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Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3

Author: artscape

Date: 11 November 2005

First Time, Fiction, Incest, Oral Sex

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Part 10

I woke up the following morning with Sarah’s new dildo poking into my side. Sarah was still sleeping and I grabbed the toy dick to look at it. I brought it to my nose and could smell rubber and a hint of Sarah’s pussy. I reminisced of last night; fucking her with the dildo and watching her rub her clit at the same time. I also mused over the thought of flicking my tongue over her swollen clit causing her to moan in pleasure. It was hard to believe what I had done with my sister last night. If it wasn’t for the pink dildo that smelled like sex in my hand I would have thought it was a dream.

My relationship with Sarah was getting closer and more intense by the day. To think I was hesitant to even allow her to move in with me. When the request was made to me I figured she would be the annoying brat I grew up with. I was definitely wrong and saw a different side of her now. She was a grown up woman that could make my dick hard in an instant. But not only was she a sex figure to me but I was starting to feel much closer to her emotionally. I was now comfortable just hanging out with her. I didn’t care to go out with the guys to the bars and pick up chicks. I would rather spend the night with Sarah and watch a movie or just chat.
I rolled on to my side, wrapped my arm around her, gave her a squeeze and kissed her neck. She was now lying on her back and my arm snuggled right under her tits. “Mmmmm,” Sarah awoke and rolled towards me. “Good morning,” she said as she snuggled up tight into my arms and nestling her head into my chest. We were facing each other and my already hard dick was resting against her upper pubic bone.

Sarah didn’t move for awhile and I figured she had slipped back to sleep. I then began to think if we would ever have sex together. Would she give up her virginity to me? I knew I wouldn’t think twice giving mine to her. But I also knew that I would never dare to make that move. “Had we already gone too far?” I thought to myself. It was no longer just teasing and self satisfaction but pleasing each other. What was Sarah thinking of our escapades? I definitely enjoyed fooling around with her and was surprised at how natural it felt, but had we stepped over the line? I figured I would leave that up to Sarah to decide. I would not make any further moves and would let her take control.

I must have fallen asleep again too because I woke up to Sarah slipping out from under my arms. “Where are you going,” I said? “No where. I’m just gonna get some breakfast. I’m starving. I worked up an appetite after last night,” she said giving me a wink as she walked out of the room naked. I admired her ass as it traveled down the hall way to the kitchen.

I got up too, put some boxers on and went to the washroom to take a piss. I had to sit down on the toilet because my dick was semi hard and I would have pissed all over the place had I stood.

When I entered the kitchen Sarah was still naked and leaning over looking into the fridge. She finally grabbed some orange juice and stood up. Her nipples were rock hard as usual but I excused it for the coldness of the refrigerator. I also grabbed a glass of the juice for myself and sat at the kitchen table next to Sarah.

She obviously didn’t think last night was going too far or she wouldn’t have been so liberal with her attire this morning. She just sat at the table naked with one foot on the seat of the chair with her pussy exposed for me to stare at. “Your absolutely stunning sis,” I said admiring her beauty. “Thanks Kev, you’re so sweet,” she replied. I then got up and went to take a shower.

Half way through my shower Sarah opened the shower curtain to join me and startled me at the same time. I nearly slipped on the wet tub but caught myself. “I need a shower too. I hope you don’t mind,” she said. “Not at all,” I replied helping her into the shower. She then grabbed the soap and began to wash my back. She quickly moved to my cock and lathered it up real good.

She then rinsed it off and immediately kneeled down. She placed her lips over my penis and began to suck me off. The water was now soaking her hair and it draped over her face and back. The heat from her mouth was slightly warmer than the shower. I grabbed the top of her head and felt it move up and down as she continued to suck my cock. She took her time and was in no rush to get me off. It didn’t matter though; I was already close to blowing. She then grabbed my balls with her other hand and I grunted with pleasure.

“I’m gonna cum,” I said warning Sarah. She didn’t flinch though. She only continued to bob up and down and swirling her tongue at the same time. “I can’t hold it any longer,” I moaned just before the first spurt of cum projected into Sarah’s mouth. She still never flinched and kept milking me of my cum.

