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I shall fuck your corpse tonight!

Author: MISTER BIG T

Date: 17 August 2007

Cruelty, Dark Fantasy, Death, Murder

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I Shall Fuck Your Corpse Tonight - Digimon lemon by MISTER BIG T. done for ”Author of the Month” contest.
WARNING!! This is an ultra-violent, extremely gory, and very fucked up torture/guro story. Do NOT read if you’ve got weak stomach or if you’re offended by such content!!! To all the others, let’s get this party started! I’ll bring out the meat grinder and the lesbians dressed as sows!! ^_^

“Greetings whomever reads this,

Who I am, does not matter at the moment. I am not going to explain my motives, nor will I tell about myself. I am merely going to tell you what’s happening to my beloved doll after what took nearly months to prepare. You may know me or you may not… and if by a strange twist of fate, you will somehow recognize me… I’ve already put that into consideration, and I’ll be visiting your house very, very soon.”
– Direct quote from the letter found in the crime scene.

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From my hiding spot, I watch my precious doll of tumbling flesh, Kari Kamiya, as she prepares to leave school. I see her, talking idly with her friends as she leaves the school grounds; whether or not she’s heading home doesn’t matter to me. All that matters is that she’s alone. I can only assume that no one is aware of what’s going on. This is just what I wanted; nothing would get in my way, now.

I wait for what seems like forever, ‘til the crowd at the school would disperse, leaving just me, and her. I would then climb out of my van, chloroform rag in hand, and sneak around behind her. I made sure not to make a single sound; I didn’t even breathe, for fear of startling my precious. Once I was close enough, I would reach out, taking her by the hips and drawing her towards me before my free hand would pull the rag up to her face. She lets out a ruffled scream, before the chemical takes its hold, and she passes out in my arms. Oh, the thrill of it, the rush of adrenaline. The tingling feeling that coursed through every bone of my body. Even though I’ve done this once before, the sensation would never grow old.

She would wake up several hours later, in the safety of my house. I watched her from my chair as she slowly rubs her eyes, taking everything in. I could tell by the look on her face that her senses were still dull from the chloroform.

“Well hello, Miss Kari. How nice of you to finally wake up.” I tell her calmly as I grab the remote control from the coffee table, and stand up. She cries out my name as I walk into her sights, and it made me so glad that she remembered me.

“What’s going on?!” she cries out, pure terror echoing through her voice. “W-where am I? What are you going to do?”

“Don’t worry.” I assure her, a warm smile creeping across my lips as I slowly raise the remote before pointing it over to the nearby TV, finger lowering to press the ‘play’ button. “Just relax, and watch a homemade video with me.”

The gasps and screams that escaped her lips as she watched the short film of my ‘visit’ with Sora was priceless. There was no sound coming from the television, but it was easy to tell when she screamed, because every time Sora would open her blood covered mouth, one could clearly see her mutilated tongue, that I had carefully peeled open with an old potato peeler. She was screaming as loud as she could while I raped her, blood gushing from her freshly popped cherry. The grip I had on her hips was iron-tight, while I pushed her up and down on my long member. Her hands and feet would struggle in a vain attempt to free herself from me, but the thick leather bindings refused to even budge. I could remember the moment perfectly, how I had told her how much of a big, filthy slut she was, and how she always wanted someone to come along, and rape her just like this. With a smirk plastered across my face, I would raise my hands around her scrawny neck, and she would make a final gasp, her limbs flailing about, before she would go still as she fell unconscious.

I stood with Kari in silence for a second, letting it all sink in. I set my hand down on top of her head, fingers carefully darting through her hair, stroking her tenderly. “That was just a few days ago... didn’t you wonder where she went when she just disappeared?”

It was at this point she began to breakdown, tears pouring from her eyes as she lowered her head, unable to look up at me, or the screen, anymore. “Y-yes… b-but… I never expected this…”

I pulled back on her hair roughly, bringing her face back up to the television, forcing her to watch the last of the movie. The screen would flicker just a bit as I pulled out my knife, and would slowly bring it up to the flesh of Sora’s stomach. I began to slowly withdraw my throbbing prick from her hole as the sharp end of the blade pierced through her skin, tearing open a large hole in her gut. I quickly discarded the knife, and went about prying open the wound further with my bare hands, her warm intestines falling into my lap. I would smile broadly for the camera as he began to slowly fuck those beautiful bleeding guts of hers, whispering softly ‘Fucking whore, even your insides beg for dick’, though Kari wouldn’t be able to hear this.

That slut Sora was gurgling at this point, her eyes glazing over as she stared at ceiling. Blood poured from her mouth, and down her chin, mixed with saliva. She was already pissing herself, her body barely able to cling onto the few strands of life I had left her. It wasn’t long before I would start to cum, my warm fluid filling her insides, staining them a bright white. I began to pull myself away from her, as my hands moved down to feel her pulse; her heart was still beating, but just barely. She didn’t have much longer to go.

