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A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 05

Author: DragoTime

Date: 20 August 2015

Blowjob, Fantasy, Consensual Sex, Female Domination

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When Matt had woken up on Tuesday morning cuddled up to a nude Sophie, he’d enjoyed it greatly, and it was something he'd definitely wanted to repeat as often as possible. This morning, Matt had the pleasure of waking up with not one nude girl, but 4, all of whom had wanted to get in on the group cuddle. Matt opened his eyes, and examined the current positions of everyone. He was laid on his back, with Sophie in pole position, cuddled up properly with him.

On his other side was Kelly, who had moved out from underneath him after he’d finished filling her with vast quantities of his cum. On top of them were Megan and Sally. His cock and balls were rubbing against one of them, but he couldn’t tell who. He didn’t care, it felt good either way.

Matt figured the chances of him getting out from under this pile of female flesh without waking them up were low, so he resigned himself to laying there for a while. He didn’t mind though, because the feeling of being skin-on-skin with these gorgeous girls was absolutely heavenly. As Matt laid there, he thought about everything that had happened since he’d first rubbed Lumiosa’s lamp. He’d lost his virginity (Well, he’d had sex for the first time he’d actually remembered), and gotten himself a girlfriend, who herself also had a genie. Not a bad few days.

“Lost in thought?” Sophie asked him. Matt jumped slightly, and his girlfriend just giggled. “Aw, did I scare you?”
“I thought you were asleep!” Matt half-shouted, half-whispered.
“I’ve only been awake a minute or so,” Sophie said. “What were you thinking about?”
“Just about how great my life’s been since I got Lumiosa,” Matt replied, smiling. “I just thank God, or whoever it was who sent me Lumiosa.”
“I’m glad you got Lumiosa too, so I have someone to share my magical life with,” Sophie smiled, kissing her boyfriend. “Come on, let’s get up.”
“What about your friends?” Matt asked.
“Easy,” Sophie replied, before whispering in her friends’ ears. “Girls, don’t wake up until I tell you to.”

Sophie then rolled Megan off of her, and got out of bed.
“Come on,” she said. Matt got out of bed too, and started following Sophie downstairs. They got into her living room, where her parents were laid spooning on the sofa, watching TV. Matt noticed their two lamps were sat on the table, being ignored, but he was more concerned with the fact that he and his girlfriend were naked in front of her parents.
“Mr and Mrs Swift!” Matt exclaimed. “I can explai-”
“Morning mom, morning dad,” Sophie said calmly.
“Good morning Sophie, good morning Matt,” Sophie’s mother said cheerily. “Did you both sleep well?”
“We slept great, thanks,” Sophie replied, before turning to her boyfriend. “I brainwashed my parents a long time ago. They just accept anything I do. Watch. Mom, dad, orgasm.”

Matt watched as Sophie’s parents both immediately cried out in pleasure. Sophie’s father humped his wife’s ass, while he stuck his hands down the front of her pants. Matt didn’t know whether to be aroused or embarrassed.
“Thank you Sophie…” Her father panted when it was over. “That was amazing.”
“You’re the best daughter in the world,” her mother panted.
“Thanks guys, but I think Matt’s getting a little embarrassed, so why don’t you both go upstairs and fuck until I tell you to stop?” Sophie commanded.

Her parents nodded, and went upstairs immediately. “Better?”
“A little,” Matt replied. “So you basically enslaved your parents?”
“Not enslaved, just made them more agreeable,” Sophie corrected him. “After all, normal parents tend to raise a fuss when you bring home 11 guys and let them have their way with you.”
“Did you actually do that?”
“2 years ago after the senior football team won the big game,” Sophie told him. “I had Alexis “convince” them that she and I were their reward for playing so well. That was a fun weekend.”
“Weekend!?”
“11 teenage guys have a lot of hormones to burn off. As do one teenage girl and her genie. You should have seen them the following week at school. None of them could look us in the eye.”

