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Her Last Breath

Author: wickedsin

Date: 20 April 2006

Extreme, Fiction, Murder, Rape

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Her Last Breath

Toweling herself off, Lindsay stepped from the shower and stood in front of the full-length mirror mounted on the wall. Using a fresh towel wrap her damp shoulder-length brown hair in, she gazed into the mirror.

“God I look like shit!” Lindsay silently exclaimed to herself.

In reality, Lindsay was strikingly beautiful. Now working on her second year of post-graduate studies, this 23 year-olds’ body was stunning. Standing exactly five feet tall, she weighed a petite yet muscular 95 pounds. Raising her perfectly toned arm to her face, Lindsay used her delicate fingers to stretch the skin next to her eye, attempting to smooth out barely noticeable wrinkles forming around her eyes.

Taking a deep breath, she again spoke aloud, “I really gotta stop these long ass days!” referring to the full class load and part-time job she worked. As her mind raced through the litany of chores and Christmas shopping awaiting her tomorrow, she slowly blotted her delicate skin, absorbing the remaining beads of water. A cool breeze flowed through the louvered glass window in her bathroom, sending a refreshing chill through her body.

Her week had been hectic. As the two-week Christmas hiatus approached, Lindsay had scrambled to complete two forty-plus page thesis papers and final exams in two other classes.
As she quickly brushed her teeth, Lindsay often wondered if her professors had a secret meeting room where they’d get together and plot, taking wagers to see how long it would take before she was completely overwhelmed. She imagined a make-shift poster-board on the wall, her harried picture pasted in the corner of the flimsy cardboard as the evil professors took turns placing their names on the date they predicted she would lose the battle. She pictured her Strategic Management professor, Carolyn Miers, cackling like a witch as she counted her winnings, correctly predicting Lindsay would lose the battle on the day before the holiday break began. “Twisted bitch!” Lindsay laughed to herself.

Retrieving a bottle of vanilla scented body lotion from the counter-top, she squeezed a large dollop of the silky liquid into the palm of her hand. Slowly, she worked the smooth lotion into her skin, ensuring it was spread evenly over her body.

Stepping from her bathroom to her bedroom, Lindsay was unaware of the stranger watching her every move.

Hitting the remote control power button, her 17” Panasonic powered to life. Even before the picture illuminated the screen, Lindsay knew it was 11:35 P.M. as she heard the easily recognizable introduction to The Tonight Show.

Lindsay found herself reminiscing to her earliest memories of the popular show intro. Her father never missed an episode. Often, as she slept, she was awakened by her dad’s roaring laughter as he watched the show night after night.

She recalled how disappointed her father had been when Johnny Carson stepped aside and handed the late-night torch to Jay Leno. Despite his displeasure, he continued to watch. In no time, he adjusted to the transition and before long, he came to accept the change.

In a sad twist of irony, her father passed away the same month as Johnny Carson. For Lindsay, this classic would forever be intertwined with memories of her dad. Although she didn’t share her father’s love for the show, it always made her think of her dad.

She did her best to suppress the sadness of her father’s passing not yet a year ago, Lindsay selected a pair of navy blue cotton boy shorts and a white cotton baseball jersey with blue sleeves to sleep in.

As she slipped the shorts over her feet and up her muscular legs, Lindsay was unaware of the stranger studying her every move.

Making one final trip through her house, Lindsay confirmed all the doors and windows were locked and turned off the porch light. She beamed with a small sense of accomplishment realizing she’d be in bed before midnight, an hour earlier than she’d retired the previous four nights. Or so she thought.

As Lindsay walked down the short hallway to her bedroom, she heard the familiar sound of her cell phone vibrating on the bar-top that separated her small kitchen from the dining area.

“Who’s calling this late?” Lindsay wondered as she did an about-face and strode into the kitchen.

As always, Lindsay looked at the caller-ID before answering. Screening calls had become a societal norm and Lindsay was no different.

It was Kelly, her best friend.

Lindsay answered the phone. “Whassup Kel?”

“Hey bi-autch!” Kelly began. “Whaddya up to?”

“Getting’ ready for bed!”

“What a wuss! It ain’t even midnight yet!” Kelly said playfully.

“I’m tired! Long week,” Lindsay sighed to indicate her physical and emotional exhaustion.

“I’m sorry. Just wanted to see what time you wanted to hit the road tomorrow?” Kelly asked.

“Pro’bly ‘round eleven-ish. I need to sleep in.”

“Mm’kay, pick me up at eleven?” Kelly inquired, verifying the time.

“Sounds good hun. See you tomorrow!”

“G’night Linz,” Kelly’s nickname for her friend of nearly 18 years.

“Night” Lindsay said as she folded her cell phone closed. With that, she made her way to her bedroom.

Out of habit, Lindsay closed her bedroom door behind her and flipped the switch to the ceiling light. Taking a second for her eyes to adjust to the darker conditions, she climbed into her bed. Lindsay contemplated whether she should get under the covers or not. She knew she’d be cold as the night progressed but right now, her bedroom was still warm as the humid moisture from her shower thickened the air. For now, she decided, she’d sleep on top of her covers.

As Lindsay made herself comfortable, the stranger, showing the patience of a well-disciplined hunter, had settled in, awaiting his moment to strike.

Taking a few minutes to unwind, Lindsay flipped through the channels with her remote control. “Seventy dollars a month and there’s nothing on!” Finally settling for a late-night re-run of Married With Children, she soon drifted off to sleep.

As Lindsay slept, she was unaware of the shadowy figure looming above her, slowly massaging himself through his dark pants.

Lindsay looked peaceful as she slept. Her damp hair had bled onto the pillow, creating a large wet spot in the shape of her head. Slowly, she inhaled and exhaled as her body drifter deeper and deeper into slumber.

As she slept, the stranger moved closer to her bed. Slowly, each step strategically planned out and executed, he inched closer towards his target.

Lindsay had been asleep for an hour now as she shifted in her sleep. Without waking, she rolled from her right side to her left, not sensing the shadowy figure now only inches away from her. Her mind drifted deeper into unconsciousness as she began to dream. Sequence after sequence of dream scenes flashed across her subconscious sleeping mind.

“Why am I sleeping sideways on a hill?” she asked herself in her dream. Lindsay was dreaming that she was lying on her right side facing the down-slope of a grassy knoll; a grassy knoll covered in thick bluebonnet flowers. At the bottom of the hill, she saw a clown making pottery in a circus tent. Lindsay laughed softly in her sleep, subconsciously amused by her comedic dream’s odd plot.

Her dream hill became steeper and steeper. She felt like she was losing her balance, as if on the verge of rolling down the hill. As dreams often do, changing from scene to scene with notice, Lindsay now found herself slipping from the edge of a 14 story roof.

Startled, Lindsay awoke immediately. Her peaceful dream now in stark contrast to the actual nightmare she was about to endure.
Lindsay hadn’t been sleeping on a hill. She wasn’t precariously balanced on the edge of a roof. Her feeling of being off-balance was actually her mattress being depressed from the weight of the stranger’s knee as he tried to stealthily crawl into her bed.

Stuck somewhere in a state of middle-consciousness, Lindsay’s heart began to beat at an alarming rate. Adrenaline coursed through her body heightening her five senses, a natural physiological reaction to threat of danger and fear. Lindsay screamed as she realized a large shadowy figure loomed over her. As she did, she felt the stranger place a strong hand over her mouth and press down forcefully.

Being held down, Lindsay began to kick and flail violently in an attempt to free herself. His arm was incredibly strong. Lindsay saw the large muscles in his forearms ripple as he pressed his hand into her face.

Striking at him viciously, Lindsay’s fists landed several forceful blows to her attacker’s face but he did not waiver. Her arms thrashed wildly as her attacker swiftly mounted her, his full weight now seated on her stomach.

Lindsay did not have time to react nor did she have the strength to fight the attack. Lindsay felt his body weight crushing her stomach and lower ribs. In an act of desperation, Lindsay clawed at his exposed neck, tightly digging her sharp fingernails into his flesh.

Her attacker groaned as he drew his arm back and, in one powerful sweeping motion back across his body, struck her forearm with his. The force of the blow caused her upper body to roll slightly. Sensing an opening in her feeble defense, her attacker grasped Lindsay around the neck with both of his powerful hands, squeezing tightly.

Lindsay trembled with fear as she realized she could not breathe. She began striking her attacker in the forearms in an act of despair; doing anything she could to dislodge his vice-like grip from her throat.

Her efforts were useless. His arms, now flexed tight and rigid, were unmovable.
Lindsay felt herself being lifted off the bed, her attacker effortlessly picking her up by her throat. Lindsay gagged as her body screamed for oxygen. Within seconds, her brain felt the effects of being deprived of the glucose-rich blood it needed to remain alive.

Again, Lindsay punched her attacker solidly in the face but her efforts were futile. He seemed to draw a sense of morbid arousal from her struggling. She felt her energy begin to wane.

Her attacker was now standing, Lindsay’s feet four or five inches off the floor. Suspended in the air by her throat, she felt herself losing consciousness as he maneuvered Lindsay into position.

Lindsay desperately needed to breathe. She used all her strength to try to pull her attackers hands from her neck but he was too strong. A single tear ran down her cheek as the room began to spin. Her feet kicked back and forth as they dangled above her bedroom’s carpeted floor.

