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  1. Me and Mike in the Tree House
  2. Me And Mike In The Treehouse - Part 2
Me And Mike In The Treehouse - Part 2

Author: Unknown user

Date: 26 May 2008

First Time, True Story, Oral Sex, Teen

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I got a lot of positive feedback on my first story about me and Mike so I decided to write another. Thank you all for your support. … Emily

A couple of weeks had gone by since my first story. Mike and I saw each other once in a while but never had the chance to go “swimming” by ourselves. We have other friends and family stuff to do so it took a while for us to have that chance again. Almost too long for me.

The day finally came and we set up a meet and told our parents our plans to go swimming. We just failed to mention our plans for afterwards. We met as usually at the tree house and dropped off our clothes and snacks. We walked down to the pond, neither of us saying anything about what we would do after the swim. When we got there Mike asked if I really felt like swimming. I smiled and said no and without a word we ran back to the tree house as fast as possible.

Once in the tree house, I whipped off my shirt and displayed my marble-like nipples. I use the word marble because they’re about that size and they were that hard. Little nubs in the center of two barely noticeable breasts. Mike had seen them last time so I wasn’t the least bit shy about showing him again. But I hesitated when it came to pulling down my shorts. Mike had not seen my cunny the last time we were here.

Mike on the other hand, stripped right down to nothing. His cock was already hard and sticking out in front of him. I wanted to play with it again and suck on it some more but I knew he would blow his load all over the floor again, be tired and not wanna learn about my girl stuff. He looked at me still in my shorts …

“Well?” he asked.
“What?”
“Are you gonna take those off so I can see?”

I knew that eventually I would have to - and I knew that I wanted to anyway - so I took a deep breath and let my shorts slide to the floor. Mike came over to me and got on his knees in front of me to get a better look. There wasn’t much to see. I have blonde hair and I haven’t had hair down there for very long so it’s really light and really thin. It’s an extra soft little patch of almost white hair above my slit. Other than that, not much to see, but Mike seemed fascinated.

I moved over to the couch and sat down. He kneeled before me again and was smiling up at me. He slowly spread my legs apart and kinda scooted forward to the edge of the couch. He very gently ran his finger down the outside of my cunny slit. It kinda tickled but at the same time it sent waves of electricity thru my whole body. He put his face down there and rubbed it my little patch of hair. First one cheek, then his nose and over to his other cheek.

I reached down and spread my lips apart showing him my pink inner folds and my clit. He took one finger and ran it along my now moist inner folds. Nobody but me has ever touched those places and it felt wonderful. His finger just grazed my clit and I jumped from the feeling.

“You ok?” he asked.
“Yeah,” I said smiling. “That’s kinda the reaction I got from you when I licked the tip of your cock.”
He thought about it and said ,”Yeah. … Does it feel that good?”
“It feels great. Do it some more.”
He asked, “Can I use my tongue? I saw it in porno movie once.”
I nodded.

I had my arms spread out across the back of the couch, tilted my head back with my eyes closed and my legs spread so far open that my cunny was Mike’s to do with whatever he wanted. I trusted Mike and knew that I could put a stop to this at any time I wanted and he would obey. I knew Mike would never hurt me or do anything I didn’t want him to - so I was completely relaxed and just laid there ready to enjoy whatever sensations he was gonna give me.

Or at least I thought I was ready …

Mike carefully spread my cunny lips apart with his fingers and then proceeded to run his tongue up along the whole length of my slit. He started at the bottom and slowly moved his way up in one long lick. I could feel his hot breath on me as his tongue entered me. It felt terrific and my whole body tensed under the feeling. Then he hit my clitty and engulfed it with his hot wet tongue. I drew in a sharp breath as my back arched. I drove my cunny up into Mike’s face and he responded. He started lapping and licking my clitty like crazy. I think I screamed - I can’t remember. The next thing I know I had both my hands in his hair pulling him into me.

The whole world melted away. All that existed was a bright white light, me and Mike. I could feel the pressure building inside me. I knew I was gonna climax. I had made myself do it a few times before but it was never like this. It was never this intense - this extreme. The pressure kept building and building - I thought I was gonna explode or something.

