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  1. Josh teaches his sister a lesson
  2. Josh teaches his sister a lesson part 2
Josh teaches his sister a lesson part 2

Author: biggie69

Date: 18 April 2007

Blackmail, Fiction, Blowjob, Boy

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they sat at the dining room table, a large pizza that was half eaten infront of them. their parents had taken the younger kids out to their mother's sister's house for the night.

jeremy leaned back in his chair and looked at karen. "you got a game tonight?" he asked her, referring to the fact that she was a cheerleader at their high school.

karen nodded. "yeah. what are you guys doing? are you coming to the basketball game?"

a cocky smile spread across jeremy's face. "nah. it's friday, i'm gettin laid."

josh laughed, lisa and karen rolled their eyes. karen got up from the table. "you're such a dick, jeremy," she said, then headed into the kitchen.

jeremy looked at lisa and winked. he smirked at her.

lisa's heart skipped a beat. josh and jeremy were both staring at her, she looked from jeremy to josh. "you fuckin asshole..." she said, pushing her chair back and standing. karen looked into the dining room from the kitchen to find out what was going on.

josh rested his elbows on the table, unfazed. he watched lisa walk around the table. "you're not going anywhere tonight," he told her.

lisa didn't respond. karen walked out of the kitchen, wondering why her sister stayed quiet. "are you gonna come to my game?" she asked her.

lisa crossed her arms and looked down at josh.

"i just said she's not going anywhere," he said, looking over at lisa. he smirked, but karen didn't see it.

karen was confused. "why are you doing everything he says?"

"yeah, lisa?" jeremy asked. "why are you doing everything josh says? what's the matter?"

lisa huffed and stomped out of the room. she could hear her brothers laughing as she went upstairs.




lisa found josh's room empty and slipped inside. she closed the door behind her, but not all the way. she went over to his computer and clicked his email.

"fuck!" she whispered loudly, looking at the screen. his email required a password. "shit."

"what are you doing?"

lisa jumped and spun around. "damnit karen, don't sneak up on people like that! christ, i thought you were josh."

"why are you looking at his email? what's going on?" she asked, leaning into one hip and crossing her arms.

"i need his damn password."

"maybe its cockmaster, or hornyasshole, or-"

"or none of your business," josh said from behind karen. karen turned towards him. "get up, lisa. you're not getting into my email."

lisa got up and stood next to karen. "why'd you tell jeremy?"

"tell jeremy what?" karen asked.

josh ignored her. "don't know what your talkin about," josh laughed.

lisa huffed and stormed past josh. he smirked. "you'll find out..." he whispered as she walked past him.




karen had changed into her cheerleading uniform and left the house. lisa changed into a pair of sweatpants and sat infront of the tv. she had no idea what josh and jeremy were doing, and didn't care to find out. but she soon would.



"see? i told you our sister's a slut."

jeremy stared at his older brother's computer screen. "damn. you should send this to dad anyways."

josh rubbed his chin. "nah, my way was a lot more fun."

"what happened at school today?" jeremy asked, adjusting his dick in his basketball shorts.

"i found out shawn had set up a camcorder in his room, taped it, then put it on the internet to brag. apparently our sister's a fuckin prize if you get to fuck her."

"so he was bragging? what'd you do?" jeremy asked, not taking his eyes off the screen.

"found shawn before football practice and beat the fuck outta him, he agreed to take it off the internet."

jeremy leaned back in the chair. he paused the video, leaving a still image of lisa bent over, her head tilted towards the ceiling, a look of pleasure on her face, brendon's dick in her pussy. "she probably snuck out you know. the house is awful quiet."

"no, she's here. trust me. she's here..."

jeremy looked up at his brother. "go get her."



lisa shuddered, suddenly feeling cold. she wrapped her arms around herself. she heard footsteps walking down the hallway upstairs, and looked over at the staircase. josh came halfway down and motion for her.

"come here."

"no."