“I’m going to die!” she thought to herself as her eyes began to bulge. Lindsay tried to scream but nothing escaped through his vice-like grip. Her legs began to spasm uncontrollably, almost as if she had been hanged by the neck; her vision began to darken.

Lindsay felt her attacker pull her body into his and then, with incredible strength, he slammed her into the wall. Everything went black.

Now unconscious, Lindsay could not put up a fight. Her shadowy attacker tossed her limp body like a rag-doll onto the bed.

While the solitude and privacy of Lindsay’s semi-secluded ranch-style rental was something she cherished when she signed the rental agreement last year, it was an issue she would regret tonight.

Even had she been able to scream, her cries would have gone unheard. Her attacker knew the nearest house was far enough away nobody would hear her scream. He also knew at this time of night, the road in front of her rented home was infrequently traveled.

With an air of confidence, he flipped the cream colored light switch, illuminating her room. As Lindsay’s unconscious body lay on her back, he walked to the large mirror on her dresser to check his battle wounds.

He pulled his hooded black sweatshirt off and inspected his body. Red streaks of blood had trickled down his neck to his muscular chest; wounds inflicted from her piercing fingernails as she clawed at his throat. His cheek was red and swollen from a lucky blow of her tiny fist and his arms had multiple scratches as Lindsay tried in vain to defend herself. He felt proud of the new battles but knew they were nothing that would require medical attention.

Working quickly now, he rolled Lindsay’s motionless body onto her stomach and pulled her arms behind her back. Using a pair of chrome Smith & Wesson handcuffs, he cuffed her hands tightly behind her back.

He stood over Lindsay now, finally able to examine his victim up close. She was stunning, by the far the most beautiful of his victims.

Grasping her white cotton shirt in the back, he pulled his arms in opposite directions, easily tearing the thin material away from her perfect v-shaped back. Once her back was exposed, he tore the material at each shoulder down her arms and pulled the remnants from underneath her.

Using the decimated shirt, he quickly wadded up one of the sleeves and shoved it in Lindsay’s mouth. He then expertly fashioned a gag from the remaining material tightly bound it tightly around her head.

While the gag was not necessary, it was an element of his sadistic ritual, one that heightened his arousal and his complete control and domination of his victims.

Lindsay was now dressed only in her blue boy shorts. Her attacker stood over her again, slowly massaging himself through his black denim jeans. Her shorts clung tightly to her body, almost as if they had been painted on. Her ass was firm, muscular, incredible, that of a female athlete. He reached down to Lindsay, sliding his hand under the material and reveled in the silky softness of her skin.

Bending down, he untied his work boots and stepped out of them as he dropped his pants to the floor. After shedding his underwear and socks, Lindsay’s attacker stood over her once again. He was fully erect and just under 8 inches in length, his penis hung under its’ own weight.

Her attacker smiled as he prepared to begin his desecration of Lindsay’s innocent body.

Sliding his hands under the narrow band of elastic on her shorts, he quickly worked the material down to Lindsay’s feet, taking only enough time to remove one foot from its’ corresponding opening in the shorts. Grabbing her by the ankles, he pulled Lindsay to the edge of the bed until her abdomen was perpendicular to the edge of her mattress. Her legs hung limp over the edge of the bed as he used his feet to spread her legs.

He throbbed with anticipation as he knelt behind Lindsay. Spitting in the palm of his hand and on his fingers, he shoved his thick fingers into her and worked the natural lubricant around. Spreading the remainder over the length of his shaft, he stood and stepped between her muscular legs.

Lindsay began to stir, slowly regaining consciousness. Her head throbbed achingly as she tried to open her eyes.

Sensing her coming to, he placed his shaft against her tight unwilling opening and drove viciously into her.

Still dazed and incoherent, Lindsay felt something impaling her and slamming against her deepest parts. She tried to scream in agony but no sounds were produced. Confused, Lindsay tried to clear her head.

As each second ticked by, she regained her senses and pieced together the last few minutes of her life.

Realizing she was being brutalized, Lindsay fiercely tossed her body back and forth, trying to dislodge her attacker.

Lindsay had not yet come to the realization her hands were cuffed. Trying to pull her hands apart to defend herself, she winced in pain as the metal cut into her flesh.

Lindsay began to panic, her body racked with terror. The wad of cloth shoved into her mouth made it difficult for her to breath. Lindsay felt as if she was going to choke. Again, she tried to scream and thrashed her head back and forth.

Muffled cries of “No, No, No,” escaped her mouth.

As Lindsay pleaded with her attacker, he placed his strong hand between her shoulder blades, pressing down hard. He continued to violate her as he pinned her against the bed.

Lindsay was helpless. Despite her terror and despair, she felt herself begin to flow with natural lubrication. Lindsay felt nauseous as she realized her body was unwittingly reacting to the stimulation.

Thinking in a panic, “Oh my god, he’s gonna think I’m enjoyin’ this” she said in her head.

As her attacker continued to slam into her, Lindsay found an opportunity to attack. With her hands behind her back, Lindsay waited patiently until he moved. At one point, he leaned forward slightly, exposing his bare abdomen to her. When he did, she clamped down tightly on his skin and twisted her wrists as best she should.

He groaned in pain and her fingernails filleted the skin on his stomach.

Enraged, he grabbed the handcuffs by the linking chain and pulled her arms violently upward. Intense, searing pain shot through her left shoulder as it dislocated. Her arm burned as she felt soft tissue being torn within her shoulder.

Lindsay began crying uncontrollably, tears streaming down her now puffy face. Her nasal passages began to fill, making it more difficult for her to breath. Being held in such an awkward position caused her airway to be partially blocked.

Lindsay continued to panic.

Without warning or obvious reason, her attacker suddenly stopped and removed his large shaft from her now bruised and swollen entrance.

Lindsay felt him pulling on the cloth around her head as he loosened the gag. Once free from the binding, Lindsay choked the wad of saliva soaked cloth from her mouth. Choking down fresh oxygen, she coughed uncontrollably.

As she sucked in the fresh air, her attacker rolled her over and tried to step between her firm, tanned legs. Lindsay summoned all the courage she could muster and delivered a direct kick to her attacker’s stomach. Her heel connected with his muscular stomach. Other than driving him back, her kick seemed to have little effect on him.

Lindsay tried to follow her first blow with a second, this one aimed at his groin, but her kick fell short. Before she could mount a third kick, he was on her. Using his weight, he pinned her legs flat against the bed by straddling her. Her hands remained cuffed behind her back. Lindsay winced in pain as the handcuffs cut into her skin.

As he sat on top of her, his repulsive shaft dangled on her stomach. Lindsay pleaded with the stranger, “Please don’t do this…pleeease?”

He did not reply as he grabbed Lindsay by the throat. She felt his fingers tighten around her trachea. Sliding his body off of hers, he guided her by her throat. Lindsay had no choice but to comply. As he pulled, he noticed her perfectly toned abdominal muscles straining as she tried to sit upright.

Still gripping her throat, he positioned Lindsay’s body at the edge of the bed and stepped between her legs. Forcing her legs apart with his muscular legs, he slammed Lindsay backwards on the bed again.

Reaching between his legs, he aligned his disgusting shaft with her opening once again.

Lindsay wept, unable to breathe as he choked off her air.

With his free hand, he guided himself inside her. His shaft soon disappeared between her tight folds as he again ravished her innocent body.

Lindsay’s heart was beating fast. Once again she was slipping out of consciousness.

As he violated her young body, he paused suddenly and released his grip.

“Were you happy to be alive today?” he asked in a voice void of emotion and any sense of humanity or remorse.

Lindsay gasped for air as she answered between heavy sobs, “Y-Y-Yes”

She looked into his cold eyes as he spoke, “Enjoy it. It will be your last!”

Lindsay felt her heart sink as she absorbed his words. Before she had a chance to fight, plead, or beg, he wrapped his hands completely around her neck and lifted her up. She felt like her head was being pulled from her torso as her body hung underneath her. White starry flashes shot across her vision. As her body dangled by her neck, she felt muscles and tendons being torn from their moors inside her body. Unable to scream, she closed her eyes tightly and prayed.

In one quick movement, he placed her feet on the ground and stepped behind her. Things were now blurry as she felt him put his evil wand between her beautifully sculpted ass and slam himself back inside her.

Her attacker’s muscular chest was pressed against her back as he wrapped his right arm around her throat. She felt his large bicep press against the side of her neck, trapping her jugular vein. His muscular forearm lodged tightly against the front of her delicate throat. Reaching completely around her neck, he placed his right hand on top of his left shoulder.

After ensuring his right arm was perfectly anchored, he placed his left forearm against the base of her skull. Lindsay was now trapped in a powerful standing choke hold, all the while, he continued to violate her innocence.

Lindsay could not breathe. His grip was overwhelmingly powerful. Her shoulder still ached from being forced out of its’ socket. Her face was turning red and her eyes ached from the strangulation.

Terror tore through her body. She tried to free herself; her body floundered back and forth.

Lindsay felt herself lose control of her faculties as a warm stream of urine trickled from her and covered his vile tool and ran down her bare leg.

If she would have been able to, Lindsay would have been begging, pleading for her life. Instead, she silently prayed for her life to be spared.

Lindsay’s face continued to discolor as she was denied the ability to breathe. Her brain was starved for nutrient rich blood. She was losing consciousness.

