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Sex games

The slave trainers, part 2

Author: liminater

Date: 17 February 2007

BDSM, True Story, Domination/submission, Male / Female

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When the men were finished with the two girls, I took them to the showers and watched them clean themselves up one at a time, then took them back to their cages. Neither of them resisted going in at all, and it seemed to me that they were damn neat purring with contentment in themselves, Both knew that they’d been savagely used, but the physical sensations they’d experienced seemed to have affected them even more deeply than the humiliation… or perhaps it was actually a combination of both.

The day was not even half over, and Everett had me bring another pair of girls in for the dogs, while he had Mitch take one to the dungeon. I gathered that it was Mitch’s first time alone there with a girl, and went to watch what he did.

Unlike Everett, who would just tell me to grab a girl or two, Mitch went to the basement with me and pointed out one he wanted, a girl about 5’1”, with long black hair that went to her waist. She was thin, but not skinny, and her tits were about a c cup, but nicely formed and rounded with little pink nipples that came erect as soon as I took her out of the cage. She stood for the leash without a word, and followed meekly to the dungeon, only a mild look of trepidation in her eyes.

He strapped her to the cross, facing forward, and then put a gag in her mouth and blindfolded her. I saw that she stiffened when he covered her eyes, and knew she was afraid of what he was going to do to her.

Mitch hadn’t talked to me much up til then, usually only to relay an order for Everett or a request from Marsha, but now he got talkative. “Thunder, you ever see a real torture?”

I said I hadn’t… some of the things we did in the Nam we just don’t talk about. “Well, then watch this… This little girl is about to get a taste of what some of our buyers like to do!”

The girl stiffened, and began to whimper, and Mitch picked up a nasty looking quirt… a long handle with a short, stiff whip attached to the end. He swung it roundhouse, and the little whip snapped across the girl’s belly and a bright red line appeared a second later. At first I thought it was blood, but it was only the brightest welt I’d ever seen… and the girl was screaming right past the gag, her body almost beating itself against the cross!

Mitch stepped in front of her and the quirt flew, first one way, then the other, and the red lines looked like a roadmap on her skin. He covered her from above her breasts to down her thighs, stopping just above the knees, but the blows were relentless and continuous, and the girl was doing all she could to scream… but she couldn’t make much more than a squeak.

I tried to keep count of the lashes he gave her, but gave up at over a hundred… and he didn’t even slow down. The rain of lashes against skin continued for a good ten minutes, til Mitch was panting from the exertion and his arm was noticeably slowing down, and he finally stopped altogether. I had sat there, watching, the whole time, and at first I thought I’d finally found something that didn’t turn me on… but after a few of her attempts to scream, I knew I was only lying to myself, and my boner only got harder as it went on and on…

But Mitch wasn’t done. Now that he’d “warmed her up”, he said, the real fun would begin.

The girl was crying, tears running out from under the blindfold, but she showed no sign of understanding what Mitch was saying, and I began to worry that she’d gone into some kind of mental shock at the pain. I asked Mitch, and he said, “nah, she’s withdrawn… they all do that at first in the pain training. It’s like they just shut down their thinking, so they don’t have to deal with it. She’ll be in and out for a bit… watch this!”

He had a small box in his hand, and from it he withdrew some long pins with knobs on the tops, and as I watched, amazed, he stuck one after another into the girl’s belly, and she didn’t even flinch! She continued her crying, but it seemed she didn’t realize the new torture being inflicted on her… until he stuck one through her right nipple.

I thought she was going to bite the gag in half… the shrill shriek that came from low in her throat was so loud it was like she was not gagged at all!

She was back… “in” as Mitch put it… feeling everything he was doing now, and I watched as he put more than a hundred of those two inch needles into her already pain-wracked body, He put several around her pussy, one of them actually right through her clit hood… damn, how she screamed… and damn, how hard I got! I felt myself about to lose control and cum in my jeans, and got up and ran from the room, with Mitch laughing at me as I fled.

