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Sex games

The girl of my dreams

Author: brutusleoinc

Date: 6 July 2014

Romance, Fiction, School, Teen

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Hey people this is my first story, so please be easy on me.English is not my first language, and I used British English while writing this one so there might be some spelling mistakes according to you folks in USA...Plus if you got any suggestions about the plot please feel free to contact me………and don’t be a spelling or a grammar NAZI. The starting would be just a brief introduction leading to the events so it might a little boring, but enjoy and leave a good rating if you like it. Yes their is very little sex as this is just a breif intro into what is a very long tale.

Hey my name is Jason I am 6” foot tall figure, blond hair, blue eyes and looks that could throw any girl off her feet’s but i certainly paid no attention to them not that i don’t like girls but i wanted more than just a useless fuck. i don't have any shame in admitting that i am a virgin, in fact i am was proud of it.

It was an early October morning and I was up before the alarm could go on,
this habit of mine was very unique as teenagers my age usually wake up sluggishly but he I am different. I went to my kitchen and poured myself a bowl of cheerios,I am usually was what some people would call a nerd and a loner.



While all boys his age were busy chasing girls, he had other things in mind and wasting time was not one of them, with an IQ of 215 he had got straight A’s in all his subject in his sophomore year and now as a junior was already taking college level courses, and had the attention of many ivy league universities.

He had a certain way with computers and studies came naturally to him,

In his school he certainly was looked upon differently. He did not have many friends, In his freshman years he was picked by lot of juniors and sophomores for being a nerd little did they know of his training regime ,but fine day he lost his cool and picked up the 200 pound bully of his feat and threw him 10 ft away,though he got away without any trouble because of his impeccable reputation with the teachers but since then every one is skeptical of him and lot of people are even afraid to look his way ..in gossip circles he is referred to as the ‘freak’

Jason finished his bowl and headed out for a shower, by the time he was out his parents were already up and getting ready for work, his dad was an surgeon and his mom was lawyer, both had met during their time in collage and stuck together forever.

“Hey Jason!! Ready for school? “ Asked his dad
“Yes , dad“ said Jason

He picked up his bag and went to the new BMW M6 convertible his parents had gifted him on his birthday. It was a very nice car for a teenager to own, but his parents trusted him and sure they were rich.

He started his car and zoomed through the streets, the school wasn’t far and he reached in couple of minutes, he parked his car in his usual spot and head toward his homeroom, the school was boring as usual for him he knew more then the teacher, by lunch the school was filled with talk of a new girl from New york joining the school and that she looked like a Victoria secret model.

Jason first saw her during lunch, all the guys were roving around her like flies on dead meat , but he seemed unaffected by her aura, Jason was something greater he knew how to control his hormone filled needs to some extent and for rest free porn was readily available online


Next day he was amazed to find that she was almost in all his classes which were generally advanced courses, beauty and brains a deadly combination which she possessed.

Candice too was very different ,grand-daughter of very successful german-born businessman Fredrick Schneider who started his business selling newspapers and made it into a Billon dollar enterprise,

Her father Robert was caring and loving, but very easy to influence and her mother Mary was what some people might call a ‘devious bitch’ she loved humiliating other people and knew how to get her work done either by hook or by crook and controlled her husband like a puppy and was too busy spending her father-in laws hard earned money. They lived in a multi-million dollar villa in Long Island New York, but Mary endless spending had let their cash reserves run dry and Fredrick refused to lend his son more, so they had no choice but to leave New York for a new place
and San Francisco was the answer too their prayer.

While back hear in school Jason was the first too reach his class and took his preferred seat in second row, then he saw candice walk right unto him and.

she said “Hey do you mind if i sit here ?” pointing to the seat next to him
“not at all” said Jason minding his own business
“Hey by the way I am Candice” said she trying to make a conversation
“ya, hi i am Jason” he said sheepishly and then quickly turned his attention to his books
Candice thought
All my life boys have chasing me, but what is up with him, is hey gay? forget it ,

As the teacher entered, today was a pop quiz in physics and as soon as Mr Smith entered he started with his question and directed it specially at Candice to test her brain and to his surprise she answered even the difficult ones correctly, and every who one who thought that she was just another dumb blond was now quiet.

“Very well Candice, looks like that you have quiet the grip on the subject. Would you like to join the school science club? it might even get you some extra credits.” said Mr Smith, the physics teacher

“Yes sir, i would like to” replied candice
“ok so meet Jason Campbell , he is the club in charge.” pointing to the guy next to her
“ok class so we were studying thermodynamics” said Mr smith starting the class
During lunch Candice started to blend in and was invited to sit with the popular students of the school, after all she was the hottest girl in school and already had been asked out a number of times already.

“So Candice, did you like any guy here?” said Amanda, a petite blond and one of the most popular girls in school

“Ya, theres this guy who almost in all my classes” answered Candice
sounds of ooooooohs filled the table
“so whose the lucky guy?” asked Emma a brunette, also the cheerleader

“ Jason” answered she

“the freak” everyone jumped

“No..NO one even dares to talk to the freak and you ..forget it” said Emma

“ why whats wrong with him? he seems like a nice guy and is looker too”
asked Candice

“Ya in fact theres a whole mystery around him some say he uses his genius brain to robs banks” said Amanda

“ And ya he literally threw my boyfriend 20 ft away, he almost killed him” added Rachel

No matter what they say there was something about him that attracted her thought she

“Ya any way coming out to more important topics, you seen the good places to hang around in this city? Would you like us to show you?” asked Emma

“why not i am free as theres nothing much to do at my home, we meet an hour after school” answered Candice

“Sounds like a plan”

their conversation was interrupted by the period bell indicting the end of-lunch

JASON

“So hey buddy how is your work on the Miniature particle accelerator you were building?” said Vijay his one of the few people he could call friends

“Ya its coming through, id be needing your help to finish the last part”

“sure, you got my number ring me anytime” said vijay

“So you seen that hot new girl, i heard she joined the science club” asked vijay after all even he was a boy
“YA I heard”
“All right brother meet you later” said Vijay as they went their separate ways

Just as he was heading to the parking lot ,Suddenly Mr Font from the computer lab ran unto him

“Hey Jason, i was just upgrading the computer with new RAM’S can you give me a hand?”

“Sure, Mr font”

It took them almost an hour too change the RAMs of all computers, finally after which he headed back too the parking lot, and he saw the new girl leaning on his car

As he approached his car “Hey you waiting for some one ?”

“Ya my friends, they were supposed to come and take me out, but they had a flat tyre on the way to here” answered Candice

“you want me to give you a ride, back home?”

“that would be great, thank you.”