As he continued to rape her, she heard him grunting under his breath between thrusts. “Die!” “Die” “Die!”

Lindsay shook her head back and forth as best she could in his grip, her only method of signaling she did not want to die.

Her attacker increased the ferocity of his thrusts into her. He squeezed his arms tighter. He now grunted deeply as each thrust tore into her delicate body.

Lindsay felt the cartilage in her throat crack under the pressure. An eerie snapping sound echoed through the room as she tasted blood in her mouth.

The feeling of her throat being crushed against his arms intensified his dark desires.

Lindsay realized she was in her final desperate seconds of life. This man was not going to allow her to live. She knew it but could do nothing to save herself. Lindsay continued to silently pray.

Knowing she was on the verge of death, his strokes became short, fast, and extremely hard.

Lindsay’s vision was fading as the tiny blood vessels in her eyes exploded from the pressure of being choked to death.

The last words Lindsay ever heard spoken were, “Say goodbye!”

Lindsay tried to scream, to plead for her life, to beg this monster to allow her to live. She could not.

Her body convulsed one final time as he flexed his powerful muscles. She felt his left forearm press against the base of her skull, forcing her head forward onto his thick right forearm. With all his power, he pushed her head forward until finally, her skull separated from her spinal column.

One loud, single snap reverberated throughout the room.

Lindsay saw a bright flash of light for an instant and then….Lindsay ceased to exist.

Her limp body slumped forward as he guided her to the bed. He was still buried deep inside her, slamming into her lifeless body until a powerful orgasm filled her with his demonic seed.

Pulling out of her, he rolled Lindsay’s body onto her back. A single stream of blood trickled from her mouth. He leaned forward and licked the salty crimson liquid with his tongue, tasting the last remnants of her life.

Leaving his trademark signature for the police, Lindsay’s attacker placed himself between her legs, placed his mouth over her and bit into her fleshy mound.

With that, her attacker re-dressed, kissed beautiful Lindsay on her blue-grey lips and disappeared back into the shadows from which he had emerged.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 10:23
    horrifying

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 16:22
    sad and sick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 17:21
    Sadistic

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 17:59
    It was explained at the top if this would offend you not to read it so why make comments like that. I thought it was well written and after all its a story!!! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 19:16
    sick and just plain sick...sequel?!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.04.2006 08:28
    Very well written,. I hate the attacker from your story and would like to see a sequel also where he is himself dealt with, that is the wanting to see fair play.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2006 23:01
    MMMix2 is right, if you dont want to read something like this, dont. 9/10, very good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.05.2006 10:13
    dude what the hell is your problem

    storys like this should never be written

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2006 20:20
    eww nigga that was just fuckin bitch tits

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 04:30
    Ever think of writing a horror book? This would make an awesome scene.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 05:54
    Love your stories. . . in the process of reading all of them, I love your writing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2006 15:42
    alot of it was really sick but overall it was ok didn`t like the last part trying wirighting something without death.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.07.2006 15:25
    I cant understand how some one can write this kind of stories, maybe they have some problem in their mind....



    I found this cruel, i dont like this at all, i wont read this kind of shit again...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2006 06:28
    To the Reader below – you are right, any person who could write something like this is in need of urgent psychological help



    Yes there is a warning - so the author is obviously aware of what he/she is writing, perhaps the warning is a device to ease their twisted mind.



    To the author of this appalling shit – get some help, you need it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.08.2006 00:04
    If it matters, I wrote this based on a request of someone. I was uncomfortable doing so at first but when I thought about Hollywood producers, directors, and writers who have written such things as Hostel, Saw and a host of other violent movies (which make millions of dollars), I was mature enough to realize fiction is fiction. If you don't like those movies...don't go see them. If you don't like these kind of stories, don't read them. But don't talk out of your ass when you have no idea who I am or what I am about. This story could easily be adapted into a screenplay and minus the graphic sex, would be NC-17 rated in theaters at worst. It clearly says SNUFF in the intro. If you're opposed to it, why the fuck did you read it anyway?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.08.2006 04:10
    ~card~ for all you people that say this is sick shit and how much u hate it, every single one of you knew exactly what this was even before you clicked the link. also now that you posted we all know what you like aswell, seeing how u knew what was on this page ment that u like the stuff he is writing about. The only reason u guys are commenting is because you all blown your loads all over you keyboards and think look at it and say hmm what will pepole think if they knew i liked this?, so then u put it down even tho u liked it! also, we are rateing the stories themselfs not the stories gene ffs, btw 9-10 man nice but you have done better with the other stories i think

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.08.2006 14:35
    Wrong and so very narrow minded - I'm an avid reader of "all" stories on this site, some I love, some I simply like and some I hate for whatever reason – that’s all part of the being human thing - and this one I hate because of the subject matter or maybe because I’m female.



    If the author doesn’t like negative comments then he shouldn’t post a story that is bound to attract negative comments or he should turn comments off (if you can still do that, you could when I last posted on here). Otherwise he has to take to good with the bad.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2006 16:11
    i agree i give this story a big 0

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2006 20:47
    Hey dumbass....lemme break it down in simple terms. I don't give a fuck what the comments are good or bad. My question is...if you don't like spinnach, why the fuck would you read it and then tell everyone how shitty it tatses. You're the dumbass who read a genre you didn't like. I know you still won't understand but hey...simple minds.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.08.2006 04:48
    For someone who “don't give a fuck what the comments are good or bad” you sure are vitriolic with your insults and patronism in your condemnation of those bad comments and commenters.



    P.S. you got to have a taste to see if you like spinach first and you eat it, not read it, I know you won’t understand that you simple minded dumbass – now that’s 1 for 1 in the insult league.

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    READER 500
    10.08.2006 22:22
    It's not the comments about my stories. It's the sheer ignorance of people who read acgenre they don't like or approve of and then make ridiculous comments about how bad or evil it is. Sit on your imaginary throne and keep enjoying whacking off to other peoples fantasies...hmmmm

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    READER 500
    11.08.2006 03:27
    Still so patronizing! – Maybe you could have made a better choice of genres - of the 6 categories under which this story is listed Fiction, Extreme, Male/Female have general appeal. – The ignorance is yours so don’t bitch when people comment that they don’t like your snuff story and definitely don’t make unwarranted personal insults to your readership for making valid comments.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2006 19:36
    Maybe you missed the introduction...so, try reading it now...



    Introduction : If you do not like choking, strangulation, death, rape, or snuff stories, don't read this one!



    Is it really that hard to understand. Either way, think what you want...simple minds work like that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.08.2006 14:05
    So arrogant - so full of testosterone - so difficult to admit your error – Your intro does not change the categories you chose

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.08.2006 15:44
    Next time, I'll draw it out in little stick figures so you can understand it...want me to write you a goat story or something? Maybe your favorite sheep paying you a visit and fulfilling a lifelong fantasy???



    One last thought....ever wonder what someone capable of writing something like this would actually be capable of?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 03:31
    Is that a threat? – maybe your testosterone levels are too high again, you should see your doctor.



    You seem to be intimating that you are capable of paining stick figures, you may even be good at goat or sheep stories but this story is crap.



    It only scratches the surface of the subject, you omitted (or show your ignorance for not researching the subject) some of the intricate details that manifest themselves in the scenario you so pathetically attempt to describe.



    If you want to exchange threats and insults then I’m sorry I can’t supply the threats but I am willing to go on insulting your abysmal, badly researched, amateurishly written attempts at story telling for a vary long time.



    Try to understand threatening and trying to belittle me only makes me more determined.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 09:44
    More determined to do what? Argue behind the safety of complete anonymity and the protection of your keyboard about the fact you were the one who read a story that warned you about its' content then decided you didn't like it.....



    And of course my last response is NOT a threat. That would be wrong and illegal. It was just a rhetorical question aimed at getting people to ponder all possibilities.



    So good luck in your self-imposed, determined war to become the Siskell and Ebert, or Ebert and Roeper of xnxx. Gosh how I wish I was you but I will never be so fortunate.



    I'm done...you bore the shit out of me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 09:55
    How was Paris?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2006 17:52
    Hey, I thought I was the siskell and Ebert of xnxx?!?! Look ws, at the end of the day, you are the writer, the creator, the one that takes a blank page and turns it into art. I read your stories because I appreciate you as an artist even when its not necessarily my thing. Just because I happen to like impressionist does not mean I cannot appreciate Picasso (your not that good yet). What we have hear is some touchy feely shmo off the street that would not know jackson pollack from finger painting wandering into the art gallery and bashing a painting so he can score some points with his (or her) feminazi girl friend. He has not, nor will not post a story of his own, so he has to manifest his shallow opinions by casting stones at the people who are driving this site. us. fuck 'em.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 07:23
    Bullshit, I have stories here all rating 7.5+. I accept comments for what they good or bad, named or anonymous. I don’t go trying to insult, belittle and patronize commenters just because they don’t like my work - that’s their prerogative.



    If we had had an argument I would have been grateful but all I got was insults and abuse in reply to what I considered to be valid points - a true sign of testosterone fueled aggression. If you are not willing to even take a look at another point of view then I can see why you reply to negative comments in such derogatory fashion.



    I didn’t like the story because it is a lightweight glance at a very serious subject, the omissions were glaring and showed a lack of understanding of the subject matter.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 10:39
    I seriously doubt you post on here...if you did, you'd have the courage to attach your log-in to your comments.



