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End of the world - Chapter 4

Author: jmiller

Date: 22 June 2006

Incest, Fiction, Male / Female, Non-consensual sex

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When Mary, my oldest daughter, ran into the kitchen and asked if she could go out and see the people, I sat there trying to figure out what game she was playing. It never occurred to me that she might be talking about real people. We had been alone here for so many years. I had not even thought about other people in several years.

I just sat there speechless for the longest time. What could she be talking about? What people? Was this just a kid’s game with imaginary players? Just as I was about to ask her about it, another of the children, Janice, ran in shouting, “There are people out by the barn”.

I got up and went to the window followed by mom. Everyone else crowded around behind us. Sure enough, there were four people over by the barn. They were just standing there in a group watching the house. There were two kids and a woman standing in front, and a man standing behind them. They were not making any attempt to hide. They just stood there, watching, waiting. The man appeared to be forty or so, around mom’s age. I guessed the woman might be thirty. She definitely looked younger than my mom. The other two were young teenage girls and were probably thirteen or fourteen.

The man was white and very stocky, about the same height as me. The woman was a light skinned black and very slender. She reminded me of someone I had seen on one of our movies but I could not remember the name. I guessed one of the girls might be her daughter. She had the same shade of skin and body type. The other girl was Asian. I thought they were a pretty odd group to be together. They did not seem a very likely family.

They were all wearing clothes; shirts, pants and shoes. Except for winter we pretty much never wore clothes. It was late spring, and already warm, so we were all naked. I could also see that the man had a rifle that he held close to his leg. If I had not looked close I would have missed it. They also had backpacks, and a few yards behind them I spotted a cart that had bags and boxes stacked in it. The man put one hand to his mouth, “Hello the house”.

I started to turn to get out of the pack by the window, “I guess I should go out and see what they want”.

Mom took my arm and pulled me back. “Dan. We need to be careful here. He is armed”, she had seen the rifle. “We don’t know where they came from or what they want. But our biggest problem is what if they carry the virus? One touch from them could wipe us all out”.

I looked back at the man, and then at the rifle. “I’ll go out and see what he wants”.

Mom stopped me again, “Just go on the porch. Don’t let them approach you. They need to stay a good distance away. I just hope that is enough”. She turned to Terri, “Terri. You are the best shot here. I want you to take a rifle, go out the back door and around behind the woodpile. If you can don’t let them see you. I want you to cover Dan. If the man makes a threatening move I want you to shoot him”.

Terri, still looking out the window said, “I don’t like him”.

I almost laughed. “How can you say that? We don’t know anything about them”.

She looked back at me. “Look how they are standing”.

I looked back at the group. “You don’t like him because how he stands”?

She looked at me a bit exasperated, “No, not how he stands, it’s where he is standing. The women are in front. He is behind them, like he is using them as a shield”.

I looked back out. “I see what you mean. But it might not mean anything”. I did not want to make a big point of it in front of the others but she had something there. Terri was pretty sharp.

Terri looked back at me, “Don’t worry Dan. I won’t let him do anything”. Then Terri went over to the gun closet, pulled her rifle out, made sure it was loaded and walked to the backdoor. She stood there waiting for me to go out. “Give me a minute to get in position before you go out”.

When I got to the door I stopped and looked back around the room. All the kids and my sisters were at the windows staring at the strangers. This was huge for the kids. They had never seen another person outside of the family. Hell, we did not know there was another person outside the family.

Just as I was about to open the door mom touched my arm to stop me. “When you are talking to them, we are your wives, not your mother and sisters”. I must have had a hurt look on my face, that was how I felt, because she immediately said, “No, I’m not ashamed. If you think about it, we are your wives. But anyway, I want him to see us as yours. We are an intact family. I don’t know what his intentions are. I don’t want him to think there might be opportunities for him here”.

I opened the door and stepped outside, mom followed me. Before I could stop them, Megan and Shelly stepped outside also. I motioned for them to go back in but they both shook their heads and stayed. Both mom and Shelly were pregnant and almost ready to deliver. I did not think it was the safest place for them but I had to admit, he certainly could not miss the fact that we were a family.

They had not moved. I raised a hand in a greeting and the man waved back but stayed where he was. I remained silent. I wanted him to begin. After a few seconds he began, “Hello. We saw your smoke. At first we thought there was a fire but we should check it out. We have not seen another person in so many years. Can we come in”? As he said that he reached forward and nudged the kids and they took a step forward. I immediately held up my hand and they stopped. “Okay, would you happen to have some extra food you can spare”?

I finally spoke up for the first time, “Yes, we have some food. Where are you from”?

“Thanks. We are from Virginia. We have been slowly walking across country for years now. We explored and looked for people all the way but we never saw a soul. For the first few years all we saw was bodies. Now we don’t even see that. My family lived down there in the valley. We stopped there. I hoped, but they are gone too. How did you all escape the virus”?

It was the crux of the matter, what we both wanted to know. “We were up here before it happened. We stayed here and did not see anyone until everything was over. We have never visited another farm and we’ve never gone down to the town below”. I waited for a moment and then asked, “And you”?

The woman started to answer but the man grabbed her arm and she stopped. Then he replied, “Kind of the same thing as you. We were all in a wilderness retreat. We were the only ones there. We did not even know what was happening until it was all over”.

I was curious about one thing, “You have been walking through towns and have had no problems”?

“You mean the virus? No, it must be over now. I guess that explains the lack of clothes on you people. I mean, you’re staying here and not visiting a town”.

The four of us had been standing there talking with them in the nude.

“Can we come up to the house now”?

Mom spoke up for the first time, “No. We need to talk first”.

We turned around to face each other. “The fact that they are here does not mean the virus is gone. They could be carriers. That is, they could have the virus but do not get sick. They just pass it on to others”. Mom had a good point.

“But how can we tell”?

“One of use needs to spend time with them. It works fast. Two days should be enough time to tell”.

Megan turned to mom, “You mean one of us could die if they have the virus”.

She nodded. “Our choices are limited. Either we send them away or we have to test to see if it is safe. The only way we have of testing is to expose someone”.

I spoke up, “I’ll go”. It did not seem right to have one of the girls go. The man should protect them. It also seemed unreasonable to send away the first people we encounter.

Megan then put up a hand to stop me. “No. It should be me”. Before any of us could say anything she continued, “Mom, you and Shelly are both about to deliver. It would not be fair to the babies if something happened to you. And Dan, don’t be such a guy. You are the only man we have, and you are the father to all those kids back there. It can’t be Susan. She is the one mom has been teaching to be a nurse. And Terri is the one with the gun over there covering us. And we certainly cannot send one of our babies out there. It has to be me”.

I could not think of a single point to refute but I felt bad about not being the one to protect them instead of the other way around. I finally just nodded. Mom told her to go and get several days worth of food packed. We turned around to the group waiting for us. “What are your names”?

“I’m John, this is Sharon and the two kids are Janelle and Myoku. And you are”?

“I’m Dan. This is” and I had to stop and think. I had not heard mom’s name since dad had used it, what, fifteen years ago or so. With the slight pause I added “Meredith, and this is Shelly and that was Megan who went back inside”.

They started to walk towards us and I held up my hand to stop them a second time. “We still have a concern about the virus. You might be carriers. We have talked it over and the plan is to have one of us stay with you for a couple of days to be sure there is no problem, a quarantine of sorts”.

If a few minutes Megan returned. She gave each of us a long hug and then we watched as Megan joined them. They pulled a tent out of their cart, set it up and then sat around on the ground and talked. We gave stern warnings to the kids that they were off limits for a couple of days. After a while the novelty of just watching them wore off. Terri had rejoined us earlier and we sat around in the kitchen and discussed what to do. After some heated discussion it was decided that if they were not carrying the virus they could stay here with us for a while. Take some time to see if they were compatible with our group. If not they would be asked to move on. Terri, who had disliked the man from the start, argued to have them move on now.

After a couple of days Terri was showing no sign of the virus infection. From what we saw on news reports from when we were little, we knew it took about a day after first exposure before you knew you were infected. Blood vessels throughout your body would simple fall apart. You would turn black from all the internal bleeding. You had total organ failure. After three days we decided it was safe and they came up to the house to meet us. While the adults met in the kitchen to talk, all the kids were out on the porch talking with Janelle and Myoku. It took about fifteen minutes for the kids to begin calling Myoku, Mikey. Our kids had never seen anyone with different skin color outside of a book so they were constantly touching the new girl’s skin.

In the kitchen we decided they could use a bunkhouse we had out past the barn. It had several bunk beds in it and a wood stove that could be used for heat and cooking. Future plans could be worked on later. At the worst they could stay through the summer and winter and then move on. I thought it might be a good idea if they stayed with us. It would give us some genetic diversity plus it would be good for mom. There would be two people she could relate to, one her age and the other close to her age.

