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My Sister the Nun Ch. 8 final

Author: old guy

Date: 19 September 2006

Consensual Sex, Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Hardcore

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My Sister the Nun Ch. 8

The telephone in the motel room began to ring in a muffled tone, and a red light started to flash. Robert lifted the receiver and a voice came on. "This is your nine o'clock wake up call."

Robert thanked the disembodied voice and hung up. Katie was still out, so Robert leaned over and kissed her. Her response was almost immediate. She put her arms around her brother and began to kiss him back with her eyes still closed. Her tongue slipped into his mouth and touched his.

"Robert ... kiss my titties, suck on them ... please."

He knew not to argue the point, so he placed his mouth on her nipple and began to suck. She in turn reached under the covers and took hold of his penis, stroking it slowly. When his cock began to get hard, she got on his lap and slipped his cock into her vagina. She then leaned forward and placed her nipple back into his mouth. Robert continued sucking while she moved front to back on top of him, her fluids beginning to flow.

Robert knew that they could leave the motel by eleven and be in Salt Lake before four am, but he really wanted to be out of there by ten. She was riding him for about forty minutes, and had two or three orgasms, however she apparently didn't want to stop, so Robert rolled her off and onto her stomach and got in behind her. He aimed as well as he could and shoved his cock into her damp little pussy. She flinched, and then moaned, as it felt wonderful to her.

He pulled on her pelvic bone and shoved harder and harder, penetrating her as deep as he could. Although she made no sounds, she would periodically gush out thick liquid, onto his penis helping everything to stay well lubricated. He knew at this point he was not about to cum so he would just continue for another half hour, hopefully until she was at least satisfied. When she "gushed" around the fifth time, she said,

"OK ... OK you win. I can't do this any longer, for a while anyway. You have burned me out."

"Are you ready to get up? I want to be out of here by ten."

"Ok Bobby, but I need a shower. Are you going to join me?"

"No ... you go ahead and I'll take one after you."

"Ooooooo ... all right." She groaned as if somebody had taken away her favorite toy, and then went into the bathroom.

While his sister was in the shower, he packed everything he could, and laid out some clothes for the both of them. After she came out, he went in.

"Robert do you need anything washed ... I'm really good at that."

"No sweetie, just get dressed and I'll wash myself."

"OK," she sighed.

Just like clockwork, he thought. Everything went fine and they had departed the motel by ten, en route to San Francisco. The drive was tedious, especially at night, however Katie was awake and sitting as close to her brother as she could without actually sitting in his lap. She then asked,

"Robert when we catch the train, how long will it be to San Francisco?"

"About eighteen hours, why?"

"That's a long time to go ......"

"Without sex?" he finished her sentence.

"Well ... yah!"

"Sweetie, everything will work out. You will see."

"Still that's a long time."

Robert leaned over and kissed her on the top of her head, and continued driving. After two hours he pulled into a gas station and refueled. Katie just sat in the car, pouting.

As they left the gas station, she asked,

"Bobby ... do you think we can stop along the way ... and maybe ... do it in the car?"

"No sweetie. We don't want to take a chance on being caught by the police, now do we?"

"I guess not, but eighteen hours Bobby ... That's a long time."

"You'll live."

'Yah ... I guess."

"Concentrate on something else, like what you want to do when we arrive in San Francisco."

"That's easy. The same thing I want to do right now."

"Where is my jacket Kitten?"

"Are you cold Bobby?"

"No ... but I need my jacket."

Katie reached into the back seat and grabbed Roberts jacket, then looked at him with anticipation.

"Pull your panties down, sweetie."

"Huh?"

"Take your panties off and put them in your purse."

Not being one to argue, she lifted her dress hooked her thumbs in the top of her panties and pulled them down to her knees.

"All the way off sweetie."

She pulled them down and off her feet, then placed them in her purse as instructed. Robert then told her to get close to him and place his jacket on her lap. When she did that, he reached under her dress and began playing with her pussy.

After just five miles his middle finger was inside of her vagina and pumping her as fast as he could. This was heaven and much better than she could have done on her own. She moaned and began to cum, as his long finger continued to probe her depths.

"Oh Bobby ... you are so good to me. Do you think we can do this on the train?"

"I'm sure we can work something out."

"Thank you Bobby," she said as she came again.

