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Sex games

Rapest scoping elementary school likes girl and boys

Author: imanster

Date: 28 May 2006

Boy, Fiction, Lesbian, Rape

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Obviously it's recess time and elementary school kids are running around and playing games as they would normally. Unfortunatly on this day a crazed pedifile rapist was on the hunt for your holes to insert his large penis into and also try out his new sharp razor dick cover which he invented on his own with the desire to fuck some while simultaneously tearing there insides apart.
The antisipation of what he was about to commit had his blood pumping out of excitement. Sitting down at a bench just at the edge of the playground at a bus stop seemingly waiting for the bus but really he was scoping out the 5th grader girl who had on a little skirt, brunette hair, long sleeve black shirt on, flat chested but very beautiful face which was so innocent but attractive. He waited to see if she is going to enter the bath room, meanwhile his cock is throbbing and he is debating if he wants to slam is dick in her mouth with his razor dick glove which basically had razors super glooded all along side it's shaft and slips right over his cock for giving the ultimate pre teen orgasm.
the bell rang and as soon as the kids started running toward there classrooms hi noticed she ran into the bathroom. He quickly got up and ran across the field to where the bathrooms were located. Still undetected he look around and slides in the restroom.
To his suprise there is a feet underneath both the stolls and without any hesitation he goes through the first stoll and before this defenseless blonde 8th grader which he had gabbed before she could even let out a squel. He quickly ties her hands behind her and threatens to kill her if she makes any noise while pressing his over grown fingernail up against her shorts hard enough to whare she could feal it pearcing her virgin womb. Crying and full of fear she listens to this strange man who's towering white supremosous prison tattooed coverd body and face was standing over her.
The other girl is obviously finished due to the toilet flushing. He hears the little girl wipping her butt, this immediately has his mind picture is cock pounding into her little dirty butt and his cock went rock hard and without and control he pushed the door open forcefully to see this little girl with a look of horror on her face, so frightened screams could not even come out. This is the little 5th grader that he was originally planning for and now he has her but not much time before people start to worry whare these girls are.
He pulled the little 5th grader brunett by the hair after gagging her mouth into the other stoll so now both of his soon to be deverginized bloody princesses were standing side by side.
I pull out a large blade and clearly warn the girls of what i will do to there breast if the scream. They nodd in a jesture to show cooperation. I remove the gags and the 5th grader is sobbing which gives him reason to fuck her mouth first to shut her the fuck up. He grabs her haid and holds it in front of his zipper and tells her to unzip him. She does so shaking, as soon as the zipper was down his dick expoded out of his pants and hit her in the hace. His large 9 inch red cock was uncircumsized and dirty as all hell.
When this guy isn't fucking little girls he enjoys fucking little boys without ever cleaning the shit and blood smears off his cock. He loved being nasty and also a man who was only aroused by vicous sex acts and should be in Prison but currently he is running from the law. Insane no just has a thirst for young ass raping and snuff sex scenes.
before she even knew it she was choking on a this rapist dick and could not breath. He pushed his cock a few inches down her little mouth and as soonas he let back she puked her lunch up on his dick. He said to her you must really not like this blonde girl because she has to lick this off of me. Me motions to her to lean forward and start clean up the little 5th graders mess. while she is licking his shaft gagging and on the verge of throwing up herself he is undoing her short buttons and the quickly rips them off her body. she had a little white cotton panty which she had peed in aparantly which unknowingly was one of this rapist favorite flavors. Kiddie pee, he dives down and starts sucking the pee off her panties and she is screaching trying not to cry, and all of a sudden feal a sharp nail pushing through her panties into her your virgin pussy. He then pulls her panties down and she hits the toilet seat with her face due to her hands being tied behind her back. He orders the little brunett to get on her beack inbetween his legs and beneath this little wet 7th graders pussy. He reaches down grabbing the girl by her cheaks and raising her mouth to this virgin masterpiece. He orders do not stop licking no matter what. If you have to hold on to her but dont stop licking her twat until i say stop or else...
the 5th grader proceeds to lick the olders girl pussy who is on the ground with her face in the toilet bowl now and her arms tied behind her back. Exciteded the rapist proceeds to insert his cock into this tiny womb and despite the tightness and the unwilling hole he used all his strength on his first thrust pushing through her whole while she experiences a ripping sensation so painful her body goes into shock. This is a problem for the rapist he likes his victims to be fully aware and awake so he leaves his dick barried inside the little blonde 7th graders no blood dripping pussy waiting for her to regain conciousness dunking her head in the tolilet bowl a couple times speeded up the process and she was wide awake and present which gave him the green light and not to make her pass out again he dosnt slam her as hard but proceeds to slowly pump in and out of her. his cock in great pain due to her extremely little pussy assured her whole must be on fire. He starts puping her faster and faster looks down and sees the little brunettes face covered in the older girls blood which erupted from