Comments Chat TOP rating Top 300

стрелкаNew stories 68846

стрелкаAnal 12637 +1

стрелкаAsian 1564

стрелкаAss to mouth 3439

стрелкаAuthoritarian 2664

стрелкаBDSM 6037

стрелкаBestiality 2928 +2

стрелкаBi-sexual 5364

стрелкаBlack 1784 +1

стрелкаBlackmail 1860

стрелкаBlowjob 17704 +2

стрелкаBody modification 1169

стрелкаBoy 1700

стрелкаCheating 4016

стрелкаCoercion 2223 +1

стрелкаConsensual Sex 14562 +8

стрелкаCuckold 1078

стрелкаCum Swallowing 7630 +1

стрелкаDark Fantasy 5292 +1

стрелкаDeath 785

стрелкаDiary 2849 +1

стрелкаDiscipline 854

стрелкаDomination/submission 3430 +3

стрелкаDrug 931

стрелкаErotica 3513 +2

стрелкаExhibitionism 2828 +1

стрелкаExtreme 882 +1

стрелкаFantastic 2202

стрелкаFantasy 11831 +4

стрелкаFemale Domination 1068

стрелкаFemale solo 2010

стрелкаFiction 31377 +1

стрелкаFirst Time 4745 +1

стрелкаFisting 291

стрелкаFoot or shoe fetish 241

стрелкаGay 2819

стрелкаGothic 167

стрелкаGroup Sex 2448

стрелкаHardcore 1861

стрелкаHumiliation 1449

стрелкаIncest 9088 +5

стрелкаInterracial 1125

стрелкаJob/Place-of-work 1119

стрелкаLactation 210

стрелкаLatina 180

стрелкаLesbian 3142

стрелкаMale / Female 6343

стрелкаMale Domination 456

стрелкаmassage 192

стрелкаMasturbation 2119 +2

стрелкаMature 954

стрелкаMind Control 613

стрелкаMonster 270

стрелкаMurder 179

стрелкаNon-consensual sex 920

стрелкаNon-Erotic 650

стрелкаOral Sex 3103 +4

стрелкаPoem 453

стрелкаPregnant 436

стрелкаProstitution 319 +1

стрелкаRape 1011

стрелкаReluctance 652

стрелкаRomance 2121

стрелкаSchool 781 +1

стрелкаSex Joke 689

стрелкаSlavery 240

стрелкаSpanking 288

стрелкаTeen 4480 +2

стрелкаThreesome 686 +2

стрелкаTorture 148

стрелкаToys 233

стрелкаTranssexual 243

стрелкаTrue Story 11353 +1

стрелкаViolence 400

стрелкаVirginity 676 +2

стрелкаVoyeurism 578

стрелкаWater Sports/Pissing 215

стрелкаWife 621

стрелкаWritten by women 814 +1


Sex games

3 Evil Sisters-Part 3

Author: SomeStory

Date: 26 December 2011

Incest, Fiction, Male / Female, Teen

  • Font:

Картинка к рассказу

The house was quiet for the rest of the day. I didn’t even get yelled at to make dinner, leaving me to wallow away in my bed, reliving the afternoon escapades. Lying there as the Saturday moon rose to the sky, I still couldn’t believe what I did. I fucked Izzy. My oldest sister just let me do whatever I wanted to her and she enjoyed it, hell she came twice.

The only problem was that she played me like a used video game. That’s why I felt so shitty. I fell for her little ploy, hook line and sinker and that made me all the more mad. So here I was, Sunday around noon, still lying in bed with barely an hour or two of sleep under my belt, and still confused as fuck as to what I was going to do next.

The door to my room slowly swung open and I lifted my head up just enough to see Izzy leaning against the doorway.

“No,” I rested my head back down on my pillow and went on, “I’m not going to do that again no matter what you say. It was a one time thing that never should’ve happened in the first place.”

“Why not?” Her tone caught me off guard. It wasn’t sad, mad, or even curious. It was calming, almost like she knew something that I didn’t. Turns out, she did know something that I didn’t. “Is it because Ashley used you for sex?”

I shot up from my bed immediately, “How did you kno-”

“Because,” she interrupted, pointing straight up, “My room is directly above yours Max. I’ve known since the first night you two started fucking, and a little tip for the future, Ashley needs to tone down her shouting if she wants to have a secret sex session with you.” Her sigh was riddled with sadness for some reason, “I thought about stopping you guys but over the last two weeks Ashley was probably the happiest person on earth, and I realized that it was probably because of you. Of course a part of me was disgusted by the thought of you two fucking and another part wanted me to whoop your ass for having sex with her when she had a boyfriend, but the dinner Thursday night made me realize something. You didn’t know she had a boyfriend did you Max?”

All I could was shake my head as she walked over to the bed and climbed into it, wrapping her arm around me and pulling me closer, inviting me to use her body as a pillow and I wasn’t in any position to resist.

“Well once I figured that out I can honestly say that that was one of the few times that I ever wanted to hit Ashley. I even lied about taking a shower because I knew that she’d go straight for your room once I said that,” she was rubbing my head as I closed my eyes. I didn’t get much sleep last night, but right now words couldn’t explain how comfy I was feeling resting up against Izzy’s body. “I was sitting in my room waiting for her to moan your name so I could rush down and burst into the room to give you both a piece of my mind, but imagine my surprise when I heard you tell her off. What did you say to her again? You’re an abusive piece of shit that’s been using me for the last two weeks?”

I nodded again and she laughed.

“I think that’s the first time you actually shouted at one of us, and damn did you go off like a firework. When it was over I even went to check on her and she was bawling like baby, curled up in the corner and giving me some bullshit excuse that her cramps were bad,” she rolled her eyes and looked at me, “We’re all on the pill by the way so our periods are never that bad, trust me.”

My eyes widened for a moment. That didn’t even cross my mind over the last three weeks and know that I thought about it, it probably never would've either. But now that I know that I wasn't going to be a father I sighed in relief before realizing something else.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa,” I lifted my head up from her boob and stared at her funnily, “Why were you cheering for me in all of this?”

“Because when I was a freshman in high school I went through the same thing that you did, only mine was worse.”

“Worse?”

“Much worse.”

“How?”

“I met a boy named Caleb. He was a senior, nice guy, had a piece of shit car but at the time I thought it was awesome to even own a car. Real smooth too, always knew what to say and when to say it, one of those kinds of guys’ y’know? I fell for him hard and within a week of us dating, he took my virginity and proceeded to fuck me almost everyday for the next eight months,” she tried to laugh but I could tell that it was an act to lighten the mood. “Guess all that sex and fake love blinded me because I didn’t see how obvious it was that he was using me. Turns out he had a girlfriend for the last two years and he just wanted to try out a different pussy, but the day I found out I beat his ass so bad that he had to go the hospital.”

“So is that when you started treating every guy like crap?”

She nodded softly, “Max…I know that I’ve made your life hell for as long as you can remember, and I’m sorry that it took something like this to happen for me to finally level with you. I don’t expect you to forgive, or even speak to me after this, but I finally felt like you deserved an explanation. There’s probably nothing that I can say or do to get you to forgive me either but-”

I put my hand over her mouth and she shut up instantly as I closed my eyes and rested back down on her boobs.

“Max?”

“I didn’t get a lot of sleep last night,” I explained lazily, “I just need a nap. You mind staying here until I wake up?”

“I think I can do that,” she rubbed my back softly, her warm hand soothing me closer to sleep every second.

Can I really forgive her? Should I even forgive her? She said sorry after all, but one sorry isn’t going to change everything she’s done to me. Then again…after two weeks of being used I was so mad that I nearly hit Ashley, I can only imagine what it would be like if it lasted eight months. Guess Izzy’s response to being used isn’t too different from my own. Don’t get me wrong, I’m not saying that I forgive her or agree with her method for that matter, but at least I have a better understanding about why she did it. Still, I can’t forgive her, but that doesn’t mean I’m not willing to move on. After all if I resented her forever then that’d make me no better then her, and as long as she’s willing to change I guess maybe I could cut her some slack.

With my mind only partially made up, Izzy’s warm hand rubbing my back, and my head resting softly against her boobs, I was finally able to get some well needed rest.

When I woke up, I was admittedly surprised to see Izzy passed out as well. I thought about getting up but I knew she deserved to hear my thoughts, plus she was nice enough to let me use her body as a pillow so that was partially influencing my actions.

“Izzy,” I whispered, shaking her shoulders softly. She stirred for a bit before opening her eyes and letting out a loud yawn, looking hazily into my eyes. “Had a nice nap?”

“I could ask you the same thing,” she smiled as we both sat up. I scooted up and leaned against the headboard with her while we sat in silence for awhile.

“Look,” I began, trying to think of the right thing to say. “What happened to you was pretty messed up I'll admit, but that doesn't mean that you had to take it out on me.”

“I understand,” she dishearteningly mumbled, “Guess it's kind of hard to ask for forgiveness after all these years huh?”

“I never said I wouldn’t forgive you Izzy, I'm just saying that what happened to you doesn't excuse your actions. If you really want me to forgive you, then there’s going to be some changes.”

“Like what?”

“Well the biggest issue is that I’m tired of you treating me like an in-house servant that lives down stairs. I want you to talk to me like family, which means no pointless yelling and definitely no more hitting. I’ve been beaten more times then a professional boxers punching bag for fucks sake I think I deserve a permanent vacation. And none of this two-faced crap either, I want to be treated nice all the time unless you have a good reason to do otherwise, and Riley and Ashley are not good reasons either.”

“I understand Max, don't worry I didn’t plan on doing that.”

“Good,” I sighed.

“Anything else?”

“Um,” scratching my head, I tried to think if there was anything else.

“Anything at all?” she asked again, hinting at something that I obviously missed.

I wasn’t in a mood to guess so I just looked her straight in the eye, “Just tell me.”

“Well,” she bit her bottom lip and looked away, “What about the sex?”

If I said I was predicting that, I’d be a liar. That one was straight out of left field and I fumbled around with my words a bit, “Well uh…what do you want?”

“I’m not saying that I want it everyday,” her hand was playing with her hair before she finally looked at me again. “But I wouldn’t mind if we did it every once in awhile.”

My first reaction was to say hell yes and agree, but there was a wicked idea forming in my head right now and I wanted to see where it led, “I don’t know Izzy.”

“Well what if you got to pick whenever we did it?”

“Hmmm,” I was biding my time now, “So we could just do it whenever I wanted?”

“As long as it’s not in front of Riley or Ashley.”

Again, I sat there rubbing my chin, acting like I was thinking to try and see how much I could get out of her. It was a little cruel but I wanted to see what she was willing to give me before accepting it. After a minute, my stalling paid off yet again.

“You could be as rough as you want with me just like the first time,” she shrugged playfully.

“Really?” I feigned shock but it didn’t take an idiot to figure out that Izzy enjoyed the pain, but I still had to keep the part going. “As rough as I want?”

“That’s right, but next time you want fuck my asshole please let me get lube first.”

“I guess I got caught up in the moment my bad,” with a goofy smile she giggled and wrapped her arm around me.

“C’mon, what else do you want from me? Don’t think I don’t know what you’re trying to do either Max,” she smirked, “Stalling to see what you can extort out of your own big sister.”

“How did you know that?”

“Please,” she scoffed, “I pull that move on Ashley and Riley whenever they ask me for a favor. I practically invented the stall, now let’s hear it.”

