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Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)

Author: MrE2

Date: 24 January 2007

Cum Swallowing, Fantasy, First Time, Incest

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This was originally my first story, I revised it because of all the complaints.

To people who are about to read this story:
YES, THIS IS A YOUNG STORY, THAT MEANS UNDERAGE, NOT ADULT. SO IF YOU DON'T LIKE THESE KINDS OF STORIES JUST STAY AWAY. I DON'T NEED TO SEE THE STUPID COMENTS, BECAUSE YOU DON'T LIKE THESE KIND OF STORIES. .


I do like feedback; I'm not a professional writer so I'm sorry if it's not perfect. I did read through it a few times and I hope I got out most of the dumb mistakes. I'm very sorry if I didn't.

Babysitting The Twins


I’m Steve, age 18, about 5’10” I’m into weight lifting so I’m in pretty good shape and the girls I’ve dated have said I’m pretty good looking. I have nice size cock to about 7” and nice and thick. Nothing huge but big enough to please the girls I’ve been with.

It was another weekend of watching my neighbor’s twin girls. Sarah and Kim, they’re both 10. Their parents usually go out once a month for the weekend to get alone time with each other, and this weekend was no different. I usually watch some movies with them or play some games. They had a nice fenced in pool, which was in the back. The fence was about 10ft. high with trees around the outside. There was no way to see in. I guess they liked their privacy. Anyway there was always something to do.

I arrived with my pack of clothes and some porn’s I brought to watch at night after they went to bed. Their parents left me the phone number where they were going to be at, and some extra money for food in case I needed it. It was summer time so there was no school. They usually leave Friday evening or Saturday morning, this time I was supposed to be there at 9am on Friday, and I was going to be there till Monday afternoon. It looked like it was going to be a long weekend. They also have a 16-year-old daughter Angela, who hated babysitting and was always at a friends every weekend. She was pretty hot, I figured she was banging some lucky guy.

So her parents left and there I was. Both girls were wearing shorts, and tank tops. It was obvious they weren’t wearing any type bra. They both had athletic type bodies; their breasts were a little large for their age, and you could see the obvious outline of their nipples. I all of a sudden realized I was staring, luckily I wasn’t noticed. They also didn’t seem to notice the bulge in my jeans, I couldn’t believe what I was thinking.

It was about noon, right after lunch; the girls were in the living room watching TV, so I decided to work on my tan. I changed in the bathroom, I had one of those small men’s suits, great for tanning. I was lying in one of those nice lawn chairs, I had on a set of blinders, I didn’t like tanning with sunglasses. I must have been out there for about 20 minutes when I heard one of the girls come out. She asked if it was all right if she joined me, I said “of course”. She then asked if I could put some lotion on her. Thinking about touching her cute little body I said sure. I got up and removed my blinders it took several minutes for my eyes to adjust.

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What I saw next put me into shock. I could tell it was Sarah, I’ve learned to tell the 2 apart she was lying on her stomach in the nude, with her eyes closed. She had an incredible perfect little ass. I couldn’t believe how hard I got so fast. I started with the back of her neck working slowly down; I wanted to take my time, her skin felt so soft. I worked my way down to just above her ass then went to the sides of her legs, down to her feet. I moved my hands back up the inside of her thighs.

As I got closer to her ass again she parted her legs. I was just about to stop, not wanting to push it when she said “please get my but really good, I’d hate to get burned there”. I started immediately gently rubbing and kneading her beautiful little cheeks, I heard her giving little moans, especially when I started going in between her crack. She was saying “OH, that feels so good, PLEASE don’t stop” she was actually moving her ass in my hands. I got a little braver and moved my hand between her cheeks and down to rub her little but hole she really like that. “OH God Steve that felt so good” I moved my hand down further to caress her little pussy. I couldn’t believe how wet she was.

She just kept moaning “OH, YES STEVE, OH YEAH, OH MY GOD THAT FEELS INCREDIBLE” I started really going at it using one hand on her pussy and the other on her ass. I started inserting my fingers on both ends slowly at first. But she was pushing back faster and faster. She had her back arched with her but way up in the air. I felt my finger break her “cherry” she didn’t slow down at all. She just kept repeating “OH, AH, UH OH GOD, OH GOD STEVE, AHHHH OH MY GOD DON’T STOP, IT’S HAPPENING STEVE I CAN FEEL IT, OH MY GOD THAT FEELS SO GOOD, DON’T STOP, OH, OH, OH UHHHHHHHHHHH” as her orgasm hit her she went crazy saying my name over and over.

