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3 Evil Sisters-Part 6

Author: SomeStory

Date: 9 February 2012

Anal, Fiction, Ass to mouth, Blackmail

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“I’ll see you later Tiffany,” I awkwardly waved, climbing out of the car. She returned my wave with a weak smile and drove off without another glimpse towards me. I tried to play it cool as I walked into my house. Riley and Izzy were sitting in the living room, there eyes looking at me blankly. “What’d you guys eat for dinner?”

“We ordered a pizza,” Izzy answered looking back towards the TV. “There’s some leftover if your still hungry.”

“No thanks,” I mumbled heading down the hall towards my room. When I shut the door, I jumped into bed without hesitation and fell right too sleep. It’d been so long since I went to bed happy, and it felt great. The next morning nothing could bring me down, and as the day went on it just proved how right I really was. I actually passed my math test with an A, and when it came time to sketch Gene, I was finally able to draw at the level I was used too.

“Wow,” Mr. Edwards clapped his hand, “Some of your best work man. That’s really good.”

“Thanks,” I glared at my picture, seeing if I could make any more touch ups.

“Was it because my mom helped you?” Gene asked coming around the table to look at it, “She said that you fought her for awhile before finally telling her.”

The moment she said that, the moment I heard her cheerful voice, the moment I heard the oblivious innocence out loud, my good day vanished like an alcoholic’s beer. I slept her mother…and I’m just now realizing that. A newfound feeling began to well up in the center of my chest immediately and I couldn’t explain it, all I know is that I didn’t like it one bit.

“Y-yeah,” I focused on my sketch like my life depended on it. “Tell her I said thanks.”

“Will do!”

She was torturing me with her innocence. Beating my conscious with it like a punching bag until I couldn’t take it anymore, and the feeling I got from it made everything ten times worse. Standing up abruptly, I grabbed my bag and made a beeline for the door.

“I just forgot that I’m late for something sorry!” I explained, flinging open the door and running like my life depended on it. Sure I looked suspicious, but I knew that the longer I stood next to her the more this feeling of remorse would grow. How Ashley dealt with this feeling for three weeks, I will never know. In fact, I don’t want to know. I want to avoid this feeling like the kid with terrible B.O. that’s always in gym class.

When I reached my house, I was sweating profusely and dragged my feet into my room, slamming the door shut and taking a seat on my desk. Burying my face in my hands, I took one long breath to try and calm down.

“I’m going to hell aren’t I?” I mumbled to myself. “What the fuck was I thinking? Holy shit I must be an idiot!” I slammed my fists onto my desk and groaned loudly. My door opened a moment later and I whirled around to find Izzy standing in the doorway, an awkward silence began blanketing the room. “What are you doing?”

“The dishes,” she replied looking around, “You told me to do them remember? I’m making sure you don’t have any in your room before I start it up.”

I didn’t answer as she finished her scan of the room. The look on her face was bored, and almost annoyed. But it wasn’t the normal annoyed look she wore, this one felt almost forced, like she was trying her hardest not to say what was on her mind. When I realized that, the same feeling that I had when I heard Gene’s voice crept back up inside my heart. I think I know what this feeling is now. It’s one that I haven’t really felt because I haven’t done many things to bring up a feeling such as this.

Guilt.

I was feeling guilty about sleeping with Gene’s mom and about making my sisters miserable. It was only when she turned to leave that a terrible impulse washed over me, “Hey Izzy.”

“What?” she turned around to look at me.

“Do you…hate me?”

Her expression switched from annoyed to shocked in record time, “E-excuse me?”

“Do you hate me?” I timidly asked again. The worst part about asking the question, was her answer. She had none. We stared at each other in silence for what felt like forever, until I was forced to say, “Forget I asked.”

Defeated, demoralized, and definitely going to hell now, I got up and went over to my bed and got under the covers. This was all some terrible nightmare that seemed forced upon me because I decided to take a little control of my life. It reduced me to a kid hiding under the covers from the omnipotent boogie man and I figured out why. I never really wronged anyone to the point where I’d feel guilty, but now that I discovered what it felt like, I could say with all honestly that I loathed it with every bone in my body.

And asking my sister outright if she hated me or not was the icing on the cake of my bad ideas. I knew she hated me after all. The proof was all over my body, and embedded into my head forever. I’ve accepted that fact, so why do I feel guilty about making someone who hates me miserable? Am I just incapable of getting even? Is that the kind of person I am, because if it is then I’m destined to let people walk all over me for the rest of my life.

In the midst of my pessimistic thoughts, I failed to notice that Izzy climbed into the bed with me, sitting up against the headboard while slipping her legs underneath the covers.

“Go away,” I whined with my face buried into a pillow. Of course she didn’t listen, rubbing my shoulder for a little while longer as I continued to try and ignore her existence.

“Look at me,” she tried to gently turn around but I brushed her hand off me. “Now Max.” her calm tone disappeared. I decided that it didn’t matter whether or not I fought her because she’d eventually just force me to turn around whenever she got annoyed. Admitting defeat, I turned around and looked up at her fidgety face as she wrapped her arm around me and pulled me in until my head was using her stomach as a pillow. She was stroking my hair as if she was petting a dog while I rested on her stomach, moving up and down to the beat of her breathing. I could tell that this wasn’t something that she was completely comfortable with just by show shaky she was, “Tell me what’s wrong.”

“No.”

“Now Max.”

“Just because you say now doesn’t mean I’ll do what you say,” I tilted my head to look up at her, but only to come face to face with her boobs. “Besides, you hate me, so why should I tell you anything. In fact, why are you even still here?”

“Because I know you feel better whenever you’re cuddled up with me.”

Strangely, she was right. I did feel a little calmer now that I was pressed up against her. “Why is that?”

“Probably because you never got to do this when you were young. Mom was always gone and dad was dead, so you never really experienced what it was like to just lay cuddled up against someone.”

“Still doesn’t explain why your letting me do this when you hate me.”

“Max,” she sighed, “I don’t hate you. None of us do.”

“Bullshit. You guys are only happy when you’re fucking with me, or fucking me in some cases. I’m not an idiot Izzy I know you guys are miserable now that you can’t screw with me constantly.”

“You don’t understand. If we pissed you off and you decide to walk out that door, who knows if you’ll come back this time. Do you have any idea how worried we were the last time you left? Shit, I almost called the cops and reported you missing. And what if Mom came home during that time? How would we explain to her that her only son, and the youngest member of the family ran away? Could you imagine mom’s face?” I felt Izzy’s body shudder slightly.

“Not really,” I admitted, “She’s never home so it’s hard for me to even remember those kinds of faces.”

“She’s got shit to do as usual. Plus she’s supporting four kids on her own, it’s gotta be tough. I’m sure she’ll be back for Riley’s birthday though, it’s in two weeks after all.”

“And then she’ll leave again for another three months.”

“Is that what’s bothering you? The fact that mom’s never around.”

“Nope.”

“Then what is?”

“Shit I don’t want to talk about.”

“Max, please?” she asked sincerely.

I groaned and buried my face into her stomach, slightly regretting getting into this situation. “I did something stupid.”

“Well that’s a start. How stupid are we talking? Like on a scale of one to ten?”

“Thirteen thousand four hundred and sixty one.”

“That bad huh?”

“Worse then the time I ditched school to have sex with you.”

There was a long pause before she asked, “Did you have sex with someone else?” All I could do was close my eyes and nod, “Who?”

“That’s as much as you’re getting.”

“Oh hell no,” Izzy snapped angrily as the mood switched from a nice talk to a violent outburst. “Max if you are having sex with someone outside of our family then you better tell me who it is so I can beat their fucking ass.”

“What?” I shot up from her stomach and looked at those murderous eyes.

“Who is this cunt? Is it Gene? I swear to fucking god if it’s her she’s going to need a fucking army to stop me from kicking her ass until she’s in the hospital.”

“Calm down Izzy!” not that me saying it would actually do anything but I could tell Izzy was serious about it. I had to ask, “Why do you care who it is?”

“You’re my little brother and I’m going to make sure that some cunt isn’t using you for sex.”

“What kind of logic is that? You used me for sex too, remember?”

“It’s completely different.”

“How?”

“I’m your sister, not some whore who likes targeting underage teens.”

“That still doesn’t make sense,” I threw my hands up, “Your basically saying that because we’re family, you’re allowed to use and abuse me for sex. But if someone else even thinks about doing it then they’re instantly a whore and needs to have there ass beaten.”

“That’s exactly what I’m fucking saying. Now you’re going to tell me who this bitch is or else I’m just going to beat up that little friend of yours ‘cause I’m pretty sure it was her anyway,” she started to throw the covers off of her.

“It wasn’t Gene it was her mom!” I blurted out desperately. The moment I did that, I slapped a hand over my mouth and froze. Oh fuck! Izzy’s eyes widened as she brushed her hair aside to look at me with her jaw dropped as far as it could. Seeing both of her eyes was like the sign of a ticking time bomb, and I knew that the clock was winding down.

A bullet to the back of my head would be nice right about now.

“Max,” she began slowly, “Did you have sex with Gene’s mom?” I didn’t say anything, praying that that bullet would come and kill me right about now so I wouldn’t have to answer. Her tone was soft and shaky. She was hiding her anger well, “Answer the question Max. Did you, or did you not, have sex with Gene’s mother.”

“I…uh, well…it’s uh…y'know,” I stammered.

“No Max,” she shook her head, “I don’t know.”

“It’s…complicated?”

“You better find a way to make it simple then Max,” her eyes narrowed, “Or else.”

That final or else, sent shivers through my body. With a shaky voice I took a deep breath and explained what happened last night. Every detail of what happened at the park spewed out of my mouth like a broken faucet, and Izzy remained emotionless throughout the whole thing.

When it was all over, she didn’t say anything. She just kinda sat there with a blank look on her face. The only bright side I could think of was that her anger for Gene had finally subsided. However the downside was that now she knew that I had fucked her mom, and that I’m sex deprived. Two things I should’ve taken to my grave.

“Don’t tell Riley and Ashley please,” I pleaded.

“I won’t,” she said as a devious smile started to cross her face. “I won’t say a word Max. But I think I should tell you a little something as well now.”

“Um, sure. What is it?”

She leaned forward seductively, making sure to smile the entire time as her arm wrapped slowly around my shoulders. “We’re going to fuck tonight.”

“What?!”

“You heard me,” she winked, “Tonight at midnight I want you to come up to my room for a little midnight pussy. Understand?”

“No! I said no more sex didn’t I?”

“I don’t think you really understand then,” her voice was a cool as a cucumber now. “You see, now that I know your little secret, I can do whatever I want with you. You can’t run away to your friend’s house again because then I’ll tell her all about your little sex session with her mom. And if you try to make a break for it I’ll call the cops and tell them that you were molested by her mother or some bullshit like that so not only will they find you, but her mother will pay a hefty price for seducing a minor.”

“This is insane! I trust you and you stick a knife in my back already? What the fuck?”

“You should’ve learned Max. I always get what I want, and if I want to fuck you then I’m going to find a way.”

“Are you serious right now?”

She leaned forward and kissed my forehead, “Can’t wait for tonight.”

Without another word she got up and left my room, leaving me speechless and confused on my bed. Did that really just happen? How stupid could I have been to admit that to Izzy, the most abusive sister I had! Was I getting dumber by the minute or something?

Sitting in my room like a statue, I refused to move until Riley came in and asked when I was making dinner. My body now on autopilot, I cooked and ate dinner in complete silence, my mind too occupied with that conversation to pay attention to anything else. It was only when I laid down in my bed did I finally snap back into reality.

“Fuck. My. Life,” I mumbled. The sweet escape of slumber couldn’t even rescue me this time because I had to meet Izzy tonight at midnight and if I missed that then I’d be in even deeper shit then I already was. So I shut the lights off and stared at the clock as it slowly ticked away until my hour of reckoning arrived.

Once my clock read midnight I rolled out of bed and crept out of my room, up the stairs, and into Izzy’s dimly lit room. She was lying on her bed completely naked, flipping through a magazine to pass the time until I arrived, and when I did, she tossed the magazine aside and beckoned me to her bed with a single finger. I drudged over and sat down on the bed, keeping my back to her.

She grabbed onto my shoulders and violently pulled me onto her, wrapping her arms around me as she pinned me to her body. That strength she had over me was definitely being abused right now.

“Max,” she sighed, hugging me tightly. “Max, Max, Max. I made the mistake of thinking that you’d grow a pair and want to fuck me every chance you got last time. Hell, I even let you be a little rough hoping that it’d turn you on more. But in the end you went back to Ashley and now I know why.” She caressed my hair again, “It’s because I gave you a choice, and Ashley didn’t. So now, you’re going to fuck me whenever I want, and however I want it. Got it?”

“What am I? Your slave?” I whispered.

She heard regardless, “That sounds pretty nice actually. You’re my own personal sex slave,” she sat up and grabbed my chin, making our eyes meet. “And I’m going to be as rough as I want with you. Now take off your clothes.”

She released me and I stripped completely, sitting back down on the bed. She grabbed my hair and yanked me backwards by it. It hurt like hell but I tried to keep quiet. Silence would be my only saving grace right now. With a devious laugh, she grabbed me and violently attacked my lips. Her kisses were sloppy but and forceful, and if she didn’t bring a hand to the back of my head I would’ve pulled back right away. But with her hand pressing me against her lips, I let her claim my mouth with her tongue until she pulled away and slapped me.

“Put some effort into it,” she demanded lunging forward to start again. I did what she said and put a little bit more effort into kissing her, but it was clear that I was humoring her more then anything.

Once she had enough of kissing she pushed me backwards and immediately jumped on top of me. After licking her lips hungrily, she positioned herself over my dick (which was shamefully hard as a rock), lowering herself down onto and letting out a gasp of approval.

“Fuck yes,” she muttered. Her pussy was like a slip-n-slide, making it a breeze for my dick to slide right in. She rocked her hips back and forth, moaning louder and louder as she slowly rode my dick. It felt great, and that was the worst part. Using all my might I tried not to look like I was enjoying myself, just so I couldn’t give her anymore satisfaction then she already had.

Judging by the blissful look on her face she didn’t care, riding up and down my dick and moaning her delight with each rise and fall that she did. She grabbed onto my hands and pressed them against her boobs, and I couldn’t resist giving them a nice hard squeeze.

“Oooooh shit!” she gasped, “Squeeze harder Max!”

I did so and she let out a loud moan, arching her back forward while slamming into my dick. She must be getting close, and although I hated to admit it I was too. It was sick and fucked up but I was so turned on by this whole thing that I was getting close to cumming too.

“I’m gonna cum soon,” I said.

“Oh yes! I want you to cum inside me Max,” she demanded angrily, “Fill me up with your cum!” Just hearing that put me on the verge of cumming and soon enough I couldn’t hold it in any longer and disgracefully shot my load into her. She moaned loudly, climbing off my dick and falling backwards onto her pillows, covered in sweat and with her pussy soaking wet.

I got up, slightly out of breath myself as I hopped off the bed, but I didn’t even take a step forward before grabbed onto my arm.

“Where…do you think…you’re going?” she asked in between breathes.

“Back to my room.”

She shook her head and patted her boobs, “Unless you get down on your knees and beg me, you’ll be sleeping right here.”

The only thing stopping me from begging was knowing that she’d get more satisfaction out of the situation if I did. With sealed lips and a spiteful look, I crawled back into bed with her, resting my head on boobs and closing my eyes. I didn’t want to be awake any longer then I had too.

But the worst thing about this was that a part of me was enjoying it. Enjoying the fact that I could cuddle up against my sister and fall asleep. Enjoying the fact that we were probably going to have a lot of sex from now. Enjoying…the situation.

At the same time however, I hated every second I spent near her.

Luckily, I passed out soon after, wondering whether or not I was in hell or heaven. When I woke up the next morning I groggily lifted my head up, recalling last nights events slowly.

“Afternoon sleepy head,” Izzy smiled wickedly.

“Afternoon?” I scanned her room for a clock, “What time is it?”

“Around two.”

That information woke me up in an instant, and I shot up from the bed immediately. “What?! I have school Izzy why didn’t you wake me up?”

“You were just so cute laying there that I couldn’t bring myself to do it.”

“This isn’t funny! I’m already in trouble at school for arriving late so many times. If I keep skipping school then I’ll get suspended.”

“Uh, I know,” she scoffed, “They told me that at the meeting I had to go to last time you were tardy.”

“Whoa, whoa, whoa. Are you trying to get me suspended?”

“Yep. Then I can have access to you whenever I want.”

“This is my education we’re talking about Izzy!”

“So what? You’re not exactly scholarship material Max. You have two D’s, don’t play sports, and the only talent you have is drawing, and even that’s not going to get you far.”

“Fuck you! You sit on your ass all day because you dropped out of college and you’re trying to tell me that I’m hopeless? Look in a mirror and tell me who’s more hopeless.”

