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Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 2

Author: artscape

Date: 30 October 2005

Exhibitionism, Fantasy, Female solo, Incest

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Part 8

We slept in the next day and woke up around noon. Sarah was the first to get out of bed and I saw her naked ass as she left the room. As she took a shower I put some jogging pants on and ate some breakfast. Sarah came into the kitchen after her shower to get some orange juice and was naked other than a pair of panties. When I saw her I couldn’t help but stare at her tits fully visible in the daylight. Sarah must have seen me staring and gave me a wink. She then left the kitchen and I swear she was trying to strut herself to tease me. I then went to the washroom to take a shower.

When I came out of the shower Sarah was sitting on the couch still in her panties and reading a book. She had her feet on the couch in front of her with her knees near her chest. Her panty covered crotch was fully exposed. I could see the outline of her pussy lips because the material was making a camel toe. I sat in a chair across from her and just admired the view. Sarah glanced up from her text book and stared at me looking at her crotch. I made no attempt to hide my burning gaze. In fact, I decided to give her a show of my own. I opened my legs a bit and my towel wrapped around me opened up to give her a view of my balls. Sarah’s eyes immediately changed focus from my face to my own crotch. I continued to shift my legs some more allowing my semi hard cock to poke passed my towel. Sarah lowered her text book a bit more to get a better view. I shifted even some more and the towel separated at my waist and flopped open exposing everything into plain site.

“Ok. I can’t study anymore,” Sarah said as she put her book down beside her. She then slide her right hand under her panties and began rubbing her clit. Her hand shifted her panties outward and I could see the sides to her outer lips. They were cleanly shaven and looked swollen. I then started to play with my balls juggling them lightly in my still loose sack with one hand and stroked my dick with the other hand.

I could tell Sarah was wet already because her fingers were sliding effortlessly over her pussy lips. She then pulled her hand out of her panties and then proceeded to take them off. Sarah was sitting butt naked in front of me with her legs spread and her pussy glistening in full view. She was so beautiful. I had never seen a girl so perfect in my entire life including all the porn I had seen.

Sarah let me savor the sight of her for a short while before continuing to play with her pussy. She would dip her finger into her slippery slit and then remove it sliding up to her clit. With her juices she would swirl around her clit a bunch; starting slow and then increasing the pace before dipping back into her pussy. I could see drops of jizz at the base of her pussy running into the crack of her ass now and then. Once, she pulled her finger away from her pussy lips only to have a string of jizz between her fingers and her cunt.

“You look extremely wet sis,” I said. “I always get really wet when I’m horny, but I’m extra horny right now,” she replied as she showed me how she could create a string of cum between her first finger and her middle finger when separating the two. I continued to stroke my penis continually taking my precum and spreading it over the head of my dick with my fingers.

Sarah then started to use both her hands; one massaging her clit while the other finger fucked her. She started with one finger inside her and then progressed to two and finally three. As she increased the number of fingers her pace massaging her clit increase too. I could hear her pussy slurping and gushing with the enormous amount of jizz present.

She then closed her eyes and began to squint as she approached her orgasm. I increased the pace of my stroking so that my orgasm would coincide with hers. Sarah then let out a grunt as she started to climax and held her breath. She also arched her back and raised her cunt into the air only to shutter on her way back down to the couch. She took a quick breath and held it again until she was just about finished her orgasm.

Both Sarah’s hands stopped moving and she no longer had any fingers in her. Sarah opened her eyes just in time to catch me cumming all over my chest and stomach. The first shot landed on my upper chest and created a trail down to my navel. The next squirt landed in the middle of my stomach and the last only went an inch or two.

When I came too Sarah was lying motionless with her legs spread open in a relaxed position and she was staring at my cum covered stomach. “Well I guess I have to take another shower,” I said as I took a deep breath and relaxed into the chair I was sitting.

“Kevin,” Sarah said with a pause at the end. “Are we going too far with each other? I mean are you going to regret this later? I don’t want you to regret anything. I don’t want this to change our relationship.” “Why are you asking this sis? Do you regret doing any of this,” I replied not sure where her statements were coming from?

