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DOMINATE ME

Author: TrixxyRavynwolfe

Date: 2 June 2010

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Crack the whip and tie me down
Have me completely gagged and bound
Make the pain go ever longer
For it makes the pleasure stronger
Spank, and bite me
Make it so I can’t see
Have your way
I’ll do as you say
Make me scream all night
I’ll do whatever you want if you bite
Make me your slave
For I love to misbehave
I have been a naughty kitty
Don’t you dare show me pity
Punish me as hard as you can
Show me that you’re the strongest man
Whip my pussy ever so hard
Make my body feel so marred
Pull my hair, tighten the chain!
I want to feel more pain!
Make me bleed, make me moan
Show me that I’m your own
Make me beg for more
Fuck me more after I’m already sore
Control me so I can not move
Show me what I want you to prove
Hold a knife to my throat
Please don’t try to sugar coat
Anything you want I’ll do
I’ll do anything for you
Make me your pet
Show me what is set
Choke me harder, bite me some
I am yours till you’re done

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Anonymous reader

04.06.2010 20:37

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Brilliant!(Clapping)

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Anonymous reader

04.06.2010 20:44

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I Love it, I can relate I feel the same way as your poem. Except the strongest man for me it would be the most demanding Woman and instead of whiping pussy it'd be my balls. This is the first poem I've seen on here and its a nice change, keep it up.... oh and you might write a story too. Good luck.

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TrixxyRavynwolfe

05.06.2010 01:52

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Thank you. I'm actually working on a story that i intend to make an entire book out of then the prequel... Yes, same theme. Will be posting chapter one soon. One thing. in this story, my husband is already my Master and I am still rebellious even though I love it at least to start. The prequel, my meeting him and my "training"

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Anonymous reader

05.06.2010 22:48

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that was fucking GREAT good job by ur friend vance

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Anonymous reader

06.06.2010 06:59

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very nice i enjoyed it, thank you for that miss.

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TrixxyRavynwolfe

07.06.2010 09:33

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If your gonna give me a negative rating at least say why

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ejls

10.06.2010 12:49

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This IS a piece of shit, but you are a guy who knows what he wants and for that I commend you. Playing in pain isn't for most, but, hey, go for it, just don't expect that it will entertain anyone else except your perverted buddies. A writer? Afraid U R Not that, far from it actually, but hey, you asked so I told it like it is.

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ejls

10.06.2010 12:52

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this sooooooo disgusting. People like you should be exterminated. You have 2 places taken up for the same pitiful work, if you call it that. Why not think about hanging yourself, save the world some pain.

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ejls

10.06.2010 12:55

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I almost forgot, since you are probably pissed at my honesty, why not PM me and I'll give you some tips on how to fluff up your writing so it's not nearly as disgusting and maybe we can arrange for me to duct tape you onto a chair and make you sad that you have only one dick for me to pleasure. I a sicko too so don't get bent out of shape gullyhog. P.S. I can almost taste your cum sliding down my throat.

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storyteller1991

10.06.2010 15:30

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Its okay, i can see that you were trying to do rhymes, but you didn't really have any flow to it. There were too many syllables some times and at others too few syllables. Try reading it out loud, that should help.

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Anonymous reader

12.06.2010 12:58

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Better than most for a first effort. At least you're making an effort at rhyme. Practice, practice, practice, and take a look at meter; Shakespeare's sonnets are a good guide. After a while it will begin to flow.

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TrixxyRavynwolfe

15.06.2010 19:24

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You would have to hear the rhythm for it to sound right lolz and stfu ejls, I'm not even a guy READ IT!!! LOOK AT MY NAME!!!! LOOK AT MY PROFILE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Anonymous reader

23.06.2010 23:05

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whoever thinks this is shit clearly has a dull sex life
i like it, it's actually what most women lust for

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Ashleysaurus

24.06.2010 00:31

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I agree, it was lacking flow. It was really good at the beginning though, and got a bit better towards the middle. Just keep practicing (:

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Anonymous reader

20.07.2010 01:02

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i loved it it is exactly wat i was looking for cant wait for more