She finally calmed down. She told me it was my turn. She reached over and pulled at my shorts before I could protest. Not that I wanted to. She said she seen her daddy’s dirty movies and have seen it done before. She went right down on my cock sucking and licking, it was almost like she’d been practicing. I couldn’t believe how good it felt, she was deep throating me like an old pro. I could feel her moving her tongue around the head at just the right spot; she would move her head back to just the tip and then plunge it back in again to the hilt.

It didn’t take me long, especially after watching her cum so hard. I told Sarah “OH I’m going to CUM” I expected her to pull it out but she only went at it harder. “OH YEAH SARAH, I’M GOING TO CUM, OH YES” As I started to cum I grabbed the back of her head and pushed myself all the way in, I could feel her trying to swallow and doing a damn good job at it to. Only a little leaked out, which she scooped up with her hand and fed into her mouth. She got up saying she needed a shower. I couldn’t believe what just happened.

I got up and went inside only to find Kim on a towel in front of the TV masturbating, while watching a porn, which must have been her dads. It was a girl giving a guy a blowjob; it was a great view on the screen. Kim opened her eyes looked right at me and said “would you do to me what you just did to Sarah?” I said of course only, I’ll do better. I knelt down next to her and started with her beautiful tits, they felt so good in my hands, and when I bent down and sucked on one of her nipples she let out a little gasp. It was obvious how sensitive her nipples were. I moved her hand away from her little pussy to replace it with mine. She was already pretty wet; I wondered how long she’d been like this on the floor. I started moving my hand down further to caress her tight little but hole, I found that wet just from her dripping pussy. When I inserted my finger slowly in her pussy, she had the same reaction her sister had, saying, “OH GOD STEVE, that feels so good, fuck me deeper”. But I pulled it out only to move it down and enter her ass, my finger went all the way in, I tried to go slow but she pushed her ass down against me. When it was all the way in she just gasped “UHHHHHHHHHH, OH GOD YES, FUCK MY ASS STEVE JUST LIKE THAT” I then moved my other hand down and entered her pussy with my finger, burying 2 fingers all the way in. just as I had done to Sarah, and just like Sarah I could feel Kim’s “cherry” break.

Kim really got into it, she started rubbing her tits, and pinching her nipples saying “OH GOD, OH GOD, UHHHH OH YEAH STEVE IT NEVER FELT SO GOOD, YES, YES, OH MY GOD YES DON’T STOP, FUCK MY ASS AND PUSSY, UH OH YEAH FUCK ME. I CAN FEAL IT COMMING STEVE, OH GOD I CAN FEEL IT COMING.” She arched her back drove herself against my hands and as her orgasm hit, she actually screamed “OH MY GOD STEVE, OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, UHHHHHHHHHHH, OHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

She came harder than her sister did. When she calmed down she was pretty limp. She told me she wanted to see me cum but was to week to move. I got up and placed a leg on either side of her ribs and started masturbating, I wanted to cum all over tits. It didn’t take long. Just seeing her naked little young body in such an erotic state. I placed my cock right between her little tits and started spurting all over. I could see her start getting excited as she felt my cum splatter all over her breasts.

I sent her upstairs to get cleaned up. When I looked up, Sarah was there again with something in her hand. She had gotten into my pack and had found my porn’s. She asked if we could watch them, I told her to wait for her sister. I still couldn’t believe what I was doing, I knew it was wrong but it was like I was no longer in control. These 2 innocent beautiful little girls were incredible.



Kim finally made it down an hour later; she was still naked like her sister. She said, “Can we watch your dirty movies now ?” . Sarah had already put it in so it was ready to go. The ones I had brought were a combo of a lot of different scenes. It wasn’t long into the movie, before I was hard again. I laid down on the floor and told Sarah to come over and straddle my face. A smile ran across her face, she came right over and sat down. I started licking her bald little pussy and was rewarded by her moaning right away. Kim couldn’t wait any longer. She came over and straddled my cock, she held it and rubbed it back and forth against her very wet pussy, before slowly inserting it. It didn’t take long for her to build up a rhythm. I could hear her, “OH god Sarah you were right it feels so good, I never imagined how good it could feel. OH Steve you cock is in so deep, I can’t wait to feel you cum inside me.” I couldn’t believe how tight she felt.

