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Megan At Last

Author: PleasureWriter

Date: 25 June 2008

Anal, Fiction, Blowjob, Masturbation

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Ah, where to begin...

Hey, my name is Cory, and to start, I should probably tell you a little about myself at the time of the story. I was 16; a Junior at my local high school. I was a tall 6' 2", had deep hazel eyes, and I weighed in at about 200lbs and had an athletic build.

I lived with my mom and my fourteen year-old sister, as my dad had divorced mom and left us about 5 years prior to the events of this story.

It was the beginning of the new school year, and I was more concentrated on trying to finally meet a good girl that I could stick with, as most of my friends had girlfriends/boyfriends that they had been with for a year or more and I felt I was missing out.

Even though I didn’t have a girlfriend at the time, I had fooled around with various girlfriends over the years (mostly just feeling them up, but I had fingered several of them, and had gone down on one), but I had yet to “get laid” as so many guys call it.

I just hadn’t found the right girl, and I wasn’t in a huge hurry to lose my virginity to be quite honest. I watched a TON of porn in my day, so I pretty much knew what sex at least looked and sounded like.

Me, being a virgin, thought that it would be very similar to masturbating (another activity in which I avidly participated at 16). And as I was going to soon find out, I was very, very wrong.



Alright, enough about me. On to the story :

It all started on a sunny, warm Friday in September of Junior year. I was in 6th Period, and my 6th period Physics with Ms. Smith was always a class I looked forward two for two main reasons :

For one, it was the last class of the day, and I was always anxious to go home and “relax”.

And the second reason I liked the class, the MAIN reason, was one of my friends who was in the class with me.

She was a completely jaw-dropping, flawless 5' 4" lightly-tanned brunette of what I estimated to be about 120lbs or so. Not too skinny, but just the right amount of weight in all the right places.

She had a gorgeous ass that pretty much looked nice in whatever she wore, and she sported some firm, ripe breasts (maybe like 32B) that were displayed nicely in the slightly revealing tops she liked to wear. God, she was just beautiful...

So Megan (the girl who I was so vividly describing) usually needed my help in the class, because I was one of the more math and science oriented people, and she was a little more creative and liked writing, painting, etc.

So anyway, her and I got through class together and talked (mostly about non-Physics related topics) all the way to the bell.

As the bell rang, we all gathered up our stuff and began our exit from the room and the trudge to our cars and school buses to finally return home.

As usual, Megan and I exited the class together and walked towards the bus lanes. Even though I actually drove to school and back, Megan had not yet gotten her license and so had to ride the bus.

I walked her to her bus, as she was a very fun person to talk to, and I wanted to spend every possible minute I could with this girl I was so infatuated with. Besides, the parking lots were right past the bus lanes, so I had to walk that way anyway to get to my car.

When we got to her bus, we exchanged the usual goodbyes and hugged. As I had known her since freshman year, I thought nothing of our brief physical contact at the end of every day. This didn’t detract from the joy I felt in her being so close to me.

Today, however, the goodbyes had a slight change. As we hugged, I felt something very lightly touch my left ass cheek through my jeans.

As she backed away from me, I saw her wink at me, and then she turned around walked over to the bus and up the steps, my eyes watching her go the whole way.

I was grinning widely at this point, and I reached back and touched where her hand had brushed my ass in what I thought was an accident. My hand brushed a piece of paper that was sticking out of the top of my back left pocket.

Weird, I thought. Maybe I had left a bill back there, or some notes from class? As I pulled the folded piece of notebook paper out and opened it, I saw that it was in fact a note written by Megan.

“Hell yeah!”, I thought. I had always given much thought to asking Megan out on a date, but she was always with some other guy, being as sexy and amazing as she was the guys were pretty much lined up for her. This note was a sure sign of something good.

This note made my fears of her lack of interest in me dissipate very quickly as I began to read the note. It read :

“Cory, I know that this is a little short notice, but are you doing anything tonight? I have had feelings for you since we met that one day at lunch freshman year, and it's been on my chest forever. I know I should have told you sooner, but us being in the beginning of our last two years of high school has made me realize that there is no more time to wait on acting. I also know that it isn’t your fault that you haven’t made a move first, as it is always one jackass guy after another with me. I hope that you feel the same way as I think you do, or else I bet this note seems pretty retarded at this point. In any event, please give me a call later today and tell me how you feel. I don’t mean for this to be awkward, and again I’m sorry for the short notice. I just decided to put it all the line and go for it.

xoxo

Megan ”


“I can’t fucking believe this”, I said under my breath. This shit was way too good to be true. Megan asked me out on a date, and had admitted to liking me for two years!

It may seem kind of girly, but you have no idea the relief I felt that my feeling and effort towards the girl of my dreams were not at all unfounded. It was already almost three o’ clock, but my day was just now beginning...


