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Sex games

Photo-shoot of a Lifetime

Author: wickedsin

Date: 6 April 2006

Group Sex, Fiction, Incest, Interracial

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My ex-wife and I divorced when Alexis was 7. Over the course of the next 9 years, contact with my daughter was limited to weekly phone calls, visits during the summer, and visits to my house every other Christmas. Despite the distance and limited contact, Alexis and I remained close and I tried to remain as involved in her life as possible. Neither I nor my ex-wife had ever re-married so Alexis was never placed in the awkward position of adjusting to a step-mother or step-father.

Alexis came to live with me last year after her mother passed away. While the circumstances of reuniting with my daughter were not how anyone would have preferred, I was happy I was now able to be a bigger part of her life.

It took several months for both of us to adjust to the new living conditions. I knew Alexis was dealing with the sudden loss of her mom and I knew how close she was to her mother. I did my best to be supportive yet give her the space and time she needed to adjust. Over the next months, Alexis and I were able to bridge the gap that had grown from our years apart.

Alexis had grown into a remarkable young woman. She maintained a perfect 4.0 grade point average in school and was named to the Associated Press All-American Girls High School Volleyball Team. Within six months of moving with me, she won the state 100m sprint championship. As a junior in high school, she was already being “watched” by several major universities throughout the United States.

In addition to her athletic prowess, Alexis was stunningly beautiful. Standing 5’ 9” tall, she weighed a perfectly toned 125lbs. Her natural blonde hair and brown eyes complimented her perfectly tanned skin. Physically, Alexis took after her mother; long, muscular legs, tiny waist-line, wash-board abdominal muscles, toned arms, and beautiful 36C breasts. Alexis always wore her hair straight and never opted to style it in any way. Nonetheless, it was gorgeous.

Others noticed her beauty as well and Alexis had been approached about possible modeling jobs several times. Although I was initially against the idea, Alexis convinced me to let her give it a shot.
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Alexis was now 17 and had been living with me for over a year now. My relationship with Alexis was going great until last month when something happened that would change our lives forever.

It was a Saturday afternoon. Alexis had borrowed my car to run to the mall with her girlfriends. I didn’t expect her back until later in the evening so I decided to throw in my favorite porn DVD and jack-off once or twice while I had the house to myself.

I was seated on the edge of my couch. My shorts were around my ankles and I was feverishly stroking my rock hard cock to one of my favorite scenes on the disk. Without warning, the front door opened suddenly and before I could react, Alexis was standing motionless across the room, staring at me. I had forgotten to lock the front door!

My face immediately blushed with embarrassment. “Shit hun, I’m sorry!” I blurted out as I quickly pulled my shorts up. “I don’t know what to say, I, um, I”

“Wow…Dad, you naughty boy!” Alexis said with a sly grin on her face.

I did my best to try to hide my erection bulging from my shorts. If I could have found a hole, I probably would have crawled into it and died at that moment. My own daughter catching me jacking off.

“I, um, well…., shit this is embarrassing!” I stammered.

“It’s alright Dad. Everybody does it!” Alexis said.

“Yeah, but not everybody gets busted by their daughter” I replied. As I spoke, I grabbed the remote and fumbled for the “STOP” button as the TV blared screams of sexual ecstasy as the brunette on the screen was being fucked in the ass.

“Don’t! Leave it on.” Alexis said. I was stunned. “Seriously, leave it on. I wanna watch it!” Alexis proclaimed.

“I can’t do that. You’re 17 and you’re my daughter. I can’t watch porn with you.” I replied.

“Christ Dad, I’m not a little girl. I’m not embarrassed!” she said.

As Alexis spoke, I hit the power button to the TV.

“C’mon Dad, what’s the big deal. Looks like you still need to finish” Alexis said as she pointed towards the obvious bulge.

I did not know how to react. One voice inside told me to walk away while an equally loud voice urged me to turn the TV back on and see where this would lead. After all, Alexis was gorgeous and incredibly sexy.

When my conscious self realized I was actually having sexual thoughts about my daughter, I felt sick to my stomach. Standing up, I did my best to use my hands to hide my erection as I walked into the den.

“It’s not right Hunni. I wish we could watch it but I can’t!” I said as I walked away.

Just as I closed the door to the den behind me, I thought I heard Alexis say, “Your loss!” I knew I couldn’t have heard her correctly. I quickly immersed myself in some paperwork to take my mind off of this embarrassing situation I just found myself in.