After cuming about five or six times she curled up and went to sleep. It was two thirty in the morning when he pulled into Salt Lake City, at the train station.

"Baby wake up, and put your panties on. We are in the city and the Mormons, don't like it when girls run around without panties."

After she was all proper and back together, Robert pulled up in front of the station. A red cap came out and began unloading the baggage, then called on his handy talkie,

"Hertz? We have one of your vehicles out in front."

Robert handed the red cap his tickets and a ten-dollar bill. The man told Robert to take the tickets with him and he would take care of the luggage. He then said,

"Mr. And Mrs. English, if you go in the front doors, you will see a large red sign that reads "FIRST CLASS LOUNGE". Go in there and show them your tickets and they will get you anything you require. Just then the Hertz man came out rubbing his eyes. Robert gave him the keys to the car and the paperwork.

"Mr. English, do you want to fill the car with gas, or do you want me to do it and charge it to your card?"

"Thank you. You do it, I'm kind of tired." Robert handed him a five-dollar bill and the Hertz man drove the car away.

Katie and Robert went into the first class lounge and showed the clerk their reservations. He checked them through and said,

"There are complementary drinks and sandwiches in the refrigerator along with snacks and fruit. There are sleeping seats in the dark area over there. If you wish a nap, I will personally awaken you prior to the arrival of the California Zephyr."

They both picked up a can of juice and lay down in the seats. She looked at Robert with her bottom lip sticking out and said.

"Eighteen hours Bobby?"

Robert just smiled at his little sister-nun-nymphomaniac and said,

"Go to sleep."

What seemed like just a few minutes later, Robert and Katie were awakened by the clerk and told that the train would be there in ten minutes and would layover for thirty minutes before it departs. There was an electric cart to take them to the train. Katie felt like a Queen, as she had never been treated this well before. She was a happy girl. They were at trackside when the train rolled in, and the redcap who had taken their luggage, guided them onto the train and down a narrow hall to their stateroom.

"This is it Mr. and Mrs. English, first class. I believe you and your wife will be very comfortable. The porter will be in just a few minutes to make up the bed." Robert handed him another tip.

"Thank you again Mr. English." With that statement the red cap departed.

"Did he say bed? We have our own bed on the train Bobby?" Katie asked with a broad smile on her face.

Robert just smiled and sat back waiting. She sat on his lap and said,

"Bobby you are just a big tease. I thought we were just going to sit next to ..."

".... each other," he said finishing her sentence. "I know what you thought. For somebody who has been a nun for so long, you show very little faith."

A knock came on the cabin door, and the porter was told to come in. Quickly he set up the bed and put away their clothing. He pointed out the restroom, which included a shower, then after receiving a tip from Robert, he was on his way.

"What do you say Ms. English, would you like to go to bed?"

"Would I? Just let me put on my nighty."

Katie took a green nighty out of her overnight case and went into the bathroom. When she came out, she sat on Robert's lap and began kissing him on the neck, in his ear and all over his face.

"Two days ago Robert, I only remembered you as a little boy. Now you are the center of my universe. I love you so much, I don't know what to do."

"Get into bed and I'll be right with you."

Robert quickly stripped down to nothing and crawled into bed with Katie. The bed wasn't very large, so they were lying close together. Katie didn't mind a bit, deciding that things would work better if he were behind her. As the train began to move, they opened the window shade a little. It was completely dark outside as Katie reached around behind her and began to stroke Robert's penis.

She lifted her right leg and told him,

'Bobby ... push your cock in me, and fuck me a little ... please."

Robert took hold of her hip, moved in closer and slid his cock into her tight little pussy. She groaned as she felt the large member fill her vagina. She was happy every time she could involve Robert in her sexy scenarios and have access to any part of his body.

"Robert ... do you think it would be possible to fuck all the way to San Francisco?"

Robert grasped her hip with his right hand, and took hold of her hair with the other. When he shoved his cock into her and pulled her hair, she loved it and came right away. She was so happy they were going to be able to have sex for the next eighteen hours. As Katie had her legs squeezed together, it seemed even tighter than normal. She began working her "kegel" muscles again squeezing his cock.

Robert loved to fuck his sister as much as she wanted him to do it to her. They were the perfect couple. They loved each other because they were brother and sister, but also because they were perfect sex partners. He couldn't believe how good it felt to slide his cock into her gorgeous slippery pussy. The train was moving out of Salt Lake, with a gentle rocking movement that assisted in their lovemaking, and the more he pulled her hair, the more she came.

