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The Awakening of Katie II

Author: Unknown user

Date: 25 April 2008

Blowjob, Fiction, Incest, Teen

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The Awakening of Katie II

Tara crawled up to me and collapsed on the bed next to me. We hugged and tenderly kissed and licked each other. No words were spoken. No words were necessary. Tara and I had known each other our whole lives. We knew each others hopes and dreams. I realized at that moment that we were sole mates. We would be best friends and possibly lovers for the rest of our lives. We pulled the covers over us and fell asleep naked in each others arms.

Mom knocked on my door and yelled get up. We both woke and realized we were naked. We jumped out of bed and scrambled for our clothes. Mom already had Michael up and dressed. We walked into the kitchen. Mom was cooking breakfast and barking orders on how the rest of the day would happen. “You have school tomorrow. We need to straighten the house up, wash clothes and you need to get yours and Michael’s thing laid out for school. I have to work the evening shift. I want you to get your showers tonight and get to bed early so you can get up for school.”

Tara ate with us and then said bye. She left and went home. I started my chores and had most everything done by early afternoon. Mom left for work about 4:00. At 8:00 I told Michael that we better get ready for bed. Mom, Michael, and I had earlier discussed giving him a shower. She said “put a plastic trash bag over his casts and tape them down. Go put on your bathing suit and get in the shower and get him cleaned, dried, and dressed, then get your shower.

We got the bags over his casts and I said wait here while I change. I went to my room and took off my clothes and put on my bath robe. When I got back to the bathroom I started the shower and removed Michael’s clothes. He jokingly said “no fair Katie, I’m naked and your not.” I looked at him for a few seconds, cocked my head and grinned. He already had a hard-on. I untied my robe and let it fall to the floor.

I was standing in front of him completely naked. My breasts were almost a B-cup. Tiny golden brown pubic hairs now covered my pussy. I posed for him as he looked at me from head to toe, smiled and said, “Wow, very nice Katie”. I turned and got in the shower. I helped Michael balance as he stepped into the shower. I got his hair wet and shampooed it while standing behind him. My breasts touching his back. My fingers where still filled with shampoo as I started washing the rest of him. One hand moving down each side of him as I washed his arms, chest, and stomach.

I reached back up to his head for more shampoo and continued. I turned him sideways and washed between his legs. He parted his legs and I could tell with out looking he still had a hard-on. I stroked him a few times much to his delight while I slid my other hand down his ass cheeks moving my middle finger past his asshole.

He puckered up a little but allowed me to finish. I rinsed the soap from his body and switched places with him. I shampooed and conditioned my hair while giving him a front view of my body which I could tell he was enjoying immensely. He watched my tits bounce while I dug my fingers into my scalp and rubbed in the shampoo.

I ran my soapy hands over and around my tits, squeezing them and pinching my nipples. I watched Michael’s eyes, he couldn’t get enough. I slid my hand and fingers in-between my legs and around my ass cheeks and stroked myself a few times. I turned to the shower head giving him a view from behind as I rinsed the soap off my body.

I shut the water off and stepped out. I toweled myself dry with Michael watching intently. I wrapped the towel around my hair turban style. I took another dry towel and dried his upper body. I placed the towel over his head and rubbed fast to dry his hair. Michael was getting another eye full. I could feel my tits jiggling up and down.

I knelt on one knee and started drying his feet. I worked my way up to his crotch. He spread his legs for me as I ran a towel covered hand between his legs up his ass crack. I looked at his still hard penis. I had a close up view as my head was only a few inches away from it. I was working up the nerve to put it in my mouth.

I moved the towel around and took hold of him and stroked it while drying it. I put the towel down and continued stroking. I looked up into Michaels face and saw that look of bliss. I put my other knee down on the floor and sat on my heels. I slid my thumb and finger down to the end of his shaft and moved my mouth forward to taste him with my tongue.

There was no taste at all, I moved forward again and placed the head of his cock on my tongue and closed my lips around it. I felt Michael relax and moan. I remembered back to when Megan gave him his first blowjob I could see her cheeks bulge from her tongue moving around his cock. I touched as much of him as I could; I circled around it while sliding up and down. He was moving his hips slowly back and forth while moaning in short bursts. I knew he was getting close to cuming.

He rose up on his toes and I knew this was it. He said, “Katie I’m cum…” he suddenly stopped breathing he put his cast hand on the back of my head and thrust his cock deep into my mouth. I felt the cum hit the roof of my mouth. It surprised me by how hot it was. Another shot of cum hit the back of my throat and I started to gag.

I took him out of my mouth as another stream hit my cheek just below my eye. I continued to gag as I milked the rest of the cum out of him. I thought I was going to throw up so I lifted the toilet seat and spit out all of his cum. I gagged a couple more times and looked up at him a said “sorry, this was my first blowjob”. He said, “Don’t be sorry, it felt real good Katie. Thanks”. “One day I’ll return the favor”. I cleaned my face up and got him dressed for bed.

Monday morning came early. I scrambled around to get everything ready. Brandon’s mom gave us a ride to school. When we got to school most of the kids knew what happened but we still had to tell the story a couple of times.

Principal Johnson stopped Michael and I in the hallway and we followed him to his office. He told us the procedure we would use. When Michael needed to use the bathroom I would be paged over the PA system to report to the office. I would go into the boy’s bathroom with Michael while Principal Johnson would stand guard outside.

15 minutes before the first lunch period Michael and I would go to the cafeteria and get our food and I would feed him in the teachers lounge in semi privacy. I told him that Tara helps me feed Michael and he arranged for her to eat lunch with us.

Some of the students put two and two together and realized Michael needed help using the bathroom. The PA crackled to life mid morning. The office assistant said “Mrs. Breland, I need Katie to report to the office” she said OK into thin air. She looked at me and nodded to the door. As I got up I heard a couple of giggles come from behind me. I was embarrassed and a tear ran down my cheek.

Mrs. Breland saw my tear and shot a stare at the class that only a veteran teacher of 30 years could master. That stare could have stopped Frankenstein dead in his tracks. Tara filled me in at lunch as to what was said after I left the room.

She glared at the class and said that she and the rest of the teachers would not tolerate any teasing or giggling. If she witnessed any, she promised to make the entire class miserable and she said with her thirty years of experience she knew how to make fourteen year olds miserable. She also informed the class that when I returned she would stop teaching and the class would look at there desks and not make eye contact with me.

It worked rather well, when I opened the door to return to class I expected more giggles, but the room was quiet and no one was looking at me. Mrs. Breland smiled and said “Take your seat Katie” and she returned to teaching.

Fifteen minutes before lunch Tara and I were release from class to get our lunch. Michael and Principal Johnson were waiting when we got there. He informed the cafeteria staff as to what was going on and Tara and I loaded our trays with extra food for Michael. He then escorted us to the teachers lounge. We said thank you and he left.

The room was empty and we went to a table in the corner. Tara had a good idea. She told Michael to sit at the corner of the table and we sat one on each side of him. We began to eat. We used our forks to feed Michael. I open a milk carton and put a straw in it so Michael could get a drink anytime he wanted.