“Nice ride you got here” said she

“Ya my parents gave it to me on my birthday”

“So were do you live?” asked Jason

“I live in mission bay” answered she

“Ohs that great even i live there” answered Jason

“here thats my house” said Candice pointing to a Beautiful House as Jason steadily bought his car to a halt

“really!! that means i just live two houses ahead of you right there” pointing to his house

Just as Candice was getting out

“we should hang out sometimes?” Said Jason out of the blue it wasn't like him,
what has happened to me thought Jason clearly this blonds beauty was taking his toll on him

his words stopped her ignoring what everyone had said he seemed like a nice guy and not a freak “ Can you help me with studies, I've clearly missed a lot of lessons since my move?” asked Candice

“I am happy to help” replied Jason

“Then ill meet you in an hour”

Jason rushed home and quickly took out the books they would be using and thankfully he always kept his room in order. He told his mom about their deal.

After a while his door bell rang and his Mom opened the door

They were pleasantly surprised to see a girl on their door that to soo beautiful

“Hello Mrs Campbell, i here to see Jason.”

“oh so your Candice, Jason told me about you,come on ill take you to his room upstairs”

As Candice entered, he saw him sitting on the desk smiling at her his bedroom was a modern bedroom with a queen size bed sitting in the corner and a big glass window giving a view of his beautiful garden

“Hi” said she

His mother nodded at him “if any of you guys need something to eat just call me, ill be downstairs, study well” said his mother as she left the room

Jason started with his lessons asking her about what she knew clearing her doubts and even giving her an insight of the next topic,

he really is a wonderful teacher thought she

Then his mother entered with a bowl of crackers and glass of coke “You have been studying for over two hours, it be good if you take some rest, here have some snacks” she said in her motherly concern

it really touched Candice whose mother did nothing but shout at her

“You really got a nice mom” said she

“Ya she is very caring and loving
he gave a big smile his blue eyes piercing into her soul, they kept quiet and let their eyes do the talking while they munched on the crackers

“hey lets get out of here, theres a nice trail just 3 blocks for here, you up for a walk?”

“Sure” It would be a good chance to know him thought she

So after a short time they discovered that they both had similar interest in Music, movies and books

Jason

“Your so much like me, my carbon copy!!” said Jason touching her lightly feeling her silky smooth skin it was almost like a shiver that ran through his spine never in his life had i felt something like this she was something that made me happy, just looking at her made me smile, an epitome of beauty combined with wit, damm this was the girl i always wanted……

“So we should head home it getting late, we've come a long way from home” said I

She looked at me “I am too tired, cant we sit for a while i cant walk anymore”

“Come on we should head home, your parents might be worried hey come on climb on my shoulder ill carry you” offered i

she looked confused and asked me “ you sure you'd be able to carry me, i am fat” she said jokingly and making a fat face

“come on” said i and she hoped on my back while i started on our way back

“You know it nicer to be carried around it feels so light, specially when your tired” said Candice

“Ya when i was little i used to go for long walks with my dad and when i got tired he used to carry me that same way” replied i

Hearing this Candice felt hollow, not once in her life had his dad tried to make her feel special even on her birthday when he would throw a big party and only invite his friends and whenever she would complain he would throw a few hundred dollars at her face and tell her to go take a hike with all these memories lashing in her mind she suddenly started crying

“hey what happened are you hurt?”

I suddenly stopped on the tracks with she still atop my back
“No..its just”

“You feel uncomfortable” said i putting her back on her own feet


“No..No this the most comfortable position ill ever be, its just you told me about your dad and it clearly seems….” she stopped
“its just that your parents are so nice and like they care for you and love you.”

and she started crying, she even looked so beautiful when she cried i just couldn't stop my self from kissing her but instead i hugged her

5 seconds after she started hugging me back and we stayed like this for almost 20 minutes. I was on cloud 9 the felling itself was like nirvana

it was getting late and my parents would start to worry hating to break the hug i just started pulling my self a little away getting the hint she held my hand and we started on our journey back and she told me everything about her parents, and how her poor father was a mere puppet in the hand of her mother their opulent and shallow lifestyle, i felt really bad about her situation. Deep in my mind i wished that i could just live with her,

We reached her house and just stood their not uttering a word it was like that both of us wanted to say something but couldn't muster up the courage

finally she spoke

“Jason this evening has been one of the favourite time of life and i feel your something special even though i just met you a while back it feels like I've known you since a century….just i want you..i want to…”

before she could say any more i slammed my lips on her and pulled back not realising what i had done at that moment i thought that i had ended our budding relationship but i was wrong

she literally pulled me towards her lips for a very passionate long kiss this really was my first kiss and her’s too as she told me later

finally reluctantly we broke the kiss

and i asked her “Candice, i was wondering if you would do me the honour of becoming my first girlfriend?”

“No” I was taken aback
“I already like this guy Jason”
i smiled
“but i wouldn't mind cheating on him with you”
and she pulled me in for another passionate kiss this one longer than our last time

we exchanged number and she send me a text hello boyfriend as I headed home i already was so late

as i entered into the house both my mom and dad were sitting in the dinning room

“so son you finally got your first girlfriend?” asked my dad
i tried to give an innocent face as i didn't knew what they were talking about

“Oh son you might be intelligent in your way but we are your parents and just by one look in the eye we get to know everything” said my mother

I smiled scratching my head as if figuring out what to say next

my dad again walked unto me hugged me and
“so son what is like getting your first girlfriend”

“first and the last dad thats what is own my mind” answered i

“you surely are just like your dad, he too knew he was gonna marry me after the first date” said mom

“What is she like?” asked my father

“what is she like? from what i know she's quiet intelligent, gets good grades too. on a scale of one to ten, she’d be a twelve, at least - tall and fit, good posture, sandy blond hair flowing just right below her shoulder and skin most women would die for. oh yes and the brightest eyes and body men would kill for”

“oh boy” said his father as the conversation went all the way home

“why don't you invite her for dinner some time, dear” said my mom

“sure mom i’d ask her”

“come on son, lets fire up the grill i feel like having BBQ” said my dad

we fired up the grill and sure it was good as it gets, i don't know why i was feeling so elated all of the sudden, maybe it was Candice i smiled getting the thoughts of her
and went to bed thinking off her suddenly my prick got erect at the thought of her i slowly start joking off thinking about her and her awesome body i generally did fantasise much about other girls but tun she was something special wasn't she…

it didn't take me long to cum thinking about her perfect body and suddenly my phone beeped disrupting m post-orgasmic bliss, it was from her

‘hello handsome’ it said
‘hey beautiful’ i replied
‘ so how you go to school?’
‘I usually take the bus’
‘want me to pick you tomorrow’
‘why not’
We chatted for an hour more before we both started felling tired and slowly drifted out.
I woke up and was quiet restless i was longing to meet Candice and quickly fixed my breakfast and picked up my best clothes from the wardrobe and just as i was heading out.
“Hey hotshot dressed to impress?” asked my dad he threw at me the key to his Audi R8 “here take this ….arrive in style” said my dad giving me a serious look “thanks dad” said i as i ran out. My dad loved cars and he sure did keep a nice entourage of them…..