Sophie then picked up Alexis’ lamp, and handed Lumiosa’s to Matt.
“Come on then, let’s see how our girls have been doing,” She said, and the two of them rubbed their lamps. The two genies then appeared on the sofa, naked, and cuddled up in each-other’s arms. They both opened their eyes, feeling the call of their lamps.
“You…you called, Master?” Lumiosa said sleepily, her hands resting on Alexis’ ass.
“I thought genies didn’t need to sleep?” Matt asked.
“We don’t,” Alexis told him. “But I like to. I was introducing Lumiosa to it.”
“So what have you two been up to?” Sophie asked them.
“We went around the park for a bit, and then I took her to the mall,” Alexis replied. “Then we rented a hotel room, and I showed her a night to remember.” Alexis stuck her tongue out and wiggled it at this, causing Lumiosa to blush.
“Well that all sounds fun,” Matt said, his cock hardening at the thought, and from all the naked girls around him. “Lumiosa, you don’t have to listen to Alexis anymore.”
“Very well, Master,” Lumiosa smiled.
“Spoilsport,” Alexis said, sticking her tongue out further towards Matt.

“Oh get a grip,” Sophie said. She then went over to the front door, to pick up the mail. “Let’s see…Oh, what’s this?” One letter in particular stuck out to her. It was addressed to her, which was a rarity in itself. She opened it, and started reading.

“Dear Miss Swift,” she read. “Your recent actions have brought you to the attention of my employer, Mr Alex Brookman, of Brookman Industries. He has instructed me to invite you, and your genie, to meet with him at Brookman Industries’ headquarters, which, as you are no doubt aware, is right here in your home town.
There is no need to RSVP. Merely turn up at the office, and Mr Brookman will drop what he is doing to see you. We hope to see you soon.

- Miss April Showers”


“April Showers?” Matt said. “That’s obviously made up.”
“I’m more concerned that someone knows I’ve got a genie,” Sophie said, looking worried. “Alexis, check if Matt’s got a letter at home too.” Alexis then vanished, before popping up a few seconds later.
“It’s fine, there’s not one,” she said.
“That’s good,” Sophie said, breathing a sigh of relief. “That means they don’t know you’ve got a genie.”
“You shouldn’t go,” Matt said. “It’s obviously a trap.”
“What if it’s not?” Sophie asked. “What if this guy genuinely wants to meet me? Maybe he just wants to ask for some favours?”
“How likely is that?”
“I dunno…”

Alex Brookman was the CEO of Brookman Industries, which he’d inherited from his father, who died when he was very young. The company made Pharmaceuticals, which could be found in most homes across the world. Mr Brookman, however, was a very secretive man, and very little was known about his personal life, at least, what Google could find for Matt and Sophie.

“Look at him,” Sophie said, holding up a picture of him on her tablet. “How old would you say he is?”
“I dunno, 24? 25?” Matt replied.
“He’s 63,” Sophie said. “This guy must have a genie of his own.”
“Well I guess that rules out him wanting to ask you for wishes.”
“Mistress,” said Alexis, a word she only ever used when she was being serious or playful. This was the former. “While I agree that this is likely a trap, it may be advantageous for us to attend. To know our enemy would be much better than to stay in the dark. He knows your address, so he’s not going to just let you go. And don’t forget that, even if he does have a genie, you and I will be immune to their powers.”

“You’re right Alexis,” Sophie nodded. “We’re going.”
“Sophie, if you’re going, then I’m going with you,” Matt insisted, but Sophie shook her head.
“It’s for the best if he doesn’t know you’ve got a genie,” Sophie said. “If this guy is bad, then it’ll be handy to have a trick up our sleeves.”
“What if I could watch you without him knowing?” Matt asked.
“Master, do I sense a wish coming?” Lumiosa asked him, sitting up on the sofa.
“Well that depends on if it’s even possible,” Matt replied. “Would it be possible to put my mind in Sophie’s body? So I’d experience everything she did?”
“It should be possible,” Lumiosa said, thinking. “If Miss Sophie consents to it, and if Miss Alexis helps me to grant it.”
“So what, he’ll be in me?” Sophie asked.
“You’d both be in control of your body,” Alexis explained. “You’d both see, hear and feel everything you do, and both of you could move and talk.”
“That sounds alright I guess,” Sophie agreed.
“Alright then, this might tingle a bit,” Alexis said.
“Hold tight, Master,” Lumiosa giggled.

