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Hot for Daddyyy!

Author: badgirlbeccaaaaa

Date: 31 October 2014

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This is my own original work. I did not copy this from anyone. Even though it is extremely cliche and probably over written. I just thought of the idea one night and decided to write about it right away.
I'll love you forever if you leave me any comments. Constructive criticism would be great. This is my first story that I've ever written like this. I hope it's not too terrible. I'm gonna shut up now so hope you enjoy xo


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I don't remember when I started to have such a huge crush on my father. I mean he's my father. The whole thing was pretty weird. But I just couldn't help myself! My father is a real stunner. He's only 40 years old so he's very young and sexy! He's six feet tall and very fit because he likes to work out to relieve stress. His short, dark brown hair and blue eye combo are to die for. He's a serious catch, I'm telling you.

I bet you're probably wondering about me now. Well my name is Elizabeth Carter and I am 22 years old. I've just finished college and gotten a degree in law. Yeah I know, ironic as hell since I can't stop thinking about breaking it. I'm a mere five foot five and slim figured. I grew up in an active household and we've always worked out and played sports as I grew up. I have long blonde hair that I get from my mother and the same blue eyes as my father which I love; and everyone else seems to as well.

Now enough about all that. Let's talk about my totally illegal crush on my hunk of a dad. I can remember being a teenager and thinking he was so attractive. Every time I had friends sleep over they'd gush over him and I would get insanely jealous! As I went through high school I'd always find myself looking and him and thinking of him. My mom left when I was a freshman in high school to get married to some New Yorker wannabe artist but I didn't mind I was always a daddy's girl at heart. I think my mom knew that and I'm sure that's why she left. So it was always just the two of us. Me and my dad. We did everything together. Even the embarrassing first talks, bra and panties shopping, etc. Being around him all the time at the age of learning about sex and hearing my friends tell their stories of being with their boyfriends just made me insanely curious. I'd stare at his crotch wondering how big he was, if he masturbated, what he thought of when he did it... I'd get horny and play with myself at night when we went to bed too. Turning up my tv so he couldn't hear me moaning as I came imagining him fucking me and kissing me. Seriously, it was bad.

Ever since I've been home from college I've had a lot of free time on my hands. My dad works from home mostly so he's always there as well. Lately whenever we're around each other, I notice that he peeks and glances at me. Ever since I first noticed I decided to wear more revealing clothing and do my hair when I'm around him. I know I'm crazy but I really want to seduce my father. I know he could fuck me better than any other idiot I'd been with in college. I know being with him would just rock my fuckin' world and I am determined to prove myself right.

I smiled big leaning against the kitchen counter as my father walked in.

"Hi, Daddy!" I said cheerfully as I always did. His returning dazzling smile and good morning made me almost bite my lip. I was wearing realllly small yoga shorts and tight tank top with no bra. My nipples were already hard and I saw my dad noticed as his gaze lingered a bit too long. "Going out today. Dad?" I asked taking in his appearance. He was wearing dress pants and a dress shirt which almost never happened.

"Yeah the office needs me to come in today then we have a staff party tonight to celebrate the sale profits we've made so far this summer." He explained before sipping more coffee. The way his tongue licked his upper lip....

"That sounds like fun Dad I hope you have a good time." I replied jumping up to sit on the counter. My legs were parted slightly. Just enough. Once again I saw his eyes lingering right where they definitely shouldn't. I could feel myself getting wet wondering what was on his mind.

"Alright well... I should be off. Leave me a note if you leave alright, Lizzy?" He said grabbing his things.

"Of course, Daddy. See you later." I said smiling and waving followed by a little lip bite. He coughed a bit then turned and walked out the door quickly. And I was left to keep plotting.

He looked so sexy all dressed up I almost lost my cool. I decided to rub myself right there because I was so insanely horny! Once I heard his car pull away, my tiny fingers slipped into my panties and began exploring. I moaned loudly knowing I could as I fingered my pussy on our kitchen counter.

"Oh yessss Daddy, right there mmmmm!" And "Fuck my pussy Daddy mhmmm." We're among a few of the things I said as I masturbated. Suddenly I heard a familiar car door slam. I ran to the living room kneeled on the couch and peeked out the window carefully.

