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Friendly Massage

Author: Stud4u

Date: 18 February 2007

Consensual Sex, True Story, First Time, Teen

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The High School year had just ended, but the summer was already hot. To kick off our vacation, a group of friends and I were going swimming in a nearby lake. Coming along with us, was a new addition to our little circle of friends, a girl named Victoria. Victoria was a shy girl, she had rust colored hair with tints of blonde and brown in it and green eyes, and reddish brown eyebrows.. Her face was round and specked with freckles, she was very cute. Victoria had a fairly nice body, with small but noticeable tits, and a smooth little belly. Below the waist she had a nice plump ass, that looked super firm and tight in the jeans she wore. She was about 5'8, a beautiful 16 year old girl. Victoria was also an accomplished kick-boxer, and she had a lean tight body from years of practice.

The lake was excellent. We all swam around and had a good time, and I got to see Victoria in nothing but a bikini. Her wet body glistened in the sun like a goddesses. Her skin was smooth all over, and I could tell all the guys there longed to have a piece of it.

After swimming, we all went our separate ways and headed for home. Victoria lived in the same community as me, so we decided walk home together. Victoria wore a pink bikini under a wet wife beater shirt that clung to her body. She wore a light leafy skirt to cover her legs. It was a long walk back to our homes, and I was at first afraid it might be awkward, as I did not know her that well. It wasn’t. We just talked for the entire hour long walk. Victoria was an extremely open girl. She told me about her past, her secrets, her crushes, everything. She even confided in me that she was a virgin. “The farthest I’ve ever been with a boy,” She said. “Was kissing and making out and stuff.”

Eventually, we got on the topic of her current boyfriend. I never liked the guy, he was kind of full of himself; a real asshole around school. He managed to pick up Victoria within a month of her coming to our school.

“He’s just an ass!” Victoria exclaimed in frustration.

“Why don’t you dump him?” I asked.

“Cause’... I don’t... I dunno, it’s mean.” Victoria was such a sweet girl, she wouldn’t even dump her asshole boyfriend. (Who was obviously just trying to use her for sex, which he wasn’t getting apparently). As we grew nearer to our home, Victoria got really worked up and launched into a long rant about this guy. We neared my house, but I did not want to be rude and interrupt her, so I decided to walk her to her door. We kept on walking the short distance to her house.

At her doorstep, Victoria was not finished her rant. She exhaled deeply, then spoke to me. “I’m sorry for ranting, hope I wasn’t too annoying?”

“No, not at all.” I said. “But hey, I gotta go Victoria, the sun is boiling me and I want to get into my house.”

“Oh.. Ok.” Victoria sighed. She entered her house, and closed the door behind her. As I turned to walk down the step, the door opened. “Hey, you want to come in here and hang out a while?” She asked sweetly.

I thought about it for a minute, and realized that I had nothing better to do. “Sure...”. We were both still a little wet from swimming, and our clothes still hadn’t dried from the Sun. Her house was air conditioned, and apparently they had it cranked. Cold air washed over me as soon as I entered the door. It was a good feeling though, after being in the hot Sun. I looked at Victoria momentarily, and noticed her perky nipples poking through the fabric of both her bikini and her shirt. This babe had major THO. Of course, Victoria didn’t notice my glances, and didn’t notice the state of her own nipples.

“So, where was I?” She giggled. “Oh ya...” Once again she launched into her rant about her boyfriend, and as she did, she led me throughout the house, giving me a brief tour. We finally ended up in her bedroom. It was a typical girls room, pink and white were the main colors, and posters of Orlando Bloom and other male actors hung on the wall. She plopped down on her bed, and continued to bitch. I could tell she was getting really worked up about this hole thing. I tried to concentrate and listen, but all I could think of were those sweet perky nipples.

I put my hands on her shoulders, and she jumped. “What are you doing?” She exclaimed.

“I was just going to give you a shoulder rub.” I said, telling the genuine truth. “You’re really getting worked up about this.”

“Oh... sorry...” She said cautiously, but letting me put my hands on her shoulders. I began to rub in smooth kneading motions. She began to relax almost immidatly. “Mmm...” she sighed. “That’s good.” She continued to talk a while, but eventually stopped talking and simply let me rub her shoulders, enjoying the massage. Eventually she chimed in “Can you do my back too?” I nodded, and she laid down face into the bed.

