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Bait and Switch Ch. 21 (Final)

Author: Dark_Brother

Date: 7 January 2012

Anal, Fantastic, Bi-sexual, Blowjob

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The sound of a text message woke me up, and I groggily reached over to check it. Shanna and Gina had kept me up most of the night, and then when Nancy had come in... Okay, I couldn't help but smile at the memories from last night, but I WAS exhausted. I had quite literally stumbled back through my door, and fallen asleep before my head hit my pillow. I couldn't even remember the drive home. I was thankful that Lela hadn't come to get me last night, or I'd be even more tired than I was now.

"Get your rest today. Tonight we will take care of the demons." the text read, and it was from my sister. I wondered why she didn't use the nanites.

I sat up in bed, and only then realized that something wasn't right. I was still fully dressed, including my shoes, but my posters were gone, and someone had rearranged my room. A groan sounded next to me, and in shock I see Robin laying there next to me.

Did I get with Robin last night? I wondered, but can't see how I had. I was still fully dressed... Then I recognize my surroundings. I'm in Dennis's room! I must have been so tired last night that I turned right when I should have turned left...

As quietly as I was able, I tried to sneak out, but to no avail.

"Hey, dude," Dennis murmured just as my hand touched the doorknob, "next time sleep in your own bed. You were quite the buzzkill."

Embarrassed I made it back to my own room, and planned on going back to sleep, but after thirty minutes of just lying there, fretting about what I was going to do with the demons tonight, I finally got up, and showered.

I had intended on skipping classes today, but since I was already awake, I figured I might as well go in. Besides, it might help to distract me.

"Nick!" Someone hailed me, their breath misting in the early morning chill. "Hey, have you been studying?" The woman smiles at me, but I don't recognize her.

"Studying?" I ask in confusion. "It's only the second day of the semester. We can't have any tests already!"

She laughs at me, but I still have no idea who this is. Her hair is a mousy brown color, reaching down to her shoulders, and matching brown eyes. She stood a little shorter than me, and her skin seemed a little loose on her.

"No, for math club, silly!" she informed me, and suddenly I thought I knew who this was.

"Barbara?" I asked just to be sure.

"Sorry," she told me, her smile getting bigger, "I forget how different I look after losing so much weight. I know most people put on weight over the holidays, but for some reason I just kept shedding the pounds!"

I could see the old Barbara in her now. She could almost be cute, if she fit in her skin better. Then I remembered what I'd done for Mrs. Polkins, and turned up Barbara's skin elasticity, hoping that would help her.

"Yeah! Sorry," I said, happy for her, "You look great!" Then remembering how Mrs. Polkins had changed mentally, I think to ask, "How have you been feeling?"

"Good," she said, her smile never leaving her thin face. "I've had a lot more energy, and have been surprised by all the attention the guys've been giving me." She laughed again, and I can't help smiling with her.

"Well, good luck," I told her. "I'd better get to class." I thought of Donald and Adam, and hoped that everything I'd done for them has turned out as well as it did for Barbara.

I was almost to my class, when another female voice stopped me in my tracks. This one I knew from hours of lectures last semester. Professor Frankens was standing in the doorway to her classroom, as I turned to look at her. She was dressed pretty modestly for her, with a suit jacket on, and a skirt that actually went all the way down to her ankles.

"I need to have a talk with you, Mr. Xavier," she told me, as she opened the door wider to let me through. As I entered her classroom, wondering why she was being so formal, I saw that it was empty and guessed that she didn't have a class this hour. My first thought was that she was after a tryst, but I really didn't feel up to it quite yet that morning, and knew I needed to save my strength for that evening.

The professor stepped back in front of me, and led me down to her office. I was trying to come up with a way to gently turn her down, without having to talk too much, knowing that my voice still had an effect on her.

I still hadn't come up with a way, when she sat down behind her desk and looked me squarely in the eyes. Her brown orbs bore into me for a bit, and I realized that she probably hadn't brought me in here for sex, after all.

"First of all, Mr. Xavier, I want to thank you for being discreet about what happened between us before Winter break," she told me, her voice stiff and formal.

I gave her a quick nod, still wary of speaking.

"Please understand that what I did was wrong," she continued. "In my years of teaching I have never crossed that line with a student. I still don't fully understand why I did so with you. I hope you don't harbor any ill will towards me for what I did, or for saying that it can't happen again."

To say I was disappointed would be an understatement. I had truly enjoyed my encounter with the sexy professor, and even with the guilt of knowing that I'd manipulated her into it, I'd looked forward to further escapades with her. I saw that she was looking at me, waiting for an answer. I still didn't want to speak though, and influence her unduly. When I gave her another nod, she grimaced, but continued.

"I've put in my resignation here, and have already been accepted in another college across state." Her tone was sad now, and I felt sorry for her.

"No," I said, before I could think better of it, and saw her shudder slightly at the sound of my voice, but I went on. "You don't have to do that. I promise not to tell anyone, and we don't have to...to you know..." for some reason I had a hard time saying sex in front of this older woman, despite what we'd done together. I figured it had something to do with the formal attitude she was portraying, and didn't want to be the first one to say it.

"But I do, Mr. Xavier," she insisted. "Even as you speak, I feel myself being drawn to you. I can't risk losing my career over the desires of my body." Her face grew stern, and she looked at me harder. "Make no mistake; I'm not saying that I'm in love with you or anything of that sort, only that I can separate lust from love."

Only then did I realize that she blamed herself for what we'd done. It wasn't her fault, and I truly felt bad for my part in it, but could see that she was determined to go, no matter what I said. If I were willing to use my switches on her, I could change her mind, I knew, but I still wasn't willing to cross that line again.

"I understand," I told her. "You will be missed," and not just by me. I knew how most of the male students liked to ogle the beautiful professor, and not a just few of the females, too.

"I have already ensured that you will pass my class, this semester. I have no doubt you would have done it on your own. Professor Hallowburton will be taking over Math Club practices from now on. I will be here till the end of term, but would ask that you don't say anything to anyone until after I'm gone." She sounded depressed, and I wished there was something I could do for her, but short of making a 'happy' switch, I didn't know what else to do.

Professor Hallowburton was an alright kind of guy, but he was no Frankens. She would be sorely missed in Math Club practices as well.

"I won't tell anyone," I told her again, mentally thinking other than Shanna, who I'd already told, but I felt sure she wouldn't say anything to anyone about it.

In the end, saddened, but knowing that she was doing what she felt was best for her, I made the 'happy' switch, and put some effort behind turning it on. It might be that I would need that strength later, but Professor Frankens deserved it, after how I'd used my switches on her before. I wished her the best of luck, and left her office.

There was a commotion outside the classroom as I walked out, and I had to grab someone to find out what was going on.

"It's all over the news!" the other student yelled at me, before running on, somewhat fearfully, I thought.

I had no idea what he was talking about, so pulled out my android phone, and started looking at news sites, online. It didn't take me long to find out. Government satellites had picked up asteroids moving at a high rate of speed towards the Earth. If the objects continued on their current trajectory, they were likely to hit the planet. Estimates ranged on how much damage the supposed asteroids would cause, and which cities would be hit the hardest.