“I want to get her back,” I mumbled softly.

“Revenge on Ashley huh?” her nod told me that she already knew that was coming, “Do you have something in mind already?”

“Nothing yet, but give me some time and I’ll figure something out.”

“Well I’ll do whatever you need me to.”

“Thanks,” I smiled and so did she.

With a quick stretch she got to her and headed for the door, “C’mon, its movie night.”

“Isn't that one of your girl things?”

“As of two minutes ago it’s now a family thing, plus Riley’s at some party again and Ashley won’t be back till tomorrow. I don’t have anyone to watch them with.”

“So I’m the replacement huh?” I joked rolling out of bed.

“Oh shut up,” she laughed and took a step towards the door.

“Izzy,” she stopped and turned to look at me. “Why did you decide to do all of this now?”

She didn’t answer right away, standing in the doorway for some time compiling her thoughts until she shrugged slightly, “Guess I finally realized that taking my anger out on you rather then Caleb wasn't fair.”

That was about the answer I expected, and with a small shrug, we headed into the living room. The rest of the evening we watched one movie after another. From good comedies to terrible romances and even a kid’s movie, all the while Izzy and I sat huddled up against one another. It felt nice, being embraced like this, and it was definitely a feeling that I could get used to.

Growing up I never had a mother or father to cuddle up against. I never experienced what it was like to feel someone’s touch unless it was Izzy’s fist crashing into my body parts and now that we were resting up against one another in this weird family-loving way, I felt happy. I kinda missed out on this experience, which is why I think I loved it all the more now, and Izzy must’ve realized this after awhile because she started holding me tighter.

It’s amazing how two days ago we were at each other’s throat, and after a rough sex scene and a heart-to-heart chat, everything’s fine. Should I have forgiven her this easily? Probably not, but I already decided that that was what I was going to do, so I didn’t have a choice now.

Eventually we ran out of movies and hugged before parting ways to go to bed. With my head now resting on my pillow, I already began to miss Izzy’s touch, which is crazy considering that today was the first day I even experienced it. Was it childish? Hell yes, but I guess it’s kind of like sex, once you experience it for the first time you’re dying to do it more.

Monday unfortunately brought school so I went about my normal routine, preparing my things and slipping on my shoes to leave so I’d avoid my morning dose of Riley’s bullshit.

“Max,” Izzy called out as I walked out the front door.

“Yeah Izzy?” I walked back through the door as she came yawning down the stairs. She wore sweatpants and a tank-top, in all black of course, her hair slightly out of whack but still managing to hide her right eye somehow. My jaw was on the floor as I didn’t bother to hide the fact that my eyes were glued to her sexy morning look.

“C’mon,” she yawned again and grabbed her keys, “I’ll give you a ride to school today.”

“Um,” I couldn’t help but stammer and look around, “Are you serious?”

“Dead serious.”

Well I wasn’t about to look a gift horse in the mouth, so I hopped into the car as she drove me to school. The radio was playing some rock music that I could totally tell was Izzy’s kind of music, and had I been into that kind of music I probably would’ve turned it up but something about screaming into a microphone didn’t appeal to me. She parked about a block away which aroused my suspicion, but I thought I was just paranoid and opened the door to leave.

“Excuse me,” Izzy said causing me to turn around, “These rides aren’t free y’know.”

“What?” I almost dropped my backpack I was so shocked, “You want me to pay you?”

“No,” she waved me back into the car with a finger and I had a good idea what she wanted. I climbed back inside and leaned in for a long, succulent kiss that I enjoyed like hot chocolate on a cold day. I enjoyed it so much that I kept kissing her, and she didn’t argue as we broke out into a make-out session, fighting with our tongues inside each others mouths.

We were almost fighting for control over each other now, her hand cupped my face gently while my arms wrapped around her and pulled her closer. The longer we went on the hotter it was getting, and finally, I couldn’t take it anymore. I slammed the door shut and pulled away.

“Take us home,” I ordered.

She giggled, obviously not taking me seriously, “Max, we’re already here don’t you think it-”

“Drive the fucking car Izzy!” my calm tone was gone now as I made my demand clear to here. Without another word she nodded and put the car in drive, racing back home at dangerous speeds.

We flew out of the car and I grabbed onto her wrist and drug her into the house, almost kicking down the door as we did a quick glance around.

“Riley are you home?” Izzy shouted.

After ten seconds of silence, we were in the clear. I rushed her into the kitchen and practically slammed her up against the fridge, pressing my body onto hers as we kissed some more. The moment I stopped kissing her we were already stripped naked as I sucked her nipples her slight moaning driving my actions more and more. She started to run her hands through my hair, her soft touch driving me crazier by the minute as I grabbed onto her wrist and dragged her to the dinner table.

I bent her over it, my right hand pressing down onto the back of her head while my left hand smacked her ass once before I went in. This was the first time I ever fucked someone in this position and the control it gave me made the feeling all the more sensational. Her sopping wet pussy made my thrusts all the easier as I rammed her as hard as I could, my balls slapping up against her clit each time. Her moans were muffled and she was panting like her life depended on it, probably because my hand was still pressed firmly down on her head. After realizing that I let go of her and put on a wide smile as she immediately screamed.

“Fuuuuuuck!”

Finally in control of her head, she looked back at me with a small smirk across her face, and I knew that I needed to wipe that off of her face. I reached forward and grabbed her hair, lightly tugging on it like reins to a horse and the response was amazing.

“Fuck yes Max! Treat me like a fucking animal!” She asked for it so I started pulling a little harder all the while trying to ram my dick as far down her pussy as possible, “M-Max, I need to cum! Please let me cum.”

“You haven't earned it yet,” I smiled as she playfully scowled, “Better think quick.”

“Please! I'll give you anything just let me cum!” A quick yank of her hair almost sent of her over the edge as I felt her entire body shake. “P-please!”

I nodded, already thinking of what I was going to do with her offer when her pussy tightened and almost made me cum as well. With a loud gasp of breath and her body seemingly losing all feeling, I knew that her orgasm was over and since I was close to cumming as well, I pulled out and grabbed onto her arm. I dragged her off the table and onto the ground carefully as she laid there breathing heavily and awaiting to find out why I was doing this. After pulling on my dick a few times, I stood over her and shot my load all over her exposed body, covering her stomach and boobs in my cum until there was nothing left.

I leaned up against the counter and tried to stay on my feet. Maybe it was just a weird fantasy of mine but I always wanted to cum all over someone, and since Izzy was kind enough to offer me that opportunity, I took it. Looking down at her sweat and cum stained body I couldn't help but smile. It may be a weird fantasy but seeing her lie there after a good fucking made me a happy guy, so in my opinion I made the right choice.

It took a little longer then I thought but eventually I helped Izzy up and she cleaned off her body, giggling the entire time as I watched her wipe off the cum and sweat. We walked into the living room once she was done and she let me use her leg as a pillow as I sprawled out on the couch and rolled over to close my eyes and rest. Truth was that I wasn't getting very much sleep for some reason, but whenever I was pressed up against Izzy now I felt like I was resting on a cloud.

She hummed softly while flicking through the channels, and there was a sense of peace and quiet that ran throughout the house that felt great. But there was one major problem that didn’t even cross my mind.

Ashley was supposed to come home today.

Of course by the time I realized it, the front door was jingling as someone was trying to undo the lock. I sat up immediately, wide eyed and scared shitless. Izzy and I were completely naked on the couch in the middle of the day, and I had no reasonable explanation to this other then the truth. When I looked at Izzy however to see if she was reacting accordingly, she brought a finger up to her mouth and gently pressed me back down. I didn’t know what she had planned but since I hadn't come up with anything, I laid back down and shut my eyes, pretending to be asleep as the front door flew open.

“Izzy! I'm home,” Ashley shouted.

“Living room,” Izzy called back. The door slammed shut as Ashley made her way into the living.

“What the fuck!?” she shouted, which in hindsight was probably a very appropriate response.

“Sh! Max is sleeping,” Izzy replied calmly.

“What the hell's going on?” Ashley asked in a hushed tone.

“Well since you were done using and abusing our little brother for sex, I figured that it was time for me to step in.”

There was a long silence before Izzy continued.

“Don't act all surprised Ashley, I sleep in the room above his so I could hear you every night. I especially liked the last night too, it made my day knowing that Max finally gave you what was coming. Your lucky too, because if he didn’t do it then I sure as hell would've.” she laughed, “I guess I should thank you though.”

“Th-thank me? For what?”

“Well if it wasn't for you being a complete bitch, I would've never realized how stupid I was acting. I told him everything and to my surprise, he actually decided to give me a chance to make up for all the things I've done to him. What a nice guy huh?”

“That doesn't explain why you're both naked!”

“Isn't it obvious? We just had sex.”

“You bribed Max with sex!?”

“Please,” Izzy shot back, “I'm not that much of a whore.”

“Then what the hell happened?”

“Well after you left him in a pissy mood, I was able to egg him on until he finally snapped and fucked the shit out of me. You should've seen him Ashley, he treated me like a piece of meat and I loved every second of it. My ass still hurts from what he did to me.”

She sounded almost proud of that fact but I could tell that Ashley was still in shock just by the tone of her voice, “You really had sex with him?”

“Bent me over the kitchen table and yanked on my hair until I cummed. Then he tossed me onto the ground and blew his loud all over my body. It was amazing!”

“Y-you actually did that?”

“Yep,” she giggled again before sighing, “But I’m getting a little distracted from my original message.”

“Huh?”

“Let me make this as clear as I can Ashley,” Izzy's harsh tone appeared out of no where, “Stay the fuck away from Max.”

“Excuse me?”

“You heard me. Max is mine now. You had your chance, and you decided to be a deceitful little cunt and blow it. I don't want you to talk to him, look at him, or even be near him unless you're eating dinner got that? What you did to him was fucked up and even thinking about it makes me angry.”

“He's not some piece of meat Izzy how-”

“You're goddamned right he isn't!” Izzy was fuming now, “He's my little brother and I'm going to protect him like a lion protects her cub. Got that?”

“Since when are you the perfect older sister huh? You were the one who started treating him like shit in the first place.”

“That's right I was but it also means that I should be the first person to make up with him.”

“What kind of logic is that?”

“The same kind of logic that made you use him for sex when you already had a boyfriend! You know how I feel about shit like that and you still had the balls to do it inside our own house no less. So believe me when I say that if if you do anything to Max again, I’m going to kick your ass all the way back to your boyfriends house, got it?”

Again, silence filled the room. It wasn't until I heard Ashley's footsteps as they headed out the door and up the stairs that I finally sat up and looked at Izzy. She was humming cheerfully with her eyes glued to the TV, seemingly unaffected by what just happened.

“How was that?” she asked.

“Huh?” I replied.

“Messed with her head pretty good don't 'cha think?”

“That was all an act?”

“Mostly, yeah.”

I shot her a wicked smile, “Oh you're good.”

“Thanks,” she bent down and kissed me. That kiss led to another, then another, and soon, I had both hands groping her boobs while we made-out. “Getting a little excited huh?”

“Just a bit,” I mumbled in between kisses. Our lips suddenly separated as her mouth moved down my body slowly, tenderly kissing each part while she slowly pushed me so I was laying on my back. Before I knew what was happening, she had her mouth around half of my dick and was making long, thorough strokes up and down.

