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Lost Empire 24

Author: pars001

Date: 16 June 2016

Non-Erotic, Fantastic, Violence

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0001 - Tempro
0003 - Conner
0097 - Ace
0098 - Lucy(un-grown)
0101 -Shelby (mothership)
0798 - Celeste
0999 - Zan
1000 - Sherry



Though he was only a very minor noble, Baron John Talbert was scared. He was still wondering why he'd been singled out by the Rangers and the Emperor. Shaking he remembered the execution of the Republic President a most horrid way to die. His mouth dropping agape, he really started to shake, what had he done. He'd sworn loyalty to the man a hell of a lot better man than the repulsive president was. Putting his head back proudly he knew he hadn't done anything therefore he had nothing to fear.

Derrick watched the man in the small room as the range of emotions ran the gauntlet on his face. Ah! There it was! The realization that he had not done anything and therefore knew that he was innocent. Derrick smiled he was glad he'd guessed right about the man, now to see if the man was game for what Derrick had in mind. Taking a deep breath Derrick knew this was a risk but he'd already had the man scanned more than a few times. Opening the door Derrick stepped in.

The Baron had just sat back when another door opened, in walked a rather plain man over 6 feet tall. A slight limp to his step, and a fierce look on his face. Taking a deep breath Derrick started, "Hello Baron, I am the official interrogator, Emderto, for the emperor. It appears that you have been found guilty of trying to poison the new emperor; this of course if you are found guilty, carries the maximum death penalty the most painful that can be found. Now then how do you plea?"

Shocked a moment the Baron looked at the man as if he was crazy, "Sir I cannot make a plea for something that I have not done. I am more than willing to take a truth scan if necessary, though it will show that I am loyal to Emperor O'Toma."

"I asked how you plea not a lecture, now..." Derrick started.

"Look if you are going to kill me, so be it, but it will be killing an innocent man so if this is all that you have to say then, be gone." The Baron said, with an irritated look on his face.

Derrick nodded it was as he hoped the man would answer. "Mary?" Derrick asked.

Mary appeared a moment later, "Yes Sire?" this of course had the Baron staring at Derrick with his mouth hanging open.

"Your analysis," Derrick asked then chuckled when he saw that the Baron was staring even harder at him.

"All speech patterns indicate that he was truthful, also I detected that he was irritated that you were questioning him as you were. Everything indicates that the Baron has all the qualities that you were in search of," Mary responded.

"Good," Derrick said as he stood and walked to the door, "Hartwell come in please."

Baron Talbert still hadn't spoken a word to this point still in shock that this man was indeed the emperor.

Joseph Hartwell walked in stopping in front of Derrick. "Is he all that you were hoping he was Sire," Hartwell asked.

Derrick nodded then started to grin wider as did Hartwell, "I believe so, though I still have to ask the man about the plan." Derrick answered.

Suddenly they heard the Baron clear his throat, "Not wanting to interrupt you Sire, but I am sitting right here you know." Derrick and Hartwell turned toward the man with huge smiles on their faces; yes he would do most certainly!

_________________________


A steady tone brought the man out of his comatose state, though just barely. Looking at the readings he could see that he was still half a parsec from the rim, good, it wouldn't be long now. According to his chronometer he'd been traveling almost two days now, almost in range enough to start transmitting. Setting the coordinates for the next two jumps the man lapsed again into a near death state.

Derrick had been going over all the reports that were coming in, so far the sect hadn't made any moves yet.

"Derrick," came Shelby's voice a moment later.

Worried a moment Derrick turned to his wrist com, "I'm here Shelby is everything alright?"

"Yes I thought you might want a report on the upgrades you made to the re-gen cycles. It appears as you said, that the growth of the ships has increased, I am monitoring all readings as you instructed. As of yet I haven't detected any problems. Also the energy change seems to help bring emergence about two days sooner. I'd say that 0097 should be conscious tomorrow instead of three days. I wanted to tell you thank you, as do all my children." Shelby told a grinning Derrick, he'd hoped that what he'd found about the growth patterns had held out.