A spokesperson for the Whitehouse stated that the asteroids were moving faster than any other asteroids they've ever encountered, which was why they'd only came into visible range late last night, and would start impacting the Earth sometime tomorrow morning.

I read a few more stories on it, and even went to a religious link that started talking about the end of days, and the second coming. Everybody was scared, and the best advice I read stated that the smartest thing to do would be to stay home, unless you knew of a fallout shelter you could use.

The government stated that they were trying to figure out some way to disperse the asteroids, and that they were working with other world leaders to find a solution to the problem. I wished them luck, but didn't have much faith in it.

I knew better. Those weren't asteroids flying free in space on a collision course. They were the demon's fleet, coming to eradicate the human race. Staying home or even fleeing to the mountains as other sites had recommended, would be useless. Fallout shelters might work, but I doubted it. No, the best hope was that I needed to come up with some sort of strategy to stop them.

I didn't have much faith in that plan, either.

School for the rest of the day was cancelled, so that we could go home and try to be with our families.

The streets were packed, and I was thankful that I'd walked this morning, hoping the chill winter air would help me wake up. I passed a couple shops on my way home, and saw that the looters had already begun to deface property, and break in windows. If it was this bad already, I didn't even want to think about how bad it would be tonight.

Perhaps my last night on Earth. I shook, to rid myself of the defeating thought.

Shanna called me as I walked into my apartment. "Have you seen the news?" she asked excitedly, and I could hear the fear in her voice.

"Yeah, I just found out. Did you go to class today?" I asked back.

"No, I just woke up. I saw they closed the campus. It's not asteroids, is it?" Her tone told me she already knew the answer. "It's your demons, instead," she answered her own question.

"Yeah, I think it is," my reply was short, but I couldn't think of anything else to say.

"When are you coming to get me?" For a second I was perplexed, and then I remembered her demand to be there when I went up against the aliens.

"Shanna, you're safer here on Earth than you will be up there," I tried to tell her softly.

"No, Nick," she shot back at me hotly, "If you're going to be in any kind of danger, then I demand to be there, too. You promised."

I hadn't really promised, but I was still too tired to argue. I decided that when Lela came to get me, I would just happen to forget that she was to pick up Shanna too, in all of the excitement. Either she would understand, or she wouldn't, but she would be safer on Earth, than up in that ship.

I pulled up pictures of the supposed asteroids online, and saw that they were flying in formation. I knew the government couldn't have missed that fact, and realized that the asteroids were a cover up. I wondered what their real plan would be, and if it might interfere with whatever I was going to do.

It was impossible to tell just how many ships there were in the grainy photos, but I could easily see that it was a lot more than the seven ships Lela and I had at our disposal. This wouldn't be a fight, and it would take everything I had at my disposal, to make sure it didn't turn into a massacre.

"One more time," I heard coming from Dennis's room as I walked to the kitchen to get a glass of water, and wondered what was going on.

"But I'm exhausted," I heard Dennis say back.

"We may be dead tomorrow, dammit. Get it back up, and let's go again." I laughed inside, thankful that some people were coping with the crisis by other means than looting, and vandalizing.

'Go to your room,' the message flashed before my eyes. I set down my glass half drank, and walked into my room, for what I hoped wasn't the last time.

There was a short flash of light as I passed through the doorway, and I found myself on Lela's ship, in the featureless, blue-lit room. Summer was already there, and she was hopping from one foot to the other in impatience.

"Oh, good, you're here!" she spouted as soon as she saw me. She gripped me in a fierce hug, before pulling back, and searching my eyes.

"Good to see you too, sis," I tried to greet her cheerfully, but didn't have it in me right then. "Are we going after the demons already? I thought we were doing that tonight..."

Apparently she either didn't like my words, or what she saw on my face. I soon found out it was the latter.

"You look like shit," she told me. "Why didn't you try to get more sleep last night?" I almost laughed as I saw how tired she looked.

For a moment, I wondered if she knew what I'd been doing with Shanna, Gina, and Nancy, and knew that it was possible, as Lela was always watching me. I noticed how upset she seemed, and could feel her hands shaking on my arms.

"I'm sorry, stuff came up," as I said that, her quick glance at my crotch told me she knew exactly what I'd been doing. "Relax, will you? We still have some time before we face them." I tried to get her to calm down, but my soothing tone seemed to have the opposite effect.

"It's not that... Something...um..." Summer bit her lower lip, as she tried to formulate what she wanted to say. "Lela's been incapacitated," she finally blurts out, and I feel like my whole world has just been rocked.

"Lela? How?" I demand to know, gripping my sister's arms now. I felt a knot form in my stomach, as I worried about the gentle alien, but my logical mind took over. If Lela was down, it wasn't a complete loss, as there were still six other ships. Ships that couldn't fight and I had no experience in. Maybe if another alien piloted... "Where's Harana?"

The fear increased in Summer's blue eyes. "She is taking care of Lela," she whispered.

"What happened to Lela?' I demanded to know again, wondering why Summer was acting like this, and then it occurred to me. "The kids?"

She nods, and I can see tears running down her cheeks now. Fear grips my heart. Not the kids, too, oh, please not the kids, too! I have to get to Lela, I know, but I don't know how to open the hatch that leads to her.

"Lela, Harana!" I yell, hoping to get one of their attentions. "I can't open the door. Lemme back there."

"Nick," Summer's hand on my shoulder makes me feel claustrophobic, and I shake it off, "You can open it with the nanites. Just send the command to the ship mentally." I look at my sister stupidly. Could it really be that easy? I knew that she could have done it for me, but that had never been my sister's way. She was always willing to help me, but never one to do things for me. How ironic that her ability ended up being the same way.

Without hesitation, I mentally commanded the ship to open the door, and sure enough, it opened to my right. I dashed through it, headless of the blackness that surrounded me. I knew I had a few steps before the path turned, and my eyes adjusted to the infrared light, before I slammed into the wall. I ran the entire way to where I knew Lela to be, and held up outside her door, slightly out of breath, and full of dread.

Suddenly I was apprehensive, not certain what I'd find inside. Summer hadn't told me what had happened with Lela's and my kids. She'd only told me that the alien was incapacitated, and then she'd started crying.

No, I thought, they had to be okay. Something about the alien hatching process must have been hard for the mother. Try as hard as I might, though, I couldn't convince myself of that. How could eggs hatching be hard on the mother?

I don't know how long I stood outside that doorway, but finally I concluded that I had to walk through it. I had to face what was inside. Commanding the ship to open this door, I stepped through.

Lela wasn't on the incubator, as she had been every other time I'd been in here, and for just a moment, I wondered at that oddity, till my brain realized that the children wouldn't be in there, when they hatched. I sensed her switches in an adjoining room, and opened that hatchway before going in.

It took me a moment to comprehend the scene before me. Lela was lying on the floor, her arms around some small, unmoving objects, and Harana had her arm around the older alien, trying to comfort her, and talking in their dual-toned language.

I took a step forward, my eyes and even my senses drawn to the six or seven objects that Lela was cradling. I could hear what I took to be crying from Lela, and only then did it really hit me that our kids hadn't survived.

