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Having Trish for Dinner.

Author: Unknown user

Date: 21 June 2008

Anal, Dark Fantasy, BDSM, Cruelty

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Trish's eyes fluttered open. She was dazed and confused. The last thing she remembered was being at a party. What happened after that? She felt groggy, and her head hurt. Where was she? The only lighting in the room was a dim light swinging on the ceiling. It was dangling relatively low. In fact, if she stood on the tips of her toes, she might have been able to actually touch it with her fingertips.

"I need to stop drinking," she muttered to herself, rubbing her eyes.

She stumbled into a standing position and observed her surroundings. She found herself in a dark, gloomy room. The entire room was made of concrete, and it was dreadfully cold. There were no windows, and there was only one steel door in a corner.

"Let's try this," she sighed, walking over to the door.

To her dismay, the steel door was locked. She pounded on it. Hopefully, someone would hear her from the other side. She had no idea where she was. All she could remember was that she had been completely drunk. She must have passed out, but why was she here?

"Somebody help me!" she bawled in a desperate voice, pounding on the steel door again, "I am trapped in this room!"

Her pounding echoed. It was creepy in a way. She stopped pounding. It didn't seem to be doing much good. She was not used to being ignored. She had never been in a situation where she did not get her way instantly. Her parents were very wealthy. She was perhaps the hottest, little, blonde girl in her high school. She was always dating and hanging with the popular guys.

She was a senior in high school and a relatively attractive young girl. She had curves that everyone noticed. Her ass was very thick, well-shaped, round, and plush. She never hesitated to swing it around as she walked, taunting every guy that saw her. Her skin was a slightly tan color. It was very smooth and soft. Her lips were well-formed and pouty, surrounded by full cheeks. Her thighs were also very thick and supple, and she did not bother showing them off as well with miniskirts. Her breasts were huge, large, and firm, and she always wore tight shirts so as to squeeze them together, causing any male that glanced at her cleavage to have an instant erection.

She felt a shiver run down her spine. It was way too cold in this gloomy room. She looked down and noticed that her attire had changed. At the party, she had been dressed in a pair of jeans and a ordinary shirt. She was now clad in a skimpy schoolgirl's outfit, complete with a short plaid miniskirt that only covered one third of her round ass, lace panties, knee-high stockings, a button-down shirt, and a necktie. Her hair was also in pigtails.

"What the fuck?" she stammered, "Who the fuck dressed me in this?"

It wasn't that she looked bad in this particular outfit. In fact, she looked rather hot in it. She just didn't know who had put the clothes on her. The small shirt clenched her busty breasts together, the short skirt revealed her beautifully sculpted thighs, and the pigtails made her look all the more cute. Her curves were clearly outlined by the tight clothing.

"Somebody help me! Please!" she yelled, banging on the steel door.

The cold was beginning to get to her. She wrapped her arms around her body, squishing her breasts further together. Her soft skin felt numb, her teeth were chattering, and she felt as if she was freezing.

"Will somebody open this door!" she wailed at the top of her lungs.

As if to answer her, the door popped open, and two huge men in ski masks walked into the room. Before she could think of anything to say, Trish was forced face-first onto the ground. She struggled, but the men held her tight in the face-down position.

"What is this?" Trish screamed, "Let go of me! Where am I? Let me go!"

Her pleas were useless, and her struggling even more so. The two masked men had her arms pinned behind her back. The cold floor smothered Trish's breasts, which were pinned very tightly against the concrete tiles. All she could do was kick her legs.

She watched as a third masked man entered the room. He was pushing a wheeled table in front of him. From her position on the floor, she could not tell what was on the table. It looked like one of the tables that doctors kept their utensils on. She struggled some more, but the two men held her in place.

Following the third masked man was an obese man in a detective's coat. His entire body was covered by the huge coat, but his face was clearly visible. He was a rather ugly man. He had warts across his face, a giant nose with hairs sticking out of the nostrils, and crooked yellow teeth. His bald head gleamed in the dim light. He looked familiar to Trish for some odd reason.

"Tie her arms behind her back and her ankles together," the ugly bald man ordered.

One of the masked men that was holding Trish down produced a long, thick piece of rope. He fastened Trish's arms behind her back firmly and tightly. She squirmed around, but it was useless. The knots were tight. He brought her kicking legs to a forceful halt and tied the ankles together as well. Then, leaving some rope, the three men left. They locked the door behind them.

"Who are you?" Trish demanded, "Let me go!"

The ugly man cackled with a sinister grin. Trish tried to climb to her feet, but with her arms behind her back and her ankles tied together, it was impossible. She just stayed in that position, face-first into the ground. Her nipples were beginning to feel extremely numb from the cold concrete floor.

"Who are you?" she yipped again, glaring up at the ugly man.

"My name is John McCoy," the hideous man laughed, "And you are Trish Clover. I visited your school sometime back. I am a representative for Blankton University. You remember me now?"

At that instant, it all came rushing back to Trish. Blankton had been her dream school since she was a little girl. Of course, when a representative visited her high school, she was the first to ask questions. This man was the man that had visited her school. He had seemed very interested in her, asking her many questions.

"Did you ever wonder why a representative from one of the top schools in the nation would be so interested in a girl with such mediocre grades?" the old man laughed.

"Because," Trish began.

"Surely, you did not think that Blankton actually wanted you," John smirked, "We are ranked very high. Why would we want a girl with such a poor performance in school?"

Trish had not really thought about it. She had always wanted to go there. It was a little odd that such a prestigious school would be interested in a girl with her academic performance. John had seemed interested in her, but she had not really thought about why he had been.

"I just wanted to get your personal information," John chuckled, "I wanted your name, your address, and so on. You know why?"

Trish was stunned and in disbelief.

"I wanted you!" he answered his own question, "You see, I am part of an exclusive club. It is for the people that are more wealthy than most. Basically, it is a club for rich people. You know what this club does?"

"I don't care!" Trish cried, "Just let me go! Please! Let me go!"

"Our club is for rich people that are angry and need to get stress out in some way. We pay a monthly fee, and in return, we get to have innocent people trapped in these cold, concrete rooms," he smiled, "And we get to torture them!"

Trish eyes lit up with horror.

"And for a higher price, we can pick the gender of our victim," John grinned, "Some of the club members like to torture people to get anger out of their system. In which case, gender is not a big factor at all. I, on the other hand, like to torture young girls because it turns me on!"

"Don't!" Trish cried, "Please! Don't hurt me!"

"And for a higher price," John continued to explain, "We get to select the victim's age and race. For an even higher price, we get to pick a specific person. The moment I saw you, I knew that I had to have you inside of this chamber. That outfit? It was my selection. You like my taste, sweetie?"

Tears streamed down Trish's beautiful checks. She could not believe this was happening. What was going on here? This couldn't be real. She struggled to get into a standing position. It was still impossible. Every time she made the slightest bit of progress, John pushed her back down with his foot.

"Don't be afraid," John whispered in a taunting voice, "I am only here to have some fun with you, Trish."

"No!" Trish screamed, "You will go to jail for this! Let me go! Please! I promise I won't tell anyone!"

"Hush, little baby," John sang softly.

Her begs did not help her situation. In fact, those begs for mercy only turned the sick bastard on more. John's cock was growing hard. Trish could clearly see the huge erection pushing outward on the detective's coat. It was throbbing with intensity.

"Let me go!" Trish helplessly demanded, squirming on the ground.

John grabbed Trish by her right arm, pulling her into a standing position. He brought her body very close to his body with her back to him. Her ass sunk into his crotch. The warmth turned him on. She felt the bulk grow, pressing into her plush ass. She closed her eyes, hoping and praying that this was all just a bad dream.

"Oh, baby!" John moaned, "You are so fucking sexy."

His left hand reached over her body, forcing its way between her fastened legs and grabbing her inner thigh. It felt so warm and inviting. He gripped it, squeezing it roughly. His right arm held her body close to his body by wrapping around her waist. She squirmed a bit, but there was very little she could do while tied up. He sunk his face into the side of her neck, inhaling heavily.

"You smell nice," he moaned, "You know, Trish, most people like to muffle their victims. Most people like to gag them, tape their mouth shut, or do something to stop their screams. I don't. I love your screams. Scream for me, bitch!"

His left hand slid up her thick thigh and underneath her white, lace panties. He gripped tightly on her pussy lips, scrunching her privates with his fist. Her eyes were still closed, and tears were pouring down her cheeks. She felt his hand twisting her pussy lips around, gripping and pinching the outer vagina. The tight grip of his fist hurt.

"Ouch! Stop it!" she screamed.

"Sweetie, you are bound and tied up in a concrete cell with a crazed rapist," John whispered, "I'm going to hurt you. I am going to hang you up and whip you raw! No one will ever find you!"

His grip tightened on her pussy. He was twisting it harder than ever now. Pain ran through her body. She was in a helpless situation. Tears continued to stream down her cheeks. John chuckled and licked them from her face. He began kissing all over her neck. She felt his crotch grow in size, pushing against her thick bottom.

"Oh, it is time!" John sneered.

"Huh?" Trish exclaimed.

Before she knew it, John had spun her body around. She was now facing John. He was still holding her body close to his. His right arm wrapped around her small of her lower back, keeping her pushed against his body. His left hand reached around, rubbing one of her ass cheeks. It was so soft, so inviting. He squeezed it.

"It is time for you to dance for me, baby!" John cackled.

His left hand reluctantly let go of her ass. With his right arm still holding her body against his, he used his left hand to tighten her necktie. It choked her a bit, and she felt her throat's air passage being cut short. He reached up to the low-hung light and tied the end of her necktie to the chain that the the light was hanging from, forcing her on her tip-toes.

"Oh, God!" Trish gasped.

Since the tie was attached to the ceiling, it pulled her head up in such a way that forced her to look directly into the bulb, which made her squint. Even on her tip-toes, it was hard for her to breathe.

"I want to see your sexy ass dance," John laughed.

"What?" Trish yelped.

It was hard for her to talk with her throat's air passage cut so short. She had to gasp for air, inhaling in gulps. She also couldn't move anywhere. All she could do was slightly sway her body back and forth or right and left. Standing on her tip-toes really restricted her movement. It didn't take long for Trish to discover what John meant when he said dance. John grabbed an item on the rolling table. It was a Cat-O-Nine-Tails whip. She could barely see it out of the corner of her eye, which was watering from looking directly into the light.

"No!" she screamed, "Please! Don't!"