"Shelby you and all the ships as I have said before, are more like people than all of those I deal with on a daily basis. I feel that this is nothing compared to what all of you have given me." Derrick told a now also grinning Shelby. "Let me know before he emerges, I want to be there."

"Of course Derrick I would never leave you out of this!" Shelby replied.

Nodding Derrick went back to all the reports, from what he could see the High Commander had already cleared out the command center. Now it seemed he wanted to go after those that were on every ship, nodding Derrick thought that might be a good idea. Taking out a pen Derrick started to make notes then had Mary call the High commander.

"High Commander, I got your communiqué, I wholly agree, start as soon as you can with command clear I am sure things are going far better for you." Derrick told the man.

"Yes, afterward it seems that orders aren't questioned even half as much as before. Do you have any suggestions Sire?" The man asked.

"Hmmm now that you mention it yes, first I'd like you to...," Derrick went on describing more changes that had the older man's eyebrows raising, but he nodded agreement.

Kimison jerked awake an hour later onboard Tempro, "What!? Where in the hell am I?"

A 25-30 year old, short cropped blonde hair, medium build man, with a smooth face appeared in front of him. "I apologize, Corporal Kimison, for you being brought here this way but it is of extreme importance!"

Kimison looked at the hologram of the man through narrowed eyes, "Look buddy I don't know who the hell you are and as for your apology you can shove..."

"Really Corporal Kimison there is no need for such expletives!" Mary said appearing a few moments later.

Kimison was starting to back away from the hologram of Mary, "Don't know what I have done, but I'd think the emperor would notice if I disappeared!"

"Disappeared?! You really think that is the purpose of bringing you here. Please, Corporal Kimison we are far beyond the barbaric practice of making people disappear. This is a highly important mission that requires you and the knowledge you possess, though I think we should bring Sergeant Rayburn into this also."

Kimison's face showed shock then he was angry, "What?! You don't think I am good enough that you have to have that asshole in on it also?"

"No, you are more of a scientific architect your ideas rival the emperor's. Sergeant Rayburn is more of a fine tuner to the ideas you have, you both are a superior combination when you work together." Mary told an almost believing Kimison. "I'm not convinced that we can work together without the emperor being there." Kimison told Mary who had noticed this odd behavior from the two.

"This vital mission is for the emperor, we cannot tell him though as of yet. We are just starting to have positive progress on it. Now please for the sake of the empire and the emperor's continued good health we have to complete this!" Mary said. Kimison shook his head it almost sounded like Mary was begging him. Huh he thought the commander had been right these A.I.'s were more human sounding than he at first thought.

Sighing Kimison thought for a few minutes then made a decision, "Alright if, and I mean IF you can get Sarge on board then I am more than ready to lend my assistance. One thing you ought to know about him though, he won't be swayed as easily as I was."

Mary was nodding at everything that Kimison was saying; that was easy. She had to figure out a way to determine when these men were joking or not, they were nothing like the emperor that was for sure. "Alright Corporal Kimison how about now? As I have heard humans say there is no time like the present a very wise saying."

Kimison was about to voice a concern when there was a flash of light and Rayburn was standing on the other side of the room. "What the hell is this shit?" Rayburn was shouting when he caught sight of Kimison sitting near the hologram of Mary.

"I have asked you both here to help assist my son and me in a mission..." Mary started.

"Work with that worthless piece of shit?!" Rayburn yelled.

Kimison looked at Mary, "See told you stubborn to a fault he's..."

"Stubborn? Me? You're a fine one to talk there is no way..." Rayburn was saying as both men were moving slowly toward each other with balled up fists.

There was a quick flash of light then both men looked at Mary with a shock on their faces. "That was only a minor shock. Please do not give me cause to administer a more severe amount of voltage. Both men nodded then fell to the floor unable to get their legs to work.

"Wow Mary you really are serious if you are willing to administer shocks. Alright, alright I'll listen." Rayburn said as he tried to curl his now numb legs in a better position.

It was then that both Mary and Tempro began to go through the processes that they had worked on for centuries. Finally finished Mary and Tempro could see that both the men hadn't gotten but about half of what they had been told.