her recently de virginized vagina but to his surprise she was licking away like her life depended on it. No amout of pleasure could take away the pain this little girl just experienced but she is moaning now, her body filling with pleasure mixed with pain giving her a gulty concionce but anable to stop the pleasure ahead. "Get up here little girl" grabbing the bruntett 5thgrader in the little skirt by the hair and blacing her head above his cock with access to the blondes butthole which was still a little muddy and smelly but without any other choice and fear of being stabbed by this huge cock which is devouring the girl who is 2 grades ahead of her could only make her imagine how much wose it woluld be for her tiny body. the 7th grader could not be over 95 pounds she was very cute and was most likely one of the more popular 7th graders. her little breast could not have been any bigger than a b cup, her flowed down passed her face into the toilet but it was obvious this was a very pritty 7th grader. Now her ass is being eaten by the brunett 5th grader he takes his dick out finally and she unexpectedly did not want it to leave her. now her strethched hole is spread open and she kneals thare on all fours totally fucked and helplesy s.
The rapist cant hold back his anticipation anymore and he slides on the razor covered glove for his cock his his first victims of the razor terror which he couldnt wait to see the destruction it will do to these pritty little rich raped girls. real quick he grabs the 5th grader and slams his cock all the way down hor throat terring skin all the way down her esophogus. The razor sharpness did not rip through the skin as he was hoping but instead sliced clean all the way down it's path and even momentarily not even seeming to have cut anything but soon after her mouth starts filling up with blood. He shoves her face in the blonde girls pussy muffling her bloody screams with the blondes already dripping pussy meanwhile her screams start causing vibrations against the little bald pussied blond girls cunt which send unstopabble shots of pleasure through out her body. the rapest notices this and wanting to make her orgasm he sticks his pinky in her little butt and pushes the bloddy girls mouth farther in the blondes strethed pussy while jamming his finger up the 5th graders ass the squeeze more screams of pain which are being converted to orgasmic pleasure for the blonde 7th grader who is now completely given up any fight and has no hope of escaping. He finally grabs the 5th graqder by the hair lifting her head and also does the same to the blonde girl pulling her head out of the toilete and forcing them to kiss. The blonde girl so beaten becomes angry at the 5th grader who forced her to experience her first orgasm while being raped. Suddenly she grabs the little brunetts head and starts kissing her real hard and reaches around to her pussy and immediately tries shoving 4 fingers up in her. After a couple miniutes of struggling the 7the grader had her fist slamming up the little girls pussy and the girl was bleading but obviously also cumming. The rapist turned on by this puts his razor glove back on his throbbing uncurcumcized coke and firecefully grabs the these brunetts tiny ass cheeck spreqading them as hard as possible almost splitting to poor girl oppen but gives off on the ass cheeck just as he slides his cock strapped with razor blades into the her tight unwilling ass hole which was actually most likely only possible due to the razor blades cutting open her butt alowing his dick in. The blonde sees what is going on and feals that she did this to the 5th grade girl but she could not live with being raped so now this fith grader falls onto the floor bleeding and slowly losing life. Satisfied with his work on the now gone brunette he turs to the blond swings her around fiercefully by her arm the slides on his razors over his cock right in fornt of her face and oreders her to suck his dick. She tries butt immediatetly cuts her lip and starts crying hoping to god he is not going to ramm theis razor modified penis down her mouth and as soon as that thought ended he reached around his head with his fingers through her head and proceeds to push her little pink lips down his razor sharp knife. The design of the razor gloves actlully enables his dick to be mostly exposed with the razors only being a trio to on the sides and on on the bottom. The bottom razor slices the blondes tongue deeply straight down the middle and proceeds to cut her more severely as he starts jamming her head harder down on his joyfull blood covered cock he manages to get down her throatat and proceeds to pump her mouth which is now gushing blood but the cuts are not deep enough to kill her quickly instead she will have to wait intil he decides to stike her pussy or her ass with his razor cock which would then cause internal bleeding but instead he removes the razors and starts pushing against the blondes tiny ass hole so hard she managed to push out a scream which indicated her ass was officially being raped. The blood covering her body also works as a lubricant while he is pumping her ass he starts banging her pussy and he want sher to cum befor ehe will be satisfied with his sinful actions of cruelty and evil. Reaching around fealing for her clit he starts rubbing it fast and percisely hitting her spot with his dick deep inside her ass she screams out a orgasm and cum comes squirting out of her pussy pushing some of the blood to the side leaving behind a clean streak of shinny cum covered pussy surrounded by what looked like a massacure but the man who has done this he had loved these young girls for they fulfilled his sexual desires and he had no guilt do to his lack of control and insananity driven mind. He is already looking foward for the next victims which will be a boy which will have to pay for he owes this rapest his life and will soon be in a similar situation which to innocent youog girls were victims of rape which left one tore to shreads b ut alive to live her the hoorible memories which she screamed out in pleasure to and left another brunett girl convinently dead


