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A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 10

Author: DragoTime

Date: 6 June 2015

Blowjob, Fantasy, Body modification, BDSM

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Philip Banks woke up slowly, to a headache, and a sound of his children laughing playfully. He opened his eyes, and saw his two young children, Jane and Michael, who were watching lights flying around the room. He looked around more, and saw a beautiful, naked girl, who seems to be directing the colourful lights with her hands.
“What…what’s going on?” Philip asked.
“Daddy, daddy, this girl is magic!” Jane said to her father excitedly.
“What are you talking about Jane?” He asked her. “And who are you, girl!? What are you doing in my house!?”
“Why, you summoned me, Master,” the girl replied. She picked up her lamp, and smiled. “Don’t you remember?”

Philip remembered the lamp. He’d found it on the way back home from working at the factory, and had taken it home, figuring he could probably sell it for some extra cash. When he’d gotten home to examine it, he’d noticed it was rather dirty, so he’d decided to give it a clean. When he’d done that, however, he’d felt it grow warm in his hands, at which point light-blue smoke had begun to pour out of it. Philip had dropped the lamp out of fear at that point, and backed away from it. But he’d then tripped up over something on the floor, and banged his head on a table, knocking him unconscious.

“Where did you come from?” Philip asked. The girl merely indicated to the lamp. “You came from the lamp?”
“Why yes Master,” she replied. “Did you not see the smoke? That was me.”
“You caused the smoke?” The girl shook her head.
“No Master, I was the smoke. It’s so much easier to fit through the spout of the lamp in that form.”
“Why do you keep calling me that?”
“Master, Master? Why, because you are my Master, Master.”
“Master?”

The girl just grinned at this point. She got on all fours, and started crawling over to him.
“Tell me Master, what do you desire?” She asked seductively.
“D…Desire?” Philip asked, a little taken back by this girl’s approach.
“Anything you desire will be yours.” She was now right up in his face, inches from a kiss, which she resisted.
“What are you?”
“Daddy, Alexis is magic!” Michael said to his father. “Did you see the wonderful magic she did?”
“Alexis?” Philip asked, confused.
“That’s her name,” Jane explained. “She told us while you were sleeping.”

“Kids, I think your father needs another demonstration,” Alexis said, standing up. She snapped her fingers, and Jane and Michael began to float into the air.
“Daddy, we’re flying!” Jane cried out with glee.
“You, Alexis, put them down at once!” Philip shouted.
“Very well, Master, as you wish,” Alexis said. She snapped her fingers, and the two children floated back down to the ground. Philip got up, and pulled them away from Alexis.
“Stay away from them!” He shouted at her. “Stay away from us!”
“Aww, you’re scared, aren’t you Master?” Alex said playfully.
“Stay away from us, demon!”
“Master, I am not a demon.”
“We go to church every Sunday! I know what you are! You wish to seduce me with empty promises, and take our souls for Satan!”

Alexis sighed. Another one like this. And he seemed so normal.
“Master, I am not a demon,” she said. “I am a genie. I am here to grant your every wish.”
“Then I wish for you to be gone!” Philip shouted.
“Very well Master, your wish is my command. If you wish to summon me again, you need only to rub my lamp.” Alexis returned to a cloud of smoke, which was sucked into the lamp on the floor.

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The two teens and their genies went back to Matt’s house, to work out their plan of action.
“What are we going to do!?” Matt shouted, sitting on the sofa. “We have to save them!”
“Yes, I’m aware of that,” Sophie said. “But we need to be cautious. Lumiosa and Alexis can’t undo what Alex has done. He’d have to un-wish it himself.”
“Well we can’t do that!” Matt shouted. “Or do you want us to give up our genies!?”
“Of course I don’t, but it’s the only solution I can think of.”
“Oh, and then what? Without Lumiosa and Alexis to protect us, we’ll be sitting ducks for Alex. Who knows what he’d do to us!”
“Well what do you suggest we do then?”
“I don’t know…”

The two genies sat in silence, watching the two humans as they argued. Alexis and Lumiosa’s minds were racing, trying to think up a solution to their situation. Alexis was cursing herself for allowing this to happen. She’d advised Sophie to put her parents, but not bothered with her friends. And she should have gotten Matt to do something with his family and friends too.