Mrs. Breland and two other teachers came into the room and saw Tara and I feeding Michael. They came over and patted him on the shoulder and told me that I was lucky to have such a good brother. I said “Yes maam, he’s my knight-in-shining-armor.” Michael thought back to his blowjob and almost choked, we got a good laugh out of it.

Five minutes before the final bell Tara and I were released to go to Michael’s class to help him with his books. He didn’t need help between classes; the teachers just assigned a student to carry his books. The three of us walked down the hall with our arms full of books toward the front door.

Three girls from one of Michael’s classes were walking in the opposite direction. All three of them said in unison, “Hi Michael” and giggled. Michael said “Hi”. When we went past them I leaned to Michael’s ear and whispered “Wet panties” he said “Do you really think so?” I nodded and said “Ya, I pretty sure”. I think he enjoyed all of the inside information about girls that I was giving him.

We settled down into a routine. If mom left us alone I would jack-off Michael in the morning and again after we got home from school and sometimes when we went to bed. Every day after the first day when we went to pick up our lunches the cafeteria workers had “Special” things for Michael like chocolate milk and special deserts. As he walked to the teachers lounge with his girl’s, one on each side, Michael would say. “It’s good to be the king”.

The following week Michael had his casts removed. His arms and fingers would need a lot of rehab. He was ordered by the doctor to exercise his arms and hands as much as possible. His left hand was sore from lack of use, but his right hand still hurt when he bent his fingers. He didn’t like to bend them.

I smiled when I thought of a good exercise he could do. That night when he got into bed I came into his room and started giving him a hard time about exercising his hand. I told him with a smile that he needed a good reason to exercise. I then climbed on his bed with my PJ’s on and strattled him putting my pussy directly on his cock.

I pulled my shirt off, grabbed his hands and put them on my tits and said “now squeeze.” He smiled and did what his big sister told him to do. It was painful but he kept squeezing. As a reward, I would grind my pussy in to his crotch. When his squeezing slowed down I stopped the lap dance. We were having fun. It wasn’t really sexual in nature, it just felt good.


We just finished supper, I cleaned up the kitchen and I went to the front door to see if Brandon was on his porch. It was hot for an early September day. Brandon was sitting on his porch swing waiting for me. Every day after supper I would walk over to Brandon’s porch and sit with him on the swing. We would pet lightly and kiss. Last night I got brave and when we kissed good night, I put my arms around him and squeezed his ass cheeks while pushing my crotch into his.

I ran to my room to change into something sexy. I removed my school shirt and looked in the mirror at my tits. I was ready for a 34-B bra. I was on the last hook of my 32-A. It was a tight fit and I had to reach into my bra to reposition my tits. Some of my tit kinda poked out the middle, I thought it looked sexy. I decided on a button up shirt that I could leave an extra button unbuttoned so Brandon could sneak a peak at my quickly growing tits.

As I walked across the street I wondered if he was thinking of me while he lay alone in his bed last night. I know I was thinking of him as I brought myself to an orgasm. I wondered what would happen tonight. Brandon was sitting on the swing with just a pair of cut-off jeans on. He looked real good with his shirt off. I said “Hi Brandon” as I bent down and gave him a kiss on the lips. His eyes darted to my tits for a quick look. When he looked at my eyes he knew I had caught him. I just smiled.

I sat down along side him on the swing. He put his left arm around me and we kissed, his right hand squeezed my thigh with his index finger touching my pussy. I instantly perked up and I felt a flood of heat between my legs. I swung my arm around him and dug my fingernails lightly into the far side of his waist and slowly scratched across his chest toward his nipple. I retracted my claws and rubbed his chest and nipple with my palm.

We broke our kiss, and I once again folded my legs under me and laid my head on his shoulder. After a minute or so I looked up at him and beckoned for him to kiss me. As he kissed me his right hand went to my stomach. His thumb massaged the underside of my breast.

I wanted him to touch and message my breast. I wanted to feel and touch his body. It was risky; his parents could walk onto the porch and catch us. I needed to find a place to be alone with him.

Friday afternoon when I came through the door from school mom said the neighbor had called and wanted me to baby sit tonight. Perfect! I said to myself, they had a one year old who would sleep through the night and I could invite Brandon over. I asked mom what time they wanted me. She said six.

I called Brandon and told him that I couldn’t come over and sit on the swing with him. That I would be babysitting, but, if he wanted he could come over and sit with me. He didn’t hesitate, I told him to be there about 6:30.

I arrived promptly at 6:00, they gave me the standard instructions and list of phone numbers and left. I went to check on the baby and found her fast asleep.

I started putting my plan to seduce Brandon into action. I went into the bathroom to freshen up. I removed my shirt and bra. I lightly misted my chest and stomach with a strawberry flavored perfume. I smiled to my self knowing Brandon would be spending a lot of time there.

I folded up my bra and tucked it into the bottom of my purse. I pulled my low cut shirt over my head and looked into the mirror. Perfect! I could just barely make out the outline of my nipples.

I sat on the couch and waited. I heard his footsteps as he walked on the porch. My heart started to beat faster. When he knocked I jumper up fixed my shirt and opened the door. I whispered, “Hi Brandon, come on in” I put my finger to my lips and said “Shhhh the baby is sleeping.

I put my arms around his neck pressed my tits into his chest and kissed him for a long second. I stepped back to allow him to get a good look at me. His eyes were glued to my breasts. My nipples had hardened and were poking at the fabric of my shirt. His eyes opened wider, I watched his nostrils flare as he took in a deep breath. I look down at his crotch and saw it bulging. I smiled, Brandon had a hard-on for me.

I took his hand and led him to a large sofa chair with a low back. I sat him down and I sat down on his lap being careful not to sit on his bulge I sat so my back was to his left arm so that his right hand would be free to roam. (Yes guys, this is what us girls are thinking about when we’re daydreaming)

I put my arms around his neck to get them out of his way as I kissed him. It was natural for him to put his hand on my side. He stroked me running his hand up my side. I felt his hand twitch when he realized I wasn’t wearing a bra. He stroked my ribs as he moved his hand back down to my waist until he found the hem of my shirt.

He dug his fingers under the fabric and touched my bare stomach. He let it sit there, I guess to see if I would react negatively. After a few seconds he began stroking my bare stomach in small circles with his fingertips. This was causing a flood of excitement in my body. His thumb nudged the bottom of my breast. I stuttered as I tried to exhale.

We began to kiss as he brought his hand over my breast. I moaned into his mouth. I broke our kiss. I was panting hard as I dug my face into his neck. His fingers were spread out covering my entire breast. He squeezed lightly and slowly closed his fingers; bring them together where they met at my nipple. My mouth was wide open and I was breathing hard, heavy, hot breaths into his neck.

Brandon opened his hand again to cover my whole breast and again slowly brought his fingers together as they met at my nipple. He stroked me this way over and over, I shuttered each time his fingertips tweaked my nipple. Tara’s touch was soft but nothing compared to Brandon’s. He seemed experienced at this. I wondered if my breast was the first one he had touched. I was so horny! My pussy was wet with excitement.

