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Math Teacher

Author: Story_guy00

Date: 7 August 2006

Lactation, Fiction, Mind Control, Voyeurism

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Here is a little story I am writing for fun.....all people and
places are fictional...if you wish to comment, please do
so......


It was just like any other day for 20 year old Jason. He woke up, got dressed, went down for breakfast. Just before he got downstairs he heard his parents yelling again and his dad leave for work. His mom was sitting at the table drinking coffee and as he ate he asked her what was wrong....she said "Nothing...you know your father...when he is late he gets cranky". Jason shrugged and finished breakfast.

On his way to the local university, Jason was just sort of daydreaming, not really paying attention to anything when he decided to cross the street.......well, he should have paid a bit more attention because he walked right in front of a car coming down the road. Well the car almost stopped in time, just throwing Jason back a little bit...just enough to make him fall down. He got up and told the driver he was ok and apologized for daydreaming and walked away.

When he was almost to school, he felt kinda weird, his head did not hurt even though he did hit it on the pavement, but it was kinda numb, and sort of buzzing......he ignored it but could not concentrate all day at school. The rest of the day continued as normal, as did the numb buzzing.

The next day started basically the same way. Showered, got dressed, parents fighting, breakfast....but that is where the similarities stopped. He again asked his mom what was wrong and she again said nothing, but as she tool a drink of her coffee, he
could SWEAR he heard her say "He hasn't fucked me in three months". Jason almost choked on his breakfast which startled both of them, because he THOUGHT she said that, and because she figured he COULDN'T have known what she thought. He figured it
was his imagination but thought he'd do a little test. So he told his mother that she and his dad need to go out more...have some private time....she looked up and smiled and said she agrees then thought "yeah, private time in the bedroom to cool down this constantly wet pussy of mine". Again he almost choked, and ran out the door before she started asking questions.

As he was walking he walked by a guy and his dog, the dog was pissing against a tree and he heard the guy THINK "Dammit dog hurry up!" He passed a guy waiting at a cross walk in his car staring at a school girl crossing the road and heard him THINK
"Damn! What an ass". By the time he was in his first class he was going crazy from all the voices he heard, and some of the stuff he heard them saying. By lunch time he had realized that he could narrow it down to just people he was looking at. He was also noticing that the numbness and buzzing was getting less.

His next class was math, he enjoyed going to math class, not because he liked math, but because of the teacher. Mrs. C, The Math Cow, as all the kids called her. Mrs. C was a very nice woman, very pretty, down to earth, great sense of humor, and what the students didn't know, was perpetually horny. Well as it turns out one student was about to find out just HOW horny.

Jason took his seat front and center as usual. Mrs. C always seemed to smile at him a lot, and he always smiled back....maybe too much sometimes, just imagining her in various
stages of dress, and of course, undress. Thinking about how he would make her feel so wonderful, and of course, she would make him feel like never before. The main direction of his stare, as always, was her very large chest, even larger now that she has
recently had a baby. Of course, that is why all the kids call her the Math Cow. Jason often imagined how large they would be unrestricted by all the conservative clothing she wore, and often had a hard on by the end of class.

After Mrs. C gave out the days work, she sat down at her desk and started marking some tests from earlier in the day. Jason was trying very hard to read her mind, but could only get little bits as she popped her head up periodically. It was all basic math stuff so he figured maybe if he asked for some help he would have better luck. He raised his hand and asked his question, and purposefully stared directly at her large chest while asking. She answered his question and asked if anyone else had questions. While she was looking for more hands he was able to get a more direct look at her and couldn't believe what she was thinking.

Mrs. C was thinking to herself as she looked for more hands, "That little prick, if he keeps staring at my tits, one of these days I am going to keep him after school, sit him down and strip naked so he can get a real eyeful. Oh yes, they I bet he would get all hard and want me to suck his hot young cock for him. Yes, wouldn't that be so nice....."

Jason couldn't believe it and asked to be excused to the bathroom. Once there, he went into a stall to jerk off. In about ten seconds he shot a huge load of cum all over the place.
He cleaned up and went back to class, still very horny. There was no real excitement for the rest of the school day, or at home that night so he went to bed early.