    Your comments had nothing to do about the quality of the story...your initial comment had to do with how messed up the author was...a personal attack. You don't know a fucking thing about me.



    You somehow profess yourself to be an expert on snuff scenarios yet failed to comprehend I wrote this story upon request from someone who requested certain elements in the story.



    You keep referring to "testosterone-filled".....b... woman????

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 12:04
    Notice how (s)he jumped right out with his ratings. sounds like someone that is looking for approval rather than someone that is willing to take risks and go out on a limb. I agree that he or she is probably lying about actually posting stories. Its easier to just hurl spears from the dark than to meet your enemy in daylight on the field of battle. Im sorry, was that reference too testosterony for you, I understand that you have an aversion to that particular hormone. They make a patch that might make you feel better, especially if you are cruising around an adult website. Its so sad to not only lack the capacity for risque literary appreciation, but also lack abject sexuality. Go write something easy like a mother son camping story because you have no credibility among real writers.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 17:53
    i'm on your side in this argument, wicked sin. i actually haven't read your story (won't because of the subject matter), but readers shouldn't comment subject matter.



    -- katie girl



    p.s.: i disagree with "archiac"; i think the person you're arguing with has posted stories. she uses rather large words.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 21:25
    Great back-and-forth going here! well done and keep up the good argument. If this fight gets any more brutal, I may even read this story.



    I am nearly certain the "READER" is a woman. It is certainly plausible she has written here at xnxx. Anyway... Round 9! ding ding!

    -blade-

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2006 17:02
    If you are going to write a story, be it for yourself or by request, you need to research the subject otherwise your creditability is non existent, there’s enough medical data on this subject on the web. I guess it would have taken less than an hour to find the information to make the story exceptionally good for those who like this genre. My latest point is, you failed



    I know enough about you to get you ranting, isn’t this fun?



    Archaic, how did you work that one out, if I was looking for approval I would sign in first and at least get a link to my profile page – doh!!!



    Testosterone is good until you guys begin dragging you knuckles on the ground and grunting abuse, you got to admit you don’t look to hot then.



    Yes I’m female, my sexuality isn’t in question and yes I’m an author

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2006 18:16
    Wickedsin...for the record, whoever is commenting anonymously here, rest assured that it isn't me. I just now became aware of the existence of this story.



    For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading it, not because I like the theme or find it stimulating in any way (I don't). But the writing is fantastically vivid! I couldn't look away! I'll give you a 10 for that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2006 20:17
    What the fuck is "creditability"???? Did you mean credibility??? When you research the correct contextual use of our language, then you can advise me to research something I investigate everyday...murder, rape, assaults...I have seen more actual death and a side of humanity you cannot imagine. If you care to reveal yourself, I'll gladly take you for a ride along sometime...then you can tell me what I do and do not know.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.08.2006 04:21
    BTW...it's not difficult to look through all the femi-nazi profiles, compare the use of certain common words, phrases, and punctuation, then compare the time/date stamp of your "anonymous" comments to comparable time/date stamps when you logged on with you user name. You love to hear yourself talk and have posted a significant number of comments...very interesting readings but, less critical when you actually use your log-in.....hmmmmm Pretty interesting how your log-in pattern is so consistent.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.08.2006 17:11
    After reading the back and forth, i decided to read the story. I didn't like the subject, and I didn't like snuff. but, it was well written. since i've never read snuff before, i can't rate or judge the story. however, i find myself hoping that the police are able to use the bite mark and the spit from it to find the killer. it is my understanding that the killer left enough of himself behind for them to do so.



    just out of curiosity, could you please write who requested such a story? if you can't specifically give a name, could you state whether it was a person from xnxx or someone from your personal life?



    -- katie girl

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.08.2006 23:43
    Katie Girl,



    Thanks for the feedback. Please understand I cannot reveal anything about the one who requested the story. I promised absolute discretion and will remain true to my word.



    Personally, the genre does nothing for me either. Even with this tory being a purely fictional fantasy, I think it goes a bit far but, I do realize there are some folks who do enjoy this. Not my "cup of tea."



    I had thought about expanding the story into a series of exploits bit have decided against it. Guess we can just pretend the cops did find him and lock him.



    WickedSin

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 14:20
    You got to admit there is now quite a group input happening here.



    “Credibility”, yes sorry - written after a heavy day and that typo got through, but don’t tell me you or anyone else is incapable of making typos, want me to point a few out? – “even with this *tory being a purely fictional fantasy” – “when you logged on with you* user name.”, - see typos are easy to make.



    I’m reasonably assured by your last comment, maybe you do have some scruples after all.



    Perhaps you should put a name to your login ‘research’, or email your suspect and see what happens.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 15:57
    Why would I do that when I can spend the next month or so mind-fucking "Reader." That sounds so much more interesting! Keep your friends close and your enemies even closer.



    I would like to thank you. Look at the attention you've created. Even in hating my story, you've become my biggest fan. Want me to mail you a free banner "I Love WickedSin"???????

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 21:53
    WS, is she actually trying to take some sort of credit for your success? Unbelievable. If you know who this wingnut is, PM me. I will not disclose it, I am just dying to see what kind of third rate slap and tickle stories she has written. She does not seem to have even grasped the reason so many writers at this site have come to your defence. You went out on a limb, you wrote something that was definately beyond your paradigm, you did a fine job of crafting a believable, detailed, well composed story. You went above and beyond the call of duty in forwarning readers about the content. Then 'reader' comes along and not only flames you, but makes it personal. This is an affront to the very spirit of the site. Every genuine consciencous author at this site is solidly in your corner.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2006 00:02
    Archaic,



    The rest of us on here must be the one's who don't know what we're talking about. "Reader" is the obvious “expert” on this site although "Reader" is so unsure of his/her own beliefs, he/she won't attach an identity to his/her comments. Where I come from, that spells cowardice. I'd like to challenge "reader" to show me specifically where my story lacks technical accuracy. I really wonder how much knowledge and actual experience he/she has with murders, crime scenes, sex crimes. But wait, finding something on the internet in "an hour of research" qualifies him/her as an expert according to "reader." Wanna know the ironic thing. I left a significant amount of detail out of the story out of respect for those who have actually met their fate at the hands of evil as detailed in

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2006 00:22
    **read entry below first..this is part 2....**



    my story. Most people who have never experienced death could not stomach the true brutality. So here I am, being criticized for not doing my research when in actuality, I toned it down on purpose. I wonder if he/she REALLY wants me to be technically accurate? I’m sure I would then be criticized for being so honestly descriptive and brutal. How much you wanna bet, “reader” is the kind of person who would win a million dollars and bitch about it because his/her winnings were in 20 dollar bills. Anyway...thank you and all those for the support.



    WickedSin~

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2006 13:30
    Regarding your technical accuracy query, I am talking about death spasm, specifically the action of particular muscles reacting to violent death which your perpetrator could not fail to miss. Instead we get the weak (in context) “Lindsay saw a bright flash of light for an instant and then….Lindsay ceased to exist.” That detail would not have made your story any more violent but it would help account for the perpetrators mentality.



    I did not profess to be expert, that’s a pedestal you placed me on. As for winning $1million, I don’t need it.



    Toning down the story in deference to those that have been there does not wash, if your concern was really for victims you would not have written it in the first place. I’m done here now that you are spouting excuses.



    Bye.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2006 16:46
    The "bright" light is medically accurate. Speak to anyone who has survived a broken neck and many experience a hot, white flash of light. I doubt the readers really wanted to read about the blood vessels in the eyes exploding, the excretion of bodily fluids from all body cavities, or the physically deformity of the tongue from being choked to death/having your neck snapped in half. As I said before, there were certain elements the requester wanted...I included them, she was happy. You seem to be very closed-minded and judgmental and, it seems you are also Ms. Cleo...you are able to read minds and know things about people over the internet. The muppets retired one of the old guys in the balcony who used to heckle kermit...they are looking for a replacement...you should apply!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2006 22:13
    BTW...I forgot...please stop misleading my readers. You know this has less to do with this story and more to do with the fact I only tipped you $3.00 the last time you blew me. I told you, stop scraping with your teeth and the tips will increase.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.08.2006 08:16
    who is misleading?, you lying turd, you know damn well all the whores think you are too fucking diseased and ugly to blow. Even if you do insist that she (or he) wears a blindfold.



    I told you I’m done here but I won’t let you get away with lying to your readers.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.08.2006 21:07
    Stalker? Obsessed? You are the one who keeps seeking me out. Can't stay away huh? What's next? Boiling a rabbit on my stove??? The "mind fuck" continues.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2006 07:29
    There’s only one thing worse than a liar and that’s a liar that ‘thinks’ he’s clever. A liar who is only capable of spouting childish untruth to counter rational argument.



    Why would I possibly want to seek you or your personality defects? Or for that matter why would I want to cook a rabbit for you? No, I don’t seek you out but I do pity you and any family you may have.



    I’m not the one writing about and glorifying rape, violence and incest, you are, are you writing from experience or perverted fantasy? Are you also into self-harm or is it just the thought of harm to others you revel in? (you sick fuck) You seem to be doing a fine job of making yourself look as moronic as your stories. Keep it up…



    You haven’t got the intelligence, resources or eloquence to ‘mind fuck’ anyone.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2006 21:14
    transitive verb : to haunt or excessively preoccupy the mind of .



