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Sex games

the girls next door

Author: roballo

Date: 10 June 2005

Anal, Fiction, Bi-sexual, Blowjob

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THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR – CHAPTER 1

I had been going out with Kirsty for about 2 years, things were ok but they could have been better. There wasn’t much sexual activity, about once a weak which mean that I had to go solo most of the time. Then the new neighbors moved in next door and I couldn’t help notice the two girls who were moving in, one looked about 18 and the other 16. They were clearly sisters as they looked nearly identical. The older one had blonde hair which was tied at the back, a really tight top which exposed the top of her breasts and her waist, and a pair of 3 quarter length jeans that hugged her ass so tightly. The younger of the girls wore the same only her top covered her waist and she had brown highlights.
That night after a passionate sex session with Kirsty she told me that she would be going to a university in Tennessee in 1 weeks time, and scene as though I live in California, that meant that we wont be seeing each other for a while, however we agreed not to break up quite yet.

The next day I awoke to find that I was alone in my room, it was Saturday and I could hear my mother downstairs, there were always only the two of us in the house as I never knew my farther, he left when I was 2. My mother was really sexy; she had black hair, tanned skin and the best pair of 36DD tits I had ever seen. My mother and I had gotten up to some naughty things from when I was 13 to now. (Without any of my girlfriends knowing of course), and I had occasionally had sex with her.
I put on my boxers and jeans and went downstairs for some breakfast, to my surprise there were 4 other people sitting at my table, it was the family from next door.
“Oh Robert put on a T-shirt please we have guests” my mother said as she saw me in the doorway.
“This is MR and MRS Ryan and their daughters Claire and Stacey” my mother carried on.
“Please please” the farther of these two beautiful girls said, “call us Ray and Holly”.
Then my mother continued “why don’t you go upstairs with Claire and Stacey…….give the adults some talking time”

When the girls stood up from the table my focus was immediately drawn to Claire, she was wearing a red mini skirt which barely covered her sweet ass, her long tanned legs were so perfect, I had to turn and walk up stairs or I was going to get a boner on the spot. I sat on my computer chair and offered the bed to Claire and Stacey.
“Robert I’m just going into town with the neighbors to show them around, ill be back soon” my mother shouted up the stairs then I heard the door shut.
As Claire sat down on my bed her legs were slightly open, far enough open for me to see that she was wearing no underwear. I could see her cunt clearly which made my cock start to harden, I noticed that she had noticed where I was looking and she quickly closed her legs tightly and gave me a sharp look, then she said in a soft voice, “you’ve seen mine…….now show me yours”. My hears suddenly felt like it was going to leap from my body, and my cock from my jeans.
“But your sister is here” I said quietly, trying to sound calm.
“oh don’t worry about her, she wont say anything” she replied and at this she put her hands round her younger sisters neck, pulled her head towards her own and kissed her, they were kissing passionately for about 5 minutes when Stacey broke free and said “well then, lets see it, and you never know you might just see mine”.
By this time my cock was as hard as a battering ram, bulging from my jeans. I un-buttoned and unzipped them and pulled them to the floor, then pulled down my boxers, my aching cock sprung free. Stacey gasped and marveled at this 8” wonder whilst Claire stood up and began to take off her clothes, I couldn’t believe this, 2 girls in my room, both sexier than my girlfriend, and me not knowing what was going to happen next.