The movie ended as I rose from her near dead body, her flesh stained with saliva, blood, and semen. My mind would wonder which one of my tortures was the final straw that broke her will to live, but I didn’t care. She wasn’t the one I had my eyes on. She was merely a tool used to shock my sweet Kari… The one I had always wanted to hold.

Kari began to scream hysterically, tears streaming down her face as she shook her head, arms moving about to try to escape my grasp. She actually put up a bit of a fight, so I had to withdraw my knife from me belt, and held it up against her throat, the sharp blade breaking her skin, causing a few drops of blood to spill out. It calmed her down greatly, for the time being.

“P-please… Don’t kill me...” she begged, teary eyes looking up at me, “Please... I-I’ll do whatever you want...”

With a satisfied smirk on my face, I took her hand and walked her over to my drawer of ‘toys’, knife still positioned carefully against her throat. I opened one of the drawers with my knee, and looked over my available options. After a brief second, I saw something that was just perfect for this occasion.

“Remove your shirt.” I instructed, letting go of her hand as I turned to face her shivering body. “And your bra.”

My precious did exactly as I told her, and slowly lifted her shirt up over her head. I pointed for her to throw it down behind her, and she did before unhooking the clamps to her bra, it falling onto the ground, bringing her small, cute tits into view. She was really crying hard, at this point… poor girl must have really thought I was going to kill her now. She was wrong… I wasn’t going to kill her anytime soon…

Slowly, I lifted up a simple fishing hook from the drawer, and before she could react, I quickly drove it into her left breast, near the nipple area. She screamed, and tried to stop me, driving the knife against her neck in just a bit more. She quickly realized that her struggling only made the hook, and knife, hurt more. Once the hook was completely through her breast, I began to do the same with the mound, while she screamed and quivered in sheer agony.

“You’re the first girl I was able to give a tit piercing. Isn’t that something to be proud of?” I taunt, and she’s only able to whimper and mumble out of fear.

With a quick push, I knocked her onto the floor, reaching into the drawer to pull out a pair of leather belts. She groaned, as she slowly tried to rise, and I went down on my haunches, taking hold of her arms and legs, carefully tying her up. All the while, my free hand would start to gently caress her feet, slowly pulling off the shoes, then the socks. Once her legs were tied, I began to tickle her feet just a bit; her feet were always one of her more sensitive spots, and I wanted to see which part of her feet were the most ticklish. It wasn’t long before her fits of uncontrollable laughter told me I found it. I got up from my spot, and went back to the drawer, digging around in it till I found a bag of thumbtacks. These were just perfect! I went back down to her feet, and began to pull out the tacks, before slowly driving them into the soft flesh, one by one. She struggled, crying out in pain, a few laughs still escaping her throat. With feet like this, she wouldn’t be able to run away from me.

I then withdrew my knife once more, and walked over towards her hands. I slowly drove the knife underneath her pinky nail, and began to pry it off, taking my sweet time to make sure she felt it. I moved from nail to nail, pulling them off, Kari’s sweet howls of excruciation. Once her nails were removed, I reached into the drawer a final time, taking out a metal tong. I brought it down to her fingers, wrapping it around her pinky finger, before snapping, her bone cracking completely. After repeating the process on each finger, she passed out, from a mix of pain, and fear.

Oh, but the fun was just about to begin.

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After opening the unconscious Kari’s restraints, and using them to tie her arms more firmly behind her neck, I carried her towards a large hook, hanging from the ceiling. I lifted her up, and ran the hook through the one of the notches of the belt, so that her arms were pointing all the way up. I them dress up my precious doll, by putting on spiked ankle clamps, the spikes piercing her ankles easily. Her eyebrows flinched, but she didn’t wake up. Pity. After taking another moment to bind her more securely with a few bits of rope, I took hold of a long, metallic cane, which I had glued several razor blades to the tip.

The first few whips from the cane drove the blades deep into her young, tender flesh, waking her up as she screamed in agony, body flailing around on the hook, while I whipped at her again. And again. Huge chucks of meat flew everywhere with each blow. She screamed and cried, her voice almost completely gone from all the screaming. I moved around behind her, to strike at her ass, now. Again, and again.

After... I don’t know thirty or so attacks, I stopped to admire my work. Her back was an unrecognizable mass of flesh, blood oozing and dripping down the bones that were sticking out of her disfigured form. I looked down at her but, and sneered at the missing pieces. She was like a pig that had just returned from the butcher, and I thought she was lucky, to have not died already from blood loss.

Not yet, Kari. You deserve better.

Her scared eyes followed my hands while I reached down, and pulled up my electric drill. She was barely able to shake her head, blood pouring down from her mouth. I turned the drill on, and let it hum for a long moment, just to let Kari listen to its gentle music, which she was obviously so afraid of.

I drilled a bolt straight through her foot, then another one, only slightly higher... then another one, just inches below her bloody and weak ankle. I drilled an equal amount of bolts through her other foot, as well. And then, without warning, I took my knife, and cut the belt that she was hanging from.