Paying no attention, John ripped off Trish's white shirt. Buttons spilled across the floor. He threw the shirt at her feet, which were still on their tip toes and tied together. He ripped open her bra as well, revealing her well formed breasts. She shrieked. Calmly, he pulled her her skirt, panties, and knee high socks down to her ankles. She was completely naked. She felt so cold.

"Dance time!" John growled, standing back.

Crack! The nine-tailed whip cracked against her ass. John swung it around again. Crack! She screamed in pain and agony. Tears streamed down her cheeks. It was all in vain. She could not even move! All she could do was scream. Crack!

"Ouch!" Trish screamed.

Visible red marks were spread across her soft, plush ass cheeks. Chuckling, John swung the whip again, this time on her big, beautiful breasts. Swat! She let out a cry of pain. The full breasts jiggled as they were smacked. She could do nothing about it. All she could do was sway back and forth, crying to herself. Swat!

"No! Ouch!" Trish screamed.

Swat! John paused for a second. He walked close to Trish again. He bent down and began to lick the tip of her right breast. His tongue swirled around the nipple. He then began to suck on the tit, wrapping his lips around the upright perk. She struggled, but it did no good. Suddenly, she felt his teeth clench onto her tit. She screamed in pain.

"Yummy! I'm going to bite your cute little tits off, you cunt!" John hissed between his teeth.

The grip of his teeth on her tit was unbearable. She let out another cry and another scream. She begged and pleaded, but the clenching of his teeth only got harder. Was he really going to bite it off? She felt his teeth pulling on it. The flesh around her tit stretched out. Yet again, she screamed. The teeth tightened. He swung his head around, stretching the breast out more.

"Ouch!" Trish screamed, "Stop! Please! Stop! It hurts!"

His teeth let go, and she let out a sigh of relief. The tit must have swollen at least twice its original size from the harsh treatment it had endured. It was still very difficult for her to breathe, and her feet were beginning to cramp from being on the tip-toes for so long. John's palm rubbed her swollen breast, caressing it softly.

"Please," Trish begged, "No more."

John stepped back again, and swung the whip. Smack! The nine tails assaulted her breasts again. Swat! They whipped her ass cheeks. She swayed around, but it did no good. Crack! They cracked against her butt cheeks again. Swat! Yet another smack on the butt. The nine tails really hurt. Every strike was followed by her sexy scream. Slap! That one was on her breasts. Smack! That one swatted her belly.

"Ouch!" she cried.

John grabbed her by her pigtails with his right hand, pulling her body towards him. He clenched his teeth onto her right breast again. She shrieked. Not again!

"No!" she screamed, "Stop it! Stop it! It hurts!"

"Oh, scream, you cunt!" John hissed, letting go of the grip his teeth had on her breast.

He stepped back. Swat! Another time across her ass. Her back arched, and she cringed in utter pain. He walked in front of her and swung the whip again. Crack! It smacked her across her belly. She could not take it. It hurt so bad. She struggled, and she felt the tie gripping her throat.

"Ouch!" she whimpered, "Stop! Please! Ouch!"

"Oh, yeah!" John cackled, "Scream!"

Crack! Across her belly again. The pain shot through her body. She was helpless. He walked behind her and swung the whip. Slap! The nine tails stung as they whipped across the back of her thighs. Swat! Each tail left a throbbing red streak on her skin.

"Ouch! Ouch!" Trish shrilled.

John dropped the whip and walked up to her again. Face to face, he reached his hands around her, hugging her closely. She was still on her tip toes, still looking up at the light. He pushed her plush and supple body against his. She was so warm! He pinched her swollen right breast. She closed her eyes, ready for another bite. However, this time, he did not bite down on it. He loosened his pinch and began rubbing it with his palm. He squished it, squeezed it, and slapped it around.

"Yes!" John whispered, "Nice! Just as soft and cushiony as I dreamed you would be! Oh, yes! I've been planning this for such a long time, Trish!"

"Please," Trish whimpered, "Don't."

"Now," John chuckled, "You get fucked!"

He let her body go for a bit. She was gagging on the choking grip of the necktie. He reached on the rolling table and took a big knife. She shrieked. He brought the knife up, and to Trish's disbelief, cut the necktie. She fell to the ground, gasping for air. She could breathe!

"Open your legs, bitch!" John commanded, holding the knife in a menacing way, "Open them up, sweetie, or I will slice off your swollen breast!"

"I can't!" Trish cried, "You tied my ankles together!"

"Bitch, don't get an attitude!" John yelled, "I know you can open your knees up! Open your fucking knees, baby, and let me slide in between your legs. I am going to fuck you!"

"No!" Trish screamed, "You aren't fucking me!"

Angered, John grabbed Trish by the neck. He choked her and lifted her into a standing position. He spun her around so that her back was to him. Again, his right arm wrapped around her waist so as to grip her body close to his body. She struggled, but since she was tied up, it did no good. His left hand, which held the knife, went to her throat. He ran the dull side of the knife across her neck.

"You are going to open up," John smiled.

He put the knife back onto the wheeled table. Trish's body squirmed around, but John kept her mushed close to him with his right arm still around her waist. She felt his large cock push against her ass cheek through his detective's coat. She whimpered. He grabbed an electric device, which was no larger than a television remote control, from the wheeled table.

"You know, Trish," John whispered, "You should have listened, honey. This thing is used for unruly cattle and animals."

Trish could see two pointy tips at the top of the device. John clicked a button on the small device. There were three levels of voltage on the device - low, medium, and high. He turned it onto medium. An electric current sparked from one tip to the other. It gleamed in the air with a weird zapping noise. The electric current flowed across the tips. She shrunk back in fear and trepidation. That line of electricity looked frightening.

"It is used to electrically shock them when they aren't doing what they're told," John snickered, "You are my pet, and you aren't doing what your told, baby. I have no choice."

He turned off the device, moved it down to her pussy, and let the two tips touch her pussy lips, cramming it between her tightly fastened thighs. He shoved the device deep into her pussy. He snickered. She was scared now, and he could tell. She was going to open her legs for him. He already knew he had won.

"No! Don't turn it on!" Trish gasped, "Please! Help me! God! No! Not There!"

"Ready to open those legs?" John asked.

"Yes! Yes! Anything! Please!" Trish pleaded.

"Well, nothing assures me more than a little voltage up your pussy!" Johns hissed, "Here we go!"

"Please! No! I'll do anything! I'll do everything you want me to do!" Trish pleaded, "I will open my legs! I will suck your cock! You can fuck me! Anything! Just don't shock me! Please! Don't shock me! Please! Don't!"

John's right arm gripped her body tighter than ever now. He was holding her tightly against his body. He could feel her squirming, he could sense her fear, and he loved every single perverted second of it. He smiled. He loved letting girls think that he was going to let them off the hook.

"Well, baby," John hesitated, "That was pretty convincing, but I still want to shock you!"

"No!" Trish screamed.

His right hand grabbed a handful of blonde hair, bringing her head backwards next to his. He kissed her lightly on the cheek. His left hand kept the device crammed deep into her pussy. He turned it on medium. Bzzt! The electric shock ran into her beautiful body, causing her to jolt. Her eyes widened.

"Ye-oawww!" she screamed, "Yeeek!"

"Just so we understand each other," John whispered.

The current kept flowing through her body, causing her to squirm ferociously. John adjusted the current from medium to high. The jolt shot up through Trish's body harder. Her eyes were wide open, and her mouth was ajar. She was screaming for her life. She was screaming at the top of her lungs, and it made John all the more horny. High voltage ran through her sexy little core.

"Yaaa-ouch!" she screamed, shaking uncontrollably, "Oh God! Eeaahh! Stop! Aaah! No! Aaah!"

"If you live through this, sweetheart, I am going to fuck you!" John whispered.

His left hand buried the device deeper into the blonde beauty's pussy. She screamed, and tears rolled down her pouty cheeks. Why hadn't she just opened her damn legs? Why did she have to be so stubborn? She regretted refusing to open up for this pervert. Things had gone from bad to worse. The smell of burning flesh filled the air. Her pussy was being damaged. Smoke began flowing into her nostrils from her burning pussy.

"You're cooking!" John giggled, "Are you ready to fuck, baby?"

"Ye-oawww!" she screamed, "Yes! Just get that thing out of my bod-eeaahh! Aaah! Yaaa-uuuh! Uuuh!"

John stuffed the device in as deep as it could go for one last moment. Trish cried out in pure agony. John then turned off the electricity. Trish nearly fainted. The electricity had been painful. John let her body fall to the floor. She felt jittery. Her pussy felt as if it were on fire. Smoke was coming out of the lips, and the entire crotch area seemed burnt and cooked.

"That was hot," John chuckled, "Literally."

Trish cried, lying on the floor face-up. Without even being asked to, she opened her knees up, revealing her cooked pussy. John smiled. He was basking in the glory of what he had done to this poor, innocent girl. He had ruined her! Her pussy was damaged beyond repair, and he was proud of it. She had become his sick work of art. He was an artist!

"It smells like steak," John licked his lips.

"My legs are open," Trish sobbed, "Do what you want. You win. I will fuck."

"Oh, Trish," John smiled, "Have you lost all hope? Well, let me tell you something, sweetheart. Your pussy is entirely too burnt for me to fuck. My dick only goes into places that are fresh and raw."

"So you aren't going to fuck me?" Trish asked, somewhat confused.

"Oh, I still will, baby. Don't worry about that. I will fuck you in your sweet asshole. Besides, I am aware of the fact that some guys have fucked your pussy already," John laughed, "I will, however, be the first to take your ass!"

Trish shuttered at the thought. She had never been fucked in her ass. Many of her boyfriends had fucked her, but none of them in her ass. That had always been her requirement. That was her stipulation with sex. She had promised herself that she would never ever take it in the ass.

"But don't bother turning over," John smiled, "I still have some use for your wide open legs."

"What are you going to do?" Trish asked, someone intimidated.

John chuckled, but did not answer the question. He grabbed something from the rolling table, but Trish could not see what it was. He stuffed it into his coat pocket. Trish did not know what was going on. She decided not to resist. If she resisted, that electric shocker might come back. What if his plans were worse than the shocker? Not likely. Nothing could be worse than that form of heartless torture.

She allowed John to crawl into the loop that was formed by her open knees and her tied ankles. She was now underneath him, but her legs were straddling his body. She discovered that it was now impossible for her legs to close because his body was blocking her knees. Her vagina was now clearly accessible to this pervert. She didn't care. There wasn't much more damage he could to do it anyways.