Mike was relentless on my clit. He kept licking faster and faster. I think he had one or two fingers stroking the inside of my cunny. Without realizing it, I was thrusting my hips up and down into his face. I know it was hard for him to keep on my clit, but he did a great job. I put my feet on the edge of the couch and stuck my cunny way up in the air. Mike had to get off his knees and stand at that point. He supported my weight by putting his hands on my ass and holding me up. But he never stopped eating my cunny.

I was breathing hard and kinda grunting from the massive pressure building inside me. I was so close to exploding it was almost scary for me. Something had to give and it had to happen soon! Then I lost all control of my body. My back arched - My entire body stiffened - I was covered in sweat - Grunting like a pig - Fistfuls of Mike’s hair - Grinding my cunny into his face with complete disregard to how he felt.

Then it happened …

I actually screamed outloud as my body started convulsing. I twitched and jerked as though I was having a seizure. Wave after wave ripped thru my body as I climaxed all over Mike’s face. It seemed to last forever. I never thought that it could be like that. It was like an explosive force let loose inside my body and it was all directed out thru my cunny. Spasm after spasm tore thru me like an electric shockwave.

When it was finally over I collapsed like a lump onto the couch. Out of breath - My heart beating like it would explode - Covered in sweat - And my cunny covered with my sticky juices and Mike’s saliva.

Mike got back on his knees between my legs and lay his head sideways on my lower stomach. He was breathing hard and moving kinda funny. I was so tired that I barely noticed and didn’t care. He told me later that seeing me like that was such a turn-on that he jerked off onto the floor again.

- - - - -

For the next month Mike and I pleased each other with our hands, mouths and tongues. I can write more about those experiences OR I can tell you about our actual first time having sex. I hope I get some comments about this story and what you guys would like to hear about next.

And a special thank you to all of you who left positive feedback and comments - You guys are the best … :-)


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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 11:41
    Let's read about your first several times soon. Good writing.
    Mostly true? What school grade?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 11:41
    another good story keep them coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 12:43
    Hot, very good. Anxious to hear how you lost your cherry.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 18:40
    Nicely Done! It is nice to read a story of slow exploration, the wonderment of learning new and mysterious secrets. Much better than the "Wham Bang" most people write.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 20:21
    post about ur fisrt time actually doing it

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  • maxmanred
    28.05.2008 22:00
    very very good. keep them coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 22:55
    Very good writing. Keep them coming. Would like to hear it all.
    BiGirl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 23:20
    GOOD STUFF!
    CONCERNING YOUR LAST QUETION; HOW ABOUT A LITTLE OF BOTH.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2008 23:45
    I TOTALLY agree with
    READER
    2008-05-28 18:40:44
    I hate the quick in and out sex stories. Add some back ground romance and other essentials things that make Sex Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 00:04
    i would love to hear both, quite honestly. you've got quite a talent, why not use it?

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  • Larry
    29.05.2008 02:43
    Good story with excellent descriptions of the enjoyment derived from pretend sex. Now I am eagerly looking forward to the moment when this hot couple actually consummates their love making with actual intercourse. Beats me how they have been able to hold off for so long while on the verge of achieving true ultimate enjoyment. How about adding more of leading up to the real thing, and then merge the stories?

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  • scubbie
    29.05.2008 05:36
    Great need to be alittle longer

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  • Likker69
    29.05.2008 14:58
    Yes, Yes, Yes luved your story..made me hard reading it !! Please continue, would luv to hear about your first time and any other time !!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 14:59
    THAT WAS GREAT! PLEASE RIGHT MORE:-) WOW! :-) DAVID

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  • wow+omg
    29.05.2008 17:05
    omg write one about ur first time having sex!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 19:08
    Holy Shit That was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 19:19
    Nice to read, love the build up in the story, keep on track, tep by step. Thnx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 20:10
    most oral stories aren't that great but this one was. Can't wait to read the one about them actually having sex. I agree with the other reader that you have talent and that build-up always makes the story better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 23:52
    That was hot. Come to Cali so I can mess too =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2008 23:53
    this story definally made me wet and horny. Next time though stop saying cunny and clitty. It sounds very immature.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 00:06
    awesome story,write more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 00:14
    that was a great story ty i am a fan of both of ur storys id like 2 hear more lol make as many as ud like ill read them just post them with the same name so i no its u i loved these storys ty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 00:28
    very hot!
    keep it up.