Meanwhile I was moving my tongue from Sarah’s pussy to her little ass and back going like a man possessed. Sarah was saying “OH MY GOD STEVE YOUR TONGUE FEELS SO GOOD, OH YES LICK MY ASS MORE, I LOVE YOUR TONGUE IN MY ASS, OH GOD KIM THIS FEELS S GOOD. I CAN FEEL IT COMING KIM HE’S GOING TO MAKE ME CUM” By now I was concentrating on her ass, as she was grinding it into my face. I knew then I was going to fuck her ass, and soon. Kim was really going wild on my cock, I was about ready to cum and I could hear “OH YES THIS IS SO GOOD, I CAN FEEL YOU, OH MY GOD STEVE I CAN FEEL IT SWELLING INSIDE ME. I’M GOING TO CUM WITH YOU STEVE” .When I started to cum she was screaming “OH MY GOD STEVE YES, I’M CUMMING TO, YOUR CUM FEELS SO GOOD INSIDE ME, OHHHHHH GODDDDD, OH GODDDDD YESSSSS OHHHHHHHHHH, UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!”. All 3 of us hit out peak at the same time, Sarah was saying “OH GOD, YOUR TONGUE YES, DEEP IN MY ASS LICK ME STEVE, LICK MY ASS I’M CUMMING, OH GOD YES I’M CUMMING TO, OHHHH UHHHHHH OHHHHHHH GODDDDD YEAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!.”

Both girls collapsed, but I could tell they were just catching their breath. It didn’t take long; they both had their heads down near my cock. They started taking turns licking and sucking; A couple times their lips touched each other and they started French kissing around my dick. That felt incredible, I could tell there was a moment of awkwardness when they kissed, but they found out they really liked it. Well it didn’t take long for me to get hard again.

I told Kim to get on the sofa facing the TV with her legs spread, I next told Sarah to get on her hands and knees in front of her sister and start licking her out. They both just kind of looked at me, I said trust me, just do it. Sarah didn’t seem like she really wanted to but did it anyway, Kim looked like she couldn’t wait fir her sister to start. Sarah reluctantly went right to work on her sister. It didn’t take long for Kim to start moaning and pushing her hips into Sarah’s face; Kim reached down with one hand on her sister’s head and the other playing with her tits.


I got behind Sarah and started to push my cock slowly into her pussy. She immediately began to moan, I could hear her muffled voice as she started going at her sister even more, I could tell she liked what she was doing to Kim, and Kim was really enjoying it. Saying “Oh god Sarah your tongue feels so good, I don’t know why we didn’t do this sooner, MMMMMM OH YEAH, OH YES, SARAH I WANT TO SUCK YOU TO.” Sarah only had to move a little bit. Kim got up and positioned herself under Sarah in a 69 position. I started rubbing Sarah’s ass, wetting my finger and plunging it in her tight little but hole, It didn’t need it though, it was still pretty we from my attentions a few minutes ago.

Sarah was really moaning now “ MMMMMMMM UHHHHH MMMMM OMM MMMMMM” She had herself between her sister’s legs again not wanting to stop. I pulled my cock out of her pussy and slowly entered her ass. When she realized what I was doing she at first tried to pull away, but I was a lot stronger and I held her in place. I let my cock move slowly in and out till I was at least half way in, Then I started slowly fucking her ass, when she realized she wasn’t getting away she relaxed a little, and that’s when she start to enjoy it. Kim was underneath sucking and licking like there was no tomorrow.

It wasn’t long before Sarah started to meet my thrusts, I was actually shoving my cock all the way in faster and faster. She finally moved her head up screaming “HOLY FUCK STEVE THAT FEELS SO GOOD, FUCK MY ASS, FASTER, OH PLEASE, FASTER HARDER, OH MY GOD KIM HIS COCK FEELS SO GOOD IN MY ASS, I NEVER KNEW IT COULD FEEL SO GOOD. AND YOUR TONGUE IS WONDERFUL, YOU’RE BOTH GOING TO MAKE ME CUM”

With that she put her head back down licking and sucking Kim’s pussy. I could tell Kim was going to cum also by her “MMMMMM OHHHHHHH MMMMMMM OH YOU TASTE SO GOOD SARAH, MMMMMMM UUNNNNNHHHHHHHH” Sarah started first, bucking her hips like a bronco that’s when I released, then Kim. Sarah actually had 2 orgasms, on right after the other. Feeling me cum inside her drove her on to the second one. She actually passed out from cumming so hard. I got up, moved her to the couch. It wasn’t long before she came around.