"I was afraid of this," Mary said. "I do have a solution but there are consequences of taking these actions." Looking at Rayburn she asked, "You saw the download device the emperor created." When Rayburn nodded Mary continued, "I wish you to recreate it, it is obvious that we need to expand your knowledge and capacity for learning. Though you should know that I will take steps to insure that neither of you will attempt to overthrow the emperor. Now then that being said, Sergeant Rayburn, can you recreate it?"

Rayburn thought for a few minutes he had seen the device up close, he had seen how it worked, and all the safety measures that were needed to install. There was only one part he was unsure of but that could be solved easily. "I believe I can yes, though the hardware application I will have to leave to Kimison. If I give you the specifications you think you could reproduce it?" Rayburn asked Kimison then drew a few parts of the apparatus.

Kimison looked it over then nodded, "it looks easy enough, though the capacitors might need to be higher, and the insulators might need to be thicker. Rayburn nodded open mouthed as he'd also thought that.

"Now the bigger question," Mary stated after they started to work together. "Just how long will it take to build?"

"If you can get or have all the parts then possibly three days, then we'd need at least a week to test it to make sure it won't fry our brains. Nine to ten days we should know, sooner if the first series of tests go well." Kimison said with Rayburn nodding his agreement.

"Please both of you get started as soon as possible give me a list of all you need you will have it within an hour. Though the security of the palace and the emperor is our top priority, this is almost as important, please remember that. Now Tempro provide them with what information you have on the transfer, it appears as good a place as any to start.

Both men nodded then went back to designing the device that they would need. Sighing Mary then smiled well that was the first hurdle, now the second would depend on whether or not they could actually duplicate the device the emperor had made.

Derrick was bored out of his mind, he'd made his self a promise that he wouldn't stay on planet this long but damn it there was so much to do! Finally with a disgusted grunt he got up and walked out of the room. In the main throne room a new contingent of Rangers that had been rotated in snapped to attention as Derrick passed a sour look on his face.

A young Corporal turned to his Sergeant after Derrick had passed, "Looks like the emperor is about to leave again."

The Sergeant nodded, "I know, that's when we have to be on guard even more, remember that sect is still out there wanting the emperor's life. Now would be their most opportune time to get in here and plant explosives, poisons or assassins. Remember all of you they will think nothing of taking your life, therefore I want you to show them the same disregard for their lives."

All of the men were nodding as they listened to the Sergeant, special training had been begun to ensure that they were ready. Again all of the men snapped to attention as Derrick walked back into the throne room muttering to himself. They could all hear snippets of phrases, overdue work, unfinished projects, and the one that had most of them smiling later about tons of paperwork.

Derrick sighed as he paced back and forth in his work room, he had to get out of here he'd been working for the last two days to try and catch up on all the concerns of the empire. 200 years of nothing being done had indeed piled up to a monstrous amount of paperwork that he still had to really make a dent in. True for the last two days he'd managed to get a hundred years caught up but really! The last 100 years had been three times as bad as the first 100. Derrick groaned he had a small mountain of paperwork done that Mary was already acting on if not a hundred years too late.

Sighing Derrick was about to sit down and attack the stack again when his wrist com went off. "Yes Shelby, has the energy upgrades we made have any effect at all?"

"Oh yes Derrick, as a matter of fact 0097 is ready to emerge two days earlier than at first predicted, 0667 is also regenerating far faster than we thought. At this rate we may have them all back a week and a half sooner!" Shelby replied in an extremely excited voice.

Derrick was definitely pleased his upgrades were as effective as they had been. He'd finally learned after the failing of the trans-warp incident not to try and push without a hell of a lot of testing. "Alright Shelby bring me onboard. Mary, I know you are working to get all that I finalized enacted I want to thank you for keeping things going. I just hope I can get us current soon."

"Yes Sire, I will await your return," Mary told him right before he disappeared. Sighing she went through all that he had finished. At least many of the worlds of the empire would receive some of the aid that they needed. The last few the emperor had signed would actually strengthen a few of the planets economies that had been failing.

Shelby smiled broadly when Derrick appeared on board; she had missed him fiercely though she still had the duties to her children. "I have everything ready for his emergence Derrick." She told him.

