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My Party

Author: Unknown user

Date: 11 May 2008

Anal, True Story, Blowjob, Consensual Sex

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When I was 14, I had a birthday party in my family's newly completed game room. It was above the garage, and had originally been intended to be a place where my friends and I could hang out. But once it was finished, I realized just how cool it was.
So my first party in the room had just started. I was not a really popular kid, but I had lots of friends and about 15 of them were here. We started my party slow, we played some XBox, ate pizza, and my guy friends and I played paintball while the girls watched. As the night progressed, we watched a movie--Shoot 'Em Up (the sex scenes in it, while softcore, gave all us hormonally charged, horny guys hard-ons that we were uncertain whether to hide from the girls or advertise to them), and sat around and talked about various diverse topics, ranging from teachers at the high school to movies to who had gone the farthest with people they had dated.
Of course, none of the girls were allowed to stay too late, so as the clock rolled around to about midnight, the girl's parents began to stop by to pick them up. The guys stayed inside and played around while I, for politeness' sake, walked the girls out to their cars and told them the standard goodbyes and thanks for comings and see you laters. Before I knew it all the girls except for Lily and Sarah were gone. Lily and Sarah were next door neighbors, and just one parent of one of the girls would pick them both up and drive them both home. Tonight, however, no parent came for either of the girls. We sat outside for over an hour waitng, but no one came. My mom eventually walked out to us and asked the girls if their parents had known to come get them. Sarah answered yes. Mom offered to drive them home, but they graciously refused and said that their parents would be here soon. Mom said okay, and with some reluctance, said she was going inside to go to bed and to wake her up if they decided they needed a ride home. She also said that they could use the phone to call home if they wanted.
Now I should explain something to you, reader. Both Lily and Sarah were the most beautiful girls. Lily was around 5'7'', six inches shorter than me. She had long legs, tan skin, a heavenly face, and a perfect figure. I had always liked to look at her breasts, but had always made sure she didn't catch me, fearing that things miught become awkward between us. Tonight, however, she had caught me. She was wearing an impossibly short miniskirt and a low cut white shirt that had no shoulder straps and stayed on simply by being tight. Under this she was wearing a slightly higher cut brown spaghetti strap shirt that squeezed her breasts together and showed off a wonderful amount of her 33c cleavage. When she had seen me looking at her tits, we had been watching Shoot 'Em Up, and I had been just stopped hiding the huge bulge in my pants, thinking that it might be time to show some of these girls what I had. I had frozen as her eyes met mine, and had been about to stammer some lame excuse for why I was staring at her wonderful, perfectly proportioned breasts, when she winked at me and licked her lips seductively. I had been trying to get her alone since then to ask her what the hell that was and if she was, you know, into me, but my chance had never come.
Sarah was about 5'10'', and she was just as sexy as Lily. She had a perfect, tight ass, and long legs, with large breasts-I'd say a 34d- and sexy, but innocent looking face. She had red hair of the kind that seemed to always make my head say"FUCK HER. DO IT NOW. IT WILL BE WORTH THE CONSEQUENCES". She was wearing a tight pair of jeans with ripped holes that showcased her perfect thighs, and a yellow top that made her tits stand out beautifully. She knew that I had been ogling her for a while, and when she caught me for the first time about a month ago. From then on, she had started striking sexy poses whenever she knew I was looking at her.
Despite both girl's reactions to me feeling them up with my eyes, I had been to afraid to ask either one to go out with me.
Back to the story.
Around two o'clock, the guys all left as their parents came and got them. Lily, Sarah, and I went back into the room above the garage to watch 300 as we waited for a parent of either of them.
During the 1st sex scene of the move, I, of course, got a huge boner. I did not hide it.
Suddenly Lily rested her head on my right shoulder, and Sarah rested hers on my left. My hard-on got even bigger-if that was possible-and formed what looked like a tent in my jeans.
My voice shook as I asked the two what they were doing. Lily smiled and paused the movie.
Sarah laughed. "You really don't know...wow."
Lily grinned, saying,"We know you like us, Rob. We've known for way longer than you think."
Sarah smailed as she said, "We like you too. We always have. And tonight we are going to make our feelings clear."
Lily spoke next."Our parents never came and got us because they think we went to spend the night at Beth's after the party. Tonight, we are free."
Sarah nodded. "We knew that we were going to seduce you tonight, Rob. And now, I think, Lily, that we should start."
Lily nodded. My voice shook with both fear (that I was dreaming)and excitement (just in case I wasn't dreaming) as I said, "Seduce me?"
Both nodded, smiled, then leaned back and took off their shirts.
My mouth dropped open as I looked at the two most beautiful racks I had ever seen. Better than the tits in pornos. Way better.
Lily's nipples were small and stiff, and her aureolae were large and beautiful. Sarah's tits had larger nipples that were already stiff too, and her aureolae were smaller compared to her larger breasts.
Sarah said,"Stop drooling, Rob. Either that or think of a better place to put your spit."