She looked over at Lumiosa, who she could tell was greatly pained by not being able to help her Master. Alexis liked to think she wasn’t like her, but at the same time, she too was hurt that Sophie and Matt were in this situation. She wished she knew what to do. But right now, she too couldn’t think of any option besides surrendering themselves to Alex, which didn’t bode well for anyone.

“Sophie, Matt, I’m not sure how to say this, but I think…” Alexis began. “I think it might be a better idea for you to not surrender us.”
“How the fuck do you expect that to help!?” Matt shouted.
“Because it’s like you said,” Alexis explained. “If you surrender us, you’ll be sitting ducks to Alex’s power. He’ll be unlikely to free your friends and family, and he’ll probably torture both of you.”
“So what, we just let them die!?” Sophie shouted.
“Master…Miss Sophie…” Lumiosa said timidly. “I’m sorry, but…I agree with Alexis…”
“Lumiosa, not you too…” Matt said.
“I’m sorry Master, but I do not wish to see you harmed!” Lumiosa cried out. “Alex Brookman would hurt you.”
“So it’s hopeless then?” Matt said. “There’s nothing we can do?”
“The rules of genies are very clear,” Alexis said. “You can’t interfere with someone else’s wishes. There’s no hope.”
“Well…maybe we could get the society to help us?” Matt suggested.
“How do we know they’re not in on it?” Sophie said.
“It wouldn’t help,” Alexis said. “We could have a thousand genies on our side, and we still wouldn’t be able to undo Alex’s wishes. Those are the rules.”

Sophie and Matt hugged, both of them trying to hold back their tears at what was happening. Alexis laid back on the floor and shut her eyes, in order to desperately try to think of a solution, but none came to her. She opened her eyes, and they were drawn to a scrap of paper, that was lying under the sofa. It was just out of her reach, so she willed it to come towards her. She looked at it, and her eyes widened.

“Uh, Matt…Where did you get this?” She asked. Matt looked at her.
“Oh, that’s just the note that came with Lumiosa’s lamp,” Matt said. “I can’t read it.”
“I can, it’s ancient Greek,” Alexis said. “And it’s definitely worth a read.”
“What does it say?” Sophie asked.
“Matthew Evans and Sophie Swift are exempt from the unbreakable rules of the genies,” Alexis replied.
“Exempt?” Matt said. “What does that mean?”

“It would appear to mean that the two of you can break the rules of the genies,” Alexis said.
“But that is impossible,” Lumiosa said. “The rules of the genies are unbreakable. No-one is exempt from them.”
“Well it could just be a prank on behalf of whoever sent you Lumiosa, Matt,” Alexis said. “You’re sure you don’t know who sent her?”
“Positive,” Matt replied.
“Well whoever it is, they clearly wanted you to give you a message,” Sophie said.
“Or play a prank,” Alexis said. “I’m sorry, but there is absolutely no way for you two to be exempt from the rules of the genies. The rules are absolute. Every genie in the world knows that.”
“Well maybe whoever sent Lumiosa to Matt was exempt for some reason?” Sophie suggested. “Maybe it was…the maker.”

“There’s no such person,” Alexis said.
“And how do you know?” Sophie asked.
“Because why would someone create the universe, put a load of genies on a random planet, and proceed to do precisely nothing else for the rest of eternity?” Alexis replied.
“I don’t know, maybe we’re his playthings?” Matt suggested. “Gods need entertainment.”
“Matt, if there’s one thing I’ve learned in my millennia of existence, it’s that there’s no such thing as God. Just people using their genies to pretend to be gods, and threaten people into worshipping them. I used to be good friends with the guy who parted the Red Sea. Nothing particularly god-like about him, although he certainly knew how to put a smile on a girl’s face.”