When I was weak in my knees and my balls were empty she stood up and licked her lips. Sarah must have swallowed my cum while I was filling up her mouth. “That wasn’t so bad. My friends say its gross but I kinda liked it,” she said confirming that she swallowed and didn’t spit.

Once I gathered my senses I started to lather her up with soap. I started at her shoulders and raised her arms to wash her arm pits. I then washed her back and her butt; concentrating on her ass crack. I then washed her chest making sure her nipples were good and clean and poking at the same time. I then knelt washing her legs starting at her feet and up to her thigh. The only part left was her pussy. I then lathered my hands, dropped the soap and rubbed her pussy lips and clit. My fingers slide easily between her lips but I made sure not to enter her vagina and put soap in there.

Sarah raised her leg and rested it on the side of the tub. I rinsed the soap off and opened her pussy lips so that I could see her spread cunt close up. I then placed my mouth over her clit and circle my tongue around it. At the same time I inserted my middle finger into her pussy. My finger slid in easily and I explored the inside of her vagina.

Sarah moaned loudly. She must have been getting more comfortable with me because I hadn’t heard her that loud before. “Shit…Oh Kevin don’t stop,” she groaned in pleasure. I then slowly inserted two fingers opening her tight pussy even more. I took my time not to stretch her too quickly and cause pain. “Ahhh fuck! That feels so good,” Sarah moaned letting me know I was hitting all the right spots.

My tongue flicked faster and harder over her clit sending her to the limit. “Ooooh,” she nearly screamed as her pussy pulsated over my fingers in an orgasmic rhythm. She then started to convulse slightly and I stood up and held her close to me supporting her until her orgasm subsided. I held her for a little while longer until she was stable again. We then washed each other’s hair and finished our shower pruned from being in the water so long.

“Thanks Kev,” Sarah said. “Ya. Thanks for cleaning me sis,” I said with a smirk.


Part 11

That night while I was brushing my teeth before bed I thought about how awesome my shower was earlier that day. I also thought how Sarah couldn’t have regretted anything we did so far otherwise she would have slowed down. But she wasn’t. It seemed like she wanted more and more like I did. I still told myself that I would not pursue any further than we had already gone. I was enjoying this too much to ruin it by taking it beyond Sarah’s limit. But what was her limit? Did she just enjoy playing around like we’ve done already or did she want to go all the way? We pretty much did everything before sex. What else was there?

I always believed that sex was a much bigger step than just fooling around or oral. I had fooled around with girls before but knew that unless they were really special to me I didn’t want to lose my virginity to them. Don’t get me wrong; I wanted to fuck the living shit out of some of my girl friends, but I didn’t want the first time to just be a fuck. I wanted it to happen with someone I would never forget. I wanted it to be with someone that would cherish the moment just as much as I did. I knew that if it was just a fuck for the girl and much more than that for me then I would feel like shit the next day.

How would I feel if Sarah and I did it together? I figure it would mean a hell of a lot for her since she was a virgin as well. I also knew that I would never forget her or the moment since she is my sister. In fact I always thought that the best person to lose your virginity to would be friend that was a virgin also. Sarah was really the best candidate; we were really close with each other, she was a virgin, and she was also hot.

Just as I was about to spit out the tooth paste Sarah joined me in the washroom naked and sat on the toilet to pee. I nearly choked when I saw her. I finished rinsing my mouth as she wiped her pussy clean with some toilet paper. I then bent over to dry my face with a towel on the rack and Sarah reached around me and grabbed my dick. I took and extra long time to dry my face as she stroked my penis to get me hard. She then stopped and I finished drying my face. “You’re such a tease sis,” I said. Sarah smirked at me in the mirror and started brushing her teeth. I went to the bedroom.

It was another hot night so I laid on top of the covers naked with a hard on waiting for Sarah to join me in bed. She came in the room a few minutes later and I admired her silhouetted body as it approached the bed. Sarah climbed into bed on my side and began to straddle me with her leg. I thought she was going to continue to her side of the bed when she stopped and sat on top of me with her hands rested on my chest and her pussy on my hard dick. “Mmmm,” she muttered. She rubbed my chest rocking slightly back and forth. I could feel the inner lips of her pussy pressed on top of my penis and her swollen outer lips creating a groove that my shaft filled.