Claire was even more beautiful with no clothes on, her size 40D tits hung from her chest, and her shaven pussy glistening with her juices, she looked at me and asked if she could taste it, so I leaned back on my chair as she grabbed it in her hands. She began to slide her hand up and down slowly, then she grabbed it at the base and shove her open mouth around it, shoving it deep down her throat, she sucked away on my cock, occasionally lifting her head up and licking the head and shaft of my cock.
“Oh yes, cum in my mouth” she gagged as she franticly sucked my cock, so I gave the girl what she wanted and released glob after glob of my cum into her mouth as she franticly swallowed, then she broke away with a mouth full of my cum and turned to her sister, who was now also naked, pushed her lips to Stacey’s and began kissing again, swishing the cum between each others mouth with their tongues. Stacey’s hand was now rubbing her older sister’s clit as the continued to kiss, she slowly kissed and licked her way down to Claire’s pussy, they both climbed onto my bed, Claire on her back with her sister kneeling with her ass in the air and her head in Claire’s pussy.
I got up and walked to the bottom of my bed and slowly pushed my stiff cock into Stacey’s wet pussy, it was tight, her lips squeezing around every inch of my cock. She began to buck her ass back as I pushed harder and faster into her warm, juicy pussy filling her with all of my cock. My pace reached a steady speed, pulling my cock almost out of her pussy and pushing it back in, hard and fast. After about 5 minutes I could feel her climax starting, her pussy tightened around my cock and she began bucking her pussy hard onto my cock, forcing it balls deep. Her body quivered as she came, her pussy juice’s squeezing past my cock as it ripped up the walls of her pussy. I could feel my orgasm building up again; I never know I could cum this quickly after already cuming, I pushed my cock as far up her as I could and blew my load, shooting round after round of cum into her, I removed my cock with a squelch, she stood up with my cum dripping from her over filled cunt and her sister Claire’s cum dripping from her mouth to her tits. I put my head towards Stacey’s tits and licked the cum from them whilst teasing her nipples, then my lips met hers and we shared a passionate kiss, sloshing Claire’s cum between our mouths.
She tasted so sweet, I needed more, I turned to Claire who was on my bed with her legs spread, I got to my knees and teased her swollen outer lips with my tongue, I pulled them apart to reveal her clit and sucked on it, occasionally pushing my tongue up her cunt as far as it would go, I slowly slipped 2 fingers up whilst licking her clit, this set her off and she began pushing her hips up so my mouth was grinding away at her cunt. Stacey climbed on the bed and lowered her pussy over Claire’s waiting mouth, who instantly began licking the sweet pussy that was presented to her.
I removed my fingers from Claire’s pussy, her juices dripping from my fingers, and slowly inserted them into her ass, it was hard work to start with but it wasn’t long before her ass allowed my fingers entry. She began franticly tossing around whilst her sister sat on her face, the muffled sound of “OH YES…YES…… ROB….DONT STOP…..UUUHHHH then she stopped and I got a mouth full of the gushing juices which flowed from her cunt, they tasted so sweet, unlike my girlfriend Kristy’s which had a slight salty taste. I got up and lay on my bed, 2 sexy girls either side of me, gasping for breath.

“Can we use your shower please” Stacey said in a panting voice.
“Sure” I said “go ahead”
As they headed to the shower I lay there, reflecting on what had just happened, how horny these new neighbors were, how easy they came onto me.
My cock was stiff again at the thought of all this, I got up and went to the shower, I looked in on the 2 goddesses, now lathering each others body, taking their time in the breast and crotch area. Then it occurred to me that one of those girls. The nicest looking, the one with the nicest body hadn’t felt my meat inside her yet. I opened the shower door and told Claire of this thought, to which her reply was “ooh we can’t have that, my little horny sister getting fucked and me not, we best get to it then”. They both stepped out the shower and began to dry each other, I looked at her as Stacey caressed her breasts with the towel and thought to my self, this girl deserves something special.
I went into my mother’s room and got the lube from her drawer which I had used on her quite a few times and returned to the bathroom. Claire was already waiting, her sister was kneeling on the toilet seat with her pussy and ass in the air, Claire was bent over behind her, holding my mother’s dildo which she kept under the sink for when I wasn’t in and she felt horny.
“I see you have found something there” I said quietly into her ear.
“Well we cant leave my little sex princess of a sister out now can we”
“Oh don’t worry…..sex queen…she’ll get her turn”
“Well be kind, we haven’t had anything bigger than a finger up our asses until today” Claire said, biting her bottom lip in a sexy way.
I grabbed a blob of lube and smeared it around Claire’s asshole, pushing it in with my finger, she took my mothers dildo and pushed it into her cunt, after she motioned it in and out for a minute she pulled it out, her juice on it glistened in the light and she slowly placed the end on her sisters asshole, it was only about a half inch thick so there was still pleasure for her to have from me.

