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My Brother's Genie - Chapter 02

Author: DragoTime

Date: 17 March 2016

Bi-sexual, Fantasy, Blowjob, Body modification

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The following day, Charlie wanted to go shopping, and Daniel wasn’t exactly in a rush to go home, so he went with her. They got a bus into the city centre, and proceeded to go around practically every shop they came across. Daniel found it quite boring, but it was better than going home and listening to Harry and Sarosa.
“This is so much fun, don’t you agree, Dan?” Charlie said as they walked through the city.
“Loads of fun,” Daniel said.
“Oh come on, don’t be like that. Why don’t we go and get you something?”
“I’ve got plenty of clothes already.”
“So do I, but you can always get more. Now come on, let’s go and check out the market.”

Late that afternoon they took the bus back, and parted ways, Charlie carrying her plethora of bags with her, after being unable to convince Daniel to come and carry them for her. As she walked down her street, she saw the neighbour’s dog digging a hole in the grass. She didn’t pay it much attention, until she noticed something shiny in the hole. The dog grabbed hold of it with its mouth, and pulled it out. Charlie looked down at it, and saw that it appeared to be some sort of oil lamp. Although it was covered in dirt, she could tell that it was golden in appearance, with dark red rubies decorating it. It looked rather like how Daniel had described the lamp in Harry’s bedroom.

Charlie picked the lamp up, and put it in a spare carrier bag she had. She carried it home, and headed up to her bedroom. Once she’d put her new clothes away, she took the lamp into the bathroom to wash it off in the sink. She placed it in there, and turned the taps on, to try and let the water wash all the dirt and soil off. As she watched the water run, she realised it looked an awful lot like a typical genie lamp. But what was something like that doing buried in someone’s garden? It didn’t look like a toy, so maybe it was a replica?

Charlie decided there wouldn’t be any harm in rubbing it, so she turned the tap off, and grabbed a towel, to start drying the lamp. She was disappointed however, when nothing seemed to happen. It then occurred to her that maybe it was because SHE wasn’t rubbing the lamp; the towel was. She carried it into her bedroom, and, moving the towel away, she moved her hands across the lamp nervously.

At first Charlie thought it hadn’t worked, but then she felt the lamp begin to warm up in her hands. A cloud of crimson smoke poured out of it, and began to take shape in front of her. Charlie watched the smoke form into a naked, well-tanned and well-shaped man, who immediately got down on one knee, bowing his head before her.
“My Mistress, what a most immense joy it is to see you!” The genie said. “I am Afericus, and it will be my infinite pleasure to grant your every wish!”

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Back home, Daniel was laid in his bedroom. There was nothing particularly interesting on TV, so he was browsing the internet on his laptop, trying to drown out the sounds of pleasure from next door by playing loud music through his headphones, but it wasn’t helping much. He found a Twitter account that tweeted old black and white photos, and he spent a while browsing through them. One in particular caught his eye. It was labelled simply as “Old Widower with his 3 daughters, c.1904”. The man in it was indeed old, but his daughters in the image seemed remarkably young. They were extremely beautiful though, with the large size of their breasts obvious even through their conservative early 20th century clothing.

It was the girl in the middle who really caught Daniel’s eye; she looked exactly like Sarosa! Her hairstyle was different, but her face was a perfect match. She was even smiling in the same way as she did!
“What’cha doin’, sweetie?” Daniel jumped as he felt Sarosa wrap her arms around him from behind.
“I…Sarosa?” Daniel asked. He then looked down at her, and realised something. “You’re…You’re naked.”
“Of course,” she smiled. “I couldn’t be bothered getting dressed after your brother was done fucking me. It doesn’t embarrass you, does it?” Of course, Sarosa knew that Daniel’s cock was becoming hard at an alarming rate.
“But if you’re here…who’s making all that noise?”
“Half a dozen girls from your brother’s year. They just suddenly got the urge to come over here and have wild sex with him.”

“Oh…right…Sarosa, I was just looking through some old-timey pictures, and there’s a girl who looks just like you!”
Sarosa looked over at the screen, and smiled when she saw it.
“Oooo, I’ve not seen that picture in years!” She said.
“You’ve seen it before?”
“We all look so happy here…Well, I guess we would, considering all the sex we’d had that morning…”
“What are you talking about? This photo’s over a hundred years old!”
“George was such a nice guy. His dick tasted amazing!”
“Riiiight…I’m gonna go take a shower.”

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“Do you fully understand, Mistress?” Afericus asked Charlie. He had just explained the rules of the genies to her.
“I…I think so,” Charlie nodded.
“Then I eagerly await your first wish with baited breath, Mistress.”

Charlie sat in silence for a while, trying to decide what she wanted to wish for. She could have absolutely anything she desired. But what did she desire? She looked around her room, and saw one of her bras lying around. She then decided to be completely unoriginal in her first wish.
“Afericus, I wish for really big boobs,” she said.
“Your wish is my command,” Afericus smiled.
“Wait!” Charlie shouted. She stood up, and pulled her top off, followed by her bra. She then positioned herself in front of her mirror. “Okay, go for it.”