“Oh god no! I don’t regret a thing. I would have been masturbating with or without you anyways or possibly fooling around with another guy. At least this way I can do it in a safe place with someone I’m comfortable with and someone I know I love. I feel so much closer to you now and yet at the same time you turn me on more than I would have ever imagined. I’m just afraid you don’t feel the same way and will get freaked out and I will lose my relationship with my brother and worst my best friend,” Sarah said in a concerned voice. “Sis, I’m flattered you feel that way about me and you have nothing to worry about. I feel the same way as you. When I do this with you I feel so comfortable and I don’t think I have to explain how much you turn me on; it’s pretty obvious since I’m constantly rock hard.” I replied trying to console her and alleviate her concerns.

Sarah got right up and came over to the couch. She bent over and wrapped her arms around me and gave me a big kiss on the lips. “I love you Kev,” she said and then helped me out of the chair. I then took another shower.


Part 9

“I’ve got a present for you,” I said to Sarah when I got home from shopping that evening. “Why’d you get me a present? It’s was your birthday yesterday not mine,” Sarah said in a confused voice. “Well, your present was so fabulous I just had to return the favour,” I said as I reached into the black bag I was holding. “I got you a vibrator to play with,” I said holding a package with a 7” pink rubbery dildo with a twist switch at the base.

“Oooh, I always wanted to try one but was too chicken to go in one of those sex shops to get one,” Sarah chuckled while skipping towards me. Sarah quickly opened the package to inspect the toy. “Oh and there’s one stipulation though; when you use it for the first time later I get to watch you,” I said with a grin. “Don’t you worry Kev. I would never consider playing with myself without you present. It’s just too much fun when you’re around,” Sarah said as she proceeded to poke my side with the dildo.

I knew Sarah wanted to try out her new toy right away but I wanted to tease her a little. I would make her wait until we went to bed before she could try it out. “What do you want for dinner; I’m starving,” I said changing the topic of the dildo. Sarah had a look on her face like a little child would have after her parents would refuse to let them open a Christmas present before it was time. I knew she thought when I said “later” that it would be in the next 15 minutes not later tonight.

I started to prepare some pasta when Sarah poked my butt with the dildo. She giggled and ran away as I tried to catch her. I gave up quickly as the pasta was just about ready. We ate and drank a little wine at dinner. Sarah was restless. I then plopped in front of the tv after dinner and Sarah reluctantly joined me.

Finally after watching a movie I said, “lets go to bed, but make sure you bring your friend.” Sarah shot up from the couch she ran into her bedroom with out closing the door and stripped in seconds. “I’m ready!” she said standing naked with only the dildo in her hand. “Give me a sec sis. I need to brush my teeth still,” I replied. Sarah joined me in the bathroom and brushed her teeth in record speed. I took my time to tease her but she didn’t waste anytime getting into bed to wait for me.

When I entered my bedroom Sarah was lying on top of the covers with the dildo resting in her cleavage eagerly waiting for me. “Ok sis, go nuts,” I said. Sarah grabbed the dildo, took a deep breath and relaxed herself. She wanted to relish the moment. She turned on the vibrator to a slow buzz and placed it on her clit. “Mmmmm,” she moaned. Sarah slowly moved it back and forth over her clit. I watched as her pussy started to show more and more moisture. She then placed the dildo at her opening and slowly inserted a small part of the dildo. It slid around very easily but I could tell Sarah was still a very tight girl being a virgin and all. She pulled it out and inserted a little more this time. As much as it may have been tight Sarah was drenched by now in jizz and she also took her time.

At the same time I slowly stroked my cock to her same momentum. Sarah increase the amount of penetration every insertion of the dildo. After about forty times the dildo was nearly all the way in her vagina. Sarah then started to increase the pace of the insertion. She then looked at me as I watched her insert and release the dildo in her pussy. I knew it was turning her on. Sarah was becoming quite the exhibitionist.

“Can you push it in and out for me,” she asked? “I would love to sis,” I said as I placed my hand on hers. Sarah pulled her hand away and I slowly inserted and withdrew the dildo from her soaking pussy. Sarah closed her eyes and played with her clit as I continued with the dildo. I placed my head between her legs to get a close up view of the action. Her pussy was making the usual sloshing noises and in the background the dildo buzzed away.