As i jumped in and drove to her house she was standing on the footway she was about to get in
“stop” said i she completely froze looking at me with suspicion
i ran to the other side and opened the door for her

“like a gentleman” commented she
she gave me a kiss before we started our journey towards school

I parked at my usual spot and we entered the building hand in hand

and everyone was like just looking at us and giving us strange looks she griped my hand tighter and i could sense that she was uncomfortable i cracked a joke to lighten up the mood and sure did she look beautiful with that smile plastered on her face, our classes were all together we chatted through out the classes and whenever any teacher asked us anything we answered the question like he just asked us our name…

during lunch as we were heading towards the canteen
Vijay came up to me,
“hey bro i got a problem” she seemed confused as hey saw candice with me and signalled me with his eyes as if asking about her.
“ hey Vijay meet Candice, my girlfriend” said i
“hey nice to meet you” said she
“same here” he said too surprised to say something
“hey baby you must be hungry go ahead ill catch you in a while” said i she gave me a peck before she went away
all the guys were staring at that perfect ass and then looking at me with envy
“you asshole how did you manage that in a day?”
“i got my ways you know”
“your a lucky bastard, don't ever leave her”
“don't worry, i wont”
“so what was your problem?”
“nothing i just was asking you weather the rumours about you and her coming hand in hand to school were true,but it seems that its answered” he said
“all right ill head back”

I walked towards the canteen and there she was her lights lit up as she saw me
she was sitting with some cheerleaders

Hey as i took a seat next to her , her friends clearly seemed uncomfortable but i started talking and threw a few of my best jokes and sure they warmed up to me just as me and her were heading back to our lockers …..
Jake’s brother John and some of his Jock friends blocked our way

“you fucking nerd, what chemical bullshit or drug did you give her that she climbed up your dick?” with anger straight burning through his eyes, i thought it would be best to keep quiet Candice grabbed my hand tighter
“and you new york slut leave this motherfucker i bet you would like my cock better”
he tried to touch her
and i finally spoke
“don't you talk to my girlfriend like that you useless excuse of a man, go away or else?”

He aggressively moved towards me grabbing my collar “or else what? you gonna piss your pants?, you really think your magic trick will save you like it saved you from my kiddo”

He stepped back trying to throw a punch but with all my training i could easily sense it i jumped to the right and he missed me by a foot

“I am here, you dumb head” i said as if taunting him, everyone laughed and he became more angry he tried to throw a couple of punches but none of them were even close
“you asshole, lets see how your slut runs” he said as he headed towards candice as soon as he pulled back his fist trying to hit her………I hit him on the head with a 360 degree kick and he fell like a giant on the floor, his buddies too tried to try their luck but both ended on the ground just like him,

he was still on the ground as i said to him

“you asshole ever if you try to hurt my girl ill hit you so hard that you'd regret the day you were born, ill drill so many holes in you, you asshole that you'll get confused where to breathe from and where to fart from”

every one was laughing at them and some even threw a slice of pizza or sandwich at them, while they cried in pain,
It turned out that no one really like them, they bullied guys and tried to grope girls, so I was the every ones hero and it wasn't very long that people warmed up to me ,


i was getting funny looks from all girls but whenever some girl smirked at me i kissed Candice right their too show that i was already taken by the most beautiful creature that ever lived.


Me and Candice were inseparable and were seen together almost everywhere…..after all she was the epitome of beauty and you cant blame me for following her like a dog after his bone……..

We were sitting in our car in the school parking lot and we were making out
i loved felling her pouty lips against mine that way hers and my tongue danced together…i was in heaven….i slowly cupped her 34 C breasts and they felled so soft great and prick was so hard that it seemed it would tear my jeans…..just as she said

“Jason your the best thing that has happened to me, and i love you more than life itself think i want to give my virginity to you and it looks like that it really wants it too..” pointing towards my rock hard cock

“Candice as much as love you and want you, baby i don't our first time to be in some car and in a parking lot i want to be as special as it can be for both of us” said i

“Baby you know almost every guy would jump on this opportunity and fuck my brains out right here right now, but baby ur different and i love you for that, what did i do to deserve you?” said she as she made a puppy dog face

“oh baby i love you, and i would want our first time to be special for you” initiating a kiss

“You know i love you so so much its hard to describe” said i

“I know baby i know” said she as i started caressing her hair

“My parents want me to invite you over for dinner tomorrow ,if you like”

“sure i would be honoured”

“ok ill pick you up at 8”

the day sailed by with all the studies and off course thinking about Candice i knew she was a keeper and i planed on doing just that, suddenly an idea came up to my mind i sat in my car and rushed down to the best jeweller in city

The sale man asked politely “How may i help you, sir”

“ i am looking for an good engagement ring”

“Sir at Tiffany’s we keep only the best”

hey guided me towards their collection and all were equally beautiful but one struck out from the rest it was a platinum band with a large 4 carat diamond at the center and small little diamonds embedded on the band in, it was beauty

i told the sale man the ring size and he had just the right one in the display at the counter the salesman looked at me with unsure eyes and asked

“Sir are you sure you want to buy this ring or should i show another one?”

“why is it not available?” i asked

“Its worth 250,000$ sir” he looked at me for expressions

“No worries put it on this” Handing him my card

and he seemed un sure weather it would get accepted, but it did during these years with the app market going up i had made millions while making bestselling apps for companies like google and apple and they still sent me 20 million $ a year in royalties for my work.

with the engagement ring secure in my pocket i thought it would be best to wait for her birthday.

That night Candice was really nervous when i picked her when Jason picked her,
but her nervousness melted away when my mom hugged her, my mom had worked very hard cooking the dinner and had made everything from scratch, as candice was my first girlfriend but she need not worry as dinner was a master piece. Candice handled the dinner with perfect ease and it almost left me amazed, on numerous occasions i would squeeze her hand too show my support and admiration for her, our eyes would meet and pure love would be transmitted between them.

After the lovely desert, we adjourned to the living room and talked some more, although much more informally. at around 9:00, my mom apologised for keeping her late on a school night and thanked her for spending time with us.

Candice replied back by saying she would likely be spending a lot of time with us and wouldn't want to be an inconvenience, but before my mom could reply she stated that she would like to borrow the kitchen for a while and cook something for all of us, my mother eyes went very wide at that and she was obviously impressed at her manners and skills, mom looked at me a without saying a word she let em know how much she approved of her.

after saying goodbyes i walked her to her house and ended a night by a passionate kiss

at night my phone rang

“hey baby, did i disturb you?” she asked i her sweet voice
“No i was just fantasising about you curling up in bed with me to aid me in falling asleep”
“so did your parents say anything about me? how did i do?” as she desperately asked me
“You did marvellous, lets just say if i want to marry you they put me in a tux right this moment. My mother gave me explicit instructions not to screw this up and treat you like the women you are, and my dad was also thrilled about us”

“you know Candice i’d never want to leave you is there a way we can meet now?”