I sat at her side, and rubbed her back. I’d start out near her nice round ass, and rub her , through the white shirt. The shirt was fairly dry on the back now, but I could still make out her cute little bikini through it. The front, I knew was a different story. It was still wet and totally see through. Every time I neared the strap of her bikini, I had to lift my hand over, and continue up her back. I did the same when I went down. It was kind of interfering with my work.

“Victoria?” I asked.

“Mmm?” She said.

“Uh...” I touched my finger on where her bikini strap was tied behind her back. “This is... kind of in the way, can I just like...untie it? Just so it’s not in the way.” After a moment of hesitation, Victoria nodded her agreements.

I slipped a hand underneath her shirt, and slide it up her back. She had a strong back, and her skin was smooth and soft. I grabbed onto one of the bikini straps, and untied the knot that held it in place. As I did this, Victoria arced her back, and turned her head to face me.

“Do not tell my boyfriend, please.” She said. “He would FLIP.” I nodded, and finished untying her bikini top. She laid down on her chest again, and let the straps fall to her side. I continued to rub her back a while longer, before finally stopping.

“That felt so good!” She exclaimed. After touching and rubbing this girl, I was thoroughly aroused, and wanted to touch more. I wanted to show her something else that felt good. Alas, I was to shy to come out and say it.

“I can, massage other things to... if you want.”

“Ooh...” She said. “Like what?”

“I dunno... arms... belly... feet... legs...” I hoped she’d choose the last option.

“Well... If it’s not too weird... could you give me a foot rub?” She giggled. “My feet hurt from the walk.”

“Alright, I can try...” I said. I took her legs in my lap, as she sat on the bed. I can tell you right now, I’m not into the whole foot thing, but I know this: girls like foot rubs. Victoria leaned her head back, and closed her eyes as I rubbed the soles and insteps of her feet. This bored me, and I longed to touch her sexy strong legs. I tried to catch a peek up her skirt, and caught the occasional flash of pink from her bikini bottom. Victoria’s shirt was still damp and see through, and her bikini top was falling off. Her nipples were still covered by the top, but it was just held on by the neck.

I moved my hands off her foot, and up to her ankle. She paid no attention, thinking it was part of the foot rub. After rubbing here for a few minutes, I moved up even more to her lower legs. They were firm and smooth, as she had shaved before going swimming. I rubbed her legs, and steadily moved my hand up and down, progressing evenly toward her thigh with each movement. She kept her eyes closed the whole time, enjoying the massage. At her knee, I got to her skirt. I delicately placed on hand on the hem, and slid it halfway up her thigh, exposing her creamy white skin. I would’ve gone further, but she opened her big green eyes, and looked directly into mine. She nervously grabbed hold of her skirt hem, and bite her lower lip. She tugged it back down slightly. There was a moment of awkward sexual tension, before she slowly pulled the skirt up herself, biting her lip and looking into my eyes. She left her skirt just below her crotch, which was still covered by her pink bikini. Her other leg was still covered with her skirt, and she held the fabric between her legs, her thumb toward her crotch, trying to cover herself.

With both hands, I started to rub her exposed leg. Her face grew red as she blushed, and her breathing quickened. Mine did to. She arced the knee of the leg I was rubbing, and moved it away from her pussy, half spreading her legs. She was still holding the skirt, covering herself up, but only know she pressed her hand tightly against herself, and moved her thumb around. It was easy to see she was touching herself She spread her other leg, and the skirt slide up. All that was covering her pussy now was the little bit of fabric that she held in place, and her bikini bottom.

I stopped rubbing her thigh, and placed one hand on her side. She kept her eyes closed, but continued to rub herself, only now she didn’t use her thumb to pretend she wasn’t. She used her palm and rubbed herself up and down through her skirt and bikini. With her free hand, she took the hand I placed on her side, and guided it up to her breasts. They were cold and wet from the water. I squeezed her perfect little tit in my hand, and she finally opened her eyes. She stopped rubbing herself, and propped herself up with her free elbow. I slide my hand down to the bottom of her shirt, and began to tug it off. She helped me slip her out of it, but held her bikini on, which was only staying on by her neck strap.

“Are we going to have sex?” She asked innocently.

“Yeah.” I said.

“Good. I want to...”

She looked into my eyes as I lifted off her bikini top. Her tits were nice and perky, and her nipples where a dark pink color. They poked out at me, like the were yearning to be touched. I placed my hands on her breasts, and squeezed both or her sweet little tits. She moaned as I pinched and twisted one of her cold little goose bumped nipples. I leaned over and placed the other in my mouth, pressing my tongue against it to warm it up. She panted as she became more and more horny. I ran my tongue around her erect nipple, and licked it up and down. She put her fingers in my hair, and pressed my head in closer. I started sucking on her nipple, and heard her let out another little moan. She moved her hands down my neck, and over my shirt. She reached the bottom, and began to tug it up. I stopped sucking on her nipples, and allowed her to take off my shirt.

