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Two Virgins Play Truth Or Dare

Author: Rick

Date: 13 November 2005

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Two Virgins Play Truth or Dare
By Robbie

***

My parents were away one weekend, so I had a group of
friends over. We were all around 15-16 years old at the
time. There was Mary, a pretty brunette; Jenny, a tall,
muscular brunette; and Sandy, a blonde who - I swear -
looked just like Britney Spears! Blond hair, blue
eyes.... a knockout! There was also me, my friend Paul
and David.

We watched TV, ate popcorn, and listened to some music.
Later in the evening, we decided to play Truth Or Dare.
Mary had a bunch of "dare cards" that her older sister
had given her. We all got in a circle and got started.

Paul goes first. A card is drawn. Mary reads it: "You
have to kiss the person to the left of you."

"Hey, David is next to me! No fair!" yelled Paul.

"Yuck!" protested David.

"Sorry," said Mary, "Gotta do it, Paul."

"Oh, OK," answered Paul, who closed his eyes and gave a
quick kiss to David. "That sucked!" said Paul, "OK, next
is Jenny."

Mary draws the card. "It says that you have to be
tickled for two minutes by the person to the right of
you, and that's ME!" said Mary.

"No, No, I'm really ticklish," replied Jenny.

"Too bad, Jen, here goes," said Mary, who started
working her wiggling fingers all over Jenny's body.

"No ha ha ha STOP HA HA HA HA no no no no ha ha HA HA!"
Jenny was laughing like a hyena. I thought that she was
going to explode.

After two minutes, Mary stopped. Jenny was
hyperventilating. In between breaths she said "Sheesh...
I thought I was going to pass out!"

It was my turn next. "OK Robbie, here's your dare," said
Mary as she picked a card. Looking at it, she said, "Oh
boy, is this going to be fun!"

"What's the dare?" I asked. "Welllll..." began Mary,
"Robbie, you have to go into a closet with the person on
your right, and come out wearing each other's
underwear. On my right was Sandy! My brain started to
go into overdrive. Was this actually going to happen, or
was this a joke? Exchange underwear with a hot babe, then both of us stand in front of the gang in just our skivvies?

Sandy yelled, "Wait a minute! Hold on! No way! I'm not
doing that! No way!"

“Me, neither!” I chimed in. “I’m not standing in front of you people in girl’s underwear!”

"Sorry. You two guys better get in that closet and come
out in each other's underwear. Go ahead. We're not
changing the rules. Do it!" ordered Mary.

"But...." began Sandy.

"Are you serious?" I asked.

"NO! NO! That's going TOO FAR!" protested Sandy.

"You can't quit the game is what you can't do. Now go
for it! If it were one of us, you would be saying the
same thing," said Mary.

Sandy looked at me and then at Mary. "I'll get you for
this!" Sandy growled. Mary opened the closet and we both
stepped in.

We squeezed in the closet, and I do mean squeezed! It
was actually a broom closet that was about two foot
square. When the door was closed Sandy and I were
literally pressed together. I pulled the light cord to I
could see what I was doing.

"Well, we better get going," Sandy said, talking right
into my face.

"I can't even bend down, how are we going to do this?" I
asked.

"We'll just have to help each other," Sandy replied.
"Can you get my shoes?" she asked.

I stretched my arm down all the way and grabbed her
ankle, pulling her leg up until her foot was right in
front of my face. I untied her sneaker and removed it.
Then, I slipped my thumb under her sock and stripped
it right off, which made Sandy giggle. Her long, bare toes were directly in front of my nose! They smelled like.... well... feet. Phew! What can I say? I lifted her other leg and got rid of her other sneaker and sock.

"Here, let me get yours," Sandy said. She yanked off my
boots and then pulled off my socks. “Wow! Look at those big feet!” she teased.


"Well, let's keep going," I said. Our chests were
pressed together so we squeezed our hands between us and
started to unbutton our shirts. As we opened them, her
bra squeezed right up against my bare chest. Our shirts
dropped to the floor.

"Here, where's your belt buckle?" Sandy asked, fumbling
around. We were so tightly pressed together that she had
to work her hand down between us. She found it, and
started to unbuckle it, while I found the snaps on her
jeans. She pulled my pants down and I pushed them away
with my foot. Then I pulled her jeans down. They were
pretty tight, so she had to hold on to her panties to keep them
from coming off, too.


Still pressed together, the bulge in my shorts was right
up against her panties as her toenails were digging into
the tops of my feet. "Well, I guess you'll need my bra.
You'll have to reach back, I can't get it from here,"
Sandy said.

I reached back and unclasped her bra. It was tightly
jammed between us, but I worked it sideways and off. She
went "woo baby!" and giggled when her bare tits finally
squeezed against my bare chest.

I could feel her hard nipples against my skin.
Meanwhile, our hips were still pressed tightly together
with my rock hard dick in my briefs squashed tightly
against her panties. "What have you got in there,
anyway?" Sandy chuckled.

"You'll find out!" I replied.

"That's what I'm afraid of! Well, let's get it over
with... they're waiting," Sandy answered.

I felt down between us and stuck my fingers under the
elastic of her undies and slowly wiggled them down, as
she did the same to me. We were now naked, but still
pressed together. My dick was tightly up against her
coarse pubic hair.

She looked down and squealed, "Oh my GOD! Be careful
with your……umm……..you know……. your…….”

“You mean my DICK?” I replied

“Yes, your……..DICK!” she giggled, red-faced. “Whatever you do, don’t stick it in me!”.

I wanted to prolong the moment, so I took a chance and
planted a big kiss on her lips. She put her arms over my
shoulders and started to tongue me while she rubbed her
private part up against my cock humming "Mmmmmmmm," Then
she said, "All right, back to business."

I somehow managed to reach down to the floor and step
into her panties. I pulled them up, but they were so
tight that my dick was practically poking a hole in
them! "Did you have to wear flowered panties today?" I
asked.

"Well, I didn't know people were going to SEE them, much
less some BOY was going to try to WEAR them!" she
answered. Sandy got my briefs on, and put her bra around
my chest. "I'll make this as tight as I can. I mean, you
got no boobs!" Sandy said.

"Are you ready?" I asked.