“come on sneak into my bedroom just come to my house ill meet you there”

I quickly jumped out of bed and literally ran to her house, she was standing in here garden

we sneaked into her bedroom, and it was neat and arranged everything kept at its right place and a single bed at the center…..

We started kissing and son it turned heavy my hands cupped her breasts and she started unbuttoning my shirt

“Not so fast dear, i want this perfect for you” said i
“screw it, your as close as i am likely to find, get your lips right her” commanded she

her sift lips felt amazing, i surrendered all my being into our kiss, we entered a whole new world, time seemed to stand still and nothing existed except us

she broke the kiss reluctantly “ I love you, more that life itself”

it was no lie, we were well beyond infatuation and this was know puppy love, although it was new, but we felt as if we knew each other for decades, we respected each other and knew how one would react in a particular situation. we both felt that they was not a chance in hell that we would spend rest of our lives with anyone else.It was no temporary fancy, it was permeant.

“I love you too, and i cant imagine my life with out you anymore”

“Last chance are you gonna be satisfied with me ?” she asked me teasingly
I smiled and wrapped her eyes with a scarf lying nearby i pulled out the engagement ring and glided it down her fingers and it fit perfectly.

“Candice you know what i love you so much that its difficult to describe, i want to us to be together till death parts us and then be united again in heaven, i want to show everyone that i care for you and love you the most, i don't want us to be teenagers playing love, so candice there are lot of things that i don’t know about you and i would pan on spending rest of my life finding out, Candice would you marry me?”

“yes,yes,yes” she jumped and without taking the scarf kissed me passionately
“but you got by a real ring to replace that clip you put on my finger” she said
“really is that all you want” i removed the scarf
and she saw her finger and she went wild and started jumping around she jumped on me so hard that i fell down on the floor…with she on top of me

she stood up with a very naughty look on her face and she dragged me to her bed and threw me on to it and straddled my waist, i wasn't expecting her to be so assertive

“there is no way you can get away with this.No more teasing i cannot wait till my birthday….i want it now” she breathed forcefully

i rolled her over and held her by waist “who said anything about waiting, enough jibber jabber, your all mine now, FIANCEE”

I kissed her forcefully, all the feelings i had been squashing till today had came up now , her lips opened and my tongue entwined with hers explored parts of her mouth, we pulled away for air, but not before she bit me on my lower lip bragging it away from me…

I sighed and she kissed my cheek and purred in my ears. i kissed her again and preceded down her neck, kissing lightly across it, occasionally pointing out my tongue and lightly flicking or swirling it around her sensitive skin…..i kissed around her shoulder and then her arm slowly coming down to kissing each finger and nibbling on it causing her to emit a sigh

I nibbled on her ear lobe then to her neck, this time i went south and kissed her right where her t-shirt met her skin and right between her beautiful breasts.

She tried to move to return the favour but i held her down with my elbow and in the tussle her T-shirt rose slightly, she seemed unable to move, enjoying the thrill i kissed her around her navel and lightly but firmly pushing my tongue against the top edge, she moaned and pushed her hips upward as if wanting me to show where she wanted it, but i had no intention of ending it so quickly i wanted to enjoy her prolonged buildup and continued relishing rest of her body

I kissed on the top of the skirt where it rested it down on her waist and kissed along the edge,she pushed her hips even harder.

Instead of giving into her wishes, i moved back up and started moving up the center of belly, pushing her sweater with my noses as i left a trail of kisses behind, i was stopped by her breasts who didn't allow the fabric to move up wards, i arched her back up as i pulled her t shirt over her breasts exploring her lacy bra, i smiled when i noticed it was front latched.

“ you were such a perfect gentlemen, since we meet i thought i’d help you by making this easy for you” said she

i still took it slow instead of opening the latch i traced my fingers over the roundness of her breasts, she skilled enjoying my appreciation of her body

her eyes closed at my teasing, seemingly lost in the feel of my touch, i took this opportunity to surprise her as i slowly lowered my head breathing slowly on her lace encased nipples, and then lightly kissing it, she groaned with satisfaction, eyes closed and head rolled off to the side, completely lost in touch.

She arched her back a little, making my kisses cover more of her breasts and also sliding her hips into my crotch, pressuring my rock hard erection

I grabbed and kneaded her breasts softly with my other hand took the opportunity to finally release the clasp and her free breast came into my full attention, i tool the nipple fully between my lips and flicked the tip of my tongue making her groan and arch her back even higher and after a short while i moved to the other breasts squeezing it a little to bring the nipple into my full attention.

After giving both breasts their due diligence, plus a little more to know they were well adored, i kissed down her belly again this time completely jumping over the skirt and kiss inside of her exposed thighs loving the fat that her skirt provided no opposition.
I kissed her moving on the edge of the seem of her lace underwear, i slid her panties quickly and as she had hinted that she was not interested in playing any more games.

I kissed down the strip of hair she had on her mound, i kissed her outer lips.
She squirmed trying to aim me at the center, with a slow slide of tongue i penetrated her slit, i quickly realised that how well she tasted.

i gave her a few more of my pieces with the tongue and ran it firmly up her slit, putting pressure on his slit, she groaned loudly and then reached down to pull my head back to her…”that enough for know, we’ll have lot of time too play later, i cant take anymore ,i want you in now” she groaned

I straighten up and released my tight grip on her, i start undoing my jeans and she took of my shirt complaining that she was the only one naked……….
I looked at her and thought about protection…before i could say anything she said
“don't worry i am on pill and its the wrong time of the month any way….now stop with the dilly dally and make me your,” said she

She literally grabbed me with one hand and my side with other and she pulled me onto her, a look of pure desire on her face….i pushed in slowly…we both revealed in experience eyes fastened on each other…enjoying out sensations…..

When i hit the barrier i froze for a second “ i love you” i said

I moved very slowly not wanting to cause her much pain, i slowly thrusted deeper into her and wrapped my arms around her…i waited for a while allowing her muscles to adjust around my invading member.

I loved the feeling of my entire body thrusted it to hers, feeling completely connected with one another, we found a slow rhythm letting the sensation build and build……

i thrusted deeper and deeper causing her to moan with pleasure ….i found her lips and kissed her ..the pressure built and the pace increased and body fought for release from their long depraved desires….i felt her walls contract and her extremely warm and tight cavity put reassure on every millimeter of his member, and he screamed her way to her final release…we were one now.. our very souls intertwined and synchronised and connected.

she caressed my side and chest and snuggled as tight as she could, and occasionally told me that she loved me…

I wanted to stay awake in this moment forever but the relaxed feeling took its toll and we both drifted into blissful sleep at least for a while…..