Afericus snapped his fingers, and Charlie felt her boobs begin to tingle pleasurably. She hated how small her boobs were, so she was overjoyed as she watched them grow in the mirror. Within seconds she was sporting a pair of DDs, and she held them with glee. However, she was a little shocked to find that they kept on growing. Charlie watched as they grew bigger and bigger, before she finally shouted “Stop!” Afericus snapped his fingers again, and Charlie’s boobs stopped growing.
“Oh my God…” she said, as she examined her new boobs. They were huge; at least G or H cups, or maybe even bigger. “What the fuck did you do to me!?”
“I endowed you with “really big boobs”, as you requested, Mistress,” Afericus replied. “Does this please you?”
“I didn’t mean THIS big! Make them smaller!”
“How much smaller?”
“Hang on…” Charlie got her phone out, and found a photo of a nude girl. “This big.”
“It shall be done, my Mistress.”

Another finger snap later, and Charlie had a much more manageable set of DD boobs.
“Ooo yeah, these are much better,” Charlie said. She stood in front of the mirror, fondling and playing with her new breasts.
“Would you like to make any more wishes now, Mistress?” Afericus asked her.
“Oh you bet. Millions. You’re going to make me the sexiest girl on Earth. I wish…”

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As Daniel stood in the shower, he thought about the picture. That girl in it had REALLY looked like Sarosa. Impossibly like her. Maybe it was her great great grandmother or something? She’d acted like it really was her in the photo though. It must have been a joke. That would make her at least 125 years old!

Daniel heard someone try to open the bathroom door, but fortunately he’d locked it.
“Sarosa!” He heard Harry shout as he walked off. A few seconds later, he returned, and Daniel saw the lock turn to the open position, as if by magic. The door opened, and Daniel saw Harry, Sarosa, and several other girls in there; Lucy Willis, Yasmin Wright, Eleri Jones, and 3 others he didn’t recognise. All of them were naked, but his eyes were drawn to his brother. Harry’s chest was one of perfection; a perfect six pack, with not a millimetre of misplaced fat. And his groin was perfection times a million. His cock and balls were completely hairless, but more importantly, they were huge! His balls were the size of tennis balls, and his cock was at least a foot long, if not longer, with a girth to match! It was mesmerising seeing it there, sticking up with a full erection. Daniel also noticed that all the girls’ bodies were covered in semen. They were drenched from head to toe.
“I’m showering here!” Daniel shouted, trying to cover his groin.
“Oh relax Dan, no-one wants to look at your tiny dick,” Harry said, as he and the girls walked in. “Sarosa, get him out of here.”
“You got it,” Sarosa said, snapping her fingers. “Sorry Dan.” Suddenly, Daniel felt an irresistible desire to get out of the shower, and go back to his bedroom. He walked out, not bothering with his towel, or even to cover himself, and went straight to his bedroom.

Dan put on a set of pyjamas, intending to relax with some gaming. However, as he sat down, he felt an incredibly urge to get up again. He didn’t know why, but at the very moment, he knew that he absolutely HAD to go back over to Charlie’s house, right now. Dan went downstairs, and started putting on his shoes as fast as physically possible.
“Hurry up Dan!” His mother urged him, already dressed to go out. “You need to get over to Charlie’s this instant!”
Dan agreed, and got in the car as fast as he could. His mother drove frantically, simply knowing that somehow, every light would be green, and they would not crash. When they got there, Daniel ran into the house, and straight up to Charlie’s room. He opened the door, and walked in.
“Charlie?” He asked. “Are you in here? Charlie.” There was no sign of her. “Charlie!?”
“Hello there, Daniel.”

Daniel shuddered intensely at this. Those words were like the most wonderful music he had ever heard in his entire life. It was so incredibly arousing that his cock went hard within seconds, tenting his pyjamas. Daniel heard a giggling, which only served to further arouse him.
“Charlie? Is that you?” Daniel asked to thin air.
“Why yes it is, Dan.” Daniel turned, and saw Charlie, laid seductively on the bed. She was, to his amazement, completely naked. Daniel had never seen his best friend naked before, but at the same time, he was certain this can’t have been her body. Her face was cleared of acne, her pussy was completely hairless, and her curves were much…curvier. Her breasts were at least 2 or 3 times as big as he’d expected them to be!
“Charlie?” Daniel asked. “What…what’s going on? Why did I come over? Why are you naked?”
“Oh this?” Charlie asked. She sat up on the bed, and squeezed her giant boobs. “Well, I guess it would be easier to show you. Although I’ve already shown you quite a lot, haven’t I?”

Charlie stood up, and opened one of her bedside drawers, bending over to give Daniel a good view of her bottom, which he noticed also seemed to have changed. Charlie turned around and stood back up, holding what appeared to be an oil lamp. Daniel noticed it looked a lot like Sarosa’s, only with rubies instead of sapphires.

“Charlie, is that-” Daniel started, but before he could finish, he saw Charlie rub the lamp. Clouds of crimson-coloured smoke poured out, and Daniel watched it form into a naked man.
“How may I serve you, my Mistress?” Afericus asked him.
“Oh my God!” Daniel exclaimed.
“Dan, this is Afericus,” Charlie said. “He’s my genie.”
“Genie? That’s nonsense, there’s no such thing,” Daniel said.
“Afericus, I wish for Dan to be naked,” Charlie said.
“It would be my pleasure, Mistress,” Afericus said. He raised his hands towards Daniel, before moving them swiftly; one up, and one down. Daniel gasped as his pyjama top flew up over his arms, while his pyjama bottoms dropped to the ground, leaving him completely exposed. Charlie wolf whistled him.