“Shit that feels good,” the words slipped out of my mouth as I closed my eyes and enjoyed the soft sucking sound coming from Izzy while she continued her rhythm perfectly. Maybe it was because I was greedy, but I wanted more, and I knew just how I was going to get it. I placed my hands over her head and pressed down as my dick nearly disappeared inside her mouth. She gagged shortly after and I lifted up my hands immediately, “S-sorry Izzy. Got a little carried away.”

She popped my dick out of her mouth and winked, “Don't worry about me Max.” With that, she stuck her tongue out and started at the base of my dick, licking her way to the tip like a lollipop and making me quiver in pleasure before sticking it back into her mouth. I was close to cumming now, and with my hand now back on top of her forcing more of my dick into her mouth little by little, I finally couldn't hold it in any longer.

“I'm cumming Izzy,” my voice was all but gone, and I shoved her head as far as I could as the sound of her gagging on my dick was the final straw. I unloaded into her throat, forcing her to take it all whether she wanted to or not, and only when I was finally done did I let go of her head.

She lifted up her head with a small smile, wiping her lips before leaning back down to clean off my dick. Once she was satisfied, she brushed her hair out of her face and grabbed onto my arm, pulling me up and into her arms.

“You liked gagging me didn’t you?”

“It felt amazing,” I admitted nuzzling up with her.

“I'll have to remember that then,” she smiled and kissed my forehead, “Come on, we better get dressed.”

We spent the rest of the day being lazy in the living room, talking about random things that came to mind and just enjoying each others company. It was a little weird at first, having a normal (almost cheerful) conversation with Izzy of all people, but it was the kind of weird that I could get used too.

Time just flew by after that, and soon Izzy asked me if I’d make dinner. Seeing as how she asked instead of ordered, I was more then happy to get up and start cooking. She even helped out a bit, although it was clear that she was fairly clumsy when it came to cooking, which only further illustrated my point that if I left, the girls would burn down the house trying to cook.

Once the table was set Riley came home at that exact moment and I couldn't help but think about how perfect that timing was. With Riley now at the table and Izzy sitting beside me with her food, all that was left was Ashley, but there was no sign of her. Izzy yelled for her to come downstairs now and eventually I heard her footsteps as she marched down the stairs.

She looked like she'd just been hit by a tornado as she drudged into the kitchen to gather her food. Her smooth hair was completely frizzled and out of whack, her usual tight clothes where now baggy and less appealing, and I caught the redness around her eyes signaling that she was probably crying.

“Ashley are you alright?” I asked responsively.

“Fine,” her defeated voice said otherwise.

“Yeah Ashley,” Izzy tilted her head in fake curiosity, “You don't look to hot? Did something happen?”

I wasn't trying to be an ass, it was an honest reaction to how she looked. It wasn't until Izzy said something that I realized why she was so upset. Our little secret and more importantly her little scandal had been brought to light, and now if she did anything to upset me Izzy would kick her ass. I guess I’d be a little upset too if something like that happened to me. Then again I was slightly torn thinking about this, and ss our dinner silently progressed, my eyes kept glancing towards Ashley, and it wasn't in the menacing fashion that I should be looking at her with, it was more...sympathetic.

Why the fuck was I feeling sorry for her?

Who am I kidding? I knew why. I still wanted her, sexually and romantically, but I couldn't go back now, Izzy would go off like a rocket on me for even considering it. But I just couldn't sit here knowing that Ashley was miserable all because of me.

But doesn't she deserve it after what she did? Fuck! This is so confusing why can't my life ever be simple? I'll even settle for a strange life rather then whatever the hell you'd call my sorry excuse for a life.

With my hands buried in my face now, the clanking of knives and forks hitting the plates filled the air, all the while I sat there and waged a mental war about how I was supposed to handle this situation. In the end, it took a pat on the back from Izzy to snap me out of it.

After feeding her a bullshit lie that I wasn't feeling well, I returned to my room and sat there for what felt like an eternity. The clock told a different story though, and after I checked it I realized that I had only be lying down for three hours. Three hours I’d never get back because I was stuck thinking about this problem.

The house had all but died with every light on the first floor shut off and only the hallway light upstairs provided me with light as I maneuvered into the kitchen and grabbed a snack. When I returned back to my room, I repeated the same process of lying awake in a pathetic excuse for an attempt at sleep.

Things got interesting however when the door opened up to my room. I was half expecting to see Ashley but was surprised when Izzy quickly shut the door and scrambled into bed next to me.

“What are you-”

“Sh,” she ordered, wrapping her arm around me and pulling me into her, “I know you've been having some problems sleeping so I thought I’d sleep with you tonight.”

I didn’t argue, resting my head against her body and returning to that warm, comfy state I was beginning to feel whenever I was pressed against her. She was right because only minutes later was I passed out lying intertwined with her.

When I woke up the next day, Izzy was humming softly, and after lifting my head up lazily she smiled.

“How'd you sleep?”

“Surprisingly well,” I admitted, “and you?”

“I'm started to get used to having someone pressed up against me again,” she laughed softly before rubbing my shoulder. “So are you actually going to go to school today?”

“Hopefully yeah.”

“Lame,” she joked.

“Tell me about it,” I tried to roll around and get out but she didn’t let go.

“These little cat naps resting up against me aren't free y'know?”

I leaned forward and kissed her, making sure to restrain myself this time only to be met with an odd discovery. She scowled at me when I pulled away, not playfully either, more like the bitch version of her that I was used to and I caught it immediately. The right thing to do would be to call her out on it and find out what's wrong, but something told me that I should just keep quiet and go on with the day.

Her scowl was quickly replaced when I got up with a more comforting look and once again I could tell that she was forcing that look just to humor me. At least that's what I thought. Maybe I was imagining things but I blocked these new found discoveries out of my mind and proceeded to get ready for school.

Izzy was waiting with the car and just like yesterday she let me out a block away, hidden from other people's eyes. Again I made the mistake of thinking that she was just giving me a ride, but again I was wrong when she cleared her throat as I opened the door to leave.

“C'mon Max give me something for my troubles at least, I’m driving you to school when I could be sleeping after all.”

To humor her more then anything, I leaned in and kissed her, but this time she grabbed onto the back of my head and forced a long kiss between us that made me gasp for breath when I was free. Her eyes were hungry now, and they were staring right at me too, screaming out that she wanted sex right now but I couldn't miss school for sex again. At least not this week.

So as casually as I could, I waved and shut the door on her hungry eyes. I had to fight to keep myself from looking back at her because I was afraid to find what look I’d be met with now.

With school being the least of my worries, it flew by and soon enough I sat down in Mr. Edwards class after school finally ready to start sketching again.

“I'm surprised you even remembered Max,” Edwards joked taking a seat next to me, “You've been MIA the last two times Gene almost thought about giving up on you.”

“Did not!” Gene shot back.

“Then why are you getting so defensive? Besides model's don't talk so shush,” I chimed in playfully as she rolled her eyes.

“So now you bring out the claws huh?” Edwards clapped his hands, “Shame you do that to the only person willing to help you rather then Izzy.”

“What are you talking about?”

“C'mon Max, I could feel the tension from you two a mile away. You think I was that gullible?”

“Would you be mad if I said yes?”

“Appalled actually.”

“I'm sure you'll get over it,” we shared in a chuckle.

“Would one of you mind explaining what's going on?”

“Max here doesn't see eye to eye with one of his older sisters.”

“I think things are working out now,” I corrected, “But yeah I’m not on the best terms with any of my sisters.”

“I didn’t even know you had family Max.”

“Three older sisters and a mom, dad died before I could get a good look at him. And didn’t I just say that models don't talk?”

“Yeah, yeah, I know.”

The conversation was dropped right there allowing me to finish my eye of sketching before heading back home. When I got home however, I was a little shocked to see Izzy standing only a few feet in front of the door, tapping her food like an ill-tempered customer waiting for their turn in line.

“Where were you?” she hissed in an all-to-familiar tone.

“I stayed after school to sketch Gene,” I answered.

“Didn't I tell you that you're not going to be sketching that whore anymore?”

“She's not a whore Izzy, and I thought you were just using that an excuse.”

“I was dead serious. You're not sketching that girl anymore got it?”

“Izzy what the heck's gotten into you? Why are you so mad all of a sudden?”

“Does it look like I’m mad?” she put her hands on her hips.

Yes...yes it does look like your mad, but then again I wasn't dumb enough to say it. “So you really don't want me sketching Gene because you think she's a whore?”

“That's right.”

“Don't you think that's a little messed up? You haven't met her.”

“I don't need to meet her Max, this discussion is over and I expect you to come straight home from school from now on.”

“This isn't fair.”

“Life isn't fair Max, you should know that by now.”

What. The. Fuck!

Everything was slowly changing back now. The signs were all there but I couldn't figure out why. Why was Izzy slowly becoming a bitch again after only four days? Was there something I was missing? I know the thing with Gene made her mad but there were other signs in the morning that were all started to click together.

I didn’t bother dignifying her sudden mood swing with a response, shaking my head slowly as I retreated to my room and shut the door. Before I could even sit down however, the door flew open and Izzy stood there with an almost annoyed look on her face.

“Look Max,” she sighed and started talking through gritted teeth. “You're in a vulnerable state right now-”

Frankly I knew that after hearing that statement, she was just spouting total bullshit now. I wasn't in a vulnerable state, if anything I was having a conflict of moralities or some bullshit like that but I definitely wasn't vulnerable.

“-and I don't want some older girl to come and take advantage of you alright? Gene may not be a bad girl but I just think that you shouldn't see her until you've recovered from what Ashley did too you. So yes, I’m a little worried and I’m sorry if I angered you when I said that, I just want you to know that I’m worried about you.”

“Thanks Izzy,” I smiled as warmly as I could and she did the same.

“Do you mind making dinner in another hour?”

“Sure, I’ll take care of it.”

“Thanks Max,” she waved her goodbye and shut my door.

That conversation gave me a lot to think about, but instead of worrying, I sat down and did some homework before the time came for me to cook dinner. My mind was a little busy going over what Izzy said but I kept myself busy with housework. Eventually midnight rolled around and I was lying wide awake in my pitch blacked room. I closed the shutters in my room so the light from the moon and streetlight right outside so my only source of vision was now gone. I probably should've opened them but I knew that Izzy was probably going to come back into my room and sleep with me again

My door slowly crept open in an almost horror movie-like fashion and with a quick shut of the door a figure darted into the bed and on top of me.

“What th-” someone's hand was slapped over my mouth as I reached over and turned on my lamp. Ashley's face burst into view as I slapped her hand away, “What are you doing?”

“I came to see you silly,” she smiled while keeping me pinned, “There was something that I needed to tell you.”

“You couldn't have done it during the day when I got home?”

“No cause then Izzy would try to kick my ass,” she rolled her eyes, “Look I’m sorry for using you ok? I guess I kind of liked having two guys that I could have sex with whenever I wanted to. I mean I fucked him, got a nice dinner, and usually a movie and then when I got home I had another good fucking waiting for me and it was just amaz-”

“You realize that your not helping your case any right?” I interrupted.

“Right sorry,” she sighed and dropped her smile. I could tell that she was trying to think of the words to explain what she was thinking, and while she did that my eyes were glued to her half naked body. Her golden body was glowing off the lamp light and I was a little shocked to see her wearing matching black bra and panties. When she started again I finally snapped out of my trance and paid attention, “I'm sorry if I hurt you Max. Guess I really haven't been the best sister in the world huh?”