I didn't know what to think, or even what to feel. Yes, they were my kids, but they weren't entirely human, and it wasn't like I had helped incubate the eggs. The entire time Lela had been on that incubator, it had almost felt like she was taking care of someone else's eggs.

But now that I saw the tiny things, it struck home. These tiny things were the product of Lela's and my mating. I had helped create these tiny creatures, and there was some small part of me in each one. My eyes could see that they were gone, but my heart refused to believe it.

I dropped to my knees next to Lela, and only then did the other two notice me, but I ignored them. There was something...

I looked at the tiny creatures, marveling at how they looked. They had the pinkish skin of Lela's race, but it was tinged just a bit by the baby pink of a human baby. Their eyes were smaller than Lela's in comparison to the head, which was also smaller in comparison to their body. I noticed that some had four fingers and some had three. There were six in all, and they all had light tufts of hair on their peaceful heads. If I ignored the fact that they weren't breathing, I could almost imagine that they were all sleeping peacefully.

All of this I noted with the outside of my concentration, however. There was something... It almost felt like I could sense them, like I could with my switches, but I had never made switches in these little creatures.

"I tried to save them," Lela's voice penetrated the fog that surrounded my mind, distracting me. "Our DNA just didn't mix," I could barely understand her, as she tried to speak English through her tears. "They all broke their shells, but didn't live long past that." Lela choked up again, and Harana tried unsuccessfully to console her.

Why can I sense them, if their dead and I haven't given them a switch? The question played through my head a few times, before something occurred to me.

Without a word, I jumped up and ran back to the blue room. I didn't say a word as I burst in, only stopping long enough to grab Summer's wrist, and drag her after me. She yelped when she passed into the darkness, but I knew her eyes would adjust soon enough, thanks to her nanites.

"Nick, what are you...?" she tried to ask me, but I just kept running.

As soon as we were in the room with Lela, Harana, and my kids, I finally stopped, and felt for them again. It was fainter now, but I could still make them out. I had to hurry, or it might be too late.

"Take off your shirt," I commanded my sister, as I started to do the same. Would it be enough, or would it take more contact? I didn't know, but I had to try.

"I hardly think now is the time—" Summer started to protest, but I cut her off.

"Just do it! Hurry, before it's too late." Summer looked from me to Lela and back again, before quickly removing her shirt. I didn't think I had time to explain, my sense of them was fading too fast.

Lela and Harana started saying something in their language, but I ignored them as I hugged my sister close to me, and felt my strength with the switches magnify greatly at the contact. A small part of me noticed she wasn't wearing a bra, and I was grateful for the extra skin that would be made. I commanded the ship to bathe us and the babies in the healing yellow light, not knowing if it would be necessary, but wanting every advantage I could have. I felt Summer pulling down her pants, hindered slightly as we hugged, and then she worked on mine. They hit the floor a second later, and she wrapped one leg around mine, and placed the other between my legs. I closed both of mine, and knew it was now or never.

This was about the most physical contact I was going to be able to have with her, short of actually having sex. Intercourse was the furthest thing from my mind right then, as I started to form the group switch, and attaching it to all six babies.

I tried to push it, but nothing happened. I pushed harder, then harder still on their 'life' switch. I didn't know if it would work, but I knew I could sense them, and how could I do that, unless they were still alive, but too weak to register to Lela's advanced technology. I noticed that the switch I'd made wasn't completely off, and that gave me hope.

I groaned as I threw everything I had behind the switch, and some distant part of me heard Summer moan as well, but I ignored it as I felt the switch move a little. It was just a tiny bit at first, but as I continued to shove against the switch, it picked up speed.

Just before I blacked out from the effort of moving the switch, I heard a small, almost imperceptible yawn.

* * *

I awoke with a start, as fear coursed through me, followed immediately by a massive pain in my skull, and I collapsed backwards onto a soft surface.

"He's awake," a voice said, sounding almost distant, but I recognized it as Shanna's.

What's she doing here? I wondered, and then realized that I must have been dropped back off at home, after I...

I sat up again, as I remembered why I'd been unconscious in the first place. "My kids," I croaked, wondering at the sound of my own voice.

"They're fine," Summer told me, as my eyes tried to adjust to the light. Something didn't seem right. Everything had a yellow tinge to it, which threw my vision off.

So Summer was here too. By the sound of her voice, she was doing better than I had been. "You saved them, Nick. I'm so proud of you. You did it!"

I felt a hand grip a hold of mine, and gave it a squeeze, but I still couldn't focus my eyes. I knew the hand to be my sister's, because I could sense my switches better, and could even feel the one that I'd made for the six little babies.

"My eyes," I said, glad my voice was improving a little as I spoke. "I can't seem to focus."

I felt someone take my other hand, and knew from the switches I sensed that it must have been Shanna. "Lela said you caused some damage to yourself, saving your kids. The nanites and this yellow light are working on healing you, but it is going to take a bit." That's nice, I think, the yellow light will get me better in no time. Wait... Yellow light... In my room? I slightly remembered Lela using it that night in the basement, and relaxed. "Nick, you really had us worried. We understand what you did, but it almost killed you." I could hear the fear in her voice, and pulled the blurry blob that I thought was her to me for a hug. Summer hugged me too, and I was grateful to sense my switches increase. At least I hadn't burned that out.

"How long till the demons arrive?" I ask, afraid of how long I'd been out.

"They're just entering the solar system now," Summer said, and I bolted to my feet. Shanna had to hold me steady, as a wave of dizziness washed over me.

"Then we need to get to the ship immediately," I said, wondering why I wasn't there already. I guessed there would be no excuse for leaving Shanna behind now, but it couldn't be helped. I needed to stop the demons from ravaging the Earth.

"Sit down," Summer commanded in her older sister voice, and I found myself obeying before I could think better of it. "We're on the ship, and heading out to meet them. You need to rest, and recover, before we face them."

We're already on the ship? Then that means that they picked up Shanna on their own. Part of me wanted to curse them for putting my girlfriend in danger, but another part recognized that they couldn't know what was in my mind, only what I had said. And I'd said she could be here.

"Nick," this time it was Shanna speaking, "I am so proud of you for what you did, but are you going to be up to stopping the demons now?"

I didn't know how to answer the fear in her voice. I couldn't see, and when I'd stood up, I'd been too dizzy to even think about moving. Had I given my children life, only to see it taken away, because I was going to be too weak to stop the demons?

"I have to try," I told her finally, uncertain of what else I could say or do.

"I'll be right here with you," my sister said. "We're in this together." I felt her lips on my cheek for just a moment.

"I'll be here too, though I can't help the way your sister can," Shanna said next, and she too kissed me. Her kiss was on the lips though, and while there wasn't any tongue, its tender touch told me what words couldn't about how she felt for me. "Remember," she told both Summer and I, "use your strongest weapon first, not last." I knew what she meant, and cared for her all the more for it.

'Close your eyes, it's time.' The words floated across my vision, the only thing I could see clearly. I truly hoped that I would be able to see what the nanites showed me, better than my own eyes were working.

