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Jayna the Genie

Author: killz

Date: 27 November 2007

Blowjob, Fiction, First Time, Teen

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A magic lamp. I had found a magic lamp. How did I know? Because the when I rubbed it a genie came out of it, that's how! It all started when my dad the archaeologist brought me back this old, golden lamp from Egypt. He said it looked like the lamp from “Aladdin”, and I liked the ancient feel of it. Well, that night, just before I went to sleep, I was holding the lamp, inspecting the strange signs on it. A small bit of dirt was visible, so I rubbed my fingers against it to clean the mark. As the dirt fell away, a pinkish smoke began to rise out of the lamp. I remember thinking “Holy shit what the fuck? Is this poisonous?!” and rising out of my bed very quickly. As the smoke began to take shape, I ran over and closed my door. I didn’t want any loud noises potentially waking anyone up. Sixteen years old at the time, I was just thinking that it was time to watch some porn on the good old computer, but now something was going on. The smoke formed, slowly, into the shape of a…girl? She was wearing a very light pink outfit…and wow! With nothing but a few strips of ribbon on her body, I began to get hard just looking at her. She was the definition of sexual desire – amazingly seductive face, tanned body, big, round tits, and a perfect ass. I fell back onto my bed, trying meekly to hide my growing erection under my blankets. All I could get out was a tiny “Uh…hello?”

“Hello young master! I am Jayna, genie of the lamp! What are you’re desires?” she said, with a very soothing, calming voice. It was beautiful.

“My…My desires? What?”

“Yes, your desires! Haven’t you heard the myths about genies? I travel the world out of my lamp invisibly, so I am aware of all of your stories about us. Do you require me to speak this proper English with you?”

“Well – No, you can speak comfortably. I mean – are you seriously a genie? Like, you’re gonna grant me three wishes and stuff? This can’t be a dream…” I said.

“Well actually, that’s not really how it goes. You see, you’re only guaranteed one wish. I can give you more though, depending on how much I like you. Fun, huh?” she said, smiling at me.

“I guess so. Wow. Well, I’m Chris. Nice to meet you…Jeanna was it?”

“Jayna. And nice to meet you too Chris. How old are you?”

“Sorry, sixteen.”

“Sixteen, really? I’ve only been a genie for around 18 years actually, so I’m extremely young for a genie. Lucky you! Hahaha!” she laughed.

“Well why exactly does that make me lucky?” I asked.

“Really, I’m not sure. Why exactly are you…staring at me like that?” she inquired.

“Oh…sorry. I was…uh…I can’t help it. Hormones are out of control I guess,” I said, blushing.

“No need to be sorry. Hormones? What are those?”

“Well….really I’m not sure. But, you’re really beautiful,” I said.

“Why thank you, master Chris! That is a very kind thing to say!”

“It’s absolutely true though Jayna! You’re the hottest girl I’ve ever seen in real life!” I said, blushing even more now.

I saw her eyes dart over to my computer, with a porn site on it. I had completely forgotten.

“I see that I disturbed you at a most inappropriate time master Chris…” she trailed off, looking away.

“No no no! I’m sorry Jayna, I just…you know…was going to…relieve myself? Ah, that came out wrong. I’m sorry, please don’t go back into the lamp yet!”

“Okay then, I will do as you say. Why exactly do you watch this…porn?” she asked, truly curious.

“Well, us young kids need to…you know…let loose every once and a while,” I said.

“Let loose? Are you referring to ejaculation?” she asked innocently.

Very red now, I responded “Well, yes, that’s it. Are you like, not embarrassed by that at all?”

She smiled. “Embarrassed? Why should I be? Is it not natural?”

I nodded my head and let out a little laugh.

She started, “Well, do you still have to…do it?”

“Well, yea, I think so. Seeing you all sexy over there isn’t helping me really,” I said, removing the blanket from my bulge in my pajamas. I don’t know WHERE all that boldness came from, but I appreciated it a lot.

“If you want, I can help you with that!” she said, whispering softly.

“You – You’d what?! Really?” I stuttered.

“Have you ever been with a girl before master Chris?” She asked.

“Well…no, I haven’t. Not yet,” I said.

“Can I be your first? I’ll do whatever you want master.”

“This is the luckiest day of my life. You’re so hot Jayna, of course you can do anything to me,” I said, nervous.

“Direct me master,” was all she said. She walked closer to my bed and got on top of it. Lowering her head, she lifted my shirt and began to kiss my chest. I began to breathe hard already. She giggled and softly brushed her lips against mine. As she continued, my dick only got stiffer and stiffer. She slid down my body and, grabbing my pajama pants with her fingers, she slid both them and my boxers down slowly. My cock popped out, sticking straight up in the air, all 8 inches of it. I was quite blessed with such a large dick, and I was proud of it.

“What is your wish, master Chris?” she asked playfully, breathing softly on my cock, making it twitch.

“Um…as long as I cum I’m good Jayna…I mean, stroke it, suck it, whatever, I’m not going to last long anyway,” I said.

“Well, for today, I’ll do one thing, and tomorrow’s another day,” she said.

I smiled to myself in bliss and closed my eyes.

She grasped my hard cock in one hand and began to stroke me. Her magic made her hands wet, and my dick was instantly lubed. She stroked softly, making sure not to make me cum yet. As her right hand moved up and down, her left explored my body, rubbing my chest, abs, and eventually making its way down to my ass. I shuddered as waves of pleasure shook through my body. Her hand rhythmically pumped my long shaft, and I heard sloppy sounds from the slickness of my cock. Opening my eyes, I looked down at her jerking me off and saw that her tongue was out and she was softly panting. My hands slowly moved down to the back of her head, and I guided her mouth to my cock. I thought to myself, even if I cum in two seconds, I need to feel a blowjob right now. She moved compliantly, allowing me to move her freely. As I pushed her down on my thick cock, I felt myself slide into her mouth, her tongue licking the underside of my dick. Pushing herself against me, my cock slid deeper and deeper down her throat, until her lips rubbed my balls and her roaming tongue could lick them. I remember thinking “So this is deepthroat – oh shit…” and I lost it. As my orgasm began, I bucked my hips wildly and my hands instinctively pushed her head deeper down onto my cock. I began to spray cum into her mouth, but she seemed to not mind at all, even though there was no way she could possibly be breathing. I don’t think there is any way that a normal girl could have kept sucking as perfectly as she did as my hands pushed my cock as deep as possible into her seemingly depthless mouth, wet and slippery with spit and cum. I continued my spasms until my entire cock was empty, and, looking at me with her beautiful blue eyes, she lifted her head off of my softening dick. Cum dribbling out of her mouth all over my shaft and balls, she quickly moved her hand to her mouth and smiled.

Breathing hard with my eyes closed, I started laughing softly.

“What is it master Chris?” she asked.

“Nothing, that was just….amazing. You’re really good at that!”