"Good girl," John smiled, "You've learned."

"Just," Trish sobbed, "Just do what you want and be done. I can't stop you."

John nodded with a sinister grin. He then produced the object Trish had not been able to see from his coat pocket. It was the big knife he had used to cut the tie earlier in the session. He held it in his left hand. She was a bit scared. What was this crazy maniac going to do now?

"What's that for?" Trish whimpered.

"Well," John snickered, "I thought since your pussy smelled so much like steak, perhaps it tastes like steak."

"Then lick it and see," Trish retorted.

"Oh, no, no, no," John crowed, "I plan on eating it like a real steak. I plan on cutting your pussy out of your body! Cut the entire area out and eat it like a steak! Yummy!"

"No!" Trish screamed.

This would be even worse than that extremely painful electric device. He was actually going to cut a portion of her lovely body off and eat it! He was a cannibal! She struggled around, but it really did no good. She could not hide her pussy from this gross man. John sat up. Trish was lying in front of him, and her legs were wrapped around his waist. Her knees were wide open. He could cut off the entire area in one circular slice. It smelled cooked and ready to be devoured by his watering mouth. He panted at the thought of it. Then he remembered something.

"Trish," John whispered.

Using his right hand to grab a fist full of hair, he pulled her body into a sitting position so that she was face to face with him. Trish felt her hands begin to go numb. They had been tied behind her back for such a long time, and those knots had been fastened in a very tight fashion. The ropes were cutting off blood circulation to her hands.

"Do you remember," John inquired, "When I came to visit your school?"

"Yes," Trish moaned, "It was the happiest day of my life. I didn't know it would lead to this."

"Well," John smiled, "I will give you a choice. If you answer my question, I will not cut off and devour your cooked pussy. Deal?"

"Yes, yes, anything," Trish stuttered.

"When I went to visit you that day, there was this other girl that you were hanging around before you came and talked to me," John recalled, "Who was she?"

"I don't know who you are talking about," Trish grunted.

The day John had visited the school as a representative, he had seen Trish mingling with another girl. She wasn't as hot as Trish. However, the girl was rather cute. John had not bothered stalking her because he had been too obsessed with Trish at the time. However, now that he had Trish to himself, he was a little curious about Trish's little friend.

"Sure, you do," John threatened, running the tip of the knife in a circle around Trish's beloved pussy, "She shorter than you. She was also blonde. She had very thick ass. She was a very cute, young lady. She was obviously not as gorgeous as you, but she was very attractive. Ring a bell?"

"I don't kn..."

The knife pressed deeper into her flesh. If John pressed any harder, it would puncture the skin. She gasped. She did not want to give this pervert the chance to hurt her friend, but she also did not want her pussy to be cut out of her body. The knife threateningly made its way in a circular motion around her pussy.

"Okay!" Trish exclaimed, "Her name was Katie."

"Katie what?" John demanded.

"Katie Mae," Trish sobbed, "Don't cut out my pussy."

"Is she a senior like you?" asked John, still pressing the knife hard on her pussy's surrounding flesh.

"No," Trish sobbed, feeling helpless traitorous to her friend.

"Well, what grade is she in?" asked John with a menacing tone.

"She is a freshman in high school," Trish cried, "Don't hurt her. She's only a freshman."

"Underage pussy," John cackled, "I like the idea."

"Please," Trish begged, "I told you what you want. Please don't cut my pussy out of my body."

"I did promise that I wouldn't," John said, letting Trish's hair go.

Trish fell into a lying position again. The ugly man was still sitting in between her legs. She had betrayed her friend. She felt horrible. She was a traitor! How could she do this to her friend? However, she had saved her pussy from being removed and eaten, or so she thought.

"The thing is," John chuckled, still running the tip of the blade around Trish's cooked pussy, "I lie a lot."

"No!" Trish screamed, "You promised!"

The knife sunk into the skin around her pussy, cutting a circle around the cooked portion. She screamed in complete and utter pain. She squirmed harder than she had ever squirmed in her life, but it was all in vain! After a few times of cutting around the burnt pussy, John tore it out of her crotch area with his left hand.

"Aaahhh!" Trish let out an agonizing scream.

"Yes!" John roared, holding to pussy up victoriously.

Blood spurted from the hole that he had created between her thick, supple thighs. Red liquid rolled down his arm as he lifted the pussy high into the air. Trish kept screaming. Blood was everywhere! The area between her legs, which was once cursed with a burning sensation, was now completely throbbing in pain. He had completely detached the pussy lips, the hole, the vagina, and the clitoris from Trish's body. Between her lovely legs now was just a bloody mess.

John moved the pussy to his mouth. He ferociously took a bite out of the clitoris part. It was chewy, juicy, and tasty. It was better than steak. He took another bite of the delicious meat. He loved it. She was the tastiest piece of meat that he had ever eaten. After completing about half of it, he looked down at Trish's crying face.

"Want a bite?" he asked.

"You disgust me!" Trish screamed.

"You need to eat," John laughed, "Open wide!"

Trish refused to open her mouth. Aggravated, John pushed his left hand, which held the leftover cooked meat to her face. She refused to open her mouth. She was determined not to eat herself. Besides, he couldn't threaten her anymore. She knew that if she did what he said, he would still hurt her anyways.

"Oh, so you want me to force it in, baby?" he asked.

Trish mouth simply refused to open. He continued pushing the piece of meat into her face, but it was going nowhere. She would not open her jaws. She was entirely too stubborn. John would have to find a new way of doing this. He was quite angry at this point.

"I didn't want to have to do this, honey," John huffed, "But you made me!"

With his left hand still smearing the pussy on Trish's lip, he grabbed the knife with his right hand. Trish's eyes lit up wide with fright. He jammed the knife into the bloody mess between Trish's legs, twisting it around. Blood splattered everywhere, and Trish screamed on instinct. Upon Trish's mouth opening, John shoved the rest of her pussy into her mouth. He then swiftly used his now free left hand to block her mouth, so she could not spit out the meaty flesh.

"Chew and swallow, bitch!" John commanded.

Trish's jaw refused to move. John's left hand continue to block the cooked meat from coming out. Trish was disgusted by the fact that her own privates were now in her mouth. She was tasting it with her own tongue. It was disgusting. She was completely appalled.

"We don't waste food, bitch!" John screamed.

His right hand stabbed Trish's demolished crotch with the knife again. Blood squirted out. She cried out, but it was muffled from the hand and pussy meat blocking her mouth. She sobbed. Tears rolled down her beautiful cheeks. She was doomed. The stab came again. She jolted in pain.

"Chew and swallow!" John demanded.

Reluctantly, Trish began chewing. As she chewed, blood rushed into her mouth. Weeping and crying, she chewed up her own pussy and swallowed it with a large gulp. John removed his hand, pleased with what he had accomplished. Trish glared up at him with hateful eyes. For fun, John gave her crotch area another stab. Blood squirted out again. Trish wailed. This time, John stabbed deeper, causing blood to squirt higher and onto his face.

"My dream has come true," John giggled, "To bath in the blood of my baby."

"I am not your baby!" Trish screamed.

John chuckled and stood up. He stepped out of the loop that was formed by Trish's legs. Instantly, Trish shut her legs. She was not about to let this pervert do anything else to her sexy body if she could help it. He had already ruined so much.

"Close those legs up tight, honey," John snickered, "There's nothing to protect between them anymore. I already took the prize, sweetie."

John was so proud of himself. This had been his best session ever! Never had he tortured a girl to this extent. Trish was perfect, and he had tortured her in almost every possible way. He was a sick pervert, and he was beaming with pride. He looked down at his work of art. It was beautiful. He turned her body over. There was no need for those pretty legs to be open now. He could fuck her ass with of without the legs being open. In fact, the contracted form of the asshole when the legs were closed would make for a better anal invasion. She squirmed as he held her.

"Get your hands off of me!" she yelped.

John didn't pay any attention to the demand. He ripped off his detective's coat, revealing his entire body. Trish was completely revolted. His belly was very fat, his chest drooped, and his large cock had random moles and hairs on it. He looked disgusting.

"Ugh!" Trish expressed her disgust.

A little angered by this expression, John got on all-fours. Trish lay face-down beneath him, arms tied behind her back and legs tightly shut. He shifted into a kneeling position. He then pulled Trish up by her pigtails into a kneeling position in front of him. He smothered his cock with her backside. He placed his head on her shoulder, breathing in the scent of the bitch. He licked her ear.

"We're going to see if your tight, little, teen, virgin asshole can take my entire twelve inch cock!" John whispered into her ear, "I didn't put any lubricant on it, so I can just rip it into you dry!"

"No!" she screamed, "No! Please don't! Not in my ass! Haven't you done enough? God! No! Please!"

He let his cock feel the warmth of her buns. He sunk in cock into the plush ass cheeks. Oh, it was so warm and inviting. He slipped his cock to the tiny asshole. It was very, very small. He tried to shove it in. It was too small and tense. She was tensing it.

"Oh, that's right, sweetie buns," John said happily, "Tighten that ass! Fight it, cunt! Make me force it in!"

John's two arms wrapped Trish body, pulling her very close to her. His left arm was fastened around her waistline, while his right arm gripped her neck. There was no escape for her. She was about to suffer a major anal fucking session. She cried out in pain. John's cock broke through the tight barrier and sunk into the constricting hole.

"Come here, pussy!" John hissed, using his arms to shove her body deeper into his.

"Ouch!" she cried out.

The cock forced its way into her asshole. She felt pain jolt through her body. She was helpless. All she could do was squirm, and the squirming actually turned the pervert on more and more. She still continued to squirm. The cock was tearing her ass up. Pain shot through her body.

"No! Please! Ouch!" screamed Trish, "No! Ouch!"

Her whining, her complaining, and her pleads did not help her at all. The cock began going deeper and deeper. It was only about one forth of the way in, but she already felt like she was in hell. John tensed his cock more, forcing it in deeper.

"Take it, bitch!" He grunted, "Only nine more inches to go, cunt!"

"Ouch! Please! Ouch!" Trish squirmed.

"Keep squirming, bitch! Yes! Oh, yes, bitch! Squeeze that asshole!" John moaned, "I want to force it into you! I want to rip your asshole apart!"

Her asshole began to tear open. She felt so helpless. The edges of the hole began stretching more and more. She closed her eyes, praying to God. There was nothing else she could do. John forced it in harder. Suddenly, the asshole ripped. The edges of the hole gave way and split into a large slit, allowing the cock the slide in easily. Blood trickled down her inner thigh. The ripped asshole was emitting internal blood, coating John's cock with bloody bliss.