I lay down as I closed my eyes, and felt hands on my body removing the last bits of clothing I had on. Summer climbed on top of my body, pressing her naked chest to mine. 'You take care of the demons,' her words told me, 'I'll take care of the contact.'

I felt a mouth engulf my limp penis, bringing it slowly to life, at the same time stars blossomed in my vision. We were stopped, and I could just make out where the demon's ships were approaching us, surrounded by the tell-tale red rings.

For a split second, I felt stark, maddening terror, as I saw how large their force was. Even the other six ships arrayed with three on each side of me, couldn't give me comfort against a force that size. There were more ships than even the grainy photos I'd seen had hinted at.

I could feel that I was fully hard in Shanna's mouth now. There was no denying the skill she had with her tongue. Even distracted as I was with the demon fleet, she had been able to get me hard. A few seconds later, I felt summer slide her body back, as I slowly entered her and the sense of my switches increased ten-fold.

I realized that I was thinking of the ship as me, more than something I was in control of, and sent a message to Lela. 'Can you give me complete control over movement of the ship, so that I can move us with my mind?'

There was a pause, before the word, 'Done,' appeared before me.

I felt my sister start to slowly rock back and forth on me, while still keeping as much contact with me as possible. The actual coitus wasn't required for her to magnify my ability, but the pleasant sensations that coursed through my body helped to distract me from my fear. It also kept me hard, giving me more surface contact with her.

Fear... What had I done, that had removed my fear of Bradley, my old boss? I had silenced him, I recalled. If only I could do something like that with the demon ships. Since I couldn't hear them, making them quiet wouldn't work. I had to strip away what made them scary to me. Well, that was their numbers. Was there some way I could reduce their numbers without killing them? With my kids, my sister, and my girlfriend on board this ship, did I even have the luxury to have a conscience concerning their deaths?

I could hear Summer moaning into my ear, as her pussy milked my cock, and her large breasts slid up and down my chest, her nipples hard. I could hear myself moaning too. I lost a little bit of contact with Summer, but a second later, I felt her hand on the back of my head, pulling me up, and into her tit. I automatically started suckling, as she came.

They were easily within range of my switches now, and the first thing I did, was make a switch for their weapons systems. A sharp pain lanced through my head as I made it for the group, and I felt my head land back on the soft floor, releasing the nipple I'd been sucking on.

"Nick!" Shanna yelled, concerned for me, but I had to ignore her for the moment, as I felt some of the demon ships start up their weapons in preparation to destroy the seven impudent ships before them.

"He's fine," Summer said, moaning slightly, as she continued to ride my pole. "He's still recovering, but this yellow light is helping." Despite her words, I could sense the fear in her.

Indeed the light was helping, as the pain had already gone by the time my sister finished speaking. I was fully seated inside me, and a part of me wondered that I was all the way within her vagina. Was it was the nanites or the healing light that was allowing me to fit inside her snug wallet?

The other part of me quickly flipped the group switch, turning off all of their weapons, and keeping them off.

The enemy ships seemed to mill around for a moment, as they tried to get their weapons back up, but they were no match for the power of my switches, especially when those switches were buttressed by my sister and the yellow light. Nothing could move a switch I'd made with Summer.

I peeked one eye open, and could just make out my sister's face, bobbing above mine. I could see her clearly, and knew that the nanites and light were doing their job. Summer saw me peaking at her, and mashed her lips to mine. Her tongue entered my mouth, as she pressed our two bodies together.

My switches' power increased a little more, and I started lifting my hips to meet her rocking. She felt fantastic, and despite the incongruity of the situation, I was filling exhilarated.

The demons had finally decided that they weren't going to be able to shoot us out of their way, and seven ships came forward to sacrifice themselves, by ramming into us. I was thankful the remainder of the fleet held back.

I immediately took evasive maneuvers, rolling to the right, and realizing that I was rolling around with my sister as well. The demon ship that had chosen us changed course to match, and here was where my gaming skills came in handy. Viewing the ship as an extension of my will, I could move and change directions at the speed of thought. Oddly, every move I made was copied by a move with my body, and Summer held on for dear life, as we rolled all over the place. When I dove, my pelvis would pull back, and when I climbed, my hips drove forward, piercing her wet crevice with my cock.

The demon ship barely missed my port side, and it dawned on me that even though my video gaming skills came in handy here, there was no reset switch, and one mistake meant all of our lives. I looked around to see how the other ships were faring. One of ours was smoking, and not moving. Another had two on its tale, and it didn't look good. I realized that the pink-skinned aliens were poorly suited for even this type of battle.

Thinking fast, I rolled Summer around, as I barrel-rolled the ship, and dove between the other vessels. I sensed more than saw that my pursuing ship collide with one of the others. I looked back, and saw that the remaining ship had broken off its pursuit and was now after me.

I felt awful for the deaths I'd caused, but I knew it was either them or us.

Even with the distraction of avoiding the enemy ships, the feel of Summer's vagina sliding around my cock felt wonderful. It also helped to distract me from any crippling fear I might have felt.

"Some of the demons are headed for Earth!" I heard Shanna yell, and even as I looked, I knew it was true. No longer content to wait and see how the chase went, some of the demon ships had broken free of the main formation, and were headed to Earth.

I charged for the errant ships, but two other demon vessels blocked my path, and I barely pulled up in time to avoid a collision; my cock driving deep into my sister, and making her cry out.

I now had three ships on my tail, as I turned and started heading for the smoking friendly vessel. I had to get these demons off of my tail, so I could stop the ships heading for Earth. As I approached the smoking vessel, I mentally sent the command to teleport all living aliens to this one, and then pulled hard to starboard at the last second.

As I did this, I felt myself go even deeper into Summer's pussy, and I moaned as my cock entered her womb; my cock's head getting strangled by the tightness of her deepest and most sensitive parts.

Two demon ships failed to turn sharp enough and crashed, leaving one still on my tail.

Dammit, I thought, if only I could get rid of their aggressiveness!

"I'm cumming, Nick!" Summer screamed, distracting me for just a second. "Oh, gawd, I'm gonna cum!" Her words combined with her cunt milking my cock were enough to send me over the edge. As I filled her womb full of my seed, I felt the switch for their aggressiveness form, and flip at the same time, draining the last of my energy away, and blackness swallowed me whole.

When I came to, I had to blink my eyes a few times to see, and my head was throbbing again. A pleasant sensation was surrounding my cock, but I couldn't see past my sister's concerned face.

"You're awake!" she exclaimed upon seeing my open eyes. Her face seemed oddly flushed, and she even seemed to moan a little as she said it.

"Wh-what happened?" I asked groggily, already feeling the healing yellow light force my headache to recede.

"The demons have stopped chasing us," Summer told me, her eyes closed momentarily as she sucked in her bottom lip.

Only then did I realize why my cock felt so pleasant. I knew that two-tongued technique; Harana or Lela must be giving me a blowjob, and keeping me hard. They must have done that when I passed out, so that when I awoke. I could reconnect with my sister, and keep my switches powerful. That didn't explain why Summer seemed to be enjoying herself, though.

My sister must have seen the confused look on my face, and correctly interpreted it. "Harana is scooping your cum out of me," she informed me. "You came a lot, and she is trying to get it out, but it feels good, too. She is about to...uhh, get me off."

