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Sex games

Her Very Bad Dog!

Author: HannaH_Girl

Date: 28 June 2006

Bestiality, Fantasy, First Time, Rape

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This is my First Story, so I’m still a novice. Constructive criticism is welcomed but please don’t nag/complain/flame. Your criticism will help me to decide weather to write the next chapter or not.

Thank you and enjoy reading. Hannah XxX


It was a warm summers night as per usual and as the sun faded there wasn’t a sound to be heard except for the occasional twitter of woodland animals hobbling off to there night-time retreats. Hannah walked on to the balcony wearing nothing more than a silk lilac coloured thong and matching push up bra. With her dad working nights at the police station she could get away with whatever she wanted, and plus She had nothing to hide since there wouldn’t be anyone around until late morning when the farmers would be out in force. Sewing seeds and rounding up sheep. So walking around in her underwear or in most cases totally naked was normality. She thought about how privileged she was as she sat down at glass table and rested her head on a folded sweater, her 36D cup perky breasts pushed firmly over the cold glass. A good school, an expensive house, a loving father and an amazing backdrop to survey after a hard days work. Yep this was the life, although she was missing something. As her friends put it “some male interaction” she had gotten herself a few good looking boyfriends but they all wanted the same thing. she had experimented with herself and some of her more adventurous friends, and she loved it. That tingling sensation she got when she played with herself, she couldn’t get enough. After about ten minuets of fantasising she woke from her day dream and ran her hands slowly and softly up her thighs and down onto her pussy. “aww not again” she sighed as she felt a warm wet patch, half of which was new and half of which was from a previous “session” she had given herself not more than twenty minuets ago. Becoming more alert to the rising moon and cold night air she stood up and walked casually inside closing the French doors which led to her room behind her. After a moment of locking the doors and closing the curtains she looked around the room slowly, “Jack!” she shouted. “Here boy!”. As a rumbling sounds echoed through the hallway outside her room she reached up her back and unhooked her bra letting it slide over her erect nipples and bare flesh to land with a soft thud on the floor next to her bed. “There you are, What have to been up too?” she questioned as a Bulky and Heavily built German Shepard bounded through the door and straight up to her sitting by her feat. “that’s a good boy” she said happily and with a cheeky grin on her face, “you stay there I’m going for a shower, kay?”. after giving the hound a brief pat on the head she turned to the shower room and walked in.

After what seemed to be a day of getting groped and touched constantly at school her ass felt rather sore and she pulled her thong down her long legs slowly and carefully making sure to avoid the sore areas before turning round and turning on the shower with a click. Meanwhile the dog had moved and was now laying on the floor of the shower room, head up and staring at Hannah with a look of amazement and confusion as if
Seeing his master take a shower was something new to him. Hannah turned around and smiles softly and want into the shower holding a breast in one hand feeling the need to relive herself once more. Feeling the hot water run down her back and legs made her relax greatly, and so after about two or three minuets began to work herself over. Running one of her hands up and down her tight pussy and using the other to pinch her nipples sharply over and over again, she moaned softly as she inserted her middle finder into herself to find her hard clit and finally after about five minuets of her attacking her clit she moaned loudly as she came to a blinding orgasm. This attracted jack who was trying to see what she was doing through the frosted glass of the shower. She finished up, washed down and stepped out of the shower wrapping a towel hung on a nearby peg around her waist. “what’s wrong jack?” she questions her K-9 companion as he ran around her trying to figure out what all the commotion was about. After about thirty seconds of useless searching he gave up and walked back into Hannah’s room, jumped on the bed and lay down.