“Hey baby, wake up baby” was all i herd as i woke up to see her hair on my face

“Hey,” i said meekly

“hey, it about time you up i have been trying to wake up from so long” she said breathlessly

“so what baby?” i wondered why she woke up up but then i just hit me like “Oh shit, its 6 AM and i am still at your house, my parents would be worried and i have too tell them about our change in relationship” i smiled and kissed her hand

she caressed my cheek with her other, “Baby you have to talk to my parents too, i know they never care but still you have too meet them and Ya my grand mom i have told her all about you, you need to ask him first too and only then your allowed to marry me” she said it

“just this, baby even if you had told me to go defeat Usain Bolt in running, i would have done that” i said

“come you got to go home before my parents see you, go and be ready after school you got to meet my parents”

“ Its gonna be tuff for them suddenly out of the blue they have a guy asking for permission too marry” i said

“don’t worry baby, i have told them a little about you” she said kissing me for the last time before i went away

all through the way home my legs didn't seem to move there was something that was attracting me back towards her, but i let that thought rest and headed home, soon to find out my dad greeting me with an angry look at his face…..

“young man, would you like explaining your late night endeavours” my dad looked at me

“were you with Candice?” my mom barged in

I didn't no what to say

“Don't call her that she not just Candice, she's your daughter-in-law” i said blatantly

“what did you say…you mean you..and she……said yes” my mom ran out of words
and i filled her for her

“Yes mom i proposed her last night, and she said yes” i announced triumphantly

my mom had tears in my eyes and she hugged me…my dad not wanting to be left around soon joined the hug…………

half the battle was won now it was just her parents left too approve and i was nervous as hell.

I picked her up for school and she sensed the nervousness, but as soon as we kissed it went up in a second. I reached school and parked the car at my regular spot we were back to our daily make out sessions but this time we went a little further as soon as i felt her amazing lips in contact with hers, my member stood up.

“Hey it never stood up just from a kiss, but now that it is up we gotta put it back to rest” she said with a naughty smile, as she opened by zipper and took my raging hard errection it to day light.. “WOW…how did you fit this thing in me last night” she said looking at my 8inch cock

she put her hand slowly own it and started jerking me off in the regular up-down fashion,

“you got to taste me last night, now let me taste you” she said as she started to suck me off , she was clearly in-experienced as i could make out from the conduced look on her face.

“Baby, just suck it as you would suck a lolly pop…oh Ya thats right…..flap your tongue over the helmet… Ya it feels good” i said in complete ecstasy, she indeed was a fast learner and i couldn't hold my self for long “baby i am gonna cum” as i came….she swallowed it whole “damm..you taste good baby, i love you”

we made out again this time with passion…before we straighter out to head back to the building…

Her diamond ring was soon spotted and her friends too were wild with happiness. Every one congratulated us…….

at lunch we sat with couple of her friends and mine, after seeing my original self her friends were really nice to me Amanda even tried to lure me……………………

and surprisingly my friend Vijay had managed to get Emma as her girlfriend, following in my footsteps.

so Amanda spoke up “Hey that diamond seems to big too be real…is at fake?” she asked me mockingly, she hadn't taken the rejection well.

All eyes were on me now,

“ the jeweller is gonna be so dead if it is” i said jokingly
“It might have cost a lot, how much you pay for it?” asked Rachel
“about 250,000 dollars”
every ones eyes just exploded, even Candice looked at me with un sure eyes

“where did you get so much of money from dude?” asked Derek he was Rachel’s boyfriend

I never really had told anyone about my job and income not even Candice only my parents were aware of that, i never really wanted the trouble that comes with owning big money…


“basically man I design apps and fix bugs for giants like apple and google and pay me well” not wanting to slash out the details..

“oh so you plan on working for them after you finish collage” asked Derek again

“No i don't plan to go to collage, i already know more than enough. I will open my own software company after i graduate” replied i

I could see that every one was impressed with my idea.

But i didn't matter what mattered was my meeting with Candice’s parents…..
so as the day weaned of me and Candice met again in the lot..but this time she was full of questions about my work.

“How come you never told me about what you did?”
“you know baby, you never asked” i replied sheepishly

“so how do you plan to make a living out of it, i am your fiancé and i need to know!!” she said blatantly
“Baby you know that your the love of my life and i’d never hide anything from you” i replied kissing her
“So you design apps, but what do you really do? and how much do you make out of it?”

“baby my work involves basically coding, i generally help the design team write the code for the programmes, sometimes when some big company like google or Facebook has some bugs or problems they contact me to go over their coding and fix this, i generally do this alone and these companies pay me well, some of the apps i developed have been downloaded more than a million times, so i get royalties from these otherwise google pays me 5 million $ to be at their beck and call and facebook and Instagram pay me 15 million $ a year, i have a T1 internet connections and lot of servers in the basement, which is kind of my invention room….plus my house runs on automatic system and even this car runs on voice control”

She looked astonished “but why did you hide these?”
“I thought you’d not want to date a nerd”
“thats bullshit, baby your the best thing that happened to me ever, all my friends are dying of envy because i got you first and they just couldn't figure you out, baby i love every thing you do and everything you say”
“Now what is your computer called?”
“Hello Ma’am, I am ‘C’ as Jason calls me” the computer suddenly came into life
“So ‘C’ why don't you take us to my parents house, while me and Jason are busy”
“Jason, “Protocol not found, initiate authority level” ‘C’ said to me
“Level 10 clearance authority initiate” i commanded ‘C’
and the car automatically started moving
“what was that?” she asked looking confused

“Candice, i gave you full level 10 clearance, my love now you can use ‘C’ facilities any time, he is all was there too help you, and his software is being downloaded to your phone as we speak you can access my house any time and as you know ‘c’ controls every thing in my house and car you can control them all, and best thing you can even talk to him for advice and all, he’s is a good listener”

she looked at me with affection “your really a gem, are you sure you wanna marry me, because i am gonna stick to you like superglue and never leave you”,

“i’ve never been so sure, my entire life” i replied

she literally jumped on me and shoved her tongue down my throat but i didn't complain and our tongues intwined in each others started dancing a dance of its own, we were lost another world and we were like and a dream, but suddenly were woken up by C’s voice “Jason,Candice we have reached your parents house”

“its time”, she said getting of my lap and opening the door and i suddenly felt a bolt of electricity run down my spine, i was scared as what would happened,
As we toke the walk down her driveway to her door, her house was beautiful and had a colonial setting to it large doorways big couches, chandeliers and candlesticks.