I finished lubing Claire’s asshole and pushed the head of my cock on her silky asshole, then slowly began to push my stiff 8” cock further in, causing her to gasp as she passed on the pleasure to her sister with a dildo. Her ass was tight and as I slipped the first 3 inches of my cock up I could feel her warm ass walls contracting against my penis, I told her to relax and soon after her ass loosened up and I slowly slid the whole 8 inches of my cock up, so my balls were now slapping off her cunt as I pushed deep into her rectum, Stacey was now screaming Claire’s name as she received the dildo up her ass.
I slowly began to pump my meat in and out of the ass around it, pushing harder and faster as her ass became more loose with the lubrication. Soon I was slamming my cock so hard up her ass she was lunging forward, pushing the dildo further into her younger sister’s bowls. Her 36DD tits were wobbling back and forth franticly as I pulled my cock to the start of her asshole and slammed it back in, so I cupped them with my hands and fondled her nipples, to my surprise I heard her cry out “ OH YEAH ROB….FUCK MY ASS HARDER….UUHH…MAKE ME CUM…YES..”
I slammed my dick as hard as I could into the depths of her ass, her cry’s became frantic screams of “YEEESSS….FUCK MY SWEET ASS AND MAKE ME CUM…YES” only to be matched by the same screams from her sister.
As I stuffed Claire’s ass with my meat as hard as I could their screams were closely followed by “OH YEEEESS…YES…IM CUMING…AHH...UUHHH”
Both Stacey and Claire came at the same time, their sweet juices spewing from their hot pussies to the bathroom floor, my balls felt like they were going to explode as I had another orgasm, my cum shot out into the depths of Claire’s ass as her sphincter muscle tightened and loosened with her orgasm, it felt so good, I pulled my still rock hard cock out of her anus and rubbed the head of it up and down her wet, pussy juice covered cunt lips before inserting it and began pumping away again like I had in her ass. After about 5 minutes of me pumping away and her cry’s of pleasure, I pulled out of Claire’s pussy and went to Stacey’s ass, although she had already taken a dildo up the ass, it was still tight, tighter than Claire’s who was now sitting on the floor with the dildo up her ass.
I slowly pushed my cock up her ass, whilst I reached under her and lightly rubbed her clit. It wasn’t long before all 8 inches of my cock was buried balls deep in this fine young girl’s shitter, which reminded me that I didn’t know their exact ages. I put this to the back of my head as I continued to rip up the walls of Stacey’s anus, my hips hitting off her ass cheeks, forcing her tits to bounce back and forth, which were soon stopped by Claire who moved in to suck oh her nipples whilst fondling my balls with one hand and her sisters clit with the other. I continued to crash my cock as far up her ass as I could, whilst gently pulling her head back by her hair softly, a few minutes later the whimpering sounds from Stacey were slowly loudening into screams of pleasure “OH YES ROB….IM GOING TO CUM AGAIN….YES MAKE ME CUM AGAIN.. She cried.
“Shit man, these horny bitches are made of cum” I thought to my self as I obeyed the order being screamed to me.
She began to push her ass back as I slammed my cock forward, her ass quivering as she was on the edge of her orgasm.
She let out a cry and her cunt gushed out her juices as I rammed my cock hard up her and her sister franticly rubbed her clit and moved her head to catch the gushing pussy juices.
I removed my cock from her ass and pulled Claire to her feel, planting her a kiss, then Stacey joined and we were 3 way kissing, sharing our saliva and Stacey’s cum as we wrestled our tongues around in each others mouths.

We went into the shower and washed each other, then after we dried, we went back into my room and got dressed, Stacey looked really hot in her pink thong and bra, and of course Claire, with her panty-less pussy hidden by her short mini skirt.

“So Claire, you never told me your age” I said to her as she sat down, fully dressed.
“I’m 18”
“And you Stacey”
“I’m 16” she replied, biting her bottom lip like her older sister did earlier.
Just then I heard my mother shout from downstairs, “we finished just in time then” I said jokingly.
We got up and walked out of my room, I was behind Claire and grabbed her ass, really low down so I could press my finger onto her pussy, she quickly turned and give me a quick kiss, then carried on walking down stairs, halfway down she turned and said.
“You can come to mine on Monday at about 9pm, my parents will be out” then walked down and into the living room.
“How was town daddy” Stacey asked her dad. He said it was fine and that they should go home now for lunch.
They left my house and returned back to their home next door.
Suddenly the phone rang, it was Kirsty, she called to tell me that she had to leave for Tennessee early, she was already on her way, I put the phone down when she had finished and smiled away to my self.