She then drew her legs close to her chest, and pulled off her skirt, tossing it to the floor. She close her legs, and laid on her side. She looked so sexy and vulnerable, a virgin about to have her first cock inside her.

I touched her leg, and ran my hand in between them. She allowed me to guide her onto her back, and spread her legs open. I kneeled between them, and ran both hands up her smooth powerful legs. I grabbed onto the elastic of her bikini bottom, and began to pull it off. Before I exposed her pussy, she stopped me.

“Please... be gentle. I’m scared.”

“I will baby... don’t worry.” Her pussy was hairy, the same red-brown color as her eyebrows. She squirmed beneath me, it was easy to see how nervous and exposed she felt. “You sure you want this?” I said, a little worried she wasn’t ready.

“Yes... I’m so horny. I want you to... to...” She was shy, but finally managed to say “I want you to fuck me... gently.”

I slide my shorts off, and my cock pushed through the fabric of my boxers. I have been blessed with a decently sized cock, somewhere between 7 and 7.5 inches in length. It is fairly thick too. Not a monstrosity, but still considered big. I am happily above average (which is actually only six inches, or so this girls Cosmo or Maxim magazine tells me.)

My cock throbbed, rock hard as I slide it out of my boxers. It sprung into the air, finally free after being restrained in my boxers so long. Suddenly, I remembered something. I grabbed my shorts, and pulled out my wallet. I took a condom, and slide it onto my cock (better safe than a 17 year old father I always say). I positioned my cock at the entrance of her pussy. I rubbed it against her lips a few times, just to make sure she was ready. I pressed it against her hard little clit, and shr moaned, a deep long moan from within her throat.

“You ready?”

She rolled her head to the side, and looked at me as she lay on her back. “Mmhmm...”

I leaned over her, and slowly guided my cock head between her lips. She inhaled sharply, as she felt something of that size inside her virgin pussy for the first time. I pulled my head out, until it was in only enough for the tip to spread her lips a little. I pushed in again, this time a little farther. Her tight pussy wrapped around my cock, and it felt as though it was sucking and pulling it in further. I drew out, ad pushed in again. Her little cunt was so fucking tight, it felt like it would squeeze my dick off. I withdrew my cock again, and pushed it in faster, and harder, pushing it in all the way this time. She gasped with pleasure as my dick filled her up.

“Ooooh... baby... that feels so good...” She moaned. Her rubbed her sides and belly, moving her hands up to her chest. She rubbed her own tits and slowly tugged on her perky nipples, as I slowly drew my cock in and out of her tight little cunt. After a while of slowly fucking her, her pussy became super wet, and it became easier to slide in and out of her tight little fuck hole.

I leaned in and whispered in her ear, “You like being fucked?” as I continued to slowly fuck her tight little pussy, feeling the warm walls squeeze against my cock with each thrust.

“Mmm... ya.... Your cock feels so good inside me... “

I pushed my dick in her to the base, and rotated my hips, making circular motions. My dick explored every inch of her pussy as it prodded into the deepest reaches of her hole.

“Ooh... that’s soon good...”

I withdrew my dick again, and pushed in. As I pulled out again, it felt as though her pussy didn’t want to let my cock out, and kept sucking it back in. I rammed in again, and she moaned with ecstacy.

“Yeah baby, fuck me!” She cried out, getting rid of her shyness. “Make me your little slut!”

“You like being a slut?” I whispered in her ear.

“Yeah... I love getting your big cock deep inside my pussy... it feels so good...” She let out a long, throaty moan.

When girls talk dirty during sex, it drives me crazy. I started fucking her harder and faster, and she didn’t object. She wrapped her legs around my back, and took my cock like a whore, instead of the little virgin that she was. “Oh yes... fuck me... fuck me... fuck me harder... oh ya... fuck me faster.”

I did as I was asked, apparently abandoning the whole ‘gentle’ idea. I felt her nipples brushing up and down on my chest, as her tits began bouncing underneath me. “Oh... oh... oh... Oh. Oh. Oh!” She began panting. Her breath quickened, and she wrapped her arms around my neck, and pressed her chest into me. She moaned quickly, with each thrust I put into her. I didn’t stop or slow down. I felt my own orgasm building, but didn’t want to cum yet.