That was an understatement.

“But I think you'll be happy to know that I broke up with him.”

“You did what!?”

“You heard me. I broke up with Tyler just for you.”

“B-but why?”

“I thought about the first time we had sex and that feeling I had,” she slowly bit down on her bottom lip, “I thought it was the sex but now I know that it was just relying on you to comfort me. Guess that's why it never felt the same after that first night for me.”

I was still trying to wrap my head around the fact that she just broke up with her boyfriend for me. This was definitely getting out of hand now, but a small part of me was kind of happy that she chose me over her boyfriend. Then again it's not like I get a prize for being the guy she'd rather be with...or do I?

“So I take it you want sex then?” I asked cautiously.

Her answer would've knocked me on my ass if I was standing.

“Only if you want it Max.”

Awesome! This is exactly what I needed...more headaches regarding how I felt about Ashley. But it was finally my choice whether or not I wanted her, and I think that alone made my decision all the easier.

I grabbed onto her shoulders and pulled her in closer as we started making out lustfully. Her ass was hanging high up the air for the everyone to see as we continued to kiss until I felt like I was ready for more. Pulling away, I started to take off my shirt and shorts while she easily slipped out of her underwear and we resumed our kissing but this time it was more wild, like we were both expecting something incredible to happen. My hands were planted firmly on her ass that I missed so much as I rolled her over to where I was on top of her.

“Try not to be too loud,” I teased leaning down to kiss her.

She smirked and I saw her eyes move down to her pussy, waiting patiently as I slowly slid it inside her. Her eyes shut immediately and she let out a loud gasp before shivering and placing her hands on my back to press our bodies closer together. I could feel her warm body up against me as she buried her lips into my neck, kissing and sucking softly on it in an attempt to no doubt keep quiet. I tried to keep my thrusts slow and under control to stop her from being to loud and it seemed to help as she moaned deeply into my neck.

“Fuck I've missed this feeling,” she whispered, “Harder Max, I know you can go harder.”

“Promise not to be to loud,” I grunted forcing my dick further inside her pussy just to give her a little taste.

“I promise,” her warm breath splashed up against me, “Now fuck me like you mean it.”

I was taking a risk in doing this, but I would be lying if I said that I didn’t want to go in further. With a quick thrust, I jammed the rest of my dick inside her and her hands dug into my back violently while she moaned into my neck once again.

“Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck,” she moaned over and over again which only turned me on more to hear her voice whisper that into my ear. Her silent panting brushing up against my ear. Her curvy body pressed against mine. And the best part was that we were trying to keep it all a secret. It doubled the insane amount of pleasure I was feeling now, and I felt her grip tighten again and her soft panting became more alarmed. “I'm...I'm cumming, fuck you're making me cum already.”

“Wait for me Ashley,” I asked feeling close to cumming myself. It was easier to control now so it made things a lot easier for me to cum whenever she did. I probably could hold out and keep fucking her for another a few more minutes but I had to admit that cumming at the same time as her always felt more satisfying.

When the moment finally, my thrust became shorter and more desperate. “Cum right now Ashley!” I ordered and she nodded quickly.

She grabbed my head with one hand and forced it towards her mouth so we were sloppily kissing while she moaned loudly into my mouth, all the while pressing me onto her body with her offhand as if trying to make me stick to her permanently. My dick was drenched in Ashley's cum right as I started unloading into her pussy, and after a couple of loud grunts on my part I pulled my dick out and rolled right beside her.

That glazed look that she always wore after we had sex was back and I loved it all the more now as she straddled my body and rested her head firmly onto my chest. This moment was absolutely perfect and there was only one thing that could ruin it.

My door practically flew off the hinges the moment that crossed my mind.

Karma's a bitch, no doubt about it, because Izzy stormed through that door and holy shit did she look angry.

“The fuck is going on here!” she roared. “Max what the fuck do you think your doing?”

“Oh calm down Izzy,” Ashley defended me, purring softly as if to taunt her, “The second I heard you yell at him when he got home from school I knew you couldn't keep up your stupid little lie.”

“Wait what?” I looked towards Ashley.

“Izzy's full of shit Max,” she said it in a way that made it seem more obvious then a slap in the face. “She probably told you that she was used or some stupid excuse like that to make you feel bad for her. Isn't that right Izzy?”

“Shut the fuck up Ashley I was used!”

“You were used at some party that you went to three years ago, it's your own damn fault for trying to hook up with some guy you never met before.”

“Don't even lecture me slut. You cheated on your boyfriends so many times that I lost count. Betcha told Max that you broke up with your current boyfriend to huh?”

“Maybe I did,” Ashley shot back.

“You told me you were going to hang out with him tomorrow at the mall dumbass. Let me have my fun with Max before you go sinking your claws into him again.”

“Fuck off he obviously likes me more.”

“Only cause he was too stupid to realize you were lying.”

“Well he must've been a moron to have bought your sad story. Besides why do you even want to fuck him?”

“Because unlike most guys he's accessible to me whenever I want, although he's being a little bitch and passes up perfectly good opportunities. What even gave you the idea to fuck him anyway? You're boyfriend that bad?”

“My sex life is none of your busi-”

“Everyone just shut the hell up!” I shouted getting out of the bed and slipping on my shorts. To my surprise, Ashley and Izzy remained quiet as I violently ran my hand through my hair to figure out what was going on. “Ashley is it true that you still have a boyfriend?”

She nodded.

“Izzy is it true that that whole story was complete bullshit?”

She shrugged sheepishly, “Maybe a little bit.”

I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. The last three weeks were a lie, and this week had only made things worse. With Ashley still lying on the bed naked, and Izzy wearing short shorts and black tank top, I slowly began to put on a different set of clothes.

“Um, what are you doing Max?” Izzy asked as I crossed the room to grab my backpack.

After I didn’t answer, Ashley must've thought that that meant it was her time to talk, “Hello? Max?”

Again, I didn’t answer, opening up a drawer in my desk where I kept my money hidden, pocketing all six hundred forty-two dollars and twenty-seven cents as I pushed past Izzy to get out of my room.

“Max?” Izzy followed me out into the hallway as I slipped on my shoes and walked into the kitchen. Opening up the fridge, I grabbed a bottle of water and walked past Izzy once again, heading for the door as Ashley came waltzing into the hallway using my blanket to cover herself.

“Where do you think you're going?” she asked as I opened the door.

“I'm doing what I should've done a long time ago,” I answered as the cold night chill brushed up against my body, “Leaving.”

I slammed the door shut and started walking. I don't know where I was going, but anywhere was better then there.


------
Author's note.
Yes, i know...i'm pretty terrible at writing things fast haha.
I do apologize for the wait and hope that this will help. I did have a hell of time deciding whether or not i wanted this too be the final part where i'd just add Riley in somehow and then wrap up the story, or try and make a little bit of a story out of it and see where it goes.
I really hope you don't mind me adding 2-4 more parts and if you do...then i'm sorry?
I'm going to try and finish a part within the next two weeks.
PS=My Xmas present to you guys :D(even though i'm techinically three hours late)
PSS=I will admit that i felt like this part isn't the best i could've done and if you feel the same way i understand but i promise that my next part will be better. Plox-n-Thx


493619   2 49838   Rating +9.51 [3495] Next part

Add to favorites
  • Complain about a story

    * Mandatory field

Rate this story: 33238

Latest ratings: Guest(104.28.50.167) 10
Comments 399
  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 07:13
    man thanx for the xmas gift

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 07:36
    Please right more Oh god this story is amazing. I've never really been interested in a story about sex I usually just cum and move on but this is a work of art. Wow please do atleast 4 parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 07:39
    Please right more Oh god this story is amazing. I've never really been interested in a story about sex I usually just cum and move on but this is a work of art. Wow please do atleast 4 parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 07:47
    That was pretty good story
    kept me waiting man!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 08:07
    Awesome story, pls continue and put in more anal

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 08:19
    Keep them coming, if you write it we will read it.

    Answer 0

  • Avenge_26
    26.12.2011 08:23
    wow.... great story and if u dont like it (even tho every body else does) then u can always repost the change

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 08:24
    Write more, much more ^^
    These are def my fav stories on this site.
    Can't wait for the next one.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 08:37
    One of the best xmas gifts ever. Thanks! Hope you keep posting stories on here, I like your writing style.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 09:15
    I like it, cant wait for the next part

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 09:27
    Hey man, I hope you realize that this story isn't about sex anymore; it's about being THE BEST STORY EVER, with occasional sex scenes along the way. You have my support to take this in whichever way you decide it's best.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 09:44
    Great writing keep it up

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 09:58
    Keep it going. Your a good writer. What makes a pro is the fact he has a company to fix there work. Your story is excellent.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 09:59
    I love the story too but I really don't want Gene getting involved. Just in my Opinion. Keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 10:04
    I really can't wait for the next one

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 10:22
    Awsome..was hoping there would be a twist

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 11:16
    This chapter was awesome cant wait for the next part. and as far as adding 2 or 4 more parts I dont think thats a problem as long as you want to wright them. Keep up the great work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 11:56
    U r the best . . . . . .pls do more. . . . .want more. . .dnt worry abt parts just keep writn. . .

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 12:17
    "PSS=I will admit that i felt like this part isn't the best i could've done and if you feel the same way i understand but i promise that my next part will be better. Plox-n-Th"

    While you might not feel it was your best work, and I'm not in a position to say whether it was or not, it was still damned good work. I'm glad you didn't listen to those calling for a foursome or a threesome with Ashley, Izzy and Max, this maintained the legitimacy of the characters - I would say credibility but two of these characters are so deceitful I don't want to give the wrong impression by calling their personas credible.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:00
    Keep it coming can't wait for the next ones

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:04
    keep up as your going dont rush to the end keep it gooing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:14
    heck, this is one of the best stories i`ve ever read. You shouldn`t rush things. Keep it up at this pace and try to add everything you want beside a one night stand. Also it would be a good thing to include a little more the mother. I would like a good ending with his 3 sisters and even the mother. Even so you should do whatever you want. Until now you made the best choices.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:18
    If Gene were to get involved, I'd prefer that he actually end up with her. Since, from the sound if it, she likes him.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:32
    BTW, just so you know,
    it`s PPS (post post script)
    not PSS (which would be post script script)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:38
    One of the longer stories i actually read and the only multiparter i've read since Darkbrother's I found my sister stripping.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 13:53
    Don't say your sorry for adding another part. This is a good series and I would read 20 more parts. Maybe add in Riley and the girl he's drawing at school, maybe even a threesome with izzy and Ashley to stop them arguing.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 14:03
    good so far waiting for the next part