I went outside for a few moments and got some air, got myself back under control, and then went to the living room, but that was almost no better… both of the girls I had brought in were being done by the dogs, and each was sucking one of the men off at the same time. Both girls were blonds, and I couldn’t tell, from this angle, which was which of the two, but they were obviously enjoying what was going on… and I wondered if they really were, or if, like Pam, they were trying to fake it, gain our confidence. I knew that Everett would be whipping them shortly, so they’d know that if that were the case, it wasn’t going to work… but right now I was just turned on as hell to watch the dogs humping away at the two of them!

Everett caught my eye, and told me I had some time before I’d be needed… why didn’t I go have some fun upstairs? He didn’t have to suggest it twice.

I ran up the stairs two at a time, and went into the dorm. As always, the girls went silent as soon as they heard me coming in, and their eyes hit the floor, but more than one sat up straighter as I entered, pushed her tits out a bit, obviously trying g to get my attention. One of them was a cute little brunette, small with little tits and a nice shaved pussy, and I unlocked her without a word and hooked a leash to her. She got up without raising her eyes and followed me to my room.
Once inside, I locked the door behind us and took the leash off of her. She knelt at my feet, her head almost touching the floor, and said, “How may I serve my master?”

This was something they learned from another woman who came there a couple times a week… how to behave as a slave. I hadn’t met this woman yet, but I’d heard of her, and apparently she’d already had a go at this one.

The question, though, caught me off guard… and at first I didn’t know what to say. Then it hit me…

“Show me what a little whore you are, and how you’re going to make your master happy with you!” I demanded, and she lit up a smile and carefully glanced up at me.

“If master will lie down, this slave will show him that entire she has learned, to please him!”

I stripped and lay down on the bed, and the girl stepped up beside it and looked me over. I was looking her over, as well, finding her little body extremely enticing, and I got a thrill when she began to caress my feet, and work her way up, massaging as she went, and following the massaging by her hands with a second massage of kisses and tongue-flicks that felt wonderful. He tongue went everywhere along the length of me, even between my toes… kinda gross, but strangely erotic at the same time… and I loved it as she worked her way up my legs towards my cock!

And then she was there… and her tongue was teasing me, licking the seeping liquid that was oozing from the tip of my hard dick. Her tongue was skilled, I’ll say that… she sued it all over my dick and my balls, and let it wander around the area at times, quickly coming back to the head of my dick, and then she took it in, and began to work her way down it a bit at a time, until the whole thing was in her mouth, the head down her open throat.

God, what a feeling… she worked that cock like it was the first thing she’d eaten in weeks, like she couldn’t get enough of it and wanted even more than I had to give her… her tongue never stopped swirling around it, it found places so sensitive that I never even knew they existed… and then teased those spots, making the cum rise up, almost ready to explode down her throat… and then she’d slow her movements, let me subside, let me relax a bit so I wouldn’t cum yet, and then back to work, twist it with her mouth, writhe her tongue against the head of my dick, over and over...

And then she came off of it, resumed the massage and kisses, up my belly, all around my chest, kissing my nipples, flicking them lightly with her tongue, my shoulders, my throat, and then she kissed me, timidly, as if unsure of whether it was permitted, and I wrapped my arms around her and shoved my tongue into her mouth! She kissed me then like a wildcat, clutching me, holding me, as her body crawled into position, and her wet pussy began its own massage of my stiff cock. Her slit ran up and down it, over and over, jacking me off with her pussy, and she kissed me even more deeply, and with a deft shake of her ass, her cunt slid into place and I was buried in her to my balls!
She sat back, her hands pressing on my shoulders to support herself, and her cunt grabbed me as hard as her mouth had done a few moments before. Her ass began to move, and that tight, hot cunt shook with it, moving faster and wilder than I’d ever seen a woman’s body move, like a belly-dancer, until I thought my dick was going to twist right off my body!