With all the will power I could muster, I put my feet on the floor and pulled away from him and stood up. We looked at each other, both of us breathing deeply. the bulge in his pants told me he was enjoying himself. I smiled as I realized that my fantasy was coming true. With all the grace and class I could find, I crossed my arms and grabbed the hem of my shirt. I slowly raised it up pausing before I exposed my breasts and then in one clean motion pulled it over my head.

I stood there for a moment and let him fill his eyes. This was the first time he had seen them. His eyes opened wider as he smiled. I went back to him and placed one knee on each side of his legs facing him I sat down on his lap centering my pussy on his bulge. I put my arms around his neck and kissed him. He placed his hands on my side just above my hips. It tickled as he ran his fingers up and put both of his hands on my tits.

He massaged them, feeling their fullness and then he started doing that thing again.. He slowly moved his fingertips on both of my tits until they met at my nipples I let out a low squeal and started grinding my pussy into his cock. I grabbed his head and ran my fingers through his hair and arched my back bring my hard nipples within range of his lips. He took it from there. He kissed each nipple and place one in his mouth and sucked and licked on it. His hand was busy rolling my other nipple in his fingers. I continued to slowly grind my pussy into his cock. It wasn’t enough, I wanted more.

I stood up again and grabbed the bottom of his shirt. He leaned forward and I slipped it over his head. I admired his rock hard chest. His six pack AB muscles were very prominent. He had a line of hairs growing from below his navel and extended down disappearing into his jeans. I put my hands on his knees, spread them apart and knelt down.

My hands went to his chest; I ran my fingertips in the grooves between his AB muscles. I spread my hands around his nipples and slowly closed in until they met at his nipples just as he had done to me. I tweaked each of his nipples with my fingers. He closed his eyes and sighed. I guess he liked it. I lightly scratched my claws from his nipples down and on to his hips and started rubbing his bulge through his pants.

I knew from my experience with Michael that Brandon couldn’t take much of this. I went to his belt and undid it, I undid the button and dug my fingers into the sides and Brandon lifted up off the chair and allowed me to remove them. I rubbed his cock through his boxers for a couple of seconds.

His head was pushed back into the chair, his eyes were closed and he was enjoying himself. I put my fingers into the elastic of his boxers and slowly pulled them down, when his cock sprang free it pointed toward his navel and levitated slightly above his stomach. I wasn’t concerned with size but it was bigger than Michaels. I held him with my fingers and thumb and squeezed, milking him a couple of times.

I placed his cock on my tongue and closed my lips around it. I knew if this was Brandon’s first blowjob and he was like Michael this wouldn’t take long. I swirled around and touched as much of him as my tongue would allow while sliding my lips up and down. He was panting hard, I could hear his breathing. I looked up to him so I could watch his expression. He was watching me and smiled when our eyes met.

He had his hands on the back of my head and I knew that when he was about to cum that he would thrust his cock as far as he could into my mouth as Michael had done. This time I was ready. His breathing became irregular; he held his breath in short sperts. He moaned and lifted his feet off the floor and pushed my head down as far as it would go.

I began drinking and swallowing as each shot of hot cum hit my mouth. He released his grip after four or five sperts and I lifted my mouth off of him stroking slowly as the last dribble ran down his shaft. I increase my squeeze pressure and slowed down. I watch Brandon and I saw that look of pure satisfaction on the face. He looked at me and we smiled at each other.

He watched me as I moved my mouth back to his soft cock and I cleaned the rest of his cum with my lips. I leaned forward giving him a bear-hug and put my head on his chest. He stroked my hair and after about 5 minutes I felt a twitch on my breast. I realized that his soft cock was coming back to life. I sat up on my knees and I watched in amazement.

It was hanging down pointing at me between his legs, then it started moving up and getting larger. It was getting higher and higher, and then flopped over and was levitating again just above his stomach. It was amazing; I looked at Brandon like I had just witnessed a miracle.

I wanted to take our relationship one final step. I stood up and unsnapped my shorts and watched Brandon’s face as I let them fall to the floor. I stood there and let him see me in just my white bikini panties. He was slumped down in the chair looking at me with unblinking eyes. I slid my hands inside my panties and slid them to the floor. I rubbed my breasts and slid my hands down and stroked my loins. Brandon took in a deep breath as his nostrils flared. I strattled him again and this time we were both naked.

I put my arms around his neck and tenderly kissed his cheek; I moved to his ear and gently bit it. I whispered, “I want you inside me…I’m a virgin…please let me be in control.” Brandon whispered, “I love you… I would never hurt you.” I was very wet and knew this would help as I put him in me.

I reached between my legs and found him. He moaned as I guided him to my opening. I felt his cock against my pussy and I slowly rocked him in and out. It was an incredible feeling. Megan had told me about my hymen and said when hers was broken it hurt for just a few seconds and then after the pain faded it was the most pleasurable thing she ever knew.

I rested his cock against my virginity and took in several deep breaths. I looked at Brandon and knew his instinct was telling him to drive his cock deep inside me and plant his seed. It was taking all of his will power to grant my request. I held my breath and grit my teeth together and with all my strength plunged down on him.

Our moans were in unison. I squeezed his head to my breast and let out a low whimper. I rested there and absorbed the pain. Brandon’s fingernails dug into my back. I slowly moved back up out of him. The pain faded as the ecstasy of him sliding inside me took over. Tara’s tongue was an incredible feeling be it could not touch the area of my pussy that Brandon’s cock was touching.

Our higher brain functions shut down as we were driven by instinct. I started riding up and down on him; his moaning was coming from deep in his chest. I could feel the incredible strength in his hands as they lifted my body in and out of him. The plateau of pleasure was indescribable. Our bodies functioned as one.

I was losing control as my pussy started to contract in pulses. Brandon thrust his hips up with incredible force. I felt the warmth of his cum flood inside me. My pussy muscles contracted several times as I collapsed on his chest. My heart was aching, my undying love was his. We rested until our breathing returned to normal.

After several minutes Brandon whispered, “We better get cleaned up.” I stood slowly as he slid out of me on somewhat shaky knees and gathered our clothes. When I stood he picked me up in his arms and carried me to the bathroom. He set me down and when I saw him a realized that I was bleeding. I was embarrassed, turned away from him and started to blush.

He reached for me and held me in his arms and said, “Don’t be embarrassed …I understand what happened… thank you for giving me your virginity… I…I was a virgin until tonight too.” He hugged me and we kissed. We got ourselves cleaned up and dressed. Before we left the bathroom he stroked my breasts from behind and whispered in my ear. “That was the most pleasurable thing I have ever done. Thank you.”

Tara came over Saturday for a sleepover. I was still floating around the house because of the night before. Tara noticed right away something was different. She asked Michael, “What’s with Katie”? Michael said, “I don’t know, she’s been like that all day”. She looked at me out of the top of her eyes and said “Katie, what’s going on!”

I hugged her and whispered in her ear, “Tara, I’m not a virgin anymore” she pulled away from me and put her hand over her open mouth and said, “Brandon? Katie, you shameless hussy! Tell me all about it.” We went up to my room and I swore her to secrecy. I told her in great detail about the night before and about the incredible feelings that I had. I told her how tender and gentle Brandon was. I spoke of my hymen and told her the pain quickly passed.

