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Becoming Daddy's Good Girl Chapter 1: Dressing Room Submission

Author: mypenname3000

Date: 1 July 2016

Blowjob, Fiction, Domination/submission, Female solo

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Becoming Daddy's Good Girl
Chapter One: Dressing Room Submission
By mypenname3000
Copyright 2016

“You take care of your father and be a good girl, Melody,” my mother said as she stood in the doorway of our house, her the tight, gold necklace glinting about her throat. She always wore it. The thin chain kept the heart-shaped locket pressed to the hollow of her throat. Her braid of brown hair fell off her right shoulder and down the front of her conservative dress. My mom always wore the most conservative dress. She was such a fifties housewife, staying at home, keeping everything clean, being subservient to dad.

Like always subservient. She would fetch him beers when he watched TV after work and always made sure his coffee was topped off during breakfast. Every day when he came home from work, Mom would be waiting for him, ready to take his jacket and massage his feet.

And she did it with a smile on her face. She loved my dad. And I didn't blame him. He was a handsome man, tall, dark-haired, and muscular. Sometimes he made my eighteen-year-old body ache with desires and I would have to masturbate in my room hoping my twin sister Alice didn't notice.

Now Alice and I weren't identical twins but fraternal. We looked as much alike as any other normal set of sisters. She was taller and slimmer than I was but my breasts were bigger and my hair finer. It fell in a similar braid to my mother's down my back, almost the same shade of brown.

“Mom, we're going to be late,” Alice shouted from the car, her head shoved through, her bushy, tawny hair spilling about her delicate face. We both inherited Mom's small nose and delicate cheekbones, making us look fragile and innocent.

“In a moment, dear,” my mom shouted, always full of patience. She turned to me and stroked my hair. “While I'm gone it will be up to you to take care of him, okay. Be obedient and a good girl. I know you will be. You love being a good girl for your daddy.”

My cheeks warmed. Ever since I realized that my dad was a muscular hunk beneath the dress shirts he wore for his office job, I found myself wanting to do whatever he said, running errands, fetching him drinks, doing things Mom normally did for him so I could be around him. It made my heart almost float out of my chest when I did.

I just wanted to be close to my dad. I was a daddy's girl, but so were lots of my friends. My friends, including my best friend Sun, were all jealous that I had the cutest dad.

Alice, on the other hand, was a brat. I was glad she was going with Mom to Grandma's. Three weeks of just me and Dad while Mom helped Grandma adjust after Grandpa's hip surgery. I could have gone, but it was my choice to stay.

And I would get to spend so much time with Daddy. So of course I declined. It was so boring at Grandma's. I loved her and Grandpa, I did, but there was nothing to do there but be board. They barely had internet and no cable, just rabbit ears on a black and white TV.

“I'll be good for Dad,” I smiled.

She sighed. “You don't call him Daddy anymore. I get it, you're getting older, but it always made him happy when you call him Daddy.”

“It does?” I asked, a hot thrill shooting through me. Daddy. It felt so naughty to call him that at my age. I squirmed my hips, my nipples hardening in my bra.

She nodded her head. “Now you be good. Do everything he tells you. Eighteen is not too old to be spanked over your father's knee.”

I blushed. Once, I had seen Dad spanking Mom a few weeks ago. They were in their bedroom, but the door had been cracked. It was Saturday and my sister and I were supposed to be weeding the garden. I slipped in to change my clothes—my tight shorts were proving impractical to moving—and heard the slaps. At first, I thought dad was hurting her until I glimpsed her face.

Mom loved to be spanked.

The image rose in my mind. My mother naked, her large breasts pressing against Dad's muscular thigh, her round bottom red and wiggling as he slammed his broad hand on her flesh. Her head had risen with each spanking, her toes curling. I caught a glimpse between her legs. She was shaved and looked so youthful. And with her hair braided, she seemed more like a little girl being spanked by her daddy than a wife playing with her husband.

I had only watched for a minute before I was so afraid I ran. I burst into my bedroom, shoved my hands down my shorts, and rubbed at my pussy lips. I was so wet. I had never masturbated with such a frenetic need as I pictured Dad's muscular chest, covered in barbwire tattoos, rippling as he drew back his arm and spanked me.

“Melody,” my mother said, bringing me out of my fantasy. “You are going to behave, right?”

“I'll be Daddy's good girl,” I smiled.

“Good.” Dad's voice rumbled behind me.

Startled, I let out a squeak and turned around, my hands clasped before me as Dad, wearing a plain, white t-shirt that molded to his muscles, walked up. Mom lowered her head and clasped her hands before her. Dad stopped before her, ignoring me, and raised her chin.

“Dear,” Mom said, “Melody has promised to take care of you while I am gone. I hope she will be a satisfactory replacement.”

“Once I have her trained,” Dad answered, his thumb brushing her cheeks.

“Good.” A smile played on Mom's lips. “Then, with your permission, dear, I would like to go and visit my parents.”

“Granted.”

Permission? Why did Mom need permission?

Dad seized Mom's lips in a kiss. My eyes widened at the unbridled passion. Mom shuddered, her eyes closed while Dad owned her lips. He still held her chin as he kissed her. She moaned, her hips shuddering, her hands squeezed tight together. And then he broke it. Mom took a deep breath, her cheeks flushed.

“I love you, dear.”

Dad nodded, his thumb still caressing her cheek, an intimate touch. Wild thoughts of Dad touching me like that spilled through my mind. A heat ignited between my thighs, wet, molten passion. The urge to run upstairs and masturbate seized me as Dad patted Mom's ass as she walked away, a laugh on her lips and a saucy look in her eyes.

They were so affectionate.

“Well,” Dad said, staring down at me. He cupped my chin and lifted my eyes. Would he kiss me now? “It is just me and you. Your Mother promises me you will behave.”

“Of course...Daddy.”

His lips twitched, a smile almost forming. “Good.” He kissed me on my forehead instead of my lips. My flesh burned where he touched me. I shuddered. “Go fetch me a beer, the game's about to start.”

“Yes, Daddy.” My heart beat in my chest as I turned and raced to the kitchen.

I thought I felt Dad's eyes on my ass. I wore an old pair of jeans—I was supposed to go school shopping with Mom and Alice tomorrow—and they were tight. They hugged my rear and legs. I had grown since I bought them.

I hoped he was watching. It made me feel so womanly. Mom was gone. It was my place to be the woman of the house and make sure the man was taken care of.

My teachers at school would be horrified. Especially Ms. Gardner and Mrs. Thompson. They were always talking about how women didn't have to serve men and being a housewife was “internalized misogyny.” But it was nice to serve. It made me happy.

What was so wrong with that?

Nothing.

Of course, I never contradicted my teachers. And I never told them about my mother. She was almost straight out of the ancient TV show that sometimes appeared on Nickelodeon late at night—Leave it to Beaver. But she wasn't faking her happiness. She was always humming and singing as she cooked or clean.

“Your father earns the money and provides for us,” she would say, “and he works hard to do it. So I work just as hard at home making our life pleasant. Your father appreciates what I do, and I appreciate what he does. We compliment each other.”

Hearing her say it made it sound like the most romantic thing in the world.

My head buzzed with images of me being Daddy's wife. Cooking and cleaning, waiting for him to come home, then I would massage his feet after his hard day while we talked. They always laughed when Mom massaged his feet. It was their private time. Alice and I were banished to our bedrooms or elsewhere during it.

I brought the beer to Daddy.

“Thank you, Melody,” he said, taking it and giving me a nod.

“You're welcome, Daddy,” I smiled.

He patted the arm of his recliner while the announcer called the baseball game. The Mariners were playing the A's, and the first pitch had just been thrown. I sat on the chair's arm and leaned back, Daddy's arm going around my waist.

It was wonderful. I smiled, loving being near him even if it meant watching a boring baseball game. Twice more he sent me to get him another beer. I returned with his drink and diet cokes for myself. I even started getting into the game, and when the Mariners won, Daddy hugged me to his chest.