Sarah then leaned forward and kissed me on the lips. “I love you Kev. You mean so much to me,” she said in between kisses. She then thrust her mouth harder into mine and shoved her tongue deep into my mouth giving me the wettest and most passionate kiss. “You make me so hot sometimes!” she said and then kissed me again. She also started to rock her pussy and this time I could feel her hard clit press against the head of my dick. “I want you so bad right now,” she whimpered as she thrust her clit harder against my cock.

Sarah then sat up again and her inner lips were moist and this time straddle my cock. She was extremely wet and I could feel the warmth of her vagina enveloping the top side of my penis. She then slid her pussy with ease up and down my dick stroking it with her lips and making it all slippery. I then realized that there was indeed more stuff we could do before sex. I wasn’t inside her but we were definitely closer than we ever were before. I was so turned on my dick was throbbing. I watched her face and tits as she continued to slide up and down on my shaft. She continued to slide further and further to the point where the opening of her vagina would stop at the head of my penis. Sometimes my penis would hit her inner pubic bone on her down stroke and bounce out over towards her clit.

I knew that the angle her pussy was in compared to the angle of my dick that it would be unlikely that I would penetrate her. It was pretty damn close though and I was starting to precum profusely. “Ya better be careful sis. I don’t want to get you pregnant,” I said getting a bit worried my precum would swim its way up her pussy. “Don’t worry. Mom put me on the pill at the beginning of the summer because she was worried I’d be fooling around when I went to university. I guess she was right,” she said with a laugh. “Really,” I replied with some relief since I was already getting paranoid we were going to get into trouble. “Ya, mom was pretty cool about it,” she said as she renewed her rocking motion.

My balls were now soaked with her jizz and I could feel my stomach below my dick getting wet as well. Sarah then leaned forward and French kissed me again. She rubbed her clit into my dick again. I knew that our angles were different now and that if she aligned us right I would slide right into her. I didn’t move a muscle though. If she wanted it she would have to make the move. She played with her clit against the head of my dick while her tits brushed against my chest.

After a few minutes Sarah then laid flat on me and urged me to roll over on top of her. I did willingly and ended up in a push-up position over top of her and between her legs. I took the sign from her and started to rub my dick against her pussy as she laid there motionless. I slid my dick up and down the length of her pussy pressing my balls against her opening on the up stroke and ending on the down stroke with my head at the opening. I did this for a while hitting her inner pubic bone a couple of times on the up stroke. Once I had to quickly stop as my penis was about to go in the other direction into her pussy. I wanted to keep going but forced myself to stop.

I then started to use my hand to control the direction of my dick and to apply a little more pressure in spots. I continued to slide the head of my dick up and down her lips stopping sometimes at her clit and wagging it left and right over her clit. I also got more daring around her vagina opening circling it and applying a little bit of pressure just so that the tip pressed against it. Sometimes I would just stopped at the opening and remain stiff to tease her and myself. One push and I could be buried deep inside her. I continued to do this for awhile. I was actually surprised I hadn’t blown my load by now. I figured it was probably because I was just as nervous as I was excited.

Then one time while I was teasing my head around the opening of her pussy Sarah rocked slightly and half the head of my penis entered her and then withdrew. I froze for a second and then carried on like before. The next time I stopped at her vagina she did it again. This time I didn’t move my dick from her opening like before. I then applied equal pressure back causing the head of my dick to enter her in the same amount. Sarah then did the same and we took turns.

After a minute or so of doing this Sarah instead of waiting until I was done my turn rocked at the same time. The entire head of my dick went inside her and we both froze. She was pretty tight and her vagina gripped behind the head of my penis. I knew that she was probably feeling her pussy stretch but I could tell also that she was in no pain. I’m sure the dildo worked her in a bunch but I was still slightly thicker than the dildo. I then pulled out slowly knowing that she would have to stretch again slightly since the head was a bit bigger than the shaft behind it.

I then took control slowly pushing the head back into her pussy again and pulling it out. After about ten in and outs Sarah was a little looser and I could increase my pace. Sarah then started to rock her pelvis with me. For every ten strokes we took a step deeper. After about 15 minutes of slow methodic strokes I was nearly all the way in her. I could tell Sarah’s pussy was starting to relax more and more and she was enjoying it at the same rate.