Her answer? A solid right hook to my face. I flew back, tripping over her clothes and tumbling to the ground with my hand pressed over the left side of my face. Mumbling swear words under my breath, I slammed my free hand onto the ground to try and dull the pain as she no doubt just gave me yet another black eye.

The part of me that enjoyed what happened last night was no where to be found now, replaced by a strong desire to pay Izzy back with a right hook of my own. No. No, I wasn’t going to stoop to that level. Last time I hit her it was in a fit of lust more then anger, and she at least feigned approval, but this time if I swung it would be for real, and I don’t know if I could live with the consequences.

My face was still stinging when I sat up, trying to keep as blank a face as possible although Izzy didn’t bother to hide her emotions. Her face was livid. She looked like she was on the brink of beating me to a pulp.

“Get the fuck out of my room!” she roared, pointing towards the door. I was more then happy to listen to her now, grabbing my clothes and leaving the room with her eyes burning holes throughout my body. Slamming her door shut, I threw on my clothes and headed downstairs to examine the hit in my bathroom mirror.

To my great surprise, it wasn’t nearly as bad as the last time she hit me and I knew that I probably was going to get a little shiner, but it would go away within the week as long as I kept ice on it for awhile. I walked out into the kitchen and grabbed a zip lock bag, dumping some ice into it before tenderly placing it onto my eye.

The front door opened as Riley walked inside, kicking her shoes off before noticing me.

“Max what happened?” Riley asked walking into the kitchen and moving the bag of ice out of the way so she could take a look at it. The question itself was stupid because she knew the answer already. I didn’t go around looking for fights after all so if there was ever a bruise or cut on me the source of it could always be traced back to one person. She must’ve realized it too because she looked away shortly after.

I walked over to the house phone, and looked at the list of important numbers written next to it. Once I found the right one I dialed it in and waited for an answer.

“Almont Unified School District, this is Peggy,” the secretary at my school’s main office answered. I handed the phone over to Riley who looked at me funnily.

“Tell them that I’m sick and can’t make it to school the rest of the week,” I explained, “This way I won’t get suspended for absences.”

She nodded and did as I asked, hanging up the phone once it was over. I could take solace in knowing that Riley wasn’t a bitch to me anymore after I stole her virginity. As to why the hell that was, I don’t know, or care for that matter, she was helping me out and that’s all that mattered.

“I’m going to my room,” I told her. She didn’t reply back as I spent the next three hours with a bag of ice on my head, grabbing a new one once the previous one melted while I laid silently on my bed. Unfortunately I had to cook dinner soon so I hopped out of bed and went to work, although I decided to just throw corn dogs in the oven heat up some leftovers.

No one said a single thing the entire time we ate dinner. Ashley noticed my eye the second we sat down and she made sure to keep her head down. I found it funny how whenever Izzy hit me Riley and Ashley would laugh, but the moment she left a visible mark, or drew a little blood they’d shut the hell up and try to act like it didn’t happen. A great system, I know.

Izzy and I were the last to finish, and as I cleaned my plate off she dropped her plate into the sink, nearly breaking it in the process.

“Midnight again. Don’t be late,” she ordered walking away. I turned slowly and watched her strut away. That bitch had a lot of nerve, but I had knew that she was loving all the pain she was causing me, so I needed to try my best and not give her an ounce of emotion. The sex was going to be good whether I wanted it or not, but once it was all over she was going to get a single thing out of me.

That night was almost an exact replay of what happened the previous night, only this time I didn’t take the risk of arguing with her, I just kept my mouth shut and let her ride my dick. Once it was over I fell asleep cuddled up with her again. This became the routine for the next three days. I would show up in her room at midnight, she would ride me until I cummed inside her, then we’d fall asleep together.

Sunday on the other hand, definitely took me by surprise. As normal, I showed up exactly at midnight to find her laying on her bed seductively as usual and she jumped right into kissing once I stripped out of my clothes. She was moaning in my mouth loudly for some reason, and I couldn’t figure out why. We were just kissing normally, I didn’t even have my hands on her.

“Oh Max,” she gasped out, “Oh Max it feels so good.” I pulled away from the kisses and just looked at her with a what the hell face. The smile on her face told me that there was something that I was missing, and she held up a finger to her lips and winked. “Right there Max! Yes, yes, yes, oh god yes!”

If that was the best acting she could do then at least I knew that each orgasm was real. Guess that’s a hollow victory huh? Regardless, I sat there quietly until she flew out of bed and darted for her door leaving me speechless. However I found out why as she flung her door open and reached around the corner to grab something…or someone.

“Ha!” Izzy triumphantly looked back at me, “I caught her.”

“What?” I looked at her funnily as she motioned me to the door. When I leaned outside I found out exactly what she meant. “Riley?”

Riley was sitting right outside the door with only black panties on, her head shamefully looking at the ground. She looked like she was going to die of embarrassment, but Izzy drank it all up.

“I knew I heard someone else’s moaning yesterday,” Izzy giggled, “My baby sister was just a little curious huh? She just wanted to get a little closer and hear what it’s like when Max had sex with someone else. After all, she’s wanted to fuck him again ever since he popped her cherry at school huh?”

“Izzy!” Riley looked at her horrified. “Why would you tell him that?”

“Wait its true?” I asked.

“Oh yeah,” Izzy cooed, “You’re the only guy that Riley’s ever been able to touch without feeling weird so of course when you fucked her it drove her wild. I’ve caught her masturbating to a picture of you three times since you came back, but I had no idea she was going to get this turned on by the thought of us fucking. She’s so wet she ruined her favorite panties.”

“Fuck you Izzy!” Riley spat out.

“Ah-ah-ah,” Izzy leaned down next to her, “Are you sure you want to say that before you hear what I was going to offer?”

“O-offer?”

“I thought that you’d rather see your little brother in action instead of hearing it.”

“Y-you’ll let me…watch?”

“Maybe,” she let go of Riley’s hand and wrapped her arm around me, pulling me in for quick kiss as her hand traced its way down my body. “Only if you get down on all fours and beg to watch me get fucked by Max.”

“What are you doing?” I whispered, “Are you really comfortable with letting Riley watch?”

“She’s seen me masturbate before, so I’ve got nothing to hide,” Izzy whispered back. “Besides, I thought it’d get you a little excited.” She moved her hand towards my fully erect dick and gave it a quick tug. “And it looks like I’m right.”

“Sh-she’s not going to do it,” I mumbled, trying to stay focused.

“Please,” Riley began as she got on all four knees, proving me wrong on the spot. “I want to watch you get fucked by Max, Izzy.”

“What the fuck,” I muttered under my breath, but Izzy just smiled and patted Riley’s head.

“Good girl,” she grabbed onto my hand and took me back into her room. “Come on in Riley, and shut the door please.” With only a lamp lighting the room, Izzy jumped onto the bed still dragging me along as I fell on top of her. She was giggling as we came face to face. She made a funny face and tapped my nose, “C’mon Max. I know you’ve been pissy about what happened but I know that you’re turned on right now. Why don’t you fuck me doggy style like a good boy? I’m getting tired of riding your dick.”

She was talking to as if I was a little puppy, which really annoyed the shit out of me. And she was right too, which only made things worse. But I couldn’t give in! I had to fight her somehow.

“Not going to happen.”

She groaned, “Look I’m sorry for hitting you Max.” I could tell by her tone that she wasn’t really sorry, at least that’s what I thought. “What do I have to do in order for you to fuck me doggy style?”

That was even stranger. She could’ve just threatened to tell Riley about what happened in order to get what she wanted, but instead she gave me the choice. With that in mind I tried to think of something crazy that she probably wouldn’t agree too.

I looked over at Riley who was sitting on the ground awkwardly before looking back at Izzy who was patiently waiting for my answer, “I want to fuck you in the ass and be as rough as I want. And when I’m done you’re going to suck my dick clean.”

Izzy raised an eyebrow, “A little kinky huh?”

“That’s the only way I’ll fuck you in that position. If not you can climb on top and get it over with.”

She reached out towards her nightstand immediately and pulled out a small bottle of lube with a smile, “Deal.”

I couldn’t tell whether to be mad or excited. Who the fuck was I kidding? I was excited. This was as close to payback as I was going to get, and it would feel great too! We both sat up immediately as she poured some lube into her hand and lathered up my dick, kissing me the whole time, and for the first time since we started this it was passionate as hell!

“Should I…even ask you…to be gentle,” she muttered in between kisses.

“Nope,” I shot her a smile and gave her a quick slap across the face. She licked her lips and went back to kissing me until I pushed her back, “Let’s go bitch.”

She laughed and got on all fours, a hand pulling on her right ass cheek to spread her asshole a little. I slapped her ass hard and she bucked forward while my eyes wandered over to Riley who had tossed her panties aside and was slowly rubbing her pussy with one hand and grabbing her boob with the other. She was being turned on and we hadn’t even started yet, and it flat out turned me on to the point where I needed to stick my dick into something.

With Izzy’s ass held high, I lined up right behind her and slid my dick in nice and slow. Izzy grunted in pain as my hands grabbed onto her hips and helped me shove my dick all the inside of her.

“Shit! Oh shit Max! I can feel you filling me up! Please don’t stop,” she growled.

Her hips now rocking up and down on my dick as I sped up my tempo until her ass was bounding against my hips. She was almost howling in delight now, and I heard soft whimpering to my right reminding me that Riley was watching the whole thing, and from the sound of it she was enjoying herself a little too much, but it didn’t bother me one bit.

“I’m…I’m going to cum soon!” Izzy murmured, “Fuck you’re going to make me cum already Max.” With one hard slap of her ass she let out a cry of pain and turned around to look at me, a sick thought bubbling inside my brain.

“You can cum when Riley does,” I smiled.

Her eyes widened immediately and she turned to look at Riley who was almost lost in her own bliss. “Riley p-please tell me your close! I don’t know how much longer I can last.” To torture her more, I leaned and grabbed one of her boobs as her back arched immediately, “Riley!”

“I’m almost there Izzy,” she panted out with two fingers lodged into her pussy.

“Imagine Max’s dick filling your wet pussy up!” Izzy almost screamed, “God I can’t hold it any longer! I have to cum I’m sorry Max!” Her ass clamped onto my dick that instant as Izzy shakily blurted out, “Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!”

Her arms buckled but she kept her ass in the air. I felt my balls tingling and I knew that I was going to cum soon, and Izzy did agree to clean my dick of so I pulled out and pushed her ass to the side. Crawling towards the front of the bed, I grabbed onto Izzy’s hair and yanked her head up by it as her mouth opened up and she wrapped it around my filthy dick. She looked completely beat but she still found the energy to take my entire shaft inside her mouth as I relaxed my body and let her continue bobbing back and forth. I didn’t even bother letting her know that I was going to cum because the look on her face was priceless as ropes of cum shot into the back of her throat. She still managed to swallow it all, coughing a bit once it was all done, but ultimately fine.

“Oh fuck! Oh fuuuuuuuuuuck!” Riley shouted. She was furiously pumping her fingers inside her pussy until she froze on the spot with both Izzy and I know watching her. Seconds later, her body crumbled down to the ground lifelessly. She brought her pussy soaked fingers up to her mouth and started sucking on them like on them while curling up into a little ball. It was cute and unbelievable sexy at the same time.

I hadn’t felt this drained in a long time, and I didn’t even care about my pride anymore as I joined Izzy underneath the covers. We were both watching Riley now as she clumsily got to her feet and searched for her panties.

“Where are you going?” Izzy asked. I could hear the exhaustion in her voice as she waved Riley over, “I know you want to cuddle up with your favorite brother after a good finger fucking like that, don’t ‘cha?”

Riley’s eyes fell on me, and as if hypnotized, she stumbled over to the bed and got under the covers with us. Luckily Izzy had a king sized bed so we weren’t all crammed into a small bed. Izzy leaned back hummed softly as I rested my head onto her shoulder, while Riley wrapped her naked body around mine and cuddled up tightly with me. It wasn’t extremely comfy, but it wasn’t uncomfortable either so I didn’t have a problem with it. Neither did everyone else by the looks of it because Riley passed out within moments and clinging to me, and Izzy’s humming stopped shortly after as well, leaving me to slowly but surely join them in a deep and deserving slumber.

My eyes slowly opened to the sight of Izzy boobs as I stared at them lifelessly, my mind still in shutdown mode until I felt her hand grab my chin and rotate my head towards her. She looked wide awake, examining the quarter sized bruise on my face before sighing and resting her head back down on the pillow.

“Sorry about that,” she said.

“I’d be lying if I said I forgave you.”

“You must think that I enjoy hitting you then, don’t ‘cha?”

“You do.”

She looked at me and closed her eyes, “Do you think I’m some using-and-abusing sex crazed maniac too?”

“That’s Ashley. You’re a psychotic sex craving bitch,” I explained.

She got a little chuckle out of it, “Yeah I can see why you think that. Guess I owe you an explanation.”

“You hate me, what’s left to explain?”

“I was serious when I told you I didn’t hate you. I guess I was just seeking a bit of retribution.”

“Retribution?” I tilted my head, “What have I ever done to you?”

“You were born,” her tone was soft and serious, and it took me by surprise. She said it with a straight face too, which only confused me. “I know it sounds mean and coldhearted but that’s the only answer I have for you Max. Everything got worse after you were born. My entire life was flipped around when you born. Dad got sick and died. Mom had to take a job that requires her to travel ten months a year, leaving Ashley, Riley, and I to take care of the person that was the cause of it all. You. Because of you, I never got to enjoy my high school years like Ashley or Riley, because I always had to look out for you. I had to make sure you were home on time, took a bath, wore clean clothes, all of that. You basically forced me to be a mother and I hated it. I wanted to go out and party, meet guys, drink until I pass, all that, but I couldn’t because I had to watch you.”

“Are you even listening to yourself,” I asked, almost as a joke judging by the sound of my voice. “Seriously, think about what you just said. You’re blaming me for being born. It’s not like I can control that shit and yeah, dad died, but at least you got to know him. Me? I don’t have a single memory, hell, the family picture of when I was born is the only thing that even let’s me know what he looked like. Your right about mom never being home, but who do you think that effects more? The little kid who’s just learning how to walk and talk or the eldest sister who’s almost in high school. For fucks sake, you convinced her to put me into kindergarten a year early. I’m the youngest in my class, even some eighth graders are older then me so of course I’m having a hard time learning things. And on top of that, you all made my life miserable everyday. Riley belittled my intelligence, Ashley made fun of my appearance, and I came to school with a new bruise almost everyday because of you.” I shook my head just thinking about what she said, “I’m thirteen, have no friends but my art teacher and a girl that’s nice enough to model for me, on the brink of suspension and soon expulsion in school, can cook and clean better then forty-year old soccer moms, I have no self-esteem, no self respect, had sex with my friend’s mom, and am now being blackmailed by my own family member in order to sate her sex life that I apparently ruined. Now honestly…look at me and tell who’s had it worse.”

Silence. Some say its golden, others think that it makes the situation more awkward. Me? It let me know that my sister was at least thinking about what I said so I didn’t have a problem with it at the moment.

“Guess I really do owe you an apology,” she murmured.

“Wouldn’t hurt if it was sincere,” I admitted.

She looked me in the eye, and took a deep breath before saying things I’d never thought I’d hear come out of her mouth with true sincerity, “I’m sorry Max, for everything I’ve done to you. No bullshit, no hidden motive, nothing of the sort. I think I’m going to try and be…a better sister.”

“Do me a favor then,” I held up my arm, “Pinch me.”

She pinched me and I winced, “Not a dream Max. I’m being serious this time. Although I am gonna miss the sex.”

“I’m not saying that we have to stop,” I casually stated, “But if we were to continue I’d prefer it if we’d both agree to have sex instead of one person making the decision y'know? Sounds a little more reasonable then our past ordeals.”

“I think I can deal with that,” Riley moaned loudly as she buried her face into my chest. I thought she was going to wake up but she continued in her deep sleep state. “That girl,” Izzy shook her head, “I’ll never understand her. When you were little she used to sneak into your room and sleep with you whenever she couldn’t fall asleep.”

“Why is that?”

“Beats me. She’s just always felt comfortable whenever she’s touching you. Remember when you were in elementary school and she’d pin you down on the couch and just lay on top of you for awhile.”

“I remember my body going completely numb yeah. Still doesn’t explain why she feels that way with me.”

“That’s something you’re going to have to ask her, but right now I think she’s in heaven. She had a nice orgasm then got to cuddle with her favorite person, what more could she want? Y'know you taking popping her cherry probably was the best thing that could’ve happened to her. Only problem is now she masturbates, like, all the time. I swear if we didn’t eat dinner at the table she’d take the food into her room and masturbate while eating it because it’d remind her of you.”

“That’s a little creepy.”

“The women of this family are pretty slutty Max,” Izzy stated in almost proud-like fashion, “You should’ve realized that by now. Plus, it’s not like she’s openly doing it, I’m just good at catching her because she’s using all the tricks I taught her.”