“Believe me now?” She asked.
“How did he do that!?” Daniel asked, trying to cover himself.
“The same way he changed my body. The same way he compelled you to come over here. The same way he made it so my voice is so arousing. With magic.”
“Charlie…how?”
“Why don’t you come and sit down?”

Charlie patted a section of the bed next to her, and Daniel nervously sat down, still trying to cover himself.
“Dan, don’t bother covering yourself,” Charlie said, guiding her hands away from his groin. “You’re beautiful.”
“Charlie, you’re my best friend in the whole world. It’s weird being naked with you.”
“Dan, I know it’s weird at first, but having a genie changes you. You feel less protective. Suddenly the whole world is your oyster. You realise there’s no need to feel ashamed in being naked.”
“Well I don’t have a genie, so I feel embarrassed.”
“What if I do something to make you feel better?”
“Like what?”
“How about a blowjob?”

Dan just stared at her.
“Charlie, I’ve known you for many years, and in that time, you’ve been adamant about refusing to touch my dick.”
“I didn’t mean a blowjob from me. I mean I could use Afericus to get you one.”
“Stop joking.”
“I’m serious. All I have to do is say a few words and suddenly you’re moaning and groaning in pleasure while your nob gets gobbled.”
“You really mean it?”
“Of course. So do you want a blowjob or not?”
“If you’re really serious, then yes, I’d love a blowjob.”
“Good.”

Charlie grinned, and then turned to face Afericus. “Afericus, I wish for you to give Dan a big, wet, sloppy blowjob.”
“Your wish is my command, Mistress,” Afericus said, bowing his head.
“Wait…what!?” Daniel exclaimed.

Afericus started shuffling towards Daniel, who looked nervous.
“Uh…no thanks man,” Daniel said. He stood up, and went to the door, but he heard it lock in front of him.
“What the fuck Charlie!?” Daniel exclaimed. “This isn’t what I meant!”
“Mistress, this boy seems rather distressed,” Afericus said. “Are you certain you wish me to fellate him?”
“I made a wish, now grant it,” Charlie replied.
“As you wish, Mistress,” Afericus bowed.

“Charlie, seriously, this is-WOAH!” Daniel exclaimed, feeling an invisible force pull him onto the bed, and then flip him over onto his back. Daniel tried to get up, but this invisible force was preventing him from moving out of position.
“Okay Charlie, whatever I’ve done to upset you, I’m sorry, but please, call him off!” Daniel begged.
“Honestly Dan, you asked for a blowjob and I’ve gotten you one,” Charlie said. “I don’t know why you’re complaining.”
“I meant from a girl!”
“A blowjob’s a blowjob. Stop moaning. Well, except for all that moaning you’re about to be doing.”
“My mistress desires me to fellate you, and so I shall,” Afericus said. “You should be honoured to be a part of fulfilling my Mistress’ will.”

Afericus then did it. He took Daniel’s cock in his mouth. Daniel moaned sharply, followed by a long, drawn out moan. Afericus then started bobbing his head up and down Daniel’s length, causing him to moan even more.
“Like that Dan?” Charlie asked him.
“N…No…” Dan lied. He was perfectly straight, so he didn’t want to enjoy it. But on the other hand, it felt absolutely incredible. Daniel had known blowjobs felt good, but he’d never imagined that they could feel THIS good. Charlie ran her hands along Daniel’s chest, and he moaned loudly. He’d given up trying to get free now, instead resigning himself to “suffering” through this ordeal. Truth be told though, Daniel wasn’t sure he wanted to get free.

Eventually Daniel grabbed hold of the bedsheets and, with an almighty groan, he unleashed his load into Afericus’ mouth, while Charlie just stroked his skin. When Daniel was finally done, he relaxed, and Afericus moved away, releasing the magical restraints.
“So? How was it?” Charlie asked.
“That was…wow…” Daniel panted.
“Are you satisfied with my granting of your wish, Mistress?” Afericus asked.
“Oh definitely,” Charlie replied. “Are you satisfied, Dan?”
“Please…don’t ever do that again…” Daniel said.
“Honestly, you’re so ungrateful.”
“Well you know, when my best friend tells me she has a genie, I don’t expect her to order said genie to rape me!”
“Oh relax,” Charlie said. She helped Daniel to sit up straight. “Here, does this make up for it?”

Charlie moved in to Daniel, and locked lips with him. Neither of them had ever kissed anyone before, and they had to admit, it was pretty fantastic.
“Wow…” Daniel said as the kiss ended.
“Afericus, could you go back into your lamp, please? I want to be alone with Dan,” Charlie said.
“Of course, Mistress.”

Afericus disappeared into his lamp, while Charlie just held Daniel in her arms.
“Would it help if I said I was sorry?” She asked him.
“Charlie, yes, I liked the blowjob,” Daniel said. “And I don’t even mind that much the fact it was from a guy. What I’m made about is the fact you not only tricked me, but basically used your genie to rape me.”
“Alright, maybe I did get a little carried away there. But I was just excited! You and I possess the key to happiness! With Afericus’ power, we can do anything we want!”
“YOU can do anything you want,” Daniel corrected her.
“Well yes, but ever since we met, you’ve basically been my only friend. Of course I’d share my phenomenal cosmic power with you.”
“It is a little weird being naked with you.”
“You’ve seen me in a bikini before.”
“Never naked though. And wearing swimming trunks is quite different to me having my dick on display to you.”