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 14:11
    I like the story and wouldn't mind as many parts as you need. I also agree that if you get gene involved i'd like that to be the final pairing.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 14:20
    The emotion is amazing. Looking forward to more!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 14:51
    Actually having it go this way is far better and sets it apart from the run of the mill happily ever afters.
    Have Riley be a lesbian and him find out that the teacher and the model are getting it on.
    Let him get his revenge on all concerned, including mother, by telling the girls that he is reporting them for child abuse and incest. The mother for abandonment and lack of providing the necessities of life and the teacher for sex with a student.
    They all panic and become willing to help him get ahead but have him want nothing to do with them, he gets himself emancipated and then watches their lives get ruined.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:09
    this is one of the first stories that i have waited for. all 3 stories are among my favorites. please keep writing the story the way you see fit and when you feel its time to end it, then you can end it with out any regrets.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:18
    wow dude... Ur stories rock... Keep it up...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:27
    i'm not convinced, that izzy has no feelings for him. her story comes across as being partially truthful, so i think she actually might care for him. and she seemed to really be happier around max. ashley though is a complete liar. he should definently end up with izzy.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:33
    dam "Anonymous reader 2011-12-26 14:51:57" not have a happy Christmas...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:40
    Please do a million parts if you want! This is my favourite series and I check every night to see if the next one is up. It's so amazing. If only you could write faster...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 15:40
    i would say have him go to his teachers house and see if he can stay awhile.. then after a few days he and gene hook up and he completely ignores his sisters even when they offer themselves or something along those lines.. im sure whatever you decide would be interesting to read.. at first this series was slow but got much and much better.. cant wait for the next chapter.. hopefully you will make another one unlike another author whos story i had liked said he would try to post every Wednesday and still hast for over 2 months now...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 16:30
    absolutely no reason to apologize for the way you are writing this, this story is great! patiently waiting for the next part, don't feel rushed, but you are doing a good job. i love this story

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 17:09
    Dont apologize! You. Are. Great!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 17:28
    Fucking kick ass man.. love the way the story is going... I can't wait for the next one... hope it out soon... keep writing.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 17:34
    SomeStory,

    This was an absolutely amazing read in many different ways, and was, in my mind, just as good a story about people as it was about sex. Especially impresive to me given how good that part was. The only complaint I could possibly come up with is that it felt odd for Max to be able to walk off missing school after what happened in part 2, but that was just a small distraction from a much greater work. Please do complete this series, as it's become one of my favorites ever.

    Best of luck,
    Ace

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 17:39
    probably the best part of the series, please continue this and don't worry at all about making more chapters. I read a 100 chapter story on this site only because it was so good. This story has that potential, don't limit your mind and keep writing because this story is great and i love the emotion in it. Maybe add some more heart felt scenes showing max's vulnerable side... great job, keep writing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 18:10
    I have read hundreds of stories on this site, but never commented before. This series is one of my all time favorites. I find myself eagerly anticipating every new chapter. I don't know about the rest of us on here, but i for one would love it if you kept it going as long as possible. Please keep writing this story.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 18:13
    heres an idea have him go to genes house and get all the women in on it

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 18:14
    The only bad part of this part of the story was you left it on a cliffhanger and left me wanting more lol great story! Keep it up

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 18:20
    The story's great. Nice turn of events
    Just harry up the next parts

    Answer 0

  • masterjake
    26.12.2011 18:37
    hay don't cut your self short it may take some time but you wright good work i have read more that a few story's and this is one of the beater ones i have read you could try reading darkbrother's work he is my favorite writer on hear

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 18:52
    Oh man this is like my favorite story on this site by fair. Keep it up man.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 19:30
    best story ever i wish all of it was done and i could just read. anyways this is my all time favourite incest story and i love how its all put together. don't worry about your writing it's awesome.

    Answer 0

  • blindu8
    26.12.2011 19:54
    Writing is awesome, story line is great,, you have me anxiously waiting for the next part of the story.

    Keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:20
    Oh god this is too great. Please continue and update fast!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:22
    Thank you so much for nit just ending it. I absolutly love the ending of this one so please keep it up your awsome.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:44
    love the story please continue

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:48
    great story, looking forward to seeing where you go with it, keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:50
    Oh god this is too great. Please continue and update fast!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 20:53
    This is one of the best storys i've read, keep it up, the more the merrier ;), just don't get anyone pregnant or any of that wierd shit

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:07
    Take as much time as you need. You're writing is amazing, and shouldn't be rushed. If someone can't wait for the next part, they obviously aren't reading the actual story, which is amazing. You've actually made these characters seem like people, as opposed to emotionless sex robots, which is what really impresses me about the story. Keep up the good work, and have a Happy New Year!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:17
    love the story so much, so impatiently waiting for the next parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:20
    cant wait to see who max knocks up

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:28
    would love to see many more parts to this story! Loving the direction you're taking with this, lots of drama, it's something you don't see often.

    Answer 0

  • dinggo
    26.12.2011 21:37
    I'm a big fan of your short existing work. And in my opinion you are the best writer on hear. I made a prifile for the soul purpus of telling you I LOVE your work. Take as long as you need to make the next you rock.
    Siting on the edg of my set waiting for max's next great adventur

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:43
    For all I care make dis shit into book this a good story keep writng

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 21:44
    For all I care make dis shit into book this a good story keep writng

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 22:24
    Hey don't crtisice yourself. It was a good story it's a good series. A tip from one writer to another don't ignore the little details I know this story was written fast so it's ok on this one.
    10/10
    Brian L

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 22:25
    Hey don't crtisice yourself. It was a good story it's a good series. A tip from one writer to another don't ignore the little details I know this story was written fast so it's ok on this one.
    10/10
    Brian L

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 22:31
    dont you dsre end the story any time soon!

    Answer 0

  • pornyhat
    26.12.2011 23:40
    Somewhat comedy in the last that all cheating him :P but awesome ... and dont think of finishing the story soon ... i need 100xxx parts :P and yes now make those girls suffer .... fck them hard nw as they are cheating their brothers .... ;) my pussy wants more so write fast :D

    Answer 0

  • pornyhat
    26.12.2011 23:41
    Somewhat comedy in the last that all cheating him :P but awesome ... and dont think of finishing the story soon ... i need 100xxx parts :P and yes now make those girls suffer .... fck them hard nw as they are cheating their brothers .... ;) my pussy wants more so write fast :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 23:54
    This is a great story man seriously. Keep writing.. This wasn't the best part but it was good and whoever says otherwise is an idiot and trust me you can add fuckin one-thousand more parts and as long as you put them out in 2-3 weeks I'd read them all. Great story again; keep up all the great work.

    Answer 0

  • Kooskol
    26.12.2011 23:59
    Personally, I'd say to hell with those who would rather leave the story ended soon. Let the story go as far as was planned (hopefully them 2 to 4 parts extra) then tie it with a bow, because stories like these make this site more than worth coming to.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:00
    Fast post the 4th part can't wait any longer

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:06
    amazing series. dont stop anytime some. at least 3 more parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:32
    thanks i loved it the twists and ending were perfect thanks for the gift -<3

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:47
    I agree with pornyhat, Kooskol & Anonymous reader. Let them bitches suffer, and fuck all that want the story to stop! This is a great story that makes this site all the better. You just keep on keepin on!

    Answer 0

  • masteerbiater
    27.12.2011 00:49
    dude great story please write more stories.

    Answer 0

  • masteerbiater
    27.12.2011 00:49
    dude great story please write more stories.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:52
    Keep the story at full length , don't cut it!We'd appreciate it if you extend it a littke too :)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 00:57
    It's a good pasr just make him hit the 3rd sister secretly

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:00
    I like them all yes the first parts were better but make the watt ever left more better then the first make it more sex let him have sex with the 3rd sister secretly and make it ong make him enjoy all the holes she have and then add the value of having 3 some then 4 some

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:08
    I loved it......as many more stories as you want

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:08
    This is the greatest series I have read on here. I have read these three that you already wrote 5 times now!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:15
    I really hope this will not end so soon!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:41
    Keep going. You still have to get the last sister in on this.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:52
    a little disappointed but hoping their will be other parts to this i very much like your stories ^_^

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 01:59
    Awesome dude it kills waiting for the next

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 02:29
    just stick with a good story every thing else is awsome no need to kill it by ending it to fast
    One of the best story's ever by the way

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 02:35
    continued from below
    Maybe while he is walking around you can the that one girl Gene be driving then pick him up and they have sex then the last sister goes over to her house to try and bring him back and then she ends up staying with him and having a threesome with him and the other girl
    Screw the other sisters he doesn't need them just to have sex.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 02:36
    continued from below
    Maybe while he is walking around you can the that one girl Gene be driving then pick him up and they have sex then the last sister goes over to her house to try and bring him back and then she ends up staying with him and having a threesome with him and the other girl
    Screw the other sisters he doesn't need them just to have sex.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 02:49
    I fucking love it :d

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 02:58
    Great story, u always leave me wanting more. Please make as many parts to the series as you want it only makes it better.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 03:25
    Fantastic story. Cool to see him man up and walk out on them. Can't wait to see where you take this.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:07
    keep writing, don't limit the chapters.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:07
    Greatness in the making...keep it up, i'm hoping for at least another 3 parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:24
    Bring on the next one brooooo

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:31
    oh SHIT!! u go fuckin hard w/ these stories!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:50
    Hmm, gonna guess that riley will now be involved. Will she actually have feelings for him unlike the others? I'd love to see max get these two back, and because i think ashley seems so not he should really take his time if you know what i mean. Treat them both like they treated him and have them begging for forgiveness.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:57
    I don't think he should have sex with gene I feel like that might ruin the story

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 04:59
    These stories remind me of the "CAMP: Ron's Journey" stories about the psionic kid who fucks his sisters. I really like the character development in Max through these last three chapters and I'm really interested to see what happens next. Don't rush the sex--he needs to come to some sort of conclusion before he'd be emotionally ready to have sex with anyone else again. Bringing Riley and Gene into it are musts. I dig the S&M. Work on proofreading/grammar and also think about how you see the series ending and where you see the girls' characters going.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 05:03
    Damn this story is perfect, story and characters feel very real! Keep going in the same direction its amazing. Typically I skim through the dialogue and go straight to the sex, but with your stories I actually read the whole thing and want to find out what happens next. Great work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 05:37
    I hope you never stop with these!!and the next one should involve car sex with izzy.. Maybe a little school bathroom sex with gene after school but none of the sisters get mad?these are the only stories i read, keep it up.. Oh and maybe a little shower sex?!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 06:40
    The one thing i dislike is that u take so long but take it as a compliment coz that means i still wait regardless for ur stories coz there fantastic :-D keep up the good work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 07:19
    keep it up please

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 09:59
    bro dont say srry lol, truthfully at this point im reading for the story not the sex :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 10:01
    for fuck sakes i wish i had sisters like that ....

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 10:04
    dude, seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must have more!!! these are really great!, maybe take out the(some) sex scenes and then you have a novel or sequel no doubt! These are really great. Keep going. :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 10:13
    i like but more stories about max and his other sister and genne

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 10:21
    please kindly keep writing i can see you getting better and the stories are amazing i read them half for the sex and half for the story. Write as many parts as you want!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 10:55
    Keep it coming. This is a great store line.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 11:31
    Personally I am hopping for a quite a few more chapters before the final really enjoying this series

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 12:26
    Hell I thought it was go an I could definitely go for 4 more parts great story line

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 12:39
    This is great love the story could read them foreever keep it going very good read

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 12:44
    This is by far the best series ive ever read please keep writing them ur awesome no suggestions from me im fine with anything as long as u keep up watever ur doing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 12:45
    Wait are you seriosly 99????

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 13:16
    Amazing please please please keep going it's awesome, next do a threesome with max ashley and izzy then have Riley catch them.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 14:26
    Man you rock! Great story, nice twists. Don't rush it. Let us have more chapters of it. Personally I am not only for the sex scenes, i like the whole story. Thanks for the gift.


