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Shelly Shocked

Author: John Sheppard

Date: 16 April 2007

Anal, True Story, Bi-sexual, Blowjob

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I have been teaching high school for 7 years now, I'm 30 years old 6'2
190lbs I work out 3 times a week and am in good shape I have dark hair blue
eyes. I teach 10th grade History to a very diverse and colorful group of
young people. Every year I have a new group of young ladies who seem to
develop~ for lack of a better term a crush on me. I want you all to know
I'm happily married to the most beautiful woman on the planet.
I get lots
of notes from my female students, mostly secret admirer notes but from time
to time some of the bolder girls will sign the letter. The school policy is
that if I, or any teacher receive any kind of personal correspondence not
related to school work from a student female or male it has to be reported
to the school administration. I feel bad having to do this because the
girls just have what I consider a harmless crush. I have a friend who is a
teacher and a baseball coach. This friend happens to be female her name is
Michelle. She has a daughter who is in one of my classes. Her daughters
name is Shelly. I have known Shelly since she was a tiny thing. She is now
considered by her piers, and anyone with eyes the hottest girl in school!
Michelle and Shelly are over at my house on weekends a couple of times a
month. My wife and Michelle are also close friends. It is no secret that
Michelle is gay. She doesn't look gay by any means she is beautiful but
she is completely gay.

One Friday evening Michelle and Shelly came over to the house, it was
during the summer and school was out. It was the summer Shelly turned 15. I
will try and describe Shelly, but I promise you I will not be able to do
her justice with words. She is about 5'9 slender, with long blonde hair,
and blue eyes she weighs 125lbs, and is very athletic. Her skin seems to be
perfect. it is always just a little darker then most peoples even if she
isnt tanning. She has long legs, and to be honest the tightest, most
perfect ass god ever created!! Her breast are either extremely full b cups
or a decent c cup. Always perky. But her most attractive quality is her
mouth, her smile is angelic, when she smiles its as if the whole world
stands still. She is always smiling. Her teeth are so white they almost
seem florescent white. She is what some would consider a tom boy, however
she is all girl, no matter how she at times tries to dress down she can not
hide her perfect form. Her mother put her on the pill as soon as she
started menstruating; I know this because Michelle told my wife who had
mixed feelings about her being put on the pill at such a young age.

This particular day Shelly was wearing kinda tight blue jean shorts not
daisy dukes but short and tight with a tank top she had her long blonde
hair in a pony tail that nearly reached her perfect ass.. She was being her
normal bubbly self. She walked up to me and smiled and said hey Mr.J I said
hey girl whats up? Her response took me completely by surprise. she looked
right at my cock, and said you tell me! then looked directly in my eyes,
and smiled at me. she grabbed her pony tail and kinda twirled it, and said
your looking good Mr. J. this was completely out of character for her, and
completely took me by surprise. She looked back at my cock, I was wearing
kaki shorts and I never wear underwear. My cock outline is always evident
no matter what I wear or the state of arousal my cock might be in. she then
smiled at me, and said so whats up Mr. J?

For once in my life a student of mine left me speechless. She smiled
again, and walked off kinda of shaking her ass a little special for my
viewing pleasure. She looked back over her shoulder with the confidence of
knowing any man would be looking at her ass as she walked away, and smiled
again. as I watched her eyes trace there way down to my cock for the third
time. I didn't know what to say or do. We have a pool and I saw her in the
distance remove her tank top underneath she had on a pink bikini top. I
remember thinking I could feel the fabric of my shorts getting tighter on
my cock. Then she kept her legs completely straight and removed her shorts
revealing a matching pink bottom of her bikini. In removing her shorts one
side of her bottom was kinda coming off her ass she looked back at me
smiled that confident smile, and inserted her fingers in the top of her
bikini bottom running he fingers down just inside the fabric until her
fingers were just under her ass cheeks. Her bikini magically snapped back
in to perfect form on her perfect ass. I know I was making a fool of myself
watching this 15 year old goddess with an obvious desire. I can only
imagine how I must have looked. Then she took it a step further from across
the yard about 15 yards she adjusted the front of her bikini bottom
extending it from her body anyone who was watching could see her pussy lips
perfectly. She looked down at her groin area and acted like she was
arranging her suit when in reality she was showing me what I could never
have. I could see her pussy so clearly. She was smooth shaven except for a
small little patch of hair just above her clit and only a couple of inches
tall. I have a large cock! I'm not going to give measurements but even
when im flaccid my cock is visible. At this moment I have a fucking huge
hard on. Reality hit me real quick my wife was here and if she or anyone
saw me they would know what is happening. I have girls everyday sit in
front of me and give me panty shots I see up there skirts all the time and
its always flattering that theses hot girls want to flirt with me and it
always to a certain extent turns me on, but nothing like this. I had a hard
on that was not going to be ignored. I sat down in a lawn chair. Covered my
cock with a sports illustrated issue and tried to hid my hard on. Shelly
jumped in the pool and swam within 5 feet of me and asked now Mr. J whats
up? I just said nothing. She said eww that's the issue with the swim
suites can I see it. I said no real quick and she laughed and swam to the
other side of the pool. Just then my wife came out side in her new swim
suit. I used this opportunity to complement her on the suit and more
importantly on the woman in the suit. I told her she was so sexy she was
turning me on she kinda smiled slyly at me and I motioned towards the
house. She took my hand, and when I stood up she looked at me keeping the
magazine over my cock and smiled at me real big. I told her I couldn't
help it she was so hot in that new suit. This seemed to make her day. She
lead me into the house, and just inside the door she turned and kissed me
very passionately. She ran her hands down to my cock and said she is so wet
just thinking how she turned me on. I didn't even take her suit off I
pushed it to the side, and bent her over the kitchen table, and drove my
whole cock in her pussy from behind. I was pretending I was in side
Shelly's tight little teenage pussy. I pounded her hard! she started to
cum violently, and I did the same. She turned to me, and told me she loved
me, and that I was the best husband in the world. I felt about 1 inch tall
because I did and do love my wife. Shelly had me so worked up I needed
relief. We went back to the pool. My wife was glowing the whole time and
smiling like she was the happiest woman in the world, which only served to
make me feel more like shit. Shelly swam up to me, and said dang Mr. J that
was quick!!! I didn't say anything. She then leaned back a little bit and
her perfect breast were kinda sticking out of the water. She saw me look
and then advert my eyes. She then said, when Mrs. J came out your cum was
running down her leg. I again was speechless!! She smiled at me, and said
that wouldn't have happened with me if you would have taken the person you
wanted to fuck in the house. I just looked at her, and she said I would
have insisted you cum in my mouth! Again I was speechless! She looked at
my cock again, and did the back stroke across the pool.


