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Truth or Dare - Part 2

Author: Marcus

Date: 8 November 2005

Cum Swallowing, Fiction, Exhibitionism, Oral Sex

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A week had passed since that fateful night when we played ‘Truth or Dare.’ Liz, Jen and I were way more then friends now. The problem with our game though – as is the case any time ‘Truth or Dare’ is played – is that it bred escalation. Just as each subsequent ‘truth’ was more revealing than the last, each ensuing ‘dare’ was more dangerous than the one previous.

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So once again it was Friday night, and once again we all went out for a night on the town. Brad came with us. He had absolutely no idea what had happened just one week ago. I had a feeling he was going to be used for a future dare.

We walked along the main strip looking for a good bar to go into. We were underage so we needed to find a place that wouldn’t look too closely at our fake IDs. Liz thought that to avoid suspicion, we should go in one at a time instead of as a group. I didn’t really agree with that idea, but when you’re 17, it’s hard to argue with a girl willing to give you head.

Jen went up first and was let in without any issues. When it was Liz’s turn, the bouncer looked at her ID for what seemed like forever. I wasn’t too concerned though. This happened to Liz all the time. It was just a way for the bouncer to get a good long look at Liz. And who could blame him? Liz was wearing a tiny white skirt and an ultra-tight V-neck T-shirt. The combination of no bra and a light-blue color made it possible to see her breasts through her shirt if you looked hard enough. And believe me, the bouncer was looking.

When Liz was finally let in, I was next up in line. I flashed my ID and was let in right away. I looked back at Brad and stepped inside where Liz and Jen were waiting. We waited for Brad near the entrance for about 15 minutes before my cell phone finally rang. It was Brad… Apparently the bouncer caught the fake ID and booted him out of line. I asked if he wanted us to come back outside and he disagreed. “I didn’t really want to go out tonight anyways,” he said. “You guys just have fun okay?”

If only he knew…

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I hung up the phone and before I could say anything Jen turned to me and said, “truth or dare?” From that statement alone I started getting a hard-on. I looked over at Liz who had a huge smile on her face. Looking back at Jen, I could tell she was just as giddy. This was going to be a good night…

“Dare!” I said. I wasn’t going to waste any time on any truths. I was ready to get this party started! Jen leaned closer towards me. But I was disappointed when all she did was grab my hand and tell me to come dance with her and Liz. Feeling let down, I dutifully agreed and the three of us made our way to the dance floor.

The music was awesome. The DJ was really rocking the house that night. Each song made girls dance more vigorously than the last. My previous feeling of being let down slowly went away with each pair of bouncing boobs I saw. The best of which were of course, Liz’s. Her movements made her breasts jump from side-to-side, up and down and all over the damn place.

Jen’s breasts were small so there wasn’t as much jiggle. She made up for it by grinding up against me. She ran her hands up and down my chest and back. She turned and ground her amazing ass against my crotch. She could definitely feel my hard-on, but that only seemed to make her more intense.

Like Liz, Jen was also wearing a short skirt. Each time she swung her hips to the music I could see her pink thong underneath. This just made things worse for me. How the hell are you supposed to dance when your cock is pressed up against your pants? On top of that, Jen was wearing a sheer white shirt with a pink bra. This was the most T&A I’d ever seen from these two girls (aside from a week ago, of course) and there was no way I was going to argue with it.

“Truth or dare?” Liz suddenly shouted to Jen over the music. Without even hesitating (or stopping her grinding) Jen shouted back that she would accept a dare. Liz looked at me then back at Jen. “I dare you to fuck him right here and right now.”

Jen’s jaw dropped and she immediately stopped grinding. She looked around at all the people dancing all around us. The music was loud, but in that moment I wasn’t paying attention to anything other than Jen. I waited for her answer. She looked at me and then over at Liz. A sly smile slowly crept over her face and her hips began to once again move with the music.