Later that night, after the kids had been put down, it was just my sisters, mom and I seated around the kitchen table. We had been bugging Megan for more information about them and she had been putting us off until later. Later had finally arrived.

“Here is what I remember, and a few things that I read between the lines. Sharon was married to a man who was much older than her”.

Several of us interrupted asking where the husband was.

“If you will all be quiet I’ll get to that. Janelle and Myoku were foster kids of his. They went on a trip into this wilderness area and that is where they met John. He hired out as a guide and he took them up to this small lodge that was way out in the middle of nowhere. They were the only people there. Food had been stocked there for guests. The guests were expected to hunt for meat.

They had a radio but hardly ever used it. When they got there they knew about the problems in Asia but they were out of touch when the virus took over. The radio was a hit and miss thing because they were out in the middle of the mountains.

When they finally heard about the virus spreading it was pretty much all over everywhere. They decided to wait it out there. Then it was like it was for us. They just did not hear anything on the radio anymore. Then something happened to Sharon’s husband and he died. They did not say much about it, John changed the subject whenever I asked. I’m guessing that he does not like having the subject of her husband brought up because she is with him now”.

I wanted to know, “What happened to the husband? How did he die”?

“From what Sharon said before John stopped her, I think he and John were on a hunting trip and he had an accident”.

The mystery somewhat explained, we moved on. Everyone seemed to like the girls. We were all undecided about John. He was not very friendly or outgoing. We probably just had to get used to him.

Over the next few weeks, life slowly settled back to normal. Mom and Shelly delivered their babies, both healthy boys. John and Sharon joined in our work. Janelle and Mikey joined in with my sisters though they spent most of their time with Terri. That seemed only natural since they were the closest in age.

Since Terri walked around nude all the time Janelle and Mikey started doing the same. You could see they were shy about it at first, especially around me but in a few days they were over it. John and Sharon were a bit more conservative. The best they could do was to drop down to shorts and shoes. Sharon began going around topless. It was obvious she had not had children. While all my women showed the signs of repeated breastfeeding, Sharon’s breasts, while full, rode high on her and really stuck out. Several times she had caught me staring at them. She would frown, look towards John if he was around, and shake her head. It had me a bit confused. Was she saying, not while he was around, or don’t, because he won’t like it. I finally got over it. I had enough breasts around me day and night to keep me satisfied. But I’m a guy. I had to look.

I was out mending a fence about a month after they arrived when Terri came up behind me. “What are you doing”?

If I had been wearing shoes I would have jumped out of them. “Don’t do that. You are the quietest person I know. I ought to but a bell around your neck”.

She was not amused. “John makes me nervous”.

“What do you mean”?

“He is always watching me. I’ll be working and find him looking at me. And he looks up and down my body. I don’t like it. I would put on clothes but I don’t like the idea of having to do that just because of him”.

“Are you sure you’re not reading too much into this? You did not like him from the beginning”.

“No it’s not that. I’ve talked to my sisters and he does not hang around them. Sometimes I go and swim alone. Afterwards I’ll lie out in the sun for a while. Several times now I’ve seen him up behind some trees watching me. I had on sunglasses so I don’t think he knows I saw him”.

“Do you want me to talk to him”?

“No. I think you should let me shoot him”.

I laughed.

“I’m serious. If I don’t now, I will just have to do it later”.

“Come on Terri. You can’t just shoot him. If this gets worse we’ll ask them to leave. In the meantime give me a day or so to figure out how to handle this. I’ll talk to him. I just need some time to figure out what to say”.

“Okay. He’s up with Megan and Susan working in the corn. I’ll go take my swim now while he’s out of the way. I’ll work on just staying away from him”.

With and “Okay” she left and I decided to go to my workshop in the barn. I wanted to get away from everyone and give this some thought. About a year ago I found I needed a retreat where I could get away from everyone for short periods. As much as I loved the girls and my kids, sometimes I needed some time to my self. God help me, with twenty three kids, I really needed some time. So I had made a room for myself out of the workshop in the barn. I had a small bed and a couple of chairs in there. Every now and then I would just sack out there. The girls knew when I was there that I wanted to be alone and they respected it.

When I got there I went over to the bed and lay down. This was going to be a thorny problem. Could it be fixed or should we have them leave? Was it possible to fix it? John was a difficult person. He did not mix with us much. Sharon and the girls were great. We would miss them if they left.

As I was running possible scenarios through my head, the door opened. Janelle and Mikey walked in. What do they want? Of course they don’t know the rules about this room. Before I could get up, they walked right up to the bed and sat on each side facing me near my feet. “What are you girls doing here? Do you need something”?

Janelle smiled at me, “Yes we do need something”. She put a hand out and lightly ran it up my thigh from my knee to my hip and then back down. “And I see you have it”.

I about swallowed my heart. It was obvious what she wanted. I looked over at Mikey, and while she was not as forward as Janelle, she was smiling also. “I think you girls had better go before John comes around”.

Mikey answered, “Oh we don’t have to worry about him. He sent us over”. Then she put her hand out and laid it on the middle of my thigh with her fingers laying tantalizingly down the inside of my thigh. “Oh look, it moved!”

I didn’t have to look. I knew what moved. My cock had been laying off at a 90 degree angle. Now it was 45 degrees. Both girls moved their heads closer to watch for any further developments. I wanted to distract them but they both looked so beautiful. They both looked so different from what I had grown used to. Mikey with her small breasts and Asian features and Janelle with her large breasts and dark skin.

“Look it’s big”. I looked down and I was now fully erect. I was now pointing straight at me and up off my stomach. Janelle reached out with a hand and grabbed me near the head. That gave Mikey the courage to reach out. She grabbed me at the base and with her other hand began pushing my balls around.

For a moment I just sighed and lay back in the bed and enjoyed the moment. Then I remembered John. He could get violent if he found us. These were his women. “You girls have to stop before John finds us”.

“We told you. John sent us over. He wanted us to be friendly with you”.

“I don’t think this is what he meant be being friendly”.

“He did not tell us not to”.

I did not need much persuasion. That was good enough for me. I had two girls running their hands all over my legs and up to my chest while keeping a firm grip on my cock. I had lost quite a bit of blood flow to my brain so I might be forgiven if I was not thinking to clearly at the moment.

As I was lying there I heard Mikey say “I’ve seen Mom do this to John”. The bed shifted as she moved. The hand on the top of my cock left and was then replaced with a warm, wet mouth. I looked up and saw Mikey’s head going up and down on me. Whatever reluctance I had with the girls was now officially gone. I was theirs to do with as they wished. She began running her tongue around the head and moved her mouth up and down as she did it. I heard Janelle say with some anger in her voice, “John tried to get me to do that one night after Mom went to sleep but Mom woke up and stopped him”.

Janelle turned and moved up closer to me. I reached out to her and cupped her breasts with my hands. When I touched her she pushed herself hard against my hands. She closed her eyes, “That feels so nice”.

I let one hand trail down her stomach until I reached between her legs. She moved up closer so I could reach better and ended up with her breasts in my face. While I sucked a nipple into my mouth I began moving my fingers around on her pussy. She gasped, “Oh god. Maybe I should have let him”. She was getting very wet. I was torn between letting Mikey finish me and having Janelle slide down so I could slide into her. I then realized I could also reach Mikey with my other hand. She was facing away from me still bobbing up and down on my cock. As I reached out to rub Mikey’s pussy Janelle whispered, “Are you going to fuck me”?

“In a little bit”. My hand reached Mikey’s knee. I slowly caressed my way up from her knee until it reached her pussy. I moved it around her sparse pubic hair and then made my way to the lips of her pussy. She was as wet as Janelle. I pushed my finger against her lips and they parted. I put a finger inside her. It was so hot and tight. I had been making love to women these last several years that had all had multiple births. A really tight pussy was a distant memory, until now. She moaned and pushed back against my finger. I almost laughed as a thought flashed through my mind. It was something like a saying my mom used sometimes. Something about two bushes in the hand worth one bird.

I was trying to decide which girl should be fucked first when that familiar boiling and tingling feeling began in my balls. “I’m going to cum”.

Janelle moved down quickly to Mikey saying, “I want to see. Move your mouth”.

I thought, “Oh, please don’t move your mouth”.

Mikey moved her mouth away but continued moving her hand up and down my cock. It was just a few seconds longer before I felt the cum launching out of me. Both girls gave a squeal as the first stream shot up into the air. Mikey was leaning too far out and it hit her in the forehead and a second hit her in the cheek. Janelle laughed at her so Mikey pointed me at Janelle. A stream caught her in her in her mouth while she was laughing and another got her on the nose. Now Mikey was also laughing.

I watched as Janelle moved her tongue around in her mouth tasting my cum. Mikey, with cum dripping down her face, asked, “What does it taste like”?

“I don’t know how to describe it. It’s just different. Not bad. See for yourself. You have some on your lip”.