Over the next couple days, I became very uncomfortable whenever Alexis was around me. I didn’t know how to act or what to say. I realized she was old enough to know that men and women do masturbate but teenaged girls were NOT supposed to catch their daddy’s beating off.

During this time, I also found myself fighting off dark thoughts that began creeping into my mind. Thoughts about how Alexis would look nude, what her breasts would look like, did she trim her pussy hair, how sweet her ass must look. I did my best to bury these thoughts but day after day, they grew more twisted and perverse. I began to fantasize about what might have happened if I had watched that porno with my daughter. This fueled thoughts of her sucking my cock, thoughts of me fingering her tight cunt, even fucking her.

Within a week, I couldn’t suppress the feelings any longer so I began jacking off to thoughts of showering with Alexis, thoughts of fucking her, thoughts of passionately kissing her. My orgasms were remarkably intense when I fantasized about her.

As time past, I did my best to try to act normal around Alexis. As much as I tried, I found myself looking at her as a sexual object and no longer simply as my daughter.

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As I lie here in bed, my beautiful Alexis asleep in my arms with her head against my chest, I recollect the last 12 hours; 12 hours that changed our lives forever.

Alexis and I left our place yesterday around 11 A.M. Her appointment with Les at his photography studio was scheduled for noon. Alexis was excited as we made the 45 minute trip. She had finally found a photographer she felt comfortable around and Les had agreed to give us a good price for her professional style portfolio.

Alexis and I came to know Les through his brother Mark. Mark was a linebacker for the Los Angeles Avengers Arena Football League team and he and I lift weights at the same gym. Mark was enormous. He stood slightly over 6’ tall and weighed 235lbs. His dark brown skin made his ripped muscles look lean and enhanced his muscle definition. According to Mark, Les was slightly taller and carried 10 more pounds of solid muscle.

Mark and I had become friends several years ago and by chance, I mentioned to him Alexis was interested in modeling. Mark told me his brother was a professional photographer in Thousand Oaks. One thing led to another and here we were, on our way for her photo shoot.

After arriving, unloading Alexis’ bags and signing the contracts, release forms, consent forms and what seemed like a dozen other documents, Les led me to the waiting area. This room was amazing! Wall-mounted plasma widescreen TV with satellite connection, a stocked refrigerator and several nice leather reclining chairs; I figured the three hour wait wouldn’t be nearly as bad as I had anticipated once I made myself comfortable.

Alexis gave me a kiss on the cheek before she spoke, “Thanks so much Daddy….I love you!”

“Love you too hun! You’ll be awesome!” I said reassuringly.

By 12:10 P.M. Les and Alexis were in his studio and I was kicked back in one of the soft leather recliners flipping through the 200+ available channels.

Finally settling for a re-run of The Ultimate Fighter, I relaxed and dozed off. Not 15 minutes into my make-shift nap, I was awakened by an unusual sound coming from the studio. I immediately jumped to my feet and walked to the door between the reception area and the studio. As I quickly opened the door, I stood in disbelief as my mind attempted to make sense of what I was watching.

Both Mark and Les were naked, Mark in front of and Les behind Alexis. Alexis was on her knees sucking Mark’s enormous cock. Les was on his knees with Alexis’ skirt hiked up to the small of her back, her panties around her ankles and his slender black middle finger probing her young cunt.

In an instant, the source of the sound that had awakened me was clear. It was my daughters muffled moans of pleasure as Les was playing with her pussy.

A flood of emotions flooded my mind and body. Anger, disgust, betrayal, and nausea all ripped through me. At the same time, a contrasting set of emotions coursed through me; envy, jealousy, excitement, lust.

Before I could speak, Alexis moved her mouth from Mark’s cock as she looked at me. “If you wouldn’t fuck me, I figured they wouldn’t mind Daddy!”

I couldn’t decide if I should kill Les and Mark for molesting my 17 year old daughter or report them to the police. However, I didn’t have to make that decision. My hormones made it for me.

My cock was rock hard in the few seconds I stood in the doorway.

Slowly, I approached the three. As wrong and indecent and dirty as it was, watching my daughter engaged in this sexual activity was the most incredibly erotic thing I had ever seen. I almost choked on the lump of sexual lust I felt in my throat.

I wasn’t sure what to say and blurted out, “So what do you want hunni?”

Alexis didn’t answer immediately and as I watched her, I was taken aback by the actual size of Mark’s cock. While I was always proud of my 8” cock, Mark easily had 4 inches on me. As my daughter’s mouth worked back and forth, my gaze was fixed on the huge vein on the top of his shaft that seemed like it was ready to burst.