"I suppose. I'm so fucking embarrassed!" Sandy replied,
and we opened the door. We walked out and yelled "Tah
Dahhh!"

Everybody screamed, hooted, whistled and clapped in
delight at our discomfort.

We were quite a sight! I was wearing Sandy's bra and
tight, little panties, which just barely covered my
dick, which was about to rip through them. Sandy was
wearing my briefs, which were about two sizes too big
for her. She was holding them up with one hand, while
trying to cover her boobs with her other arm. Paul and
David's eyes were bugging out of their heads, as they
looked her up and down, then up and down again.

"San-DEE woo woo WOO!" yelled David. "Hey! NICE BOD,
Sand! Wow-WEE!" Paul exclaimed. Jenny was blushing, as
she stared at the clear outline of my cock against
Sandy's extremely small and tight panties.

"Robbie, those panties fit you to a 'T'!" she giggled,
with her hand over her mouth. Sandy's bra, which was
hanging pretty loose, fell off of my chest and on to the
floor.

"Hey, that chick's pretty flat chested!" Mary said and
everyone laughed.

"Can we PLEASE get dressed now?" Sandy pleaded.

"OK, grab your clothes and go upstairs," Mary said.
Sandy and I scampered upstairs to the bedroom and
closed the door.

"Your panties are killing me. Close your eyes”. I ordered, and Sandy put her hand over her eyes. I wipped off her panties and handed them to her. I noticed that Sandy was sneeking a peek through her fingers. “Oh, go ahead and look. You felt it you might as well see it!”

Sandy took her hand away from her eyes, and took a good look at my erect dick sticking straight out. "Yipes! Rob-BEE! Shame on you!”
she squealed.

"Now give me back my underwear, right now!" I barked.

Sandy turned around with her back toward me, took her arm away from her boobs, and pulled my briefs down and off. “Nice ass, Sandy” I teased.
“Yah, and that’s all you’re gonna see" she laughed, looking over her shoulder, holding my briefs out. “Here, take ‘em” she said. “Sorry, I can’t reach them” I replied. “You’ll have to hand them to me nicely just like I did to you”. “Just take ‘em, you perv” she laughed. “Come on, hand them to me nicely” I replied. “Oh, I give up!” she snapped, turning around. “THERE!" she yelled, standing full-frontal showing everything. “You happy?” She handed my shorts to me.


Oh, man! I saw some pieces parts in the closet-and felt a
few more-but now here she was in all her glory! She was
absolutely gorgeous...just like a naked Barbie doll come
to life, except anatomically correct, with perfect tits
and a little, blonde bush. We were now both totally
nude. I put my arm around her waist and she put her arm around mine.

"You got nothin' on, you dirty girl!" I said, taking inventory
from top to bottom.

Blushing, she replied "I know. Neither do you!"

Her eyes were locked on to my dick. “See anything you like?” I asked. “Well, to be honest, you’ve got quite a sausage there!” Sandy giggled. Then she looked down at her snatch. “Do you think this would look better shaved? My girlfriends say that guys like it better that way. What do you think?” she asked. “Either way is OK by me” I answered. “And are my boobs OK? I mean, I’ve never been completely naked in front of a guy before” she asked. “You got it all, Sandy. The puss, tits, ass, legs, every inch of you is cute as a button” I replied. She smiled. Then, she stretched her arms out. "Oh, I am so sore after being in that tight closet" Sandy remarked.

"You want a massage?" I asked and smiled.

"Oh yes, but no funny stuff," Sandy answered. She lay
down on the bed on her stomach. I worked on her
shoulders, and massaged her back. Then I started to
knead her bare butt with the sides of my hands. "Never
mind my butt!" Sandy chuckled. I started to massage her
legs bending them backwards and working my way to her
feet.

I gave her a foot massage, spreading her long toes and
massaging each one individually, finishing up with tiny
little nibbles.

"Oooo, you're kinda turning me on!" she whispered.

"OK, flip over," I requested.

She turned over on her back. I massaged her shoulders
and started making circles around her breasts as she
started panting. I gently massaged each rock-hard nipple
and worked my way down to her tummy and hips. I massaged
around her belly button and started to go lower. Sandy
grabbed my hand to stop me, but I shook it off and kept
going lower until I reached her cunt. I started to make
circles around her bush. She had her eyes closed and was
panting harder. Then I went inside and started to make
circles. She started wiggling and moaning. I found her little clit, and she gasped. I massaged her clit and her moans got louder. She got wetter and wetter, and then went "Oohhhhhhh!" and
then lay still. She opened her eyes. "Oh, wow. I feel so
much better. Here, I'll give you a massage now.

We switched positions, and I lay down on my stomach.
"I've never done this before," she said.

"Just do what I did," I answered.

"OK, here goes," said Sandy and she started to rub my
shoulders with her soft, little hands. She worked her
way down to my back, then started rubbing my butt. "You
have a great ass," she purred. She bent my leg upward
and massaged it. Then she started rubbing my feet. "Next
you did this, right?" she asked as she massaged each of my toes.
“Then this, right?” she asked as she nibbled the tips and started giggling.

“What are you laughing at?” I asked

"I’m sorry. It’s just that your toenails are really funny looking!”, Sandy chuckled.

“Very amusing” I replied.

"OK, turn over," she requested. My dick was gigantic by now
and Sandy couldn't stop looking at it. Even as she
massaged my shoulders and chest she kept staring at my
dick.

She got down to my stomach and started to go a little
lower, but stopped. I grabbed her hand and thrust it
down on to my dick which made her gasp.

"This, too?" she asked.

"Yup," I answered.

Slowly, she started to massage my dick. The sensation
was incredible. "This doesn't hurt, does it?" she asked.

"Nope," I answered and she continued.

"It's like... so hard... and big... it's so strange
looking... oh, man, this is weird..." She kept rubbing.
"Your thing doesn't even look real!" she remarked. "I
can't believe that I'm doing this!"

I knew that I was just about to come.

"This is sooo dirty!" she said.

"Sandy?" I asked, "Do you wanna have sex?"

She stopped for a minute to ponder the question. "Well,
ah... I don't wanna get pregnant," she replied
nervously.

"Wait, I have the solution," I said, as I reached into
the end table and pulled out one of my Dad's condoms.
"Here, put this on me," I requested.