“You taught her tricks about masturbating?”

“I taught her how not to get caught. After all I didn’t want some sick incest porno scene where you walk in on her and it explodes into a giant sex fest.”

I could’ve poked a lot of holes in that statement, but I decided not to, “Wait! You stopped letting me come upstairs when she learned how to masturbate didn’t you?”

“Yep,” I rolled my eyes, “Hey I don’t want to hear it mister, I watch porn at two in the morning.” My jaw practically dislodged from my mouth. “You didn’t think I knew did you? You thought you were sneaky, setting your alarm at two A.M. in order to watch porn on the TV.”

“Do you have eyes all around the house or something?”

“Maybe,” she winked which only made me more suspicious. “It’s like one-ish by the way. Sorry I let you both sleep in.”

“Well, call the school and tell them that my sickness got worse and Riley caught it too. I’m sure they’ll buy it.”

“You lying little bastard,” we both laughed as Riley gave off a groan of awakening. “Morning Riley,” Izzy sang.

“Morning,” she mumbled. “Is it time for school yet?”

“Four hours ago yeah.” Slowly sitting up, she looked at Izzy and I with half opened eyes, “You’re welcome to get dressed and go back to school if you want.”

Her eyes fell onto me and my naked chest, and she shrugged before resting up against my chest and getting comfy, “Maybe later.”

“What if Ashley walked in right now?” I asked looking towards Izzy.

“Fuck her,” Riley hissed.

“Riley’s a little unhappy with Ashley after finding out what she did,” Izzy explained, “Isn't that right Riley.”

“She’s got a boyfriend, she can fuck him not Max. Manipulative bitch.”

I was about to ask something but Izzy read my mind, “She’s been like that ever since your storybook encounter in the classroom. Ashley and her are secretly fighting over you, and frankly, I think it’s funny.”

“I see,” I didn’t really see why I just said that because I knew that it was a dangerous road. “So should we not say anything to her?”

“Nope! She’s off whoring with her boyfriend anyway so.”

“Speaking of whoring, it’s your birthday this Friday Riley,” Izzy said. How she went from whoring, to Riley’s birthday…I will never understand. “What do you want for your birthday?”

“Surprise me.”

“I can do that,” Izzy smiled evilly, “But now that we’re all awake I’m kind of hungry. Let’s go out and get something to eat.”

That was all the reason we needed to get up and redress ourselves. Before we left Izzy called the school and told them that Riley and I were sick so we had the rest of the week off. This was only going to hurt me in the end but I really didn’t care right now. We all piled into the car and headed for some deserted restaurant. It was a nice cozy restaurant that we always went to whenever our mom came into town, but it was still a good treat nonetheless. Grabbing a booth, Riley sat next to me while Izzy took the seat across from us.

We ordered some burgers and fries and just talked about whatever came to mind. I was still a little wary of Izzy stabbing me in the back again, but after awhile it didn’t even cross my mind. When our food came Riley pitched the idea to have a movie night since we basically got a free pass from school this week, and I didn’t have any objections nor did Izzy so it was decided. We swung by some cheap movie rental place and all picked out a movie to watch before heading back home. To think we spent almost three hours on that simple trip was mind bottling, but I chose not to worry about it.

After discovering a note left by Ashley saying that she wouldn’t be home for dinner it was decided that we’d just order pizza which was good news for me because I didn’t want to cook. I took a shower during this time as Izzy and Riley did the same, after all we all still reeked of sex and I could tell that the waitress at the diner noticed that. When I got out of the shower, the pizza had just arrived and Izzy already had a plate full of it, taking a seat on the couch as Riley walked down the stairs with a large fluffy blanket in her hand.

“Don’t judge me, its cold,” she told me.

“Maybe it’s because you’re wearing short shorts and a tank top,” I teased as she stuck her tongue out at me. With a plate of pizza in my hand, I took my seat on the couch next to Izzy.

“Jeez, can’t get enough of me huh?” she snickered.

“Stop bitching you like it,” I shot back.

“No comment.”

“Didn’t think so,” as I said that Riley had set her plate on the table and took a seat dangerously close to me. I looked at her and she gave me a childish smile. I think that the blanket was for more the just keeping her warm so I was a little curious to see what she’d make of it.

Izzy played the first movie, some romantic comedy that bored me to tears, but I suffered through it by focusing more on my pizza. When the second movie started we were all out of pizza and took our positions for the rest of the night, Izzy at one end of the couch with me leaning up against her and Riley laying down on the rest of the couch while using my leg as a pillow. It was a little hard to focus on the R-rated movie in front of me because I found out the true purpose behind Riley’s blanket. She grabbed my right hand in the middle of the movie when Izzy wasn’t paying attention and movie it onto her boobs, letting me feel them up as she whispered moans constantly. Unfortunately a loud gasp from her tipped of Izzy as she flicked my ear.

“Owe!”

“We’re supposed to be watching a movie and you’ve been playing with Riley’s boobs for the past twenty minutes.”

“How the hell did you know that?”

“Eyes everywhere remember,” Izzy winked. “Now hands where I can see them.”

“Fine,” I moved my hand out of the blanket and Riley whined softly. It was pretty cute and Izzy even laughed at her for it, but we tried our best to all focus on the third and final movie. An action flick that I had never seen, although I was immediately enthralled by how crappy it was. It got to the point where I couldn’t look away because I was too amazed at why I would think a movie like this was worth renting.

The door rattled open and we all leaned forward to see Ashley walk inside. She looked pissed off and when an explosion went off in the movie she jumped at the sound. That’s when she finally noticed all three of us in the living room.

“What the hell?” Ashley said aloud, “What’s going on here?”

“We decided to have a movie night.”

“I can see that,” Ashley looked at the TV, “But um…”

“But you’re wondering why Max is leaning up against me and Riley’s using his leg as a pillow?” she nodded. “I buried the hatchet,” Izzy announced with a sigh. She looked at me and shook her head playfully, “We had an eye opening discussion and I realized what I did was wrong. Luckily Max is a softy and can’t hold a grudge to save his life.”

“Fuck you,” I poked her stomach while my eyes remained focused on the shitty movie. Besides, I’d hardly call a two minute discussion eye opening, but if that’s what it took for her to stop being a bitch to me then I was fine with it.

“So you want to watch with us?” Izzy offered.

“No she’s too busy dealing with her boyfriend,” Riley answered snootily, “Isn't that right Ashley? After all you’re so faithful to him that he has your full attention right?”

“You are so lucky-” Ashley began.

“That what?” Riley interrupted sitting up. “That Max is here? That Izzy’s here? Please tell me what makes me so lucky?”

“Alright you snobby little bitch you want to fight?” Ashley dropped her purse and rolled up her sleeve.

Riley didn’t waste anytime hopping to her feet and raising her fists, “Fuck off you cheating cunt!”

They were growling like animals and it finally snapped me out of my trance. I looked over at Izzy, who was already standing up to stop them, but something caught my eye. A constant light shined in the small window next to the door and I tilted my head in curiosity. The fight was probably raging on in front of me but I was too focused on the light to even hear anything else. Like a moth, I stood up and made an entranced beeline for the door, slithering my way around Ashley who was too distracted with Riley to notice.

I opened the front door and flicked on the porch light as a car door slammed shut immediately followed by two quick honks. A woman with an hourglass figure that was nothing short of perfect even from where I stood. Her large breasts were pressed tightly against a white blouse, and even with a navy blue skirt I could still see her sculpted hips sway seductively while her high heels clicked against the pathway towards the door. Long, silky black hair fell over her chest as she removed her glasses and slipped them onto her collar as she got closer and closer to the door.

“Hey,” I looked over at my feuding sisters. After they didn’t answer I shouted, “Hey!” They all turned to look at me, “She’s home.”

“What? Who?” Ashley asked.

“Mom,” I pointed out the door, “She’s back.”









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Author's Note.
Late!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes i try to get a part out in two weeks and i'm failing so i apologize for that.
Quick thing i want to address is the emails i've gotten about people wanting to edit my work. I'm flattered but i just don't think it's really...worth it? i guess. Like, i've gotten a lot of people who have asked and <3 you all but unless i could finish the stories in a consistent time frame i just don't feel that it'll work out. Maybe on my next story i will but i'm just kind of learning how to do things now. (I can't find a reason other then this...i'm stupid shut up! lol)
As grammer goes, my biggest problem that people point out is too-to and there, lol all i can say is that i'm impressed you guys are spotting them out and when you comment about it i just feel even worse. I already royally screwed up and put part 4 twice!!!!!!!!! I was face palming for like a week.
Anyway, hope you guys like it, and i'm sure there are mistakes in this but bear with me please. I will try to work on it in the future and on my next story I'll find an editor that'll make me look less like a grammerless prick :P
Thx for your support! I've decided that i won't write another story until i've finished this one because it's what i got from most people's comments and emails so REJOICE and all that lol.


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  • wasup8322
    09.02.2012 09:34
    Keeping writing. Its a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 10:02
    Bravo, there was a bit of a wait on this one but my god it was fucking worth it.

    Best chapter yet! Can't wait for more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 10:28
    Dont worry about grammer and spelling u r a great writer . . Just keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 10:44
    OMG!! Momma's back!! Please do not stop writing!! I love this story, and my favorite of the sisters is Riley. Max is an awesome protagonist. Please, I'm sure the plan for part 7is sleeping with mom, but I'm not sure I'd wanna read that...I like how things are finally turning around:)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 12:03
    best chap of all and keep goin do all which takes to post more quickly good luck

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  • masterjake
    09.02.2012 13:04
    man i loved the ending it mad me laugh my ass off. don't worry to much about the grammar i am not that grate ether. i am interested in where your going to take it after. mom is in the house seeing as how the are really not that well dressed. also with Izzy and Ashley fighting. who knows what got ripped off in the way of clothing and black eyes.

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  • dav31092
    09.02.2012 13:05
    I love this story. That is all i have to say.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:06
    Wow this keeps getting more enthralling by the volume.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:13
    Love this story, I almost check daily to see if the next one if up. Can't wait for the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:18
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:20
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 13:21
    best part in the series i thin.......i fucking loved it made me laugh the entire fuckin time ha ha but still i agree with the comment below mine i love Riley she actually LIKES HIM not like that snooby Ashley bitch but still hope theres a fuck fest with all 3 sisters and the mom gonna shit brickz if you do that kind of thing AWESOME SERIES can't wait til part 7 ^^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 14:21
    Loved it yet again! Easily the best story on here cant wait for part 7 Please keep writing these stories make my day (sad i know)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 14:29
    only thing i have a problem with in this entire story is the female version is spelled JEAN. the Male version of the name is GENE.....

    enjoying it pretty much. of course he could have just told Izzy to fuck off, all she had was hearsay. he could have warned tiffany and both of them denied it.

    of course it is fiction, so it doesn't really matter

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 15:46
    Have him fuck his mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 16:15
    i want him to finally hook up with gene, maybe max should tell his mom about everything and see how that goes over. kick all 3 of his sisters out on there ass

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 16:19
    Great story love them so much man great twist please keep doing your job as a writer man fuck all the errors man its still a great story
    Mastedo

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 17:47
    Hey you agreed with everything i posted btw would you mind posting a part no more than two weeks after the one before tkz

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 19:10
    Welll done bro loved it and I mean loved it I like the way its alll comming together..........I love riley she actchelly cares about max I think that there should be a lot of fellings between then........any way bro loved it and don't make max sleep with his mom not cool dud realy not cool make here leave or somthing welll ur the expert dude alll I'm saying is I loved it...........thanks keep it up bro....keep welll m8

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 19:28
    I love your stories and I hope you keep turning out more chapters XD this is the only story I've really been sucked into and I can't wait till you write chapter 6

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 19:52
    Awesome!

    Looking forward to the next

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 20:09
    I didn't like this chapter, I thought the shift away from his sisters was interesting and I was excited to see where that lead. Also, after Izzy hit Max, I was really surprised to see him cave in to her after he flipped out such a short time ago. Lack of continuity starting to taint an otherwise top class series!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:17
    Dont listen to those people I LOVE your stories and i think as long as you have suprises and cliffhangers in your next stories your stories will continue to ROCK!

    Xoxoxo<3your stories:)!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:19
    Well done. I love how he has 2 sisters wrapped around his finger. And now the mom is back. Things will get interesting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:42
    Can anyone recommend stories like this one?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:49
    Absolutely brilliant. Keep up the good work! Happy to see that Max is finally being treated like a decent human being. Don't worry too much on the grammar, the story makes up for it lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:54
    Max is awesome!! He's nice, no matter what people do, and he's finally getting his courage back up. I just hope he doesn't screw his mom. It would be hot, but I think that would ruin his character.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 22:55
    I agree with the guy under me. Pls dont have Max fuck his mom, that will definitely ruin the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 22:56
    do i predict a mommy son fucking it think i do!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 23:06
    Max is awesome!! He's nice, no matter what people do, and he's finally getting his courage back up. I just hope he doesn't screw his mom. It would be hot, but I think that would ruin his character.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 23:11
    hey don't listen to everybody else how say don't have him fuck is mom or have him fucker her it your stories do what ever you think you should do

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 23:46
    He took the hit cause if he didn't izzy would tell gene about him and her mum.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 23:49
    I've read all of these to date and I must say that you have a real talent for this. There are some spelling and grammer issues but your imagination is brilliant. I cant wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 23:51
    I've read all of these to date and I must say that you have a real talent for this. There are some spelling and grammer issues but your imagination is brilliant. I cant wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:05
    10/10 I enjoy your written. Please, keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:10
    Nailed it, he got in a threesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:19
    oooh do i smell a foursome in the next one... i think ido!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:25
    Max is awesome!! He's nice, no matter what people do, and he's finally getting his courage back up. I just hope he doesn't screw his mom. It would be hot, but I think that would ruin his character.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:28
    Love your story best one yet you shouldn't stop making them but please don't make him fuck his mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:30
    Next part needs to be all 3 sisters in a crazy sex frenzy, lol, and I wouldnt care at all if Max screws his mom or not. You're the writer, your stories. And when is Max gunna fuck Gene? cmon, she's begging for it with all that innocence

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:30
    Oh my god, please say you've already started writing the next part? The sooner it comes out, the better. And yeah, don't have him do his mom.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:32
    More with Riley cuddled up it's so romantic cute

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 01:53
    Again WOW!! Great love it. Remember you are the writer I for one will read your stories no matter what direction you take. Keep up the great work, and thanks. Always Drunk Monkey

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 02:34
    u had better stick with this story, everytime u write a new part it jumps to the front screen as the most popular story

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 03:00
    What happened to riley in her past that made her addicted to max? Why does she hate guys?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 03:49
    Love this one as much as the last 5 keep them coming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 04:13
    NIce part man.....m lovin it...i always keep checking for new posts.Please write faster...n yeah....make his mom fuck someone else...but not him....thanks..

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 06:01
    Brilliant. Please don't make Izzy betray Max again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 06:57
    I read ur story last nite and I loved it I got the same feeling as I got from the firdt three love that u brought back his sisters keep it like that just them three no one els...........and I think that its romantic between riley and max its walsome that she realy does care about hm................its awsome. Man

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 07:01
    Nice job one of the best stories I have read. Hope to get a new One soon. Keep on writein

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 08:03
    Do i have problems? considering im too into the story to get off on it? :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 08:16
    Bro u gotta make a movie!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 08:47
    I'm a 18 year old girl and I fingerd myself so much at this story it makes me so wet I loved it...............xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 09:32
    I will be very disappointed if the next takes longer than a week. Also, he can't go back to Ashley. NEVER. Him and Riley should get closer, too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 09:46
    Riley all the way! haha. best chapter ever.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 10:34
    Don't involve their mum. I love ur stories and I want u to do Wat u want with it nut I probably wont read them anymore if the mum is involved. FURTHERing the relationship with genegene would. b awsome however

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 10:34
    Don't involve their mum. I love ur stories and I want u to do Wat u want with it nut I probably wont read them anymore if the mum is involved. FURTHERing the relationship with genegene would. b awsome however

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 11:33
    GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAT KEEP IT UP YOUR STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 13:21
    When is Max gonna fuck Gene? Maybe he can join Tiffany in a threesome with Gene? That would be fucking hot!! Also, I think that Max will somehow get involved with his mom. That would make things really weird! Great way to introduce her by the way. You did a good job of that! I wonder how she'd react to how Max is treated in real life. I also wonder if she'll find out about the incest going on and the Max/Tiffany scene. By the way, I like the Max/Tiffany pairing the best and then the Max/Riley one but Maffany (Max/Tiffany) is fucking hot for some reason and undoubtedly my favorite pairing in this dark but sexy story.

    Keep up the epic work!!! :-)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 13:22
    I was kind of dissapointed at first when Izzy took his power away, but it turned out nicely. And I agree with other's sentiments on Ashley, she should never get back with him.