I called her about an hour later after I had gotten home and settled down down the couch to watch my favorite channel, Comedy Central. I dialed her number with shaking hands and waited for her wonderful voice to greet me.

“Hello?”, I heard her say after only a ring. This caught me off guard, but I kept my cool. “Hey there”, I replied smoothly. “You got my note, I assume?”, she ventured cautiously. “Yeah, and I feel the same way, Megan...I just didn’t...”

She cut me off. “Shh, I know baby. It’s all good now though”, she said.

I smiled even wider at her calling me “baby”.

“So, what do you want to do about it?”, I asked. “what are you doing tonight?”, I asked.

“Nothing at all”, She replied, “and my dad is out of town on business until Tuesday”.

“Alright then, how’s about I come over at 7 and we can watch a movie or something?”, I asked.

“Sure”, she said. “We can watch a movie”, putting special emphasis on “watch”.

“Talk to you then”, I said.

“See ya”, she replied, and the hung up the phone.

It was just now after 4, so I had three hours to get prepared for going over to the girl of my dream’s house. I immediately went upstairs and hopped into the shower.

I made sure to clean every inch of my body thoroughly, paying special attention to my pubic area, just in case Megan decided to get close I wanted to smell like I took care of myself.

I got out of the shower, toweled off, and headed butt naked to my room to pick out my sexiest outfit for the occasion.

It was four o’ clock, and my mom didn’t get home until late most nights, and my sister was going directly from school to spend the night at a friends house. This meant, like Megan, I had the house to myself.

I picked out a nice-looking polo shirt from my closet, and selected my best pair of khaki shorts and underwear from my dresser. Tonight was the night to impress, and I intended to do just that.

I figured there wasn’t any point of putting on my clothes and cologne and stuff until I was ready to leave, as the clothes would maybe get dirty and the cologne would wear off in the near three hours I had to wait. I was taking no chances.

So I just sat around naked in my room until it was about 6:15, and then I got dressed, put on my cologne, and went to the bathroom to brush my teeth.

Since my mom wasn’t coming home till later, I decided to write her a note telling her I was going over to a friend’s house (didn’t specify) and to call the cell if she needed me.

I grabbed my cell phone and car keys from the kitchen counter and headed to Megan’s house. This would be a night to remember.


I arrived at Megan’s about five minutes till 7. I walked up to the door, straightening my collar and tiding myself as I went.

I knocked on the door, and Megan arrived to answer it just seconds later.

She was wearing one of the sexiest outfits I had ever seen her in, and for her that’s saying something.

She wore a navy blue top with a low-cut style front and short sleeves that hugged her features perfectly. Paired with it was a matching skirt in navy blue and white plaid that was fairly short, but not too short.

Her hair was worn straight down to her shoulders, just the way I liked it. It accented her ears and face perfectly. She looked downright gorgeous.

“Hey there handsome”, she greeted me, “come on in”.

“I don’t think there’s anything I’d like better”, I replied with a wink, and I walked in to her home.

“You look...amazing”, I said as we sat down on her couch and she flipped on the T.V.

“Thanks! You aren’t looking so bad yourself there hotshot”, she said warmly.

After a few minutes of talking, we decided to put on “American Pie”, one of our favorite movies.

“Make yourself comfortable, because you’re probably gonna be here for a while”, she told me with a look on her face that told me she was into this as much as I was.

I kicked off my shoes and moved them next to the couch we were sitting on. I leaned back on the couch, and she moved closer to me, lightly touching the hand that was on my leg.

I smiled and entwined her hand with mine. She looked up at me and returned my smile.

“Let’s start I guess”, she said, pressing “play” on the remote.

After about twenty minutes or so, Megan looked at each other simultaneously with looks that said “fuck this”.

She got up off the couch and motioned for me to follow her upstairs. I did so happily. Our night of fun was just beginning, and it was only 7:30!

She led me to her room upstairs and opened the door. It being only 7:30, there was some light seeping through the curtains of her window. She laid down on the bed and again motioned for me to do the same.

Now we were both laying face-up looking at her ceiling. We held hands and just sat there for a moment before beginning to talk.

“I don’t want anything to get out of hand”, I said. “Are you sure this is what you want?”

“Yes”, she replied, “this is what I have been dreaming of since 9th grade”

“I wish I knew how you felt about me, or I would have done something then”, I told her.

“I know, and I’m sorry. I was so young then, and I was afraid of losing you or you not liking me or...”.

I cut her off this time, putting one finger of my free hand over her luscious lips. “

“It’s okay”, I said, “I’m here now”.

We looked at each other and smiled. She inched closer and crawled on top of me. She then put her lips to mine in a loving kiss. Our tongues played around with each other, our passion growing.

I moved both of my hands to her ass, and she put one of hers on mine, the other on my inner thigh dangerously close to my hardening cock.

Her ass felt even better than I had imagined it would. It was soft and warm and plump and just fucking hot.