Just as Summer started to convulse on top of me, Harana let my cock free, and slipped it back into Summer's vagina.

I moaned as we reconnected, and felt the power of my switches magnify again. I knew I couldn't use them again so quickly, and was glad that I'd been able to buy us a little time..

"No," Summer moaned as she came down from her orgasm. "In my ass. I don't want to get pregnant from this." I nodded, and pulled my hips down, and let Harana aim me for her rectum. I was easily slick enough, and slipped right past my sister's sphincter, causing us both to moan again.

"The other ships!" I exclaimed, suddenly remembering them.

Shanna was the one to answer this time, "We were able to see everything you did. This room changed, and it was incredible! I'm so sorry, Nick. Those ships are long gone, though. Lela says they're likely to Earth by now."

Despite how good my sister's colon felt around my cock, I felt it wilt a little at this news. I had failed. Those other ships would have been outside of my range when I created the 'anti-aggression' switch. I only hoped that my fellow humans could handle the few ships that'd made it through. Knowing that their weapons wouldn't work, soothed my fears, some.

Right now, though, I needed to concentrate on the rest of the fleet that was still here. I closed my eyes and pulled Summer's face down to mine, kissing her deeply, as I lifted my hips, and felt myself re-hardening.

I could see the demon ships still floating out there in space, waiting, and likely wondering what was happening to them. They might not be aggressive at the moment, but they still posed a threat. I needed to stop that threat for good, or all would be lost.

My headache was nearly gone now, and I knew it was partly in thanks to the healing light, and also thanks to how wonderful Summer felt on top of me. I could feel her sphincter sliding up and down my rod, my entire length piercing her colon.

I allowed my hands to drop down to her rear, and grabbed a globe in each hand, as I examined the ships before me.

I needed a way to stop their aggressiveness permanently. Derek's image flashed before my mind, and I recalled what I'd done to him, changing him into a female. Somehow I didn't think changing their sex would help, but perhaps another biological change would do the trick. I knew I would need the added strength of another orgasm though, to accomplish it, and threw all of my concentration into making love to my sister's tight ass.

I lifted my head, and brought one of her teats to my lips, sucking gently, as I increased the pace of my hips.

"Damn," Summer moaned above me, "I'm going to cum again, Nick." She started to convulse on top of me, her ass squeezing my length, and feeling fantastic, but still not enough to make me cum.

I opened my eyes, and saw Harana and Shanna watching us, and knew that I would need to enlist their help.

"Shanna, Harana, I know what I need to do, but I need your help," I told them. "Shanna, get naked and come here," Harana was already naked.

Shanna did as I asked, a curious look on her face, and walked over to Summer and I. "I don't know how I can help, Nick. I'm not like your sister."

I told her what I wanted, and she sat on my face, my sister moving slightly as my girlfriend got situated. Summer did her best to keep as much physical contact with me as possible. I had Haran kneel between Summer's and my legs, and felt her two tongues go to work on my balls. I needed to be as turned on as possible, so that I could form the switch as I came.

I sucked hard on Shanna's labia, and noted that she was already wet. Despite the fear that she must have been feeling, watching Summer and I roll around must have been turning her on.

I felt Summer lift up, while keeping as much contact with my body, and knew that she must have been sucking on Shanna's tits as I began to nibble on her clitoris. I reached my hands up, and pinched both of Summer's nipples between my fingers, making her moan into Shanna's chest.

Shanna ground her crotch against my lips and tongue, while I enjoyed the feeling of Harana's tongues on my balls and Summer's ass gliding up and down my hard shaft.

Having three women pleasing me was enough to increase my libido, and I felt my orgasm building. I squeezed my eyes closed to form the switch I needed in my mind.

Summer dropped her chest down to mine, and our chins connected as we both licked Shanna's creaming crotch. I tasted a flood of my girlfriend's cum a second before Summer's colon squeezed my throbbing rod, and I unloaded myself into my sister's colon.

It took every ounce of mental strength I had left to make and then move the switch. I had just enough time to sense the demons becoming herbivores, before I passed out.

* * *

Epilogue

It took nearly two months for me to recover from that last switch. Two months in the ship under the healing yellow light, while the changed demons and friendly pink aliens came to an understanding and a truce.

That final switch didn't change all of the demons in the universe, only the ones that were within range at the time. However, according to the new truce, the Earth had a defensive friendly force. Some of the demons went with a few of the female pink aliens, to defend their home planet. The rest went to Earth to fight those that'd made it past me during the battle. It took almost ten years to flush all of the carnivorous demons from the Earth. Ten years of chaos, violence, and the beginning of a new age for humanity.

When I awoke from my coma, after the two months, I had a number of surprises awaiting me. Summer was pregnant with my child. She had debated on whether or not to keep it, and in the end decided that she couldn't get rid of it. She even helped Shanna and Julia find a large enough house for the four of us to live in.

Julia and Shanna had worked out their differences, apparently, and Shanna had come to Lela's ship to visit me every day in my convalescence. She told me all about reconciling her trust issues concerning Julia, and couldn't wait for me to come back down to the Earth to be with them.

Gina and I are still great friends, and is actually living next door to us now. I try to encourage her to find someone else, but she keeps telling me she will only leave me when she finds someone better. Fifteen years, and three kids later, she still hasn't found anyone else.

Robin had apparently become pregnant as well, despite all of Dennis's precautions. They ended up getting married before the child was born, and even had three more children, though none of them looked anything like the first. It didn't take long for their oldest to start displaying interests in the geekier things in life. I kept my mouth shut about my thoughts about his real father, but somehow I don't think it escaped Dennis's notice.

All of my children with Lela were doing well, and going strong. They were growing faster than normal humans, yet slower than the pink aliens. They also seemed to grasp concepts and thoughts faster than either race. All of Lela's and my children were speaking both languages fluently by the time I came to.

My mother had been worried sick about me, until Summer'd brought her up to visit me. With the demons still roaming the Earth at that time, she was filled with fear at first, but Harana and Lela put her at ease. She took the news of Summer's pregnancy a little hard at the beginning, but in the end agreed that she couldn't get rid of the child. When I finally saw her again, she almost looked like a different woman, my switches having taken their affect on her, increasing her skin elasticity and slowing her aging. She looked twenty years younger, and Summer informed me that they were constantly mistaken for sisters.

When the unchanged demons first arrived on Earth to start devouring the human race and Earth's resources, one of their first victims was my father's girlfriend. The sight had completely unnerved my father, and he came crawling back to my mom. To her credit, she told him where to go, and in no uncertain terms how to get there.

Old Mrs. Polkins was found in the dean's office one day; or rather, under it, by the dean's wife. Somehow the wife didn't take it too well, but last I heard, Mrs. Polkins had found herself another job as a high school nurse, and none of the students were complaining. I never did see professor Frankens again.

All of those surprises were minor compared to finding out that I had burned my ability out. I was too weak when I used that last switch, and no matter what Lela did, the ability was gone. I couldn't even sense any of the switches I'd made, or my half-human children.