I saw Shelly several more times over the summer. Every time she would get
me so worked up I would use my wife as a surrogate. I could not deny that
fucking Shelly was the number one thing on my mind it was just about the
only thing on my mind.

My wife and Michelle and a couple other girls had a bunko night for the
girls. Bunko is a card game chicks like to play.

My wife wasn't gone but a few minutes when there was a knock on my door. It
was Shelly and her new boyfriend he too was a student of mine his name is
Chris he is an excellent student, a star high school athlete, president of
the student body.

I was excited to see him I thought for sure with him here; Shelly would be
on her best behavior. I could not have been more wrong. I asked them if
they wanted something to drink they both did. I excused myself to get us
some sodas. Shelly came in the kitchen and I said hey girl. She said Mr. J
lets cut the shit, and with that she came right up to me and gently
massaged my cock through my shorts. I got real scared real quick because I
knew if she did not stop I would fuck her. She looked up at me and
smiled. I looked directly into the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever
seen. I told her we had to stop. She smiled at me and said another part of
your body does not agree with you. I told her it was wrong. She un zipped
my fly and snaked her hand into my pants I felt the cool of her skin touch
my cock. I was so hard I could have driven my cock threw a concrete
wall. She looked right at me and said its so big, and with that she tried
to close her hand around my cock, she could barley touch her fingertips
together when she encircled my cock with her tiny little teenage hand. She
got real close to me and closed her eyes and stood on her tippy toes, I
could not help but close mine as our lips met. I felt her pull on my cock
just a little bit as her tongue went into my mouth. I was leaking precum,
she took one finger and swirled the precum on the tip of my cock head. She
stood back just a little and put her finger in her mouth. I thought I would
shoot right then. She smiled at me and asked me if I wanted to fuck her. I
said of course I did!! But I didn't think I should. She told me well of
course morally you should not fuck me. I didn't say anything for a second
then I said you're my student. She said not to worry, she would never tell
anyone. I said what the hell and started to kiss her really
passionately. Without warning she was on her knees and I watched as her
beautiful mouth opened wide for my cock. then I felt the warm wet awesome
feeling that comes from the first time a cock discovers a new mouth!!!

She went as far down on me as she could moaning and humming while she
sucked my cock into her mouth. Suddenly it dawned on me that Chris was
watching, I thought for sure he was going to be mad. After all I had my
cock in his girls mouth. I tried to pull away from Shelly's mouth but she
sucked me in even harder I looked down and saw her perfect mouth sucking my
fat cock for all she was worth. Chris came over with his cock out. He was
stroking it and it was a nice cock, mine is cut but his isn't. I was about
to forcibly remove my cock from Shelly when she took my cock from her mouth
and offered my cock to Chris. I didn't know what to do or think! My first
thought was this kid is a good looking kid; then I asked myself why was I
thinking that? This is a guy not a girl! When he got on his knees in front
of me placed his hand on my cock opened his mouth and sucked down on my
cock, it all seemed as if it was happening in slow motion. Even his eyes
looking up at me seemed to move in slow motion. I did not say or do
anything. Shelly stood up, and very seductively removed her clothes. She
turned from me with her back to me, and bent at the waist to remove her
panties. I saw the most perfect tiny, little teenage pussy with just a hit
of pink showing when she bent over. She looked back at me, and smiled then
looked at Chris and smiled. Chris was giving me the best suck job of my
life. I said I was close. Shelly came over got on her knees and sucked my
balls while Chris continued the assault on my fat cock with his awesome
mouth. I shot the first shot with my cock only about two inches in his
mouth, cum was running down his chin. Shelly quickly licked it from his
chin then without my cock ever leaving someone's mouth I was in Shelly's
mouth for the second shot. I watched as she started to swallow, then the
third shot came, and some escaped her mouth, Chris was very eager to lick
it up. Then again my cock changed mouths; without ever being completely
outside of a mouth.