I soon began to slip my hands under the skirt she wore and began to feel her ass through her panties. It felt like she was wearing a thong. “This just keeps getting better and better”, I thought excitedly to myself.

It did keep getting better and better, as I had thought.

“Hold on for a sec”, she said suddenly, breaking away from our lust-driven kiss.

“What’s wrong?”, I asked as she got off her bed. My concern turned into pure heat as I saw she began to strip off her top and her skirt.

“Oh, shit.”, I said quietly, and I jumped off the bed and followed suit.

Soon she had nothing on but some incredibly sexy pink lace panties and a matching pink bra. The words “Pink” on both of these items suggested to me that they were from Victoria’s Secret.

I was down to my bare (but fairly hairy) chest and my carefully-chosen boxer shorts. We stood there for a moment and admired each other in silence.

This silence was broken when Megan asked “So where were we?”.

I smiled and playfully wrestled her down to the bed.

The passion we had before seemed like ice compared to the way we were at this point. 2 years of waiting and wanting from both sides was finally unleashed into this love.

As we began kissing again, I carefully moved one of my hands to the front of her panties and another to her leg. She did the same to me, ever so carefully cupping my balls through the boxers.

She began to rub my balls gently, and her other hand moved to my shaft. I made a soft gasp, as I had never felt like this before. Of course other girls had touched my dick, but I had not ever felt as strongly about those girls as I did about Megan. This was more than just fucking around now. This was real shit.

“Just lay back and relax, you can get to me later”, she whispered into my ear. I obliged and laid back on her soft bed, at this point pretty much having the best time of my life.

“God, I’ve been waiting forever for this”, she whispered, grasping my ample cock through the cloth with her soft hands. She then pulled down my boxers to my ankles and took them off, fully exposing my throbbing, hard, six and a half inch penis.

“Wow, not bad at all my boy”, she giggled playfully, tossing my boxers to the floor. I loved getting complements about my dick, but hey what guy doesn’t?

She began to stroke my dick up and down while at the same time massaging my balls. I looked down and was impressed at how big I actually looked with some nicely trimmed pubes and my nicely circumcised dick.

I laid there for a minute watching her, and then I looked toward the ceiling, sighing heavily. If this foreplay was this much better than just jacking off, then I couldn’t wait to see what the real shit would feel like.

About at this time, Megan closed her lips lightly around the head of my erect penis.

“Oh god...”, I said, enjoying the feel of her moist warm breath embracing my dick.

I looked down and she looked back at me, with that look in her eyes telling me that she was ready for anything at this point. I pulled back her hair with utmost care and held it so it wouldn’t get in her way.

She then started to move her mouth slowly up and down on my shaft and head, with me softly moaning as she proceeded. Her left hand was still playing with my now swollen balls and her other was now fingering my ass.

At this point I was the luckiest guy in the world. I had never been so fucking horny in my whole life, and I could tell she hadn’t either.

She continued to softly caress my dick with her mouth and tongue, and fingered my ass even harder now. She slipped in another finger and I let out a soft grunt of approval.

At this noise of pleasure she began to blow me a little faster, but still as soft, and her fingers worked faster in my anus.

“Oh shit Megan, I fucking love you oh my God don’t stop baby”, I moaned.

After a few more minutes of awesome pleasure, Megan came to a halt, taking my dick out of her mouth and her fingers of my ass.

“Thank God I know how to hold on”, I told her, “that shit was fucking incredible”.

“Thanks”, she replied, smiling. “I’ve had a little practice, but no other guy has held his own like you”.

I just smiled, a little peeved at the thought of her with another guys. Fuck them though, she was with me now.

“My turn”, I said. I was going to show her that she was not the only one that could please.

I lightly pushed her down from the sitting position so that I was now sitting at her feet and she was laying face-up.

I gently laid myself down on her and started with kissing her forehead, and I moved to kissing and lightly biting either earlobe, and then moved down to her lips.

“Oh shit...that’s getting me fucking hot Cory”, she whispered with passion in her voice.

“That’s the plan, beautiful”, I replied with a grin.

I moved my lips down to the center of her chest, playing with her bra. She then intentionally leaned up a bit, so I put my arms around her and unfastened her bra.

I pulled it off slowly and tossed it aside. Her gorgeous, perky breasts were now completely exposed to me. This made my dick stand even straighter, as these were the prettiest tits I had ever laid eyes on.

Her perfectly-centered, pink nipples could about cut class at this point, and her curvature was just exquisite.

I caressed her left breast carefully with one hand, and began to work my lips and tongue around the other supple breast. I licked all around it and began to lightly suck the nipple that was pointing up to greet me.

“Mmhmmm...”, Megan moaned. This just got me even more excited and I continued my exploration of her perfect body.

After I had finished with her other breast, I moved my way down to her belly button, playing around the hole (she was an "innie") using my tongue.

