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daddy's bad girl

Author: nancy

Date: 2 December 2005

Anal, Fantasy, Bestiality, BDSM

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all i can do is wait,,,,,,wait and hurt and think,,,,,,,,,,,,,earlier in the day i had not responded correctlyand you decided i needed to learn a lesson,,upon entering the bedroom i saw a harness hanging from the ceiling it was made like a sort of swing, you had me stand in front of the harness as you lowered it then you had me sit back in it,,,so that i sunk threw the seat, when i was fully positioned i was hanging like sitting in a tire swing, my knees were against my chest and i was bent in half, unable to fall threw but unable to get out either, this position left my asshole and pussy exposed to whatever you wanted to do to them, squeesing both breasts together you place nipple clamps on my breasts with only about 2 inches of chain so that when you let go the nipples were being strecthed extrememly painfully but you still weren't done, directly in the middle you attached a 6 oz weight and let it go causing an agonizing pain in both nipples at once,at my yelp of pain you reached over to the dresser and pulled off a ball gag and told me "can't have you making any noise and letting everyone know what kind of fun your having",,standing back you survey your handiwork,,,happy with the signs of pain on my face and the tears in my eyes,,,i am hanging at the perfect height to be fucked, but that's not what you have in mind for me....instead you tell me "well slut there is only 2 more things for me to do then i'm leaving for ahwile, i;'ll finish your punishment when i get back,,,first though to finish setting you up" so saying you turn to the dresser and open the bottom drawer and bring something out,,"i have a new toy,one that you haven';t seen yet" you tell me,,,,you turn to me with what is called a MONSTER COCK in your hands, saying "remember when i first came down and you said something like that would never fit,,wellwere gonna make it fit as part of your punishment,,,,i'm gonna hurt you baby slut, so you learn your place",,you pull s vhit over and sit in front of me, your face right in my pussy and you rub the huge head of that dildo against my pussy, tryng to get it in,,god it's huge and it hurts, and i want to beg you not to do it,,,but then to my horror you hold up a far of vaseline and laugh saying "oh don't worry i'll make sure it's lubed up for you"...and you stick the dildo in the far then you stick 2 fingers in the jar and start pushing the gobs of vaseling UP MY ASS,,,,and i start shaking cause i now know where your gonna try to put that huge dildo...i grunt around the gag trying to plead with you not to put it there,,,you lean forward and start licking my pussy rubbing your tongue over my clit til you hear me moaning into the gag, then you put the head of the dildo against my asshole and start pushing even witht the wonderful feelings of your tongue the pain is peircing as with a continuous motion you pop the head past the ass ring muscle and i scream into the gag and fling my head from side to side in agony,,,tears streamning down my face,,,,you continue to push the dildo further into my ass as i scream again and again into the gag feeling as if my ass is being torn apart,,you only have about 4 inches in my ass and the things is a good 14 inches long,,and about 5 inches wide,,,,,,,,standing up you walk behind me and whisper in my ear,,"you displeased me earlieryou know that right" and i nod my head,,,"so you know you have to be punished right",,again i nod my head,,"you know how happy your making me,,god you lood so beautiul crying for me,,,my property right, your pussy, ass, mouth, or any and all parts of your body belong to me right" again i nod my head,,"good and i can do whatever i want to to what belongs to me to me right" again just a nod as that is the only thing i can do..reaching down you touch the dildo half lodged in my ass and whisper again in my ear "scream for me bitch, show daddy how much you love being his pain slut" and you shove the rest of the dildo straight up my ass and i scream continuously into the gag. you now have about 10 or 11 inches of the monster cock lodged up my ass and you get a strap and strap it in place so that i can't push it out,,,,the pain is so intense, and i'm only semi conscious, you reach out and swing the weight between my breasts making me cry out again at the searing pain that goes through my nipples,,taking the gag off you kiss me and ask "anything you want to tell daddy baby slut"..hoarsely i whisper "thank you daddy for hurting your little slut" "very good slut, your welcome", placing the gag back in my mouth you tap the weight again, and smack me on the ass slamming your hand against the dildo banging another 1 or so into my violated asshole and receiving another muted scream from me,,,,walking wver to the door you say "i'll be bac in an hour or so to finish your punishment, in the meantime have fun with wolf"....and you let in our full grown 2 year old male german sheppard and locking the door you pull it shut behind you leaving me hanging,,,,,,,,

well i hope that everyone liked the story, it is the first one i have ever written,,,