Kari dropped like a rock, crashing down on her feet, which was too much of a burden for her new, weakened form. Her ankles snapped off from the clamps that bound her, her leaving only bloody stumps. She cried it absolute terror as she glanced down at her mutilated legs.

“Oh, God! Kill me! Kill me please! IT HUUURTS! ” she screamed with a muffled voice, as she tried to weakly kick with the remains of her feet.

I couldn’t help but smile as I took hold of yet another hook; rope tied through its other end, and pushed it through her pussy and clitoris, then yanked up on the rope. She howled in anguish, and found herself forced up, to try to stand on her bloody stumps. Her legs did nothing, of course, and she slipped backwards, only to have her genitals torn to shreds. She whimpered in pain, as her voice grew, gradually, weaker and weaker, her blood starting to flow much slower. She was rapidly becoming pale, and her spasms were starting to weaken.

I took hold of her blood-stained body, carried her to the kitchen, tossing her into a large, iron container of hot, salty brine. She slowly sank into it, where she would boil like a lobster, although much slower, and therefore, more painfully.

Incredibly, her eyes opened and she screamed as she, again, desperately tried to escape. The salty liquid did not give her any mercy, and neither did I. While standing there, I smiled, watching her struggles go weaker. Soon, Kari was finally dead.

Once her tender flesh was fully cooked, I pulled her carcass out. I threw her onto the table, took hold of my fork, and unzipped my pants. I started to slowly eat her warm meat, while my free hand reached down, and I started to masturbate.

Kari…

I moaned, while eating more of her flesh, enjoying her taste. No steak dinner was like this.

Oh Kari… Kari…

I took a bite on the remains of her tits, and ate through her body.

Kari you’re in me… Kari’s in me…

The images of Kari screaming and twitching in agony came back to my head. How she had begged and pleaded to me to end her misery.

I came.
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Epilogue

So who was the killer? Prime suspects are TK and Davis, both of who had a huge crush on Kari. Upon never receiving the same sort of a love back, perhaps either of them could commit such an act? Could denied love have such an effect on people we thought could never be capable of acts of violence?

However, we cannot pass up the possibility of another person, such as Matt, Izzy, or even Tai. What could possibly be their motivation? Why would they want to kill and mutilate both Kari and Sora? Could the motivations be similar to that of TK’s and Davis’ possible motives?

And we can’t ever turn down the possibility that the killer may be just a nameless classmate, just a random person sharing the same class with Kari. Just somebody who no one paid attention to.

We may never truly know who did it. And that’s the true horror behind the story; we may never really know who may be the death to any of us. Could it be someone we trust and care for? Could it be someone we hardly know, someone we only see sometimes? How well do you know your friends and the people around you?

Have a nice day.


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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 08:04
    WTF IS THIS SHIT



    GO BACK TO SCHOOL YOU IDIOT!



    FUVKIN WEIRD STORY!

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 11:09
    sick

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 13:13
    Completely disgusting. I know this site is supposed to be uncensored....but that was not even sexy, it wasn't even explicit in the sexual way, it was just a murder story. Should be removed.

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 15:32
    hey idiot readers! he TOLD you it was ultra violent, gory and fucked up. he TOLD you not to read it if this type of content offended you! Shut the fuck up!



    Mister Big T, great story! I came twice! More please!

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 16:39
    hey idiot readers! he TOLD you it was ultra violent, gory and fucked up. he TOLD you not to read it if this type of content offended you! Shut the fuck up!



    Mister Big T, great story! I came twice! More please!

    Don't listen to these morons. They're okay with bestiality, bondage, boy, coercion, first time, fisting, foot fetish, incest, humiliation, mind control, scatology, spanking, teen female, toys, threesome, trasvestite, virginity and water sports. But oh no, no guro. Bullshit. Keep writing.

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 18:09
    THIS IS TOTAL SHIT FUCKING GAY DIGIMON SHIT AND CANnIBALSIM????WTF!!!!

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    READER 500
    20.08.2007 23:25
    well,,, well... its not really my type of story, but if thats what you like to write, more power to you.

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    READER 500
    21.08.2007 06:56
    Hey, I don't care what the fuck it was he warned us about at the start of this story. The whole thing stunk to high heaven. It sucked gonads, big-time. What a piece of garbage. And anybody who doesn't like what I have to say can kiss my rosy ass.

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    READER 500
    21.08.2007 09:34
    ultra gory..and ultra wicked. The writer of this inhumane story has a warped and dangerous mind. Good grieve..

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    READER 500
    21.08.2007 09:34
    ultra gory..and ultra wicked. The writer of this inhumane story has a warped and dangerous mind. Good grieve..

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    READER 500
    21.08.2007 16:52
    strange story-we were warned,guess people don't believe the prolog,then bitch after reading the story! different strokes for different folks. i'd rather he raped her for a long tyme but oh well!