Next, I moved down to her sexy little thong. I noticed that it was a little damp right where her lips were, and I thought this to be a huge turn-on.

I played around her upper pubic area with my mouth and tongue like I had done to her breasts before pulling her thong down past her ankles and tossing it aside.

“Holy shit”, I said slowly, staring at the precious treasure that awaited me. Her bush was very expertly trimmed into a runway-style cut that looked very nice on her. But the real beauty was her beautiful vagina.

The moist, pink lips were the most arousing thing I had seen in my young life. They were perfectly symmetrical and hairless all around the immediate area; she had done an amazing job with her most recent trimming.

We exchanged meaningful glances and then I proceeded to pleasure my new love.

I carefully slipped my middle finger into her after wetting it a little with my saliva. This produced a quiet gasp from my girl.

“You okay?”, I asked her with concern.

“Yeah, it just feels sooo good. Keep going and don’t mind me”, she replied.

And with that, I began slowly sliding my finger in and out of her pussy. I began to speed up and started to learn to read the noises she made and gave her what she wanted accordingly.

I could feel her inner walls closing in around my finger, but I could tell that both Megan and her beautiful vagina were getting used to my handiwork.

After a few minutes of just one finger, I slipped in my index finger, now using the common two-fingered method of masturbation.

“Fuuuuck...”, she moaned, beginning to fondle her innocent chest with her hands.

I worked a little slower now, but began to twist my fingers as I went in and out. I began to sense her getting wetter, and her breathing became more laborious.

My fingers worked in and out of her with expert precision; I could tell she got just what she wanted and then some. There were going to be some more great times to be had with this girl, I could tell.

I worked for maybe about ten minutes until I began to implement my mouth as a tool of arousal.

I first played around her labial area by kissing it and sucking gently while still fingering her with gentle care and love.

“Oh shiiiiit baby ohhh goddd...please don't stop”, Megan moaned.

I did what my love wanted and continued my work on her young, pink vagina. After a few more minutes of fingering, I removed my fingers and replaced them with my tongue.

"Ohhhh...fuck me Cory....", she softly whispered.

My tongue flicked in and out of her orifice, while my hands moved to her anus and began to do the same work she so graciously did on me. I loved everything about her pussy...the way it smelled, the way it tasted, the way it felt in my mouth. I loved it all and I loved this girl.

I slowly worked both my tongue in her vagina and my fingers in her ass, listening to her pants and heavy breathing as I continued my pleasuring. She moved her hips in rhythm to my tongue so that her soft mound came up to greet me at every tongue thrust.

"Fuuuck...I'm cumming baby...I'm cumming!", Megan moaned loudly, almost out of breath.

I slowed down my tongue and slowly pulled my fingers out of her sexy little ass as she came, shaking gently all over.

I sat up licked the two fingers that had been fondling her ass, staring into her eyes the whole time. "Fuck, that was awesome", I thought.

“Damn...I’ve never had one like that before”, she said, smiling big and wiping sweat from her brow.

“I’m glad you liked it as much as I did”, I replied, also smiling. I leaned down and gave her a peck on the forehead.

“What do you want to do now?”, she inquired.

“I don’t know”, I said, checking my watch. Damn, it wasn’t even 9 o’ clock yet, and it was Friday night!

“We have plenty of time for whatever”, I informed her. “When did you say your dad is coming back?”

“Tuesday”, she told me with a huge grin, “Over three days from now.”

“Looks like we’re gonna have to hang out again soon”, I said to her, getting up off the bed and looking for my clothes.

“Where are you going? Can't you just spend the night with me, so I don’t get...bored?”, she said teasingly.

The thought never even occurred to me to ask to stay over at this girls house! “Shit yeah!”, I said, voice full of enthusiasm.

I called mom and told her I was staying over at my friend Brian’s and that I’d most likely be back tomorrow for lunch. One thing that I liked about my mom is that she really trusted me and rarely asked too many questions. She was perfectly cool with it. Score one for me!

“So, now what?”, I asked.

“We’ll see...”, she replied, gazing into my eyes...

I resumed my place by her side and we sat there gazing lovingly into each others eyes, knowing that our sexual relationship and romantic relationship had begun it's first journey of many to come.


---To be continued? You decide.---


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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 11:03
    ooooooooooh cliffhanger, great story, next please!