The cum had dripped down from her forehead to her lips. The shot that hit her cheek was now dripping down in a long cum rope to her breasts. Mikey stuck her tongue out and licked her lips and then sucked it into her mouth. I watched as she swished it around in her mouth and then swallowed.

They both moved up in the bed so that they were laying next to me. Janelle moved her hand very gently around in circles on my chest. “Terri said you first fucked her when she was thirteen. We are both fifteen. So we are old enough. Who do you want to fuck first? Mikey already got you to cum so I think it should be me”?

As I was trying to think of my answer the door swung open, “Janelle, Myoku, are you in here”? Sharon stepped into the room. Both girls jumped up leaving me flat on the bed with a semi-erect dick. My heart fell as I looked up. Both girls still had cum dripping down on their faces.

“What are you doing in here”? It must have been obvious what we had been doing. “Oh no. John is going to be so angry. How could you do this to me? You know he takes these things out on me”.

“It’s okay mom. John sent us over”.

“What do you mean he sent you over”?

“He said he had some things to do and told us to come over and be nice to Dan. He said we could learn some things”.

Sharon turned to me. Fortunately I was completely deflated by now. “Dan. Where is Terri”?

Why would she be asking about Terri? “I think she went swimming a while ago. Why”?

“I think you should go check on her”.

“I’m sure she is fine. She swims alone all the time. We all do”.

“Dan. That’s not the point. I think you should go check on her”.

Then it hit me. “Where’s John”?

“Go check on her”.

I jumped up and started to jog towards our swimming hole. I went just a few steps when I stopped and then ran up to the house. The gun closet was always kept locked now with so many kids around. It took me a minute to unlock it. I grabbed a revolver, checked to be sure it was loaded, relocked the cabinet and then started running for the swimming hole. As I got close I could hear yelling. I could not tell what was being said but it sounded like Terri and it was intense.

As I reached the rise above our spot I slowed down and then walked through the trees to where I could see. I wanted to know what I was walking in on. I could now hear Terri’s voice fairly clearly. “John. Stop! Get out of me”!

When I stepped around the last tree I could see them on the ground with their feet towards me. John was naked and on top of her. He was holding both of her arms stretched out with his and he had her body pinned to the ground with his. Terri had her legs up in the air and was trying to kick him while his hips were moving up and down driving his cock into her. I could hear him grunting as he rammed into her. He was raping her!

I quickly walked down and approached them from behind. As I got behind him Terri saw me but did not say anything. I put the barrel of the gun against the back of his neck and pulled the hammer back. With the click he froze.

“Get off her”.

He let go of her hands and rolled off to a side. Terri jumped up. I could see tears in her eyes but her face was cold. She reached out to me. “Give me the gun”.

“Go on back to the house”.

“Give me the gun. I told you I would have to kill him”.

“Go back and see mom”.

She looked down at John. “Don’t come near me again. If I see you again I will have a gun and I will kill you. Ask Dan if you don’t believe me”. Then she walked away.

I squatted down out of arms reach of him. The gun was still cocked. He looked very anxious. I was not sure of what I was going to do. “You know, I should have let her. The only reason I didn’t is that you have a family to take care of, though they might be better off without you. But that is not my decision to make”.

“Dan. I’m so sorry. I don’t know what came over me. It’s just that you have all these kids. We have been trying to have kids for this whole time and nothing. She is barren. She tells me the two kids are still too young and I have to wait. And then I see you here with all these…”. And then his voice trailed off. “I’m sorry. We’ll go”.

“No. It is too late for you to go right now. We thought you might settle in the valley here, be our neighbors, but now I thing it would be a good idea for you to move on much farther away. You will not have the time right now. Winter comes pretty quick here. You will stay around the bunkhouse. Sharon and the girls can work with us but you need to stay away. She meant it when she said she’d kill you. She is an excellent shot, better than I am and much more cold-blooded. You want to stay far away from her”.

I could see anger flare in his face and just as quickly pass. I’ll need to watch him. He does not like being told what to do. “Okay. That sounds like a good idea. We should move on as soon as the weather is good. We had not really planned on staying in this area anyway”.

I stood and took a couple of steps back. I looked at him for a few seconds trying to assess what was going through his mind but his face was blank. I turned and left him there, tapping the ground with one hand.

When I got back to the house Terri was in Mom’s bedroom; she was comforting Terri.

“They will be staying here through winter and then be leaving. They won’t be settling in the valley. I thought it would be best if they completely left the area”.

Mom nodded. “It’s too bad about the girls though. They would be welcome. I hate to think what it must be like living with him. I’ll miss Sharon. It was nice having someone around who knows the old world, someone to talk to about stuff”.

I left them there and returned to the workshop. When I walked in I could still detect the odor of sex in the air. The bed remained askew. I kept thinking back to Janelle’s question, “Who do you want to fuck first”? I wasn’t sure then. Now I knew it could not happen. They would be leaving in the spring.

The next two months were very tense. I saw little of John and avoided him when I did see him. Terri walked around everywhere. I suspected she was deliberately trying to have an encounter with John. She always carried a small bag with her. I had no doubt about what was in the bag. John had his meals with Sharon in their quarters in the bunkhouse. Janelle and Mikey came around to the barn a couple of times when they knew I was there and John was too far away to catch them. I gave them a brief hello and sent them on their way. It was not easy, as every time I saw them some very pleasurable memories would return. Unfortunately for me, it also brought back all the guilt I felt over my getting a blowjob while Terri was getting raped. Plus, the only reason for the blowjob was to give him the opportunity.

The two girls were very much like Terri in that they could be very quiet. They were always sneaking up on me. If I did not see them coming, my first clue they were even nearby would be Mikey or Janelle rubbing their breasts against my back.

“Whatcha doin”? They had done it again. I was sharpening our scythes and I almost cut myself when they startled me. I could feel Mikey behind me, or rather; I could feel her two nipples poking me in the back. I stepped forward to put some distance between us and then turned around. I had learned my lesson earlier about just turning around. The first time I had done that, I found Mikey in front of me pushing forward so that her breasts were right in my hands. She was not a tall girl. I knew she was somewhere under five feet. She was not that much taller than my oldest children.

“I’m just sharpening some tools. They get dull fast. You need to leave. I have told you too many times you cannot come in here with me. If your Dad sees you with me you know your mother has a hard time with him”. As I finished, I motioned that she should leave.

Her face turned dark, “Don’t call him my dad. He is not my dad”. She just looked at me and then turned and left without saying anything else. Boy, I hit a nerve there.

I stepped over to the door, staying in the shadows and watched her butt sway as she walked away. Thank god this erection did not start while we were back in the barn together. I might not have been able to get her to leave, or worse, I might not have let her leave.

When she was out of sight I returned and slowly worked through all the tools that needed sharpening. It was pretty much an excuse to be away from everyone. I knew the tension with John was spilling over to how I was reacting with my family. I had been short with several of the kids over the last week.

Just as it started getting dark Terri brought out some dinner for me. It was Saturday and our “guests” always came up to the house to eat with us on Saturdays. This gave her a good excuse not to be there when John arrived. She sat and tried to draw me out in conversation but I was not in the mood so she finally left. For the next hour I sat there and thought about the situation; how can it be resolved? I finally decided that since he is going to be here for a few more months maybe I should break the ice with him and we can make the best of a bad situation. I’ll try tomorrow.

It was long after dinner when I left the barn for the house. In the dark I thought I saw someone outside by the bunkhouse but it was hard to see. Thinking it might be John, I decided to go over and just say hello. Maybe that can be the first step to our being at least civil.

As I approached the building I could see there was no one outside. There were lights on inside but curtains covered the windows so I could not see anyone. I was just turning to leave when I heard a sharp sound from inside followed by a cry. It sounded like a hand slapping skin. I turned back around and stepped closer to the window. It was open because of the heat and I could hear low voices coming through it.

“I told you to stay away him”. It was John and I could hear the anger in his voice. He must have seen Mikey enter or leave the barn this afternoon. “I just wanted to talk to him”. It was Mikey. “No, Please”. I heard the slapping again followed by Mikey beginning to cry. “If you just wanted to talk then why were you naked”? I did not hear Mikey reply. She finally choked out “We all go around like that now. I didn’t do it for him”.

I heard a noise some distance behind me. When I turned around I saw Sharon and Janelle walking towards me. It was dark and I was far enough away that I did not think they saw me. I stepped behind a tree and waited for them to pass me and go inside.

When the door closed I started to walk away. I stopped when I heard Sharon exclaim, “Why did you hit this girl”? There were some low sounds that I could not make out then Sharon spoke up again, “Don’t raise your hand to me. You hit me again and I’ll never sleep with you again. And you’ll never get to sleep with these girls either”.

When I got to the house I kept what I had heard that night to myself. I said goodnight to the kids that were still up and then went into my bedroom. When I opened the door I could see someone in my bed. As I got closer I saw it was Terri. She had fallen asleep waiting for me. It was a bit of a surprise. She had not slept with me since John attacked her. I thought perhaps she was now put off by men, me included. I was also afraid she had found out about the diversion I had fallen for and blamed me. When I got in bed she turned over and put her arms around me. With a very sleepy voice she said, “I’ve missed you. It’s time for me to get pregnant but I’m tired. Do you mind if we wait until morning”?