The two genies held hands, and raised their other hands towards their Masters.
“Your wish is our command,” they said in unison, before snapping their fingers. Instantly, Matt fell unconscious, while Sophie’s body tensed up.
“Master, are you alright!?” Lumiosa shouted, worried, running over to the unconscious Matt.
“Yeah, I’m fine,” replied Sophie. “Wait a second, that’s not my voice!” Sophie looked down at herself, and her eyes widened. “It worked, I’m a girl!”
“Master…is that you?” Lumiosa asked. Sophie’s expression then changed, however.
“Wow, this is weird. I’ve got Matt inside me. And not in the fun way,” she said, before grabbing her tits. “Heh heh, I’ve got boobies.” She then let go of her tits. “Matt, if you wanna feel me up, I’d appreciate if you’d do it with your own hands.”
“I think we can assume it worked then,” Alexis said.
“Definitely,” Sophie said, or at least, her body did. “Lumiosa, stay here and guard my body.”

“Yes Master,” Lumiosa bowed. Sophie’s expression then changed again, and she turned to Alexis. “Alexis, drive me, or us, or whatever, to the office building, and then get in your lamp. I don’t want this guy seeing you before we want him to.”
“As you wish,” Alexis said.

Alexis and Sophie/Matt got into the car, a Ferrari, which Matt assumed Sophie must have wished up, and Alexis started driving.
“When we get there Matt,” Sophie said. “Don’t say or do anything. Just sit and watch. He can’t know you’re here.”
“Can I at least feel you up?” Matt asked.
“Matt, this is serious,” Sophie said sternly. “We don’t know what this guy wants. We can’t afford to be making jokes.”
“Oh fine…”

They arrived at the large tower building where Brookman Industries was based. Alexis changed back into a cloud of light-blue smoke, which was sucked into the lamp in Sophie’s handbag.
“Remember, don’t say anything,” Sophie said, before she got out of the car, and walked into the building. She walked up to reception, where there was a girl sat at the desk. She was, Sophie observed, young, gorgeous, and well-endowed.
“Hello, I’m here to see Mr Brookman,” she said to the woman.
“I’m sorry, but Mr Brookman is not taking any visitors at the moment,” the woman said.
“It’s fine, Julia, she’s expected,” said another woman. Sophie turned to her right, and saw a woman standing there. She looked to be her late twenties, but she was drop-dead gorgeous, even more so than the other woman. She was dressed in formal business attire, though with a very short skirt. She was holding a clipboard. “You must be Miss Swift.” Sophie nodded.

“Very good, come along with me dear,” the woman said, and turned to walk towards the elevator, before realising Sophie had stayed put. “Oh where are my manners? My name is April Showers. I am Mr Brookman’s secretary, among other things. I assure you dear, you’re quite safe with me. Now come along, Mr Brookman does not like to be kept waiting.” Sophie steeled herself for whatever was to come, and followed Miss Showers into the elevator, which began to go up.
“Mr Brookman is very excited to meet you,” Miss Showers said. Sophie just stayed quiet. “Not one for small talk, eh? Well, I’m sure Mr Brookman will be able to get some talking out of you.”

The doors opened directly into a large office, with large windows, giving a big view of the city. There was a formal desk at the back of the room, but Sophie was more concerned about what was in front of it. There were two sofas facing each-other, with a glass table in between them. Sat on the sofa facing Sophie was a man, whom she recognised as Alex Brookman. He was wearing a suit, aside from the fact that his pants were around his ankles. Sophie couldn’t see his penis though, because it was in the mouth of the nude girl who was knelt in front of him, sucking on it.

“Welcome, Miss Swift,” said Mr Brookman. “Please, take a seat.” Sophie sat down on the empty sofa. On the table was a big bottle of Coca Cola, two glasses, and a plate of chocolate biscuits.
“Do let me know if you’d like something else,” Mr Brockman said. “Though I was expecting two people. Well, one human.” Sophie ignored him, and looked at the girl who was giving him head.

“Is that Amy Barrows?” Sophie recognised her from school.
“Why yes it is,” Mr Brockman replied. “She works here evenings and weekends. Of course, she’s part of how I discovered your little secret.”
“I’m sure I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Sophie said, and Mr Brockman just smiled.
“Yesterday, Miss Showers overheard Amy here talking to one of the other girls about her boyfriend, one Mark Matthews,” He explained, and this peaked Sophie’s interest. “Seems he was rather reluctant to get his penis out for her, and when she finally saw it, she realised why. His penis was only an inch long, and it couldn’t get hard. Apparently some girl, by the name of Sophie Swift, had wished for it to happen, and then it had. Does that sound familiar?”
“Maybe, maybe not,” Sophie replied.

