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Harry Potter and The Order of The Sex Appeal Chapter 1

Author: SimonFear01

Date: 4 February 2007

Consensual Sex, Fantasy, Erotica, Fiction

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Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal
Chapter One
by Simon Fear



It was going to the fifth year for Harry Potter at Hogwarts. Lord Voldemort was now alive again, and out there somewhere. The paper had been saying a lot of mean things about Harry, and the Wizengamot Court and the Minister of Magic had tried to get Harry expelled from Hogwarts except that Professor Dumbledore had come to his hearing and had gotten him cleared. Now Harry was sitting in the room that he was sharing with his best mate Ron at Grimwauld Place that his Godfather owned and the Order of the Phoenix was using as a Headquarters, thinking about everything that had happened in the last week. Ron was out with his twin brothers Fred and George, probably getting into mischief. Hermione and Ginny were in their room probably talking about things that girls talk about. Well he was bored so to hell with it, even if they were talking about girly things at least they would be company, so Harry decided to pay them a visit at their room. He walked out of his and down the hallway and stopped at their door. He was getting ready to knock when he heard his name being said through the door. “Hmmm, I wonder why they are talking about me, I think I’ll listen for a second,” Harry thought to himself. Harry slid his hand into his pocket and brought out an extendible ear that Fred and George had given him. He put one end to ear and slid the just under the crack of the door.

“I just can’t stop thinking about him Hermione, I just get all tingly when he’s near and he is always on mind,” Said Ginny. Hermione looked at her redheaded friend and frowned. “I know Ginny, but Harry has been through so much, he really probably doesn't have time to think about much of anything else. But don’t worry Ginny, sooner or later Harry will come around and he’ll notice you. I mean there is no reason why he shouldn’t, you are so pretty, hell I’ll even go as far as to say you are sexy,” Hermione began blushing at this point, “I mean well, er... what I’m saying is, if I was a guy I would find you very attractive.” Hermione began fidgeting with her hands and quickly looked away. Ginny was blushing, “You really think I’m sexy, I mean do you think Harry will find me sexy. I don’t think I’m that attractive, I mean are more attractive than me. I just don’t see how, it’s just whenever I think about him at night, well...”, Ginny trailed off blushing pretty bad by now. “What Ginny, you can tell me.” “Well are you sure, I’m a little ashamed of mentioning it.” said Ginny. “Ginny I’m your friend, you can tell me anything,” Hermione said looking at her friend with a puzzled look. Ginny’s blush got deeper, “Well my vagina gets all tingly, and it gets so wet that I constantly have to change my knickers. When it first started happening I thought maybe I was peeing myself but when I felt of my vagina the wetness was warm and sticky. I’m not sure what it is.” Hermione began to giggle, “Oh Ginny that is nothing to be ashamed of. Your fourteen years old and your body is beginning to experience new things. I mean your breasts are forming out now, your stomach is losing that baby fat, and your sex wants to have an orgasm.” Ginny stared at Hermione, “an orgasm, what is that?” Hermione began blushing, “Ginny an orgasm is a very powerful feeling that goes through your body when you masturbate, almost magical but with out the magic.” Ginny continued to stare at Hermione. “Don’t tell me, you don’t know about masturbation right?” Ginny shook her head. Hermione looked around the room and then at the door. She then took her wand out and pointed it at the door, and said, “Oorday ocklay.” There was a click at the lock on the door.

The click being sounding right on the door was extremely loud in Harry’s extendible ear that it made him jump. Very quietly he put his ear back in place listening. He knew about orgasms, he had after been jerking off for about a year now. And now he was listening to two girls talking about it, and it was making his heart beat fast. After all he had noticed how Ginny was getting very attractive, and that Hermione herself was very attractive. He felt a stirring in his pants and felt his cock beginning to swell. He quickly looked around and assured himself that no one was in sight and then placed his hand over his bulge as he slowly began to rub it through his pants as he continued to listen to the two girls on the other side of the door. Why had Hermione locked the door?