    -junkyard

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 14:59
    Love the story, I along with many others would def. enjoy many more parts of the story!

    Answer 0

  • gab4320
    27.12.2011 18:17
    great story so far. I want to see what is going to happening

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 18:42
    omg dude i love ur story shit do i want more chapters shit i want a book this is good shit

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 18:53
    Please, few more chapters.

    Answer 0

  • JustBored2k11
    27.12.2011 19:22
    Come on we have to get more parts to this series. Oh and the storyline is ace

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 19:35
    FINALLY thanks for story 3 :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 20:05
    they should have a 3 way plz

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 20:45
    Keep going your storys are great. I can't wait for the next one

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 20:53
    Dude PLEASE MAKE A BOOK OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR A FUCKING AWESOME WRITER!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 21:26
    great story bro i smiled through the whole thing i was even clapping for Max cause he finally had enough of his sisters' bullshit man i can NOT wait for the next part i mean that was AWESOME keep writhing bro thx again for this awesome series

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 21:42
    Awesome story keep writing parts to it

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 21:59
    great story! Riley has to get involved soon. How about three and foursomes down the road?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 22:11
    Make a three-some with Max, Ashley and Izzy or four-some with Riley added GREAT STORIES you should be an author :P

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 22:55
    Jesus christ...i rly like the constant twists in the storyline. Plz keep writing this one XD

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 00:15
    Keep them going they are getting real good.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 00:20
    Dude, Your doing great with the story so I wouldn't worry. And as far as making 2 to 4 more parts to this story, I hope you make 10 + more parts to this story or maybe even a few more story lines with these characters. Oh, and I'll gladly wait 2 weeks in between each part if I have too, of course if you can write them faster that would be cool too. ; )

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 00:56
    This was great! I got so angry after you said it was all a lie, and him leaving just sold me. Make. More.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 00:58
    ok this is getting very interesting and hope to see a lot more soon

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 01:00
    Hey bro I hardly ever read sets of stories but I find myself looking for your stories. Great job keep them coming please. Ps you are on my favorites list now.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 01:09
    There is no need to apologize for a good story. Your grammar and spelling is good and your stories flow nicely. You are doing very well and I hope you keep this story going for a long time.
    From,
    NRL

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 01:17
    dude this is some of the best writing ive ever read. a sex story that gets you really into the characters doesnt come along too often, but youve done it my friend. keep writing stories theyre amazing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 01:30
    So hot hav him stay wit gene n he draws her n more happens

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 01:44
    WOW! Very nice! keep writing this story.. i wouldn't mind even if it would reached 100 chaps. (as long as its 2 chaps a week lol )
    Its really pretty good and i'll keep waiting for more.. thanks and belated merry Christmas.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 02:12
    i think u should make it to wher he ends up fuccin riley cuhzz she does something similar to wht ashley nd izzy do but then at the end it wuhzz all a tricc to get him into a foursome

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 02:20
    These aren't just sexy as yell even if you bust early you still wanna know the rest lol!!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 02:31
    Dude, fucking awesome stories. The more parts you make, the better. :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 02:33
    dude u need to get the next one out fast man i love this story so much man i will check back every day until u put a new one up that is how awesome this story is and one person was right i blew early but still kept reading to see what happened next

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 03:24
    This is amazing! It's hot, captivating, and you start to care about the characters! You see recurring themes and use metaphors amazingly (the part where it says "With Ashley still lying on the bed naked, and Izzy wearing short shorts and black tank top, I slowly began to put on a different set of clothes." was a great way of showing his metamorphosis into an independent man was superb)! Don't limit yourself to sex stories, get into creative writing; I would be one of your first customers! :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 03:26
    PLUS make this a book, it'll be a bestselling adult novel!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 03:36
    idea: have him go to gene for support, maybe start a kind of relation with her, but at the same time, have him be pushing her away for some reason...maybe there WAS some reason for the whore accusations? maybe create conflict between her and the sisters, izzy especially!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 03:46
    Best series period keep on going I check 3 times a day to see if you posted more

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 06:46
    Dude PLEASE MAKE A BOOK OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR A FUCKING AWESOME WRITER!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 07:35
    u are the man..i love that there is an actual story to it instead of just fucking..much props to u n keep them comin.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 09:38
    This is on par with End of the a World as far as a story that draws you in. keep up the great work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 10:07
    Please make more parts, I was sure it was gonna be more lovely dovey, never would have expected all the twist but I love them all the same

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 10:48
    Dude I nvr thougth I would read another story as good as my neighbors incest
    Keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 12:17
    What a story.Welldone

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 15:14
    Great story once again. I'm starting to really root for poor Max. He gets played like a piano by these two. But after all, I kinda felt Riley is the most interesting sister anyway all along. And, boy, do i hope she ends up being better for him than the others. Maybe even a happy ending with Riley?

    Anyways, I'm curious to see where the story will take us, and I hope you'll keep creating elaborate storylines to follow the progression of Max's relationships with his sisters along.

    Thank a lot!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 16:34
    You could have Max stay over at Gene's house or something. Anyway this is an amazing series, loving every little bit. lol

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 16:53
    Dude u might as well include your mother and then gene, then punish your whory sisters with maybe hardcore sex that will live their sluty cunts sore.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 16:56
    Dude u might as well include your mother and then gene, then punish your whory sisters with maybe hardcore sex that will live their sluty cunts sore.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 17:49
    This series is fantastic! Max has dimension and is quite relatable, and his sisters are definitely devious monsters. Honestly I find myself to be reading this more for the plot than sex lately - not that I'm saying you should cut back on the sex, of course. So... Yeah. Keep up the good work! Anxiously await Part 4, though please take your time and make it a spiffy thing!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 18:44
    Keep them oming and dont change to much from the way the story is going. I mean like i read in a previos comment dont cut back on the sex. these would make a realy good book that I myself would love to own.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 20:54
    HELL OF A GOOD CHAPTER. keep up the great work. I loved how you threw the curve ball. I actual took the line of Izzy changing her stripes if you will. I can see another 5 chapters easily. This is worth waiting for. Once again keep up the great work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 23:18
    awesome story do you have any idea when the next part will come out? like a day that you will try to release it by?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 23:22
    hope you make a part 4 and the curve ball as you say got me hooked and hope you make it to were max get big revenge on his sisters good

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 23:22
    hope you make a part 4 and the curve ball as you say got me hooked and hope you make it to were max get big revenge on his sisters good

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 00:30
    max...ur awesome..hatsoff...!!
    I'm really impressed by ur story.....u better add a riley in this n punish all d sisters by a hardcore sex...in wich its must contain anal..,n hardcore sex...n the same type of sex wich u had first time wit izzy

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:11
    i love this story. don't you dare stop now!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:12
    i love this story. don't you dare stop now!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:22
    I wish u could make them quick I'm hooked on these stories......They are a HIGH demand these days I think u should just make them quick u do it perfectly fine when u are in a hurry u should just have on up every week Or five days

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:23
    Love these stories please keep going!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:25
    This series at least deserves four more parts

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:50
    Make a million more if you have to these are really great! Its so hard to find such good stories now-a-days and yours definitaly tales the cake on the bes story ive read so far! Cant wait to read more and i actually felt quite sad then proud for max in the end. Im suprised Riley isnt the one decieving but oh well, maybe there is hope for her to be the "bigger sister"

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 02:22
    I have read all 3 and i think this one is the best so far i laughed a lil it was funny at points
    it kinda did piss me off though wen max left i wanted to know where he was going
    *****

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 03:12
    Very good make as many parts as u want I will read them all

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 03:46
    Damn cliffhangers! Write more!! I'm interested to see how Riley gets involved and finding out how Max deals with everything

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 07:43
    Ohk....now this is fucking addictive.....love ur stories man....keep em going....post em faster if u can...
    thanks

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 09:11
    You can write a damn novel if it keeps this story going. Good work

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 10:38
    Keep writing these are awesome

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 11:47
    post the 4th part.asap.

    Answer 0

  • inferis
    29.12.2011 14:09
    The 3rd part was the best yet. Feel free to keep writing new parts and I promise to keep reading them.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 14:35
    Bro, these stories are fucking fantastic, I almost came when I saw you'd posted the third part! This though, is by far the best part of the story so far because of the drama and jealousy factors. Not a lot of writers use that in their young incest and I personally love it. I say to keep the drama going for a bit longer (especially since Max just left).

    Suggestion: Have Izzy and Ashley become a complete wreck and Riley confront them and hear the whole story. Then have her have some sentimental break down about how she's always wanted a good guy (like Max) and she's pissed they only used him. She then goes off to look for him....

    That's just a bit of a frame but I think you could make that work, change how Max and the sisters live in their own. Ultimately of course, it's all up to you, I'll be happy with whatever you write. Keep up the great work!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 15:37
    Hurry up already I cant wait for part 4. I love Max's character. I hate how Izzy and Ashley has been treating him. I hope Riley enters the story and treats him better then Izzy and Ashley. And when does the mom enter the story? I hope she does come home and catchs anybody having sex.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 18:15
    Your description of the sex is pretty mediocre but the plot is so good it makes up for it.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 18:48
    so good i had to write another comment. looking through some other posts i like the idea of izzy/ashley becoming wrecks and riley getting the whole story and going out to find him. i have NEVER had a story that i checked daily to see if there are ne new chapters. i think it would be kinda of twisted if riley has him stop to use him and then he leaves while the girls lives crumble from him being gone. Then the girls can go after him to come complete th family again.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 19:56
    dude great story look foreword to reading more, great story line and i love that you're making it long, this is one of my favorite stories

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 00:15
    riley needs to be in this story! part four is wat im thinking

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 00:24
    Honestly you have some of the best writing very talented the whole story theme plot everything is spot on

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 01:27
    Omg!! Great story!! I want more!! I love Max because i have can relate to him! You are an amazing writer my friend! I feel what Max is feeling!! Author!!! Author!!! ;) hope for more parts soon

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 01:35
    I am so glad part three came out!! Amazing writting bro!! It would be interesting if Gene somehow ended up entangled in all of it. ;)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 02:24
    great story defo add riley in the next and all 4 of them together maybe even gene

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 02:44
    I was kind hoping max would've fucked riley. He fucked ashley in the 1st story, izzy in the 2nd but riley shoulda been in the 3rd story

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 03:29
    Great story, u always leave me wanting more. Please make as many parts to the series as you want it only makes it better.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 04:36
    I don't care if it's 2-4 more parts make it 10 as long as this
    One or longer make an entire book I would buy it I love stories make more and more I can't get enough

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 04:46
    dude, you can write like a champ. ive read all of them and i want to finish it. im excited about part 4 :)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 05:25
    Good story, awesome plot twists, unique character design, and tons of other good stuff I can't find a name for.....6/5 in my books, and I hope you keep writing these thigns

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 05:34
    This is amazing! Plzz keep up the good work these storys are FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 06:32
    U are a good writer u need to write another one mate

    Answer 0

  • Chaso4469
    30.12.2011 08:19
    Iwoul like the story to continue. There are a lot of possabilties left.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 09:00
    keep up the excellent writing.This is the best series I have read in a long long time.Fucking awesome

    Answer 0

  • atrevino95
    30.12.2011 10:12
    The more pieces to this story the better. Your a really good writer and i cant wait For the next chapter.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 15:14
    i think you should wright about riley sneaking out and she found max and thats how you could work riley into it

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 18:24
    Your doing an excellent job writing this series.