Sarah smelled like sex. I could smell her jizz and all I could think about was how she tasted. I then licked the top of Sarah’s hand that was playing with her clit. It surprised her and her hand stopped moving for a second. I then stuck my tongue between her fingers and the tip touched her clit. Sarah jerked a bit and she slowly moved her hand away. I slowly licked her clit and Sarah moaned some more. Within fifteen seconds her vagina started contracting and her hips rocked as she had an explosive orgasm. I pulled the dildo out and jizz trickled out down her ass and onto the bed. I quickly started to lick up the remaining jizz on her pussy; it tasted so good.

Sarah lied on the bed motionless for a moment to recuperate. She then sat up and pushed me down on my back. She then kneeled between my legs and grabbed my stiff dick. She stroked it slowly sending shivers through my body. She then reached down between her legs to get some pussy juice on her hands. Her hand then stroked my dick sliding up and down the skin. I closed my eyes and imagined that it was her pussy sliding up and down my cock.

When the jizz started to disappear she bent over and licked the head of my penis. She circled her tongue around the tip a couple of times then took the head into her mouth. She bobbed up and down in rhythm with her hand; getting deeper and deeper until half of my shaft was in her mouth. I was about to go any second. “I’m gonna cum,” I grunted. She then took my dick out of her mouth and increased the rhythm with her hand. When I exploded she directed it all over her tits and stomach. It was unbelievable.

Sarah then took her hand, now covered in cum, and tasted it. “I never tasted it before. I was afraid to take it in my mouth and not like it. It’s not that bad though,” she said as she continued to lick clean her hand. “That was so good Sarah. I’ve haven’t had that many blow jobs but that one was by far the best. You’re a natural,” I said. “You’re not too bad yourself Kev,” she replied.

Sarah cleaned herself and me up with some Kleenex and laid back down on the bed next to me. We got into our usual spoon position and fell asleep.


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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 10:06
    another great storey dude, but too short



    keep up the good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2005 10:07
    Good work again, keep posting, I am expecting the next part!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2005 12:04
    Good stuff again...but tooooooo short ...go on 10/10

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 13:51
    More, I give it a 10/10, very good

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 13:54
    nice loved it keep going 15/10

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 15:28
    Still, the imagery was great and so was the grammer and spelling. but my only problem with the entire story, this one, is that it's is just not quite as long as the first. Still, you show a lot of talent and should continue your work. cheers.

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 17:14
    still good but how about some action.

    waiting for the next one

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 20:05
    give us some action

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2005 21:28
    I think that this one should have just been added on to the first, it doesn't stand out, between the two, excellent work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2005 22:34
    How old are you "artscape"? 12? You suck as a writer of porn--just naively coy, not at all erotic or sexy. The best that can be said of your work is that your spelling is correct and your punctuation adequate. But, the sex is mechanical and dispassionate. There is no conflict or tension in your staged pacing of the "action" I dare say no one 'cept "kev" could really get a hard on from this crap. Maybe this is what passes for porn lit in Canada? Heh?

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    READER 500
    12.11.2005 22:46
    It was a little disappointing after the previous chap. This one was more like a staight on sex story, the charaters and setting got lost in this part. You need to do something to keep us on our toes. As usual, the story was easy to follow and well crafted. You just need to get back to story telling.

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 04:48
    Excellent work again! You must ignore slams by old fuckers. The other comments, and mine, are ment to encourage the really fine aspects of your story telling. Your first chapter was classic. Try to keep the same level of suspense length. Truly, this is some of the best stuff I've read.

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 09:15
    8. Yeah, what about some avtion?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.11.2005 12:31
    ALRIGHT KEVIN, WHEN ARE YOU GONNA GET TO THE MEAT OF THE MATTER?? YOU KNOW WHAT WE ALL MEAN......FUCK SARAH & YOURSELF SILLY..............

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 13:09
    It sounds like for real. Good story.

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 14:47
    verry good story i hope you continue the story you are a very good writer and have a master piece in my opinion. Keep it coming

    i give it a 10

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 14:50
    Extremely well done.. You don't need to carry it further. We all have imaginations. For those that don't, they have a problem. How about another story from a feamles standpoint??

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 20:05
    make another... and wtf your last one was longer dont shorten them up for the ppl with add fuck them make em long and keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    13.11.2005 23:51
    Let's have some more. Great effort! Do you think you will have some anal in there?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.11.2005 09:30
    nicely done... keep the suspense going, write a few more before you both get it on.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.11.2005 16:24
    i love readin this keep it up

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    READER 500
    14.11.2005 18:26
    I want read about Kevin and Sarah actually fucking

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    READER 500
    14.11.2005 20:48
    too short!! but still great!! write more quickly!!

