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Lost Empire 17

Author: pars001

Date: 14 March 2016

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Derrick jerked awake, ah Christ his head hurt, the light was so bright, ugh! Looking around he could see that E had integrated back into the system. Sitting up a thought filled his mind, E? Why in the hell had he just called Shelby E? Then again where in the world was she? She never left his side, then the memories started to flood his mind, looking at the chronometer he did a double take, huh? It seemed that he was missing a few months, though he could slowly feel the memories starting to open up. Sitting there a few moments he was glad he was getting his memories back that is 'til the memory of what Lucy had done and sacrificed flooded his mind and the tears started to flow.

Nodding his head at the memories he again pledged that he would find her. Looking at the Chronometer again he saw that he only had a month missing, then the pain started as the first time he'd used the head set hit him. What the hell was going on? It was like doors were being opened flooding his mind at an accelerated rate.

"SHELBY! Oh god!" Derrick almost screamed, where in the hell was she? Both Shelby and Mary appeared looking at Derrick with huge concern in their eyes. "My god my mind is going to tear it's self to pieces! You have to knock me out 'til they are all one! Hurry I can feel the pressure starting to increase."

Shelby looked at Mary who nodded then watched as Shelby administered a drug to render Derrick unconscious. "Thank you," he said as he once again faded into the blackness. Both Mary and Shelby started to monitor his Alpha and Beta waves. Though both were mostly normal, Mary was a little concerned about the overabundance of Theta waves. "It appears that the emperor's subconscious is trying to fully integrate all the memories back into his conscious mind. I am just hoping that the stress that he was feeling won't damage his already fragile hold on reality."

"What are you advising Mary?" Shelby asked, not really sure that she was going to like the answer that Mary gave her.

"I can't see much that we can do 'til he awakens again though I suggest we keep him out 'til such time as the reading in the Theta range is more normal." Mary told Shelby. "I am also afraid that we may have to delve back into his mind, though I know it is necessary at times I still find it distasteful."

Shelby could only stare at Mary, being in his mind being with HIM, to Shelby was the most intimate that she could think of. Yes she could see where Mary was coming from but without this close personal contact, Shelby felt for sure that they would have lost Derrick more than a few times. Thinking a moment Shelby finally came to the conclusion that to Mary, Derrick was her master and unless he told her that she could, Mary would do nothing to interfere with what made him Derrick. Unlike Mary though, Shelby wanted to be in every facet of his life.

It was several hours later when Derrick issued a groan, Mary could see that his readings were finally starting to stabilize. Though this was the first good sign she'd seen since all this had started, she had Shelby standing by with another injection in case he once again started to experience the pain.

As Derrick opened his eyes he laid still a moment, the last time he'd jerked awake he'd been restrained by the bio-bed. God he hated the damn thing, yes it was useful and saved lives but he still hated being restrained in it. Looking around he felt the last of his memories slip into place, I really needed to look into the headset, I have obviously upset the balance in my mind if a simple knock like this affected me this severely. Groaning as he slowly sat up Shelby and Mary both looked on with questioning looks.

"How are you feeling Sire? Mary asked afraid that he might still be suffering the effects of the memory loss.

"Much better Mary thank you, I need the status of the prisoner." Derrick said all business as he started to sort through everything that had happened the last few days. "Shelby I also need the status of 1000 and the other case that was the initial cause of this."

Mary smiled ah! The emperor was back! "Yes Sire, the prisoner is still in the custody of the Rangers on board Rear Admiral Hartwell's ship."

"Very good contact Hartwell in an hour and tell them to have the prisoner ready tomorrow at 0800 hours," Derrick ordered.

"Yes sire it will be as you command." Mary said a sense of pride swelling in her.

"1000 should be ready to emerge into space in four days," Shelby informed Derrick. "I have connected up to the other brain case, it appears to be 0798. I have also started the program to clear her of re-growing the explosive unit that was attached to her brain box. If you care to inspect her she is in bay two, I should be able to start her re-gen in another day."