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  • damaged0ne
    30.05.2008 01:00
    i actualy love your stories :) Im surprised theres lots of people like me .
    PM me i'm waiting. Maybe we can discuss about something .

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  • jerald
    30.05.2008 01:31
    MORE PLEASE....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 02:01
    Cant Wait for the next

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 07:12
    more

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  • darly239
    30.05.2008 07:31
    Great story. Very well written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 07:41
    cool

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  • latrunk
    30.05.2008 10:18
    Mike should strangle you with your panties when you're done with the sex. Then he could have more sex with your lifeless corpse. That would REALLY jazz up the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 10:24
    that was fantastic, got me really turned on...write about other things you and mike did, then lead up to your first time!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 12:23
    your doing just fine lil girl, you keep it up I'll get it upfor you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 12:26
    hey cool story love it :) much like my 1st time but not with the tree house n all... im 15 now and i first slept with a guy when i was 13 and with a gurl befor n after that :) anyways im great job keep writing. i might start as well. good job

    xox

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 12:36
    it would be nice to read the story about your first time together . . .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 12:52
    first time would be great!

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  • Sequoia
    30.05.2008 12:53
    Goold story. Too short. Continue on with actual sex stories. Mabe threesoms with mother or friends.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 13:16
    The more the better. I'd prefer to hear about how you two pleasured yourselves with your hands, mouths and tongues.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    30.05.2008 13:30
    good story . pls write about the actual sex . enough foreplay !!!

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  • reader
    reader 500
    30.05.2008 15:15
    definitley real sex

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    30.05.2008 15:30
    great story but you really got to write about the real sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 15:36
    I'm going to say more details..........

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 16:19
    write about your first time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 17:19
    i like some of the wham bam stories. but none of those begin to compare with this one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 17:37
    sex sex sex sex sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • shavedandonly16
    30.05.2008 18:51
    My story is the top rated story in the past 30 days ... OMG!!! Thank you all so much - Hee Hee Hee - I love you all

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  • JEZABELLE
    30.05.2008 19:14
    So real. It reminded me of our first time, so many years ago. I could feel your excitement build and explode. You obviously enjoy your sex and now you can enjoy your writing with confidence too. I can hardly wait for the next chapter but, like having sex, don't rush, do it WELL.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2008 23:33
    great story, just make the next one longer

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 00:38
    i want to hear about everything!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 01:00
    Yeah...you need to make
    another one ferr real.
    ♥Sarah.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 01:19
    great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 04:56
    Please, PLEASE Pleeeeeze write the .next chapter.

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  • Janet
    31.05.2008 06:27
    Exact same thing happen to me awwwww that day was unforgetable

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 06:56
    WOW man that was great! keep up the good work I would love to hear you have sex!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 09:09
    great story you should write about you two still playing with each other and the first time you two had sex in the next story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 11:18
    Top story. Please do a series, leading up to having sex and remember lots of detail.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 14:28
    more more and a lot more keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 15:09
    another great story keep it up i would love to hear you have sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 16:29
    I'd love to hear how you first had sex...

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  • scorpion308
    31.05.2008 16:41
    Very good .. only a girl from maine could be so good .. Let's see more ....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 23:15
    let's here about ur first time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 23:24
    Great story, would love to read about your first time having sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2008 23:31
    that was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 02:03
    So far: great story, nicely built-up. You are absolutely talented. I understand other readers' yearnings for next and bigger evolvements, but build the story in your own pace. You now have a nice balance between romance and sex, which might get distorted if if you try to adapt your style to other people's comments.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 02:23
    brilliant. im not sure if you're actually 16, but i am, and i know very few people my age who write that well

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 11:41
    love love love this story and as one of the other readers said write it at your own pace.I will be patiently waiting for the next one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 19:02
    awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2008 21:20
    lets hear about the first he fucked you in the arse

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 00:21
    fucking kinky as hell. i'd give it one boner way up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 00:31
    I love it...lets here the story of the time you were caught by a mother or tather....and what happened then!

