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Sex games

brother and sister part 1

Author: neji

Date: 4 June 2007

Blowjob, Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Incest

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Devin walks into the kitchin to get somthing to eat as he starts to head back to his room his sister steps out in front of him and nocks him back into the kitchin.

What was that all about Tammy i dident do any thing to deserv that.

Tammy stands there for a minet looking at her littel brother.

What did u do she asked.

Its not what u did it what ur frind did last night.

well what did he do devin asked his sister well we went up to my room hafter our date last night and we started macking out and and tuching each outher and i grabed his cock and he grabed my pussy an started rubing me so i took his cock out of his pants and put it on my lips and went to suck it and he came before i even got the tip in my mouth but that was fine with me as longe as i got mine so i lade on my back whating for him to fuck me or at least eat me out so i could get off so i lade ther with my eyes closed for like 5 minets whating and nothing i opend my eyes to see what was ronge and he was gone the asshole left.

Devin looked at his sister with a dumbstuck look i realy dident need to no all of that Devin sayes but seeing as u told me what the hell do u want me to do about it so u had to finger fuck urself thats not my fault so dont blame it on me u stupid cunt.

Tammy looks at her littel brother who is clerly injoing this so she decids that she is going to get even.

That night Tammy sneeks from her room to devins she slowly walks into his room and starts to snoop around as she is snooping she relizes that there is nothing for her to finde.

Tammy looks around one more time then decides to look under her brothers bed as she starts looking under her brothers bed his blanket falls off Tammy gets up to put her brother blanket back on him as she starts to cover up her brother she relizes that he is completly nacked as she stands there looking at her brother she scans his body with her eyes and relizes that he as a big cock at lest 4 inches soft as she stard at her brothers nacked body she starts to notic that here pussy was starting to become verry wet.

With her pussy as wet as it had ever been Tammy slowly fineshis covering her brother up and starts to walk back to her room as she is walking she can her the splush of her pussy rubying to gether from were she was so wet.

Tammy finaly gets to her room witch was just right dowen the hall from here brothers but with as horny as she was it seemed like miles as soon as she closed her doore behinde her she striped of f her close like there was no tomorowe and spraweld out onto her bed she couldent stop thanking about here brothers cock
thanking of his cock she starts to play with one of her nippels thats so hard it feels like a rock she
slowly starts to slide her hand down her body curesing every part of skin she could as her hand traveld dowen she got even weter. She started to teas her pussy by just barly tuching it then moving her hand away then she slowly started to rub her clit up and dowen pully her lips up and dowen with her free hand.

Then she slowly stuck one of her fingers in her pussy she started to finger fuck herself faster and faster Tammy roled onthe bed fingering herself tammy then takes her free hand and sticks a finger up her ass as she starts to finger fuck her ass and pussy at the same time she finally sticks a nother finger into her pussy as she dus she starts to have a majer orgasim as she is starting to climax she yelss oooo my god at the top of her voice with out relizing it as the cum is poring out of her pussy she starts fucking her pussy with her finger agian.


As Tammy reaches the end of her secund orgasem she relises that her dore is cracked and som body is standing out side watch her she looks to see whoe it is and relisez her brother standing out side her dore stroking his cock not relizing what she was saying she asked out loude u want some help with that.

hearing his sister say that he walked into her room with his dick in is hand with out thanking twice tammy reached up and started strocking his dick with each strocked it expanded by the time devin was fully stiff his cock was at least eight inches longe.

Tammy slowly takes her brothers cock and starts to swirl her lips arounde his cock soon she had the head of his dick in her mouth sucking with all her mighte.

Devin gronde as his sister swallowed his cock then he finnaly took his dick out of her mouth and as he felt his balls start to tight he new he was about to cum but he wasent ready to yet so Devin got dowen onto his knees and started to his the innerthiges of his sister teasing her pussy he slowly starts to lick around her pussy then he finnaly dived into it licking and nibbeling on his sisters pussy.

As devin licked her pussy Tammy started slashing around on the bed from all the plesher Tammy had had her pussy sucked before but never like this Devin had a tonge like a god and she loved it Tammy allways thought ove her littel brother as never doing any thinge like thisand nowe her he was giving her plesher.

Tammy grabs Devins head and shoves his face into her pussy as fare as she can her brother is just so good that she cant holde back anymore she cums all over devins face.

Devin sucked it all dowen savering the sweet taste of his sisters sweet jucies.

Tammy wiggeld out from under her brothrs face as she gets to her feet Tammy turns around and and beds over the bed .

