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MY TRANSGENDER GODDESS

Author: Michelle Summers

Date: 12 May 2015

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BEING TRANSGENDER IS HARD FOR SOME GIRLS, BECAUSE THEY AREN’T THAT PRETTY. THOSE OF US LUCKY ENOUGH TO BE PRETTY, ARE STUCK IN A ODD PLACE, BECAUSE FINDING OTHERS LIKE YOU OUTSIDE OF A PORN MOVIE IS GONNA BE TOUGH. I GIVE MYSELF ABOUT ABOUT AN EIGHT, ON A ONE TO TEN SCALE. IM SLENDER AND CURVY IN ALL THE RIGHT PLACES, I HAVE A DARK HEALTHY TAN, AND MY LEGGS CAN STOP TRAFFIC. CHANCES ARE, YOU ARE NOT GOING TO KNOW WHAT MAGIC IS IN MY PANTIES, UNLESS I TELL YOU, OR SHOW YOU. HOW DO I FEEL ABOUT THAT? HA. I COULD CARE LESS WHAT THE HATERS THINK, IT TURNS ME ON TO KNOW THAT THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE HAVE MASTURBATED THINKING ABOUT GIRLS LIKE ME.
AT THE END OF THE DAY, THEY WANT ME TO WALK INTO THEIR BEDROOM, IN SEXY LINGERIE, BEAR MY ADORABLE LITTLE BREASTS, AND PUT THIS BIG, BEAUTIFUL GIRL ROD IN THEIR MOUTHS, AND OTHER PLACES. DON’T THEY? DON’T YOU? IVE BEEN A WOMAN MY ADULT LIFE, AND ALWAYS DATED REGULAR WOMEN, THOUGH MY EYES WOULD OCCASSIONALLY SEEK OUT SHEMALE PORN. THEY BEGAN TO SEEK IT OUT MORE OFTEN HERE LATELY, AND I COULDN’T WATCH ANYMORE. I COULDN’T TAKE IT. I WANTED THE REAL THING, NOT A MOVIE. IT JUST CONSUMED ME. I LAY IN BED AT NIGHT, WITH MY HANDS WANDERING IN MY PANTIES, DREAMING OF MY PRINCESS AND HER SWEATY LOVE SESSIONS WITH ME. I WOULD LOOK AT MY LONG PRETTY NAILS, AS I STROKED MY FLOWER UNTIL THE NECTAR SPRAYED OUT, AND LICK MY HANDS, PRETENDING IT WAS HER CUM. I COULD ONLY COME WITH A WOMAN, WHEN I WOULD IMAGINE A BIG DICK SLAPPING UP AND DOWN ON MY TUMMY AS I POUNDED HER BOTTOM IN MY LAP. I BEGAN TO IMAGINE REALLY DOING IT, AND I MADE UP MY MIND TO.
IT’S A SCARY LINE TO CROSS, WHEN YOU NEVER HAVE. I’VE NEVER BEEN WITH A BOY, LET ALONE A HOT TRANSGIRL. I ONLY KNEW A FEW OF US, AND I GUESS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND CHARMING WOMAN I KNEW, SHARON, HELD A SUPPORT GROUP I WENT TO. I OFTEN THOUGHT OF HER WHEN I MASTURBATED, BUT SHE’S SO GORGEOUS AND SUCESSFUL I WOULD NEVER HAVE THE NERVE TO ASK HER OUT. SHE PROBABLY HAS A RICH BOYFRIEND OR ACTRESS GIRLFRIEND. BUT MAYBE IF SHES STILL DOING GROUP MEETINGS, I COULD MEET SOMEONE. SO I WENT WERE THEY USED TO HAVE MEETINGS, AND SURE ENOUGH THERE SHE WAS. SHE WAS WEARING A SHORT GREY SKIRT AND A POWERSUIT, WITH HER LITTLE GLASSES ON. DAMN SHE’S SO HOT I THOUGHT AS SHE LOOKED AROUND THE ROOM.HERE EYES CAUGHT MINE AND SHE SMILED BIG AT ME, AND SAID “HEY MICHELLE!” WHO ME I THOUGHT? SHE WALKED OVER AND HUGGED ME. SHE SMELLED DREAMY. JUST DREAMY. I WAS STARTING TO THINK WE’D NEVER SEE YA AGAIN,” SHE SAID TOUCHING MY ARM. I KNOW I BLUSHED, “IT’S GREAT TO SEE YOU AGAIN SHARON” I SAID LIKE A SCHOOLBOY WITH A CRUSH, SMILING WAY TOO BIG.
