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Bait and Switch Ch. 02

Author: Dark_Brother

Date: 9 November 2011

Blowjob, Fantastic, Consensual Sex, Erotica

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Author's note: This story consists of multiple chapters. Some chapters will contain subjects that some may find objectionable, such as incest, anal, and perhaps even violence. While this chapter doesn't contain any of these, you are here forewarned not to get into this series if these subjects bother/offend you. All characters are over eighteen, as I can't abide kiddy-porn. If all this is suitable to your tastes, please enjoy my series, Bait and Switch.

(Quick FYI: The Robbie in this story is not the Rob in another of my series.)
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I woke up with a start, heart thumping in my chest, and sweat dripping from my brow, and looked around my room. Just a dream. It was just another nightmare, I kept telling myself. Images of strange pink creatures burning, dying, and the sounds of screams still echoed in my throbbing head.

Looking to the clock, I groaned. There was still a half-hour till my alarm was set to go off. The thought of trying to get more sleep and possibly continuing that dream were enough to get me out of bed.

I reached for the light switch with my mind, and as soon as I felt it, tried to flip it. Sharp, lancing pain drove into my mind. It felt like a spike was slowly being pounded between my eyes, and I stopped trying to move the switch. The pain lessened markedly, but the echo of it could still be felt, as I realized that I'd fallen to the floor.

"Are you alright in there, man?" Dennis said a few moments later, knocking on my door. "I heard you yell."

I got up on my knees, and held my head in my hands as I answered back, "Yeah, just a bad dream. Sorry I woke you."

As Dennis walked away, I wondered what had happened? I could still feel the switch with my mind, but I didn't dare try and flip it again. I could still feel the pain between my eyes, though it was only a pale shadow of what it had been. Had I overused my new ability yesterday, or did I somehow break it?

Deciding that I needed to rest my mind for a bit, I brought up my laptop. The latest episode of Big Bang Theory had downloaded last night, and it usually put me in a much better mood.

"Exterminate! Exterminate!" The sound of my alarm going off scared me all over again, which ruined the final scene of the episode I'd been watching, and turned my mood sour all over again. I quickly grabbed my Android phone, and turned it off. Considering the dreams I'd had last night, I decided that I really should follow Dennis's advice and change the alarm sound. I chose Aeris's Theme from Final Fantasy VII, as that was a soothing song, and hoped that it would be better to wake up to.

I changed out of my Batman pajamas, rubbing my eyes, and wishing I had slept better.

"Hey," Dennis said around a mouthful of cereal as I walked out of my room, "I've done some more checking online, and found even more people who claim to have gotten special abilities."

I froze as I heard him say that, trying to recall if I had told him what I could do now. Or rather, what I had been able to do yesterday. Then I remembered the conversation he'd had with me yesterday morning about the news reports he'd seen on T.V.

"Don't give me that look. I thought you were into this kind of weird stuff."

"What did you find now?" I asked, trying to act uninterested, but after the events of yesterday, he had my full attention.

"Some guy down in Brazil can make himself change colors like a chameleon. It almost makes him invisible." As he talked, bits of cereal spewed from his mouth, but he just kept talking excitedly. "Man, if I could do that, I'd hide out in the cheerleader's locker room. Can you imagine what goes on in there?"

I could only shake my head at his behavior, but wondered if what he was telling me was real. If I had received new abilities, it was completely likely that others might have too. The only thing I couldn't figure out was: what had the catalyst been?

"I forgot to ask you," my roommate said, finally swallowing his mouthful, "How did your date go with Gina?"

"It wasn't a date," I answered immediately. "It was a tutoring session." I couldn't hide my smile though, and knew I'd been somewhat busted.

"Tutoring... Right... Somehow I think she did more teaching than you did, from that smile of yours!"

I could feel the blood rushing to my face. "Let's just say, she may no longer be interested in Robbie." I remembered that he'd had a date last night too, and I wanted to change the subject. "What about your date? How'd it go?"

"Did you see a sock on the door? No? Then you know how it went." Dennis suddenly turned sullen, and I wondered what had happened. Being a Jock, he normally had his pick of women. From the noises that had emanated from his room on past occasions, I knew he got plenty of action. That was part of the reason we had instituted the 'sock on the doorknob': I had walked in on him on more than one occasion.

Knowing that I wasn't going to get any details, I ate my own cereal,, showered, brushed my teeth, and got out the door.

Wind and snow pelted me in the face as soon as I stepped outside, and I rushed to my car. Normally I prefer to walk to the campus, but in bad weather like this, I was glad I had my car. It took me a few minutes to get it warmed up, and I had to keep my wipers going and defrost running just to see the mushy road. The snow was coming down hard, and I envied the guy from Japan that could start himself on fire. That was a feat that would come in handy at the moment.

Slick as the roads were, I arrived on campus at the same time I usually did when I walked. By the time I made it to class, I was covered in snow, and slightly out of breath from running. On the plus side, no one threw any snowballs at me, or called me any derogatory names. Everyone was too busy trying to get out of this storm.