We finally had some dinner, went upstairs got cleaned and ready for bed a few hours later. They got into their nighties not bothering with underwear. Sarah told me she wanted to feel me cum inside her pussy. Kim said she wanted to feel me cum in her ass. I promised them tomorrow. They were both pretty tired. I laid down in the guestroom, pretty spent myself. Thinking yup, it’s going to be a long weekend and probably the best ever.

Let me know IF I should make a #2.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 05:43
    wow great story waiting for a second one!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 05:59
    fuck fuck fuck moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    now

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 06:19
    Knew the original one but still great work...i want more



    Whats about a part six of "Our family and my sisters friends"??? still my favourite story on this page^^

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 07:28
    yes.pleeeez write chapter two.10/10-thanx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 08:28
    that was very HOTT get me hard as steel i give it 10/10 i cant wait for part two

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 08:41
    only real critisisms I would have is that this shows an obvious lack of foreplay, and that some of the grammatical errores such as, '2' instead of typing out 'two' could easily be avoided by a PROFESSIONAL writer.

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 09:05
    yes that was incredible sure wish i was u and really doing just that insect mmmmmmmmmmmbut not o young 10 ok . can't wait for part #2 you got my 10 in scores

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 10:39
    That was so damn hot, please keepit up. bring in a couple frieds maybe a brother or boy next door for a little gay stuff.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 11:24
    unlrealistic, and not enough stuff building up to other stuff



    "i came in and saw her masturbating"



    yeah, how dramatic

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 12:59
    you could end up in the joint and then bubba would fuck you in the ass and you would say oh bubba you fuck me like a man. This is not true and you know it.

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 13:07
    Definetly need a chapter two. Good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 13:34
    TWO MISTAKES NOT BAD

    WHY DID YOU HAVE TO SAY YOU DID TEN YEAR OLDS WHY NOT SAY YOU DID THE SISTER

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 13:36
    I'll echo the comment of "Reader 1/27/07 11:58" Your story lacks verisimilitude--but it is very energetic fucking that you describe very energetically. The all-caps lines are a little silly, but they're 'standard form,' so forgivable. Soft-pedal the 'dialogue' next time, and see if that doesn't work at least as well. Mainstream writing shows you how it's done,



    e.g., "First squad! To the wall!" he shouted. "Oh, please," she murmured, "Please!" Then she screamed, "Ah! My ass! You're tearing me open!"



    Let me suggest also that the 16 y.o. sister should have been better used. She should have been a 'risky presence,' at least.



    I'm willing to overlook the problem of fit. If you insist on stuffing a narrow gauge cunt with an oversized crank, so be it. It's permissible exaggeration in this sub-genre. But you story will suffer a little for each departure from the possible that you include in the tale.



    skumpfsklub

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 13:53
    Absolute garbage. There is no feeling or emotions in anything you write. This story should be taken off immediately. The way you write isn't even writing. It is just non stop sex with no enjoyment. Read "Farm Girl" or ANYTHING by FanFiction. Those are great stories. Please stop writing until you can actually figure out how to.

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 14:54
    I would have to say this would have been better with a little more of an plot. Building the storie to the sex will make it better. I give you a 4 butmuch better then I could do!

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 20:02
    Again a good story but needs more of a entrance, I enjoyed the descriptive sex but with no plot it did kind of lose all meaning.

    All you really need to work on is the plot to the stories like why they wanted you so bad ect, But other than that a good story, 7/10

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 21:09
    Extremely good story! I would perhaps expand on it to include extremely perverted parents and of course very sexy slutty clothes for the twins!



    It got me hard!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 21:21
    Learn how to spell "BUTT"!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 21:27
    Nice story.. I couln't hold it past the first fucking ;p



    You've got a few "to/too" mistakes though. But nice story so far, non the less :)

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    READER 500
    27.01.2007 23:42
    good story, but it would be better if you checked the spelling ect. eg: "but" - "butt" and "we" - "wet".

    a bit more intro would make the story a little better.



    7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 00:29
    yes make

    #2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 02:11
    their called pornos not porns!

    other than that pretty good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 10:48
    yes pls make 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 15:37
    make a number 2 i loved it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 17:49
    Quite good story.

    I like it. (10/10)

    When can we read part 2?