After another five minutes I was sliding in and out of her with ease. With ever penetration Sarah’s pussy sloshed from her wetness. My hips pumped up and down faster and faster and she gyrated her hips at the same pace. “Ahh you feel so good inside me,” Sarah moaned. “I never thought it would feel this good,” I replied. I didn’t think I could last much longer especially since Sarah was groaning as if she was going to go too. “I’m not going to last much longer,” I said giving her some time to figure out what she wanted me to do with my cum. “Oh, come inside me please. I want to feel you explode inside my pussy just like you did in my mouth,” Sarah said.

It wasn’t ten seconds later when I started to erupt plastering the inside of her pussy with my cum. At the same time Sarah started to jerk into an orgasm milking my dick of its last drop. I then collapsed on top of Sarah trying to catch my breath. I laid there for a minute kissing her neck and being careful not to pull out just yet.

I then rolled over and my cum trickled out of Sarah’s pussy. “Thank you Kevin,” Sarah said in a loving way. “Thank you too Sis. I’m so glad you chose me to be your first and am grateful that you were mine.” I replied. “I love you Sarah,” I said rolling over to give her a kiss. “I love you too Kevin,” she said pressing herself against me.

“So when do you want to do it again,” Sarah said while wrapping her leg around me. My dick then sprung to life and I started to suck on her tits. The End.


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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 08:35
    Dude you never cease to impress



    keep up the good work

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 09:24
    Hot, Hot, Hot.



    10/10

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 09:52
    I have been waiting for the final episode. It was well worth the wait. Excellent writing, and the build up to the "climax" was great. You sure there won't be a part IV?

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 10:05
    keep it going its a great story

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 11:03
    As usual artscape your work is flawless but part one seemed to have something the others didnt and i liked it more. maybe because it was alot longer and had more build up. but this story was still excellent. hope to see more posts from you. 10/10

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 11:54
    Good stuff. Great story, good build up throughout. I agree with Sock man, that Part one had something a little extra. more detail and more suspense / teasing

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 12:35
    awesome story 10/10

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 13:29
    Not bad, not bad at all. I see a bit of myself in your work. I'm a erotoc novelist and I like to go through chapter after chapter until the sex actually comes into play. VERY,VERY good

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 13:50
    Very Very well done, these pieces all seemed to be inspired. Keep writing and don't be afraid to explore new characters/concepts.

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 15:04
    dude ur story wuz simply awesone i mean all 3 ov em..10/10

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 15:59
    Great story, keep them coming well done



    10/10

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 16:00
    pictures would be nice

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 17:05
    great story, write more

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 19:48
    Dude... what the fuck? your sister??? ew

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 21:18
    Excellent writing! A pleasure to read and very erotic! Would like to read more of your work!

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 21:55
    you stories were amazing to read the plots were interesting and engaing i also liked the ending .

    i would love to read more of your writing

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    READER 500
    28.11.2005 23:24
    Part 3 was definatly a GREAT finally! Well done!!! I was checking every day to see when the part would come out and it was VERY VERY WELL DONE 11/10 FOR SURE!!!

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 01:43
    Man, you must start a new trilogy. This one rocks, keep up the stories. 10/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 02:33
    wow! worth the wait 10/10 fo shizle

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 03:31
    Mate what a great store. All three were really good

    12/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 05:26
    Wow, It would be an understatement to say this was a great story. Very professionally done, keep up the good work,

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 07:25
    i HAVE JUST READ A PIECE OF LITERATURE. EXCELLENT. KEEP WRITING.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 08:08
    One of the best sets of stories I've ever read.

    I'll read anything else you write.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 11:47
    Excellent. This was a worthy finish to the first two.

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 11:54
    absolutely brilliant a*** ace !!!!

    Super man keep it goin

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 14:56
    YEH u rock man



    this is one of the best ever



    u could be proffesional

    10/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 15:56
    tear.... thats just fucking great... dare i say its better than camp nurse

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 17:27
    great job,that's all i need to say

    10/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 17:58
    that was realy fucking good i wish you would make more i love jacking off to this story.... 10/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 18:10
    super hot!! 9/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 18:13
    Your all sick this wasn't even worth reading. 1/10

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    READER 500
    29.11.2005 22:19
    nice

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 01:13
    Omg i was jacking off and my dog came up to me and licked my balls so i stuck my dick in his ass and came all over it. Fuck you guys should try it.