"Oh Robert fuck me harder, and pull my hair again. You are such a naughty boy, and I love being naughty with you."

He rolled her over on her stomach, and got on top of her, shoving his cock into her as hard as he could. She was going to say nothing, as she was now his love slave, ready for everything he was going to give her. Accepting everything he offered her.

When he leaned forward, and licked the back of her neck, she couldn't stand it and began to cream all over his cock. Telling her to turn over, she did as he asked and laid herself open to his assault. He jammed his cock into her hard and she hooked her legs around his, so he couldn't get away. As he fucked her harder and faster she held him close aware her was going to fill her vagina with his fluids.

He was moving fast and had a pained expression on his face. She knew he was ready, and squeezed her titties together, telling him to suck on them. He took a warm soft, yet firm mouthful of her titty, and sucked. She squealed and oozed out a tablespoon full of juice wetting his penis again.

As he was sucking her titties he felt the most wonderful feeling in his thighs. It was warm, and it tingled; then a slight pain hit the back of his neck. His breathing increased and he could hold off no longer. All of his cum began to shoot out the end of his cock, into his sister's pussy. She took a deep breath, her toes curled down and she grabbed his ass with both hands as she came again.

They lay there as the train moved down the tracks toward San Francisco. The steady rocking of the train was gently putting them to sleep. Robert then realized he was on top of her and moved off, taking her in his arms and holding her tight. She was very comfortable, and moved a leg over him. The liquid from her pussy was leaking on his thigh. She kissed him lightly on his lips and said,

"Eighteen hours!" then giggled and drifted off to sleep.

Robert was awakened when the train lurched and made a loud noise. He looked out the window as the sky was beginning to turn from black to a light blue. Watching the passing scenery, he saw the sun come up on a new day, a day that would begin to make his life really worth wile. His older, little sister lay in his arms sleeping, content and happy. He snuggled down into the covers and went to sleep.

A knock came at the door around eight-fifteen. The porter was advising them breakfast was now being served, and would continue until nine-thirty. He awakened Katie and whispered in her ear that they should get up for breakfast. She looked at him and smiled then kissed him on the lips. He got up and went into the bathroom to pee. She was right behind him, and then reached around and took hold of his cock.

"What are you doing baby?"

"I wanted to help you Robert, so I thought I could hold it for you while you peed. Girls never get to hold anything when they pee."

Robert thought, 'what the hell; if that's what she wants to do then why not let her.' It felt funny, peeing and not holding on to his cock. She was a good shot, however and aimed right for the pot. When he was done, she shook it and then took a warm washcloth and washed it carefully. After several minutes his penis began to get hard, and she had him sit down on the commode. She then knelt down in front of him and took his cock in her mouth. As she began to suck, Robert wondered at his fortune.

About five minutes of her special nurturing was all he could take and he told her he was about to cum. She nodded her head, which added pleasure to what she was doing. Robert stiffened his back and legs and began squirting his cum in her mouth.

"Mmmmmm," she said and swallowed it, "Now I'm hungry, let's go to breakfast."

As Robert was getting dressed, she came up behind him, put her arms around his neck and bit him on the ear.

"Oww. What was that for?"

"I just want you to know that I love you."

"Don't you have a less violent way of showing me?"

"Sure ... let's go back into the bathroom."

"No let's go to breakfast instead."

"Okay ... your loss."

They locked the stateroom and then he guided her down the narrow hallway toward the dining car. When they got there they had to wait for several minutes until a table was available. When they finally sat down, he handed her a menu. She said,

"I'll take one of everything. You really know how to stir up my appetite."

Robert began to write the items of food on a menu card for each of them.

"Baby?" he asked, "Do you want eggs?

She nodded her head.

"How do you want them?"

"Scrambled ... light."

"Bacon or sausage? And what kind of toast? Coffee or milk? Orange juice?"

"I'll have whatever you are going to have, Robert."

When they were waiting for the food, Katie reached across the table and took Robert's hands, looking him in the eyes.

"I love you, and I'll do anything for you, no matter what."

"The same goes for me too, Kitten. No mater what."

They ate breakfast and watched the scenery of western Utah, as the train headed for California. She talked about everything that happened to them in the last two days, and suddenly tears began to form in her eyes.