Well maybe we could try it at least,” Matt said. “I mean, what would actually happen if we broke the rules?”
“Nothing,” Alexis replied. “The spell simply won’t work.”
“So there’s no problem with trying?” Matt asked.
“Well, aside from the fact it won’t work, no, there’s no problem,” Alexis said. It was clear she was against it.
“Alexis, don’t you realise if this is true, we can save our friends?” Sophie said. “Don’t you want that?”
“Of course I do, but I really don’t want you to get your hopes up,” Alexis replied.
“Master, I will try to do this, if that is what you wish,” Lumiosa said.
“Then let’s do it,” Matt said, and Sophie nodded.

“Alright, so what do you want to try first?” Matt asked Sophie.
“How about this…” Sophie said. “Alexis, I wish for the TV to change to a live feed of Sarah.” Alexis snapped her fingers, it was done. On the screen, they saw Sarah, laid in bed in all her nude glory, having her skin fondled by her equally-nude genie, Iago.
“Good boy Iago, as skilled as ever,” Sarah smiled.
“I am happy to have pleased you, Mistress,” said Iago, not stopping his sensual stroking. “Would you like me to do it again?”
“No no, just keep on doing this for now,” Sarah smiled. “I’m nice and relaxed. But I wish for you to pull the duvet over me.”
“Yes Mistress.” Iago snapped his fingers, and the duvet floated onto her, while he continued fondling her young, yet old body.

“Oh my God, it worked!” Matt exclaimed.
“Oh course it worked, there’s no law against spying on people,” Alexis said, still not believing the note.
“Alright then, Little Miss Skeptical, I wish for Iago to kiss Sarah,” Sophie said.
“Your wish would be my command, if it was going to work, but let’s try anyway,” Alexis said. She snapped her fingers, expecting nothing to happen.

The 4 of them all looked at the screen, eager to see what would happen. Imagine their surprise then, when they saw Iago lean in to Sarah, and give her a big kiss on the lips.
“What on Earth are you doing!?” Sarah exclaimed. “I didn’t order you to do that!”
“I’m…I’m sorry, Mistress,” Iago said, bowing his head. “I don’t know what came over me.”
“Remember your place, slave,” Sarah said sternly. “If I didn’t enjoy your touch so much, I’d punish you for that.”

Back in Matt’s living room, everyone was amazed.
“That is…impossible…” Lumiosa said.
“That cannot have happened!” Alexis shouted. “How did this happen!?”
“Well clearly the note was telling the truth,” said Sophie, rather smugly. “Matt, try something.”
“Uh, okay,” Matt nodded. “Lumiosa, I wish…I wish for Sarah to give Iago a blowjob.”
“Your wish is my command, Master,” Lumiosa smiled, and snapped her fingers, causing Sarah to immediately grab Iago’s cock, and shove her mouth over it.
“Oh Mistress…” Iago moaned.
“Yay!” Lumiosa said gleefully. “Does this please you, Master?”
“Oh you bet it does,” Matt replied. “This means we can save our friends!”
“I suppose it does, but I’m still suspicious,” Alexis said.

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In his mansion, Alex Brookman was sat on a comfy armchair in the dungeon, which, like the rest of his home, was lavishly decorated. He was naked, and being ridden reverse cowgirl by Miss Showers. He squeezed her ass, as he looked on at his victims, who were nude, and chained up on the walls, constantly orgasming. They’d all lost the energy to moan, resorting to simply breathing heavily.
“You know, I’m starting to think those two aren’t coming,” Alex said as his genie rode him. “Keep these people alive for a little bit longer. I do so want Matt and Sophie to turn up.”
“Yes Master,” said Miss Showers. “I’m sure they will come. They seemed like the sort of people who for some reason care about normals.”