On the bad side, despite running and the cold, I fell asleep halfway through my science class, and couldn't get my programs to compile in my programming class; all the switches I wrote into my code kept failing. The Irony of that didn't escape me.

Lunch was a welcome break, but I couldn't get my mind off my failure with the switches. I was lost in thought, when something struck the back of my head. My headache had completely dissipated, thankfully.

"Look what we have here," Robbie's voice boomed above me, and I cringed, "a geek who thinks too highly of himself."

"Leave me alone, Robbie," I murmured, cradling my head in my hands. With my new ability out of commission, I knew I was no match for the bigger man.

"Weave me awone, Wobbie," he repeated in baby talk, laughing. "Gina told me you tried to come on to her, and she had to kick you out. She's mine, understand? Leave her alone, or you will have to deal with me." Robbie's tone made my head throb, but his words made my blood boil. Gina claimed *I* had come onto HER? Sure, I had flipped some of her switches, but in the end, she had been the one to kiss me.

I stood up from my chair, turning to face the bigger man, and spoke before I could think better of it. "Really, Robbie? I have a question for you: how bow-legged was she walking this morning?"

I could see that I struck home by the flash of red that blossomed across his cheeks. Quicker than I could think, he shoved me back, and I fell hard back into my chair. I knew I didn't stand a chance against him in a fight, and with my anger rising, I started to act before I could think. I made a switch in him to make him weaker, and firmly started moving it.

Standing back on my feet, I looked up to him, wishing I were the taller one. My fists were clenched at my side, as I glared at the bigger man.

"Look at the dweeb," someone said behind Robbie, and I realized he'd brought one of his cronies, "looks like he wants to fight you, Robbie. You'd better be careful, he looks angry." The mocking tone just added fuel to my ire, and I pushed more on Robbie's 'weak' switch, and remembered that I had created another switch yesterday.

"Maybe if you were a big enough man to satisfy your girlfriend, she wouldn't have come to me." The words were out of my mouth before I could think better of them.

Again Robbie's hands pushed against me, but in his weakened state, he fell back and almost tripped over Derek Peterson. Derek caught his leader, however, and helped him back to his feet. Robbie tried to shove me again, bracing himself this time, but he barely had any strength left in his arms.

"Leave me alone, Robbie, and never bother me again," I told the bully, menace dripping from my voice. "I'd hate for you to have any more accidents."

Robbie's arm cocked back, ready to strike me, but his eyes grew large as I flipped his other switch. In horror he looked down, to see the puddle forming at his feet.

"Come on, Robbie!" Derek cheered him on, not noticing what had happened. "Show this dweeb where he stands... Robbie?" It was too late. Robbie had turned and fled, an unmistakable dark stain still growing as he ran. "What the...?" he said, slowly turning back to me.

"Better follow him, unless you want the same," I threatened, feeling full of myself.

"Freak," Derek yelled, but turned tail, and followed the yellowish trail out of the cafeteria.

It wasn't until I sat down, that I realized my switches were working again, and my anger fled. A second later, the pain struck and everything went black.

* * *

Soft talking brought me out of a dreamless sleep, and I looked around. Under me was a stiff mattress, with white sheets. A white curtain hung from the ceiling, and everything seemed to be white around me. I've died, I figured, and let my head drop back to the pillow. I overused my ability, and it killed me.

"I see you finally woke up," a soft feminine voice sounded, and I looked up to see old Mrs. Polkins, her grey hair tucked neatly into a bun on the back of her head, and her large smock hugging tightly to her massive frame.

"Wh-What happaened?" I asked, finding my throat dry. Not dead then, I realized. Mrs. Polkins looked nothing like an angel.

"I was hoping you could tell me." Mrs. Polkins, the campus nurse, was a nice enough woman, I had heard, but this was the first time I'd had to come here. The lights flickered as she spoke, and I wondered if the storm was still going strong outside.

I just shook my head and lay back down. She kept an eye on me for another hour, before releasing me, telling me I should see a doctor when I got the chance.

Leaving her office, I noted that my head no longer hurt, and remembering the look on Robbie's face as he ran away brought a smile to my face. Hopefully I wouldn't have to deal with him again.

Checking my watch, I saw that I had already missed half my last class of the day, and just decided to go home, and get ready for work tonight.

The drive home took nearly as long as the drive to school this morning, the storm had gotten worse, and I noticed more than a couple cars had slid off the slick road. I took my sweet time, and made it back to my apartment safely.

Walking into my room, I plopped myself down on my bed, and braced myself, before trying to mentally turn off the light. The pain hit me almost immediately, but it was duller than it had been this morning. Either I was getting used to it, or it wasn't as bad. Better yet, the light had turned off, and I was still conscious.