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  • ShadowBane
    10.02.2012 13:27
    Really like the max/Riley relationship, hate ashley.

    Here's an idea, how about max, izzy and riley having a threesome in front of ashley strapped to a chair.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 13:49
    keep the mom out!! and more with riley and gene!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 14:19
    I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 15:02
    amazing can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 16:01
    did i miss number 5??

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 18:01
    This is one of my all time favorite serius on this site keep up the awesome work man. P.S. I like Riley the little minx is so sexy I wish I had a sister lik that

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 18:04
    Also I have a creeping feeling that izzy is playing him again and MORE MAX/RILEY SEX I LOVE THAT MINX

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 18:06
    Also I have a creeping feeling that izzy is playing him again and MORE MAX/RILEY SEX I LOVE THAT MINX

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 18:32
    Guys, give him more credit. It's not easy only typing with your left hand ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:43
    Wait is like Riley bi or something? Like maybe she hates all guys exept max for some reason? And her and gene had a thing haha.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:44
    You're losing it, man. The guy finally takes control and thoroughly puts his sisters in their place(s), and now in this one you've got him acting like a whipped dog and her (Izzy) back in control mode like nothing ever happened. You had a great story going but I couldn't even finish this part it was so out of place with the rest. Sorry. Neg from me.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:47
    Please don't get their mom involved! At most only let her find out what happened!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:48
    Please let Riley be bisxual or lesbian :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:51
    did i miss the 5th chapter?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:52
    did i miss the 5th chapter?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:53
    MORE OF THIS: /llllllllllllllllllD~~~({'})
    (_)_)

    AND: /lllllllllllllllllD O:}
    (_)_)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:55
    MORE OF THIS:
    /llllllllllllllllllD~~~({'})
    (_)_)

    AND:
    /lllllllllllllllllD O:}
    (_)_)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 22:55
    DAMNIT I MESSED UP AGAIN! FUCK

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 23:00
    Why does Riley hate being touched? Was she raped or something?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 23:13
    Let there be peace n let he fucks all 3 sisters ... -_-

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 23:20
    Don't worry about the punctuation, worry about the dialog, you don't have to label the speaker; just worry about how its said, its really confusing and annoying!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 23:35
    For the love of God do NOT have max fuck his mom. Nor let any of the sisters Be lesbians..

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 00:37
    why won't you let me post

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 00:37
    sorry for the last comment it isn't letting me post something else cause it keeps saying it contains bad words

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 00:46
    Part 5 was labeled as part 4 for people ho are confused

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 01:00
    Dude ur a boss fuck everyone who says otherwise

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 02:00
    I think your story is absolutely amazing. Not just the sex, but the raw emotion that you can feel from the characters, the realism in them, how one feels as if they have gotten to know these people through the story. This could almost be published (I say almost since max does seem a bit young for most publishers to feel comfortable), but a gripping story regardless! I do agree not to involve mom in the action, I think that would diminish your story, BUT maybe if its necessary perhaps some sort of voyeur situation. Maybe she has a date with the art teacher, things "go well", and max happens to see it through a cracked open door, but she never finds out. Just a thought. In any case continue your writing career, with the sort of talent you posess it would be a shame for that to go to waste.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 02:04
    Grammar* <3 love the stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 02:25
    Right up front I admit I usually come to read here for a quick wank. Can't believe I'm posting this, but I actually put my dick away to really read the story. You have talent.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 02:37
    No mom fucking plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 03:51
    I didn't wip/my dick out? Wtf? I forgot too engrossed in the story.... Make a book!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 04:19
    Dude, amazing series. Please keep writing. You could put out one a month and I would still follow your works (pls don't make me wait that long though). Look forward to your next installment.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 07:15
    I love your characters and your whole story! Please please please keep writing. Stories with a good sex scene is awesome. Stories with a good plot, character development, and shows emotion are simply amazing! Keep on keepin on.
    -anonymous reader eighty thousand something

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 08:08
    u know i gotta say before i started reading ur stories i wasnt interested in sex stories let alone incest but since then all i read r incest - God

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 09:29
    I second the 'no mom fucking'

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 09:29
    I second the 'no mom fucking'

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 09:30
    I second the 'no mom fucking'

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 15:34
    Me too NO mom fucking . It'll be too predictable!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 16:29
    I personally would love to see more of max and Riley alone, also i don't think he should be with his mom at all as it wouldn't be good for his character. Don't think an accident between his mom and him would be too bad though if it didn't lead to anything. Would have to be a morale dilemma type of thing that max conquers though for it to be a good idea in my personal opinion

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 18:03
    Have sex with the mom, she finds new job in town so they cann all fuck all the time because they love each other

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 20:34
    Mom ficking and orgy pls

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 21:43
    Was Riley raped in her past or something?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 23:04
    Keep the mom out of it. Maybe like they have to go behind her back. But that's it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 23:41
    Was Riley raped in her past or something?

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 00:17
    Max should end up with Gene

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 00:30
    Just gotta say, ur an amazing writer! And it'd be cool to bring Gene into it more, not necessarily having max have sex with Gene, but maybe a romantic relationship between them :3

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 02:38
    Dude u R great....the only fing tht saddens me(n u knw wat it is)...its so long 2 wait 4 the nxt part its driving me crazy as fuck ^^
    Anyway am a fan evn if i need to wait my whole life it will worth it...Yaseen from Mauritius island :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 02:39
    Dude u R great....the only fing tht saddens me(n u knw wat it is)...its so long 2 wait 4 the nxt part its driving me crazy as fuck ^^
    Anyway am a fan evn if i need to wait my whole life it will worth it...Yaseen from Mauritius island :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 05:02
    You should have all three of the sisters fuck max at once

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  • OGBlueMerc
    12.02.2012 09:13
    Keep mother out, and have Max stick with Riley or go with Gene.

    I'mma OG who loves romance.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 09:48
    Iv been anticipating these stories you do a good job on every level as on spelling I really don't care as long as I know what your saying its really no problem for me keep em comin

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 11:47
    I love all ur story's I wait for like ever for each to come out u are amazing ur stories are better than most I read!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 15:44
    Welll done loved it its fucking awsome mate keep it up love the fact the sisters are back keep I just them 4 plzzzzz

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 17:35
    and to an earlier comment, I don't think she was raped because she still had her hymen.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 18:34
    I'm a huge romantic don't know why but I love the the fact of riley and max as bf gf its realy hot and the fact the the sisters are back great its so originaol to the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 19:13
    Maybe in the next one let max fuck his mom and at the end of it he and Ashley make up ? Really its up to you but it's just a suggestion then after that you could have max,Ashley,Riley ,izzy and the mom fucking
    Btw I love the stories and you should carry on however you want to :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 23:19
    have all the sis and gene and have 1 with tiff and gene

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 23:25
    I hope you never end the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 23:37
    I love this story! That said, the most important part, i guess, I especially love what you're doing with Riley. I liked her the most from the beginning, but now she grew on me even more! Cute, smart, sexy... compared to her the other women in the story seem almost dull. I'm not sure how I would feel, if Max would have sex with the mom too, though. Could be overdoing it. I'd rather want to see Max focusing some more on Riley ;) but thats obvious from what i wrote so far, I think.

    Anyway, I'm already looking forward to the next part! Can't wait to see what will happen! And hopefully, this story is faaaaar from over!

    Best wishes
    Michael

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  • EngagedReader
    12.02.2012 23:39
    I love this story! That said, the most important part, i guess, I especially love what you're doing with Riley. I liked her the most from the beginning, but now she grew on me even more! Cute, smart, sexy... compared to her the other women in the story seem almost dull. I'm not sure how I would feel, if Max would have sex with the mom too, though. Could be overdoing it. I'd rather want to see Max focusing some more on Riley ;) but thats obvious from what i wrote so far, I think.

    Anyway, I'm already looking forward to the next part! Can't wait to see what will happen! And hopefully, this story is faaaaar from over!

    Best wishes
    Michael

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 23:53
    Max and Riley! I mean Max is always commenting Riley's cuteness. It doesn't always have to be about full on SEX! Romance should juxtapose(don't know if I spelled that right) the sex. Creating that final "oomph" to a story...just saying. :D great job

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 00:27
    I like the story better without the mom there. And I really like the riley ideas. And the Ashley one. I get sad when theyre all mad at each other:(

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 00:27
    I like the story better without the mom there. And I really like the riley ideas. And the Ashley one. I get sad when theyre all mad at each other:(

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 00:45
    Don't do the mom that's over kill just make it harder for max to be with any of the sisters

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 01:32
    awesome!!!!!! just one thing: NO SEX WITH THE MOTHER!!!!!!! YOUR JUST GOING TO MESS THE STORY!!!!!! :) that's it....it's an awesome story though I love it!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 02:22
    Shag mom shag mom shag mom shag mom shag mom shag mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 08:16
    Hey just thought I'd tell you that your doing a great job on this story even with the screw ups. The thing is you are human after all. You've established the characters so well for this story as well as the everythIng else, people are going to keep reading it know matter what. I really hope you continue with this for awhile yet because I have no complaints. Ok maybe one... I would like them more often. Dev

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 11:47
    Dude, fuck everyone else's opinions. You write what you want to write. I love this story. Every word of it. Keep kickin ass with these man.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 14:56
    Congrats, you have a new fan... hint it's me

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 15:06
    The way they all get soooo shitty with each keeps the story so entertaining. Don't worry about your grammar bro, as long as you're not getting published the best thing is to have a killer story with good characters. You my friend are there.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 17:17
    Go with what you want. You are a brilliant writer and gone already in a direction few people would have. I look forward to reading the next sections of this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 20:11
    awsome stories man. Verey creative. Way better than I could possibly come up with. Got any tips for an up ameture writer?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 21:33
    This is the best series on here; the only one I've ever waited for the next parts to! Please do it a lil faster this time lol PLEASE don't keep ur fans waiting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 22:55
    MORE RILEY!!!! can u please explain in the next one why Riley is the way she is? Was she like sexually abused as a child?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 23:51
    How could she be sexually abused other then a touch here and there, she was a virgin until max took it, sheesh did you read this or skip straight to the sex?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.02.2012 22:11
    This is my second time commenting on this site in over 5 years. So far I have to say that I love your stories. I was in Kona, HI on vacation and still looking for your stories (#4 was due and I HAD to read it) and was actually excited when I saw it was up. Thank you for writing these, I enjoy them a lot. I recommended these as a read to a buddy of mine.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 03:36
    More for the love of erotica more! Please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 06:00
    FUUUUUUUU

    Please don't include the mom in the sex! PLEAASE

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 07:20
    great stories man :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 11:44
    When do u think you are going to finishes the. next chapter ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 11:45
    I love the way you write, please write more. I cant wait !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 20:38
    where are parts 4 & 5

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 21:36
    well done but try to get done within the month

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 00:14
    Never stop this series Dx

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 05:28
    the mother must get fucked

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 08:52
    Chapter 4 is in somestories story log thingy (click his name near the story title) and chapter 5 is called chapter 4 cue he accidentally repeated it when uploading or something so you should find 2 chapter 4s.
    P.S. Keep the stories coming man, u the best!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 18:52
    U should make a Huge 4-some between Max,Ashley,Riley,and Izzy on Riley's b-day with the mom walking in and joining in

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 20:26
    How are you gonna have a foursome with one guy and then add in another girl? I think either ashley's bf should join or one of max's friends then they could have a foursome

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 21:14
    Times a tickin one more week until next parts deadline

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 22:23
    Their isn't a deadline. He said he will try to get it posted within two weeks, not he will. Don't rush him and let him take his time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 23:07
    The some say silence is golden line was awesome. I really like your stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2012 01:25
    I agree never end this series I am always looking on here for the next part because I am not just turned on by it, but the story is amazing and the character build up is the best I can actually see all four of them and really want to see where this kid ends up love that you had riely and Izzy become better sisters and love the background on riely please dont stop and for some odd reason I dont know if this series would be a good him and his mom one :/ but again Idk youre the writer. Just dont end it just love this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2012 14:02
    i LOVE this series!! It doesn't matter too much to me about grammar errors, because I can still read the story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2012 17:57
    These are great keep up the great work

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 03:38
    So why is sex with his friends mom blackmail material but incestuous statutory rape isn't?

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 04:59
    Dude you rock!! keep it up n when is part 7 coming?

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 07:03
    quite a boring story...

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 11:19
    not upto expectaion!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 18:12
    I think you guys should just stop checking the spelling and start reading the story.... Love the work. Can't wait for part 7

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 19:51
    Please don't let him fuck his mom. It's too prodictable

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 23:14
    please add another sex scene with riley and not the mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2012 22:39
    No sex with the mother! I think Ashley is pissed off because the boyfriend broke up with her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 00:37
    ashley and riley should kiss and make up and learn to share max.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 02:07
    Please no mom fucking

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 02:35
    Yeah, seriously, not the mom.
    But, also seriously, Max and Riley! Max and Riley! :D :D :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 04:24
    Hurry up with the next story dude ur not even the top rated anymore ur starting to lose readers with this slow ass next part bullshit come on

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 21:55
    “I’ll see you later Tiffany,” I awkwardly waved, climbing out of the car. She returned my wave with a weak smile and drove off without another glimpse towards me. I tried to play it cool as I walked into my house. Riley and Izzy were sitting in the living room, there eyes looking at me blankly. “What’d you guys eat for dinner?”

    “We ordered a pizza,” Izzy answered looking back towards the TV. “There’s some leftover if your still hungry.”

    “No thanks,” I mumbled heading down the hall towards my room. When I shut the door, I jumped into bed without hesitation and fell right too sleep. It’d been so long since I went to bed happy, and it felt great. The next morning nothing could bring me down, and as the day went on it just proved how right I really was. I actually passed my math test with an A, and when it came time to sketch Gene, I was finally able to draw at the level I was used too.

    “Wow,” Mr. Edwards clapped his hand, “Some of your best work man. That’s really good.”

    “Than

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 21:55
    “I’ll see you later Tiffany,” I awkwardly waved, climbing out of the car. She returned my wave with a weak smile and drove off without another glimpse towards me. I tried to play it cool as I walked into my house. Riley and Izzy were sitting in the living room, there eyes looking at me blankly. “What’d you guys eat for dinner?”

    “We ordered a pizza,” Izzy answered looking back towards the TV. “There’s some leftover if your still hungry.”

    “No thanks,” I mumbled heading down the hall towards my room. When I shut the door, I jumped into bed without hesitation and fell right too sleep. It’d been so long since I went to bed happy, and it felt great. The next morning nothing could bring me down, and as the day went on it just proved how right I really was. I actually passed my math test with an A, and when it came time to sketch Gene, I was finally able to draw at the level I was used too.

    “Wow,” Mr. Edwards clapped his hand, “Some of your best work man. That’s really good.”

    “Than

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 21:58
    I know your busy and stuff, but how about get done by 8 tomarrow? You got something good going on, don't ruin it by being slow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 23:53
    Plz no mom fucking then its just un realistic. I mean he's 13 has a big dick and has 4 women don't push it

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 01:13
    What's taking so long?!?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 01:13
    What's taking so long?!?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 02:33
    Dude I love ur stories! They are awesome but don't fuck the moM do Riley instead. Continue! These story are amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 14:26
    I am a bit of a romantic. I would love to see more of Riley and Max. She reminds me of someone I guess, but it's cute. And I would leave out the mother, to unrealistic. And I would reveal Rileys past about max.

    - A males opinion.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 17:54
    Plz dont make him have sex with his mom! i think he should start a relationship with Gene! (awesome series btw)

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 19:52
    Hey fuckers just be glad hes gettin em even though its every two weeks..... If it goes past that i might get a lil ticked too ;|

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 20:33
    Come on dudes, give the man some slack! Its hard writing stories and get everything done. But he is becoming very slow!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 20:56
    thanks so much for the story! and i cant wait for the next piece

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 20:56
    wow i love this series i look forward for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 23:48
    Don't do it with his mom. That's a little too far. Also. Best series ever.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 23:50
    Completely agree with "- a males opinion". 100%

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 01:40
    I'll be ready to read the next entry I love this story I'd say this is my favorite story

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 12:07
    Dont write about him and his mom having sex!
    Make max tell her whats been going on and stuff!
    Lets see the twist in that :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 12:49
    Hurry up man ur taking for ever. Its to long to wait

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 17:14
    Little longer than normal

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 20:22
    Two week mark is tomarrow hope its ready tkz

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.02.2012 22:02
    I think there should be more parts involiving Gene moms and hurry up man we are getting impatient

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2012 00:12
    I like where this is going with Riley. It seems fitting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2012 01:35
    Part 7 plzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2012 03:42
    I love your story! And I have to go with all the other people commenting before me about not wanting the mom to join the "fun". I'd rather see you focus on Riley and Max's relationship and them spending more 1on1 time together. Maybe find out why she enjoys touching him so much...