Alexis withdrew his cock and teased the tip for a moment before she answered, “They’re gonna fuck me and you’re gonna watch!”

Holy shit! Was she punishing me? Teasing me? Testing me? While I didn’t have the answers, my mind was completely made up. I would play along and see where it went.

That was the moment I figured out Alexis and these two had this planned. Not 4 feet from where my daughter was about to become their fuck toy I found a recliner positioned in a direction facing their “play area.”. Taking my cue, I sat down and settled back to enjoy the “show.”

Alexis looked amazingly beautiful. Her blonde hair was pulled to one side allowing me to see her cheeks expand each time she took Mark’s shaft into her mouth. Les was using his enormous hand to spread her tiny ass cheeks apart as his finger probed up and down between her full pussy lips.

Never in my twisted fantasies did I realize how truly sexy Alexis was. Her clit was larger than I had imagined and her pussy lips were much more pronounced than I could have dreamed. As she knelt on all fours, the definition in her thighs and calves was more evident than ever and her round ass was absolutely perfect.

I slowly began rubbing my cock through my jeans as I watched this remarkable scene unfolding before my eyes. As Alexis sucked Mark’s cock, she wrapped her fingers around his shaft and began to stroke him back and forth as her lips surrounding his massive shaft. Seeing her long slender fingers with their perfectly manicured fingernails wrapped around his chocolate colored cock almost made me cum.

Alexis slowly started to rock her body back and forth as Les continued to prod his fingers in and out of her tight cunt. The deeper and faster he fingered her, the louder and more frequent her muffled moans became.

As I massaged myself through my pants, I felt a large wet spot as my pre-cum soaked through the denim material. Without thinking, I unbuttoned my pants and freed my throbbing prick.

Just as I finished pulling my pants down to me knees and sitting back down, Les lowered his face against Alexis’ round ass. He had one hand on each ass cheek and was spreading her ass as wide as he could. As he did, he slowly stuck his tongue out and started teasing her tight ass hole. Alexis let out a whimper of pleasure as he did so.

Les repositioned himself to get better access to her cunt and as he did, his cock was now visible. Les was bigger than Mark. Perhaps he was the same length but he was clearly much thicker. There was no way either of these men were going to fit their cocks into Alexis. She was too young and her pussy was going to be too tight.

I found myself stroking up and down on my cock and almost exploded as I pictured one of them burying their dark meat deep inside her white pussy. I quickly removed my hand from my cock. No way was I going to cum this soon!

I watched as Les began running his long tongue up and down the soft fold of Alexis’ pussy, going from her ass to her clit, flicking and teasing along the way. Alexis would meet his tongue with subtle backwards thrusts of her hips and variations in the pitch and volume of her moans.

As Les ate my little girl’s pussy, Mark had pulled his cock from her mouth and was now smacking his enormous shaft against her face. As he did, Alexis kept trying to lick him, her tongue narrowly missing him. Wet with his own pre-cum and her saliva, strands of sticky juice hung between the tip of his cock and her face; strands that hung like power lines strung across a countryside.

“You like this black meat Lexi” Mark asked.

“Mmm hmm” Alexis answered.

As Mark continued to tease her, Alexis quickly removed her shirt and bra. Her breasts were stunning. Firm, full 36C’s with long erect nipples. As she got back down on all fours, her perfect breasts hung beneath her. I slowly began stroking my cock again and resisted the urge to join in on the fun.

Alexis took Mark’s cock in her hand and began licking his entire shaft from tip to the base. Each time she reached the tip, she would flick her tongue across his head, tracing it’s circumference with her tongue. Mark let out a deep moan as my 17 year old daughter handled his enormous shaft with the touch of a woman 10 years older.

I was fixated on Alexis’ blowjob of Mark and hadn’t noticed that Les had placed himself between my little girl’s legs and was running the tip of his enormous cock up and down her tiny folds.

Alexis turned her head slightly with Mark’s cock still in her mouth and moaned, “Mmm hmm!” indicating she wanted Les to put his cock inside her.

As Les readied my daughter, he lowered his face and allowed a large drop of spit to run down her ass. Immediately putting his cock in the slippery moisture, he used his cock like a paint brush, spreading his wetness around her cunt.

