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A Tale of 2 Nerds

Author: Dusk

Date: 16 August 2008

Blowjob, Fiction, First Time, Incest

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This is my first story ever, so please be gentle with the reviews. I've always found incest interesting, although I DON'T have a sister, so this is a work of FICTION. I'm not a great writer, but I hope this helps at least ONE person cum.

I just picked 2 random names for the "twins," incase anyone cares.

I tried my best, and I know every single story on this site gets at least one flame, so give me your worst, if you must.

If you LIKE it, please let me know!

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"A-Ah …"

I moaned quietly as I finished spraying my load, grabbing a sock and cleaning myself up. A sock? Yeah - It's a substitute when you have no Kleenex and you need to rub one out. But let me first introduce myself - I'm Jeremy. Quite the nerdy teen, but what can ya do? Glasses, anime-obsessed - The ultimate pussy deflector. Terrible thing too, as I was at that age where I was craving sex.

So like I said, I was a TOTAL nerd. My computer consisted mostly of Hentai pictures and movies (which is "anime porn" to those who don't know,) and I used it to please myself. Sure it made me a sad person and it was just a dumb thing to get off to, but it was what I liked. Fuck the rest of the World and their opinions.

So, with my introduction aside, let's look at the next character in this little story - My "twin" sister, Julie. She wasn't much different than me - Loved anime and a lot of things Japanese, had basically the same type of glasses - We were basically twin nerds. We weren't REALLY twins, but we were so much alike that people just began calling us that.

Only one problem with that - Since there were no other girls in my school that were like me at all, my attraction started to turn towards the only girl like me - You guessed it - Julie. I wasn't sure if these feelings were friendship, sexual, pure love, or ... Whatever. I just knew that I liked her.

Yeah, I'd call her "hot," but never around people, and certainly never around her. I just ignored it and kept on living life, knowing that nothing would ever happen between us, since she was my sister.

Or so I thought.

It was a few nights back - I had just finished what I was talking about before - The nightly masturbation session. Just as I had finished cleaning up, my door creaked open. I assumed it was one of my parents telling me they were going to bed, so I quickly pulled up my sleep pants and acted like nothing was happening. It turns out that it wasn't either of them - it was Julie. She was quiet as she peeked in, looking at me.

"So, at it again, huh?" She smirked, just looking at me. I nodded, blushing. It was obvious that she knew what I was up to; only a deaf person wouldn't have been able to hear me. "Seems fun and all, but remember that we have to get up early tomorrow for some ... Shopping … thing … That Mom wants to do." I nodded as she left. I personally didn't mind it - Shopping just gave me time to check out the electronics section to see if there were any games out that I really wanted, and Julie usually went with me.

I sighed, turning back to close the hentai and shut down the computer for the night when the door opened again, Julie walking in and sitting on my bed. She was in regular clothing - She didn't wear pajamas unless she had nothing else to wear. I looked at her, confused as to why she was here.

"Do you need something?" I asked, staring at her. My eyes traveled down her body - She wasn't ugly by any means - She wasn't flat, either. My guess would have been about a big B, small C. I was just about to look back up at her when I heard her say something.

"My eyes are up here, buddy."

I blushed, quickly looking up at her.

"I wasn't looking anywhere else." I blushed, hoping she would just shut up about it and tell me what she wanted. She shook her head, smirking and looking at me.

"You weren't, hm? What if I did this?" She grabbed the rims of her shirt and quickly pulled it up, revealing her bright yellow bra. I couldn't say a word as I stared, seeing her look at me with seductive eyes before starting to laugh. "So, are you looking now?" She asked. I just nodded, unable to move my eyes from her chest. She smiled, walking over and sitting on my lap.

"I see you look at me in school, and in my room … I'm no idiot, brother." She smiled as she pecked me on the cheek, making my face redder than ever. I still couldn't say a word as she took my hand and placed it on her bra-covered breast, and by pure instinct I started to squeeze, not even realizing what I was doing. I finally came to my senses and looked up at her. She moved both of her hands up, getting her shirt off entirely, and then the bra. I felt myself grow rock-hard as the yellow garment hit the floor. Her breasts were amazing - They were so big that they bounced as the bra moved, the nipples were nice and pink.