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2012 09:01
    Yey, we're at 2 weeks again ;) that means only a couple more days till part 7! can't wait! more Riley!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2012 13:37
    Just like to say that if your gonna be all Liszt about Hume taking too long WHY DON'T YOU TRY WRITTING A FUCKING STORY!!! This man's life doesn't not revolve around you getting your rocks off!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 00:45
    Please don't involve the mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 00:53
    Please don't involve the mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 08:43
    Yeah please no mom, i would say you should do more with riley snd max and maybe izzy buz not the mom and ashley, cause shes a bitch lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 14:01
    Anyone know when part 7 is coming out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 16:42
    I don't care about everyone else in this anymore I just want to know what will happen with Riley and Max.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 16:57
    usually its about 15 day wait, so for everyone bitching SHUT THE FUCK UP SO HE CAN WRITE!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 00:28
    Please come out with the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 00:42
    Ok you impatient assholes. Quality over quantity. You like this series because it is well written? Then let the man write his own way. Think you could do better? Than write your own damn stories and push them out as quick as you want. The more you badger him, the less inclined he'll be to write. I understand your desire to read more, but this is a series more than worth waiting for. Give him time and I'm sure he will come out with another great piece.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 06:17
    Okay f* this sh*t its been too long I'm startin 2 think this cruel sob is takin us 4 a joy ride, u better post the story now!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 07:25
    Duuuude part 7 please!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 10:20
    Dude for gods sake, for everything thats holy, post part 7!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 10:28
    Hey man, read all parts a few times, i really love the story, by the way dont be sorry for the grammar, its really no big deal you just have to bring the parts out a little faster. Other than that i would suggest dohling more with Max and Riley ( and Izzy ) and MAYBE Ashley. As for the mom, im going to share everybody else's opinion, please dont include her ( or genes mom ) but maybe you could do something with gene cause she seems to like max ;) And again, great story if not the best one here man. Cant wait for part 7 keep it up man!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 14:39
    Cmon man wheres part 7??

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 16:56
    Part 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDD

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 17:37
    Dude! Wtf?? just post part 7 already, can't balieve it can take this long 2 write a f*ing story, ITS JUST A F*ING STORY!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 23:49
    My advice is to not let max have sex with Gene. Things should develop slowly between them to make it more special.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 23:51
    My advice is to not let max have sex with Gene. Things should develop slowly between them to make it more special.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 23:57
    Just over 3 weeks now...still hoping though

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  • redwingsfan14
    26.02.2012 00:41
    Agree on not going to fast with Gene. but push a little towards them so there it keeps interest. and please no mom. and to everyone freaking out on the guy let him write. who knows maybe this is a longer chapter that deserves a few extra days.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 03:00
    Love these stories. Just read all six in one night! Cant wait for part 7!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 06:53
    Where's part 7?? Taking forever

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 07:00
    To put out quality work like this it takes time so if you don't wanna wait there's plenty of other stories on this site for you in the mean time. Til then, stfu and give the man time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 07:06
    i got 2 say not only is ur story the first sex story i have read but it is the 1 that i use 2 compafre 2 all others cause its that good of a story- God

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 11:53
    Dnt have sex with gene nd make riley and max have a gradual build up on their romance

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 12:18
    Waitin for next part

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  • empairs
    26.02.2012 16:53
    Part 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 19:02
    Compared to a lot of authors who make worse mistakes, your little mix ups aren't bad. Good stories. I stopped reading a lot of stories cause the mistakes make the story not make sense. I can figure out what your trying to say so keep up the good work. And everyone makes mistakes when they are rushing. Go at your own pace. Great stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 22:55
    I agree with guy below me, but please keep writing. I'm from Ohio too

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2012 23:45
    To all the dumbasses that cant count it's just over two weeks about the time he post the next story it should be up any day now so quit complaining and let the man complete his masterpieces after all its hard as he'll to only type with your left hand if u have never done it before

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 00:39
    post chapter 7 soon can't wait for that shit

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  • empairs
    27.02.2012 06:52
    Part 7?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 12:12
    Dude I'm begging you write chapter 7 plz! I really want to know what happens just ignore the nerds that care about grammars they are judgementle assholes so plz write chapter 7

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 12:17
    I hope that part 7 comes out sometime this week, i've read all the stories at least 4-5 times again.. :/

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 12:36
    Dude I'm begging you write chapter 7 plz! I really want to know what happens just ignore the nerds that care about grammars they are judgementle assholes so plz write chapter 7 also if you want to add the mom in the sex then go ahead it's your story not anyone els

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 13:23
    Now this time i think he is dead

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 14:16
    Dude calm down it will be out any day now patients is a virtue

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 14:26
    Dude calm down it will be out any day now patients is a virtue

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 16:11
    i read the all 6 chapters in 5 hours and i loved it this is one of the best stories ive ever read keep it up XD

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 21:50
    saying things like "part 7 Plz!!!! :D ??!!!!!", does not in fact make him write faster. he will obviously come out with another part, and im sure he will post it as soon as he is done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 01:49
    Surprisingly good your a talented writer in fact I never grow bored of your story i prefer dealing with the life in your work rather than sex.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 03:27
    What are you waiting for ? This is the only thing i'm living for

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 08:20
    Awesome story keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 10:32
    Fuck off !!! You lazy asshole

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  • empairs
    28.02.2012 11:55
    Goddamnit dude upload part 7 already!! :@

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  • empairs
    28.02.2012 11:56
    Its almost 3 weeks now

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 14:32
    Seriously guys, is he even gonna post it?? Im getting tired of waiting...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 14:34
    ty for this story man hope u can write the new one faster. Everytime u write a new one it just gets better the the older one. I lover yours story so mtuch man keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 14:45
    It looks like i was right man your losing fans this is another story that just stop a good story just stopped damn and i was liking this one

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 15:33
    Seriously guys, is he even gonna post it?? Im getting tired of waiting...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 17:08
    Ok ok I get every ones getting pisst offf but honestly I can under stand why but having sayin that this guy has a life just like us dudes yeah love is storrys to hell but if its that good welll great it will be worth it.........ps love ur work bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 19:45
    Be patient you maniacs

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 19:55
    These are good story's to me.I hope to read the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 20:32
    I Prefer the actual storyline rather than the sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 21:47
    Hope your almost done with the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 22:17
    I feel like this story will end up like TAMPERER's stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 22:36
    man the sex is ok but the actual story is whats got my focus u should turn it into a book or somthing its great

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 23:58
    Wtf hurry up or dont write fucking bitch

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 01:55
    Or even ends up with Riley sorry i take that part back about not ending up with one of his sister's i think Riley is a perfect match for him lol XD

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 08:42
    Best Story here! I think his computer is broke...

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 09:13
    Are you still alive ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 13:13
    Come on man. Cann't any more

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 14:42
    Please upload it soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 15:34
    Be fucking patient dnt hurry the dude

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 17:09
    Man, You're one of my favorite authors, hope you come out with the 7th part soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 19:00
    Ur borring the helll out of usss

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 19:09
    Just heard on another site he died in a car crash. RIP one of the best writers on it

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 19:17
    what site is that???

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 19:19
    what site is that???

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 20:15
    you stories are awesome bro.
    you could probably make some money writing if you are really serious about it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 20:32
    Out of all the story's I've read, I like this story the most! Hope to read plenty more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 21:06
    You're a great author! I was all caught up in the moment of the three getting along then Ashley coming home, then you hit us with their mom. Just feels like pro stuff right here. Looking forward to part 7!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 21:56
    HE BETTER NOT BE DEAD!!! HE'S THE BEST WRITER HERE!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 22:16
    Can't wait for the next chapter! Curious if he is going to have sex with the mom too

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 23:39
    I love these stories man there awsome I really like the fact that it acutaly has a storie line can't wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 00:23
    Wow rlly another day no story fuck this faggot... and what at the end hes gona kis our ass apologizing?? Fuckhim he needs to hurry he fuck up

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 00:26
    Wow rlly another day no story fuck this faggot... and what at the end hes gona kis our ass apologizing?? Fuckhim he needs to hurry he fuck up

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 09:03
    Just throwing it out there but it's been over 3 weeks since this came out...would really love to see part 7.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 10:02
    god forbid it takes a few weeks for the next chapter to come out people give him a fucking break. he said he would try thats not a guarantee. as long as he does but the next chapter out i don't care how long it takes him as long as this story doesn't die like my sister & the exchange student did.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 10:07
    GIVE HIM A BREAK! hes doing his best,even if it takes him another week just hope its good

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 10:43
    are u stilll there bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 10:43
    are u stilll there bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 15:35
    hurry ur asss up man

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 17:41
    Well I'm not trying to be a douche but I really hope your computer crashed because your losing viewers everyday you don't get that story out.. Almost been a month man.. Don't get me wrong it's a fucking amazing story and I personally check all the time and I want to read to the very end.. Not even really to jerk it just because it's a good fucking story. But a lot of people are getting pissed soo if you read the comments I hope you read mine and take it into consideration. Just give us a little note saying its late.. I bet half of us if not more just want to know your not fucking dead haha. But you guys need to give him a little slack. For all we know he's in school. Or she. But especially if he/she isn't good at writing then its even more complicated. Just give SomeStory a little more time. Like a week or two.. And if it still isn't out then e/she is either dead or their computer crashed or they just quit.. Anyway later people.. This is a long ass comment haha:) Woops.. Sorry... Hehe.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 20:54
    I agree with the last comment I personally check back on SomeStory's profile like 20 times a day hoping part 7 will be there

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 22:02
    I check 10 times an hour.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2012 22:02
    I check 10 times an hour.

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  • w-kun
    02.03.2012 00:16
    Take your time, id rather wait longer and read a good chapter then an awful rushed one

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 00:54
    I think if it takeing a long time to get them out he/she should try to make them into parts like a part 1or A for chap7 and then part 2 od B for chap 7 too or just make it it a shorter chap

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 00:54
    I think if it takeing a long time to get them out he/she should try to make them into parts like a part 1or A for chap7 and then part 2 od B for chap 7 too or just make it it a shorter chap

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 07:14
    take your time man ... just ... don't turn into TAMPERER ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 12:19
    it willl be out to mozzz

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 15:15
    This is awsome dont stop!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 18:38
    have u given it up or.....what

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 19:07
    i think this story has more comments than any other one. and i dont think you are dead, but you may be surpressing your post to build up suspense, or are writing multiply chapeters to impress us and restore our faith in you. good luck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 21:00
    these other commenter better be right and you better be making multiply chapters about it and not wasting our time on waiting for a new chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 23:15
    Hurry the fuck up with this story .. dam this is a long time for one chapter if u knew u couldnt be honest with ur fans then u should of never started writing in the first place u fucking bitch your pissin alot of people off ....fuck you

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 00:19
    OI! People relax! give the guy a little more time he might be busy with important things n his life. If your tired of waiting go read some other stories and be patient. if that doesn't work for you try writing your own stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 01:00
    I think he is doing that trick where he makes us wait so the story, and doesn't give us what we want, so when he does actually post the story it seems even more incredible than it already is. Kinda like that episode of south park where Cartman has an amusement park and locks people out and it eventually builds up so much suspense that the amusement park seems incredible. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 01:02
    Sorry that first sentence died make sense. I meant to say for the story not so the story. I'm the guy who wrote the comment below this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 01:02
    come on bro its been a month...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 01:04
    What's wrong with me today. I meant to say didn't make sense not died make sense. I'm the guy who wrote both the comments below this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 04:16
    Come on man please.........whats up wid u man!!.....its been a long long time!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 11:04
    im wondering if that guy is even writing the story :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 11:38
    Hey if y'all want to read a story to keep ur mind off of this fOr a few days go read Allison and the primdales By daddycums there's 100 chapters and If u stick with it I guarantee it won't disappoint you I read all 100 chapters in four days cuz Of how good it was

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 12:16
    and im wondering if that guy is even alive

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 19:36
    I really want to know what happens next and I don't want the story to end too quickly so as long as the story's are still good and more parts come out, I don't mind the waiting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 19:38
    And I don't mean other storys, I mean this story and I'm the guy that wrote the comment below this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 00:53
    Iv'e been reading the girls next door series by oldman6976 and they are really good and he comes out with a new chapter just about every week, it helps pass time while waiting for this one

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 00:53
    whens the next one going to be done??

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 01:55
    Alright not to join in the complaints, but I do check for part 7 almost every day... If you're having trouble thinking make a note asking for suggestions. I don't mind waiting but a little "hey guys I'm still alive" message couldn't hurt.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 10:19
    Okay guy, you need to get your ass in gear. It's like we have to wait another week every story that comes out. Maybe a little side note would help. Waiting is worth it but I'm not going to waste my time looking for part seven to come out everyday. It's almost been a month. I'm not trying to troll and don't get me wrong it's a good story but does it really take this long to write and post a story? Like I bet everybody here thinks you just don't give a fuck but I bet most of us, including me, would understand if you have some shit going on right now. But I don't think im the only one thinking your just writing this when you feel like it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 10:39
    All got to say is that people who check this guys page everyday I'm sorry but that's sad at least the guys apolgize ever time he slow on writing but writes a dam good story and...well that's all I got but patients is key so just chill and wait it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 13:51
    i think hes just going for as many comments as possible

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 14:00
    just take your time man, ignore the people around my comment, write them when you want, its well worth it! :) :) :) <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 15:05
    Stop apologizing man these stories are great and take time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 19:12
    Heyy sorry guys this is somestory i save my password onto one of those sticky notes and my little sister accidentaly deleted it, i'm going ti have to make a new account and post the rest of the story from there, really sorry guys:(

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 19:42
    your little sister deleted a sticky note?... nice try

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 20:23
    IDC what is going on just post the next part PLEASE!!! It's going on a month.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 21:04
    Don't worry Somestory, just hide your password somewhere else.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 21:04
    if you are going to make a new account, where do we go for the rest of this story??

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 21:08
    What's the new accounts name

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:19
    Two things lets hope that was actually him and mind tellin us ur new name and btw i use one or two passwords for everything so i never needed to write it down

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:22
    @The dude mocking about deleting a sticky note, I think he/she was referring to the sticky note things for Windows 7

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:23
    ...and I hope that person that posted wasn't some lifeless troll.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:29
    so if you are reading this your post made it sound like it was done

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:31
    The part where he said he deleted the sticky note is not real cuz he would've just logged in and comment with his username and not being anonymous

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:35
    you sir are an idiot

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:35
    you sir are an idiot

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2012 23:44
    It's fake. The writing isn't like SomeStory's writing, he didnt even capitalize the two s's. The same thing happened with echange student story, some idiot thought it would be funny to pretend to be the author. Everyone from that story cane here so it is probably the same person. Don't believe it.

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  • Jswab
    05.03.2012 03:08
    Lol @ Somestory. You're that much of a retard you can't at least hide your password better? Since my password is a 'random' password, I sent it to my email so I can copy and paste. You honestly expect us to believe your sister erased it, and no you have no way to get back in your account?

    The truth is, these AREN'T your stories. I did a search on Google, and came across these same stories on other sites, posted by SOMEONE ELSE! The reason you haven't posted a new story is because the person you're ripping them from hasn't posted one. You low life fuckturd. If you're going to rip off someone's story, at least give them credit for the theft.

    I've lost all my respect for you. You can go die now.

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  • OGBlueMerc
    05.03.2012 06:26
    So you forgot your password? C'mon son!

    Jswab post some links.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 09:00
    only found part 3 on a website and it was posted after the one on this site. Don't bash someone without posting evidence Jswab

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 09:01
    only found part 3 on a website and it was posted after the one on this site. Don't bash someone without posting evidence Jswab

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 10:34
    wow, i mean i get why some people get disappointed after waiting so long, but WOW. How RETARDED are some of the people here? first they love the guy, and once he takes a little longer to get a part out (which he does for fun, not for any of us) some of you go ape-shit! Jswab for example. wow dude. I'm amazed you can even read, with that IQ of yours. same goes for all the other people complaining. Be thankful for what you get, not just demand more. like children, really.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 12:42
    Ohk..@SomeStory do whatever you want but please bring out the 7th part soon....
    I check in almost everyday but get disappointed everytime....
    Please post it soon...
    Im tired.. you may soon be losing one reader...

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 13:25
    There something that allows you to get your password if you "Forgot Password" Get out of here troll.

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  • Jswab
    05.03.2012 16:18
    @Anon FYI, my IQ far exceeds yours, dipshit. Fact of the matter is, If I was writing these stories, I'd have respect for my readers, and would get stories posted in a decent time length. I have found several versions of this story on various other sites, some that were on there before they were posted here. SS is a fraud, which is why it's taking him so long to post, he's waiting for the real writer of the story to publish part 7 so he can rip it and claim it as his own.