Candice guided me to a large room and as i entered i could see both her mother and father sitting on two large sofas, they both nodded as they saw me….

“Mom..Dad this is the guy that i told you about”

“Good afternoon, Sir …Ma’am” i said

“SO what do you want?” she asked me rudely

“Sir….I have been dating your daughter for a month now and yesterday i asked her hand for marriage and she accepted, we have come here for your blessing”
Candice smiled and showed her ring
“Thats probably a fake” she smirked

“No Mom, stop it” Candice freaked out

“So what do your parents do for a living?” Mary asked me

“My moms a lawyer and my dad is a surgeon” i answered

“haha….poor buy, you probably want our money…hahaha” she laughed

“MOM, STOP THIS HE HAS MORE MONEY THAN YOU”
Candice was red with anger and expressions on her moms face changed suddenly

I squeezed Candice’s hand and took the charge

“Yes ma’am though i am officially unemployed i still happen to earn 20 million $ myself and i plan to open a company and who knows what it may develop into”

after this statement her mom kept striking me with questions and i answered them with tact and wit.

at last she spoke “No matter what you say and what you do, your not fit for my daughter, go home and don’t even think about seeing her” she looked at me trying to scare me

“MOM, NO if you do this i’ll run away and never comeback” Candice gripped my arm tight

“LEAVE THIS MAN AND GO TO YOUR ROOM OR ELSE” she looked at Candice with resentment

Candice hugged me tighter

“ROBERT, KICK THIS MAN OUT OF MY HOUSE” she shouted at her husband

He rose up and headed toward us i used my other arm to grip Candice tightly
and he came up to me and hugged us.

“ROBERT WHAT ARE YOU DOING? YOU MAD” her mother shouted again

“SHUT UP BITCH” he said, every one was shocked specially Mary who now stood stunned and in silence

“You already have destroyed, my life and i will not let you do the same with my daughters, who clearly seems to have made the right choice, she loves this man and that is it,” he said

“ROBERT WHAT HAS GOTTEN IN TO YOU, CANT YOU SEE THIS BOY HAS NO CLASS AND MANNERS” she shouted again

“You talk about class and manners” he laughed

“Mary you were nothing but a cheap slut, who was running after every guy with money and i thought you loved me, and because of my mistake i and my daughter had to bear with your torment, you destroyed my relationship with my father and left me homeless, but NO more Mary No more I want a divorce” he said
“DIVORCE, I’LL TAKE EVERYTHING YOU OWN YOU BASTARD” she shouted she was too proud too apologise

“Thanks to you,there is not much left to my name other than few thousand dollars in the bank, rest is all owned by my father which cant be claimed by you so you better start packing your bags and looking for a job” he told he told her

She stomped out of the door and returned with a few bags, only to walk out the front door and go away.
“ Now, my boy we never got a chance to know each other?” he said
“No, Sir” i answered
“Sir wont work, after all i am your father-in-law to be, call me Dad”

The moment he uttered these words Candice looked at me with ecstasy and kissed me then and there after all we were about to be married.

“Ahh..ah all right you to i am still sitting her…..so Jason why don’t we acquaint are selves over some food, i plan on heading out to the Hilton in an our why don't you too join us”

“sure sir, i mean dad” i replied


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  • brutusleoinc
    25.06.2014 10:37
    Please guys give a positive rating if you live it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 11:27
    too much errors!! my eyes are bleeding

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 11:30
    No need to be a grammer Nazi when every sentence has a mistake.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 11:41
    Good work grams needs work but an enjoyable read keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 12:29
    Great potential, good plot base, continue of course. Understandably English is not your first language, but you can send your story to someone who knows English well to proofread for you and avoid grammar mistakes and add clarification. Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 13:18
    Obviously there's a few grammatical mistakes but, as you said its your first story isn't your primary language. Brilliant story and I eagerly awake the next chapter.

    Geoff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 16:10
    Indian author????
    there was a dialogue from dabangg

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 16:21
    Indian author????
    there was a dialogue from dabangg

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2014 19:28
    keep it going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 04:45
    If you have to ask people not to be spelling Nazi's don't write your stupid crap story in the first place

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 04:47
    So Mujibur, Pradesh, whatever your name is, go get yourself a nice yogurt and hot curry enema and leave the writing to people who know what they are doing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 04:47
    Stupid frog assed fucktard!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 04:52
    There is a great American pastime that is quite pleasurable and you should familiarize yourself with. First take a bread toaster, plug it in, add bread, when it starts to toast hop in a bathtub of nice warm water and submerge the toaster. The experience is shockingly pleasurable!!! This is a joke dumbass don't actually do it!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 05:03
    Good story ...
    ... good plot twists.... try reading the story allowed to yourself for you post it will help.... keep it up I can't wait to read what you write next
    ...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 08:23
    Dude you don't know how to spell shit ask someone who knows the English language ty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 09:27
    I loved the story but it would make it so much better if you sent it to someone to correct all the grammar. It really killed part of the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 14:00
    Nice story, except the sex got rather light treatment. I gave it a positive, but you need to put in a bit more detail, and more sex between Candice and Jason. Maybe a part 2?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 14:05
    Check your inbox. I have sent you a PM.

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  • brutusleoinc
    26.06.2014 17:38
    all right people....thanks!! for the next part ill make sure that I proofread it first and yes I ackowledge the fact that there are too many mistakes................

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  • brutusleoinc
    26.06.2014 17:47
    PLUS YA COMING ON THE SPELLING PART I use Pages on my mac and for some reasons the words like shit, hell, yo, damm and all the other words get transformed into whatever that shitty word processor wants.....i am sorry that the repeated grammar and spelling mistakes have killed the rhythm..once again I apologise.....

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  • brutusleoinc
    26.06.2014 17:49
    Plus that dialogue was in some Bollywood movie some friend showed me.......and I liked it.....and I am Dutch not indian though I recently shifted to Baltimore

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2014 00:22
    Try and get another author to edit the story for u.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2014 06:00
    Great story but lacking the editing you needed. Get an editor because I love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2014 02:08
    Cock a son of a dick ah mother bitch you are make the story bad!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2014 18:18
    Lord love a duck, you claim to be a med student? That's seriously messed up!! Where do you find pseudostratified ciliated columnar epithelium? If you had to choose would you rather be infected by Gram positive or Gram negative rods? What is the other name for Downs Syndrome? What causes Cushingoid features in a patient who does not have Cushings? What is the normal range for bilirubin? When a patient presents with a positive for troponin what does this usually indicate? What are otoliths and where are they found?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2014 18:26
    I find it very strange that a med student would have to time write erotica. Especially when English is not their first language, you should be way too busy learning English to keep up in class. Amaze everyone with your brilliance and answer the questions below. If you're in med school which I seriously doubt, I have one word that's going to describe your entire medical career. This is a word even you should be able to pronounce and spell, after all even ducks can pronounce it!!! On second thought I will let you tell us what it is!!