I was relieved. She was not mad at me. “No, it’s fine. I’m just glad to have you here”. She quickly fell back asleep. With her head on my shoulder, I followed her a few minutes later.

The next morning she kept her promise. We made love very slowly. It started with us laying on our sides with her back to me. When I entered her she reached down and pushed me deeper into her with the flat of her hand. Once I was buried in her she gently grabbed my balls and pulled them towards her with each stroke. I had my arms around her and was caressing her from her breasts down into her pubic hair. While I was lightly running my fingers in her hair she reached up, took my hand and moved it lower. With her fingers on top of mine she pushed my fingers against her clitoris. It was plain that she did not want me to move my fingers. She wanted to move my fingers for me. As my fingers were moved around I could also feel my shaft against them, slowly sliding in and out of her. As the feeling was building up in me I wanted to speed up but I held back. I knew she needed this. The slow easy lovemaking was helping her.

A while later she turned over and then pulled at me to get on top of her. “I think you are ready now. I know I am. Give me a good fucking. I want to remember only you ever being on top of me”.

As I lifted up to get on top of her she pulled her feet up the bed towards her butt, bending her knees. She then spread her knees out until they were almost flat on the bed. I was still in a bit of a tender mood so I was moving slowly. I was finally on top of her but I had not entered her yet. My cock was right at the entrance. I could feel her pelvis straining to get down to me. With frustration in her voice she asked, “Did you not understand me? I said I wanted a good fucking. Now fuck me”.

I needed no further words of encouragement. I pushed forward and ran into her right up to the hilt. She gave a loud gasp. “That’s what I need. That feels so good. Not only did he make me mad, he has a little dick”.

I began thrusting faster in and out of her. She had both arms around me and was pulling me down tight against her on the bed. Each time I reached bottom she let out a gasp. I could feel her head move up on the bed as each stoke hit her. After another stroke I heard her say “Harder”.

I almost laughed. “I can’t get any harder”.

“I know. I’m the one down here. I meant fuck me harder”.

I picked up speed slamming hard into her. She had hooked her legs around my waist so she was tight against me as I pushed her down into the bed. The springs were really earning their pay. “Yes. That’s it Danny. More. More. Right……there”. She arched her body hard against mine and she dug her nails into my back. And then her pussy clamped down on me. That was all I could take. I pushed as deep as I could in her, and I did not so much release the sperm in her as it just all shot out of me into her. It was like one long continuous ejaculation.

We were both spent and just laid there trying to catch our breath. Finally she smiled and pushed at me. “Hey you need to get off of me. Remember I’m the little kid sister. You are squashing me”.

I let my weight sag down a bit. I was not above rising to the bait with my little sister. Even if I was on top of her with my cock still buried in her. But I was really happy to see that her sense of humor had returned.

“Hey, you are squashing me, I can’t breathe”.

But being the nice big brother I am, I lifted my weight off of her and then rolled over to the side. She followed me and put one leg up on mine and an arm across my chest. “That was very nice. I would let you do it to me again if I thought we would survive”.

Over the next few weeks, as summer was coming to an end, my bedroom became a case of musical chairs with Terri, Megan and Susan. They were all trying to get pregnant quickly so that they could deliver before summer began again. They had all learned that the heat of summer was not a great time to be walking around with a swollen belly. Mom and Shelly had delivered just a few months ago and wanted a break. I did not mind at all. Just the three women kept me busy day and night. I also learned to check the bed before I got in. On a couple of different occasions I found either Janelle or Mikey, naked in my bed, waiting for me. It took some real willpower to send them off. It is not easy to pull the covers back on your bed, find a beautiful naked, extremely willing, young girl, and then send her away.

The weather had just started to turn cooler when mom approached me and said I needed to get a few hunting trips in. I had not given it much thought during the summer. The arrival of our new people, and all the work we had this summer had completely occupied my mind. Mom suggested I take John. She said they could use the meat when they left and it would get him away for a while. That would allow Janelle, Mikey and Sharon to relax with the rest of our family before they had to leave.

I told her I would ask, but I didn’t know if he would take me up on it. We were not exactly hunting buddies. Since I was not so keen on the idea I did not search him out for a few days. When I finally explained mom’s idea to him, leaving out the part about the girls relaxing without him, he surprised me by saying “That’s a great idea. And she is right. We could use the meat when we leave. When do you want to go”?

I was not ready for that question. I had so firmly believed he would not be interested I had not given it any thought. “Well, I will have several trips this fall so it should be pretty soon”.

“How about we leave tomorrow”?

I did not really have any reason not to so I said, “Okay. I travel light. Change of clothes, sometimes we have bad weather this time of year. A pup tent. Food for a couple of days. We will leave around 5AM tomorrow. It will take us almost all day to get where I hunt. I use a bow by the way”.

He gave me a funny look. “I’ve never used a bow so I’ll just take my rifle. I’m pretty good with it. I’ll see you by the barn in the morning”. He left, walking towards the bunkhouse.

In the morning, as I began to get out of bed, Terri rolled over and gave me a hug. “Are you sure you don’t want me to shoot him now? It could save you a lot of trouble”.

I hugged her back. “No, if he needs shooting I’ll do it for you”.

She turned back over and with a very sleepy voice said, “Don’t take all my fun away”. I kissed her on the forehead and she was already back asleep.

It was going to be cold in the mountains so I dressed appropriately. When I left I found John sitting by the barn waiting for me. It looked like he had everything he needed in a backpack. As I walked up I said, “It looks like you’re ready. Lets’ hit the trail”.

Little was said as we walked. Daylight found us miles from home. As we walked around one ridge I pointed out a couple of roads John’s family would take on their way to the San Joaquin Valley. It was where he said they would be going come spring.

It was evening when we finally arrived where I usually camped. We made some dinner, put up our tents and I immediately went to sleep. The next morning I found John already up. “While you were sleeping this morning I saw a large herd of deer move across that side of the mountain over there and then go over the top. There were several really good sized deer in it. Now you are probably better with that bow than I am with this rifle,” though the look on his face said otherwise, “but since some of this meat is for us I would like to be responsible for getting a couple of the deer”.

It sounded reasonable to me. Any man would want to be responsible for providing for his family. “How do you want to do it”?

“Well I’ve been thinking about that for the last hour, waiting for you to wake”. He pointed over to where the deer had moved through. “It has not been very long. I bet they are on the other side of that ridge feeding. There is a technique that has worked really well for me in Virginia. There is a deer trail over there”. He pointed behind me. “I want you to follow it. I think it will take you right around to the other side of this mountain.
While you are doing that I’m going to move over to where the deer moved up. I’ll be positioned about fifty yards below that ridge. It should take you about an hour to get there. When you do, just start walking up the mountain making noise. The deer will hear you and flush out in front of you. When they break over the top I’ll pick a couple of good ones and drop them”.

I could not find any fault with his plan. It seemed very reasonable. I picked up my bow and quiver and took a step towards the deer trail. “Do you need those”? I stopped and turned. He was pointing at my bow.

“Yes. You never know what you’ll meet here. I lost my dad years ago to a bear. Plus, I might get a chance for something after you get yours. If they cross back over the ridge I might drop something”. He nodded and I turned and began following the trail.

It was a rough trail in parts but he was right, it seemed to be working its way horizontally around the mountain. If it stayed this way I should end up right where he wanted me. It took me almost exactly an hour to reach a point that I thought was equal to where he would be waiting on the other side. I began walking up, not trying to be quiet. I was not deliberately making noise but I knew I was being loud enough to flush any deer. It was very rough going on this side except for one part that flattened out. There was even a pretty deep stream that ran down the mountain. I was lucky I did not have to cross it to get where I wanted. The stream had steep sides and there was one waterfall drop that I could see where it fell onto rocks below. It looked rough but it was pretty.

As I continued making my way up I hoped I was moving the deer up. I had not seen anything or heard anything but this side was pretty heavily wooded. With my luck they probably moved sideways around the mountain instead of going back over the top. I had reached a point about sixty yards from the top when I stopped and leaned against a tree for a breather. The steep climb had really tired me out. I was just getting ready to push off and resume my climb when suddenly the tree I was leaning against exploded next to my face. My face was peppered with bark as I fell backwards on the ground. Just a moment later the sound of the rifle shot rolled down to me. Damn. He’s not a hunter. He shoots at any movement. What is he doing on this side? Did I take too long climbing up?

I was trying to blink pieces of bark out of my eyes when I heard his voice, “Dan? Are you okay? Where are you”?

Laying on my back I called out to him, “You dumb shit! That was not a deer. You almost hit me”. I was almost able to see again. I began rolling over so I could get up.

