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Mommy's Love Denied

Author: mathew elizabeth

Date: 29 November 2014

Boy, Dark Fantasy, Humiliation, Incest

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Mommy's Love Denied

By Mathew Elizabeth

Chapter One

These strange feelings started when I was only 18-years-old. I always knew my 37-year-old mother was a beautiful woman; with her long blonde flowing hair, her blue shimmering eyes and her wonderful voluptuous figure. She was the most gorgeous woman I knew. I loved her with all my heart and would of done anything for her. It was pure innocent love. That was until all my vulgar high-school friends started to talk about seducing her and 'doing things' with parts of her body.

My name is Scott and I had become rather disturbed. I was probably the most muscular kid in my group; which was ironic since I was the kid everyone made fun of for being super goofy. I guess it was because of my personality. I was the first and only child in my family. So I was very ignorant to things like 'popular culture' and I wasn't funny or witty at all. It was easy to trick and make fun of me. I was super gullible.

My mothers name was Penelope; she was 37-years-old, single and was divorced from my father who had moved to Europe years ago. I thought she was the most beautiful woman in the world. There was nothing she wouldn't do for me. As mothers do; she fed, clothed and watched funny television programs with me. My mother and I were best of friends. Things were so wonderful and innocent. But then my friends filled me with these thoughts of worry and paranoia. I didn't want my mommy to be that way. I didn't want my mommy to love anyone except me!

"Scotty," One of my friends Andrew said to me, "I bet your mom sucks great dick,"

"Yeah," another friend named Josh added, "Fucking milf! I bet she loves the cock!"

"Do you think she takes it up the ass too?" Another skinny friend named Justin said hungrily, "She's got such a fat butt. Have you tried to fuck her?"

"No! I would never!" I said horrified.

"Pussy," Justin said to me with distain, "I would fuck her if she were my mommy. We all would."

All of my friends laughed with each other in front of me and whole heartedly agreed.

With these vulgar and intimidating words my thoughts of my mother were shattered and redesigned. She had become the object of all my male peers desires. Slowly throughout the day at school; thoughts of her sucking random cock and taking penis in her anus were overloading my mind. My soul was transformed. I kept thinking about her moaning and gyrating her big butt on the lap of a random boy that was shrouded in shadow.

Who was fucking my mom in my thoughts? No one! It's just your imagination! She would never do that! She would never betray you!

I pulled at my hair and my eyes shuddered in horror. The thought of my mother being violated and used broke my heart and was a extremely new and powerful feeling. To further my shame I felt my cock tightening against my underwear and school pants. Why was my penis hard? I wondered if it was perhaps my body reacting to the competition. I knew I wasn't sexually attracted to my own mother before. So why now? My friends words had unlocked something inside me that would haunt me for the rest of my life. I saw my mother no longer as an innocent woman of nurture and kindness. But now I saw my mother as woman that was desired and had needs like any other attractive woman.

I was glad to return home from that bizarre day at school. My friends words about my mother kept repeating in my mind as I walked home.

I sighed, took a breath of fresh air and happily decided to greet my wonderful mother . I joyfully skipped into the front hallway and called out to her.

"Mom! I'm home!"

"Hey Scott!" I heard my mother call out from the distance, "How was your day at school honey?"

"Good," I lied.

I walked further down the hallway and towards the open kitchen area where the laundry also was. I stepped into the laundry and to my horror my mother was bare ass naked bending over and stuffing clothes in the washing machine.

I stared and stared.

I stood creepily behind her and in a trance. My mother had a knack for being naked in the house and lingered without any clothes after she had a shower. I never took much notice until now. Before today I never even thought twice about it.

Mother would just walk around naked while I watched my cartoons and played my video games. I never used to care. But now; after my friends vulgar brainwashing words I looked at her wonderful busty body in a completely different perspective.

"She's got such a fat butt," I remembered skinny Justin say at recess, " Have you tried to fuck her?"

My mother's ass was poking out towards me; at the doorway where I was standing. She busy shuffling through the laundry basket on the floor. So she didn't notice me staring at her intimate places between her legs and ass-crack. Her gigantic ass-cheeks and thick legs swayed in front of me. It looked warm and welcoming.

My eyes were wide as I could see her pussy lips and her asshole. Her asshole was winking between her crack every time she swayed and shuffled through the clothing. Her large bulbus butt cheeks looked so slick and glorious. Steam could be seen hovering and flowing around her ass and legs. I never thought of it before; but her ass was the most glorious piece of round rump meat I had ever seen.