When Jason woke up, the buzzing and numbness was all gone, and he felt very refreshed, and full of energy, must be the extra sleep he thought. Since it was the weekend he laid in bed for a while enjoying that comfy feeling you get when you just wake up. Eventually, he got dressed and went down for breakfast. He said good morning to his mother and asked where dad was. She told him he was down in his work room working on something for work. She thought "Couldn't even take some time on the weekend to please me!"

Jason almost expected this so he did not seem startled, and just thought to himself, "So go down there and MAKE him!" His mom looked up suddenly, as if she just had an amazing thought, and told Jason to get some breakfast......she's going down to
talk to dad. He thought that it HAD to be a coincidence, but wanted to try one thing.....and thought to himself "you should take off that baggy old robe first....maybe look at least a little more appealing" He was amazed when she threw the robe on
the chair, just leaving the nightgown on. He could see her nipples poking through the thin material. Seeing this he thought "Give your nipple a little pinch" and naturally, she
did.....just as if it was all normal, then headed down stairs.

Jason couldn't stand this, and decided to head out to the mall....IMMEDIATELY! Once at the mall, Jason walked around picking up all sorts of thoughts, and tried to think of where he could start his fun when he passed a small shoe store with nobody
in it accept for the young girl working there. She was probably around 18 or 19, he went into the store and they said the usual greetings and Jason proceeded to the rear of the store. While Jason was just looking up at the shelves, the girl came back and asked if he needed some help.

"I am looking for something like these, but every time I get shoes, they do not seem to fit right. Do you have one of those foot measuring things?" She told him to sit down on the stool while she went out back to get it. When she came back, she knelt down and pulled her skirt down to keep it from riding up, and measured his foot. "A size 8 1/2." Jason looked at her and thought to her, "Next time you bend down, do not worry about your
skirt, let it ride up." She grabbed a pair and knelt down again, this time the skirt rode up to her waist giving Jason a view of her skimpy, red lace panties. This made his cock instantly hard and as she looked up to ask how the shoe fit, she noticed his
hardness. He could hear her think, "Damn, look at that thing, I can see I will be giving my clit a good workout when HE leaves."

Being a quick thinker, Jason instantly asked her if she had the same shoe in black? He also thought to her, "When you go out back to check, finger yourself to orgasm, and take off your panties and bring them back to me." Five minutes passed and she returned, very flushed looking, and handed him the shoes with the panties stuck inside one. Jason tried them on, and told the girl he was going to look around some more but may be back for them, and left her there, flushed, breathless, and panty less.

Jason spent the next little while just wandering around picking up peoples thoughts, most were people complaining to themselves about prices, not being able to find anything, rude or ignorant people. Occasionally he came across a horny housewife wondering around the mall, thinking about how much they were ignored at home, and found these were more common around the lingerie store. He sat on a bench outside the lingerie store and just read the minds walking in and out, the men were humorous he thought. Most were thinking of the sex they would be getting when the woman in their life opened the gift they just bought. One man even came out thinking to himself how sexy he would look in the bra and panties he just bought for himself!

As Jason was sitting there, almost ready to leave when he noticed his math teacher, Mrs. C walking down the mall towards him. He hid behind a plant and watched as she walked right into the lingerie store. He couldn't believe his luck, and watched her from behind his shelter. She was looking at bra's on a stack that was up against the window so he was able to pick up her thoughts...."now.....do they have it here this time......36C ...no... 34B...YEAH right.......38B....no ....36DD......no...... damn.......40D..... no....... 38DD..... close........damnit, why do they never have 38FF?" Jason almost fell of the bench,
38FF.....holy shit he thought! They are bigger than he imagined. Mrs. C went over to the sales lady for some help and he could hear what the lady thought when she asked if they had any 38FF. "38FF damn lady, are you some kinda cow or something?" This caused Jason to laugh out loud. What are the chances she would think of that.....guess it is obvious! The lady showed her where to find the size she was after and Jason instantly got an idea. He thought to her, "you are in a hurry now, pay for it, then go up to the second floor family washroom to try it on." Jason thought of this because a guy at school was thinking about watching women in the bathroom there by standing on the sink in
the single men's washroom, moving the ceiling tiles to the side and looking through the fan vent. (Damn he loved this mind reading thing)

As his teacher was buying the bra, Jason practically ran up to the next floor and into the mens washroom, up on the sink, and moved the tile just in time to see the door opening. His heart was beating so fast, he was sure she must be able to hear it. Mrs. C put the bag down on the counter and lifted her sweater over her head revealing her massive mammaries. Jason almost passed out, they were absolutely huge! She reached behind her and undid the five hooks holding the massive sling in place. She bent forward and let the bra slide off her shoulders and off her tits.