“LISTEN, CAN I TALK TO YOU REAL QUICK,” SURE I SAID, AND WE KINDA WALKED OFF TO THE SIDE, LIKE SHE WANTED TO SHOW ME SOMETHING, AND SHE SAYS, “WOULD YOU LIKE TO COME TO MY HOUSE FOR DINNER TOMMOROW NIGHT?,” SHE SAYS LOOKING VULNERABLE FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER. MY HEART WAS POUNDING, AND MY MOUTH GOT DRY, BUT I MADE ARRANGEMENTS TO BE THERE, AND AFTER A LOVELY WALK AROUND HER PLACE IN THE COUNTRY, WE ENDED UP ON THE BACK PORCH. THIS WAS DREAM COME TRUE, TO BE COURTED BY A WONDERFUL TRANSWOMAN, SO HOT AND SOO COOL. SHE WAS LIKE AN OLD FRIEND, AND MADE ME COMFORTABLE.
IT WAS GETTING ON CLOSE TO DARK, BUT STILL LIGHT OUT. SHE SAYS” YA KNOW WHAT I LOVE ABOUT BEING IN THE COUNTRY? YOU CAN DO ANYTHING YOU WANT!” AND AFTER TALKING AWILE, OUR EYES MET FOR JUST A LITTLE TOO LONG, AND I GOT NERVOUS THINKING ABOUT HER. SHE SMILED A SEXY SMILE, AND SAID, “I’LL BE RIGHT BACK”. SHE CAME RIGHT BACK OUT IN A SOFT PINK BIKINI. OH MY GOD. MY HEART JUMPED, SHE WAS SO BEAUTIFUL, MY BODY TINGLED WITH LIFE. SHE WALKED OVER AND LEANDED BACK ON THE PORCH RAIL I HAD MY FEET ON. SHE REACHED DOWN AND PUT MY FEET ON HER ANGEL SOFT THIGH, AND BEGAN TO RUB THEM FOR ME. YOU HAVE SUCH PRETTY FEET SHE SAID, AND IT FELT SOO GOOD I COULD BARELY TALK. I LEANED BACK IN MY CHAIR, “OH GOD THAT FEELS GOOD,” I MUMBLED TO HER. AND HER SMILE MADE FEEL LIKE A QUEEN, LIVING IN A DAYDREAM. “MICHELLE,” SHE SAYS, “ I’M SO GLAD YOU CAME BACK TO THE GROUP MEETING, BECAUSE I ALWAYS WANTED TO DATE YOU, BUT I WAS NERVOUS TO APPROACH YOU, OR IT SEEMED INAPPROPRIATE OR SOMETHING BECAUSE I WAS IN CHARGE.” ME? I SNORTED. WELL THANK YOU, BUT SHARON YOU COULD HAVE ANYBODY YOU WANTED. YOURE SO BEAUTIFUL!? “SHHHHH”, SHE WHISPERED AND GENTLY RAISED MY FOOT TO HER LIPS AND KISSED IT, WET, HARD AND LONG. I THOUGHT MY PANTIES WERE GONNA EXPLODE, AND I COULD FEEL THE THUMPING AND PRECUM DRIBBLING OUT. HERE IT IS, IM LIVING IN A DREAM I THOUGHT, THIS IS IT GIRL. AND IT FEELS WONDERFUL. I KNOW NOW I’VE BEEN WAITING MY WHOLE LIFE FOR THIS MOMENT, AND THIS LOVELY LADY KISSING MY TOES. I STOOD UP TO FACE HER, BUT