Hannah followed quickly as she hummed to the tune of back in black, and stood in front of the dog bare breasted and soaking wet. Jack was by this time staring at her and sniffing the air as if it were his dinner time. Hannah just let out a giggle “you’ve had your dinner” and began to dry her long brown hair with the towel that was previously wrapped around her waist. Jack had taken a special interest in her today there was something strange about her, an aroma. He lay on the bed his eyes fixed on her tight virgin pussy still soaking wet before moving forward slowly putting his nose in her crotch. “woah!” she stepped backwards “nah-ah not for you” she smiled again and walked over to a chest of drawn in the left hand side of the room.
After a moment jack got up determined to get what he wanted, whatever that was. He walked over to his master and sat behind her as he bent down to get another thong and bra from the third draw up. Her pussy still wet, a second past and he made his move moving forward and thrusting is tong up into her pussy violently. She gave out a little scream and jumped up, foolishly stepping into a corner of the room. Jack moved forward with a growl, not letting her escape from her corner without giving him what he wanted.
Hannah kneeled on the ground never knowing her bulky friend to have acted this way in the past, “go to your bed!” she demanded but it was of no use he was approaching fast and bearing his teeth. “go to your bed NOW!” she shouted again but this only made jack more determined and he moved forward again reaching Hannah’s knees and staring straight at her crotch. “NO!, NO! DON’T YOU DARE!” he moved forward for the last time parting Hannah’s knees with his strong jaw. “NO! STOP-IT!” she cried in a state of terror as this was something she had never experienced before. Jack began thrashing around her pussy with his tong violently, taking time to taste his master. While he was occupied Hannah got up and ran towards her bedroom door. The sudden movement and loss of his “goal” angered the hound which gave chase moments later. Getting no more that a few feet before catching sight of razor sharp teeth she tried to run faster. Jack hot on her trail and much faster than she would ever be ran past her and blocked the doorway. Grinning with sharp teeth he made her slowly move backwards near her bed, he then advanced until he was back at her pussy to which he began tasting again Hannah being distressed by all of this grabbed a pillow off the bed and began to swipe it at the beast that had forced her into this predicament. The dog knew what to do and snapped back at her left thigh. Not hard enough to make it bleed but hard enough to let Hannah know who’s the new master. Hannah fell to the ground and began to cry as he kept licking her pussy going deeper and deeper into it. After a minuet or two she finally plucked up the courage to make another run for it. And without a moments notice she was off in the direction of the French doors the dog however just sat down as if he knew in her frustrated state it would take her ages to unlock the doors. A moment passed and Hannah lost control tripping over the same silk bra she had discarded earlier. While she was on all fours trying to pick herself off the floor he made his move walking up behind her and mounting her growling into Hannah’s left ear as he did so. She froze by this point not daring to move an inch, as the tears flowed down her cheek and onto the carpet. Slowly this 220lb beast tightened its grip around Hannah’s waist and move up her back still growling as he did. She was frozen scared to move and scared to react to what was happening. Another brief moment passed and she felt something warm against her ass. Closing her eyes she braced herself and tightened her body. She could feel this thing, whatever it was slowly move down her ass and onto her pussy lips. With jack giving a final grown he trusted forward pushing his 12” monster into her tight virgin pussy after a second of thrust Hannah’s body shook with indescribable pain as the beast of a dog ripped backwards and forwards through her hymen. Her body now in indescribable pain collapsed and she feel to the ground with a thud banging her head off the ground lightly. Jack lost his “goal” for a second before finding it again on the motionless wreck on the floor. Each thrust brought more and more pain, all Hannah could do was lay there and accept it. Jack pounded her insides over and over again watching as she screamed and cried with agony. A short period passed and jack was still at it, although now this sensation had gone from a sharp pain, to, To something like she would get when playing with herself. As the moments passed the pleasure got better and better as the sensation in her body. Noticing that jack had now calmed his growling she got up on all fours slowly making sure not to dislodge the beast in fear of making him angry again. Feeling a stream of water ripple down her leg, she looked under her belly and down at her thighs which were patted in light shallows of blood. She had read in self care class that when having your first time, you will bleed. So she ignored it for now and went back to concentraighting on her first time. A few more minuets passed and she began to come close to an unrealistic orgasm something she had only dreamed about. Jack who had now been on the job for several minuets was close too, and a few final thrusts later he did. And as soon as he did Hannah did, both Hannah and jack stuck in motionless orgasm, Hannah froze before falling back to the ground as she lost consciousness for a brief moment while the orgasm consumed her body. Jack meanwhile had cum, and was slowly pulling his hard shaft out of her body after filling her up with everything he had to offer. After a long period of ten minuets Hannah got up slowly feeling her legs could collapse at any moment and made he way slowly and wobbly over to the shower room.

She looked at herself in the mirror and at the bruise on her forehead. And then down to her blood stained thighs. She looked in horror before throwing up at the thought of what she had just done and made her way quickly into the shower. While washing herself down she could see the dog she once called her friend through the frosted glass and began to cry again while washing herself. After she had finished she grabbed a second towel and dried herself fully before going anywhere near jack as the thought of all of this happening again would be her worst nightmare. Once dried she cautiously and slowly walked back into her room and searched for jack. He had gone now. Into another room of the house to rest after his “little battle”. Hannah noting that the dog had left the room ran towards the door and slammed it shut locking it behind her. As soon as she locked it she turned her back to it leaning against it for support as she felt her legs go all numb. Moments later the phone rang and snapped Hannah out of her crying. She walked over to it and picked it up slowly. “h….h-helo?” she queried in a shallow tone of voice “who.. I-I… is’ It?”, she paused for a second before thinking about putting the phone down. “hello dear, sorry If I woke you” the voice replied. “ohh d-daddy… hello”
“are you ok sweetie?, you sound really quiet…”
“I’m… f-fine you just woke me is all” she said as she thought about the past thirty, forty minuets. Thinking it would sound stupid and perverted if she told anyone what had just happened. “ahh ok sweetie, listen uhh I’m sorry but iv got to take this business trip to London tomorrow so I wont be able to come home for a day or two, will you be ok by yourself?”. Hannah dropped to the bed and began to cry softly not letting her dad know anything was wrong. “yeah d-daddy ill be fine. Ill see you when you get home ok?….”
“ok sweetie take care and if you need anything give me a call, love you”.
“bye daddy, l-love.. You too…” she gave out a cry as soon ad she put the phone down and then looked around the room once more making sure jack wasn’t around. After making perfectly sure she lay down on her bed and closed her eyes, trying to push out the bad thoughts and the horror. And as soon as that happened she was asleep.