I looked into her eyes questioningly. She nodded, then both she and Lily slid closer to me and put their tits right in my face. My tongue went out and gently tasted first Sarah's, then Lily's beautiful breasts. Both girls moaned as soon as my tongue made contact. I went back to Sarah and licked her right tit repeatedly, while working my hands around Lily's nipples, stroking and rolling them between my fingers. I switched my tongue to Sarah's other tit, and began licking and sucking on the nipples, placing my entire mouth on the aureola and blowing gently. Then I did the same thing to Lily. Some time during my tit exploration, the two girls began to rub the bulge in my pants. I took my mouth off their nipples and asked them how far we were going with this. They both smiled coyly and then simultaneously grabbed my pant legs and ripped of my pants, then pulled my shirts and boxers off. I was completely naked, my 8 inch(huge for my age, I was the envy of everyone in the soccer locker room)cock standing at attention.
Both girls gasped and smiled wickedly.
"Now it's our turn,"said Lily. And with that she wrapped her hand around my dick and began jacking me off. Sarah started rubbing her tits along my face and chest, and then she kissed me long and deep. I gasped as the pleasure rolled thru me in waves. Sarah leaned back and then she licked the head of my cock, with Lily still jacking me. She placed her mouth on it and went down as far as she could-4 or so inches-and then began running her tongue all around it and sucking it. I moaned with pleasure and gasped that I was going to come. Sarah grinned around my cock and sucked even harder.
I came then, and the cum shot out of me and deep into Sarah's mouth. She must've swallowed it. because none came out after that. I spurted six or seven times, and then Sarah pulled her head off and switched places with Lily. Lily got my cock to go down her throat until her nose was in my happy trail, and her mouth was all the way down to the base of it. Sarah began licking my balls. Lily was sucking with a vengeance, and I felt myself cumming again. Lily was a better deepthroater than Sarah, but she let almost all of my semen leak out of her mouth and puddle around my pubes. She and Sarah both combined to lick this up.
The two girls leaned back and began to pull off their bottoms, slowly and sexily. When those were off, they were in nothing but a g-string each. Then they stripped those off and spread their legs in my direction, exposing wonderul lips. Both looked to be freshly shaven, and each began to finger the other. Then Lily turned over and buried her head in Sarah's crotch. I leaned in for a better angle, and was delighted to see Lily's tongue stroking Sarah's lips, her clit, and now her slit. Lily bit softly on Sarah's pussy lip, which brought a moan from Sarah's mouth. THen Lily flipped Sarah over and pulled her ass cheeks apart. SHe then snaked her tongue into Sarah's asshole and began to flip it around and around, while she put her fingers into Sarah's pussy. Then she pulled off Sarah, Sarah turned around to face me, and I took Lily's position. I first licked Sarah's slit. It tasted delicious, and it smelled magnificent. Spicy, and new, this smell was one that needed to be made into a perfume.
I moved up to Sarah's clit, which I sucked on until it was fully erect. I felt Lily pull my ass apart, and braced myself for a new sensation, while I spread Sarah's lips and pressed my tongue into her hole. I became aware of a pressing on my asshole, and then something soft and wonderful feeling was inside my ass. This felt even better because I could imagine how much you must like someone to clean their ass with your tongue.
Then I noticed that Sarah was turning over, and exposing her ass. I hesitated briefly, then decided, what the hell, I really liked Sarah and I was open to new things. I pulled her cheeks apart and probed her ass, first with a finger. It came out slightly brown, but for some reason that only turned me on, and I was suddenly putting my entire tongue into her ass and moving it around. I was sure I tasted shit, but it was actually not too bad, expecially when Lily started sucking my dick again. Soon Sarah was moaning and then a flood of tangy, delicious jucies rolled down into my mouth. THis, along with the blowjob, made me come almost instantly. Lily drank all of my semen this time.
We all stood up. I was amazed as, when I looked at the sweating figures of the girls beside me, I began to get another hardon. Lily told me that she wanted me inside her ass, so I eagerly bent over to lick it when she told me that she would rather have my dick in there. I was shocked. But I did not argue. If these girls wanted to go all the way, that was fine by me. SHe spread her cheeks aparts and I guided my 8 inches in while Sarah licked my sack and ass. Lily cried out as I went in, and as I began to instinctiveky thrust back and forth, I heard her moan from pain and from pleasure. Her ass was so tight. As she began to orgasm, her rectal walls squeezed me and I lost control and came deep inside her.
Sarah sucked me back to erection and told me to put my cock inside her pussy. THis was even better than getting to perform anal. She spread her legs and opened her pussy lips as I gingerly put myself inside her hole, which was warm, and slippery, and pouring juices. Her vaginal muscles made her cunt squeeze my cock as I thrust in and out of her, and she began to moan with pleasure.
Suddenly she screamed in pain and i felt something rip, a trickle of blood came pouring out of her, and then she told me to keep going that she was a virgin until now.
I lasted much loger this time for some reason, and she moaned for a long time beore suddenly screaming "Oh fUCK yeah Ohhhhhhhhhhh goooddddddddddd godddddddd goddddd ohhhhhhh ohhhhhhhh" and then it was like a water ballon exploded inside her cunt because a ton of pussy juice came pouring out and it was only then that I noticed that Lily was beneath us and was preparing to lick my balls.I kept thrusting, and when Lily licked my balls I sped up even faster. She drove 2 fingers into my asshole and began thrusing in and out, while she sucked on my sack. I kept thrusting and driving my cock into Sarah and my balls into Lily's face and then both of them started moaning and then screamed almost simultaneously. Realizing I had just given 2 girls orgasms at the same time, I came deep inside Sarah, spurting wave after wave of hot cum deep into her pussy. THis made her scream louder and longer, and she just kept humping me until I had stopped spurting.
THen the three of us stood up and laid down on the couch and fell asleep.
When I woke up it was still dark outside. THe two girls that I had just fucked were laying on either side of me. And there, right in front of my wake up hard-on, was my mother.