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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 12:48
    well i think you got a good concept, but you need to write in third person, use chapters, proper punctiution, and stretch it out with alot more details. other then that i loved it, 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 18:06
    i thought it was pretty good make it longer though :p

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.12.2005 23:10
    you really need to watch your spelling and punctuation....you should write in the FIRST person - not in the third person, as someone stated above.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.12.2005 17:25
    im sure it was could but i couldnt read any of it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2006 02:50
    Actaully its written in the second person...format it better:P

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.01.2006 14:17
    u do realize u dont need ,,,,,,, for punctation. and you dont use commas to end a sentence, u use a period. there wasn't any bestiality, just sort of implied. i liked the point of view, u dont see it often. there wasn't any real exposition. there were spelling errors and grammer errors. use paragraphs.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2006 01:41
    I thought it was pretty good need to add more paragraphs though but overall not bad its not everyday someone writes in 3rd person

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.04.2006 13:46
    how can anyone read that ? your spelling is horrible.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 20:53
    try to use microsoft word when writing, to correct ur spelling :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 03:24
    it was ok but you need to work on your spelling try harder keep it up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.07.2006 17:32
    The worst story I've ever read. Spelling, punctuation, structure were horrifying. Hard to read.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.11.2006 03:13
    There's nothing I can say that others haven't already said.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2006 01:28
    Good story, does need some touch up work but the main idea is good. Would be great to hear another chapter.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2007 22:03
    its ok but hard to read good job tho 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 16:05
    It's all great besides for: the horrid ending, lack of spelling, lack of punctuation, lack of capitilazation, and well really, lack of sense all together. You wrote your "story" in fragments and run ons without punctuation, and it's shameful to even call this a story. By the way, Have you ever heard of paragraphs?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2007 00:32
    That was good just need to fix it and correct your spelling but on tope of that it was nice I love bondage stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2007 09:05
    all of the comments from the other reader was correct. it could be a very good story if you put some effort into your writing and next time be sure to the FUCKING story DON'T leave hanging!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.05.2007 09:45
    spelling & grammar goddamnit!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 17:19
    Just curious- why the hell is everyone afraid to be anything besides READER. Jeez- its not like you have to give your name and address!

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  • Deeelor
    07.05.2008 19:30
    A good story. If you had better punctuation and as already meantioned, structure, it would be a very nice story.

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  • camjoeone
    17.07.2008 17:11
    i'd love a monster cock in my ass

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  • alex+blahovec
    01.12.2008 02:52
    interesting story. really fuck up though. ad y is the whole thing one gigantic, non grammar checked, non spell checked, non capitalized, nonpunctuated "sentence"?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 10:59
    This story is GARBAGE!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2009 13:19
    Shit punctuation, shit spelling, no capitals and no full stops so the whole thing just looks like one big, confusing, jumbled up sentence. Overall, it's just a load of confusing bullshit. 0/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2011 17:03
    nice perspective btw hot but needs to be refined

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2011 17:46
    Definitely needs alot of work. Maybe you ought to take an English class then try again.

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  • magikbananaman
    03.02.2013 22:57
    very nice story but its one huge sentance i need some judges to my story thies will be my first one written today so someone come read my story and tell me if u like it!

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  • magikbananaman
    03.02.2013 23:19
    very nice story but its one huge sentance i need some judges to my story thies will be my first one written today so someone come read my story and tell me if u like it!

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