I had a hand on top of each of there heads I watched as Shelly's blonde
head went all the way down on my cock. The I watched as Chris did the
same. Shelly said OMG this is so Fucking HOT!!!!



For a few minutes after that no one said a word. The Shelly broke the
silence by saying I'm so fucking wet!! She then took my hand and placed it
on her pussy and used her finger to push one of mine in her, she was so
freaking wet!!! And tight. When just my middle finger passed her opening
she jumped but then impaled herself on my finger. We started to kiss, she
was kissing me like she was a woman not a girl but a woman in love. She is
an awesome kisser. She broke our kiss to kiss Chris. She kissed Chris just
as passionately. Then she came back for me she started to kiss me again she
was grinding her pussy into my hand. Chris was kissing her neck while I was
kissing her mouth. I thought to myself Chris is a good looking kid, I
wonder want it would be like to kiss him. No sooner did I think that then
Shelly turned my face toward Chris and kinda pushed us together. I don't
know why I did it but I kissed him just as passionately as I had kissed
Shelly. I sucked his tongue and he sucked mine. I was kissing a guy and I
ws in freaking heaven and didn't care what the world was going to think of
me at the time anyway. His hand went to my cock and mine followed suit. I
had this teenage studs cock in my hand. He moaned when I touched his cock
and turned to better face me. We kissed and massaged each other cock for a
while then Shelly said she wanted to play. She said she wanted someone to
eat her pussy I begged for the privilege and was awarded with her perfect
little ass coming to rest on my face. She tasted so good so clean. She had
just a tiny patch of hair about two inches tall just above her clit. I was
working her clit when she kind rolled on her side and opened her legs ever
wider, but positioned herself in a 69 position with me with both of us on
our sides. Feeling her tongue and that perfect amount of suction on my cock
almost sent me over right then. She was kinda humping my face and I was
kinda pumping her mouth, when I felt hands on my ass. I was laying on my
side faceing Shelly. The I felt fingers on my asshole wet fingers. Shelly
stopped long enough to take my fat cock from her mouth and say ewwww yeah
Chris eat his ass!! And then I felt his hot wet soft tongue on my asshole!
I had a hot teenage chick sucking my cock and a hot teenage stud eating my
asshole. I didn't know what to do so I just went with it. Chris started to
put a finger in me and I almost stopped him. I have never had anything go
in there its always be and exit only. But the more I allowed Chris to do
the more awesome Shelly was becoming with her mouth. I was tonguing her
pussy hole and she was grinding into my face. She started to moan the
scream the spasm all over my face. I was so caught up in Shelly's orgasm
that I hand not realize that Chris's finger was in the process of being
replaced by a hard uncut cock. I started to object and Shelly looked at me
and said just let it happen. I still started to object and she went back
down on my cock and kind pushed my ass towards Chris's pulsating hard
uncut cock. I looked back at it one time and looked at the beautiful mouth
sucking my cock and pushed my ass towards him. He didn't waste any time he
put his cock to my hole and pushed. I thought I was going to be torn
apart. I started to pull away and Shelly came up to my mouth and started
kissing me. She was saying relax, she then turned around so her and I were
spooning. Chris was plowing his awesome cock into my ass with me still on
my side. Shelly reached back between her legs grabbed my fat cock and
whispered that my cock was going to hurt her as much or more the Chris's
was hurting me and with that she impaled her tight pussy all the way down
on my cock. She pushed back into me and Chris was pushing into me. Her
pussy was so tight I thought I actually felt it tare when she impaled
herself on it. She took a minute to adjust and then waited to find a rhythm
with Chris and started to fuck the hell out of me. I have to admit that her
pussy was the tightest and best I have ever had and Chris was somehow
turning all the pain in my ass to pleasure. I wanted this to last
forever. I could feel Chris pick up the pace and I felt his cock
swell. Shelly was fucking me hard and I whispered in her ear that Chris is
about to cum she begged me to let her see him to it in my mouth. This is a
day of first for me so I didn't argue he took his cock straight from my
ass and pushed it into my mouth. I sucked a cock for the first time right
then, and I think I have become addicted to the taste of a cock and the
feeling of how it swells in my mouth just before it floods my mouth with
cum. Chris started to make a lot of noise and I felt his cock swell and
then his cum hit the back of my throat. Shelly was screaming in orgasmic
ecstasy, I was enjoying the heck out of it too. When Chris finished cuming
in my mouth, shelly sucked his cock for a second saying she was making sure
nothing was wasted. While I continued to fuck her tight little pussy. She
got off again while I fucked her from behind. I spread her ass cheeks and
fingered her asshole while I fucked her. I felt the building of the most
powerful orgasm of my life coming and I would slow the pace. I wanted this
to last. I wanted to have this little perfect pussy forever. I watched my
fat cock disappear in her tight pussy and watched as my fat cock stretched
her to the limit. My cock was glistening with her pussy juice as I watched
it disappear and re appear. I told her I was going to cum she begged for it
in her mouth I said ok but I wanted to at least put the first shot in her
pussy, so she was going to have to be quick if she wanted he to shoot in
her mouth too. I shot the most powerful shot of my life. The first shot of
cum alone was more then I cum with all my shots combined into my wife. She
jumped and turned and sucked my cock waiting for the next shot and I gave
it to her volley after volley of thick ball juice she swallowed every bit
of it. I looked down and Chris was sucking mycum from her pussy.