He smelled so manly. The hot itch returned to me. I squirmed, my cheeks burning, suddenly so embarrassed. “I have to go make dinner, Daddy.”

“Okay, sweetheart.” He kissed me on the forehead.

I crawled off the recliner, my thighs squeezed tight. I really did have to start dinner, but I wanted to masturbate so badly. “Daddy, Mom was supposed to take me clothing shopping tomorrow.”

“I'll take you.” his eyes fell on mine. So strong. “But you won't buy anything without my approval.”

Part of me wanted to revolt. What did my dad know about clothes? He would probably try to dress me like Mom. Long skirts, loose blouses, nothing to show off my growing body. I liked to dress in tight jeans, short shorts, and daring skirts. But I had promised to be a good girl for Daddy.

“Okay, Daddy.”

“Good girl,” he smiled.

My heart thudded for joy.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I was so tired the next morning. I couldn't sleep last night. Thoughts of taking over all of Mom's duties for Daddy filled my thoughts. I had rubbed my poor pussy raw masturbating last night. But I couldn't stop. The idea gripped me. Massaging his feet, stripping him naked, laying beneath him as he pumped his cock in and out of me.

I knew about sex. Several of my friends had had sex, and they told me all about how disappointing the boys were the first times. “I wish I had a man do it,” they all said. “Someone older and sexier. Like your Dad, Melody.”

“I would totally let your dad pop my cherry,” Sun had giggled.

“Older men know how to get the job done,” Tiffany had proclaimed. “Trust me.”

“Every girl knows it,” agreed Donna. “But good luck finding an older man that isn't a perv. He needs to be perfect. I bet your Dad would be perfect. Maybe I should spend the night.”

I had said no. There was no way I was letting Donna near my dad, not with the hungry look in her eye.

Now my thoughts were consumed with him. We were all alone. Three times I stood up and walked to my bedroom door, set on walking down the hall and slipping into bed with Daddy. But it was also so scary. I wanted him so badly, but incest was wrong. He wouldn't want to sleep with me and cheat on Mom.

He was a good man not a pervert.

The third time I had stood at my door, gripping the nub, my stomach twisting. I listened. The house was so quiet. I strained to hear him in his bedroom. I imagined him awake, burning with desires for me, waiting for me to come and perform Mom's wifely duties with him.

But I chickened out and ran back to my bed. And then masturbated to another orgasm.

I almost overslept and forgot to make Daddy breakfast. But I remembered at the last minute and rushed downstairs wearing only my thin nightgown. I whipped up Sunday breakfast and had it ready when Daddy came down at his usual 8 AM.

It was after breakfast he took me to the mall. I held his arm as we walked through the mall. I noticed the other girls and women who looked at them and a prideful surge went through him. He was desired but he was mine.

Until Mom got back.

I led Daddy to the first store, pulling him past the shoplifting detectors and into the vibrant clothing store. Everywhere I looked were frilly, feminine items. Daddy was the opposite of it all, standing tall, muscular, hunky.

“I only want you to buy skirts,” Daddy said. “I like my girls in skirts.”

“Is that why Mom never wears jeans or pants?”

Daddy nodded. “And you're at that age where you should do the same.”

“But long skirts, like Mom? Hers are so boring.”

A smile crossed his lips. “Sweetheart, buy the shortest, tightest skirts you want. You have gorgeous legs. Let Daddy see them.”

Heat rushed up my legs. “Yes, Daddy,” I squeaked then turned away, my cheeks on fire. Daddy wanted to see my legs. I wish I was wearing a skirt right now instead of stupid shorts.

There were so many wonderful skirts. Short tennis skirts, pleated skirts, pencil skirts, flowery skirts, knee-length skirts, mid-thigh skirts, even shorter ones. I felt so daring when I grabbed on of those, imagining it only falling past my rear and not much else. It would show off so much of my legs. Daddy didn't complain as I handed him another skirt to hold. He threw them over his muscular arms, a patient smile on his lips as he glanced at what I bought.

I liked flashy skirts with bright colors, drawing the eye.

And then I had to find blouses to go with them. We headed across the store where I snagged halter tops, peasant blouses, V-necks, scoop necks, baby doll t-shirts, belly shirts. With each one I considered which bottom it would go with, making my outfit plans. This top could go with three different skirts, bu this one only went with one. I took the top that could match three skirts.

Variety. I needed to mix up my clothing. I couldn't wear the same outfit combinations all the time.

With a dozen blouses and skirts chosen, I headed into the back for the changing rooms. “I can't wait to see how pretty you look,” Daddy said as I closed the door.

My cheeks blushed. I looked out the louvered slats. I could sort of see through them from my side, glimpsing his legs in his blue jeans while I pulled off the t-shirt I wore. A sudden surge of excitement went through me as I wiggled out of my shorts.

I was almost naked in here and Daddy was just on the other side.

I grabbed a knee-length skirt and a halter top that went well with it, adjusting my bra. I would have to get a strapless bra to wear with the halter top, my straps were too obvious. I stared at myself in the mirror, turning, loving how my braid of dark-brown hair fell down my back, almost reaching the soft swell of my rear. The skirt fell lovely across my butt. I shifted my hips, loving how the hem swayed about my legs.

“You dressed yet?”

“Coming, Daddy,” I giggled. “You need to be patient when girls are trying on clothing.”

“I'm not good at patience. I like to take what I want.”

A hot wave rushed through me. I almost said, “You can take me, Daddy,” but that would be absolutely stupid.

I stepped out, standing before him, suddenly so afraid. What if he hated it. His arms folded before him, his eyes studying me as I fidgeted. I played with my fingers before him, wishing he would say something.

“Straighten your back,” he said. “And turn around. Let me get a good look at you.”

“Yes, Daddy,” I said, my spine snapping straight. Then I turned, putting a little sway into my hips to really make the skirt swirl. “Do you...like it, Daddy?”

“The skirt's a little long,” he said, “but your top is great. We'll need to get you a strapless bra. Unless you already own one?”

“I don't, Daddy.”

“We'll fix that.”

I swallowed then reached for the door and opened it. I slipped in. Only the door didn't close behind me right away. I turned and gasped as Daddy stood in there with me, his arms folded, his eyes on me as I clutched the next top.

“Well, this will be faster,” he nodded, his eyes rolling up and down my body. “You won't have to keep coming and going.”

“I...I don't think it's allowed for you to be in here, Daddy,” I trembled.

“I don't care.” His eyes were so dark and commanding. “Now change. Show me your next lovely outfit.”

“Yes, Daddy.”

I hastened to obey him. I pulled off the halter top. I felt so naked in just my bra, cupping my round breasts. My nipples were so hard, poking at the front. I don't know why. I had worn my bikini around Daddy before and it showed just as much flesh. I wiggled out of my skirt, bending over to step out of it and pointing my panty-clad rear at Daddy.

“Cute pair,” he said. “Black. I like them.”

“Black? What...” My panties. My cheeks burned even more and the hot itch between my thighs swelled. “Thank you, Daddy.”

“You're growing up so fast.”

I straightened and pulled on a red, V necked blouse and turned to face him.

His cock bulged the front of his jeans. I froze, half-pulling on the top, my right arm through the sleeve, my left arm searching for the armhole. I sucked in a deep breath. Daddy was turned on right now.

I turned him on.

“Keep changing,” he ordered. “Don't stop. I need to approve all your outfits.”

“D-do you approve all of Mom's?”

“Why do you think I take her shopping? Your mother dresses to please me. She's a good girl. And I know you want to be just like her, another good girl for Daddy.”

“I do,” I whispered. I pulled the top over my head and pulled my braid out the back. Then I grabbed a jean skirt I thought would be quite cute with this top. I stepped into the skirt, pulling it up my hips. It was tight. I sucked in a breath to get it up over me and then zipped up the side. It fell to my mid-thigh, a few artfully worn through spots showing off my pale thighs beneath.

Daddy nodded his head as I turned. “Now bend over,” he ordered. “Touch your toes.”

“Yes, Daddy.”