Charlie kissed Daniel softly again.
“What if I do this?” Charlie asked, before grabbing hold if Daniel’s penis.
“Uhh…” Daniel moaned as his best friend stroked his dick, it rapidly becoming hard again.
“Does that feel good Dan?” Charlie asked him. Daniel just nodded. “Dan…I’ve wanted to have sex with you since before I knew what sex was. Do you want to have sex with me?”
“Yes…” Daniel moaned.

Charlie released her grip on Daniel’s now fully-erect cock, and laid him down on the bed. She crawled on top of him, and the two of them kissed passionately. They slid their tongues inside each-other’s mouths, and they danced passionately, expressing a decade of sexual tension. Charlie looked down at Daniel’s boner, and grinned.
“Ready to become a man?” She asked him.
“Oh God,” Daniel said, realising what was about to happen. Charlie moved into position, and then, ever so slowly, she lowered her vagina onto his penis.
Daniel and Charlie both groaned as their genitals met. Daniel felt his penis slide into Charlie’s vagina, every one of her fold like the next level of Heaven for him. By the time they were completely united, Daniel and Charlie were staring each-other in the eyes, feeling nothing but love and pleasure.

“Touch my bum,” Charlie said, and, nervously, Daniel reached his hands around, and laid them on Charlie’s bottom. “Mmmm…squeeze it.” Daniel did so, and Charlie moaned. Then, full of hormones, as well as a significant amount of cock, Charlie began moving her hips up and down. The two of them moaned loudly, as Charlie bobbed her waist up and down on Daniel’s length. Suddenly Daniel realised why Harry and Sarosa had so much sex. Because why would anyone want to stop doing something that felt this good? Daniel was also suddenly rather glad of the blowjob he’d gotten earlier, as it meant he’d not exploded yet.

After a minute or two of fucking, Daniel worked up some strength and courage. He grabbed Charlie by the waist and, without ever removing himself from her, flipped the two of them over, so that he was on top.
“I’m in charge now,” he said, thrusting in and out of her.
“Suits me…” Charlie moaned, spreading her legs wide and laying back. Daniel reached down, and rubbed Charlie’s breasts, feeling for the first time what boobs really felt like. He gave them a squeeze, and Charlie moaned.

Of course, despite the blowjob, neither of them were particularly experienced in the sexual department, and as such, neither of them particularly had much staying power.
“Oh God Charlie, I’m gonna cum…” Daniel moaned.
“Do it Dan…”
“But what if you get pregnant...?”
“I won’t…now do it!” Daniel didn’t need any more encouragement than that, and he thrust deep, leaned his head back, and unleashed his load deep into Charlie. At the same time, he felt her pussy beginning to contract, and as if by magic, the two lovers enjoyed their orgasms together.

When it was over, Daniel collapsed onto Charlie, and the two of them made out for a while.
“Fuck, that was great,” Daniel said.
“And it’s not over yet,” Charlie said, licking his lips.
“What do you mean?” Charlie reached over to her bedside table and picked up Afericus’ lamp.
“We have phenomenal cosmic power,” she explained. “So let’s use it.”

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At an undisclosed location, a man was being led at gunpoint through a building by some very unpleasant men. He’d been stopped on a country road, and forced into a van, where he’d been brought to this place. He didn’t know who these people were, or why they wanted him, but he’d watched enough television to know that it was best to do what the gun-wielding psychos said. The prisoner was lead to a door, where the apparent leader of his kidnappers turned to face him.
“Here we are,” he said in a voice that was all too cheerful for this situation.
“Are you going to tell me why I’m here now?” The prisoner asked.
“No, and if all goes to plan, I shan’t ever have to. But I will say that you’re not special. We took you simply because you were in the wrong place at the wrong time. So believe me when I say that we will not hesitate to kill you if we have to.”

“So what, you just enjoy kidnapping people?”
“On the contrary, you’re going to help us.”
“And why would I do that?”
“Because as I’ve said, we could kill you very easily. And if that’s not enough, think of the poor sod we’ll have to capture to replace you. Spare him the pain by taken on his burden. Or if that’s not enough, there’s the fact that I’m sure you’ve got some sort of ID on you, or in your car. Which means that it wouldn’t be too difficult for us to locate your family and friends. Do you see where I’m going with this?”
“…What do you want me to do?”

“Good boy. Now then, in a moment I’m going to open this door, and hand you a piece of paper. Once inside, you will pick up the object on the table. You will rub it, and read the words on the paper, exactly as they are written. Inside the room there will be automatic machine guns locked on to you. We will be watching and listening to everything you do. If we even suspect you of trying to say something different, or otherwise go against our orders, we will shoot you dead. Is this understood?”
“Yes.”
“Good. Get on with it then.”

The man gave the prisoner the paper, and opened the door. The prisoner walked into the room, and heard the door shut behind him. He looked around, and saw that the room was bare, aside from the cameras and guns pointed at him. Aside from that, all there was were a table in the middle of the room, with an object on top of it. The object looked like an old oil lamp, although the prisoner noticed that it was utterly spotless, without a scratch on its surface.
“Rub the lamp,” the prisoner heard his captor say over the intercom. “Now.”