    -Greetings from germany. ^^

    OliaveX

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 18:23
    fuckin good story...i came twice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 18:29
    that was amazing make a part 2!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2007 20:57
    anyone know a website with young girls in the nude, please post it on this comment page. great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 00:36
    Good story would like to read part 2. Agree more intro needed.

    anonymous

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 01:33
    Yes why don't you make part two and add her sister to it so you could have more fun with them ok*

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 05:07
    yes please make a number 2 I liked it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 05:56
    make a second one, please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 09:27
    oh yes that was good make another please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 12:03
    I WAS FUCKED BY A SITTER TOO WENT I WAS11. BUT IT WAS A GIRL . THATS THE FIRST TIME I EVER EAT PUSSY MMMMMMM.PAM

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    READER 500
    29.01.2007 12:32
    sounds good to me waiting for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 15:16
    awesome man make a second

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 15:36
    you all need Jesus.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 16:42
    number 2 number 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 16:56
    number 2, please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 18:08
    i need a porn site with young teen girls nude, please post it on this comments page if anyone knows of one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.01.2007 22:52
    That was one of the best Sex Stories i have ever heard. If u can, make a 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9!!!!

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    READER 500
    29.01.2007 23:28
    a little thin-skinned, are we? the "don't be mean to me" foreward was a bit off-putting. If you can't handle the feedback, don't put your work out in the public domain. i gave it a 6/10

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    READER 500
    29.01.2007 23:30
    orgasms at age 10? hahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaa...

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    READER 500
    30.01.2007 04:37
    Superb best story I have read for ages make a 23456789,10,11,12

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 13:19
    damn dude...bad ass story...waiting for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 13:49
    well, you got the "i'm not a professional writer" part correct at least. weak

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 14:08
    this idiot muct be writing his own reviews. hahahahaha - forget the pedo stuff, its just lousy writing. bad ass??? who says bad ass anymore?? hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 16:52
    more revisions necessary - really average hard to believe its getting an 8/10 so far only a 5 from me

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 17:36
    This was goood.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 17:54
    Your story still stinks......you have no writing talent......please don't quit your day job you hack!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 18:02
    can someone please post a website with young girls nude on this comment page as i cant find a site anywhere.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2007 20:45
    Damn there are some real idiots making coments. Bunch of fucking retards. It's a fucking awsome story write a #2 and 3 . fucking Jerks

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    READER 500
    30.01.2007 23:01
    love it when someone calls everybody else an idiot as he is misspelling words. nice job, genius. and - the story lacks any shred of merit. boring plot, lousy writing, no build-up, way too many capitalized words, etc. etc. to the suthor - you can stop now, no need for anymore of this garbage

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.01.2007 08:46
    good story... it kinda goes into the sex way too fast and there isnt alot of descriptions... but definately has merit there man, keep it up!

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    READER 500
    31.01.2007 15:22
    if ur in the US kid porns illegal, great story

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    READER 500
    31.01.2007 22:11
    man these idiots that bitch about spelling who really reads these stories for that Duh its all about the sex jackasses anyway great 10/10

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    READER 500
    31.01.2007 23:06
    who the fuck really thinks this is good writing?! i mean, come on - maybe it doesn't take much to get your motor running, but the writing is pretty bad. forget the spelling everybody makes typos, this has horny 14-year-old written all over it

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    READER 500
    01.02.2007 01:06
    wtf? i think you're playing a joke, right? were you trying to make me laugh? this shit sucks balls and i like pedo stories give it up, dude

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    READER 500
    01.02.2007 08:36
    Holy shit what, I don't what the hell popple mean. These are supposed to SEX stories, who the FUCK gives a shit about a fucking plot, dumb asses. You want a story with a plot, go to the book store. 10/10

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    READER 500
    01.02.2007 16:17
    scumbag

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.02.2007 10:55
    very sick asshole these kids are way to young

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.02.2007 15:23
    absolutelloved this story definetly should do mo more great stuff

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    READER 500
    03.02.2007 17:43
    well, you asked - please do not make a part 2 unless you can learn to write better.

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    READER 500
    04.02.2007 22:49
    damn. y the fuck would u guys leave comments the guy specicly asked not2. any way story was great. if they were 2 or3 years older storied be perfect. bring on another.9/10

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    READER 500
    11.02.2007 20:34
    suppose it could be decent jackoff material for the deviants that imagine 10yr olds with any kind of sexual maturity. other than that - it was pretty average.

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    READER 500
    12.02.2007 16:59
    2 please

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    READER 500
    12.02.2007 21:11
    pretty lousy - i give it a 1/2 limp rating

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    READER 500
    13.02.2007 18:00
    Yah maybe a lil older, other than that that was awsome! Part 2!