    TRANSITIVE VERB: To preoccupy the mind of excessively.



    Sound familiar? Who is so pre-occupied they keep coming back here? You're the moron arguing with someone who, in your mind, lacks intelligence. What does that say about you? Mind-fuck continues.....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2006 23:30
    Message to the poster: If you want someone to vent your hatred toward, check out this girl's true stories: Casie/molester

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2006 03:24
    Ha Ha Ha - could it be that you have nothing more of interest to say. Have you resorted to copying word meanings from a dictionary? That is so sad.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2006 04:36
    To reader:--



    this is not hatred, it’s fun. in the area designed for the purpose I stated my opinion that the author needed psychological help.



    He seems to think that people can have no opinion if it disagrees with his own and began an aggressive tirade of abuse and derogatory comments, of course I responded. I then re-read the story and noticed failings, which I brought to public notice, he went totally overboard in response to that.



    I’m not sure from where he hails (I can guess) but his mindset is very similar to that of many U.S. American males. Which goes a long way towards explaining many of the problems in the world, why global opinion of the USA is as low as it is today and why he goes into overkill when people defend themselves from his aggression. Q.E.D.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2006 20:42
    Talk about hatred. This went from you thinking you could psychoanalyze someone over the internet, to you being a technical expert on a topic you acquire your knowledge through google to bashing american males and the u.s.a. Who is the one filled with hatred? Sounds like you could gain some peace from a bit of counseling. Shall I give you the definition of stalker now or do you have that one down?...and, thanks for all the ratings of 1...real mature.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2006 04:46
    Have you considered the possibility that I may have a valid opinion? Of course not, you are the one exalting rape, violence and incest, you can’t be wrong, your mind functions normally. Is this why you resort to lies and abuse in a futile attempt to belittle me? Do you really need of help? The hard part is admitting it to yourself, (everyone is normal in their own mind). Once you see that then getting help becomes easier



    Remember that it was you who promoted me to expert and then you went into gory detail to prove your manly expertise and spare your readers sensibilities



    As for ‘bashing american* males’**, they make it so easy



    * Is your arrogance so great that you think the USA owns the entire continent



    ** Lets be accurate, I wrote ‘many u.s. american males’

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2006 17:06
    OK, lets sort out a few points:



    A. You are doing a fine job of belittling yourself.

    B. At no time did the author ever 'exhalt' anything, he told a story. As simple as that.

    C. Of course he knows he needs help, we all do.

    D. The 'manly expertise' (boy you r-e-a-l-l-y hate men) the author has comes from life, professional experience, and old fashioned research. You should do some.

    E. The USA does own the entire continent silly wabbit.

    F. USA males cured polio, beat hitler, put men on the moon, and invented the personal computer which you are so hell bent on misusing. We're entitled to a little Arrogance.



    balls in your court Oprah, carry on

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2006 23:17
    "you are the one exalting rape, violence and incest, you can’t be wrong, your mind functions normally."



    You have it all figured out, don't you? Let's take a closer look at this:



    - You obviously read snuff. Are you abnormal?



    - You are bashing me for a fictional story of a fantasy written by me upon specific request FOR A WOMAN! Oh shit, how does that figure in your equation? Some women enjoy more than missionary or a cucumber!



    - You don't feel strongly enough about your opinions to identify yourself. Coward!



    - For some reason you are fixated on me. You told me 4 days ago you were done here yet you keep coming back... = stalker = kinda spooky



    - Opinions are like assholes sweetie...everyone has one and they all smell like shit. Take a deep whiff of yourself.



    MFC

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2006 06:19
    Ok, Now, First: Your sick. Two: so Am i

    Three: THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!

    And Fuck all the prudes who say otherwise

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2006 00:18
    Hmmm, WS, we get hacked and oprah disappears coincedence. . .probably, she sounded to dumb to write code. I think your stories are just peachy.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2006 03:11
    FUCK! wiped out three of my posts! FUCK! they weren't anything really important... just a rebuttal of Arcaic's version of WWII, which was also wiped out!



    Man if i could get my hands around that hackers neck.... oooo!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2006 03:47
    archaic you dick head, are you trying to blame me for hacking my own stuff – I shot you down with the truth about u.s. involvement in WW2, your “the usa does own the entire continent” (you arrogant twat) and the history of the invention of the computer.



    The hacker obviously likes the same u.s. propaganda you seem to be so stuck on and is afraid that the truth will shrink his dick.



    wickedsin – I was asked to read it (oh look same excuse) – some men respect women (not you it seems) – Following your veiled threat (you soon chickened out of that when I noted it – coward) I am so glad I stayed anonymous – Following my I’m done you began spouting lies about me – this is continuing because you are such a fucking lying bastard.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2006 14:30
    Some dates that archaic conveniently forgot



    Sep 3, 39:Britain, France, Australia and New Zealand declare war on Germany

    Sep 5, 39:U.S. proclaims neutrality

    Sep 10, 39:Canada declares war on Germany

    Jun 28, 40:Britain recognises Charles de Gaulle as the Free French leader

    Jul 10, 40:Battle of Britain begins

    Aug 13, 40:Airfields and factories in U.K. bombed

    Aug 17, 40:Hitler declares blockade of British Isles

    Aug 23/24:London bombed

    Nov 14/15:Coventry bombed

    Mar 11, 41:Roosevelt signs the Lend-Lease Act

    Dec 7, 41:Japanese bomb Pearl Harbor

    Jan 26, 42:First U.S. forces arrive in U.K.

    Jan 17, 45:Soviet troops capture Warsaw

    Jan 26, 45:Soviet troops liberate Auschwitz

    Mar 30, 45:Soviet troops capture Danzig

    Jul 1, 45:U.S., British, and French troops move into Berlin

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2006 21:56
    Q: how many europeans does it take to defend paris?



    A: No one knows because it has never been done!



    Enough said.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 00:13
    Between 1939 and 1941 nearly 10,000 us Merchant Marines died by U-boats supplying allied forces with arms and supplies.



    In order to understand history, one must keep it in context. In 1940, the US was coming out of the depression. It had only been 22 years since armistace and europe was embroiled in war yet again. US voters opposed entering the war. Nonetheless, after Japan attacked the US war was declared on both sides of the world. Within 42 months, fighting across two oceans, the US once again restored peace to europe and asia. What did they do with it? Communism. brilliant. DO NOT even insinuate for a split second that you would be speaking anything but german or russian if not for US intervention. Every time tyranny rears its head americans die fighting it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 01:40
    hmm, better check your facts... start at usmm,org,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 04:46
    Abuse, threat, lies and now sarcasm from wickedsin, the traits of a weak, immature mind and again he confirms his ignorance. There was a resistance who fought the might of the German army with little more than farm implements and home made weapons. You insult those courageous people you moron



    Archaic: the U.S. was not at war then, they were sitting on the fence supplying arms to germany as well as the allies. Before it was hacked I wrote that europe was grateful for U.S. (belated) intervention, yes you helped but did not do it alone. When tyranny rears its head the u.s. decides whom it is most advantageous to support



    The more this goes on the more my point about the arrogance of some u.s. males is made. It’s gratifying to see you prove me right

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 20:28
    Yes...that resistance did a poor job against the nazi blitzkreig. Let us not forget the berlin airlift. Let us not forget it was u.s. power that held the warsaw pact at bay for 40+ yrs & our power that led to the collapse of the u.s.s.r. Let us not forget the rest of the free world sucks the tit of the u.s. dod, relying on the u.s. for security and liberty. How strong would the european union be if its members had to spend a proportionate amount of their budget on their own defense? Let's not forget the u.s. bears the majority of the operating costs for the u.n.



    Sweetie...if you have the impression i am immature and weak minded, you are mistaken. You are simply a source of a quick laugh every couple days. Get over yourself! You aren't as sophisticated as you think you are.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2006 07:44
    At least the French resistance did not sit on the fence. Is French bashing still a national pastime in the U.S? why? Because they stand up to U.S. aggression. The Berlin airlift was an allied effort, Allied power restricted the Warsaw pact, Great people such as lech Walesa and John Paul II brought about the fall of the USSR. Is your propaganda machine working overtime?



    At least you admit you are a tit but typically U.S. to take credit for the work of others



    Would the U.S. spend money on something that was not politically advantageous?



    Who wants the U.N. disbanded whenever its stance goes against that of U.S. ambition then cries for help when they are close to bankruptcy?



    Learn ‘real’ history before shouting your mouth off.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2006 08:55
    I came to read a story (disappointing 2/10) before these type of stories are pulled down because of the new British internet violent sex laws (be warned). The comments are fascinating though and tell me why most u.s americans are so cock sure of themselves, must be the diet of distilled history they're fed in school. Sorry ws and posse, I was there in ww2, I'm guessing you weren't or you would not be talking like this. Yes you yanks took a battering and yes you did your bit but you better not think you did it by yourselves and never think you were any better than any other allied force. Better equipped yes, better at getting the job done, sometimes, better organised, definitely not. On average, pretty average and doing what needed doing, just like the rest of us. - PJ London England

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.09.2006 19:41
    Foot in mouth! For your information, my grandparents died in the birkenau gas chambers of auschwitz in late '42. It was "cocky" u.s. soldiers who later whisked my mother away to safety when she was an infant.



    when was the the last time european men died on u.s. soil liberating us from tyranny? Compare that to the tens of thousands who have died on your soil and those who continue to leave our country and stand guard within your borders.