I knew I had to do it with my ass facing him. I bent over, the skirt sliding up my thighs, revealing more and more of my flesh. I almost wished it was short enough to flash my panties at Daddy. The hot itch between my legs grew even hotter. I had to be wet, my panties soaking up my excitement.

I wanted to escape to a bathroom and masturbate.

“D-do you like them?” A tremble ran through me.

“They are perfect. You have great taste in clothing.” His hand stroked my bare thigh right beneath the hem of my skirt. I shuddered and moaned, the blood rushing to my head as I stayed bent over. What was he doing. “Just perfect. Okay, try on the next.”

My virgin body trembled as I turned. I could still feel his hand on my thigh even though he stopped touching me. It was the most intimate contact I had ever had with another person. I didn't date much—Daddy didn't approve and, unlike Alice, I was a good girl. I had barely kissed a boy let alone let one really touch me.

It was amazing to feel his hand on me. As I stripped down to my underwear, I wanted Daddy to touch me again.

I grabbed the one very short skirt I selected. I had never worn a miniskirt before. It was made of a stretchy, black material that hugged my ass when I pulled it on. It felt so exposed. It ended right below my butt-cheek. As I pulled on a purple belly skirt with dangling, golden fringes around the hem, I felt like at any moment the skirt would slide up my flesh and expose my panties.

“Now that is a skirt,” Daddy said, as I faced him, the tasseled fringes caressing my belly and back as they swayed. “Yes, it is. Turn around. Let me see your ass.”

“Yes, Daddy.”

I turned, so aware that I was turning him on. He groaned. His hands reached out, touching me. It was so wrong. No father should touch his daughter like that, but I didn't care. It was so wonderful. His hands so strong as they squeezed me.

“That's my good girl,” he whispered as his hands kneaded me. “Mmm, you're making Daddy so happy. Now bend over. Let's see how this skirt moves.”

“Yes, Daddy.”

My pussy clenched as I bent over. He let go of my ass as I did. I gasped when I pressed back into his cock bulging his jeans. I felt it along the top of my ass as I bent over, my braid falling to the floor. I fought the urge to grind back against him. My pussy was so itchy. I wanted to be touched.

Needed to be touched.

I didn't care if it was my Daddy doing the touching.

That would just make it hotter.

“What a gorgeous skirt,” he groaned, gripping my hips. He moved, sliding his bulge up and down against my ass, moving it lower. It pressed against my pussy. I felt him through all our clothing. So big. So thick. Was he bigger than a normal guy? What would he feel like in me?

Incestuous passions gripped me. I wanted my father to fuck me right here, right now.

“Melody, kneel,” he ordered, grinding harder against me.”

“Kneel?”

His hand smacked on my ass. I yelped as the burning pain shot through me. I didn't understand why that made my pussy even warmer. “I gave you an order. What happens when girls are bad.”

“We're spanked, Daddy.”

He rubbed my ass where his hand landed. “Well?”

I spun around and knelt before him, the thin carpet of the changing room rough on my knees. I stared up at him. He seemed even taller than usual. The changing room's light shone above his head, making him a dark shadow.

“You've made me hard,” he continued. “You've excited me. Good girls take care of the problems they create.”

I stared at his cock, my eyes widening. “I...What are you wanting me to do, Daddy?” This couldn't be happening. This really couldn't. We were in the changing room. I know I was horny and wanted my Daddy, but they were just fantasies.

Incestuous, forbidden fantasies.

“I am telling you to pull out my cock and suck it until I cum. You will swallow every drop. If you don't, I will spank you so hard when we get home.” His hand reached out and seized my braid. “You promised to be a good girl, Melody.”

“I did, Daddy.” I licked my lips, staring at his bulge. “But...but...what about Mom?”

“What about her? She's not here. You are. What will it be, young lady?”

Another wave of heat washed through me. “I'll be good, Daddy.”

My hands trembled as they reached for the zipper of his jeans. I had never sucked a cock before. I had only heard my friends whispering and giggling about it. I needed to watch my teeth, use my tongue. Lick it and suck it.

The zipper rasped as I pulled it down. His cock pressed at the open fly, tenting a pair of dark-blue boxers. My breath quickened as I reached up and hooked my fingers in the waistband. I froze. I couldn't believe this was happening.

Daddy seized my braid. “Do you want a spanking, young lady?”

His stern voice compelled me. I would be a good girl for Daddy. I hauled them down. His dick popped out, bouncing before me. A flick of something wet splattered my cheek. It was warm. More juices leaked out of the tip of his cock.

“Lick the precum up then suck,” he growled, still holding on to my braid.

I leaned forward and licked.

Daddy groaned as my tongue slid across his warm, spongy tip. Then I reached the drop of clear fluid—his precum. It didn't have much flavor, a little salty. Not bad at all. An erotic thrill went through me as I licked again. And again.

I was blowing my Daddy's cock.

My lips opened wider. I sucked the tip into my mouth. My tongue explored it as I remembered my friend's words. I sucked, my lips forming a tight seal, my cheeks pulling inward. Daddy groaned again, louder.

I pleased him. I made him hard and I would be a good girl and take care of his erection. Mommy wasn't here to do it.

My hands seized his cock. He felt so huge in my grip. I stroked my fists up and down his shaft, brushing my lips. His dick throbbed with his heart beat, pulsing with his passion. I stared up at Daddy and his shadowed face.

“That's it,” he panted. “Melody, you're being such a good girl for Daddy.”

I sucked harder. I fisted him faster. My tongue swirled circles about the tip as more and more of his precum filled my mouth. My head bobbed. I took more of his cock into my mouth. Daddy loved it. His hand pulled on my braid, encouraging me.

My hips shifted. My pussy was so wet. I bet there was a big wet spot. When I masturbated tonight, I would relive this over and over, remembering every taste and smell. When I breathed in, I smelled his musk. It was intense, rising out of his thick, dark curls.

“Such a good girl,” he groaned. “And good girls swallow every drop.”

I moaned a yes about his dick. Daddy was about to cum. My right hand, curious, left his cock and found his heavy balls. They were thick, swelling his sack. His cum filled them. In a moment, his jizz would feel my mouth.

I massaged them, eager for the treat. I didn't care if this was wrong. My Daddy told me to do something, and I would do it. I was his good girl.

“My good girl,” he echoed. My heart fluttered and my virgin pussy clenched every time he said. “My good, wonderful girl.”

His hips thrust forward, pushing his cock to the back of my throat. Then he drew back while I sucked. He growled. His balls twitched. His hand tightened on my braid as his cum squirted into my mouth.

I gasped at the force of the first blast of jizz splashing at the back of my throat. It was thick and salty. And then a second and third blast followed. I moaned, shocked at how hard he erupted and how much flowed into my mouth. More and more pumped into me, overflowing my mouth.

I had to swallow. I gulped. Daddy's seed poured down my throat and warmed my belly. I swallowed again and again. It was so salty, but not terrible. It was my daddy's, and that made it better. He grunted with each blast, his head tossing back, the light illuminating the primal passion crossing his face.

And then he grunted the last time. “Mmm, so good. Melody, you did a great job giving you first blowjob.”

His cock pulled from my mouth. “Thank you, Daddy.” Then I realized some of his cum trickled down my chin. My eyes widened. “I'm sorry, Daddy, I really did my best to swallow all your jizz.”

He laughed and pulled on my braid. I winced and stood. “Sweetheart, your mother can't always contain my flood, either. I know you swallowed as much as you could. But let's get you cleaned up.” He knelt before me and reached beneath my miniskirt. He yanked down my panties. The hot, tart musk of my pussy filled my nose. He chuckled again. “Someone's excited.”

He held up my panties. A dark spot soaked the material even darker. I blushed as he reached out and wiped my face clean. I smelled my pussy even stronger. I had the sudden urge to taste myself. I had always been curious, but chickened out licking the juicy crotch.

Daddy pocketed the panties in his jeans and said, “Well, let's continue.”