    Answer 0

  • Pussy_Lover_69
    30.12.2011 19:14
    whens part 4 coming out I am really enjoying this story!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 20:47
    ouaou man that IS a hell of a turn on events . great story and hope that many more parts will come. anyway max should go to his teacher and stay there at least for the night then you can add gene into the scene and later i'd really like to see a threesome or even a foursome with the evil sisters. realy great story again hope to read more.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 21:34
    You are one of the best writes on this web site even when u done with this story I hope you write more

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 21:50
    when can we expect part 4?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 21:51
    when can we expect part 4?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 22:10
    You are one of the best writes on this web site even when u done with this story I hope you write more

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 23:28
    This story is one of the few I've not only found incredibly sexy, but actually really good. It's got some great twists and turns as well.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 00:03
    U better be kidding ur almost done god dame I shearch this site everyday to see if there's a new one...don't stop righting this seriers

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 00:34
    This is the greatest story I've ever read plz keep writing
    Also have u noticed there is nothing but positive comments so I doo hope u
    Keep writing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 02:05
    you can mkae 20 parts for all i care this story is GREAT!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 02:23
    I highly advise you continue this story, and not end it anytime soon. I love the drama in it, as well as the sex. Good job with this.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 02:54
    These Stories Are Amazing... Keep Writing. I Want To Read More. :) Cant Wait For Part 4.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 02:59
    Bro, these stories are fucking fantastic, I almost came when I saw you'd posted the third part! This though, is by far the best part of the story so far because of the drama and jealousy factors. Not a lot of writers use that in their young incest and I personally love it. I say to keep the drama going for a bit longer (especially since Max just left).

    Suggestion: Have Izzy and Ashley become a complete wreck and Riley confront them and hear the whole story. Then have her have some sentimental break down about how she's always wanted a good guy (like Max) and she's pissed they only used him. She then goes off to look for him....

    That's just a bit of a frame but I think you could make that work, change how Max and the sisters live in their own. Ultimately of course, it's all up to you, I'll be happy with whatever you write. Keep up the great work!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 03:53
    OMGGG I want MOOOAR!!! This is so awesome to read that I find myself looking for the next part daily.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 05:10
    Ive never commented on a story before. I felt the need to for yours: This is by far the most excellent story I have seen on this site in a very long time. I would not mind at all if this was an on going series with 4, 8, or 100 more parts. I, in fact, would love that. Please keep it up.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 05:23
    Excellent keep writing looking forward to next part.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 05:32
    Your good bro, But to me it feels like your a teen, I'm one too.. I love reading these stories (: Keep up the good work and maybe you can be like Dark_Brother eh?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 05:44
    Pls don't stop,because i want more.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 08:21
    Its bad? What the hell do.you mean its bad? Im an avid reader and writer, and this is GOLDEN. im honestly saying this from complete experience. This is bookworthy the only thing thats wrong with this is the typos. Get that fixed, and hot damn! We got ourselves a fine artist here! Much respect from toledo ohio. Im giving this a 4/5 and i mean this is a DAMN good story, bro.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 20:22
    Hey I'm glad to see that your going to continue with this story because honestly I'm looking forward to alot more. With your writing I feel how Max feels... Pissed off or sympathy when it calls for it. However I do like some of the other comments where on this story could go but you are the writer and the one with the great story line so please keep up the great work ! I for one will keep reading but please hurry with the other chapters!!! Dev

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 22:51
    your really young arent you you made a mistake with your grammar that anyone over the age of 12 wouldn't make dumb ass

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 23:11
    This should go to a soap opera, has a good thrill and drama and all the turns, really funny.
    When I started to cheer for Izzy she became a bitch again so hilarious.
    I hope the next part will sho the younger sis side and the same plot will work then all off them trying to get into Max's pants while trying to put the others down to his eyes.
    YEAAAAAHHH!!! sisters cat fight!!!
    Still I don't get why all the girls in this site's stories are c, D or DD's (just a random thought) I think you never said Izzy's or Ashley's meassures lol :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 23:16
    Holy crap you're good! It's hot and it's also good writing (other than the occasional grammar/spelling mistake)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 23:22
    2-4 more parts hell go 10-20 this is a 5/5 series

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 23:38
    dude this is my favorite stories on this site man make the next part of the story i was dying to read it but when i found out there was none kinda bummed awesome story make one soon dude that would totally be awesome

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 23:41
    Could always do something connecting the part w/ Riley from the last story.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 00:36
    Needs more detailed sex scenes

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 04:53
    i cant believe im hooked on a sex story so much that im waiting for new parts to be released.
    its like the wait for a movie sequel or a book like harry potter. u cant get enough. Love this story man!
    ur a brillant writer

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 07:43
    it is the best story i have read in a long time i am really hooked on ur stories please make more i will keep on reading them tell the end please dont end this one

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 09:58
    dont change shit about your story i read comment from other people nigga your story is fucking awesome i am waiting on the next chapter please hurry though man i cant wait to read the next one i check back everyday just to see if you posted it thanks

    Answer 0

  • MartinJD
    01.01.2012 11:39
    Yup! What all the comments above were sayin'... :-D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 13:57
    This series kicks ass!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 15:51
    Can i just say i love your stories and just you as a writer. And that this is the only story i have engaged in deep thought (about max's position). Great story cant wait for part 4
    P.S. plz dont change anything about how you write

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 16:25
    great story dude dont change a thing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 20:13
    Best series I've read in a very long time. Keep them coming!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 20:13
    Nice! why dont u make it in to a threesome

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 22:29
    you and dark brother are the two best authors on this site... great job man... and your lucky... apparently your only real competition is leaving soon :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 02:00
    Make him fuck up all of their lives. I'm not typically one for revenge, but these bitches deserve it.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 02:02
    I've been waiting so long for this!! Are you gonna write another?!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 02:25
    great story, but if he got riley too wouldn't that be too perfect? :P

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 02:37
    Fuck you you the comment under neath me this Guy is great and I love his stories but we all will Mister the incest God dark brother

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 03:14
    damn, and just when i was thinking this little story had jumped the shark, it has another twist. you are the M. Night Shyamalan of internet incest stories. GREAT WORK

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 03:16
    you better write another part and this one was as good as all the others. and if you don't get this published you are lame ;)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 04:34
    One of the best stories i have ever read please make another!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 12:58
    This is one of the best stories ive ever read erotic or not and i thank you for taking time out of your life to make a other people have a little enjoyment,this story is well written even if it was rushed and again i thank you for right these 3 great stories and hope you continue to right this storie..thanks

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 19:24
    The song Good Ridance (Time of Your Life) By: Green Day perfectly fits this scene. I would have made great friends with this guy knowing that we have many things in common also adding were the same age. :P And also, i love friends with hot sisters.......

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 19:29
    Dont worry about making Riley get the 9 incher... Shes a subconscious psycho-bitch, make get fucked by a monkey... hate bitches like that. :<

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 22:37
    story is perfect, im craving more, without a doubt the best story i have ever read on this website. It is a work of art

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 22:59
    Honestly I like reading this series better than any Dark_Brother series, the characters are much more interesting to me, largely due to the fact that not everybody is perfect and invincible, making them much more believable.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 23:50
    MAKE THE NEXT ONE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 00:01
    good ending you should definitely keep writing and i think he should still do gene the girl as school

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 01:43
    Oh jeez, I just read all three in a row. Please make more. You're incredible.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 03:08
    dont piss everyone off and take a extra long tim3 for part 4

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 07:29
    The great thing about this series is it has a plot and not just mindless fucking. Take your time and add more parts. We all love your work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 10:18
    i fort ur story was great fantastic dont worry about those dicks that say shit i loved it please keep writtin part 4 cant wait

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 12:14
    nooooooo my name is tyler :(

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 14:28
    man...i finnally thought max had it good with...man shes a bitch hell i would leave too i i had to deal with what max has gone thru and take all the time you want make a few more chapters it adds depth to the story and personally your better than Dark_Brother and this is just your first series!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 19:36
    Good Plot, Good Storey, enjoying reading the series. Looking forward to more.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 01:47
    This is the best one yet

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 02:13
    OMFG this set of parts is flipping AMAZING. Make more parts!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 04:35
    Wow these r really good. Keep it up

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 05:04
    Best story i have ever read in my life please continue

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 05:15
    please finish the story
    Gage

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 15:55
    I really loved this story. Please keep working on it. It's great and I would love to read more.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 19:43
    Bro, ur story is fucking addictive; I'm checking everyday for the next one

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 19:57
    He should live with his teacher and have an orgy with the teacher and Gene, after a pot smoking session

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 00:42
    aw man this is like one of the best storys ever so mutch drama like the sex is good but there is alot shit that i never saw coming!! keeping going bro totally need more

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 01:44
    There is only one word to describe your stories, fantastic! Your plot is interesting in the fact that there are many twists and turns. I am pretty thrilled for the fifth part of this story! Keep up the great work!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 05:54
    If you dont finnish this story im gonna hunt you down and murder you in your sleep, and im not entirely sure im kidding. lol. This story is way too good to die now, keep upp the awesome work =)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 07:25
    this story is intriguing, I like it a lot!!! make more!!!

    Answer 0

  • zacksmets
    05.01.2012 07:34
    awesome story
    a lot better
    BAKED
    shooting his load on izzy AWESOME

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 20:04
    When is part 4 coming out...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 00:09
    I'm completely hooked to this series, which truly never happens with stories here. I say you should continue whatever way you see fit. I love the twists and struggle and stress that Max goes through. Personally I'd love 2-4 or more stories out of this if you can keep it up. After finishing this, I want to know what happens next. Keep it up!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 00:30
    Dude hurry up please

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 01:05
    I honestly can't wait for part 4 and neither can my pussy. Its socked from all three parts. Cant wait for more.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 13:57
    please make the 4th one asap! i love this author xD

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 17:41
    awesome story pls hurry with part 4

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 17:46
    Wow I'm completely hooked into your story. I enjoy your writing and the detail and emotionz you put into the characterz really bring me into the story. I can't wait for the next one plz dun keep us waiting to long

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 01:55
    Please hurry on part 4 I've been waiting sinse the day part 3 came out.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 04:59
    Holy crap. Another 2-4 parts would be AMAZING.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 05:16
    Holy shit I love the story fucking best storyline I ever read in my life dude you got great skill.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 07:12
    Holy shit I love the story fucking best storyline I ever read in my life dude you got great skill.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 07:13
    Holy shit I love the story fucking best storyline I ever read in my life dude you got great skill.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 07:17
    Omfg more plz ur talent is amazing hurry up

    Melxx

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 15:47
    I wonder why you never had Riley come into the story. You just left her to dry.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 05:05
    part 4 please its fuckin great so far and i wanna read more!!
    And maby include Riley

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 07:31
    Dude! best story ever!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 08:17
    dude were is the the next one been waiting what feeels like ages

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 13:34
    i am pretty curious what will happen next. Still two girls in it that could be involved more - Riley and Gene ... go on with it ;)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 15:04
    I really wanna see Riley in this ;)
    It's an awesome story; good job :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 17:40
    I have to admit... Pretty damn good. I am encouraging another chapter in the story. It's pretty well written, very entertaining, and sexual all the while. I'm going on my third week of waiting. Now, all the horn dogs here really want to see Riley and Gene sexually brought into the story. I do see a need for that, but only because its a whole loose end for each Character. Also, I will be disappointed if you don't write another one, only because you left it hanging off at the end.