And again, when I thought I couldn’t hold back another second, she stopped, slowed her movements to a relaxing tempo, and her muscles clamped down so tight I felt like I was being strangled down there… My orgasm subsided again, and she slowly slid off my cock, her eyes locked on mine, and moved forward ever so slightly… and slid back down, her tight little ass opening to my dick and taking it all the way in one smooth stroke.

She began to move again, and her own moans now mingled with mine, as she fucked me with her ass… her sphincter contracted repeatedly, grabbing my cock with each upstroke, and pulling me as if I were being masturbated by skilled hands… for minutes, this went on, and the sensations were incredible, feelings I’d never experienced before, until once more I felt my cum rising to blast into her, and once more she stopped me… and got off of me… and grabbed my dick and plunged her mouth back down onto it!

The shock and erotic rush of seeing this girl willingly take my cock directly from her own ass into her mouth, sucking it as she had earlier, was more than I could handle, and I blew my load into her mouth and watched as she drank every bit of it down…

She licked the last of it off my dick, and looked up at my eyes, a pleading look on her face, and I thought that she wanted to cum too… but what she asked was, “Master, punish me, I’ve been so bad… I got master’s cock all dirty, and the I put it in my mouth, like a bad girl… punish me for being so bad…”

I rolled up and grabbed her, my dick beginning to shrink back to normal, and pulled her naked body across my lap, and began to spank her, my hand rising and falling as hard as I could manage, and she cried out in pain at each swat… I was leaving beautiful handprints on her ass, and they only turned me on, so that I kept swinging harder and harder, listening to her begin finally to scream, tears flowing down her face from the spanking I was giving her.

And then I realized that I was no longer going soft, I was as hard again as I had been when I dragged her into the room… and I pushed her off, me, put her on hands and knees, and rammed my cock back into her cunt from behind! She was still crying from the spanking, and now she cried as I thrust into her now sore ass, my hips bashing against the red handprints, and I kept on spanking, smacking her ass hard with every thrust. She shook her ass for me, again, making it move like mad, so fast I almost fell out of her several times.

She ground against me, harder and faster than I’d ever felt… for almost a half hour it went on, and I was gasping for breath, when she shook herself one last time and screamed as she came, dragging my own explosive orgasm along with her… We came together, the slave and I, and it was a wonderful sensation… and we fell onto the bed, exhausted.

I woke suddenly, and realized that in my contentment, I had drifted off to sleep… the girl was awake, and merely laying there, contented herself, apparently, and I quickly dressed and took her back to the dorm. From the moment I told her to get up, her eyes were once more downcast… I was starting to like that.

I went downstairs and watched as Everett and Don finished up with the girls they were working with, and took them back to their cages, then checked in on Mitch. The girl he had been so abusing earlier was now laughing and squealing as he pumped in and out of her, and she looked at me as if inviting me to join in. If I hadn’t been so worn out from my exercise upstairs, I might have tried, but I wasn’t supposed to be involved in their training and tortures… at least, not yet.

I left Mitch to finish up and went to take the dorm girls to lunch. Once they were fed, I carried the bowls that the cage girls were fed in down to the basement, and fed them as well.

Everett called me shortly after that, and we went outside to a picnic table.

“So,” he began, “are you handling everything okay?”

I said that I was, and admitted that I was even enjoying it all, far more than I would have dreamed. “To be honest,” I told him, “I thought it would be hard for me, at least til I got used to it, but goddamn, it turns me on!”

Everett nodded. “There’s something about power that does that, and knowing you have absolute power over these girls… god, what a rush!”

We talked about some of the girls, and what he expected me to do with them… I learned that I was actually being a bit too easy on them; he wanted me to be rough and even somewhat cruel with them, while at the same time remaining their safety net… I agreed that I could do that, and he told me to go get a particular girl from upstairs and bring her to the rack room… it was time for me to see some of the more extreme things the girls were taught.

As I went to get her, I thought: What the hell can be more extreme than the things I’ve seen already???