DIDN’T HAVE THE GUTS TO KISS HER. I THINK SHE KNEW, AND SHE LEANED OVER AND GENTLY PUT HER HEAD NEXT TO MINE. HER EMBRACE AND SILENT CONVERSATION WITH HER EYES, WAS MORE INTIMATE AND EROTIC THAN MOST SEX I’VE HAD. SHE PUSHES MY HAIR ASIDE, AND SLOWLY COMES IN TO KISS ME. I CLOSE MY EYES, STICK OUT MY LIPS, AND LET GO OF MY ENTIRE PAST IN A MOMENT, AND CROSSED THAT LINE IN THE TWILIGHT ON HER BACK PORCH. IT WAS THE SEXIEST, MOST EXCITING KISS OF MY LIFE. MY KNEES WHERE SHAKING AND SHE GIGGLED AT ME. “YOU OK BABY?”, UGH..HEARING HER CALL ME BABY IN HER SOFT VOICE, JUST MELTED ME TO THE GROUND. I TOOK HER HAND AND KISSED IT AND WHISPERED IN HER EAR, IM YOURS SHARON. IM SO YOURS.”
I PULLED HER CLOSE TO ME AND I COULD FEEL HER GETTING HARD AND IT WAS A NEW FEELING TO ME. I COULD FEEL THE HEAT OF IT AGAINST ME. I SLID BACK DOWN IN MY CHAIR. I NEVER WANTED SOMEONE SO BAD BEFORE, AND HERE SHE IS, IN A BIKINI, HER BOTTOMS GEETING A LARGE BUMP IN THEM. I HUGGED HER TUMMY AND KISSED IT SOFTLY. MY HANDS RUBBED HER THERE, AND I LOOKED UP IN THOSE PALE BLUE EYES OF HERS. IT FELT SO GOOD TO FINALLY TOUCH ONE, I CAN’T EVEN EXPLAIN HOW GOOD. BUT I WAS SCARED, LIKE WHEN YOURE ABOUT TO PERMANENTLY CHANGE YOUR LIFE SCARED. MY MIND WAS GOING A MILLION MILES AN HOUR, AND I HAD TUNNEL VISION AND FELT FAINT. BUT I WASN’T STOPPING. NO FUCKING WAY, I THOUGHT, FEELING STRONGER AND MORE BOLD BY THE SECOND. “ MAY I?” I SAID TO HER, REACHING TO PULL HER BOTTOMS TO THE SIDE. “OH PLEASE,” SHE REPLIED. AND TOOK HER TOP OFF REVEALING HER SMALL BOOBS THAT SHINED. I LOOKED AT THE GROWING BUMP IN THOSE PINK BOTTTOMS AND A LITTLE WET SPOT IN THE FRONT. NO TURNING BACK NOW I THOUGHT. IT FELT LIKE I WAS FALLING A HUNDRED MILES AN HOUR, MY WHOLE LIFE FLASHED BY, AND THE FEAR TURNED TO THE MOST INTENSE LUST I’VE EVER KNOWN. I PULLED HER BOTTOMS TO THE SIDE AND LET HER FLOWER OUT. TIME JUST STOPPED, AND WE WERE THE ONLY TWO PEOPLE IN THE WORLD. IT WAS INCREDIBLY PRETTY, LONG AND THICK, AND A PERFECT, SEXY HEAD. I STARED AT IT FOR A MOMENT OR TWO JUST TAKING IT ALL IN. “WOW, SHARON. ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL”..JUST BEAUTIFUL. I SCOOTED MY CHAIR UP CLOSER, AND SHE PUT HER SOFT FOOT UP ON MY THIGH AND LEANED BACK ON THE RAIL AND HER FLOWER STOOD STRAIGHT UP, RIGHT UP TO MY FACE, AND SEEMED TO JUST SPARKLE. I TOOK IN A DEEP BREATH, AND I PULLED IT DOWN ALMOST TOUCHING MY NOSE. IT SMELLED LIKE FAINT GIRL SWEAT, AND LIGHTLY OF HER PERFUME. TIME STOPPED AGAIN, AND I SLOWLY BROUGHT MY LIPS TO THE TIP OF IT, AND KISSED IT. IT FELT SO GOOD ON MY LIPS. SHE GASPED A LITTLE, SHE WAS REALLY TURNED ON, AND A LITTLE CLEAR CUM DRIBBLED OUT. I CLOSED MY EYES, AND LEFT MY OLD LIFE BEHIND, AND OPENED WIDE TO TAKE IT IN MY MOUTH. IT COULDN’T BELIEVE HOW WARM IT FELT ON MY TONGUE. AS I LICKED AROUND IT, I COULD FEEL IT GROW A LITTLE AND AN OCASSIONAL SPASM THAT MADE HER THIGH TENSE UP.
A GENTLE BLOWJOB WAS TURNING INTO ME SLAMMING HER BIG FLOWER INTO MY THROAT, AND I COULD TASTE A LITTLE SALTINESS HERE AND THERE AS PRECUM TRICKLED DOWN MY THROAT. THE HEAT OF IT ON MY TONGUE DROVE ME CRAZY, AND I WAS SLURPING AND SMACKING ON IT, LIKE A BIG WET POPSCICLE. IT WAS MY FIRST, BUT I PRACTICED THIS IN MY MIND A THOUSAND TIMES. SHE WAS FLICKING HER NIPPLES WITH HER FINGERNAILS AND HER FLOWER WAS ROCK HARD AND WHITE HOT IN MY MOUTH.”OH MICHELLE, MICHELLE BABY, IM GONNA CUM!” SHE WHISPERED OUT BREATHLESS. THE THROBBING MADE MY WHOLE MOUTH THROB, AND HER BABY SOFT FOOT WAS RUBBING MY FLOWER UNDER MY SKIRT AS WELL. HER PANTING AND MOANING, WAS THE SWEETEST MUSIC I EVER HEARD, AND THE MUSCULAR FLOWER GOT EVEN HOTTER, “OH BABY, HERE IT COMES” SHE SAID, WARNING ME. I STOPPED FOR A MILISECOND AND SAID” COME IN MY MOUTH PLEASE, I WANA DRINK IT.” THE SPASMS WERE SO EROTIC AND FORBIDDEN ON MY LIPS, SHE TOOK ONE HAND DOWN AND GRABBED MY HAND WITH HERS AND HELD IT TIGHTLY, AGAINST HER HEART. NOW HER FLOWER WAS BOUNCING IN AND OUT OF MY MOUTH, AND WITH ONE FINAL””OH MY GOD” I FELT THAT LIQUID HEAT FILLING MY MOUTH UP, AND SHE SLAMMED IT IN AGAIN AND AGAIN. THIS IS THE COOLEST THING I’VE EVER DONE, MY MIND THOUGHT FOR A SECOND. THEN SPURT AFTER SPURT SHOT OUT OF HER IN MOUTH, ACROSS MY LIPS, ALL OVER