    More proof of this is, when you're a writer, you get deep into your work. You'd work on your story constantly, wanting to improve it and get it to your audience in a decent time, and I should know, I've been writing books for several years now. SS is nothing more than a wannabe writer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 17:03
    Hey im not the same anon but if u cant post any links we cant believe anyone

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 17:32
    Fair enough Jswab. Then post a link to the real writer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 19:11
    i tried posting a link on here i am another reader i found also a link with the same story but it wont let me it says contains bad words

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 22:05
    I believe jswab but a link would be nice for further evidence.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 22:12
    I found part 3 on XHamster, and it was posted AFTER this.

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  • w-kun
    05.03.2012 23:19
    Anybody know where to read some more of this story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 00:14
    I did a quick search and found the same story on other sites however the dates are after the date it was posted here. I am interested to see some of these links to back up your accusations.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 00:30
    Dammit. Make another

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 01:04
    Yea ima just wait it out

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 01:41
    there is one other instance on x hamster by adel500, up to part 3 ONLY, and always after XNXX, so Jswab, post the user and website name of the "original" author or go F yourself

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 03:02
    @Jswab So far, all I see is someone throwing a hissy fit because Somestory's stories are receiving more attention then your own. If you have proof that these are stolen, then show them. OR, go back to writing your own stuff, and stop trying to flame others.

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  • Jswab
    06.03.2012 06:58
    LOL, that really just made my morning. You think I'm jealous of his stories? Damn you're funny! I could give a fuck less! I know his stories are better, and it doesn't bother me at all. Funny thing is, all of you are asking for proof, yet, you don't seem to be intelligent enough to go look for it yourselves.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 07:05
    Don't you want to prove that your IQ is greater than ours?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 09:14
    SAME STORY WATS UR NEW ACCOUNT NAME SO WE CAN READ THE STORIES

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 09:18
    JSWAB he might be rite u guys but jswab tell us wat site 2 look at 4 the original auther

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 09:20
    JSWAB he might be rite u guys but jswab tell us wat site 2 look at 4 the original auther

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 09:26
    how the F do you guys know jswab isnt right wat if it is stolen what if somestory took it from someone else. so stop given him shit if u cant prove its not stolen

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 15:22
    why is it whenever i get into one of these stories the eriter seems to go awol or rights other stuff. WTF!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 16:01
    @Jswab So far, all I see is someone throwing a hissy fit because Somestory's stories are receiving more attention then your own. If you have proof that these are stolen, then show them. OR, go back to writing your own stuff, and stop trying to flame others.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 16:16
    Intelligent enough to go look for it ourselves? I don't have to look it up. I'm not the one accusing Somestory of stealing this. I'm perfectly fine with believing this is his original work. But if you decide to come on here and flame Somestory for stealing this, saying you have proof, then show it. Because so far everyone's asked you to show this evidence, and you've just cracked jokes calling everyone stupid. The funny thing is, if you have the truth, then why not share it? If you have it and you're right, then you're right, but if not, then you're just being a troll.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 16:20
    Intelligent enough to go look for it ourselves? I don't have to look it up. I'm not the one accusing Somestory of stealing this. I'm perfectly fine with believing this is his original work. But if you decide to come on here and flame Somestory for stealing this, saying you have proof, then show it. Because so far everyone's asked you to show this evidence, and you've just cracked jokes calling everyone stupid. The funny thing is, if you have the truth, then why not share it? If you have it and you're right, then you're right, but if not, then you're just being a troll.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 16:30
    Please stop bickering. Fighting over the Internet is pointless and makes you look stupid. I have one question. Somestory, where can I read your latest work?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 17:29
    From this

    Anonymous reader
    This shit is amazing , very good work man keep it up!!!
    Anonymous reader
    Great stuff man. Write a shit ton more. :)

    to this

    Anonymous reader
    Hurry the fuck up with this story .. dam this is a long time for one chapter if u knew u couldnt be honest with ur fans then u should of never started writing in the first place u fucking bitch your pissin alot of people off ....fuck you

    y'all really need to get LAID

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 17:35
    From this

    Anonymous reader
    This shit is amazing , very good work man keep it up!!!
    Anonymous reader
    Great stuff man. Write a shit ton more. :)

    to this

    Anonymous reader
    Hurry the fuck up with this story .. dam this is a long time for one chapter if u knew u couldnt be honest with ur fans then u should of never started writing in the first place u fucking bitch your pissin alot of people off ....fuck you

    y'all really need to get LAID

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 18:38
    Intelligent enough to go look for it ourselves? I don't have to look it up. I'm not the one accusing Somestory of stealing this. I'm perfectly fine with believing this is his original work. But if you decide to come on here and flame Somestory for stealing this, saying you have proof, then show it. Because so far everyone's asked you to show this evidence, and you've just cracked jokes calling everyone stupid. The funny thing is, if you have the truth, then why not share it? If you have it and you're right, then you're right, but if not, then you're just being a troll.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 19:51
    Well we cant believe either side until a link is posted someone mind posting it or its his work

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 20:53
    Intelligent enough to go look for it ourselves? I don't have to look it up. I'm not the one accusing Somestory of stealing this. I'm perfectly fine with believing this is his original work. But if you decide to come on here and flame Somestory for stealing this, saying you have proof, then show it. Because so far everyone's asked you to show this evidence, and you've just cracked jokes calling everyone stupid. The funny thing is, if you have the truth, then why not share it? If you have it and you're right, then you're right, but if not, then you're just being a troll.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.03.2012 22:00
    I don't give a fuck bout the story no more. These comments are their own story and more amusing.

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  • w-kun
    06.03.2012 23:06
    @jwasb its 'i couldn't give a fuck less' not 'i could give a fuck less' fyi, looks like someone doesnt have that high of an iq

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 01:20
    WHY THE F ARE YOU PEOPLE TALKING SHIT IF U DONT HAVE PROOF THAT IT ISNT STOLEN,LETS ASK SOMESTORY IF ITS STOLEN.

    SOMESTORY IS THIS STOLEN

    YES OR NO

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  • ShadowBane
    07.03.2012 05:23
    Sony long, dude. It's been fun while it lasted

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 12:42
    great stuff
    keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 19:38
    Over a month since this was posted? Did he fucking fall off the face of the earth?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 19:47
    Story 2 at tinyurl /7k8sobg

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 22:24
    @JSwab is a whiney cunt who writes depressing, boring, laghable shit. He's probably just pissed that he didn't think of stealing someone else's work, maybe (definately) he'd get more readers. If you've such a great IQ you'd be able to work out that you're a useless little prick and you are not wanted!! FUCK OFF @JSWAB

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 22:39
    Jswab is right u dumbasses. If u want ur proof so bad search this story on google and quit bitching.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:11
    2 things:

    1: I've searched the internet to see if SomeStory is the genuine author or not, and I've found that SomeStory has more chapters of this story than other people I found posting this story as their own, so therefore I shall believe this is in fact the genuine copy.

    2: I shall also believe that some unfortunate circumstances has happened to SomeStory for there has been no submission of chapters nor forum posts by said author for the past full month now, not that there is some selfish reason on the author's behalf.

    So I respectfully say to everyone; use this time to cultivate patience and wait for another chapter, because unless you personally know the author and can update on the author's personal situation (because if you look back a few chapters, I believe there was mention of a visit to the hospital?) you are merely assuming and "making an "ass" out of "u" and "mi".

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:11
    who needs the story when you have idoits fighting over the internet ahhh comedy

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:13
    also did i just troll most of you

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:13
    no i just trolled them

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:15
    ahhh the funny thing about anoy readers is that you dont know who they are but we know who you are pepole with accounts yes we do yes we do

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2012 23:49
    2 things:

    1: I've searched the internet to see if SomeStory is the genuine author or not, and I've found that SomeStory has more chapters of this story than other people I found posting this story as their own, so therefore I shall believe this is in fact the genuine copy.

    2: I shall also believe that some unfortunate circumstances has happened to SomeStory for there has been no submission of chapters nor forum posts by said author for the past full month now, not that there is some selfish reason on the author's behalf.

    So I respectfully say to everyone; use this time to cultivate patience and wait for another chapter, because unless you personally know the author and can update on the author's personal situation (because if you look back a few chapters, I believe there was mention of a visit to the hospital?) you are merely assuming and "making an "ass" out of "u" and "mi".

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 03:04
    when you gona post another part

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 06:49
    Why are you fucktards fighting through the internet? FUCK, now you're making me do it!!! I'm stressed and I need a shit now!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 10:06
    Need a shit? why dont you go to the toilet and take one?

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 11:43
    Hey that's good advice, I didn't think of that!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 16:04
    Hey that's good advice, I didn't think of that!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 16:05
    Hey that's good advice, I didn't think of that!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 17:00
    I know no need to thank me

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 18:03
    Where's part 7!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 21:14
    Love the story all parts 1-6 hope there is a seventh coming up ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 00:53
    Is he gona post another story ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 01:19
    :( We've been waiting forever!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 06:07
    Is it really that important to all of you that he post this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 09:28
    oo yh we are living for it! !

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 11:48
    another case of TAMPERER syndrome here ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 12:28
    Im sure he has more important things to do than provide you lot with wank material 24/7 go play some video games, go outside wait a few days you fucking saddos, jesus.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 15:18
    I'm debating on if I should even keep checking anymore.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 17:23
    i agree with the below comment

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 22:23
    damn been like 3-5 weeks, when next?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2012 23:15
    Love how one guy told us to get a life... but you know he had to get here some how.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2012 17:57
    When will you do part 7 i don't want to wait longer can you hurry up please

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2012 17:58
    When will you do part 7 i don't want to wait longer can you hurry up please

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2012 19:10
    To the comment below, if you don't want to wait, then there are Plenty of other things for you to do...

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2012 21:25
    I am saddened by the lack of an update

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2012 23:36
    I can't wait for the next part please finish it soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 00:21
    The best way to get this story up is to forget about it. Don't check for a while then one day just randomly check it and the story will probably be posted.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 00:53
    It was fun while it lasted

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 12:08
    Just create a new account and resume the story pls . .@ s.s.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 18:48
    gheeze guys the guy was 99 years old he's probably in porn hevean right about now

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 22:36
    Make another one man and have him fuck his mom in the ass great work you kick ass

    From SMS (and to everyone else yes those are my initials)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 23:38
    O yeah. He's 99 probably, anyone ever thought he might be dead?

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 06:47
    plz update next part soon i am begging u

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 06:47
    update plz continue story u r awesome man wonderful story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 06:48
    i cant wait for next update

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 14:48
    Plz i beg u to write another segment. U have so many devoted followers

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 15:58
    where is part 7, ive been checking almost dailt for the new one anyday now

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 15:59
    where is part 7, ive been checking almost dailt for the new one anyday now

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 16:13
    For an author of such stories death is a possibility u guys but I'd place my bets on inprisonment or anything implying in trouble with the law, I'm guesin he probably 'acted out' his stories/fantasies were the circumustances were more ilegal, anyway watever the case is I don't think there will be more from him for a long time (if ever). loved the series tho

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 17:46
    where is part 7 this series rules iv check daily for like 2 weeks

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 17:48
    Chyecking everyday for the next installment hope it cums soon! lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 21:38
    Okay soo.. He's could be a she.. And he/she isn't 99 -_- And he/she is most likely not in prison and I doubt they acted this story out.. All these theories are stupid. He/she had a hospital trip in the beginning of this series so he/she could possibly be having more troubles and could possibly, sadly be dead. And that would end this amazing series. But lets not jump to conclusions people!! It's only been like two weeks past what he/she originally posts his/her stories. So everyone just calm down and go jack off or go finger yourself to something else for another two or three months and if he/she still didn't post anything then we can start to assume...

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 00:10
    When is he/she gonna right another story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 00:19
    Maybe never, who knows? I'm still gonna continue checking though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 02:35
    man ive been cheking back every couple of days to see if the new chapter is up but no luck, its been a ittle over a month since the author posted the last chapter, what is going on?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 03:42
    Awesome story. Can't find part 5 tho. And I'm with everyone else. Is there more or is moms return the end of the line?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 18:43
    anyone think his account ended? the system probably cant process the number 100

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 19:56
    Here's my theory that maybe his computer crashed and he has to re right the chapter idk I just want to read the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2012 23:15
    Fuck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.03.2012 01:13
    Everyone, you're shit out of luck. This loser isn't coming back. And it is a she. The way she types (not her stories, but the use of "<3") is quite obvious. Oh well, guess it just goes to show, Jswab was right. Not her stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.03.2012 04:59
    Anonymous reader
    2012-03-15 01:13:38
    Everyone, you're shit out of luck. This loser isn't coming back. And it is a she. The way she types (not her stories, but the use of "<3") is quite obvious. Oh well, guess it just goes to show, Jswab was right. Not her stories.
    ----------------------------------
    Then please, find the true copy of the story, I implore you, because I haven't been able to find the story beyond part 3 on other sites, which pretty much sums up that this is the original unless I get proof otherwise.

    You call the person who posted the story a loser? Then write your own fucking story and post it here, otherwise shut up, go back to the main page, and read something else to pass the time. Fuck sake, you fucking people don't have any concept of patience. You know those wide-selling books written by famous authors? It takes at least a YEAR to make a plausible sequel/book, and what do people do who? They WAIT, because they're PATIENT

    Fuck sake, be patient and go read s

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.03.2012 10:30
    Actually, I DO write my own stories, and I can certainly get mine out in a faster time frame. There's a difference between these and a book, A BOOK IS LONGER! SomeStory IS a loser because she can't even post to say "sorry for wait, will have part 7 out soon". Why? 'Cause she's not coming back, or if she does, it'll be to say "I can't continue with the stories". Somestory, come prove me wrong. LOG YOUR STUPID ASS ON!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.03.2012 13:33
    i think hes right. 'YOU ARE A FUAKN LOOSED ASSHOLE ! ! !'

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.03.2012 16:08
    Look guys this is a porn website. Stop fighting.. There are trolls everywhere you go. Just ignore them. The true fans just wait and stay out of the fights and the impatient not so true fans have your opinions just don't start shit. This story is for pleasure not internet fights? If SomeStory comes back then she will and if not then she won't.. Whatever. It's a story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.03.2012 22:19
    If you guys want a story that bad do one yourself

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.03.2012 00:31
    you got writers block or one hell of a hetic life. please hurry your stories are so good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.03.2012 02:58
    Christ, do you people really have nothing better to do than to argue about whether or not there will be another post or not or whether this is the original work? FFS grow up.

    On a side note though, I'm fairly certain these are the originals, I have seen this story other places, but have yet to see it on another site posted on a date before these.

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  • ramboy
    17.03.2012 04:33
    i sent somestory a message asking if s/he is still writing or gave up. no responce yet btw. i did find out s/he was here 11 days after the story was posted. safe to presume not dead or in jail. this place might not be the original because the profile and the stories dont have his/her email adress cuz s/he kept saying about how people send her emails to be his/her editor

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.03.2012 18:05
    The wait for the next chapter has caused me to realize something.
    I'm enjoying the comments more than I enjoyed the stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 00:07
    In the meantime, everyone go watch Mr. Bean dance to Mr. Boombastic. Laughs all round to those who watch it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 08:19
    If its taking this long, it will be long and the best one yet!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 20:11
    Totally agrees with the comment Below me

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 22:08
    Holy shit..... This chick can write a damn good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 23:00
    ALL OF YOU ARE MENTALLY ILL. SomeStory is NOT posting anymore stories ever again. For the comments 2 under me, don't try to cheer yourselves up by forcing yourselves to believe that he/she or whatever u wanna call him/her/it is going to post another one. STOP CHECKING EVERYDAY.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 01:39
    To the person below chill. You buzzkilling bitch. what wrong with bein positive

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 04:19
    chill out man some people only just got here

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 12:29
    Somestory had lost his password and he already mentioned it so stop making dead hopes

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 19:22
    guy below, SomeStory has not lost his password he just can't be fucked to write anymore so came up with some lame half hearted excuse

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 21:22
    Wow what's it been bro about a month and a half dude ur wrk is fucking awsome but to be honest m8 I'm not gonn check any more for ur storys cozz honestly u must of quit by now just want to say thanks for the storyy loved it wile it lasted take care dude

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 23:42
    Wtf, this is such a shame. I lived for these stories every 2 weeks.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 23:55
    please finish the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 00:52
    i hope he makes another part with him having sex with his mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 01:27
    He's not gona make it!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 17:20
    I want next part, no i need it !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 17:30
    Dude you should totally continue this series been waiting for the next chapter and havent seen it.. hope you havent given up on this one yet uts just getting good

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 18:05
    Unless you've been writing the final chapters so you can just throw them on here at once I'd pretty much say you've lost the will to continue. It was intriguing while it lasted.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 19:12
    Hurry up man there are no more great story's like this anymore on this site

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  • OGBlueMerc
    21.03.2012 02:19
    Damn it feels good to be gangsta.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.03.2012 22:45
    Person below me is a fucking dumbass.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2012 03:28
    I have a feeling this is going to end up like TAMPERER's stories, mark my words, but I hope I'm wrong...