"You are my fuck doll, now! Mine!" John screamed in joy, shoving his cock harshly in and out of the destroyed bloody asshole.

"Ugh," Trish moaned, becoming limp.

She had given up trying to resist. Her asshole had been ripped apart and torn to shreds by John's massive cock. There was no hope in keeping anything out. All twelve inches of pure sexual pain pushed in and out of her asshole. Blood was trickling down her thighs. She was squirming, rubbing her fastened legs together and spreading the blood across her inner thighs.

"Oh, yes!" John gasped.

His right arm moved down to her right tit, the one that had previously been toyed with by his teeth. He pinched it really had with thumb and forefinger, causing more pain to the poor, little girl. She shrieked, she cried, she begged, and she screamed. All of this only made John's massive cock throb harder. It pulsed rapidly in her asshole.

"Oh, yes! Scream for me! Uh! Scream!" he yelled.

With his right hand still pinching on Trish's swollen nipple, his left arm clutched her head. He wadded a mass of blonde hair into his fist and pulled her head back, making lip to lip contact with her mouth. He continued to brutally pump in her asshole as his tongue probed her mouth. After a minute or two of tonguing, he let go of the lip lock.

"Scream!" he cried out, shoving his cock deeper into her bloody asshole.

"Ouch!" she cried helplessly.

"Yes! Scream! Make me cum hard into your asshole, bitch!" he bellowed, "I am cumming!"

He gripped her head tightly with his left hand, pulling it back hard. His right hand was no longer pinching her tit. It was now twisting it in a painful circle, nearly an entire way around. He exploded into her injured asshole. Warm sticky liquid filled up the damaged slit. She wept. There was nothing pure about her anymore. She had been manhandled and beaten by this monster. Now, she had been anally raped. She was hopeless and helpless.

John let go of Trish, and she fell to the concrete floor. Blood was leaking all over the floor. Her pussy had been demolished, and half of it was inside her own digestive system. She was lying in a puddle of her own blood. She was face first on the floor, soaked with her own blood.

"I own you, bitch!" John stated, climbing to his feet.

Trish rolled over in the puddle so she was face up. She looked up at the man that had fucked her, stolen her pride, and destroyed her sweet body. She had given up. There was no hope. She sniffled. John smiled at her. She was so beautiful, lying soaked in blood. She belonged to him, and she had accepted it.

"Who is your fucking owner, cunt?" John asked.

"You," she cried.

John knelt down beside his artwork. She was crying. A place in his heart felt a little pity for her, but the horny side of his mind was far stronger. His hand clasped her inner thigh. She didn't even bother pinning her legs together to try to hinder his efforts. He began squeezed the inner thigh tightly and roughly.

"So thick," he commented.

He wasn't done. He picked the knife up from the floor. She knew what was coming, but she wasn't strong enough to fight it. She had completely used up her energy struggling and squirming around helplessly. She was out of breath. She couldn't even scream.

"No more," she moaned and pleaded, "Please, no more."

That was all she could do. She could only moan in a weak tone. Of course, this did not stop John by any means. He jabbed the knife into her left inner thigh. She let out a moan, but that was it. Blood spilled out. He continued to stab her soft, thick, and supple thigh. After there were about five or six stab wounds, he bent his head down to her thigh.

"Don't," Trish groaned, "Don't."

Her weak voice did nothing. John mushed his face into the wounded thigh, opening his mouth wide. He began to bite chunks of the thick, supple flesh off. He was eating her. Her thigh tasted really good. The thickness, the suppleness, and the juiciness. Blood was everywhere. He kept biting and chewing. She tasted so good.

"Ouch!" she would wince between the bites, too weak to do anything else.

"Good girl," John would reply, biting away at her flesh, "Very good girl."

After he ate a decent amount of her inner thigh, he turned her body around. He was met with little resistance. He plunged the knife into her left hindquarter and dragged the blade down, ripping open her thick, upper leg. He was destroying her left leg. She had learned who was boss, and now the boss was having his feast.

He reached his hand into the large cut he had made into her leg, soaking his fingers in her blood. She moaned in pain. He leaned down and began to eat away chunks of her flesh from the back of her thick upper hind leg. Too weak to fight, she let him have his way. He feasted on that portion of her meaty leg for quite some time. It was so thick and juicy.

After he had finished devouring a majority of the meat on her upper left leg, he turned her body over, so she was face up. He looked into her eyes, her sad weak eyes. She was the prettiest thing that God had ever created, and he had completely destroyed her. Her face was so beautiful. He locked lips with her, running his tongue through her mouth. The kiss lasted for a long, long time.

"I love you," John whispered to her, unlocking lips with her, "I love you, Trish. I want you to know that I really do love you."

"Then why did you do this to me?" Trish cried, "Why?"

John's hand went to Trish's left breast, the one that had not been bitten and tampered with. It was so soft and so well formed. He squished it in his fingers. She cried, knowing what was to come. She knew what he was going to do. She whimpered, knowing she could not prevent it.

"Please," she pleaded helplessly, "You have misused and abused every part of my body. Leave that breast. Please leave that breast."

"I am sorry, my love," John grunted.

He lifted the knife and began to saw off her left breast. She cried out in pain. He cut the entire hunk of breast meat off of her chest. Blood rushed out of the large round wound that he had created. She cried in utter agony. He took a huge bite out of the tan flab of breast flesh. It tasted delicious. He took another large bite.

"You taste so good, sweetie," John slurped in between bites.

He gobbled up the breast. He turned her body over again, so she was face down on the floor. She didn't care anymore. She was bathing in a puddle of her own blood. This sick pervert had stolen everything from her. She had nothing else to lose.

"Baby," John whispered, "I haven't been that cruel to you. I only ate one leg, you pussy, and one breast. I left you one leg and one breast."

"You are sick," Trish whimpered.

"Yes," John nodded, "I am, but I still love you. I just wanted you to know that you have given the the most pleasing torture session out of all of my sessions. I love you."

He leaned down and kissed her on the cheek. With that, he stood up and walked to the steel door. He knocked on it, and the door opened. One of the men in ski masks entered with a gun in his hand.

"I'm finished," John nodded to the man, "The next one I want is Katie Mae, freshman at the local high school."

The man with the mask lifted the gun. Fear ran through Trish's damaged body. She screamed.

"No!" Trish screamed.

"This is for the best, my love," John whispered, blowing her a kiss, "Bye bye."


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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2008 10:48
    this is so sick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2008 16:12
    i'm fucking going to puke. whoever wrote this story is ughhhhh not even going to say it

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  • GOBURNINHELL
    23.06.2008 17:07
    YOU FUCKING SICK BASTARD, even though this is fake you deserve to BURN IN FUCKING HELL you most likly did halve the votes your self Bastard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2008 18:25
    This is wrong.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2008 18:47
    I don't understand why people click on a story in categories like cannibalism and rape if they think it is sick. Great writing. I hope you write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 02:10
    You are such a FUCKING MAN WHORE you suck at writing who the hell would write a sick story like this. YOU ARE THE WORST STORY WRITER IN HISTORY . YOU BLOODY SUCK AT WRINTING YOU SICK FUCKING MAN WHORE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 02:37
    BULLSHIT YOU SUCK !

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  • anonymous
    24.06.2008 08:20
    Not to my taste, but then again it was written well. I think I would enjoy your work without the cannibalism, but that's just a personal preference.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 13:02
    I don't like the idea of cannabilism either, but I thought you did a kick ass job with the writing...got me hot until he started literally eating her...I hope there's a sequel with the freshman bitch...instead of cannabilism, maybe you could have her ass gangbanged.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2008 17:57
    Love it! I want a sequel with that freshman bitch too!

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  • mormonsuck
    25.06.2008 07:02
    How much can this bastard eat, ffs!
    "I only ate one leg, you pussy, and one breast."
    You go and try to eat more that 2 kg meat! ;)

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  • Alex1981m
    25.06.2008 17:43
    Not a good story...missing to much logic, and not a turn on at all...

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  • Anonymous+%3D%29
    25.06.2008 18:05
    This was so sick.
    So disgusting.
    What mind could you have.
    My god.

    However, it was very well writtened.
    Felt sympathy for that girl )=

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2008 19:04
    Although it was pretty sick, it was a good story. It reminded me of the film "Hostal"
    [I think that's what it's called]
    Write more, maybe a nomral guy not uber rich?

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  • Yezzer.
    26.06.2008 01:16
    It was written well but i dont like cannibalism. Weird though, becuase my best friend her name is Katie Mae and she is a freshman to. ahah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 20:36
    One word: magnificent!

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  • holy
    01.07.2008 21:03
    holy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 12:29
    a little bit to much for me... i felt sick after reading half

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  • Cracktaster
    05.07.2008 20:19
    It must have been rough picking the pubic hair out of his teeth. I wonder if she had any problems with the curly hair....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 22:53
    I loved this story.. Came many times reading it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2008 21:54
    Well this was horrifying. I don't know who could possibly get turned on by this, but if it does turn you on, then power to you! Just please don't practice it in reality.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 21:32
    very well written. Perhaps a little much but if your reading something with cannibalism in ^^.

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  • ILIKETOTURINGHOTWOMEN
    14.07.2008 02:20
    wow good story... =D
    just the cannibalism removed my erection... hahaha...

    very well done hope there would be a sequel more torture and sex... and ease out of the cannibalism... hahaha =D

    nice... 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2008 13:46
    Wow. This story is sick, cruel, and fucking weird.

    You people are some sick bastards.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2008 16:52
    fuckin disgusting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2008 01:10
    no offense to the writer but this shit made me sick. Who fan get turned on by this crap. This was well written but still a horrible story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2008 17:57
    the writer of this story is sick and twisted. Clearly no one loves you. I feel sorry for you. Although you deserve what u got coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2008 23:18
    I can't believe it but I actually puked. I'm not kidding.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2008 02:42
    well written, but, not something id try in real life. lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2008 07:02
    Reminds me of the movie hostal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2008 04:23
    Everything from the thigh eating down was... a bit too much for me. Everything else, including the pussy eating, was pretty damn hot. I loved the part with the tazer. I also thought the fact that the man was all fat and nasty was a little unpleasant. I suppose it does add to the amount of anguish she went through, but it really didn't help the overall visual for me.