“Oh... oh... UH!” She gasped, closing her eyes, and opening her mouth. She pressed her hips into mine, and held me close. She grinded her hips into mine, enjoying and milking out her first orgasm. She let go, and collapsed under me. I withdrew, until only my head was inside her, letting her rest a moment. My cock and balls was soaked with pussy juicy, and as I pulled the head out, clear liquid leaked out of her cunt. She was a squinter (As I think about it, she might’ve actually peed a little instead). My cock was still hard, and I was still wanting to fuck.

I placed both my hands on her hips, and lifted her ass off the bed. Once her cunt was level with my dick, I slide it in. She was so fucking wet, it went in easily, even though she was still as tight as ever. “Ready to get fucked hard?” I asked.

“Oh ya.” She said, bunching up the blanket she laid upon in her hands, to hold on. “Fuck me like a slut, ok?”

I nodded, and drew out of her pussy. I slammed my cock back in, hard. Her tits swayed up toward her face, and she let out a gasp. “More.” She said. I withdrew my cock again, and slammed back into her. Then again. And again. I fucked her faster and faster. Her tits bounced up and down wildly, as I fucked her hard. She moaned and gasped with each thrust. “Ooooh baby. fuck me.. “ She moaned. Her pussy was soaked, and flecks of her cunt juice sprayed each time I thrust into her, splashing on both of our bellies. Her pussy let my cock in and out easily now. Her bed squeaked and moaned under the ferocity of our fucking, but was almost drowned out, as she moaned loader and loader, almost screaming with pleasure.

“I’m gonna cum...” She whined as I pounded her cunt. I felt the tension in my dick, as I was ready to cum as well. I thrust into her hard and fast a few more times, and then buried my cock in all the way as a load of cum exploded out of my dick into the condom. My dick began to spasm and throb, as it expelled load after load of jizz into her cunt . I collapsed over top over her exhausted, with my dick still pressed deep within her. She wrapped her legs around me again, and pulled herself off my dick again, about halfway. She then thrust her self onto it again, fucking me from below. My dick twitched and hurt slightly from my head being so sensitive after the hard fuck. She continued to do this for a few seconds, before letting out another moan “uh... uh... UH-!” she exclaimed. Pussy juice leaked out from all around my cock, as I slowly pulled out. She fell back onto the bed, after enjoying another orgasm. I looked at her little body, and smiled. Officially no longer a virgin. I placed a palm on her pussy, and gently rubbed with my palm. She breathed slowly, but still enjoyed the continuous rubbing between her legs. I gently pressed a finger against her still sensitive clit, and began to rub. She gasped, not expecting this, and moaned as I rubbed harder and harder. One hand shot up to her tit, and she squeezed it hard. The other went down to her crotch, and hovered above me hand, as if getting ready to grab it if she was unable to handle the pleasure. After a short time, she clasped her hand over mine, trying to get me to stop. I kept on rubbing her clit, and she moaned loudly, squeezing and rubbing her tit and nipple hard, preparing for another orgasm. Her legs began to close slightly, and her entire body tensed. She let out another high, loud moan, and her pussy squirted more juice out. It actually sprayed my chest, which was fairly close to her cunt.

She fell back again, rubbing her titty more softly now. I got on my knees between her legs, and she sat up. She placed her hands on my back, and began to lick off her own pussy juice. She closed her eyes, and ran her tongue over my chest and nipples, which grew hard. (Men don’t often get their nipples touched, but it actually feels pretty good when they do, they’re basically the same as girls nipples. Once again, this is according to this girl I know’s Cosmo.) She reached down between my legs, and pulled off the condom. She let it go on her bed, not caring if it spilled. After dropping the condom, she started rubbing my dick with her hand, rubbing in the cum that was still left on. She licked my chest, with her hot tongue, flicking it against my hard nipples. I have extremely sensitive skin, and it sent tingles down my back and sides with each touch. With her free hand, she pushed against my chest, forcing me to lay down on her bed. My cock grew hard as she rubbed it up and down, pulling the skin back over the head and sliding her hand all around the well lubricated shaft.