She rubbed her ass against my bulge, laughing as she looked into my eyes.

"Aww, did I make brother horny?" She smiled, standing up and moving down to her knees, grabbing and pulling down my pants. I didn't usually wear underwear underneath them, so my rock-hard dick instantly popped out. She looked up at me with a huge smirk on her face as she moved her head down, taking over half of it into her mouth. It took my brain a moment to register what was going on. As soon as I snapped into reality, a moan quickly escaped my lips as she continued sucking me off. She pulled away for a minute, looking up again.

"I've heard you before, you cum really fast at times, and since we only have a few minutes … How about I finish now and we'll do it again tomorrow, okay?" I quickly nodded at this, growing harder as she put her mouth back down, bobbing her head back and forth very fast now, making my body start to twitch as I grabbed her head, moving it and making her go faster on me until …

"Oh fuck …"

I felt myself release a big load of cum into her mouth, and I could faintly hear her swallowing every bit of it. I looked down at her, blushing as she stood up and looked at me, putting her bra back on.

"I know it was pointless, but I just flashed ya so it would make you harder. You tasted pretty good, actually." She smiled, starting to walk out of the room. "Goodnight, sleep tight .. Don't cum too much tonight. I want more tomorrow." She winked, leaving the room and closing my door.

"What the hell just happened?" I asked myself as I climbed into bed, shutting off the light and falling asleep.

My life had just turned perfect.

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Yeah, the sex was short and I'm sorry - If I get good reviews, I'll do another one. I know most of it was just Jeremy telling the story, and sorry for that too - I wrote it for the forum and didn't worry about the sex yet. It'll be better if I make another one .. If people want me to.


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  • borther+andsister
    21.08.2008 12:44
    cool man

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  • oldguy1944
    21.08.2008 13:02
    Hey! you have to start some were

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 13:17
    more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 13:18
    why dont u just lay back and let ur twin take the lead? a little longer tho, it seems as if she knows what she wants.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 13:28
    i cant wait untill you continue this story!

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  • duckcrvrBob
    21.08.2008 13:46
    You said she isn't realy your twin ,give more description of her, and it is only a story make the sex last longer, Take some controle and get her naked, there are endless posibilities for this story line go with it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 15:24
    would love to read more! keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 21:39
    that is a good story, and don't worry you should read my first story... the sex is so/so and it has terrible grammar errors, but anyway I liked the story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading

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  • ky493
    21.08.2008 22:49
    You did great on your first gave good discription to your charictors keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2008 23:22
    excellent first time. description was pretty good, the build up was good, but the build up was longer than the sex part....lengthen the sex and and the entire story in general and you're golden.

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  • Kurtz-Divine
    21.08.2008 23:29
    I rather liked it actually. I got confused by a couple of things but no big deal. But you should of read my first story, it was not perfect I'll tell you that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 02:02
    this was good,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 10:59
    It was a great story yes it was kinda short but that was ok if you get a chance to make a sequel to it just make the sex longer and it would be perfect. If we had to give a number rating i would say 9/10

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  • george+in+cincy
    22.08.2008 13:11
    Too short, but otherwise well done. Here's a hint...RELAX. Don't try to force the story or the details. Open your mind and the details will come. Try a sequel and see what happens.
    George in Cincy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2008 18:52
    shit...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2008 18:11
    Pretty good. I liked it. Usually I think there's too much fluff in a story, but this one I think there was just barely not enough. If it had been longer I surely would've cum.

    Good job, keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2008 00:32
    this would have been a great story if it had been longer but as it is i would say that it was pretty good. I'd like to read the sequal. You might want to go into a little more detail also.

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  • some+random+guy
    24.08.2008 04:18
    good story, make it longer. Make a sequel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2008 11:02
    This is like the seed of a good story. We have established the fact that our hero is a nerd (geek? The two are diferent), he likes hentai, and he has a hot sister who also likes anime, but probably not hentai.