Ginny was giving Hermione a puzzled look as that same thought was going through her head. Hermione noticing the look stood up and walked over to Ginny’s bed where she was sitting and sat down next to her. “I locked the door for some privacy, I am going to show you some things, things you will love, and we don’t need anyone barging in on us,” Hermione said. She was sitting real close to Ginny, their thighs practically touching as Hermione gently placed her hand midway up on he thigh. Ginny felt a tingling sensation go through her from Hermione’s touch, and she could smell Hermione’s perfume wafting to nose. “Does my hand bother you, I’ll move it away,” she began lifting her hand off Ginny’s thigh. “Uhhmm... uhhh...no, no it feels good,” Ginny whispered. Hermione put her hand back and began to slightly rub Ginny’s thigh. Hermione face was now close to Ginny’s face, as she whispered, “have you ever kissed anyone before?” Ginny shook her head. “Would like to know what it is like?” Ginny nodded. Hermione moved her face closer to Ginny’s as her nose brushed brush Ginny’s ear. Hermione began to slightly kiss behind Ginny’s ear and then lick her ear lobe. Sensations were flowing through Ginny as Hermione then kissed her way around Ginny’s cheek. Ginny turned her head to face Hermione until both of their noses were touching each other. Ginny’s heart was beating fast as she looked into Hermione’s eyes, and she saw something in her friend’s eyes she had never seen before, Lust. Hermione smiled at Ginny and then moved her hand up to Ginny’s waist, as she leaned in and began kissing Ginny passionately on the lips. Ginny moaned as she returned the kiss putting her hand on Hermione’s waist as well. Hermione continued to kiss Ginny as she moved both of her hands and placed then on Ginny’s cheeks, and then slid her tongue out and parted Ginny’s lips and probe her tongue into Ginny’s mouth. Ginny tongue met with Hermione’s and their tongues felt of each other, exploring each other mouths and Hermione and Ginny moaned.

Harry was trembling now, rubbing his raging hard-on though his pants as he continued to listen to the girls moans, and kissing sounds. Oh-my0god they were making out in there, and he was getting to listen to it. He couldn’t believe his luck, if only he could see what was going on. He looked around again to make sure no one was around and then put his ear back to listen more. They had stopped, what was going, it was so quite. Hermione was watching Ginny, who had her eyes closed and was licking her lips savoring Hermione’s taste. Hermione was licking hers too; Ginny had tasted good, and had responded well, now it was time to move forward. “Did you enjoy that Ginny?” Ginny opened her eyes and looked at Hermione, “It was...It...I don’t know how to describe it, I did enjoy it, was that an orgasm?” Hermione giggle, “Oh no silly, that was no orgasm, that was french kissing, and to tell you the truth, I really enjoyed kissing you.” Ginny blushed. Would you like to try something else. Ginny looked puzzled there’s more?” “Oh yes, see what I am doing is building you up for an orgasm, it is what’s called foreplay. Lets see what we need to do next is...” Hermione trailed off as she picked up her wand and pointed it at Ginny. Ginny asked, “So magic does have something to do with an orgasm?” Hermione paused, “Oh no hun, I just find that magic helps move things along a little faster, and don’t panic, what I’m about to do will startle you,” Hermione re-pointed her wand at Ginny, “Otheclay dissapparate.” Ginny’s clothing instantly disappeared. Ginny gasped as she quickly cover her breasts with one arm, and her pussy with her other hand, and giving her friend and upset look said, “Hermione bring my clothes back.” Hermione just stared at Ginny taking in her nudity with a burning lust in her eyes. “Shhhhhh, Ginny it’s ok, there is nothing to be ashamed of here, I’ll show you.” Hermione then pointed her wand at herself and said, “Othelcay dissaparate.” Hermione clothing vanished like Ginny’s had leaving her naked before Ginny, her perky B-cup tits pointing out. “See now I am naked just like you, now here...”, Hermione placed her hands on Ginny arm and gently removed it revealing a set B-cups tits which were almost as big as Hermione’s giving that Ginny was a year younger, “Your breast are very lovely Ginny, very perky.” Hermione reached and began to gently rub Ginny’s left breast. “Hmmmm, very smooth and so soft”, Hermione began to rub Ginny’s nipple, which was getting hard. Ginny closed her eyes as a moan escaped her lips, “Oh Hermione that feels so good.” “That’s not all sweety,” said Hermione, then she leaned forward and stuck her tongue out and flicked Ginny’s nipple. The flick sent tingly shivers down Ginny, as she moaned again. Hermione then placed her mouth around Ginny’s nipple and began sucking on it while her left hand began to rub Ginny’s right tit. Ginny continued to moan as Hermione then switched tits, and continued sucking one while rubbing the other one.