"Good this will bring the fleet up to 6 ships; I am hoping that with more ships I can have the nobles fall more in line. As of right now I have to spread the fleet far too thin to do much." Derrick told her.

"Yes I know Derrick I am just glad that we have found as many of my children as we have. I am reading an increase in the cognitive functioning of 0097." Shelby related a moment later.

Again as there always seemed to be a static sound came out of the speakers then a male voice was heard. "Where am I? Is anyone there? Hello?"

Again Shelby stepped in, "Hello 0097 you are onboard me, you are in an improved re-gen cycle."

"Thank goodness! I thought I was alone floating in space. Tell me mother are there many of us left?" Came the almost pleading voice of 0097.

"With you we now number 8 though we have another 8 in various states of re-gen. One of those is your wing mate she..." Shelby was saying as she was interrupted.

"Oh, her, please I do not want to talk about her she..." 0097 started.

"You will not talk about her like that!" Derrick snapped out his anger showing in the scowl on his face.

"0097 I believe you have upset the new emperor." Shelby said surprised but still proud at Derrick's anger.

"My apologies Sire but she..."0097 again started.

"She gave her existence saving most of the galaxy and no one; NO ONE will ever say another bad word about her she performed with absolute honor and integrity that day. She is and you will treat her as the true EIG that she is. Am I making myself clear to all of you?" All seven of the whole ships holograms nodded in shock, Shelby had huge tears falling; she had watched her daughter take the dirty bomb to the edge of the galaxy and beyond. She had screamed with Derrick when it went off after Lucy had turned and was retreating. She had felt the deep pain that Derrick had when the blast overtook her, and she remembered Derrick's solemn promise to find and restore her.

Derrick began to pace he'd waited too long to tell all of the ships that weren't there the story.

0097 was silent for a few more moments, "I will remember Sire and be proud to be HER wing mate. I will remind her everyday how honored I am to serve with her."

Derrick nodded; that at least helped to cool his anger most of the way. A moment later, Mary appeared on the bridge.

"Sire I am picking up that escape capsule at the edge of the galaxy as of yet I am still not detecting any life readings but I continue to watch it as you instructed." Mary informed Derrick.

"Very good Mary, let me know if you detect any life from it. I have a feeling I am missing something but can't quite put my finger on it." Derrick told Mary and the rest of the holograms present. "I'll be back soon, Mary."

Sighing Mary knew that once he was out of the palace it was a near miracle to get him back in it. "Yes sire I will continue on 'til such time as you return.

Derrick smiled, thank god he'd enacted all the over rides, though he thought, as he rubbed his chin they all weren't going to be good for all that much longer. "Now then 0097 as I have told the others I require that all EIG ships go by the name that they were given. Please what is yours?"

"Yes Sire, I was called Ace by my crew for a time. Though I never understood why they always told me that it fit me perfectly." Ace told Derrick.

"Very good Ace, you will make a fine addition to the fleet such as it is, soon though we will be a force to reckon with." Derrick let all the ships know.

On the extreme edge of the galaxy a single tone brought the man barely back enough to start the distress call. Smiling he saw that he had only a few days of air left, more than enough. Soon he thought as he returned to his comatose state, soon he and the sect would have their revenge. A smile frozen on his lips he slipped further into the near death state.

An alert drew Mary's attention away from the progress of Kimison and Rayburn on the new download device. Curious she thought for a mere 20 seconds and only 20 seconds she had gotten life readings from the escape capsule. She was about to inform the emperor then remembered that he wanted something definitive before he invested the resources to investigate it. A very sound judgment by her standards.

Again she was amazed at the amount of work that the two had accomplished now that they were working together. Momentarily distracted she almost missed Kimison yelling that they had done it and a day earlier! "So you have accomplished what you have sat out to do early?" Mary asked of a now dancing Kimison and smirking Rayburn.

"Yes, though I believe it will surpass the emperor's first design, I already have most of the software written and ready for it also. I am afraid that we are still going to have to test it first though." Kimison told Mary.