    Pretty good stuff though.
    Few minor spelling errors.
    Good read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2008 00:18
    you fucking sick asshole

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2008 16:56
    who ever wrote this is sick and twisted and should never be allowed near people, who ever wrote this should be sent to a mental institute

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  • Disgusted+reader
    04.08.2008 00:06
    DON'T EVER WRITE ANYTHING AGAIN YOU SICK, SICK, SON OF A BITCH!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.08.2008 03:11
    YOU ARE FUCKING SICK
    GO TO HELL

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  • sOMEONE+WHO+IS+GOING+TO+KILL+YOU
    GO BURN IN FUCKING HELL YOU SICK, SON OF A MOTHER-FUCKING BITCH!

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  • someone+who+wants+to+see+you+BURN+IN+HELL%21%21%21
    sorry. this story just didn't appeal to me. maybe, you sould add a part about the writer BURNING IN FUCKING HELL! that would make the story way more interesting to know the FUCKING SICK SON OF A BITCH ISN'T GOING TO WRITE ANYTHING ELSE! above all the story was pretty FUCKING SICK!

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  • SOMEONE+WHO+WILL+WATCH+YOU+BURNING+IN+HELL%21
    YOU ARE ONE SICK, SICK, SON OF A BITCH! "TRISH" WILL BE LAUGHING AT YOUR ASS AS YOU BURN IN HELL! ENJOY ETERNITY YOU SICK BITCH!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2008 20:28
    An unusual way to cook a pussy steak. I doubt the girl would still be alive at the end given the degree of mutilation. Just hope the rest of the meat was put to good use after her owner finished.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2008 01:53
    I have never read anything written by anyone that made me actually want to deny their exsistance and their humanity until today. Thank you for showing me the absolulte most disgusting part of the sickest persons mind. You really are the most terrible and pathetic human on the face of the planet tied only with people who enjoyed this story.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    09.08.2008 12:16
    well im soo glad this story isnt real....atleast i hope so

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2008 13:34
    omg,that was the most sick,disguisting thing i have ever read..whoever wrote this needs to get some serious help...u sick son of a fucking bitch,i hope u burn in the firing pits of hell for the rest of your life...NASTY FUCKING PIECE OF FUCKING SHIT!!!FUCK U,U SICK BASTARD!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2008 12:29
    It's a shame Trish won't be around to help eat Katie Mae. Or maybe grill up what's left of Trish for McCoy to enjoy with Katie Mae, not telling her who she's eating until the meal is done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2008 01:47
    while the story was a little disturbing, it was incredibly well written, and i thought very good.
    people: you knew what the story was about before you read it, why read it and post annoying comments about how sick it was and how the writer should die and go to hell? get a life.

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  • youuxxsuckk
    13.08.2008 09:58
    My my my.
    I don't get on too well with cannibalism, but I do like blood, and there was lots of it.

    It was well written, very well written, though, I think she'd have passed out from the electric shocks, or the blood loss...or died of blood loss. I am having some sympathy pains right now though. Ouch.

    To all of you out there screaming about people being sick and twisted and needing to go burn in a false hell...have fun with that, but read descriptions a little better before you click a goddamn link.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2008 11:06
    Man, I must have orgasmed 20 or 30 times while reading this. Write more, lots more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2008 23:42
    Made me a little sad for katie mae.

    But it was well written. The cannibalism made my stomach turn, and the rape made me hard.

    Maybe write something lighter next time? I love your style, this is just a bit hardcore for me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2008 05:24
    FUCK DUDE... that was some fucked up shit, but it doesn't deserve all theese bullshit comments about you going to hell. After all, it's not like you did any of this shit... it's just a fuckin story. Besides the concept of hell is just as stupid as the dumb fuckers who leave the comments.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 02:18
    ok dude ur pretty fuckin sick if ur gettin turned on by a chick gettin eatin u are seriously fucking sedistic and fucked up to akll u who get turned on u people are fcking sick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2008 15:42
    i knew the story was about cannbolism but this is rediculous....sympathy towards trish =(...however tis well wriiten story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2008 01:22
    your fuckin nuts man you should go to hell

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  • reader
    reader 500
    29.08.2008 10:26
    i was expecting something a little bit less hardcore

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2008 17:10
    i passed out from jerking off so much... that was five hours ago and I just woke up and still had to jerk off.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2008 00:58
    Well that is more a scare the shit out of you story then a story I would get off to. I like some rape stories but this is extreme anywho how do you guys no you burn when your in hell?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2008 05:57
    its well done. brutality is definitely and genre here, and i love it, though i wouldn't eat my victum. but bravo.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2008 16:02
    lol pretty fucking sick. good story, cannabalism freaked me out though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2008 15:24
    I hope you go to hell you fucking Bastard.

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  • PISSOUTMYASS
    07.09.2008 08:58
    Ugh, eating breasts. The fatty tissue is rather disgusting, ideally you should eat the meat of the arms and legs. Also, you should probably cook it first ;)

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  • joefuriously
    07.09.2008 10:12
    Only idiots would think of this as anything but fodder for fantasy. Of course, one wouldn't eat a woman's breasts as described. Even real cannibals cooked the meat (victim) before eating. Based on the negativbe comments above, you folks would never read Steven King, Edgar Allen Poe, see Brian DePalma movies or any violent tantasy stories or films.Keep 'em coming and ignore the fools.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2008 00:52
    i was oly seeing what this story was about but it made me quite ill i'm afraid to say although i know that no one would actually do tese kind of things

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2008 23:46
    wow dude. really?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2008 20:26
    Well, not a bad story, i came but to be honest, the antagonist was an ugly guy, kinda typical of a rapist type of guy, and the protagonist was a beautiful girl with all the right dimensions. John didnt do too much for me but i do like a pretty girl. As for the cannibalism, i suppose i should have read the description better because i liked the story for a while but wen it got farther into it, i was disgusted by it lol. positive rating though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2008 21:00
    u need shooting right between the eyes!!!!!!!! just to get you off the face of the earth!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2008 00:35
    She actually stayed conscious throough all of this...this was really dumb

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  • korecutsronnie
    27.09.2008 09:43
    WOW that was sick and twisted but I think that it was also an amazing piece of writing, I am lost for words on the amazing imagination that you have.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2008 18:55
    Just so you know, if the zapper in the pussy caused her severe pain the burns were clearly superficial. That's no better than eating raw pussy. You suck.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2008 19:26
    HI, my name is Steve, I work for the FBI, I would like to point out the fact that this guy lives in his moms basement with his retard brother and they have buttsex listening to Celine Dion... This guy is clearly Canadian, or possibly French
    p.s. The sickest part of this is everything is true except for the part where the guy has a big dick, and filthy rich.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2008 00:39
    That is very sick and twisted.Its a very good piece of writing but that was so twisted. Its sad to think that out there there are actually people who attempt to do things like that(theres probably people who have)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2008 22:01
    SICK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2008 12:42
    SICK FUCK

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  • reader
    reader 500
    18.10.2008 00:20
    Your a sick piece of shit!!! you fucking dick!!! how dare you!! this is not good writing, and you don't have an imagination, you just have a sick fucked up mind

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2008 19:28
    what the fuck is wrong with you buddy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2008 17:38
    That was the most fucking disgusting thing ive ever read, you sick bastard!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.10.2008 13:43
    sick so sick there are human beings in this world not just slice of meat

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2008 22:37
    i threw up, holy fucking shit, that was the sickest, grosest story i've ever read, u asshole

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  • OMG
    OMG
    27.10.2008 00:01
    I NEVER CAME SO MUCH IN MY LIFE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2008 23:53
    Wow man seriously I cant believe poor girl didn't die before this happened getting stabbed in the leg 6 times would hopefully hit an artery... which hopefully would of made her bleed 2 death in at least 30 seconds... and how does someone not pass out through the ordeal. Not close to being nonfiction nor good its just a guy no imagination and pretty much a pretty twisted fetish

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2008 16:49
    go die, u sick fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.11.2008 07:35
    that was the best story i had read ever. i got relaxed by reading it

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  • sami
    09.11.2008 18:58
    it is so sad poor girl oh my god this is the first time nd the last time i read this shit oh ogd im going to have nightmaires it made me cry so much oh my god wht if there is a guy like this shit shit shit shit i wish i was guy this way i wont be so afraid

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2008 03:52
    FUCK YOU THIS WAS TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2008 22:01
    Ewww... Please tell me you made this as a joke...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.11.2008 20:18
    Beautiful story. This has inspired me in real life ... oh, the inspiration. I'm going to make this author proud!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2008 00:55
    I have just fallen in love with whomever wrote this. It is absolutely brilliant. Well-written, descriptive. An all-around amazing piece of work. Keep writing. Please. Oh, and for all of those who think this author is "sick", have you never watched a horror/gore movie? They're all the rage lately. This story is tame compared to some.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2008 18:16
    you sick cunt, i just read a tiny bit and i want to torture you to see if that turns you on. 0/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2008 13:23
    Disgusting. 0/10.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2008 18:02
    you sick twat go torture yourself an cut off your fucking leg

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2008 00:03
    you are fucking sick. that is sickening and disgusting. and i hope that if ur a guy i hope ur two inch cock gets cut off and u hav to eat it u pervert

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2008 03:13
    You are sick!!!!!!! That was so wrong!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2008 14:21
    Bastard pervert.
    Chop ur own cock dip it in ur shit and eat it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2008 23:02
    you're messed up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2008 17:44
    gross

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2008 16:13
    IT WAS HOT UNTIL THE GORE PART GAY FUCKING GAAY CUNT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.12.2008 00:59
    You sick fuck. You make me want to puke. You better hope I dont find you or I'll make sure that same thing happens to you. I hope you burn in the deepest parts of hell.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2008 22:59
    So, she died, right?

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  • Alex
    13.12.2008 23:09
    So did she die? Did the guy shoot her at the end or did she bleed to death? Obviously your not going to live long with your cunt ripped out and your leg and ass half eaten and your tit cut off

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  • Alex
    13.12.2008 23:12
    So did she die? Did the guy shoot her at the end or did she bleed to death? Obviously your not going to live long with your cunt ripped out and your leg and ass half eaten and your tit cut off

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  • Alex
    13.12.2008 23:20
    So did she die? Did the guy shoot her at the end or did she bleed to death? Obviously your not going to live long with your cunt ripped out and your leg and ass half eaten and your tit cut off

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  • Jackal
    15.12.2008 17:44
    Sick cunts i read ,what, 3 paragraphs and it made me want to kill and torture you freaks!! Will having your legs mutilated turn you on?