"yes, come here."

lisa shook her head, her heart beggining to beat quickly. she was alone, with only josh and jeremy home.

josh quickly ran down the stairs and went into the living room. lisa pressed her back into the couch and drew her knees up against her chest. "no, get away from me!"

smirking, josh scooped her up and carried her out of the living room towards the stairs. she kicked and pounded on his chest. "let me go! i did what you wanted! leave me alone!"

josh just ignored her and went into his room. lisa saw jeremy sitting at his computer. josh put her down but held onto her arms so she couldn't run.

"what do you want josh? i did what you wanted, now leave me alone."

jeremy stood up and walked over to them. lisa looked away. dispite the two year difference between her brothers, they were both the same height, a good five inches taller than her 5'4 frame. jeremy put his hand on her chin and raised her head to his. "so i see you like to suck dick."

lisa pursed her lips and gave him a nasty look. "your both fuckin sick. i hate you."

"no you don't," josh answered.

jeremy looked at josh then walked behind lisa, trapping her inbetween them. jeremy hooked his fingers in the waistband of her sweatpants, causing her to squirm. josh tightened his grip on her arms. jeremy lowered her sweats to the floor in one quick motion.

"stop it!" lisa yelled.

jeremy snickered, and he pressed himself against her back, his erection pressing into her ass. she whined. jeremy reached around her smooth stomach and cupped her pussy, purposely pushing a finger into her hole through the fabric of her thin panties. she looked up at josh, a look of pure hatred in her eyes.

jeremy backed up and josh dragged her onto his bed. he flipped her onto her back, and she started kicking at jeremy as he got on the bed infront of her. josh quickly got behind her and held her arms over her head. "you still gonna fuck the next guy that wants a peice of you?" he asked.

lisa looked up at her big brother. "i told you no. now let me go."

jeremy placed himself over her and grabbed the waistband of her panties. "i donno, josh. i don't think she learned her lesson yet," jeremy said, and slid her panties down her legs.

"yes i did, i swear," she pleaded, locking her legs together and looking back up at josh. "josh let me go..."

"no. you know what i had to go through because of you? because my sister's such a slut? you think i want people to know you're my sister?" josh asked, above her, his face lowered to hers.

jeremy grabbed her thighs and spread her legs, positioning himself inbetween them. lisa whimpered as he lifted her shirt and kissed her stomach. josh laughed. jeremy kept kissing her down to her pubic bone. he sat up and looked at josh. they snickered, then jeremy shoved his finger roughly into lisa's pussy. she squirmed and cried out, tried to close her legs.

"lay still. we both know you like to run train..." jeremy said and josh laughed. lisa screamed and kicked jeremy.

"watch out, she's fiesty," josh said. "shut the door, just incase karen comes home."

jeremy got up and lisa twisted her hips to the side, closing her legs. he shut the door and turned on josh's stereo. the band 'Korn' blasted through his speakers, the bass vibrating through the room. he got back onto josh's bed and ripped lisa's legs apart, holding her open to he could get a good look at his sister's pussy. he fingered her again.

"stop.." lisa moaned, shutting her eyes.

"damn she's tight," jeremy said, shoving two fingers into her pussy.

"i told you i'm not a slut, now get away from me," she said through clenched teeth.

"your wet," he said.

"that's because she likes this," josh said. "she hasn't learned her lesson yet. my sister's not gonna be a slut anymore."

"don't worry. she'll be scared of a dick after this," jeremy laughed. "here, taste your own cum bitch," he said and put the two fingers he had in her pussy into her mouth.

lisa winced and turned her head trying to get his fingers away from him. he straddled her stomach and held her face. "suck," he said.

lisa obeyed and grew nervous, seeing the huge tent in her younger brother's basketball shorts. she sucked her juices off his fingers, then looked up at him, knowing what was about to happen.

"good girl," jeremy said, taking his fingers out of her mouth. still kneeling over her, he lowered his shorts and pulled his dick out. "suck my dick," he told her, grabbing her face again.

lisa felt josh's knees on either side on her head, felt his hands gripping her arms. she couldn't move, she was trapped inbetween them, jeremy's erection pressing against her lips.