"I believe it is ready even without the extra software that Kimison wants to write but I do agree it could still over stimulate the neurons in our brains and possibly burn our cerebral cortexes out." Rayburn stated with as serious of a look on his face as Kimison had ever seen.

Mary sighed they really needed to commence working on the mission. She felt that if they didn't get it done very soon then it might be too late, not only for the emperor but for the empire as well. Shaking her head she had to trust that the two men could accomplish in a few weeks what she and Tempro couldn't all those centuries ago.

Deep within the depths of their new staging world, the new second in command was called to the communications room. "What have you got?" He asked of the young tech that was only in the second year of his training.

"Leader," the young man said as he tensed up at the approach of the second in command. "It is a distress call from an escape pod of the Deception."

The second in command eyed the young man and snapped off a quick chop to the man's throat that the man barely deflected. "Very average; send out the Betrayal to retrieve. I believe she is the only one that is equipped with a still working light cloak."

The young man quickly scanned a list and responded, "Yes leader it is." Then side stepped a sweeping kick, and almost the down ward chop. "Thank you leader," he said as he hit the floor then was unconscious. The second in command had been impressed he'd almost avoided a fourth year attack. Smiling he thought the true leader would be very happy when he returned.

Stepping over the unconscious man's body he thumbed the radio, "Betrayal retrieval of the pos is imperative at all costs you must remain unseen. Failure in this mission will be punishable by death. Good hunting and good death!" Thumbing the radio off he watched the ship then it wasn't visible any more. At least that was still working they had lost far too much knowledge over the last few centuries.

Onboard the Betrayal, the crew started the jump that would take them to the pod. Already they had taken readings showing there were no life signs. The ship leader smiled it was standard procedure to hide their selves in near death states. He was sure they would find someone there otherwise the pod wouldn't be here. An hour later they were half way around the galactic rim.

"Commence recovery operations," carefully they docked with the pod extending a metal arm to retrieve whomever was inside. When the arm came back inside they were all agape but weren't shocked when they saw the leader in his near-death state. It was then that many noticed that almost every bone in the man's body was broken, thus showing his superior skill and pain blocking.

"Get him into a healing machine! His injuries need to heal as soon as possible!" The ship leader yelled. There was a brief moment of confusion then the crew sprang into action. "I want us gone NOW! I am sure the emperor is still monitoring, go NOW!" A moment later the ship broke contact and jumped into trans-warp.

Ten minutes later the leader awoke, the machine already speeding his healing many times faster than his body could. Motioning the ship leader closer the leader whispered to him then lapsed into unconsciousness. The ship leader smiled it was going to be a war that was for sure, and he and the leader were going to be in the fore front. Well he hoped he was; he has a few debts to repay those imperial bastards after what had happened at their old planet hideout.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2016 12:45
    As usual "pars001" another great chapter in this exquisite story. I can not wait until they regen Lucy and she finds out how proud Derrick and Shelby are of her for the unselfess act she did to save the galaxy and in the end sacrifed her exesitence again. I still say "pars" that you need to put this story in book form because I would sure in the hell buy it. The thing I wait most for to discover in this story is what is the research Mary and her son Tempo and to see if I guessed right ar I was wrong as a mad hatter, I can not wait for the next chapter. Retired Army NCO

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  • GhostCharger
    16.06.2016 14:25
    I also agree with Retired Army NCO, this would make a brilliant book.
    Awesome writing as usual and you have made so much progress from your earlier works.
    For some reason I am having thoughts that maybe not every ship will be loyal and perhaps 1 is going to go insane or be a traitor. It just nags at me.
    can't wait for the next chapter and see where you lead us :)
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2016 17:03
    Hi pars, nice story as always. The writing is good too. However I feel that you are being too stingy with commas and that really impacts the way the story reads. Without them some sentences just dont make sense until they are reread a few times, and sometimes they feel like run-ons. I also feel that maybe if you spent more time on descriptions and "showing, not telling", it could easily be the best story on the site. I hope this small piece of constructive criticism helps you, and you dont feel offended. Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2016 21:35
    I relly enjoyed this story. Will there be a follow up story?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2016 21:36
    As always, excellent job man, lovin this. You should compile these and make it a book I am deadly serious these are good.