The power flickered a few more times as I dressed for work, and I wondered if the restaurant would still be open in this storm. Deciding that I was better safe than sorry, I called my boss. He informed me in no uncertain terms that I was either to show up for work, or I could find a new job. I cursed him soundly, as I trudged through the snow to my car, and even louder as my car slid more than drove down the slippery roads.

I was ten minutes late, when I walked through the door.

"Where the hell have you been?" Thundered Bradley (Don't call him Brad) Cooper, my boss. He was a big bull of a man, and ran this restaurant with an iron fist. He was also the owner's son. The lights in the restaurant shone of his shaved head, and I could see he was already in a foul mood.

Looking around, I couldn't understand what his rush was, with the storm blowing outside, the restaurant was mostly empty, but I wasn't about to point that out to him.

Turning to point outside, I opened my mouth to explain, but he cut me off.

"Don't blame the storm. You knew what it was like when you called, and should have left earlier to make up for it. Now get back to the kitchens, and get to work."

All I could do was nod my head, and nearly run back to the kitchens. For a moment I was tempted to use my ability on him, but decided he wasn't worth the headache.

For the next hour, I cooked what few orders came my way, and otherwise kept to myself.

"We're out of juice up front," Shanna, a new waitress, called back.

"It's in the fridge, but make sure you get one out of the freezer to thaw out," I told her. I saw the brunette take one of the concentrated juice jugs out of the fridge, and take it up front. A few minutes later, she returned and walked into the freezer, only to come out a second later, shivering and empty handed.

"I can't find it in there, and it's freezing!" She walked up to me, rubbing her arms, and asking, "Can you help me find it, Nick?"

Shanna was a new waitress, so it was understandable that she wanted help. I followed her back to the freezer, and noticed that she had a pretty nice frame. Her hips were a little wide, but her waist was small, and she had a rather nice walk. Normally, all the cooks see of the waitresses were their faces, and while she was cute enough, she was no Gina.

"It's freezing in here," Shanna repeated herself, and I couldn't stop my retort.

"That's why they call it a freezer."

She gave me a look, like I was the idiot, but I just brushed it off. I noticed her eyes were a light blue, and she had really long lashes.

I heard the door close behind us, electronically latching, and decided to quickly look for the juice before we both froze.

"It's right here, next to the--" I cut off as the lights went off, and Shanna gave a small scream. Before I could act or think I felt her grab a hold of me, pinning my arm to my side and shivering from cold and fear. "Don't worry; the lights will come back on shortly. The power shouldn't stay off long. Let's see if we can find the door." It was a little hard groping for the door one handed, with her holding on tight to me, and somehow I'd become turned around, in the meantime.

"I hate the dark," she confided in me. I patted her back in an effort to calm her, and she pulled me tighter to her body. I couldn't help but feel her breasts pressed against my arm, and after a moment I realized her crotch was pressed to the back of my hand. All of a sudden, I felt myself growing hard, and a plan hatched in my mind, as I finally found the door.

"It's locked," I lied. "With the power out, we're locked in here till it comes back on." I could feel her shaking against my body, whether from fear or the cold I wasn't sure. "The good news is that with the power out, it won't get any colder in here."

"At home, when the power goes out, my sister Shannon and I comfort each other till it comes back on." I placed my free arm around her waist, pulling her tighter to me as I listen to her talk. "Sometimes we'll just hold each other, and talk about whatever comes to mind. My parents say we're two peas in a pod, but that's just silly. What else would twins be?"

Shanna has a twin? For a moment I was tempted to start using my ability on her, but then thought better of it. I didn't want to get caught in here doing something I shouldn't be, and have Bradley fire me, and the last thing I needed was a bigger headache. Besides, how much sweeter it would be if I won her over without making switches?

I let her continue talking, only saying a little here and there, letting our shared body warmth fight off the chill room. I knew it was helping to keep her calm.

"You don't remember me, do you?" Shanna asked unexpectedly, and I wracked my mind trying to figure out who she was. She laughed, after I remained silent for a few seconds. "It's okay. I wouldn't expect you to remember me with the likes of Gina in the same class, or even Prof. Frankens." She must have felt me tense up then. "Ha, I know all the men look at the professor, and Gina IS one of the hottest girls in school." She laughed again, and I sensed more than saw her look up at me. "Do you know why I got a job here?"

I shook my head before I realized she couldn't see me, and then said, "Because the tips are really good?"

"No," she suddenly grew quiet for a few seconds. "I probably shouldn't tell you this, but I've had a crush on you for the longest time."

"Me?" I blurted out. No woman has ever had a crush on me that I'd ever heard of. "Why me?"

"Why not?" She replied, matter-of-factly. "I don't go for the jocks; most of them are assholes anyway. I prefer a man that is smart, and for some reason I like pale skin, versus tanned. I dunno," she hesitated, growing shy again, "I guess I also think you're rather cute."