"open your mouth slut," josh instructed her.

lisa kept her mouth closed tight, her lips pursed together. jeremy squeezed her jaw. "open. you bite my dick, i'll shove my dick in your ass so hard you won't be able to sit down for weeks."

lisa whined, but opened her mouth.

"wider, bitch," he said, then shoved his dick into her open mouth. lisa wimpered as he fucked her face, and could hear jeremy moaning, josh laughing.

"shit, your lips feel fuckin good," he said and groaned. "lick my shaft like a dirty bitch."

lisa did. she ran her tongue up and down his shaft, then teased the tip of his dick, tasting pre-cum. she felt like vomiting again, remembering what josh had done to her a couple of days ago. she moaned and squirmed beneath him, realising there was no way out of this. jeremy shoved his dick back into her mouth.

"suck your cheeks in, i want to feel every part of your mouth around my dick. that's it...do it faster... i want to cum," jeremy moaned.

lisa groaned again, but did everything he said. she sucked his dick as if he were one of her boy toys.

"your gonna swallow," josh said.

jeremy continued to fuck her face. "oh God..." he moaned. "i'm gonna cum..."

lisa cried and shook her head, her mouth filled with his dick.

"uh huh," jeremy said, josh laughed.

lisa groaned in protest again and jeremy grabbed her chin, holding her head still. she felt him tense then he came in her mouth. it dripped down the back of her throat, and lisa wanted to spit. she tried not to swallow and had every intention of spitting it back at him the second he pulled out of her mouth.

jeremy relaxed as he finished, but kept his dick in her mouth. "clean my dick."

she shook her head no and whined.

"pull out," josh said.

as soon as jeremy did, josh head his hand over her mouth to make her swallow. "swallow."

jeremy grabbed a tshirt off of josh's floor and cleaned his dick with it. lisa pressed her legs together and closed her eyes as she swallowed. a tear dripped down her cheek and onto josh's hand.

"my turn," josh said, removing his hand from her mouth and leaning over so his face was near hers.

"no..." she said, but jeremy was already lifting her hips. josh let go of her reddened wrists and pulled off his own jeans. jeremy positioned lisa so her ass was in the air to him, her face inches from josh's boxers.

"tell me you want me to fuck you," jeremy said, pulling her hips back against his thighs. he held her there. "tell me how badly you want my huge cock in your pussy."

josh lowered his boxers, his thick erection infront of her face.

lisa didn't answer.

jeremy pressed his finger to her asshole.

lisa cried out and tried to get away from him, but they both grabbed her.

"you want my dick up your ass? huh, slut? you want me to hurt you?" jeremy threatened.

"no..." lisa whined. she squeezed her eyes shut, josh put his hand on her chin, directing her mouth to his cock. "i-i want your dick in my pussy," she said in a low voice.

jeremy fingered her. "she's really wet."

josh smirked, looked down at his sister's pretty face and pushed his dick into her mouth. she started sucking and josh moaned.

jeremy shoved his dick into her wet pussy. lisa moaned, to josh's pleasure, as jeremy rammed her from behind. "moan. i want to hear you... i know your liking this, you little whore."

lisa wanted to kill both of them right now. how stupid was she to think josh wasn't going to tell jeremy? but as long as he didn't send that link to their father...

"i want to feel you cum," jeremy said.

lisa pulled back away from josh and shook her head. "no, stop it jeremy..."

josh grabbed her chin again and roughly shoved his dick back into her mouth. "don't do that again."

she moaned, and josh reached his hand out and began to rub her clit. he could feel his brother thrusting into her pussy, could feel the wetness that covered it. he rubbed her clit and teased it.

lisa squirmed, her ass pushing into jeremy as he fucked her. jeremy moaned, holding her hips. "make her cum," jeremy said, feeling like he was about to cum himself.

she continued to suck josh's dick as he played with her. she felt her stomach tighten and moaned as an orgasm ripped through her body. josh moaned, moving his hand to the back of his sister's head, holding her against his cock. she moaned, causing a vibration through her mouth. he shot his cum into her mouth, and kept his dick in her mouth until he felt her swallow.

jeremy felt his sisters muscles contracting around his dick. he groaned, and almost blew his load into her tight little pussy. he tried to hold it.

josh pulled out, and slumped against his headboard, his dick going limp, his eyes burning into his sisters. she gave him a death stare as jeremy pounded her from behind. her blond locks fell over part of her face, and josh just watched.

jeremy grabbed her hips hard and held her in place, her pussy impaled on his dick. he let out a loud moan and lisa dopped her head to josh's mattress, closing her eyes tight. her fingers clawed his sheet as she felt jeremy's hot cum fill her insides.