Despite my lack of a special ability, Lela and Harana insisted that I be the main liaison between the three races. Even at my young age, the world leaders agreed, though some felt slighted because they were left with no choice in the matter. Lela, Harana, and even the demons made sure of that.

Some of the other modified human's came to the rescue of their race, during that ten years, but some used their abilities for their own gain. Once the carnivorous demons were dealt with, Lela, Harana, my sister, Shanna, Shannon, and even Gina, helped me to capture the rogue humans, and deactivate their special genes.

Five years after the last rogue human was found and dealt with, we realized that all of my children had my ability. They are all working on healing mine, though I have come to terms with its loss.

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Author's note:
I hope you have enjoyed my final series, Bait and Switch. Keep an eye out for garbonzo607's spin-off of this series, coming out later.


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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 15:17
    I would have paid to read this series. The kink was awsome but the reading value of the storyline was amazing! The world will be worst off if you stop writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 15:48
    great job ur writing will be missed brother

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 15:58
    wow wow and wow
    thats all i can think of

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 16:25
    A great series. I even stopped reading for the sex and waited with bated breath for every story line continuation. I am sad that this series has ended. But will be excitedly waiting for what you have next.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 17:03
    Y do u hav to stop im gonna miss u :'( i read all ur stories and i love them u are amazing plz keep writing :'(

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  • Kitsune_Lord
    07.01.2012 17:16
    Noooooooo!!!!!! how can you stop writing i hope that you saying this is your final series is some kind of sick joke you are one of my favorite writers on here and i couldn't stand to loose you amazing writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 17:35
    You are an amazing writer i am so sad that this series is over . If you can ever post another story do it and never stop writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 17:44
    U really are the best writer I know. I think we all are ging to miss u and ur storys

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 18:26
    Wow. Great series but the ending is very lacking

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 18:35
    Great stories. You are a magnificent writer, Thanks for the enjoyment :D.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 19:00
    Great story! You will be missed

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 19:23
    Everyone will miss you.If you ever can i sincerely hope you get back on and keep writing.Alas that wont happen farewelldark brother you shall be missed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 20:42
    I actually started crying when I read this was ur final series

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 21:18
    YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! DUDE U R MY FAVORITE WRITER ON HERE AND U SHOULDNT STOP WRITING IT TOOK 2 MONTHS BUT I READ EVERY SINGLE ONE OF UR STORIES THEY WERE ALL AWESOME BUT PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING MAN IF WE NEEDED SOME INCEST OR THREESOME ACTION WE ALL CAME TO U DUDE

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 22:03
    PLZ DONT LEAVE US MAN UR FANS NEED U PLZ PLZ PLZ

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 22:05
    Sad to see you go and hope the other persons spinoff will do your story justace.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 22:10
    Great story! You will be missed and these stories will be missed as well. I wish you could continue but, we do not get what we all want. Hopefully, you come back and will be able to right more amazing stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 23:08
    Man... you are one of the best author's ive ever read... I'll miss your writing... hope you enjoy living wherever it is your going

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 00:10
    Farewell Dark_Brother i am crying

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 00:32
    I'm sorry to see you go. You will be sorely missed by many here. Please, if you ever get the chance to write again, do it. While your stories have great sex, I haven't really cared about it for a long time. I wait not-so-patiently for the continuation of the storyline.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 02:17
    that was fantastic, well done. i really appreciate that you included an epilogue. it gave me the closure i wanted at the end of the series, and i am pleased with how it ended. ultimately, as unfortunate and sad it is that you can't continue, this is a perfect place for you to end your story-writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 02:38
    Great work bro. I was hoping for just a little longer finale. Its the best series I've ever read. Don't burn your ability out and return safely. "It was the best of times" Dickens once written. Great, Great, Great!

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  • JustBored2k11
    08.01.2012 02:41
    Really loved the series quite a shame to see it go nut if it had to end you ended it brilliantly

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 03:27
    If you can write such amazing stories about people fucking then you yourself could be a great fucker

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  • Sexykitty88
    08.01.2012 03:47
    Love this seires of a fantastic tale. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 04:51
    great series, can definately see it becoming a full novels series. and i agree with the rest the sex ads a twist but the story itself is what draws me back to this series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 05:09
    awsome story man ive read all of them and maby when you get back you could consider a sequil to this story just a thought, but you will be missed your my favorite author on here

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 05:18
    Amazing series. Thanks for sharing it with the world.. Hope you have a safe and pleasant trip.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 06:28
    You are one of the best writers on the internet, perhaps the world. Truely and inspiration to everyone else here. Even though you wont be able to write anymore sex stories, I hope that you will continue writing. If not then I pray that you have a grand and healthy future. Farewell Dark_Brother, till we hopefully have the grace of reading your stories again. I think it goes without saying that you will be missed.
    -Anonymous reader eighty thousand something.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 07:53
    Write a story about the invasion from an infantry mans point of view on Earth. If you word if skillfully then you don't have to mention sex and you can sell it for millions

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 07:53
    Write a story about the invasion from an infantry mans point of view on Earth. If you word if skillfully then you don't have to mention sex and you can sell it for millions

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 08:54
    why are you leaving?

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 10:43
    i have to say, i never usually read any of the series that are on here, but i found myself checking daily for the next story to come out, very nice work and thankyou

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  • handparty
    08.01.2012 11:57
    A fantastic bittersweet ending. We'll miss your stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 14:37
    for those of you who don't know, Dark Brother has taken a high-profile job in another country where it would mean the loss of his job, and likely his career, if he were to continue writing these stories. check his story forum page through this site for more details and some pictures of the characters if you are interested.

    to Dark_Brother: well done. i already posted a comment on this final chapter earlier detailing how pleased i was with how it ended and the presence of a good epilogue, but i wanted to say again how great this series was. well done, sir, and good luck in the future.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 18:11
    Thank you for your stories. You will be missed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 22:01
    fantastic stories but yet this one is my fav you will be missed and we hope you will all come back and start re-writing all of these stories again and we would love the link to the spin-off of this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 22:08
    I'm sad to see you go. We love you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 23:18
    please, a epiloge. i just got to know more. im sure everyone else does too.

    -a friend trying to help

    PS: make a new series about two diferent kids with unique power than there families and run away together and come back to save their world 14 years later. they will have 2 children
    k?

    i just think its a good idea. u get all the credit and every thing. i can`t write it myself so... yeah. just say u got it from your story. please? thanks just for reading this if you do. ill read it if you make it

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 03:18
    For this series I give it 10/10 for sex, and 10/10 for story, I even stopped reading the sex parts in the last two stories!

    I know I can say this for all of us when I say I'm gonna miss you and am sad you're leaving. You are probly the best writer on this site, hell you're probly the best writer I've ever even heard of!

