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Camping(short)

Author: LoneFury

Date: 14 August 2006

Bestiality, Dark Fantasy, Death, Dark Fantasy

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I’m running through the forest, faster and faster till I can’t run any more. It’s behind me I know it just a few more meters to go I’m almost there……..




I’m in bed now, a dream, how could I be so foolish to believe that IT was chasing me. I know it’s far far far away in a place that I don’t plane on visiting anytime soon. A man if u could call it that. More of a forgotten animal that tormented me…… It all started about two years ago when we decided to go camping.

My husband and I decided to go camping for the weekend out in northern Canada for the week. Out of the fast life of the city to just relax for a week out in the forest. Just me and him alone for a whole week. It sounded like a week of romantic sex that we never got to do because of our hectic lives. I was still an attractive woman about 32 with a thin size one waist that made my 34c breast stand out in a crowed. Shoulder length brunet hair that I usually keep in a pony tail. A nice wholesome face with baby blues that made guys blush when I caught them staring. “I was a great catch” is what my husband always told me…. He wisent much to look at but he had the hart of a loin. A middle age looking man. He kept a bald head because he started to go bald in high school. Not much of build on his body but he could always get the pots from the top cupped for me.

Our fist night in the forest was terrific with an all night love session that had me screaming my husbands name with my multiply orgasms that he brought me too. He had this thing he could do with is tong that flicked my clit that gut me going like a rollercoaster. I woke up about mid morning and I still felt a little a need to get off before my husband woke up. So I snuck out of the tent with a little lotion bottle. I found a nice place on a rock that looked perfect for my devious deed. I got on my back and began to work like a jackhammer on my pussy. I need to be quick before he woke up wondering where I went. That was the first time I saw IT, a quick shadow that moved across me. A bird, I thought nothing of it then again a shadow. An eerie feeling came across my body almost like someone was watching me. I came out naked from the tent thing we were the only people in the forest. I collected my self and thought nothing of it and went back to our camp site.

I slowly walked back to the camp when another shadow came through the trees…. Now I was scared shitless, I started to run now. The camp is just right around bend and blank. That’s all that I remember. I’m guessing this is when IT decided to capture me or I was in suck shook of seeing my dismembered Husband being eating by theses animals. I don’t remember and don’t care to remember this part of the ordeal…

I wake up to pitch black and the heavy smell of death just lingering in the air. “Where I’m I??? Is anybody out there??” Then the loud shrieking of IT comes back as an answer. The sound made me cold to the bone. My husband…. He’s gone…. I’m next……… I started to cry at that moment when IT walked in with a torch. It was a man if u can say that with a deformed face beyond recognition of that of a human, but the body of an ape man with no hair except on his head. Another one walks in and another behind that one… I start to plead with them but it falls on deaf ears if they even understand what I’m saying…

The largest of the three shrieks at the other two. The two shrieks back but it must have offended the larger one because he smacked both of them off there feet. The two hurry off afraid of any more punishment. The one left walks closer to me. I now see more closely at what his truly wants to do with me…… In front of me is a pole of manhood that had to be a foot long. Like a branch off of a tree in front of me. I”m still naked from the mourning before. I try to run but it easily catches me it pins me to the ground and I feel IT’s manhood pressed up to my love canal. I brace for the powerful trust when the other two animals race in with rocks and sticks in there hands. The beast dismounts me and confronts the other two… A loud shrike is the last thing I hear as I ran for my life out of the cave. I run and run knowing that IT could jus be right behind me, I run and run till I get to the main road…. I flag down the first car that comes (wasn’t that hard to get a man to stop with me still naked)...

I’m lying in bed now with the past behind me and the future to look forward towards. I miss my husband so much. I still can’t shake that image of him in pieces being eaten by those animals… Something doesn’t feel right… I still feel like i”m dreaming…… What’s this burning sensation between my legs? Oh my god it hurts so bad… Feels like i”m being stabbed over and over in the same spot!?!?!?!?!?! What is this, it hurts sooooo bad. I”m going to split in half from this pain……………..