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2012 11:51
    Yeah, come on, get the next story going! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2012 15:18
    when are you going to post your next story. their needs to be more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2012 00:12
    I used to check everyday for part 7 then I took an arrow to the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2012 07:16
    ok bro listen u gotta come back plllz pl are trying to coppy ur work i wont even read it bud cozz i know ulll be back smash it bro just plz dude

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2012 09:19
    loved the story needs pt. 7 hope to see it soon

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  • nivek_88
    23.03.2012 16:26
    nice, waiting for the next part

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  • Stark2486
    23.03.2012 17:01
    COME on please the next part, and less of the Stephen King sketch and make us wait 20yrs for the next installement.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 04:24
    why did you give up bro this story was sooo awsome the best story ever and im sure every one would agry bro but what happened what went so rong u gave up man well any way i hope we get part 7 if not it was awsome wile it lasted u have a talent bro and not just for writing storys its the words u use the way u make the people in ur story soo real and make use fall in love with it bro its not just a sex story i read it cozzz it pulls u in so much u dont get meany pl what can do that bro dont waist it keep welll bro or sis lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 11:42
    im so horny any one els cant

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 11:52
    nivek_88 im waiting for part 17 of your incest birthday why the hell are you on this storie?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 11:58
    hey guys some story here again well my real name is mathew but what ever lol any way just set up a new account will be done in one week sorry for the wait i know i can be a dick but illl make it up to alll my fans

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 11:59
    im so horny any one els cant

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 14:02
    Whats the ner accounts name? & I just read all 6 today lol :) Make a new one but dont make him have with the mom, make him and Ashley sart having the pashionitte sex and flirting agian?

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  • 17andsmall
    24.03.2012 18:43
    someone has wrote a part7

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 21:01
    Where the part7!? & if its not by him it not as good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 21:04
    You gotta tell us the accout name! Dont stop the stories. You get like 1-400 plus comments! Most writers strive to get 50 or more! Put the new one up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 23:05
    /40261/3_Evil_Sister-Part_7

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 23:07
    h t t p : / / s t o r i e s . x n x x . c o m / s t o r y / 4 0 2 6 1 / 3 _ E v i l _ S i s t e r - P a r t _ 7

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.03.2012 08:46
    Anyone else think its weird how much praise this guy gets for writing a story that guys just jerk to? On that note I will offer my own opinion. I really like the character interaction and all of them are well developed. You got a gift my friend, you got a gift. Also I really like jerking it to your stories lol.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.03.2012 16:14
    When is the next story coming :( :( Ive been waiting for a month!! :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2012 01:52
    ok the story has been continued by duskflair the link is below so stop asking about a next part the only one there is gonna be is by duskflair

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2012 18:34
    part 7 please i cant take it!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2012 22:59
    Don't let this be the last part what about the mom keep it going this is my favorite story

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2012 23:22
    Can you post another link it doesn't seem to work

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 01:23
    the link is spaced out i tried unspacing it and it worked just unspace it after you paste it into the URL bar so ya just thought that would help

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 16:21
    You can't stop there, it would be a crime. !!!! Come on next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 18:42
    Can't wait for part 7!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2012 23:31
    /story/40261/3_Evil_Sister-Part_7

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2012 06:58
    the link below is what i consider a fan-fiction contiuation. it just became more romance then the fight on who is in charge in the bedroom max or one of the sisters. btw like to see genes reaction to the news that max banged her mom and his sisters

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2012 23:03
    Yeah, there are a few errors. So what? This is quite possibly the best story I've Come accross here, in like 3 years.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2012 01:55
    Yeah, there are a few errors. So what? This is quite possibly the best story I've Come accross here, in like 3 years.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2012 04:01
    FORGET THE DAMN SPELL CORRECTING!!
    Just post the next story or two that you've written SomeStory!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2012 16:02
    NEXT STORY PLEASE?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2012 23:12
    This is the only series I've actually bothered reading instead of just...getting off and getting out. Great job writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 01:29
    If you go here,
    /story/40261/3_Evil_Sister-Part_7
    you can read a pretty good fan continuation.

    I think SomeStory is just gone now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 04:22
    i think he is either in jail dead or forgot about one of the greatest series on this site. btw ALOT says he dead

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 07:37
    ok hes not comming back who ever wants to read parts 7 8 go anread them on duskflairs account this so annoyin that u gave up bro but what ever dude ur life

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 18:52
    Everyone stop bitching. I've been here since part one and I've been checking like weekly.. It's porn. Calm down and get some lives. Loyal fans will stay and people who want to troll or just get off will go. Maybe that's what SomeStory is going for. Maybe he/she is filtering good fans from the bad. Or maybe there are some problems in SomeStory's life or maybe that last part was the end? When the mom came home maybe it was the end.. Shitty end but the end. It's a great series and I want the next story just as bad if not worse as the next but we loyal fans need to be patient and we do NOT I repeat do NOT need to be like these bitching trolls!!! It's interesting but it's just a story guys I mean come on.. Get your girlfriend to go run you off in the meantime and check every so often. Let's just hope SomeStory is okay!! Not if he/she will have a story out soon so we can jack off to it!! Everyone just calm the fuck down and be patient.. Hell if your that desperate for the next part; pray hah

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 18:55
    Umm I'm a little high and spell check sucks but that was supposed to say something like go get your girlfriend to give you a handjob in the meantime or something haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 18:59
    As a realistic man that I am (hoping u guyz also are) I'll say chances are he's either dead, in a prison, or hospitalized because those are realy the only reasons why BY THIS TIME we haven't heard from him excluding possibilities he's lazy (were the number of fans would be enough to encourage more writing) or he's playing a mean trick on us (of which judging from his writings he sounds like a nice dude, possibly gay) anyway from the 3 possibilities we should be hoping he's in a hospital were he needs a few more weeks/months to recover since writing some wank material for some pervets online is the last thing on his mind so check back weekly/monthly, second to asume is he's in a prison (highly likely for a pervet like him writing stuff that's unacceptable to society like these, us fans included) so check back in bout a year or so, then lastly death which I hope not but we should be clever enough to know if no part 7 within a years time then no part 7 @ all!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 02:54
    Oo come on. He all ready state that he has lost his password and he will never be able to log in as somestory. So story checking out and enjoy next parts posted by another guy. Now say goodbay to somestory and chill out. :-)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 07:32
    There should be password recovery options right? So if its not somestory then its not somestory... By the way while readinding through his work I'm also getting a 'gay vibe' from him, he must definetly be gay!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 13:07
    Actually I thought this was a good story with an actual plot. I thought the last chapter was not up to the prior ones and the protagonist should have been 15, not 13. Although I was fucking at 13 I was not doing nearly as well as he did WITH HIS NINE INCH DICK. An exceptional in every way young man. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 09:13
    Youse might wanna read the little note SomeStory put at the end of the other story. Might explain a few things...

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 11:17
    SomeStory is back. check his channel to find the first chapter of a new story he started. 3 Evil Sisters won't continue in the near future, because he feels he can't do it justice right now. If he gets back into his groove, I'm sure, eventually we'll find another chapter of 3ES. But until then, enjoy his new story!

    All the information is from the note SomeStory left under his new story, which you can find on his channel (or whatever his page is called).

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 23:32
    MOOOOOOOAAAAAR... please?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 13:07
    Outstanding story..If people are catching the type-o's than they are not really reading. Please keep up the good work. I grew up with three sisters myself but it was nothing near as fun as this is.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 00:22
    When will the next chapter be out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 11:22
    THESE STORIES ARE FUCKING GREAT. PLEASE KEEP THEM GOING!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2012 11:52
    Dude, I dnt know if I'll ever read this comment, but this story is really well written. I wud really appreciate it if u create a happy ending though. I know it's not easy to write a story, again I wud really appreciate it if u cud publish ur stories a bit faster. Thnx fr ur stories, dude. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 15:15
    Please give it a ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2012 03:02
    More. Raps train. More

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.05.2012 13:25
    I don't get why this is rated the lowest. Personally this is my favorite part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2012 06:18
    Sorry to disappoint everyone, but ss isn't going to finish. He says he will, but he's not a true writer, just a punk ass who starts writing something then starts something else before the original is even finished.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2012 19:04
    that would just be awesome if you would have him fuck his mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2012 02:25
    Where did part 5 go?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2012 23:12
    I'm starting to hate you for being so undependable when it comes to publishing stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2012 00:41
    my first sex storie was a not so simple life. ss is my favorite

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2012 14:31
    Responding To:
    Anonymous reader
    2012-05-03 13:25:58
    I don't get why this is rated the lowest. Personally this is my favorite part.
    ***************************************
    I absolutely agree with the above remark. This was the best of all of them. He needs to fuck Gene's mom a few more times and now that Mom is home, she should be introduced to her son's thirteen year old nine inch pole. Those girls should all treat him like GOLD. When he gets to be fifteen, sixteen and seventeen, he's going to have at least eleven inches of cock to stuff into their hot little pussies. He'll be the only source for them to get the fucking they crave. I think he should end up with Riley. She only wants HIS cock and cum in her pussy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2012 14:37
    To:
    Anonymous reader
    2012-05-06 02:25:07
    Where did part 5 go?
    **************************************************
    Part 5 was accidentally posted as the SECOND part 4. Was that too tough for you to figure out all by yourself?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2012 14:56
    THIS reply/comment is to this story's AUTHOR.
    You write a great story but you have your head stuffed WAY UP YOUR ASS to think that editing your work isn't important. The tone of this response to you should tell you that much. What you're telling us is that you're an arrogant motherfucker. Do I have that right? (of course I do)
    I've had book editors tell me that some of my stories can be published AS WRITTEN because I have pride and took the time to PROOF READ my work before I submitted it to criticism.

    For all time, a good story is going to sit here and be shown to have been submitted by an asshole who was too ignorant to present it as professionally as possible. It's one thing when you're incapable of better and another when you're an arrogant motherfucker who thinks that what other people think doesn't matter. ..... But if you're comfortable with dozens of misspelled and wrongly used words representing your intellect and educational limitations... you've arrived.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2012 18:52
    hey man you gotta make another chapter this story is awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2012 19:40
    You have to keep this series going it's by far the best thing I've read that's anything like it. We have to get to know the mom too and I don't feel like Gene is ready to back out of the story. Your grammar mistakes are easily over looked and this entire series is just seriously well written. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 17:25
    R u gtn old? Wea is the rest?

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  • Kenidar
    28.05.2012 20:32
    I do hope you will be continuing this series I must say I have enjoyed it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2012 02:59
    I just cant see how people are spotting mistakes I'm so into the story I can't notice shit I'm in my own little world hope you stupid grammar Nazis would join me because this is a great world

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  • CavernOfIce
    09.06.2012 08:10
    Cant wait for the next part loving this series <3

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  • toblu2btru
    13.06.2012 05:57
    This is a great series cant wait to read more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 17:56
    I love this series please keep going

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 03:36
    Damn dude, this is some seriously good stuff, can't wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 03:45
    Don't let him fuck Gene please! I love the story's and I hope that you won't let it drop off, and please keep it good, but Gene should become his girlfriend, not his fuck buddy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2012 01:15
    Man you you already choked to fucking stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.07.2012 14:45
    Where is part 7? I've been waiting for months and still no part 7!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2012 13:54
    This series is amazing keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2012 02:32
    I can't see how people spot mistakes I get into the story to much to notice

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2012 19:14
    Where is the rest!?!?!?!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2012 16:58
    Dude hurry up with part 7 im dying to read it..is he going to fuck his mom to? U should have the sisters and hhim all forgive each other in one big fuck fest and have them all bent over the bed in a line giving him six holes to to choose from that would be so awesome...love the seriws please hurry with number 7

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2012 13:12
    DUDE! GET TO WRITING! I VOTED ALL YOUR CHAPTERS POSITIVE, NOW GET TO THAT KEYBOARD, BECAUSE THIS IS FUCKING PUBLISHABLE! Thanks for caring ^^

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2012 19:01
    This story is cursed!!!! He stopped writing it and somestory wrote to part 8 and then stopped this story will never get finished

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 11:25
    I am not as critical as I used to be and tend to overlook words spelled wrong and I hope that you don't let it get to you. I could write a story about personal experiences and then I would be dry, I realize that it takes a lot of time, energy and effort to pull these plots out of thin air and I appreciate it. Keep up the good work, do what you can and to hell with the critics. Just tell them to do better and then criticize you. Semper Fi.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2012 21:23
    I would like it if u continue this exciting story because I want to know how it ended. Please finishes it. I luv reading this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2012 05:30
    Very nice story would like to see where you will go with it

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  • timothy411
    27.09.2012 13:03
    Will you do any more of this story because ,I am hooked on it,like to C what going to happen next keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2012 15:45
    Dude more who cares bout the spelling it itsnt that bad and anyone reading this shouldn't really be worrying bout ur spelling

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2012 06:06
    keep going on this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2012 23:52
    Anyone know other insest stories with sisters named Ashley?

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2012 00:38
    ITS YA NIGGA KEBO GOTTI!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2013 03:44
    I want the next part, but i don't want the mom to join with the incest, maybe her finding out about it might be a plot twist!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 08:26
    Please please continue this story I'm hooked and want more keep up the amazing work ner'vod

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 08:27
    Please please continue this story I'm hooked and want more keep up the amazing work ner'vod

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2013 12:47
    dude more man...you are too good

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2013 07:08
    Please continue. Describe the mother more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2013 05:34
    Turn this into a book. It's like the best story every. I just love how it's not a 'straight into sex", story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2013 15:12
    you need to write about this more

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2013 10:42
    duskflair has continued this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 09:28
    Are you going to finish the series?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2013 04:25
    You gotta continue man :/

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2013 07:31
    Man i love this story man u need to finish it off

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2013 03:49
    I speak for everyone on the fact that we need a part 7!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2013 12:26
    Finish the story I love it need to ended it

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2013 17:55
    Please sir, may I have some more? Seriously, a really good story that I really can't wait to get more of.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 23:55
    Forget it this story was made a year ago so this is the last story

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2013 02:47
    We all fucking want part 7!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2013 20:01
    Part seven is under a different author known as duskflair.

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  • DePlexx
    30.04.2013 18:46
    there is a part 7,8 and 9 but part 7 & 8 are by duskflair and part 9 is by someone else I wouldn't read part 9 but would say read 7 and 8

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2013 00:45
    I don't want to read someone's improvised interpretation I want to read the original author's continuation. Dammit I hate when good authors just stop writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.05.2013 07:54
    please finish!!! love it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 14:17
    Dude, why did u stop writing. 2 b frank, ur sories were the best ive read on this sit. Please continue 2 write.Thnx.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 18:22
    Don't ypu idiots get it. It is finished it called a cliff hanger. Stories finish on them. Great job with the series I loved it. The writing was fantastic and the story was great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2013 04:05
    WHERE THE FUCK IS PART 5?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2013 22:46
    when is the next chapter?

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2013 15:15
    These stories are the best I've ever read.... But now other people have written 7.8 and 9, but everyone would much prefere the original author of the story as it is better this way. Therefore I still don't understand why you won't do 7.8 and 9 yourself

    Anyway thanks for the stories so far... 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2013 04:29
    are you still gonna complete this series? this is a really fantastic story.. please continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2013 05:36
    Great writing I can understand that it's hard to critique yourself but this is extremely well done please continue and possibly incorporate Gwen as she might check up on him lol thanks for a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2013 11:32
    this guy named duskflair made a part 7 and 8 that is pretty decent but don't try to look for part nine

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2013 02:40
    These Stories are excellent, you are one of the bes authors. I'm disappointed that you have stop writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2013 15:18
    this is incredible, please dont say its over, due mainly to the fact that this could get even more interesting...and worth it in my general uncouth opinion.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2013 13:52
    Lol, I really liked this story up until he fucked Gene's Mom, infact I liked it so much I was skipping the sex scenes because it was so interesting story-wise. Now I assume he's going to fuck his Mom, and then when Izzy found out about him fucking Gene's Mom that just felt like an uber tryhard to keep the story going. I was really sad when Izzy betrayed him, but I expected it especially after the argument she had with Ashley. Fucking the Mom made me really hate the story though:/

    I hope it wraps up with a nice ending. (Hopefully Izzy dying since I really don't see this story ending with everything being alright between the 4. L) You should really wrap it up with the next chapter though, it's getting extremely tedious and the plot-twists are getting dis-interesting.