Tara hugged me and said she was happy for me and she hopes she can look at Brandon without giggling. I punched her in the arm and said you better not! Mom left for work around 4 and left us pizza money. Tara was cuddled up to Michael, they were kissing and hugging as we watched a couple of movies then Tara and I went to my room about 10.

I was spooned up next to her playing with her nipple when I heard Michael’s bedroom door close. About a minute later Tara turned around and took a deep breath and asked “Would you be mad if I went and talked to Michael for a little bit? I jokingly said “why Tara, you shameless hussy” She hugged me and said nothing. I asked her,” Tara are you asking for my permission to make love with my brother? “She said “yes”. I hugged her again and said “you better treat him good” and I kissed her.

She got up and tiptoed to the door and I whispered “wait!” I jumped up and got my strawberry flavored perfume and told Tara to lift up her shirt. I gave her a couple of squirts, giggled and jumped back in bed. I heard a light tap on Michael’s door and heard the door open and close. I laid there slowly stroking my pussy thinking of what they were doing in the next room.

About an hour later I heard my door open and close and Tara silently crawled into bed. I rolled over and said, “Tell me everything.” She sighed and put her arms around my neck and said, “Oh Katie, it was wonderful.” She said they did everything. He licked on her pussy and she gave him a blowjob and when they did it she was sitting on top. Tara and I had both lost our virginity within 24 hours of each other.

Michael was on light duty and wasn’t allowed to pickup books or a food tray. Tara and I fed him for three more weeks until he went back to the doctor. I continued my nightly visit to his room to help him “exercise.” After a couple of weeks of squeezing my boobs he gabbed me put me on the bed and lay on top of me and started hugging me. It was apparent he wanted more.

I pulled his hair with both my hands and pushed his head up until I could look him in the eyes. I said, “Michael, I love you and I enjoy playing with you but I don’t want you inside me, do you understand?” He looked a little rejected and said “OK Katie, but I still owe you something.” He reached up and grabbed my hands and interlocked my fingers and pinned them to the bed.

Even with his sore hands he was still stronger than me. He bent down and flicked my nipple with his tongue. He was sucking and licking while watching my face contort into all sorts of strange looks. He left my nipples and kissed my stomach lower and lower steadily moving down while still watching my face. He started pulling my panties off. I sternly said “Michael!” he looked at me and said, “I can’t lick your pussy with them on.

I sighed and let him pull them off. He spread my legs and lifted them in the air as his tongue got to my pussy. His tongue was fast. He was licking my thigh and quickly touched my clit for about a quarter of a second. By the time I squealed he was licking inside me. He licked there for a few seconds and quickly went back to my clit again. I squealed and he was gone, back to my pussy.

I found this exciting not knowing when he would quickly go to my clit. Every time he went to my clit it would surprise me and I would squeal. Suddenly he went back to my clit and stayed there licking quickly and sucking. My orgasm came to me so fast that I screamed and squeezed his head in my thighs.

I was panting as Michael came up and lay at my side. I said “Oh god, that was incredible. Thank you.” He said, “It was my pleasure, I really do appreciate you helping me out when I had my casts on.” Not thinking I said, “How did Tara keep from screaming?” he said with a puzzled look on his face, “Did she tell you everything?” I realized my mistake and smiled,”Ya, pretty much everything”. I grinned and gave him a hug and kiss.

The trial had started against the three men that attacked us. A police officer came to our house with subpoenas for Michael and me to testify in court. Brandon had also received one. Mom drove us downtown to the courthouse. We were escorted into a waiting room just outside the courtroom. A policeman came into the room and escorted me into the courtroom.

The judge had cleared the gallery because I was a minor. The jury was sitting on the side of the room facing everyone. There were nine women and 5 men. I saw the men that attacked me. They all had short haircuts and were clean shaven and wore suits. There were four policemen sitting behind them and there were also three more sitting in chairs by the jury.

The chair I sat in was right next to the jury. After swearing me in. The lawyer asked me questions about the day I was attacked and what they did to me I told them the story and that they ripped my swim suit. He opened a bag and brought my suit and shirt to me and asked if these were mine.

When I saw the suit tears ran down my face but I didn’t cry. The clip was broken and one of the straps was ripped off and he held the shirt up by the shoulders. It was almost unrecognizable as a shirt. I said yes that’s mine.

He asked if I saw the people that attacked me, I said yes and pointed to the three men and said them three. He then asked if anyone of them assaulted my person. The tears started flowing again and there lawyer tried to object but the judge overruled him and told me to continue and answer the question.

I told them that the man sitting on the left. Put his finger in me. He asked me if I bit any one. I said yes and pointed him out. He then asked if I scratched any one. I said yes and pointed him out. The lawyer said, “No more questions your honor” and sat down.

The judge asked me how I was doing and if I wanted a break. I told him I was fine and I wanted to get this over with. The other lawyer stood and the judge said that special procedures were in place because I was a minor. The lawyer asked me, have you ever flirted with anybody?

The other lawyer said “object, irrelevant” the judge said “sustained. Next question” …Do you have a boyfriend? “Object” the judge hit his gavel on his table and warned him in a very stern voice not to ask me any more personal questions. He paged thru a tablet he was holding and said no further questions and sat down and shook his head at the three men.

The judge smiled at me and said “thank you, you may leave.” I went back into the waiting room and Michael was called in to testify. Then it was Brandon’s turn. As we were leaving I saw Sara the CSI from the hospital. She said the trial was almost open and shut. Sara said my teeth marks matched his bite mark perfectly and the blood from under my fingernails also matched. She smiled and said, “We got’em, there going to jail for a long time thanks to you. Mom got a phone call about a week later and said that they were all found guilty and sentenced to prison. I was pleased.

One weekend night when I was in the summer before my senior year of high school, the four of us talked about the day at the pool when Megan brought the pool to a stop with her bikini. We all had a laugh when I told them I thought every one was looking at my bathing suit that some how came loose.

I looked at Tara and said, “Lets do it” she said “What” I said “lets go to the mall and get a couple of drop dead string bikinis and put on a show.” The guys were all for it. The next day we went to the mall and found some suits. I picked out a bright white suit that looked good with my dark complexion and sun tan and Tara got a hot pink that really looked hot. We drove to the pool about 15 minutes after the session started.

Tara and I super model walked in with Brandon next to me and Michael next to Tara. Just as we guessed the pool came to a stop and everyone looked at us. I saw our 13 year old neighbor Carol standing at the edge of the pool in a two piece suit. I had a bout of d? vu, I remembered me stand in almost the same spot a few years ago and what it meant to me when Megan stopped and said hi.

I said “Hi Carol” She turned and looked at our suits, her mouth dropped open. She said “Hi Katie, Tara, …MMMMiii” She looked at Michael and Brandon’s faces, a dreamy look came over her. Her eyes dropped down to Michael’s rock hard AB muscles and chiseled chest. She began to squirm and squeeze her legs together. Poor thing, she was losing her concentration. All she could do was squeal and jumped into the pool. I whispered to Michael, “wet panties” he chuckled. I looked at the pool and we had done it!