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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 02:54
    good story but do you not use your spellchecker:

    there instead of their: antisipation instead of anticipation and pedifile i mean catch your self on.this was an 9 but it was ruined by the spelling 5/10

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    READER 500
    31.05.2006 02:58
    WTF, razor blades? Dude are you fucking wacko? No one could cum with razor blades just being stuffed down their throat, maybe you should think of horror writing, cause this was more grusome than anything else.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 03:14
    man what a fucking wack job (barf barf barf ) sory that was fuckin sick nasty totaly startaling and i read some weard suf and that is the groosest ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 03:28
    YOUR A FUCKING ASSHOLE. I HOPE YOUR SICK STUPID AS IS RUN OVER BY A BUS. DICK HEADS LIKE YOU ARE THE FIRST TO CRY LIKE A BITCH IN PRISON WHEN SOMEONE DOES WHAT YOU TYPE TO YOU. STAY OUT OF JAIL CAUSE YOU'LL GET WHAT YOU DESIRE. TO BE RAPED LIKE THE BITCH YOU ARE. AND SPELL CHECK NEXT TIME, YOU DUM FUCK!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 06:37
    wtf...thats nasty as hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 06:43
    you are one sick fuck. I hope you get raped & die

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 10:33
    you are a fucking sick shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 11:49
    You are one sick motherfucker. I hope you die in a pool of your own blood while a crazed blackman is masturbating on your rotting corpse.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 13:31
    holy hell dude why would you write this let alone post it I mena DAMN

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 13:34
    this guy should be the author of the next saw movie perhaps, a pity he couldn't even write a script with the amount of spelling errors.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 16:07
    umm, holy shit, that sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 16:23
    I sincerely hope that you get raped while in jail. It is disturbing to know that someone could even think these thoughts. Please kill yourself before society has to kill you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2006 17:01
    *yawns* learn to spell first, okay?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2006 05:40
    ughhhhhh.......

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2006 17:49
    What the HELL... You were dropped as a child weren't you!?! Or were you not held enough by your parents, OR held a little to MUCH... if ya know what I mean..... That's just sick.... Get HELP dude...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2006 00:40
    fuking sick, still very nice, that razor-bladed dick will be 1 day as famous as the one on 7even...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2006 01:40
    why the black man got to be the crazed and mastubatin

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2006 11:25
    u are a fucking sick batard u should be fucked to death by a man with razors on his dick. why the hell would u write something like this u sick sick motherfucker.

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    READER 500
    02.06.2006 13:44
    Please seek help from the nice people at the mental health institute.