Harry couldn’t handle it anymore, there were two beautiful and very naked girls inside that room and he wanted to see it. He looked down the hallway and no one was there, then he removed his wand and pointed it at the lock on the door. No he thought, they would hear the lock click if he used the Allohamora charm, which would counter the counter the locking charm that Hermione used and then they would know and would stop, and he did not want them want them to stop. So what charm would he use to be able to see the scene on the other side? Aha, he had it, he pointed his wand at the door and whispered, “Ray-x-ay oorday ne-way-o-ay.” A square portion on the door began to fuzz out as window appeared. The window on the door had become a one-way vision portal that he could see through but if the girls looked at it from their side it still looked like a solid door. He had learned that charm from the George. As Harry peered through portal he couldn’t believe what he saw. Hermione had her back to him and was bare, and because she was leaning forward the top of her smooth butt was showing above the bed covers. Ginny was in front of Hermione sitting straight up with her eyes closed, and since Hermione was sucking on Ginny’s right tit, he could see her bare left tit as Hermione continued to rub it. Damn Ginny was sexy. Harry couldn’t handle it anymore, he unzipped his pants and pulled his hard cock free of his knickers and began stroking it. His cock was a good 6 inches and somewhat thick. He continued stroking as he watched and listened to the girls.
Hermione leaned back and looked back Ginny smiling. “Did you enjoy that hun?” “Oh yes Hermione, it was wonderful.” Hermione smiled, “Good, now we move south.” Ginny looked puzzled, “We can’t move south, my mum would never let me move away, me being so young.” Hermione laughed, “No sweety, not move literally, oh you’re so innocent, that is the most attractive thing about you. Here come stand up.” Hermione took Ginny’s hand and stood and then pulled Ginny up with her. Now Harry had a good view of Hermione’s ass. It was looked round, smooth and firm, and very sexy. Ginny was facing him, and even though she was a few inches shorter then Hermione her tits were well form, and her stomach was firming up and she had nice hips, and her pussy lips were visible as she had only begun to grow a small amount of fiery red pubic hair and it was glistening wet. Hermione began kissing Ginny as her right hand trailed down Ginny’s breast, then stomach then pelvis to right above Ginny’s nether lips. Ginny’s legs slightly parted as Hermione slid her middle into Ginny’s folds and began to move around.

Ginny’s head was swimming at this new sensation. Hermione’s finger was fiddling with her clit. This was sending electric shocks through Ginny’s pussy and she moaned out. She could feel something building deep inside her, as Hermione continued to rub her clit. Hermione then slide middle finger up into Ginny’s pussy as she used her thumb to rub Ginny’s clit. She began probing her finger in and out, as Ginny’s hips began to move with the motion. Ginny was moaning a lot now and she had her eyes close. Hermione knew she was close, very close to her first orgasm, and it was her that was going to bring it for her. But not like this, she had one thing she still wanted to do. She slowly slid her finger out. Ginny gasped, and with pleading eyes, “Please...please don’t stop...I...I need it...I want it in me.” “Shhhh, sweety, you’re about to get it.” With that Hermione knelt in front of Ginny and with her hand spread Ginny’s legs wider. Ginny’s pussy was dripping her sweet girly nectar, running down the insides of her thighs. Ginny’s pussy aroma was a sweet intoxicating scent. Hermione stuck her tongue and licked Ginny’s nether lips tasting her salty but sweet flavor. The lick sent a shock through Ginny, “Oh yes, yes please more Hermione.” Hermione began licking Ginny’s pussy sliding her tongue in and out of her, Ginny grinding against her face, smearing her juices over Hermione‘s face. Then Hermione began licking Ginny’s clit while she slid her finger back up into Ginny’s pussy. Harry was stroking his cock fast; he could feel his orgasm building up. He kept watching as he saw he saw Ginny’s sexy body beginning to tremble. Hermione kept licking and sucking on Ginny’s clit while finger fucking her. Suddenly Ginny’s legs clamped down trapping Hermione’s hand between her thighs as Ginny’s shook. “OHHH, OHHH God Hermione UUgghhh, OOHhhh God, UUGGGHHHHHHHHHHH. Her last cry erupted past her lips as she held that long cry, and her first orgasm racked her body against Hermione’s face, and her girl juices squirted out of from her pussy drenching Hermione’s face, Her body continuing to buck as the orgasm rocked her gushing more juices out into Hermione’s open mouth. At the same time Harry was biting his tongue to keep his own orgasm from being heard as he began to shoot jizz against the door, and he continued to stroke his cock forcing more jizz to spew out and splatter against the door. The last few drops fell onto his pant legs as he pushed the last of it out. He looked back through the portal to see Ginny’s knees sag as slumped into Hermione’s arms, and Hermione held her kissing her faces and lips. Just then Harry heard Mrs. Weasly call from the bottom of the stairs at the end of the hallway, “HERMIONE, GINNY, HARRY, SUPPER’S READY. COME ON DOWN!!!” He heard Mrs. Start walking up the stairs. He took one last look through the portal as he saw Hermione apparating their clothes back onto them. He pointed his wand at the portal and whispered, “Ray-x-ay oorday disapparate.” The viewing portal disapeared. He then pointed his wand at his cum on the door and whispered, “Essmay eanclay.” The Jizz dissapeared and as he ran back to his room he heard the lock on the girls door click. He made it back into his room as Mrs. Weasly got to the top of the stairs and the girls came out of their room. With his heart beating he tucked his cock back into pants, straightened his clothing and walked back out to head for supper.