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    READER 500
    14.11.2005 21:21
    Great story i love the supense and i agree with taurez write the stories on your trems not anyone elses and miker is a jackass. anyways keep up the good work. 10

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    READER 500
    15.11.2005 18:35
    Yep, you're doing ok with the build-up of tension, and I can't wait until the next chapter. u gotta 9 for this one.

    r

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    READER 500
    15.11.2005 20:59
    please make chapter 3!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2005 21:25
    By far on of the best ones iv read. and please. make a 3rd where just FUCK LIKE WILD MONKEYS.

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    READER 500
    15.11.2005 23:19
    that was amazing there needs to be a part three

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    READER 500
    16.11.2005 00:03
    These two part hard on stories are...tough but worth it. Keep us up...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 03:54
    fuck ya dude! its killin me i gotta kno more lol! write more soon!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 05:56
    He's going to fuck her, right? It's way past the time for foreplay. He's going to love it just like I loved fucking my sis. Incest is the best!

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    READER 500
    16.11.2005 07:50
    Absolutely great. I have read it over and over. Reminds me of me and my sister. Please tell me there is more to cum!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    16.11.2005 15:42
    WOW really great story! please write more!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 16:36
    it like it a lot make more and ill keep reading

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 16:55
    That was great my sisters name is sarah and she's 15. Maybe i'll introduce her to my little green man one day. ; )

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    READER 500
    16.11.2005 17:59
    Great Story, Keep writing and I'll Keep reading, I think this storys a 9

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 20:31
    pure bullshit, author quit rating ur own fucking crappy ass story, so damn obvious 1/10 1/10 1/10

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    READER 500
    16.11.2005 23:05
    What confuses me is the fact that his sister is fucking herself with a dildo and still a virgin? If I were her I wouldn't want to lose my virginity to a dildo. Besides the confusion it's a great story.

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    READER 500
    17.11.2005 01:09
    great story. write more! 9/10 and for those people who dont like it, DONT READ IT THEN U FUCKING DUMASSES!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2005 07:45
    Not quite as good as the 1st installment, seemed a little more rushed. Good still though 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2005 16:35
    Great story, please write another chapter.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2005 17:48
    great story, please make a part 3!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2005 19:44
    Love it! 9/10 because it seemed a little rushed. Another please, but you dont have to rush

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    READER 500
    17.11.2005 21:17
    as fast as a bad comment is left, this asshole leaves a ton of fake bullshit comments trying to cover them up while rating his own crap up, 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10

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    READER 500
    17.11.2005 21:47
    the 1st one was better, 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 00:15
    This is a reayy good story but the frist one was better 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 05:39
    great cant wait for chapter 3

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 10:27
    I agree it was a little too short. the first one was a lot longer and built the sexual tension up to a point where you could really get into the story. cant wait for part 3...10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 14:01
    hell yeah that was great plz write another 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 14:15
    Is it the same writer? Not as good as the first part.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 15:10
    Incredibly awesome!! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.11.2005 17:47
    10/10 yay!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.11.2005 06:25
    needs a part three, still good but the first was better 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.11.2005 16:16
    wtf was that? 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 03:26
    I think it was good oogman your a douche, I think this one cut more to the chase i liked it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 06:11
    CUM ON - YOU CAN WRITE MORE THAN ONE PART AT A TIME - MORE --MORE - SHE WANTS IT SHE WANTS IT - KEEP THEM LICKING AND FRIGGING UNTIL - WOW

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    READER 500
    20.11.2005 06:40
    the first one was better as it was longon but this one was still facking awesome keep writing m8 :) 10/10

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    READER 500
    20.11.2005 08:56
    super stories I ned a mail chat

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 09:52
    omg even shitter dude u have no life

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 18:44
    comming on fine like your imagination, 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 19:12
    good story (= i'd say 10/10. if yu write part 3. maybe have them fuck or something. they cum too fast also, lol.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2005 01:56
    I am now ready for more parts, just keep writing as many parts as you can come up with, without running it dry. I am very impressed.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2005 16:24
    very well writ. keep going! 9/10 on this one couldda been a bit longer..i was looking forward to sommore foreplay based on the first

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2005 18:09
    whens he gonna put it in her? -_-

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    READER 500
    21.11.2005 19:01
    I really like your style. I prefer a longer story like the first one but nonetheless I was still impressed. Please hurry with the next part. I give it a 10/10.