“I don’t know why you’re being so secretive, Miss Swift. Sophie. Can I call you Sophie?”
“I’d prefer Miss Swift.”
“Well then Miss Swift, I know you have a genie, it’s obvious. So why don’t you just summon her so we can all start being honest with each-other?” Sophie reached into her handbag, and pulled out Alexis' lamp.
“Damn…” Mr Brookman said under his breath.
“What?” Sophie asked him.
“Just rub your lamp and then you’ll get your answers,” Mr Brookman replied.

Sophie rubbed the lamp, and light-blue smoke poured out, forming into Alexis, who sat down next to her Mistress.
“Well, she’s a pretty one,” Mr Brookman smiled, before groaning, as he came into Amy’s mouth. She then pulled off of him, stood up, and bowed politely. “Thank you Amy. You’re dismissed.”
“Thank you for this honour, Mr Brookman,” Amy said, before she left.
“Are all your staff mindless slaves?” Sophie asked him.
“Not mindless, just obedient,” Mr Brookman corrected her, before turning to face Alexis. “So what can I call you, dear?”
“Alexis,” the genie replied.

“Alexis,” Mr Brookman smiled. “A fine name. Do you recognise her, dear?”
“Unfortunately, she’s not one I’ve ever come across, Master,” Miss Showers replied.
“Master?” Alexis asked. “You mean you’re his-”
“Miss Showers, I wish for you to dress me,” Mr Brookman interrupted.
“Your wish is my command, Master.” Miss Showers snapped her fingers, and her Master was instantly dressed.
“Definitely a genie, then,” Alexis said. “But I’m assuming her real name isn’t April Showers, which by the way is a horrible joke.”
“I must say, Miss Swift, that your genie is very outspoken,” Mr Brookman smiled. “Does she not fear punishment?”
“I like to give my staff some free will,” Sophie said sternly.

“Quite. Well, if you must know, Alexis, the name April Showers was chosen by my grandfather, who found her lamp as a teenager,” Mr Brookman explain. “He passed her down to my father, who passed him down to me when I was 3, upon his death. I’m adopted, you see. My father never settled down and found a wife, much like I haven’t. Too much sex to be had, as I’m sure you understand. But since then, Apriya, as is her true name, has been everything to me; A mother, a wife, and, most importantly, a genie.”

“Well that sounds great,” Sophie said, somewhat sarcastically. “So what exactly do you want with me?”
“I’m getting to that. Patience,” Mr Brookman said. “For now, I’m curious about how and when you acquired Alexis here. Regale us with your tale.”
“Maybe I don’t want to tell you. Maybe I still don’t trust you.”
“As right you shouldn’t. After all, you barely know me.”
“For now, I’m interested in why you were disappointed when I pulled out Alexis’ lamp.”

Mr Brookman smiled, and ate a biscuit.
“Please, help yourself,” he said, and Alexis took a handful of them.
“Stop avoiding the question.”
“Oh, I like a girl with spunk in her. Of course, I prefer it when it’s my spunk. Fine, I’ll tell you. I’m a collector of lamps. Magic lamps, of course. Aside from Miss Showers’, I have 3 of them locked away at home. I’ve not rubbed them, of course, since humans cannot have more than 1 genie each, but I enjoy having them. I used to have 4, but last week, one of them was stolen from me.
“Stolen?”
“Yes. I don’t know how, either, since I specifically wished that only I, or a member of my family, would be able to access it. I was hoping that your lamp was the one that was stolen from me.”
“So you could steal it back?”
“Not at all. I merely wished to become acquainted with you. I may look young, but I often feel like the old man I am. I want some youthful companionship that I’ve not just wished for.”

“So you want to fuck me?”
“Yes, but I want to fuck all attractive girls. I have some friends I’d like you to meet, Miss Swift. A little society we have. All of them are Masters, and I’m sure they’d all be interested in meeting you.”
“How many of them are there?”
“Including me, five current members, though we’ve had several more over the years. We have a store of lamps that we’ve collected over the years. We’ve got 214 in total, plus my 3, which the others don’t know about.”