The next morning she woke up with a splitting pain in her forehead she rubbed it gently and felt a large bump probably from when she hit her head on the carpet the previous night. As soon as she felt the bump it all came flooding back to her, the pain, the blood, but most of all her former friend. As soon as jacks name appeared in her mind she swung round and look around, giving out a scream of terror. That monster was back. And sitting at the foot of her bed. She look at the door which was wide open. And her heart sank. The beast it seems, was back for round two… … … …


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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 10:21
    not bad has potential

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 12:38
    "220 lb. beast"!!! with a 12 inch cock. Honey, either you got the it wrong about the breed or that hound was the largest german shepard who's ever lived.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 19:04
    shitty pure shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 20:22
    Dumb Stupid Dumb

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 20:24
    this is fucked up !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 21:46
    The Bitch isn't smart enough to LOCK the Fucking door?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 23:22
    she did lock the door, the dog got out stupid... good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 03:05
    "Hannah noting that the dog had left the room ran towards the door and slammed it shut locking it behind her." then all of a sudden the dog manages to get in? this is really fucked up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 03:38
    not the greatest story but alright over all you gave to dog to much of a human personality which doesn't work but at least your trying cause i'm to scared to post on here and also maybe your next story should be between humans it might work better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 12:25
    ok im scared but da story was nice an stuff but weiried to me ive neva seen a dog wit 12" an things shit i havent seen a man wit 12" haha ive seen 9" on a man an 6" on a dog but not 12"!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 19:23
    go girl go write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 20:24
    great story. but if the dog was out and she locked the door, how did he come back

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 01:51
    It has potential, but it's buried very deep. All the basics, like spelling and punctuation, need work.

    Basic details need work. Dogs don't have razor sharp teeth. They have strong jaws, but they don't have teeth like sharks. I don't think that anyone makes a D-cup push-up bra. German Shepards don't weigh 220 lbb. K-9 is a fanciful hominym for canine, not a real word.

    The scenario is a little far-fetched, but around here that's hardly a problem. If you organize your thoughts and your words better, you could develop a decent style. Please have someone proofread your next chapter.

    =Dreamer=

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 02:37
    Nice one, girl. Would love to read your next chapter.

    xoxo

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 08:09
    Good story Hannah, i look forward to the next chapter.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2006 08:47
    You call Jack a former friend, and you said at one point you was enjoying it, so in the next story lets get jack back to being your friend.

    nice write!

    Doc.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2006 16:41
    learn to endent a little bit more makes for less eye straining read. oh also story line not so good ok not good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2006 17:09
    TNHATS ONE FUCKIN SUPER DOG THATS A GOOD STORY PLZ RITE ANOTHER



    P.S DONT FUCK WID THIS DOG

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.07.2006 00:25
    You seem to have a knack for story telling, but you need to know your subject. You evidently have never seen a dog fuck or you would have mentioned a knot. Your spelling needs work. Its tongue not tong etc,etc. 12" even with the knot inside her would have been and exaggeration for a German Shepard. Most German Shepard’s weigh between 90 and 110 lbs. DON'T QUIT, I THINK YOU COULD BECOME A DECENT WRITER.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.07.2006 21:25
    Over all, it was pritty good for a beginner. Though the spelling was rather hard to make out at times and the discription wasn't too grand, I'd have to say it's quite a good story....but I think you need to learn more about beastility and the different between dog and human cocks....overall made me wet good job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2006 18:31
    Grrrrreat!!! Loved it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.07.2006 09:55
    Wow that was a good story but I wander if there going to be a part two of it is the dog will be your master lover after that encounter with him, areyou steel have him fuck you again ,little wench*

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2006 12:37
    Awesome first story. I loved it. Gave me a huge hard on. I also really liked your reference to AC/DC. I too am a HUGE AC/DC fan. I think it was cool (and brave) that you used your own name.