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  • PleasureWriter
    27.06.2008 13:08
    Thanks mate, glad you enjoyed :)
    The second one is in validation as we speak.
    If you liked this at all, you're gonna LOVE #2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 17:44
    Wow, next part please ;)

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  • austiman
    27.06.2008 18:10
    Awesome story. Definately looking for a part 2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 19:23
    holy shit bro nice story hurry up with part 2 man if its anythin like this one ppl are gunna love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 19:29
    yumyumyum
    cant wait for #2!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 20:37
    damn i hate cliffhangers, perfect story friend write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 21:07
    wow dude. Best story ever. Continue it

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  • PleasureWriter
    27.06.2008 23:57
    Thanks all for your kind words :)
    The second one is already written and is validating (uploaded it today), so it should be with you maybe tomorrow or Sunday

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 00:29
    please write a second one. this story was fuckin amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 12:02
    That's not a "cliffhanger", you douchebags! Anyway, it's a good story -- nice and sweet is a surprisingly refreshing respite from the usual extreme smut we (love to) find here. Your writing will improve with practice. You might try reading a draft out loud to yourself, though -- that should help a lot.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2008 14:01
    And what happens when 'mom' calls Brian because your sister is sick, and mom is called in to work suddenly? Just kidding! Great story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 17:57
    Reminds me a lot of me and my long time friend - except I haven't got the note in my back pocket yet :P . Excellent story mate, great writing and I can't wait for part 2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 19:56
    please post more my friend awsome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.06.2008 22:10
    Carry on. She's ready to fuck her brains out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 00:51
    get her dad to join them.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 02:15
    great story. I especially liked the attention to detail which is so lacking in most other stories. keep them coming!

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  • Esq
    Esq
    29.06.2008 06:42
    Its a pretty good story... I just cant help thinking that its written by a woman.... the use of certain words and phrases, just make it sound like a female writing from a males perspective.

    although its a good setting, nice story, great bckground

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 13:09
    Awesome story can't wait for part 2 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 14:57
    Great story, and dont listen to those who want you to add incest, it's great as it is! Keep up the great work. 9/10.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.06.2008 21:38
    good but would be good with incest to

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  • PleasureWriter
    29.06.2008 22:09
    lol Esq, I can assure you I am 100% male. I have a dick and balls and a hairy chest and everything. ;P
    I write like that to try to get away from the "same old, same old" stories. Guy and girl get together, exchange a few words, and fuck each other's brains out kind of stories.
    I personally don't think those kinds of stories are very entertaining to read, nor do they turn me on whatsoever.
    Even though my stories are Fiction, I try to make the reader believe that some of this could actually happen.
    Hope that helps with why my writing is a little more "touchy-feely" and girly than some of you may be used to.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 01:16
    omgsh i loved it...dats was so hot i wish it happened 2 me...i had like 3 orgasims from it...tanx i da awsome thrill

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  • George+in+Cincy
    30.06.2008 17:15
    Well done. As a guy who writes mostly romantic stuff myself, I enjoy seeing others do the same. Keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 21:46
    Very well thought out and executed.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 22:22
    great! turned me on! keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 22:37
    great story hurry and write the next one!!! i can't wait!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2008 23:40
    Simply Astonishing, I'm rock Hard...Please come Out With A Part2 Don't make us wait to Long

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  • Mannly+Man%21
    01.07.2008 00:08
    Perfect Story!!! But... I dont like all that finger in the ass crap for males.......... Keep writing!! =P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 00:38
    This was very well wrote. It wasn't girly at all. There was affection and playful (nice touch btw) compassion. Shows a side in guys that's really deep. The thought of that special girl and not some random chick was great! And the story is very relatable, at least the scenarios were.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 01:48
    This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. You're one hell of a writer. Hurry & write Chapter 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 02:27
    i think that it made it better that you guys had to wait, because a passionate relationship and sex is the best! LOL

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 09:48
    awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!write more stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 10:03
    damn write chapter2

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  • anon
    01.07.2008 13:08
    write more part 2!... but no guy getting fingered in the ass .... 8=D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 13:24
    got to admit that was pretty fucking good!

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  • hehelalalo
    01.07.2008 19:06
    Gudd gudd
    Write moree

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 21:15
    WOW DUDE THAT WAS EXCELLENT CANT WAIT 4 THE NEXT ONE!!!!

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  • mike+hunt
    01.07.2008 22:02
    yer dude that was an awsome story
    i think u shud make another for sure

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2008 22:13
    wtf finish the shit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 01:05
    WRITE CHAPTER 2!!! i didn't get a big arousal...but I definitely thought it was sexy and good!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 02:38
    Just two words. Simply perfect. I give this one a complete 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 04:37
    So ya that was very good, one thing you spelled class instead of glass. Which is what I think you where trying to say. But whatever great story I say continue!!!

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  • hmmm
    02.07.2008 10:21
    I♥ that story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 16:58
    Nice work, very well written, a good start to what could easily be a great series!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 18:24
    Nice work, very well written, a good start to what could easily be a great series!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2008 23:39
    dude that is some good shit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2008 02:29
    i just love the details in this story. its just soo juicy and wonderful. 1000/10. wonderful

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2008 03:20
    PART 2 NOW!