    While you're at it, get some spelling and grammar lessons as well.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2006 17:46
    SICK FUCKING IDIOT! YOU GO NEAR MINE AND YOU WONT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT BUBBA AND HIS BROS IN THE PRISON>>YOULL BE SIX FEET UNDER THE GROUND! SICK BASTARD!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.06.2006 23:05
    wow that is really sad and demented! It also sucked. Another thing is work on your grammer and spelling!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2006 00:16
    Wait a sec..was this supposed to be arrousing? Try more along the lines of modd killer.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2006 09:27
    This is so bad it is not worth commenting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2006 09:57
    u sick fuck, obviouslt u dont have any experience with men or women u shud try suicide u fuck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.06.2006 02:54
    Man, talk about a complete lack of grammar and spelling. Or should that be "a compleat lak of gramer and spelig"?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2006 07:22
    My cock, it was about to spasm,

    I was getting close to orgasm,

    Till this story I read,

    Mad it go soft in the head,

    This crap should be buried in a chasm.



    mt

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    READER 500
    10.06.2006 04:39
    Psh. You're absolutely sick to be driven to write a story like this. Learn to write, would you?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.06.2006 17:08
    You fucking dumb ass weido...Get a fucking life...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 16:19
    i liked it hot an nasty

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.07.2006 13:24
    You are a sick SOB. Come to my house and I'll ease your pain....permanentaly!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.07.2006 00:44
    sick son of a bitch!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2006 06:58
    Guess what asswhole? You are too sick to live in society. 991, yes, i'm calling to..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.09.2006 22:18
    ok its sick but would make a good horror movie

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.09.2006 22:58
    cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.10.2006 01:19
    u are a real sicko

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.10.2006 06:16
    OI COCKHEADS USE R READING SEX STORIES AND UR TELLIN HIM TO GET A LIFE? DUH HATE TO BE A FUCKHEAD....think next time dickheads

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.11.2006 20:10
    very awsome story man i got my self of with my pussy 5 times that was hot keep writing and like other people say ignore the pepole that think it's bad they shouldn't have read it dumb mother fuckers well great job keep up the good work



    emily

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2006 14:03
    thats sick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.12.2006 02:43
    who wrote this?.....evidently it must have been someone in elementary school.......grab a websters dictionary next time.....might help.........

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2007 15:23
    what a sick story you mother fuc*** come around where i live and ill mess you up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 11:47
    Certainly not going to vote on this - illiterate !

    Can't make up your mind as to tense - or if it's you or the rapist.

    You need to get an education - and help.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 20:57
    U fuking prick wat the fuk 5th grade, u have a sick mind u dip shit i bet ur a lonely nerd who didnt get laid in high school or eva for that matter, i bet seaguls target u in the streets, and i bet even g.w.bush looks down on you. well fuk u and anyone who enjoyed this abomanation,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.02.2007 21:04
    your a sick individual that needs help.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.02.2007 10:58
    lern to fucking spell you pice of dog shit. why would anyone want to read this crap

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2007 15:12
    Now this, now that....where's the transitions?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 15:27
    odd story.with all the piss poor spelling hard to read

    2/10

    thanx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2007 09:43
    You need help for real man. What are you? Are you even human?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2007 13:10
    u r sick in the head

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2007 10:21
    i wish i knew what this story was about, but i dont and dont want to know u SICK PERVERTED SON OF A FUCKING TWISTED WHORE. ure spelling isnt even 5th grade level. what grade could u have possibly completed? or u went to the absolute worst school in THE WHOLE WORLD. razor blades on ure dick? let me get a hold of u. i will tie u spread eagled, naked to 4 spaced trees, coat ure body with molasses, and dump fire ants on u. then ill watch and laugh as the ants get in ure nose, ears mouth stomach, asshole, dick, just everywhere on u and eat u FROM THE INSIDE OUT, and listen to u scream YOU FUCKING MAGGOT. then id see how u like getting fuced in the ass with a razor stuudded dick. NOTT!!!. i wouldnt touch u with a ten foot pole for fear URE SICKNESS would rub off on ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2007 10:47
    AND U REALLY CANT SEE EMPHASIS BECAUSE FOR SOME REASON CAPS DIDNT SHOW UP ON PREVIOUS COMMENT. AND DID U NOTICE, I CAN SPELL U ILLITERATE SON OF A TWISTED FUCKING WHORE. BOY, AM I GLAD I DIDNT FUCK URE BITCH MAMA!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2007 00:28
    couldnt even finish it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2007 18:42
    Give me a minute to scoop my brain out of my head with this spoon, I have to get rid of the memerory of this story. I think I'll miss all the Dead or Alive girls though. Oh well, it's worth it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2007 14:37
    drained nuts: fire ants? The stupid fuckwit needs to be tied to the ground in the path of an army of driver ants.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2007 04:56
    you sick fucking perverted pig i hope you get sent to jail where Big Bubba the big black guy will make you his bitch and rape you you sick sadistic asshole you seriously need help no wait theres no help for you someone needs to cut your dick off stick a 10 inch razor studded dildo up your ass and rip you to shreds so youll die a slow an painful death