    The "tit" is called a metaphor honey! You have such a penchant for accuracy, then be accurate. I did not call the u.s. a "tit."



    Contrary to what you feel, my family will be eternally grateful for the sacrifices of the u.s. and their "cocky" males.



    Check your facts again. The vast majority of aircraft in the Berlin airlift were u.s.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2006 14:42
    I’m happy for your mother, maybe I’ll tell you my grandparents story next time. However, your view of history is distorted beyond belief. 21 countries allied against axis powers before the u.s. got it’s finger out. The German war machine fell when British and u.s. forces joined up with Red Army units at the River Elbe. I am not saying you didn’t do it, I’m saying you didn’t do it alone as you have implied throughout.



    u.s. foreign policy is not based on philanthropy but its ‘needs’, be it oil (or other resources), military bases, to put down a people that have different values, pre-emptively protect itself from perceived threat or simply because someone in the cia lies



    When using metaphor it’s best to use a device that doesn’t make you look a total tit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2006 17:06
    And what I am saying is europe did not, and could not do it without the u.s.



    Take your head out of the sand; it will give you a better view of the world. Of course the u.s. makes decisions based on its' own strategic and economic interests. That's the basic premise of survival.



    Stop buying into the media hype and web blogs.

    The rerst of the world believed the same thing about WMDs.



    Here's a question. what has the e.u done to help with north korea or iran? what about the genocide sweeping several countries in africa? nothing...you sit back and criticize offering no real solutions, afraid of any confrontation or afraid to stand up and die for your values and beliefs. So, oprah, spout off quotes from google's search engine all you want. I guess it makes you feel scholarly..

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    03.09.2006 13:56
    Did I ever say Europe could not have succeeded without u.s. help? No, I disputed your claim and went on highlight the folly of your superiority complex and your lying nature. All the rest is academic, tools to reinforce my opinion about ‘some’ u.s, males. Reviewing the comments below I believe that you have personally proved me right. So who is doing the ‘mind fuck’? The reader can form their own opinion, you remember opinions don’t you, those things that you think are assholes,



    Some countries didn’t fall for the lies, the u.s. is still punishing them

    You sight genocide in defence of a country built on genocide

    There are countries trying to resolve these problems without threat of blazing guns

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    03.09.2006 23:53
    Ask jeeves does not make one intelligent. You are obviously stupid or brainwashed.

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    04.09.2006 00:17
    If you debate someone, pick a side. You can’t have it both ways. You piss & moan because the u.s. remained neutral in WWII until we were attacked. Then you bitch if the u.s. preemptively attacks a perceived threat (our perception, not yours; you don’t have a say-so) & criticize us for making moves that benefit our national objectives! Next, you try to tie one unrelated thing to another to prove some obscure point and think you’re mind-fucking me. It’ll take more than your asinine faulty-logic and asserted conclusions. Show me one major conflict in history of mankind not solved with war…most countries in existence today have a history of genocide or displacement of one race or another..it's human nature. Hmmmm? BTW…who is petra? A friend of yours PM'd me and told me to ask you?

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    04.09.2006 04:09
    Still trying to carry on this conversation? Oh How you must love me! I wound you up like a spring to prove a point and so that next time you want to spread malicious lies about someone maybe you will want to think about it first, you really are a tiny-minded individual with a dick to match. (Insults traded)



    Civilisation is moving on from its childish, school yard mentality and the u.s. is being left behind. It won’t be too long before you won’t be able to steal the other kids dinner money, shame you can’t see it coming



    Take a look at the research on people who use text style abbreviations in written conversation and their intelligence



    Don’t know petra, don’t know oprah, don’t use ask (dropped jeeves a long time ago, wake up sunny boy) and only use google when I need it

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    04.09.2006 18:17
    “A real diplomat is one who can cut his neighbors throat without having his neighbor notice it.”--Trygve lie, first Secretary General of the U.N. but I’m sure you knew him well. The "new world order" you fantasize about will never occur. It goes against human nature.



    Let’s discuss a few of your assumptions. You assume I am actually American. You assume I am actually male. You assume my responses are actually my true views. You assume I really give a shit. You have no way of knowing what is true, half-true, or plain bullshit yet you respond to everything I type. I say black, you say white. I say up, you say down. Hope you had a fun ride but I just realized something; this ride has a minimum i.q. and you don’t meet the standards. Sorry, you have to get off at the next stop. MFC

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    04.09.2006 18:35
    North korea, russia and chechnya, darfur, somalia, syria, iran, al qaeda, hezbollah, the men responsible for the madrid train bombing, the london train bombing, the sarin gas attack in the japanese subways, the men plotting to bomb airliners from heathrow, india/pakistan (kashmir), the taliban who still want to oppress women, those instilling secular violence in iraq and a host of other groups must have missed your memo on the "childish school yard" mentality.



    I suppose the u.s. is to blame for all of this yet I see no other nations making any real diplomatic progress. But wait...let me guess; diplomacy takes time, right?



    Predictions: diplomacy will fail with north korea and iran and american soldiers will once again shed their blood while most european nations stand by idly.

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    05.09.2006 01:33
    Fine Story, Like Your Rest.

    However Thats Not What This Post Is About,

    It's About The Person Who Can't Get Some Fuckin' Balls And Show There Real Name, That Person Is An Ignorant Peice Of Shit, And In All Honesty, I Bet It's One Of Those People Who Have Nothing Better To Do Then Argue, Just To Try And Prove There Right.

    Guess What Buddy. DROP THE GOD DAMN SUBJECT, Christ Your Reveiws Aren't Even About The Story! Your Just Blabbin' About Shit That No One Else Really Wants To Pay Attention Too, And Also, Your Not Mister Hardcore Just Because You Say "I Don't Use Ask, Google" That Just Means You Have No True Life. So How Bout You Go Pick Up A Football And Get Together With Friends, And PLAY SOME GOD DAMN FOOTBALL.

    As A Writer, I Know How It Feels To Deal With Ignorant Bitches Like Him.

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    06.09.2006 00:55
    Wow, are you still here? Jeeze, you're right WS, she is a stalker. Or at least a very sad lonely little person who probably lives for this thread. Thats quite a burden WS, you may be her only reason for living. Just think, this all started because she did not read the introduction to a story. Hilarious. They say those who do not learn from history are doomed to repeat it. If she is an example of the caliber of history taught in Europe today, I can already hear the tanks rumbling.

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    07.09.2006 00:21
    Oi lol I Think It's A Him, Because Quite Frankly, I Doubt Any Female Actuly Uses This Site, Just Weirdos. Well, Not All Weirdos, Just The Ones That Act Female. Which Are More Then Likely, Men!

    Dee Dee Dee!-Carlos Mencia

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    07.09.2006 08:18
    Carlos, are you the ‘typical’ u.s. male? arrive late, read only part of the text then start shouting your mouth off with inane comments and simply oozing arrogance. One thing in your favour, you seem to have spotted one of the anomalies here (eventually), See if you can spot any more, there are a few. Of those brave souls who knock me for staying anonymous you are the only one that has given a genuine name in addition to your alias.



    Archaic you too are late, we have already run the history aspect to the limit. See the first line of ws 09-02-06 - 17:06. I’ll explain the ramifications of that comment for your simple mind – ws now grants that you did ‘not’ do it on your own. When you wake up perhaps you should enrol for a reading refresher class.

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    10.09.2006 05:01
    Smart One, I Have Taken The DEE DEE DEE, From Carlos Mencia, And I Gave Him Credit.

    So Before You Start Your Bullshit Remeber This,

    Get A LIFE PLAY SOME FOOTBALL.

    FOOTBALL!

    And I'm Not American, German. Thank You,

    Fuckstick.

    -UnEarth-... PS I Didn't Arrive Late, I Just Decided To Comment Now.

    Once Again From Carlos Menica,

    DEE DEE DEE (AKA A Person That Wasen't Born Retarded Just Is)

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    11.09.2006 23:10
    You know, arguing on the internet is kind of like running in the special olympics. Even if you do win, you're still retarded.

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    12.09.2006 08:19
    The previous comment could only come from someone of limited intellect, with little or no understanding of disabilities in sport. considering archaic (great name for a has been) was/ is one of the ones arguing, very clever (not)

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    10.10.2006 14:17
    who the fuck is carlos mencia?

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    19.10.2006 16:52
    Is she gone? I miss her.

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    28.10.2006 15:37
    Carlos menica is so famous throughout the world that anyone with the intelligence of an American would recognise the name. I am being sarcastic, as someone on these very pages said - who the fuck is Carlos menica?



    Football?, (or as Americans call it, soccer or do you actually mean that pansy game of American football) – rugby is much more fun to watch, a bit like American football but without all the armour and breaks for a rest and chat.



    To misquote Terry Pratchett, I don’t need to get a life, the three I’m living already keep me busy.



    Nope I’m still here, (now and again) just busy with more interesting pastimes, glad you miss me though



    kiss kiss

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    28.10.2006 19:25
    Good god, you're worse than a case of herpes. Valtrex anyone? Rugby is fun to watch? Ever played it or do you just armchair quarterback sports like you do here? I already know the answer but look forward to your forthcoming analysis of my inferior intellect & pathetic life.