“Well, I aaaam a genie!” she said, also laughing.

Within a few minutes, I had my pants back on and we were talking. She seemed like a pretty normal girl except for, you know, the whole “genie-in-a-lamp” thing. I asked her if she could stay outside her lamp, and she said that it was up to me, until I had my wishes granted. She also said that nobody besides myself could actually see her, unless, of course, I wanted them to.

“Well, Jee, can I call you Jee? Jay? Na?” I started.

“Any of them sound fine,” she said, sitting on my bed as I got up to turn the computer off.

“Well, you see, I was wondering if – if you could…be my girlfriend?” I asked quickly, blushing.

“Really? Me be master Chris’s girlfriend? Sure that’ll be fun!” she said very childishly and enthusiastically.

“You don’t have to keep using the whole ‘master’ thing, okay? Don’t worry about it Jay,” I said.

I didn’t sleep much that night, maybe an hour or two tops. Anyways, the next day was Saturday and I was extremely excited to tell my friends all about this. Jay had said that she would be happy to meet my friends, and that she’d be even happier to help me pull some tricks on them. She had no problem at all with anything sexual that I told her, and she seemed to actually be more interested in sex than about anything I told her of my life, hobbies, and interests. I told her that she would never have to go into the lamp again unless she wanted to, and I said she was more than welcome to sleep in my bed, provided that she remained invisible to all but myself. She happily complied. As she laid next to me, my mind filled with many thoughts of sex for the first time with such an amazingly hot girl, but I restrained myself as best I could. As she said goodnight and turned over, her ass rubbing against my leg, she calmly stated, “I hope you don’t mind Master, but in my lamp I never sleep with clothes…” and ‘poof’, they were gone.

I thought to myself, “Shit….I wanna cry…”, and pushed myself to not try and have sex with her. That would have to wait. I turned over to her, put an arm over her, pulled in close, my cock in my boxers rubbing her ass gently, and went to sleep.


SATURDAY

The next morning I rose to find myself in bed alone. I got extremely nervous at the idea of everything being a dream, but as I saw the lamp on my bed-table, I hoped for the best. Going downstairs, I saw a note on my bedroom door:

“Chris,
We’ll be home at around 5:00. Went out to do errands.
Love,
Mom, Dad, Chrissy”

“Okay, so they were out of the house until much later,” I thought. Walking down the steps, I jumped when I felt a hand on my shoulder.

“Jay! Oh my god you scared me!” I said, almost tripping.

“Silly, why did you get scared? You knew I was here!” she said, smiling.

“Ugh, I need some breakfast. Do you know how to cook, almighty geniess?” I asked, praising her.

“Cook? Jeez, you forget about magic really quickly, don’t you? I’m a genie, why would I have to cook?” she said, pointing out a finger to the table. “What do you want? I can make it.”

“Uhm…hmmmmm….Lemme get……a chocolate- chocolate chip muffin with some nicely sliced pinapple pieces on the side, and also let me have some hot chocolate, just the way I like it, if you can read my mind. It’s hard to explain,” I said, thinking hard.

“Hm. Okay,” she said, and ‘poof’, it was there. I was amazed. Everything I had asked for was there, on the table. It had come from nowhere, but it was most definitely there now.

“Jay! You’re amazing! Holy crap!” I shouted, giving her a hug.

“Well, what can I say? I aaaam pretty amazing,” she said, smiling.

As I ate we talked about what we were going to do today with my friends. We had a bunch of plan’s laid out, and I was so excited to get out of the house that we got to my friend Ryan’s house by 10:30.

“Okay Jay, now you make yourself look like who?” I asked, making sure she remembered.

“House number one….friend is – Ryan right? Okay I turn into….Adriana Lima, Victoria’s Secret Model!” she said, becoming her before my eyes.

I looked at her in the clothes she had ‘poofed’, a tight tank-top and jeans that showed plenty of belly and drooled.

“Don’t stare silly,” she giggled, positioning my mouth and head back to normal positions.

I rang the doorbell, shaking my head at Ryan’s reaction in my mind. As he came to the door, yawning, I saw him do a double-take, and then, stuttering, he got out, “What the – Chris, are you shitting me right now or are you standing there with Adriana Lima?”

I laughed and we went up to his room, Ryan walking in the back and staring helplessly. When we got to his room, I introduced them.

“Jay, this is Ryan. Ryan, Jay,” I said, pointing.

“Hm, Jay? Where does Jay come from?” he asked, frowning.

“Shi – oh uhm…that’s the nickname she likes,” I said, looking at her.

She smiled and began talking to Ryan. We explained how she was crazy about me, and how we had gotten to know each other. Ryan’s eyes must have tripled in size as she spoke, and I couldn’t hold back all my laughter.

“Chris…uh, well, you have any friends for me?” Ryan asked playfully. “Very nice to meet you also, Adri – I mean, Jay.”

“Nope, sorry buddy, I’m sold out,” I said, laughing again.

After a short while, we told Ryan the truth, and Jayna went back to her real form. Ryan pretty much bugged out even more at this, seeing how she was even hotter now. He had a lot of trouble believing that she was a genie, but after a few short magic tricks, she had him convinced. He pulled me out of the room for a minute to fiercely interrogate me.

“Dude what the fuck?! A GENIE!?!!” he yelled in amazement. “This shit is crazy man!”

“I know,” I said. “But man, she’s really cool. Besides the fact that she sucked me off last night, I think I’m actually really starting to like her,” I told him.

“Whoa, whoa, she did what?! If she’s your genie, can’t you get her to like, you know, suck me off?”

“Dude, didn’t I just say that I was really starting to like her?” I asked impatiently.

“Well…how about just this once? Pleeease?” he begged me.

“Well let’s see what she thinks,” I said, opening the door.

Jay was sitting on the bed, her legs crossed, flipping through channels on the TV. She looked just like a normal teenage girl. But she was so much more than that…

“Hey Jay?” I walked up to her. “Ryan has a favor to ask of you.”

Blushing fiercely, Ryan stammered, “Well – Well I, uh…I was wondering if, you know, you could…like, make me cum? Any way you want? Please?” He was stuttering.

She smiled. “What do you think Chris?”

I looked at her. “I…It’s up to you really.” I don’t know why, but after being with this girl for one day, I was already starting to feel extremely protective of her. The thing I wanted most in the world right now was for her to say no to Ryan and to come back home with me. It may have been my teenage hormones causing me to have a huge crush on her, but they were really affecting me.

“Well then, I think I’ll do this for you Ryan,” she said, smiling at me with a twinkle in her eyes. She pointed to his closet, snapped her fingers, and stood up. “Well Chris, I think we should go now,” she said, grabbing my hand and leading me out. “Check your closet when we leave Ryan. Nice meeting you, and have fun,” she said, winking.



When we got outside, I barraged Jay with questions, and she told me that she had created a one-time look-alike of some supermodel that would do whatever Ryan told her to, but she only lasted for 24 hours. I knew he’d have fun with that.