What she did next caught Jason totally off guard. She reached into the bra she just took off and removed two pads, one from each cup, and brought them to the sink, squeezed them and some fluid dripped out of both. She then ran them under the water and rang them out again. She put them down and grabbed her right tit with both hands and started massaging the nipple. Then it happened. Something shot out of it.....no way.... she was
actually milking her own tit. Jason couldn't believe it and came in his pants right then and there.

Jason couldn't take it and climbed down before he was caught, and left. Walking home in a total daze, not believing what he saw. Sunday went by as a normal do-nothing day, just as every Sunday does. Monday, Jason got up for school, showered, dressed, and went down for breakfast. His mom was on the other side of the room and had her back to him. He sat down and looked at her....she was getting something out of the fridge, and was thinking to herself, "God.......i can't believe I came that hard. He has never eaten my pussy like THAT before. Suddenly, Jason realized he was not looking into his mothers eyes....he could read her mind, from behind......AMAZING!

Thinking quickly, Jason wondered if he could change her thoughts without being face on. He thought to his mother "Take off that ugly big robe" And she did instantly hmmm interesting.....he nipples were both hard. Jason thought to himself, if only she couldn't see me in the room.....HEY! Maybe that would work.

Jason thought to his mother, "You do not see me here, you think you are all alone" She looked up, and basically looked right through Jason. Jason had to try something....he couldn't stand this any more! "Your panties feel too tight, you should take them off" To Jason's amazement, his mom took off her panties, giving him a quick glimpse of her pussy. "You are very horny mom.....you should finger yourself right there on the
counter." His mom jumped up on the counter and pulled her night gown up to her waist, and started rubbing her clit, with Jason right there in the room. Jason's cock got so hard, so fast, that as soon as he touched it he came all over the inside of his pants. As he looked up after realizing this, he saw his mother throw her head back and scream just as she had her orgasm. Jason ran upstairs, changed and went out to school. He then
realized that he actually couldn't wait to get to school, and this made him laugh to himself. Once at school, he decided to try out these more potent powers he discovered this morning, and as he walked down the hall, thought to different girls......lift up your skirt... she did......pinch your nipples.....she did.......go over and kiss her.....she did.....Jason was amazed. As he was walking around, he wasn't paying the best attention,
and walked right into something very soft. Jason looked up, and realized he had just walked right into Mrs. C's chest.

Immediately, Jason remembered the washroom, and the lactating tits. He excused himself for not watching where he was going then thought to her that she should go into the teachers lounge as soon as first period started, which was ok because it was her off period, and usually went there anyway, and almost always had the whole room to herself. She smiled at him and walked away, headed for the lounge, and Jason followed close
behind her. As they got to the room, Jason thought to her "When you get in the room, you will be totally alone, and will stay that way until next period."

Once they got in the room, Jason locked the door and closed the blind. Mrs. C went over to the couch, got out her marking book, and started correcting some papers. Jason thought to her, "Your bra is feeling very uncomfortable, you should remove it for
this period." Mrs. C looked up......shifted her bra this way and that, then looked around, seeing nobody else there, she unhooked the five hooks in the back and pulled it through one of her sleeves. Next Jason thought to her, "Open your blouse and squeeze your nipples a little bit"

As she did this, milk started to dribble out of each nipple, making Jason's cock very erect. Jason just had to start stroking it, and stripped from the waist down. As she was milking
herself, Jason couldn't help himself, and walked up to her and put his cock right in her mouth. This made her realize he was there of course, but he thought to her that it was ok, and nobody would find out.

She continued to suck at his cock, savoring the taste of the young man as she was sucking him, he reached down and started to play with her tits.....he was mesmerized by them, and couldn't keep his hands away from them. She was a very talented cock-sucker and in no time he felt himself close to cumming. What finally pushed him over was when she reached down and squirted milk up to the underside of his cock. As soon as he
felt that milk hit him, he pulled out and shot his cum all over her wondrous tits, most of it seeping down into her cleavage.