Every male over the age of ten was looking at us and every girl over the age of ten was looking at Michael and Brandon. I scratched Brandon’s rock hard AB’s with my claws and gave him a kiss on the cheek, he picked me up in his arms and ran and jumped into the deep end of the pool.

Epilog

Michael has fully recovered from his injuries. He is stronger now than he was before we were attacked. Brandon and Michael have become best friends. Brandon won the state wrestling championship in our senior year of high school. I can’t begin to tell you how good he looks. He is a hunk. Michael also was in wrestling and is a chiseled specimen. Tara and I ran track all through high school and our bodies were almost identical. We both were 5’ 4” 105lbs 36C-23-34.

Michael and I love each other. We never sexually touched each other after the trial. Oh sure we would playfully touch each other, I would grab the bulge in his pants or he would playfully pinch my tit but that was it. Tara and I are a different story. Occasionally Michael and Brandon would go hunting or fishing for the weekend and Tara and I would spend the weekend together.

I am now 23 years old as I put this story to pen. Brandon, Tara, Michael and I have just graduated from college. Brandon and Michael have a degree in chemical engineering and are working for a large chemical company. Tara has a degree in business and I’m an electrical engineer.

Brandon & I and Michael & Tara will be married tomorrow in a double ceremony. We are their Best Man and Maid of Honor and they are ours.

Life is good…


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  • donb9033
    01.05.2008 13:33
    Thanks for posting part II so soon. The entire story was really entertaining and worth the time to read. Keep writing.

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  • curt+lee
    01.05.2008 21:02
    ...now that all the base work is done, hope you pick a moment in time to expand on...nice growing with a family...

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  • George+in+Cincy
    03.05.2008 01:01
    Well, this one is still basically OK, but still fractual and spotty. The spelling and grammar are still bad (Spell Check will help with some of that) and you are just all over the place with your settings. You have good ideas, but you need continuity in your work. Also, I must ask a question regarding the intro to part one...why on earth did you say that the story was a 'three hour read'? I plowed through it in about 18 minutes. Just wondering.
    For your own benefit, take the time to review your work several times before submitting it. Trust me...it will lead to fewer bad reviews.

    George in Cincy

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  • Seejay_93
    03.05.2008 03:31
    That was a great story! It wasn't like most of the other stories on here, (cut out the middle-man and get right to the fucking...) it actually sounded plausible and, in a way, like a real story might play out, know what I mean? Anyway, I give both of em a 10/10.

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  • donb9033
    04.05.2008 02:32
    Even if some words were spelled incorrectly, the story was superb. Do not take George in Cincy's constructive criticism the wrong way. Keep writing. Proof reading will help a lot, but above all, keep writing.

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  • kyaizsen
    06.05.2008 20:38
    It was a really fantastic story...Errors as usual, but very minor. Detailed and long.

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  • mako
    mako 1
    07.05.2008 16:49
    great !fuckingly great! i even silently masturbated rigt here! at the cyber cafe men sweet!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2008 22:16
    listen to no criticism. this was a great story despite minor errors. keep it up !

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  • Runeteller
    07.05.2008 23:48
    I absolutely loved this..there was an actual story to this is wasn't all just mindless fucking and bad grammar very nice work very nice 10/10

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  • onmouseout
    07.05.2008 23:54
    i lov u

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2008 03:59
    Very nicely written, I look forward to reading more of your work.

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  • katana69
    08.05.2008 14:08
    Hey great story! I really enjoyed that story had depth and plot...and even circular construction (great ending). You have obvious writing skills and I await your next piece. Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2008 05:56
    wonderul story..........i loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2008 14:40
    i love this story

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  • teacher
    09.05.2008 17:42
    It's a pleasure to read a story with a plot and good grammar & spelling - more stories would be welcome

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  • dandy57
    09.05.2008 21:53
    I loved your story. Very good because as told, believable:) I just wish i looked as good as her neighbor accross the street from such a girl. I have a story but i am not a literary giant and i am sure it is too long and would draw way too much critisism. As it is now, almost 300 pages of word. After reading your story I would send it to you if your interested bot I don't think i would ever post it.

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  • Bongsta
    10.05.2008 00:15
    Good read, a little long for me, but with my bong I found it to be a very...well good read. Ha
    Glad shit is working out for you!
    One love.

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  • lawl
    10.05.2008 04:32
    It was pretty good. I was hoping (since I am in the incest section of hte website) that Squirt and Katie would bang eachother...

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  • Unknown
    Unknown 730
    10.05.2008 12:02
    I liked that story.

    More of these stories should be like this one.

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  • Curt
    10.05.2008 14:37
    Its a shame you have to hunt through so many stories before you can find this quality.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2008 23:15
    it stinks that this was so hard 2 find in all that other crap

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  • duck
    duck 2
    10.05.2008 23:20
    awesome story, why cant there be more like this? glad everything is going well in life for you and i hope it stays that way, god bless

    duck, belfast

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  • betty
    11.05.2008 00:57
    It was a good story .. all the best

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 03:04
    AMAZING STORY BEST ONE I;VE READ SO FAR...WISH ALL THE BEST...LUCKILY I FOUDN THIS ONE QUICKLY TONITE :P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 03:05
    Nice stories. Should be more like these. Keep writng - there definitely is a place for what you bring.

    Good luck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 03:48
    aww well if the whole attacking part is true im sorry D: but good stories. wouldn't i like to be apart of your horny life? :D <3

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  • george+laden
    11.05.2008 05:23
    shitty story...crapy stuff...totallly fake....but i still loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 05:48
    i loved this story it wasn't just mindless ass fucking like every other story here- i loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 13:39
    I found it hard to read the first part... with tears in my eyes.
    If there's a "porn"itzer prize, you should get it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 14:40
    Awesome

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  • Mike
    11.05.2008 16:54
    That was a trip

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  • stern
    12.05.2008 05:45
    INCREDIBLE U could be a professional writer. and not just erotica. i've been read xnxx sexy stories for awile now and this is the best by a long margin... WOW

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  • Gigi
    12.05.2008 15:31
    What you wrote is amazing... I mean, you could be professional ! If you're not already ... :-) Keep writing and thank you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2008 18:05
    Hands down the best story on here. Please write more.

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  • pimpin18
    13.05.2008 00:51
    one of the best stories out there but it could've had more details.. Seemed like you rushed it at the end like suddenlly their at highschool and then college from being in junior high. What happend inbetween and when the men get out on parole do they try and get their revenge or do they get no parole? Too much detail on the bodies at the end.. most people really don't look like that, but i thought it was hot anyway. Good but it seems rushed.

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  • Katlyn
    13.05.2008 12:55
    my life is exactly like this except for the rape part o_o lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 14:24
    best story i have ever read!!! congratz on the double wedding best wishess to the four of you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 14:48
    I enjoyed reading this story and think you should definately continue to write.

    The flow was very decent, the story line as well and I found the ending quite alright. IMHO a story does not need to have a fullfledged and long drawn ending to be categorized as good. Sometimes a good epilogue is indeed better.