My heart was thumping in my chest as she spoke. To say I was shocked would be an understatement. I was aware of every inch of her body pressed to mine, her legs around my left leg, my left hand trapped between my jeans and her soft khaki-covered crotch, her breasts heaving against my arm, and it occurred to me that she was just as nervous as I was.

Despite what she had just revealed, I thought I was being bold as I leaned my head down to where I thought her lips might be, and ended up kissing her nose.

She giggled, and I thought it was rather cute to listen to. I felt her hands travel up my body to the back of my head, turning it, and then felt her lips touch mine.

Despite the frigid temperature in here, I felt a delicious warmth spread from where our lips made contact, then travel through my head, down into my body, and ignite in my loins. I had already been a bit hard, but now it was throbbing in my pants.

With the arm still around Shanna, I pulled her tighter to me, deepening the kiss, when she pulled away from me. "I can't-- I mean, we shouldn't," her voice was breathy, and suddenly I became self conscious.

Was I a bad kisser? Did my breath stink? The sudden absence of her body heat next to me made me shiver. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have done that," I murmured.

"No," she said, and I could hear her move closer to me, her arms wrapped around my body, "I wanted it to happen. I've wanted this to happen for a long time, but..." She trailed off, and I could tell she was just as nervous as I was. "What if the power comes back on, and someone finds us... You know..."

This time I was the one to laugh, but I tried to sound reassuring as I spoke. "The first thing Bradley is going to do is count the tills. It'll be a bit before anyone checks the freezer, and we can slip out before they do." I paused, and let my own arms wrap tightly around her, "And besides... We need to keep our temperatures up. I'd hate to freeze in here."

Shanna tittered, and I knew I'd won her over. "Keeping our temperatures up, huh? Is that what we're doing?" I felt her lips along the underside of my jaw, and turned my face down to hers, enjoying how soft her lips felt against mine.

Her tongue pressed against my teeth, and I opened my mouth to let it in. Our mouths writhed against each other, as her hands roamed my back. I let mine drop down to her ass, cupping a cheek in each hand.

"Oh, really?" she giggled playfully, breaking the kiss.

"Absolutely," I replied, more confident now as I groped her more firmly.

Her hands slid down my back, till she had a hold of my own rear. "Oh yeah?" She gave my cheeks a squeeze, and this time I had to laugh at her playfulness, till her hands slid around to my front, and grasped my manhood through my jeans. "Holy shit!" she stepped back from me for a second, and I wondered what was wrong this time. "Is that thing for real? It must be huge!" Her hands were then fumbling with my zipper, and despite the cold air, when she pulled my member out, it stood tall and firm. It was a little odd, doing this in the complete dark, but it just seemed to add to the eroticism. "Mmm, I can't wait to see this in the light!" she declared, gripping it around the middle. Her fingers weren't able to make it all the way around, and despite myself, I was grinning from ear to ear (not that she could see it).

"Why, thank you!" I told her, the words turning into a moan, as the cold air surrounding my cock was wonderfully replaced by the warm, wetness of her mouth. Placing my hands on the back of her head, my moans grew in volume, matched only by the slurping, sucking noises she was making.

I could feel her saliva dripping from my balls as her tongue and soft lips slid up and down my shaft. Every time she pulled away, the cold air would immediately cool where her mouth had been, only to be re-warmed a moment later, as she swallowed me back into her mouth. The eroticism of the whole thing was starting to get to me. Unexpectedly she pulled away and pinched me at the base of my cock.

"I know your close, but not yet." I think she stood up, and I heard her fumbling with her clothes, before she gave a sharp yelp. "Damn, it's COLD! Hurry up and slide that in me before the saliva freezes. I need someone warm against me."

Blindly, I groped my way forward, till I felt her ass facing me. I grabbed my large meat, and started to rub the head against her already sopping wet slit. We both moaned at the contact, and I couldn't stand the cold much longer, so I gave a shove, feeling the tip of my penis punch past her inner labia. Shanna grunted saying, "Holy fuck, that thing's a beast! Hurry up and warm me up with that thing. I'm freezing!"

Obligingly, I started moving my hips back and forth, slowly sinking deeper and deeper into her hot crevice. I kept my hands on her hips, and helped move her against me, as we slowly screwed in the pitch black freezer. After a few minutes, I felt myself hit her deepest parts, and she grunted again.

"Okay stud, fuck me hard now!" Her words were like music to my ears, and I picked up our pace.

"You are TIGHT!" I exclaimed, as I pulled all out but the head. Her pussy seemed to clamp down hard on me as I did so, only to suck me back into her, till I hit bottom again and again. Some of me was still outside her, but I was more worried about hurting her, than trying to get completely in her.

"Ung... Thank... You..." Shanna grunted in time to my thrusts. I felt her stand upright, as her hand snaked to the back of my head, and pulled my lips to her turned face. In this position, it felt like I was going deeper, but that was only because I was now also sliding between her thighs.