As she backed away and was about to clean the cum up, Jason thought to her that she thinks it would be sexy to go to class with his cum still squishing between her tits. She shrugged, and reached to put her bra back on, then her blouse. She looked at him and asked him "Why did I just do that? I know better than to do that with a student" He first thought, then said out loud, "You have wanted to do that for a long time now, and it will not be the last time will it?"

Mrs. C looked up and shook her head no.....this made Jason very happy, and started to think of all the nasty stuff they could do, but was interrupted by the bell signaling the next class. Before Jason left he thought to her that she will not mention this nor will she think about it until Jason wants her to. He went over to the door, pulled up his zipper and walked out, leaving her there in a bit of a daze, but otherwise unknowing of what just happened.

Next class for Jason was Gym, which his best friend Brent was in as well. Jason couldn't hold this information back anymore and had to share the news of his new powers. For gym today, they were just running laps out on the field, so it was a perfect time for him to talk all about it and not worry about being heard. Before the class was half over Jason had told Brent the whole story right up until the end of last period, and Brent just couldn't and didn't believe him. Jason asked if wanted some proof, and of course Brent said yes. So....to get the point across very quickly, Jason thought to Brent that he should take
his t-shirt off, of course he did without thought.

Jason asked him why he just took his shirt off, and Brent simply said he wanted to. Jason told him that he MADE him do it, but Brent still didn't buy it. Brent told Jason to make one of the girls remove their top. They looked around the field for the perfect candidate. Jason wanted to look for somebody that wasn't so obvious so there would be no chance of getting caught. He noticed Jeana sitting on the back steps of the gym. Jeana was such a pretty girl, honor roll student, and very very quiet. Jason motioned to Brent to watch her, and sure enough, she stood up, turned towards them, and up came the shirt! Then she pulled it down, sat down, picked up her books, and went back to work, like it was something she did every day.

Well, poor Brent could have been knocked down with a feather. He didn't believe it, but knew he just saw it. The bell rang, and they went back into the school for next class.
Next class.....Math. Jason and Brent were the first ones in class. You could just barely see a slight discoloration just below her tits where Jason's cum had leaked down to, then dried. Jason told brent to get ready, cause this was going to be the best math class ever. He thought to Mrs. C that she was alone in the class for the whole period. As each student came in the room, Jason though to them that it was just going to be a study
class, and they would be so busy studying, they would not notice anything else happening that class.

The bell rang to start class, and Mrs. C looked up and seemed surprised that there was nobody in the room with her. Jason thought to her that she wanted to get naked, but first go over and lock the door. When she got back to her desk, she stripped down. Brent was going nuts......he told Jason to make her play with herself....Jason did just that....He thought to her, "Clear a spot off your desk and hop up there....lay down and start
playing with yourself, show us what kinda stuff turns you on".

Mrs. C climbed up, got comfy, and started to run her hands all over her body, caressing her huge tits, flicking her nipples, teasing her cunt hairs, running the length of her slick slit. She finally settled one hand at her pussy, lightly teasing her clit, slowly rubbing it back and forth, occasionally sliding a finger deep into herself. After a bit of this, she brought her juice soaked finger up to her mouth and sucked her fluids from her finger, then back down for more. While she was doing this, the other hand was massaging and playing with her nipples, not enough to make them squirt, but there was a slight trickle of milk running down the side of her left breast, pooling on her desk. She brought her finger back up again, but instead of going back to her pussy, she grabbed her left tit with both hands and lifted the nipple to her mouth and the young men could see by her facial movements, that she was literally sucking the milk from herself. After only a short time sucking her tit, her whole body began to shale and she erupted into a mind-numbing orgasm, and then collapsed from exhaustion.

Brent blinked a couple times and finally came to his senses. He could not believe what he just saw. "You have to let me fuck her! You just HAVE to!". Jason looked at him and said "No way! She can suck you off, but *I* am fucking her." The went over to
her, and Jason made her aware of their presence, but assured her it was ok. Brent sat himself on the edge of the desk, facing the black board. Jason sat in her chair so she could ride him as she sucked his friends cock. Both men were so excited that in no
time at all they were ready to cum, and before they could, Mrs. C asked if they would do something for her......