I was mesmerized by the sight. I watched closely as his huge head parted her pussy lips. I leaned forward to look closer as I watched the first inch of his enormous shaft enter Alexis. Alexis moaned as her tight cunt began to stretch around his thick shaft. Les placed his large hands on her curvy hips and moved his hips in a small circle before pushing himself a little deeper into her. He was only 3 or 4 inches into her and I thought her pussy was going to tear from his girth.

Alexis turned and looked at Les, “Do it….fuck me with that big black cock!”

“You got it girl” Les answered with his deep voice.

Alexis’ pussy was soaking wet so lubrication was not lacking. Inch by inch Les plunged into my baby.

Alexis giggled, partly pleasure and partly surprise and she spoke, “You cock is enormous!”

I couldn’t touch my cock. If I did, I know I would have shot a load of cum across the room. I sat motionless as I watched. “Baby, you okay?” I asked.

“Oh my God yes…I’m perfect Daddy!” she said confidently.

As she did, Les seized the moment and drove his cock all the way into her. “Uhhhnnnn” Alexis moaned. Within and instant, the fucking began.

I watched in amazement as his cock parted Alexis’ tight cunt. His enormous balls swayed back and forth and I watched her body being rocked with the energy from Les’ powerful thrusts.

As Les enjoyed the wonderful pleasure of my daughter’s tight pussy, Mark was busy enticing her with his dripping cock. Alexis eagerly took him into her mouth once again and did her best to swallow his massive shaft.

Alexis was finding it difficult to concentrate on Mark’s cock with the pounding Les was applying. His massive member was driving in and out of her tiny cunt like a piston and Alexis could not contain her pleasure. What started out as quiet and occasional grunts were now full-blown screams of ecstasy. “Uhn…..uhn……uhn……yes…..yes….yes…uhn…uhn…UHN, UHN, YES, YES, YES!!!”

As tone and fit as Alexis was her ass and hips rippled with shockwave-like currents from each powerful stroke.

“OH GOD DADDY!” Alexis screamed, “I’M GONNA C-U-U-U-U-M!” Before she could finish, her body tensed as a powerful orgasm shot through her body.

Alexis tried to catch her breath but Les continued to assault her young twat. Sensing Mark’s anticipation, Les asked, “You want some?”

“MMM, fuck yeah I do!” Mark answered.

“Let’s see what this bitch can handle” Les said as he pulled his cock from her now-gaping pussy.

As he did, he spit in his hand to ensure his cock was adequately lubricated. Les then placed the tip of his cock against her tight asshole and slowly worked the tip inside her tight ring. “There’s no way it’ll fit” I thought to myself. To my astonishment, Alexis sat motionless as Les worked 8 or 9 inches of his shaft into her tight ass.

Once he was securely inside her, Les grasped Alexis by the hips and guided her on top of him as he rolled to his back. Les’ feet were now facing me as was Alexis with his cock shoved in her ass. Les spread his legs slightly and Alexis followed his lead.

These two were going to double-penetrate my 17 year old daughter and she was looking forward to it with an eager look of pure sexual deviance and desire.

Mark crawled between Alexis’ long beautiful legs. His cock ready in his hand. “Mmmmm, you ready Baby Girl?” Mark asked.

All Alexis could do was shake her head yes and mumble “Mmm hmmm.”

Mark pressed his cock against Alexis’ opening. What was a tight hole only 10 minutes earlier was now still gaping open from Les’ pounding. Mark used the path his brother had forged for him and shoved his cock deep inside Alexis.

Alexis screamed as the massive cocks stretched her young body to it’s’ limit. Les was lying flat on his back and Alexis used his chest to lean back on, supporting her upper body with her arms against his chest. In this position, her ample breasts stuck out from her chest and begged to be fondled. Her stomach muscles rippled as she tensed her body, accepting the dark meat that was buried inside her.

Her thigh muscles tightened as she rocked back and forth in unison with Mark’s strokes. Les didn’t have to move as the combination of Alexis’ movement’s and Mark’s strokes provided all the stimulation he needed. Alexis’ pussy lips were spread wide from the position she was in and her engorged clit protruded from her body. Her closely trimmed blonde pubic hair glistened as sweat dripped down her sleek belly. I couldn’t watch any longer. My cock was throbbing and I had never been so horny. As Mark and Les fucked my girl, I walked along side Alexis’ upright body.

“God damn Alexis, you are incredible” I said as I stroked my cock only inches from her alluring face.

Alexis was unable to answer. The only sounds coming from her lips were now very loud screams, “UHN, UHN, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, YES, YES, YEEEEES!”