“So Jay, just wondering, why didn’t you, you know, do whatever to Ryan yourself? I mean, you were pretty amazing to me…” I asked her, walking along the sidewalk on a very quiet road.

She looked at me with a serious look. “Did you want me to?” she asked.

I looked up. “Actually, the thing I wanted least in the world was for you to do that for him – or any guy, I mean – and I’m not sure why. I know I just met you, but you know, I kinda like you Jay,” I said, blushing now.

“Really? My master is falling for me. How cute!” she exclaimed, her eyes beaming.

I just smiled as we walked back home. It was 2:30 and I wanted to watch some football. Sitting on the couch and turning on the TV, I asked Jay if she liked sports.

“I do, actually. I like to play basketball, you know,” she said, walking over to me and sitting down on the couch.

“Really? I’ll have to play you later then,” I told her. “Of course, I’ll have to go easy on you,” I said, tauntingly.

“You think so, huh macho-man?” she said, pointing at me. Instantly, I had a huge erection which propped up my shorts. My dick was so hard that it was hurting me.

“Ahh – please stop, its hurting me!” I told her.

Instantly she stopped. “Oh my gosh I’m sorry I didn’t mean to hurt you, you know that right Chris?” she apologized, massaging my now soft dick with her hand through my shorts. “Feel better?”

“Uh…” I moaned softly. “Much.”

“We will have to play later then,” she said, sticking her hand in my shorts. “You want me to help you get off?” she asked innocently.

I looked at her. “You know I would Jay. I just want you to know though, it’s not that I like you just because you’re so great at sexual stuff. I really like you for you. Just thought I’d throw that out there,” I said, turning red.

“Chris, that’s the best thing anyone’s ever said to me. Thanks,” she said, really meaning it.

Her hand grabbed around in my shorts, eventually grasping my shaft. To lube me up this time she actually took her hand out of my shorts and licked it slowly, making sure I could watch her. She lowered my shorts so my cock could pop out, and pulled them to the floor. Rearranging herself on the couch, she calmly asked “So who’s playing?” as she poofed off her shirt. As I got a glimpse of her perfect chest, I got out a quick “Kansas-Missouri” as her now wet hand grabbed my hardening dick. She smiled and said “Oh, good game,” as she began to stroke me. Still sitting on the couch with her to my right, I slouched down as I felt her cool, wet hand go up and down my 8 inch cock. As she increased her speed, she slightly twisted her wrist, making my orgasm build slowly. She stopped for a second, this time sitting on my lap, facing me, wrapping her legs around my back. Her tits were inches from my face, and she continued to jerk me off.

“You like that?” she asked.

“Hell yea I like that! I love those,” I said, nodding towards her chest.

She smiled. “Play with them silly! That’s why I moved.”

I gaped. Moving my hands slowly, I slowly squeezed her breasts, very gently. As my hands moved, Jay closed her eyes and moaned softly, her left hand putting a finger in her mouth. She then moved both hands to my dick, stroking me with two hands. I leaned forward, slowly putting my tongue on her tits and licking them. Acting on all the porn I had ever watched, I began to slowly suck her perfectly formed nipples, using very little force. I hugged her and licked her cleavage, making her chest wet.

“You know Chris, you’re pretty good at that – mmm oh yea,” she moaned as she jerked my cock. I was getting really turned on by both my first time seeing naked breasts in real life and by her moaning. She slowly drooled, allowing her spit to fall on my cock and quickly lubing up my shaft with quick jerks.

“Ahhh…Jay I’m gonna cum…mmmmm” I moaned as she jerked faster and faster. After I spoke, she let go instantly, and my orgasm subdued.

“Wha – Huh?” I didn’t know what she was doing.

“Hold on, you got my tits all wet I want you to try something,” she said, smiling and getting on her knees in front of the couch. She slowly wrapped my dick in her tits and began stroking me like that. The soft wetness of her tits around my shaft was sensational.

“Jay…ohh yeaa that’s amazing…” I moaned.

She began to lick the head of my dick as it popped up and continued titty fucking me. I jerked my hips into her.

“Cumming!” I moaned, as I began to shoot. She kept bouncing up and down, and my first spurt of cum hit her chin. My cock still squirted, covering her cleavage with cum as she soldierly continued her task. When my cock stopped, she backed off, stroked it a few times, and sat back down on the couch. My cock softened onto my leg.

“Chris, your dick is really great!” she said. “So, did you like that?”

“I freakin loved it!” I said, still breathing hard. “I loved it.” I leaned towards her and kissed her. I don’t know what gave me the courage, but I kissed her. We must have been like that for a minute, and I caressed her body in a loving way, enjoying being near her. As she backed off, she giggled.

“So I think you kinda like me,” she played. “Me, the genie!”

I laughed. “A genie…two days ago I woulda laughed at the thought of a genie…but now…I’m in love with one!”

“Chris, it’s been a day. You really don’t know me yet,” she said.

“I’m going to try to know you. I really am,” I said. “I’m crazy about you. I don’t know what I’m going to do on Monday…how can I go through school without thinking about you?”

“Maybe I’ll pay you a little visit,” she said, winking at me.

I laughed. “That would be very nice,” I laughed.

We watched the football game together, her leaning on me in my arms. Within an hour, she had fallen asleep. I looked at her and glanced up. “Thank you.”




MONDAY

Brriiiiiiiiiiiiiinngg!!

The weekend had been amazing, but now was my first school day with my own personal genie! As my 7:00AM alarm rang, I grumpily rose from my bed, only to see Jay there in a really hot school uniform.

“Uhm…Jay, you know that I don’t wear a uniform, right? And you also know that you kinda have to stay invisible, right?” I said

“Yup, of course I know that! But I can still try this on, can’t I? I think it looks nice!” she said, clearly wide awake.

“It looks more than nice, I can tell you that. By the way, what time do you wake up?”

“Well…whenever I want to really. I mean, I’m not even sure what time I woke up this morning,” she said, looking curious now.

“Well, we’re off. Let’s go, the bus ride is pretty long,” I said, leading her out.

As I stepped out the front door, my mom watering the grass waved a “Good bye Chris have a good day at school” and I was off. On the bus, I had a seat to myself so Jay sat near me, even though no one else could see her. She was blasting me with questions, asking about my teachers, classes, other friends, and everything pertaining to school. I told her that she’d be seeing all of it.

It was first period, Math class. Pre-calculus is just a subject that I don’t like, I don’t see a point for it. I sat near my friend Matt and we worked on drawing a comic that we had been making. It was over 10 pages long now, and if I do say so myself, it was pretty funny and action-packed.

“What are you guys doing?” Jay asked while she watched us draw.

“Making a comic,” I said, not looking up.