"What's wrong baby?"

"Nothing Bobby. I'm just happy. Happier than I have ever been in my whole life."

"You make me happy also, Kitten."

"Thank you Robert. I will be thanking you every day for the rest of my life."

"That's not necessary, sweetie. I should be thanking you, because you saved me too."

"From what Robert?"

"Loneliness, boredom, a dull life and about a thousand other things I can't talk about in mixed company."

Katie smiled and her deep dimples excited Robert.

"Could we have a little wine, Robert?"

"Of course. What kind would you like?"

"Something light and fruity, but not too dry ... Okay?"

Robert ordered two bottles of White Zinfandel, and took them back to the stateroom. When he closed the door, she took the 'do not disturb' sign and hung it on the doorknob.

Robert opened a bottle, and poured them both a glass. They drank a little, and then Robert got down in front of her where she was sitting on the bed, and slid the bottom of her skirt up to her tummy, revealing a pair of Raspberry colored panties. He placed his hands on her knees and slowly pushed them apart, moving his head between her thighs, kissing them on the soft inside, just below the crotch of her panties.

As Robert licked her thighs, she moaned and ran her hands through his hair, pulling his face gently into her crotch. When Robert saw the dark Raspberry colored stain on her panties, he leaned forward and kissed it. She groaned and began to play with his ears as he brought her extreme pleasure.

He then took hold of the elastic and pulled her panties to the side, sliding his tongue up and down her slit. She was breathing hard when he took her clitoris between his lips and sucked on it. Two minutes later she began to dribble her juice out onto Robert's tongue.

He grabbed the top of her shiny panties, and pulled them down over her hips. She lifted her butt as he pulled. Taking the panties off her legs, he dropped them on the floor and placed his whole mouth over her clitoris and pussy lips. Sucking hard, she came again.

Closing her eyes she reveled in the feeling of her legs wide open and his head between them, his mouth sucking on all of her tender parts. After she squirted again, Robert stood up and removed all of his clothes, then turned her over on her stomach, shoving one of the pillows under her mid section.

He moved in behind her and placed his cock at the entrance to her pussy hole, then shoved and pulled on her hips at the same time. He began fucking her as hard as she wanted it, and continued on through at least four orgasms. Robert was about to cum when she screamed into a pillow, and splattered one more time hard against him.

Not pulling his cock from her pussy, he leaned in top of her, resting on his knees and elbows, moving his hips slightly. She hugged her pillow and moved her hips back into him, her pussy sucking on his deflating penis.

When it came time to have lunch, the porter awaked them. Robert thanked him, however declined stating they were going to catch up on some much needed sleep. As soon as he was gone, they lay in each other's arms totally naked kissing and touching. They played together all afternoon, and their play culminated in a wild no holds bared act of pure sex, fucking each other as hard and fast as they could.

When the dinner bell rang, they were up, showered dressed and ready. They were both starving. All through dinner, Katie smiled at him, her deep dimples accentuating her natural beauty. Robert was truly in love. They returned to the stateroom, and Katie said,

"Bobby, don't be angry, but I have something I have to tell you."

Fearing the worst Robert asked. "What?"

"Bobby my pussy is a little sore ... maybe we can wait until tomorrow? If you need me, I'll suck you?"

Robert began to laugh and said,

"You know Kitten, I'm a little sore myself. Maybe we should pace ourselves."

They both laughed and he poured out more wine. They held each other then finally laid down for another nap. The train pulled into the "Fisherman's Warf" station about ten thirty at night. As the porter had packed their clothing, and taken it off the train, Robert and Katie, got off. After eighteen hours on the train the aroma of the San Francisco bay, was a wonderful change. Katie had never seen an ocean in her entire life. The red cap, at Robert's request, hailed a taxi for them.

Robert helped her into the back seat while he assisted the driver with their baggage. Robert said,

"Mark Hopkins please."

"Yes sir."

"Where is the Mark Hopkins, Robert?"

"You will see little one."

Katie looked like someone who was watching a tennis match. She was trying to look in every direction at the same time and see everything.

It only took about ten minutes from the Warf to the top of the hill, where the hotel is located. As the taxi pulled into the circle driveway, a valet opened the door. Robert paid the taxi driver and slipped a bellman five dollar to get their bags. At the front desk, Robert signed the register as Mr. and Mrs. Robert English.