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  • bisexual19
    03.07.2008 14:23
    definitely a part 2,3,4,5...oh just keep em cummin'. and check out a few of my stories while you're at it. :-) 10/10.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2008 23:29
    that was amazing deffinately make another that was sooooooo hott

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 00:52
    nice work. keep the stories coming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2008 01:09
    the part *cut class* thats cut glass but overall good dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 01:10
    pretty good nice details

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 03:14
    That was amazing. awesome details. keep up the good work.

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  • sickos
    04.07.2008 11:54
    awsome keep them comming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 18:25
    That was one of the most romantic and erotic stories i have ever read and if its only your first i cant wait to see the others that you write and i realy hope that you continue this as a series for a while. again it was excellent.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 22:56
    There were a few typos, but otherwise an awesome story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2008 23:44
    that was amazing!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 03:36
    You have some skill, I say proceed.

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  • Larry
    05.07.2008 03:50
    I was completely turned-off when the narrator had to stop to lick off his fingers that just came out of her anus. Such is vulgar and enough to make one regurgitate. Otherwise the story was pretty well written and nicely erotic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 18:56
    yeah i have to agree with larry, the anus finger licking thing wasnt exactly a turn on for me, and im a girl so i wouldnt do that in the future...just an idae :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 20:54
    it was really good but I hope that u keep it up in ur stories to come. I have seen a lot of writers make a really good first story and then fuck up the rest of them. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next ones ; )

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 22:18
    And then you woke up? Right?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2008 08:57
    ohh my god that was soooooooooo good i didnt stop fingring myself all the way throw that well done plese write more.

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  • good+job
    06.07.2008 10:26
    i have to say that this story is a whole lot better than"dear diary" this story rock out loud.now im gona read part ll.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2008 14:42
    If you don't write a sequel I'll track you down and kill you.

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  • scottyh214
    06.07.2008 15:25
    very well written. detail is great. gets the point across but not over done. exelent work....that being said, definately write another....or else! haha

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  • sexii_nurse
    06.07.2008 18:09
    Pretty good. I'd like to read about their first time and him losing his virginity, so write more!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2008 01:37
    hell yea! write a second!!! but no ass fingering.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2008 08:15
    Gotta admit, the best story ive read in a while, keep it going!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2008 10:41
    amazing story! write another plox?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2008 12:04
    Great story, keep going

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  • deadly_dalia
    07.07.2008 20:42
    Wow... this is really good. Not just because it made me cum, but also because it's grammatically correct and full of detail. You're a great writer kissies for you =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2008 02:34
    Expertise writing, awesome story telling and i'm positive that it was a much more amazing experience than I could even begin to express.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2008 02:43
    Expertise writing, awesome story telling and i'm positive that it was a much more amazing experience than I could even begin to express.

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  • GoodStoryLover
    08.07.2008 11:57
    Cool stuff, I'm ancious to read the continuance..(s)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2008 14:00
    Its fine writing. The spacing is easy on the eyes You might try grouping into paragraphs to make it a pro work! My vote was positive, for sure, keep writing. Any negative will only be from any who dislike a specific activities. Those are entitled to personal preferences, but doesnt affect the skill you are using

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2008 01:28
    ur an excellent writer, and this is a perfect fantasy story. it may only cater to the specific needs and fantasies of certain readers,however, but it covers a fair range of teen sex fantasies, it was quite a pleasure to read, nice details and structure!! please write sequals!!

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  • Nigerian+babe
    09.07.2008 10:47
    Cool story, keep it up.
    waiting for the continuance though...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2008 00:03
    Alright, could have used a bit more character development. Seemed to add a little last minute excuse i.e. My mom trusts me, could have been added in around the part he went over to her home. Other small grammatical errors, but all in all a good story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.07.2008 16:34
    at first i thought cory was a girl, i was way off

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2008 19:51
    fuckin awesum, man! good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2008 22:23
    Excellent piece. Wonderfully Written. Hope you keep up the good work in many more pieces. Spend slightly more time on the story not concerning sex, and it will be perfect.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 01:59
    good story, one of those good teen sex fantasies..... keep writing :D these kind of stories are great ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 16:05
    when does he fuck her please write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2008 23:12
    great job, look forward to more of it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 05:47
    Very well written =]

    I'd like to add that I like the small details you put in about the clothing and things of that sort. What I would like to see more is the details about the environments you're in. Like how was the bedroom like? or any room for that matter. I knew what was happening but I didn't see the whole picture.