We all kinda laid there for a while and then got dressed and cooked some
hamburgers on the grill. Shelly looked at me and said we have to do this
all the time. I joked with her and said girl I'm scared of you! She said
yeah your ShellyShocked! I thought it was a clever spin on shell-shocked
being that her name is Shelly



If you liked this please let me know
thank you...J0hn


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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 09:32
    Very Nice!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 19:03
    i loved it. i would do anything to be in the same "position" as Chris

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 20:35
    one word SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 21:39
    Thank you for the comments!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 22:30
    gross. guys on guys. eww.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 23:10
    I loved it IO wish I were that teacher

    Being sucked by her as he fucked my ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2007 23:21
    to the reader that thought the story was gross. I did not set out to offend you or anyone. Im simply writeing what turnss me on and hopefully a few others. I hope some part of you enjoyed the story??

    otherwise why read it all the wat through. Thanks to the people who enjoy my stories and even to the guy i grossed out......john

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 03:43
    Good story. Is there a sequel?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 12:42
    HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 12:49
    man i would love to fuck shelly!

    Is there a second part?

    please write more i give you 10/10 and i dont give those out easily!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 13:48
    no wonder you teach in MS. You cant spell.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 14:25
    Im not usualy turned on by guy guy action, but throw a hot teeneage blonde tight pussy into the mix and damn if i didnt have to rub one out after this story!

    write more about this dude your on to some seriously hot shit here.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 14:51
    ONE OF THE HOTTEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ ALSO ONE OF THE BEST I GIVE IT 11/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 17:17
    this is one of the only time i could continue reading after i found out there was gay stuff going on. itsis a outstanding story!

    if you write more i'll read it. I'll even say if its as interesting as this one i'll be handing out another 10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 20:00
    shelby sounds so hot! i dont know about how i would feel about fucking the boy but you did a good job of making even that hot!!

    great job!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 21:13
    Sheppard~~ you one bad mother fucker!!

    in the next story but some black cock in that little blonde pussy!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 21:19
    I READ ALOT OF STORIES EVERY NIGHT BUT I ONLY PICK ONE TO READ WHILE I STROKE IT!!

    THIS ONE IS MY PICK TO STROKE TONIGHT!!!

    DO YOU HAVE ANY OTHER STORIES??

    THANKS FOR THE STROKING MATERIAL!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 22:53
    Christ, dude. Try writing a story without the gay shit for a change. Ick.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2007 23:08
    As a storyteller: B+; I enjoyed the story, but

    As a writer: D; it's hard to follow some places, mostly because of run on sentences and lack of puncturation, especially important commas and quotation marks.

    As a teacher: F-. there is a difference between there and their, then and than; pronouns and verbs need to match; apostrophes needed at many places. Glad you teach history, not english.

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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 00:09
    SEXIEST TEEN CHICK I HAVE EVER SEEN IN ONE OFF THESE SEX STORIE SITE!!!! IF YOU KEEP WRITEING I'LL BE A FAN FOR LIFE!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2007 09:49
    shelly sounds hot but whats with the fuckin ass to mouth to shit you gay faggot

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2007 13:22
    This would have been a great story if you hadn't put that fag stuff in there. We have had enough fag stories written.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2007 16:39
    Use some fucking grammar.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2007 12:04
    Hey guys, don't knock it till youv'e tried it! I went to an all-boys school and things were good, We practised on each other and then moved on to girls and anal sex techic was ace.

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    READER 500
    21.04.2007 12:05
    this story is smoking hot with the gay story line

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2007 22:40
    why does everone fucking worry about the fucking grammer its not like this is for school. fuck off to all those who say you need to fix ur gramer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2007 20:30
    fuck the grammar,its not that bad...but just cause u like to suck cock dont mean everyone else likes to read the shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2007 23:25
    FUCKIN HOT STORY DUDE!!!!!

    YOUR GRAMMER DOES SUCK BUT IM WITH THE OTHER GUY. THIS AINT SCHOOL!! ITS JACKOFF MATERIAL AND THIS IS ONE OF THE HOTTEST I HAVE EVER READ!! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2007 08:02
    Great story but fix the grammer. We all know this is not school but the errors are quite distracting. Also if you want anyone to believe that it is a true story then do not say you are a teacher if you cannot use words correctly. I do not care if you are supposed to be a history teacher or an English professor, even the football coach knows the difference between "there" and "their". Anyway 10/10 for the story line. Really hot!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2007 13:11
    This is a great piece of story telling (if its true, there is hope for us all), I had anal sex at school (with boys) and it was good training for the real thing with girls & men).

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2007 00:41
    THIS IS ONE HOTTTTTTTTTTT STORY!!!

    THIS IS MY SECOND TIME TO READ IT AND I STILL GIVE IT A 10/10 EVEN WITH ALL THE FUCKED UP GRAMMER.

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    READER 500
    27.04.2007 00:47
    yes your grammer is below par but your story line and chactors are the best i have ever read period!!! and ive been reading online forums and poems and porn for 15 years. I think we can deal with the grammer if you will honor us with more stories!