“Yes, they are rather strange in that regard. Near-infinite power, yet they allow themselves to be concerned for those not lucky enough to possess the gift of a genie. I shall enjoy making them suffer.” Alex looked over at his victims, particularly at Becky. “I think I might keep her, though. Would you like that, dear? To serve me and my descendants for all eternity? You and Miss Showers could become good friends.” Becky just stared at him, her eyes a mixture of hatred and pleasure. “Well, I don’t suppose you have a choice in the matter, now do you?”

Alex let out an evil laugh, which Miss Showers joined in on. As they laughed, the lights in the dungeon began to flicker, and they heard the sound of thunder. There was a particularly bright flash, and when it cleared, Matt and Sophie were stood there, looking angry, with Lumiosa and Alexis stood behind them.
“Why hello there,” Alex said to them. “Miss Showers, seems we’re going to have to cut this short. I wish to cum now.”
“Your wish is my command, Master,” Miss Showers said, and Alex cried out in pleasure, grabbing his genie’s ass.
“Alexis, I wish for Alex’s orgasm to end now,” Sophie commanded. Alexis merely nodded, and snapped her fingers. Alex felt his orgasm end, and he looked at them in surprise.
“What…How!?” He shouted. He pushed Apriya off of him, and glared down at her. “Did you do this!? Did you grant that stupid girl’s wish!?”
“I did not, Master…” Apriya replied, bowing her head. “I would never go against you…”

“What’s the matter, Alex?” Matt asked. “Confused? Afraid?”
“Alexis, restrain him,” Sophie ordered.
“With pleasure,” Alexis grinned. She snapped her fingers, and chained up Alex on the wall.
“Lumiosa, free the others,” Matt ordered. Lumiosa snapped her fingers, ending everyone’s orgasms, and unchaining everyone but Alex.

“This is impossible…” Apriya said.
“We’ll get to you later,” Sophie said to her. “I wish for her to return to her lamp.” Alexis stuck her hand out, and Apriya was instantly sucked back into her lamp.
“So then, what to do with you?” Sophie said threateningly. “Kill you now, or torture you for a bit?”
“You don’t have it in you,” Alex said.
“Oh don’t we?” Matt said.

“Matt…what’s going on?” His mother asked him, as she got up.
“It’s fine mom, I’m just getting revenge on this guy,” Matt replied.
“Matt, you can’t kill him!” Sam protested.
“And why not?”
“Because it’s not right!” Sam replied. “You’re not that sort of person! You wouldn’t kill anyone!”

“My Master will do what he wants!” Lumiosa shouted at him.
“Lumiosa…don’t…” Matt said. “Sophie, what do you think?”
“I think…maybe he’s right,” Sophie replied. “Who are we to take his life?”
“Matt…Sophie…” Megan said. “I don’t know what’s going on, but I know you two aren’t murderers.”
“If anyone’s interested, I agree with them!” Alex said.
“No-one asked you!” Sophie shouted. The two of them turned to face Alexis. “So? What do you think?”
“I want that man to suffer,” Alexis replied. “But I’ve also lived long enough to know that two wrongs don’t make a right. That the way to combat evil is not to become evil in return.”

A decision was made.
“Lumiosa, I’d like to make a wish,” Matt said to his genie, who nodded. “I wish for Alex to be stripped of his genie. He will become a normal human again.”
“I wish for all his bodily modifications to be undone,” Sophie said. “All the changes Apriya did to him, undo them. Every single one.”
“As you wish,” the two genies said in unison. They thrust their hands towards Alex, and fired a beam of energy at him. Alex screamed in pain, as he felt his body change. His penis shrank, and pubic hair grew around it. His hair grew grey. His skin lost its tan, and began to grow wrinkles. Within seconds, his body had become what it should have been; the 63-year-old form that Apriya’s magic had been suppressing.
“For the rest of your life, you can live with the knowledge of everything you’ve done,” Sophie said. “But your reign of terror is over. Let him go, Alexis.”