    Sorry I'm picky but other than that, I thought it was a superb read =]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 06:37
    GAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was the most boring peice of cr
    ap i cant beleive i just wasted 10 minutes of my life reading this bullshit cory is a gay boi and likes the taste of cum

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 17:38
    Dam daz hell 0f a g00d st0ry.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2008 23:02
    this is the best story on here and it was not your cousin or sister

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 03:09
    Story was fucking great i can relate to every part.....except for her fingering your asshole. Thats a little bit fucked up yo. but hey im not judgin different people like different kinky shit, good luck with that chicka

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 05:25
    fuck this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 05:55
    This story was really great. I'd like to do all that with my next girlfriend. I dont know about her putting her fingers in my ass tho...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2008 14:58
    Hey kid get your cock in that sweet cunt and really fuck fuck fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2008 02:27
    weird anal fingering =] but I'm not one to judge really great story line and mostly relateable ( accept the dream girl part were not all that lucky)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2008 12:36
    i love all yur stories. they always get me really wet and horny. im waiting for more =]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2008 17:39
    Fuck yeah continue :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2008 03:04
    yeah continue it!! it was fucking orgasmic!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2008 15:31
    Continue the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2008 15:53
    Hey man get your cock in that sweet pussie and fuck fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2008 17:38
    I love a finger in the ass when I get a BJ... Good job man. Now put a cock in her....

    :-)

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  • hornysexmonger12323
    18.07.2008 03:31
    that story had me spurting 5 feet of cum good job man but fuckin get that cock in her lushious pink pussy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2008 18:42
    Fucking hot, made me all wet, write more =D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2008 22:51
    what a pussy why didnt you fuck her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2008 04:17
    next time put your 2 inch cock in her u lil pussy my god

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2008 18:46
    is this real

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2008 19:28
    i agree

    why didnt you fuck that biatch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2008 01:26
    write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2008 02:59
    more that was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2008 11:22
    why would he fuck her, it was there first time you dipshits

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  • uno+joker
    24.07.2008 01:25
    Add more like the sex part 8)

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  • hornysexmonger12323
    24.07.2008 02:28
    dude great story this is the 5th time ive read it and 2nd ive commented great story u should make a part 4!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2008 02:51
    THAT WAS INTERESTING, NOW I WANT TO READ MORE.!!. GOOD JOB.!!. KEEP WRITING....

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  • Kurtz-Divine
    25.07.2008 20:46
    good job, I hope there's a part two

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2008 18:15
    tht was grt dude! keep up the work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2008 11:53
    Make part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2008 20:19
    Bullshit!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2008 10:28
    PleasureWriter, you are a brilliant story teller. just keep it up. you could start writing romance novels if you wanted. the only difference is 200 pages. lol
    keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2008 23:57
    boobies boobies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2008 23:20
    great story!!

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  • nyaire
    20.08.2008 00:28
    your story was amazing. i cant wait for more!! your literary skills impress me and you really know how to draw in your audience. please make a sequel =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 03:17
    I personally didnt enjoy the story to much. It reminded me of a dumb kids dream. The use of baby and I love you was a little excessive and it got old. Also it was a little to storybook and not very realistic.

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  • baby+big+dick
    26.08.2008 10:42
    2 much tawkin and 2 little action... but otherwise its a good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2008 03:36
    pretty good and kinda believable except for the part about the guy finding pleasure from getting fingered in the ass

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  • The+Martin
    03.09.2008 03:56
    oi, you know a guy's g-spot is in his ass!
    excellent story, keep up the good work, i'd love to read more of this story.
    You are an excellent write, putting in all the details in all the right places.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2008 15:34
    continue

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  • reader
    reader 500
    26.09.2008 19:49
    overall good job but i think its a unrealstic kid dreams story! although u r write well but i found lot of lackage as adult writer becasue so much talking & just jarkoff not fucking! listen kid its a adult story! so u should given description abt fucking & sucking but afterall i'll say u write well & if keep countinue writing, u'll be a very good & skilled writer in future! ok! good luck kids! go ahead

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2008 16:13
    more fukin now plz was incredible... cremd my pnts bra coninue da gd work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2008 15:52
    great story! keep up the good work!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.11.2008 03:47
    I don't see why a guy likes the fingers up the ass unless your gay?

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  • anonymous
    03.11.2008 23:34
    Great Story. Really hot story, except for the fingers up the ass. That was a a little weird but, overall great writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2008 09:42
    The anal area is very sensitive for both women and men - it has nothing to do with being gay or not - some women like their nipples pinched, some don't, so do some guys - etc. Sheesh.

    Great story!! Very well written - continue it!

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  • Lord+SEX6000
    22.11.2008 09:46
    GREAT STORY! but the part with the ass was a bit GAY!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2008 12:08
    got me horny

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  • Southernman
    30.12.2008 23:55
    good story,sounds alot like the time I fucked my high school sweethart while her parents were in Hawaii! Man good times!