Fuck me devin fuck me as hard as u can Tammy beggs Devin hoping he will fuck her with his larg cock and she whates there for a minet starting to thanke that he isent going to fuck her Tammy feals
the head of devins dick rubbing up and dowen her cunt macking her socked pussy evens weter then it allready was.

Devin eases his cock into Tammy doing in inch by inch as Devin slid his cock into his sisters pussy he grounde out of pleasher it was the tightest pusyy devin had ever had as he fucked Tammy he started to gain speed. going faster and faster Tammy thought for shure that Devin was going to split her in half .

Then Devin felt his balls start to tinse up he new he was about to cum so thruste deep into his sister one laste time as he felt the spurm start to shoot out inside of his sister he pulled his cock out and spun Tammy around Tammy dident need him to tell her she allready had his cock in her mouth swollowing all his cum of his rock hard cock.



From then on every night Devin and Tammy would fuch




sorry this one was not that good but whate for part 2 it should be better.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 06:01
    Learn to spell first. Improve your grammar. Basically learn to write in English. this should be minus 100/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 06:06
    I can not read this it is written so badly.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 06:14
    spell check anyone ????

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 08:08
    might be a good story. But fuck mate use a speel checker.

    0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 08:51
    spurm... wtf? go bsck to school kid -.-'

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 08:51
    spurm... wtf? go bsck to school kid -.-'

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 12:12
    Pay attention boys and girls; this is your mind on drugs!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 13:51
    this would be a great story, but for the spelling, I'm not one for demanding perfect spelling but this is so bad I can't read it easily, and nothing kills a binner like stopping to correct spelling

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 17:09
    Can anyone say, the author's family tree looks like a telephone pole. Drugs and incest, a mind numbing combination. Had a very good laugh though.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 19:32
    god what lousey spelling go back to school before writting any more stories

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 20:32
    that sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 22:08
    god use spell check negative 50/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 22:31
    Funniest story ever. Nearly the only words you spelled correctly were "cock" and "pussy." Best of luck next year in the first grade.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2007 22:42
    wow...just, just wow... i had no clue what was going on and it seems like a retard got a hold of your keyboard. dont bother with part 2. you fail at life

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 00:36
    Darwin says you should die because of you atrocious spelling. Why do I bother commenting? You probably can't even read this.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 05:57
    all i can say is... wow, did u just punched the keyboard trying to make words!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 08:38
    Your mind on drugs my ass: I could write something better than this stoned out of my gourd. Jesus, go back to school you illiterate alabama goat fucker.

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    READER 500
    08.06.2007 10:31
    are you fucking six?!?! this story sucked ass all because you can not spell! you couldnt even spell "fuck". im dislyexic and story made me realise that some poeple are ILLITERATE JACK ASS'ES THAT COULD AT LEAST INVEST IN USING SPELL CHECK!!!! OH MY FUCKING GOD NEVER WRITE A STORY EVER AGAIN

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 10:34
    learn to spell you retarted kid.

    Wait, Ill translate it so you can understand it.



    lrn 2 spel u retrded kid!

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    READER 500
    08.06.2007 10:38
    how did this f'ker get 2/10, I dont know, but I suggest to make it an 1/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 10:50
    ummmmm i dont know but isnt it spelled minute?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 19:23
    After going to school you might want to try again. 1 / 10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 20:33
    lol its gotta be a piss take on the spelling , its hillarious :P , and if its not a joke then ur seriously mentally retarded

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.06.2007 12:48
    Gotta love the IM Lingo and the Misspelled Words...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.06.2007 00:03
    Is it just me? Or do alot of the people who post that the person cannot spell. Cannot spell themselves?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.06.2007 18:25
    y dnt u pray dat ma sis wud do dat to me

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.06.2007 03:29
    jibai

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    READER 500
    17.06.2007 22:29
    DAMN YOU DUMB FUCK CAN YOU FUCKING SPELL!!!! tuching IS SPELT TOUCHING!!! RE WRITE THIS AND IT MIGHT BE SOMEWHAT GOOD IF YOU DIDN'T SPELL LIKE A DUMB FUCK NO ONE WANTS TO TRY AND FIGURE OUT WHAT YOU MEAN JUST TO READ YOUR DUMB FUCK STORY

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    READER 500
    22.06.2007 03:43
    Wow people making fun of him for not being able to spell should learn to spell themselves. Also to the writer learn to fucking write please. No part 2 until you graduate second grade. To the people who gave it 1/10 shame on you....-10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2007 09:59
    koal khara

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2007 13:40
    LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL DUMB SHIT. FUCH? TUCH? THANKE? DOWNE? WHAT THE HELL? Graduate 3rd grade before you write part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2007 01:03
    u suck!!! SPELL U DUMBSHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2007 05:28
    This was written by a non-English speaking person, probably from India. That's why you ignorant readers are determined to criticise his writing. He must be in a school taking English as a second language.