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 01:57
    great story 9/10 and nutincup your a fag seriosly why would you want to tell people that fuckin queer.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.11.2005 03:08
    Great Story, but like the second one, just a little to short. Keep Them CUMing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.11.2005 06:06
    Excellent story! 10/10. This had my cum bubbling out of my dick.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.11.2005 10:22
    A eleven star story in a ten star world. A great little three part series that would make anybody's heart go into hihgh gear. Keep up the good work.

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    READER 500
    30.11.2005 16:14
    milkier and oogman arg fuckin jackasses who wish they were nutincups dog. i liked the story

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 01:28
    bravo man bravo i enjoy what u write alot all 3 were great 10 out of 10

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 02:52
    smuftacular it a smufing good i liked it how he smurfed her sfurfing gr8 story

    10/10

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 06:41
    Really a great Trilogy but it falls off to the end.



    Part 1 teases and builds up a lot of tension, but leaving the reader unsatisfied and in an urge for the next part, that was excellent.



    Part 2 is a short bridge to part 3, just closing the gap and part 3 is finally the fulfilment, but to shoort with less teasing.



    Overall there is nothing else than a 10/10 I can give, but i would like it more, if the tension is kept highly.

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 15:21
    great story. chapters 2 and 3 could have been longer. having said that it was well written and had plenty of build up which was good to see for a change.



    is there going to be a chapter 4? i can think of another stop to take it too :-)

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 16:10
    you suck, this shit is wicked

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 18:10
    wicked? wtf. someone needs to learn how to spell. assclown.



    kickass story. one of the best ive seen.MORE10/10 as always.

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 22:29
    DEAR GOD! This story was wonderful! Great trilogy. I wish I had a brother like that! 10/10 keep em cumming,

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 23:01
    The last part needs to be longer and have more teasing!!! I only give a 6/10 on the 3rd part. 10/10 on the other 2 though

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 01:04
    this was the best story ive read... i could imagine every detail, you are a great writer, you need to write more mate!!!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 03:11
    Great story. It kinda needed a better ending but i t was awesome. One of the better stories on here. I give 10/10 just as i did for the other 2. Hopefully a part 4

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 07:43
    NOOOOO it cant be over! ;_; Great story i really enjoyed it 10/10!

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 17:16
    all in all i give you a 10/10, i thort the build up was superb and the 1st & 2nd chapter got me quite tense, hense the reason y i was back for more... i think i good way to end a wonderful story is to keep writing...

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 20:10
    These are the best three stories i've read on here.. try to write some more with different characters!!

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 04:06
    Wow, this is amazingly good. You are a peerless tease. It's awesome.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2005 04:42
    How about a sequal where she invites her friends in??? :p

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 19:59
    Wow, what a great ending to a great trilogy! I say you should write these stories but with different characters to keep with the same theme. Most definitely 10/10 :D:D:D

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 22:03
    All three were very good. I strongly recomend that you continue writing similar stories. --- 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.12.2005 23:30
    you seriously write the best stories on this entire website. You shoul keep writing more stories and keep up the excelent work

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 01:16
    If you DON'T write more i will kill you!!! 10/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 09:19
    Wonderful writing. Love the way you build up to something different in each story. You make it all sound so believable.



    Gave this one a 10/10.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 11:04
    Horrible!!! 0/10

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 12:52
    loved all 3 man, great and awesome! -10-

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 14:41
    The best I've ever read anywhere, just the right amount of intrigue and slow progression and considerate behavior, real love not just lust! Please keep on, start with a younger couple and let it progress through the years.

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 15:46
    IT was ok except fro the fact THAT ITS YOUR SISTER

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 20:38
    GJ 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.12.2005 21:35
    your all jewish. i just might burn you all

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    READER 500
    04.12.2005 23:45
    great story, 20/10 keep on writing

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 15:22
    great story. 10-10

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 15:25
    Miler you're an asshole you say all the stories suck. But it's not the stories that suck it's YOU! so go fuck yourself!