I would soon find out…


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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 12:33
    Didn't like the extreme torture of whipping and pins, but otherwise, well written again.



    I know that each to his/her own, but even so .....................

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 13:23
    Much more rushed than the previous chapter. Take your time

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 15:14
    dont rush please let me have the time to cum while reading your stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 15:57
    I liked it ^_^

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 18:20
    a good story but it was too rushed and short, nothing new happened nowhere near as good as the 1st 1 keep tryin, I was a little disappointed but well done on the grammar.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 19:03
    bring a boy into it, and show how they are trained

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 19:04
    I think the story was good. A little shorter then the last. I didn't like the pins. Yuck!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 20:11
    good 2 short

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 20:36
    You sick son-of-abitch!!! If this is true I hope someone from the FBI gets hold of this and your sick ass rots in jail!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 23:08
    This is a superb series. Dont pay any attention to the twat who wants the fbi, and please please dont bring a boy into it.Queers really are perverted

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 00:34
    I like how you write, almost poetic, and very erotic. Forget the Nay-says, they don't mean a thing. keep writing and I'll keep reading.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 19:41
    M O R E !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... FACKING STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... EVER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 23:39
    Why are you readers patting this guy on the back? These are agonized, tortured little girls. People that do these things are terrorist on the lowest level. It sickens me to think that people in this country/this world enjoy this kind of thing.

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 21:45
    u need to do a third and on on

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 01:01
    People who don't like this story shouldn't read it. I think you are a wonderful writer. Keep writing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 01:02
    This guy tortures children! He's lower than dog shit! I suppose if he has moved on to having sex with new born babies then eating them alive that would be okay too.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 18:37
    if you dont liket he fucking story, dont fucking read it!



    i loved the story man, keep going, your extremely talented

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 19:54
    It's only the best story that I have ever read!!!!! Please keep up the amazing work, i can't wait for part 3!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 20:28
    I loved the story! As for agonized, tortured little girls? I know many girls who would love to be humiliated and degraded like that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.02.2007 17:52
    whan is 3 comung out ????!

    hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 18:42
    I hope you are writing these stories from your prison cell between bouts of having broomsticks shoved up your ass!

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    READER 500
    28.02.2007 20:02
    i liked this story also...it is the best i have read on here...it makes me want to join..and for the bad things said please remember it is fantasy...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 20:13
    i like! both parts are good. though i'd like to see more blood and alot more detail in what the slaves do.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 23:13
    there should B a specail order in the next 1

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 12:44
    what is taking so long and make the next one longer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 14:13
    ;knuijl,yt rdxhjn

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2007 11:35
    you ´re rockin man, where is part 3, i can´t wait longer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2007 17:47
    you're going well mate

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2007 07:01
    nice! i love them both. cant wait for 3!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2007 11:19
    This story is actually quite well written considering the genra. It is an interesting bondage story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 00:45
    Stop crying about the story its a story nothing more if you dont like it dont read it



    i bet that the people who complained read the whole thing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 15:53
    Still waiting for part three. Looking forward to see where this goes. To hell with people that don't like it. If you don't like it try this....DON'T READ IT!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2007 17:22
    Cant wait for part 3. Totally hot story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2007 21:07
    great storie

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2007 11:18
    based on actual events.... not just a story.... fucking hot though!!!



    when's part three coming??

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2007 18:05
    THAT LITT SIP WAS JUST MEAN OF YOU TO LET ME FIND THAT WAS A PART! ! ......AND GET KNOW MORE THAN THAT!!.......BRING IT ON! !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2007 15:49
    When is the part when the undercover get to arrest all the slave trainer and what happen to the girls after those crazy people get arrested. What happen to the girls' life after that incident. Will they get back to their normal life?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2007 17:26
    *drools* OMG! MORE! my master enjoys reading these stories, he really does. after words i get to be fucked by him! more!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2007 23:37
    too short

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2007 12:25
    good second part but not enough to get off on. Need more!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2007 16:27
    do a seven or eight year old, i dare ya!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.03.2007 16:13
    Write a book about the horror that is this business, your stories are contributing to it. It spirals down from here. Case and point; if the reader below had the money, he would probably pay for a child to be kidnapped, tortured and raped. What about the reader who does (have the money)............