To be Continued..............


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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 10:02
    Very good Story, let down a bit by the grammar 8/10

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    READER 500
    08.02.2007 10:17
    cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 10:45
    dude your my fucking hero

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    READER 500
    08.02.2007 11:31
    not bad...little bit of gramatical problems



    plus taking a tiny bi more effort on the spell words would make it more "real" try just using bastardized latin like rowling does... keep it up 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 11:53
    ...Woulda been okay if harry wasn't in it.

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    READER 500
    08.02.2007 13:05
    hey i luv it and want some more more and more please

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    READER 500
    08.02.2007 16:16
    i agree with author.GREAT start for series.

    don't wait too long for next chapter

    9/10

    thanx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 16:22
    Very good got to make part 2 soon

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 16:30
    great story

    i like the(is it pig latin?)spells

    gotta have more

    9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 17:32
    horribly short. Barely any fun. Interesting story tho

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 17:44
    can harry come into the story please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 21:02
    oig latin is not a spell but other than that its cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 22:49
    bring harry in on hermione and ginny, that wood b fucking hot

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 22:52
    for teh love of gawd moar

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 02:02
    I liked it which is suprising i dont usually like girl on girl stories

    Nadez

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 03:04
    gr8 story, y don't u hav harry use the new charm on the girls, write nxt chptr soon

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 08:46
    ur a fruit loop girl on girl stories are da best!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 11:00
    Hehe still pretty good...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2007 11:00
    Hehe very nice... I've always thought something like this should be written

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    READER 500
    10.02.2007 01:04
    Gotta agree with the first comment. Change the spell language to Italian or something interesting. Other than that, great. Bring in some older characters like Cho from Goblet of Fire. Make some hilarity ensue w/ the girl in the girls bathroom... Great stuff, fun to read whether horny or not.

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    READER 500
    11.02.2007 00:03
    I would have used another language except for one problem, I only know English. I know that a lot of the spells in the Harry Potter stories are Latin, but since I didn't know any latin I used the one form I knew, Pig Latin. I appreciate all the comments and I will start working on a third chapter, though currently I am working on another story, soon to come out "A Ghostly Haunting". Oh and on the comment of bringing Cho, good thought but I didn't like her, so I think I will just leave her out, but I do look forward to seeing if there are anymore advise you readers would like to see in the upcoming chapter.

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    READER 500
    13.02.2007 12:15
    make part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.02.2007 09:31
    yeah it was a good story. hermione took over the story

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    READER 500
    17.02.2007 18:42
    I love your stories but please learn to spell and use better grammar!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 02:34
    not bad at all write part 4

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 21:25
    sTOP WITH THE LAMEASS PIGLATIN YOU DICK. IT'S ANNOYING.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 22:24
    good concept.

    PLEASE proof -read stories before submitting them. lots of mistakes in spelling,typing lines twice.

    8/10

    thanx

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 00:45
    i liek it....more plz!

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 03:05
    Love the story so far, can't wait for chapter 4.. keep the pig Latin it sounds more original and plus you already established it in these 3 chapters so it really wouldn't make sense to take it away... Do proof-read please.

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 21:34
    its different, i like it

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    READER 500
    24.02.2007 00:10
    Thank you to the last reader. I actually do prefer using pig latin. It's fun I think, plus also to the reader who called me a "DICK", I don't know any other languages. I just took english in school. while I do accept critism which helps in better the future chapters, but if you don't like the pig-latin then don't read it because that is what I will continue to use.

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    READER 500
    25.02.2007 12:17
    nice, but involve harry next time! He could fuck them bove

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2007 09:35
    The head games are good, so just make them a three way relationship, or four way. keep going

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2007 00:31
    awesome, write more please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2007 07:39
    i agree short but good dont forget about the girl ron was messing with and cho you could havea whole series here esily looking forward to more

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    READER 500
    09.03.2007 14:53
    fuckin great

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2007 13:03
    GREAT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2007 13:24
    write part 4

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    READER 500
    19.03.2007 00:07
    GR8 STORY BUT HAVE A LITTLE INCEST WITH GINNY AND ONE OF HER BROTHERS AND FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEEEEESE LET HARY CATCH HERMIONE AND GINNYIN THE ACT SO HER CA USE THE CHARM AND I HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER IS AS GOOD AS THIS ONE 10/10

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    READER 500
    21.03.2007 13:22
    'hard cock out of his knickers' is tht a mistake or is harru a cross dresser

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    READER 500
    21.03.2007 13:31
    i like it buy y say harry wear knickers

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2007 01:43
    why does evry1 keep calling each other sweety?

    its hot hp style...and its anoying

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2007 13:34
    very nice you need to make harry fuck HERMIONE