The prisoner picked up the lamp, and took a moment to admire it, before he reluctantly began to rub it. What had been very cold at first began to grow warm, and the prisoner watched as a cloud of Light-Pink smoke poured out of it. He stepped back instinctively, and saw the clouds of smoke begin to clump together, and take a humanoid shape. The smoke dissipated, after forming into a beautiful, naked girl. The prisoner just stared at her, admiring her features. She was absolutely gorgeous, and was smiling at him. She looked middle-eastern, the prisoner noticed.
“Greetings Master,” she said. “I am Asrah, your humble genie servant. How may I serve you?”
“Read the words, or else!” The man shouted over the intercom. The prisoner immediately looked down at the paper, and began reading.
“I wish for you to obey the UN Council for Supernatural Affairs as though each and every one of them were your Master. Their word is law. From this point on, I wish for you to not obey anything I say. My wishes from here on out are not valid.”
“M…Master?”
“Obey him, genie!” The captor shouted. “You must obey your Master!”
“I…Your wish is my command, Master.”

The doors opened again, and the captor walked in, along with two armed guards.
“Good,” he grinned. “Now then genie, I am one of the UN Council for Supernatural Affairs, and therefore, you must obey me. I wish for you to create a small pocket dimension, with all the air and gravity needed to support human life. I wish for you to teleport this man there, but first, I wish for you to remove all this man’s ability to think. Remove all bodily functions and requirements. He should be brain dead; kept alive only by your magic, and unable to understand or even think about his situation. A living statue, I suppose.”
“That does seem awfully cruel…” Asrah said.
“First of all, genie, I am your Master now, and you shall address me as such,” the man said. “Secondly, as your Master, you are obliged to obey me. Now obey me.”
“Y…Yes Master. Your wish is my command.”

“Wait, hang on…you’re a genie!?” The prisoner exclaimed.
“Well, look who’s finally caught on,” said the man. “Now do it, genie.”
“I’m sorry…” Asrah said to the prisoner. She stood her finger out, and zapped him with a bolt of magic. He disappeared, leaving absolutely no trace.
“It is done?” The man asked.
“Yes Master.”
“Good. Now then, from now on, you are not to return to your lamp under any circumstances. Is that clear?”
“Yes Master.”
“Excellent. Can’t have you escaping us, now can we? Now come along, we have work to do.”

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Author's message: Hi, I'm DragoTime! You may remember me from such genie stories as "A Boy and his Genie" and "The Royal Genies"! And I'm back, and not a moment too soon.

I'd like to talk a moment about the timeline of this story. Mid-August 2015 I finished Divine Succession, and went on holiday to Disney World. While there I started writing My Brother's Genie, but I made slow progress on it. By the end of November I'd only written 3 chapters. So why has it taken so long? And where is Chapter 3? Well, I was keeping the story on the memory stick I had which I used to contain my "adult" content. Said memory stick got full, so I got a new, bigger one. I transferred everything over to the new stick, and deleted it from the old stick. That was a mistake. The new stick was faulty, and a large amount of its contents were corrupted, including My Brother's Genie. The story was lost.

So I wrote The Royal Genies, not wanting to go right back to re-writing My Brother's Genie. About a month or two ago however, I noticed a file on my hard drive called "Genie 2". I looked at this file, and lo and behold, it was My Brother's Genie. Or rather, everything up to Daniel being kicked out of the shower in chapter 2. So it wasn't completely lost. It is this file I used as a basis for this version. So aside from a few re-writes to give characters their own personalities, everything up until that point is what I wrote last year, while everything since is what I've written in the last few days.

The story, for those who aren't familiar with my work, is a sort of pseudo-sequel to my story "A Boy and his Genie", and will be much more so than The Royal Genies was. It's also an expansion of the one-shot story I wrote last year called "Abducted on a School Trip", which also featured Harry and Sarosa. This will likely be a longer story on par with ABAHG, so no worries there. I have plot planned out (Though not all of it), so I'm hoping to be able to produce something on par with ABAHG's quality. I hope so.

Now let's talk about censorship. There has been some to make it acceptable for this site. I hate it too, but them's the breaks. It's either that or not post it here at all.

This story is set around May 2016, which is obviously in the future as I write this, but it could very well be the past by the time I finish it. It was always going to be set then, incidentally, and it would have been more like 7 or 8 months in the future when I initially started this story.

Something I should mention is it's worth checking the comments, since I tend to post in there when I submit the next chapter for moderation, so you know after that point it's out of my control and on its way.

Anyway, I think that's it, so all that's left to say is to remind you to rate this story highly and comment if you liked it! Positive votes and comments really do encourage authors to keep going, and let them know you enjoyed what you read. I do read every comment.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 12:43
    Let Dan have a genie its doesn't look fair for his brother to have one then his friend its almost like rubing it in his face

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 13:56
    Great Story it Must continue ..More wins for Daniel .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 18:22
    let dan get a genie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 22:09
    Dude I love your stories, if I had only one complaint is that you don't type fast enough lol give us more please and soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 22:23
    let dan get a genie....he's all left out..the poor sap...bad enough his brother rubs it in..now charlie...poor bastard

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  • XxILOVETHISGAMExX
    17.03.2016 22:48
    DragoTime don't be upset about all the dislikes. These are mostly due to the gay stuff. You are still a good writer with an interesting story to tell. Keep going!