She kept licking my chest, but progressed downward, toward her hand and my cock, following the treasure trail. Each time her tongue flicked against my bare skin, I twitched, as it shot tingles in all directions. She got to my cock, and licked it from the bottom of the balls, all the way to my head. I groaned in pleasure as her tongue passed between my balls. She then slide my shaft into her mouth, sucking on the head. My dick was already rock hard again, despite cumming only moments before. As she sucked on my head, she ran her hand up and down my cock, sucking the cum off the head off. She then flicked her tongue against the sensitive head, and my back arched slightly from the sudden pleasure. She plunged my cock into her throat, getting about half of it in, before having to draw out. Her beautiful red hair bobbed up and down on my dick, as she sucked cum off it. Her tongue rolled around my hard shaft, and I love every time her soft tongue rubbed against my rock hard cock. I felt another orgasm building, and I propped myself up on my elbows. She must’ve felt a difference too, because she started sucking faster. The cum built up in my cock for what seemed like forever, and I was dying to let it out. It finally exploded from the end of my shaft into her mouth. She choked and coughed, and cum leaked from between her lips.

“Sorry...” I said apologetically. She took my dick out of her mouth, and gazed up at me with her big green eyes. A string of cum connected her mouth and my dick. Without saying another word, she plunged her mouth back onto my cock, and sucked it clean, swallowing every drop of the white sticky cum.

“Guess I went from a virgin, to a total slut, didn’t I?

“Ya, I guess you did.” I said. Victoria crawled up toward my chest, her legs straddling my hips. She pressed her nipples against my chest. She thrust her hips downward, and rubbed her pussy against my semi-hard dick.

“I love fucking you...” She whispered as she rubbed her cunt on my cock. “I’m your innocent little whore now... and this whore needs a cock inside her again...” She brushed her nipples against my chest, and let out a moan. “Ooh... I’m gonna ride you...” She got onto her knees, and positioned her pussy over my now hard dick. “You ready for me to fuck you for a change, baby?” She asked, her voice laced with sexy ecstacy. I just nodded.

She slowly guided my dick into her, pressing it into her warm, tight cunt. One hand she placed on her breast, as she opened her mouth in a silent moan. She drew herself up, before allowing herself to fall back down onto my cock. Her tight, wet cunt lips slide around my cock, sucking it back in each time she pulled up again. She started riding me faster and faster, her tits pulsing up and down as she bounced. She put her hands in her hair, and inhaled sharply through gritted teeth. I felt my orgasm began to grow again.

“Get off...” I said, not wanting to cum in her.

“No... it feels so good...” She kept riding my cock, and I tried to hold in my cum.

“I’m gonna cum...” I said.

“Me too... I- I-I... I’m cumming!” She exclaimed. She tensed her legs, and her back arc. She let out a long moan, and more pussy juice exploded onto my cock. She sank back down, until I was all the way in her. Then, my cock pulsed out gobs of hot cum into her pussy. Victoria finally collapsed onto me, exhausted from fucking for so long. She rolled off of me, and then placed a hand on my stomach.

“I just realized something...” she said to me.

“What’s that?”

“You just took my virginity, and never kissed my once.”

I smiled. “Come here, you.” I held her closely and kissed her passionately on the lips. After a few minutes, we parted. “What about your boyfriend?” I asked.

“Who cares. I’m going to dump him.”

“Yeah.” I smiled. After a few seconds of non awkward silence, I spoke. “Well. We got all summer ahead of us it looks like.”

“Yeah...” Victoria said, smiling mischievously. “At least we’ll have something to do.”

-After the fuck fest, she cleaned out her pussy, and we got lucky and she wasn’t pregnant.


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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 06:55
    fuck mate you have to give us more. i need to cum again. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 07:41
    This is one HOT Story give me more as I want to shoot another load.

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 08:54
    good story give more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 09:20
    part 2 nessesary

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 10:15
    Make them fuck in the lake

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 12:27
    While this story is promising, it's missing one crucial thing: murder. Pretty soon this Victoria bitch is going to start gabbing too much and need to get her throat cut. That'll be a really sexy story, likesay, if he gets hard when she goes limp, and he finishes up and goes soft when she tenses up from rigor mortis. Once again, good start, not enough senseless violence and slaughter though.

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 13:33
    great story.can't wait for next adventure

    9/10

    thanx

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 15:31
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    02-21-07 - 12:27



    While this story is promising, it's missing one crucial thing: murder. pretty soon this victoria bitch is going to start gabbing too much and need to get her throat cut. that'll be a really sexy story, likesay, if he gets hard when she goes limp, and he finishes up and goes soft when she tenses up from rigor mortis. once again, good start, not enough senseless violence and slaughter though."





    wtf?? you've got a sick mind

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    READER 500
    21.02.2007 19:36
    nice 10/10





    Murder? Dude or Dudet (cant tell) sick and twisted mind really sick and twisted mind thats effing wrong

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 19:49
    omg im so horny now write another one pleeez

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 23:03
    great story. Keep it up.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 23:55
    you're a pretty promising dude... Hoep to hear more from you!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2007 11:53
    awesome story. 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 15:52
    Nicely done, believeable, slow build of passion, respect for the girl and gentle consideration. The kind of story that would make one want to have an experience just like it. Again, nicely written.