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  • CJ
    CJ
    09.01.2009 22:10
    Oh please c'mon we have to have a part 2, 3 and many more. Only slight criticism is the few 'continuity' errors. For example Cory looks at the clock as showing just after 4 o'clock then he went for a shower and once he got out he looked at the clock and it was showing 4 o'clock. Also found a few other cont. errors which could be fixed. Still, a really good story I would love to see part 2!! Keep up the good work buddy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2009 01:09
    im also a junior in high school and kinda in the same position. great story. I read it to my gf I have been dating for two years, afterwards we had the best sex ever. keep the stories comin!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.02.2009 06:43
    awesome story!!! Definately do part 2 but this time make sure you cum in her mouth and watch her swallow. This story got me so horny. keep up the AWESOME work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2009 01:19
    a little too manyt cliches but that is all, otherwise it was totally awsome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2009 23:03
    excellent story definantly do part 2. I feel I'm in the same position as cory in my life but not that deep into the story yet, I'm at the beginning of the story but I hope it works out the way this does. In saying that don't givevit a bad ending!

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  • sexsexsex1543
    18.04.2009 18:53
    Dude having sex is nothing like masturbating

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 12:09
    Awesome story. Got me seriously horny.

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  • wet+cunt
    10.05.2009 07:36
    so hot, great story get onto pt 2 asap and fuck her. made me so wet and horny

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  • Jimbo
    13.05.2009 14:46
    Let's have some more. You are off to a good start. Enjoy!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2009 04:19
    Teenager porn

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2009 12:51
    bravo my good man bravo no one can say that that wasnt one of the best stories i have ever read keep writing my man keep writing you have a gift which you must share more with us please i cant wait to read the next one

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  • Capt.+BigDick
    27.05.2009 17:24
    very nice!

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  • anonymous
    04.06.2009 19:55
    that is the best i have ever read . great job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2009 15:47
    To READER of 2009-05-03,
    Actually the semi-colon (;) would be correct because it's indicating a full stop, and then going on. Just pointing that out.

    Anyways for your first story it was excellent, you must have done your homework for this one. Keep 'em cumming (pun intended =P).

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  • Blue.Jeans
    16.06.2009 16:37
    nice one ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2009 03:58
    nice great story you ned to get crackin on the sequal though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 11:10
    best ever make more NOW!!!!!!!!!11

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  • qwerty
    25.07.2009 16:49
    make the second part plz!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 20:21
    "Megan looked at eachother"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2009 03:49
    PART 2 now!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 07:52
    dats brilliant m8. it reminds of my relationship with my current gf, dis was our exact 1st date, except we watched theres something about mary. plz make 2nd installment soon. great read, congratulations.

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  • 1inchewide
    13.08.2009 02:07
    got me horny!!! more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2009 09:30
    Bro, more now make sequel immediatly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2009 13:01
    to be continued definitley

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 00:01
    goddam!!!!! how can you leave the story like that? we need to have some more!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 22:38
    more damit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2009 06:11
    Part two just stop with butthole fingering Fingering a dudes ass is kinda gay

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2009 15:18
    wow, this is insane, the story was good and so was the writing. Bravo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2009 18:03
    just a pet peeve of mine, I believe you mean eager not anxious when you mention the guy wanting to get home, he isn't worried about the prospect of getting home so much as just wanting to.

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  • Love+Struck
    23.11.2009 07:29
    It takes a damn good story for me to be bothered to write a comment, let alone a good one. That was without doubt my favourite story. Bravo,my friend.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2010 02:11
    9.5 out of ten. some typing errors but a wonderful job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2010 20:22
    I agree with Lovestruck, I only comment on stories that really deserve it, and yours definitely does:-)few typos but that was the only prob. Most noticable I found was "her nipples were hard enough to cut class" instead of glass, but no major ouch moments like with most stories, good character development and storyline. Well done, part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2010 23:34
    the guy getting fingered was a boner killer

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2010 19:18
    I lost track of the number of times I read a sentence and thought, cliche! Still good though.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    26.05.2010 21:20
    wow that was so awesome! keep em' coming! : )

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  • Anon+and+Alack
    11.07.2010 01:22
    Pretty good grammar, although I note that whenever someone curses (this is a universal problem), the grammar is thrown from the Empire State Building. Anyway...

    Good story, though I expected them to actually have sex. (I hate part 2s, they're so hard to find...

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  • Anon+and+Alack
    11.07.2010 01:23
    Pretty good grammar, although I note that whenever someone curses (this is a universal problem), the grammar is thrown from the Empire State Building. Anyway...

    Good story, though I expected them to actually have sex. (I hate part 2s, they're so hard to find...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2010 01:40
    Man that story was the shit keep em coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 12:06
    Her nipples were hard enough to cut class because it was a school related pun

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2010 21:51
    Dude I would leave if a girl fucking fingers my ass...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2010 03:42
    fuck your sister and her too

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2010 03:42
    fuck your sister and her too

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2010 02:14
    I wish you were uncircumcised, do you remember when they cut your penis? Did it hurt?

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2013 00:06
    HAH FINGER A ASS UGH

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 07:45
    aS9cQc Looking forward to reading more. Great blog post.Really looking forward to read more.

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