Matt looked at me quizzically, and continued drawing. I looked at Jay and shook my head, indicating that I’d have to talk to her later. At lunch, as I was waiting on line, a kid who I really don’t like, Tom, walked up to me and decided that today he’d want me to buy his lunch for him. Well, I don’t know where he got this idea from, seeing as how I am around 5’10”, 180 lbs and am the starting running back for my high school football team. He is bigger than me at around 6’0” 200 lbs, but by no means stronger.

“Fuck off Tom, I’m not giving you anything,” I said, brushing him aside.

“Whoa whoa, tough guy! I just asked for a few bucks. How about you help a guy in need? Whaddya say? I don’t wanna have to make you,” he started.

All of a sudden, Jayna ran behind a wall and walked out from behind it, visible to everyone! I opened my mouth, but she walked over to me and slung her arm around my neck, greeting me.

As Tom as his posse stared on, I laughed and walked up on the line.

Tom started, “Hey babe, what are you hangin around with this loser for? If you want a real good time, come with us,” he began.

“Tom, last chance. First my money, now my girl? Get the fuck outta here man,” I said quite calmly.

As he reached for Jay’s shoulder to pull her towards him, instinct kicked in and I pushed him back. Hard. As hard as I possibly could. He reeled backwards into a vending machine and fell on his ass, clearly embarrassed. Getting up, another big kid tried to hold me as Tom wound up a punch, which connected with my stomach. I was used to getting hit from football. The kid behind me let go, thinking I would fall, but I hit Tom once across the face, a full punch, and he was down. Teachers ran over, and I knew I was in trouble. When the principal walked over, he calmly placed his hand on my shoulder, said a quick “Good work, son” and walked on. I was in shock. Then I looked at a once-again invisible Jay and saw her laughing. “Wow” I thought. “That was a good one.”

Last class of the day, Art History. Who’s ever heard of Art History? Well, we sit in a really dark room and watch extremely boring slideshows of ancient paintings. Boring.

“Jay, can you like…get us out of here?” I begged her, putting my head in my arms.

“Well, that wouldn’t be good! You need your schooling mister,” she said sarcastically. “Well, I can at least make it better for you,” she said, softly moving under my deck.

“Jay! Here?!” I whispered loudly. “Are you crazy?”

“Maybe a little,” she said, unzipping my pants. “Relax silly, I’ll mute myself out so nobody can hear me. But” she laughed, “I’ll keep your volume on, so everyone can hear you. Don’t make too much noise!” she warned, as her hand quickly pulled my cock out.

“Man are you serious Jay? In school?!” I slammed my head into my folded arms and looked down at her. “Jeez, you’re so crazy,” I said, laughing softly.

She smiled up and began to stroke me. Suddenly, she popped me into her mouth. She sucked hard and fast.

“Jay – uhh – are you tryin to make me blow as fast as possible?!” I whispered down to her.

She nodded and continued. She deepthroated my shaft until she could lick my balls, and she swallowed so her throat would squeeze my cock. I involuntarily jerked my dick deeper into her, but there was no gag. Jay backed off and looked up at me again.

“What girl in here do you like the best?” she asked curiously.

“You baby,” I panted. “Without a doubt!”

“Besides me silly!”

“Right there – Amber. Her, yea that one,” I said, pointing very inconspicuously.

“Okay then, look at her while I do this,” she said, snapping her fingers.

Instantly, Amber’s clothes disappeared to me. I saw her dark tanned body and great shape. All I could really think though was “Wow, that’s great…but it just can’t beat Jay’s body”.

Jay must have sensed something, and asked me what was wrong.

“Nothing, really – uh…it’s nothing,” I said, looking away from Amber and down at Jay.

“I know it’s not nothing Chris, I know you a little better than that, don’t you think?” she said, stopping.

“Really, it’s nothing Jay. Please,” I said, trying to avoid it.

“I’m not gonna continue until you tell me what’s up, big boy,” she said, resting on her calves and looking up at me under the desk.

“It’s just – I mean…Jay. It’s just that now, every time I see anything, I mean, ugh. I used to really like Amber. I used to want to see her naked more than any girl before. But you know what I thought when you let that wish come true for me? ‘She’s really nothing compared to Jay’. That’s what,” I blurted out.

“I see,” she said, looking deep into my eyes.

“I know we’ve just met Jay, but…I don’t know. I like you. More than I’ve ever liked anyone before. If you weren’t here…I don’t know what I’d do,” I said, really feeling sad.

“You know I’ll always be here for you, Chris! We’re friends, and friends stick together!” she said.

“You know, I’ve decided. Jay, you know the one wish that I get? I know what I want. What I want more than anything in the world. I want you to be free of your genie responsibilities. I mean like, you know, you don’t have to do anything you don’t want and you can leave me if you want, but I mean you aren’t held back by that lamp any more. You’re free. I love you,” I said, extremely embarrassed.

“Chris…” she said, really shocked. “That’s…that’s the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me…”

Jay closed her eyes. A tear dropped down her cheek, and I brushed it away. Time froze. Everything around us stopped, and Jay stood up. I looked at her, and I got the same feeling I always got from looking at her. I was just happy all over. Jayne opened her eyes and stepped close to me as I stood up. I put my arms around her waist and pulled her close as we embraced in a passionate kiss. I never knew this feeling before, but it was incredible. My senses were dulled, but I felt like we were spinning, and as I opened my eyes we were in my room. Jayne pushed me onto my bed as we continued to embrace.

“Jay – I…Can I make love to you?” I asked timidly.

“I love you too Chris,” she said. It was finality. My ultimate wish. The thing I had wanted more than anything ever.