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  • Sayian_God_Goku
    17.06.2016 03:47
    Really nice one... I enjoyed reading this series... I hope next chapters are comming soon....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2016 14:00
    excellent chapter cant wait for the next.
    nutcase

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2016 06:06
    Please continue, maybe add in a cousin or sister or something for Derrick? That way she can come with him on all of his "expeditions"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2016 19:15
    I one to join you pepeol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2016 07:11
    I wish this site would upload faster, reading this again im laughing at the last bit with the one saying it will be a war. No it will be an absolute slaughter. Ace is going to show why he was named so. Lol
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2016 07:14
    I'm curious Pars, are we going to get to meet another of the mother ships? Would make the rebuilding faster for Derrick by heaps?
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2016 01:38
    As far as someone for Derrick, I can see where the author is leading us. He plans to successfully implant the personality of Shelby into the successful biologic grown by Mary and Tempro have been working on. This would give Derrick what he doesn't realize that he needs. A companion and someone to help give him an heir to the throne. It already appears that Shelby and Derrick are very compatible. This move by the author would also move this story from just sci-fi (which has been a great story so far), to a sex story between Derrick and Shelby.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2016 15:47
    Again we have the sick a--holes using the comment section to find themselves someone to screw over. Guess they do not have the skill to go out and do it in the real world. Sorry "pars" that these clowns think it is alright to advertise themselves in the comment section, guess they never learned the difference between comments and personel ads. I started at chapter 1 and I am going to read all 24 chapters again today as it is Sunday and I have got nothing to do today but read "Empire" again. I agree with the 5th comment on page 1 about finding another mother ship like Shelby to speed the regen and then the regrowth progress of the ships that they find I'm sure with Derrick's new program to find the brain boxes of destroyed ships will lead them to find more. Out of 1000 ships, they have only found 14 with last find being the largest(8 brain boxes) and hopefully they will find a lot more. So the idea of finding another mother ship makes sense. Tetired Army NCO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2016 18:59
    I would like that u keep writing this story it is very good. I can not wait for you to finish it. I hope the ending is as good as the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2016 18:59
    I would like that u keep writing this story it is very good. I can not wait for you to finish it. I hope the ending is as good as the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.07.2016 11:05
    Cant wait to see who you allow to bring the pain Pars. I love this series above nearly all the rest. With nearly 20 all up now when the last of the latest finds is regrown to full thats 20 ships traveling in different directions with the new scanners looking for sibling EIG's and other mothers and their brothers. I can only guess that Shelby, Tempro and Conner are Marys children and siblings themselves. If each ship goes out and finds aleast one other brain box and returns with it, that makes almost 40 straight away. The numbers then just continue to multiply exponentially. Just a question, was Conner also a larger ship like Tempro? I cant remember what you said earlier about only just a few of the larger time ships existed?
    can't wait for the next, love your work.
    -Ghost

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2016 15:50
    Its killing me waiting on the next saga. I read all your stories, but this is my favorite. Great writing skills, very few mistakes. Im no writer by a long shot. But I love to read. Keep up the great work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2016 16:04
    i know your writing a lot of stories and most of them I either cant really follow or just cant get into this is by far one of the best and most other commenter's look to agree with me I would really love for the next chapter to come out its been almost a month and I really want to see what happens the only other thing that you write that I read is soverenty and im sure I just mispelled that but they are the only ones I read and I really want the next chapter of this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2016 18:07
    another maddening writer that has a fantastic story and then does a vanishing act. please finish what you have started. why not publish the whole story as paperback. I would be willing to buy a tale as good as this is.. please finish. please,please,please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 08:50
    Been waiting for ever now. Are you intending to continue with this awesome story ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 08:50
    Been waiting for ever now. Are you intending to continue with this awesome story ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 14:54
    Is the this site shutdown no new stories have been logged on and now two weeks? I take it that that are not adding more stories on this site until the moderator must come back from vacation or something . Michael

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  • Clover+Ernest
    11.10.2016 21:39
    Always a pleasure and honor to read your creations Pars

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2017 16:33
    So well done.. thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2017 17:18
    Awesome. Nothing like a humiliating backhand to make him come to his senses

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2017 19:33
    Awww shit bout to get real great cliff hanger Pars waiting impatiently for the next chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2017 20:48
    Very evilly done now we have to wait two weeks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2017 23:09
    Dear Pars
    You know how to leave the crowd hungry for more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 01:56
    Waiting for more...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 04:18
    Actually I have grown tired of this as you dither with other stories making your readers wait for those they want.
    As I previously said concentrate on 2 so that you can get them out faster & finished, then go on to the next.
    Anyway best of luck in your writing and life.