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 16:12
    Beatuiful.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2007 16:26
    great story keep it coming 10/10



    and the person who said she should be fucked while going through roger mortis -> that is the most disturbing and screwed up thing i've ever heard and please never write a story. twisted bastard.

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 17:43
    great story

    if only life was as gd as this story,

    write more!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2007 18:54
    Dude whats THO mean?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2007 23:14
    Awesome story I know what I do is go to cousin and fuck hardest

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 23:34
    wow, i was soooooooo horny after that story

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    READER 500
    22.02.2007 23:43
    Excellent for a first timer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 01:53
    Splendid hot story,

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    READER 500
    23.02.2007 02:41
    Weeeeeee10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 02:42
    i jerkd twice ro this 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 06:07
    great story, a couple grammar mistakes but other than that, well done!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 11:53
    great story write another one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 13:47
    why do people always say something about grammer mistakes DOES IT MATTER

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 14:52
    Good story, but for the first half, I thought the story was written in the persona of a girl... maybe by adding a small hint about the person being a girl will solve it. Otherwise, great story

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    READER 500
    23.02.2007 16:03
    To answer 02-22-07 - 18:54, a THO is a "titty hard-on" or erect nipples. I had to look it up on the urban dictionary.



    I agree with the previous commenter: The gender of the storyteller is ambiguous until he actually pulls out his cock. He doesn't have a name either.



    I loved the plot. It was very sweet and kind. Heck, it was downright romantic. That quality more than makes up for the other minor flaws. I liked the realism of the info that you put in parenthesis, though parenthesis are usually bad style. Thanks for not making a big deal about the absence of a hymen in a girl who was an "accomplished kick boxer". An intact hymen would have been very unlikely. Actually, a little more detail on her athletic physique would have been great.



    Great job so far. Thanks.



    =dreamer=

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 18:25
    That was very well written. Kudos. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 19:43
    you know that one of the worst things you can do when you come in a girl is clean her out later it pushes your semen closer to her egg

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 19:56
    Dude, that was an awesome story. Keep writing!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 21:41
    any time someone brags about the size of his dick just subtract 3 inches. that's the real deal. dude, just use your spell checker it's really pretty simple.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2007 23:44
    good story. only thing that bothred me was that Maxim is a man magazine

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 01:26
    great story man. check your spelling though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 14:25
    thanks for teh comments, i actually forgot what magazine i read that in, so i just said maxime, i thought it was a girls... it migt've been cosmo or something...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2007 21:03
    easy to tell it was your first story. just a few things though. you said that victoria was a shy girl but then as they are walking home from the lake she completely opens up to the guy. its just out of charactar. apart from that, proof-read and develop the charactars a little more and you have got yourself one hell of a story. 7/10

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    READER 500
    25.02.2007 01:50
    Marvelous! As other have mentioned, syntax could use a little work, but semantically, it's very easy to follow. Just remember to proof-read (although with a story like this, you may get distracted!) The plot is lovely; it really lets you understand the characters, and the sex is kind, but dirty; the way sex should be.



    It's true that the first person's gender is a little ambiguous, but I don't think it matters. Actually, you might try re-writing it as a lesbian story!



    Anyway, it got me aroused, then all the way there; something most stories don't. So great job! 10/10 :)

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    READER 500
    25.02.2007 02:15
    Shoot, I forgot to mention something:



    you said that victoria was a shy girl but then as they are walking home from the lake she completely opens up to the guy. its just out of charactar.



    This isn't necessarily true. Many people have trouble opening up in groups, but no problem in one-on-one interaction. She obviously has some chemistry with the guy, which makes it a lot easier :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.02.2007 06:28
    Boring

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.02.2007 19:09
    u said that she was a virgin so why didnt u mention u bursting her cherry...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2007 10:09
    It happens like in the story. She probably liked the guy to begin with then took her opportunity to claim him.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2007 22:58
    lol u should wright real storys not this shit put it to good use.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2007 17:05
    good, hot story...reminds me of my first girl friend who acted about the same way when we had sex on that Thaksgiving afternoon long ago. She had absolutely NO pubic hair, and that fact has stayed with me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2007 23:14
    grrrrrrrrrrrrreat

    lol

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2007 23:15
    totally hot!! i loved it!! keep up the good work! 10/10!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 06:04
    do that 2 me!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 14:02
    just came

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 20:00
    fucken awesome but work on your spelling

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 02:01
    i do not think she was a virgin. but a good story right.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 02:31
    Great story. The only things are the little spelling/grammer errors like saying "my" insted of "me" etc.