    8/10

    thanx

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    READER 500
    21.08.2007 19:29
    well what can i say. i have never read anything like it before, but i guess you gotta get in where you fit in. i think the worst part about the story was the fact that someone like that could be living next door.

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    READER 500
    22.08.2007 03:23
    im sorry but the story was just... bad. it just wasnt good, Have a nice day. Fucking original jerkoff.

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    READER 500
    22.08.2007 05:06
    Dude, that was awesome.

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    READER 500
    23.08.2007 17:23
    Yeah, I know, we were warned. I'm sure glad you don't know where I live. Have a nice fucking day indeed. Alfred Hitchcock you ain't. I think I'll pass on supper.

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    READER 500
    24.08.2007 12:29
    great story!

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    READER 500
    26.08.2007 01:37
    u sick fuck. go to therepy

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    READER 500
    28.08.2007 11:04
    Read the "A Night With Destiny" story,right? Not quite the writer that dude is.

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    READER 500
    29.08.2007 00:13
    Wow, it was a rather brutal & graphic story. I'm not complaining though, you did give us fair warning before anything happened. The detail was quite good, chilling but excellent regardless.

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    READER 500
    29.08.2007 08:33
    I have no idea what night with destiny is but now I'm inquired to find out more.

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    READER 500
    30.08.2007 15:39
    i was raped once and i enjoyed it

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    READER 500
    01.09.2007 19:15
    sick!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.09.2007 20:20
    i want to be fucked!! i am still a virgin!!

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    READER 500
    07.09.2007 01:33
    Fuckin amazing! If you got off to this shit then your fucked up. lol. Love it tthough!

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    READER 500
    09.09.2007 14:51
    great story!!! very descriptive and grapic.. but not very focused on the sex though, perhaps a sequel more focused on sex and pussy torture?

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    READER 500
    09.09.2007 17:41
    different i must say! creeped me out more thn anyfin lol

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    READER 500
    29.09.2007 09:10
    Who in the world would enjoy this? You people should go to therapy. Seriously. You people need help. Who likes getting raped or even doing that. You sick cannibal pervert.

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    READER 500
    04.10.2007 04:17
    holy shit!!!! i got a gut made of iron, ive eatin beetles, snakes, scorpians, monkeys, and all other crazy stuff, out of bets and military training mind you, and even seen my friend blown up in front of me and that still made my gut twitch but that was perfectly well writin and i give it a 10/10, good job.

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    READER 500
    12.10.2007 06:59
    Pretty fucktup how sick do u get.motherfuckers

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    READER 500
    15.10.2007 02:50
    Should have heeded the warning at the beginning!

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    READER 500
    16.10.2007 01:36
    best story ive ever read.i loved how much gore there was.i was always wondering what the cannibalism page was.time to go read more.heh

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    READER 500
    18.10.2007 18:37
    wow, i mean i like some weird stuff, but jesus man. lol. i don't understand how anyone could get off on this and manage to make it their entire lives without being a serial killer. but i read it as a horror story, not as erotica so as a horror storing i gave you a 7/10. it was good, but felt kind of rushed. the torture didn't have any suspense or buildup it seemed like short of the cooking it could have happened in ten minutes. try working on more suspense. and i'll avoid the cannabalism page from now on. lol. you warned me.

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    READER 500
    30.10.2007 12:54
    A bit short but good enough

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    31.10.2007 12:13
    Thats really sick! but im not a wanker who just insults u then leaves, ill give u 9/10 purely because ur a good writer, i was just reading this too see what these stories

    r like-thanks

    4 the warning~Tristan

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    03.11.2007 15:21
    How could you write something like this. People who masturbated at this need help. This happens for real. To hear people like this makes America sick. Mr Big T. If you wrote this you seriously need a new hobby! If that happened to somebody because of your story. You should go to jail!

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    READER 500
    04.11.2007 12:54
    typical American-Centric Bullshit. You people think the world revolves around you. It DOESN"T! he warned you up front. he told you it was ultra violent and gory. if you don't like it, DON'T READ IT!!

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    READER 500
    15.11.2007 04:26
    this is the exact same thing i did to my girlfriends sister n mother

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    READER 500
    26.11.2007 04:13
    what sick mind comes up with this.did urdad never hug u or somethin because this is sick.peaple sit at home wondering y 1/2 the world think americans r evil and yet dont bother to connect with this piece of shit.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2007 05:32
    saw meets porn.... not a movie i'd want to see

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    READER 500
    29.11.2007 19:12
    YUCK

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 03:29
    you scare me

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 13:21
    holy shit.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.12.2007 02:24
    OMG You messed up piece of shit, some one should do that to you and see how you like it.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2007 04:29
    mmm i came all over my walls, almost as much as when i drugged a girl and cut her clit off, she died offcourse.

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 22:29
    ^^ to all above,WHY READ IT THEN???



    good shit .... sounds like you need to write a book. how abot the title "whos your killer" 5 stars!