With her back pressed against my front, I brought my hands around to her front. I found her clit with my right hand, and slid my left up under her shirt. Upwards it traveled, till I felt the bottom of her right bra-cup, only to slip under it, and get my first feel of her firm breasts. They seemed to be about the same size as Gina's tits, but when my fingers found her areola, Shanna went crazy. Bucking hard against me, her moans grew in volume, muffled against my own teeth and gums. Her juicy hole clamped down tight on me, and quivered as she came, sending her hot liquids dripping off my scrotum.

It felt too good to hold back anymore, and I let loose inside her without thinking. My fingers pinched her clit and nipple hard as my whole body locked up, except for my spewing cock. All I could do was stand there, as shot after shot of my jism filled up this hot little brunette.

When the waves of pleasure had finally stopped crashing over me, I finally came to my senses.

"Oh, shit! I'm so sorry! I meant to pull out!"

Shanna laughed her beautiful laugh, as she pulled away from me. When my cock left her, there was an unmistakable sucking and then a 'pop' sound. I felt her hand on my cheek a split second before her lips brushed against mine. "Relax," she told me, "I'm on the pill, though I definitely didn't expect to be doing this tonight!" She laughed again, and just then the lights came on, as the power was restored. I got my first good look at her, her blue eyes were sparkling, and her chest was still heaving, but between her legs was her hairless crotch, and as I watched, some of my cum dripped out of her, and fell into her panties, which were still up around her thighs.

I looked back to her blue eyes, and noticed that they had gone large, as she looked at my crotch. Even softened as it was, it was still impressive.

"I got all of that in me?" She asked in wonder, but I couldn't lie to her.

"No, only to about here," I indicated a spot a bit more than halfway. "We'd better get dressed and out of here." I reminded her, and was rewarded with her blushing as we both got dressed. She gave another yelp when my cold cum in her panties touched her nether-lips, but otherwise dressed in silence.

I poked my head out of the freezer door, and took a breath of warm air, checking to see that the coast was clear. We both stepped out quickly, and not a moment too soon, as Bradley came around the corner a split second after the freezer closed.

"What are you two doing here?" He demanded. "I sent everybody home a while ago."

"We got locked in the freezer," Shanna exclaimed, and I worried that Bradley wasn't going to accept it, as he looked at us suspiciously.

"Well, you aren't going to get paid for the time you were in there. Only to the time I let everyone go for the night." He finally told us, and we both decided it was time to get out of there.

Outside the storm had drastically lessened, as I walked Shanna to her car.

"I'm glad I have tomorrow off. I don't think I'll be walking straight for awhile." I could feel my cheeks burning as she told me this, and could only smile in response. "I definitely want to do that again, but next time let's do it in a warmer place, and maybe I'll be able to get all of you in me!" We kissed again, and then made sure we had each other's number, before I watched her drive away, still in awe at what had taken place, and I'd never had to use my ability.

The drive home was slow, but seemed to be over before I knew it, with my mind on the events of the last couple days. I still couldn't believe that I had this new ability, or even that I had now screwed two very attractive women. In a daze, I walked up to my apartment, into my room, and exhausted fell into bed, still fully clothed.

I slept fitfully, a simple question repeating itself in my head: "Are you the one?".

Sometime past midnight, blue lights woke me up.


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    11.11.2011 14:47
    @fireengine douche

    yeah...... that's usually what happens when only a fraction of the people who read your stories can vote........

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2011 19:16
    are you working on ch.3
    Gage

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  • Dark_Brother
    11.11.2011 22:41
    I had to limit voting, because I was getting trolled horribly in my other stories. If you check the ratings of my last 2 chapters of Broken Bliss, you will see what I'm talking about.

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  • stargatefan
    12.11.2011 11:53
    I have really enjoyed this series so far. I do hope your main character learns how to harness his powers without headaches coming on. I also hope this new girl becomes his girlfriend and doesn't have a problem with Gina and him continuing to screw. This new girl did say Gina was really hot. Perhaps you'll make her bisexual. That would be awesome. Thanks for sharing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 10:24
    I am not going to lie but this story is not that great...
    1) The first chapter went tooo fast almost as if the character knew that he had powers and everything....too short of time for him to discover his powers....
    2) the hero himself is unattractive thus somewhat ruining the impression
    3) Monster cock really? There is almost no need for huge cocks! Don't u fucking get it? skill>size

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 00:33
    Awesome story! Write more!

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  • Meili
    14.11.2011 01:03
    Dude you should write scripts for movies, your stories are awesome :) it'd be a serious improvement looking at all the major movies lately that all have really crappy plots :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 06:59
    I like it. Waiting on ch3

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 07:45
    Great man dam good

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 12:48
    more more more more more more more more

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  • miroku
    14.11.2011 13:32
    Loving the series so far. Please keep it going and not let it die till it's done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 14:55
    brilliant! 10/10! Please keep it going!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 14:56
    brilliant! 10/10! Please keep it going!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 17:09
    You are an excellent writer. You have a very interesting style that brings the reader into the story, very enjoyable to read and I look forward to more!! Keep or up!! I wouldn't mind seeing more stories like your stripper series.