    Awesome Story 10/10

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    READER 500
    05.12.2005 20:59
    fucking awesome!!! a part four would be good but only if its different

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 00:22
    great stories...keep writing...loved all 3 man..*10*

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 04:59
    You have the best stories on here !! 10/10 ... Keep writing !

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 15:12
    this is pure crap, wish these faggot writers would quit bragging on theirselves using different aliases and rating their own shit up 50 times a day, 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 16:19
    Oh my god!I was masterbating the whole time with them.Can you add some more detail in 4 tho?Like how long he is?What it looks like?How it feels?More stuff like that?Not only would it make it longer but it would be hotter aswell.

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 19:47
    Artscape is undoubtly the best writer on this site. too bad there is no way to find out what other names the publishes under. I wuld put him in the same class as Thomas Wolfe or Tom Clancy. His stuff is better than mine.

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 20:52
    needs a part 4, maby throw in another character, and other stuff, (anal)

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 22:20
    10/10



    Is it even possible to rate something more than once



    oh yeah if you don't like certain stuff it tells you what you are gonna see so if you don't like that suff don'f fucking read it and i hope no one! fucks the guys you write these mean comments, they don't deserve it

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 01:21
    that was the most amazing series ever written

    its popularity is only behind Harry Potter and the Lord of the Rings

    u r a god among insects in the world of writing

    10/10

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 11:17
    great job looking forward to the next step in this story.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 13:22
    A part 4 would be nice, but if you left the story here, no one would blame you

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 15:23
    Nice story, and very well written. It could stand to be a bit more descriptive, though. And I really don't like the ending. Also, try not to use "the end"... that's an ending way over-used. It's not really a big deal, it's just a peeve of mine.

    Good story, though.

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 23:06
    I liked it and found the long "forplay" to the story was a great build up although did not cum until half ay through the second part. For me to cum these days from a story it has to be rough rape, whole arm fisting in both holes or more - so this was a great series. Your good - do more

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    READER 500
    07.12.2005 23:53
    I forgot to add that I love anal and a move in that direction would not be to much for the siblings in this story - you do it so well

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 04:55
    Don't listen to any of them. It was just fine the way it was.Too many discriptive words makes for a gaudish read. You're style is easy to read, has a nice flow to it, and has good pro look to it. If you ever wrote something else other than porn with a good story line to it, it would probably be well received.

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 05:25
    JEWFACE I MIGHT BE A JEW BUT I BET YOU WONT SAY THAT BULLSHIT TO MY FACE, BY THE WAY GREAT STORY I LOVE EM ALL PLZ MAKE MORE.

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 14:23
    Good story; sensuous; erotic.

    9/10

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    READER 500
    08.12.2005 17:40
    “Ya better be careful sis. I don’t want to get you pregnant,” I said getting a bit worried my precum would swim its way up her pussy. Dont you think that putting sperm in place of precum would be better said..great story but precum does not flow uphill, however sperm do swim where there is a medium to transport them.

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 20:22
    you did a great job but it wasn't exactly a "fuck fest" that you promised in the beggining of the first one

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 22:14
    Sucking tits. the end.



    oh come on. you could make a better ending than that.

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    READER 500
    09.12.2005 22:29
    A strong well crafted story. The problem is that once you started it there was only one way to go and we got there as expected and it was a little bit of a letdown. the story needed some conflict or a third party, or something to shake us a little. I also wish you would have made the sister a little less 2 dimensional, she acted like a bot most of the time. Nonetheless, a good job. Tonguewaver, take an anaotmy class.

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    READER 500
    10.12.2005 08:39
    Oh my God! I couldn't keep my hands off my dick while reading this story. Fantastic foreplay description. Made a fucking mess of my pants, but worth it. This shit is too good.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 05:46
    yeah fluid does go against gravity, it's called capillary action and it's the main thing that allows trees to live... fucking good story aswell. nicely constructed.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 15:36
    the worse in the series BAAAAAAAAAD

    1/10, i didn't even have a hard-on, and i usually goes very fast.....................

    ...

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    READER 500
    11.12.2005 19:11
    great series

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2005 19:21
    Blah

    12-09-05 - 20:22

    You did a great job but it wasn't exactly a "fuck fest" that you promised in the beggining of the first one

    if im not mistakin he said it wasnt gonna be another and i qoute this part bam bam thank you mam story....aka fuck fest and tonguewaver you really do need that anatomy class

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 12:24
    VERY GOOD STORY !