Derrick was nodding this was good news a little over two weeks from now they should be a force of six ships, with a chance of adding more. Sighing Derrick felt tired still, with everything that had happened the last few days he was surprised he had as much energy as he did. Derrick sat for a moment longer then remembered his mother and grandmother were on board, he had to admit that had been a stroke of genius that Mary had.

"If either of you need me, I will be with my family, I take it you put them in my quarters?" Derrick asked.

"Yes Derrick, though I am afraid that Milley O'Toma is the most opinionated female I have ever seen. If I had to say she is a female version of you, bright, strong and intelligent though not as much as you." Shelby told Derrick which drew a soft chuckle from him. <Better not tell her that,> Derrick thought drawing a smile from Shelby.

<I'll remember that Derrick, I don't want to upset her again.> Shelby looked away almost ashamed that Derrick had been hurt, the fact that Milley O'toma had pointed this out hadn't helped either.

"You upset her?" Derrick asked then thinking a moment then told her, "I am sorry Shelby, Gram is extremely protective of me after what happened to me at the base."

"It's alright Derrick in a way she was right I should have made you restrain yourself before using the IMT. Oh yeah that's another thing she really wants no part of," Shelby informed Derrick.

Again Derrick could almost see the look on her face when Shelby had brought her and his mother on board. Chuckling again Derrick nodded to Shelby as he headed to his quarters. As the doors slid open Derrick tried not to laugh, not to chuckle but the lost look on his grandmother and mother's faces was almost comical.

"Derrick!" Both of them shouted as they rushed to him and started to inspect almost every inch of his body especially his head.

"How are you feeling my boy?" His grandmother asked still looking over his head.

"A whole lot better than I was," he replied as he hugged both of them. "Had it not been for Shelby I might not be here."

"What!!?" his mother said, "but it was her fault!"

"Well." Derrick started, "yes and no. I had her so busy as I was myself I never took into account the explosive amount of force that had been attached to the box. Shelby went into my mind and found me. She used what little energy she had to open up some of the border memories, after that it was a cascading effect." Both his mother and grandmother were staring at him with confused looks. Sighing he remembered his intelligence had been heightened.

"Ok to put it simply, I was blocked. Shelby attached to my head and entered my dream. Once she was there she used her energy to clear the blockage away but during the process she almost used up her energy. She was willing to die to save me Grams, please don't be too hard on her ok?" Derrick asked her.

Sighing, the older woman could only shake her head for a few minutes, "I really don't see how the A.I. of the ship being in love with you helps to continue the line. Son you are the direct descendant of the imperial line, all these years I humored your grandfather thinking it was a wild tale of his. I loved that man with all my heart or I'd never have listened; now I regret that I didn't believe him, after all love can only go so far."

Derrick remembered all the times that he and she had listened to him when he had visited, then when they had all moved into a larger house. Derrick had loved his Grandfather fiercely and had listened to everything that the man had said with rapt attention. Smiling Derrick was glad that he had, all the codes that he'd known all the commands that he knew. Derrick at times could almost swear that his Grandfather had actually been inside the palace.

Suddenly a thought lit up Derrick's mind, "Grams? Did Grandfather ever mention being inside the palace?"

The older woman's face was drawn in concentration for a few moments, "He never said that he was inside the palace but one day 30 or 40 years ago he came home excited about a communication he'd had. Though he never went into it that much he did keep repeating, I finally got through to her, but she said I wasn't right." Derrick's Grandmother could only shake her head at Derrick. "I never did understand what he meant by it."

Derrick was going over everything that he'd just been told, "Mary!" He suddenly shouted.

A hologram of an older, petite slightly graying woman appeared in front of Derrick and the two women. "Yes Sire I am here."

Derrick's Grandmother and mother's mouths hung open as they both stared at the visage, "Who are you?" Sherry O'Toma asked suddenly taken aback.