"Oh!" She said turning her head around, " I didn't see you there!" Mom giggled and wiggled her naked fat butt innocently at me. Her butt-cheeks wobbled from side to side in the aftershock.

"Why do you have to be naked all the time?" I said rather annoyed and stern.

"Oh I'm not naked all the time," She said waving her hands at me, "I just stay naked for an hour or so after shower that's all; to cool down. You know that."

"Well; can you please not be naked when I get home from school?" I asked, " I could of invited one of my friends over from school today. What if one of them saw you?"

"YOU bringing friends over?" My mom said pleasantly surprised.

My mom was right. I rarely invited friends over after school. I treated my home kind of like a sanctuary. Besides; sometimes all my friends witty jokes at the expense of other people; usually me; become tiresome and I prefer to hang alone after school and play video games most of the time.

"Well fine then Scott," My naked mother said with her tits hard and her arms crossed, "I wont be naked in front of you anymore if you have such a problem with it."

"No, I never said that." I said meek, " You can be naked as much as you like mommy! Its just please be wary about my friends after school."

"You ARE getting at that age though," She said concerned, "Maybe it was O.K when you were nine-years-old but not when you are eighteen. I don't think its appropriate for me to be butt naked in front of you for now on. You have developed into a man. So I should be decent."

What have I done!

How could I be so stupid. Maybe it was morally for the best. But my body and penis had never felt so betrayed. That wonderful glimpse of my mother perfect juicy bottom would be my last. I would never see her walk around with her naked body ever again!

With my face full of dread my naked mother shuffled past me.

I followed her through the house before she entered her bedroom and got dressed. I watched her cute warm fat butt wiggle and jiggle for the last time as she strode down the hallway. It was sad; it was like I was saying goodbye to her beautiful buttocks when I only just begun to appreciate it. It was a tragic tease.

My mother entered her bedroom and looked back at me. I was very upset. Would she at least let me watch her get dressed?

"You wait outside cheeky," She said sweetly, but it sounded as harsh and cruel as if she was yelling. She then closed the door slowly.

"Pussy," I remembered my friend Justin's voice, " I would fuck her if she were my mom. We all would."

Those words haunted me all evening until bedtime. I remember staring at the ceiling full of stress and worry. My penis was as hard as a rock. It needed relief. My moms ass and butthole looked so lovely. Why did I act like such an bastard and criticise her nudity?! I should of said nothing; I was so stupid!
I longingly pull my penis out from the covers. It was as hard as a rock. The head of my cock ached and shined.

"Mommy," I whimpered and slid my hand up and down my damp hard penis. My fingers and thumbs slid and protruded between the base and bulbus eager red head. I stared intently at my dick while I stroked it; ready for it to explode. I thought about my moms ass bending over in the laundry room. I wished that moment lasted for hours. I closed and squinted my eyes trying to remember my mothers glorious bulbus hams in vivid detail. I needed it to be burned into my memory.

I was never going to see her beautiful butt again!

"Mommy!" I whimpered even louder; tears welling down my face in the lonely darkness. My hands tug and pull my penis aggressively. I heave and breath in panic. My heart rate got faster and faster. My right hand and wrist hammered around my wet, slippery and sensitive flesh. Loud squishing noises could be heard every time I applied pressure up or down. The hot pleasure was boiling up.

The image of my moms bent over buttocks in the laundry was deep in my mind as I tried to achieve climax. Her asshole was winking like it was talking to me.

"Hurry up and cum!" My moms butthole winked and taunted. My mothers angry voice coming out of her winking butthole like a talking fart.

"Hurry up; pull your little wiener and cum!" the anus cruelly said to me, " You have such a tiny penis! You are masturbating over your mothers bottom! You should be ashamed of yourself!"

"I'm so sorry!" I cried pulling my penis like I was crazy, "I'm so sorry I'm such a bad son mommy! Please forgive me! Please don't hate me!"

"Why are you such a creepy little pervert? At least your friends are cool enough to admit what they want."

The image of my mothers beautiful, stern and annoyed face suddenly appeared in front of me in my dream; instantly we were both transported from the laundry-room to the hallway in front of her bedroom. With one final look of distain; mom suddenly slammed her bedroom door in my face. My heart was broken. My mother didn't want to see or talk to me.

My hand was tightly around the base of my cock. My dick head throbbed with anticipation and eagerness. Let it out! I told myself. Let it all out! The hopelessness, the fear, the heartbreak! I twiddle my fingers around the base. My cock didn't need much more stimulation.

I looked longingly at the blankness of her bedroom door and I could feel my cock nudging and scraping against my bedcovers. I rubbed my cock more slowly but increasingly harsh and intense.