    PS: I added you on msn, so I hope to talk to ya soon.

    Peace my hard rocking amigo.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 05:09
    #¤&0Dog

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 19:14
    a

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 02:31
    dude this is an awsome first storie my first sucked i hope u get better at writing these stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2006 18:38
    Very nice one.

    There should be anal in the second part. There will be second part right?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2006 22:33
    I think its time for randy feelings to occur in part two. Hannah cannot satisfy herself and Jack once again becomes flavor of the month. Great story. But use a dick-tionary and read what you write more carefully before publishing. By the way. Try to see a doggy video before part two. I think you will realise why and probably enjoy.

    envious uk

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 13:11
    it was ok but if she had load of boyfriends and experimented with them and enjoyed the feeling why is she a virgin? makes little sence but it was ok story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.09.2006 01:26
    Awesome for a first story. You used good word usage but you need to work on the spelling and grammar. Other than those two little things I found the story to be very good. Make a sequel

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.09.2006 22:33
    when are you going to make another one?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.01.2007 15:29
    loved the story............lots of mind blowing sex, with the dog taking what he wanted, and the girl forced to give in............keep writing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2007 18:04
    great story. a former girlfriend lost her cherry to the family dog. unpleasent to say the least-the first time

    after that he became her fulltime lover

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2007 21:13
    Good story and keep writing. I only have few suggestionsquestions: One, 220 pounds is one huge dog that would be abnormally large for a Saint Bernard or Mastiff much less a German Shepherd. Keep in mind bread to weight ratio or just call it a giant shepherd looking mutt. Mutts are easy ways out. Second, how did dog get door open? What kind of door knob? Great opportunity for suspense if you have the scratching wake her and then as she cowers in fear the dog opens the door. And last I’m curious if her father is a cop why does he have to go to London for business? With all that said I really liked it and eagerly await more stories especially a sequel.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.05.2007 01:35
    This was a great story, I have read plenty of first time writers and by fare you are the best at this point. dont let people influence you 2 much on what to write about in your second part, just let it take you where it goes. the last person to comment sums up the problems in this Ch. have fun with it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.11.2007 19:46
    Is this even possible? To be raped by an animal?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.12.2007 17:16
    dont know, dont care. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.12.2007 18:09
    I really wanna know.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.02.2008 12:32
    well, if the animal gets frustrated enough, it can act abnormal, and in the situation described here, it certanly did..



    good story though.. 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.02.2008 03:26
    not bad id rate it a 6.5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2008 23:32
    *smiles* I would love to read a second one. You're very good, though you need to work on your paragraph structure. That appears to be a common occurrence on this site. Other-wise: 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2008 19:35
    that is good for your first time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2008 07:16
    lol you should start "concentraighting" on your spelling, grammar, paragraphing etc....
    Otherwise great story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.03.2009 23:29
    Not bad at all. Work on your paragraph structure and capatilization. Also, watch your run-on's . Most of all, keep writing!! Practice makes perfect, and you have talent.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2009 22:01
    Not bad work.
    I know a woman whose 14 yr. old brother started fucking her when she was 10 yrs. old. She said he fucked her every day, even when she was having her periods. (she'd started them when she was 9, which he didn't know until after he'd fucked her three times and pumped his cum in her) When she was 11, he fucked a load of cum into her and then made her get on all fours and suck his cock while the family dog licked his cum out of her pussy. She said the next thing she knew, the dog had jumped up on her and instantly found her pussy with his cock. She tried to get away but her brother held her there and made her let the dog fuck her until he came in her. He made her let him fuck her two or three more times, that night. He was turned on by it so he made her fuck the dog again, the next time... and the next.... After being fucked by him a few times, she said she grew to enjoy having the dog fuck her. Her brother and the dog took turns on her, from then on.

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  • rachel_7113
    07.11.2009 19:24
    Very Good, I Enjoyed It.

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  • Big+Willy.
    11.05.2010 18:36
    You have good basic style but please learn to spell and watch out for the different forms of there,their, they're,etc. A good way of checking if your story reads well, is to read it out loud to yourself, that way you know if it makes sense. When you are writing, you know what you mean, but other readers may not get it. Best of luck , stick at it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2010 07:25
    There were a couple typos. And I thought her dad was a cop? Why is he going on a business trip to London?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2011 23:04
    it's okay but watch the grammar and add more details

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2011 01:39
    That addresses seevral of my concerns actually.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2014 18:25
    spelling mistakes all over the place but like other people I would like to know how the dog was able to unlock the bedroom door other wise not bad for first attempt good luck

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