"oh God, no... " she cried. josh and jeremy smirked mockingly at lisa. jeremy pulled out and lisa turned over, cum dripping down her thigh.

jeremy, out of breath, pulled his basketball shorts back up and look down at his older sister. tears dripped down her face. she sat up quickly and slapped him across the face.

"i fuckin hate you!" she yelled. jeremy laughed and touched his beat red cheek. "you fuckin came in me, you asshole!" she yelled, and punched him.

"whoa," josh said, and grabbed her before she could swing again, his jeans pulled up but still unbuttoned.

"he fuckin came in me!" lisa repeated, and kicked at jeremy. jeremy slapped her thigh, leaving his handprint.

"you learned your lesson though, right?" josh asked. "or maybe you didn't."

lisa squirmed, josh let her go this time. she jumped off his bed and grabbed her sweatpants. she looked for her panties. she was furious. they guys at school had used her, though it felt good at the time, she regretted it now. josh was never going to let her live this down. "leave me alone," she answered, her hand shaking as she picked her panties up off his floor.

"did you get the video off the internet?" lisa asked, sliding her panties up her tanned legs.

"i told you i'd take care of it," josh answered. he stood up and faced her, lisa took a step back towards the door. "and if you ever do some shit like that again-"

"i said i didn't know they taped it."

"i was referring to the threesome with my football team."

jeremy came up behind her and wrapped his arms around her. she cringed. "i think she learned her lesson," jeremy said.

josh looked down at his sister. he knew there was at least 100 other guys that wanted to fuck his sister. he heard guys talking about her, not knowing he was standing nearby. he didn't blame them. her face turned red. "we'll see..."


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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 07:13
    fair story. does she get even with them? prob'ly revealed in the next chapters,huh?

    7/10

    thanx

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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 18:42
    wank

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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 20:44
    U fuking prick wat the fuk 17 yrsu have a sick mind u dip shit i bet ur a lonely nerd who didnt get laid in high school or eva for that matter, i bet seaguls target u in the streets, and i bet even g.w.bush looks down on you. well fuk u and anyone who enjoyed this abomanation,

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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 21:25
    dear lord, how old ARE you (speaking to rude reader)??? oh yeah and u might wanna look up those really TOUGH words like "abomination" before you start juding OTHER people... jeez...

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    READER 500
    20.04.2007 22:49
    Hey give him credit for KNOWING it :P

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2007 00:52
    they are awasom cant wate for next

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    READER 500
    21.04.2007 02:18
    Hi my name a borat...I like ur story it is nice...HI FIVE!

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    READER 500
    21.04.2007 03:26
    Ok this is to the retard who critisized this story, A) stupid people need to die B) G.W.B. is as low as you can go C) You are a hypocrite because if you had this kind of chance your cock would rip itself off ur pussy body to get to ur sis D) Punctuation E) (next commentor insert scathing hate here)

    I WANT ALL THE WAY TO Z) on how much that reader sucks!!

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    READER 500
    22.04.2007 11:26
    Next part should be about the sister getting banged while lisa has to watch and then she gets banged again and josh and jeremy both shoot loads of their sperm up her pussy and ass.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2007 08:52
    Get the 7yr old in on it .nothing like a nice tight bald lil pussy to fist fuck while i ream her young asshole. fill it with hot cum. yum yum.Dirtydad

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.05.2007 17:31
    Get a 4some going and both brothers fuck the sister and switch them off and shoot both their collective sperm up both pussies and impregnate both sisters..that would teach them or the sisters to be the fucking whores that they are.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2007 18:54
    sweet ass story bro, keep it up!