    (I'm sorry but one of the dislikes was mine. I don't have anything against gays but I just don't want to read about gay sex. I'm sure you understand)

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  • DragoTime
    17.03.2016 23:30
    Oh I understand, and I knew when I wrote it it would be controversial, but I wanted to put it in to be somewhat realistic.

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  • DragoTime
    17.03.2016 23:31
    At the same time though, WTF? I can get it for this chapter, but chapter 1? That is just being cruel, people.

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  • DragoTime
    17.03.2016 23:33
    Incidentally, there was originally a warning about it, but I removed it in my attempts to get the story past the mods.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 23:47
    Already enjoying this story. Your one the authors I'm constantly checking to see if they posted anything new.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 00:01
    i think people are starting to dislike your stories because theyre all the same man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 01:20
    I thought you were mature for introducing a female character that didnt exist just to be a sex object. You have thoroughly disappointed me. If you complain about this website so much I should be so bold to suggest that they should get rid of you promptly. As far as I'm concerned, the 50% is deserved, much more than you deserve to be here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 01:28
    WHY THE FUCK DID YOU BEING RAPE IN AND MAKE IT SEEM OKAY YOU ASS

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  • DragoTime
    18.03.2016 01:36
    To the "50% is deserved person", you do realise what sort of site this is, right? It's hardly the sort of place for realistic discussion of such matters.

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  • DragoTime
    18.03.2016 01:38
    And anyway, who says you can't have a mature character who also wants to have sex. That's perfectly normal adolescent behaviour. It's perfectly normal adult behaviour.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 03:31
    Practically every female character in your stories is either a borderline nymphomaniac or a submissive airhead. It's appalling. It rather seems like you're just another 12-year-old writer (admittedly one much better at grammar) who writes about what they think girls and sex are. Many writers are much better at both writing realistically and yet still erotically, and their stories deserve that 90% (an A+!) Every female character wants sex in your stories, not 'a' character. I should rather suggest that you would want to spend less time creating rebuttals to critics pointing out flaws in your stories in a vain way to justify yourself, and more time actually bettering your stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 05:29
    Drogotime, you stated in your comments that you put in the gay thing to be realistic...and yet now you state that this website is not the sort of place for 'realistic' discussions. Which is it? Because 'realistically', what happened in this chapter was rape, pure and simple, and it should NEVER be treated this lightly.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 08:43
    I loved the story. I loved how descriptive you are in both action and sexual feelings. I also enjoy teenage-teenage discovery so this was hot for me in that department.

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  • DragoTime
    18.03.2016 10:42
    If you want a realistic discussion about serious issues, and erotic fiction site is not the place to look for it.

    As for the person complaining about every female character wanting sex, I again say that many people enjoy reading that sort of thing, and I'd argue it's what a lot of them read my stories for.

    And anyway, if you don't like something, don't read it. If I dislike a story I simply stop reading it. I don't go on a massive rant explaining why no-one should like it. People enjoy what they enjoy, and if you've not enjoyed this, then the sensible thing to do would be togo and find something you will enjoy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 15:20
    To the sexist idiot complaining about the female characters wanting sex. I'm sure it's escaped your notice that the male characters are even more addicted to sex than the female.

    Sure the females seem to know more about what they want, which shows some experience, but the males come off as insecure virgins desperate to have intercourse.

    So who exactly would you say is being portrayed in a negative light? Experience and experimentation are all a part of growing up. Obviously if you want to infantalise women and deny them their human desires then you seriously need to take a good look at yourself and grow up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 15:41
    To the sexist idiot complaining about the female characters wanting sex. I'm sure it's escaped your notice that the male characters are even more addicted to sex than the female.

    Sure the females seem to know more about what they want, which shows some experience, but the males come off as insecure virgins desperate to have intercourse.

    So who exactly would you say is being portrayed in a negative light? Experience and experimentation are all a part of growing up. Obviously if you want to infantalise women and deny them their human desires then you seriously need to take a good look at yourself and grow up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 17:53
    this story is nice, but I hope it isn't heading in the direction where everyone but Dan has a genie and everyone but Dan uses their genie on Dan for their own purposes, or I might not read further. It's your story, but it's a heads-up, I never missed your stories.

    As for the gay stuff, while a welcome change, something abouit the execution rubs me the wrong way. Maybe its how his supposed best friend basically uses magic to force him into a gay experience.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 17:59
    I love how the 'to the sexist idiot' comments are written exactly in the same style as DragoTime's comments. You're allowed to take criticism, brosef. Really. It's okay. You don't have to make yourself seem better, just... Improve. Please, for the love of God. Improve your stories.

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  • DragoTime
    18.03.2016 18:06
    I hope you're not accusing me of posing as an anonymous commenter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 18:27
    Maybe friends or supporters? I dunno. Your content aside, your story like 99% of stories is pretty sexist. Like how most genies, especially sexually submissive ones, are girls, and have lesbian sex, then the second a male one does the same and makes himself a sex object you yourself acknowledge its 'controversial'. I don't care whether it's because you're sexist or because you know what your sexist audience wants, but the double standard is there. Plus they're mostly for male consumption, usually painted as power fantasies for guys where girls are often rewards for travelling through the plot. I'm cool with believing you're not sexist and just know what a largely sexist audience wants but you're story is pretty darn sexist. I felt like if I were in this story I would be another set of tits and an ass in a porn story but my boyfriend didn't feel objectified. He agrees that it's unfairly sexist.