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  • fireengine8
    14.11.2011 17:16
    Positive vote for a good continuation with a twist.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 19:26
    your my favourite writer. ive enjoyed all your series and have read them all. thanks and keep going!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 20:11
    I love the stories man keep them coming.

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  • DWsmooth94
    14.11.2011 20:16
    Really enjoy this story can't wait for the next chapters

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  • bigmix
    14.11.2011 22:08
    That is one hell of away to end this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. This should teach Nick to be more careful with his power.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 22:35
    holy shit this story is fuckin brilliant. by far you are the best author on this website, if not in the entire world

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 02:10
    Very good again.
    The massage bit even relaxed me...

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 06:00
    Great story. Will there be more?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 06:11
    Armitage? Awesome choice. Honestly, I hate having found someone who writes really well and isn't just done with their work. Usually the stuff I find is years old and I can peruse it at my leisure. I hate waiting, but on the flip side I understand pressure to perform and hate that just as much. Just write in a manner that won't burn you out. We'd all prefer to wait a few more days, weeks, or even months, rather than forever.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 09:34
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'M the one!! Take ME!!

    Great series underway.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 10:53
    I love the stories dude keep them coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 13:30
    Best stories can't wait till the next!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 16:15
    I like it. Waiting on ch3

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  • codmanhunt
    15.11.2011 16:28
    more more more lol this is really good

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 20:30
    This is amazing, I never comment or like, but this really deserves the best. More ASAP would be appreciated!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 20:53
    Wow..... Love the whole story

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 22:56
    alsome!!! more ASAP!!! please!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 23:14
    Keep them coming. Great story as always.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 00:10
    Awesome story. You are a great writer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 04:12
    good, cant wait for him to slip his cock into the hot professor.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 07:38
    Great story, I love it and can't wait for more. Mr. Xavier..... I see what u did there!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 13:56
    im looking forward to chapter 4.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 14:16
    Congrats, bring on Chapter 4,5...........

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 15:32
    Oh please post the next one soon. Not gonna lie these are good and they freaking make ME horny... And I'm a 18 year old girl that normally doesn't read this kinda stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 17:24
    you little fucker .i bet it felt good.now me .

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 17:39
    fuck me!do it now!or else!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 18:00
    You should be the ds :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 21:51
    dude gotta say you are an amazing writer. keep it up. cant wait for more- Vanofthedawn

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 13:07
    great story dude lookin forward to next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 14:41
    enjoying this series very much. thanks for sharing it

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 16:54
    Keep it coming. Actually might be better if we can have all of it at once when finished.

    Remember do not let the details of the Aliens and their impending attack slip by. The best parts of this story is the actual story & plot the sexual acts are secondary.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 17:13
    Wow dude, this story is amazing. Even better than your other series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 18:16
    agreed with the other guy plot kicks ass. the sex is great but too much takes away. keep up the good work big fan-Vanofthedawn

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 18:40
    Great as always cant wait
    Elitemohawkrob

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 22:01
    The only thing i don't like is how short the stories are i actually timed my self and got 2:67 sec. Other than that great

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 22:37
    It's the Tenth "Doctor," not "Doctor Who." It's okay if you wanna make a big deal about this geek thing but make sure to at least get it right.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 00:19
    While the sex is great, I find myself reading these chapters more for the story line then anything else. Keep up the amazing work, you obviously have a lot of fans.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 02:30
    hurry up with the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 05:31
    turning out to be a fucking amazing story, have read all the other series you have on here and they all great in their own right, amazballs. dissapointed to hear that after this series you wont be able to write as you turly have a talent. 10/10 so.... good luck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 10:31
    dude, u r amaazin
    but plz try to add a bit more detail as in ur other stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 16:31
    the story is good cant wait for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 08:56
    Dude you should write scripts for movies, your stories are awesome :) it'd be a serious improvement looking at all the major movies lately that all have really crappy plots :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 09:28
    Great story line keeping u hooked from the beginning!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2011 02:20
    I give this story a 2/10 for sex and a 7/10 for story 9/20... not bad coming from me... I've read better but that was still really good

    -RJX

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  • AngelEyes15
    21.11.2011 06:47
    it's not a bad story just a bit fake with the switches i think, n the sex not ALL that sexy is it, time to take it off 100% anyway as you have others :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2011 15:44
    great great story like the characters great descriptions of sex. keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2011 22:22
    DARN THAT WAS GOOD, MY PUSSY GOT WET JUST READING IT, KEEP GOING, PLEASE...

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 01:49
    I give this story a 9/10 for sex (a REALLY high rating from me) and a 8/10 for story (also a REALLY high rating from me) for a total of 17/20... THAT'S THE BEST RATING I HAVE EVER GIVEN A STORY!!!!! Before this the highest rating was 14/20! You have the best story by 3 rating points... can you top it?