Without warning, Alexis took my cock in her hand and guided it to her mouth. I stared in wonder as her beautiful lips parted and guided my shaft inside. My head spun as I felt her soft tongue under my shaft, licking my entire length. I felt so dirty watching my daughter fuck two huge black cocks as she now sucked on my cock.

Alexis reached behind me and placed a hand on my ass, pushing my hips into her face, signaling me to fuck her mouth. As she did, I felt her jaws widen to prepare to accept my cock deep in her throat. I knew I would not last long once I began thrusting in my daughter’s mouth. Watching two huge dark cocks splitting my little girl in two was enough to send me over the edge. Add in the fact Alexis’ muffled moans were vibrating against my cock and I was a volcano of cum waiting to explode.

I eagerly fulfilled my little slut’s desires and feverishly fucked her mouth. Alexis gagged as my cock hit the back of her throat but she never pulled away. Large amounts of saliva and pre-cum ran from her lips dripping down to her chest and stomach.

As I enjoyed the feeling of my incestual oral sex, Mark was nearing orgasm. I heard him grunt as he quickly withdrew his cock, stroking himself 10-12 times before he exploded. Mark placed his cock against Alexis’s blonde cunt hair as several large loads of creamy cum unloaded into her hairy patch.

Seeing Marks’ cum matted in her hair was more than I could take. My cock spasmed as I pumped my load into my daughter’s mouth. Alexis continued to devour my shaft as load after load of cum emptied into her throat.

“Jesus Hun! Suck it….Y-E-E-E-S-S-S-S!” I grunted as I came.

Once Mark pulled out, Les used this opportunity to take Alexis by the hips as he bounced her up and down on his cock still buried deep in her ass. Alexis pushed my cock from her mouth and began to scream in ecstasy, “FUCK, YES, YES, YES, YES YES……DADDDY….I’M CUMING DAD-D-D-D-Y-Y-Y-Y-Y!!!!!!!!!!” As Alexis exploded in another orgasm, her sphincter tightened around Les’ shaft, sending Les over-the-top. Les began to pound her ass with fast, short strokes. Alexis could sense his orgasm nearing as his cock swelled inside her.

“Cum in my ass Les!” she commanded. “Fill my white slut ass with your cum! Pump me…Do it! Do it! Do it!” Les didn’t need any further encouragement. With one final thrust, his cock exploded, spurting his hot cum deep in my little girl’s ass. Les groaned as he emptied his creamy juice into her.

The three of each stroked the last drops of cum onto my precious daughter as she sat motionless, trying to catch her breath.

Alexis had never looked more beautiful to me than she did at that moment. Her face was glowing with an erotic aura I had never seen on another woman as her body glistened with sweat.

I leaned down and pressed my mouth against hers, locking in a passionate embrace. I could taste the salty remnants of my cock as we kissed. Pulling away, I took her face in my hands, “Hunni, when we get home, you’ve got to explain what just happened” I said.

“Not until we shower and you make love to me Daddy! I love you so much and want you to hold me and make love to me tonight” she replied.

- To be continued -


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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 07:20
    fucking great story 15/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 15:14
    wtf is wrong with youll sick fucks????????????

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 16:43
    great!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 17:05
    IT WORKED FOR ME!!!!!

    TO THE READER WHO THINKS WE ARE SICK,

    HOW MUCH DID YOU READ BEFORE YOU STOPPED? I THINK YOU ARE THE ONE WITH

    SERIOUS PROBLEMS.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 19:34
    Ease up it just a fantasy story, very well written. I almost forgot my wife is sitting on the couch accross from me.

    rudhrny one

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    READER 500
    13.04.2006 05:36
    OK, let's face it, this is a red-hot story. Very erotic and sexy. Well done, says the Dick Slapper.

    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2006 09:33
    totally bullshit

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    READER 500
    13.04.2006 10:35
    Very fucking nice,

    But if i found my daughter fucking 2 guys at same time, lol the 2 wouldnt live to see another day :|

    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2006 10:51
    Good story, made me wet... not very well written though.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2006 13:02
    meh

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2006 02:48
    Wonderful story come twice.

