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My Young Flower

Author: MasterFaker200

Date: 29 April 2008

Blowjob, Dark Fantasy, Incest, Masturbation

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This is my first time trying this. Positive feedback only please.

"Brandon, time for dinner!" yelled my mother Kassy from outside my door.

"ALRIGHT MOM! JESUS!" I yelled as I stood up to walk out of my room, turning my computer off before I left. I was at 16 years of age and sadly still a virgin, also roughly 5 feet, 11 inches tall with green eyes.

"Wow Brandon! Yell a little louder next time and maybe my ears will fall off!" yelled my sister Rose, rubbing her ear in pain.

"Well who would complain, would be an improvement on your.... Hideous face!" I sneered from across the living room. Rose was actually a pretty good-looking girl, as much as I hated to admit it. She had a nice, slender body with a nice rounded ass and chest, which was seeable though the shirts she wore. Her cleavage was showing so much of her off, a huge crack went through the center of her chest.

"There is no need for that Brandon. You know its hard enough to have had your father leave this family in the past week, you two should really try being nice, like you used to be...." Said my mother, sighing softly as she laid down a steak for us both to eat.

"Well if Brandon here was not such a dumb ass- ROSE!" Yelled my mother, angry at what she just said.

"You know I don’t like that language in this house, especially from you! You're only 15 years old!" My mother was furious now. "I want you to finish your steak and get to bed! NOW!"

Rose squinted her eyes at me and looked like she was threatening me with her fork. I couldn’t help but laugh a little, as I knew she was (for the most part) an innocent little girl, and would never hurt me.

“Love you Rose” I said smiling at her.

“Pfft, like you actually mean that” rose answered as she finished her steak.

“Okay young lady, be nice and go to be now. Its late.” I said teasingly

“Whatever.” Rose said hatefully as she turned to mom. “Night mommy” she said kissing her on the cheek and strutting off to her room.

“Isn’t it odd how her mood changes so quickly?” I asked my mother.

“I hate to admit it, but she gets that from my side of the gene pool, son.” Said my mother quietly. We sat quietly till I finished my steak, I then put my dishes in the sink, along with roses, and walked towards my room.

As I was walking back, I found my sisters door partly open, and heard a light noise from behind it. I started to push the door open as quietly as possible, lucky me she got a new door put in just last week as the last one was worn out from years of being used and had a horrible squeaking noise.

I peer my head into the room. The lights were on and I could see my sister on the bed, she was watching something on her television, but her attention seemed to be somewhere else. I peered into the door more and found what she was paying attention to, just as she seemed to silently scream.

Her hand was rapidly moving back and forth over her clit as liquid started to shoot out onto a towel she had placed on the bed for easy clean up. Or so it’s supposed to be, but she seemed to get EVERYTHING but the towel.

”Holy shit!” I said as quietly as a surprised teen could be to watch a girl cum like that!

Rose all the sudden noticed me watching and grabbed the towel to cover her self. “WHAT THE HELL BRANDON! HAVENT YOU EVER HEARD OF KNOCKING!?”

“Well, yes I have, but your door was already open, so why should I knock?” for some reason, I was extremely calm after just seeing what I saw my sister doing.

“Because I was…. was…. I was…. um…. h-how much did you see?

“Oh, I walked in about the time you were done. Good job though, I have never seen something like that in real life!” I said smiling

“Shut up Brandon! Do you have any idea how embarrassing that…. that…. Brandon, your pants!” she gasped. I looked down to see my pants bulging outward where my dick got extremely hard from watching her.

“Oh shit!” I yelled turning away as rose dropped the towel she was holding and got off the bed, staring at me turned around.

“Brother…. are you okay?” she asked, turning me around as I held my hands over my crotch “I’m sorry rose, I should have just left….”

Rose grabbed my hands and pulled them away from my pants. “Brandon, I know what that is. Its called a boner, and guys get it when they are…. aroused.”

I pulled my hands back to cover it again. “Y-yes, but I got it because of you, and that’s wrong!” with that I ran out of her room and to mine.

I laid on my bed and turned the television on and flicked through some channels, nothing good was on, so I turned my computer on and signed into a chat room with some friends.

After an hour of talking to a friend from school, I decided it was getting lat and that it was time for bed. I laid down trying to sleep, but I couldn’t. The thoughts of my sister were still racing through my head, and they seemed to keep repeating.

Someone knocked on my door and then slowly opened it and came in. I couldn’t see who it was because my lights were off. “Hello?” I said finding this kind of strange.