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  • George+in+Cincy
    02.06.2008 00:37
    As a writer of more romantic stories myself, I enjoy the way that you are slowly exploring each phase of the sexual encounter. Keep it up. Well Done.

    George in Cincy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 01:34
    great story..but they need to be longer to be newhere close to the best on this site.. u have the potential.. for the next parts.. go slowly one by one..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 02:22
    fuck u, shut the fuck up and continue writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 05:31
    I love your style of writing. It's so natural and easy flowing I almost feel as though I am there. It certainly sparks memories.
    Just keep writing you are doing a great job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 05:44
    my "cunny" is so effin wet!!! i want my bf and i to do this kinda stuff!! WRITE ORE!!!

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  • The+Rokynutz
    02.06.2008 12:16
    Great beginning of a even greater series! i wish i could see what you look like at 18...

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  • dw350sxx%40hotmail.com
    02.06.2008 14:47
    I really enjoyed part 1 & 2, you have written the best story I have read on this site, Please keep them cummin and keep them as true as possable. Awesome is the best word I can use

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 22:19
    that was owsom is there a thei one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2008 23:33
    Awasome huny , i wud like to drill ur wet cunt. Mwah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 11:28
    hi "emily " fantastic only wish i could could have been there

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 12:28
    If this is you, you are incredible. Need to hear more. Come on baby, ride the pony.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 15:08
    c'mon, write about the times you fucked

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 16:25
    Fantastic

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  • Yepperz
    03.06.2008 16:26
    Fantastic story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 16:44
    Great stories! I'd love to hear more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 17:13
    that was short and sweet, i liked it a lot. more about it all please.

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  • milkner
    03.06.2008 17:36
    I do have to say, that was an amazing story

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  • babyblue
    03.06.2008 19:22
    great story talk about sex,and the next time in the treehouse everything please :)

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  • chris1850
    03.06.2008 21:40
    excellant! hear whole story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2008 23:52
    cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.06.2008 08:19
    Sweet, innocent and very erotic. You are a natural in more ways than one. Keep up the good job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2008 16:19
    Tell us more about the times before you had sex.

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  • kev
    kev
    04.06.2008 16:21
    amazing! post some more of this kind of stuff!!

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  • kays
    04.06.2008 18:29
    amazing story love to read about your first time.

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  • Frank58
    04.06.2008 21:15
    hey! you should deffinetly write about stuff like this a little more then lead up to your first sexual expirence

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  • EvoIX
    05.06.2008 01:12
    you should write a bit more about your encounters and then lead up to the first time great story LOVE IT!

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    05.06.2008 02:38
    Having dejavu. How many times did you both cum on the first time?

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  • luckyguy81
    05.06.2008 04:00
    wow. incredible. just great. keep up the great writing.

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  • some+kid
    05.06.2008 16:39
    this is the best iv ever read on xnxx.com!!
    ur good!!!
    keep it up!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2008 14:52
    Wtf! I'm 17 and still a virg. This sux. Anyone wanna help this guy out? I like young! Mail me bt theace@mailinator.com. Good story though. Write more. Make them longer. Put in a dash of water sports and stuff. Hold the pain though. Pain isn't good.