I spotted my dad in the car with his hand wrapped around his own cock! His head was back and he looked like he was moaning. I started rubbing my pussy again paying attention to my clit. I couldn't stop moaning as I watched him jacking off. I'd never seen or heard my father do anything like this before. Had he heard me fucking myself? Did it turn him on? I came so hard as I watched him in his car. Right as I started to come down from my high I saw him grab a tissue and cum into it. The way his body shook and his veins popped out a bit in his neck. I could watch him do that over and over and never get tired of it. He took a few deep breaths before driving away quickly down the street. I smirked as an idea popped into my head. I walked up the stairs and removed my shorts and panties and dropped my soaked undies right in front of my fathers bedroom door. I wonder how he'll react when he sees those. ;)



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Sorry there's no sex yet! Just wanted to know what everyone thinks of the plot before I move ahead so leave me comments and stuff! I hope everyone likes this and it isn't too crappy lol so please lemme know what y'all think xo


currently writing part two finalllly! xo


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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 20:16
    the only limiting identification that I saw for your relation to your dad was that you got your eyes from him - that indicates blood father.
    unfortunately, your math does not work for you to be 22yo and your father to be 30yo; there is only an 8 year difference.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 20:44
    How can he be your daddy if he is 30 and you 22 ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 22:01
    Aside from the glaring age problem, I thought the story was very nice. Please continue. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 23:36
    my suggestion is to rewrite it with the CORRECT age difference

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 23:57
    I'm with everyone else. How is it possible you're 22 and your father is 30? Proof reading helps, a lot. Good start to the story, though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2014 00:26
    Ohhh I so wish you were my daughter. I would give all the cocktail you wanted, needed or desired.

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  • StatueofStone
    11.08.2014 01:33
    hot story.

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    11.08.2014 03:06
    LOL EVERYONE I'm sorry it was a typo! I seriously wrote this before going to work this morning sorry I didn't notice the mistake I fixed ittttt to the age he was supposed to be which is 40 :P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2014 05:20
    Next chapter please!!! hurry!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2014 07:24
    I cannot imagine a woman 22 years old with a college degree who still spells "masturbated" as "masterbated" (twice). Also, why are your fingers still "tiny" at your age? Are you malformed?
    Take some time with your feeble attempts at writing and PROOF-READ BEFORE you post.

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  • LittleKittyKat
    11.08.2014 11:27
    Utter crap

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    11.08.2014 13:30
    sorry about the typo again anon reader it's fixeddddd. however um no I'm not malformed, but I do have tiny hands have you never met someone who has small hands? everyone is different thank you very much. AND THIS STORY ISNT ABOUT ME it's a fictional character that I made up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2014 15:50
    what I find hot is the idea of an 18yo girl who likes to write erotica! way to go girl!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2014 00:39
    Clearly, your writing shows YOU'RE A Guy!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2014 00:44
    Totally stilted writing. Your lame attempt should not be rewarded with accolades of praise. And I agree. You're not an 18 year old girl. You're a 50-ish year old man!

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    12.08.2014 11:49
    thank you to the person who thinks it's hot that I write erotica! x
    and seriously???? I AM an 18 year old girl!! why the fuck would I lie about that? I came on this site to be truthful and let out random stories that I thought of that we're hot to me. damn y'all will for real find anything to pick on about the writers on this website.
    I understand when I have typos and such that y'all feel the need to point out but my age???? seriously???? I'm probably one of the youngest writers on here and I feel like I'm more mature than 90% of you it's truly saddening.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2014 22:00
    I for one feel no need to be a granmar nazi, or to doubt the identity of the writer. It was a fun story, not written poorly and I enjoyed it. I hope to read more from you miss, please keep up the good work :)
    -Tharric

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    13.08.2014 01:37
    THANK YOU THARRIC!!! that is so kind and sweet of you to say I'm currently working on a part two xo

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  • Midwest_guy
    13.08.2014 09:10
    I think this story is really hot, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2014 10:29
    Hey , I like the story regardless of your age , or sex :) .

    Please , don't mind too much about typos , because most of us have them, and keep writing :) .

    Oh ! Fuck the haters :D !

    xpepinitox .

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    13.08.2014 18:05
    xpepinitox you rooock I'm glad you like it :D <3 and thank you Midwest guy toooooo (:

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2014 09:00
    The answer to your question is yes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2014 03:09
    Ommg this story was getting me wet and had my pussy pulsing ;) mmm,I just want to finger my tight pussy and rub on my clit;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2014 03:12
    And her story says 40 not 30 you idiots

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    17.08.2014 19:12
    thank you anonymous readers!!! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2014 00:03
    Absolutely brilliant! Would love to see more ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2014 14:36
    Awww part two needs to happen

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  • badgirlbeccaaaaa
    17.09.2014 10:07
    SO MUCH SPAM UGHHHHHH but I'm currently writing part two so I'm reposting this so it can be in latest and more people will see it :) xx

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  • Midwest_guy
    17.11.2014 07:43
    I can't wait for part 2, how is it coming?

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