    25/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2006 05:18
    but if she was just fucking one guy then its ok lmao hahahahahaah

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.04.2006 15:46
    this is crap

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2006 17:26
    well done nice written

    very well told, please write more

    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2006 17:41
    Why, o' way, did you not say it had anal in it? I would have read it before! It would have been better if the 2 guys had started by raping her,

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    READER 500
    16.04.2006 21:44
    good story, very erotic and sexy hope you post more up soon

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2006 04:53
    Badly written perverted bullshit - otherwise not too bad but I've certainly seen much better here 3/10

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    READER 500
    20.04.2006 02:31
    Badly written my ass. this is a classic...awesome 10/10

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    READER 500
    20.04.2006 03:52
    Funny how all the glowing comments for this story seem to be written by the same personality. Why is this?

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    READER 500
    20.04.2006 20:29
    Great fucking story.

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    READER 500
    21.04.2006 03:39
    More than 20 comments (14 praising it) (18 anonymous) for 156 votes smells of self-promotion.



    A score like this for what is an average story tells the world that the author is a legend in his own mind.



    The story is not so good and most certainly does not deserve its voting score, there are much better stories here.

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    READER 500
    21.04.2006 04:09
    I gave it 1/10 because there is no 0

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    21.04.2006 20:39
    You really have that kind of time that you can spend analyzing good -vs- bad comments? Sounds to me you're a disgruntled author on here getting your ass handed to you in the ratings so you hide behind the anonymity of your petty comments. Grow some balls....send me an e-mail and give me some contact info...I'd love to chat! Don't like the story? Fine, say so. Don't pull allegations out of your ass when you have no idea what you're talking about...you just make yourself look more ignorant!

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    21.04.2006 20:47
    If you read this story and like it, post a comment using a log-in name so I can turn "Mr. Rating Analyst" (comment dated 4-21-06 / 03:39) into my little bitch! 14 Stories, 230,000 reads, 1880+ votes...average rating of 8.18 and this candy-ass thinks I self-promote....

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    22.04.2006 09:31
    I see Viewed 19724 times Rated 7.73/10 (168 votes) right there above these comments - where do you get 230,000 reads, 1880+ votes...average rating of 8.18 from ???



    We are talking about this one story in reality not in your enlarged ego



    Good of you to sign in for these comments I would have pissed myself if you also posted these as reader.



    No I’m not an author I’m a critic, get used to the hard truth being told, if you don’t like it then don’t post.



    Signed your little candy ass bitch.

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    READER 500
    22.04.2006 11:47
    OK now I’ve read all your other stories, some quite good, some, like this one merely average and a couple are abysmal. I’ve also looked at the comments appertaining to them. As a psychologist (and porn story critic) it seems obvious to me that many of the comments were written by the same person, all of these are anonymous. I also note that these comments were written in groups, I.e. batches of comments across all your stories were written within a short time frame of a few minutes.



    You may not like valid criticism but the facts speak for themselves.



    signed your little candy ass bitch.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 14:09
    And once again, you make your comments anonymously. I have no problem with you critiquing the stories or writing style. But you make it personal by attacking my integrity and making allegations for which you have no proof. None of the "glowing" anonymous comments were posted by me. However, until you want to qualify your comments to me by attaching an identity to them, all I can say is....have fun Dr. Seuss...have fun!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 14:36
    And, in case your in-depth analysis missed this little fact: of all the 14 stories posted here, there are 23 comments made by people who signed in using a screen name. score: 21 good comments, 2 bad comments. Thats an 11.5 to 1 ratio of good -vs- bad. Thank you for the debate. I wish you'd have the courage to send me an e-mail...click the link on top, it goes straight to my personal e-mail...I can assure you I will not hide. You'll be able to clearly identify me, my full name and my location when I reply. Why are you so afraid to attach your identity to your criticism???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 15:12
    Holy shit...wait! I figured it out. My candy ass bitch and the associated comments are actually me too! My ego, id, and super-ego are all making anonymous comments, in constant conflict with the other....my super-ego is posting glowing anonymous comments while my id notices how I self-promote myself...and my poor ego, it sits in the corner crying wishing we could all just get along.....fuck! I need a shrink....lol

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2006 09:32
    could be!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2006 11:09
    11.5:1 is a reasonable average for a competent author (you can’t please everyone) there would also be a fair proportion of anonymous comments in similar proportions. However, look at the comments for any other author, the attributed and the anonymous comments are fairly random. This is not the case for the comments to your stories with page after page of good “Reader” comments, mostly one-liners in the vein of “great story” and “wow” composed by the same mind interspersed with 1 or 2 genuine comments



    I’m not willing to give you my email address, not for the reason you think but because it’s only given to those I trust and given the facts before me, I most certainly don’t trust you



    your little candy ass bitch

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2006 11:10
    The lady doth protest too much, methinks.