Sandy opened the pack, and pulled it out. "Like this,
right?" she asked as she rolled it over my dick.

Without another word, I turned her over, spread her legs
and stuck it right in. She was tight, so I had to work it in a bit. “Oh, Robbie! Robbie! Robbie!” she gasped. The sensation was like nothing I had ever experienced before. Sandy clawed my back and whispered; "Oh my God!" over and over as I started working it in and out of her.

Before my eyes, this cute little blonde had turned into
a primal beast. "Oh fuck... Oh my God!" she repeated.
She bicycled her legs. "Oh, yes! Oh, yes! Oh, yes!” I popped
her cherry, noticed some blood, but kept on going! "Oh
my God...Oh God... Oh yes! Yes! Yes!" she was moaning now.

My dick was about to explode. I kept pumping. "Oh, Oh,
Oh, Oh," she kept repeating. She started to rub her own
tits frantically, so I pulled her hands away and started to suck
them, nibbling on her nipples. “Oh, Robbie! Oh, Robbie!” she panted. That sent both her and I over the edge!

I started to cum. “Oh! You just got even bigger!” Sandy blurted out. I came like crazy as she tightened her body, let out
one, big "Ohhhh!", and released a river of pussy juice. Then we lay still. After a minute or so, we both sat up. "Wow, that was intense!"
Sandy said. We were completely drenched in sweat.

The master bathroom was right there. "I wanna take a
quick shower," I said.

"Me, too," Sandy replied.

"We might as well take one together," I said. “OK” replied Sandy and we both entered the bathroom. I took off the condom and
threw it away.

Sandy put down the toilet seat and sat down. "Sorry, I gotta pee," she said with a sheepish look. After a little while she got up.

"I gotta pee, too," I said, and lifted up the seat. I
took aim and let go with a stream, much to the amusement
of Sandy. "Oh, gross! Were not hiding anything anymore
are we?" she giggled.


I turned on the shower, and we both got in. "Here, help
me wash," I requested.

"I've never showered with a guy before. What do you want
me to do?" Sandy asked.

"Just do what I do. Here, I'll wash your neck and you do
mine," I instructed.

"OK," said Sandy as we both worked up some lather.

"Armpits are next", I continued as I lifted up her arm and scrubbed her pit.

"Hey, you're washing off all my deodorant!" Sandy giggled.
“So what? It stopped working a long time ago. You stink!” I laughed.
“Oh yeah? So do you!” Sandy replied. “I guess we both worked up quite a sweat”.

"Here, keep washing. Arms, hands, get under the fingernails, chest," I said, as I soaped up her titties washing them right down to
the nipples. "Tummy... get the lint out of the belly
button," I said jokingly. "Hips and legs," I proceeded
as we continued to wash each other. "Feet. Get the
stinky smell out from in between the toes and the dirt out from under the toenails," I instructed.

"Boy, you sure are thorough!" Sandy laughed as she
followed along.

"Now, the fun parts," I said.

"You mean…?" she began.

"Yup, spread 'em."

"Well, you too!" Sandy replied.

With legs spread, I lathered up her little tuft of hair and cunt, went inside and washed around. She leaned backward. “Oh, you’re gonna make me cum again” she whispered. Sandy's soft hands were sudsing up my cock. "Don't forget my balls and pubic hair." I reminded
Sandy.

"Boy, I'm washing everything today!" she giggled.

My cock was getting bigger.

"Hey, you're pumpin' up again," Sandy exclaimed. "You
want me to stop?"

"Nope," I answered.

We both kept scrubbing. “Oh, here I go!” Sandy panted. I kept scrubbing. She closed her eyes as pussy juice dripped from her snatch. I scrubbed right through her orgasm and kept on scrubbing. I felt her cunt contort again. “Oh! Oh! Robbie!” she panted, as she reached another orgasm. I kept on scrubbing. After about two minutes, her cunt started contorting again. She leaned her head back and whispered “Oh my GOD!” as she reached her third orgasm. “How many times do you want to cum?” I asked as I kept scrubbing. Drenched, Sandy mumbled something, spread her arms and legs as far as they would go, fanned out her fingers and toes, leaned back, closed her eyes, shrieked “Ohhhhhhhh!” and dripped more pussy juice. Then, she grabbed both my wrists and put them against the wall. Then she gave me the biggest, wettest, deepest kiss that I ever had! “Oh, what you did to me, you dirty, dirty fucker!” she whispered.

She started giving me a soapy hand job, but then stopped. “Oh what the fuck!” she blurted out, and went down on her knees and started to suck my dick! I was in heaven. In between sucks she looked up at me and said “Come on, cum for me”. A few moments later, she took it out of her mouth and jacked me with her hand. “Come on, Robbie, I want to see you cum”, she pleaded. “I’ve never seen a guy cum before”.

I have to admit that I was a bit shy. “Sandy, this is embarrassing! I’ve never cum out in the open before!” I replied. “First time for everything!” she shot back. She leaned back against the wall and started to massage my dick with her long toes. Then she rubbed her tits on it, turned around and rubbed her ass against it, and sucked it some more. She took it out of her mouth and started jacking me again, this time with both hands. I felt myself losing control. “Come on, let’s see it!” she ordered.

Suddenly, I hit the point of no return.

Every inch of my body tingled as the volcanic eruption began. There were five or six seconds of pure, unadulterated bliss before I actually came, then gobs and gobs and gobs of cream shot out of my cock with tremendous force. I thought it would never stop!

"Oh WOW! So that's how it looks when you GET OFF!" she
exclaimed. “Look at all that STUFF!”

The cumming finally stopped, and my dick sunk down, deflated.