"Mother, Gram, this is Mary she is the palace A.I., she is the one in control of all the palace systems. Now then Mary, Query." Derrick explained.

"I am ready Sire," Mary replied.

"Possibly 30 to 40 years ago were you contacted briefly by another O'Toma that also claimed to be a descendant of the Imperial line?" Derrick asked.

"Searching records, yes sire I did receive an initial communication with the afore named individual. I also tested his Deoxyribonucleic acid to confirm his claim, though he had the proper codes at the time, the analysis only showed a 58.9% chance of him being directly in line for the throne. As per mandates therefore I could not accept his claim his sequences were not of a high enough ratio to merit taking his claim as serious." Mary rattled off.

"I see, thank you; I need you to open up a room in the palace I and my family will be there tomorrow, for a short time. I am also going to need you to assign permanent guards to both of them, though the reason cannot be known to anyone." Derrick instructed Mary.

"It will be as you command Sire," Mary said bowing to Derrick.

Mary then turned toward his Mother and Grandmother, "It is my honor to also meet the Imperial mother and Imperial Grandmother." Mary said as she also bowed to an now blushing Milley and an embarrassed Sherry O'Toma. Mary then turned her face toward Derrick, "I have had the palace ready awaiting your arrival for over three weeks now Sire. I await you're arrival and the chance to welcome you back home." With that Mary's gray hair shook as she bowed to all three of them again and vanished.

"OK," an opened mouthed and slightly shocked Milley said a moment later, "this will definitely take some getting used to. Wow," was her next reaction, "I'm royalty now." She said as a wide smile spread across her face.

Derrick had a smile on his face gauging the reaction of his Grandmother, though the still shocked look on his Mother's face was starting to worry him a bit. "Mother?" He asked, "all you alright? I know it's a lot to take in but..."

"I..." Sherry O'Toma started, "You..." letting out a sigh she collapsed into a nearby chair, her still young features somewhat strained. Then she lowered her face into her hands sobbing.

Concerned Derrick rushed forward to try and find out what was wrong. "Mother? What's wrong? Are you hurt?" Derrick was even more concerned as she started to sob even harder the tears now coming freely.

"Oh ... oh my god Derrick!" Sherry O'Toma said as she threw her arms around his neck holding him close sobbing into his shoulder. "We almost lost you before and now this! Every nasty, evil, vile underhanded fiend out there will be trying to take your life now! It took me and your Gram a month to heal you! You were so close to dying so many times I can't lose you again like that Derrick! I can't do it Derrick it almost killed me last time!" Derrick could only look at his Mother with compassion he'd never heard any of this, after his father had been found dead Sherry O'Toma had devoted her life to her son. Looking over at his Grandmother he could see the tears escaping her eyes also.

Sighing Derrick could see their point of view, truly he could, but he also knew he had to keep going as the throne had been vacant too long, the empire was in chaos and it deserved to return to its formal glory. Holding his mother close he tried to reassure her as much as he could telling her that he'd listen to any ideas she and his Gram had to keep him safe. Sniffing Sherry looked up through the tears and saw that Derrick was more determined than she'd ever seen him. Sighing Sherry O'Toma looked closer and saw something in Derrick's eyes she'd never seen before, doing a double take she looked deeper. Not only seeing the love he had for her and his Gram but more much more, her eyes opened wide this was a look that went deep with a confidence that she'd not seen there before.

Shaking her head affirmative she told him, "If it keeps you safe and alive I will but so many I am thinking of seem unreal. I have heard of many things, many dangerous cults out there that do not wish for the return of the empire. Your father told me of them, I still have all the information he gathered, I still believe to this day it is what got him killed. Please Derrick, if they are true, what he told me of them they will stop at nothing to stop you. Please, my son be careful." Here Sherry O'Toma held him tighter, her blonde hair falling over his shoulder her slender body still shaking from her fear. Again Derrick was shocked he'd never heard any of this he would have to go over what his father had gathered to better guard against those opposed to the empire.