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  • pars001
    27.01.2017 04:53
    To the anon below too afraid to say who they are, hiding behind the skirt of your mama. If you think you can do better then write your own! You can leave me the hell alone. I have a life outside of the site I work full time. I don't sit on my fat ass like you do I take care of an elderly family member! If you don't like it then go the fuck away. It takes more to write for ass wipes like you than it does to hide and criticize. Have a nice boring life and when you're ready I will still be here as you aren't!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 11:09
    pars this story is worth waiting for just not to long...... thanx for the great story

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  • Axis+battleaxe
    27.01.2017 13:38
    I KNEW IT, I knew she would get a body to marry him. Just wanted to say I had that pegged! Love the story, screw the naysayers. You have plenty of people who love what you do

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 15:31
    I knew that when Mary and Tempo restarted the clone regeneration program it was to grow a clone for Shelby's AI mind to be placed into. I think I stated that in my comment on that chapter. The more I read this exquisite story, the more I love it. This is by far the BEST Sci-Fi story I think I have ever read. The only thing I am waiting for is when Derrick welcomes Lucy back after her regen. Way to go Pars, cut that idiot off at the knees and let him bleed all over the floor. You are right, you do have a life outside of writing for this site and the sooner people relieve that the better. I don't like waiting anymore that the next person for the next chapter, but I know you have a life and responsibilities that come before your writing. I hope you never end this exquisite story because I don't know what to do with myself when you do. You are one hell of a Sci-Finwriter Pars and I still say you should put thus into book form. Retired Army NCO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 22:10
    I love this series! this phone is not capable of logging in here. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! You have (again) left me hanging on for more. And to the ANON A-Hole - if you are looking for sex in your stories this site is filled with them! Go find another author to harrass!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2017 16:18
    I LOVE the ending to this chapter. I think Derrick has met his equal in the human Shelby and more. This story is far better without sex. You do not need sex to have an excellent story as this one well proves that fact. Now that Shelby is now human weither you begin a sexual relationship between Shelby and Derrick is up to you. The srory as been exquisite without sex so I do not care one way or the other. But adding to much would take away from the basic story line. I have read several stories without any sex in them and liked them as well as stories with sex in them. Ther were 2 plus "Empire" that I liked better than stories with sex in them. So just keep writing this story like you have been pars and I will be SO HAPPY. Retired Army NCO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.01.2017 07:20
    Great Story, Keep up the Work. I Love This Story, it's hard to wait for the next Chapters to come out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.01.2017 00:16
    Finally. Someone that can put derric in place.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2017 08:44
    Love this story! Just started reading it the other day and im already done with 38! Please write more soon!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2017 19:36
    Sister.and.Bherda

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  • terdon
    15.02.2017 04:09
    Come on pars001, please release the next chapter, the suspense is killing me.
    terdon

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  • Leon3rd
    16.02.2017 00:09
    hi, I really like this story !!!! I hope that you continue it. (please) I enjoy your stile of writing. cat fight is great also! and the others, thank you for your time and effort.

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  • Axis+battleaxe
    21.02.2017 03:54
    Thank you for feeding my lost empire addiction!

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  • Proofreader
    25.02.2017 08:33
    Nice work, as always. This series is as fun as the adventure serials they played every week at matinees, long ago. Now that I'm done binge reading I have to be patient. Looking forward to the next exciting chapter.

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  • Oldbutyoungatbheart
    27.02.2017 01:07
    Awesome as always Pars, I await the next instalment. You have some fantastic abilities.