Sandy grabbed my wrists, put me against the wall, and gave me another deep kiss. Then she grabbed my cock, lifted it up, and felt my balls.
“Let’s see if there is anything left in your tank” she asked. “I know you got more. I want every drop” she chuckled, and started sucking again. My dick slowly hardened, and before I knew it I was on the verge of cumming again. Only this time, Sandy didn’t stop sucking. I felt the beginning of a climax in such an intense way that I almost passed out! I couldn’t believe that she was going to go through with it, but she did! I came right in her mouth as she kept sucking and swallowing simultaneously. After a few moments, she took my cock out, and washed and rinsed it. Holding it in her hand, she looked at it, then looked at me. “When I said every drop, I meant EVERY DROP!” she whispered, and got down on her knees and started sucking again. I honestly thought that I couldn’t get it up again, but you would be surprised the power of a cunt-naked gorgeous blonde providing the ultimate service. She sucked and sucked, as I felt my body muster its last reserves of strength. When I finally came, it felt as though my body was turning inside out. She kept on sucking and swallowing right through this third climax, too! I remembered that some rock songs always had the line “she makes me weak in the knees”. Now, I know what that’s about. When she finished, I could barely stand up!


I caught my breath, and grabbed the soap again. I turned Sandy around and spread her little ass cheeks. "Can’t forget to wash out the butt hole," I said, lathering it up.

I stuck two soapy fingers inside her butthole and worked them around. “Hey!” she squealed “even inside there?”. “Yup” I replied. “I guess there isn’t a square inch of our bodies that’s private anymore!” Sandy laughed. When I finished, Sandy turned me around and lathered up my rear end, spread my cheeks, put her soapy fingers up my butthole, and scrubbed. “I can’t believe what I am doing today!” she laughed.

I grabbed the bottle of shampoo. "Here, I'll do your hair," I said.

"I just washed it this morning," Sandy answered, "but if
you want to, go ahead." And with that, I washed her
beautiful, blonde hair. I worked up some extra lather
and scrubbed her face.

"Hey, wait a minute! Don't do that!" she said through squinting eyes and a soapy face as I washed off her eye shadow, eyeliner, blush and lipstick. "Oh man, now, I'm REALLY naked!" she laughed.

We rinsed off and toweled each other off.

I started to dry her hair with the hair dryer. “Now this is service" Sandy said. Then, I lowered the hair dryer between her legs and blow-dried her little blonde tuft of hair, fluffing it with my hand. “You don’t have to do THAT part” she laughed. “Now, get dressed before I end up doing it to you again" I said, standing directly in front of her.

Sandy looked down at my cock. “Will you please do something about your lovemaking apparatus?” she giggled.


I found two bathrobes and we put them on.

Sandy sat in a chair while I brushed her hair. She had her purse in the bedroom, so she got out her makeup and nail polish. “I am going to treat you like a queen” I said. I took her hand, painted her fingernails, and blew on them. “Give me your feet” I asked, and she put her feet in my lap. Her toenails were a bit long, so I began by trimming them. “Not too short, now”, Sandy said. Then I painted each one, and blew on them to dry. She stood up. “You are a peach” she said. She took her purse and walked toward the bathroom to change, but just as she reached the doorway, she untied the rope of her bathrobe, took it off and threw it on to the bed. She turned to me, threw up her arms and went “Woo woo! One last look, Romeo!”, posed for a moment showing that great bod, blew me a kiss and entered the bathroom.

If the angels look half as stunning as this babe, Heaven must be quite a place.

We finished up and got dressed. She reapplied her makeup, and looked like a million bucks. She was positively glowing. We hugged and I
softly kissed her. "You're so adorable. I never dreamed
that I would be so lucky," I said.

"Me neither," replied Sandy. "Mary told me her first
time was with a selfish asshole who hurt her."

We walked back downstairs.

"Hey, where have you guys been?" asked Jenny.

"Oh, we just wanted to get cleaned up," said Sandy,
winking at me.

END


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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2005 20:32
    Pretty darn good, could have used more description on the actual sex parts, but over all good. 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2005 23:28
    2/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 00:01
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 01:31
    Good story but "sandy" wasn't realistic enough to be a virgen. other than that nice descriptions keep up the good work.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 04:11
    danm good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 07:55
    Keep up the good work. Nice job.

    10 / 10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 15:24
    This was an AWSOME story dude. Keep it coming.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 17:04
    nice one 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 17:59
    first of all... who used my name again...

    well, who gives a shit

    and Big Stick, whunot realistic? you shouldve seen my girl on her first time ;-)

    anyway, nice story, but how the hell did you know how to polish the nailes and trim them... wait a sec... i don't wanna know!... just kidding 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 19:24
    def a 10 we need more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 21:33
    killer story, you got any more in there? if so they would have to be pretty good to beat this one 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 22:27
    This was the best story i have ever read on here i hope u make a 2nd part~!!

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 22:50
    i love this story its so funny ha 10/10 easily

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 23:23
    Enjoyable story....it's nice to see good format with an equally good story...great job

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:04
    great story man! 10/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:10
    damm good story keep the good writing ....10/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:15
    this story was great but did you really have to go from fucking her to doing her nails ;-P



    still 10/10 keep the good ones cummin ;P

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:20
    This story rocked I totally agree with Original Me though how did he know how to paint and trim nails but still it was between 9/10 and a 10/10!Definetly make a sequile talk about what happned after at school, with friends, were you caught. You know stuff like that.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 08:43
    ıve never read in english these kind of story always in my languages. I think I always looking for english one after that story.

    That was really good..

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 11:19
    I really liked this story, it has some heart in it. 10/10! keep writing

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 12:09
    Great plot, well written, but a bit too quick when it came to their first time. 8/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 16:36
    Highly recommended, and please write again, its works like this that make this site enjoyable, asides from all the porn that is :P

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 16:43
    slow down on the fucking part 6/10



    fix that and it would be sooo much better

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 19:37
    i didn't even get hard once...

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 20:47
    Keep writing man, I liked how you built up on the sex part

    10/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 21:30
    All that happened and the and their friends didn`t notice. think it out before u write



    u got stuck up the ass dude thats gey



    6/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 22:10
    being young myself, I always like these realistic experience stories

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 23:24
    u r a faggot asshole, quit ur commenting under different aliases and quit rating all ur stories at the same damn time, it makes it so obvious, 1/10 1/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 23:46
    One of the best! Nice job. You said in the introduction that this was basically a real experience and that you only embellished it a little. Good stuff. Interesting how people doing it for the first time just fall into all the moves! Nature at work, I guess. I like how you got sweet at the end and brushed her hair and did her nails. Getting cozy afterward and showing love is the sign of a real man, not a boy. Take it from me.

    10+ rating!