I put my arms on Jay’s shoulders, and slowly pulled her shirt down. Her bare shoulders and the loving grin she gave me made me shudder. As her clothes fell away, I stared at perfection in its utmost beauty. Jay began to undress me, and before long we were completely free. Gently pushing me onto my back on the bed, she seductively climbed on top of me and laid on my body. Her breasts pushed against my chest, and my quickly hardening cock rubbed against her legs, searching for her pussy. We didn’t speak, but our breaths mixed as I hugged her to me. She sat up and turned around, going into a 69 position. I looked at her pussy as my heart raced. I wanted nothing more than to make her feel good. As my hands moved to her ass, I felt my cock enveloped by a warm, wet sensation and I knew that she was sucking me. Moaning, I quickly pulled her down and began licking away at her pussy. This was my first time licking a girl’s pussy. Moving my tongue very gently, I sucked and licked, trying to find her clit. As my tongue neared the top of her, she moaned and I knew I had found it. I continued as she continued, and I knew that she would be able to last ages longer than me. She was now using her tits, lubed with spit, to rub my cock while sucking hard on the head. I was out of control, and in a few more strokes I erupted. The first shot hit her mouth and the rest smeared between her tits. I kept licking her as I moaned in ecstasy, my hands now pushing down on her head. She knew how I liked it and deepthroated my still-cumming cock. As she swallowed repeatedly, I only had the urge to erupt more. Not feeling any sense of “the end”, I knew that she was keeping me going using her magic. My cock was still rock hard and full of cum. As she sucked me for a bit more, I began to finger her deep, making her moan and making her extremely wet. With a few slow licks of my cock, she rose again, turning around to her original position. She grabbed my cock, stroked it a few times, and without warning sat on it, my entire cock entering her wet pussy. My eyes closed, as I instantly came at the feeling of being inside her. She sighed in pleasure as my cum flowed inside her. I didn’t bust that much, and she began to ride my dick. Swaying back and forth, bouncing up and down, her pussy shaped to the contours of my dick. Every couple of jerks I spurted a bit of cum into her. For a long while she did this, her magic keeping me feeling the intense pleasure of my orgasm. It didn’t stop. Slowly getting off me, my cock completely drenched in sticky cum, her pussy apparently empty, she motioned for me to get on top of her. As she lay on her back I gently put the head of my dick inside of her pussy and pushed. She hugged me tightly as I pleased her. I rested my head on her chest and licked her tits as I fucked her. The lube of her pussy and my cum felt amazing, and I kept cumming. With each thrust into her I began to go deeper. I felt like my dick just wanted to penetrate her as deep as possible, and my thrusts started causing me to have a small orgasm each time. As she squeezed my head into her chest and moaned with her orgasm, I sighed once again in ecstasy. I slowly pulled my dick out, as she began to rub it with her feet. My hands moved away as I blasted cum all over her body, my cock being jerked by her feet. I had trouble breathing the pleasure was so intense. My eyes closed tight and I held my breath. I thrusted involuntarily as she lifted a gentle hand to jerk the rest of the cum out of me. By the time she finished her stroking, cum covered her entire body, as well as most of my bed. Sitting up, she smiled at me and licked her hand.

“I love you, Chris. Sex like that with a genie like me can only be felt if both partners truly love one another,” she said softly.

Pulling her to sit on my lap, I kissed her.

“Jay, I love you.”


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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 10:00
    very good hope you do more

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 12:43
    this story was actually awesome do more please

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 13:04
    oh so fucking great this is a good story keep it up man

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 13:09
    What a wet dream jay is.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 13:47
    Great.. just like a dream I had once

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 13:50
    awesome story man please write another

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 14:01
    more! definately... really good story... the magic aspect makes it interesting and gives it an edge i havent seen im other stories.



    chapter 2 please? :P

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 14:02
    this was pretty much the worst story i've ever read

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 17:16
    Fuckin amazin ! chap 2 plz!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 17:56
    wow.....that was a great story man,

    YOU HAVE TO WRITE CHAPT 2!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 18:14
    i usually never comment on these, but this too fucking amazing not to. good work, buddy and keep it up

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 19:03
    nice job!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 19:07
    Damn nice story mate, keep it up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 20:21
    nice job dude ussually I just comment that the stories are shit but yours was really good

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 22:28
    good story, part 2 I hope?

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 22:57
    Very nice story! You really begin to feel what the main character feels for the girl, and the love that they have for each other. You read this story, and you finish with an extremelly wonderful feeling.

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    READER 500
    01.12.2007 23:12
    this an amazing story!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2007 23:16
    VERY GOOD. PART 2 AND/OR ANOTHER STORY WOULD BE WELCOME

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:02
    A bit of an odd start but overall a great story. Amazing storyline and it was just different from anything else on the site and thats what made it so good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:26
    i usually never comment stories but that was badass i wish i had a genie lol

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:33
    Superb. a true accomplishment in grammer, spelling, plot, and originality.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:35
    thank you everyone so far for the great comments

    i'm happy you enjoyed the story, i worked hard on it

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:40
    write part 2

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 00:42
    *sits reading and rereading* umm dude where did you learn to write this isn't just a story it's a work of art one of the best I've ever read if not the best

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 01:13
    man, i've been a regular here and this is by far the best story i've ever read!!! ur story is every boys dream. good job!!!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 01:22
    Quite well done. Do all of us a favor and ignore the jerk who said it was the worst story ever. That prick says the same thing about every post on this site. Looking forward to the next installment. 9/10

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 02:05
    amazing story! keep it up

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 02:12
    dude, moar!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 03:04
    Badass bro.

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 03:11
    Beautifull oh so good I just had the largest come ever, thank you

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 08:36
    Well-written for a first attempt. In the opening line, you forgot the old rule of "..."i" before "e" except after "c"..." and you misspelled "received". Continue to write and pay attention to using good grammar and a spell-checker.

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 13:29
    Very good story please write pt.2

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 15:01
    well after reading this, this has the most origanl text I have ever read.

    most people on here don't know how to write, and your one of the few good one's.

    keep it up!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 16:26
    Amazing plot line. MOAR!!!! lmao

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 17:11
    im 14 and i toss my 9 inch dik to porn on this site everyday but this story was beta dan all da pOrn

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 17:56
    sassy:P lol

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 18:50
    hell yes right more!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 22:25
    waiting for ur next story

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    READER 500
    02.12.2007 23:22
    That was amazing! Can't wait for part 2! I agree with the one poster about expanding the plot development and character backstory though. When I read the sex stories here it's more so to get off, but with this original of a plot line, I'd be willing to read it just for the fun of it. Keep up the great work!

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 00:24
    i totally agree with the poster that said this was better with porn. the way this was written really allowed me to visualize and experience everything. it was great. but as a writer myself i do think that your back stories could be thicker and the relationship between Jay and Chris could be a little more defined, but i know love like that exists so..... yeah great work 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 11:54
    nice one. waiting for the 2nd part

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 12:52
    good job more plz

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2007 16:04
    awesome story gj man keep it up

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 17:25
    good work man keep it going. and i agree with the other people can not wait for part 2. i give it a 10/10 n if i could give it more i would

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 17:29
    Amazing story, keep on writing! I really mean it!

    10/10 of course!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2007 17:34
    this is great stuff! Your effort wasn't wasted! can't wait for part 2!

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 17:48
    Made me laugh. In a good way

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 20:05
    That was probably one of the best stories ive read on this site in a long time. Keep up the good work 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 20:24
    dude awsome story, ill definatly be looking out for part 2, u put in the best detail

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2007 22:35
    Amazing story. One of the best I have ever read. Great work. Can't wait for the next part. 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.12.2007 23:49
    Best I've read in a long time...can't wait for number 2...10/10 perfourmance

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 00:00
    Ok, this is the first time i have ever even considered giving a comment to someone, i have seen alot of people on their first tiem and their story sucks ass. Ths is absolutely briliant! great job man seriously, 2 thumbs, 10/10, what ever you want to say, GREAT FUCKING JOB!!! Best story I have read in here, hands down. Thanks, lookin forward to part 2 =)

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 01:51
    Good work Honestly Ive been reading stories on here for almost 3 and a half years and I can say this is a good one. Your dialog needs work you have a few problems but your a new writer and for that its WONDERFUL so I give you a 10/10



    Nadez

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 06:26
    my god man i have to say this is the best story i have ever seen on this site. damn great job 10/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 07:33
    Are you sure you are 23 you write like you are 13. That was very unimaginative and boring. Don't embarass yourself with a second try at it.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 13:23
    waaaaaaw you are the best

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 13:52
    third best story on the site according to me.