My first story so let me know what you think, chapter 2 is on its way soon.


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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 08:07
    yummmmmm

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 09:17
    SHIT! This is really your first story?! You have to write more. Make Kirsty be back and fucking him when the neighbors come in through the window! Then his mom hears and joins in!





    nah... that's a bit too much for the second story. Put that in the last part.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 11:14
    What's a farther?

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 14:01
    VERY NICE LOVED IT KEEP IT GOING WANT TO READ MORE MAYBE HAVE HIS MOM CATCH HIM AND JOIN IN SEEING HE ALREADY HAD SEX WITH HIS MOM

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 14:35
    Great story

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 15:40
    Man you need to learn how to spell. It was very hard to masturbate while I had to read through a lot of poor spelling.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 16:49
    I thought this story was fucking hot and dont listen 2 those assholes who say u dont know how to spell. keep writing more! I cant wait.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 18:36
    This story was hot write part 2

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 19:26
    that was amazing and dont worry i cant spell eather lol

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 22:17
    Hot story ! 9/10 I want to read more about the girls.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 23:34
    Hot but not much of a story. The beginning was not that great. You just jumped right into the sex without really leading up to it too much. 6/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 01:51
    This story made me so fucking horny!

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 02:24
    Ok, that story was hot and all, but that dude was a little far-fetched. He somehow was able to cum like 5 times in a row which is a little unbelievable. Then again maybe he was just a stallion and I can't fathom his ability. Haha. Good story, write more.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 05:00
    THAT WAS THE BEST DAM STORY 10/10 MAKE ANOTHER ONE NOW!!!!

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 09:37
    Horse's patuty, not only from the spelling, the story line sucks, get real. Imagation works great, fiction is and will always be fiction. Dream on about makeshift thoughts, Yes we come her to read porn however would it not be better to see well written porn? 1/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 11:08
    this was the nicest story ever cant wait till chapter two

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 14:01
    hot story, it was like reading someones mind while they jerked off infront of the computer in there room.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 15:41
    great story! something tells me mommy's in part 2 10/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 16:26
    dude that was a fucking awsome story just use spell check next time and spend a little bit more time leading up to it (dont worry i still gave you a 10/10) :)

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 18:31
    not a bad story but need a bit more of a storyline just dont jump into it build up the characters a bit more and check ur spelling and it be great

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 19:27
    Lame. How many of you guys stay hard after you cum? Get real. Make it sexy but make it believable.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 19:58
    Great story but lets here more about times with mom and her 36dd tits

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 20:19
    Man, where did you go to school? You spell worse than a 5-year-old. It ruins the whole story. Go get a dictionary and learn how to spell. What a pity.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 20:19
    thats story made my dick rock hard u need too make part 2

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 22:05
    awesome story dude i will be looking forward to ch. 2

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    READER 500
    23.06.2005 22:59
    it made me cum

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2005 00:40
    U made me cream my pants man!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2005 02:26
    Good story, but try to build up to it, make it seem more real.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2005 03:02
    well done

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    READER 500
    24.06.2005 05:33
    Yo, Conch. Learn to fuckin read. The spelling in this story is actually pretty good. Maybe you should read some of the other stories, in which "characters" is "chrractrs"... Jesus H Christ. Y' fuckin critics can't see worth bloody shit. I'm half blind, and at least I can see it. This story is good. *Bitch slaps to Conch and A Critic!*

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    24.06.2005 13:33
    THOSE GIRLS MUST BE FUCKING THEIR DAD AND MOM TO BE THAT EXPERIENCED THAT YOUNG. THEY DON'T SEEM TO BE WORRIED ABOUT BEING CAUGHT - JUST ENJOYING THE FEEL OF A COCK IN THEIR CUNT AND ASS AND A MOUTH SUCKING THEIR PUSSY. THE SEVEN OF THEM WILL HAVE TO HAVE A NICE FUCK SESSION IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.