His voice seemed closer now as he called out to me, “Are you okay? I thought I saw a deer. I didn’t hit you did I? Stand up so I can see you”?

I stood up and looked up the hill to see where he was. “No, you did not hit me. I’m okay. I just got hit with some bark”. I knew he was not too far away by the sound of his voice earlier, but I could not see him walking down towards me. As I scanned above me I saw something flash to one side. I looked closer and I spotted John standing against a tree. Then I saw what flashed. He had the rifle up pointed at me. It was the sun reflecting off the scope that I saw. I jumped towards the tree and actually heard the shot pass right next to my cheek. As the sound of the shot came to me I was moving from tree to tree working my way back downhill. I took a chance after about twenty five yards and looked back to see him working his way downhill after me. When he saw me stop and look back he quickly raised the rifle but I moved into some dense trees so he did not have a clear shot.

A couple of times the trees thinned out and he took a quick shot at me. I heard the shell hit trees but I was lucky so far. He must have lost me a couple of times as he would call out to me to try and get me to reveal where I was. The last time he was really close to me. “Dan, you might as well come out. I’ll get you eventually. If you come out now and don’t make me work too hard I’ll make it easy on you. One shot. You won’t even feel it. You make me run you down this mountain and it will just make me mad. Don’t be like Frank. He made me work. I was not very nice to him in the end. I’ll put a couple in your legs and arms. Then I’ll gut shoot you and just leave you here. You might even meet that bear that got your father”.

Who the hell is Frank? Then I remembered Terri’s story. John had gone hunting with Sharon’s husband and he did not return.

Very quietly I began moving down again. From the sound I knew I was near the stream. Maybe it would give me a way out. When I reached it I saw that it would be no help. The chasm was too wide to jump across and the sides were too steep to get down. Then an idea came to me. I took the quiver off my belt. I took most the arrows out and spread them around on the ground like they had fallen. I kept five of the arrows and dropped the quiver on the ground. Looking up and down the stream I picked the high side as having the best field of view. I walked up slowly making sure I was not leaving tracks. I found a spot between two trees that shielded me pretty well but still left me with a good view of where I had dropped the arrows.

When I heard the first twig break I took a step back between the trees, notched an arrow and pulled the string back to my cheek. I knew I would have to hold it until he showed himself. I could not risk him seeing any movement. After a minute there was no sign of him. My arms were beginning to burn. He must have gone another way and is not coming here at all. Just as I was about to lower the bow John stepped out from behind a tree. How long had he been standing there? He walked over to the side of the stream and looked down. He stepped back, picked up a couple of arrows and then tossed them over the side down into the water. “Well Dan, you should have listened to me. I told you I would have given you an easier way out. A fall down into those rocks couldn’t have been much fun”. And then he laughed.

I was not totally sure I could do it until he laughed. I took careful aim. It was a level shot, no wind and I had his side towards me. It was a tight shot but I was pretty good. He had stepped back from the edge and was now pissing on a tree. The arrow took him through the neck and buried itself deep in the tree. I notched another arrow and stepped out from the trees. He must have heard me because he was trying to turn his head to see me. However the arrow through his neck would not let him. I let another go and it took him deep in the side. He sagged with that hit, the arrow through his neck broke and he fell into a sitting position against the tree.

When I got up to him his eyes followed me but he was unable to talk. I was fine with that. There was nothing he had to say that I was interested in. His eyes began to sink down. “John. John, look at me”. His eyes rose slowly back up to mine. “I just wanted you to know something before you die. The first arrow was for me. The second was for Terri. And I have to tell you. She is going to be pretty mad at me when I get back home and she finds out she is not going to get to shoot you after all”.

I squatted down in front of him and waited. It did not take long. It was less than a minute before the life faded out of his eyes. I picked up my quiver, replaced the arrows and began working my way back to camp. I slept well that night. The next day I got a deer the first thing in the morning and then started home.

When I was in sight of the house it was the kids that saw me first. A bunch came out and tackled me, taking me to the ground in their welcome home. After some wrestling I had them take the meat over to the meat house to be put away. When I got to the porch I found Mom and Terri sitting in their rocking chairs. They started to say hello as I approached, but they must have seen something in my face and they stopped. They looked around me and Mom finally asked, “John”?

I said simply, “He didn’t make it”.

Terri smiled. Mom did not say anything for a while, she just looked at me. Finally she must have decided I was okay. “Come on inside. Sharon and the girls are in the kitchen canning fruit to take with them next spring. Let’s let them know they won’t be leaving after all”.


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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 11:40
    I like that one. not a whole lot of sex but that was a damn good story line m8. im really enjoying these stories. good setup for when he killed John.

    Nice work 9/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 12:17
    Great story mate

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    22.06.2006 12:23
    love your stories but the need more sex

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    22.06.2006 12:42
    It's a rarity when I want to write an episode of a story found here. Not that I'm nearly talented enough to pull such a stunt off, but, like "reader" above said, it is a gteat story line. You have just the right element of surprise and sex. Thanks.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 13:06
    Yeah these are great stories not a lot of sex but thats fine. The sex scenes in the story are plenty. Keep up the great writing and finsih up your next chapter soon.

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    22.06.2006 13:18
    You did a really good job, not as good as the others because of John. But i dont think any one liked him to start with. Great story I just really hate him so much. Because you made me hate him so much that i dont like the story as much as the first three i'll still give you a 10/10. It is a really good pice of work much better than I could ever do. Would have been better if you killed the asshole at the start. Please next time no assholes. Make it more like the first three.



    To sum it up great series not such a great chapter because of the great job you did on the asshole and how much you made me hate him.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 13:22
    this story is good but seriously its a sex story it should have more sex in it

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 14:33
    Great storyline dont try sticking more sex in just let it go with th flow dont kill it u r an awsome writer 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 15:21
    great story

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 15:30
    Excellent story, I like the fact that it's not just about sex. You're an excellent writer. 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 15:41
    That story was definetely the greatest out of the four, a bit predictable, yes, but you used classic techniques in distracting/throwing off the reader, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, this is definetely the best submission I've read on this site, keep it up.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 16:06
    awesome story, many more chapters to come! and even though it isnt all sex, its teh best story i have read on this site

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 16:22
    usualy i just read these stories for the sex but this was a geniunely good story i had me interested i hope you continue it and you are a fantastic writer

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 16:31
    awsome story, keep them coming. 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 16:39
    awsome story// and now he has 2 diff girls in the gene pool

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 17:05
    jjust damn good

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 18:25
    wow this is one of the best stories i have ever read on here. many of them are short, and pretty boring, but this one actually has a good, and believable storyline... i think you could easily write a couple books, if they are anything like this, and make some good money. Definately a 10/10... one of the few ones out there,.. keep up the awesome work J.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 18:41
    Well done!

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 19:42
    Well done. Definitely a step above most of this site's material. Its nice actually seeing a plot in a story, but try disguising the ending a little more next time. It was pretty obvious.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 20:14
    Awsome

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 20:14
    whens part 5 coming

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    22.06.2006 20:26
    this story is great keep them comming

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 20:40
    Great story. Keep up the great writing. 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 20:45
    I agree, there are alot of chapters left is this story!

    Keep them coming, and I'll keep reading them.

    10/10

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 21:03
    Wow, man. You are one hell of a writer. Write some books, get rich. Just keep posting here so I dont have to pay. ^_^

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 21:16
    very nice man...loved it..a combination of God of war and playboy

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    22.06.2006 21:27
    10/10 keep em coming this is great even though its fiction thats good for that john fag he deserves that shit

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    22.06.2006 21:48
    definatly bool material would love to see the next part of the story almost forgot it didnt actually happen

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    22.06.2006 21:53
    One of the best stories i've ever read in my life!!!! WTG. keep writing. u are one of the best writers on here. love it. keep it up. part 5 soon?!?!?!?

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 22:35
    How long 'till the next chapter?

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    22.06.2006 22:50
    You are a great writer, and this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I really like how you can successfully combine erotica with a plot.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 23:30
    Fantastic story, cant wait for the next chapter. 10/10

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    22.06.2006 23:40
    exellent story! would be better if john nicked him, but oh well... still good!

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    READER 500
    22.06.2006 23:54
    loved em all so far keep em comin.. love these stories

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    22.06.2006 23:55
    Awesome Story man....Keep it up

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    23.06.2006 00:05
    im not even reading this for the sex, its just a good story,

    20/10

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    23.06.2006 00:15
    I've read the entire series so far. Good story mate. =) 10/10

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    23.06.2006 00:18
    Alright, You are an Awesome authoer. I've read all of your stories..but that blow job scene, I can't help but notice it is highly similar, if not the exact same as one from your other story. Even though I like the scene, i'd watch things like that a bit better man. Keep up the good work.

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    23.06.2006 00:38
    make capter 5 please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2006 00:46
    same with the last~ great work 10/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 01:03
    dude you should think of makiing this into a novel...