    -RJX...Critic/soon to be writer

    P.S. are you sure you HAVE to leave?, Cuz like I said you're probly the best writer I've ever even heard of!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 04:53
    I mentioned it before and ill say it again, this could EASILY become a film, same as sister stripping, broken bliss and subject 0. I truely believe there are two films in the making there! Its a shame you have to leave, you have soo much potential as a writer, i will be looking for you in the future. All the best
    Tony

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 04:55
    p.s. Look for a story called "camp" its got a similar theme, its well written and has a good story line too. I think you will enjoy it.
    Tony

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 06:04
    beautiful story im sad its over

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  • teddies%21%21%21
    09.01.2012 07:44
    NO!!!!! NO! NO! NO! *Child's tantrum* NO! It's not aloud to be over! I don't care if all good things, all extraordinary things have to come to and end, I say NO! Your an amazing writer who write equally amazing stories and your leaving?! NO! I love this series, you best one yet in my opinion. You had better come back and write stories like this for us! AMAZING STORY WITH AN AMAZING DESERVING ENDING!!! MAWH!!!, to you and your adventures and your amazingness! 100/10 is possible, if only i could vote more than once.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 17:27
    im sad that you have to go but all writers stop some day i bid u farewell man~gives him a manly hug~

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 20:07
    You know you can still puplish your stories you just need to find a website that you can publish your stories legal and give us a link.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 20:29
    FITTING WAY TO STOP DEMONS, HAVE INCESTOUS SEX WITH YOUR SISTER

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 03:17
    I was happy to see the final chapters here after the holidays but sad to hear this is the last one. I have really enjoyed your stories and hope that whatever life brings you that you find happiness in it.... and hopefully a way back to writing here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 12:04
    Incredible series, well written and cleverly composed, we'll all miss your writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 14:33
    things have to come to and end, I say NO! Your an amazing writer who write equally amazing stories and your leaving?! NO! I love this series, you best one yet in my opinion. You had better come back and write stories like this for us! AMAZING STORY WITH AN AMAZING DESERVING ENDING!!! MAWH!!!, to you and your adventures and your amazingness! 100/10 is possible, if only i could vote more than once.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 20:53
    Loved it, im going to miss u fosure

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 21:45
    U should make a second story of this it would be good for the fans and I think it should be
    Called if u do another one: Bait And Switch 2 pt 1

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 04:36
    Very nice compact story. Good plot (lots of sex lol)that stayed in line with what your concept was. Would like to see more of your work.

    Ghost

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  • Edgar_Norfolk
    11.01.2012 23:33
    I have enjoyed all of your stories. I hope you return to writing when you are able.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 18:18
    the end (for now) should continue the series when you come back from 'hell' would love to see what happens next

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 20:14
    im loveing your stories and i wish you would continue to write this story for ever (lol) and wish you would also continue to write .
    #desil14

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 20:20
    i cant find garbonzo607 i searched for him but cant find it :( why cant i find it i would like to see if he is going to keep doing good for this story.
    #desil14

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  • desil14
    13.01.2012 20:30
    ok i just made a profile but i still love ur stories and i kno i will never b able to write like you

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  • desil14
    13.01.2012 20:49
    i been searching and i cant find garbonzo607 any where

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2012 20:07
    Greatest story i have ever read.. Man youre the best.. I read all your stories from ask me to this bait and switch chapter 21. Good one i wish it did not end.. Hoping you would come back soon with other great stories.. I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES

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  • kingpin02
    22.01.2012 16:28
    Excellent story. To bad he got burned out and lost his ability. Maybe he kids well help get it back. It would be better for all three races. Now we need to find out how long they will live and how long the others live due to his changing their abilities to regenerate.

    Robert

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  • CrownClown29
    27.01.2012 01:09
    Great story! Wish you were not leaving! Loved everything you wrote and this last series was the icing on the cake. Hope you come back and write more in the future. Who else do you recommend on here that has a similar style to you?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 12:41
    Can't wait for new stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 15:04
    i did think i would like the Alien story,i did [ great storie want more].

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 17:02
    W6dr2T Unbelievable. Class..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 11:15
    you should make this into a novella! it would be great

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 23:34
    It saddens me that you have left it check back about once a week hoping to see a new story from even though I know there won't be anymore. I hope that you will one day return.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 11:01
    Develop the topic further! It is interesting to know more details..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 11:24
    This article is for professionals..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 11:46
    Not bad post, but a lot of extra !!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 12:09
    Scribbler, give me a student's record-book!))))

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 12:32
    Can be also this issue because the truth can be achieved only in a dispute :DD

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 21:56
    damn bro ttht waz great man. i wish it ketp goin.it tool e 2 days finish it cuz itz so frikin gud.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2012 06:18
    I read this and I found my sister striping twice...Beautifil .
    This always made me horny and wet ,thank you.

    Elise

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  • Ieatcumallday
    22.02.2012 17:54
    I hope you come back some day soon with more stories for us, erotic or not. I hope you could try to find some way to let us know if you release a non-erotic book while you can't make any more of these stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 16:08
    It Sucks You Stopped The Series. You Could Have Gone A Long Way With This Story And How You Set It Up Like Having The Kids Restore His Ability And Some Other Race Attack Or The Aliens Coming To Earth To Make A Treaty And Reactivate Everyones Ability

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 21:19
    You should continue righting story's you are a lot better than alot of fighters and also
    In my opinion this series bait and switch was the best because it had the best story and like I said please take this into consideration because your by far my new most favorite writer so like I said I beg you to continue writing more story's like this one please take this into immense consideration

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 21:56
    You should continue righting story's you are a lot better than alot of writers and also
    In my opinion this series bait and switch was the best because it had the best story and like I said please take this into consideration because your by far my new most favorite writer so like I said I beg you to continue writing more story's like this one please take this into immense consideration also just call me stephe :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 04:44
    BEST SERIES EVER!!!!!!!!!!=)=)=)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 04:55
    write more. have sompthing like some leftover carniverous demons and another alien race start to team up and meanwhile have him teach his and lela's kids (who are hermerphroadites) how to use the switches and they seduce him with them then eventually they find a dorment gene in the herbavour demons and activate it and the six friends of his and lelas kids are all having some kind of power and then they all have to defeat the new aliens with the help of his and his sissters child which also has a dormant gene of course. please write more using my ideas.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 04:57
    P.S. from last comment all refrences to him and his is reffering to nick.

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  • physhman
    10.03.2012 20:43
    this was an amazing series!! i have read start to finish and its been and erotic blast after another! if you come up with any omore story ideas like this one please let us know!! geeky erotica is one of the best in my opinion! thank you so much for this story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 09:12
    I just spent the entire night reading your series! I wish you did MORE... you leave the series like... To Be Continued.... All in all great story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 00:10
    you were the first writer i looked at when i came to the sex stories and let me say, I was right to choose you, Live long and prosper :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 00:42
    shame that garbonzo607 did not write anything, would of loved reading more of this story, was fantastic, and by far the best story i have ever, read. I mean the sex in the story is good but in the end i was like arrr whats going to happen int he actual story and the sex did not bother me anymore and wanted to read the story i was really, into this stroy and wish that guy carried it on for you. I hope one day i come back on here and find you writing more amazing stories like these, i only wish i has your talent to write like this.
    thanks and goodluck with whatever it is yourdoing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2012 17:30
    greatest series ever!!! will miss new chapters tho :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2012 01:59
    MO-VIE! MO-VIE! MO-VIE! MO-VIE! MO-VIE! MO-VIE!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2012 13:58
    This was actually one of the best stories I have read here.. it was amazing.. Thank you so much for writing this.. I'm sad to see it end. Truly amazing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2012 00:11
    That is a great story, both with the erotic and sci-fi. I look forward to your future stories. AAWWEESSOOMMEE!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 09:32
    Quite simply the best series on the site, if not the internet! I eventually found myself skipping sex scenes to get back to the main story! You're an excellent writer, bravo!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 06:02
    Pleasepleaseplease write another series! That was amazing! No other writer on this site holds anything on you!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 06:22
    Ok I've read all of your series. And I'm going to say that I am a bit disappointed to see that this is the final story series. I would love to hear some more of your imagination at work. Please think about getting another series started up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2012 02:09
    I started and ended the series today and I loved every second of it