Derrick looked at his Gram; she too had a worried look on her face and said, "You realize that once you reveal just who you are, they will come after you. I have seen some of that information, there are assassins out there with technology I have never heard of, though," here Milley looked around the room and then waved her arm around indicating the whole ship. "I see that you also have technology than I have never seen nor heard of, I just hope that yours is far better than theirs."

Derrick looked at the last of the family he had left, the concern that they both were showing for him. Yeah, he had to admit he sure as hell hoped that his was far better also, as dying wasn't something he was prepared to do for quite a while. "I don't know yet Gram, I'll have to see what father gathered first before I can make a determination of that. I'm looking to stay alive for quite a while, as I said I want your input, you might think it ridiculous but I want to hear it ok?" Derrick looked at both them, they could see that he was serious deadly serious. Both were shaking their heads yes, they could see that Derrick meant every word.

Leaving them instructions on what to do in certain conditions Derrick hugged them both before he left for the control room. While he was walking Shelby appeared next to him and walked with him. Stopping a moment Shelby lowered her head, "Derrick? I am so sorry, that you were hurt. Can you forgive me?" Shelby's eyes were tear filled as Derrick looked over to her.

"Forgive you?" He asked as he stopped also, "Shelby, there is nothing to forgive you for. It was as much my fault as it was yours."

"No Derrick," she replied, "I am responsible for keeping you safe when you are on me, I ... I failed, I am surprised that you still wish to be partnered with me." Derrick could see that this was tearing Shelby up, though he didn't blame her it was obvious that she blamed herself, nodding he knew how she felt now that he thought about it.

"Shelby," Derrick finally said after thinking of a proper answer, "I feel safer with you than I do with any other; the bond that we have forged is unlike anything I have ever experienced. Please continue to protect me; I will endeavor to do things less dangerous. Will that make you feel better?" Derrick finally said waiting with trepidation.

"If you can do that, I will do everything I can to ensure you aren't hurt again." Shelby replied though she still had tears in her eyes she was finally smiling making Derrick feel a whole lot better.

Entering the control room Derrick had just sat when the communicator at his side went off. Shaking his head he wondered what was wrong now. Clicking it on he heard Hartwell's voice, "Emperor Sir? Are you there Sire?" A small smile played over Derrick's lips he could hear the hesitation in Hartwell's voice.

"Shelby distortion please," Derrick told her then answered the call. "I am here Rear Admiral, is all well?"

"Yes Sire," came the reply, "I was just wondering are you in need of us to be present at the execution, uh ... for security purposes."

Derrick tried to not laugh, Hartwell just wanted to be there to see the inside of the palace. Derrick couldn't blame him after all; no one had been in there in over 200 years. "I am considering having a few Rangers as security, thank you Rear Admiral. I'll contact you soon with an answer."

"Thank you Sire," Hartwell replied then switched off.

Derrick started going over all the reports for the few days he'd been out, hhmmmmm quite a few of the nobles still hadn't replied. Sighing Derrick could see that they thought they would get special treatment just for their station, they were about to get an extremely rude awakening. Moving on he began to piece together a strategy when Mary appeared in front of him.

"Sire, you have a communication from the highest noble." She told him a slight angry look on her face.

"Alright Mary, let's hear it."

Derrick replied. There was a soft crackle then Derrick heard, "To the bastard who claims to be the emperor, we of the noble confederation rebuke your claim as such. Further more if President Maury is executed tomorrow we will declare war upon you. Furthermore..."

"Mary, find where that is coming from. I want you to charge all long distance energy weapons. I think it is time that we finally up the ante on the nobles. Also open a channel to them." Mary nodded the a clear air sounded as Mary nodded again. "I suggest Duke Risen that you rethink what you have just said, as a matter of fact I highly suggest it. You really don't want to go against me on this."