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    23.06.2006 01:32
    +that was a peretty good story keep it up ..... write part five soon...10/10

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 01:38
    Excellent

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 01:42
    you never fail to amaze me. this is way above anything else i've seen here.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 01:49
    Man you have to write another chapter...that might be the best story i've ever read.....ever

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 01:55
    forget the sex! good story, write a book

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2006 02:07
    Excellent reading stuff. Go on! Go on!



    Cheers,



    Rob

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2006 02:08
    Good Plot, But Like Chapter 2, Not Enough Sex. Also A Little Name Confusion. ADD FOOT FETISH STUFF

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    23.06.2006 03:02
    Wow what a great Story mate! I only wanted to read the first chapter and go to bed but no you had to write a master peice that i want to read more of! Great story very well created, can't wait to read more

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 03:12
    make a novel

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 03:27
    Nice, not enough sex but Im cool with that :D. Pretty predictable that John was gonna try and kill Danny and that Danny would kill him but...10/10 ^^

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 03:49
    I agree with the person below me. With your enthusiasm in these stories you could easily make a fortune writing these types of novels. This easily earns 10/10 in my book and anyone that doesn't give 10/10 deserves to be shot....like john... Whatever you do, keep with your instinct. Do not let other peoples opinions lead you or else they will screw up your writing.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 03:56
    I'm not even reading this as a sex story anymore, more like a great novel. Keep the chapters coming. I love it! :D

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 04:26
    I love your stories more than any others on this site. They have stories in them, which having just the right amount of erotica. If you were to take some college english and grammer classes - not that your grammer and english are poor - I'm sure you actually could write an excellent erotic novel. Cheers and keep writing!

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 05:58
    I bet this could be continued and turned into a great novel

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 06:24
    excellent stuff, keep it up even although there is not that much sex, it is still excellent

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 09:08
    i wouldnt have given the stupid bastard a chance to go hunting to kill him i'd have done it right then when he raped the girl . keep the stories coming but now put some more sex into it, now that he is dead and no threat to you or your family .

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 09:53
    great work man. keep up the great story. i agree with Morphs!

    ~~Fluffy

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 11:13
    good shit man...good way to get more pussy in the story how many years have passed in the story now???

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 12:08
    this a great story i agree with fluffy! i really am waiting for part five!

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 13:35
    please i need more storys please theyre alsome even w/tout the sex

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2006 13:45
    Hi I`m Kathy, I loved it.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 13:52
    please hurry with the next part im dying

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 14:26
    who dares give this story anything less than a 10?

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 14:37
    If the rest of the series is like the first four chapters, you'll have youself a twelve star story in a ten star world. KEEPEM CUMMMMMMMING!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 15:11
    Excellent story. Morphs is right. This is a ripping good novel. Seriousl think of publishing. i'd buy it.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 19:02
    such a good story..can u put some more sex in the next one, and mayb the ages of everyone too..that has me lost

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 20:24
    Twst&Dmtd4Lfe....back at you peeps...............

    (JMil... are most deffinently above & beyond

    all these other writers..........{chapter5}... you say all the ages + get sharon involved =

    make it 4some => dan,her,her 2 kids...........

    right now as it stands the best scene = terri's

    {{first time}}......you gotta do better then that

    scene

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 20:34
    Add Foot Fetish Stuff

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 21:41
    man, this is one of the few stories that make reading XXX Stuff worth it, like a few have said before me even without the sex this story is great ! keep em coming.. =)

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 22:37
    Outstanding writing. I have never given a ten to anyone. However I have given each of your stories a 10. I don't even give my own a ten

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 22:41
    hey these are really good but put more sex and more detail into the sex im not 1 to telll u wat to write cause i cant write for shit but it is fucking amazing

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    READER 500
    23.06.2006 23:22
    Good job JMiller. I look forward to the novel or movie. Have someone help you with the script if need be and send it to one of the film festivals. There are a lot of hungry directors out there.

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 00:15
    Damn good story! You need like ...uh ... 10 more chapters. Get his kids into it once they are a bit older!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2006 00:32
    i love the stories!! keep em coming!

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 01:22
    awesome awesome awesome

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 01:31
    great story and i personally like the sex to story ratio i can't stand stories where all it is is fuck fuck fuck keep up the plot i enjoy a good story

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 02:10
    dude ferget the people saying more sex, theres plenty of hardcore stories out there, keep this the treasure that it is. tasteful, and sexy at the same time.

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 03:59
    UR SO FUCKIN AWESOME DUDE THESE STORYS ARE FUCKIN GREAT. N YEAH IM DEFINETLY WANT 2 SEE HIM FUCK THOSE TWO FOSTER BITCHES LOL

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 05:30
    More

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 16:00
    Dude, I love you, This is the best story and I said that chapter three was the best to the point, and this is even better, hurry up and post chapter 5..."The Demon" Xexx Demone

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 18:32
    DUDE YOU ARE the man 10/10 all 4 times 5 please

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 19:48
    U are the best writer ever i give u 10/10

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 21:47
    Awsome!!!! Need some more and possibly let the Sisters and new comers develop some personality in the sack other than just regular sex. Maybe a trip to town via the porn shop and unlimited possibilities after that. Anyway great read KEEP IT UP!!!!

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 21:55
    What a great story 10/10

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    READER 500
    24.06.2006 22:24
    also predictable that it was a diversion and john would be raping terri

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2006 22:34
    I love your stories. you need to write some books. Its erotic stories, but they have an awesome theme and its entertaining! ha

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2006 23:39
    Chapter 5. Right now.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 01:44
    100%

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    READER 500
    25.06.2006 02:28
    These stories are amazing, simply amazing 21/10



    Please post all the stories, I love them and have to read them.

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    READER 500
    25.06.2006 03:35
    Every damn story you write is so well done that you have me hooked. Can't wait for chapter 5 and hopefully many, many more. Hey, with all those girls around, how about a little lesbian action on the side.

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    READER 500
    25.06.2006 04:33
    Nice I've read alot on here and yours is the bestt all of it keep going i hope there alor more i get sad whne it ensdds

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 04:34
    shit! so damn good!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 05:37
    holy shit... you should right real books and not just the short storys you have some real talent

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 09:54
    miraculous man.........u keep the reader so entrenched in the story..........u really should b a proffesional

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 21:00
    I got bored after the first sentence

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    READER 500
    25.06.2006 21:10
    I love 1,2,3, and 4. perfect. u got skillz make more more more!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 21:26
    You definately have the potential to be an author.

    I'd definately buy the book :)

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    READER 500
    25.06.2006 22:34
    great story. if u write a book i will definitely buy it. 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2006 23:53
    FUCKING POST 5, god damnit, you have them all written, just fucking post them

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 01:07
    I actualy found myself skipping over the last few sex scenes to read more of the story... Thats how good this was. Hell if i were you I'd take out the scenes and publish this story. Ya know, clean it up a bit, more people need to read this. Glad i'm a pervert and got to experience this story. I hope theres another story.

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 01:40
    dude I don't think I even read the sex scenes.great story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 02:17
    Well written, tense story. However, who reads these for the run-of-the mill stories. It is sex ad more sex that we are looking for, and this story was woefully lacking in same. What sex it did have was nice, but there just was not enough ot it.

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 02:46
    WOAH!!!!!! excellent. story 1 got me interested in the naughty pleasure but the story line got me hooked. keep em comming !!!!!!

    RATED ®

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 09:26
    dude you are amazing...this is the first series of sex stories..that without even having constant sex,,kept me hooked...you should make a book...there is actual written stuff out there like this...make some money MAN!!

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 13:39
    awesome story wheres part five i need part 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 14:24
    FUCKING POST 5, GOD DAMNIT, YOU HAVE THEM ALL WRITTEN, JUST FUCKING POST THEM

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 15:06
    I only managed to read not even half of this story cos it is too long. I wanted to stop reading after part 3 but couldn't and its now way past 3 in the morning and I really need to get up early to go work.



    after reading these comments I am more relentant to stop reading halfway. but I really have to. I agree with them that you should publish a book about this story. you can make it into 2 version one which is clean and another just let it be the same.



    it is your choice. it would be a pity if you I had to pay to read it but hey I can't be that selfish.

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 17:04
    Wow amazing your writing style is excellent, pls cont

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 17:24
    i hope you have this copywrited because im sure someone is trying to steal this right now

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 18:17
    I occasionally read the comments looking for feedback about what I'm doing right or wrong. It is a learning process. I was quite surprised to learn from the reader a few comments below that I had already written all the chapters and that I should just post them. Silly me, I thought I was still working on five. It is about finished.



    I broke the chapters where I thought it was logical. Perhaps that is not such a good idea. It does create some long chapters.



    For those readers who say the stories need constant sex the only thing I can think of suggesting is, don't read my stories. I try to stay a bit more realistic. Though that is a stretch to say my stories are realistic.



    Oops, event my comments are getting too long.