Daddy loved the rest of my outfits. He told me to wear the miniskirt and belly shirt and we headed to the counter to pay. I was so aware I didn't have panties on beneath. Cool, air-conditioned breezes swirled up my legs and caressed my bare lips. I trembled as Daddy paid, my hands constantly pulling down the skirt, making sure I didn't show anything.

Daddy noticed. It amused him.

I had to walk in front of Daddy on the way to the lingerie store to buy me new bras and panties. Every time I glanced back, he had a hungry smile on my lips, his eyes locked on my ass. My cheeks burned. My pussy leaked excitement. I felt the juices trickled down my thighs. People had to notice.

It was so embarrassing. But Daddy wanted me to do it. Even though my cheeks burned with shame, I was also so horny. I could explode at the slightest touch. No wonder Mom did everything Dad wanted it if was this exciting to obey and be a good girl.

“Oh, hello,” the teenage worker greeted when we walked into the shop. She was a few years older than me. “Out with Daddy, huh?”

“Yes,” I blushed, squirming, embarrassed. I was old enough that I shouldn't have my father with me shopping for bra and panties.

“Come on,” Dad said, putting his hand on my lower back and subtly pushing me, guiding me to the racier bras and panties.

“Wow, you have a cool Dad,” the girl laughed as Dad pulled out a lacy, almost completely see through pair of soft-purple panties.

“Thanks,” I blushed as Daddy grabbed a red thong with a lacy, black bow in the tiny triangle of material that would appear above my butt.

I didn't choose a single pair. Daddy chose them all. I was dressing to please him now. He found me several bras without straps, and others that matched my underwear and were equally racy. I blushed to my roots when he grabbed one bra that had holes cut out for my nipples to poke through.

He grabbed a pair of crotchless panties to go with it.

“Very cool dad,” laughed the girl when she noticed.

“Now lets go try these on,” Daddy said, guiding me through the store as I held an armful of lacy, beautiful things.

“Yes, Daddy.”

When we reached the stall and my dad opened it and went to follow me in, the girl objected. “Sir, you're not going in there.”

“I'm her father,” he said. “And I will not be questioned by a girl half my age. Show some respect or I will bend you over my knee and spank you the way your father should have.”

She blinked and swallowed. “I...I... Sorry sir.”

“Now I need to make sure everything is perfect for my little girl.”

The salesgirl blushed and shifted her shoulders, not sure what to say. Dad closed the door behind us. She did not object. I grinned at Daddy. He was such a stud.

Another bulge tented Daddy's jeans as I pulled off my belly shirt and reached behind me to remove my bra. He had already seen my pussy, but he hadn't seen my breasts. I took a deep breath. They were so small compared to Mom's. Sure they were bigger than Alice's, and they were nice and firm while my nipples made impressive nubs, but would he like them?

But Mom had large tits. Even in her conservative blouses, it was obvious she was packing.

I unhooked my bra and shifted my shoulders. The straps fell down them. I took a deep breath and pulled the cups away from my breasts. Daddy's eyes fell on my round, firm breasts. His hands seized them. I gasped, my nipples aching as his palms rubbed them.

“Daddy,” I moaned, trembling I stared up at him. “D-do you like them?”

“They're gorgeous,” Daddy growled, his thumbs rubbing over my nipples.

I gasped. It was amazing. My eyes widened. Pleasure shot straight down to my pussy like there was an express elevator through my nerves connecting them. My pussy clenched as he rubbed harder, his fingers digging into my flesh.

“I-I'm glad you like them, Daddy.”

His right hand slid up from my breast, caressed my neck, and then lifted my head. Daddy leaned down and kissed me on the lips. I closed my eyes as his strong lips moved against mine. His fingers pinched my right nipple as I sighed into the kiss. He claimed me. I was his good girl.

I was breathless when he broke the kiss. Then I gasped when I realized my hands were on his side, rubbing his muscles through his shirt. I couldn't help it. He as so strong. I slipped down the front, rubbing his abs.

“You're hard again, Daddy. Do you need me to blow you?”

“I need you to turn around, lean against the wall, and get ready to have your cherry popped.”

“I-in the store?” I gasped. “With the girl out there? What if she hears us?”

His smile grinned. “Your mother always loves it when I fuck her in the changing room. I bet you will, too. You love the danger. You were dripping wet on the walk over here, afraid someone would notice you weren't wearing panties while not understanding why it made you so wet.”

“I didn't understand, Daddy. I was scared but...thrilled. Exhilarated.”

“Now turn around,” he growled as he popped the fastener of his jeans. “And be quiet. You don't want to get caught, do you?”

“No, Daddy.” I turned and leaned against the wall, bracing myself as I trembled.

I was about to lose my virginity. And not in a bed with romantic music playing on my honeymoon. Not even with a boy I snuck into the house who I was crazy in love with. I even thought I might lose in the backseat of a car on a date.

But I never thought I would lose it to my father in the dressing room. This wasn't romantic.

It was something better. Something more exhilarating, more existing. It was sexier.

My pussy clenched as his zipper rasped. I looked over my shoulder as Daddy pulled out his dick. He stroked it. He was hard again, the tip throbbing with pleasure. I remembered how wide he was. Could he fit back there?

His hands seized my slim hips, pulling me back a bit and forcing me to bend over more to keep leaning. His dick prodded the cheeks of my ass, smearing precum as he moved. It traced a pattern of burning bliss on my ass.

And then he grabbed it. He guided it between my legs. My eyes widened as he rubbed it on my virgin flesh. My heart pounded so hard I thought it would explode out of me. He rubbed his cock up and down my cunt and found my hymen.

“Daddy,” I moaned, still looking over my shoulder at him.

“I think you need a gag,” he grinned and pulled my dirty panties out of his pocket. He shoved it into my mouth.

I tasted my tart juices and his salty cum.

Daddy thrust his cock.

I moaned into the panties, my head snapping back while his dick reamed my pussy. My hymen hardly stopped him. In moments he was in me, stretching my hole wider and wider. I groaned louder through the panties, pain burning in my depths as his cock buried into me. His groin pressed into my ass as his hands hugged me.

“That's it,” he whispered. “Just relax and take Daddy's cock. Don't be afraid. I always make sure good girls are rewarded.”

His left hand wandered up and seized my left breast. He pinched the nipple while his right hand went south. It shoved between my legs and rubbed at my soft curls before he found my favorite place on my body.

My clitoris.

I moaned “Daddy” into my panties as he rubbed it. My pussy clenched on his cock. Pleasure replaced pain. His diddling washed it away. I shifted my hips, his cock moving inside of me. My eyes widened. More pleasure rippled out of my pussy.

“That's it,” he groaned. “You're becoming Daddy's good girl.”

His hips drew back. My pussy clung to his flesh. My back arched and my hips shifted. I moaned again, loving every inch of his flesh. He rubbed harder at my clit. Duel delights washed through my body.

Daddy thrust in.

My head snapped up again. I bucked and moaned. It was so amazing. His cock slid through my folds. His groin slapped into my butt. I moaned into the panties, loving every moment of our incestuous union of flesh. The very cock that fucked my mother and spurted the cum that conceived me now hammered my own pussy.

I was Daddy's good girl.

The thought, combined with my day's worth of excitement. The salesgirl was just outside the door, unaware we were committing such an incestuous act. My pussy clenched down on Daddy's cock while my clit throbbed beneath his strumming fingers.

I came.

It was the best orgasm ever. All my masturbation paled to the delight of Daddy's cock fucking my pussy.

The pleasure shot through me in powerful waves. My body undulated with each one. They reached my mind, smothering my thoughts in delight. The small changing room spun about me as my body drank in every blast of Daddy's taboo seed while I moaned into my panties.

Stars danced in my eyes.

My Daddy's cock fucked me faster.

The pleasure kept building. Swelling. I moaned again and again. His dick thrust harder and harder. My orgasm didn't stop. It kept going, drowning me in bliss. I bit down on my panties as the ecstasy consumed me.

“My good girl,” he groaned as he buried his cock into me.

His dick erupted.

His cum flooded my pussy.