    About spelling I would like to say that we shold all take care to do our best. :-)

    Keep up the good work...
    J. Bailey

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  • unknown
    unknown 730
    13.05.2008 20:31
    This is 2nd favorite story on xnxx , 2nd to "my sister the bitch", keep up the good work your one of ym favorite writers

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 20:50
    omg this was a graet sttory awesome perfect soryline jjust wish the se scenes had a little more detail but other then that it was great

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  • nightmoves
    14.05.2008 03:10
    wow very good. kept me want for the nexy part.

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  • Unknown
    Unknown 730
    14.05.2008 22:05
    Great Story! loved it

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  • Louisa
    15.05.2008 01:47
    Sounds like something Osama bin Toke'n would be into. At least when he's not out shooting white people.

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  • istupid11
    15.05.2008 01:49
    this is buy far the best story i have read on this website i love the ending and the beginning and the middle you should do a contuience of this story in a few years so we can hear about your marriage and some of your lesbian adventures with Tara thanks for taking the time to write this awesome story

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  • im+cool
    15.05.2008 09:46
    wow this was amazing... and realistic its like reading my wife issy's life story (except for without older guys trimg to screw her)

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  • roger+dodger
    15.05.2008 19:51
    An absolutely wonderful story. Top MARKS. Had begining a middle and end, very well written.

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  • 9inchdick
    16.05.2008 04:43
    so hot i rember my teen days very silmar good story -_-

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 02:25
    nice sex story post your phone number

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  • Spetre35
    17.05.2008 21:20
    G'Day,
    A reasonable story but the spelling needs a lot of work. "There "and "their" are not interchangeable

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 03:41
    yay i love cheezits and apples!

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  • unknown
    unknown 730
    18.05.2008 21:11
    Its amazing how you can get an engineering degree and not have a command of the english language.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 00:06
    I like the description in this story it's very good. Most of the things that people point out are very trivial. Although the spelling does need a bit of work. I came before they even got to the sex. Probably one of the best stories here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 01:59
    very good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 04:25
    It's a great story. Probably one of the best I have ever read, even if there are a few spelling errors. Write on

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  • rebel69
    19.05.2008 05:15
    I agree, that this here is one of the finest stories on the net at present. Ii goes to show that you do not need unecessary cussing and description in order to write a great sex story. just a good solid story line and a willingness to write. Only needs to look at tense and spelling.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 08:23
    Thanks to everyone who has enjoyed this story. I apologize for the bad spelling. I struggled through high school English with a D average. I have no formal writing training or experience. When I stumbled across XNXX last year I decided to write about the girl that lived across the street from me when I was in junior high. Katie (not her real name) is a real person but she never came across the street to sit with me. This story is pure fantasy.
    To Katie,
    If you are reading this, I still love you.
    Storyteller2653

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 18:31
    good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 20:35
    that was great plz write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 21:34
    o yea, fuck that bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 22:21
    Very Very good keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 22:59
    a well written story

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  • rocky
    20.05.2008 04:37
    heart throve

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 18:45
    nice ass story keep it up
    you should write about there highschool/college years

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 20:21
    Words can not describe how good that was. With the exception of a few typos it was very very good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 21:38
    Very sexy and genuine. I came 3 times!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 22:47
    no words can describe how fantastic that story was

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2008 23:22
    Omg.... I loved both parts to this story. Has everything you could want; sex, a plot, it's well written.. JUST PERFECT!

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  • Kniceguy58
    22.05.2008 01:01
    Very nice story !! Well written, except you consistantly spelled "spurt" as "spert"....otherwisw..Great Job !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2008 20:18
    A fantastic story, but you kept replacing dd with tt

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 03:23
    The only thing i dont like about this story, is i think i saw a few comments about it being to long. Good stories are long. And this is an amazing story. Its almost impossible to find stories of this caliber on the internet. Especially for free. You are a great story teller, and that matters far more then how you did in highschool english. Keep the good work. Oh, and i think writing more about them later in life would be an awesom idea as well. Kudos to whoever said that first.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 17:25
    Very good, 2 thumbs up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 02:50
    wow awesome story im all wet=D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 04:09
    Very nice, ive read this like 3 times now. i like it. i would have never known it was fiction, had it not been for the description, great job.

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  • latrunk
    24.05.2008 10:06
    "Its amazing how you can get an engineering degree and not have a command of the english language."

    Do you mean using "Its" when it should clearly be "It's"???

    HYPOCRITE!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 13:32
    latrunk ur a dumbass its a good story geek

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 14:09
    haha to the guy below me lol once ur out of school which u surely arent if ur not a teacher u forget all the correct spelling to alot of things because u short hand it ....or ur just a nerd... nice story!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 21:31
    great story i jaked off like 5 times

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 23:51
    This was a very good story. I absolutely loved it, especially the ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2008 04:17
    This story was awesome. Im glad that you and brandon are working out. I would love to read more about. Im only 14 and not a vrigin. With both girl and boy

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  • sherrardcusj
    25.05.2008 11:12
    nice story i cummed like 3 times!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2008 21:49
    nice story I jacked off woo much to it nice ending

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  • sex+lover
    26.05.2008 22:50
    Wooow I love the story got meh hard helluh tymes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 07:11
    hey ! amazing story :) u should totally write more !! u could lower the ages it would make it wayyyy better , im a gurl n i first slept with a guy when i was 13 and with a girl b4 and after tht :D:D gjoob anyway keep writing !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 13:52
    Good story would be nice if it was made into a sex movie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 18:07
    That was a beautiful story. :D

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  • cykos1s
    27.05.2008 21:37
    THAT WAS AMAZING

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 21:38
    that was a very nice story. Greatest ending in all of xnxx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 09:29
    this is a great story and i loved it :)
    it comes as a tie for 1st place with jena the jeenie or how ever
    u spell itand i give both storys 1010

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  • hello
    28.05.2008 10:25
    is a true story or not?
    it was good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 21:36
    fantastic work. please write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 02:20
    make more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 18:25
    U better keep writing. Have found this web site today and have bookmarked it so i can see more of your work. Awsome!

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  • Silver
    30.05.2008 07:13
    Is there going to be more of this story? Please?

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    30.05.2008 15:32
    wow i love your story i read the last one and it was great i hope you and Brandon are happy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 12:27
    love this storie couldnt take my eye's off

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  • -
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    05.06.2008 01:16
    That was fabulous...I swear it was almost professional. Keep it up, you'd do great in the writing industry.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2008 14:56
    This was one of the best stories i have ever read, you are fantastic, keep up your work !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2008 04:08
    Hah, wow. Just stumbled across this site, and man this is the greatest (sexual) story I've ever read. Is this a true story, or was the bit at the end just for show?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 16:14
    I don't know what to say...it's a really great Story, not only seen sexually....just keep up the good work^^

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  • reader
    reader 500
    10.06.2008 16:36
    ive read a lot of storys but this is defiantly my fave ! keep up the great work !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2008 15:45
    This is a wonderful story! This has to be my favorite of all time. AMAZING!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2008 18:50
    Wow, Best story ever. This one beats anybook.