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  • rubberstarlet
    17.12.2008 18:04
    lol wow i must be a sick freak to get off on this!!!! make more stories like this!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Twisted+shit
    17.12.2008 19:07
    Sick stuff man

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  • disgusted+dude
    24.12.2008 14:52
    sick bastard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2008 14:26
    wow, i came through... this is disgusting! if i c that man, i gonna cut his balls! and put his nose to his balls! stab his dick in his ass, and make him eat one of his balls. *no name*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2009 01:37
    sick fuck thats disgusting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2009 17:42
    What's "right" or "wrong" is entirely man made, so I won't say "DIS IS SIK SHT!!11". However, I find it incredible that you can come up with something like this. Ignoring the theme, your literature was quite good, compared to some of the illiterate people who commented.

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  • SIM
    SIM
    04.01.2009 18:57
    ypu son of a bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2009 18:38
    dude i think u need 2 get your fucking head checked!!! your out of your mind writeing about a fine as girl being killed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOU!!!!! SICK!!!!!!!!! FUCK!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2009 17:37
    Ok for the people saying this is sick shit... Whyy did you even read it? I thought it was amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2009 21:28
    dood that was pretty brutal, i cant call you sick though because it's under cannibalism and it's my fault for coming here but DAMN that was some hard core shit, you should be a horror righter!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.01.2009 13:21
    You know what, I'm royally sick and tired of listening to all of you fucking people put down on writers like this. If you don't like it DON'T FUCKING READ IT! Because obviously all of you were attracted to it, otherwise -why- would you have read the entire thing!? Personally I enjoyed it, quite immensely, but just because I did doesn't mean I'm going to go and kidnap some girl and do this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.01.2009 00:13
    :O... that was horrible, but it interested me... not sexually but more like if this was a novel, i would totally read it. if i were in her situation, i would have hung myself with the necktie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2009 05:36
    this is a lot like that one movie that wont come to my mind right now.. but yea i liked it, more non se_ually though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.01.2009 05:17
    you're thinking of Hostel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2009 02:31
    You are one sick, sick bastard!

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  • ANTI
    25.01.2009 22:53
    MAN THAT WAS SOME PRETTY INTERESTING STUFF. ESPECIALLY SINCE I'M ON MY PSP AND DECIDED TO READ IT WHILE LISTENING TO A DARK HORROR AMBIENTAL SOUNDTRACK ON THE INTERNET RADIO. I DIDN'T IT FIND INTERESTING IN A SEXY WAY, BUT I DID FIND IT INTERESTING IN A HORRIFYNG, SUSPENCEFUL WAY (NOT TRYING TO SOUND LIKE AN INSULT)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2009 11:37
    You get turned on, by this?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2009 12:20
    this is sikk, it was so horrible, but i could not turn away. i hope this never happens too anyone for real.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.01.2009 03:53
    Holy shit man...what the hell do you think up..im digusted beyond belief..

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  • Curious
    31.01.2009 20:32
    this kind of thing is not really a turn on point for me but u guys who just bitch about the writers work, id like 2 see u do any better! i love gore so the story was brilliant, i cringed so badly when he cut off her cunt!

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  • Archtrucer
    05.02.2009 20:55
    While I suppose parts of it could be a turn on to BDSM, this is just passed the level of sexy in any way, and into pure gruesome. Also, you far overestimated the girl's capacity for staying conscious. She would have passed out or died of cardiac arrest from her nerves taking too much before the end.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2009 00:14
    This is sick whoever wrote that is the nastiest 40 year old virgin in the world.

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    06.02.2009 00:25
    she should've been dead, if her whole reproductive system was taken off, she should've died of blood-loss, even wehn her leg was being eaten, there was no possible way in bloody hell she could've lived to survive that torture, am sorry, although the quality is high, i doubt i'll ever go to cannibalism.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.02.2009 16:30
    i hope whom ever wrote this, meets thisa same fucked up story of his. if i ever meet someone like this i will kill them!! your fucked up!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.02.2009 17:59
    All around, not a bad story. A little grotesque, but very well-written.
    For everyone bitching about how sick the author is and that he should burn in hell etc etc, why on earth did you read a story with the title 'Having Trish for Dinner' which is categorized under cannibalism?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2009 22:31
    Good story, not nessacairly true, but well written. continue
    For all who say the writer can go to hell are wrong.............
    its simply a story... and if you didnt like it then why did you read the whole thing? clearly you liked it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2009 22:32
    Good story, not nessacairly true, but well written. continue
    For all who say the writer can go to hell are wrong.............
    its simply a story... and if you didnt like it then why did you read the whole thing? clearly you liked it

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  • YoungNew+Reader
    08.03.2009 01:10
    I'll admitt, I'm not into canibalism, I just read the story to see if it was something I could get into, it's not, but I will admitt the story was well written, if I was into this it would definentally be a story worth Bookmarking. Not my thing, but great job whoever wrote it, you should be a writer in general.

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  • The+Guy+Behind+You
    10.03.2009 00:41
    yeah to be honest, im not into rape,torture, cannabilism or any kind of BDSM shit, and i just wanted to what it was like, and damn! you have a sick mind, im stay the hell away from these creepy places........

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 23:12
    wow i am never clicking the wrong link again whoever can create this has a fucked up head......they sit in there mothers basement fantasizing about this kind of stuff because they dont have the balls to do it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 16:01
    this was the sickest story i have ever read. However , good imagination.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 18:53
    i accept i shoudent have gone to the link but the only reason i finished it was because i hoped that sick fucker would die. now i will say that was the sickest, most demonic shit iv ever read, and i litaraly almost threw up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2009 14:20
    that is the sickest story ever and if that is what turns you on than you are an animal gan fuck yasel with a pipe.... U SICK PERVERT ....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2009 18:43
    that was the wierdest sickest story i have ever read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2009 01:49
    Hmm well that was the sickest thing I've ever read. Congratulations if that was your aim, I assume It were! I have no Idea what possessed me to read it, sadly it failed me as a sex story as I couldn't get hard at all. Which needless to say I'm rather proud of. I'd be rather worried if I got turned on by that! Although kudos to you, it was actually well written.

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  • alxsc5
    14.03.2009 19:18
    I really hope that if there are ppl like that out there they all get rounded up put through the same thing but are allowed to live and live knowing that they just go a taste of there own medicne. As for the story it sucked it wasn't arouseing it was a waste and stupid. There is no point to it in terms of sex. If you get turned on by this put a gun to your head and pull the world won't miss you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 16:22
    I got hard because i looking at my girlfriends pic and not reading the story
    By the way if i was trish i would have taken knife and cut ur balls in half then cut ur man boobs off u sick stupid piece of trsh whore!!!

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  • gorgeousandwet.
    16.03.2009 18:52
    omg i would kill myself before letting that happen... omg omg omg.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2009 19:24
    .................wow who wrote this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2009 21:23
    oh god wtf that was fucking gross

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2009 18:33
    digusting i hope nothing remotely similar to this happens in real life

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 19:43
    i think im going to puke

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 23:11
    this made me puke up a little bit of my dinner

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2009 02:48
    Sheep shagger...this wasn't well writen at all...and just a little factoid about this story....it's about cannibalism...and it's a sex story....if a guy gets hornyat this...just go ahead and cut uredick off cuz ure no man at all....whoever wrote this should have every toe and finger cut off....and repeaditdly hit in the back with louisville sluggers by preschool kids...and then made to bite the curb.....negative stars like dude b4z....I puked in my mouth btw...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2009 02:51
    W2g dude..u just bece the most hated and worthless human being on the planet....what will u do now????Disney world?

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  • InnocentxLove
    29.03.2009 12:35
    o_x;;
    I know I got what was coming to me when I clicked on this section but dude...
    it's like, holy shit. I can't stop shuddering, and it's not the good kind either. It's like a puterde sickening sensation that I do not find pleasurable.
    x_x
    Never again, will I come here.
    Never, again.
    x_x;

    On behalf of the story, for getting how the content freaks me the fuck out, it's well written, but could have been paced slower.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2009 20:34
    Wow... this is the scariest thing ive read...sicko...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2009 21:39
    im gonna cut your dick off and shove it down your throat

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2009 04:04
    i just puked

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  • reader
    reader 500
    05.04.2009 12:58
    dude thats nasty no need for a story this gross im almost puking

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.04.2009 01:23
    well written
    but this shouldnt be classified as a sex story!
    i read alot of horror and violent novels but thats strictly non-sexual entertainment.
    btw..the girl would have died alot earlier than u predicted.
    u should write a book...u have the talent...but dont put it in a sexual way. It just doesnt work for this much blood and gore

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2009 09:05
    This is pretty well written and you are a good writer, but reading it was painful (since I am a girl). It's like a guy seeing another guy being kicked in the balls but 100 times worse...

    You would make an awesome Horror writer for books and movies....

    BUT IF I WERE TO MEET ANYONE WHO WOULD DO THIS I WOULD PERSONALLY CUT OFF THEIR COCK AND BALLS AND FORCE FEED IT TO THEM AND THEN BRUTALLY KILL THEM MYSELF IN THE MOST PAINFUL WAY POSSIBLE SO YOU READERS BETTER NOT BE GETTING IDEAS

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2009 07:19
    Seriously, that was well written but i kinda of regret clicking on this section. I should have known better,but oh well. I nearly puked several times and my stomach is still churning. This would make a good horror story, but not a good sex story.

    P.S. I don't know why some poeple are calling you a sicko and saying your a horrible person. Um, HELLO! Ya'll clicked on the CANNIBAL section. What the heck did ya expect?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2009 18:40
    great story...but horrible i'm never clicking the cannibal section again

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2009 23:08
    lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2009 06:07
    that is scary. never will i go on this section again. ever.