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    READER 500
    12.04.2007 17:47
    okay...the bad spells are stoarting to get on my nerve...what is it with all of the multiple dashes and endings with -ay...erch

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    READER 500
    16.04.2007 06:30
    man you are the best keep writing there cool

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    READER 500
    18.04.2007 04:35
    hi u have got to write more i wont to see what happens you cant stop now half way through. please write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 21:37
    you should write the next part as harry catching Gimmy masturbating and he joins her

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    READER 500
    23.04.2007 20:19
    harry should fuck ginny and hermione

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 06:06
    Great! Well written, I look forward tothe rest

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    READER 500
    11.05.2007 12:16
    the harry potter stuff is good only thing is that u should go through them and proof read them seriously dude or if ur a dudet lol lol

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    READER 500
    11.05.2007 13:50
    dude or dudet knickers means under wear in brittish dua

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    READER 500
    20.05.2007 19:49
    o my this made juice come out my pussy

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    READER 500
    24.05.2007 17:27
    that's so hott!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2007 05:16
    so ginnys pregnant now ?



    10/10 need to work on the endings

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    READER 500
    02.06.2007 18:01
    beautiful fucking beautiful 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.06.2007 21:18
    this pwns! when will the next part come out? 10000000000000000000/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2007 23:42
    ginny better be pregnant

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2007 10:34
    it was good but u need to check yr spelling and grammer there were typos and missing words other than that good story

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    READER 500
    30.06.2007 03:42
    I love how everyone comments on spelling and grammar, then does it themself. Irony at its best! Love the writing and must say it's better than all the HP stories I've seen. Keep it up and start writing that next part. If you have time run it through a spell check, if you don't...well hell with spelling and post it! And if you didn't guess what I rated this...10/10

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    READER 500
    02.07.2007 03:07
    holy that made me cum

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.07.2007 14:30
    dude that made me cum so much

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    READER 500
    10.07.2007 17:18
    there is a 'reader' who said

    'Dude or dudet knickers means under wear in brittish dua'



    first of all 'brittish' is NOT a language there are several languages in britain



    second URE A FREAkIN R-TArD i bet your american...



    good story keep it up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.07.2007 01:27
    we deffs need a prege Ginny. I would say fix the missin words. And for those of us who correct of spellin and grammar its because of the limited charrie count. At least thats my excuse.



    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.07.2007 04:35
    you are all idiots..there many are diferent words for the same meaning..lol

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.07.2007 19:53
    haha great !! keep writing. get more people involved. also i love your spells !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2007 14:19
    that was silly but still a great story do you want to fuck?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2007 14:13
    luv it get the next part done plz =)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2007 18:41
    Sorry, this is total shit. Degrading to a good book. Get your own damn ideas and then maybe you can write.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.08.2007 19:34
    Think its great but you need to be a bit more inventive with the names of the spells. Hope the next part comes out soon, it would be a great twist if ginny was pregnant. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2007 23:05
    This is total shit...

    I think you should get a better imagination and come up with your own characters...

    LOSER

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.08.2007 00:00
    Well truthfully, the spells kinda sucked but good story anyway

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.08.2007 20:48
    Why are they using magic outside school at the age of 15?

    Why is 'disaperate' a charm?

    Why isn't the cleaning charm 'scourgify'?

    Why isn't the memory hex 'Obliviate'?

    Why did Harry blame memory loss on Voldermort, even though he wasn't directly possesing Harry?

    Why can Hermione cast a non-verbal charm, considering they don't learn how to do this until they're 16?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.08.2007 05:20
    good but fix the mames of spells

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2007 00:11
    Nice story, but spells are just pig latin, USE YOUR IMAGINATION!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2007 20:52
    IM YouR BIGGeST f@N!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2007 21:32
    the spells are in pig latin

    damn this sucks

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2007 00:07
    ok, names of spells, needs more girl-on-girl, and a gangbang

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2007 00:29
    fuck u bitch americans kick ass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2007 17:46
    Yeah, add Ginny walking in on Harry jacking off and have them fuck each other. But that should be the finale. Continue the story, it's great.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.08.2007 19:26
    Reader



    08-10-07 - 20:48

    get a life. its only a story to get people off. not a novel.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2007 11:24
    Reader



    08-19-07 - 19:26



    Well in that case why base it on a novel?

    If it's going to be based on a novel you should get it right if not you may as well not even assosiate it to the novel.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2007 10:27
    Ok, I read this story on some site that is dedicated to Harry Potter Erotica... Pure forgery I tell you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.08.2007 11:59
    all you have to do is translate 'lock' into latin using one of those internet dictionaries. besides not every spell has to be spoken. simple locking spells could b done with a wave of the wand.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.08.2007 03:40
    Lol what was with the jizz part .aw but a good story .hope in ur next one harry gets a piece of that ass .