“214!?” Alexis exclaimed through her biscuits. “You’ve got 214 genies!?”
“All of them dormant in their lamps of course. We wouldn’t want some random kids getting hold of them and causing havoc with the world, now would we?”
“So what, you guys just collect lamps?” Sophie asked.
“Through a mixture of wealth and magic, we hunt down magic lamps to add to our collection. For example, the one that was stolen was recovered from the Museum of Egyptian Antiquities in Cairo, where it had sat for 10 years after being found by chance buried in a building site in Alexandria. As soon as I found out, I procured it, and hid it in my home. For the greater good of the world, of course.”
“Of course.” Sophie wasn’t convinced.

“Tell you what, Miss Swift, how about I give you my address and personal phone number?” Mr Brookman looked up at Miss Showers, who materialised a business card, and handed it to Sophie. “We’re meeting at my place on Friday night. I’d love for you to come, and of course Alexis is invited.”
“I’ll think about it,” Sophie said.
“I’m sure you will, and I’m sure you’ll make the right decision,” Mr Brookman smiled.
“We’ll see. Alexis, take us home please.”
“As you wish, Mistress.”

Alexis snapped her fingers, and the two of them were instantly back in Sophie’s living room. Matt’s body was still unconscious on the floor, with Lumiosa sat on the sofa, watching over him.
“Welcome home Master!” She said happily. “Would you like to return to your own body?”
“Yes, do it,” said Matt in Sophie’s voice. Lumiosa and Alexis snapped their fingers, and Matt instantly sat up. He looked down at his groin, and sighed in relief.
“Oh good, I’ve got a penis,” he said. “That was the weirdest bit. Not being able to feel my penis.”
“Try being a girl all the time, we never feel our penises,” Sophie said.

“If I may ask, what did you discover, Master, Miss Sophie?” Lumiosa asked.
“Lumiosa, I wish for you to extract the memories of the events from my mind,” Matt commanded.
“Your wish is my command, Master.” Lumiosa snapped her fingers, and instantly knew everything that had gone on. “That is so sad…To think of those poor genies, trapped in their lamps, never again to see the light of day, or know the joy of serving a Master.”
“I’m more concerned with what they want with all those lamps,” Sophie said. “I don’t believe it’s really for the greater good.”
“So what do you suggest we do?” Matt asked.
“I say we go to this party, and we find out the truth.”

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Author's notes: So apologies for the relative lack of sex in this chapter, but I wanted to get some plot development in, and I didn't want to just ram sex in for the sake of it. Next time there'll hopefully be plenty more sex, as well as plot.

A note about this chapter. Way back in Chapter 1, the library that Lumiosa's last Master worked at was meant to be the Library of Alexandria, which was burned down in the Roman invasion of 30BC. I'm not sure how many people got it, so I put some dialogue in this chapter to make it a little more obvious.

Keep your suggestions coming in in the comments, by the way. I love reading them, and good ones might get implemented! Saying that though, lots of "plz rite da nxt chptr" comments don't make me write any faster. I'm currently aiming for at least one chapter every 2 days, though it's 1 chapter a day at the moment. I know people are asking for longer chapters, but these take several hours to sit down and write, and by having the chapters these length, I can release more regularly, allowing you all to enjoy Matt and Sophie's adventures more quickly!


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  • dickrichards
    19.05.2015 22:11
    Great story, and the pace you're pumping them out is incredible :p keep up the good work, you've got me hooked!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2015 22:53
    Love the story

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  • Legorp
    20.05.2015 01:24
    I love this story sex and plot! I really enjoy the way your not sacrificing story just to rush sex. Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 01:29
    love the story so far, and I knew it was alexandria from chapter 1

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 01:49
    I completely agree and I think that you were right about not cramming rediculus amounts of sex into the story with every chapter. It takes a lot of work to write these stories and right now, you are doing a fabulous job with your chapters. Keep up the good work and don't rush yourself. I'll wait a week if I have to for the next chapter because I love this story. Thank you for writing. P.S. You might want to actualy put all of the chapters into an actual book and send it to a publisher. I'm serious.