I felt so close with Daddy. I was his woman, his good girl. His hands stroked me as he gasped for his breath. His incestuous seed was in me. I wasn't on birth control. I didn't care if we conceived a child. I never wanted him to let me go.

“Is everything all right in there?” the salesgirl asked.

“Perfect,” Daddy answered and pulled his dick out of my pussy. “Right, sweetheart?”

I pulled my panties out of my mouth. “It's wonderful,” I sighed. “So many beautiful panties and bras. I'm such a lucky girl.”

“Sounds like it,” laughed the salesgirl. “My Dad would never buy me such...daring panties and bras.”

“I guess you weren't a good girl.” I was. And I earned my reward. It dripped out of me.

I stepped into my dirty panties to contain it. I couldn't wait for the rest of our three weeks alone.

To be continued...


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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2016 22:53
    I love this story!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 03:22
    I love it!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 05:06
    loved it!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 10:15
    amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 10:17
    I love this story!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 16:25
    Fantastic story, had me so hard. Had to take care of business.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 18:14
    Very nice and it sucks that the minimum age on this site is 18. We all know girls like to bond with their Daddies at a much younger age.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 18:19
    Very erotic. One of the best ones I have seen in a long time. When will you write next chapter? Include her getting impregnated by dad too.

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  • Goodhardsex
    02.07.2016 20:55
    I am dripping in my panties reading it. great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 02:32
    OMG this made me so wet! I cannot wait to read Chapter 2! Please post it soon!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 07:17
    Nice story. On wolfpub.org you could use the actual age (I am guessing 18 -5 or so)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 12:21
    I wish my dad will fuck me to

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 12:21
    I wish my dad will fuck me to

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 13:54
    Pls, continue the bimbo serum series!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 14:15
    WOW this was so sexy from start to finish!!!!! The dickhead that objected to this story was just jealous. As to age She told at the start that she was 18,so he's just a whinger. Beautiful!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 14:46
    perfect

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 17:26
    Ohhh I wish that my dad fuck me to with his big dick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2016 06:14
    Teaching
    Lady boy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2016 11:38
    I wasn't into the whole incest thing but as I kept reading it made me squirt. Great job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2016 04:32
    Horny girl looking for her master

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2016 07:32
    Other than the laughable premise and the dad being a certified asshole, the story had promise. Too bad it was a dead duck.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2016 16:35
    "I sucked harder. I fisted him faster."

    I don't think you know what fisting means lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2016 02:50
    When your a master its not if she is willing to send pictures its your gonna send them cuz im your new master.... I dont think your a real master jaime HACK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2016 08:27
    First hymen I have heard of outside the pussy . . . must be a new model

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2016 09:36
    Amazing! I love all the incest stories you do!! Not too long but Deff have a good amount detail, by far my favorite author for this type! Keep up the good work!! Only complaint is that I have to wait for more lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2016 05:26
    Very sexy story.

    _DEFAULT_

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2016 08:03
    Does not sound real at all,,,disgusting.who can have sex with his daughter in a shop for that matter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2016 01:45
    Some people like e power mate and it's a common fantasy believe it or not I mean someone like you read it and probably judges people who like this but this probably turned you on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2016 04:24
    Can't wait for chapter 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2016 15:33
    so delicious. Made my pussy soaked!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2016 06:12
    nice, also waiting for chapter 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2016 08:53
    Wanna Eat Some Pussy

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  • Little+Bisexual+Sub
    09.07.2016 15:46
    Fuck I'm dripping

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 04:47
    Women I am a loving caring and strong daddy Master looking for a naughty girl who wants cam and send live pictures to you daddy master my K!k $kype and $napchat is johnsmith1978mn hit me up if you're interested

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 11:04
    Please continue!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 22:21
    dripping wet rn

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2016 02:33
    This makes me wet! More pls!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2016 05:18
    I love this story. It made me so horny and wet. Please make chapter two.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2016 21:34
    I am so fucking wet rn. I masterbated through this whole thing and I even had a orgasm. Please make a second chapter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2016 04:01
    Masterbated

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2016 21:55
    I came so hard to this story keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2016 16:20
    When is part two coming out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2016 16:37
    We need a second part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2016 21:27
    am rly horny... wish I was ua dad..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 01:54
    I'm so wet right now. I wish I had a daddy like that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 09:38
    Wish I had a daughter like her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 18:34
    Fuck im so wet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 20:20
    adfbgtrewd

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 21:10
    Sleeping

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 10:38
    So wet, my pussy needs to be fucked by a daddy, the older the batter, im touching my pussy as im writting this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 16:15
    I have a daughter like her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 16:27
    That was sexy I'm sitting here naked still playing witb my dick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 17:16
    Come on continue!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2016 04:23
    I need a 2nd chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2016 23:07
    I always wanted to suck my dad's cock but was afraid to start... any advice?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2016 09:38
    Moaned and screamed so hard I squirted all over my bed... I wish I had a vibrator or one of those sex machines to fuck me senseless.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2016 20:02
    This made me so horny, I squirted all over my sheets. I wish I had a big cock deep inside my puss right now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 00:11
    I couldn't make it to the end without an orgasm.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 02:40
    Where is part 2? I want to cum again!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 05:21
    hey guys I just turned 18 and I really want to have some fun. Send me your huge cock and the biggest wins a special something

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 07:05
    Damn, I wish someone would fuck me like this. I would be a good girl.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 16:37
    Let them be impregnated, I beg you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 20:11
    More! Damn that was fucking hot, came twice!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 23:26
    Excellent story line. Love the Asian addition. Perhaps the two mothers can be added in a scenario with their daughters. Either way, please continue...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2016 13:41
    More! Damn that was fucking hot, came twice!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2016 18:19
    Omg! I love this. Can there be a part where Melody gets pregnant?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 01:02
    I never post but damn thats amazing. Please continue to write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 12:44
    love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 20:02
    Awesome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 20:03
    Is there really a part two

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 23:40
    So hot. It'll be even hotter when the mom and twin come back. Sexy times all around

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2016 03:48
    Your stories always make me cum hard.

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  • pyroclast
    23.07.2016 09:37
    Hmmm! So that's what sado-masachisms all about, control freaks subjugating lesser people into token slavery via actually inflicting pain and suffering.
    This story is just juvenile; the female characters are emotional retards, and probably only young teenagers (aged by decree of website) and just pathetic wimps, babies.
    All this pandering to sick readers who want to see further degradation by having the children become pregnant.
    Such mental sickness and depravity is the reason for the cultural collapse of the nation.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2016 19:38
    I ESPECIALLY LIKED THE PART WHERE SUN SHAVED YOUR PUSSY,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2016 17:30
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    2016-07-20 16:37:05
    Let them be impregnated, I beg you!

    Seconded! Nice work, Sir!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2016 22:17
    Chapters 2-4 are shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2016 03:38
    Damn these stories are fucking sexy. Keep them cumming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2016 08:45
    please more!!!! give me more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2016 16:56
    Anonymourreader2016-07-1618:34:38Fuckimsowet957

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2016 06:29
    I hate it when a story isn't finished. If it isn't complete don't post it. Idiot!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2016 22:31
    Girls Aussie daddy waiting to be pleased and too please !!! Add me on k I k aussieupforit. Brissie girls prefered.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2016 08:39
    Subspace is the best place to be. It's my favorite get away.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2016 17:36
    I think Pyroclast you're probably screwing your kid and it makes you feel some kind of way reading about it cause it probably something you want to do but can't... if it were so bad you wouldn't read it...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2016 18:29
    My pussy was so wet as I read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2016 20:33
    please please make this a longer series than some of your other stories

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  • naenaegirl
    27.07.2016 22:43
    since your stories are so out of order here im reading off your blog for now love them keep writing
    .....naenae

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  • Inbeast26
    28.07.2016 10:42
    This story honestly was the best I've read in a while can't wait for more and although I loved the scene with Sun I just want dad and daughter together a little while longer PLEASE :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2016 05:42
    Fuck these stories make me so wet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2016 06:27
    Fuck I swear I need a daddy to do this to me.