    -From the tuffest critic on this site, RJX

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  • AngelEyes15
    22.11.2011 05:11
    A 'wet pussy' switch?? Itch switch?? Too many, too easy. Now you have plenty of positives it's time to make a bit of room :)

    As for Mr self-rating RJX tuffest critic - wowee @@ lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 08:56
    I'm starting to see this guy as a bit of a villain in this piece. Pretty realistic to human nature I'd say, but with all the switch flipping, and not immediately going into full panic preparedness mode when finding he'll have to save the Earth he certainly isn't a classic good guy.
    Funny thing is it might be easier to excuse his nonchalant attitude and his not immediately informing the world and going for help if he put on a costume, cause it's seems the natural thing for superheros to do now. However crazy.

    Surprisingly good read for a porn-site story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 16:39
    Love your stories, and the fact that you use so many words usually not seen on a site like this (i.e. tremulous). I also love all the great geek references.
    One note that caught me in several of your stories though is you calling chest muscles "pecks". They should be "pecs", short for "pectoral"

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.11.2011 01:48
    9/10 for sex and 8/10 for story... 17/20 the same as last time... the best!

    -RJX - critic/writer (but mostly critic)

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2011 12:07
    oh wow im sooo horrny now

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2011 23:05
    pretty good. i give 9.48/10. Try a little less alian contact, like only brief mentions

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  • xtremejump
    17.12.2011 02:55
    Positive vote from me. Keep it up, just like your main character. Ha.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 03:31
    More thumbs way up. On your way to immortality.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 03:32
    More thumbs way up. On your way to immortality.

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  • xtremejump
    17.12.2011 03:36
    Great, Greater, Greatest. Immorality does await you

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  • xtremejump
    17.12.2011 04:19
    Great story, good build up

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 19:14
    Story is pretty solid but some really cheezy bits that seem to shoehorn their way in kill the mood. The alien is named Lela. The twins are named Shanna and Shannon. Really?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 12:02
    My pussy got sooo wet reading this but I think his roommate should have joined him and Gina

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 20:42
    just starting to read this series im likeing it so far :) but i like everything u do so its no surprise
    #desil14

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2012 23:39
    Omg I have a boyfriend jus lik that (a total geek) :D lol we both love batman and fuck each other crazy :P but I love your stories keep them comin

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 03:52
    Epic story so far. Made it onto my frequent writer list with how much I have read so far. I will read all of your stories after reading this. Just like RJX, I am pretty picky and give you the highest of esteem.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 04:36
    He needs a good nights sleep

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 20:08
    Sorry but it's not doctor who it's the doctor

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 06:23
    His roomates name is Dennis not Derek

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 23:12
    you numnt. picard is a badass. kirck is the one that is dead

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 23:55
    below: db has completed the series and left the site. so he cant "keep them comin."

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 00:21
    i know im weird but this is like the third time ive read the series and ITS FUCKING AWESOME

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 00:21
    i know im weird but this is like the third time ive read the series and ITS FUCKING AWESOME

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  • Emperor
    19.06.2012 15:36
    Awesome ... I love the college vibe .

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.06.2012 05:45
    Again and I will repeat this process stripsue and angeleyes15 suck. Its much nicer to just leave a comment with your dislikes. Instead you ruin the rating of the story for others by saying negative. I will do this from now on with everything I read.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2012 01:18
    Let me tell you about my first time. It happen when i was six years old. I last it to my daddy. My mother, I never knew her, she die when I was born. I don’t remember when the first time my daddy molested me was, I probably happen since I was a baby. For me it was normal, he would give me a bath almost every night and that’s when he would do it. He always put extra attention to cleaning my pussy. It wasn’t until I was six that he took it to another level. I remember it was Friday after school; he was in his room watching a porno on the TV, when he calls me into his room. I remember he told me to sit in the middle of his legs: as I sat in his bed I could feel his erect cock. I sat there watching the porn movie with him, not really knowing what was happening. That was the first time my daddy ate my pussy. He even try putting his finger up my little hole. I remember how much it hurt, telling him to stop, crying as he rip my pussy open with his fingers, but he never did. After that he took

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2012 23:00
    wrong again kirk is the bomb. picard can go jump into space

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2012 20:56
    Fuck you Picard isn't a pussy he is fucking awsome Janeway is the fucking pussy she ficking lost herself crew and ship for seven fucking years dude Picard is awsome screw you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2012 23:23
    The end's a bit creepy...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2012 01:47
    Wolverine?? I'm pretty sure that a normal guy would know what that is... I mean there are the old movies that lots of people watched

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2012 01:47
    Wolverine?? I'm pretty sure that a normal guy would know what that is... I mean there are the old movies that lots of people watched

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2012 01:47
    Wolverine?? I'm pretty sure that a normal guy would know what that is... I mean there are the old movies that lots of people watched