The Duke laughed snapping back, "You are nothing but a bastard, give up this ridiculous campaign!"

"Mary, target all power generators where the duke is, “I suggest you have all personnel leave the facilities you have in one minute." Derrick told the man through clenched teeth, "After that their deaths are on your head!"

"You wouldn't dare!" The man growled back at Derrick.

"Fifty seconds," Derrick advised the man. Suddenly the man was screaming to evacuate the power centers. "Good, fire Mary when they are clear. Remember Duke, with me or you no longer exist."

"All clear Derrick firing now," Mary told Derrick there were a multitude of screaming voices then all was quiet. Sighing Derrick looked over the readings almost all power on the Duke's planet was non-existent. "You think it will convince them Mary?" Derrick asked.

"I don't know Sire, but I hope that the fact that you chose not to destroy them paints them a clear enough picture. Though I am afraid that knowing the Duke and the way he and his family are, you are going to have nothing but trouble from him." Mary advised Derrick who could only nod yes; he felt almost the same thing from the man.

"Sire I am receiving communications from several of the nobles now. It appears that eight, now ten are swearing allegiance to you they say that they will pledge everything they have to you. Hmmm it appears that your display has shaken many of them and their loyalties."

Derrick was nodding looking over all the pledges he was a little surprised that they had flipped as fast as they had. Looking over the Duke's planet he suddenly saw five streaks come from the planet. "Mary, identify these energy signatures," Derrick told her pointing to the five streaks of light escaping the planet.

"Analyzing, it appears to be five compact ships equipped with an earlier model of the trans-warp drive, they should arrive in 30 seconds." Mary advised him. "I suggest protective shields and cover."

"All ships defensive positions around the perimeter of us, shields to full, light screens to full." Derrick ordered. "All ships status."

"All systems ready, weapons charged, light screen up" both Zan and Conner replied.

"We will protect you and Shelby," Zan advised.

"Tempro trans-warp behind the moon, await further orders." Derrick ordered.

"Moving now Sire," Tempro said as it vanished.

A moment later a small opening or tear in space opened directly in front of Shelby.

The speaker crackled then the voice of the Duke was heard, "Alright bastard! Let's see how you like dealing with real power!" Then the man laughed more like a maniacal mad man than a Duke. Firing, all five ships blasts harmlessly bounced off the shields.

"Conner, Zan, nullify!" Derrick yelled then again as when they had in their last battle with the aliens, strange yellow beams shot out from both of the ships. Striking the five ships they all went dark a moment later.

A moment later the Duke shrill voice was screaming, "What have you done!?? These are priceless gifts to my family from the emperor! You have no right!"

"WRONG!" Derrick yelled, "I have every right I am the rightful emperor, the sooner you accept it the sooner things will go smoother for you. As it is right now, you are an enemy of the empire and will be dealt with as such!" With that Derrick switched off a smile on his face, let the moron stew a while might help his attitude. "Shelby how..." Derrick started.

"I estimate they have five hours of air, and power then I believe that their systems will start to fail." Shelby advised Derrick a slight smile on her face.

"Good notify me when four hours and thirty minutes have passed." Derrick smiled as he went back to reading.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 17:40
    Hey pars as always a nice one though I seriously suggest that you increase your story length.....we knw you put a lot of effort and time in writing this masterpiece but its frustrating to see your much awaited post end so shortly.
    With hopes that you you consider our suggestion
    -asouthindianman

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 18:40
    next one soon please!!! I love this series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 22:09
    we are waiting please don`t make us wait too much

    lk

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 22:15
    A totally awsume story and I can't till the next chapter comes out to tell me more. You are a great writer of sic/fi and should think of making this story into a book since their no prono content in it. Great plot with very good character development. Another writer writes stories on the site with no sexual content and I enjoy reading as much as those with sexual content. It is the plot and character development is what I read a storyfor and this story has both in Spades! Keep up the good Writing pars001. Retired Army bNCO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 23:36
    Badassery level over 9000