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  • HORNYLITTLE9THGRADER
    14.06.2008 02:50
    I...........DIDNT BLINK ONCE THE ENTIRE TIME THAT WAS A GREAT FUCKING STORY

    -14 YEARS OLD ANYOMUS[CANT SPELL]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 01:35
    GODSEND
    The sex was nothing short of amazing, there was chemistry among the characters, very long and perfectly laid out story, and is probably the best story i will every read in my life.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 04:02
    umm it was great but the whole incest thing is nasty i would never fuck someone in my family...plus kinda gay ending

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 04:21
    GREAT STORY!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 07:08
    Awesome story... MEGAN seems SUPER HOT! Best one lve read so far

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 22:25
    Compares favorably with "Other Plans" by Miss Behavin for best story on this site.

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  • stevie+fuckin+gerrard
    16.06.2008 11:56
    top notch, great quality. more lesbian and less american hillbilly family nonsence and your the fuckin shakespear of porn. good work, keep em' comin mate, cheers.

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  • sundance
    16.06.2008 17:58
    this is the best story I have read so far in the past couple of years

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 00:32
    best story ever!!! great ending!! hell!! great everything!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 04:35
    the truth?!!...this will make a good movie screen story...(that's from my point of view though)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2008 01:58
    that was a beautyful story, allmost every one would have changed the story and had her violently raped, it was good to see a story not compleatly fuck up the main character, good job loved it all the way

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2008 05:09
    this was an amazing story i loved it i like how you did the end saying everything went fine their still together and even friends absoulutely amazing good job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2008 02:07
    I had to read both incredibale stories in one night! Amazing job. There was a valid realistic plot and not just sex.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2008 07:53
    wow that was amazing. how do u make up plots as brilliant as that. These two stories are simply irreplaceable.
    well done

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  • reader
    reader 500
    08.07.2008 04:08
    i love the 2 stories there awesome i do think its wrong that she did her brother pretty much

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  • giga
    10.07.2008 07:39
    very interesting this is the second time im reading this story its so good 10/10 (if there was a rating system)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 12:30
    A well written story, with a lot of what appears personal insight, no unnecessary language, just a lot of realistic action.

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  • lala
    11.07.2008 13:05
    great story so romantic!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 22:10
    I really enjoyed this story. I was expecting a stroke story when I started reading it, but by the time I figured out that it wasn't I was hooked!

    Very good read, keep writing, you're good at it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 07:26
    I like it. but not the fairy tale ending

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  • meeee123
    17.07.2008 03:15
    wow i loved both parts simply amazing how well this is written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2008 03:22
    isnt michael like 2 years younger then katie and tara?? i cant believe tara just went to micheals room and came bak an hour later with her viginity gone. this one was better then the first one. 9.5/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2008 09:20
    it sounds like it was based on a real life incident and there wasn't an overload of sex or incest

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  • storydude
    27.07.2008 03:55
    Please don't write any more. You suck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2008 05:41
    dude you watch way too much CSI

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2008 04:05
    Wow, that was an awesome story... Well written other than a few gramatical errors. But all in all, it was one of the more catchy stories I have read. Kudos, and keep writing.

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  • Vanion_3000
    14.08.2008 03:18
    A very good and well thought out story. Well written except of the some spelling errors. The ending was a little weak, but at least the author tried to give it an ending unlike others who just cut off and leave it hanging. Very good job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2008 15:48
    i love it its a good story and not 2 much sex but still pretty hot one of the best stories ive read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2008 13:34
    it's great
    romantic, not too much 'action'

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  • a+swinger
    22.08.2008 22:12
    very good u should be author remindes me of when i was fouteen i was alot like brandon good job kepp writing and good luck peace baby

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2008 22:44
    Excellent story. I enjoyed reading both parts very much. Unlike other stories, this one really aroused me by being more romantic than full-on sex. Well written story, very well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2008 02:08
    amazing. seriously. i'm 14 and this sounded so great to me, i can't wait until my boobs get a little bigger so i can do that to my boyfriend!

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  • reader
    reader 500
    28.08.2008 21:54
    that story was fresh
    keep writin
    God that was awesome!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2008 14:44
    the word you are looking for about 2/4 down is déjà vu... which is french and means "already seen". English writing: deja vu...
    great story

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  • Sunnjay
    14.09.2008 13:12
    Good refreshing story with lot of controls on oneself.

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  • mxrider007r
    15.09.2008 23:20
    you know what they say about a story with a happy ending, its just a story that hasn't been finished. id be cool to see what happens after the marriges, maybe the 3 guys in jail get out and are bent on revenge Either way a great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2008 00:43
    im 15 and that was one of the best ive read job well done : )

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2008 23:54
    nice story is it true? ...................

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  • storyteller2653
    24.09.2008 13:06
    No, it's fiction. I did live across the street from the girl that I call Katie in this story. In real life she never came across the street to sit with me in our porch swing. I did dream of being her hero.

    Storyteller2653

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2008 12:04
    All I can say is

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

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  • reader
    reader 500
    01.10.2008 22:07
    wow sick story u should add more sex though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2008 11:55
    awesome story...I'm 12 and it got me extremely wet... nice job : )

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  • jellybeans
    05.10.2008 08:00
    GREAT story !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2008 11:20
    Fantastic, well done mate :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2008 12:13
    Fantastic, well done mate :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2008 00:29
    AMAZING STORY!!! Ive saved both part one and two. I LOVE THEM!!! this is the BEST story ive ever read. Love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2008 14:30
    that was the best story i've read even though the part where katie gives her brother a blow job is a little messed up. i'm only 16 but that got me hard as hell

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2008 14:23
    Tried all through the teen years to get with my sis, only to find out now that all it takes is a beating and a few broken bones. It would have been worth the price. Great story.

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  • hornyzach
    07.11.2008 19:35
    i loved your story and how it wasnt all about the sex i would read it even if i wasn't trying to get off please write more!!!! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2008 19:59
    Nice job, good story. Could've had a few small improvements. Overall, nice.

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  • Pussaholic
    14.11.2008 21:13
    Is this a true story?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2008 01:48
    omg is this a true story, its so sweet

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  • tyciol
    17.11.2008 15:30
    I hope I can find my sole mate some day. This is a nice sequel, a bit shorter but a lot happens. A satisfying conclusion to many matters. It's a bit disappointing that the siblings didn't keep going but it's too be expected. I wish there was more about the older girl who gave the BJ, she seemed very nice. It's a nice contrast to the stereotypical older bigbusted girl in stories who is mean, because she defeats that stereotype.

    I kept cracking up at "every boy/girl over the age of ten" though. As if sexual desire only awakens in the doubledigited or something, lol. I know from my memories of my old thoughts that is simply not the case, but to be PI I guess.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2008 16:34
    Absolutely Incredible (That go's for both stories)
    Very Nice Story
    I Agree That There Should
    Have Been More About Megan
    10/10

    Sincerely

    Alexander Phoenix
    {:<)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2008 05:19
    FANTASTIC! Loved it! This coulda been just boreing stuff and you woulda made it something better! Your really talented, keep working and write more like this please?