    I'd give anything to bump into you someday. I assure you that you'd not have the same level of courage you display behind your mask of anonymity. OMG...there he does again; the threats. Did you see that everyone? ws just threatened the little bitch again. I told you once before, no matter how sweet you are to me, I don't want to date you and no, you cannot give me a blowjob so stop the pm's! Oooops, ws just lied again. Bend over....I wanna show you what an Amercian cock in your ass feels like!

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    29.10.2006 13:29
    I used to play rugby union until age 12, then the rules said no females - that’s life…



    American cock anywhere? I’d rather eat shit…



    As for the rest of your diatribe you are repeating yourself (again).

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    29.10.2006 15:24
    Okay...I'll shit in your mouth if you prefer. I forgot, it's your mother that prefers american cock in her ass.



    I believe I have the right to repeat myself on my page. You are the one who continues to stalk me, returning time after time with your judgemental sermons and elitist attitude.



    So, here's a good old fashioned amercian quote: "go fuck yourself cunt!"



    Kiss kiss

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    29.10.2006 23:06
    Ya Know, This Is Gettin' Funny, Someone Believes Themself Better, Because There A Brit, "Oh Bloody Hell lets Get Some Tea And Crumpets"

    Oh And I Can Bet Any Amount Of Money Would Be The Comeback For Me Being German, "Killed Any Jews Lately?" First Off That's A Nazi.

    Second, Any American Would Know Carlos And It's True.

    Third Off, How Bout You Quit Tryin' To Act Tough Because Your British.

    And A Side Note To Archaic, Quit Trying To Steal Off Lines That Are Utterly Retarded In There Own Sense, And To Those That Use Them.

    Serouisly Brit, It's Called Football, The Rest of The World Calls It Soccer, It Get Right.

    Now Then Like I Said Before, Go Get Some Tea And Crumpets Or However You Wanna Spell Them.

    -UnEarth-

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    30.10.2006 14:07
    Ue, go eat knackwurst and drink piss beer and don’t try and putting words in my mouth. Throughout Europe, Africa, Asia and South America the game is known as or translates as football – read what I wrote! Maybe any American would know carlos menica but who gives a shit if he’s as childish as you and finally what has anything I’ve written here got to do with acting tough or does the sight of a few well chosen words put the shits up you



    Ws. Wow, rational argument (my sarcasm) your eloquent response must have lifted your intellect up to gutter level. So you get your kicks butt fucking corpses do you? All I’m doing now is replying to requests for my input. Is that an American quote? No - it derives from Saxon times; it must disappoint you learning that

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    30.10.2006 20:07
    Ever listen to Charlie Brown's teacher? That's who you sound like...blah, bla bla, blah, blah...



    Look at yourself in the mirror for a moment. What does it say about you if, month after month, you return to my story to argue with someone with "gutter level intellect?"



    Cunt can also be traced back to Old Norse (german), "kunta", circa early 14th century and some etymologists debate it's origin as being traced back to Macedonia. See, I can use ask dot com (formerly jeeves) too! No, I'm not disappointed. I feel honored to be blessed with your teachings.



    BTW....I liked the previous post you made in the forum.

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  • READER
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    04.11.2006 12:52
    Americanisms to stereotype non Americans? Why am I supposed to understand this reference?



    I am not choosy with whom I argue with if I disagree with them, it’s one of my more endearing qualities.



    One difference between us is that I know the roots of the words I use (in this case some 800 years earlier than the 14th century although the Macedonian link may be valid) whereas it seems that you need to look them up. Perhaps a reference library or even a good dictionary is preferable to the internet unless you are prepared to take the answers you find with as much salt as is needed.



    Which forum is that?

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  • READER
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    04.11.2006 22:57
    You make a feeble attempt to sound intelligent although you are fooling no one. Perhaps if you would get an actual education at a university, or as you Britons call it, a "Uni," it might help. You remind me of a whore who used to work a pub in Swindon when I lived there..she tried to sound intellectual but the harder she tried, the more asinine she looked.



    Please stop stalking me. You need some serious psychological help. Your obsessive behavior is indicative of more serious underlying issues and begs the question; if you are capable of this level of fixation over the internet, what are you capable of in your own neighborhood? You have a superiority complex andif you study root causes, it stems from a feeling of inferiority. Get help before it's too late to be beneficial.

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    08.11.2006 08:07
    At least I must be fooling you, is a double doc not enough. And with you helping me towards my third thesis it should be a triple by this time next year.



    ‘britons’ know a university as a university although the word is sometimes shortened to uni. In english american (contradiction there) are some words not shortened? what! They are? Yes, language evolves so don’t make a fucking big thing about it.



    Was this an actual prostitute or just some girl you labelled as a whore because she is female? And isn’t ‘asinine’ a difficult word for you? Did you have to look it up?



    Seeing as how you said please I will oblige but I reserve the right to respond to any crap, thanks for the fun.

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    09.11.2006 21:41
    Any institution that would lend any validity to a thesis or disertation drafted using unscientific data obtained through an anonymous e-mail exchange isn't worth the paper its doctorate degrees were printed on. So, your "I've been leading you all on as part of a larger social experiment" implication is lame!



    Yes, she was a real whore. I thought it might be you for awhile but then I remembered, she had all her teeth, unlike most educated and scholarly "britons."



    Anyone with more than a baccalaureate degree knows you do not start a sentence with a conjunction. Wasn't it you who made the comment shortening and abbreviating written communication is an indicator of a lack of intelligence? Some research you alluded to??? Does it not apply to your superior intellect?

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    13.11.2006 09:24
    I did say I would respond to any crap - the choice was yours. Did I say I was using this, no - I said you were helping me. It did not begin that way but some of your comments indicate unusual traits that relate to my work. Given the nature of the medium the information is anonymous and ethical. Do you remember anything about ethics from the time you used to be a real human being?



    Can’t have been me, never been to Swindon. Most academics I know have all (or most) their own teeth but they don’t go in for cosmetic dentistry in a vain attempt to improve nature as do many americans. You must have been hanging with a rough crowd.



    And finally, you claim to be an author so try and keep up to date with the tools of job.

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  • READER
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    14.11.2006 00:22
    Unusual traits, such as your dillusions of grandeur and attributes of a textbook stalker obsessed with an object of affection.



    Please, get help! Have you noticed nobody has come to your defense? What does that tell you? Let me guess, the rest of the world is screwed up and you've got it right.



    You need real help! You are beginning to make me fear for my safety.

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    22.11.2006 22:33
    Where'd you go? I miss you! seriously though, you are a worthy adversary and obviously not the average antagonist who slings mud just to sling mud. You have actually piqued my curiosity and, you'll find this hard to believe, I think I'd enjoy an honest intellectual conversation with you. Can you believe that just came out of my mouth (or off my fingertips)? I bet you just fell out of your chair, didn't you? Something about your responses and style tells me we are probably in the same line of work and share similar educational backgrounds.

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    28.12.2006 21:59
    Wow, ws, that really, honestly, caught me off guard. No, I'm not the "reader" you've been arguing with, just a reader. I'm neutral on the whole, since, technically, you both have valid points, since she's right that you've got problems (but so do we all), but then again, you did warn readers, so she's bloody well daft to've read it and then bitched. That said; it's not my cup of tea, but I'll be damned if I didn't like the writing.

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  • READER
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    31.12.2006 02:04
    Hi I am a new reader here and I just wanted to say that the person who wrote this was a very good writer, though it is not a subject I am very fond of it is skilled writing. I just wanted to ask this individual to come up with some new material with his unique point of view. I wont lie I come to this sight to read smut and find that many of the other readers don't like smut. Is this not a sight for erotic stories? So who gives a shit if somebody finds this hot. Reading a story about "monsterous things" is far better than performing those things in real life, that's why fantasy exists.

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  • READER
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    17.02.2007 16:10
    Dude it was pretty cool. though strangly arousing it was also pretty sad. Nice blend, keep up the good work

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  • READER
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    18.02.2007 04:16
    Very well written, although I don't quite understand how death could be sexually appealing to some. Death is something tragic, is it not? Although, I do admit, you do give a warning; "Introduction : If you do not like choking, strangulation, death, rape, or snuff stories, don't read this one!"



    My point is, if there is anyone out there who does enjoy choking, strangulation or death stories, I have many a mental health doctor to recommend. Seriously.

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    24.02.2007 17:40
    I'm an American male. Just thought I'd throw that up in the forefront of the rest of my post. I find myself to be cocky, true, but not because I have a cock and not because I'm American. No, I'm cocky, because I'm simply better than the majority of the idiots I come across in my day-to-day life. With that out of the way, allow me to say that I didn't care much for the story, but I did appreciate the writing. It wasn't the best I've read, but it's better than most.



    In the case of the unruly Brit, allow me to add that, via deduction of fairly simply logic, ingrained intuition, and an accute sense of perversion, I have a prediction: If Wickedsin and the anonymous "Reader" were given half a chance, they'd tear off each other's clothes and screw like rabbits!



    Now, I'd enjoy reading that!

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  • READER
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    28.02.2007 21:28
    Last post was mine, by the way...