"MOMMY!" I yelped helplessly, "PLEASE MOMMY!"

I keeled over and convulsed. My cock spasmed every time a thick wad of watery cum splattered all over her bedroom door. I shook and shuddered as the hopeless feeling overtook me.

"You little wimp," I heard mom giggle through the doorframe.

I opened my eyes to the darkness of my bedroom. My hand and dick are sticky amongst my bed-covers. Tears were still built up in my eyes. My eyes and my cheeks were crusty.

"Goodnight Scotty," I heard my mother call out from outside my room before she went to bed.

"Goodnight mommy!" I called out in a whaling desperate voice, "I love you!"

It was probably all in my head. But I sobbed when I got no reply.

To be continued....


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  • Norton+X
    29.11.2014 00:18
    I can feel the stress in your story. It is worthy of a positive vote, but I ran out of votes for today. Scott's paranoid affection for his mother is very real and well done. Good story, Mathew.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 03:59
    Cool, Can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping this turns into a cuckold story~

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 08:24
    A pathetic mind came up with this crap . . .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 19:35
    Great story, well written, not just a slam and bang but emotionally connected, love it write more please

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  • Norton+X
    30.11.2014 21:24
    Okaaaay. You get points for originality and that is not to be disrespected. Let's see what else is going to happen.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2014 21:25
    Very poorly written. If you can learn how to proof-read, try doing that to your stories(?) prior to posting them. You have many errors in them that could be corrected if you bothered to proof-read properly.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2014 08:17
    From the title, I thought it would be the son denying the mom his love & her prosueing him and offering all kinds of things to get him to love & service him.

    (Bigd1965bigd)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2014 21:16
    Is anybody else confused about what's supposed to be going on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2014 02:42
    This story is going to be a son losing his mom's love to that kid Ryan. Mathew has an outline of where he's going with it on bluvelvet's forum

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2014 03:28
    you dont need Ryan in your story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 05:56
    ying and yang fucker, I may write my own version where Scotty fucked Ryan over.... fucken pitty party

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 06:05
    Scott should beat the hell out of Ryan

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 06:23
    Please begin proof-reading and correcting your errors BEFORE posting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 06:54
    Damn dude you have some fucked up issues.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 08:16
    I would have Scott graduate. Get a good job that makes him grow up. He makes something of himself. Gets a woman that loves him. Although he doesn't let his mother or Ryan know. A year later he drives into town with his protective girlfriend. She sets people straight and make them kiss Scotts feet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 08:28
    I agree woth the person below me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 15:08
    I agree that Scott should beat the shit out of Ryan. I also agree with the poster below. This mother is a piece of shit. No mother could do that to her child.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 22:07
    Since this is cearly a humiliation kind of story I think Scott should walk in oh Ryan and his dad fucking his mom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2014 23:34
    Good job . I hope that Ryan take advantage of her trust . Then fuck her . total drunk or passed out . To humiliate Scott. Who could stop this but he preferes masturbate seeing his innocent and loving mommy fucked hardly by his "Friend" . At the end clearly . After a vacation spent in three . Alone . Where mom's Scott , completely at ease and innocentely , shows her body to the new son . And if she became pregnant too?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2014 09:32
    Now I know why they have so many school shooting. If I was Scoot I'd feed Ryan a bullet, just before I are one myself. Scoot is pathetic and depressing, if he does grow a set and man up, he should eat a bullet.

    (Bigd1965bigd)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2014 17:47
    Part 4 please

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    23.12.2014 02:10
    Sorry for the delays. Part 4 is on-going but slow. It will be out in the new year.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 04:50
    This is totally fucked up and unbelievable. If I were scott, Ryan would be dead and I would publish my mom for the whore she is to ruin her life.

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    30.12.2014 04:53
    This is a humiliation story. If Scott did any of that realistic stuff the humiliation would be over; wouldn't it? Plus, Scott's mom hasn't done anything with Ryan. So she's not a whore...yet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 05:57
    I get the humiliation thing, but the realism should also be involved a little bit. Andrew had it right...no mother could ever do this to their son. If you turn her into a whore, then you should also realize the terrible effect that this would have on Scott's psyche and then be prepared for him to snap and start going on a Muslim style killing rampage.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 06:10
    Yah im down to see scott go on a rampage, he go hit man style on their asses and tell his mom but when the mom told the police no one would beleive her kuz scotts just a kid. That be fucken awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 06:43
    Dread author clearly you get off on the humiliation, the setup is good, now make the story entertaining. It's time for Scott to fuck Ryan up, or you can keep going in the same pemis and start boring the shit out of us.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 07:42
    This kid is the type that one day walks into school and shoots everyone in site or hangs himself from the upstairs into the living room. But he should start a journal of the real story of things happening, Ryan's plan layed out. But really he should beat Ryan's ass or just runaway from home.