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    READER 500
    11.12.2007 13:14
    perfect thing to get rid of a mid day boner, any traces I had are gone now. I'm actually kind of relieved this one wasn't as gory and detailed as this other one I read, but I guess if you like this stuff it was alright. I did find comedy in the fact their names were Sora, Kari, Matt, Izzy, etc. Which kid from Digimon could have done it? Anyway, I'm off to the scat stories

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    18.12.2007 01:48
    This is... Some pretty fucked up shit, Lol. I was gagging as I read, very nice 10/10

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    READER 500
    25.12.2007 17:16
    this is sick

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    READER 500
    03.01.2008 20:18
    Rikku did it obv sora and kari are characters in kh gd game and gr8 story it did what it said on the tin

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    READER 500
    07.01.2008 22:54
    omg I wanna fuck I'm came so much 19/f

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    17.01.2008 18:12
    omfg, this is fucking disgusting. i seriously, seriously hope you get caught. you fucking sick, pitiful discrace of a human being.

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    30.01.2008 10:46
    great until you cooked her, that was too much

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    30.01.2008 11:40
    hey, who doesn't get hungry after a good fuck?

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    15.02.2008 02:38
    Wow. I am surprised on how yuck this was. I am not going to say this was bad but not going to say this was good. You have great tecnique at writing. Nice how you discribed what the killer did. Yet again I am not going to dis this story but I aint' going to give this 2 thumbs up.

    The story is 1 thumbs up and your technique is 10! thumbs up! Good. but not good. So, oerall 5/10 ok

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    READER 500
    19.02.2008 10:01
    The fishooks were dull and rusty and snag the nipple... image the cunt with piano wire as a noose around her neck and pulled tight to the ceiling. Her feet rest on a block , causing the wire to hang loose--the the block of ice begins to melt.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2008 20:58
    amazing... when i read that, i almost felt the torture. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2008 05:23
    you stupid dumb pathetic fucked up psychotic idiot. What the FUCK is wrong with you? To think its alright to even go to these extremes to post this twisted bullshit. I fucking hope you die the WORST FUCKED UP DEATH YOU COULDNT EVEN IMAGINE. Im an 18 yr old girl and ive read some fucked up shit on here but to see stupid shit like this tears me up. U need to be in jail u sick fuck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2008 11:45
    I really fucking you die a painful and slow death, it fucking made me sick. you really do have a twisted mind, I was naked while reading it, and my pussy ached. my tits felt horny, wat was wrong with me?

    I want to masurbate and fuck someone

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2008 17:51
    That was fucking awesome

    i love the final touches to it

    with the bolts just brilliant

    the guy who wrote this was a genius

    congrats she seemed to deserve it anyways good by

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2008 21:36
    what stupid fuck tried to make it look like this shit turned me on. Im a virgin and only consensual sex turns me on. Add me on myspace . com / tawniebubbles

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2008 01:06
    Should have ate her raw, would of been better, also next time something with her eye balls so she cant see it coming then come in her eye socket! overall it was an amazing story! good imagination,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2008 01:56
    I really like the technique it was amazing. The story was almost as gross as saw4. I gave it a seven. Good technique.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2008 02:27
    fuckin' nasty, man. i love how humans are so obsessed with the macabre side of pleasure. we're fuckin' animals...some are just more barbaric.

    didn't turn me on; not into this sorta stuff, but damn if it's not fascinating.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2008 17:42
    you are fucked up. i hope you one day die like that. someone needs to rip your balls off of you and feed it to ya. yeah see how the hell you like that you sick son of a bitch. i hope you have fun in hell. trust me the devil is going to have fun with your sick ass. ROTT IN HELL

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2008 16:35
    To understand that a person can think such things is both a blessing and a sick reality. We may read this out of curiosity, or out of necessity, or out of enjoyment, which one makes us more sick than the individual who wrote it? The person that thought of this all and has the audacity to write it down? I can't tell you who would be the most sick, I would vote the author, simply because this is enough to make someone cringe and flinch from the bluntness of it. Your opinion may be different. Either way, someone was sick enough to write it, yes, but we were sick enough to read it, and sick enough to be afraid of it happening to us. The author was brave enough to post it and we are brave enough to belittle that because we know the difference between right and wrong. This is wrong.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2008 11:05
    Awesome man..Its like straight out of a Quentin Tarantino film...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2008 11:02
    Why do you guys feel the need to rag on the author when he warned you at the beginning of the story NOT TO READ IT if you're not into that kind of stuff?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.04.2008 21:46
    Pretty good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2008 23:36
    sick

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  • Rock+out+with+my+Cock+out
    04.05.2008 16:58
    Why would Tai be the one to do it? Kari is his sister. <3'ed the Digimon names lol.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2008 20:28
    thats fucked up

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  • Fadra93
    09.05.2008 19:13
    Oh my god, this was awsome.
    I loved it.