“Alright!” shouted Liz. She continued to dance but moved in behind Jen. Jen ground her ass against Liz while Liz ran her hands up and down Jen’s back spanking her each time her hand got close to Jen’s ass. Jen turned to face Liz. They danced in front of each other for a while swaying their hips back and forth and throwing their hair. Jen slowly crouched in front of Liz. As she gradually rose, she ran her hands up under Liz’s skirt and grabbed her ass.

Liz then began to slowly crouch in front of Jen. As she did so, she ran her hands up Jen’s skirt. The only difference was that instead of simply grabbing Jen’s ass, Liz took Jen’s thong off and let them drop down around her ankles. Liz then slowly rose running her hand up into Jen’s crotch. Liz’s hand paused there for a while. Jen’s eyes rolled back and my cock throbbed. When Liz finally removed her hand I saw the juices on her fingers glisten in the light. She stared deeply into Jen’s eyes as she sucked the juices from her fingers. Jesus! I nearly came…

Jen then turned slightly and bent down in front of me. I could clearly see her pussy staring back at me, the juices practically dripping from the lips. She reached down and took her thong from around her ankles. Standing up, she danced to the music and swung her thong around on her finger above her head. She looked at me and then threw her thong out into the crowd. I watched as it fell on some anonymous guy’s shoulder. He grabbed it and looked around for the owner. I don’t think he was looking that hard though. He coolly put it into his pocket and kept on dancing.

Meanwhile Liz moved in behind me and was grinding herself against my back. I could feel her pussy against my ass and her breasts on my back. Her hands ran up and down my chest. Jen then moved towards me and starting grinding her ass against my crotch. She reached back behind her and grabbed my hands. She guided them in front of her and made me grab onto her tits.

I danced with the girls, running my hands up and down Jen’s body, stopping only to squeeze her breasts. My cock pressed harder against my pants desperate to get in on the action. As if hearing my call, Liz slowly moved her hands down onto my crotch. She undid the button to my jeans and slowly unzipped me. Thank God I didn’t wear underwear! My dick sprung out of my jeans and made a barely audible slapping noise against Jen’s back. Jen moaned slightly.

I looked down over Jen’s shoulder and noticed that she had slid one of her hands down inside her skirt and was rubbing her pussy to the music. She swayed her hips back and forth side-to-side against my aching cock. Liz was gently stroking me while continuing to grind her tits into my back.

I couldn’t take it anymore. This was torture. I reached around and grabbed Jen by the breast pulling her back into me. She was so wet my dick slid straight into her. Jen moaned very loudly. The people beside us looked over and shook their heads, laughing. They couldn’t see what we were doing, but the position we were in was just as provocative.

The 3 of us continued to grind to the music. Jen wriggled her ass against my cock while Liz reached around the both of us with one hand to rub Jen’s clit, and continued to stroke my cock with the other hand. I continued to fondle Jen’s breasts while slowly rocking my cock in and out of Jen’s pussy. Jen continued to moan.

Jen closed her eyes and started to rock herself back and forth more vigorously. She grabbed at her tits and threw her head back. Her other hand moved back down to her pussy and began to rub it in enthusiastic circles. I could feel both Jen’s and Liz’s fingers stroking Jen’s pussy and it felt amazing.

Jen’s pussy was incredibly tight and I could feel the muscles clenching my cock. I rammed my dick further inside. The warmth and the wetness felt incredible. Jen’s pussy juices were now running down my cock and down her legs. As she continued to rub her clit, Jen’s legs began to get weak and I had to start supporting her weight.

Suddenly, Liz moved her hand from Jen’s clit and around to Jen’s ass. Soaked in Jen’s pussy juices, Liz’s fingers easily slid into Jen’s ass. The combination of my cock and Liz’s fingers was too much for Jen as she suddenly had a massive orgasm. Unfortunately, because there were so many people around, she had to stifle her screams as she came. She quivered against me and pressed her ass harder against Liz’s fingers.