If you want to more of my escapades leave me a comment saying so. If i get enuf, I will do a sequel.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 16:45
    ok, very few spelling errors, great story line, could use some discriptions on the main character, and the sex scenes were pretty good. Overall great story keep writing mate

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:14
    1 of the best stories ever..keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:16
    nice work mate

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  • sexiibrittxo
    14.05.2008 17:19
    KEEP WRITINGG!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:24
    wow that was hott. I'm a girl and I came ;)

    Keep writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:26
    good

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  • bekka94
    14.05.2008 17:29
    really good story.i liked it alot.hope you do get to do the sequal! =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:46
    very good- now some bi-incest with mom and dad

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 17:52
    that was a great story you should write part 2 or part 3 or even part 4

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  • billsadick
    14.05.2008 18:14
    good storie,get your mom in the act.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 18:24
    yea right, true story my arse

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 19:09
    awesome

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  • fghfgh
    14.05.2008 22:00
    Having the mother walk in ruined it. But otherwise it was very good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 22:26
    another 1!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2008 22:30
    YOUR MOTHER SHOULD BE NEXT.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 00:46
    well done

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 08:05
    hells ya give us another one that was great i hope to c more from you....great job! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 09:56
    great story, well written. The sequel if this story is anything to go by will be worth the read!

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  • blackley1
    15.05.2008 10:16
    great!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 16:15
    write another one!!

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  • lmnop
    15.05.2008 16:25
    that was a great story

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  • Lol
    Lol
    15.05.2008 16:31
    Pretty nice story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 18:52
    write another one soon, it was good, but personally stay away from incest if thats where the mom thing is going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 18:55
    dam gewd story dude

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  • unknow
    15.05.2008 21:20
    i wish i had that went i was young

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 21:27
    let the mom jump in on that shit

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  • 1234
    15.05.2008 22:07
    No mom stuff please, good story though, keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2008 22:49
    Great story, but work on spacing make reading easier. More PLZ>