    (Bigd1965bigd)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 09:27
    I saw Scott runs away makes something of himself in two years time. gets a girlfriend that truly loves him she even builds his body up. they both return back to his home town and finds his mom in a state of missing him. the girlfriend tells the mother to late for that and ties her up. ryan shows up and gets tied up. the girlfriend starts fucking scott in front of the mother showing what she missed and lost. afterward they both humiliate the mother by pissing on her and make a vibrator fuck ryan up the butt with a cage on his manhood so he can't get off. Just a thought

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 13:51
    Weirdly written with many misspelled words. Don't you know about spell-check and proof-reading prior to posting? Negative rating.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 18:41
    You people wanting him to go on a killing spree are fucking idiots. This is a cuckold/humiliation story, there will be no revenge because the humiliation is the entire point. If you want to jerk off to dudes going on shooting rampages then watch the nightly news.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 23:15
    Goood job . Plese continued !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2015 01:18
    I loved this story when it started out but it's been getting less and less interesting with each chapter :/

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    01.01.2015 02:10
    I'm sorry you feel that way. I will admit that this was the worst chapter despite its length being the longest. It was designed to tie up loose ends from the previous chapters while at the same time foreshadow the following chapters to come. One more chapter of build-up (chapter 5) then the story is going to go full steam ahead.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2015 03:03
    Great .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2015 04:22
    Christ, the entitlement of everyone in the comments is ridiculously sad. This isn't your story, you're not paying for shit. If you don't like it, take your whiny nonsense elsewhere.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2015 05:13
    Stop making Scott look like a pussy lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2015 13:07
    Timetable on the next chapter?

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  • Hawkrider
    02.03.2015 02:59
    I say he ties Ryan up while taking his own mother in front of Ryan. then after he does. he goes up to Ryan with a gun to Ryans head and pulls the trigger in frontof a satisfied mother who has a smile on her face from her sons big dick.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.03.2015 03:47
    Plzzzz killl ryan, then when the mom tries to tell the police that her son did it she wont have anyproof and think shes crazy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.03.2015 05:29
    I agree with hawk

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.03.2015 05:32
    Perhaps you could make Ryan a bitch boy before you decide...Just a thought.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2015 11:13
    took u long enough to write 1 of these

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2015 17:33
    When u write again eh?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2015 21:32
    One of my favorite stories so far. Don't listen to the commentors, keep going down the same theme you were going for since the beginning.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2015 21:33
    One of the best.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2015 21:35
    Great story so far. Keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2015 21:54
    Keep going.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 06:56
    Scott's revenge lets fuck up Ryan

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:04
    Dude I've read a lot of Netorare. I gets old and it real gets degrading. pls take the road less travelled and let the son have his revenge and end up with his mom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 03:36
    Forget the haters. Keep writing your vision.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2015 14:25
    Outside of Matt and Nebic there really aren't that many mom netorare stories like this. On Literotica you've got Purplemonkeydishwasher but outside of that most milf stories are either too tame or involve incest in some way. And if you ask me there are way too many incest stories out there and that's why I love this story so much. The feeling of hopelessness and jealousy that Scott feels paints a much more vivid picture than some happy go lucky son who gets to fuck his hot mom at the snap of a finger.It's okay for the good guy to not win all the time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2015 01:03
    There is no possible way a mother would do that to her own child. If she did she deserves to die...along with the prick Ryan. Ryan would get his schwanz cut off and shoved in his mouth if he dared do that to me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2015 02:32
    This story is designed to bring upon great thoughts of jealousy in the reader and myself. This is chapter 9now and ive made it pretty clear where this story is headed. I intend to fonish this helplessly long fantasy for myself. Its up to you as a reaser if u want to join me. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2015 15:31
    Poorly written and obviously not proof-read or edited prior to posting. Both are needed badly.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2015 03:57
    Therapy - you need years of therapy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2015 19:52
    Nosense story u can do better next time try again by lekezy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2015 21:21
    This story is wack. Atleast change things up a bit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2015 08:35
    Can scott jus fukk his mom a kick ryan ass already