She assumed her previous position, lying on her desk, both boys standing over her. She had a cock in each hand, jerking fast. Each young man was pinching a nipple.....She kept telling them to cum on her.....cum on her big udders.....cover her with young cum.....well, that did it for the boys, and at almost the same time, they began to spray her with cum.....they got cum from her belly to her hair, and she just laid back and smiled.

The End....for now.......


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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2006 21:08
    great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.08.2006 01:17
    hmm... no mention of him hitting his head when he got hit by the car, but it clearly doesnt have to be, and isnt supposd to be believable, so overall, pretty damn good story. 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.08.2006 02:40
    nice,i hope theres a second 1 continue from dis i came at the middle of the story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.08.2006 10:58
    more!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2006 22:41
    teenage boy with that kind of power shit if it moved i would fuck it!! love the concept.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2006 06:56
    Just writing it are you? I have essentially the same story (from another site) from back in March of 2003.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2006 21:28
    I actually just copied and pasted from the file I have saved, I am sorry I didn;t remove that first line - please forgive me!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.09.2006 10:11
    i liked it and think u should make a second one.....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.10.2006 00:00
    Made me wet. Please get nasteir, and more evil, LOL. "v"

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.10.2006 12:13
    Look forward to next chapter

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.10.2006 22:20
    very original

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.10.2006 03:56
    Hey amazing story where's part 2?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2006 04:02
    haha it was really good. i definetly liked the idea

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.01.2007 10:12
    oh yea !!! have mom drain dads cock dry and that she really needs a hard cock more than ever, son walks in with a hugh hard on, mom smiles as he came closer and slap her with it and she greedly sucked it, then got on top & guided it into herself & fucked him good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.01.2007 11:31
    My G/F sucked my big breasts when they were full of milk......Only if she would have sucked my cunt.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.02.2007 00:25
    good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 09:46
    one guy says that you copied it. anyway it was good. lot of imagination and very interesting. you did a good job AND, if you want to prove the other guy wrong...WELL just write another one!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2007 00:05
    make a second one please!

    awesome. 20/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2007 13:08
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.05.2007 05:32
    i think that i was very good im not dripping wet thanx mwa xxxx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.07.2007 07:10
    With that power, a teenager would have fucked more than just one teacher, wouldn't you? Try a bit harder on the next one, okay?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.07.2007 20:35
    Awsome story but theres one problem, THERS NO PART 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.11.2007 18:18
    Dhdfhfjdhsyeiedhffj poopy in my pants

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2007 11:27
    Very good story indeed. I certainly hope there will be a part 2.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2008 17:27
    Didnt read but it looks good, anyways i know ur asked this BUT are u going 2 make a mathteacher part 2 or did u copy it, idc i just want more lol. anyways good job on ur stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.04.2008 15:32
    The story was excellent and funny too. I can not wait for part two where he knocks up his teacher and and waits she gets back from summer vacation with big belly and milk fillled breasts.. During Christmas vacation the baby is born and she is ready for breeding again.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 12:06
    I'll bet Charles Xavier has done that a time or two.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2008 23:35
    Fuck your teacher and give her another baby.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2008 20:02
    PLZ MAKE ANOTHER

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2011 20:20
    "With that power, a teenager would have fucked more than just one teacher, wouldn't you? Try a bit harder on the next one, okay?"

    that would be the next logical step, obviously. on this one he's still finding out what his powers are. think the first spiderman movie, you start small till you're confident of what you can or can't do.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 17:08
    Was he in high school or college? Planning period, bell, gym class? Sounds like you're mixing things up a bit too much.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2013 15:59
    It wasn't going bad, until the moment you decided to make the prottagonist's character share the secret of his gift with his friend.
    Right at the moment, you FUCKED UP the story.
    Noone with a brain bigger than a monkey would share that with others, not with a best friend, not even with family...!
    Which means, that the story completely lost the relative sense of direction it had up to that point.
    Now that I think about it, yes, maybe a 10 or 11 years old girl or Boy would have done such stupidity!!
    A story, specially one that its plot is about Mind Control or any other kind of Science Fiction bases, needss to keep some kind of rational, reality background or ends sounding just like a laughable, humouristic non sense pre-pebur thoughts!
    Taka out of the story sharing his secret with his best friend part, r-write it from there to make it fit and you could end with a lot more interesting story.

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