Katie was delirious and wasn't sure what would be next. As they went up the elevator to the ninth floor and the honeymoon suite, he told her they would be staying in San Francisco for three days, and the following day he was going to take her to Ghirardelli Square on a shopping tour, then lunch at Alioto's Restaurant on Fisherman's Warf, and later to Chinatown for dinner, if she wanted.

In the suite, they stood by the window and looked at the sights of the city by the Bay and contemplated their new life together. End.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.09.2006 15:16
    I must say that you did capture my attention. Even if it was poorly written and horribly ineffective with the way robert seemed the only person who had the least bit of common sense, it was a good concept and an entertaining story. The biggest problem I have with the storyline, though, is that it ended too soon. Robert should go to the school, tear it off its fucking hinges, then go back home, beat the shit out of his father and bring his mom and brother to california so they can live normal lives. But then, that's just me, and it's your story. Peace.

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    READER 500
    22.09.2006 17:01
    To peace: A rose by any other name, right? When you say Robert was the only one with common sense, I must disagree. His brother Jim the jr. college teacher seemed reasonably level headed, except for his choice of “friends”. His dad was typical of mid-western folk, except for molesting his stepdaughter. Mom just wanted to keep her family together. Eric was a football player and not prone to intellectual pursuits. Many people have stated the story should go on, however like many writers I feel the reader’s imagination should finish the story. As for normal lives, if you were mom or the brother Eric what would you think of incest between Robert and Katie? Thanks for the left-handed accolade, “it was a good concept and an entertaining story.” Posting a new one, hopefully with more substance.

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    READER 500
    22.09.2006 20:49
    Quite an interesting series. Enough sex for anybody. You've got a great talent.

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    READER 500
    22.09.2006 23:30
    To everyone who took the time to vote, and write your comments, thank you once again. To “peace” (you know who you are) I join you in homage to Sir William, and hope he will not come back and beat me to death with his quill. For any of you who are not tired of my verbiage, I have just posted a new one-chapter story called “Mixed Metaphors”. It takes place in New York and has several interesting situations going on.

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    READER 500
    22.09.2006 23:55
    Question: Is anyone out there interested in a young Japanese-Irish American (who resembles David Ono) returning to Japan to visit his relatives and falling in love with his cousin? If you do not wish to place your comments for the public to see, send me a personal note please.

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    READER 500
    24.09.2006 22:06
    i was impressed. finally a story with intellect. i guess it goes to show that contributing to the porn community isnt just for perverted idiots. well done.

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    READER 500
    25.09.2006 11:04
    I must say that at first, because of the title I was unable to make the connection between a nun and Robert visiting his parents. I am happy now with my decision to wait until all of the chapters were in before I placed my feelings in print.



    This has to be one of the best stories I have seen here, as not only do you get sex, but an intriguing story as well. Good one west coast. You say there more in the works? Have to have a look. Thanks.

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    READER 500
    25.09.2006 11:24
    Enough of the detractors. An excellently written story. With out A doubt the best written series on this sight. One man con not cum that much, but it is still great. HOT ROCKS

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    READER 500
    26.09.2006 03:27
    There has been a lot of talk on this site about the penis. Here are a few facts to clear away the non-truth. Actual amount of semen per ejaculation: 1-2 teaspoons. Average number of times a man will ejaculate in his lifetime: 7,200 or almost twenty years, doing it once a day.

    Average # of times he will ejaculate from masturbation: 2,000 or 5.4 years. Average total amount of lifetime ejaculate: 14 gallons ½ bathtub..

    Average # of calories in a teaspoon of semen: 7

    Average # of calories in a can of Dr. Pepper: 150

    Average length of penis when not erect: 3.5 inches

    Average length when erect: 5.1 inches.

    Smallest natural penis recorded: 5/8 of an inch

    Largest natural penis recorded: 11 inches (not erect)

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    READER 500
    29.09.2006 00:46
    that sucked

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    READER 500
    29.09.2006 19:53
    Are you telling us you read the whole 8 chapters, and all you could come up with was, “that sucked?” I’ll bet your days in high school were a disaster. What were your SATs (200)? I have heard you get 250 for just showing up.



    Typical SAT question: Read the following SAT test question, and then click on a button to select your answer.