I felt a hand press lightly on my chest, I only sleep in my boxers. “Brother…. I can’t stop thinking of what I saw…. C-can you let me see it?

I got up and turned the lights on to see my sister lying on the opposite side of my bed. “Rose? Shouldn’t you be asleep right now?”

Rose sat up and stared at me with her innocent brown eyes. She was wearing a nightgown, and by the way she made sure to keep it covering her entire body, I guessed she had nothing else under it. “I can’t sleep, I want to see your penis…it looked so big through your jeans.” Her voice sounded sad and desperate at the same time.

“What?! I cant do that! You’re my sister!” I said taken aback by her words.

“Brother please!” she said as she started to cry lightly. I noticed the tears and she buried her face in her hands.

“Why are you crying about this? You actually thought I would show you?!” I asked taking a step forward surprised by his sister crying. Rose was usually a tough girl.

“But…. It’s not the first one I would have ever seen! I have seen other ones before!” she said through the sobs in her voice.

“What?! You have had sex with a guy before?” I asked really freaked out imagining my 15-year-old sister with another guy. It made my stomach turn.

“N-no! I mean online.” She said staring up at me with her soft brown eyes, piercing me to my soul with her innocent look. I don’t know what caused me to do it, but I walked over and wrapped my arms around her hugging her tightly.

“I still don’t know why you’re crying…. but if you want, I could keep you company till you feel better. Sound like a good idea?”

Rose stopped crying and hiccupped once while saying: “w-well, I guess that’s okay….” I picked my sister up and I took her back to her room, where I laid her down on one side of the bed, and I laid down on the other side. As soon as I laid down and we were both under the covers, she grabbed my hand and pushed herself to my chest and rested it there.

“Brother… Do you not want me?” rose asked, she sounded half asleep already.

“You know I love you rose…but….” I was half asleep now too. “But…. you’re my sister, and….” My mind seemed to be loosing focus as I felt her breath breeze over my chest. My vision blackened in minutes, and I awoke later. I looked at the clock. it was almost 10 A.M.

“Ugh, lucky its Saturday….” I said about to sit up from lying in the bed as I realized something was wrong. My sister was still lying across my chest, but her hand was in my pants and seeing as how it was morning, I had morning wood.

“Mmmn. Hey brother.” She said to me. She had a triumphant look on her face as she squeezed my cock’s shaft softly.” I would say you’re at least 6 inches!” she said a little surprised.

“R-rose…. Stop it! I was getting uncomfortable and tried pulling her hand out of my pants. This was useless, as she held onto my shaft tightly. “Let go rose! This is wrong and you know it!” I said as she started to pull on the elastic on my boxers downward.

“But brother, your hard cock here says that you need some attention!” she said with a teasing look on as she pulled my boxers down to my ankles exposing my hard dick to the cold air in the room. “Oh brother! Its so beautiful!” she said as she pulled down on the shaft, exposing the head of my dick to the cold air too. A shiver was sent through me as I tried to force her off, but no use came from it.

“Oh brother. Are you cold? Let me help you warm up. Please.” The put her most innocent look on and put my cock against her cheek to make her look more innocent.

“No rose! Stop it now!” I said to her, a little angry that I was not resisting that much. As I expected though, she started to slowly stoke my cock up and down. That did not last long though, she started stroking faster and faster till I could not stop her anymore and dropped my head back and accepted what my sister was doing.

“Oh, so you do like this, huh brother?” Rose asked teasingly as she started to kiss my shaft all over. I still could hardly believe my own sister was doing this as she licked the head of my hard dick a few times, then pushed her mouth and lips down around my cock, sending it from cold to warm in a split second.

“Ah! Goddamn Rose! Y-your mouth is so warm!” I gritted my teeth as she swallowed half of my shaft, then she started to move her head back up as my hand grabbed the back of her hair and forced her down to almost the base of my dick. Her throat seemed to resist for a while, till I did it a few more times before it seemed to slide down her throat easier.

Roses eyes watched my face intently as she watched as my face changed expressions, all of them a blissful joy expression of some kind. Suddenly, Rose took over and sucked my 6 inch engorged dick down her throat as I squeezed her hair tightly.
Rose knew what was coming, and pulled all but the head out of her mouth as I came with a huge explosion into her mouth as she stared at me in shock by how much shot out of my pulsating dick, she started to swallow it. After her first few mouthfuls she closed her eyes and made a deep moan from down in her stomach. When she finally finished, she pulled her mouth off mf my dick and stared at me with her sparkling eyes.