In turn, Jen’s orgasm was too much for me to take and I came inside her. I moaned, groaned, and sighed. I too had to be quiet, so I grabbed Jen’s tits and pulled her closer as I emptied my entire load inside her. She bit her lip and turned around, kissing me as my cock slid out of her pussy and Liz’s fingers pulled away. My dick was now in plain view so if anyone was looking… Realizing this, Jen continued to dance to the music and crouched down in front of me to zip me up. But before she did, she made sure to suck up all of her juices and all of my cum off of my cock.

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We stayed on the dance floor for a couple more songs after which the 3 of us walked off and found a table. We laughed and talked about what just happened, astonished at what we had just done. Jen talked about how great it was and how amazing it felt to have my dick inside her. She blushed a little and confessed to Liz that her fingers in her ass felt pretty damn good too.

Jen went on to explain that the best part was when I came inside her. She admitted that all the other guys she’d been with always wore a condom, so this was the first time she actually felt sperm inside her. She blushed again and pointed down to her panty-less crotch. “There is still some escaping,” she laughed.

Liz and I looked down at Jen’s pussy and saw small droplets of white juice dribbling out of her cunt. I looked over at Liz just as she licked her lips. It was my turn to give a sly smile… “Truth or dare?” I asked Liz.

“What?” she stammered as she snapped out of her gaze. Jen just laughed. Liz came back to reality and answered, “dare!” Then she looked back at Jen’s pussy, knowing what I was going to ask. Hell, before I could say anything, she dropped out of her seat and under the table! I couldn’t see her, but I knew where she was going…

Jen suddenly shot up in her seat as Liz’s face emerged between Jen’s legs. Jen laughed, looked around, and adjusted herself for easier access. Liz slowly began to kiss Jen’s thighs. She moved higher and higher getting closer and closer to Jen’s crotch. As she reached it, Liz looked up at me and asked, “is this what you wanted?”

I looked down at her and up at Jen. Both girls looked at me as if begging me to say yes. I looked back at Liz and responded, “Yes. I want you to eat all of my cum from Jen’s pussy.” Both girls smiled happily and Liz went to work.

Liz began my licking and kissing all around Jen’s pussy. She played with the cum using her tongue. She sensually pressed her lips against Jen’s labia. Once all of the cum and pussy juices had been cleaned up, Liz reached up with her hands and parted Jen’s pussy lips. Jen’s juices were flowing more than ever as more liquid poured out. Liz accepted it and stuck her tongue deep into Jen’s pussy.

Jen moaned loudly and turned her head towards me. We were in a dark, somewhat secluded corner – not to mention no one could hear us over the music – so we could be as loud as we wanted (or so I thought). Liz groaned with equal pleasure as she ate out her friend’s pussy.

Jen squirmed in her seat. She reached down and grabbed Liz’s head and pulled her further into her pussy. Jen threw her head back as Liz continued to ravish her pussy. Liz then reached up and ran her hands up Jen’s thighs. As she reached Jen’s mound, Liz slowly inserted two fingers deep into Jen’s pussy as she tongued Jen’s clit.

Jen was now getting more vocal, screaming “Yes! Yessss!” as Liz rammed her fingers in and out of her pussy. Jen looked over at me and lifted her shirt. She pulled down her bra and exposed her breasts. “Kiss me!” she commanded. I complied and moved in. I ran my hands over her breasts and allowed my tongue to glide all around her nipples. “YES!!!” she screamed again.

Liz then inserted two fingers into Jen’s ass. Jen rocked back and forth in her seat as I licked her breasts and Liz stuck fingers into each of her private parts, all the while licking Jen’s clit. Juices began to flow freely out of Jen’s pussy and onto Liz’s hands. “YES!!!” She screamed. People were starting to notice and looked over to see what was going on.