    She definitely blew his mind when she basically walked in and sucked him off as quickly as you can say "Thank you. May I have another?" We really need to know why she did that, other than the fact that she knew he liked to look at her body. It would also be nice to know more about how the two of them were nerdy and/or geeky.

    Don't be afraid to write more backstory into the next episode, or even rewrite this and add the continuation to it. There is a lot of promise to this; with a little care it could be really good. Your writing style is good for a first-timer.

    Above all, don't rush. It's ok for the sexual relationship to advance slowly. We don't need three-way butt sex with her best friend by the next week.

    Thank you for your story.

    =dreamer=

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2008 01:07
    Don't appologize for your work, just relax & take your time. Don't post the story until YOU are happy with it. Remember, you can't please everyone, so don't try. I thought this was pretty damn good for the first time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2008 21:54
    for a short story it was great i hope to see more of your works,you will go far

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  • BoBo0050
    12.10.2008 20:28
    Very good!! I enjoyed Jeremy's predicament. At his age, I, too, was a nerd; still am, and DAMN PROUD of it!!!! Unfortunately, I didn't have Jeremy's in-house relief....

    I think most people on this site would like to see more of Jeremy and Julie. Don't forget that as they learn more from each other, they will want to share their knowledge with other people.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2008 19:34
    It was good it was a description of the bj was a little short other wise it was really good. keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2008 19:42
    It was good it was a description of the bj was a little short other wise it was really good. keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2008 17:17
    best story ever i loved please i beg u more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2008 02:15
    pretty good, but too short 6/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2009 03:50
    mor excellent worl 4 a first

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  • khoral7
    02.02.2009 19:58
    Dude not bad i'd go for a sequel. maybe a bit longer too.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2009 23:36
    Good A Little longer though

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  • Greg73
    04.03.2009 23:02
    Hmmm...Can I finish this with a part 2?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2009 01:40
    it was not that great. but the sequel with more action wil be good im sure. go for it homey (thats wat she said)!

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  • notallmine
    02.05.2009 02:51
    good 2 short

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2009 17:27
    I never thought I would see another anime obsesed person posting stories on here. Awesome job.

    This is definetly the best story I have read in a good while. Kepp it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2009 13:51
    hot!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2009 03:45
    Great story, a sequel would be great though..

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    reader 500
    17.06.2009 20:41
    MORE PLEASE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 02:52
    In my opinion, it doesn't HAVE to be completely sex. The background information was actually pretty nice. A longer, more erotic sequel would be much appreciated. ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 09:10
    new part plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2009 11:03
    Nice first story...but got to the 'stuff' a little too quickly.....tease me a little more please....the build up makes it more exciting!

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  • 305+reader
    27.07.2009 11:23
    itz pretty good. how old r the "twins" ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 11:45
    I know you have sequels to this story, but for future refrence you need to act like the readers don't know anything about sex or the characters. Which means you need to be more descriptive (during the sex scenes), try and use the 5 senses (sight, hear, smell, taste, feel), and really make your characters come to life. From a scale from 1 to 10 I give this story a 6, sorry, It just didn't do anything for me. You've got a good idea of how to tease but your structure needs some work. I'll let you off easy though since you're a beginner.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 05:03
    alright

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2010 03:55
    Whats wrong with you! Man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2010 17:18
    I dont think the whole seducing thing really fits in with teens just exploring sex.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2010 08:36
    yeah... what is wrong with you man

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2010 00:15
    umm theres a worm coming out of my nipple what should I do?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2010 00:15
    it's really big help!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2012 21:22
    You must live close to Disney then because liivng 20 hours away, we could't pull an impromtu visit!Wonderful picture! You are the second blogger I've come across tonight to provide a Wordless Wednesday Mr. Linky, I like that idea. Might have found another idea to implement on my blog.Thanks for pinch hitting for Trisha tonight! Great job!

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