    Write more!
    The only thing I flinched at was when her ankles snapped.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:58
    That was a good story but i think you need help..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 21:37
    sick fuck

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  • wow..
    18.05.2008 02:56
    this shit is disghusting...why would people take lives from the innocent when they can just do the world a favor and take their own.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 23:38
    you are a SICK SICK FUCK-i hope you burn for writing this- i didnt even want to read it all-you are SICK!!!! may you feel this pain in hell

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2008 02:17
    Who cares? i just masturbated to it. it's alright but just work on your grammar.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 16:44
    Wow reminds me of hostile or saw movies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 00:54
    who ever wrote this a sick fuck thats going to burn in HELL

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 22:46
    umm this is some of the nastiest shit i've ever read. you need help. god job scaring the shit out of everyone who reads this... O_o

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2008 14:02
    There is a place in Norse mythology called Hel, or the dark underworld, where all the damned souls go when they perish. When you arrive there, may the terrible wolf Fenrir rip your throat out and consume you...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2008 14:12
    Whoa... I just came here because I was bored and figured this would give me a laugh, but... Whoa. Thats pretty fucked up. I think the part that makes it seem so fucked up is the attention to detail, it makes it seem like you're there. A good auther, I'll give him that, but certainly not my genre of choice...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 11:59
    holy god man i think i threw up a little dude what the fuck is wrong with u

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 21:03
    you are so fucked up
    go kill yourself
    You are worthless
    Fuck off
    Play a real game

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 21:05
    Dude thanks for the story
    I came at least 4 times to this
    plz make more ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
    OxoBLEEDINGSOULoxO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2008 16:04
    this is so freakin sick IMMA SUE THE PERSON WHO MADE THIS STORY

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  • frenchie83
    13.06.2008 01:03
    dude your a fuckin sicko why anybody would write something like this is beyond me how can you even imagine shit like this die and go to hell you perverse cocksucking motherfucker

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 09:17
    dude consult a psychiatrist .......... ill pay

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 20:05
    Dude! Awesome! I am kinda a real life vampire. I enjoyed it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 11:46
    you are one disgusting sick fuck that needs to be mutilated yourself you sick douchbag

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 04:13
    Good framework ,Some of the story seems rushed. I don't even have an idea of what the two girls looked like or even the how Kari managed to put up such a fight. Still a good start.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2008 00:27
    this is a fucking nasty story who ever made this get a life.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2008 00:29
    creepy but cool story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 08:29
    beautiful art here my friend, keep them cumming! hahaha!!! i'm holding back vomit with an ominous smile as i read this.... good job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2008 07:19
    damn you sick fuck
    get a fucking life

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2008 12:45
    to write about something so delicious is much different then doing it. trust me once you try little girl flesh. its hard to back to being normal. good job on the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2008 17:42
    WHY THE FUCK READ THIS IF YOUR GONNA LEAVE COMMENTS LIKE "sick fuck" ETC? Truely YOU are the sick fuck for reading this? This is brilliant writing - could do with some more embellishment but over all a good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2008 05:47
    Jesus okay whats the pleasure in that you didnt even have sex with her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2008 03:00
    this story so fucking bad man fuck this jerk

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2008 02:01
    dam mother fucker write a book and will buy good shit

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  • Michael+Whitman
    22.09.2008 18:44
    Ok, i think this is truely sick, but please dont judge me on that, i want someone to explain what is nice in anyway about this . . . is this supposed to be sexy? are you supposed to wank over this? Because if you do, this is not me trying to take the piss out of you but get sexual help. People who get pleasure from this must be the sick people who rape little children. my aunt is one of the leading dutch sexual helpers and even she doesnt understand this kind of sick stuff, no one normal could understand how anyone gets pleasure from this . . at all. Its vile, people who like this should literally be killed in my opinion becuase you have a fucked up head and cant be cured. Its just plain sicko freak shit. Dont get pleasure from normal sex? So lets cut up girls and fuck their insides . . .

    SICK FREAKS, DIE.

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  • masterbatter
    22.09.2008 22:51
    i love how people read this and then say how horrible it is, if u dont like it then dont read it, i liked the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2008 05:47
    fucked up people who write this deserve to die
    how is that even slightly sexually arousing you sick fucks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2008 23:40
    Excellent horror story.However,for you REAL people that are masterbating because of this story,you need help..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.10.2008 23:33
    Very creative methods!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2008 22:43
    Good horror flick. Made me shiver.

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  • MISTER+BIG+T
    07.11.2008 04:43
    "Ok, i think this is truely sick, but please dont judge me on that, i want someone to explain what is nice in anyway about this . . . is this supposed to be sexy? are you supposed to wank over this? Because if you do, this is not me trying to take the piss out of you but get sexual help. People who get pleasure from this must be the sick people who rape little children. my aunt is one of the leading dutch sexual helpers and even she doesnt understand this kind of sick stuff, no one normal could understand how anyone gets pleasure from this . . at all. Its vile, people who like this should literally be killed in my opinion becuase you have a fucked up head and cant be cured. Its just plain sicko freak shit. Dont get pleasure from normal sex? So lets cut up girls and fuck their insides . . .