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    READER 500
    27.04.2007 10:26
    OK

    1. GAY

    2. NOT REAL

    3. FOR SPARTA



    THIS STOREY = 1/10 ITS SHIT NOT EVEN REAL

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    READER 500
    27.04.2007 16:56
    fuck face~ how many stories do you think are "REAL" on this site or any other sites?

    do you llive in a littel fantasy world in wich you beliebve the shit you read is real on the internet? its entertainment and i think this uy or maybe it was even a chick that wrote this story entertrained with it.

    your prob one of these people who got a chick to send her picture and she looked just like britney spears, and you feel for it, only to find out it was a dude on the other end that you were actually haveing online sex with! dont feel bad every other story on the internet is "TRUE" except this one of course.

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    READER 500
    27.04.2007 17:23
    what a great story

    surly its every mans dream to have 2 fucking hot teens

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    READER 500
    29.04.2007 03:51
    truth or fiction it was good

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    READER 500
    29.04.2007 07:38
    Can I join in?

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    READER 500
    29.04.2007 23:13
    hi

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    READER 500
    30.04.2007 10:35
    why is shelly not ass-fucked? please follow this story with more of the same. this must be 1 of the top ten stories on the site.

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    READER 500
    30.04.2007 10:43
    A very hot story whether it is real or not. Well written

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    READER 500
    30.04.2007 23:15
    Just noticing, the reader who criticizes the grammar can't even spell grammar or characters, and used terrible punctuation.

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    READER 500
    01.05.2007 19:29
    This is a hot fucking story!!

    A mouth is a mouth right? doesnt matter if its on a girl or a guy! an ass is an ass for that matter!! You show me a guy who say he doesnt like fucking his girl in the ass, and ill show you a guy who is lieing or who has never tried it!! Awesome fucking story one of the best i have ever read!!

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    READER 500
    01.05.2007 19:48
    10/10 you made me want to fuck her and him.

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    READER 500
    01.05.2007 21:01
    god i tried so hard not to cum and i did im roud of myself, fucking hot 15/10 (if it was possible) but still write a sequel i will pay u

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    READER 500
    01.05.2007 21:11
    I have now read this story 4 times and have jacked off everytrine! This is the best story EVER!!

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 00:28
    This hot I would love to have been in his place sucking that cock

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 01:19
    I liked it. Could use some more seperation; break up the mega-paragraphs. Write another and give it a read-through or two, change and edit whatever is needed, then submit it. Good story.

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 13:56
    loved this story. i closed my door at work and put my calls on hold and beat off!! please write another one? 10/10~~ id give you a higher rating if possible.

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 14:10
    Good beginning but the end is all bullshit. It would have been a good story without the sucking of a shit-covered cock. Can't believe that it is done not even in any of the many adult films that I have seen.



    Gave it a 4/10.

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 14:46
    good beginning good ending too.

    good allaround story. the grammer is not perfect but the story more then makes up for it. 10/10 thanks man and keep writeing more stories.

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 15:26
    one of the best

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 16:13
    i didn't even finish it. i thought you meant bi-sexual in the good way, nasty shit. 1/10

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 17:09
    WOULD HAVE LOVED TO HAVE BEEN IN YOUR PLACE, EXCEPT FOR THE A2M. 9/10. WRITE SOME MORE AND LEAN HEAVY ON THE BLOW JOBS.

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 20:15
    this s one of the best all time ever!!

    write more and make us all cum more!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 20:22
    if this is real you should have your cock bronzed.

    this is the best story i have ever read. real or not i shot cum all over my wife while we both read this story! 10/10

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    READER 500
    02.05.2007 23:45
    You son of a bitch! This is a gay story! You need your ass whipped for this! Faggot motherfucker! If I could give a zero...you would damn sure get it!

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 01:11
    "She doesn't look gay by any means she is beautiful but

    she is completely gay."

    What? You mean gay women usually don't look beautiful? Man, you're full of shit.

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 01:47
    Awesome story. I'm more into transexuals/shemales than actual guys. But saying it's a story I tweaked it in my mind.

    Overall 10/10. Best story I've ever read,

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 02:25
    89 dot com is much better

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 04:48
    Fucking terrific! Wish I got to fuck Shelly :P

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 05:30
    terrific story i had my hard in my jeans

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 05:31
    fucking hot!!!

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 18:46
    I still have wood in my pants! This is the fucking best all around story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 please right more??????????

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 18:50
    Fuck me this is the best, hottest, sexiest story i have ever seen. It almost seemed as if it was my cock going into Shellys pussy, and mouth. I dont understand why this story doesnt have a higher rateing it should be the only story here with a perfect 10/10 rateing.

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 21:37
    holy shit... thats just crazy...

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 21:48
    Dumbshit. Use THESE THINGS " ". The story is fake because real teachers aren't that fucking dumb. You must be a twelve year old kid, little shit faced punk.

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 21:55
    One word Perfection!!!!!!!!!!

    20/10

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 21:59
    very good story!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 22:04
    Hey, there are these things called "commas". USE THEM! That's how people know when to pause when reading, otherwise the words just run together. Unless you teach math, I seriously doubt you are a real teacher. Still, the story was hot, and even though I am hetero, I still whacked it.