    P.S. seagulls target you in the streets? can any1 say WTF?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.05.2007 18:06
    you guys are sick!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.05.2007 00:50
    I say wtf 2 cgull thing, sry, on a psp,hrd 2 type

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 01:11
    hot damn onpsp to great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.06.2007 17:07
    to tha person who said wtf. stfu cuz you aint need to read no story. you ass is sick fer readin it all tha way bitch. go fuck yourself!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.06.2007 15:25
    wow this reminds me of the time i got fucked by my brothers. all 5 of them. but i was caught in the act, not even on film. loved it though. and this story. made me finger fuck myself. pity my second older bruv noticed. =[ got torched for a week when my parents went away =[ lool oh well =] had fun. keep up the stories. you're entertaining =]

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    READER 500
    19.06.2007 16:36
    i loved it i played with myself while my brother read the story to me then fucked me after

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2007 15:39
    how about another chapter

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2007 01:36
    sick u dumb bitches

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2007 22:58
    I got to fuck my older sister ,but it was her idea and I did it for 15 years best fucking cunt I ever had

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2007 14:29
    This shit is dirty fucking horny bitches whoever reads this mustve fuck their own sister

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2007 01:56
    nice story -on psp

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2007 09:19
    tight story psp

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2007 19:24
    great continuation...write another pat!!! ASAP! lol jkjk..but i would like to read more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.07.2007 13:31
    psp ftw :D haha

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.07.2007 13:19
    thats ok yu should make a dad and his daughter fucking without her mother nowing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.07.2007 14:28
    Nice once again

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2007 10:45
    ha good one im on my psp

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2007 12:26
    this story sucked ass :{

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    READER 500
    16.08.2007 00:18
    Nice story - Wii!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2007 01:25
    that was a good one. psp

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    READER 500
    25.08.2007 03:56
    i saved this shit to my ipod.....10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.08.2007 15:02
    her dad shud fuck her then she gets pregnant

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2007 21:33
    yeah, wouldn't mind a part 3

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.09.2007 00:49
    LOL I am also on my Wii. Part 3 please!!

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    READER 500
    04.09.2007 17:54
    nice hot so mush detail

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.09.2007 07:38
    er...wow?

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    READER 500
    13.09.2007 00:23
    your all losers get a life and learn how to spell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.10.2007 03:09
    this was fucking awsome, need a part 3. ive saved this on my xbox 360 online account. 15/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.10.2007 02:56
    Wow everone here needs to get a life and a girl friend fuckin a

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.10.2007 08:42
    that was good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.11.2007 19:00
    i didnt like it as much as the first one... 10/10 though

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    READER 500
    10.11.2007 21:55
    Yall should get a fucking life you fucking sickos!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    29.12.2007 19:37
    yoyu are the most discusting jacasses in the world

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.01.2008 11:32
    this is fucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.01.2008 04:13
    Capitals and spellings.

    You should work on them.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2008 15:08
    ok u have a great story here and all u people calling him a sicko lay off if u dont like the story dont read it u frickin idiots

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2008 00:09
    Don't call them sickos you are fucking dumbasses you were warned about the story.

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    READER 500
    24.02.2008 13:16
    u seriously need a part 3 to this!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2008 16:24
    oquard story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2008 07:50
    That was really good. Is there gonna be a part 3?? I hope so.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 12:26
    Don't post hateful comments. You're here reading the same story like the rest of us, if you're any less 'disgusting' or 'sick' maybe you shouldn't be on this site in the first place, jackasses.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 11:20
    i loved it plz make a part 3!!!!