    Answer 0

  • micky1952
    08.01.2012 19:41
    great story line, not usually one to read continuing stories but this one held my interest. Waiting patiently for 4,5 etc.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 22:14
    Best Muthafucking story I've ever read! :D
    Continue continue CONTINUE! !!! :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 22:57
    OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG HHHHHHHOOOOWWWWWWW LOOOOONG ISSSSSSSS IIIITTTTTTTTT GGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOIIIIIINNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG TOOOO BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!???!?!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 23:05
    Best Muthafucking story I've ever read! :D
    Continue continue CONTINUE! !!! :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 23:42
    fucking post the next part already!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 23:57
    AY AY AY AY BRO!!!!!!
    FUCKING POST UP PART 4!!!!!!
    LIKE.....NOW!!!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 23:58
    dam it school started and you didnt post the next part FUCK

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 00:24
    Look dude I never commet but its driving me mad to check this bull shit every day please hurry

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 02:38
    Holy Fucking Shit Talk About A Twist I Love This Series, Make It Super Long As Possible. Btw I Hate Them Bitchs lol

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 04:06
    i mean... the stories are really good n all but i dont think there worth this much of a wait

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 07:27
    This is one of the best reads i have ever read! Amazing story. Greetings from Norway

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 09:42
    dude..post its next part ..i love ur stories

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 10:34
    less sex. but still the story lineup is awesome .hope you carry it on good cause it has some great potential .

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 12:00
    dude how much longer are u going to take ?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 16:24
    dang!! the 4th part still isn't on i'm getting immpatient

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 17:54
    yea dud come on bro everyone is waiting shit i am growing tired of waiting

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 18:22
    yea hes keeping all of us waiting but who cares... probably sumthing important came up there is something called real life shit...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 18:50
    Why do people want riley so much i think that you should make ashly and izzy fill so bad and lonely without max

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 21:02
    Love the story take your time and dont laten to all of them
    From the greatest country in the world CANADA

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 22:12
    Part 4! Part 4! Part 4!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 00:52
    Oh you're starting to piss me off you little piggly son of a bitch lol jk take your time I just hope you don't let everyones suggesions ruin the story

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 03:08
    yea i agree dont let these impactient idiots ruin what you have going

    Answer 0

  • WittyandClever
    10.01.2012 14:24
    Hey bud, take your time. At the same time, hurry up.(Nirvana... lol) I'd say a month from now is enough time? This isn't a threat, just me telling the facts. People are getting pissed. And if something happened that is causing you to not be able to add on to the story, tell us.

    Yours truly,

    WittyandClever :)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 17:56
    Plz make number 4 plz hurry up I've been waiting for ages

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 20:38
    Yeh man keep us updated or something

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 00:01
    U better be postin two at one time or be hurt or goin through some shit cause if your jus bein a douche I'm gonna have hank hill "kick your ass" lol

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 01:20
    Forget those guys man; take you time and make sure pt.4 is of good quality. But then again, try to not take so long(:

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 15:23
    Look I don't know if people read your posts about waiting for two weeks and how your not a fast writer but just ignore them.. I've been checking everyday for the post though and I'm starting to grow a little inpatient soo just make sure that if your going to take so long to post that it's really good but all the parts are really good and you really should make a bunch of parts to this.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 17:27
    I like it please write some more

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 18:46
    This is the shit. I can't wai for the next 2-4

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 19:45
    jesus christ, how this is ridiculous, how long DO I GOTTA WAIT!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 21:20
    Wtf, it's been like forever and the anticipation is killer, could you say something like it'll be done at this time or something so I don't have to come back everyday and then make my teary eyed exit to something that is inferior to your work.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 22:13
    Bro I come to this site every day hoping for part 4. Great storie but damn the wait is killing me. Some advice though. I would like to see you put more detail in the sex parts of the storie. Just a thought :)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 00:13
    U think I'm playin about Hank Hill don't you well guess what I am but for real I'm gonna go get help because the fact that I wait all day to check this thing can't be healthy. Lol

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 00:17
    Excellent story keep it going and don't doubt yourself your an amazing writer

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 02:22
    -_- im gonna kill you... unless you post part 4 tomarrow

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 04:26
    i most definitly would not mind another 2-4 parts what i would mind is having to wait this long for them, these are awsome stories and i cant wait for the next one

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 10:08
    I say to definitely continue and make many more parts to this story. It's one of the best stories as well as one of my favorites so definitely continue it if you can. :D

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 13:41
    Bro really now...u got us waiting for a long ass time...if ur not done or if u got sum shit going on, then u should just post sumthing up...because ur fans r getting mad....u said two weeks 4 the next part and those two weeks have passed us by.....just poat sumthing up if ur not able to finish the story

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 23:36
    Another day goes by and you haven't put anything? WTF bro??? It's the best story on this site just fucking post another part of it.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 23:37
    Another day goes by and you haven't put anything? WTF bro??? It's the best story on this site just fucking post another part of it.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 23:44
    i hate you so much right now...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 23:45
    you all know this guy died right

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 23:56
    maybe have Riley care and try and convince him to come back then sex with her?

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 00:00
    I'm with this other dude I think he died all kidding aside tho r u ok

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 18:36
    Dude hurry up and post part 4.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 18:37
    Yeah. Just wondering like no joke tell us that u are still living

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 19:00
    3 weeks its bean 3 weeks. I have no problem waiting but when you give yourself a deadline its kinda ridiculous.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 19:07
    Where is the next chapter

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 19:39
    Man, just get it done, it'll be great.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 22:17
    Come on man it's been 3 weeks and you gave a deadline of 2, and don't get me wrong I love the stories but please if you set a deadline at least be somewhere in the vecinity.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 22:34
    dude really? ive been waiting for 3 weeks now. Im starting to think youve stopped writing

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 00:02
    Dude hurry up and post part 4.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 01:02
    CmOn man were all waiting for prt 4 and when u give urself a deadline ppl exPect u to follow ur own rules

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 01:14
    Dude I almost had the perfect Friday. Jus post somthin man at least this weekend

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 01:20
    I jus tried to find somthin else to read and fill the void yeaaaaaa no that didn't work out please finish

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 02:19
    okay everyones saying he gave deadline.... not really he said he was going to TRY to write it within the next couple weeks... he didnt guarantee anything... so shut the fuck up and be patient

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2012 12:24
    I love youy stories so much. Maybe the only stories that actually make it seem so real and so easy to imagine. I know how tough it is to write a good story especially when a good story writing requires self critism (sp?) lol but keep uP the amazinggggg work

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2012 23:38
    No I thought this was great.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 12:57
    Amazing, your stories keep me rivetted :)

    Answer 0

  • Silv1
    22.01.2012 02:43
    holy shit. great plot twist

    Answer 0

  • Silv1
    22.01.2012 03:11
    holy shit. great plot twist

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2012 08:52
    Not a story . . A thriller . . May better then Indian blockbuster movies. . . in some its give reality nice work done.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2012 04:12
    Greatness. Make a series haha.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2012 17:51
    you got make a part 4

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 04:19
    Go for it write 6 more parts if you wanna

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 05:39
    not 2 ... not 4 parts ... continue the story ... make it longer ... i'm sure u have a lot of ideas ...

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 05:46
    Besides the sex it sucked but u can fix it while walking riley picks him up and take him to a diner they talk max explains the situation and they decide to get a room for the night to avoid the situation at home sleeping voyeur incest u can take it from there

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 00:25
    Great stuff man. Write a shit ton more. :)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 01:22
    This shit is amazing , very good work man keep it up!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 16:10
    I don't know what makes you think this part isn't what it could've been, cause this is just as good as the past parts. Please make more than 2 or 4 parts.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2012 01:12
    My name is Mac! Hell yeah!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 23:10
    Please write more, this is a awesome story, also write more stories, your a great writer

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 13:30
    He shouldn't have given in to Ashley so fast, but the end made up for it, and they turned out to be as manipulating as I thought they were.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2012 21:58
    Great story, I´m actually more interested in knowing what happens next then the actuall sex. Is that weird? :P

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2012 00:55
    Half the stories I read on here I like the plot rather then the sex

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 02:04
    this is like the third time ive read the series and ITS STILL AWESOME!!!!!! although i know your stuck plse hurry up with part 7 !!!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 00:41
    I read this before but I don't remember what happened next. I know it is just a story but I want things to turn out right (that means fucking all his sisters when he wants to and them all getting along) and maybe him getting with another woman and just dropping back home to get pussy, LOL. Thank you for writing. Here is a POSITIVE, it would not take it.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 08:33
    Very good. i like this story.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2012 12:11
    i love this story not just for the sex scenes but because this actually has some plot

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2013 03:00
    man, i love this story!

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 09:57
    When is part 4??????????

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2013 06:01
    I want an Eat Cook Love t-shirt!I also really want to try to get tegethor with you before the summer is over. What's on your agenda for August?VA:F [1.9.18_1163](from 0 votes)

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 10:42
    great storie keep going

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2013 17:03
    Nice keeps gettin better

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2014 23:20
    this is so gd. a gd story

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2015 15:29
    Awesome

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2015 04:39
    Why can't I find parts 4 and 5

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2015 09:13
    Why can't I find parts 4 and 5

    Answer 0

  • Bry83
    06.11.2015 21:56
    Great story can't wait to read the rest.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2015 22:00
    Dis story is awesome

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2015 07:52
    yes yes yes

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2015 01:21
    u spell off wrong

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2016 01:39
    Definitely rushed, there are a lot of spelling errors but still a great story. Thanks for writing! =)

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    11.02.2016 02:55
    I don't even feel like I'm reading porn. The storyline and the suspense is amazing

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2016 03:38
    This could be a damn movie

    Answer 0

  • Big+Bob+D
    19.02.2016 21:45
    Oh, this is FUN! That last scene was hysterical. Those women are unbelievable. THANKS!

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2016 05:22
    Amazing suspense I love it!

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2016 15:53
    someone, make this a movie.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 16:24
    Movie movie movie movieeeeeeeeeee............

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 16:28
    I m n indian n i made my cousin read ur stories . Immediatly v ended up both losing our virginity . Thankks to you. Give us another chance , giv us a fuckilicious ending ...

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 16:29
    Movie movie movie movieeeeeeeeeee............

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2016 20:25
    Lmao if this were made into a movie people watching it in theaters would all be labeled maybe a porno

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    29.04.2016 23:46
    i want the next part :(

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2016 20:50
    Make as many parts as you can come up with.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2016 20:25
    I DIDNT READ IT FLAT BUT EVERY TIME MY DICK HARDENED

    zman

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2016 09:42
    cumed cumed cumed that's what I did while reading this that many times too

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2016 23:51
    Dude the story is so good sometimes I just read it for fun

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2016 01:29
    I know I'm pretty late to all this but I have to commend you for your character building I was worried there for a bit with the sudden change from izzy but you pulled it all back into a believable narrative I look forward to finishing the rest

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2017 23:57
    It will be good if you can write several more chapters. Thank you for your work.

    Answer 0

Sign Up and leave comment

Last stories by SomeStory

arrowChat +1