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    READER 500
    03.05.2007 23:25
    fuck all the grammer freaks!! Even if you wrote this story in Japaneese mixed with Aribic, witha Zulo tribal twist its still hot as fuck!!! 10/10 dude keep up the awesome work and im with theguy who said fuck the haters!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    04.05.2007 01:21
    commas dont always mean a pause in the story. How bout you go back to school and learn about commas again while John continues to write amazing stories. Fuck all of you who read these and complain about grammar. This is about sex, not about who can spell or use proper grammar. Get a fucking life

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    READER 500
    04.05.2007 05:21
    not to bad i guess i'm to much of a homophobe to let another guy com in my mouth or give them a blowjob but hey if the lights are out i guess amouth is a mouth for sucking . good story nice 15 yr old piece of ass that teacher is soo gona get his ass fired once she has a nice rag and it sall bitchy and gets pissed at him for fuck all boom say goodbye to your career hope yoru 15 minuit fuck was worth it

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    READER 500
    04.05.2007 08:19
    good story and though the circumstances may be styretching it a bit the sex was very hot keep writing and i'll keep stroking

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    READER 500
    05.05.2007 23:35
    GREAT STORY. I WISH I COULD BE THE TEACHER WITH THAT YOUNG MAN. MMMM.

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    READER 500
    06.05.2007 09:32
    keep writing i think i would try that guy and girl who cares about grammer 10-10

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    READER 500
    06.05.2007 09:49
    yo guys i'm a big (and I mean big), black stud and i nearly wanked myself to death reading this, I don't know if I could take it up my ass, but after this i'd love to give it a go. right on bro keep them coming.

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    READER 500
    06.05.2007 20:23
    simply put..... this is the fucking HOTEST story ever posted!! PLease write more or at least tell us where we can find more of your writeing? 10/10 and yeah fuck the haters! you have done a perfect job with this story!

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    READER 500
    07.05.2007 16:15
    Made me hard most of the way through the aticle

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    READER 500
    08.05.2007 22:39
    dude it was good but the part bout the guy needed to by left out fag otherwise it woulda been gr8t but no had to a queer

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    READER 500
    09.05.2007 07:25
    Dear 05-08-07 Not only can you not do joined-up writing, but you don't know a great story when you see one - go back to your cave!

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    READER 500
    09.05.2007 08:29
    a good read, i do agree quotation marks & paragraphs would help the reader, but i'm not bagging you. i'm looking forward to part 2.

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    READER 500
    09.05.2007 14:09
    Ew, diude when are people goign to learn, homosexuality is wrong.

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 02:44
    hey upload sex photos

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 11:38
    Good jesus, just having a cock up your ass does not mean that you are a homosexual, and putting your cock up an ass is ok, it feels the same if it goes up a guy or a girl. Stop complaining,

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 20:39
    Thank you everyone for the kind words and even for the not so kind words. It has been very supriseing to me that this story has stayed on the higest rated catagory for its duration! thank you for that, its very falttering!

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 22:14
    wow, that was incredible... and since my name is Shelly, it really made me hot!!! nice writting

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    READER 500
    10.05.2007 22:23
    Yo dude nice story. IM straight myself and see what the beef is with Homosexuals and all I mean tis jsut a prefrence like how some people dont like tomatoes and all that. Anyways keep em' comming

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    READER 500
    11.05.2007 05:20
    wow...im straight...but that turned me on sooooo much!! great story, i can see why some people are gay...fuck! you should write more...much more

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    READER 500
    11.05.2007 05:56
    ok..dude..11/10..i dont usually like guy on guy action but you made it hot! write more!!!

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    READER 500
    11.05.2007 10:30
    This should stay on the top 30 list forever as an example of the perfect story. (more please john).

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    READER 500
    12.05.2007 02:34
    great up until the gay moment. sorry

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    READER 500
    12.05.2007 03:07
    Your story claims to be true. If so, I hope it's worth it.

    It *is* a good story, even if the grammer, punctuation and spelling are a travesty. Don't most teachers have to go to college? Well, whatever. Write on, adventurous son, write on.

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    READER 500
    12.05.2007 03:12
    And what the hell is up with this site? Doesn't seem to like UPPERCASE letters much.

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    READER 500
    12.05.2007 07:38
    If this is written by a teacher, the kids have got no fucking chance of learning to spell or use correct grammar

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    READER 500
    12.05.2007 08:58
    Guys, without the gay element of this story it would just be a tame little tale - I'm straight but I tried a 'bi' session and when I had a cock pounding in my ass my cum hit a wall about 3 yards away and went on and on forever. Try it, it's really worth the pain in the ass.

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 01:23
    dude aside from the homo gay shit it was good

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 08:10
    good, but you really didnt need to explain the pun at the end!

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 14:31
    Well it was ptrtty good story, though i dony like gay part much but ok.

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 18:52
    The subject matter was interesting, but the writing was terribly difficult to read.

    I would have liked a little warning about m/m action, and ass-to-mouth is just plain gross, but the main thing that was bad was that the writing had absolutely zero flow. Dozens of short, choppy sentences in a row are kind of smothering.

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 21:47
    The only bad spelling and grammar is from the peoples comments. I thought the story was great 10/10

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    READER 500
    13.05.2007 23:00
    it was good but the gay shit

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    READER 500
    14.05.2007 15:35
    so, you need the further adventures of shelly

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    READER 500
    14.05.2007 21:31
    aain't fuckin a 15 yo fun?

