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Sex games

Daddy, no.

Author: pussylover4ever

Date: 3 March 2014

BDSM, Fiction, First Time, Incest

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So, this is my first story(: I'm really excited to see where this goes. Lol It involves all of my personal fantasies so please ENJOY!
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Chapter 1

"Daddy, can I go to the movies with Jace?" My babygirl, Justine asked.

"Like, on a date?" I asked

"Well, I think so." She said smiling. "Mom told me to ask you"

"Honey, I dont know..."

"Please, dad!!!" She begged. Well, if she went on that date. No doubt she would be fucked endlessly all night.That thought alone got my cock twitching. I had an idea.

"Fine, but you're taking our car. And I want to talk to Jace."

"Dad!! No."

"Did u just say no to me?!" I bellowed. Shw knew better. She knew better!!! Fibe, I'll have to punish her! I grabbed her by her arm and pulled her into my room. She already knew what was going to happen...

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Switching P.O.V!!!! Now its Justine's

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"Daddy, let go you're hurting me!" I screamed knowing it was no use for when he had been drinking. He picker me up and threw me on the bed. He laughed when a sob escaped.

"Don't lie to daddy, we both know you want it. Tell daddy you want him, tell me you wantmy cock deep in your soaking pussy!!!" He yelled. I knew if I didn't respond it'd be worse. But I couldn't get the words out. He flipped me over and yelled in my face. Then I felt his hands pulling my tank top off. He smiled and kissed my chest. I forgot to put a bra on after getting out of the shower. So he was gropingand sucking on my boobs which were B cups. I just sat there crying. He stood up and pulled his clothes off. When he yanked his full shaft out I froze staring at the 9 inch cock that I knew would soon enter me.

"Take off ur underwear." I looked down shocked when did I get out of my pants? I slowly stood and slipped my thongs down my tan legs. He then pushed me back on the bed and spread my legs. I closed my eyes hoping he'd make it quick.

I yelped when i felt his tongue on my pussy. He was punoshing me for talking back.shit. i couldnt help the moan that escaped my lips when he insterted a finger. Then two. Then three. Ugh this felt amazing. If it wasn't my dad doing this. Dammit. He started licking my nub and glory hole like his life depended on it. I started arching my back and crying. He stood up and slammed into me. He was so good it hurt. I hated that I liked this. I felt him lay on top pf me as he kept pounding. Finally he finished. He got up and stepped to the side letting me up.

"We are having new rules around here. 1. No clothes in the house. You go to school or whatever u do then as soon as u step inside that door, NO CLOTHES! 2. Ur my slave." Shit. Shit. Shit shit.

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Hi!!!! Okay so I know.its short but its good...

Constructice critism welcome!!!

More to cum!! (Get it?) Well bye! Part two soon!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2014 03:29
    Horse shit. No plot, no character building, no eroticism, no point in reading the trash and no reason to continue writing. Stay a reader.

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  • AZMotherLover
    03.03.2014 05:16
    This story is so very poorly written that you should be embarrassed, If you have any self respect, you'll delete this. Seriously.

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  • mstrmrd1
    03.03.2014 06:00
    I am sorry but I have to agree with everyone above. you need to learn how to write stories. if ou need help feel free to ask some of us we will help you

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  • countrycadillac
    03.03.2014 20:12
    VERY badly done. You need to spent a lot of time reading any of the stories that are 96% or higher to get a better idea of how a good story is written. Good Luck !1 (countrycadillac)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.03.2014 03:39
    I'll try to be a little more constructive in my criticism, because this story does have potential. You need more detail and better grammar/punctuation.

    As for character building, which was mentioned in the first comment, you need to tell us who these people are. What's the story with Justine and her father? Is this the first time something like this has happened? Describe their characteristics, physically and otherwise.

    Also, you said there is more to come (by the way, avoid those silly clichés. Literally ALL of us "get it"). Why not just save this, sit on it, add to it, and then publish when it's longer? It would be much better than that garbage tacked on at the end? I'll bet most people saw all of that and immediately hit the back arrow and didn't bother even reading the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2014 14:09
    Agree with the last comments; rather than typing gobbledegook to fill out the thousand character minimum requirement, why not flesh out the story more? I also agree this story/idea has potential. I just don't think you've realized the potential to its fullest.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2014 00:17
    That was the worst thing I have ever read! Learn how to spell, form complete sentences and paragraphs, build up the story better with more details, and do not simply scribble crap just to fill space.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 17:43
    Seriously?
    Learn to spell. I got your little 'joke' at the end but you really can't spell. I got bored by the time it came to the second point of view, make it longer and COMPLETE YOUR SENTENCES! That really bugged me.
    You need to construct your paragraphs much better and at least go onto a word document to write up your story, this way you have time to edit and make it longer, take more time on it to develop it well.

    Seriously, the random letters you put at the start and end needs to stop.

    Try to do better in the future, if not, stop writing, because it doesn't seem gobs working out so much for you honey.

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  • Inbeast26
    18.01.2016 08:52
    God this was extremely hot and can't wait for more Although I would have loved more of a back story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2016 04:51
    U suck I need real ra pe

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2016 18:14
    It's a shame you failed grammer class in jr high, I know foreners who have better English skills

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  • Libby+Jean
    05.01.2017 04:39
    Making a mental note of your name so I don't waste my time reading anymore of your lame stories full of misspelled words. *smh*

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  • Brimd
    09.04.2017 18:15
    this...is a mess.

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