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  • cannibalsaregross
    02.05.2009 13:57
    this story was so perverted why did i go to the cannibal section you sick fuckin bastrad

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 23:29
    she should have like found a way to escape

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2009 21:21
    that was fukin sick, i puked 3 times

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  • Seriously+disgusted
    12.05.2009 23:09
    WHAT THE FUCK. YOU SICK BASTARD. I AM NEVER, EVER GOING INTO CANNIBAL AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Captain+Trips
    16.05.2009 01:37
    That was sicker than i expected. I didn't think there was gonna be that much detail. How did she no die from shock after her vagina go cut out! Thats awful! I puked!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2009 22:02
    What shit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2009 01:09
    fuck one more second in this section and i am so gonna puke. SHIT. i do not dream of my pussy to become a steak. SHIT.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2009 01:15
    i i i *cries* i feel so sorry for her!!!wwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2009 02:09
    what a fantastic story :) more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2009 14:06
    I came.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2009 23:12
    i just lost my will to jack off......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2009 00:06
    Terrible.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2009 03:33
    i cant beleave that my pussy is wet.......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2009 18:19
    ,!,(-_-),!,
    You are disgusting

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  • girly+girl
    02.06.2009 23:12
    o my gosh, im so fucking horny, i came in my panties, 3 time! iim going to cll up my bofriend so we can try and make this happen!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2009 02:32
    all i can say is that this story is amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2009 03:10
    Alright so the story was very well written, and I can kinda picture it being made into a horror movie, but the fact that it got that far.. just wow.. She would have died from blood loss way earlier in the story.. I told my boyfriend about this and even he got sick from it...

    So as a sex story - 0 stars out of 5
    As a horror story/horror movie screen play - 4.5 stars out of 5

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  • Toxic_xX
    03.06.2009 03:58
    Sick !
    Girly Girl I cant believe you actually want that to happen ...
    Sex story ? A 0 on 10
    But as a horror story, 10 on 10
    o___________o

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  • PsychoBoy
    03.06.2009 16:39
    I am so fucking horny by this great story. More of this please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2009 18:14
    Sick cunt who ever wrote this should die it's plain sick I couldn't read mutch you fucking dirty perv

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2009 02:46
    this would make a good horror film, like the first saw, i am completely flaccid from this, but i could imaging this in very much detail, high def if you will, very realistic...... scary realistic.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2009 16:41
    Ickkk that was so fuckin grosss yu stupid peace of shit...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2009 00:55
    HOw fucking sick! How can anyone get horney to somthing so horable! T_T And i love furrys i though i was different!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2009 12:29
    that was totally sick, how can anyone get horny over that?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 21:37
    This is sick. How can you even write something like this shit?
    You are the reason I fear going out at night

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 12:37
    WHAT THE FUCK , I mean SERIOUSLY WHAT THE FUCK , WHO RAISED YOU , HOW CAN YOU EVEN THINK OF SOMETHING LIKE THAT , LET A LONE GET TURNED ON BY IT !!? you're a sick disturbed person , and so is everyone who likes this in anyway especially sexually all of you who get off on this should be shot on sight what the fuck is wrong with the world , CAnnibalism ??? SERiously ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 12:56
    I can't believe stories like this are even authorised on this site did any of the "moderators " ever even read this , people who write this should get mental help ?
    I think that you and everyone like you who gets turned on by this have very serious psychopathic problems and should see a psychiatrist asap , you're not only disgusting but a menace to society
    what ever happened to good old fashioned values is not even apliccable for this, even bdsm people would throw up when reading this ... this is worse than hitler
    being open minded is one thing but this is... I think i'm going to be sick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 12:57
    has anyone ever thought about the dangers of this and how it could inspire psychos that clearly are out there if I read the rest of the comments .. ? people are actually turned on by this ? whats the matter with your system ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 00:29
    OMFG this is disgusting how could u even think of these things?!?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 06:20
    Wtf! Ths guy shud b banned! N such stories shd nt b allowd to b postd in a public forum! He is sick!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 12:54
    You are all saying it's sick, yet you read it? You had to click on it, and you saw what it involved. I read it, didn't mind it, sounds like its straight out of Hostel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 16:28
    oke....well the writing style kept me reading...but it still is sick ..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2009 00:35
    Awsome story. I think ill have to try that for real soon, really turned me on ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2009 08:55
    Awsome story. I think ill have to try that for real soon, really turned me on ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2009 11:44
    thats gross.. not even hot.. just gross..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 04:19
    YOU SICK FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT, YOU NEED SOME SERIOUS MENTAL HELP AND HOPEFULL THEY LOCK YOUR ASS UP AND DO TO YOU WHAT HAPPENED IN THIS STORY, I MEAN HORROR FILMS ARE FINE AND ALL, BUT YOU TOOK IT TO A FUCKING UNREALISTIC, TWISTED, DELUSIONAL SICK PEICE OF SHIT. THIS ISNT EVEN SEX AND ANYONE WHO IS AROUSED EVEN SLIGHTLY AT THIS NEEDS HELP BECAUSE THEY ARE MORE THAN A DANGER TO OTHER PEOPLE THEY ARE A DANGER TO THE COMMUNITY AT LARGE, AND SOCIETY AS A WHOLE. FOR EVEN THINKING OF SOMETHING LIKE THIS, MUCH LESS WRITING AND ENJOYING IT, YOU ARE GOING TO HELL WITH HITLER AND THE NAZIS, AND I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO PITY FOR YOU. I THOUGHT THE SAW MOVIES WERE SICK, BUT THEY CANT MAKE ME EVEN CLOSE TO THROWING UP, IM A GUY, AND YES, I LIKE A LITTLE WIERD THINGS AND ENJOY SOME WIERD STORIES BUT THIS IS JUST WRONG, I CANT EXPRESS ENOUGH HOW MUCH I WANT YOU TO BURN IN HELL AND MAY GOD NOT! HAVE MERCY ON WHAT MUST BE A HORRIBLY DEGRADED AND MORALLY ABSENT SOUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 04:34
    WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF A KID CAME ON THIS SITE AND READ THIS, NOT KNOWING WHAT CANNABALISM IS??
    WE ALL KNOW KIDS AND TEENAGERS GO TO SITES THEY ARENT SUPPOSED TO, AND YOU CANT HELP THAT, BUT IF A KID READ THIS ONE OF 2 THINGS WOULD PROBABLY OCCUR, THE KID WOULD EITHER SHUT DOWN, AS IN TOTAL DEPRESSION, SUICIDE, UNABLE TO DEAL WITH IT ANYMORE PHASE, OR THINK OF IT AS NORMAL AND CARRY IT OUT, ALREADY I HAVE READ THE COMMENTS AND SOME PLAN TOO, YOU ARE JUST FUCKED UP

    i mean this stuff is right up there with the supposed jospeph park shit - This is a sample of At580 / Wt235's otherwise known as joseph parks work as he calls it -Die painfully okay? Prefearbly by getting crushed to death in a
    garbage compactor, by getting your face cut to ribbons with a
    pocketknife, your head cracked open with a baseball bat, your stomach
    sliced open and your entrails spilled out, and your eyeballs ripped
    out of their sockets. Fucking bitch


    I would love to kick you hard in the face, breaking

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 00:40
    thats..just fucken SICK!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 23:05
    Thanks, I can't jack off now


    YOUR A FUCKING SICK FREAK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2009 04:39
    It was hot in the beginning...and then I couldn't take it after the guy cut her pussy. *shudders* Not bad overall- even though in real life the girl would've passed out when he cut her. But I appreciated the good grammar and spelling.

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  • iiH6qAW7UMLx9Vzl1Qj3
    28.07.2009 13:02
    You people just don't appriciate a good story.

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  • iiH6qAW7UMLx9Vzl1Qj3
    28.07.2009 13:03
    You people just don't appriciate a good story.

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  • rob.
    04.08.2009 01:54
    lol gtfo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2009 21:56
    you sick fuck why he fuck would you get even write a story like this its fucked up and sick fuck you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2009 00:09
    y do ppl think that human meat tastes good? it taste like rotting lamb. and thats after its been cooked. i cant imagine how bad its must taste raw.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2009 23:48
    this story is discustingly sick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 20:06
    if you dont like it why did u read it i think it is a great storie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 21:21
    this is horrible! being a mother makes it even more scary n i would so love to see this done to the sick fuck that wrote this! i hope u fucking die horribly, slowly, n painfully!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 21:30
    i mean yeah in realality there would be some things different but it was a legit story...i wouldnt mind trying some human meat. oh an for the stupid fucker who claims its a horrible story an their sick remember this you werent forced to read it your just as sick for opening your mind to this shit...sooo dont judge me haha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2009 04:21
    Die painfully okay? Prefearbly by getting crushed to death in a
    garbage compactor, by getting your face cut to ribbons with a
    pocketknife, your head cracked open with a baseball bat, your stomach
    sliced open and your entrails spilled out, and your eyeballs ripped
    out of their sockets. Fucking bitch


    I would love to kick you hard in the face, breaking it. Then I'd cut
    your stomach open with a chainsaw, exposing your intestines. Then I'd
    cut your windpipe in two with a boxcutter. Then I'd tie you to the
    back of a pickup truck, and drag you, until your useless fucking
    corpse was torn to a million fucking useless, bloody, and gory pieces.

    Hopefully you'll get what's coming to you. Fucking bitch

    I really hope that you get curb-stomped. It'd be hilarious to see you
    begging for help, and then someone stomps on the back of your head,
    leaving you to die in horrible, agonizing pain.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2009 15:43
    you are one sick puppy..and u ripped off hostel and made a sexual american version..not very original

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2009 23:14
    Eww... Why did you write this...?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 06:59
    That was actually kind of a good story sick...yes but it kept me reading

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2009 16:10
    That is sick u r a sick motherfucker I don't know why I read that sick shit

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  • HardcorexMaster
    29.08.2009 15:43
    Love it! You should write some more, I would definitely read it...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 23:39
    i hope you find help
    the lord can only heal those who wish to be healed
    open your heart to the lord and close your mind from this sin
    the lord gave you the ability to choose
    now choose brother
    i only hope you chose the path or reverance and forgivness

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2009 00:24
    Dude this is fucked up...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2009 06:54
    beautiful... keep up the good work, thankyou

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2009 00:08
    I enjoy reading beatings and abuse to a limit, but this was so fucking sick, i got no enjoyment out of that, and anyone that did are fucking bastards, and truth be told, people are really out there like that, and they all should burn in hell, even though that is much better than what they really deserve

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  • RamRaider
    07.09.2009 18:22
    Fucking Hell!

    Im all for a good rape story but this shit actually made me puke in my mouth.
    Not that its a bad story.
    The pussy eating thing did it for me.I have a lovely GF Just like her and i would chase any basyard who did something like this to the ends of the earth.
    Tone it down Brother.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2009 01:11
    That had to be the most fucked up thing ever......

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  • The+Preacher
    09.09.2009 13:34
    I agree with some of the other readers on here.
    You could be a great horror writer and this is good horror material,if it were put without the sex.
    And a lil bit of background as to why the villain is so FUCKED UP!!!!!!!!!!! Would help.
    Trust me,Im a proffesional publisher.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2009 23:42
    ummm....WTF! what happened to you as a child?