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2008 00:54
    gr8 story

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  • Brother+Prophet
    16.05.2008 01:46
    Oh plz continue!! I am curious if the mother joins or not!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2008 02:44
    dont involve the mom, its just wierd

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2008 14:38
    leave the mom out and more line spaces almost got lostr eadin this one

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  • LegMan13
    16.05.2008 22:30
    I say, keep the mom in... to be pissed off! :p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 00:38
    nice story, mom was okay to add a twist to the ending but it'd be fucked up if u make her join and shit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 04:24
    great story bring on the 2nd 1

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 05:22
    WHAT DID YOURE MOM SAY?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 07:22
    nicw stiry man n wat ur mom sayed to u....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2008 19:21
    can i fuck your friends to ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 01:45
    Story was good, but make more pragraphs, use more detail, and dont include mom in sex wise, but i do want to know what she did about that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 02:29
    put mom in for a 4some. let mom teach the girls how to fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 10:13
    you'v never got with these girls and before you even kiss thm your licking both their nipples.... fake much

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 11:39
    nice i love it

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  • pimpin18
    18.05.2008 12:05
    excellent make more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2008 18:22
    hey this is the author. just wanted to let youknow i've been reading your comments and the second story is on its way.

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  • njhuj
    18.05.2008 23:22
    i like cock

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 00:11
    Definitely make more, sequel for sure

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 01:30
    u should really do a sequel this was a great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 05:41
    Sequel common

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 12:11
    this shit ruled!
    sequel, sequel!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 15:02
    sequal

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  • kynan
    19.05.2008 17:42
    sequel!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 20:07
    That is fucking awesome. Takes me back 2mi younger days wi mi neighbour. Rachel. Similar thing and same age

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 21:31
    Yes please more you can't leave us on the edge like that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 21:47
    great story can't fucking wait for the next one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2008 22:46
    unrealistic

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  • Unknown
    Unknown 766
    19.05.2008 22:48
    Amazing storey, I came twice. Please write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • icedweller23
    19.05.2008 22:53
    wow trippy story bro

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 02:01
    dude nice story make more and what happened with the mom?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 06:45
    u gotta have a sequel to this!
    its fuckin awesome!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2008 06:46
    its awesome.....i demand a sequel!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2008 02:58
    yea there def needs to be a sequel!

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  • leopardsden
    21.05.2008 03:57
    we have to have the mother partaking and after playing with the girls, being fucked by her son, both front and back!

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  • leopardsden
    21.05.2008 03:59
    not sure you received my comment.
    Anyway I want the mother to partake and eventually fucked both back and front by son!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2008 13:51
    what happens with the mother?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2008 16:59
    ya bro do a sequel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2008 10:39
    KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2008 15:38
    nice 1st timer, keep writing

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  • fuckme123
    22.05.2008 16:59
    keeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppp gooooooooooooing!!

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  • Big+Papa+Jim
    22.05.2008 22:49
    great story i had the same thing happen to me when i was 14 in my tree house

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  • Big+Papa+Jim
    22.05.2008 22:50
    great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 14:50
    was gr8 luved it
    should make a sequel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2008 17:42
    whoa dude i had the same happen to me but it was on 13 b-day, actually during my barmitzva party!. we went to the roms which were designated for sex (cuz it was a club) and when i was 13 i hadnt made cum yet and the 2 grils jennifer and rebecca did have their periods and we fucked and fucked until the party was over and every one was looking for me! :-P so in the end it was the most memorable party for m...for now... anyways it was great story rob, rlly enjoyed it and so did my girlfriend who is siting next to me right now, rubbing herself ;)

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  • sfnadrnta
    24.05.2008 10:19
    SSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2008 11:20
    tht was an awesome story
    deffinetly make a sequel

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  • Larry
    25.05.2008 02:48
    Very good story that deserves sequels, but please, pretty please keep his mother out of the picture. Perhaps you can have her give advice to him and the girls, but incest is a big turn-off to me especially between mother and child.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2008 03:56
    another, but longer if possible :)

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  • ddaytz
    25.05.2008 22:02
    more plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2008 23:19
    SEQUEL!!!! what happened next?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 00:53
    dude you gotta do a sequal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 05:31
    If its really a true story you cant change what happened when your mother knew about it. If she joined the incest it is; if she gave advice then be it.. don't change the truth!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 07:55
    DUUUDDEE that was awsome
    more more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2008 10:00
    Ya, i h8 incest. The only incest i like is the sister-sister 1. And Yes! Keep it coming.. And say the truth.