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    READER 500
    24.06.2005 17:40
    great story man you have made my tight pink pusst hot and wet

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    READER 500
    24.06.2005 18:27
    and scene {SEEING} as though I live in California, ALSO, 40DD's are only on Fat girls

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    READER 500
    24.06.2005 22:11
    Good job dude

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 01:19
    Good story man, Had a pretty good sized boner through almost the entire story.

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 04:42
    I so badly want to play with my pussy now, but im in the library!

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 14:25
    This is crap

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 15:18
    All I can say is my pussy is dripping and I'm in search of a nice fat dick now. Excellent story. Can't wait for pt.2.

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 15:27
    hum... maybe a little 2 easy 2get them going

    but still verry nice :d

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    READER 500
    25.06.2005 16:24
    hey those girls lived next door to me in Texas before they moved. claire and stacey, man can they suck a cock until its dry, boy you are one lucky fucker to have them living next to you now, say hello to stace for me, tell her that i got rid of the clap that she left me with but i would do it all over again, wow

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    READER 500
    26.06.2005 04:52
    maxman, u do realise the story was FICTIONAL right, fkn idiot

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    READER 500
    26.06.2005 10:15
    This story is fucking retarded. I didn't even get halfway through the first page. Spellchecker is more then just a funtion in Word. You need to actually go through and "look" for the errors. Your charachters are flat and boring and this is exactly like every other story you've read like it. Why should I keep reading, you haven't put anything in here I haven't already seen.



    –S–

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    READER 500
    26.06.2005 21:45
    this was a good story can not wate for part two....... man i need a cock right now 10/10

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    READER 500
    27.06.2005 00:31
    Great for first time, gave me a boner through the read, but could use some editing. Personally idc how hot a mom is, sexual shit with ur mom is fckn gross.

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    READER 500
    27.06.2005 00:47
    very nice bravo!

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    READER 500
    27.06.2005 14:55
    I'm a critic on this site, but I must say, it was pretty good. Other than the fkkin mom part. I didn't go in the story at all. And who would start fkkin that fast if your strangers? No one that's who, I give this story a 4/10 and No I don't think there should be a part 2.

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    READER 500
    28.06.2005 00:43
    ROFLMFAO max..... its FICTION man

    NOT TRUE

    ahahaa

    they used to live next door to you -.-

    must be different slutty girls

    fu sho it was an ok story

    a little quick

    but good 6/10

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    READER 500
    28.06.2005 05:50
    This is a good story. A nice begining. As suggested do some editing. I still rate it with a 9/10.

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    READER 500
    28.06.2005 23:50
    Breasts are a little large. I mean c'mon, only fat chicks have boobs that large. Ditto on the mom stuff.

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    READER 500
    29.06.2005 00:19
    dont fuck ur mom thats sick as hell the rest was good though

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    READER 500
    29.06.2005 19:59
    Shut the fuck up hot guy, moms are the best... by the way great story =) 10/10

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    READER 500
    29.06.2005 23:46
    heard this story a thousand times. think of something new!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2005 22:03
    wow,if ure #2 is gonna be like this 1 then i suggest not doing it.its not evan worth reading.go fuck ure mom okay basterd ew!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2005 22:28
    wow that max kid is fkn dumb.it was a frk made up story.a bad 1 i might add.

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    READER 500
    02.07.2005 00:13
    make a part 2

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    READER 500
    02.07.2005 14:06
    ok, your spelling does leave me kind of upset...but other then a few stupid mistakes it wasnt that bad...i mean i could have gotten off to this story if i chose to. the sisters seem to willing to fuck, it was to fast. i suggest you write a second story, but have someone proof read it or somethin i mean...dang. not to mention try thinking of an original story, this seems just like another fantasy gone to far. btw everyone that is dissing on the authors spelling, a few of you made some spelling errors...hypocrites. it was a good story. but like they said, to quick, dont fuck the mom (incest is in my opinion disturbing and wrong i mean its your mom for christs sake!) and try harder with spelling. 7/10. 9 for a story in itself (it has potential) and 5 for mistakes and shit.

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    READER 500
    02.07.2005 15:36
    Really good base, for future chapters. 8/10



    These people, like "indifferent", should not comment on grasmmer & spelling , unless theirs is perfect. (They are not.) I is always capitalized ,

    TOO is Athe word to use when you mean "also",

    not "to".