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  • GhostCharger
    15.03.2016 00:39
    Awesome again, the wait is killing me for the next but its well worth it. Hope you feeling better Pars, rest up and cant wait to hear back from you :)
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 01:49
    Yes stick to one or two tales until they are finished, then go onto another tale. Your time span is not supported by the chapters length.
    Sorry mate.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 05:56
    What a wonderful story teller. I hope this becomes a long series or a great book. Thanks.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 14:02
    This is getting good now, can't wait for the next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 14:37
    As I have said in previous commants, this is an awsume story. This story could easily expanded in one awsume Sci/Fi story continuing on with what Shebly will involve into, a human female or a very advance Android. Myself I pick the human female because Mary know hDerrick needs one to carry on his bloodline. What better choice than Shebly who is already fallen in love Derrick. I truly enjoy this story and can not wait until you finisn it. Maybe your next story could be a Sci-Fi one as good as this one. Think about it as you are one hell a Sci-Fi writer, Retired Army NCO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 22:00
    I hope that this ties in with Deputy Morpheus and Emporers Bodyguard.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 22:42
    Very good. Waiting for the next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 23:32
    I do hope they refine Lucy and regenerate her as she deserves it.
    Retired Army NCO

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  • GhostCharger
    16.03.2016 03:01
    To one below, the deputy morpheus and the emporers bodyguard all tie in with the Kaire universe. The Liious and the Wellington families. Although the O'Toma family could be another empire again, you never know. ;)
    -Ghost

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  • pars001
    16.03.2016 05:39
    OK GUYS I am pars001 not Ka hmnd HE wrote those stories and though I credit him for getting me interested in writing again he and I don't really write the same style. Plus he has never given me permission to write in his universe

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2016 06:49
    It is no insult to be confused with another good writer.

    Jselvy

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  • GhostCharger
    16.03.2016 11:10
    I like the new lil additives to the story that their are other factions with perhaps just as good tech, we now now that the grandfather contacted Mary. But not entirely what happened to him or the father near the palace... so many ways to interweave and thicken the story, I love it :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2016 18:53
    All I can say is WOW!!!!! Just don't make a habit of linking one author to another. This may lead to unnecessary misunderstanding between readers. pars001 is definitely different compared to Ka hmd. Inspiration and Plagiarism are two different thing but a slight misconception might lead the former to latter!

    BTW pars001 keep up the good (AWESOME) work!!!!

    Dino Aris

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 03:50
    Great stuff Ty - z

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 09:32
    love this story line it was everything I had hoped for altho I do wish it had been a bit longer xD only cause I read through it as fast as it was loaded lol <--- 100 percent my fault tho for gobbling it up lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2016 19:36
    nice story looking forward to seeing where it goes from here

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2016 00:36
    great story, liked the way you write, keep it coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2016 05:06
    Best. Series. EVER. Ty so much pars001!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2016 05:24
    Don't leave us hanging

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2016 10:51
    come on now we are waiting for more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2016 12:14
    do not stop continue please

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  • Draco1972
    30.03.2016 08:34
    Don't stop! I've read quite a few of your stories and this one is just as good. More chapters please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2016 11:43
    Mate, hoping for more. Seems that there have been no updates from the web owners since the 18 Mar.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2016 03:08
    This site is getting lazy, not a peep since the18th for any writer. Hope you ok and doing well pars. Still checking daily for any new stories from yourself and a few other writer here.
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 15:18
    I'm having withdraws!!! Where is Chapter 18????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.04.2016 12:29
    I'm having withdraws!!! Where is Chapter 18????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2016 15:13
    Hurry up with the rest of the next chapters please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2016 15:16
    Hey chapter 18 is out found it on storiesonline.net

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  • Clover+Ernest
    10.10.2016 07:34
    Damn Pars you sure know how to write asshole strategist for a lead character. Keep up the amazing work with all your stories

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