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 05:47
    That was truly on of the best stories I have had the pleasure fo reaking. Please write more. I wish this one had not ended. Keep up the good work and fuck the ones with negative thoughts. I love your work. Your a talented author. Make the next one like the first one and I am your biggest fan.

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 11:42
    Excellent! I hope to read more of your work in the future. You've got a real talent :)

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 15:48
    5/10 at best.

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 19:36
    hmm incest sucks

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 21:58
    rat,don't rate incest stories down,you knew what you were going to be reading before hand.and as for you oogman,you are just a retard.this story was well written,and had good content.8/10 at least

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 22:29
    very good story, wish it didnt' have to end, and yeah was a little predictable but i loved it all teh same 10/10

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    READER 500
    13.12.2005 23:18
    THe End: Are you fucking crazy!! This story was too hot to end. Give us another chapter asap. 11/10

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 01:10
    Very well written, looking forward to a 4th chapter?

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 01:51
    very nice job if im not mistaken you left a giant opening for another but i must say the way you descried things was great really good story.

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 18:09
    Pretty damn good.

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 21:08
    Great story, one of the best I have read please make a chapter 4 ...

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 17:34
    i AM GLAD YOU FINISHED IT WITH A BANG, GREAT STORY

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 18:07
    hey i agree with Tu Madre oogman u suck , i really liked it 8.5/10

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 21:34
    Loved every part it got me so worked up.

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 11:35
    very well written and only found one gramatical error. typing this w/ one hand because the other is busy w/ something else

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    READER 500
    17.12.2005 12:32
    wonderful story, you are a very good author.

    Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 14:33
    I love this story, it made me cum very hard and strong, I wsh I have a brother to fuck me everynight

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    READER 500
    19.12.2005 20:53
    As long as you read the entire story, not just the section, this is definately at least a 7/10. I mean the author has alot of promise, he's at least learned paragraphing(which is better than I can say for most) now if there was a little better punctuation, and maybe another part, it would be briliant....

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    READER 500
    20.12.2005 22:44
    Artscape:

    I am a first time writer on these pages

    This was, by far, one of the best stories that I have read at this forum. I think it all came together [no pun intended] quite well. Honestly, and while pulling on myself [I like to call them sessions], toward the end of the first chapter, I was thinking out loud, "Fuck! Why doesn't he put it inside of her so I can cum, too." Ultimately, though, and well worth the wait, I had to extend my session to the end of Chapter 3. I'm glad I did.



    Just one other thing: On the advice of Cpt. US Army: FUCK all those asshole "closet jerkers" that write "Ooo!" "How disgusting and unnatural." Stories like yours are not insidious and vile. Rather, they are sensual and erotic, and, thus, can truly be called ART. I'm ready for another session.

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 05:36
    I loved it. Hot, feeling, sexy story.

    9/10

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 16:23
    great story. write another chapter

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    READER 500
    22.12.2005 19:34
    I loved it whens ch 4 comin out????

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    READER 500
    24.12.2005 14:36
    bloody awesome man well du,n would llove 2 see a 4th chapter and i hope 2 see 1 very sonn 9/10 will becum 10/10 wen the 4th chapter comes. jolly good chap

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    READER 500
    27.12.2005 01:34
    loved all three of them

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    READER 500
    27.12.2005 13:00
    this was a very good story, this is the 3rd time i read it. i love it. most insest stories are gross and vile, taking it way to far. this series was full of love and passion. This is the best story i have read on here. i personally aint in to insest, but a i think having fun with stories is fineit would be cool if you wrote a few sequals. You are and excelent writer.

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    READER 500
    29.12.2005 21:57
    Good effort. Write more and make us all ask for more and more.

    9/10

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 01:36
    OUR PEOPLE ARE FUCKING SICK. WE DONT HAVE LONG DICKS TO PLEASE OUR WOMEN. SO WE VISIT SEX SITES LIKE THESE TO MASTERBATE. WE CANT ENJOY REAL WOMEN. THIS IS OUR DESTINY. WE GET SO HORNY READING SEX STORIES LIKE THESE SO IMAGINE WHAT WOULD HAPPENED IF WE SEE A REAL NAKED WOMEN. WE JUST EJACULATE IN A SECOND. ONBEHALF OF EVERYBODY HERE.