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 00:32
    Great story! The nail business at the end reminded me of that James Mason movie where he paints his teenage girlfriend's toenails after a session. I have dried my girl's hair after we showered, but I gotta remember the toenails next time. S-E-X-Y!!!!

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 03:35
    the bit at the end, was good for the cooldown, soem stories go too long, and it's boring, but as a story it was good, believable, and most of all, it was so pure and innocent it made me feel good, reminding me of my first time. when love is love.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 08:03
    was PRETTY short you need the build up and maybe you could have make their freinds share them. BAD end 8/10

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 16:15
    That's the way to write, go to the top off the class,

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 19:04
    i loved that one dude, crazy, i did sumthin like that once with a girl, so it brought up some memories!

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 19:52
    Yeaahhh!!!! that's what I'm talking about. Hot fuckin story, dude, and you rec'd a 10/10

    rudy

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 00:57
    great story

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 07:08
    no faulkts, great story. More please

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 14:51
    great one 10/10 iits true if the girl puts enough in to it she can make a guy cum multiple times i should know i had a girl that did that to me every time. :)

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 16:19
    The story, overall, isn't too bad. It's not the best story I've read by any means, and it could use a lot of work. Sounds like a horny 12-year-old who knew nothing about sex wrote this.

    Polish it up a bit, be a bit more descriptive, and change some of the wording. The wording chosen for the character's speak isn't very believable and sounds like it's a TV show with really bad actors.

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 16:50
    the stroy fucking sucked cock

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 03:00
    girls dont like soup in their vaginas.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 13:18
    C-R-A-P 1/10

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 16:25
    Good stuff! Maybe some that didn't like it wanted more violence and ugly male dominance, but I thought that it was quite sexy and real---it reminded me of some of my first episodes when I was a teenager. Ah, innocence.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 18:23
    good story 10/10

    made me cum all over the screen

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 00:20
    i just remembered how fun junior high was definately10/10

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 22:25
    it was good but a little unrealistic with the friends just down stairs come on any ways good story 7/10

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 02:26
    I thought that the story was great!!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 02:37
    I thought it was a great story, The only thing i agree with from everyone else is the friends not really noticing, but still a great story 9/10

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 05:40
    10/10 amazing !!

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 07:52
    Miker: You are so funny. I can't stop laughing at your hilarious remarks! "I am a gay homo fuck who needs to take shits in the mouth to get off" is a classic! I can't wait to quote this to the guys at work.

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 08:42
    Great Story 10/10

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 14:52
    Yea reminded me of my old schoolday fantasys, alll in all a 7/10 story.

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 17:14
    best i have seen in a while

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 22:13
    I thought about the friends too but then again, if there were very many people and they were having a good time then they might not notice. Besides, it will be all over school tomorrow anyway. I thought the dialogue kind of swung from childish to overly sophisticated and back a few times. I remember what it was like to be 15 and I could get off a lot, but four times in an hour or so would be pushing it, especially standing up. I doubt if they could have walked down the stairs without a belay line. She was a virgin (allegedly) and I assume he was though he never said it. They were a little too wanton and knowledgeable in a few places, especially her (all guys are wanton). This was a very good story, way to take a tired old premise and breathe a little life into it. Keep writing.

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    READER 500
    10.12.2005 04:58
    great story just like how I got my girlfriend but we didn't play games like that and we didn't do the later part. but great story.

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    READER 500
    10.12.2005 06:19
    Hey great story, one that manages to be good without all the filthy shit that sometimes ends up on here...

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    READER 500
    10.12.2005 08:14
    miker shut the fuck up you ass hole. great story 10/10

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    READER 500
    10.12.2005 10:21
    Great Story,

    See all you guy's..

    you don't need all the sex to be so descriptive to make a great story

    I liked it better this way gives more for the mind to think about..





    10/10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 00:20
    there were strong points, and weak points 6/10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 00:40
    Awsome storyline, amazing characters and wonderful plot. The only thing you need is details! You have to put more details in! Keep developing it, and I cannot wait for the sequel.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 05:36
    Nice story. But sometimes a little bit unrealistic. 8/10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 10:59
    Great Story! When this story will be played in a theatre I´ll play Robie.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 16:34
    Pretty Fucking awsome, nice job sounds like it oucld happen 10?10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 19:12
    Nice story A+

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 22:15
    I think that was the best story I have ever read, and I read XNXX stories all the time. Excellent, excellent, excellent. 100/10

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 02:10
    i thought the story was GREAT...the part witht the fingers in your ass though, not so much. but other than that it was a killer story, i gave it a 10/10! any girls wanna chat? feel free to e-mail me!

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 11:11
    a real bitch doesn't need to LOOK alike fuckin britney are you hearin me? you so foul dude

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 14:35
    that was a hott storyy

    cummed lots

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 20:02
    hey. loved the story. wicked detailed. 10/10!!

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 22:21
    Nice dude, Very Nice. 10/10

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 22:34
    WAY too much giggling and laughing in there. Moredetail would be needed too. Reluctance also. 7.

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 19:57
    Pretty good, you need to develop more of a style and lead into the story a little more. Also what were the friends doing while they were having sex? Sequal maybe?

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 11:32
    Looking for ladies to talk to I got a pic... Very nice story 10/10

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 15:54
    dat was sick bitch!!!

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 19:13
    it was good and all but the guy tht wrote this prob has a lil dick cause no1 would brag tht much in a stroy about a "big" dick

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 23:18
    I am i girl an i felt this is well done (cant girls but horny about sex stories jeeze) lol so anyways it was good i say ten out of ten very well done man GJ

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 02:38
    damn that was hot lmao gonna have to try that shit with my gf hehe

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 17:23
    Hot hot hot. I wish my guy was sexy like that. Guys, let me give you a tip: Foreplay is the key.

    Massage every inch---and I mean every inch--of my body, especially fingers, lips, tits, toes and clit.

    Wash me in the shower up and down and in and out. Then let me wash that pole of yours. Oooo baby.

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    READER 500
    18.12.2005 03:12
    wow that was a hell of a story!

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 05:29
    Excelent, i wish i was so lucky

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 15:45
    wow that was good

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 18:02
    thats fucking worst story ever

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 21:39
    Maybe your nickname (Hitler) is appropriate. Hitler had only one ball....(for real...check the history books) ....and couldn't get hard even when Eva Braun sucked his cock. No wonder you weren't turned on.