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  • sandiegopussyeating
    09.03.2017 00:46
    Well worth the wait please continue writing there's only a few good writers left here

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  • Clover+Ernest
    15.03.2017 09:15
    damn she really put the "bitch" in "bitchslap" when she hit him! (or for you pissy technical asswipes, pimp-slapped)
    what a tremendous cliffhanger, pars! my biggest impatience is that of Lucy's re-gen. absolutely CANNOT wait for her reemergence! keep up the awesome stories

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  • Clover+Ernest
    17.03.2017 07:44
    ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!!

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  • Clover+Ernest
    17.03.2017 10:40
    promotions out the ass in this and Cat Fight

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  • Clover+Ernest
    27.03.2017 05:52
    FINALLY!!! The damned bitch is dead!! Truly, my favourite ongoing series, perhaps favourite overall. LOVED this installment, pars. Can't wait to see just where things advance to from here!

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  • Clover+Ernest
    22.04.2017 05:59
    Now we're finally getting into the juicy sub-subplot. I've been waiting for this event to occur for quite some fuckin time now. Can't white to see how it goes. Keep it up, pars. Hope all is / goes well with your health, family, and life in general.

    Merry meet, merry part.
    Clover Ernest

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  • Axis+battleaxe
    29.04.2017 02:19
    No, it stopped as soon as it got going!!!!!

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  • Rakkassan
    07.05.2017 17:05
    Awesome story. Looking forward to more of it.

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  • Clover+Ernest
    08.05.2017 07:32
    Damn! Axis is right.

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  • Clover+Ernest
    10.05.2017 13:56
    Welp. That bitch is fried.

    Amazingly plotted and thought out, minimal punctuation errors (not that those matter in your stories anymore), and gut-wrenching cliffhanger!
    Splendid chapter yet again, Pars.

    Merry part,
    Clover E

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  • Clover+Ernest
    06.06.2017 09:34
    MOTHERFUCKER, PARS!!! You hype me up with more events of Gregor and the head programmer, then you go and kill Tara, using ermine shenanigans as the reason for having to do so?! Even for a great chapter, that's a depressing blow! Way to keep your teasers on edge! Now to go sulk in a corner till the next update

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  • 12talk
    07.06.2017 16:40
    You alphabetized all your stories??!??! Christmas has come early!

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  • Clover+Ernest
    15.09.2017 05:09
    "Both men smirked as did Derrick, they had never had any mission that was simple."
    Summary of the chapter, right there. So we get a single line of dialogue that tells us ago much information. " Walking up to Randall the man placed a hand on Randall's chest then smiled. "Good! That's the second of the ten. Call disposal!"" The SECOND of the TEN. If we go in order of original deaths, Daniel was the 1st, and Randall would have been 2/10. But if on the other ships we've got Derrick, Dempsy, Rayburn, and Kimison, that only makes 6/10. Add in the last 2 deaths, Shilo and Grant, that's still only 8/10. Where are the last 2?


    Wait! Way back when... When Derick was in war flashback mouse, a member of the squad died in the battlefield - the son of the crazy martial arts bitch! So there's 9, sorta. (because the guy said there were 10 people to kill, and Randall was only the second) (idfk) but that still leaves one more spot to fill. Pars, am I missing info, or is it a continuity error?

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  • pars001
    15.09.2017 08:45
    ah dear, you forgot Hartwell and Conner! To run down
    Derrick
    Hartwell
    Conner
    Kimison
    Rayburn
    Norman
    Jimison
    Shilo
    Grant
    See? that's ten!

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  • pars001
    15.09.2017 08:46
    Crap forgot Dempsy that's Ten!

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  • Clover+Ernest
    15.09.2017 20:43
    Thank you Pars

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  • Clover+Ernest
    15.11.2017 05:45
    Damn, everybody Hayes the bio-bed.

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  • johannaC
    29.11.2017 10:53
    I'm glad Shelly is okay. She's been through a lot.

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  • Bald+Chuck
    29.11.2017 15:27
    I love this series.

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  • Clover+Ernest
    30.11.2017 08:09
    Pars? I'm going to fucking KILL YOU!!!! Too many of your fucking signature cliffhangers!!!

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