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.03.2007 21:26
    good but a little bit short



    maybe put like a 12 yr old fuck in part 3

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2007 19:46
    more more more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 23:05
    AMAZING, don;t pay atention to the fuckers who hate this story, they have probably never been fucked in their life. CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2007 12:00
    I love to fuck sluts like the reader below. They are the best and easiest to "break".

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 00:04
    I like it a lot. Its not as involved as the first, but I like it just the same. You should continue with the series.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2007 12:50
    dude ur fucking rong...if this is true and your torturing girls...think if that was you would u like it? this isnt true by reading it...the fbi looks at this stuff and tracks were u write this if this was true your asses would b in jail by now...FUCKING RETARDS! this isnt true ppl

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    READER 500
    21.03.2007 12:59
    think you ppl!!! if this is true...thats mean to tortue little girls like that i mean if i was one of those guys i would realize wat im doing....think about this if this is true its wrong...please change it to fiction because this isnt true you only said it was true to make it more erotic and ppl dont beleive him!! wat if it wass your daughter getting raped like that? or your sisters? or n e family member...t.h.i.n.k!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2007 12:20
    MORE MORE MORE!!! What happens next?!??! I neeed to know!! Whens part three comeing out?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2007 00:47
    dam if this is reall that makes it even better i love this sick shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2007 05:41
    I keep checking and then double checking waiting on more to one day arrive!! You can't stop now!!! Now that would be torture!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2007 05:45
    ok where the hell can i sighn up?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2007 23:36
    This one is a trained Gor sex slave she lives to please her Master this slave and her Master loves your story whens the next coming out because we cant wait x x love slavexx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2007 23:07
    where B part 3

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.05.2007 02:26
    where can i sign up to be a slave?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.05.2007 04:51
    Where's part 1???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.05.2007 17:47
    to the writer, great story kinda short though. to everyone saying this is sick shit u all still sat there and read every bit of the story and commented so you r just as sick as we are think about that



    where's part 3 you can,t stop now.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.05.2007 05:36
    As a 21 year old woman I love this story, loved part 1 as well. Didn't like the extreme torture stuff as much but it is very well written and one of the few stories where I really want to know what happens next. Good job definitely!

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    READER 500
    17.05.2007 07:35
    part 3 should be up any day... I've been sick, but I'm fine now and writing again. Also, for those girls interested in being a slave... just message Me :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.05.2007 15:23
    Nicely written story. I don't at all enjoy torture but as, it seems, most reader, I couldn't wait to see what happened next. Very good writing, liminater.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.05.2007 10:32
    Please write a part 3. This is so hot!!!



    Can't wait

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.05.2007 01:17
    cant wait for part three, i check site daily

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.06.2007 19:25
    Awesome looking for part 3

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    READER 500
    05.06.2007 23:22
    Amazing story, lookin for part 3! Keep em coming

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    READER 500
    26.06.2007 23:57
    come on man!!! i've been waiting FOREVER for part 3!!!

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    READER 500
    08.07.2007 11:46
    mas por favor. i love this set so far





    -mar

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    READER 500
    08.07.2007 22:36
    great story!

    i wish i could be fucked like those slaves!

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    READER 500
    24.07.2007 19:46
    Whens 3 comng out. hell i would of like to be one of those girls!!!!!

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    READER 500
    05.08.2007 14:15
    wow... that's all i can say!

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    READER 500
    19.08.2007 11:16
    the best just the best !!!

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    READER 500
    24.08.2007 02:32
    I need part 3!!!!

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    READER 500
    08.09.2007 04:40
    mmmm, wish i could be a fuckhole like that . . .gimme more!