    I think that some of you readers should do the same thing. And yes, the story is difficult to read. I gave it a 2/10.

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    READER 500
    14.07.2007 22:17
    i thought it was a very good story even though you do have some spelling errors

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.07.2007 18:50
    you suck ass buddy my dog can spell better than you man thats why you should stay in school dumb fuck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.07.2007 07:53
    hey buddy better luck next time hope u come up with a nice story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2007 19:34
    was it fun? i want sex rite now sooooooooo bad !!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.08.2007 21:13
    That a bad story. Are you going to write chapter 2?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.08.2007 23:36
    he never described tammy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2007 06:11
    can l your sex. i love sex.and i love play sex at balakang masai but know i want to sex at your sex.xooo

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2007 16:51
    wow you need spelling lessons

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.08.2007 17:00
    you suck buddy my dog can spell better than you. thats why you you should stay in school dumb shit!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2007 13:33
    the story was ok and cool. i liked it so i will be waiting for next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2007 21:19
    it was so sexy t was ok but the spelling was horrible

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2007 01:54
    hey sucker!!! just get the spellings right

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.09.2007 18:24
    he dint describe her

    i fink he gay

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.09.2007 12:09
    it was good it got my dick hard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.09.2007 19:21
    i got a hard on now, i fantasize about fucking my sister too!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.09.2007 08:11
    boring

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.09.2007 18:05
    yea u shit must to go to some fuckin school and get yur speels right nigga

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.09.2007 23:46
    its gayy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.09.2007 19:51
    u suck dumass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.09.2007 20:00
    u need spelling lessons u piece of shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.09.2007 20:09
    up yours dumb shit 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.09.2007 10:02
    Good, but spell check everything first

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2007 02:18
    this was shit.

    learn to spell n00n

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2007 16:33
    spell check dumbass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2007 22:18
    learn how to spell dumb fuck ! One more thing are you from west virginia ?



    PS.Don't make anymore stories you gay mother fucker.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.09.2007 00:51
    he was playing with him self and typing with other hand

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.09.2007 18:53
    You dumb fuck. Spell correctly or dont jack off while you are writing these stories. Actually dont write anymore you sick fucker

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.10.2007 22:40
    Uh.... kinda good.. BUT LRN2SPELL GOSH

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.10.2007 16:26
    god damn you

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.10.2007 16:00
    mother fucker, do you know how to write english with correct spell!. go and study how to write english properly....then try to write story..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2007 10:22
    i think you might be legally retarded

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2007 02:21
    fuk u bastard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2007 17:20
    let me tell something LEARN TO SPELL THAN TRY TO WRITE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.10.2007 08:23
    madarchod sale kuch toh aacha lekhakar........apne sis mujhe de dena..................

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.10.2007 09:34
    It was not that bad, But whe should haved Got More Sex as she wanted.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.10.2007 12:59
    That was so fucking hot you should learn how to spell better or at least read over what u type other then that thats awsome....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.10.2007 19:58
    You are crazy you fucking assholle

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.11.2007 16:35
    ur gay

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.11.2007 07:42
    its called GRAMMAR dumbass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.11.2007 13:23
    THAT SUCKS U COULDNT EVEN SPELL SHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2007 19:31
    You are a fucking bitch

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2007 01:14
    bhenchod

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2007 15:07
    bhosadi k lund pehle likhna seekh aur usko idhar bhej de behanchod

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.11.2007 01:35
    that was sexi iwould fuck my sis to

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.12.2007 02:35
    bahan ke loude

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.12.2007 11:37
    you spelled this like you were 6 im only 13 but fuck you are such a dumass and i didint beleve a single fucking thing you said

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.12.2007 08:28
    madarchod,tere gand mein kutta chode,bahanchod

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.12.2007 17:33
    fuckin retard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.01.2008 23:46
    Ok! Woah! Now I couldn't even read the whole mothafucking thing. It was like "blahboogndjsjjkasdbks"! Use quotes bitch. Use quotes. My goodness. You need to go back to elementary school for that shit.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.01.2008 16:44
    FUCKING BORING xxxxxx

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.01.2008 13:09
    that was shit lying faker hoe fuckin dumass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.01.2008 02:19
    you damn thing !cursed thing!die soon!!!