    ("my sister the bitch " and "wendy and miss west" are a little bit better but not much)

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 16:51
    I thought it was good, but like one guy said he thought you were 13. I doubt you actually are 13 but i think you can tell in the writing that it wasnt as good as it could be. Although i still thought it was really good.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 18:29
    to the guy who didnt like it, could you please tell me why? i'll try to improve the next one



    i don't take criticism badly, i appreciate it

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    READER 500
    04.12.2007 20:16
    it was good. 10/10

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    READER 500
    05.12.2007 05:09
    I've never commented on anyones before, but this story was awesome 10/10 keep it up dude make a second one.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2007 09:21
    Spectacular job. 10/10



    Z?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.12.2007 13:09
    great story 10/10

    wats z?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.12.2007 18:03
    niice job

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    READER 500
    05.12.2007 18:03
    I loved the story but I think u need 2 work on ur details u didn't talk about ur height and weight till l8er on so the story got kinda weird but other then that I like its a really good change from all the incest stories on this site

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    READER 500
    05.12.2007 20:39
    One of the best i read. Very Good! 10/10

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 00:18
    AMAZING! made me so wet! Thank you so much, I loved your writing, please write part 2! 10/10

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 03:44
    10/10 for shooo... Great Story man. Please write a part 2,3..... we need more. please dont spoil the fun in this by dragging bull shit coz this is a good story. just continue the flow and do something creative, which everyone would like.

    make her shape shift and u know make him the new man in the block kinda stuff

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 07:46
    Nice. A good story. I give it a 7/10. It was decently written, with a few holes. A little more description would have been better, but it got the ah... POINT across nicely:P.



    Also "Z?" is a reference to another author/cartoon writer. Name of Jhonen Vasquez. Wrote and directed the cartoon Invader Zim and wrote and illustrated the comic Johnny the Homicidal Maniac. Basically Z? is something to the effect of "Got sleep? or "Got Z'z?"

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 15:06
    9/10, I like its not mindless sex. Its got a plotline

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 15:06
    pretty freaking sweet

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 18:22
    excelent story man. 9/10

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    READER 500
    06.12.2007 22:13
    I fucked my cat and now hes dead

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 00:31
    great story man

    I felt the love xD

    you did a really good job keep up the good work

    ...

    ...

    just a side note, SPELL CHECK!

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 01:31
    I love your story. I rated it 10/10. I masterbated while readind it. And it was the best sex story that I have ever read in my entire life. Please continue to a part 2 and 3. Keep going because you inspired me.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 07:21
    Superbly written and very hot. I agree with a previous rated. This begs for a long story with many chapters. Keep writing as you are very good. Thanks.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 15:26
    amazing story inded

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 17:35
    This was amazing. I got off twice during the story. A 10/10 for sure! Keep writing! Bring on the part 2!

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 19:58
    Reader

    Keeping your high point for that long is amazing,

    What if there really were GENIES

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 22:16
    THAT WAS FUCKING RAD!!! keep writing, i'm totally looking forward to the part two.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2007 22:32
    cool man, cool.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 00:36
    that was awesome!

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 06:47
    ok well this about sums it up for me..

    STU-FUCKING-PENDOUS (stupendous with fucking in the middle of it, just for all the people, a few tools short of a toolbox :P) hahaha well done dude keep it up, looking foward to it :)

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 08:57
    its only once in a while a story like this appears, Good job

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 09:12
    wow!...wht an xperience

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 10:04
    You say this was a story that took you a long time, but i found it way too detailed with many minor plot points being harped upon, The idea was ok, but with some refining you could the scenes more abrupt and action packed. I give it 5.5/10.

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 10:37
    good but no comparison to Camp

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 10:50
    dude make a number 2!!!! i jerked of so hard!

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 13:29
    lame

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 14:23
    i want a genie

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 17:45
    awsome! good job I busted my load!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 18:03
    It ok charges to experiences

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 20:41
    WOW I STARTED TO CUM MYSELF THAT WAS PRETTY AWESOME MYGIRL REALLY LIKED IT AND SHE DID ALL THAT TO ME

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    READER 500
    08.12.2007 23:17
    very good story i cummed a lot 10/10! best story out there for the moment

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    READER 500
    09.12.2007 03:07
    so, what, he got nude and had sex with an invisible woman in the middle of art class?

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    READER 500
    09.12.2007 03:09
    Great story Killz, personally a 10/10 from me.



    For the 2nd chapter you should give more detail to whats happening between the sex and some background information for Janya to keep the life and sex balance, with that I bet this story sequence could become one of the better ones.



    Look forward to next no matter what though!

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    READER 500
    09.12.2007 16:41
    hay when part 2 comin?

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    READER 500
    10.12.2007 02:32
    hurry up with number 2!

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    READER 500
    10.12.2007 17:27
    Awesome story, part 2 please!

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    READER 500
    10.12.2007 18:12
    dude where is part 2?

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    READER 500
    10.12.2007 23:41
    Yo this story made me go into cardiac arrest and my eyes turn into spuds, best story ever!

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    READER 500
    10.12.2007 23:48
    oh fuck that was amazing i cummed 5 times i wish that genie could cum me when is part 2 cumin!!!

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    READER 500
    12.12.2007 04:38
    jgfj

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    READER 500
    12.12.2007 08:27
    Best story ever dude. Where did you get your inspiration? =P

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.12.2007 08:46
    Its a pretty good story. Needs a little more build up though before you go straight to sex. 7/10

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    READER 500
    12.12.2007 22:38
    part 2 please 5/5

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    READER 500
    12.12.2007 23:50
    Part 2.... or else... that was the coolest shit ever

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 09:48
    It's the best porn story i have ever read! ! !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.12.2007 09:57
    It's the best porn story i have ever read! ! !

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 11:05
    Really good

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 13:05
    Damn, that was great!!

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 17:40
    Very nice.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.12.2007 18:05
    wow!

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 18:21
    A shame that Jay,s a girl!

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 21:18
    awesome i almost cummed reading it it was so hot.

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    READER 500
    13.12.2007 23:56
    excelent, the best porn story i ve ever read

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 00:10
    That story sucked dick hu da fuck says I luv u dnt quit ur day job buddy

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 04:25
    plz write a part two it was the best story i ever read it was really romantic

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 05:14
    10/10. Nice to see a story that doesn't have incest or pedophilia in it for once.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.12.2007 08:58
    It was very good really

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.12.2007 11:20
    AMAZING..,. NEED PART 2

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 12:33
    loved the ending but next time put a little more sex in. start working on part 2

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 14:41
    it was okay

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 17:56
    ok...this story was really weird....it wasnt fit to be on a porn site.....and as the guy below said...DONT QUIT UR DAY JOB MOTHAFUKA!!