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  • Salffg22
    30.07.2016 12:02
    I need a daughter like this hit me up if you want a daddy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2016 01:36
    Origen this story mode me so wet. I don't mind fucking my dad like that. I need to fuck right now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2016 01:38
    I don't mind taking or trading sex pics I would love to please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2016 12:28
    i love the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2016 06:42
    Hey mypenname nice to see you posting new stories really loved Devils pact
    it was the first series I followed all the way

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2016 10:27
    Great story I cant wait for the next part keep it going all your storys keep me on the edge of my seat

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2016 14:35
    cant wait for more... I am loving it!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2016 15:50
    OMG THE CLIFFHANGER! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2016 02:17
    I've been waiting for this, and you end it on a cliffhanger?! How dare you! :(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2016 06:14
    Omg noooooo I love this story and you left it like that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2016 18:19
    Love the story so far. Keep up the great work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 02:04
    good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 22:01
    Mazzaratie monica

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2016 12:31
    Part 6 please!!!!!! With mom and daughter 1 as slaves to Father
    , now it's time to deflate daughter 2s ego, and make HER slave to Mom and Daughter 1.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 02:50
    Gosh I love this story!!!! I would be a good girl if they fucked and treated me like that...

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  • Victoria+Raia
    07.08.2016 13:52
    This is a good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 15:22
    Awesome story!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2016 12:50
    Your stories are normally top notch with very few errors, but it seemed like you were in a hurry with this one. I mean the line...."I moaned as I lapped up Mommy's juices, my cock spasming about Daddy's cock" seemed weird. Another thing to remember is Melody isn't getting paid yet so she is still a slut and not a whore. I did like it though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2016 18:52
    i so love your stories, please make more, please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2016 02:44
    I'm obsessed with this series. Can't wait until the next one! Makes me so hot every time, I've never read better erotic literature. Cheers

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2016 08:51
    1. You don't understand how the hymen works
    2. You don't understand how women enjoy oral sex
    3. You keep using the same adjectives
    4. You don't understand the mentality of a sub

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2016 03:12
    You poor, perverted Yanks! So fucked in the head with your constant porn, no wonder you're just about to have your nation implode. Your jewish porn masters have done a real job on you, subverted your youth with porn and video games, and now getting ready to take you over fully, making you just pawns in their NWO.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2016 10:15
    @ anon. Below... Go suck the Queens saggy udders.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2016 02:29
    God this is good, but how hot would it be if Alice walked into the room?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2016 11:16
    Love the story, hope you keep it up, and would love to see Sun became a permanent slave to him.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2016 14:34
    Freaking awesome, can't wait till the next chapter. I do hope Sun gets back into the scene again, would love to see her turned into a total fuck slave.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2016 21:26
    Okay this is cool or whatever but I fucking hate how Melody is trying to steal her mom's husband like bitch chill. You can fuck him for now cause June is cool with it but damn she's trying to suck his dick forever. I'm too possessive for all this sharing shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2016 02:02
    so hot but I think sun should become a total slave like melody did

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2016 02:14
    i love this!! keep going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2016 08:37
    Very much enjoying this series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2016 10:13
    Great series. really enjoyed it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2016 19:54
    When will we see more. Awesome story!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2016 18:14
    More, we want more

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  • masteradam
    22.08.2016 08:48
    Really love this series more please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2016 04:04
    So hot!! Please make the next soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2016 16:36
    Great, as always

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2016 17:48
    Mmmm....so good. Loving the series a lot. Love getting off this series. So fucking hot. Please keep it going.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2016 17:58
    I fucked my sister once n her tongue was magic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2016 18:03
    Oohh can't wait till the next one, what naughty desires await Alice now? Mmm make her an exhibitionist like Sun

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2016 20:53
    Great story once again, but please make a foursome or threesome with melody, June, Sun and Alice

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2016 06:47
    More Sun please I love bi girls.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2016 10:53
    I need a daughter like that..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2016 17:37
    mmm so goooood so amazing!!!! give me more!!! please please please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2016 21:21
    I wish I had a daddy like that

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  • daddysxqueenn
    26.08.2016 15:23
    I pretty much live for this series. It's so beautifully well written and deserves so much praise. I need more. I am addicted to these stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2016 21:50
    I don't want Sun there. She's taking too much of her attention from his actual good girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 04:01
    María esther severino fotos whasa gratis

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 12:22
    it said unicorn choker in the last story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 13:23
    chapter nine please I'm so addicted

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 15:56
    Great story, I hope you can keep it going for a long time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2016 04:26
    FUCK this shit im out!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2016 04:27
    My pussys sooo wet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2016 13:21
    Fucking pathetic trash.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2016 14:30
    More, more, we want more!

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  • Anonymous70605
    30.08.2016 10:04
    Sun is the Best!!! Please do more with her character

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 11:32
    I loved all of this story. I just wish it would have had more training for them both.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 12:54
    This was the best story I've EVER read. I loved the ending, the Sun and Melody together, I loved EVERYTHING. Thanks for the amazing story. Ill look forward to new stories by you in the future.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 18:51
    Wow... Amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 23:22
    More please continue somehow

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 00:24
    I loved it but I thought melody's charm was an not a dolphin..

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  • narutoforever
    31.08.2016 03:25
    i would like to see when melody daughter gets to be 18 and what happens. great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 03:56
    Cool, it made me wet but not enough to cump try harder next to meu2764ufe0f

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 03:59
    Cool, it made me wet but not enough to cump try harder next time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 05:04
    Write about Melody's daughter and maybe even a story of Alice's love life too? Sexiest stories ever.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 09:42
    YOUR DAD SO BAD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 11:43
    can we have MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 13:30
    Sorry to see the story end, would have loved to read more. I hope you act on the previous suggestions and write an offshoot story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 17:28
    Wouldn't that baby come out retarded?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 22:20
    Sorry to see the story end, would have loved to read more. I hope you act on the previous suggestions and write an offshoot story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2016 17:57
    Jesus my pussy is throbbing right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2016 17:58
    I'm ready for someone to fuck me hard oh God yes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2016 01:14
    I'm ready for someone to fuck me hard oh God yes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2016 05:44
    I loved this thank you. Thank you so much for making this story it was so amazing I chummed so many times reading this series of stories. Once again thank you so much.

    -----Cherise

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2016 08:53
    So fucking hot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2016 18:50
    Was quite the funny story, even enjoyable if you could get past the complete asshole the father was. Just the kind of sad sap, that should be beaten to fix his head.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2016 03:55
    Excellent serial verse. You're quite prolific as well. I truly enjoy and appreciate the way your mind sets your plots. The overt sapphic influence is captivating. One of my personal penchants. Keep up the quality posts. My most erotic thanks.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2016 15:51
    I want to be a good girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2016 02:28
    David Jackson

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2016 02:28
    David Jackson

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2016 14:28
    Your Story Is Fucking Good You Know It Got Me I Mean Feels Like Its Real For Sure

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.09.2016 07:22
    I'd give anything to be a submissive

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  • mr+longfello
    08.09.2016 16:24
    Great series I'm really enjoying it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2016 15:42
    I thought it was a unicorn choker.... How did it transform to a dolphin lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2016 15:56
    Sun is such a bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 08:27
    Good read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 11:58
    would love to nail my preachers dsughter, she is one hot honey! hot story. thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 13:09
    Very nice so far and I think sinning with Donna would be great for Alexandra. Daddy could be there to fuck both of them and give them some fresh creampie to eat.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 13:27
    This is a great story, please continue!

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  • LeahR
    12.09.2016 14:05
    One of the best. Makes me wish I had a Preacher daddy.

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  • Tim101
    12.09.2016 14:46
    Great story, can't wait for part 2, and I hope mom isn't the angel she seems, but a cock loving slut like her daughter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 17:32
    Great story, I finger ed my self until I came all over my bed

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 19:19
    WOW I WISH A HAD A FATHER LYK THS ONE

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  • papaprv
    12.09.2016 21:52
    What a fantastic, hot, nasty story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 23:13
    Hot story, very well told.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 02:57
    oh wow :) love this story so far

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 04:57
    By the gods, by the Force, by the whatever. This story is amazing. Please keep it going...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 16:22
    fuck I came so hard..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 23:00
    Jesus Christ this was awesome! Outstanding job.