    -Merc

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  • READER
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    03.04.2007 20:50
    sick bastards

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  • READER
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    13.06.2007 05:31
    the strory was not as entertaining as the comments, but i do like wickedsin's writing style

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  • READER
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    29.06.2007 18:58
    oh my! i was convinced to read this story by a guy in my psycology class. More specifically, to read the comments. I did read the story first as to fully understand the crap on the comment board. And as a 22 yr. old female, i have to say that i was intrigued by this story while at the same time deeply disturbed. However, i have to wonder why everyone leaving comments types eloquently their views but still sound like idiots? Am i not mistaken that this argument was about the content of the story and then progressed to a history lesson and then to bashing the great U.S.A.!! i am English and living in America and both places have their strengths and also their shortcomings, but is it really necessary to be so childish in your rantings? Keep the banter to the subject at hand good story!!

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  • READER
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    04.07.2007 17:05
    Man, I miss her WS. It sure has gotten quiet since she left. Two doctorates, I nearly fell out of my seat . . .

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    11.07.2007 20:38
    Good story. It was very well written. Kept my attention through the story and not a distint typo in the whole thing. I must point out though.... this story has the most intilectual comments I have ever seen for a story on this site.

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    26.07.2007 04:37
    like some commenters, this story was not my usual style. i jumped in and read it out of curiosity and found it was quite well written. i enjoy some of your other stories like 'The Violation of rachel' and would like to see more along that line. 9/10

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  • READER
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    19.08.2007 18:06
    While it seems most of the excitement on this board has long since calmed down, I thought I'd throw my thoughts in anyway. I can't believe that a comment was made about women not looking at stuff like this. I am a middle class, well educated woman. I purposely looked up rape erotica on this site. And I purposely read this story, even after seeing the warning. Silly boys...girls like sex too...

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  • READER
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    19.09.2007 15:46
    good for you,





    i love the comments and speaking as a well educated Second generation American immigrant living inEngland, I find this all very amusing. I origionally sided with wicked, but when he started bashing on about how the US was so f**cking great i rebelled

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  • READER
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    30.11.2007 00:16
    Firstly some of your wording seems slightly .. off, but respect for the topic matter 6/10



    That was a real shame that Ws turned a quite eloquent rant about his right to write anything he wants, in to stereotyped nationalist winge delivered with venom but little style.

    Also you really seem peeved that reader won't give her Id , but why is that a surprise, in a digital environment aren't all of us basically non-people defined by our shared and opposing interests.



    Also did anyone notice that WS said that he wrote the story "as it was" minus some identifying points, which means you were talking to the victim so what did you have a seance?!



    Reader, archaic did have a point, no one forced you to read a snuff story and this is a fiction site, you may find things that are socially not acceptable, polite or to your particular taste, sorry.



    -also i dont yet hav a login on this site but id be willing to get one to carry on this ... conversation

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  • READER
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    06.12.2007 13:54
    uhm wierd didnt get me horny or anything but very entertaining

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  • READER
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    07.12.2007 13:39
    Holy Cow! The comments were damn near as entertaining as the story. *just shakes head*



    About the story. Not my cup of coffee usually, but I read it anyway, even after the warning. I enjoyed the fact that it was well written, no glaring typos, correct use of grammar, puncuation and paragraphs. It also wasn't heavy on disgusting details while still being violent enough to satisfy those of us with an interest in reading such things.



    Just a comment after reading all the others. You'd have to be seriously deluded to think that it's only men who read these stories.

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  • READER
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    13.12.2007 20:30
    Oh my fucking god...What the Hell? I mean really. I'm sixteen and have more brains than "Reader"....I'm also female. I agreed with the person five below me...Girls like sex too you retards...And you don't have to be an American male to be dumb. You people are funny...Btw, I'd love to get this forum rocking again, it was interesting.

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  • READER
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    29.01.2008 00:55
    Wow, this conversation (read arguement) seems to have turned into something more than the usual "I just came in my hand"and turned hydra like into a different beast.



    Yes most women do like sex too and yes some of them do like kinky sex e.g. snuff porn and thats THEIR choice. However the problem for the 'maladjusted' element of this forum and un-fortunately society at large is realising NOT ALL GIRLS DO.

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  • READER
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    25.02.2008 04:32
    are you people retarded? this isnt a fucking forum, its a story comments page, so talk about the story not all of that other bullshit. and these stories are fuckin sick

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  • READER
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    27.02.2008 12:58
    Wow, this conversation (read arguement) seems to have turned into something more than the usual "i just came in my hand"and turned hydra like into a different beast.



    ((hehe =3 thats from reader 2 below me so im gonna make him happy and say UNO THING



    I just Came in my hand....

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  • READER
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    07.03.2008 02:21
    its a shame poor lindsay had to go. that was creepy. and very well-written.

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  • READER
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    12.03.2008 04:18
    I'm a new member here, 23 years old and female. This story was rather unique to what I am used to reading, I enjoyed the suspense I could near feel her desperation. It is very well written, cannot help but watch it in your mind as you read. Disturbing, but very entertaining and it gave me a bit of a stirring in my neathers lol. I would like to read more like this, I'm not always in the mood for this sort of story, but when I am I love it.

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  • READER
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    26.03.2008 12:16
    Damm, this is some SICK SHIT. I fell gulity reading it.

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  • READER
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    26.03.2008 20:24
    I'm a big fan a Wickedsin's work. I like all of his strories, and wish he would write one just for me.

    btw........if you're 16 YOU SHOULDN'T BE HERE!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2008 11:38
    good storie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 18:19
    I suppose I should apologize for my earlier outburst. When your a Marine who lost half his leg, three fingers, one eye, and his right nut protecting his country and finds out he couldn't protect the only family he had left, it tends to have an affect on his mental stability. And I also realize I said 7 years ago when it was 2. My girlfriend is the one that died 7 years ago and everyone else I cared about died when the WTC fell.

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  • aegis
    30.05.2008 08:26
    Jesus, the below post seems to be more interested (if its true obviously) than anything already posted.

    But erm... I assume you we blown up in either Iraq or Afghanistan, so you might be protecting your country's geo-political interests but thats not protecting your country.
    Also dude, get some serious psycological help you sound madder than a box of frogs

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 10:15
    THATS SOME FUCKED UP SHIT!!!!!

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  • franczhesca
    07.06.2008 08:21
    One time I saw this Nine Inch Nails video with all this torture shit, like a guy getting butchered slowly and having his teeth ripped out with pliers. It really messed with me, and since then, this is the type of shit that I can really get into. I'm a woman, but I don't wanna be the one tortured, raped, and killed. I just fantasize of holding the bitch down for ya.

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  • luvmylittlepuppy%40yahoo
    22.06.2008 14:21
    idk y i love this stuff... it just gets me soo wet O.O

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 02:56
    WHOLE LOAD OF BULLSHIT, YOU ARE SUCH A FUCKED UP MANWHORE! CANT BELIEE PEOPLE ACUALLY ENJOY STUF LIKE THIS! SOME LOAD OF BULLSHIT! YOU SUCK YOU FUCKING MANWHORE, BASTARD, MAN SLUT, GAY ASS!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2008 18:05
    I loved this.. people here are idiots. Obviously there is a difference in fantasy and reality. Just because someone gets off to this stuff doesn't mean they condone it/would do it in real life. Surely, you would rather someone calm their urges like this by reading a sex story, as opposed to keeping it built up inside and making it worse/possibly act it out.. If you're too immature to realize the difference in fantasy and reality, then maybe you shouldn't be on an adult website.
    I would love more of these :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.12.2008 19:34
    i cant explain this 2 u.............. when i was leaving school late one night from the pool someone came behind me and forced me into my car and raped me and stole my purse and put me in the trunk and drove me 2 an abandoned gas station and caught my car on fire, luckily my car was an 07 jaguar so there was a release hatch in the trunk and i got out, like 2 minutes later my car blew up.... i was lucky 2 of survived....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2008 02:49
    Nice job, though I was surprised she died in the end...so sad...
    I like how you worked the dream sequence. Should add more dialogue; it would liven the story even more.

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  • Morana
    03.02.2009 00:11
    Loved it. Very hot.

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  • Coldcase187
    09.03.2009 22:23
    This is one of my favorites. I just read it again and it turns me on every time. The part where he is telling her to die is very sexy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2009 20:25
    I guess it's well written but honestly he left so much DNA behind, he would be caught after the first one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 10:14
    woah... that was intresting

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2010 00:46
    Haha, sehr schoen, gut gemacht.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 09:57
    8P4nGa This is one awesome post. Will read on...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2014 01:01
    EkVhwP Really enjoyed this article.Really thank you! Cool.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2014 19:20
    A8ZsRj I really enjoy the blog article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 21:01
    D4TPGh Thanks so much for the blog.Really thank you! Will read on...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2016 02:36
    Y'all are all so fucking dramatic, it's a fucking story and tbh nobody gives a shit what you think about it, read the tags of his/her story, or better yet the title. Stfu and stop acting like little bitches, it's a story and if you don't like this kind of shit, why the fuck did you read it? Now, run along back to your Mommy's little bitches.

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  • borota
    28.07.2018 03:14
    To the last Anonymous reader:to be honest,nobody gives a shit WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT ANYTHING!And,for your own fucking information,NOBODY LIKES EVERYTHING HE/SHE READS!NOBODY!So,YOU SHUT THE FUCK UP,STOP TELLING ALL THESE FUCKING NONSENSES and RUN ALONG BACK TO YOUR MOMMY AND FUCK HER GOOD,you IDIOT!

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