    SICK FREAKS, DIE."

    You say people who think of killing other people are sick. Yet, you say people who think so should die. I guess that makes you not only sick as you said, but also a hypocrite

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  • MISTER+BIG+T
    07.11.2008 04:44
    "fucked up people who write this deserve to die
    how is that even slightly sexually arousing you sick fucks"

    I wasn't sexually aroused by this, writing this story gave me nightmares!! I'm not sick for writing things like this, you are if you read them and want someone to die based on a text you read, despite not knowing anything about the said person.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.11.2008 14:37
    that was sick and very disterbing! ill ppl who right like this are sick.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.12.2008 20:10
    I DONT GIVE A FUCK WHAT WARNING HE GAVE US AT THE BEGINNING!!!!!! THIS REALLY HAPPENS AND HE IS PRACTICALLY MAKING FUN OF THE PEOPLE THAT DIE THIS WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANYONE THAT READS THIS AND LIKES THIS R FUCKING SICKOS AND PROBABLY DO THIS TO PEOPLE AND THINK IT IS FUNNY!!!!! THESE PEOPLE AND THE WRITER NEED 2 THINGS.... HAVE THIS HAPPEN TO U AND THEN WELL SEE HOW FUNNY IT IS AFTER AND TO BURN!!!!!!! IN!!!!!!! HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Carbon+Monoxide
    26.12.2008 14:50
    First things first, i very much doubt things like this happen on a regular basis so i don't think this story is making fun of people who die in this way.

    Second - "people who write this deserve to die?" I which case all of the people who write horror movies should be killed and the script writers for movies such as Saw and Hostel should be killed also. Fucking stupid thing to say.

    Third - how do you wank to this? easy you wack your cock

    Fourth - The critisism "HE'S SICK" is starting to get tiresome. I get it you don't like the story. If you dont like then fuck off somewhere else

    Fifth - Im not sure humour was the point of the story

    Sixth - Fucking amazing writing. MISTER BIG T Continue to post stories of this nature and ignore others who are unable to comprehend this particular genre. You seem to have a way with words that most others do not have and you are clearly not affraid to write something that could be considered controversial

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  • woot
    31.12.2008 02:26
    woot

    lovin your stories

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  • woot
    31.12.2008 02:26
    woot

    lovin your stories

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  • woot
    31.12.2008 02:32
    woot

    lovin your stories

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  • TheLessOfTwoEvils
    01.03.2009 18:41
    i dont particularly find this hot but i do like a good horror story well writen if, in my opinion, slightly disturbing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2009 13:25
    i HATE YOU YOU FUCKING SICKO
    GO SNAP YUR HEAD OF IF I EVER FIND OUT WHOWROTE THIS I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU SLOWLY

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.03.2009 13:57
    DUDE GRT STORY, YOU ARE A GENIOUS, PLS CONTINUE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 01:21
    This story wasn't my cup of tea, but if it were the type of thing I was into it would be a great story. My suggestion for MISTER BIG T, keep writing because your fans love you. Sorry I'm not into it., but still a cool story just to read for kicks.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 08:32
    Ur a sick piece of shit n i hope u burn in hell. Sick bastard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2009 02:20
    I literally threw up, i'd never cook somone, i'd fuck the shit out of them.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2009 08:25
    Do a sequel! Please! That would be so awesome! This is my fav story by you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2009 13:04
    That is just soooooo horrible how could u even write such a thang....poor gurls omg u r a horrible man horrible horrible man......that is just plain mean and all of u who accutally liked it ur just as bad.....u should go do that to ur damn self.....did u even know that studies show that people who write this stuff r more likely to do it.....im with the FBI studing this stuff....im gonna keep watching u secertly..........how caould u even think about this stuff

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  • dwatz
    24.04.2009 19:30
    nasty yo....lmao dude ur one sick ass hole creep.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2009 09:28
    U R 1 SIK PUPPY!!
    UR A DIRTY ROTTEN DOGG I HOPE U GET LOCKED UP ND RAPED BY A BIG HARD BLACK COCK EVERYDAY...

    I BET UR LIKE A 50 YR OLD PEDO WHO GETS OFF ON WRRITING THESE STORYS

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2009 15:34
    omg...
    My pussy is fucking soked

    =P

    That was sexy as helll!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2009 05:44
    Man, that was hot. I got off liek twice dude! I liked the part where yoyu cut off her legs and then cooked her! Djude, that turned me on... Perfectly normal right?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2009 16:53
    you are a sick bastard
    you are going to to hell you little pedo cunt
    iam going to seriously fuck you up if you write anymore sick shit like this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2009 06:32
    you sick man how would you like if a fat ass gay cannibul did that to you huh!!!!!!

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  • I+enjoy+Flaming+People
    21.06.2009 13:41
    Let’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic.

    This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you:

    A. My left testicle
    B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea
    C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B
    D. All of the above

    If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize:

    A flame from moi! Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart?

    Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think?

    best regards,
    IEFP

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2009 17:04
    if u dont like it, dont read it!
    Nevertheless; I found it fairly amusing. You (the author) sure used many examples of torture... just the part with the whipping of Kari's back... didnt like it that much. + the title is a bit misleading, all he did was masterbate. meh.
    Nice story nonetheless.
    NB; I take it u like music in this direction; try a band called "Eisregen" - they put a humouristic view like you did in their songs. :-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 05:24
    I find it hilarious how people get so angry about this but I agree its pretty screwed up

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  • horneyreader
    28.08.2009 17:33
    well idk about anyone else but i thoroughly enjoyed the stab-wound fucking as well as the clitoris destruction. i hope in the next piece you write that there is more of it and maybe even some Karosine fisting. now you should have used a pregnant woman who would have a fetus to fuck because that would have made the pleasure just that much better. i hope you take my advice.
    ~Reader

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  • %26gt%3B.%26lt%3B-_-T_T-_-%26gt%3B.%26lt%3B+Faceman
    26.09.2009 03:01
    Uhh... I am seeing more complaints... the SAME complaints. And I wouldn't mind putting money down that these complaints are from the SAME people... READ THE DAMN TAGS AT THE TOP! Cannibalism my friends. Is cannibalism your cup of tea? If it isn't, then WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU READ THE DAMN STORY?! Okay, I take that back. I don't like cannibalism stories, but I definitely get turned on from the major torture factor. Took me a while to realize these were Digimon names XD Made me wanna laugh a bit, I'd say it was Tai himself >.< Anyway, I enjoyed this. If I have to deal with another person saying "OMG! YOU'RE A SICK WRITER! I HATE YOU! I'M SUCH A WUSS!" ... I will personally find the commenter, and stick a tree stump up their ass. Okay I won't, but I sure hope like hell that someone else will >.>

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  • kena
    30.03.2010 22:14
    i think its beautiful and hope to read more like it. thank u

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  • Bthm1981
    05.04.2010 08:57
    Very nice

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  • MISTER+BIG+T
    06.05.2010 04:58
    I enjoy Flaming People: 'blah blah blah'

    Avoiding dictionary? I kept looking at it all the time!

    Reader: 'you are a sick bastard
    you are going to to hell you little pedo cunt
    iam going to seriously fuck you up if you write anymore sick shit like this.'

    How? I don't think we know each other and last time I checked. Are you coming on to me suddenly? *tee hee*

    'U R 1 SIK PUPPY!!
    UR A DIRTY ROTTEN DOGG I HOPE U GET LOCKED UP ND RAPED BY A BIG HARD BLACK COCK EVERYDAY...

    I BET UR LIKE A 50 YR OLD PEDO WHO GETS OFF ON WRRITING THESE STORYS'

    Actually, I am 25 years old. And I saw nightmares after writing this story! I am so sensitive.

    ' HATE YOU YOU FUCKING SICKO
    GO SNAP YUR HEAD OF IF I EVER FIND OUT WHOWROTE THIS I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU SLOWLY'

    Sadly my dear friend, I don't know how to snap my own neck, can you demonstrate with yourself so I can learn?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2010 20:02
    Ummm to get to the story you have to click on one of the tags, no?
    If you didnt want to read it you clicked on the wrong fucking tag!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2010 21:38
    I have a really strange porn taste. I'm a young girl, and rape and torture will turn me on. But not always. Usually I can read one grotesque story a day and cum, but if I read two I'll become disturbed. I'm not sure why... So usually after reading a story like this I'll go to the romance stories :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2010 21:39
    By the way: I really liked this

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2011 07:18
    well you definately have an imagination thats for sure not really my cup of tea but i agree with the other readers you gave fair warning what the story was about and if people were to lazy to read that then they deserve what they got just curious you ever write gay stories?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2011 23:16
    not a huge fan of the story, liked the bondage but usualy the gory stuff is a turn off.........got a good laugh out of MISTER BIG T's post reply though....that was the shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2011 20:07
    OMFG!!!! THIS IS FUCKING SICK! You are a pedo just sitting there jacking off! I hope you die of a STD slowly in salty water you asshole. I don't think there are enough swear words to describe your filthyWHOREness. you ASSFUCKINGMOFO!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.06.2011 19:47
    omg did this actually happen?!?!?!?!?!?! thats so terribly sad, it was cool to read but disgusting and sad becasue it gives you a sense of real terror ya know...wow

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.06.2011 22:43
    THIS SHIT IS FUCKED UP,
    CAN'T READ THIS SHIT YOU ARE FUCKED UP YOU NEED HELP

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2011 10:32
    i just clicked on this to go straight to the comment section =o

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2012 18:57
    Fucking die you evil cunt

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.02.2015 03:29
    THIS STORY SUCKS!!! GET A LIFE MORON!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.04.2015 20:34
    Guys, the idea is that it is FICTION. Someone wrote this for fun. Not Real!!!!!!!!!

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