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    READER 500
    17.01.2008 15:45
    What the fuck u bitch. Yu spell like a kindagrdener. And i aint beleiven any of that fuckin shit u worte. What did u write with your head backward and ur fuckin brain out of ur mind. Thats right u dont have a brain u fuckin llittle shit face. Go fuck ur mom.

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    READER 500
    23.01.2008 10:20
    u'r one son of bitch come on what a fuck did u think u were doing as i can see uare going to fuck all u'r family shame on u

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    READER 500
    28.01.2008 15:58
    wow did u write this with your dads cock in your mouth

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2008 19:08
    GOD DAMN YOU



    SHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.02.2008 08:24
    fuck your sister so hard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2008 02:55
    u suck at spelling and don't bother with part 2 its gonna suck even more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2008 14:35
    go back to school before you attempt to write chapter two you can't spell worth shit it is totally impossible to read or follow your story please do us a favor and learn to write then resubmitt this story

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    READER 500
    14.02.2008 20:54
    learn to speel dumass

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2008 17:51
    what the fuck was you tinking you little shit face. go to kindergarden you fucking idiot

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    READER 500
    27.02.2008 12:52
    I only read the first few lines of your crappy story because it was so bad. Learn to write, spell and use punctuation, you idiot. 2/10 crap!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.02.2008 12:05
    u bitch.i ll fuk ur mouth brutaly.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2008 23:16
    That was so good. It makes me want to go out and really fuck my sister

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2008 10:00
    ...........learn to spell, and if you're going to rip on someone for not being able to spell. make sure you can spell yourself.....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2008 01:51
    you suck ass at spelling. why dont you go back to first grade and learn how to fucking spell. dumb ass. i gave it a 1/10

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    READER 500
    12.03.2008 06:28
    I cant belive how many of yoy slagging the guy of, Why don't you all grow up and get a real life and try pehaps to write somethink that does'nt involve fuck you, asshole.....

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    READER 500
    15.03.2008 22:57
    i Thought that was so hott me and my sister did something like this once..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2008 04:17
    this shit sucked balls learn to spell asshole

    you are such a dick.

    i'd fuck your sister better than you ever could.!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2008 16:33
    hey, loser learn to write and that sucks, i mean ur own sis, how desperate are you! fuck face!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2008 11:18
    that was hot

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2008 09:10
    keep ur shitty stories wid urself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2008 18:18
    that wz good mate meant my 22 year old ant fuked once im only 16 if u want some idears use me n kate we fukd doggy anal pussy bj liked er out cumed inside er cumed in er ass wz exalent n i raped a 9year old girl after readin this i gt er sukin me off nw

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    READER 500
    25.03.2008 16:19
    my sister teased me abot jerkin off. She'd see me peein in the can an till me to quit playing wit my peenus. finally igrabbed her an stuk my hand in her pantz.

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    READER 500
    04.04.2008 06:38
    im 15 and mi step siter is 22 she came home one time drunk and hoped in to my bed and sucked my cock and i slept with mi cock in her poussy she woke p in the middle of the night and fucked me now she dosnt talk to me she trys to fuck me more but its gay coz shes like family il lick her asss thoe

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    READER 500
    16.04.2008 15:39
    I have never fucked anybody but I played with my self until I came a couple of times. Have you ever had sex? And if you have, did it feel good? And you do need to work on your spelling.

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    READER 500
    16.04.2008 15:48
    sexy

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    READER 500
    20.04.2008 17:03
    wow learn to spell. i am young and i could right a hell of a better story than you. you spell fuck "fuch" what the hell is wroung with you. slow down and learn to type you redneck.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 12:29
    Nice Spelling ;-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2008 23:12
    can anyone say "Spell Check" comon a 10th grader can type better then you. 1/10 for spelling

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2009 13:12
    Where you masturbating while trying to write this story? Get a dictionary ;-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 23:07
    larn to spell then write

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 01:11
    ONE WORD... SPELLCHECK!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 17:32
    another story written by a nonenglish speaking idiot or by a ten year old i wish the webmasters would force all writers into going through editors before posting so they are readable unlike this garbage

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2011 19:14
    U suck on writing sex stories but itz alright cant wait till da secund part!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 01:29
    U speak great engrish wish me could be like u

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2014 05:36
    I see there are still idiots out there who don't have a brain. no one writes stories to be graded. if you understood the story and liked the content that is all that matters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.12.2015 03:42
    After the first 2 paragraphs I couldn't read anymore. You are writing a story, not texting a friend. And yes spelling does count if you want me to read and enjoy it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2016 11:43
    Great story. Just need a little more development.
    But love it.

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