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  • HauntedGerman
    20.05.2015 01:52
    Awesome job here. I'd love if some of history's important would turn out to have a genie or were one(Cleopatra and the following). Also I'm sad to not have as much sex in this chapter I see why you did it. Hope you keep on doing what you do and this story never ends. Would love to be able to discuss the story with you and maybe I have some Ideas you'd like?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:04
    Good read. Good plot. Good sex. Continue on what you do, you're good at it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:22
    i would love to see Matt has a teenage guy use some wishes for money

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:22
    Great work, anyone who voted negatively for your stories must have a acedently clicked the wrong button. Maybe incorporate an other young character or Matt's friends again for an orgy .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:24
    Good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:31
    you should have sophie get fucked while matt is in her body

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:32
    would like to see matt get involved with sister/mother

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:37
    I think it would be cool to see more body modification wishes. You could have Matt and Sophie switch genders or something like that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:43
    Best series in a while that I have read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 02:58
    would love to see matt and sophie change the body the body of their genies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 03:34
    I think you should become a real author, these stories are good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 03:38
    Perfrct timing keep up the good writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 04:30
    this is honestly great keep up the amazing work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 04:56
    Get a boy genie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 06:08
    I could read a whole novel of this work its great....

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  • spiritofcrow
    20.05.2015 06:51
    Wooo things getting good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 07:36
    Really enjoying the story and as the plot thickens I anticipate it will get oh so much more intriguing. As for the sex it has to have a purpose or it is simply gratuitous. If it is at point where there is build up to the sex it can be an enjoyable read but when it's just a character with a 10" dong stretching a pussy for the hundredth time it becomes boring, unrealistic and wholly a waste of goor reading time. Less sex that is better written and better timed is far superior. Best wishes as you continue this and future stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 11:49
    This is an actual story I'm very much enjoying reading. Its been a long time since something has caught my interest like this. Awesome work and great detail. I kind of had an assumption that the library at the beginning was in fact the library of Alexandra, glad to see I was right

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 14:30
    Sophie's parents are still fucking upstairs! I think Matt should wish for his own family to accept and obey him (just to avoid arousing suspicion). Maybe he plays around with them a bit too, when he's not with Sophie?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 14:51
    Great story. Can't wait until Ch. 6

    Idea: Sophie and Matt having sex in each others bodies.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 15:47
    Hi Drago Time. Thanks for the good story, so far a fun read! Like those wish'ing storys a lot:D And you did a great plot start here! I am looking forward to the next parts!
    Some thoughts that went around my mind: It is nice to see Matt develop some idea how to use wishes in the right way (btw. extract memories... and snip, Matt does not remember the events any more;) So far he was a real child. Poor lad didnt do enough role play in his early days. His wishes are poorly worded and depended on the good intentions of his Djin so far. How the xxx could he put himself in this terrible danger of placing his 'mind' in Sophies body?? There are a thousend ways to exploit this... Anyway, as I saied, I read some more of those kind of stories and his way of wording his wishes made me scare, cramp my hands on the keyboard but got me sooo hooked!
    I wouldnt want to put ideas in your head. Yours are amazingly creative as the plot shows (and the sex parts anyway;)
    ...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 15:50
    I would like to post you a URL for a story I found some time ago. One of the very, very few where the protagonist really explores the potential of this kind of ... reality modifications. Just as an inspiration. '#1' Please accept my apologies if You dont like or aprove the sexual part of the story content!
    I hope you enjoy reading, writing and exploring your own interesting way of plot development with sexy twists and turns that we are so

    looking forward too reading:) Keep up the fun!
    Thanks again and all the best!
    Urtica

    #1: URL:
    fictionmania.tv/stories/readhtmlstory.html?storyID=33026664331200493202
    (first 1-9 chaperts)
    or google
    Master PC: Aram Von Rhein's Story
    (there should be 40 chapter at all but he starts early of with the exploration of possibilities)
    ...i hope I am right with the story;)

    p.S.: Sorry for my english skills. Or better, there lack of...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 16:44
    Really enjoy the series, when finished I hope you put it in novel form.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 16:47
    Reckon this is turning out to be a amazing storyline, love to see more, of course,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 16:49
    Could you please add some beastiality in the next chapter as I think it would be a fit into the plot well.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 19:11
    Its great so far. But you need to add some domination and submission, but make it wished for. That'd be great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 19:19
    I think that you should have let Matt keep the monster cock he wished up in ch 1.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 20:57
    Needs to bang his sister. And mom