Suddenly Jen had an explosive orgasm! She arched her back and flung her head back. She grabbed Liz’s head and rammed it into her pussy. Liz removed her fingers and Jen’s juices squirted everywhere. “YESSSSS!!!!” she screamed, “OH GOD, YES!!!” her juices exploded out of her and all over Liz!

As Jen’s orgasm subsided, she looked at Liz and I and smiled. “Man I love you guys.”

No sooner did she finish her sentence did the bouncer show up. He took one look at us and shook his head angrily. Jen’s breasts and pussy were still exposed and even though Liz was no longer under the table, Jen’s juices were still all over her face and had run down her shirt, soaking it. Her breasts were now clearly visible through the fabric.

The bouncer kicked us out.

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As we walked down the street to go back home, I looked over at Jen. She had a huge smile on her face. I looked over at Liz, still with Jen’s juices dripping from her chin. I felt kind of bad that she didn’t get a chance to get off that night. But then I felt a stirring in my pants. That old familiar feeling coming back for more.

“Truth or dare?” asked Jen…

To be continued…?


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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 19:27
    Need alot more cum action

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    24.11.2005 19:50
    wel it was alright, needs more detail to pussy liking

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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 19:56
    Damn that story was real good. wow i can't wait to readmore. keep writing

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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 20:24
    Don't continue it, Marcus.

    2/10

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    24.11.2005 21:26
    just write a ful story

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 05:57
    Marcus don't listen to the scammers who cant' write. this story is great and please keep writing

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 11:18
    It was great i love it write more

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 16:28
    good story make part three soon

    10/10

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 16:44
    I believe that this series, (i hope), has some great potential and should be continued. as I said before I can relte somewhat to the storyline.

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 17:08
    10 out of 10 in my book.



    I think you should wrap it up with a nice, well-written part 3.



    IMO, however, don't go on to a part 4. Let a good thing live and then go on to write another story.



    That said, I am awaiting part 3!

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 17:18
    I came at least five times over that story. My hands hurts and my pants are soaked in my cum. Write more please! I'm gonna wank over it again. 100/10!!!

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    READER 500
    25.11.2005 21:07
    MMMMOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEE... 10/10

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 10:13
    That was pretty good. I like the endings use tem again, but dont write too many stories, that'll just kill the series.

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 13:30
    man i dont care what any of yall say... that was a fucking good story. if you fags are lookingfor gramatical structure and correct speeling then goto another site...... great story man keep it going..

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 16:44
    This is a great story. 9/10

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    27.11.2005 12:37
    this story is great... can't wait for part 3

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    27.11.2005 18:01
    i wish i hadda 3 foot dick

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    READER 500
    27.11.2005 21:21
    That was awesome. Don’t listen to dickheads who try to shit on it.

    However as a few others have already hinted on I think part 3 should be the last part. Otherwise the series may burnout

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    READER 500
    27.11.2005 21:42
    thts awesome....u shld be writing 10 parts of tht story...so go on....write it dude...!!!!!100001/10...tht... my score for u.....!!!

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 13:20
    nice story. Got my panties very wet.

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 15:34
    that story was bad ass keep em cumin

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    28.11.2005 16:23
    fukin brill!!!!! keep em cummin!!! canny w8 4 part 3!!!!

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 20:57
    That was the absolute best thing that I have ever read! Can't wait for eventualy part 10!

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 21:04
    I wish that would happen to me hello fuckn' good!!

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 21:57
    Dude, nice. I read part one a few days ago. These are great stories. Keep goin with it, man. You have hella lotta talent, dont waste it.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 07:23
    Reminds me of me and my first girlfriend, that thruth or dare... that alone makes me like the story, but hell, you can write man, you are a poet! keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 11:35
    Part 3 your doign a good job

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 13:44
    Very nice story the kind every guy dreams of.

    thank you

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 20:14
    Great story man keep it up. Gotta love those truth and dare moments in life

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 21:15
    dam good story keep them comming.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 22:11
    oh yeah man, keep them cumming 10/10

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 12:45
    im so horny i cant handle it my pussy is juice wet i wish someone was here but since theres not I'll just have to play with my pussy, again

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 20:41
    THESE STORIES ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 21:42
    I agree, this was definately a great story, worthy of top rated. Keep writing on with a part 3, then possibly more stories. you are good, man... keep it up

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 23:32
    keep on writing them, there amazing

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 15:12
    LOVED IT..!!! HAD ME ON THE EDGE!!! NOW...