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    READER 500
    20.02.2007 01:39
    It is quite obvious these detractors dont kow a thing about which they speak. Very young girls do get horny and play with themselves and also get VERY wet, even 5 yr olds. As for the guy that says improve your writing, he didn't graduate from high school but says the same thing to all the writers.

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    READER 500
    20.02.2007 20:49
    that was a fucking awesome story! part 2 man part 2! There is nothing wrong with the age.

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    READER 500
    10.03.2007 15:02
    This story was very hot and heavy. Mabye you could do a prequel showing how they learned about sex and how they came to crave it. You should absolutely go for part 2 also. And you don't have to worry to much about spelling. As long as it's understandable, people will know what you mean. The internet has it's own language now days. And don't worry about the age factor either, you still hi a pretty big audience with the story. 8/10, great job

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    READER 500
    11.03.2007 00:46
    hottttttttttttt

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2007 19:16
    dude you have to make a numder two that story was awsome

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2007 23:06
    Hey u should make a number to it was the best story ever .....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2007 19:57
    excilent! youv made one of the best stories i have ever had the pleasure of reading. 10 /10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2007 11:34
    comeon every body: We want a number 2, we want a number 2!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2007 19:57
    u rock .make #2 fast

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2007 15:36
    best fuckin story i read make part 2 fast

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.05.2007 10:33
    great job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2007 06:22
    i wan't you to fuck me like that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2007 02:24
    fucking pedofiles. u all r going 2 hell

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    READER 500
    02.08.2007 03:38
    of 1 to 10 i giv 100 ;P

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    READER 500
    09.08.2007 21:39
    OMG! that story was mind blowing

    i love young lovemaking.

    keep the good work up

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    READER 500
    23.08.2007 15:44
    great story

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    READER 500
    03.09.2007 09:01
    you definetley need to make a #2 with out a doubt. This was an amazing story and needs to be continued.

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    READER 500
    11.09.2007 23:45
    make number 2 with much less OOOHHH YAAHHHH!! STEVE!!! shit. then itl be perfect.

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    READER 500
    29.09.2007 19:36
    wats wrong with hell? they got good bands and whores. ps nice story

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    READER 500
    16.10.2007 12:18
    Great story sweetie. You know what I want you to suck my boobs. Push your dick deep inside me baby. Wanna makeout with you.

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    READER 500
    21.10.2007 00:25
    chapta 2 plz

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 22:16
    dude you should make a #2

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    READER 500
    26.12.2007 19:32
    Number 2 that tit that siad u all r going to hell is just as bad to read it p.s fucking excellent

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    READER 500
    04.01.2008 04:51
    Lose the capitals.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.01.2008 22:32
    I COMMAND YOU TO MAKE A NUMBER 2!!!!! And wats so wrong with hell?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2008 20:06
    uhhh!! fuckkkk im so horny. number 2 uhhhhhhhh fasttt

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.02.2008 23:45
    oh my god that was so hot.

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    READER 500
    12.02.2008 11:48
    o so good i com so hard ahhh it makes me crazy you must make another

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    READER 500
    24.03.2008 21:34
    that was fukin awesome

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    READER 500
    29.03.2008 12:38
    Holy fuck man thats awesome! I comed so hard! omg, make a no.2 you just have to! Fuckin awesome! BTW lose the capitals!

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    READER 500
    01.04.2008 01:11
    you ass hole you need to make the guy like younger 18 is To old and idid like it

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    READER 500
    02.04.2008 00:53
    make a number 2 plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2008 14:40
    you HAVE to make a second one!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 04:20
    U GOTTA WRITE NUMBER 2 MAYBE THE OTHER SISTER COMES HOME AND JOINS IN

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2008 00:55
    please u have 2 make another please and very soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2008 04:39
    yes make #2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2009 01:55
    I say make the girls like 13 and the guy like 17 but other than that great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2009 01:56
    That was great!!! Make a two!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2009 11:53
    make two

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  • yngnlver
    19.08.2009 18:40
    Very good story, maby the little girl have friends that are a little reluctant but ver curious.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2010 19:38
    fucking awsome make a 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 02:50
    Please make a number 2. It really was a sexy good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2011 17:06
    yap yap blah blah dribble dribble dribble!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 23:52
    My only question is what parent would let an 18 year old boy stay overnight with two, maybe three of their daughters? That's just begging for trouble.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2013 16:30
    dam m good could have should have should been longer (the Q)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2017 03:20
    You are a fucking pervert !!!!

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  • Wildfire1180
    26.06.2020 22:32
    Yea you do need to write a part 2 to this!!

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