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  • Mojavejoe420
    13.09.2016 23:07
    Definitely one of the hottest stories I've ever read! Massive props, dude. Keep it going!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2016 00:16
    Omfg dat was da most amazing story I hve eva read way 2 go man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2016 00:47
    Was running my pussy the whole time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2016 06:51
    Seems like a pretty normal Preacher's daughter to me. Sunday afternoon after one of those sermons is the very best time to take one on a date.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2016 07:09
    My sister was friends with the preachers daughter. One night she left the other girls at the sleepover and came into my bedroom and locked the door. She was definitely a sinful daughter.
    Though I doubt she ever worked a glory hole.

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  • countrycadillac
    14.09.2016 16:44
    Loved every word of both chapters, don't ever stop writing. Maybe even start a sex workshop at church for unfofilled men. Thank You

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2016 00:45
    write more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2016 00:45
    never cumed so hard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2016 03:04
    Im.horny .want a fuck now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2016 03:09
    Hard cock as now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2016 21:28
    Dank man this is well

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  • JC205
    16.09.2016 09:43
    great story to read...extra pleasure as I enjoyed good wank....now going to read part 2..i'm a wank addict

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2016 14:50
    Jeez, another story fucked up by the admin's stupid demand for adult/18 yo teenagers with 13 yo bodies and minds on this site. Admin is wrecking this site in their efforts to be legal; ok no site/no problems with fines and legal expenses. No readers either.

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  • kumshooter
    16.09.2016 22:25
    WOW !!! So hot, and nasty! You have a real talent for writing, I could just picture every moment, and word as I read it! Getting ready to read Part 2, and so hope you write several more parts. Thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2016 03:10
    Best
    Shit
    Ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2016 12:04
    The best story in a long time on this site .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2016 13:02
    Good but to bad you took it in this direction .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2016 14:41
    Yes. Have Donna and the deacon share her, then have the priest and the deacon Eiffel Tower her. Then have her father introduce her to anal

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  • Weby2909
    18.09.2016 18:54
    Great job, you should add anal in part 3.

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  • Tiger_t
    18.09.2016 20:37
    Fantastic, made me cum twice. Hurry with chapter 3.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2016 00:57
    Very nice indeed and the preacher should provide a glory hole at church for Alexandra. It's a win win for all as attendance will increase along with the money for church functions and she will have plenty of fresh sperm to satisfy her needs.

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  • Tim101
    19.09.2016 12:27
    Amazing story. Came so hard reading it. What a wonderful cum loving slut she's becum!!
    Lesbian next I hope, threesome with daddy maybe...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2016 21:27
    i wish I had a daddy like that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2016 04:12
    God I came hard

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  • Don%26amp%3B%23039%3Bsdick
    20.09.2016 19:30
    DAY-UMM!!! Great story with amazing detail. Gotta go to the next one.
    Thanks, Ma'am.

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  • Don%26amp%3B%23039%3Bsdick
    20.09.2016 19:49
    Praise the Lord and pass the pussy!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2016 01:39
    I will be so glad when people realize sex is not dirty or vile but a wonderful gift of the Lord God given for our enjoyment and pleasure. All sex is good except when used in pagan worship or rape. This is an excellent story except for the "dirty sex" syndrome. Looking forward to part 2.

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  • vivicavixxen
    21.09.2016 04:12
    Fantastic story...can't wait for part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2016 12:54
    You should check out fortify.com it has the best vids ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2016 15:27
    Master seeking an obedient female slave. Must be willing to send live pics. Your first message to master will be a live photo of yourself and a greeting. Your master is Jamiehack13 on K I k

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  • MarinaTrench69
    22.09.2016 00:04
    Wowwww!!!!! That was so dirty, I need to step my writing skills way up on that!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2016 01:08
    Gahh I'm so wet just reading it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2016 16:14
    @the one referring to "Jewish porn masters", wut? No, seriously, wut? go suck Muhammed's left nut.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 04:33
    awesome theme! Nothing better than the power of lust taking over and driving all actions towards sexual satisfaction. Bring on Part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 09:52
    Live sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 13:14
    More dad's need to make love to their daughters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 13:36
    Lovedo the stories ruined it by making her date sun

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 21:19
    Holy shit I'm soaking, I WSNT THIS!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2016 04:08
    WHERE IS CHAPTER 3?!?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 01:55
    Yeah it's all great in the literary sense but to the anon below, incest in context is nasty

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  • Martina80992
    25.09.2016 11:28
    Fantastic, you are going from 0 to 100 in seconds. Great work, really good written! One of my favorite series.

    ps: I'm not native english, but might it be that you misuse the word "about" instead of around or over? I learnd otherwise from my english tutor.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 13:00
    Chapter 3 please!! Getting deprived!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 17:53
    Chapter 3 pleeeeease my pussy is drooling from both .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 17:54
    anal for the preachers daughter next?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 19:44
    Gujarati language

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2016 04:53
    Wasted youte

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2016 10:20
    Changed to fast at the end that could've been its own story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2016 10:21
    Changed to fast at the end that could've been its own story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2016 20:37
    fuck you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 02:48
    Excellent story - although I agree you shouldn't have rushed at the end there. I was hoping you would draw out the rest of the year some more with at least another story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 05:49
    U have art to your writing love more please!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 16:01
    Still an amazing story, I have the same name and it is so hot, holy fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 23:25
    I love reading these stories to my boyfriend. They get us so hot. But there are some stories that I can read and put the emotion into my booster into the words that makes the story 10 times hotter and this is one of them. I can read it as if I'm the preachers daughter and that is so hot. Can't wait to read more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2016 03:26
    Yes daddy, fuck me, cum in my nasty, sinful holes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2016 03:42
    Another! I love this series so much. And I love the writing. Hopefully there is another one after this story, and if there is I definitely can't wait.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2016 13:16
    Get the mom to join in

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2016 01:16
    man this writer is wayy good even his other stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2016 19:17
    I DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO READ THE WHOLE STORY, BUT WHAT I DID READ I LIKED A LOT. CAN'T WAIT TO READ SOME MORE OF YOUR NOTTY ADVENTURES WITH YOUR PREACHER FATHER.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 09:53
    The best series I have read on here,from soft to hard in no time at all!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 13:58
    Get the mom pls

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 21:43
    Mmmmhmm it is ok but why would the hole be there in a male bathroom? Are they giving gay blowjobs or something? So many questions...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 23:26
    My pussy is so wet waiting for the next chapter. Wish I had some daddy dick right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2016 03:21
    Dam I never knew I was this into erotic story's

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2016 05:15
    The main thing this chapter ruins is that way too many people know now.

    The teacher, Carolyn....and then when Mother finds out....lots of blackmail is what comes next.

    Frankly if this doesnt lead to

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2016 05:16
    The main thing this chapter ruins is that way too many people know now.

    The teacher, Carolyn....and then when Mother finds out....lots of blackmail is what comes next.

    Frankly if this doesnt lead to shoot outs I'd be shocked

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2016 10:04
    Only one dollar for blow job? Surely high school boys can afford five dollars these days.

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  • countrycadillac
    04.10.2016 08:33
    "O" WOW !! Just perfect. Please continue on, forever !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 13:41
    I called it! Fuck it made me wet. I loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 16:06
    Just when you can't think it couldn't get any better, you have Mom And Daughter eating freshly fucked pussies filled with creampie. Bring on the black bulls for a gang-bang session next chapter... I'm loving it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2016 03:12
    Loved all the stores keep them coming. Should have her attack the girl that took her man.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2016 07:36
    More soon!

    Maybe a strapon gangbang or have.her do carolyn and mommy

    A black girl?