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  • me...
    08.06.2008 04:42
    you definetely don't need to rush the story to "your first time". Just keep up the good work and slowly work your way towards it. By the way, did anything ever happen by the lake? -hint hint-
    11/10 =P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2008 22:19
    woah

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  • sexbabe12
    08.06.2008 23:19
    wow, MAJoR dejavu man! ima die here! i really need a new bf. oh, um, i loved the story, major turn on.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2008 00:17
    these are the types of stories that make me love this site!!!! lolz grat story, im 15 (girl) and can totally relate!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 02:47
    hey this has got to be one of the best stories ive read one this site, im 14 and have just started doning stuff with my boyfrined. I liked you story because its realistic also you dont use vulgar language which is a nice change from other stories...

    great work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 16:29
    very very VERY nice i loved getting my pussy licked a lot and it was the most amazing feeling ever i am not a vigrin and im 16 so IM me at hazelgurl075 at aim

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  • readerxxx
    11.06.2008 16:34
    omg that was the bestplease write the 1st time u have sex wit him

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  • Sockman
    12.06.2008 09:09
    lol its surprising how many young kids actually get onto this site.

    after seeing how you can write about foreplay, id like to hear about the first time. my only critiscism was that the story was too short. 9/10

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  • muminlawslover
    13.06.2008 11:25
    Hi, i've just read both your stories just now and they are great. Please keep posting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2008 13:14
    rite the first time to have sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2008 17:38
    The story was very erotic and well done, and you did a nice job pulling in the reader right away. Looking forward for the next.

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  • Michael
    14.06.2008 02:42
    That was realy good

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  • anonymous
    14.06.2008 13:09
    10/10 Great work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2008 15:52
    a bit on the short side but very hot!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2008 15:42
    great writing, keep it up. P.S. Discovered this site two years ago at 13

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  • %3F
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    15.06.2008 23:54
    I love your stories and cant wait to read the next

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  • anon
    16.06.2008 00:01
    stick it in her vagoo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2008 01:21
    my best friend matt was trying to get me in the mood and I read your last story, and it made me so hot. I gave him 3 blowjobs that day.
    your writing is very good and your story are so great with the innocence
    i cant wait for your next one, so is he

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2008 03:07
    Good work, And ....LMAO Vagoo?"......Anon *shakes head* hahah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2008 23:37
    great story. made me hard

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  • ty
    ty
    16.06.2008 23:54
    Wow... great story keep writing!

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  • ty
    ty
    16.06.2008 23:54
    Wow... great story keep writing!

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  • srgtsilent
    17.06.2008 03:28
    awsome !!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 07:56
    good job cumdumpster. i lieked it ! : P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 09:53
    please continue writing and proceed to the part were you and mike had sex..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 11:04
    very good story keep writing

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  • kudos
    17.06.2008 23:40
    Awesome story, keep it going. I'd like to see if the kid with my name does the same thing as I'd do.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2008 17:19
    just write another!

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  • Bigwoody
    19.06.2008 14:40
    Great story.
    Thats how sex ed should be.
    Play together,
    Learn together

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2008 06:16
    very descriptive, since I'm also a Mike, I feel like I'm right there with you...keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2008 12:16
    holy shit man i got so horny during that story. i read ur first one but it sucked compared to this one. damn im jealous of mike. keep writing 10/10. awesome =}

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2008 21:51
    u r amazing .. i cant wait till i read chapter 3 ... xxxxx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2008 00:40
    Wow, great story as was the first. Reminds me of my first girlfriend and I doing much the same thing. I don't care what you write about next just keep it coming.

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  • BiBabe
    22.06.2008 14:48
    wow im all ovr this website!
    Anyways;
    Great story! I ddnt get to read yur first one; but ill look 4 it[=
    Great work!
    I wonder what my first is gunnah be like{=

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  • therane
    25.06.2008 01:41
    This is a really great story, reminds me alot of me and my gf ;)

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  • darkzole
    26.06.2008 05:49
    write more that was verry good and well writen even thoue i can spell my self lol

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  • mrjones502003
    29.06.2008 09:10
    hi em...i never know when you're on so please call me? thanks, i really like your writing and want to see more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2008 23:08
    Really well written, could be longer. I think their first time with sex would be cool

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  • sneakypete96761
    19.07.2008 11:39
    Sounds good how do we know it is true?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2008 22:52
    sorry to say but this kinda was boring

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2008 05:23
    more!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Dragon+Lord
    27.08.2008 02:19
    Very Good and yeah I'd love to read about your actual First Time.