    And yeah, mentioning rape so lightly isn't classy. Fucking ever.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 18:32
    And go ahead, tell me from a male perspective that how I feel is incorrect and your vision is the only way to interpret this story. Or, here's an idea...

    IMPROVE. Take criticism instead of arguing with people. I don't know who you're trying to impress. The best authors also have rebuttals, but they keep it to themselves and note any criticism they think they can implement. Do the mature thing, Broseidon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 18:46
    If by supporter you mean someone who likes his work then yeah I'm a supporter.

    Otherwise get your head out of your anal sphincter and stop whinging about an author writing what people want to read.

    If you don't like what he writes go read something else. Constructive criticism is good. Whining because something isn't to your taste is childish.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 18:50
    And to the muppet who thinks I am Dragotime I've some bad news. I'm not. I mearly have a good appreciation for the English language and know how to use it. However I don't have the imagination to use it creatively.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 18:58
    neither does he since all his stories are the same genie shit same plot same sex same everything

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  • DragoTime
    19.03.2016 00:56
    I wasn't mentioning rape "lightly". And I certainly did not intend to paint it in a positive light. Certainly Chapter 3 was and still is going to go into Charlie having made a mistake, but it's also going to go into something else. The fact that although the rape in this chapter was much more obvious, it happens in every story involving mind control. Matt making an entire PE class fuck him and his friends? Rape. Sophie doing the same thing to an entire football team? Rape. Sofia doing that to her servant? Rape. Magic and mind control are basically impossible to write without involving what is essentially rape.

    I do take criticisms on board though. Go through Divine Succession, and you'll see me responding to people who quite rightly pointed out where I was going wrong, and wherever possible, I attempted to improve. On other sites I've had private messages from people with criticisms, and I've responded civilly, and attempted to take their criticisms on board.

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  • DragoTime
    19.03.2016 01:01
    But you are not one of those people. You are simply there criticising me for having sexist characters where (As you did admit), plenty of other stories are out there like this. Characters like Sophie and Alexis aren't sex-obsessed anyway. They enjoy sex as anyone should be allowed to, but they don't obsess over it. And yes, while I have written more female genies than male, there are male genies, and I'd argue ones like Marcio are exactly what you're complaining about. He's incredibly sex-obsessed, but obviously he isn't important because he's male. Yes most of my genies are female, but that's because, as you said, that's what people want to read. I'd be foolish not to.

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  • DragoTime
    19.03.2016 01:04
    Look, I get you don't enjoy my work. I understand I can't please everyone. But the sensible thing when you dislike something this strongly is to simply not read it any more, and be on your way. I've read stuff I've disliked, so I've simply left. There are story themes I very much dislike, but I don't discourage anyone from writing them. People can write what they like, and if that's not the sort of thing you like to read, then don't read it. But remember it's not just me you're criticising here. You're also criticising everyone else who's ever written or enjoyed reading something like this. We're not wrong to like this sort of thing, and you're not wrong for disliking it. But you are wrong for so intensely opposing it. No-one has been hurt by this story. Most people reading it understand that the stuff in this story is wrong, but they enjoy reading it. So let them.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2016 02:28
    can you get Charlie to get Daniel his own genie? Let them become a couple? Some anal sex between them would be great? Can you bring the makers into this story? You have done a great job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2016 11:53
    loved it

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  • DragoTime
    23.03.2016 19:08
    Chapter 3 is in progress and will likely be submitted tonight. To make up for the wait, it's a longer chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2016 23:57
    I thought it was really good myself. I would have welcomed the b/j from the genie.

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  • DragoTime
    24.03.2016 00:22
    As would I. I'm straight but if a guy wanted to give me a no obligation blowjob, I'm not sure I'd refuse.

    Chapter 3 is done and about to be submitted.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2016 03:22
    So is chapter 3 gonna come in soon??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2016 15:13
    its gotta go through an approval process dude, give it some time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2016 11:17
    Still waiting for the 3rd chapter.. I hope it will be worth the wait

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  • DragoTime
    27.03.2016 19:52
    As has been said, it has to go through moderation. I submitted it several days ago.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2016 00:02
    hey drago I really like this genie thing, you are not the inventor of the idea but your stories got me wanting to write about it too, would you mind that? of course im not even sure if id upload it (english is not my first language) and even if I should like my doing id be willing to give the rights to you since you got me into this idea

    btw im german ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2016 02:13
    When is the new fucking chapter coming out???

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  • DragoTime
    29.03.2016 09:38
    Wenn Sie etwas in diesem Universum schreiben möchten, wäre das wunderschön. Obwohlich ich es vor dem Hochladen lesen möchte, wenn Sie mein Universum und meine Ideen benutzen, aber es würde mir so sehr gefallen wenn Sie so etwas schreiben. Und wenn Sie es auf Englisch schreiben wollen, kann ich es für Sie prüfen. :)

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  • DragoTime
    29.03.2016 09:40
    Im zweiten Satz soll es "Obwohl" zeigen. Ich bin müde...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2016 12:36
    Ja ich habe gerade erst das letzte Kapitel von A boy and his genie gelesen in dem du erwähnt hast, dass du es gut finden würdest wenn andere deine Ideen umsetzen würden. Dein Deutsch ist übrigens sehr gut und es sind nur Kleinigkeiten, die dich von einem Muttersprachler unterscheiden. Ich denke ich werde es die nächsten Tage auf alle Fälle versuchen und ja, es wird auf Englisch sein. Sollte etwas gutes dabei rauskommen, werde ich dich natürlich vorher kontaktieren.