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 21:40
    that was nice your fuckin lucky

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 21:54
    that was great man! ive gotta try that.

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    READER 500
    20.12.2005 05:29
    That was a fun story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Let's have more from yoyu.

    9/10

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 11:07
    its a beautiful story.

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 14:43
    Good job, made me want to fuck Sandy

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 15:14
    wowowoowowowowo awsome

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 16:47
    absolutely fucking fantastic story. Quit working on your day job and write more of these sex stories and sell them in a book form.12/10

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    READER 500
    21.12.2005 23:03
    FUCKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 01:44
    that was freakin awsume i loved it my dick was on the verge throught the whole thing. good job.

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 18:48
    hey rick, why dont you take a break from rating ur own shit and try and enjoy the holidays some. ur rating wont make anyone know you or like you any better, frankly it kinda sucks, 1/10

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    READER 500
    23.12.2005 14:32
    why is this rated so hihgh its not even that good

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    READER 500
    23.12.2005 18:13
    holy shit stop the presses! this was awesome u should keep writing and writing and writing. this was the best story i have ever read. it made me so horny i had to jack off three times before i finished the story. it gets a 100/10

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    READER 500
    24.12.2005 17:27
    this wasnt even good why dont u try and go to school dick head, ur a fucking dick head. OMG LOOK AT THAT ITS THE WRITER! DICK HEAD!

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    READER 500
    25.12.2005 00:46
    Thank you all for your comments pro or con. The pro remarks were very nice to see, and the constructive cons—not the misspelled insults from some very crude people---will help me to write better in the future. The only sad thing is that a couple of folks seem to think that I posted all of the pro comments myself. You posters out there know that you are real. Thanks again to all.

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    READER 500
    25.12.2005 20:17
    Damn man keep writing. next time involve like all the girls and guys. and i agree with the guy under me that the girl was too smart to be a virgin. But i give it a 10.

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    READER 500
    28.12.2005 17:25
    Very good 10/10. Anyone who gives this 1 is too bitter for anyone to read their stories as they will reflect that author. Good narrative and well described: looking forward to part two.

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 18:03
    its funny, u all say its crap, and you all still read it, and jack off to it

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 20:59
    im only 13, and i wached off so much, my penis broke

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 21:39
    omg this was one of the best sex stories i have ever read, keep up the fantastic work man

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 21:55
    I don't know why there's so much criticism on this story. It wasn't bad. I kind of liked it.

    7/10

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    READER 500
    30.12.2005 17:41
    Childish, and a bit stupid i'm afraid. Tedious to the end, with an insight into someone who doesn't seem to either 1-be descriptive or 2-is just guessing at what it's like to have actual sex.

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    READER 500
    31.12.2005 00:09
    needs more detail

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    READER 500
    31.12.2005 22:17
    VERY GOOD 10 of 10 !!!

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    READER 500
    01.01.2006 04:47
    Dick Warmer, how lovely that you're having sex so young. I hope you have enough sense to not get knocked up. I wouldn't want kids from you in this world.





    Anyway, good story. 10/10.

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    READER 500
    02.01.2006 03:32
    im 14 too, but i werd a rubber...

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    READER 500
    02.01.2006 16:20
    how bout u little kids stop surfing porn sites eh?

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 01:31
    OUR PEOPLE ARE FUCKING SICK. WE DONT HAVE LONG DICKS TO PLEASE OUR WOMEN. SO WE VISIT SEX SITES LIKE THESE TO MASTERBATE. WE CANT ENJOY REAL WOMEN. THIS IS OUR DESTINY. WE GET SO HORNY READING SEX STORIES LIKE THESE SO IMAGINE WHAT WOULD HAPPENED IF WE SEE A REAL NAKED WOMEN. WE JUST EJACULATE IN A SECOND. ONBEHALF OF EVERYBODY HERE.

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 16:30
    The last post was NOT authentic. I am the real author. I wrote the original "thank you" earlier. It seems that many people on this site like to cause trouble one way or another by pretending to be other people, insulting people just for kicks, or doing other stupid things that anyone with a real life containing happiness, love and respect would not find the need to do. I would never be so crude as to call someone an "asshole". How dare you use my name.

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 19:46
    absolutely delightful, ahh what the fuck, I cummed lots, in fact the biggest i have ever had

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 19:54
    fUCK I'm 13 who can blame me for being here

    at least i can read

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    READER 500
    04.01.2006 10:37
    there seem to be plenty of underage ppl posting on this site, it seems to be every popular witht the kiddies.

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    READER 500
    04.01.2006 17:06
    This was amazing, and it was, well AMAZING!!!

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    READER 500
    04.01.2006 18:38
    there is not one kid i know that hasn't been here

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 00:52
    Allright people, please stop using my name to post on here. At least the last person was polite, but I still would prefer my name not be used. He's right though, it's childish to continue using other peoples names just to make fun of them or make a post. And I am working on another story, but if people keep abusing my name I don't think I'll submit it.

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 01:30
    im 15 and i dont think ur story rings true its not like when i got changed with a girl when we went swimming we had sex after it took 3 weeks and more changing infront of her. and i cant get porn by card or mags so what do u want me to do sit there i need to learn so when i have my big orgie this weekend me and my friends can get fucking laid. ugh i put it in her pussy!

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 08:52
    That does it. I don't know what the hell thrills people so much about identity theft (maybe because they have no identity of their own). I am the real author. I posted the December 25 "thank you" and the "last post was not authentic" post. All others, including the "allright people" one from Jan 5 were fakes. So, I will make it easy. This is my last post. There will be no more stories posted on this site from me. There will be no more messages posted on this site from me. From this point on, anything with "Rick The Author" is a fake posted by someone trying to be cute. In closing, thank you all. I hope that my little story--which is based on a real incident, by the way although embellished--made both male and female readers feel sexy, and ready to please each other with a combin

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 23:56
    After reading this I read the story you posted last May. I liked the shower idea - real sexy, though I can't imagine doing it with a guy when I was 15. However, since the two stories are both nearly identical I can't believe either one really happened. I've submitted 26 stories here mostly just my fantasies. The real ones aren't ever this good!