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2015 10:13
    You just don't know when to quit. Pitiful.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2015 08:05
    Don't forget folks this is also, Young15_, RyleeElizabeth, hornylittlegirl96, johnny1234, CaptnBoner, Captn4incher, RidleyFiore, Carly:)...etc. Look for walls of text, horrible spelling, inability to know when and when not to capitalize and on and on. Usually claims it's the first story ever submitted, asks for comments, then at the end asks if there should be a part two. This person also likes to steal works from other authors. This is a real pain in the ass for readers and authors alike.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2015 08:10
    You'll also notice this person leaves positive comments on their own behalf. Take a look at the most recent submissions. Stories that don't allow comments and rate low are examples of this. You'll also notice them ask for comments and after one positive result (which is by the author under a pseudonym or anonymous user) comments are then disabled. This idiot is well known.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2015 22:19
    Lol the idiot who posted the last two comments is the REAL idiot because none of the stuff he/she mentioned is evident throughout this story. Those other authors share no liking to this story or author. First story? I don't see any claim of that. The commenter from the last two posts is a weak minded troll who can't handle subject matter that is too intense or controversial. The type that commits suicide to the simplest things. I tell you what; go ahead and do it; but for everyone else's sake and for your own energy keep your shit talking to yourself; it will help you tie the ropes in your closet quicker.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.09.2015 20:18
    Im done with this story, I thought it was great at first but now it just got fucking stupid. So basiclly Ryan always wins and Scott just gets humiliated like always...sigh. Let Ryan win for once smh

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.09.2015 20:18
    Im done with this story, I thought it was great at first but now it just got fucking stupid. So basiclly Ryan always wins and Scott just gets humiliated like always...sigh. Let Ryan win for once smh

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2015 03:16
    I'd love to see Ryan and Scott have sex and then have a three-way with Scott's mom.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.10.2015 03:53
    Mathew (author), this cannot be cathartic for you. You'tr just pushing your dark dreams of humiliation, which is invariably leading you down a spiral. Get some real help.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2015 04:48
    Make a banging come back from Scott to kick Ryan's ass for forever in next part...!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2015 15:51
    Amazing, please keep writing! Make Ryan rape and fuck Penny like his whore!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2015 06:51
    you are making me angry with this story, you dont post on time and u kept making scott look bad in his mother's sight. when will penny know the whole truth? I want her to find out the whole truth, that ryan framed her son and also vedeo taped her and he is planning of sharing her with his frnds, but by the time she found out the whole truth her son would have left her to his dad or he would have broken any ties with her and that would hav caused her to be heartbroken and made her to kill ryan for what he had done to her family and later commit suicide because her son wil never forgive her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2015 02:56
    Bruh wats up man wen Scott finally gone win. And went penny gone knoe the truth

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2015 01:48
    This story was okay in the beginning, but come on man, there's only so much of unrealistic characterizations and situations that you can stretch a story, then it just becomes one of the many basic bs stories on this site, straight of out some stupid preteen boys silly fantasy

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  • shade+333
    30.12.2015 06:25
    I love this story. By any chance do you take requests or commissions for stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.01.2016 17:40
    Man up Scott dammit

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    13.03.2016 03:24
    Sorry for the delay everyone. Ill work on chapter 11 more today. Just having trouble figuring out how to proceed with the plot; despite knowing whats going to happen in the end.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 01:16
    so when can we expect an update?

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    16.03.2016 06:46
    Probably around the weekend. To quicken the pace and make it a bit easier. I kind of copied, pasted and re-wrote from a few failed experiments I posted on nifty a while back and restructured them for this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2016 19:46
    Will this all started in kindergarten, and by that time I already had my first fight over things like this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2016 19:28
    Scott is such an idiot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2016 20:24
    Ryan should have killed scott like he was poisoning his father. Much easier than making his life a hell.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2016 04:51
    the both deserve death for what they have done to scott.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2016 18:13
    Nice update.

    Maybe you should move on from the build up now. Hope to see Penny humiliating him more

    love your story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2016 18:21
    Let Ryan take Penny up the ass.

    Are you planning on doing anymore anal scenes?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 23:00
    End his fetish somehow. Scott must have sth that's secretly going to turn him normal or sth please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2016 00:15
    please update

    When will you???

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    28.07.2016 05:36
    I'm aiming to get the next one out by mid august.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2016 11:59
    Come on, the next part haha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.09.2016 13:36
    Where is the next part? I wanna read it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2016 21:00
    The 15th loooool.

    Been more than a month and more.

    Stop making false promises

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    29.10.2016 22:39
    Sorry for the massive delay. Things happened in my life and I got side tracked. The next chapter is well into development now and should be out by the end of the year; it will also be the biggest chapter yet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2017 14:18
    Holy fuck.

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  • mathew+elizabeth
    04.02.2017 00:48
    Chapter 13 is on my ASSTR if you are interested. It may take a while for it to be posted on this site.

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