    Danke für deine super Arbeit!

    *Ach und ich habe jetzt immer "Du " statt "Sie" verwendet, was natürlich nicht genau so höflich ist, aber ich hoffe, dass das kein Problem ist ;)

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  • DragoTime
    29.03.2016 15:59
    Hast du einen Twitter-Konto? Schick mir deine E-Mail-Adresse zu @Drago_Time um deine Ideen zu diskutieren.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2016 15:22
    What the fuck???

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  • DragoTime
    30.03.2016 17:45
    We were having a discussion. Don't worry, we weren't talking about you.

    Also, I'm really starting to get annoyed at how long Chapter 2 is taking. I submitted it 6 bloody days ago...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2016 18:32
    You mean Chapter 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2016 18:36
    Ich wahrscheinlich verwendet Google für diese übersetzen und seinen Spaß zu scheinen, wie Sie aus anothe Land sind

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  • DragoTime
    30.03.2016 18:41
    ...I understand you, but yeah...Google Translate is bad.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2016 04:54
    Try resubmiting?

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  • DragoTime
    31.03.2016 09:30
    I'm considering it, yes.

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  • DragoTime
    31.03.2016 12:11
    Alright, if it's not done by the time I get up tomorrow morning, I'm re-submitting it. This is ridiculous.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2016 18:11
    Try fucking her right in the pussy?

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  • DragoTime
    31.03.2016 23:58
    You think I'd be here if that was an option? I'd be living erotic fiction, not writing it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2016 07:50
    Loved the story Drago! Will Dan be getting some body enhancements?

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  • DragoTime
    01.04.2016 13:20
    Yes he will. Also, Chapter 3 has been re-submitted.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2016 21:22
    Notting has gone trhu mod so either the site or the mods are dead (or on vacation though its a long one fucking 2 weeks)

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  • DragoTime
    01.04.2016 23:02
    I hadn't noticed that actually, but yes, nothing has gone up since the 18th of March. Of course this could all be avoided if they didn;t insist on moderation.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2016 06:40
    Why is moderation a thing?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2016 12:13
    Mods are assfucking asshats

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  • Unknown+user
    02.04.2016 12:14
    damn the third chapter is taking forever. I uploaded my own stories, and I can't believe how long it takes. And yeah, still no recent uploads. last one was on 18th March. I've resubmitted several times, now i've just decided to leave it alone and take its time. By the way, I love your stories DragoTime. Awesome work, man!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2016 12:14
    Drago,when is chapter 4 coming?

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  • DragoTime
    02.04.2016 13:36
    Chapter 4 is in progress, don't worry.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2016 21:42
    Yake your time we are not in a hurry right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 04:23
    Yake your time we are not in a hurry right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 22:12
    Moderation is as cancerous to a good thing as Advanced Supply Drops are to COD.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.04.2016 20:00
    Yeah but cod sucks anyway


    That doesnt take away the fact that it sucks that I dont expect them to do anything this week since they did nothing today

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  • DragoTime
    04.04.2016 21:49
    Yeah...on the plus side, the long time it's taking me to do Chapter 4 isn't as bad of a thing.

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  • DragoTime
    04.04.2016 21:49
    Just a reminder though that Chapter 3 is up on StoriesOnline for those that want to read it.

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  • DragoTime
    04.04.2016 22:50
    I've also just noticed that, despite its low score, this has now made it into the top rated stories of the last 30 days. I guess because a lot of the higher rated ones are now too old to qualify, and nothing's being posted to replace them. One of the advantages of the moderation team disappearing I suppose. Or rather, the only advantage.

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  • DragoTime
    06.04.2016 12:29
    Looks like the mods have come out of hibernation. Let's see how long it takes for Chapter 3 to get through then.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.04.2016 06:39
    I was about to say the same
    It was about time. Atleast comments don't have to be moderated or we would have been completely bored on this website the past 2 weeks!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.04.2016 21:31
    I think the moderators have been in a coma, not hibernation.

    I only follow 1 other writer on here and he had quite a few stories all come up at once so hopefully yours will be here soon for our visual consumption.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 16:21
    Where's chapter 4? It's been at least 2 weeks!

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  • DragoTime
    09.04.2016 16:36
    Chapter 4 is stuck in the limbo of "I'll do it today, I swear". It's NEARLY done though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 22:15
    I'd rather you produce something good in your own time than produce something crap quickly.

    Just wish the moderators would climb out of their stupor and let chapter 3 get published.

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  • DragoTime
    11.04.2016 10:02
    Chapter 4 is done and up on StoriesOnline.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2016 10:54
    Hey Drago, Could you try reposting episode 3

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  • DragoTime
    12.04.2016 17:20
    Chapter 3 is up now! Everyone go read it! *Goes to submit chapter 4*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2016 07:44
    DragoTime, Your are the best author ever!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2016 07:33
    Sally, having swallowed cheese,
    Directs down holes the scented breeze,
    Enticing thus with baited breath
    Nice mice to an untimely death.

    Or did you mean the Genie had bated breath (barely breathing)?

    Never mind, you're an excellent writer and spelling is more and more flexible these days. The last thing I'd want to do would be to discourage you. Thanks for sharing your fine work!

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