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    READER 500
    09.01.2006 21:20
    that's obvioue asshole 1/10

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    READER 500
    10.01.2006 16:50
    man i thnk the author should get it so only he can use his name on here and no one else that would solve a lot of problems

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    READER 500
    11.01.2006 18:18
    thought it was a great story. what the fuck is the point of slatin other peoples stories, god id like to see some of you do better for fucks sake!

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    READER 500
    12.01.2006 16:52
    it was a good story

    10/10

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    READER 500
    13.01.2006 19:45
    part 2 : )

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    READER 500
    13.01.2006 22:57
    amazing story

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    READER 500
    16.01.2006 06:54
    oh yeah

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    READER 500
    17.01.2006 13:19
    nice story..if its stoeln then serious props to the true author

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    READER 500
    30.01.2006 17:12
    Oh MY! this story inspired my girlfriend to have sex with me. Thank you!

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    READER 500
    31.01.2006 05:23
    Oh, Shit. After reading this fucking story, my girlfriend doesn't want to fuck with me any more. What a fucking story!

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    READER 500
    09.02.2006 15:37
    i think it was very good

    10/10

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    READER 500
    11.02.2006 06:13
    chill

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    READER 500
    15.02.2006 18:45
    what a load of shit

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    READER 500
    17.02.2006 10:55
    sdfsfsdfsfsdfdfsdfsdfdfdfsf...

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    READER 500
    17.02.2006 22:29
    good, 10/10

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    READER 500
    18.02.2006 03:03
    awesome

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    READER 500
    18.02.2006 09:14
    what a crackin stroy

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    READER 500
    19.02.2006 03:01
    SHHHHHHHIT!!!



    10/10

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    READER 500
    20.02.2006 03:34
    20000/10

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    READER 500
    21.02.2006 18:51
    LOVED IT!

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    READER 500
    22.02.2006 16:17
    very good 10/10

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    READER 500
    28.02.2006 23:24
    Pretty corny if you ask me, not bad though

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    READER 500
    01.03.2006 09:52
    man that was so corny -- i got off on it tho

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    READER 500
    04.03.2006 00:36
    POOP

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    READER 500
    05.03.2006 06:08
    when he was cleaming her ass he should have startel licking it and fucking it..... but good read anyway

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    READER 500
    08.03.2006 19:04
    very enlighting but he should have run his cock up he ass while cleaning it

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    READER 500
    08.03.2006 22:27
    10/10...write a sequel

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    READER 500
    10.03.2006 11:47
    that was good, i enjoyed it, played with my clit while i read it, climax was great

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    READER 500
    10.03.2006 16:01
    Great story! Wish that would happen to me.

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    READER 500
    13.03.2006 02:58
    what a story cant belive such a lucky guy robbie is.........wish i could be there

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    READER 500
    13.03.2006 17:19
    lots of exclimations. corney story, good action, 7/10

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    READER 500
    21.03.2006 02:31
    ew thought it was like.......ew

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    READER 500
    21.03.2006 10:47
    lame shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2006 10:10
    This was actually a well written story. Keep up the good work.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2006 18:50
    should have stuck his cock up her ass!!! but a great story anyway,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2006 19:37
    corney as hell but good, i liked it good going.

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    READER 500
    26.03.2006 02:14
    10/10 Awsome Story . . . .

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    READER 500
    30.03.2006 10:11
    i think there shud b a part 2 and more... ! lol

    10 / 10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2006 15:02
    dammit i want to be robbie, lucky fuck! The furthest i ever got in truth or dare was making out. bastard!

    brilliant story. got me horny as hell, good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2006 17:38
    wow. thats all i can say. wow.



    100000/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.04.2006 18:09
    lame but corney but make a part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2006 00:47
    Very good. You need a part two

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2006 10:27
    Awseome 10/10... Great!! Best Story On This Whole Site... Nice One ;)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2006 18:28
    wish i was him

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2006 18:31
    hey great story. Now i wanna go play truthor dare. you really need a part 2

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    READER 500
    18.04.2006 03:30
    i didnt really like the dialouge it wasnt... real. people wouldnt really say the stuff the characters said, but other than that i liked it a lot good story

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    READER 500
    22.04.2006 23:01
    Truth or dare had never been so much fun!



    I really liked this story.



    The buildup was perfect, just perfect. I can't imagine a better way to start the story. I liked how you didn't bullshit most of the story with the truth or dare game.



    The story was pretty good. It was a little unaccurate, but pretty good. I don't think that a guy can get it up that many times and not feel a little discomfort. And the condom came out of nowhere, but I'll let that slide.



    The story was overly erotic, and very well done. I got horny after reading the title. The story just kept getting me turned on.



    Overall, the story was amazing. I loved it. This is definetly going into my favorites list! :)



    10/10 for sure. Keep it up.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 00:32
    fucking make a part 2 ! gogoogogog :D

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 21:45
    great

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    READER 500
    27.04.2006 01:02
    Have read over 100 stories to date on a variety of "erotic" sites. This was certainly the very best. Vivid descriptions that were erotic without being grossly exaggerated for the most part.. Story flowed well and was almost completely believable. Brought back very pleasant memories. Did not buy the portion that spoke of globs and globs of cum, quite unbelievable..Sounded like he produced over a quart. The most I know of is about a half cupful, and even that is most unusual.

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    READER 500
    27.04.2006 20:23
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2006 04:10
    what a teriffic story.to bad it doesn't happen like that in real life to everyone.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2006 15:45
    It was a little unbelievable that she went down on his soapy cock.

    It was good and gave me a hard on.

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    READER 500
    04.05.2006 16:37
    it wasnt the best i've read but it was a good fantasy. i think it was mostly for guys thoo.... as a girl i would personally want a bit more raunchy action.... but it was good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2006 18:54
    Will you shit in my mouth.