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    READER 500
    14.05.2007 22:07
    this was great i too have tried a "bi" session i loved the twist in this story 10/10

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    READER 500
    15.05.2007 10:41
    We need more 'Shelly Stories'. John say's that all his stories are true, this is not really possible, so John more of Shelly as quick as you like. The 'bi' stuff is great, please don't listen to the anti-homo brigade they are just to tight-assed to try it! it's them that's missing out it's not gay it's sex.

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    READER 500
    15.05.2007 19:28
    for everyone who wants more stories. I have been locked out of my account and can not post any more stories under my name. sorry.....J0hn

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    READER 500
    15.05.2007 22:29
    The story was great u should post more on Shelly

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    READER 500
    20.05.2007 14:25
    Please, Please, Please.. give me more shelly my balls ache for more!

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    READER 500
    20.05.2007 23:43
    gratz on raping a little girl. youre a real hero. by the way, it sounds as fake as ShellyShocked sounds clever.

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    READER 500
    21.05.2007 14:36
    You are one sick bastard, and you need to learn how to spell. I am glad you don't teach my children you fag!

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    READER 500
    22.05.2007 07:38
    if you've been locked out JOhn, what name will you re-appear as? great story, i'd like another. 9/10

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    READER 500
    23.05.2007 10:15
    Come on John, pull your finger out and get back on the site - we need more shelly now! my right (wanking), hand is missing her so much that I'm fit to burst.

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    READER 500
    25.05.2007 10:12
    Why are we waiting - your public expects every john to do his duty,

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    READER 500
    26.05.2007 02:30
    i loved the story very much that i masterbated for four times you made my holiday

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    READER 500
    31.05.2007 17:38
    wow

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    READER 500
    13.06.2007 11:52
    This should be a lesson in good writing for that wanker 'MILKER'

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    READER 500
    15.06.2007 10:23
    excellent story. come on john, where's the follow up 9/10

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    READER 500
    28.06.2007 09:58
    more pliz.get your fucking hands on your computer

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    READER 500
    04.07.2007 22:02
    thank you to everyone who enjoys my stories. even thanks go out to the people who seem not to care for them very much. next time i will try and make my stories more appealing to everyone......John

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    READER 500
    06.07.2007 05:19
    i loved it. ignore the last guys comment. it was hot. i'm a uni lecturer and would love to have this happen to me. i had plenty of opportunities - i wish now that i took them all

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    READER 500
    11.08.2007 00:11
    i wish it was me with kelly

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    READER 500
    17.08.2007 23:50
    I must say, I liked it, but I'm not gay in any way, so the whole Chris thing came as a shock to me. haha

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    READER 500
    27.08.2007 07:24
    Becuase of this story I've looked at all your other offerings but none come up to this standard, what are you upto man, give us something that we can screw to, wank to, and be proud of you, please,

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    READER 500
    11.09.2007 10:01
    goooood

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    READER 500
    21.09.2007 03:33
    this story deserves a part 2 any chance...? 9/10

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    READER 500
    24.10.2007 18:47
    dude this is the best story ever.

    i read it once a day.

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    READER 500
    30.10.2007 12:21
    Nice story, even though im not gay in anyway and it kind of freaked me out.

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    READER 500
    03.11.2007 10:49
    This is absolutly great, far better than your other work - can we have some more, part 2 with girl/botfriend action would be good (plenty of anal/gay is fine).

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    READER 500
    09.11.2007 09:16
    This story is one of the best ever submitted (it is also far better than your other stories), please write more with all the pace and content as contained this one.

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    READER 500
    15.11.2007 03:40
    hey john, you were last heard of in april... what's the deal??? can we get a follow up pleeeze. 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.11.2007 13:29
    It happens. You suck one time and you are addicted. Good story. That can happen.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 20:29
    it was hot until the gay chris shit

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    READER 500
    11.12.2007 09:44
    Sorry guys but stop going on about the gay stuff -don't knock what you havn't tried, is there no adventure in your lives - you must have very dull sex lives - an ass hole is an ass hole, and as for sucking another guys cock, try it you may shock yourself!

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    READER 500
    04.01.2008 15:59
    Great story! But I seriously think you should describe your cock and cum more. Very hot..... I is very wet!

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    READER 500
    11.01.2008 02:35
    thank you to the chick who liked my story!! its awesome to know females get off on it too.

    as for details about my cock i will keep that in mind if i ever write again.

    once again thak you.........John

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    READER 500
    11.01.2008 12:32
    Seems odd that John has not followed this with another story, maybe he stole it from somebody else! I think that we should be told, naughty boy!

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    READER 500
    15.01.2008 07:43
    WOW...! JOHN IS ALIVE. O.K. FUCK THE SMALL TALK WITH THE WANNABE COCKSUCKER, NOW GET BACK TO THE STORY 4 US PARTNERLESS WANKERS...!