MY FACE, OVER AND OVER AGAIN. I COULDN’T BELIEVE HOW MUCH KEPT COMING, AND I QUICKLY TRIED TO SWALLOW IT, BUT TASTING IT FIRST. IT TASTED LIKE PURE, HOT SEX. I HAD IT ALL OVER MY FACE, AND IT FINALLY STOPPED, AND SHE BEGAN TO LAUGH AND PANT AT THE SAME TIME. I COULD FEEL THAT FAMILIAR FEELING IN MY OWN FLOWER, AND I COULDN’T BELIEVE WHAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN. I STOOD UP QUICKLY, PULLED MY SKIRT UP, AND GRABBED MY FLOWER STEM KNOWING IF I COULD STROKE IT JUST ONCE I WOULD EXPLODE TOO! I WIPED A GLOB OF HER WARM NECTAR OFF MY CHIN AND SLAPPED IT ON MY FLOWER AND GOT TWO GOOD STROKES IN BEFORE I EXPLOED ALL OVER HER FLAT TAN TUMMY. HER MOUTH WAS WIDE OPEN AND SMILING IN WONDER AND AWE AT ME COMING TOO, IT WAS THE MOST POWERFUL ORGASM I’VE EVER HAD IN MY 27 YEARS. THE THOUGHT OF HER CUM ON MY DICK MADE ME KEEP COMING UNTIL MY LEGGS GAVE OUT AND I COLLAPSED INTO MY CHAIR. SHE IMMEDIATELY HUGGED ME CLOSE TO HER STOMACH, AND I HAD BOTH OF OUR NECTARS ALL OVER MY FACE AND LIPS, AND I COULDN’T BE HAPPIER. WE JUST HELD EACH OTHER FOR AWILE NOT TALKING. I DIDN’T WANNA RUIN THIS SPECIAL MOMENT WITH WORDS, BESIDES WHAT WORDS COULD SAY MORE THAN WHAT JUST HAPPENED? SHE TOOK ME BY MY HAND AND WE WENT INSIDE WHERE SHE MOPPED ME UP, AND GAVE ME SOFT KISSES, HOLDING MY HAND EVERY CHANCE SHE COULD. I FELL IN LOVE WITH SHARON, STANDING AT HER KITCHEN SINK, WHILE SHE TOOK WET PAPER TOWELS AND CLEANED ME UP, WITH THAT KNOWING LITTLE GRIN OF HERS. I EVENTUALLY CAME BACK DOWN TO EARTH AFTER AN HOUR OR SO, AND AFTER WE PIGGED OUT ON CHEESECAKE AT HER TABLE, AND TALKED UP A STORM, WE WENT TO HER BEDROOM.
WE STRIPPED TO OUR UNDIES, AND SHE LAID OUT ON HER BED, AND I SLID INTO HER ARMS WITH MY FACE ON HER CHEST, AND DRIFTED OFF TO SLEEP AFTER A FEW GENTLE KISSES ON HER BREAST. I WAS MORE CONTENT THAN IVE EVER BEEN, AND FINALLY, THE WORLD WAS RIGHT FOR ME. GOODNIGHT DREAMGIRL, I WHISPERD. SHE TUSSLED MY HAIR UNTIL I DRIFTED OFF. “GOODNIGHT MICHELLE,”…THE BEGINNING OF MY NEW LIFE WAS ALL I WANTED IT TO BE, AND SOO MUCH MORE. DREAMS DO CUM TRUE. TRUST ME. XOXO MICHELLE. ?