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 22:09
    i liked the story so much i had to print it so my wife could read it. i like that its not just a sucky fucky story makes it much better. i went through all the old story find anything by you because i like the way you write keep up the good work.

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    READER 500
    26.06.2006 22:52
    keep it up i love it DON'T add constant sex keep it up and POST PART 5 lol

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 23:06
    Great story, i saw it coming that john was going to attack dan, no constant sex, and some interesting storyline

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    READER 500
    27.06.2006 01:24
    iat first i was just reading this 4 fun, but after "doing my stuff"in #1i was hooked as well,i ended up reading the whole thingnot for the sex but because i relly liked the book!!! o god i need more!!!

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    READER 500
    27.06.2006 01:41
    Well If It Isn't Done, Write Fucking Faster, And Make It Longer Dipshit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 01:57
    It's great man. Like they said, it's not a sex story for me any more. It's really great. Keep them coming. Im dying for 5.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 03:57
    I have to say that I love your stories. Please keep wrighting.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 10:40
    You not only have a superb imagination, but you also know your writing AND spelling. Please let us have more of that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 11:09
    Hey man, superb work!

    I agree with the guy who posted at "06-26-06 - 17:24"

    I'm sure many people are stealing this and reposting it somewhere this else.

    This is brilliant work, a bit of editorial work (there were some words that seemed left out) and this could be a novel! I know I'd definately read it!

    I'm dying for chapter five!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 11:54
    nice blend of science fiction and sex

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 13:36
    This is really great. Not only does it have good sexual references and stuff, but the plot is great! I really hope you make a chapter 5! You are a very good writer and i hope you do well if you ever try to publish anything in a book or anything unless you already have!

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    READER 500
    27.06.2006 15:01
    make ch 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2006 20:34
    hurry up with chapter 5 man i cant wait much longer. Put more megan in it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 01:01
    this is a fabulous story, not even just a sex story, it's just a great story.



    if i had both hands free, i would applaud you, sir.

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    READER 500
    28.06.2006 03:03
    loveee the stories .. they're great .. keep going !

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 09:15
    hurry up with chapter 5 mannnnn

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 14:10
    I'm finally able to read this chapter wanted to finish reading it soon but am only able to do it now. good job on the story line I really feel the standards of the stories posted are getting higher with writers like you around.

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    READER 500
    28.06.2006 15:03
    It's nice to find a well written story that's long, but not tedious; has likeable and round characters; and isn't just the repetition of the same words and phrases over and over



    Good job!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 15:13
    Good story, when will Dan start on his tribe?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 15:36
    Like always, keep writing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 19:20
    very good, bring on chapter 5 :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 23:10
    Wheres chapter 5? come on, we're dying to read more....i've been coming back to this site everyday 5 times a day hoping to see the sequel

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 00:22
    masterful writing. even with little sex, you kept me glued to my screen.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 03:48
    wow i forget i was suppose to be reading a dirty story shit man ur good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 05:37
    Loved it, but what I didn't understand.. The two arrows part? I only read one arrow.. ~.~.. Could be my tiredness.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 08:53
    please im dieing for chapter 5. REALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 09:24
    hurry the fuck up with chapter 5 :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 09:58
    Where is chapter 5?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 11:21
    i loved the stories wish you would right more to finish them off thanks

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 13:18
    Christ, stop making us beg! Bring it on!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 15:28
    Please give us more i hate begging.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2006 19:48
    uhhh hurry up with chapter 5 we shouldnt have to wait. i love these stories to much to wait

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2006 02:43
    Wow, I never thought I'd say this, but I'm readin these more for the story than the fuckin'!

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 03:49
    I have ALWAYS been a big fan of the Post Apoc, and have began to write some myself, but this shit is amazing, As a few other posted, I forgot I was reading a dirty story. Very well done. KEEP WRITING!!!

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 09:47
    need more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2006 17:13
    An amazing post-apocalyptic story with the added bonus of a little sex, not the other way around. That's the way it should be! Very good job.

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 20:33
    part5

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 22:47
    Incest is sick..but this...this makes since. They are the last and are trying to restart, nicly done. (Friend informed me of this, wasnt thrilled at the incest)

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 22:48
    make some more rite fukin now b4 i have a heart attack these questions iz burnin in ma mind!!! Will dan eva fuk mike an da other gurl who will get it first will he fuk da lady to ? will i eat oatmeal tomrrow morin 4 breakfast or sum hot yummy cum from ma boyfriend am i done cumming from this story all these i shall neva no till it happens an i hope dats very soon cept da las part lol i cant get enuff make more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!









    ... sighned,

    hungry for more!!!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2006 13:22
    more......more.....more....... i want more......

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 13:44
    Part 5,6,7,8,..... etc Plssssssssssssssssss dont stop ,. u r so god damn good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 16:33
    omfg hurry up whats taking so long for chapter 5

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 21:06
    wow amazing!! As a female i loved the relationship between terri and danny. It wasnt just plain fuck it was romantic and sexy. LOVED IT. 10/10 all the way!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2006 21:25
    great write mor please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2006 23:30
    Hurry The Fuck Up With Chapter 5 You Piece Of Nigger Shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 11:51
    wtf is taking so long

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 14:15
    yeah answer the call of the crowd. post chapter 5 the suspense is actually killing my brain cells.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 16:20
    I thought this was supposed to be a SEX story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 16:44
    c'mon dude wtf post that shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2006 21:58
    Man, these stories are GREAT.

    You really need to keep writing. chapter 5. NOW!

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    READER 500
    03.07.2006 00:33
    OMG I KEEP POSTIN BOUT DIS STORY CUZ I LOVED IT SOOOOOO MUCH AN HELL DID IT TURN ME ON MAKE CHAPTER 5 B4 I DIE OF ANTICIPATION IM BEGGIN IM ADDICTED TO DIS LIKE I AM WIT CRISPY CREME DOUGHTNUTS *COUGH* MADE OF CRACK *COUGH* NEWAYZ PLLLLLZZZ DUN STOP IT FEELZ SO GOOD DUN MAKE ME BEG FOR IT O YEAH GIVE IT 2 ME AN I MEAN CHAPTA FIVE ........... YA NASTYZ!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 08:44
    WHAT THE FUCK IS TAKINE SO LONG WE HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EVER!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 10:35
    still waiting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 11:00
    -qktxmj

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 11:18
    It is posted. Just waiting for the review.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 13:02
    when the hell is chapter 5 gonna be posted im am ding for it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 19:59
    more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.07.2006 20:20
    how long does it take to be reviewed

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2006 01:58
    HEHE :) that dude can write in pornmagazines :D

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2006 03:26
    so wheres 5 6 7 and so on come on man

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2006 03:45
    Take your time m8 these stories KICK ASS!

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    READER 500
    04.07.2006 18:18
    Jmiller iz da fukin bomb his storysz fukin rock so fuk w00t i like da word fuk fuk fuk fuk fukin fuker fuk fuk fuk fuk kiss ass fuk!!!!

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    READER 500
    05.07.2006 08:27
    great story, hard to look away from it, nice touch with john, though his excuse for frank was really transparent after you learned his personality, i was suspicious of the jack ass from the beginning, before terri said anything, in any situation of similar circumstance, no man would let the women stand in front of him in that manner, unless he wanted them there for human shielding, and in my opinion, that means he is not on the level, in any way fashion or form, and should be suspect, and subject to immediate disapproval.... i woulda handled it by talking to him right after terri had said john was looking at her in that manner, and when jenelle and myoku came into the workshop and said that john had "sent" them over, i would have instantly put 2 and 2 together and shot the fucker in the head..... buh then again, i jump to conclusions quickly, though 98% of the time i'm right, and if i'm uncertain, i wait jus long enough to think the truth out

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    READER 500
    05.07.2006 10:39
    sweet shit but you got the names mixed up a little 10/10

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    READER 500
    05.07.2006 18:07
    i have a question

    WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 5,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2006 22:27
    i need to see 6 ...this is to much of a cliff hanger i need to see that threesome

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    READER 500
    05.07.2006 22:42
    Do more Great story!! maybe try to stab her with a knife or cut her fingers off maybe even slice her tits off not that be awsome. mr. snuff

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2006 22:45
    wtf were is chapter 5 why do we have to wait

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.07.2006 00:52
    Jmiller wat iz a review how long iz it gon take

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.07.2006 01:15
    I LOVE YOU SHANNON ^,^

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2006 04:52
    JHON GOT FREAKING OWNED!!!!!! sex was good too.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.07.2006 00:47
    Wow man, this is BY FAR the best series i have read on this site, i am only on this 4th chapter, just finished and i am amazed by how good this story is. I am less interested with the sex and more with the story. I am probobly going to end up reading these all night and end up waking up at noon tomorow. I can't wait until i read the rest, i hope they are as good as the first 4! Great job again, 10/10!