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2007 16:33
    r u japanese

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2007 23:17
    yeah, same here, i would love to fuck, exept im a 12 yr old girl who has NO secret admirers, and my mom won't let me get a boy friend, any way, i loved that story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.09.2007 02:36
    great god it was amazing continue it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2007 21:15
    americans are badass and so are japanese people specialy asian girls who made the PSP wich is wat im using

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2007 21:50
    dont listen to them keep writing i read all this and the ghosty hauntings

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.09.2007 22:07
    hey reader thats putting down america watch it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.10.2007 21:11
    this is terrible at least type with both hands next time, of course after you get sued

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.10.2007 01:43
    Make Harry Ginny and hermione have masive threesome and then make them wipe harrys mid agsin and make it so they both pregnat

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.10.2007 01:48
    more use of orgasom charm plz

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2007 13:15
    Wow thats was amazing!!! 10/10 To start with i thought it was a joke but after reading it... IT WAS BRILL i defently read any more you release.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.10.2007 17:05
    good story next part though got to continue

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.10.2007 23:31
    Out of all the Harry Potter themed stories on this site that i have read, this one far surpasses them all! pleaseeeeee make a new chapter to add onto it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 01:13
    "All you have to do is translate 'lock' into latin using one of those internet dictionaries. besides not every spell has to be spoken. simple locking spells could b done with a wave of the wand"





    ...... how long has it been since you saw the sun?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 01:41
    PLZ keep Right you are a fucking artist

    but got to have harry in next make it a forsome next time

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 05:17
    Hey im using a PSP too...



    P.S. Great story except for the spelling.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 09:15
    keep the story going

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 11:53
    put harry and ron in next time! Ooh or dumbledore -chuckle

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 12:49
    Continue, continue.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.10.2007 10:59
    Continue but focus on Ginny and Hermione's relationship it's better than Ginny/Harry.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.10.2007 19:22
    I am surprised that no one commented on Ginny showing positive for being pregnant, since that is what almost everyone wanted.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.10.2007 19:44
    MAke next one st hogwarts and put luna ginny hermione tonks and any other you can think of in it o and i gess since this supose to be harry potter story you can put him in senter if you want

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.10.2007 15:13
    Please keep it going, I love it. And don't listen to anyone else, so far they've all been great, even without listening to anyone's advice. Ginny being pregnant is also a good sign, sense I think the best outcome would be a triangle love scene between Harry, Jinny and Hermonie.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.10.2007 16:58
    It was a great story. The only thing is, if you were going to follow Harry Potter, they couldn't use magic out side of school because they're under-age. Otherwise, I'm so wet from reading it. I want someone to watch me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.10.2007 18:36
    KEEP GOING!!!! It is Fucking amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.10.2007 01:19
    i love this story, but make sure you read through them before you post them. you often leave words out and it gets confusing, but definitely a good story. it would be awesome if harry or ron used the orgasm charm at dinner on hermione or ginny, or even tonks, that would be amazing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.10.2007 13:54
    omg this is so fucking gr8 i cummed twice and ime only 13 years old!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.10.2007 13:24
    It's good, but try spellcheck next time.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.10.2007 17:47
    great story all of them. Looking foward to the next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.10.2007 19:44
    dumbledors gay fyi

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.10.2007 17:44
    maybe a late interruption but there are enough sites on the internet with english to latin translation and you can make nice translations out of that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.10.2007 15:12
    This was agood story. Keep writing; I really want to know of Ginny is pregnant.



    PS Try spellcheck!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.10.2007 04:28
    10/10, My eyes hurt from staring at the screen! UVE GOTTA CONTINUE, GREAT STORY ~TRISTAN

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.11.2007 02:06
    ok, but translations needs work, and George is definately gay!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.11.2007 12:06
    Oh great story! And every time i read hermione i image emma watson in there. Oh i luv u emma watson! Ur my only luv!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.11.2007 20:01
    KICK ASS STORY!!! MAKE MORE!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2007 02:52
    AWESOME STORY!!!!! Please make more!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.11.2007 01:31
    for the love of god...please continue this story!!!! I am a huge harry potter fan, but even more so after reading your stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.11.2007 07:37
    omg it make me feel so hot that i had to masturbate

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2007 22:48
    more more more lets see more we need more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2007 21:12
    MORE MORE MORE!! I WANT MORE!! NO I AM NOT SELFISH BUT THIS IS AWESOME MAKE MORE!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2007 12:38
    two thumbs way up hermione's ass keep writing plz!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2007 03:46
    Oh man that was so awesome please continue o please do