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  • anonymously
    11.09.2008 10:18
    first time please!!!!

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  • denise
    28.09.2008 13:26
    Hey Girl that was great! I wish i had that much fun LOL my first couple of times were kinda blah and painful LOL you are doing a great job keep it up and yea the first acctuall sex part would be friggn great!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.10.2008 21:50
    awesome definitly put a first sex part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2008 17:37
    that was good. you should write a first time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2008 23:28
    I loved it deffinatly write a third story

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  • Mr_E
    31.10.2008 17:29
    Brilliant, fantastic, amazing, wonderful, sensational!!!!!!
    This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Please don't stop now.
    Thank you for sharing these with us and I hope to read more soon.

    P.S
    Yes what you wrote has had me cum way more than once.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2008 19:41
    Brilliant, fantastic, amazing, wonderful, sensational!!!!!!
    This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Please don't stop now.
    Thank you for sharing these with us and I hope to read more soon.

    P.S
    Yes what you wrote has had me cum way more than once.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2008 00:48
    I really like this one. it showed how much pleasure is given and revieved from oral sex alone

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  • Lezlie
    16.11.2008 21:44
    very erotic, yet quite charming! You have a real insight into youthful sex experiences! My compliments.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2009 11:19
    Great Story. I'd love to hear about when you and Mike finally took the big step and made love!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2009 14:57
    I know it's been a good long time since this story appeared but a lot of us are still hoping for a sequel. I really admire your style and skill. This one was just awesome. It was well written and beautifully erotic.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.02.2009 14:41
    this is a great story. keep it comming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.02.2009 19:19
    I wanna hear more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.03.2009 02:09
    Great

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  • somewhat+inocent
    08.03.2009 20:32
    i would like to hear about both. i guess the oral first then you can write about your first time. i think it would mean more if you lead up to it.

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  • Alf
    Alf
    09.03.2009 19:01
    Got me really hard...just like it was happening to me. I just LOVE the taste of sex and the opportunity to give pleasure to an appreciative lady. Keep the story cumming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 23:01
    good storie were is part 3

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  • JCASARRU
    12.03.2009 23:07
    GREAT STORY. IT REALLY TURNED ME ON

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 19:11
    please make the next story longer and do more oral before their first time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2009 02:31
    You should definetly write more about these stories and then lead to your 1st time! Cute and riviting story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2009 20:35
    its a good story , i came reading it, keep it going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2009 01:16
    I enjoyed it! Two Thumbs Up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2009 02:10
    tell us about the sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2009 02:27
    please tell me more, i cum every time i read ur stories

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  • babeejawdropperzzzz7
    13.04.2009 12:45
    ffffiiiiiiiiivvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee ssssssssssssttttaaaaaaaarrrrrsss!

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  • anonymous
    15.04.2009 11:38
    You have a natural tallent for story telling. Keep it up. There's no telling where it might lead.

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  • scorpiostories101
    15.04.2009 18:40
    awsome story. i hope to read more from u.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2009 22:39
    that was great keep us informed

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2009 02:05
    you should make the next one really long. start with more of this, and lead up to the sex, but do it in one story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2009 11:25
    nxt part plz its so hot make them get caught

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2009 22:03
    damn girl thats a sick ass story..in a good way lol.u made me hard the whole time.i think the next part should start like blow jobs and eating u out then SEX.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2009 08:42
    please post more soon i cant wait to read more i dont think my pussy has ever been so wet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2009 17:40
    write about sex!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2009 17:37
    You and mike really get it going! Write some more! I am excited to read your next sexual masterpiece!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2009 19:05
    write more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2009 18:34
    wow...that was great...you might as well write an erotic novel on this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2009 01:50
    wow great story i liked it had me hard all the time

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  • LoveitBig69
    05.06.2009 15:11
    That was great you should write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2009 13:38
    That story was GREAT. You should really write about your first time having sex with Mike.