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  • %26gt%3B.%26lt%3B-_-T_T-_-%26gt%3B.%26lt%3B+Faceman
    19.09.2009 12:57
    I am dying here, laughing like a madman as to the replies I am seeing, and well, even though I have yet to read, I am expecting this story TO be sick. The tags say cruelty, rape, and CANNIBALISM! Hello?! Is that not enough for your brains to process; warning, sick story ahead! *stupid chuckle* Use that brain a little! It's not that hard... Ohh! And I'm seeing people preach now? Who are you people to judge anyway? Bringing the lord into this? Such a disgrace you guys are to your own religion! And what makes one who writes of sick works... sick? -_- I just hope the next set of people who choose to read this, understand, they ARE going to get something sick out of this most likely, and that if they are displeased by the amount of sick material, then they had best suck it up, shut up, and do not leave a comment! They had it coming -_-

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 23:19
    you are one sick fucking prick

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  • %26gt%3B.%26lt%3B-_-T_T-_-%26gt%3B.%26lt%3B+Faceman
    26.09.2009 02:06
    Ohh wow... is that another useless comment? did you not read my previous comment? Wow... To the guy, or girl who wrote this, please excuse the bullshit that many readers are bringing to the table here. They must not understand what the hell was in store for them. I thoroughly enjoyed that read btw ^.^

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 05:31
    you want feedback here it is you have written a load of shit and i agree with the previous person you are one serious sick fucking prick and yes i did read the warning and you still disgust me or is it that you just can't take reading negative feedback for the crap you write

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 09:40
    there are now 223 idiots including myself that have left a comment for this pathetic sad sack of shit who wrote this piece of crap which is just giving him more motivation to write more of this filth, and to the people who actually enjoyed reading it you are just as sad and pathetic as the piece of worthless garbage who wrote it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 11:24
    u r sick u fuking dick jus cus ur dad tortures u dnt give u da write to wryt bullshit u dickface go and get a life ur fat overgrown sicko shithead

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 21:56
    Truly Amazing :]

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  • go+fuck+yourself
    12.10.2009 23:25
    because of asshole like you i wish to become a crime scene investigator this is why i want to be a cop, a law maker anything to fuck assholes like you up i shall be happy to destroy jackass retarded bastards like you

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  • Pissed+off+reader
    13.10.2009 17:09
    There is no doubt in my mind that you will die horribly and rot in hell for eternity i dont know why i read this shit its been bothering me for days so i went back on to look at the comments i know that i am the 200th person to say this but you really
    Are a sadistic bastard and i curse you to experience the shit that you wrote about i must admit i like kinky things but this is more sick then i can possibly have ever imagined and yes all you mother fuckers who enjoyed this shit and left comments about how good it is your in the same ball park as the animal that wrote this shit and i hope you all die in horrible slowly ways

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2009 20:35
    lol wacked it to thi =]=]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2009 21:25
    I came all over my face, wiped it off and swallowed every last drop. Came all over my feet, swallowed that, then cut off some of my hair and ate that. God i'm a faggot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2009 03:33
    I hope you all die a horrible death!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2009 21:01
    Yes, its fucked up but you saw that what the topics were.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2009 08:31
    u fukin screwed up piece of shit!

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  • quejodienda
    25.11.2009 00:16
    you people are idiots, is not like he is doing it i mean, i writed about drugging my roommates, and its just a fantasy, i would never force someone to have sex, geez you are ignorants!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2009 12:43
    Brutal story u should write horror, it looks like a look of these fuckin dicks don't know the difference from a true story and fiction. For all you dicks out there if you don't like to read sexual horror, then don't, and for the author that was some scary shit! Ranks with the 120 days of sodom!

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  • anonymous
    26.11.2009 12:45
    Brutal story u should write horror, it looks like a look of these fuckin dicks don't know the difference from a true story and fiction. For all you dicks out there if you don't like to read sexual horror, then don't, and for the author that was some scary shit! Ranks with the 120 days of sodom!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2009 08:40
    wow!! i know the topic but dayyumm!!! you are fucked up to the extent!!


    FAGGOT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2009 23:43
    i had to read this just to see the sick shit u people think of. and if this is what u fantisize about...i hope i die a slow painful death. ur a sick fuck.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2010 12:35
    U fucked up scumbag I hope u fucking die.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2010 19:37
    daaamn this shit is FUCKED UP im not into this shit xD NO WAY am i jerking off and NO WAY does this turn me on but its actually rly fcking scary you should write horrors

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2010 20:50
    Lovely extent. The ending was very horrific and I guess that's what I get for reading this XD. Either way it was a well written and amazing story. Congratz. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2010 00:13
    wow, very graphic. despite the brutal nature, i must admit very well written. this must have been very challenging to write...

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  • MissMurder
    07.04.2010 21:00
    i like these..and im a chick who has one of the sweetest reps... its just a story...for those of you who have a prob..stop fukin reading!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 01:32
    scary XP but a good scary

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  • Cracy+soos
    25.04.2010 01:54
    Wow....Super torture and horror story i really like it.I request to write more stories like this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2010 21:48
    dude ur a FUCKED up bitch if this is what goes on in your mind.i was actually raped and somone bit my index finger off. it hurt like HELL. this just reminded me of that. when reading this, i could almost feel the pain.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 18:03
    i love horror and this truly is a very good story. and thats coming from me, a highly talented literature scholar. :)
    I enjoy reading scary thrillers and enjoy the selection on this site. you should write more. your really talented.
    xxx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 18:10
    everyone who thinks hes disturbed, your acting like theres somthin rong wiv bein criminally insane! :P
    honestly theres a lot of weird people out there including me.
    Everyone i know can tell when im happy since i run around like the world is made of salmon fillets. mmm salmon...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2010 22:58
    I really do not know why I clicked on the cannibal section. Morbid curiosity, i suppose. I admit that I did not read the whole story, as the plot is just too much for me! However, I do find it interesting that some readers are saying that the author is sick and need to be killed or at least have counseling. Many horror movies, even mainstream ones, have similar content- cannibalism, amputations, and heavy sexual content, yet not as many people say the directors of those movies need to die. I wonder what is so different about reading these things in print as opposed to viewing them on TV. Just a little FOOD for thought (I know, I'm lame).

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2010 23:50
    That was gross. If you at least continue this, make it so the guy dies or something.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2010 02:55
    Woow wtf is up with u?? I enjoy erotic stories but this is way too much!! If i met u in
    person i would knock u out with a fucking rock and beat u to death so yeah u better not put information here or else i will find u and i will kill you.

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  • reader1
    07.07.2010 12:26
    you should be removed from the earth for writing such a thing. good god.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2010 05:18
    stop complaining!! you guys are in the fucking cannibal section!! what did you expect?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2010 18:21
    im just wonderin someone said they gotrape and got there finger bitten off so why the fuk did u read a story like this is it to remind of tht experience and PEOPLE u aint forced to read it so why are !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2010 00:22
    wow no more i just cliked it and burning pussy omg too much i hope something like this happens to the person who wrote it

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2010 01:48
    Seriously everyone. This was a rather well written piece of dark erotica. While there are parts that i think went a little far, I am still willing to admit that. Now to everyone who is complaining about this, and calling the author a piece of shit, get over yourselves. Stop trying to be a fucking white knight. Nobody gives a shit. You wanna read cannibal fiction, you gotta deal with the good and the bad. If you don't fucking like it, don't fucking read it. Its the fucking moralistic readers like you that make me wanna fucking puke. Don't bitch about it. You chose to read it. Nobody pointed a gun at your head and made you read it, so don't fucking rip it apart.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2010 01:49
    anonymous reader
    2009-08-31 23:39:53

    Dude, if you fucking believe in god, why the fuck would you read this shit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2010 05:36
    Nice story.Keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2010 16:31
    OOh my god!! SO nasty!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2010 20:32
    anonymous reader
    2010-06-10 18:03:13
    "i love horror and this truly is a very good story. and thats coming from me, a highly talented literature scholar. :)
    I enjoy reading scary thrillers and enjoy the selection on this site. you should write more. your really talented."

    A 'highly talented literature scholar' would not make BASIC grammatical errors like you have. Silly teens attempting to look intelligent.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 20:54
    it wasent that bad you pussies! I enjoyed it alot, write more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 20:54
    it wasent that bad you pussies! I enjoyed it alot, write more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2010 20:54
    it wasent that bad you pussies! I enjoyed it alot, write more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2011 07:16
    Like it or not folks this writer is pretty creative and wrote it well....I read it but not to get off on it, it's just really interesting. I'm morbid I suppose

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2011 07:16
    Like it or not folks this writer is pretty creative and wrote it well....I read it but not to get off on it, it's just really interesting. I'm morbid I suppose

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2011 07:16
    Like it or not folks this writer is pretty creative and wrote it well....I read it but not to get off on it, it's just really interesting. I'm morbid I suppose

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2011 00:49
    Then Trish's fathe located John and beat his face in with a fucking hammer. As the blood spurted from John's dead face Trish's father continued to beat it to a pulp.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 23:34
    I actually feel sick to my stomach you should really consider hollywood kid cause your that good. Im gonna go watch pbs for a few years now

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2012 12:17
    Good writing abilities but disgusting story. Channel your abilties better.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2012 02:00
    wat sick mind writes this shit....i loved it im 11 though....

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  • dark+dad
    06.11.2012 02:14
    this is some sick shit. i loved it and the fact that an 11yo is able to read this too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2013 16:28
    Im 13 and i have to say while it was good and creative you have to be one sick basterd to get turned on by this, bye, sick ass bitches.

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  • the+gentlemen
    16.07.2013 20:35
    this is the sickest shit that my eyes have lain on. i hope this fucking happens to you. after all you love it dont you!?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2014 03:23
    So this was really well written for a dark erotica type novel but there's 11 year olds who actually read this type of stuff and I'm really concerned... 11 year olds should be reading soft porn then hard porn then evolve to the other stuff as they grow older. Either that or they should just stick to minecraft and reading rainbow. Either one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2015 11:44
    Loved it

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  • shadowsrmine
    15.11.2022 04:39

    Just my opinion but it would have been a MUCH Better story if somehow she'd gotten ahold of the knife and cut his dick and Balls off then gutted the POS! His buddies would have killed her for it but that would have been a better end

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