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2012 00:35
    You should write more stories on this one make to where he does get his powers back and someone else tries to destroy earth and him and his children help and maybe his girlfriend and her twin get powers to

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2012 00:35
    You should write more stories on this one make to where he does get his powers back and someone else tries to destroy earth and him and his children help and maybe his girlfriend and her twin get powers to

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2012 22:03
    The only problem I have with your stories is you haven't written any more.
    And yes I've enjoyed everything you have written so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2012 00:47
    This was great. A couple of times I skipped the sex scenes just to get back to the story. You inspired me. I am currently writing a story based off of Nicks powers. (No sex included ) Don't stop the writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 20:36
    Really wish you would re consider stopping writing. You write brilliantly, not even just the sexual parts of your stories. I enjoyed the plot and actual story just as much if not more

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  • SexUwell+Poet
    22.08.2012 08:11
    Awesome! Thank you. Weather u write again or not med to geek, "live long and prosper."

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2012 11:36
    Have read all of your stories and a great fan of your work. Wish you could keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2012 10:41
    i realise this may be a little late, but i have just finished this series. i started reading it this morning haha.

    Great series, i love your work. writing style, storyline and plot were brilliant, and there was only a couple of small mistakes i picked up on.

    congratulations on writing such a good series, wish you could keep writing haha. Have fun with whatever it is youre doing now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2012 17:13
    Please write more stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 05:21
    Man i have to say this is a bomb ass story. it was enjoyable from start to finish. you did an outstanding job, you have a talent.

    James

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2012 10:36
    Dude, get writing again. I've read all your stories and love them all. Bait and switch was by far the best.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2012 03:32
    Wow, man! THAT STORY WAS INCREDIBLE!!! You should totally keep writing more. When you got something that`s going good, never give up on it. I guess that I`m just saying that you really have a gift, and anyone who disagrees is a complete butt-hole (although I haven`t seen any disagreements yet). In essense, I guess I`m begging you not to turn your back on your gift. You`ve really got something good with your stories, man, and I`m pretty sure that anybody would back me up on this.
    But I guess that this is your decision to make, and nobody can make it for you, and I`m sure we all can respect that.
    Just gonna say it again, that was a great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 04:03
    If these comments aren't enough to stop you from writing (perhaps just on this site?) then I don't know how to convince you. I can only hope that in the midst of your boredom that you decide to write another brilliant story. I hope that time comes soon Dark_Brother

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2012 20:24
    I dont even know if you are able to read this, Dark Brother, but it has come to my attention that your fantastically written stories continue to be stolen and reposted. In fact, there is such a thief on this very site, by the name of Barney Stinson. Rest assured, his crime will not go unpunished. I will not reveal the specifics, but he will suffer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 04:53
    Awesome story I just felt I was the geek infact I am one after reading ur story my attitude changed completely & noticed that many girls in my college give me that ru single look,great work love to read more stories from you

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 17:12
    لالانملالاملامالاملا

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2013 05:25
    Today its exactly One year since this post. Wouldnt it be a good time to start again?

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2013 05:57
    You sir, is marvelous writer! Thank you

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2013 12:24
    gg

    Pleasepleaseplease write another series! That was amazing! No other writer on this site holds anything on you!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.06.2013 11:44
    I can't bleave how good that storie was. Fantastic really sooo good

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2013 11:26
    Wow...diz is the best story eva in diz site...i luv diz series very much...kip it up...kudos

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2013 19:16
    Faulous i love love love it and im not to fond of incest but this would have been even better as a full book with less sex and all more child friendly cause a lot of kids like sifi but this was amazing awsome love it and i wish you would write more very good job!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.10.2013 12:17
    D: noooooo its over!!!!!! This was the best story evaaaaaaaa....I wish I was on that ship

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2013 08:37
    Dude u should of kept making more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2014 05:31
    nooo more a website a book a unpublished movie please this is beter than any thing. his kids bait &swich 2 like transformers make the aliens come back or turn into somthing like greek mytholgy

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  • robmac123
    07.02.2015 20:44
    Great final chapter to the series...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2015 02:50
    Its too bad he loses his ability

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2015 21:45
    Dam I wish OT didn't end now I gotta find something new

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2015 20:01
    Thank you. This is my tribute to Dark Brother, now sadly passed away. This series has helped me more than you can know. I will be forever grateful.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2015 08:22
    One word AWESOME

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2015 18:10
    Thank you very much. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and am sorry it is your last.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 02:22
    I was skeptical about this series because I had never read the alien genre. Needless to say, this series is incredible. I began reading for my own personal pleasure, but soon was engulfed in the series or she stories, which could easily be modified into a novel. Bravo!

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  • Clover+Ernest
    08.03.2016 06:03
    damn! so sad this is last series of his. wish he did more, but alas, as his best friend informed us in the retypes, the man we all knew and loved as Dark_Brother was killed by a roadside bomb on a military convoy type trip.

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  • Clover+Ernest
    08.03.2016 06:05
    TO EVERYONE TRYING TO FIND garbonzo607, HE DID NOT WRITE THE SPIN-OFFS. HOWEVER, THERE IS SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR TO THESE BY SSelxuyt. CHECK THEM OUT.

    FOREVER SEMPER FI, Dakotah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2016 03:31
    The best there could be. R.I.P, you were a great writer with amazing ideas

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2016 22:06
    This was amazing!!!!! Thank you for this.

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  • dator
    14.08.2016 08:03
    It hurts knowing dark brother Is gone...
    Another bright light passed on.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2016 10:12
    WOW.... just fuckin, WOW.
    If thats true about Dark_Brother's death then the world has lost a truly talented individual.
    And as for how he died... I cant possibly express in mere words the gratitude I feel toward him, as well as all of the other men and women who fight for our freedom in the armed forces... but Thank You.
    Know that you are ALL appreciated.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.11.2016 05:32
    Man I only wish that I could follow in this man's foot steps he not only fought for our freedom but he also used what little free time he had to entertain us a bunch of fucking assholes back in the states were it was safe while he fought till his last breath and it would have been an honor to have fought along side him but as u know that is not possible this world has seen yet another very amazing person leave this world at an age to young I just hope that the assholes that sit there and talk shit on our soldiers get beat to death and then brought back only to have it happen again the next day for all eternity

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  • ChimeraLoveMe
    24.12.2016 06:42
    Top class story. I am a huge fan of your stories. I found talented authors very rarely. You are one of them.
    R.I.P.

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