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2007 22:29
    holy shit... what the fuck is wrong with you?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2007 07:38
    Damn... People are going crazy on the guy for writing a rape story. Even though he is a horrible writer and should never write again, I'll agree with that part. But dissing him for writing a rape story, when it says "RAPE" beside the title is not something you do...



    My point: This writer needs to never write again... And you people dissing the rape stories need to just not read a story that says "Rape" or "Nonconsensual sex" beside the title. Save yourself the brain ache if it bothers you so much.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2007 18:14
    that was so horrible dont even bother writing a story again you fucking bastard

    poor kids

    even if it's just a story you should be ashamed

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2007 11:30
    Man, what a sicko. How can somebody think of that we should put him in jail just just thinking about it!!!! This sickens me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.03.2007 22:30
    wtf is ur problem? ur a sick bastard and who ever thinks this is a disgusting fag! i couldnt even get through half of it!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2007 18:14
    very very bad writing. Don't even bother writing a new story. I think we can all do without the snuff aspect.



    Overall a -11/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.04.2007 16:11
    i have some marines who whod take care of you fuck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.07.2007 01:43
    i'm going to need a fucking memory wipe of this section in the part of my head



    i've read sum fucked up shit ut this one takes the cake



    i'm with 16:11 on this one

    shoot this piece of shit no i got a better idea

    bash him on the head with a jar of pickles throw his now seizuring body in the back of a car shoot him 6 times (revolver) in the heart and drive the car into a 50ft deep lake so that this motherfucking mutt dies right their but in a suffering way



    "looks around" Hi i'm tom

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.07.2007 13:18
    Sick bastard!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2007 23:37
    dam nigga thats fucked 4 real

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2007 13:12
    That, is so unbelievably wrong, first of all, that you could even think to write about that. It is a rape story, so I understand that, but it is still, just wrong. I mean, the writing isn't that well off, and the grammar as well. But the thing that I can't get past is how you could think of such a sick image and then actually write about it.

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    READER 500
    26.08.2007 03:50
    that was sick man the one guy is rigth di not write a second story u need help u bastard if u write any thing like that her ur fucked in the head may the was way over my limits and i can take sick shit i am with all the people before me in what they all have to say man i like most of the storys on this site but i read ur all the way though and i hope you don't live near kids or i meet u some day i would kick ur ass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.09.2007 11:00
    Man this story was fucked up in so many ways!

    You are indeed a sick twisted fucking person as alot of readers have already posted.

    But what I find funny as hell the folks talking about how sick and twisted you are .

    Are the ones wanting to do sick and twisted things to you because of your story.

    Like pour molasses on you and let ants eat you or fuck you with a razor studded dildo!

    And they are the ones calling you a sick twisted fuck!

    But your story which really I mean really sucked!

    Spell check thats all I can say damn!

    And also get some fucking mental help quick!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2007 02:51
    I GOT A FEW SPC. AND BLK. OPS. FRIENDS THAT WOULD LOVE TO GET THERE HANDS ON YOU.

    YOU'RE A SICK FUCK. I'VE CAME ACROSS SOME NASTY SHIT IN MY DAY, BUT I WOULD LOVE TO SHOW YOU WHAT WE DO TO GUYS LIKE YOU.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.09.2007 06:11
    Learn to spell correctly asshole

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.10.2007 00:20
    u sick and twisted fuck i wanna put a leech in ur ass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.11.2007 10:43
    So hard right now...i love it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2008 21:22
    i just stopped reading at razor dick cover in the second line.