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    READER 500
    22.11.2005 00:26
    its hard to type with sticky fingers

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    READER 500
    22.11.2005 03:47
    God DAMN muthafuckas! This shit is tight! I'll shit in your mouth! youll fucking stink like redball-asswipes! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP

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    READER 500
    22.11.2005 17:29
    Write another part, next time have Kevin PUT IT IN HER

    GAHHH

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.11.2005 21:40
    obiosly you didnt take your time

    but you are tesing a little

    but i die a little inside when he doesnt do her

    write another this time fuck action, nd my fav anal!

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    READER 500
    23.11.2005 00:36
    More plz :(

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.11.2005 01:12
    i dont want to know her name i just want bang bang bang!!!

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    READER 500
    23.11.2005 17:39
    Great Story!!! Please cumm with part 3.

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    READER 500
    23.11.2005 19:51
    omg that was amazing ive read a shit load of stories on this site and that has 2 be one of the best wriited storys ive read uve got a tallent and need 2 write more keep this one goin then maybey start anouther story 10/10

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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 02:25
    nice man 9-10

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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 12:00
    that was really good but i agree with the other people when do kevin and sarah actually fuck? i mean theyve been doing so much foreplay dont you think its time they went all the way?

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    READER 500
    24.11.2005 13:51
    noone is going to read another story from you about kevin and sarah masturbating. better make the next one good and long.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.11.2005 19:19
    Oh my poor pussy...is unhappy why didnt they do it!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.11.2005 21:17
    the same like the first part only 1/10 for the topic, but for the style i would give 10/10

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 10:13
    That was not as good as the first but i still liked it please cum with #3.

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 16:59
    Ok story? 6/10

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    READER 500
    26.11.2005 22:53
    I think you should start #3 with them continuing there evening, other than that I give 8.6/10

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    READER 500
    27.11.2005 01:49
    still love the story but i agree you need to have them fuck really soon it's long over due

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 18:07
    Great style,very sexy,good pace that leaves you wanting more,but why ruin it by including incest.It could have been a flatmate with same affect unless you were fuked up the ass by your daddy and miss your mums pussy

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 11:57
    Not as good as first, but I once again like your style. Keep at it.

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 03:59
    You are onto something with these stories. Well played. K

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 15:56
    Good story but a little too short. I too, liked the first one better. I enjoy the manner in which you build up to the next phase in their relatioinship. Sarah is correct, they should be fucking soon. Can't imagine their both "playing with themselves" until orgasm and not fucking by now.



    Still gave it an 8/10.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:51
    Both execellent stories, and I like the fact they didn't do it. I think they should save that for their future partners. Write more please.

    From a kinky masturbator.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 08:34
    i love it

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 15:32
    it wus alright, ill give u a 8/10, i am happy that u didnt make them fuck right away, makes it ore tempting to read

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 16:19
    Oh my god!I was masterbating the whole time with them.Can you add some more detail in 4 tho?I'm about to go read number 3!

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 01:51
    Aiya...does that mean she lost her virginity to a dildo? thats kinda sad..good story none the less

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 12:56
    Good, a little short though. i didn't think it was as good as the first. the third is at the top of the ratings list right now so it should be Fab

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 05:28
    Go back to your first style. It was too fast that time. I liked the writing style of the first one. If you wrote a book, you would get a few bux out of me, becase I would buy it. Some people shouldn't be such critics. If they aren't into the type thing they need to get lost. Lost being the alternate word for me being nice. Spend some time in a combat zone pal and you would change your tune. Keep on writing. I love it.

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 14:55
    another 10/10 from me, that says it all. Keep em cumming

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 00:51
    What do you mean go back to his old style, it's a continuation so he's just building off from before and since they reached that point he can't just START over

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    READER 500
    12.02.2006 12:05
    Great Story. Gave me a great hardon. Keep up the good work. 10/10

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    READER 500
    06.01.2008 12:48
    i have read all three of the stories now and they all get a 10/10 in my book. please keep up all the good stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2009 20:50
    Nice! 8/10 I wish he'd have smeared his dick across her little tits, though...

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