“That was amazing brother…. and your cum tasted so good!” she was still holding my dick with both her hands, then she started to blush. I just laid there, confused “Brother… I was wondering if you could…. Do something for me….”

“What do you mean Rose?” I was pretty sure I knew what she wanted me to do, this was my little sister, but I have never seen a side of her like this. I was not sure of anything anymore.

“I want you to…. fuck me brother…please.” She had that desperate look again, but of all things I would not do, that was it.

“Oh my god sis, no way!” I sat up so my back was on the headboard for support as I pulled my boxers back up.

“Oh please brother!” she wrapped her arms around me and held me close to her. Her boobs were pushing into my chest, and I could feel her nipples were hard through her nightgown. I suddenly had an idea to get this horny, seductive girl off me.

“I wont fuck you, but I have an idea.” I put one of my hands between our chests and pushed her back a little, then pinched one of her boobs hard. She let out a high moan as I pushed her back so she was lying across the bed.

I pushed her nightgown up and over her head. Her boobs were huge! I found myself thinking if a 14-year-old girl could possibly be this big here. Next thing I knew, one of my hands was softly pinching her boob while the other was lightly biting her nipple with my lips.

“Oh Brandon, that feels good. Don’t stop please….” I kept this up for a few minutes. Sucking and licking with my lips. Pinching and rolling them between my fingers. After a few minutes, I realized that my sister was pushing her pussy upward into my boxers, trying to get at my dick. Her pussy juices were actually coating my boxers with a warm liquid from pushing against it for the past few minutes.

I put a hand on her soft mound above her pussy and pushed down trying to stop her.

“Please brother! Please fuck me! I’m so hot right now!” I stared at her. I had never seen my sister this crazy before. I wanted to see what her pussy looked like, so I started repositioning my hands to get a better view when my hand brushed over her clit, and her body stiffened as she let out a loud moan.

“Fuuuuuhhhk!!! God damn it!” she yelled as she had an orgasm that easily. Her pussy stopped contracting right when I got in a good position to see it.

“Awwww, how cute. My lil sis came that easily?” I teased her

“Shut up and do it again brother!” She said with a mad look on her face, waiting for another.

“Excuse me sis, but I think I’m in charge here!” I rubbed the slit of her pussy when I started talking, and pinched her clit lightly when I finished. She moaned loudly and started gasping for breath deeply.

“Oh wow sis! Seems like your weak spot is your clit!” I started to rub her pussy lips while lightly licking her clit.

“Oh shit, oh fuck, oh god! Yes! Brother, right there!” my sister seemed to be loosing all control as her hips bucked up and down. She let out a loud continuous moan and I knew she was about to cum, so I changed my licking, to sucking on her clit, and shoved a finger deep into her pussy.

I hit a wall just a little; it was almost out of range of my fingers. But Rose did not scream in pain when I hit her Hymen, she screamed in ecstasy, as her orgasm seemed to intensify by that. All the sudden my face was hit by running water, I threw my head back and realize she had came, and HARD!

After she was done, she grabbed my face and pulled it to her as she kissed me. This kiss was strange to me, it was not a brother and sister kiss, it was a lover kiss. She used her tongue to explore the inside of my mouth, but she seemed kind of sluggish at it. I stuck my tongue into her mouth and did the same to her, only faster.

After a minute or two, she finally pulled away and went almost completely limp in my arms. I figured after the orgasm she just had, she would be kind of tired. I laid her down in her bed, and put the covers over her. I went to get me some breakfast and turned the television on. A few hours later, I heard her call my name.

“Brandon, can you…. come in here for a minute?” I walked towards her room and entered after a minute outside thinking of what happened.

“Yes sis?” I stared at her as I walked in and…

TO BE CONTINUED…if I get some positive feedback that is.


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  • L3gMan13
    06.05.2008 10:10
    Excellent build up. Hope to see more!

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  • omairydaqueen
    06.05.2008 19:10
    Come on!!!!!!!!!!
    Give the next part pleaseeeee!!!!!!!!!!

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  • makeitrain
    07.05.2008 00:52
    Next thing I knew, one of my hands was softly pinching her boob while the other was lightly biting her nipple with my lips.
    hand lips!!!?!?!!!

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  • makeitrain
    07.05.2008 00:53
    great story. this part made me laugh
    Next thing I knew, one of my hands was softly pinching her boob while the other was lightly biting her nipple with my lips.
    handlips!?!?!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2008 17:43
    great story, the only thing it needs, in my opinion, is more detail and to be alittle longer.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2008 18:19
    AWW GIVE USE SOME MORE THATS SO FUCKING HOTT

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  • 8%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3D%3DD
    07.05.2008 22:28
    vagina!