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 19:06
    wow tht wass gay

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 19:41
    sucks

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 22:25
    I hope whoever wrote this slides their car under a gasoline transport truck and is burned over 80% of their body but survives. That's what it felt like reading this story.

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 00:13
    i liked it, i'm still not too sure about the whole "i love you" complex but it was well written. 9/10

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 06:33
    For all of you pieces of shit who rated this bad, you can go fuck your selves. Killz is an amazing writer and none of you have published anything worth reading so go to hell.

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 11:29
    Amazing, 10/10. Deffinately need part 2, 3,4 and 5! =D Don't listen to anyone who says its bad, I think this stories rated the highest, and it doesn't need more sex, it's perfect.

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 13:34
    fag/10

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 14:04
    This was a great story but you know what, orgasms need to be like ORGASMS. not like fountain-that never knows where to stop!

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 15:21
    super story

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    READER 500
    15.12.2007 17:42
    Gr8 story bro, w8in 4 part III

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 00:40
    This was good atleast from my opinion. Im not sure many others liked it as much as i did, but keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 06:20
    mm nice and original.

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 18:19
    Great story, but small improvement suggestions to your future works if you don't mind? This one had great potential for a longer story. Maybe the release of the genie was too early? And you rush the sex scenes. Use the tabulator button to make them more readable.

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 18:46
    Super! Cam't wait for part 2!

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 19:44
    That story was the bomb!!! I loved it!!! keep it up man!!! Your a talented person

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 21:09
    wow realy good cant wait tell the secend one 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2007 21:19
    This story was great, keep it up fuck all of them haters, true potential, nice and original, nice job

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 21:53
    great story bro definitly make a part two

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 22:36
    like most sex stories this focused entirely on intense sex acts, leaving many unchecked dramatical errors and shoddy dialoge. All you realy need to do is review your work and you can make very decent stories.

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 23:00
    Awesome story! Keep it up and can't wait for part 2!

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    READER 500
    16.12.2007 23:09
    Great story. i cant wait to read the sequel

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 04:59
    make part 2 as soon as possible i cant wait

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 06:52
    very bad

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 18:35
    loved it, made me want a genie to fuck me.

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    READER 500
    17.12.2007 21:56
    best story ever

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 00:53
    me likey

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 01:58
    Don't listen to those fuckers...this is the BEST sex story I've ever read. Make part two ASAP!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 04:25
    i liked it. just make it a little more detailed with a deeper story line...like what brought her to become a genie, make a bad guy...that'd be awesomme



    9/10

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 10:39
    good story do not listen to the idiots

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 15:56
    Amazing and fuck those who don't like it

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 16:40
    prose and cons!Pro:very imaginative con:lacked description or depth pro:you are now officially a writer! con:you penholding slut,get your ass-a-fondling your slimy-ass-keyboard and hook us up with more porn["the writings of prostitutes" officially]



    sincerily,

    spanky

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 18:56
    Add Amber in the second story ;p

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    READER 500
    18.12.2007 22:44
    fuckin amazing

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    READER 500
    19.12.2007 00:13
    great story please make a part 2!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 00:14
    Great.... I'll be looking out for part 2...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 00:54
    god damn it look at this mess its all your damn fault lol keep up the good work definetly need part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 02:01
    That was a great story, a part 2 with a " 5 years later" in it would be great, keep up the good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 05:37
    that was fucking amazing!!! great story, plz make a part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 05:44
    could Jay be a lesbian in the 2nd. And next time have amber involved. Now that would be interesting. LOL... I love this story.

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    READER 500
    19.12.2007 10:31
    fucking hot

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2007 23:35
    really good story

    part 2 would be greatly wanted

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    READER 500
    20.12.2007 05:03
    BEST STORY in the site this is what sex stories r all about

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    READER 500
    20.12.2007 12:51
    very good, im dreaming about that genie. make part duc e !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2007 16:15
    That is the best story on this website. It was great. I think the idea of involving Amber in part 2 would be great!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2007 17:56
    can't wait for part 2

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    READER 500
    20.12.2007 17:59
    please please please please make a part two! this is easily the best story on this sit, by far. an excellent start to a hopefully long series. 10/10. if the ratings went higher, then it would be higher.

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    READER 500
    20.12.2007 23:11
    That story was one of the best Ihave ever seen!!!!!!!

    please make part 2!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 03:05
    awesome story please please please make a part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 04:57
    that was the dumbest shit ever. a fuckin genie?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 06:48
    very wierd..vague.. u have potential..but da full genie thing is too fukin wierd..din quite like it..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 14:04
    AMAZING Story, I FUCKIN' Loved it!! Part 2 should be fantastic!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2007 23:35
    Good story, a little to fictional for me but I really liked it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.12.2007 00:39
    holy shit that was good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.12.2007 09:27
    Cool story, man.

    Unlike some readers, I like the drama in the story, so, bah to the rest of them.

    But, on top of that, you should have the second one with a plot twist. Maybe his friend that knows about the genie tries to steal her? It's up to you how you put a plot twist in here, but, either way, it should be a good story.



    GOod on ya..



    Genuineeastwood

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    READER 500
    22.12.2007 17:50
    Great story, a little longer than I like but you had me till the end. Part two will be great if this is any indecation.





    trackbum hit gas, turn left

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    READER 500
    23.12.2007 00:22
    From an actual writer of stories I think that this was fantastic and it had very good ideas. I can tell you that your story kicks the crud out of mine. Anyway keep on going make this the best story on the site cause right now it is very close. Part 2!

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    READER 500
    25.12.2007 05:07
    nice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.12.2007 12:24
    YA add amber in the next story not realy lesbian but let it be a 3 some with them all.

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    READER 500
    26.12.2007 19:45
    fantastic story! i've read stories on this site for a while now, and this story is in the top ones of mine. keep writing, i'll be waiting for the part 2.

    -drande

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    READER 500
    26.12.2007 20:46
    Great! A few more paragraphs, and a bit of editing, and part two will be the best story on xnxx! There better be a part two... You've got me interested!

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    READER 500
    27.12.2007 00:07
    truly outstanding and original story. I am very impressed with the complexity of the character depth and storyline, and whether or no there is a part two, know that this was one of the best stories I have ever read.

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    READER 500
    27.12.2007 03:18
    It was a cool story. Very fictional though. But it got me wet. I like stories with very juicy lines and I like them to make my cunt slopping wet!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.12.2007 10:04
    it was a bit cheesy and shallow in some areas but altogether decent. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.12.2007 17:56
    Very well written.. am definately looking forward to a part 2.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.12.2007 01:23
    *sigh* ^_^ i love a good romance story. this was amazing ^^ 10/10

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    READER 500
    28.12.2007 03:57
    Please write other stories, your stories are clearly one of the best around these sites.