    GO 2 HELL AND DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2008 17:50
    the worst author in this xnxx website. u sick-minded-and-violent-min... somethings wrong wif u.

    1. watch the grammar.

    2. im dizzy cusa de endless amounts or writing.

    3. DUDE A GUY DOESNT PUT A RAZOR GLOVE ON THEIR FUCKING DICK! ITS PLAIN WRONG.



    what im really trying to say >=> YOUR SICK-MINDED!!(no offense)

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  • edd+howes
    27.04.2008 08:52
    Learn how to spell you sick bastard.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    01.06.2008 04:26
    that was fucked up as shit.
    but it got me hard, tho.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2008 20:28
    Wow this is so fucked up man.. I was hard befor I read this now i'm as soft as a baby's bottem.. Man you are one sick fucker and I hope you fucking get raped by a razor glove.. If I was you i'd fucking kill myself man..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 13:34
    U sick mother fucker go to hell

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  • davidsender
    12.08.2008 22:18
    keep your facts straight.. first she is an 8th grader then she is a 7th grader and you spell like a third grader,different paragraphs would be nice,but would not help the lack of talent

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2008 05:43
    You are a sick-fuck. I'm not sure if this was supposed to gross people out (ala 'The Aristocrats'), but oh my god, what a fucked-up story.

    If this is some kind of fantasy of yours, then I really would like to see you in jail. People like you deserve nothing more than being put in a jail-cell. Oh, other than death, anyway.

    I cannot believe the lack of quality-control on this site. I think that I will be petitioning the Webmaster for such a system.

    Utterly disgusting...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2008 16:16
    These are evil stories in jesus name i say stop

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2008 21:53
    dude this was the most fucked up story ever
    how can u not be in jail

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  • miggie
    21.11.2008 23:59
    i really hope that fucker dies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.12.2008 18:55
    that's fucked up, I was hard before I read it too

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.12.2008 17:34
    wo naty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.12.2008 17:35
    ay boy who was hard i like to kiss u but not have sex call me my name is shericka 449-9323

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2008 01:38
    do the world a favour slice ur balls off and die that would be a great ending to your story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2009 12:07
    fucking dog ,,,hell is to good a place for a person that can make up a story like that i hope you die you fucking animal ,how can a sick fuck like you be safe in this world i urge anyone who know the person that put this story up to tell any one and everyone your name with the hope some mad fuckers find you and kill you real slow ..bastard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 08:57
    spell check works...it was almost unreadable

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2009 21:26
    chapters 2to 6 are needed be tommrow shelley

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  • ann
    ann
    30.10.2009 05:59
    next chapter soooon please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 03:30
    U sick fuck u need help

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2012 03:15
    This story is fucked up. I hope you get raped and rot in jail someday.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2013 03:23
    To all the haters of this story, you clicked it, read it, and hated? This isn't nonfiction guys. It's pure fantasy. Now, I personally found this appalling but really guys? Telling the author to kill himself over a FANTASY story that some people find erotic is unnecessary.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2013 21:18
    to the guy before me. Is it a harmless fantasy to talk seriously about raping little kids at an elementary school. Sorry but ur as bad as the guy who wrote it. And to him, go jam a fucking axe into your esophagus.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2013 01:50
    this was just revolting, disgusting, vile, horrid, and many more adjectives.
    fantasy is one thing, but this is a step way too far beyond that line.
    honestly? what would make you want to write something like this?
    are you okay?
    do you need a jacket? and perhaps a soft room with no window?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2014 10:07
    Wow I can't believe all you people are being so negative and rude towards this writer because you all clicked rape and you all clicked the story and you all read it if you did not like it then you would have known after the first paragraph as for myself I'm a 25 year old female who thought this was quite a good story yes it could have used a little spell check and possibly some punctuation but other than that all in all it was a good story non fiction come on people if you don't like something then don't read on don't read it at all haters going to hate hate hate all day long

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  • WayRadSteve
    10.12.2025 03:22
    How dare you throw logic, reason and reality against the over performed, transparent projections of self righteous rage of these oblivious malcontents?

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