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  • marsh+24
    16.06.2009 22:13
    write about first time

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  • CHessji
    17.06.2009 10:44
    WOW, that was a great story!! Just keep writing about how u and mike got closer...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2009 23:29
    keep writing, u should write about both:)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 05:09
    wow i really liked it...Please keep wrrighting more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 12:28
    wow that was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 17:34
    You need to tell about your first time having REAL sex with him!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 20:39
    To sum up what everyone is saying: Good job and keep on writing!
    A personal note from me: Whatever you do, dont listen to any one that says your a bad writer. Your a great one, just new. So Bravo!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2009 12:40
    the thing that makes these stories great is mystery...so dont write the sex story yet...save that for l8r and make it better

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2009 09:17
    Your stories are fantastic! Keep them coming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 03:13
    Amazing stories I liked them both plz plz keep them coming. Then write about when you and him had actual sex.!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 09:53
    I loved your story. I'm going to masturbate, imagining that I'm licking your hot sweet pussy until you squirt all over me. Sorry, but I'm also going to fuck you in my dreams. Once again, great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2009 20:45
    great story write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2009 02:28
    great story! i want u to wright about the first time yall had sex :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2009 22:20
    This is the best story I've read in weeks. Write some more please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2009 19:31
    You're pretty great, and you describe things well, but saying things like "cunny" and "clitty" kind of ruined it. Stay away from those and you'll be fine

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.11.2009 18:28
    did this really happen...or r u making this up??
    but otherwise...its GREAT!!!!!
    write some more please with the same concept

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2010 19:15
    just read the first part and liked this one too. i do hope u used a condom for ur sex?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2010 21:31
    Please write more about your sex life with Mike and others. Your doing great work.

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  • BatDan
    04.04.2010 05:17
    I'm going with sex, this keeps me intertained, & I'd like to know what that'd do...

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  • LONEWOLF
    08.05.2010 18:21
    LOVED IT WRITE MORE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2010 21:43
    fab gf littl mo length tho

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2010 04:01
    id love to read about your first sex adventure.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2010 21:44
    I wanna hear about the time yu and him had sex this is an awesome story keep writing!!

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  • RAW
    RAW
    09.06.2010 16:41
    AS OTHERS SUGGEST, STAY AWAY FROM VULGARITY. YOU
    ARE DOING GREAT! MANY THINGS TO DO BEFORE ACTUAL
    SEX,SUCH AS ORAL 69,FINGER IN ANUS, LAST TWO TOGE-
    THER, ANAL PENETRATION (PENIS) , MIKE TASTING OWN
    SEMEN, ETC. YOUR IDEAS, NOT OTHERS. GREAT WORK!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2010 20:01
    i agree with the reader on 2010-03-22, if you do have sex use a condom. but you are a good writer. keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 02:49
    iLovEDit please continue.maybe u can have ur cherry popped(i no alot about sex and im only 12).also pretty please w/ a CHERRY on top right more stories
    please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 02:51
    suck mikes cock and get pregnant u whore

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  • suck+and+buck
    10.06.2010 02:52
    eat out tha pusssy and get cummed in so u can get pregnant

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2010 13:45
    keep up the good work, the story was great

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  • Farmer
    11.06.2010 16:50
    You write a kickin story. Loved it and it was hot. Keep writing please.

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  • wc_brown%40Yahoo.com
    14.06.2010 13:37
    Yes, perfect handling of the story. Very descriptive but still kept short and on point. We have to see more. Thank you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2010 05:47
    your fuckin hot i wanna masturbate to u and your friend mike fucking

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2010 10:37
    Great start to the story, would like to hear what happens next between the two of them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2010 17:57
    I loved it too part 3 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2011 18:46
    loved the story//More// Love to hear of you sucking his cock and eating his cum and him doing you

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2011 00:11
    Good but a bit short

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  • CowGrrrl333
    04.08.2011 02:10
    Please write more!!! I wanna hear about your first time having sex with him. You're such a good writer!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 21:37
    I enjoyed both your stories. Well written, short, which I like,
    and you tell all that needs to be told.
    Would enjoy reading more, short and sweet.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2013 04:32
    so what did ya all like that little fuck session cause THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWSOME!!!!

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