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    READER 500
    03.01.2006 19:50
    Hey, American Dude, since you masturbate a lot, I'm sure, you ought to at least learn how spell the word: Masturbate ---- not masterbate. Don't make me Dick-slap you, boy.

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    READER 500
    09.01.2006 02:47
    Yo, Dick Slapper, shut the fuck up. You probably fuck ur animals since you're too damn ass ugly to fuck anything human.

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    READER 500
    10.01.2006 05:19
    Yo, Yoyo, don't make me dick-slap you, you little fag. And learn how to spell. You write like a 5-year-old.

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    READER 500
    11.01.2006 15:46
    nice stories. should continue

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    READER 500
    14.01.2006 20:48
    NIce story. You should write more and add to this.

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    READER 500
    15.01.2006 20:38
    it was good..10/10

    ______________... funny how people try to make fun of each other on here lmao

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.01.2006 18:11
    wwhats the differentance between 3 and 3b???

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    READER 500
    18.01.2006 02:25
    Where is the difference to chapter 3?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.01.2006 00:40
    This is the best fucking story I have read on this site!

    10/10

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    READER 500
    27.01.2006 23:15
    good one

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    READER 500
    03.02.2006 09:44
    1 Nice story

    2 AMERICAN DUDE, if you cant please your woman, you're doing something wrong

    3 I love to read the posts here, always some... guys insulting each other

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    READER 500
    05.02.2006 14:03
    10/10

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    READER 500
    19.02.2006 14:30
    Great story, but why do some of the authors of incest stories insist on using the term "Sis," when refering to their sister? The term seems a little out of date don't you think? I've never heard anyone of my friends call their sister "Sis," at least not in my presence. Nonetheless, a good story! 8/10

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    READER 500
    16.10.2006 12:55
    A very nice story with a nice ending, lets have some more 10/10

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    READER 500
    13.11.2006 16:04
    In a rating from 1 to 10 u r a 12, dude!!! I love Bro/Sis incest!!!

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    READER 500
    20.11.2006 04:04
    write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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    READER 500
    19.02.2007 11:10
    great stories but what happens when you go home for thanksgiving and christmas or summer vaction do your parents find out etc.

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    READER 500
    10.03.2007 17:54
    Pretty good!I'm surprised it didn't hurt her!I might try that my first time!Please make a 12th one!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2007 23:30
    "plastering the inside of her pussy with my cum"

    LOVED THAT! oh my, that was such a good use of words

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    READER 500
    05.07.2007 13:08
    sorry but the ending sucked shit and the sex scene wasn't all that great either i give this one 7/10

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    READER 500
    05.01.2008 22:31
    Gawd. I wish i was yer sister.

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    READER 500
    10.02.2008 17:38
    just another sick writer that gets you hooked then dumps you if you can't finish then don't start

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  • Sequoia
    08.06.2008 22:30
    Fucking your sister can and should be great. I should know. I fucked my sister most every day for over 12 years and gave her 4 children. So now fuck your sister and get her pregnant.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2008 22:34
    Get sister pregnant.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2008 02:53
    naomi

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2008 02:55
    but why do some authors of incest stories insist on using Sis

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2009 21:19
    Fucking great!! 9/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2009 21:21
    Um. Why would you copy the same ending?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2010 15:56
    you ruined a good story by not finishing it needs atleast one more chapter to tell what happens when they go home for thanksgiving ,christmas and summer does she get pregnant do the parents find out does she fnd someone else at school hell of a place to leave it

    DBRS

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 20:39
    This is hilarious, we're just snieeg it for the first time! Yes, we expect more sincere apologies from Management for not showcasing every possible angle of Ms. Belle to ensure your audience memorizes precisely what Lucy's well-toned vagina looks like from any vantage point. (We suspect Pat & perhaps several Artful Porn fans could at this point pick out the likes of Lucy and, say, Tori Black, Alexis Texas, Gilda Roberts, et al from an anonymous crowd by the shape of their labias alone.)Happy to contribute

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