    Elessar

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2008 19:41
    what a romanitc ending. and the story waz just award winning.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2008 11:52
    i wish my lover was that good. not even j is that good. looove it!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2008 04:24
    that was actually one of the best stories i have read between oen and two. the sex was incredibly written, aswell the story hooked the reader. excellent work 10 out of 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2008 01:33
    Amazing story! Hell, that doesn't even begin to describe it! 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2008 00:32
    best story on this websites...I have read many stories and this is by far the most amazing one..I planned on going 2 bed an hour ago but I couldn't stop reading. there shoulda been more meagen she seemed hot..hopefully this stuff can happen more often

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.12.2008 02:12
    Congratulations, you made a second part of a story that didn't turn out to be absolutly ridiculous. 9/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2008 21:33
    That was incredible, and what made it better, is i lost my virginity when I was babysitting, just like Katie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2008 21:34
    That was incredible, and what made it better, is i lost my virginity when I was babysitting, just like Katie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2008 12:14
    great story hun it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time i was reading it so keep up the good work 10 out 10 best one yet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2008 17:10
    bothof these stories were the best sex stories i have ever read. i like that we could connect with the characters and it wasnt just all about sex and that it was balanced. GREAT job!

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  • hillbilly5007
    20.12.2008 03:36
    I love it 10/10

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  • reader
    reader 500
    24.12.2008 07:00
    Wow, so much better than the amazing first one. I mean both are really hot erotic stories, but they're both really sweet and romantic, incredible stuff. Nice ending too.

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  • sam
    Мужчина sam 127
    24.12.2008 07:43
    I was reading other readers comments, and someone said it would make a good movie, and i really think it would make an amazing movie. They'd probably have to change the ages, or not show the actual sex acts though. Honestly though, u should turn this into a script and send it to fucking paramount pictures lol.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2008 03:52
    Amazing, one of the only times were I actually enjoyed reading a lengthy story with not that much sex in it. GREAT WORK!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2009 02:20
    Great story I loved both of them!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2009 04:40
    I loved both of them too. As soon as i finished the first one i started on the second.

    I love to read, but i had never really read sex stories before, and I believe you just got me hooked :D.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2009 17:46
    Great story line. kept my attention all the way through and like the ending at the swimming pool.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.01.2009 12:26
    very enjoybul

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.02.2009 18:29
    i thought this was really good keep writing!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2009 03:04
    thar was an amazing story tho it only took me 27 mins to read[ i timed it lol im a really fast reader] but as i was saying both of them are amazing cant wait to read your other stories and i think you should make a follow up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2009 09:21
    Very, very good story. Nice to read something with a proper story line and I just love the way you describe all the feelings and emotions. Pietbliksem

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2009 23:34
    great story my fav

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 01:07
    Thanks for sharing this with everyone. Well-written, free stories like this are few and far between on the net. You developed the main characters well. I read a lot and found your story flowed well and kept my attention. Very sexy-you didn't rush to the hard stuff. That kind of build up is excellent.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2009 01:15
    This story had depth, unlike the other mindless crap thats on this website...Bravo, 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2009 22:38
    9/10 its great story but id say it could of ben better but ur better then most still trust me

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  • ggggg
    27.05.2009 08:56
    brilliant story

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  • thechef
    28.05.2009 21:06
    Pietbliksem says it all, nothing to add apart from, well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2009 19:21
    I loved that it wasnt just sex sex sex..it was sweet romantic and loving LOVED IT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2009 06:39
    i love this story, its great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2009 02:25
    omg that was THE BEST story EVER.it wasnt just sex it was ramance and like it was ah-mazing.bravisima!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2009 03:58
    Wow I actually enjoyed reading this in the sense that when done reading I felt like I was part of the story and that like everyone else said it wasn't completely 24/7 sex. If others wrote like this this site would be the shit. Keep up the great work
    Peace "BrookIs" leave no wall ungraffed

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  • tesslane
    04.06.2009 10:45
    That was a really well written story...I hope you write more...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2009 14:14
    Boring!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2009 16:34
    seems a little too good to be true, but that's the beauty of fiction. i like how the plot actually makes sense and you aren't just rushing to the sex. the build up of an actuall story before someone decides to fuck someone else is rare these days.
    thanks for the logic.
    do fix the spelling mistakes though.

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  • downwind
    08.06.2009 13:38
    You're really good

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  • short_puertorican
    08.06.2009 21:57
    I read both stories and I have to say that they were good and I like them. The first story left me wanting more but then I found part two and it was amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2009 15:42
    very nice story. Love the plot. Good work.

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  • MAN1NAM
    11.06.2009 06:51
    whats the point or solved question of this story?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2009 02:40
    good story, epilogue ruined the ending though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2009 16:42
    OMG this is the best story on the website plz make more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2009 18:05
    yes pleas more the absulite best yet that i have read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2009 17:26
    by far the best story I have read on here

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2009 21:12
    loved this. more please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2009 15:14
    amazing!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2009 23:54
    I just got the CSI reference; Brass and Sara from CSI. Good job blending them in. I had to go through it a second time just to make sure.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 20:14
    awesome story!!! i love part one as well

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 04:34
    i absolutly love this story sad loveing hapie and romantic all at the same time you could make a movie out of this and make billions send it in to a WB or something like that yit will be the best seller of the year.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 23:29
    ph wow i loved it, it was so beautiful. one of my favorite stories by far

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  • storyaddicted
    19.07.2009 00:17
    OMG
    i love this story not just sexually
    but it had a great story line
    i was happy that everyone was happy together and had each other

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  • Why%3F
    03.08.2009 21:18
    haha, read 'em both now, both bloody amazing as an erotic novel and in story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2009 11:02
    Katie is a whore!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2009 23:43
    shame to read a good story with it in a FEMALES perspective coming from a male writer. you got some issues buddy. Do you wish you were a girl or something? Queer fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2009 20:40
    fucking fag

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2010 05:36
    Bravo, truely wonderous story. It progresses quite beautifully and you develop the sense of attachment for the characters that is so lacking from the other stories. Anyone who would treat this story negatively simply has no grasp of the work of art this is.

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  • Fuckinbitch
    10.06.2010 03:13
    That was a truly amazing story, I really really liked it

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  • Fuckinbitch
    10.06.2010 13:31
    That was a truly amazing story, I really really liked it

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  • justicepr
    23.06.2010 18:41
    It was a good story, however some parts of it were a little long winded, but overall I liked it.

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  • chaser
    25.06.2010 16:48
    Wow i LOVED this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2010 03:34
    Awesome,Enjoyed reading this well written story. Great job showing how we should see and feel the character.With enjoyment of sex of course.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2010 03:35
    Awesome,Enjoyed reading this well written story. Great job showing how we should see and feel the character.With enjoyment of sex of course.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2011 20:20
    This story is ****in awesome! I love it

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2011 15:38
    i really enjoyed the depth of the storys put it was ****ing hot! thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 18:07
    definately write more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2011 23:19
    Awsome story loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.04.2012 01:03
    Awesome! Very descriptive and romantic. While some parts dragged on and other parts went quickly, it was a very good story overall. Write a part III.

    Your score: 9/10 -> a bit long but descriptive romance made reading this worth it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2012 07:25
    This is an amazing! One of my favorites ... Very good!

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  • DADDY5511
    08.06.2014 16:11
    Awesome story just the right length and drawn out perfectly to keep you reading.. Can not wait to read more of your stories

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