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 00:52
    Great story 9 / 10 Wow. All caps dude, your a break from the normal comments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 02:10
    MMMYYYYY COOMMMENTS SEZ I HAZ CAPZ!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 02:13
    ↑ i hate fiction. i need real shit not fake shit. cause its fake, i'd say -1/1

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 00:01
    , you are an idiot . You cant even come up with your own article so you resahh a bunch of crap jelous women spew out to feel better in ther mens size 36 jeans. And i find it bizzare that you would state there is not a single shot where her face and body appear in the same frame. Did you not watch the video before you wrote your little article ? AND BTW she never said THIS IS WHAT A POST PREGNANT BODY HAS TO LOOK LIKE she's saying ITS NOT IMPOSSIBLE, with a little work you can MAKE IT HAPPEN. mommyrexia lol come on are you kidding? Did you see mariah BEFORE she gave birth? SHE WAS HUGE!! The article YOU suggest talks about mothers who are ignoring the advice to gain 25-30 healthy pounds durring the pregnancy in order to help maintain their figure post pregnancy. Obviously you didnt read that one either.. I really hope you dont have any kind of degree.. It would just clearly be another educational abortion brought on by the wonderful american education system. Seriously, yo

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2013 00:35
    Amazing story, but you MUST stop changing tenses

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  • Dark_Brother
    09.02.2013 00:15
    Sorry, this was supposed t be Chapters 5-6. I re-posted it it anyway with the right title.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 00:56
    Can I make a request that you change Professor Frankens story? I'd like to see her continue to teach at the same school and still be in a relationship with Nick.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2013 04:27
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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2013 10:00
    Wheel of Time reference FTW.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2013 09:09
    I'm so glad that the internet aolwls free info like this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.03.2013 02:03
    U called 2 other people derek lol his room mate and brent. Ur kept refering to dereks party when it brents then u called the sis dereks sis not brents lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2013 09:53
    ich will sex haben okay leute

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.06.2013 07:51
    horrible news about D_B.. I'm so sorry for your loss. you are doing an amazing job with this story though well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 08:52
    The girl who wrote is right ! I want to read the story and thank the author for his/her contribution, not read about guys wanting pics. You arent going to get any, so stop asking.

    To the author, thanks. I pulled my cock so much, It'll take the restore the day to refill my balls.

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    01.08.2013 20:23
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    01.08.2013 20:23
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    11.08.2013 01:31
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    11.08.2013 01:46
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    01.09.2013 09:22
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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2013 00:11
    ITS NOT THE TENTH DOCTOR WHO ITS THE TENTH DOCTOR. GIVE DAVID TENNANT SOME RESPECT PLEASE. HE WA SUCH A GOOD DOCTOR

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    06.01.2014 22:38
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    16.05.2014 12:35
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    15.06.2014 06:39
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    24.06.2014 18:31
    arab

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2014 06:23
    5th Time Readinq The Plot Of The Story Is Intoxicant And Addictive

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2014 05:16
    سكس

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2014 01:28
    Sasha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2014 00:55
    Surprised it's number one of all time, but series so far is definitely good. Just hope this wasnt really the pinnacle of the series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2015 11:57
    kjhfd

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.02.2015 11:37
    im liking this one also look forward to more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2015 18:19
    Have read the first 3 chapters and I'm hooked. Very well written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2015 01:23
    I have g-freind who's kinda nerdy :/ ,extremly sexy, fuck constantly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2015 13:45
    100 000'th view, keep up the vood work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2015 17:37
    Holy shit. I'm so wet!! This story is wonderful

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2015 02:17
    I read this whole story on here once but now I am unable to get my type larger than a miniscule size. Maybe later. A good series as I remember. Bfreetorun

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2015 15:44
    Picard rules he's a diplomat a warrior and a pimp kirks just a womanising prick in a cheap wig

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2015 02:00
    Shut the FUCK up

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  • Clover+Ernest
    27.12.2015 11:09
    great story, but damn talk about a flame war. this isnt fucking youtube guys, grow the fuck up. seriously.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.02.2016 11:21
    Bait And swich

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.02.2016 18:32
    Pretty good stuff.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2016 11:50
    Novinhas

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  • pyroclast
    17.04.2016 14:37
    Good story line, but watch getting the names of the guys right as one anon poster said. Can you get someone to proof-read for you? Doing it yourself can lead to errors as we have seen. Thank you for following your late buddy's request.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2016 23:22
    IS EVERYTHING ON THIS SITE A FUCKING SEQUEL. WRITE NEW STORIES

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2016 23:10
    Very goodl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 01:09
    The comments got me dying!
    10/10 man keep it coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 13:53
    Loan luan

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2016 22:02
    tia viuda ecuador

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2017 07:51
    You surely know how to encourage someone to read the next chapter

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  • Stealth+Eagle
    01.12.2020 02:28
    What happened to Chapters 3 and 4?

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