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    READER 500
    04.07.2005 02:21
    A good quick read that gets you going. 8/10

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    READER 500
    04.07.2005 03:14
    MAX MAN you are a fucking idiot! I mean you are the king of fucking idiots. I think that they should give you a first place trophy for being so fucking stupid!!!!

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    READER 500
    04.07.2005 17:34
    real good story, except for the mom part....please try and leave that out i find it disturbing and more difficult to get off to a stary when the word mom keeps appearing...all in all good story...9/10

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    READER 500
    05.07.2005 02:43
    awesome story, hint the name. Suck it you non-momfucking bitches. Pt. 2 plz. (plz do work on grammar) 8/10

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    READER 500
    05.07.2005 14:44
    u aight ur grammar is sum shit damn u dumb

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    READER 500
    06.07.2005 01:00
    good fucking God I would go on about your horrible spelling and grammer, but from the other comments it isn't needed.

    p.s. illiterate douche

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    READER 500
    09.07.2005 14:18
    the girls sounded like they wanted to impress he neighbours so they acted like they were lesbians



    i thought that was a good idea to go with

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    READER 500
    10.07.2005 00:01
    it was okay but man your man thing aint that big dont keep kidding yourself

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    READER 500
    10.07.2005 14:53
    this is a sex story not enligh class people... your story rocked had me cumming like no other. good job please write more

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    READER 500
    14.08.2005 07:16
    not a bad story really could have done without the mom fuckin....guys if grammer is that big a deal go read penthouse....

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    READER 500
    20.09.2005 19:01
    you are all under arrest, your irp's have all been traced. Please turn yourself in to your local police department for leniency. All others will be dealt with strict penalties of law.

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    READER 500
    23.10.2005 01:59
    grate story can't wait for chapter 2

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    READER 500
    02.11.2005 23:38
    my cunt juices are flowing. I love a story that makes me horny. I could use a good fucking like the girls got in this story.

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 19:38
    iy was a great story, it had me real wet. can't wait to read part 2.

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    READER 500
    27.11.2005 01:19
    nice job with the story had me Hard as a Rock waiting for the next Chapter

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 15:47
    ... when's part 2??????

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 19:37
    freaking amazing

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    READER 500
    27.12.2005 02:34
    your story was sweet man it had me goin all over the place no need for the mom part though

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    READER 500
    07.02.2006 03:52
    wow!that was so sexy.i wish u could cum into my cunt.pls write part 2

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    READER 500
    08.02.2006 12:49
    Excellent story..... got me hard.

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    READER 500
    17.02.2006 16:25
    To Mr. "police".... you dont trace irp's you trace ISP's and nothing in this story was illegal... I am a cop.

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    READER 500
    28.02.2006 22:11
    Hey mr "police" i'll say this loud and clear GO FUCK YOUR SELF, it's a god damn fictional story

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    READER 500
    28.02.2006 22:15
    if you want good gramar go read a fuck'n text book!!!

    and shut the fuck up

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    READER 500
    22.04.2006 08:21
    it sucked jk lol it was awesome i cant wait for the sequal

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    READER 500
    17.05.2006 21:28
    Good shit man i cant wait till part 2

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    READER 500
    10.11.2006 11:08
    good story write part 2

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    READER 500
    06.12.2006 19:11
    i want stacys ass

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    READER 500
    31.12.2006 20:27
    SOUNDS LIKE YOU WENT TO HEAVEN WHY CAN'T I. I JUST HAVE MY OLDER SISTER TO FUCK FOR NOW

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    READER 500
    22.03.2007 07:44
    Very nice Story

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    READER 500
    12.09.2007 19:08
    good story

    why dont the porn haters stay the fuck off this site

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    READER 500
    17.10.2007 05:02
    very nice, 8/10

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    READER 500
    17.10.2007 10:32
    That. Got. Me horny

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 14:41
    that got me really horny also!! keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2009 12:51
    Bad rating....for a good reason...story sucks...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2016 15:46
    Got menu horny too. Keep writing perhaps one of these days you'll learn to write the good stuff.

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