    ---GangstLicious

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.11.2007 23:15
    That was amazing!! please keep writing more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.11.2007 23:24
    dude that was truly awesome! you are an artist. Please keep writing more and maybe include harry and definitely hermione more. maybe a threesome with harry ginny and hermione. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.11.2007 03:22
    it was okay.. im not into the girl on girl thing , but that was hot.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2007 21:42
    For the stupid piece of shit that said knickers is underwear in Brittish, knickers is panties, for males the English across the pond would likely you the word pants, and refer to what Canadians and americans consider pants as jeans or khakis, and by the way americans suck ass maybe you should open your eyes to the rest of the world and see that 88 % of the world hates you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 22:53
    also trousers

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2007 03:36
    too good i am going to cum now

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.12.2007 08:36
    11/10!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2007 21:33
    Wtf is up with the dumb ass spell names?? other then that good story

    and even though i am american i agree with some ppl we are fucktards

    and screw the psp im reading on a wii

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2007 23:39
    cum in my earpussy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 12:13
    it was just okay!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.12.2007 02:43
    To the fucker who is a brit, who the fucking hell do u think u are!? We are the world super power not u. We have saved ur sorry ass to many times. And when someone attacks u who do u run to for help? sorry to the auther good story 10 / 10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.12.2007 23:25
    ahh..... little kids arguing over what countries kick ass.... to tell you the truth The world sucks.... No single country is great... As for the knickers thing people this just shows that most of the world is ignorant of other cultures... Just because you think it means one thing doesnt make it mean just that.. IE: American slang, Gay. Correct definition is happy or somewhat close not a fruitcake or a queer guy. Once again we seem to knock ourselves down another level and make te world look shitty.... But then again it is.... Any way pretty good story could follow HP storyline a bit better but cool none the less.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.12.2007 12:32
    What a great story! I loved reading it! Please continue!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.12.2007 19:19
    I loved it :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.12.2007 21:27
    we want more when will chapter 5 come out we want to know

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2008 18:23
    please write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2008 12:43
    my only complaint is the pig-latin. if your going to base a story on harry potter please use real latin or at least more creative wordplays than that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.01.2008 22:34
    100/10 we want chapter 5 when is it coming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.01.2008 22:05
    come on we are waiting for chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.01.2008 06:09
    1000/10 were is chapter 5 we are all waiting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.01.2008 02:30
    suck ass. realy bad. did not eaven get hard.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.01.2008 11:31
    claps for you :P

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 01:03
    wen is ch.5 comin out

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 16:43
    nooby 10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.01.2008 06:46
    sexy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2008 18:39
    write chapter five please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.02.2008 01:33
    I'm using an itouch

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2008 18:09
    i read this while drunk its pretty good, hermini ftw drool, gooda a story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2008 00:32
    Seriously, ever heard of proof reading? The content of these stories is pretty good, but I get a headache from all the typos and errors.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2008 17:28
    Every time I check your page for the next chapter. Do you please give me some results; chapter 5?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2008 00:28
    not bad, but you need to work on the spells. pig latin? i mean, come on! would it kill you to use the internet for something other than porn, like looking up latin translations? plus you need to proofread.

    other than it was great. i liked the chapter with tonks that was hot.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2008 22:57
    god kill the queen

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2008 23:07
    in america, knickers means fuck england

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2008 02:37
    Come on do better spells or read the books the lock spell is culoportus and spellcheck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2008 21:31
    I love it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2008 21:57
    I loved it now please write chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2008 23:28
    come on write chapter 5 we all love chapter 4

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2008 15:23
    need more! That was such an awesome story! When Is chapter 5 coming?!?!?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2008 04:31
    I all for chapter 5 as well. To be honest though I was a bit disgusted with the Tonks scene. For 1, it sounded too much like a torture chamber. And second, Tonks would would never be that cruel.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2008 03:05
    thats so fucking gross.

    way to ruin harry potter dipshit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2008 15:18
    cum on write ch. 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.03.2008 01:15
    holy shit that was great, i want chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2008 00:48
    woah

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2008 02:52
    chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2008 23:14
    to the 13 yr old

    woopety shit, Im 14 and I came 5 times.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2008 00:21
    thats right, I said "woopety shit".