    You shouldn’t have pointed me at your other stories, they give me much more data to back up my statement that you are self promoting or at least getting your immediate circle of friends to do it for you. Your statistics deviate too far from the norm to be genuine; all you are doing is boosting your own ego (does it need it?). If you want to talk about id and super-ego then get past psych101 first, it’s hard to discuss concepts you’ve heard about but don’t really understand



    Continued…

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2006 12:51
    Congratulations! You cracked the case. The xnxx police were just here and took me into cusotdy. Apparently, I was indicted by the xnxx grand jury and will appear in fantasy court. I'm sure I'll be convicted based on your in-depth investigation and scientifically supported conclusions.....how can one person be filled with so much jealousy and hatred? Who's the legend in their own mind? You crack me up! You're no different than someone in the KKK who hides behind the anonymity of their white hood....a coward!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2006 17:17
    There now doesn’t that feel better now you admit it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2006 12:03
    Jealousy and hatred - No - Indignation and a loathing of cheaters and egocentrics - yes

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2006 20:13
    muah....I love you too bitch!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2006 05:18
    Thanks honey. But as a parting shot I am sure everyone will notice the sudden absence of glowing one line comments in the last 5 days (usually 1 to 3 a day). Some may say coincidence, I would say that I have had the desired effect and embarrassed a self serving egotist into playing fair. Only time will tell but remember, the only person you are fooling is yourself because I'm sure you give the average reader here some credit for their intellegence.



    Bye lover…

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2006 12:59
    Keep applauding yourself! I'm sure the lack of comments on some of my stories has nothing to do with the fact some of them are rated in the mid-7 range and no longer appear under "latest stories" "top-rated" or other headings, therefore they are not being read as often. You keep living in your little fantasy world....when you grow some balls and want to identify yourself, I am only a click away....until then, keep giving me all the press you want!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2006 13:11
    You forgot to mention the low 4 range, kiss kiss

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2006 21:29
    The story rated in the 4-range is a snuff story. Snuff stories very rarely rate high. I'm quickly boring of your hissy fits and obvious jealousy. wouldn't you just love ti if i said something threatening so you could report me? try to mind fuck someone who you can actually mind-fuck!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 01:28
    O jealousy, Thou ugliest fiend of hell! thy deadly venom Preys on my vitals, turns the healthful hue Of my flesh check to haggard sallowness, And drinks my spirit up! --Hannah More

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 03:55
    You keep mentioning jealousy as though that’s the reason I have picked up on this outrage. You are so wrong but your egotistical mind blinds you to the real reason. What I object to is the way you have no regard for your readers intelligence. You are a good author, you write quite well (usually) but trying to mislead your readers lets you down badly and tells much about your personality.



    If you want to turn the fact that you have been caught out, and that you admit your error (albeit jokingly or was that bitterness) into my fault – then that’s like saying the police are bad guys for catching criminals. - Sorry but you are then one with 55 genuine comments and who knows how many issued from duplicate IP address.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 20:02
    The problem is, you keep throwing your "opinion" around as factual when in reality, it is strictly that...your opinion and honestly, it is a flawed opinion. You attribute a drop-off of one line good comments to you "identifying" the issue. You forget the issue could be similar to newly released movies....rave reviews and huge attendance during the first weeks after release only to drop off during subsequent months

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2006 20:21
    How do explain the fact my ratings remain strong and more readers are now attaching names to their comments? I don't see anybody else jumping on your band-wagon. My readers are proving you wrong. You are whining and crying and everybody but you sees it. I honestly find you amusing... you claim to be educated but you act like a spolied child who is pissed because his best friend got the gift you wanted. Don't try to attribute a joking admission as consciousness of guilt...would not fly in debate in the first year of law school, wouldn't fly in court and the readers of this site aren't going to buy into your faulty logic and asserted conclusions. Your crying is getting annoying...go to your room until you can behave like a good boy!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2006 05:22
    I never said this was my opinion or that it is fact, I did say that statistics showed it to be the case.



    Never joke about admissions of guilt.



    I explain this way – you are now not swamping your stories with anonymous comments – my previous post noted that you had 55 attributed comments (now 59), That figure is displayed by the XNXX system, it’s not my count.



    I am not saying you are a bad author, in fact you deserve many of the comments you receive, I was pointing out an inconsistency in the number of anonymous comments that left you open to criticism, so I criticised, that’s what I do.