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    READER 500
    18.01.2008 02:42
    I did not steal tis story!! I have alot posted on nifty just look up j0hnsheppard under prolific authors.

    the 0 in my name is a zero. I would be happy to continue this story line but im getting mixed signals from people. some like it but most seem offended by my writeing style here. the story has been read alot of times and doesnt have that high of a rateing. I cant change my writeing because some people dont like the bisexual stuff. it would be a piece of shit, if i didnt write the way i feel. im sure some would argue its a piece of shit now. for the person who asked me to write again 01-15-08 - 07:43 its coming!!

    and thanks to you and everyone who has said something positive about my story... BTW Shelly Is REAL and sexy as FUCK!! I have pic of her and wish i could share with a select f

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    READER 500
    20.01.2008 06:27
    john, i wrote 07:43 + 03:40 (this page). i wrote another way back but none the less, i do believe, regardless of opinion, you should write your story - and be proud! you will always find an audience, some bigger than others. bi-sexual guy stories are not popular but if it's your preference as iv'e recently found with myself... then go with it. i'm glad you wrote it.

    i'd like to chat personally, contact me in forum under '1 c.c.', or leave a message 10/10

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    READER 500
    20.01.2008 09:24
    Well done john, I see that you are now number 1 on the bi-sexual list. Just confirms that you are submitting what people who really matter want. The Bi anal stuff is ok it makes the stories more interesting and no matter what some people say, this type of thing does happen in real life and I for one have in the past enjoyed it (and the stories) - next new story as fast as you can please. well done. x

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    READER 500
    21.01.2008 23:44
    I liked it, keep up the good work. Need to work on your paragraphs, but otherwise great. 8/10

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    READER 500
    25.01.2008 15:22
    Omg that was so hawt. Especially picturing you being fucked by a guy and a girl at the same time.

    Dont listen to the negative comments. They're entitled to their own opinion and ure entitled to yours.



    Good job, 10/10.

    Only thing, space out the paragraphs a little better to make it easier to read

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    READER 500
    26.01.2008 20:55
    I wont be number one for long, someone is logging in twice aday every day and rateing the story a one.

    i do have a part 2 comeing but i have to teach, keep up with shelly and not get caught by wife. leaves little time for writing while wife is asleep.

    however i believe its shapeing up to be far better then the first. you can find my other stories on nifty and even how to contact me.

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    READER 500
    26.01.2008 21:08
    This is the hottest bi story ever!! a beautiful young girl described so perfectly. a hot young stud to teach the teacher!!! best of the best 20/10

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    READER 500
    01.02.2008 13:28
    Don't worry John some of us keep rating this as a 10/10. this is to encourage you to write again! (as soon as you can please).

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    READER 500
    09.02.2008 04:39
    I LOVE THIS STORY IT MADE ME WET AS FUCK!!

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    READER 500
    17.02.2008 00:56
    to 02-09-08 - 04:39

    its awesome to know chicks get off on my stories!

    look me up on the nifty site. u can find out how to contact me. i can share pictures of Shelly and Chris and myself........John

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    READER 500
    27.02.2008 23:24
    more! ! ! ! ! ! !

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    READER 500
    27.02.2008 23:26
    4-18-07 ur a fag

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2008 16:16
    Precum is flowing from my peehole. Fantastic. I have fond memories and this reminds me of them. Please keep them up.

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    READER 500
    09.03.2008 21:01
    It was a close one there - you nearly lost your 1st place, 10/10 does you the world of good - where is the follow-up story?

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    READER 500
    30.03.2008 21:24
    Best fucking story I ever read. I'm a bisexual guy and wish this actually happen to me. Fuck all those pussy bitches that's hating on you. I say, shut the fuck up because if you don't like it, don't read it. Make your own fucking story. This guy takes it out of his busy schedule to write true, sexy, great stories for our pleasure and dumb muthafuckas are so picky. I rate it a 10/10! Keep up the good work and good luck on the second.

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    READER 500
    31.03.2008 03:12
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw i just get the 2nd cum when i read your stories

    i want more plzzzz

    10/10

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    READER 500
    12.04.2008 02:38
    u like me

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    READER 500
    15.04.2008 21:27
    PLEASE DO MORE URGENTLY - I KEEP READING THIS AND PRAYING FOR MORE!

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    READER 500
    16.04.2008 00:16
    I got so fucking hard i jerked off 2 times. when my wife got home I had her read it. she got so fucking hot she bent over the computer desk and begged me to fuck her while she was re reading this story. this is the best and hottest fucking story i have ever read. if you had better grammar or a editor you could go pro with your writing. she even let me fuck her ass while she was reading it. actually begged me to fuck her ass. she hardly ever allows me that pleasure any more. Thank you man and Please write more?.. you are now my favorite author of porn stories.

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    READER 500
    16.04.2008 16:33
    that was awesome it got my cock hard and the i had some precome and licked it off my finger yum i have always wanted to try that but havnt had the guts yet

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    READER 500
    19.04.2008 18:50
    its so hot for the girl part the rest is shit

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    READER 500
    20.04.2008 20:35
    More please, and leave the gut stuff in it's that that makes this a great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 00:32
    one assumes a history teacher went to college, and would have at least learned to spell. other than that the story is apiece of shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 12:33
    My cunt is on fire!...mmmmmmmmmmm

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2008 18:15
    holy shit i fingered myself and played with my pussy throughourt the WHOLE story........mmmmmmmm great job

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  • maleslut
    27.06.2008 03:20
    Great, what build up, wow did not expect the man on man, but it was great!!! the only thing which would have made it better if you fucked the young girls ass. but i give it a 9.5 out of ten the best story i have read. ignore the jerks . keep it up!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2011 20:17
    Might have been an ok story, but I won't know because I couldn't get through the terrible writing and general unbelievability of the whole thing.

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