    Those can set people off, so they're important, especially to critical readers.

    Other than that, excellent, what I would like to see is more commentary on her body, being athletic as she was and everything.

    (Also, I like that you didn't put in the whole hymen thing, as she was ab athletic person. Good job)

    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 07:51
    good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 17:39
    People who say that the gender of the "speaker" is ambiguous until he pulls out his cock, this is simply not true. Being that it is obvious that Victoria is a female, and the heading of the story reads "Friendly massage rated 8.22/10, read 44583 times, True Story, First Time, Teen Male/Teen Female, Virginity, Consensual Sex" Obviously the speaker would be a "Teen Male"



    Mmk

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2007 12:40
    god man, nice story, if it's true, i envy u. but seriously though, read it over again and fix your mistakes, some of the scentances just don't make sence and thats not helpfull when your in the middle of a sex scene and you cant read the next line. fix it up and its a 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2007 03:19
    1010 fuckin awesome sry fix grammar

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2007 17:05
    wha a load of crap

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2007 20:19
    great start......LOTS of grammar errors----fix these, it might be better.... 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2007 17:50
    wow. awsome story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2007 20:46
    she was not a virgin she got one over on you lmao

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 02:37
    hey that was great.............. good job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 12:23
    she sounds sexy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 18:45
    ahh that was SO good. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2007 20:47
    A really good story. I agree with the others, There were a few minor grammar issues but apart from that, really good!



    8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2007 19:17
    ok these stories aren't resumes. they are pornography in a text form. why the hell does it matter if the grammar is correct as long as you can get off?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2007 00:33
    Erotic but hard to believe that it is real.

    What happened to her hyman. There was no finger plunging to break it, so did she lose it before her first encounter, or did the author forget there was such a thing present in most virgins?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2007 19:54
    The author did not forget, as i pointed out she was athletic, which if you know anything most active girls break theirs during sports...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2007 00:38
    Great story...I could picture myself when I was 15 with my cousin who was 14 playing in the hayloft. After fucking and sucking a few times she became a real slutty cum sucking bitch. And we both enjoyed the Hot times we had together.... She didn't have a cherry either cause she broke it herself masturbating with a candle...but who cares !!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2007 20:35
    not bad

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2007 17:34
    very good, but i agree...the lack of mention of her hymen was disappointing. it's one of my favorite parts of reading the virgin stuff.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2007 12:17
    a very good story for a first time author and babe, but was she a virgin thats what i wanna know.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2007 15:48
    "it expelled load after load of jizz into her cunt"



    No it didn't. You said you were wearing a condom.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2007 04:28
    uh

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2007 21:49
    good story, the ending left something to be desired, the last lines just kinda stupid and funny. but overall nicely done, hot as hell.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.03.2007 23:29
    Good story, Some gramtical errors. But good none the less. Like the whole turn around from shy girl to slut puppy. Yea i thought about that hyman, But with her being a kick boxer would explane the lack of one.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 01:57
    i kick ass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 12:58
    Not bad. Not bad at all. Excellent story with suspense that nails the reader on his chair.I will copy it all in a Wordpad!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 16:02
    sexY!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 21:47
    great story for your 1st time! i like it how you explain the settings and story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2007 23:47
    awesome story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2007 23:25
    good plot to it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2007 00:44
    Very good story...I dont know how everyone seems to

    come multple times in these stories, wheras it doesn't

    seem to be that way in actuality.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2007 06:06
    hey young man thhhat story trminde me of being a teenager and fucking the girl across the street. GGGGGod gow I loved those days. thanks forr thee memories.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2007 06:10
    fantasdtic

    mindblowing

    lo... it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2007 00:08
    wack u forgot to ad that his dick would be red and raw how can he bang her 2 times and get head and where were her parents

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2007 16:23
    Good story but like the 3/20/07 reader said, men just don't come that many times in this stories length of time. We all wish that we could. Any girl being fucked for the first time doesn't usually give an after-fuck blowjob. They just want to fuck more.