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  • nini30atl
    30.05.2008 17:30
    Great story. Make a part three. One with the father finding out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 15:38
    i just freshly shaved my pussy and it felt so damn nice to feel myself squirt everywhere after reading this storry Mmmm X

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2008 07:25
    fucking unreal make (NO 3) asap

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2008 08:23
    to all the readers who critisized this: you have no right to talk about sick. if someone who reads this story and enjoys it is sick... then so are you. this says part two... so I know damn sure you aint gonna read part two without reading part one first. which means that after you knew what this was all about, you continued onto the next chapter. and if ur wlling to read two parts in a series, you enjoyed it. now who's the 'sick' hypocrite. is there a part three?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 00:39
    omg I love ur stories. I was pretty much masterbating thro this. I soooo wish I was lisa in that. I wished u had them dp her. One in her ass the other in her pussy. But it was still amazing. Best writer so far.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2008 22:42
    please of please wite a apart 3!!! and a part four!!!! please please...... PLEASE!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2008 15:09
    please could you add more parts, brill story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2008 15:43
    i sucked my nans dick to this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2008 17:40
    I loved your stories! Your writing style paints a vivid and erotic picture, giving the reader a sexual rush as if they were in the room with your characters. Please continue writing these amazing stories and please make a part three to this one. Ella, 24, AZ

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2008 00:56
    OMG! This was SOOO awesome! PLEASE write a part 3!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2008 15:28
    u should get her pregnant!

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  • Romancer
    27.11.2008 01:04
    I loved this but I know that if my bro desided to rape me I would just kill him

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2008 03:53
    sucks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.12.2008 23:22
    have him making her bareback fuck the entire football team and all their friends whenever they want

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.01.2009 22:44
    Damn this is a kickass story! But you know what? I still don't think Lisa's learned her lesson. You should make a part 3 where they chain her up and spank her and all that bondage shit!

    1000000/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2009 01:58
    i think they should have the three guys she banged join in on the fun and tie her up and shit and they should make her their sex slave in part three..

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  • none
    29.06.2009 20:58
    it was a good story but if my brother even made a move on me i would beat teh shit out of him.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2009 17:27
    Love your stories. Second one just as good as the first!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2010 10:50
    loved it. love a bitch that fights.. Hope to see more like it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2010 17:33
    well that was a really good story i really hope lisa learned her lesson or josh will have 2 fuck her again 2 make sure she did

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2010 10:03
    i think lisa should fell in love with someone.Anyone which makes josh jealous and realizes his feelings for her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2010 19:53
    another part should be added... this is good but funny

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2010 06:46
    I jus hit 18 this past march I think u shud come find me n we can roleplay this I love ur story

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2011 20:03
    make lisa fall inlove n make josh jelous and make him realize he has feelings for her

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2012 15:15
    your writing sucks sucks sucks sucks sucks

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.09.2012 14:21
    You should have her and josh fall in love and she gets pregnant. That would be an awesome part 3. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz <3 lots of love ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2012 08:25
    Make lisa run away and thn josh realize tht he loves her more thn he thought and tht he feels sad without her even though he pushed her away by blackmailing her and he going to find her and them living happily but not pregnant with jeremy kid but joshs

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2012 00:58
    Your. You're. If you don't know the difference between these, you have NO damn business writing.
    Examples:

    Your grammar fucking blows.
    You're an illiterate fuckhead.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2012 01:58
    Why would you ever do that to a girl thats just gross dude i hope you die if you ever do this in real life any of you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 09:24
    This is really I just don't have any words /:

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2012 21:43
    Have Lisa run away, then have Josh realize he loves her and goes and finds her and they fall in love :) Please! Oh and shut up anonymous reader! His writing DOES NOT suck! And that's all I have to say about it! :0

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2012 11:17
    Remarkable! Guess she will have to get a DNA test to see which one knocked her up LOL

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2013 06:10
    More please.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2013 19:30
    Marvelous story. I don't care if you don't capitalise. You are an asshole if you don't continue this, please don't be one. And to the rude anonymous readers, i dare you to write a better story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2014 09:21
    if you could have her being ambushed in an alley and have josh save her, then you could really get some respect

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2014 02:53
    You need help. The characters have no humanity. There is no shred of empathy. No emotional bonding of any type. That says a lot about you. 're do the characters and this God be okay

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2016 14:00
    Make one about them raping Karen

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  • sassy_girl
    08.11.2017 17:03
    i think you should continue but it get kinkier you know add water sports and maybe the family goes away except for josh, Jeremy and Lisa and have them make her their pet

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