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    READER 500
    11.09.2007 19:25
    PART 3 PART 3



    COME ON FOR FUCK'S SAKE PART3

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    READER 500
    12.09.2007 16:54
    Hey r u ever gonna right part 3?Why so long?

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    READER 500
    23.09.2007 16:05
    The first was absolutely great, 10 out of 10! The second good, although the pins and needles brought me down a little, and it was too short (ya spoiled me with the first one!). I am looking for part 3...I run part 1 through my head often, and hope part 3 is similar, so bring it on! PS- Are you really a slave trainer...?

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    READER 500
    01.10.2007 01:01
    does it seem strange, that the worst complainers have read both parts 1 and 2? can't seem to get enough, i suppose.

    what a bunch of self styled moral majority morons.

    thumbs up, liminater. keep going.

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    READER 500
    09.10.2007 14:59
    Hope to see more of it soon.

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    READER 500
    17.10.2007 16:02
    part 3 part 3 part 3

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    READER 500
    24.10.2007 15:02
    wow more please

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    READER 500
    26.10.2007 14:45
    great story, write part 3 soon! I can't wait

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    READER 500
    01.11.2007 14:54
    This was very good, a 9! It was too short though...

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    READER 500
    14.11.2007 12:27
    Please give us more of it!

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    READER 500
    17.11.2007 00:39
    I would love to read a part 3. I have enjoyed parts 1 and 2. I'm dripping wet. I especially love the dogs.

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    READER 500
    20.11.2007 19:10
    no kidding time for part 3 stop being lazy lol

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    READER 500
    24.11.2007 06:49
    part three has been submitted for reciew... should be up shortly.

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    READER 500
    26.11.2007 04:43
    Your writing is very good. You are a finer storyteller. BUT true? I doubt that very much. I say that from experience. What you describe might be fine for someone that is keeping the slave but for commercial use she wouild be next to worthless..Every mark on a slave's body costs me money. Some of what you describe is accurate and I assume the rest was for dramatic effect. The "B" girls date back before the Civil War and were not the sluts they are today- Bar girls. They were "Better's girls" a family tradfition , ole boy .

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 01:32
    Fuck im so wet and i fisted myself to feel size of those dicks. Im gonna fist myself again nw. Fuck, amazing and wonderful

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 01:32
    Fuck im so wet and i fisted myself to feel size of those dicks. Im gonna fist myself again nw. Fuck, amazing and wonderful

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    READER 500
    30.01.2008 23:03
    Final Chapter has been submitted.

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    READER 500
    02.02.2008 15:51
    Are you ill? Is your illness contagious? Perhaps you could get a job in the Bush Whitehouse and become Dick Ceney's little pussyboy.. You and most of your readers are scumbags, without empathy for others and will have to experience someday the horrors of your sick imaginations. As you sow you reap. Perhaps on some prisonplanet somewhere where you will be the torturer's plaything..Grow up, become a human being instead of a hellish troll!

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    READER 500
    04.02.2008 08:57
    Geez... if you think it's so sick, why are you reading it?

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    READER 500
    05.02.2008 09:24
    to all the fuckheads who think this is sick, it is a sotry!!! fiction!!!!!! would you prefer we go and out do this in real life???? no??? then shut the fuck up and let us indulge our fantasies.



    to the author, some of your writings border on scatology, which does nothing for me, the rest though, is absofuckinglutely excellent. i was going to give you a 9, but you get that 1 extra point for your imagination.

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    READER 500
    19.02.2008 10:22
    I've stained my pants

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2008 14:29
    i want to be treated like a slave. this is turining me on

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  • dreamer
    14.01.2009 13:40
    great story, would like to ave a slave of my own

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 10:41
    I'm just going to make a point that it's not just a story it happens in real life, I am a slave and me and all my friends really enjoy it.

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  • liminater
    31.05.2013 00:46
    Feel free to message me if you have comments or questions.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2015 03:19
    I would love to get the same treatment i feel i am just a slave like pam

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2016 23:46
    I would love to give you some of that treatment

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