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Anonymous reader

20.07.2010 02:09

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Hi, my name is Bianca and I agree with the other posters, it is severly lacking in flow. The reason the first few lines went so well is because it went in a pattern with each line being 7 syllables.
Try this: (first four lines are good) Make it so I cannot see, Master please spank and bite me. Make me scream all through the night, anything to make you bite. Have me be your pain crazed slave for I love to misbehave. Take everything have it your way, I will do all that you say. I have been a naughty kitty, don't you dare show me some pity! Punish me hard as you can, show me you're the strongest man. Whip my pussy oh so hard, make my body feel so charred. Pull my hair tighten the chain, For I want to feel more pain.

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|Crazed|Desire|

26.08.2010 05:04

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Wow, I thought it was really good :D
And to the person who first psted a comment there criticism and then theres insulting... I think you are a great writer to be honest, and also I think theres already some flow in it, and it great because it rhymse so well-done :3

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anonymous reader

19.11.2010 20:06

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I would have enjoyed it more if you had paid attention to the pace and the metre, the sado-masochism works well and the desire to be hurt sexually is well imagined, you seem to be a very sexy lady. Dan Dare.

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anonymous reader

03.01.2011 12:44

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im mouad my phon is 0633340140

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anonymous reader

06.04.2011 15:13

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i liked it. its a good piece of writing.

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anonymous reader

24.05.2011 20:23

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THE PERSON WHO WROTE DOMINATE ME HAS FUCKING ISSUES YOU NEED HELP, YOU WENT TOOOOOO...... DAMN FAR I THINK I THINK YOU NEED A EXORCISM SERIOUSLY .....

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lesley_tara

15.06.2011 20:57

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This is really good - poetry is the most difficult form, and you are brave to try it (I haven't even dared!). A few of the rhymes are a bit obvious, and the scan doesn't work in all the couplets - some are a bit uneven - but that doesn't affect it very much. Of course, I do like your choice of subject matter!! I have added this to my favourites list - it's actually the first poem there (the rest, like my own stuff, all being prose friction). Keep working at this, you'll get it better each time.

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anonymous reader

16.06.2011 08:42

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Thank you. I actually am working on a story instead. I knew when I was writing it that I wasn't anywhere near following the rules of poetry but I was trying to get arousal out of my system ^^' heh heh. I think it actually turned out well considered I wasn't even trying lolz. I thought it would be much worse.

~Lesbian Furry~

(anonymous was the only way it would let me comment)

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anonymous reader

04.07.2011 15:24

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Super infomartive writing; keep it up.

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TrixxyRavynwolfe

18.10.2011 20:03

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I have my own rhythm to it. You would have to hear how it is supposed to be said to hear the rhythm

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anonymous reader

16.11.2011 10:09

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I really neeedd to find this info, thank God!

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anonymous reader

07.05.2012 17:59

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The guy who posted the first comment don't know what he is talking about!

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anonymous reader

29.08.2012 18:03

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Ugh! My girlfriend loved this!

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anonymous reader

08.10.2012 04:53

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Finally ;-) Some lesbian hard core
I'd love to read a story from you...

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anonymous reader

08.10.2012 05:00

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Finally ;-) Some lesbian hard core
I'd love to read a story from you...

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anonymous reader

08.10.2012 05:01

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Finally ;-) Some lesbian hard core
I'd love to read a story from you...

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anonymous reader

17.10.2012 18:15

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عربى

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anonymous reader

17.10.2012 19:06

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i love this poem i love it thank you i love it is fantastic love you!

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anonymous reader

17.10.2012 19:08

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hello hi bye bye love it!

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useherman

29.10.2012 04:13

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decent poem although certain parts were a bit hard to read along cause the tempo of the words changed a bit from how short some lines were

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anonymous reader

30.10.2012 05:05

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its a rip off i read the same poem yesterday except it was a master and slave not a mistress

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anonymous reader

12.08.2013 01:35

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I think that you copied it word for word from another writer, you changed a coupled of word but other than that it is word for word. I think that you need to come up with YOUR own ideas instead of using someone else's

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