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  • JS
    JS
    08.05.2008 00:55
    Who the hell calls their brother, "brother"? 7/10.

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  • Anonymous
    08.05.2008 06:21
    Dats a good one, u have succeeded in putting me in suspence. Very Good 4 a first timer. Keep d good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2008 15:19
    good

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  • .......
    09.05.2008 15:25
    great story, just that no1 calls each other "Mother, Brother, Sister" anymore its more either mom and as for siblings its bro, sis, or their names

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  • Eric1770
    10.05.2008 00:38
    good job dude

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  • noxious+soldier
    10.05.2008 00:39
    10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2008 17:02
    Would of been a lot better if they called each other by their names instead

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  • Janet
    11.05.2008 01:13
    I really liked this one!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 09:46
    shud have eaten her more Ilove eating pussy nothung like having cum all over my face

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  • whatsupmikey%40yahoo.com
    11.05.2008 13:32
    like a cartoon get the names for us just go to mcdonalds and write on the wall it might be better there

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 17:20
    keep it up. i'm typing with one hand, while the other is on my cock.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2008 17:58
    it was pretty shitty..you suck dude

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  • dsgsdgds
    11.05.2008 17:58
    Not very good

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  • Demolly
    12.05.2008 05:39
    Nice story

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  • wtf20007
    12.05.2008 09:16
    Very Good Stoire And i Hope You Do write more...dont be put off these people who say "its shit" Coudnt write a storie even if their live Depended on it...so Keep up the good work!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2008 18:09
    tht was amazin i like the way u got them together. again again :)

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  • pudge565
    13.05.2008 22:53
    more more more

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  • Deyssuck
    14.05.2008 00:11
    This story is great and i want see how this story ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:01
    dude this was a fucking good story. write somemore

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  • velo
    14.05.2008 20:24
    hot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 22:36
    Awesome!

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  • L%3Aarry
    16.05.2008 04:12
    Although I usually dislikde incest especially when tender youngsters are involved, this story built up heat as it progressed and was rather enjoyable. I can readily imagine that a following story can be even hotter and am eagerly anticipating it.

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  • m
    m
    16.05.2008 06:51
    fuck that is good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 01:45
    good story, need to get the mother in the picture tho. still great story 2 thumbs way up!

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  • lol
    lol
    19.05.2008 12:46
    this was awesum!! i wish i could watch and hear this online, but i cunt

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  • ....
    19.05.2008 14:12
    moooooooooo!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2008 14:11
    it was good.. I would just have rose call her brother by his name and not brother all the time...

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  • Trast_13
    21.05.2008 19:09
    I agree that it would be nice for her to call him something other than Brother, because, to be honest, it reminds me of anime for some reason, and that's creepy. Otherwise, pretty good.

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  • king_198889
    22.05.2008 06:32
    great story dude.... keep up the good work.. loved it...
    waiting for the part 2

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  • Sequoia
    22.05.2008 17:32
    Great story. Too short. Insest is the best. I should know, I fucked my sister and my mother most every day for over 12 years giving each of them 4 children.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 18:51
    haha your a dumb shit

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  • unknow
    23.05.2008 18:54
    haha your a fucking dumbshit

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  • great+story
    27.05.2008 02:38
    hey i am sorry to tell to you ppl that to get the feel of the incest in the story you have to call each other brother and sister me and my girlfriend fantizes about being each others brother and sister and we call each other brother and sister to call each other that is a turn on if you call them by name it just seems like you are just fucking a regular person and not your sibling

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  • Trast_13
    28.05.2008 08:58
    woah, awesome awesome story, incest fukkin rules, ur story convinced me to fuk my sis up the ass

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    01.06.2008 18:20
    OMG incest is disgusting and to all of you who fuckign read this shit need to get a fucking life and if you 30-90 years old i think your a sick fuck

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  • unnamed
    09.06.2008 01:12
    you told us that she was 15 of age then you go in change it to 14 its cool
    but i don't think it could happen that way anyway get a fucking life man it sucked liked hell the part of the TO BE CONTINUED cuz it sound like unfinished anime hentai book

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 05:28
    Who talks like that? "Brother, i want to see your penis" more like Oh, brother. If you were to have her call him something other than brother at least some of the time, then I think it would be a lot better, and think about what they're saying, does it really sound like something someone would actually say? Other than that, it's not too bad for a beginner.