    To the author: good job. keep writing!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2008 05:32
    hey dude u better be writin chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.04.2008 02:05
    Nice.. Need I say more?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2008 22:56
    1 000 000 000/ 10 write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2008 11:45
    what the hell? here are some of the spells you should have used:

    scourgify (cleaning spell), alohamora (the instant picklock spell), alohamoro (the instant lock spell) as for harry seing through the door... wtf? But you should realize harry does go out withgin and all and hermoine is less a friend more a sister to gin and definetely not a mother.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2008 17:53
    nice man. when is the next 1 coming out. by the way this site works very well on my psp but i also have my own laptop

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.04.2008 23:46
    loved it! want tonks fuckin hermione. kinda lost boner when found out ginny was pregnant, but i still want more.hell yeah.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2008 17:40
    all i can say is... you guys are retarded its a sex story. honestly if you read sex stories to find out spells, you are a raging faggot. go die.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2008 05:35
    when is the next chapter cuming i wish i had half the talent you had

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 15:02
    write chapter 5 already

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 13:56
    Hey these were awesome. I really want you to make more. Please!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2008 10:14
    this was good you sould write chapter 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2008 02:09
    Your all jews

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2008 02:11
    I'm only 12 and i can tell this is bullshit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2008 18:56
    write a fifth, it was awesome

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  • Pissed+off
    11.09.2008 07:39
    Don't use pig Latin, you freaking retard!!!! Use spells from the books you moron!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2008 07:51
    I love it. I read them a while ago but still it's great to come back from some more fun.

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  • Landru316
    05.10.2008 23:34
    Please continue this series i love it

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  • The+Guy+Behind+You
    11.03.2009 07:31
    lol he used pig latin because in harry potter (the actual 1) they use latin for the spells, and he is using pig latin in this because its a sex story........lol.....irony....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2009 19:24
    lol whats with the pig latin

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  • horneyguy321
    17.06.2009 13:07
    This is a Great series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2009 09:31
    I would have to say that the way that was written was perfect. I am 13 years old and my 16cm cock loved it all the way. I cummed 6 times.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2009 09:34
    Also it would be great to see Harry fuck Cho's cute little asian pussy. You could also do a gang bang where Harry, Ron, Fred and George fuck Hermione all at once. Sweet.

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  • whoseurdaddy%3F
    23.06.2009 06:44
    AWESOME STORY! fuck that possibly to be continued shit. u should continue it!! ITS AWESOME

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  • cadet31
    14.09.2009 17:19
    ok to the 12yo who commented at 2008-08-03 02:11:24 stfu; its FICTION for a reason; and if ur tlkin bout the other guys cumming how would u know?

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  • billmackie56
    28.09.2009 10:42
    Sexy As Hell --- but I Did feel sad about the ending. Would Love to See Harry, Ginny & Hermione have a Sexy Hot Threesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2009 12:38
    Ginny's eyes are hazel...

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  • frank+stone
    06.12.2009 08:59
    boy freid harry potter sex kissing the frank stone

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 22:49
    This pig-latin is total bullshit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2010 23:37
    this pig latin shit is fucking retarded use some real fucking spells fag

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.11.2010 15:01
    Hey at least he's making an effort!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 10:43
    It's a fictional story there are no real spells nerds

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 10:43
    It's a fictional story there are no real spells nerds

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 10:44
    It's a fictional story there are no real spells nerds

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 13:26
    It's a fictional story there are no real spells nerds

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2011 00:16
    what a dramatic ending

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  • demck23
    20.03.2011 09:38
    keep it going loved it but have all three be mated to harry would make it alot better in that he's been allways put down & controled by others & he's had a very hard time. Give him some hot laddies

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2011 16:21
    YOU BITCH, YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE HARRY AND THE REST OF THE BOYS JOIN IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 14:48
    it was really good keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2011 14:33
    That was the best series I have read yet, make more chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 04:48
    Fred and George gaysex would be professional.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 04:39
    The underwear scene in the hallway was so hot!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 19:01
    i like getting somewan to suck my ass while i stick toothpicks and needles down my pisshole n cum in their eye and ear

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 03:39
    fantastic looking forward to more

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 12:25
    Pls pls pls more.....

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2012 14:35
    This seriously sucks

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2012 08:56
    The pig latin was...interesting. I liked and i also didn't like it. I have one thing to say: if the author had not used pig latin, there might have been a copyright issue.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2012 09:05
    Nice description. (:

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2012 09:19
    I agree with another reader- a threesome would've been great!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2012 09:32
    OMG!!!!!!! Great plot twist at end!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2012 00:01
    tsk tsk tsk pig latin ruins it
    -f

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2012 00:43
    i really like it but i like the spellbook of desires better

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 07:34
    got harder than i have in while

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2012 00:55
    got harder than i have in while

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 16:21
    His taste is pretty good, thoguh I have to say, if the most important thing to him is wand retention, he might need a few more years to learn how to appreciate the non-wand features she brings to the table. (And thank you SO much, I now have that old song Do you believe in magic/In a young girl's heart running through my head. I'll be sure to repay you with either Barry Manilow, or the Village People, whichever is more appropriate to the time of my revenge! )

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2013 19:28
    Big fat gay fag jap boys

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  • EdTheBeast
    23.10.2018 11:04
    I think this is a great story line, please continue!

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