    THE QUESTION IS... PART 3... I DARE YOU!!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 18:54
    i really loved these stories, but if you wrote more, wouldn't it get kind of repetetive? truth? i dont think you should write more, it might ruin the concept.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 15:15
    makes me wish i had a group of freinds like that

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 18:07
    i wish i had friends like that, like holy fuck man!

    Great story, u better have a fuken part3 longer next time

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 21:16
    More info and I wish my friends were like that too.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 01:12
    ME:TRUTH OR DARE?

    U:DARE!

    ME: I DARE YOU TO WRITE A PART 3!

    U:(to be decided)

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 01:02
    Hey... that was amazing. Way to write! Get cracking at pt3, and hell i'd like to see a threesome with Jen Liz and you. Also, this is a sappy request, but maybe a bit of romance?

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 03:44
    THAT WAS A GREAT STORY!!! WRIGHT PART 3. I WISH I WOULD HAVE BEEN A PART OF IT!

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 00:26
    yes write the third part and possibley 4th or 5th keep it going the possibilites are almost endless

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 14:33
    my cock is so hard i feel like bursting. love to suck the come out of that sweet pussy. more!

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 20:01
    very good, i liked it.

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 20:36
    best ever make part 3

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 02:25
    hittler is a faggot, great story dude

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 09:50
    Great story ! I'm waiting for part 3

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2005 13:43
    Please Please Please Write Part Three! That ROCKED!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.12.2005 10:56
    Excellent! I cant wait to read the next chapter...

    So hot I couldnt stop touching myself.....

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 00:02
    Heil, 1/10. Adolf has it right, "writing" shit and writing are different, and you fools... well, a damp spunge could be more compelling.

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 07:01
    Crude and bland. Hated it. 1/10

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 11:47
    Excellent story!, one of the best i've seen in a while, i wan number 3!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.12.2005 15:54
    If you all think te story sucked then write something better.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2005 16:16
    the story was ok. 5/10 Make it a bit more realistic. Fucking on the dancefloor. :-D

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    READER 500
    16.12.2005 21:38
    TERRIFIC...HUGELY SEXY



    keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 19:35
    eawgwgawgwa

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 14:08
    Much too un realistic. but still ok. 6/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2005 19:34
    Dude, someone should fuck Liz in the ass about now!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2005 23:05
    a little un realistic and someone should be fucking Liz and her tits

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 17:39
    not bad, i liked the risqueness. something a bit different, nice work!

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 11:38
    fiction you idiots not true story

    excelelnt work 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 18:55
    story was great. not as good as the first though. But i still fingered myself!!!!!

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    READER 500
    23.12.2005 17:55
    Not the best, but also not the worst effort.

    I'll give it a 5/10

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    READER 500
    24.12.2005 12:32
    pretty good. it was ok sex scenes, but especially good on the dance floor. you could have done better and probly could have let Brad in there but it was still ok. try to stay away from them being caught. that was the worst part of the whole story. im pretty good at getting off on stories but this was pretty weak. 4/10 consider urself lucky to get a 4.

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 21:58
    Only fair. Could have been a lot better. But the author shows promise. 5/10

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    READER 500
    30.12.2005 00:40
    THE GREATEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    02.01.2006 10:51
    intresting.but very good. i enjoyed every word of it.