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  • MPE
    MPE
    19.06.2008 12:52
    great story, a little more action would be fine. maybe ass licking, using her "large" tits and a 6" cock is also great

    wait to read your other stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2008 11:27
    Sometimes incest stories are great. This one was shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2008 03:51
    this stories was the best out of wat i have read so far( and thats not much). keep at it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2008 14:48
    Wow! This is pretty damn good! Yes, 14-yr-old girls can have huge tits. Yes, 16-yr-old boys can have 6" dick. What I REALLY liked is that you didn't actually have them fuck in this one and saved it for a later post. 8/10

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  • flohb
    12.08.2008 12:34
    Wowwwwwww!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2008 06:36
    " t sucked liked hell the part of the TO BE CONTINUED cuz it sound like unfinished anime hentai book " <------ lol funny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2008 22:13
    pretty nice, i thought it might not be good in the beginning, but it turned out to be pretty good... and i just came, (without touching.. mind you)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2008 09:53
    good job but try not to use brother to much. i mean noe one talks like that . gooj jovb otherwise

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2008 20:25
    ok i guess but u miss typed quite a few words in here and said brother too much but i enjoyed reading it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2008 18:44
    Love it man! Definately continue, 9/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2008 23:08
    She need lots of cum in her pussy!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2009 18:02
    dude you have 9.1/10 rating... please, for the love of porn, continue. the storie is absulutely amazing!

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  • friggin+awseome%5C
    16.01.2009 01:53
    this was fuckin awseome!!!!!!!!!!! I hope 4 another 1 soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.01.2009 00:57
    was wel gd, came at least twice as i read that, cnt wait for part 2!!

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  • anonomious
    30.03.2009 21:58
    dammmnnn niiiccce!!! MORE!! yer a genius (btw for any others i know im not best speller)

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  • kinkygurl15
    08.04.2009 12:00
    i liked you should explain the sex more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2009 16:33
    its a very good story, just the brother shouldnt be so aginst it, he should go for it and have all the fun he can lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2009 05:47
    come on write full story... is it the true story or just fiction??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2009 17:49
    good job keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2009 08:13
    wow. good story. write another but maybe include a strip tease or something. keep it coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.04.2009 21:46
    it was okay

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  • simplyscottif
    05.05.2009 23:14
    no one talks like that...all that brother and sister stuff....without that, its good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2009 23:53
    waiting for part two

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  • terryliggins+at+yahoo.com
    30.05.2009 19:08
    awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2009 01:21
    I thought that it was pretty good. I like how you didnt make him have sex with her right away. Kept her waiting. Im curious to see what the second part will be like. I'll be waiting

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  • reader
    reader 500
    08.06.2009 17:50
    good short story enjoyed it well done

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  • atthen
    10.06.2009 21:58
    great story man. hope you do another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2009 09:12
    Aids isn't a nice disease to have.

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  • theunknownman
    17.06.2009 19:35
    nice

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2009 17:59
    not bad. not bad at all

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  • tinker+49
    30.06.2009 00:48
    i like it but want to read that mom got into the act

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2009 06:48
    that was so good it turned meon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2009 16:45
    holy crap this is hot!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2009 08:52
    Nice

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  • shadowwonn5087%40yahoo.com
    11.07.2009 01:22
    DUDE make more it is AMAZING, i love this oneplease dude make more i rate you 10000000000000000% on crack. LOVE IT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 11:14
    oh yessss

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 21:10
    good story, pay attention to typos and misspellings though as they can detract from the flow of the story. Also proofread, as she jumped from 15 to 14. It was a little hard to concentrate with so much use of the word brother, it doesn't flow as well as it seems less believable that she would constantly call him brother.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 20:19
    Third story in a row that was pathetic.

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  • harry145
    20.07.2009 18:42
    Amazing Storie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 21:07
    Great Story -- hardly wait for part 2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 15:27
    that was sweet! please continue!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2009 19:54
    wanted to cum just reading that. WOW, great detail and awesome mental images from it. Looking forward to more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2009 09:54
    wow

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 23:24
    I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 15:45
    its got potential...excellent foundation...stop making the girl calling bran "brother" so much...gets on your nerves...waiting for part 2,3...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 22:23
    Please continue this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2009 18:04
    Fuck you and this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2009 17:05
    bullshit

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  • MR+GATO
    20.08.2009 16:29
    GOOD SISTER!!!!! LET ME FUCK HER ONCE. ILL BE LOOKING FOR PART 2>

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2009 12:24
    "Positive feedback only please."