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  • brutusleoinc
    29.06.2014 01:25
    Man English isn't my first language doesn't mean that I can't speak or understand English...I am tetralingual and plus I do get time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2014 06:24
    You would not be accepted to medical school not able to spell words like "jeweler." That's like third grade level spelling. If you were intelligent enough to go to medical school you would spell and write better than this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2014 06:27
    No way would I want you for my doctor. You could misspell medications that are very similair in spelling. Making that mistake with a few of the critical medications could be catastrophic or even fatal.

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  • brutusleoinc
    29.06.2014 10:11
    You know to get into med school you don't have to write some essay or some article to check your grasp over your spellings... Ya I admit that like any other human I too make mistakes..and you know that when you write a story this long it has to contain errors...and I in the excitement to post this erotica didnot edit or proofread it and I apologise for that but please people don't make this about me... If you got any thing to say about the story please do...but dont pester me about my life and why I can't get into med school.....

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  • brutusleoinc
    29.06.2014 10:14
    Plus it suggests how ignorant you are...you know that all doctor don't prescribe medications and the field that I want radiation oncology doesn't allow me to prescribe medications plus you know even if a did prescribe you medications...and I missed a e from paracetamol the pharmacist would understand.....

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  • brutusleoinc
    29.06.2014 10:19
    Plus you idiot I didnot learn American English in my high school and in British English the word jeweler is spelled as jeweller and the spelling mistakes you all point out maybe because I used British English and not American

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2014 19:33
    Please keep writing! I understand that English is not your first language (and it is amazing that you are tertalingual) and I understand the British English and not American English. Keep writing you have a great idea and plot an I want to read more. Don't let inconsiderate people get in your way, because they can choose not to read your stories if they don't like your style. I eagerly await the next chapter!!
    -Ryukin127

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2014 19:33
    Sorry, I meant to say Ryukin126!!! Haha, messed up on my own name :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2014 10:30
    Pt 1. This is one of my favorite stories. I'm not the best at American English; however, some may know English is one of the hardest languages to learn. I speak with ease, writing can be a weakness. I take Spanish, Latin, French, and German as well. I understand what you're saying and read the story with ease. I'm also rather laid back with the fact you make spelling "mistakes" some are such as the use of "there" - there are three ways to spell it and if it isn't your first language you're not going to know the difference. Everybody can hide behind a conputer and "trash talk" you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2014 10:31
    Pt 2. They're not worth your time fighting or arguing with. It's often better to tell them "I'm sorry you feel the need to act that way." And leave at that. People will try to cyber bully no matter what you do. Just don't take offense to it. You have talent in your writing you can make a nice plot and story, that doesn't mean what small errors there are in this story make it a bad story.It isn't.They just want attention and boost their self-esteem.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2014 03:29
    Author listen the person below, your ignorance is really starting to show. All actual physicians prescribe meds during school and you graduate with that privilege. Perhaps you are talking about a technical program and not full blown medical school? It's very obvious to me that you do not know what you are talking about. Paracemetol known as acetaminophen in the United States is an over the counter medication. No rx is necessary.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2014 11:29
    Normally banter like this would make me laugh but Brutus is so pitiful I just can't. Now your're whining and asking people not to make it about you, only the story? You made it about you when you wanted to seem smart and superior when you wrote you were a medical student. Now quit crying because you have been exposed as a liar!!! Have you ever heard of English Composition? Even Americans must take English classes as part of a Pre medical degree. You are required to write numerous essays in these courses. So yeah actually you do have to write essays to get into medical school. There is no way you could attain the necessary grades in those classes that would be required for medical school. Either quit whining and accept you have been caught in a lie, or better yet, close your account and don't submit anymore of the garbage you call writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2014 13:58
    Normally banter like this would make me laugh but Brutus is so pitiful I just can't. Now your're whining and asking people not to make it about you, only the story? You made it about you when you wanted to seem smart and superior when you wrote you were a medical student. Now quit crying because you have been exposed as a liar!!! Have you ever heard of English Composition? Even Americans must take English classes as part of a Pre medical degree. You are required to write numerous essays in these courses. So yeah actually you do have to write essays to get into medical school. There is no way you could attain the necessary grades in those classes that would be required for medical school. Either quit whining and accept you have been caught in a lie, or better yet, close your account and don't submit anymore of the garbage you call writing.

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  • brutusleoinc
    02.07.2014 08:22
    My dear friends first of all I said iam in med school and I never said that I have become a full doctor or something like that I am infact yet to start with the school you all know that college starts in the autumn...I am new to this country and ya there are plenty of things I don't know as,for the pre- med degree I did a undergraduate course back in Netherlands and I can assure you that I wasn't required to write any essay or word check and I am still not fully aware about my med school coz I am yet to clear one and my knowledge is restricted about the med school in Us.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2014 13:57
    I can assure you that you will not be entering medical school with an undergrad degree from another country. Your are going to be taking undergrad courses befor you ever set foot in a medical college. You will be writing essays, compositions, and research papers in many of the courses you take, it's not restricted to English. So when you claimed you didn't have prescription rights in the field of radiation oncology you are admitting that you were talking out of your ass!!! You haven't clue one about what you're talking about. You need not worry about it anyways, rest assured you are never going to be accepted to medical school in the United States. That's an undeniable fact I guarantee!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2014 02:29
    Laughing my ass of at this guy, says he is a medical student, your not even a pre med student ya putz!