…..ah……ahhhh….ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………….I”m awake now the blackness has now consumed me…. IT is on top of me thrusting with all its might…. The pain is gone, the sounds of the beast is gone…I’m slowly going…………….”Just a dream I slowly say to my self over and over. Just a dream….”


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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2006 22:29
    I don't generally comment on the stories, but felt compelled to do so in this case. The main ideas of your story are quite interesting. However, there are a few areas that you could improve. While other readers will be commenting on your lack of details in the practically nonexistent sex scenes, I am hoping to give you some constructive criticism.



    First, when you write a story, use a word processing program such as Microsoft Office Word. Use the tools Spell Check AND Grammar Check. These two things alone, will help you to improve your writing. Many of your errors that people will comment on are due to the fact that you are writing using the way words sound and unfortunately, many of the sounds may be correct, but the words are vastly different from what you mean to be using.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2006 22:41
    Second, after you finish writing the story, take a few minutes to read it to yourself. If you notice that the word choice doesn't look right or doesn't sound right, try to find a word that makes more sense...and example here is your female character had MULTIPLY ORGASMS, not multiple orgasms.



    Hope this helps you become a better writer.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2006 00:44
    Sick subject...sick spelling ...and one day I hope you go to jail and get raped by a biker named big snake...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2006 06:11
    notrhng hapen good story needs also GUD iDeTuR.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2007 04:29
    spelling, grammar mistakes, and what the fuck does "he could always get the pots from the top cupped for me." mean?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2007 01:26
    your story sucks,your grammer is shit. ive read better storys from an epileptic on a type writer.you should do us a favor and off yourself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.10.2007 12:50
    SHE/HE MEANS THE TOP CUPARD NOT CUPPED

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.10.2007 20:45
    I agree with the last 3 posts.... you are pathetic... please off yourself and have someone post it so we can relax

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  • SensitiveOne
    27.06.2008 01:58
    I agree with READER 2006-08-18 22:29:45,both programs are fantastic additions to any aspiring writer's workshop. I would also like to point out that anyone making comments to this writer such as "You should off yourself",should clearly cease reading this type of literature immediatly,as I am almost positive it is illegal for minors to do so from wherever it is they are posting. Try to remember that this is a pornographic site,where people come to look at and read pornographic things,and although your' story had some excellent ideas as to a plot and storyline,as the afore mentioned READER stated,your' sex scenes were virtually non-existent. Also,you rushed the story much too quickly. Try to add more detail to it,such as the warmth of the sun on her naked flesh,or the chill of the breeze on her erect nipples as she continued to softly circle her clit with her index finger. All in all,I give you a 4/10 because I know you could have done better,you have potential,so keep it up. Good luck!

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  • anonymous
    26.04.2009 11:50
    you stupid fuck people should learn to read what the story is about when u call these people sick you call yourself retarded so with that beeing said people that call these writers sick need to die and go to hell

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2009 18:31
    retard.virtually no sex scenes.bad grammer,Horrible spelling.i agree.you should off yourself.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2009 11:51
    Try to write better next time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2010 04:54
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    23.06.2010 04:55
    هاااااااااااي

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  • anon.
    07.07.2010 00:34
    zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2010 08:19
    come on i can do better than this .a lot more could havehappen

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2011 22:14
    What the heck? A three year old could do better than this! First, spelling, second, too short, THIRD, THERES NO SEX!!!!! Wrong site to post on...

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 00:48
    the people who make comments of u being sick and stuff are stupid and have no life worth living they should check themselves first before posting some comments like that with that said i do think that the story could have been better i have written a few stories my self (krillin123499) if u want to read them and get some ideas as i also have been criticized my self try agian my friend.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 03:44
    I got the first paragraph done before I had to stop because of spelling and grammer errors. If a person is going to write stories, at least proofread the damned things

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