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    READER 500
    13.05.2006 21:27
    hhaaha it was good but ive heard better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2006 22:51
    Make a part II!!!! I enjoyed this story, this story is my ultimate dream to play truth or dare w/ hot girls....I loved this story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.05.2006 15:50
    ITT WAS A PEACE OF SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTT DONT WAST UR TIME TO READ

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.05.2006 21:48
    Niiiiiiiice.. :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.05.2006 19:44
    2 bad it dosnt happen in real life.=(

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 18:42
    Good story, but would any girl really suck a soapy dick ?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.06.2006 21:37
    any more dare cards? and part 2 of the game?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.06.2006 22:11
    That was super sexy, cant wait for part 2 :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2006 15:51
    i've heard better stories from a drunken monkey

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    READER 500
    08.06.2006 22:52
    i admit it was pretty terrible. ive seen my dog fart and it was more of a turn on than this story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.06.2006 07:09
    wow the day that *actually* happens is the day an arab doesnt blow himself up!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.06.2006 01:07
    That was great! Make another!

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    READER 500
    15.06.2006 20:06
    you assfidgeting fudgemuffin!Thank god I have such a vast imagination to make up for your vomit-inspiring lack of talent.I'll admit I came, but luckily due to my extensive training I managed to sqeeze my pc-muscle and hold back the deluge of liqified baby ooze which my firehose sized cock might otherwise have unjustly spilled in tribute to this insensible smut.You are a rediculous, perverted little fuck monkey and I'm going to kill you!!!!

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    READER 500
    18.06.2006 18:53
    Hey rick was doing some looking at comments I was suppose to have written Webmasters have fucked uu on this one Ole Rusty did not write that comment Seen some other shit on this site ole rusty didn't write either

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    READER 500
    19.06.2006 01:21
    A real turnon and fabulously hot. Realistic in that he did not just glide into a virgin, but actually had to pop the chrerry. Felt as if I were participating and really enjoying it...lucky kid!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 16:51
    as long as they suck it

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 20:31
    You needed to keep going with the game, and perhaps delve further into their activities in the closet.....they're pressing up against each other and that awkwardness should've turned into something very hot....but instead you took it to the bed......overdone.....disap... with the original premise....you had us.....but you lost us....

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    READER 500
    06.07.2006 01:28
    omg now i just wan lik ma tits an den go over to ma boos house an suk him off a million times i loveeeee cum!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.07.2006 21:09
    PART 2 AS SOON AS MOTHERFUCKING POSSIBLE

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    READER 500
    08.07.2006 10:16
    yeah u cunning lingus.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.07.2006 13:00
    this was a great story!!!!!!!One of the best I've read so far!!!!!!!!please write another...

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    READER 500
    12.07.2006 03:04
    I agree....That was great! make another!

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    READER 500
    19.07.2006 07:25
    It was nice, but could be improved, more build up during the game maybe, and it goes from just being like "hey you wana have sex?" to then being quite romantic which is a bit odd?

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    READER 500
    20.07.2006 05:09
    no too board

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    READER 500
    22.07.2006 19:04
    Very good. A little short, but very hot. I had a good wank.

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    READER 500
    25.07.2006 23:46
    haha too fast on everything

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    READER 500
    01.09.2006 01:02
    loved it, hell yes

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    READER 500
    10.09.2006 11:27
    close but no cigar

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    READER 500
    27.09.2006 05:40
    i hate britney spears

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    READER 500
    05.10.2006 23:31
    I do not know how the bad comment on this story with my name in small letters got on this story. I never read this story until tonight hope this will make up for someones mischief 10/10

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    READER 500
    26.11.2006 12:12
    okay story not the best needs som more descriptiveness ot it and maybe a little anal next time keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    03.12.2006 17:08
    It was ok but I could write a better story then this. You should have wrote what were the other people doing, you just can't skip to other people.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2006 23:50
    Fast good jerk, and if you can write a better one you fag "Reader" then write one and stop posing.

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    READER 500
    27.12.2006 17:32
    well that was pretty good but who the hell likes to think about a big gross bush nexed to their dick the was like godzilla foe hevans sake shave that thing off

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    READER 500
    01.01.2007 01:36
    from air: hay thise was hot but it could do a litle twiking up if u know what imean

    like in the closet ther should of been more closet i had sex in a 2 by 3 closet and it was ahsom and i hate condems no im not old fhashon but when you put on a condom its just like puting a plastic bag over ur penis

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    READER 500
    19.01.2007 01:26
    Hey. Havin my first gf at that age that story sounded about right. Very well done. A good read.

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    READER 500
    05.02.2007 22:24
    i like boobies

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    READER 500
    18.03.2007 00:48
    good story

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    READER 500
    29.05.2007 18:31
    make a second

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2007 09:43
    It was pretty good.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2007 03:29
    That was good, it definitely needs a part 2.

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    READER 500
    29.06.2007 01:22
    i enjoyed it

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    READER 500
    15.07.2007 14:42
    oh my god - that was one of, if not THE best story i've ever read on this site - good job man!!

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    READER 500
    26.07.2007 15:42
    That was the best story ever dude.

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    READER 500
    23.08.2007 19:02
    sequel would be good, tell what the other people were doing

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    READER 500
    20.10.2007 02:47
    great story. you really should do a pt. 2

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    READER 500
    14.11.2007 15:09
    love this story. keep writing.

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    READER 500
    11.02.2008 20:43
    Very good story, dude. Few grammatical errors, good storyline, and not as mindless as i expected. Keep up the good work!

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    READER 500
    08.04.2008 19:26
    i liked it!! deffinatly a girlish storie, which is great! lol...1st storie ive read about the guy painting the girls nails...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2008 11:10
    i want more truth n dare not only 2-3 dares

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.02.2009 08:11
    gud story........................
    i liked it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2010 17:00
    good story where is part two

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 13:47
    I was moaning to this it was so sexual miley cyrus

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2015 07:18
    That Was A Good Story And I Hope You Write A Part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2015 03:22
    Excellent submission!! I too would love to see another chapter with these two. There is still a lot for them to explore. He didn't even have the chance to return the oral favor/. Anal would certainly be a welcome addition and if you want multiple chapters fetish play can accomplish that. Watersports which you did have a pee scene and now that the awkward "first time" is over you can expand. You've set things up perfectly for the future. Water sports or even anal in this first chapter would've been unrealistic. Now all you have to do is let your characters climb the "erotic ladder." Start with more oral, then introduce anal etc. Thanks for taking the time to write and submit this story for our enjoyment! Needless to say I'll be giving you a positive vote!!!

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