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  • brutusleoinc
    03.07.2014 12:08
    Man why do you think that everything in the world runs the way it does in your country.... All right you people have a pre med school or undergraduate course of 3 or 4 years and then a med school of 4 years so summing up you people take 8 years to become doctors of medicine but in Europe Australia Asia (generaly speaking) there is a degree known aS MBBS for which you can apply after 12 grade of your high school and you go right into med school.... This degree can be earned in about 5 to 6 years( according to your region) and after which you become a full doctor and can prescribe medications...then after mbbs you can go into residency of your choice similarly it takes 5 to 6 years in our country.... So coming on to my story I have an mbbs degree or basisartsen as we call it in Dutch which is equal to your doctor of medicine....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 01:44
    Prt 1. Adding to my two part response from a few days ago. You just need to say "I'm sorry you feel the need to act that way towards me" and go about your way. I live in the US and we have a nationally known college here. Over 80% of those students don't speak or write English. But they are well beyond the school expectations that they school goes to ther country and gives them scholarships. The English professors complain they don't know who to write, but considering they are mostly foreign exchange students that's to be expected. You can get a job for working for our government through this school and then they obtain citizenship or they go home. We, as a country, have a lower mentality and comprehension compared to other countries. You all will continue to belittle another person behind a computer screen, I've seen enough to know its pure ignorance. The talent is within the story. The plot. Most people believe when they live in the USA that they are above others, I see it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 01:52
    Prt 2 differently. Other countries are highly intelligent; for example china or japan with technology, Spain is rich with culture and art and talented musicians, many other Spanish speaking countries have produced amazing sports stars such as Molina or Pujoles. Never, I repeat never, put somebody down for writing a story in a language that isn't their primary language. I would LOVE to see you all putting somebody down write a story in a foreign language. Yes, get this, American English IS a foreign language to many people. This author happens to be one of the many. You're ignorance is uncanny and just shows to the world the ignorance of the USA. You all should be ashamed. This person tried, that's better than what you call can say or do in a foreign language without google translate, which by the way is useless and mostly incorrect. To the author, I've defended you a few times and have considered making an account to talk to you. Don't let others ignorance detour you from writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 02:12
    Prt 2 differently. Other countries are highly intelligent; for example china or japan with technology, Spain is rich with culture and art and talented musicians, many other Spanish speaking countries have produced amazing sports stars such as Molina or Pujoles. Never, I repeat never, put somebody down for writing a story in a language that isn't their primary language. I would LOVE to see you all putting somebody down write a story in a foreign language. Yes, get this, American English IS a foreign language to many people. This author happens to be one of the many. You're ignorance is uncanny and just shows to the world the ignorance of the USA. You all should be ashamed. This person tried, that's better than what you call can say or do in a foreign language without google translate, which by the way is useless and mostly incorrect. To the author, I've defended you a few times and have considered making an account to talk to you. Don't let others ignorance detour you from writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 02:37
    Actually after med school you have internship and residency. Length depends on your chosen area of practice. For example, cardiology is a ten year residency. We do not honor degrees from other countries not even medical degrees for entry directly into medical school. You are the prime example of why those rules are in place!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 02:41
    You don't like our country? Then why don't you go back to your own and stick your finger in a dyke!!! Since you say you can't find a girl yet list fucking as a hobby, putting your finger in a hole is no doubt a skill you have attained some success at!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 02:48
    Look who has to defend you, another idiot who can't write at a level as to even make a valid point. He needs to go back to school too, at least if he is gonna live in the US. I am fine with you unevolved cretins staying in your own country. Don't come here and be down on the US, love it or leave it!! I am sure we can help you find your way home. Guess what the US is superior, that's why everyone wants to come here you fools!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 02:54
    I think you should create an account so you can talk to Brutus. My question is which one of you is gonna be the "bitch" when you're doing more than talking. Hell maybe you'll take turns packing fudge, just as long as it keeps your whiny disgusting asses of this site!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2014 13:48
    Waiting for next chapter

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  • brutusleoinc
    04.07.2014 17:18
    Ya I know my mbbs degree is useless in this country that is I listed myself as a med student..to practice in Us I have to clear 3 stages of usmle.... And I have already cleared step 1 step 2ck and 2cs... Iam awaiting results for step 3 after which I can apply for residency and ecfmg is acting as my current med school... It's just on paper and legally I can still practice medicine back home.....

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  • brutusleoinc
    04.07.2014 17:31
    The .it's people like you that can't tolerate others who are better than you..... I will now not reply to any of your useless ridiculous accusations about me, my proffesion or my status...man whoever you are really what your problem..you don't like the story? Ok I couldn't care less..... You think I am an idiot! Ok think whatever you want but please don't pollute the comments section with your useless comments...it because of people like you with not an iota of grey matter in your brain that authors have to disable comments... Man whatever your problem with me is keep it to your self

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  • brutusleoinc
    04.07.2014 17:31
    Oh man please don't start with the superiority bull shit man on US the country which all of you take do much pride in almost three-fourths of the engineers..doctors and professionals come from foreign lands from third world as you call it...man your economy is particularly run by China and your IT companies by indians.... And you know why all people wanna come to us because they already have so much competition back home... Man though long but it's easier to become a doctor in the US. And Netherlands is not a backward or third world in any way.. He'll we got a higher GDP than you and we are technically more advanced.... Man please don't feel that just because you got a better army makes you better than the whole world.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2014 01:07
    You foreign assholes oughta kiss our ass, it's because of America you even have a country to call home!!! Like the other guy said, "Love it or Leave It" We also have rights in this country, such as freedom of speech. So just like you dorks can voice your opinion we can voice ours too. Our families fought and died for you ungrateful assmunchers!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2014 02:15
    Hey if your country is so much more technologically advanced and superior why are you here? I to am an immigrant to america am here because its better than anywhere else you know that to and you make us all look bad by doing this things. I love it here its great shame on you fucktard ass

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2014 12:26
    Dude, how many times do u have to be intellectually bitch slapped? U cant write and you have no idea when your totally outclassed when it comes to the brain department you just don't get it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2014 16:39
    Lol watch out he is listening to his little butt buddy now he is not gonna respond to comments about his "proffesion" lmao. He oughta be a urologist or a proctologist, oh wait given that he is tetralingual and thinks he is so smart maybe he could be a bispecialist and practice both. Then he would have a reason to piss and moan and be a pain in the ass!

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  • brutusleoinc
    05.07.2014 17:08
    Man please don't start with rights and freedoms...you make it sound like that you people are the only democracy in the world and man you don't own the world I'll fucking go wherever I want..and do whatever I want.......and I know that all you can do is crib and bitch...because you are a fucking bitch and get a life my friend it clearly shows that you are a loner......and got nothing substantial to do in your miserable life and I did try seeing things from your point of view but I couldn't get my head that far up my ass

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2014 00:38
    What the fuck is a crib? Careful dude your making the little sissy mad now. Too funny now it's "I'll go wherever I want..." Sniff...sniff. Man guy it's obvious who the bitch is here and it's not the folks that are showing you for the retard you are. No wonder you can't get a girl, you fucking are one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2014 01:55
    Brilliant cone back Brutus what did it take ya ten, twelve hours to come up with that?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2014 05:15
    Do tell, you mentioned you had your head up your ass, (like we couldn't figure that out on our own) were you able to actually see your brain? I am just wondering what a walking, talking, rectums brain looks like. Oh, what's that penis breath? You couldn't actually see the little pea sized structure for all the cock snot you'd taken up there in the last few hours? What a pity, you still don't have the evidence to prove you even have a brain. Better luck next time, shit for brains.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2014 08:41
    Ouch that one gotcha good lol!! You do realize that your in a battle of wits with people don't you? Probably not, as you are stepping onto the battlefield an unarmed man. Learn to shut your piehole, everytime you comment, stupidity is the result. Again shut your fucking mouth weenie boy. You'll never learn!!!!!!!!!!

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