    We.need more soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2016 13:30
    Awesome! Next victim-Carolyn

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  • Sean-007
    05.10.2016 15:49
    How work here, hoping for the next part soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2016 01:26
    i wish I could be a submissive

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2016 14:08
    Very good story! The only one I read on here! I'm read for the next chapter asap

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2016 18:52
    Good going waiting on the next chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2016 09:53
    This story has been awesome. Loved the mother reveal. I can only anticipate what the 2 a going to 've doing for now on.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2016 10:45
    Hi there!

    Since I don't want to open another profile of yet another stories-site I try it this way:
    I really liked the whole series Preacher's Sinful Daughter very much. Write on.
    Question: Can I take this story, translate it into german and post it with your name on literotica?

    epsylon@lit.......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2016 19:23
    I love all of it as well as the Asian part added in!! Perfection!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2016 02:13
    Fantastic series getting better with every new chapter. Loved the mother being a slut too!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2016 22:43
    I typically love your stories, but the mother reveal was expected... I was hoping and praying it wasn't going to be the mother... an entire kinky aspect of the story is gone now sadly.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2016 05:16
    I typically love your stories, but the mother reveal was expected... I was hoping and praying it wasn't going to be the mother... an entire kinky aspect of the story is gone now sadly.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2016 17:30
    I agree with the commenter who said they enjoyed the mother staying pure. As a fab of the whole behind the back angle I'd have to agree. That said. Amazing story, can't wait for what's next and would love some flashbacks!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2016 10:06
    Shit man. It's over . Cool series dude!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2016 15:32
    A blowjob for $1.00 seems like a real bargain even if it was way back in the 60's. I also enjoyed the series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2016 16:02
    Don't usually comment, but your series was great enough to warrant this. Keep up the good work and never let it die.

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  • narutoisawesome
    11.10.2016 19:09
    can you do a series that has veronica in it? to show how she got her sinful start. a really great series. only thing I think it needed was more anal. can you show the difference between the sixties and eighties in the sexual freedom styles.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2016 19:40
    Sucks that it's done but there was nothing to continue with really. Awesome. Loved the wrap up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 02:59
    I love how she ended up with Peter. Great ending to wrap it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 08:37
    Andromeda?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 12:17
    This is back in the 70s right? Go-go boots and snuff theatres...not to mention the lack of cell phones and internet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 18:51
    I need a master... sc:cute.leech

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2016 03:45
    Favorite series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2016 23:04
    Wish there could be a series bout Alexander's daughter, and her and Peter?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2016 09:24
    I like it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 06:18
    I can't find the first chapter?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 16:08
    I want a dad like this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 16:10
    So wet, my 19 year old pussy needs to be fucked by a daddy, the older the better, im touching my pussy as im writing this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 16:15
    I need a master like this rn, im so horny, if your interested in having a naughty girl K!k me @ KayKaylee456

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2016 18:36
    So damn good. A sequel would be amazing with Peter and his daughter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2016 00:21
    I Want This So Bad I'm A Dominant But I Have A Few Secrets And This Would Be One Of Them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2016 01:49
    So is the necklace a dolphin or a unicorn? It constantly went back and forth and I'm confused? Amazing story tho! I think I came a least 20 times during the series!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2016 01:54
    Could you possibly do something gothic next? Maybe about cousins? I've seen a story with a goth dude and a regular girl. CharlieBladeRemus. Look him up please! He is amazing and you could get some inspiration from him next. Maybe AllTheseRoadworks? They are two of my three favorites including you. You have similar writing styles and topics and it would make an amazing story if you guys collaborate and made something about goth or gay or apocalypse. Hope you take this into account! Love you! AJL

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2016 20:42
    40 I am

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.10.2016 19:51
    wow this is disgusting

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  • bisub2
    24.10.2016 00:56
    I need a daddy

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  • bisub2
    24.10.2016 00:57
    looking for dom- new sub

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 06:01
    Daddy/master looking for a daughter/sub who will listen to all my orders. I need a good girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2016 00:23
    Hot very hot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2016 20:14
    My cock has stayed so hard reading these stories that I have a wet spot of precum on my jeans. Gotta go release

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 00:02
    Amazing story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 06:24
    This story is good though the mother's revelation was predictable.

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  • naenaegirl
    02.11.2016 11:42
    i just finished this story Sir it was amazing now ill go back to the battered lamp ive been reading them on your blog so much easier to find next chapter thank you so much sir
    slave naenaegirl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.11.2016 04:41
    This series is in my top 5 favorite of all time
    As is your Incestous Harem. I cannot wait to read more of both series. Please keep writing, I will keep reading.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.11.2016 03:20
    Sun needs to leave the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2016 01:39
    man this was good! her willingness to please her daddy was great, it hit home for me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.11.2016 20:25
    This was oh my god I never thought I would feel or get so hornier than ever by such a naughty taboo oh mmmmm yes would love to be Daddy's good little girl mmmmmm god help me I so enjoyed reading this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2016 07:35
    Fantastic!! Too bad you didn't continue on with the story. Has all the makings of a great serial story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2016 12:31
    I kinda figured it would be the mother but was hoping it was Carolyn. Or even Missy D. Oh well, now hoping the next chapter has Alexandra getting her revenge on Carolyn. Great story!! Hoping the next chapter isn't the end of the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2016 14:14
    What's with the name Andromeda? The milkman said it when he came to the house (I thought he was calling the mother that) and it was used again at the beginning of this story and Alexandra answered to it. Did I miss something somewhere?? Otherwise, hot story. Should've put more emphasis on her getting Carolyn though. Now how about the next generation? Peter and Veronica??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 07:54
    First mistake was only 3 paragraphs in. It was a choker with a UNICORN on it, not a gold chain with a dolphin charm. Then there is this typo: He slammed my MOTH down his cock. Another is: Only then would he let me slide back up HIS throat? You people need some better proofreaders!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 12:53
    Yet another error the proofreaders didn't catch: I held the last squirt in my mouth as I popped my dick off Daddy's cock. And near the end, this one: newsiest slave's cherry. At the beginning it says the choker has a dolphin on it (just like it did in the last chapter) and again at the end. It's a unicorn. Grrrrrr I don't usually like this kind of story (BDSM) but this is the exception. Even with the typos and errors in details, it was one HOT story. Wish there were more chapters. Like in raising the next generation of good girls.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 12:59
    Thank you so much, I feel so guilty and horny, imagining that I'm Daddy's good little girl...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 14:31
    I want to find someone who will treat me like this, I can't wait to experience being a full fledged submissive.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 18:30
    So horny I came as I found out that the black masters slut was named Tiffany that's my name and I love big black rough cock up the ass;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.12.2016 18:34
    More Daddy daughter stories with different characters please sir.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2016 04:24
    I've been reading this entire sceries since I got to bed and now it's 5:45 and I'm still horny as all hell. I'm going to have a wet dream as my mind creates an endless supply of fantasies of me being daddy good girl. I'm even going to get a choker and where it every day. I think I've found my most potent fetish thank you so much;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2016 04:26
    Just enjoy the show grammar natzie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2016 03:59
    Why is Sun bad?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2016 05:02
    oh my....gosh I came so hard moaning daddy the whole time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.12.2016 03:49
    Please let Sun find someone else she's taking all the attention

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.12.2016 14:27
    I was sort of a sex slave for my ex boyfriend. It was the best until my parents found out. He even made me cum 4 times on the fucking phone. We were going to fuck but he never did fuck me. My pussy always burned around him. I want to be his slave again. I need release.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2017 23:45
    Oh fuck. I need some hard fucking right now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2017 23:45
    Oh fuck. I need some hard fucking right now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 16:25
    Good story, to read and learn from it , since im a dominant, but looking for some submissive one , to please me
    If there any one out there , who needs a master daddy just post, with ur email .

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  • naenaegirl
    15.02.2017 22:39
    huge fan I love your stories I read them on your web page

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  • AllyAlly25
    15.03.2017 02:21
    punishmentgasm?? I died laughing at this lmao

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  • AllyAlly25
    21.03.2017 00:20
    I like Sun being in this story maybe there should be another story with Melody's daughter.

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