    Gave it an 8/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2007 00:08
    dude i can cum more than that so believable loved it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2007 01:06
    well much like the virgin in the story you were new to writing but know you are a real slut at it :P

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2007 05:51
    Omfg soo good, loved it!! write more dude

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 15:21
    That was a gud story i really enjoyed it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 18:37
    7 1/2inches isnt anywhere near average. Its kinda weird always reading about these obviously huge dicks.



    Other than that, its good. Me likey,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 20:33
    wow nice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2007 01:34
    if it was that good she whould have gone sleep but it was a good one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2007 19:54
    u can fucking have to orgasms u fucktards. Stop masturbating for about 2 weeks then screw. You can have 2 or more, you all are just to pathetic to keep trying. Also, in the final sentence "-After the fuck fest, she cleaned out her pussy, and we got lucky and she wasn’t pregnant. " You can not find out if she is pregnant right after you have sex. And also, you never explained where her parents were. I know when I go see a girl, i want to know where her parents are before we have wild monkey sex. And once again, you can orgasm more than once. Just stop wacking off everytime you get the chance.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.04.2007 01:40
    The ending really kinda sucked... and you cant come 3 times that quickly... that just is not possible

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.04.2007 23:05
    Men cant cum dat much !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.04.2007 04:03
    make a guy have a smaller penis a nd give a girl a huge orgasim...it would be funny

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2007 23:01
    bullshit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2007 01:05
    Rust nigga plz!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2007 17:03
    sweet, good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2007 21:14
    it was believing at first then you killed it u were rock hard in seconds and cummed 2 more times? plz

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2007 00:20
    GAy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.04.2007 15:13
    fuckoff

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2007 00:48
    Wow that was a pretty intense fuck fest!! How did u cum so many times tat fast??

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2007 13:55
    w00t good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.05.2007 11:34
    men can cum that often... too bad ur not 1 of them Reader 04.15.07 & 04.24.07... Dont be a hater bcuz someone has more fun than u!!!... great story!!.. now i need to go find my bf and get some!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.05.2007 11:36
    I wish my boyfried could cum more than once!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.05.2007 00:57
    good story man and if some guys are not able to do that and they are jelous thats there problem because i know its possible because i can

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 22:39
    wow nice man dont listen 2 thajealous 2 inchers.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2007 05:24
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.05.2007 13:35
    Miss Handeled

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2007 15:05
    I loved it dont stop writing.... I am concidering sending you my information

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.06.2007 02:59
    oh it looks like someone is a wee git jelous someone can cum more than him but man keep the writings cumming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.06.2007 19:16
    lucky son of a bitch my girl got pregnant im scared shitless to tell my parents

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.06.2007 08:51
    good story, just normal sex story with no shit in it ;) keep on writing dude it was cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.06.2007 07:57
    Awsome story man...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.06.2007 08:19
    keep the stories cummin

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.06.2007 18:08
    omg u got my pussy throbbing u wanna give me a massage ;) XOXXX

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2007 00:52
    Nice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2007 18:50
    well i shot load after load in my hand when i first read this...just came back to tell u thought something similar happened to me shortly after reading it? want me to write it up?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2007 13:05
    apart from a few grammer mistakes it was one of the best stories i've read in this genre! And that's saying something. Also i just wanted to point out that teens use this site to(myself included). Don't stop writing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2007 01:29
    awesome

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2007 02:21
    MY PUSSY IS SUPER WET AFTER READING THIS

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.07.2007 08:10
    this afternoon i weel do my firt penetration i am a male its going to happend in my housso is she going to let liquid on my bed or something like that just asking answer plz?????

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.08.2007 22:39
    hay man nice story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2007 16:28
    Hell yeah man best story ive ever read.

    Beats high school English stories.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.09.2007 14:24
    Oh my god,by far my favorite story that I have read so far.My pussy's so wet...mmm...thank you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.11.2007 00:55
    definitely one of the best I've read on here

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.11.2007 00:14
    This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Apart from the grammar, it's a work of art! Keep up the awesome work, man!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 02:29
    Great Story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2008 02:13
    perfectly illustrates the fact that under our innocent shells we are all slutty sex crazed girls... for the right guy...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2008 22:21
    what about her cherry?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2008 02:21
    ilike this because it was real no crap about the girl liking video games or anything like that
    good job

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  • Sunny
    01.11.2008 15:15
    Really it took me .

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2013 22:44
    You said she was a virgin but...No hymen?

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