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  • bicurious
    27.05.2008 17:31
    mmm baby i wish i was one of those girls...or maybe the forth to join.... made me so wet

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  • connereight
    27.05.2008 22:20
    i beg of you, continue...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 07:58
    i dont beliefe that this story is true
    but it is a god one, please continue,
    but do it without the mother

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 08:34
    could do with paragraphing but other wise amazing !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 15:41
    bullshit.

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  • sir+fuckalot
    28.05.2008 17:34
    unrealistic. he cums to many times.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 19:06
    14 and you were 6'1, had a happy trail, and a 8 inch cock? is your name by any chance chewbacca?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 19:48
    I was about that tall at 14, and had a happy trail from around 12. Some of us develop earlier...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 20:45
    Total bullshit, but a good story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 20:51
    "14 and you were 6'1, had a happy trail, and a 8 inch cock? is your name by any chance chewbacca?"

    clearly one of the greatest comments, ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 13:57
    Ehhh, It was pretty good I hope you make a sequel
    though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 18:00
    Did u ever hear about paragraphs? I couldn't get into it al all, and skip a line betweeen paragraphs plse.

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  • lickthebubble
    31.05.2008 13:40
    more more!!!!!

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  • lickthebubble
    31.05.2008 13:41
    more more!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 18:51
    plz..plz....we want more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 02:13
    mediocre - good i didnt mind it

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  • Xean
    02.06.2008 18:37
    You had six orgasms in that short space of time? Yeah, and I'm the Queen of Sheba.

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  • terrible
    02.06.2008 20:24
    one of the worst stories i have read. not only is this a poor excuse for a sex story its a poor excuse for a written document in the English language.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2008 03:01
    Not bad, You definitely need some work on the grammar and punctuation end of things, but it was readable, the sex was hot and even fairly accurate.

    Don't listen to your detractors, the record for male orgasms in an adolescent male is something like thirty in a 24 hour period.

    I really like the last line "And there, right in front of my wake up hard-on, was my mother. " It's both horrifying and beautiful at the same time.

    Way hot sex scenes, good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2008 07:06
    horrible story.. shit build up.. no paragraphs.. wat was it a story or some piece of shit..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2008 04:19
    Good story, the sex was amazing, but the buildup was to long and it could have used some more paragraph beraks to make it easier to follow. Write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2008 09:28
    wanting a sequel

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  • ReAdEr
    ReAdEr 500
    22.06.2008 02:23
    great story. loved the ending. would like to see more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 06:34
    Everyone hear that? Xean is the Queen of Sheba, amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 14:50
    Great story, write more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2008 23:35
    it was a good story, i'm not sure why everyone is hating, this isn't writing class, good job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2008 23:57
    GOOD STORY
    SCREW THE ASSHOLES (HEHE)
    8/10
    ALEXANDER PHOENIX
    {:<)

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  • lala+%5B%3D
    07.08.2008 07:19
    gooooooooood

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2008 12:00
    Tht was an amazing story great detail, visisualization, everything plz make another

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  • Reader11
    30.09.2008 23:50
    Dude u should hook me up with these chicks lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2008 01:44
    it was awesome.. just space out more.. my eyes started to hurt.

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  • READER1
    04.10.2008 16:57
    great story hook me up wit these girls or at least let me meet them lol. make a sequel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2008 16:31
    Loved it...
    The varied sex scenes made it feel more real.
    Not just hand job, finger, bj, sex..... coz that is boring as shit
    i loved the ass licking
    All it needs is some foot play

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  • Tinnieman
    01.02.2009 05:20
    Why, oh WHY did you put mum in? Do a sequal but no incest, theres too much of that shit on here, its becoming like asians and webcam whoreing
    Also, paragraphs do exist, look the word up and use them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2009 20:19
    Dude that was awsome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2009 20:19
    Dude that was awsome make a sequel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 00:14
    Do it again

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2010 12:28
    did the mom fuck the child or was she mad make another story plzzzzzz!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2010 12:29
    did the mom fuck the child or was she mad make another story plzzzzzz!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2010 12:29
    did the mom fuck the child or was she mad make another story plzzzzzz!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 00:16
    I loved it :) do it again

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 23:37
    cozxE2 Thanks so much for the article.Much thanks again. Great.

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