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    READER 500
    15.07.2006 23:35
    this series is the shit man. I didn't right any comments in the previous stories but if i do recall i found some of it a little far fetched. Any ways i agree with some of the comments for chapter 3 this is a sex story site so the stories should be about sex. Don't get me wrong the stories are great and im about to move on to chapter 5. keep on writin and maybe u should publish the story.

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    READER 500
    21.07.2006 01:42
    well the sex is not there as much as some would like but im hooked on it i just cant stop reading it. this is my first coment and i agree with the reader that you should get a publisher on this one.----------10/10 keep going.

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    READER 500
    29.07.2006 19:42
    that was a damn good story. a little light on the sex, but pretty damn good in literary terms, i was on the edge of my seat

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    READER 500
    30.07.2006 16:30
    dude keep writeing omfg its like such a story that you almost want to skip some of the sex parts

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.08.2006 23:51
    very boring, too long of stuff about John and going hunting who cares about that it is suppose to be about sex, with the girls not about hunting. also learn how to spell. why make this story so long, worse story ever

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    READER 500
    23.08.2006 02:50
    this is amazing

    10/10

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    READER 500
    14.09.2006 04:43
    Dude I would fuckin by tha book and tha hole collection u seriously need to make a novel

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.09.2006 00:57
    This is one amazing story!! i can't wait to find the first chapters and then return to the one after this. You DEF should be published!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.10.2006 15:41
    it was a bomb ass fucking story but it deffinetly needs more sex

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    READER 500
    20.10.2006 03:12
    really good series. I would consider getting it published but I don't think it would because of the incest. Reminds me of the post man a lot for some reason....

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    READER 500
    04.11.2006 03:41
    nice i liked how u made it a killing story 2 im hooked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.11.2006 13:44
    dude your a bitching writer n yes you should be published save some of these replies and send them with your story to an editer, try them all i'm sure 1 will publish you, you deserve to get paid for what you do

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    READER 500
    30.11.2006 19:11
    YEAH!!!, kill that motherfucker; I loved the way you got rid of john, the story rocks, I'll keep reading it

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    READER 500
    02.12.2006 01:17
    amazing, simply amazing.... 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.12.2006 23:38
    lol It's the feel good porno story of the summer! 10/10 compared to some of the god awful shit that you can find on here.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.12.2006 00:56
    this story is great simply put

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    READER 500
    25.12.2006 03:43
    Well, you are turning into quite the novelist, I tell ya, if you took the porn out, you could sell this stuff, Great job, Good Porn, but great story. Two thumbs up! changed my rating again to a 9.5/10 (thats the most I have ever given anyone.)

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    READER 500
    25.12.2006 04:10
    when you do publish, you should use your pen name, otherwise, everyone here will know who you are. Change the fact that all the girls are his sister, and you could have a great movie here.

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    READER 500
    31.12.2006 16:17
    Love it. 10/10

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    READER 500
    03.01.2007 22:13
    try describing da sex more, great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2007 06:17
    Awsome story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.01.2007 02:23
    This story is Terriffic! I have read many books over the past 55 years and this is one of the best.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.02.2007 21:27
    Acooding to your last chapter Mary didnt ask to talk to the people

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.02.2007 11:36
    you should have had Dan chop of John's dick and feed it to a wolf

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.02.2007 19:15
    great story! I came her to read some sex stories but this is ten times better.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.02.2007 01:22
    Excellent!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2007 15:59
    reader 12 25 06 -03 43 if he took out all the porn then there would be no story good story though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2007 05:32
    The second arrow should have cut through his balls or dick or something.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 06:46
    10/10 ill be reading the next one soon :] ive read all the previous ones your eraly good

    -mary ann

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2007 18:56
    this sTory is good but there shouLdve been more sex

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.04.2007 05:23
    kickass action

    Jim

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2007 11:56
    Danny Gets so much action

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    READER 500
    10.04.2007 08:02
    okay holy shit..should you be writin g a book with this shit..this better then most authors i have read, inculding ones that are about sex. and thats another thing, this is a story, not just a page about some chick getting fucked. this is amazing!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2007 15:18
    if dan wanted to kill him then why didn't he do it when he was up and the other guy was sleeping. just doesn't make sense.

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    READER 500
    17.04.2007 02:41
    I think John waited till after Dan was awake because chasing Dan gives him a bigger thrill.

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    READER 500
    01.05.2007 00:00
    great

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2007 11:59
    you write some great stories!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2007 16:36
    The second arrow should have cut through his balls or dick or something.





    ROFL!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2007 22:49
    ok....where the fuck did they find food for 23 kids not including every1 else....?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2007 06:59
    love this one to



    name is RecSniper

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.11.2007 00:14
    Different to the previous chapters, but i like it. It has a good story line as well as some fantastic sex scenes! keep up the good writing

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    READER 500
    23.03.2008 22:54
    duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude, you are a phenomonal writer, you truely have an amazing gift, great work, and i'm glad all ur chapters dont just include danny nailing on of his sisters. makes it seem more like a book with sex in it, rather than sexstories plain and simple.





    how come all the terms we use for sex are tools and crap i.e. hammer, nail, bang, drill, screw, etc. im mean seriously, who came up with that shit

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    READER 500
    20.04.2008 15:31
    A great chapter in a great piece of writing. Have read many books from well known authors, that don't come close to the standard of this.

    10/10 and would have given more if it would let me.

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    READER 500
    20.04.2008 18:46
    yea i agree the second arrow should have cut through his dick and balls for raping terri lol fantastic writing love these chapters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2008 03:28
    I would just like to say that this is the first chapter I have commented. But I love every story u have written and these are amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2008 08:45
    You have a gift.
    This is far beyond any series of stories that can be found ANYWHERE.
    You my friend should write books... Well with all the elements of incest, and underage sex maybe not. But you get the point.

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  • yay%21
    14.07.2008 21:08
    yay, nice stories, i like this series, cuz its not like just ONLY about sex, like most of the other stories, but it actually has like a plot, and like real life and stuff, nice storyies' phenomanal!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2008 00:44
    U should make a movie. LOL

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  • Frede
    02.11.2008 01:21
    love your stories man. you'll get my positive vote anytime.. keep up the good work! you''ll get 15/10 for the amazing story.. and 9/10 for the spelling, saw some mistakes, but who cares? your my guru! xD i also love your stories "Stormy Nights" you are making a 3rd right?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2008 17:10
    I agree! you should make a movie!!! i love your stories!

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  • BabiiGuRL
    23.01.2009 18:46
    i love these chapters , ive been readin them for like 3 days now and im only on 4 lol but omg for stormy nights r u making a 3rd?!?!?! cuz i love those, when i first started readin these i was like wat the hell i thought this was a sex story not a novel lol but i liked it soooo im still readin =D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.04.2009 23:17
    haha i totally agree with babi girl : P but im reading it because this shit is hot and has a good plot


    heffer

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2009 13:15
    fantastic story

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  • Reading...
    27.05.2009 15:05
    It's like a porn star and a creative fiction rider did it and made a baby, and that baby was you (sorry for the pun).
    There are a couple of spelling and grammar errors here that kind of detracted from the story a bit, but mostly, it was good. i prefer to think of this as really good story with a lot of sex in it rather than a porn with a lot of story. >.>

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2009 18:20
    holy shit this is a great series cant wait to read the rest of them but you definetly need to make more chapters for stormy night you left off perfectly for them and the first two were fucking brilliant man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 06:34
    Man that's a great story. So well written

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  • Greg73
    27.05.2010 13:40
    I must agree with the one called Reading... This is too...Epic to be a sex story. Seems more like a book that would be fine for children except, well...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2010 10:13
    epic story and yes a movie would fucking rule

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2011 01:18
    as soon as the girl,Micky and Janalle said "John sent us over here to be friendly" i was like Terri is in trouble then when Dan go to the forest i was like SHOOT THE MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2011 20:43
    Absolutely amazingly written.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.02.2014 01:49
    Amazing job, the erotic parts are just the icing on the cake! !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2014 05:22
    This is a breath of fresh air compared to some of the other stories out there. Plenty of sexy parts and lots of action to keep me on the edge of my seat. Very well written by the way. Keep up the great work. I'm officially hooked on the stories!

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  • Muke+Hunt+Hz
    01.11.2014 03:56
    This is a GREAT story! I was hoping that Terry would have suspected John and followed with her rifle; taking out John as he tried to kill Dan, but the arrow through the neck was EPIC!

    Oh yeah: the sex stuff is really good, too--BTW.

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  • Muke+Hunt+Hz
    01.11.2014 03:58
    Why the F is this story not rated at 100%????!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2014 17:46
    Add new stuff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2017 07:07
    I have completely stopped reading for the erotica. It's all about the story now lol

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  • Tighttina02
    05.08.2018 10:07
    Great chapter...Can't wait to read the rest.

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  • Doozy+woof+Hunter
    25.09.2020 19:46
    Just amazing!!!! What a story so far!

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