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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 21:56
    sorry not even going to try and read this, bloody capitals really.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 21:56
    Please make another

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 23:14
    All Caps earns an automatic Negative vote.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 23:16
    Fucked up grammar, spelling, and formatting. Add the fact that the content is severely lacking this is just big jumbled mess! Please don't bother posting anymore of this ridiculous junk, it makes you look ignorant, which the preponderance of the evidence clearly points!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 23:34
    Your grammar is awful, why correct hers? jerk. I loved it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 01:10
    WRITING IN ALL CAPS MAKES YOU APPEAR TO BE A 3RD GRADE DROP-OUT. Please learn how to write before posting again.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 01:59
    To 23:34:14 I don't bother proofreading my comments. I am also not the one posting a story to be critiqued, moronic cretin!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 02:34
    why is it that you people expect perfect novels on a porn site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 03:11
    you haters are on a porn site, bashing grammar on a dirty story. get a life. its just dirty stories, Your not an Englist literature professor on the comment section of a shemale story. Just shut up already, we get it, move on.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 06:03
    Contrary to popular belief not everyone is stroking to these stories. That excludes the person who wrote the comment below this obviously. I allow room on spelling and grammar if it's minor, but this is not!! Same old story, inept writer and idiots like you that encourage them when. This an amateur site, not a personal diary, you shouldn't be posting if you have no clue how to write. Do you ever stop to think that these authors are putting their work out there and asking for critiques. Suck it up, you don't like hearing the truth then again, DON'T POST GARBAGE LIKE THIS! Can you hear us NOW??????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 06:41
    YOU DO NOT HAVE YELL YOUR POOR EXCUSE OF A STORY AT US YOU OBNOXIOUS ASS!!!!!!! BTW A NINE YEAR OLD COULD WRITE BETTER THAN THIS!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 07:01
    what a pile of badly written shit, can't you work out how to turn off capitals?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 07:06
    What a total waste of the fifteen seconds I spent before giving up on this steaming pile!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 12:05
    Thank You Michelle for sharing your fist time with Sharon. All Caps was a little distracting, but your first submission was just fine. I'm one of the Thousands that dream of PRETTY girls with Flowers.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 13:10
    Yes thank you for wasting our time and exposing us to your nasty, stupid, little story. As soon you as you start dating let me know, I'll buy your date a T-shirt that says, "I'm With Stupid."

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2015 20:51
    Wow, you guys are assholes. its a porn site, not american idol for writers. if you Get that angry, you need to get a life,. theres no reason to call the chick names. she did ok. wasnt that dam bad, lighten up. I liked it michelle. lose the caps tho. theyre just wanna bes fuk em!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2015 11:06
    Oh, fuck off Mr. Nice!! This writing would really have to work at being worse. It's just horrible.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2015 12:30
    You hate the story, You hate her, you hate the other folks who comment. bitch your problem isnt bad writing, Your just full of hate and insults. none of us are Pros, maybe if you werent such a jerk off, you wouldnt take porn stories so serious. goto a fucking library if you want quality. wish I had a hot transwoman to write about , I probably wodnt give a shit about grammar either lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2015 20:24
    To the imbecile below. Damn you're stupid!!! There are professional writers here, yes people that get "paid" for their stories. Do an author search for the author "Zondar the Bear" he is one of them. I've been reading stories here longer than you've been wiping your own ass, or I maybe I'm wrong about that, wiping might be beyond your capabilities. I don't expect everyone to be a pro, but I do expect better than what I'd get from a twelve year old. That's the level this author writes at and shod never have posted a story in the first place. Now, shut your granola eating ass up and grow a pair...pussy!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2015 20:26
    In case you're interested, his works are available on Amazon, Fucktard!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2015 23:29
    Zondar the bear? bahaahaa. that ur boyfriend? neither one of are pros and thas why ur mad. that ur male porno name? hahaha fuck u and boy. like a little kid. ur still assholes, no matter how you paid to get ur gay stories on amazon. so we should bow to U? u aint shit, fuk off. u cant spell either! zondar, hahahaaa

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2015 00:02
    You are the one who can't spell or even count cretin, much less formulate a comment that makes sense. I've always noticed that people who repeatedly accuse others of being gay do so because of the shame they feel due to their own homosexuality. Maybe if you didn't finger your anus so hard your brain wouldn't of been damaged. Then, maybe you could write a comment that someone other than yourself could understand.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2015 01:25
    Not to bad for a first attempt. I'd like to hear more. Just disable comments on your next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2015 21:33
    Don't let there be a next one!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2015 16:11
    so long as this is what you enjoyed,then don't bother for comments.
    It's eventually two people in the act and if we'll described it's pleasure for readers and what to say of those lucky guy's who get see this live!

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