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    READER 500
    04.01.2006 13:04
    liked it alot. Nice dance scenes. Also intriging. 10/10

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    READER 500
    06.01.2006 16:04
    i agree with sepp and sexyhoryfreak well besides the the last part of sexyhornyfreaks comment

    10/10

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    READER 500
    07.01.2006 17:58
    It was an OK story; not great, not terrible. 6/10

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    READER 500
    10.01.2006 15:55
    write part three. loved them all

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    READER 500
    18.01.2006 22:14
    the bouncer would have seen them sooner not a great story

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    READER 500
    07.02.2006 13:41
    yes were all astranged perverts, not only that but we all are english experts and know how to write books, so dont complain we know what we are talking about.... fucking retards...

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    READER 500
    30.03.2006 10:17
    ==pp--o0ooooooooooooooooooo... bvh b jhhiu knohuk mkjnk konk kmok knok ln k olkmpijikp[olk pjijiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... ddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...

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    READER 500
    14.04.2006 20:26
    i loved it and kind of wish i was really there or atleast in one of the girls place

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    READER 500
    02.05.2006 11:43
    10/10



    I don't think it really deserved 10/10, would have normally given it an 8... great story but pretty short, and lacking in details... I just wanted to negate some of these damn killjoys complaining about every little detail.

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    READER 500
    12.06.2006 03:37
    Sex? Fuck you all you faggots ass bitches im god and suck my dick bitches.

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    READER 500
    12.06.2006 17:55
    it was hot as hell but also a bit confusing 9/10

    good job

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    READER 500
    13.06.2006 17:39
    thhthththththththththththth...

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    READER 500
    19.06.2006 12:39
    pretty bad... fucking in a bar get more realistic ur retarded but it was ok 5/10

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    READER 500
    20.06.2006 00:39
    i really liked it, although i agree that it's extremelly unlikely...but, i would still give it 9.5/10

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    READER 500
    29.07.2006 08:46
    Super but as a few flaws. 10/10 any way

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    READER 500
    03.08.2006 14:41
    better than the last 1

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    READER 500
    08.08.2006 13:27
    fuck yesss loved it wish tht would happen to me (im single nd lookin fr a hot fuck like this one lol :P

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    READER 500
    19.09.2006 16:10
    what are the chanced of fucking in bar and no one noticing until they are screaming??

    get realistic and make something tht could really happen

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    READER 500
    10.10.2006 00:04
    nice fantasy, 8/10

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    READER 500
    05.11.2006 07:24
    Fuck u guys u can hve sex at a club i hve seen it happen people whould of seen it but thoufght who cares ... oww yeah reallly hot story :)

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    READER 500
    16.01.2007 03:51
    fucking hot!!

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    READER 500
    19.01.2007 09:08
    male reader: having sex in a club, and no one notice, yea right. I go to the clubs and notice alot, I did see a couple having sex and everyone notice, the bouncer joined in along with others.

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    READER 500
    26.03.2007 13:36
    I need a male story!!!!!!!! make one about a guy being raped!!!!!! not by a guy though

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    READER 500
    28.03.2007 18:39
    OMFG I WACKED OFF MY PENIS TO THIS I WOULD FUCK BOTH GIRLS AT THE SAME TIME !!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.04.2007 19:24
    cum everywhere fuck that was good

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    READER 500
    05.05.2007 18:15
    10/10

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    READER 500
    05.05.2007 23:00
    it bit you should be repoted.41/2/10

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    READER 500
    21.10.2007 21:50
    Aww, the bouncer was prob. gay...

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    READER 500
    20.02.2008 11:43
    Female reader: love your stories... gets me so fucking horney...10/10

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    READER 500
    24.02.2008 01:40
    gawd these stories are awesome -The Crimson King

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2013 19:28
    i just masturbated with an electric toothbrush and im 10 it felt so good! It turned me on. Is It bad im 10 and my hymen is already popped..?

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  • tinytitlover54
    13.01.2014 15:03
    any girls want to share showing me your tiny tits?? PM me here

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