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  • DragoTime
    20.05.2015 22:01
    AUTHOR'S UPDATE: Chapter 6 will be coming tomorrow, not tonight. It's half finished, but it's getting late and I want to go to bed. I will tell you though that it has more sex than Chapter 5, as well as plot development (Or will, when I get to writing that bit...). I'll also say that one of the suggestions in this chapter's comment chain has been implemented, but which one?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 23:20
    You should make Matt have forced sex with Lumiosa, that was pretty fucken sexy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 23:20
    You should make Matt have forced sex with Lumiosa again, that was pretty fucken sexy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 23:54
    Thank you for this great story! i'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 00:31
    Wow this is realy good I like the idea of it not just being about sex don't get me wrong keep the sex coming of course

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 01:22
    Thank you for this great story. Could you please add more sexual wishes like lumiosa or Alexis having a penis.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 04:42
    I love these stories! Just later on please don't feel the need to kill any genies or Sophie/Matt just to make the story more dramatic. Also back story on how the genies were created would be pretty cool. You should have like a pattern of sex oriented and story oriented chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 04:42
    The Story just mad a very interesting change of course

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 04:56
    I love these stories! Just later on please don't feel the need to kill any genies or Sophie/Matt just to make the story more dramatic. Also back story on how the genies were created would be pretty cool. You should have like a pattern of sex oriented and story oriented chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 05:35
    Where's next chapter please???!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 05:52
    I've gotta say, never before have I been so hooked on a story here and actually come back to check every day if there's a new chapter. Kudos to you for your work. I love it! And I love how this chapter has deepened the plot. Looking forward to more fucking too :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 06:52
    This is fantastic.. I agree with the others, though. Don't change the plot too much from where it's gone, and keep Matt and Sophie together. You should also consider the Genies being behind all of this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 07:09
    love love love these stories! ive been checking the site a few times a day to see if you have added a new chapter yet lol! you need to speed it up :) as long as its just as good as the others! and I love the latest chapter...the plot is thickening! cant wait to see what happens

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 07:30
    I love this series! My one recommendation is to have Matt wish for more fun stuff like a bigger house a jetski a million dollars a shark etc. I feel like if he could have anything he could ever want he should go out and wish for some really cool stuff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 08:53
    You should make him want to get girls pregnant, and just wish for the kids to be cared for, he could have hundreds of kids he wouldn't even have to take care of.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 10:16
    Seriously don't change it from how you've been doing. You're good how you are. Reading these comments..beastiality ..girls with penises and making hundreds of children..just not right in my opinion for this theme. Keep going. Loving the series so far how it is. Plot is decoding Nicely

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 12:19
    Really enjoying the stories so far, keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 17:51
    best series since an incest birthday

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 19:40
    Dude the way the story going is perfect... u jus make sure a chapter a day quota is met!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2015 22:01
    This is great! I'm very much looking foward to more chapters.
    I bet this Brockman guy, has some genies doing all kinds of things in his mansion...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2015 00:09
    I realised you were talking about the Great Library of Alexandria.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2015 09:24
    you forgot about the parents. They are still fucking!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2015 09:35
    you forgot about the parents. They are still fucking!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2015 09:11
    So, if I were to procure some very obedient slaves. Make it so that they are relying on me more so than Lumiosa is on Matt. Then I give them each a lamp with a genie. Then I indirectly control more than one genie so I not? Make the slaves first wish that I can order the genies and problem should be solved, right? Freedom for genies and I can have all the genies I want.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2015 04:24
    I don't normally comment. But you have a way with words. I am absolutely looking forward to your future works.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 22:04
    Please have them fuck more often

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.09.2015 18:38
    Youre seriously making them look like common whores
    11 fucking people one girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2015 23:39
    dude, you are my favorite writer but your stories sometimes just get too deep.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.01.2016 01:56
    I have a question. So let's say I wish to be completely invulnerable. Another master wishes that whatever he hits instantly dies. If he tries to punch me what will happen

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2016 19:23
    Ignore the haters, write how you want. I'm enjoying :) those that don't can find something more to their tastes. Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2016 05:12
    The allusion to the Great Library was pretty obvious. I really hope the Romans responsible for the fire are suffering an eternal punishment.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2016 04:17
    I AM LOOKING FOR CHAPTER 1 THRU 4

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