    How are you going to learn if all you want to hear are good things?
    if you want people to bow to you and tell you how great you are, go somewhere else.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 03:33
    great story realy whant to read prt2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2009 06:53
    very good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2009 11:00
    very nice bring on part to please

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  • vinnieboJ
    31.10.2009 23:32
    dude continue the story!!!! i love it!!!!!

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  • Me-Mo
    02.11.2009 20:03
    Quite a hot story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 23:52
    Decent first try. Keep at it, but next time make sure you have someone else proofread your material. I noticed a lot of the time you forgot to capitalize names, which can make reading less smooth. Don't stop writing, just like I said, have someone proofread your work. They'll catch some mistakes you may miss. Good luck.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2010 17:11
    Good story... Tell us more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2010 17:52
    You said she was 15 then14?

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  • Farmer
    24.04.2010 20:51
    I like the story. More please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2010 12:46
    I would die to know what will happen next

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2010 23:25
    Wow. Nice story looking forward to part 2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2010 23:51
    Wow. Nice story looking forward to part 2.

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  • fuck
    04.05.2010 19:21
    i stared fucking my sister wen she was 4 going on 5 an i was 10 i cumm inside my sister all the time that was 37 year ago an we are till fucking to this day the best pussy i every had sister is the best

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2010 21:21
    This story is amazing, I hope we can hear more like this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2010 16:34
    a lot of spelling faults and that Brother that rose sas all the time is freakin anoying

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2010 02:42
    i cant tell you how much it pissed me off that you keep referring to her as rose, and she says "Brother. Brother. oh brother." seriously dude wtf? did that slip your mind the WHOLE fuckin time you were writing this? so fucking repetitive.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2010 02:46
    i cant tell you how much it pissed me off that you keep referring to her as rose, and she says "Brother. Brother. oh brother." seriously dude wtf? did that slip your mind the WHOLE fuckin time you were writing this? so fucking repetitive.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2010 01:46
    Hey man what happened next I would like to know. Oh by the way that was an awesome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2010 04:17
    Nice story! Check spelling

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2010 21:47
    excellent, please make more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 16:32
    great story liked it very much. you should write a second part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2010 08:45
    very good i loved it !!! part 2 plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2011 05:46
    Ok dude first of all a girl never ever EVER cums after one touch on her clit (I would know ima girl) and 2 rose calling Brandon "brother" the whole time was so fucking annoying, it's ok sometimes but after the tenth time it was a turn off. 3 where the he'll was the mother in this? U failed to mention if she was at work or asleep or out with friends or something! That's a very big factor! And fourthly his dick needs to be bigger! Girls like 8 inch+! these are things to consider in part 2 (please do part 2!) and it was an alright story

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  • iwant3bigdicks
    05.12.2012 09:33
    I DISAGREE WITH THE GIRL THAT SAID GIRLS DON'T CUM 4RM JUST A TOUCH.....WELL I'M A WOMAN AND MY MAN MAKES ME CUM SOMETIMES 4RM JUST A TOUCH....SOMETIMES I CUM WHEN I FEEL HIS BREATH ON MY CLIT....BUT THEN AGAIN MY HUSBAND KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING AND I HAVE A VERY SENSITIVE PUSSY

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2013 21:13
    THE SERIES NEEDS A GOOD EDITING YOU REALLY FUCKED UP THE SPELLING.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 14:34
    she needs to be 2yrs younger and he needs to be 3inches bigger. when i was 11 i was introduced to a really big cock by my best friends dad. he was about 10inches and did me and his daughter. i never could take it all in my kitty but did get it all im my butt and loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 15:33
    she needs to be 2yrs younger and he needs to be 3inches bigger. when i was 11 i was introduced to a really big cock by my best friends dad. he was about 10inches and did me and his daughter. i never could take it all in my kitty but did get it all im my butt and loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 15:33
    she needs to be 2yrs younger and he needs to be 3inches bigger. when i was 11 i was introduced to a really big cock by my best friends dad. he was about 10inches and did me and his daughter. i never could take it all in my kitty but did get it all im my butt and loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2013 02:48
    you need an anatomy lesson the hymen covers the entrance to the vagina it is not deep inside it. you also need to use a good editor your spelling sucks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2014 14:57
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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2015 19:27
    It's weird that she calls him "brother". Siblings don't do that.

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  • m1990
    10.04.2016 16:48
    Love it

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