    If 22 · 3 · Q = 6, then Q =



    HINT: It is a fraction. Come on “that sucked” send us an answer. Old Guy has written some teriffic stories for everyone. It is too bad we can’t get people like “that sucked” bared from the site. Keep it up old guy. I like many other people, enjoy your stories. James, From Washington State.

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    READER 500
    03.10.2006 20:52
    Just posted “Mixed Metaphors III” and “School Daze chapter1”. School Daze is about a Forty plus professor and an eighteen-year-old female student at Long Beach State College in California.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.10.2006 17:29
    Check out your geography. The California Zephyr terminates in Emeryville, about 10 miles across the bay from San Francisco and Fisherman's Wharf.

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    READER 500
    11.10.2006 12:17
    The series began a little slow, in one direction, and at first the title didn’t fit, but as we all know now everything finally made sense. The “old guy” can really tell a tale. If he is the old guy what am I? I’m 8 years older, and ready for more. Chuck

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    17.10.2006 21:04
    If chucks comment doesn’t make sense, I’ll explain. He was house sitting for me while we were away in Palm Springs. Chuck is my older brother. OG

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    26.10.2006 14:01
    As with all your stories, this series was beautifully crafted. As others have said, a story with inteligence and wit. Sorry this story is over. Keep them coming.

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    03.11.2006 23:39
    G'Day, Well all good things have to end, eventually and, thankfully, so did this "story". while the story line was, well, -- possible the errors, mistakes, bad punctuation et al destroyed too much of the mood.Fear not Old Guy, I'll read some more of your stuff and you'll likely hear from me again.

    Spetre

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    13.11.2006 19:18
    Another good series..just keep them coming, I'll put up with minor errors for a great written story... Don Upstate New York

    that's way upstate for you new yorkers....

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    READER 500
    20.11.2006 21:40
    You are a little mixed up on the railroad depots. a train from salt lake city would end at the oakland mole not in san francisco. there is no depot anywhere near fisherman's warf story very good. i suggest you read up on what happens when a female has an orgazism

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    READER 500
    02.12.2006 15:59
    (From above) Being just a man, I guess I have failed in my attempt to pay attention, due to other things on my mind at the time. If you get a chance, read the “Six Mile High Club” as they were all researched personally. If you are a female please send me a personal note re: the subject. If you are a male, and not working with masters and Johnson, I don’t believe you would know much more than I.



    Thank you for your kind comments and your attempts to keep me on track (no pun intended). I haven’t been writing lately as my computer is in the shop. I am writing this on a friend’s computer. I believe I will begin posting additional chapters after the first of 2007. Have a wonderful Holiday Season and a Happy New Year to all of my readers. Og.

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    READER 500
    02.12.2006 16:03
    For below thank you 11-20-06 - 21:40, for want of another name. The train station error was pointed out to me several weeks ago by 10-06-06 - 17:29, and I attempted to re-write it; however xnxx never took my changes. Maybe I should just post a revised copy of the last chapter, however that tends to be confusing.



    Please believe me when I say that I have done exhaustive research re: female orgasms however it is now my opinion that they seem to be different in most females. I have been married three times and all were different. Most of the females I had dated prior to, and in between my marriages have varied in their climaxes also. (see below).

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    READER 500
    13.02.2007 20:47
    Aw shucks. I've read up. Guess I'll have to go back to studying. Mike aka X

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    READER 500
    17.04.2007 16:03
    REALLY STUPID LIKE THE AUTHOR

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 17:10
    can u do another series continuing on to this it seems like there is more to come. Their family, Earl, jennifer, and seeing the rest of the world like beaches make a new series please. call it watever u want like

    My brother the savior or something

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 20:30
    i agree with the person below me this needs to continue she just entered a new world she needs to explore it with robert

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    READER 500
    31.12.2007 08:15
    I also agree with the below two readers. There could be so much more, not just for Katie to explore, but also more drama and the like. Jennifer might come back for Robert, or they could go back to the family. Writing an extension series would be a good idea.

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    READER 500
    23.01.2008 19:26
    SOUNDS LIKE CRAP TO ME.WASTED TIME AND INK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2009 01:46
    I've said it a million times but still out-fucking-standing and awe-fucking-mazing one of the best stories I've read but please add a real ending

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2010 02:50
    I think this story good the way it is

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 06:18
    good story and my hope is they live happily after

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