    I also don’t see any comments backing up your side of the argument, I would have expected a few people telling me where to go, given that most of your stories are so popular.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2006 17:28
    well, here is someone on "reader's" side. i suspected the same thing you did, that the author was self-rating/promoting with bogus comments.

    Once you brought up the subject, there was a huge drop in comments - in ALL of his stories. this is not coincidence. I also agree that it says something about the personality of the author. It's egotistical and self-serving. Something I don't quite understand is this: Why post a story for the public to read if you aren't able to take the good comments with the bad? That's the idea of this whole comments section, isn't it? A chance for people to voice opinions. I understand it's not always pleasant hearing someone critique your written work, but, you open yourself up for it by posting on a public site.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2006 20:24
    Are you really that ignorant? The 59 number you quote is the number of comments I have posted on other stories or replies to my stories while logged in as wickedsin. That number does not indicate the total number of "attributed" comments attributed to my stories. Furthermore, if you are using the previous number of 55, and 59 as of your last e-mail as some evidence to prove I have decreased the frequency of "anonymous" posts to my own stories, that is faulty logic. if I post anonymously ( i.e. not logged in), they would not be counted in the total of my profile comments.....now 63 or 64 since I replied to you and commented on a few good stories earlier today. You honestly have no idea what you're talking about and as for joking about admissions of guilt...sorry, it's a lawyer thing!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2006 04:36
    I was under the impression that comments count on profile pages related to comments from unique names, you prove me wrong on that one point, I hang my head in shame, I apologise and withdraw the part of that statement reading: --



    “my previous post noted that you had 55 attributed comments (now 59), that figure is displayed by the xnxx system, it’s not my count”



    Everything else still stands…

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2006 18:10
    I appreciate your apology. There's nothing I will ever say to convince you I did not post anonymous comments myself nor do I (or did I) rate my own stories. So, we're gonna have to agree to disagree but I assure you every rating and every comment, good or bad, was made by someone else. The decrease in the number of comments recently is the same thing that happens to newly released movies...the first few weekends, attendance is high...the longer the movie has been out, the fewer the number of people who view the movie. Your hypothesis is flawed in that you assume I actually care that my stories are top-rated. I don't. I had no idea how they'd be received. The ratings are flawed on this site since there are vindictive people who continually rate stories low for the hell of it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2006 09:45
    excellent story!!! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2006 07:53
    N/P. I hold my hands up when I am in the wrong.

    You should care if your stories are top rated or at least well rated, I'm sure you do really, otherwise why publish?

    As for your vindictive people comment, is this what it is or are the true ratings beginning to show through now?

    Sorry for the delay in responding, I've been away (mmm… Paris in springtime.)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.05.2006 02:51
    Hope you enjoyed your vacation. Personally, I don't care much for Paris. I prefer Austria/Bavarian Alps region myself but haven't been there since 1997. Welcome back!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 05:52
    Good story, great writing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2006 15:51
    i know it may be kinda late. when is there going to be a part 2. i can't wait.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2006 00:18
    This was really hot WS. I did not think you had a plain old fucking sex stroy in you. Super.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2006 02:05
    holy wow my god great story 100,000,000/10 one of the best ive ever read

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2006 10:32
    My pussy and my ass got in convulsions and I got wet all over. I love this double penetrating picture with huge cocks pounding into the girl. And so good that you joined them and gave her your load of cum right down her throat. I wish I was her. I can see the picture you all working hard fucking her to fill her body with cocks and cum. Slavia

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2007 22:15
    holy fuck that was hot 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2007 15:00
    The story was a 9/10. But the fight? 1000/10. 2 in 1 i loved it...hey dumbass reader. say stupid stufflike that more often please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.11.2007 22:56
    Hands down this is a top 3 story that I have ever read on this site....mmma young girl and 2 huge nigga cocks....in a LOVELY double fuckin mmmmm....i have hunch that those niggas will be fuckin her ALOT more in the future....but what is cool is she still wants daddy to fuck, suck and eat his seedMMMMM.......a 10 out of 10....i cant tell you how many times i have jacked off to this GREAT story....keep'em CUMMIN ....PLEASE!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2009 19:22
    well i loved every bit ofit my dick was so hard ive wanted to give my daughter to a black man but two them id love to see that oh my god yes i do

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2013 10:40
    I'm really impssreed with your writing skills as well as with the layout on your blog. Is this a paid theme or did you customize it yourself? Anyway keep up the nice quality writing, it is rare to see a nice blog like this one nowadays..

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