    But yeah if he fucks his Mom I'm truly losing all hope for this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2013 13:59
    Oh wow, this was posted in 2012, I guess the guy gave up on the story. He must have realize how stupid it was getting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2013 22:42
    Oh come on!!!! It's been over a year please post chapter 7!!! Please message me when you continue this story....my name is iwant3bigdicks.....thanks in advance!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2013 02:17
    some more are posted under a different name

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2013 19:25
    What's the different name

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.12.2013 18:49
    You know that was the ending right? He finished it off with a cliff hanger. This is the last chapter and the ending

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.12.2013 22:24
    This story is so stupid it's not funny, Fuck your story and fuck you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2013 13:36
    Terrible ending,
    He didn't even do anything with Gene

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2014 09:09
    Were is the rest of story?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.01.2014 14:08
    We want another story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2014 07:08
    Make more parts !! It's been about a YEAR ALREdy ! please hurry up !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2014 03:53
    I really would like to see a new part Its been 2 years after all.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2014 21:27
    This story is awesome! I cant wait for the next part! I'm hoping he hooks up with Riley some..and not at all with the mom... hurry hurry please...I keep re-reading these!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2014 21:27
    This story is awesome! I cant wait for the next part! I'm hoping he hooks up with Riley some..and not at all with the mom... hurry hurry please...I keep re-reading these!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.04.2014 05:30
    C'mon somestory... It's been more than 2 years and you have not even completed this series... Hope you'll come up with new parts to it as soon as possible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2014 07:21
    Next one please!!!!! Cant wait any longer

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2014 10:29
    please part 7 love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 22:13
    as bitchy as the sisters are maybe if they got pregnant would give them a reason to see life in a different light .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2014 05:31
    Somestory..... Please. I love this series. You are truly a genius. Please. You have me very worried. I continue to re-read these stories daily, and every time I do my eyes linger on your authors note about you being sick. It has almost been 3 years since your last post and I can only fear the worst. Please. I really just want to no if you are ok health wise. And I am curious as to your feelings about authors like "Duskflair" continuing your work, are you going to continue from your own work (if you continue at all) or are you going to branch from his. Also. If you have started posting I. Another site or use another screen name please comment it. Please. Writers like jashely cannot take your place. Come back.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2014 01:00
    a true form of masterpiece. you really have what it takes.keep going man....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2014 04:48
    So sad this was posted 2 years ago it would be great if I could keep going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2014 06:22
    Please keep going. This is my favorite series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2014 02:45
    Dear Somestory, This is a well conceived, well thought out story. It is however too short. There is so much scope in the story itself that it deserves to carry on. This is a rare jewel in a sea of dross. Please please return to it. This really does deserve to run

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  • adjo+the+tiger
    28.09.2014 11:29
    Well some story u hope you keep this one going because I want to know how life changes for them with there mom home

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2014 04:04
    Been waiting for this to update for over a year now... Sad. I love the story just wanted to see it finished

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2014 13:13
    damn it no scene with gene

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.10.2014 21:27
    I need more gotta keep going!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2014 06:47
    Amazing my god i want part 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2014 05:12
    Where is number 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2014 03:12
    You're joking right? You couldnt do this story justice? I've havent seen an author as good as you in 2 YEARS! I read ALOT of online works, both like this and non-sexually based stories, but writing is writing and skill is skill. You my friend have got some SERIOUS talent, your ability to convey the character's emotions, your ability to create subtle humor in tense situations, and your ability to have me sit in one spot for 3 hours reading this non-stop is OUTSTANDING. YOU'RE A GENIUS AND ITS AWESOME BECUASE YOU DONT KNOW IT. The way you foreshadow events is awe-inspiring. I appreciate quality work and this exceeds qualifications to be considered high quality, especially for an amateur like yourself and I. I put down my vote for this to continue. You don't want to lose inspiration? Then dont set deadlines, not meeting those is a huge moral killer and builds up into killing drive. YOURE A GOOD WRITER AND THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY. I'll post this to all stories so I'm sure you read it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2014 16:36
    Alright. This is really a great story. The drama and hurt./comfort is amazing. It creates emotional attachment to the story. But really? The Mom too? So unrealistic. It's still a good story for erotica, but it's a shame, because if things were a bit more realistic it could have been much more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.12.2014 01:06
    I agree with the second comment lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2014 17:49
    Needs more parts. These stories turn me on so much.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2015 03:34
    I imagine izzy looks like a goth version of Gianna michaels

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2015 19:47
    This is the second time I've read this series and I love it. Really wish there was a part 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2015 03:57
    This story NEEDS a part seven with like a three some maybe even a foursome its also not that unbelievable like Id believe you if you said it was real cause you got this emotions on the paper so well. This has definitely became my favorite story on this site like I'd be addicted if this were an actual book series and you made alot more I beg you come back with just one more addition to this amazing story. =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.04.2015 13:04
    I've read and reread your stories , l don't know if your still writing or not ,
    Have seen a few ghost writers try to continue this story.
    They fail badly for your content and humor is by far more entertaining .
    Please make a return and finish the story.
    Thank You

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2015 00:01
    i'm like...begging you for more! ;)
    Its a great story!!!
    Don't give up on the threesome with all the sisters just yet!! ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2015 07:50
    Where DID HE GO????!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 09:39
    U can continue this series. Please post the other parts. It's really awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2015 05:00
    Sadly somestory disappeared but, if I'm not wrong two or three other guys picked the story and continued it. Can't remember who though.

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  • Diannap
    17.07.2015 12:37
    Wow this story made me wet i really really hope u will contiue. When the storie is this well writen it does matter if there some minor spelling problems (my english suck anyway so I dont even see them). Im begging you to contiue this storyline and I wont even hit you, even thou my favorit character in the story probably would have. Thanx for the wet dreams :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2015 03:48
    Haha I'm a picky reader. In one story Izzy has a queen bed and in this she has a king and in the first story Max's dad left and in the others he died. Just commenting. Great story. Love it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2015 03:54
    Haha I'm a picky reader. In one story Izzy has a queen bed and in this she has a king and in the first story Max's dad left and in the others he died. Just commenting. Great story. Love it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2015 02:57
    amazing,u should make this into a book

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2015 14:55
    I love this story line and a few mistakes in grammar don't matter it's a sexy story and it gave me a raging hard-on, you should make another.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2015 02:37
    Dude! Where's part 7!?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2015 04:48
    interesting story, if the dates right means your not writing at all at least here. to bad. story was getting interesting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2015 05:28
    You should really keep it going, I absolutely love these stories, they're really well done man. Good job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2015 04:07
    Continued under author "ll Metallica ll"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2015 10:22
    Max & Riley

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2015 07:22
    I want part 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2015 04:22
    FIVESOME!!!!

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  • a1day1
    18.09.2015 08:02
    One of the best stories I have read in a while you should keep going with this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2015 22:23
    Please continue. This is by far the best story I've read on here. I can't wait to see where you're gonna go with the story. Is mom gonna find out. Did she suspect what was going on. Is she gonna join. I'm just tingling with anticipation

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  • Exybro007
    11.10.2015 01:51
    Can wait to see the rest of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2015 18:27
    oye why did u stop writing the other parts of this story ,, some other authors tried to complete it but they were complete failures ,,,,
    Please continue , we all are waiting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2015 04:07
    Keep it going. What happens next?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2015 02:46
    YOU WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT THE END IS

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2015 06:52
    This is a kick ass story! Luv it!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2015 17:32
    Very good series! Nice job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2015 14:47
    Cmon bro finish. Please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.11.2015 12:51
    Please make part 7 :'(

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  • Bry83
    07.11.2015 19:23
    Great series of stories they were really good stories hope the other stories will be just as good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2015 07:52
    Waiting for number 7-8-9 to come out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2015 02:15
    Waiting for number 7-8-9 to come out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.11.2015 14:15
    He's been MIA for 3 years now. It's kind of depressing, I loved this series. Would love to at least know where you went.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.12.2015 20:17
    one day...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2015 22:54
    Wonderful, I mean, if there were to be an award,u won.just waiting for part 7_8 maybe 9 if possible.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.12.2015 10:32
    I never leave comments, but I absolutely love this story, please keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2015 19:43
    KEEP WRITING PLEASE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2015 04:46
    It's spelled grammar, not grammer

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2015 06:49
    keep making these

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2015 06:54
    Where's part 5 at?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2015 07:40
    I know it's been a long time but please continue this story! Totally hooked! Love your writing style and how your story is relatable, and not cliché when it seems it is going to be. Please continue writing, and I hope you never stop!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2016 11:47
    I loved these stories, please keep them coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2016 09:20
    I love your storys please continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2016 13:09
    Hey bro...this story is awesome.... Plz continue ....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2016 00:17
    Part five is the part four with no tags

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2016 04:51
    perfect ending to a perfect franchise!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2016 22:56
    You should have him have a foursome with his three sister's

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2016 07:28
    You got to continue the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.01.2016 23:50
    I hope to see another installment sometime soon, this story has evolved from a jerkfest to an actual plot filled story, and I can't seem to put it down

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.01.2016 16:06
    Another one please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.01.2016 01:33
    I honestly started hating it after he went back to the house. This went from something I thought was hot to something I just wanted to read because I had to see what happened next. It was ruined for me because I loved everything but then I couldn't even trust what izzy and Ashely said and it made me want to skip all the parts with them. There was no happy ending....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 15:09
    I'm loving this series. I'm hoping for a few scenes with Riley, considering we've kinda missed out on that. I'm guessing the mother will also get sexually involved later on too. Keep up the great work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2016 04:34
    Awesome story, please continue!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2016 01:19
    I wouldn't mind reading a few more chapters I'm curious to see what happens with mom as well as riley and Izzy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2016 05:09
    Mind boggling. Not bottling. It's a good story (really) but...., the inevitable but. It could do with proof reading. Words missing, words mixed up, it really spoils the rhythm of the stories.Oh and you don't glare at an inanimate object. Glaring is reserved for people.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.02.2016 16:49
    Nice story! Don't end it anytime soon please! I hope the protagonist fucks gene at least once. Really good man! <3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.02.2016 16:51
    Gene needs to be fucked!!!!!!! I expect like at least another 3 4 parts please don't stop writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.02.2016 20:43
    keep going with the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2016 16:34
    Why want you let them have one big orgy Izzy gives him a pill

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.02.2016 07:51
    Wheres the next chapter!?!?!?!?!?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.02.2016 20:46
    I have to agree with the others. Let it continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.02.2016 03:37
    Plz continue this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.02.2016 03:37
    Plz continue this but let him end up with gene

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2016 04:59
    Plz more with Riley, by the way this could go on forever if you are willing to keep writing

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  • Sood
    20.02.2016 15:28
    More please awesome it is

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.02.2016 21:18
    Keep going with this let him fuck riley more and end up with gene

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2016 02:54
    Continue let fuck Riley more , and maybe get her pregnant and then he ends up marrying his own sister.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.02.2016 07:38
    Another part plzzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2016 15:48
    fix part 7 as early you can
    end up the story
    pLZzzzz.........
    some other person intruptted the series!!!!!
    thats not fair ending
    I can't wait anymore
    XD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.02.2016 17:16
    make a foursome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.03.2016 22:25
    Please continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.03.2016 22:25
    Don't end the story at number v7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 08:01
    Whens part 7 comimg?!?!?!? I am amazed at your work on this series its was like watching a movie! Cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Oh and I agree with the 95% of people saying there should be a 4sum.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2016 02:43
    Please right part 7 or if u did please update I've Ben waiting for to long man this is a good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 08:15
    please dont make him bang the mom that would ruin it. and not a 4 way, but indvially hate fucking izzy, and riley and ashley. maybe do something where izzy forces him even more than usual...like punchees him

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 08:17
    oh and the mom should catch them and NOT be ok with it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.04.2016 22:15
    This story is going soo good plzz dont stop

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2016 06:45
    U have made me a huge fan of urs . Just do a favour never stop writng n hell yeah i want a 4some n my cousin loves u .... really

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2016 05:57
    Great storytelling. The use of then instead of than, as well as the lack of commas sometimes throws me off.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2016 23:05
    This story needs at least one more chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2016 00:57
    good job could use another chapter but I enjoyed it very much keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2016 07:25
    amazing. need more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2016 08:16
    Where is number 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2016 09:12
    Please make another one

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  • thedarkknight
    18.05.2016 07:00
    write another chapter. Its amazing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2016 07:08
    Please write more chapters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2016 14:36
    Are you going to finish this story? Please do!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2016 02:46
    I WANT ANOTHER STORY PLEAAaasssse

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2016 19:31
    Please do more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2016 03:22
    What happened to part 5?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 13:34
    Another story please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2016 01:18
    I need more damn it this has been my go to story for 4 years hoping we get anaother part preeez for all the die hard insect fans make more i will patreon this shit if i could great work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2016 12:09
    Omg please wire another one in dying

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 12:42
    Hello everybody. thier might not be another story because his last activity on here was "October 2013".

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 12:43
    I also might be wrong to. he could be writing more parts before putting them on here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 17:26
    I also might be wrong to. he could be writing more parts before putting them on here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 14:50
    You should definitely have more parts to this story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2016 06:11
    Please make more stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2016 06:11
    Please make more parts to this story!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2016 16:02
    I would love for this story to be finished! But since this chapter was posted in 2012 I'm not hopeful.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2016 19:06
    author is probably dead and buried

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2016 02:05
    FINISH THE STORY PLEASE!!!! I NEED TO READ THE END!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 08:14
    Yes please finish. I read it months ago and is driving me crazy to know what will happen

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2016 22:30
    Fuck, what a pity about this enthralling tale of debauchery, deception and desire not being finished. Maybe the author went on to write intruige and/or drama novels cuz god knows the writing is amazingly done, putting aside the obvious (not to mention understandably common in unrevised work) grammar botches. A bit unrealistic, but it's got a fiction tag so that's a given. SomeStory, Kudos for what we have up to here. If this was your warm-up project... Things can only get better as they age, or however that saying goes. Keep it up!! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 00:58
    I get so annoyed with authors who writes great stories and leave us with no ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 10:33
    I get so annoyed with authors who writes great stories and leave us with no ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 14:54
    I get so annoyed with authors who writes great stories and leave us with no ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2016 08:50
    I get so annoyed with authors who writes great stories and leave us with no ending.

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  • KingKunta187
    08.08.2016 08:51
    I came across this story in 2013 and i immediately loved it, I looked it up again to see if tilts been given a good ending, sadly that's not the case, I wish you d complete it because it was very promising , likewise with the other story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2016 23:56
    An u got to wright ore

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 22:54
    A few people started to continue the story for you in case you didn't know. And part 7 and 8 are pretty good but don't bother with 9-12 they're completely horrible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2016 19:50
    Where can I find parts 7&8 that someone else continued.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2016 07:07
    I lobed this story wished it could go on and on and on haha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2016 05:27
    Are we going to get anymore chapters?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 12:37
    I stayed up an extra 2 hours after reading the first one so i could read the rest. I hope theres more. These are the best stories iv read on here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2016 17:57
    Dude great serious but seriously finish it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2016 07:17
    I've read all 6 parts 4 times already and i can't stop reading them. When should we be getting the next part?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 22:27
    This is really good I do not mind the mistakes I to can't spell but I would like it if you made another one because it's good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2016 07:20
    This story is amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2016 17:56
    Are You a Indian

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2016 03:59
    Can't wait for the next part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2016 09:56
    When's the next part coming out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2016 17:14
    I hope the author makes more this is really one of the best stories I have read in a while on this site and I want to continue reading I mean I was even inspired to write my own story along the same lines as this one but with my own plot and characters and I get great inspiration from this story good damn stuff but this shows as being posted in 2012 so don't know if we'll get any more chapters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2016 22:11
    Google 3 evil sisters everyone three other author took up somestory's work on this after he/she disappeared there's up to chapter 12 7 and 8 are by one author 9 by another and 10 through 12 by the last so after reading here go do that for the rest its not bad honestly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2016 06:19
    This was an absolutely amazing story. I came here to fap, but that flew out of my head whilst reading through. Thank you so much for this.

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  • djtunnadex
    03.12.2016 06:07
    Next part pls

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2016 22:38
    Please write another part or two to this story...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.12.2016 13:26
    Enjoyed this story especially the entire series I have
    to say Izzy is my favourite (what a bad ass) lol on
    Izzy's reasoning with max about not wanting
    anyone to use him.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2017 01:09
    I will check for another chapter in about six months when I cruise xnxx again. Thank you for writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.01.2017 04:41
    Attention to all of the people in 2017 or above. HE isn't writing anymore if you look at the date it is 2012 and the date this year is 2017

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 15:05
    Bro, please continue this series please, please finish this story.

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  • Randy61
    08.03.2017 08:34
    AT TWO IN THE MORNING I'DA TOOK A BASEBALL BAT TO IZZYS ROOM AND STARTED WITH HER RIGHT WRIST! I GUESS NO MORE STORY BY THE POST DATE, lol DAMN, WHY DO SHORT STORY WRITERS DO THAT SO OFTEN? HOPE YOU LIKE THE HALF STORY!

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  • HornySaxPlayer
    10.10.2017 19:22
    FINISH THE STORYYYYY!

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  • Purplefox2145
    01.07.2018 06:00
    Bro, please continue this series please, please finish this story

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  • peto40
    26.08.2019 18:14
    Great story this far, please continue this series

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