    May I add, perhaps more detail when the face, like maybe a few pops in the eye are always sexy to read

    Keep it up!

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    READER 500
    28.12.2007 08:41
    Very romantic and sweet. Beautifully written and the best story I have read by far on xnxx. Keep writing, your work is fantastic.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.12.2007 04:12
    Oh wow I really loved that! Keep up the great work!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.12.2007 06:23
    A very god story, keep it up!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.12.2007 00:08
    tIght... please make a part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.12.2007 23:35
    beautiful. i love the originality. my favorite story by far. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2008 09:51
    plz part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2008 13:31
    The best storie ever!!!!!!!I read it once and I only lasted 5 minutes before I read it again

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2008 14:35
    I have to admit this is the best story ive EVER read... fifteen out of ten ^^

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2008 20:07
    Is it pronounced Jayna, or Yayna? Because the letter J has been known to give a Y sound.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.01.2008 08:57
    MAKE A PART 2 NOW, THIS STORY MADE ME SO HORNY

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2008 14:24
    Come on man... we need the sequels.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.01.2008 06:17
    FUCKING AMAZING STORY!! holly shit i cumed so fucking much. PART 2 PLEASE!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.01.2008 03:58
    AMAZING, I think im going to read this everyday!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.01.2008 23:02
    holy fucking shit, that was the fuckin gr8est story I've every read I need the fuckin sequel

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2008 17:46
    i loved the story make a sequel but all I want to know is why the hell did you nickname her Jay makes her sound like man.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.01.2008 15:21
    ok guys seriously learn the English language it is an awesome story but you guys who keep commenting seriously enough with the chat speak 10/10

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    READER 500
    10.01.2008 01:01
    Simpliy Brilliant

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2008 16:25
    with no doubt, best story i've ever read

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.01.2008 00:49
    wow fucking amazing

    better than sequel

    11/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.01.2008 10:57
    wow this one is great...even better than part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.01.2008 14:47
    2094/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.01.2008 18:31
    awesome

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 00:06
    this story roked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 05:28
    ok great story but i've got a friend named jay so that's really awkward

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 14:35
    i saw a transexual who said his/her name was jay so this kind of scared me... if her name was anything it would be erotic

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.01.2008 23:33
    excellent job my friend , you made it super erotic and loving at the same time that's not something all writers can do. you still managed to maintain the fantasy of a sex genie without making it awkwarldy ridiculous. good job man.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.01.2008 14:35
    fucking shit....useless junk

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.01.2008 23:47
    this sucked my 12 in cock dont even think of writing a 3rd part

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.01.2008 17:25
    Nicly done

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.01.2008 02:06
    Amazing Story. Keep up the good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.01.2008 18:14
    I loved this because it was sex out of love not passion.

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    READER 500
    31.01.2008 22:37
    For one, that was prettty poor writing. Also the ending was really obvious and you lacked any originality. A 16 yr old would never fall in love with a chick woh gives him a BJ within the first 5 mins they meet. Go take a writing lesson, have sex, watch a romance movie, and try again.

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    READER 500
    04.02.2008 16:46
    Please hurry up and write the next one i cant stand it i get wet and have to shove my fingers so far up my pussy it hurts just thinking about how good the next one will be please wright number 3

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    READER 500
    05.02.2008 12:27
    تنا&#1606...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2008 20:41
    nice one! really

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    READER 500
    13.02.2008 01:58
    i'm sorry everyone but this story is completely over rated i give it a 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.02.2008 23:32
    amazing, great storyline

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.02.2008 04:14
    i liked it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.02.2008 03:15
    Nice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2008 01:05
    kinda bad 4/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2008 20:59
    to tauren, go eat a dick you thundercunt. and to Killz the writer, great story, I give it a 10/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2008 18:06
    i wanna genie.........

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2008 21:46
    make another one now!!! 10/1o

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2008 01:02
    i wish i was that genie

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2008 13:17
    My god, why haven't I seen a second one?? 10/10!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2008 01:04
    I jacked off

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2008 00:27
    holly freakin wow

    now i wanna genieeee!!!!

    waaaaa

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2008 20:22
    damn fine story, very well done!!! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2008 23:43
    omg I just blew the biggerst load ever!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2008 02:50
    lol get sum!! 20/10! man....btw 2 the guy who yanked....dude wtf how u yank to a story!

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    READER 500
    02.04.2008 10:51
    10/10 dude great no wait awesome story I cant wait for part two,I wish I had a genie...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2008 14:24
    my grilfriend loves this story we have sex every time we read it!!!

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    READER 500
    03.04.2008 12:37
    brill m8

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2008 21:53
    You guys need a girlfriend and to stop lieing about having one faggots.

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    READER 500
    07.04.2008 00:08
    MORE! GOOD GOD! YOU ARE A GENIUS! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! from 1-10 I give it a 15!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEASE make another!!!!

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    READER 500
    08.04.2008 22:44
    good job!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2008 21:56
    That was a great story u need to write number 2 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2008 13:07
    very good i loved it from the magic aspect to the sex to the love in it it was great do more your good.

    10/10

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    READER 500
    14.04.2008 10:29
    Not writing a another will be a damn shame

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2008 22:19
    Simply the best I've ever read! You are very very talented!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.04.2008 16:09
    hott

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2008 10:42
    great sex made me come all over the com {lonley female

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2008 19:26
    My second time reading this story, still makes me cum.. 10/10 a nr 2 is a must :D

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2008 01:45
    that was a realy fly story, u should make it into a movie and, i know the perfect girl to play jenie, karla spice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2008 18:26
    EPIC STORY OMG IT WAS WIN

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2008 12:28
    U are one talented writer. keep it up please! id love to see a sequal.

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  • omairydaqueen
    03.05.2008 15:30
    Omq made me cum 2 times
    Plz i begg write a second part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 23:30
    I've had a similar fantasy for years. This was very well done. As long as she's invisible, though, I'd have kept her naked...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2008 23:06
    This was a great story. Made a great read with a satisfying conclusion.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2008 21:51
    I still luv it amazing

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  • Mr.Schmo
    03.02.2009 17:25
    10000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 19:49
    This needs to happen to me

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  • ME-MO
    10.09.2009 00:39
    Great story.Iv'e had the hots for a Genie,ever since that old show"I Dream Of Jeannie".Starring,the ever so sexy Barbara Eden.Very well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2009 01:25
    some of the dialogue is kinda corny, but the story is good, and the scenes were pretty damn amazing. best part, my name is jayna.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 22:57
    tht was a pic of perfection just the best nt 2 dragged out but still detailed nt boring or "un awesome" in the least plz write a second

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2013 21:35
    wish that could happen to me

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 01:18
    Is there a video like this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2015 20:38
    I want him to lust for other girls too

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