Alexis undid the chains, and then went to pick up Apriya’s lamp.
“What shall we do with her?” She asked. “She may have only been following orders, but I don’t believe she’s entirely innocent. She wanted what she did.”
“We’ll decide on that later, come on Matt,” Sophie replied. She took Matt’s hand, and they walked towards the exit.
“Hey, what about us!?” Sally shouted.
“Lumiosa, I wish for them to be dressed.”

They were all magically dressed, as Matt and Sophie walked up the stairs into Alex’s mansion. They looked around, and saw his many slaves.
“What do we do with them?” Matt asked.
“Most of them have been around for years,” Alexis replied. “Even if we free them, most of them have no-where to go back to. Their families died decades ago. Hell, they’ve probably not even thought something of their own free will in a long time.”
“What about the others?” Matt asked. “The young ones? The ones who’ve still got families?” Alexis closed her eyes for a moment, finding the information with her powers.

“The people working in Alex’s office building all have lives outside of work, with only a few loyalty spells on them,” She told them. “But all the girls in this mansion are just mindless slaves. Alex even mind-controlled other people to make sure everyone would forget them. He was thorough.”
“Can you undo it?” Matt asked.
“I can try,” Alexis replied. “But what about all the girls with no homes? What about them?”
“Maybe…we should just get rid of them,” Sophie replied. “Let them die finally.”
“But we just decided we weren’t going to commit murder!” Matt protested, but Sophie shook her head.
“This isn’t murder, it’s euthanasia,” she said. “Assisted suicide, for those who have been trapped for so long.”
“Master, I will help Alexis,” Lumiosa said. “If that is what you wish.”
“I suppose there’s no other way…” Matt relented. “Fine. Do it.”

The two genies nodded, and took each-other’s hands. They closed their eyes to concentrate, and focused on performing the changes. It involved altering a lot of minds, and changing many small details about aspects of the world, in order to make it as though the girls had never been gone. Matt and Sophie looked around at the slave girls. Some vanished, as they were returned to their normal lives. But most of them simply dropped dead, as they were finally freed from the immortality that the Brookman family had wished upon them.

“I can’t look…” Sophie said, cuddling close to Matt. Both of them shut their eyes, and waited for it to be over.
“It is done,” Lumiosa said. The two humans opened their eyes, and saw dozens of dead girls around them, with their genies on their knees, panting.
“That was rather tiring…” Alexis panted. “Mind if we go in our lamps and rest for a bit?”
“Alright then,” Sophie nodded, and the two genies returned to their lamps in clouds of smoke.
“Come on Sophie, let’s go home,” Matt said. The two of them picked up their lamps, and walked hand-in-hand to Matt’s house.

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Philip laid in bed that night, thinking about what had happened. Everything he desired. That’s what the girl had said. He could get money. No more working in the factory. No more struggling to feed his kids. Maybe…she could bring his wife back.

No. No. This girl was trouble. She was a demon, or a succubus, or something evil. But she’d been playing with Jane and Michael. She’d not seemed evil then. Maybe it was all an act, in order to gain his trust. But he wanted to know. He had to know.

Philip got up, and opened the drawer where he’d put the lamp. He stared at it, as it sat there, looking inviting. He picked it up, and held it in his hands. It felt warm. Though it was apparently made of metal, it felt vaguely…alive. He’d let her out last time by rubbing it, so maybe that would work this time. She’d said he could summon her again by rubbing it, so that’s what he would do. He slowly began to move his hands along the surface of the lamp. Light-blue smoke immediately began to pour out of it, which formed into Alexis, who laid casually on his bed.

“Changed our mind then, have we?” She smiled.
“What are you?” Philip asked. “And don’t lie to me.”
“I told you, I’m a genie,” Alexis replied. “Your genie, specifically. Or at least for the next few decades I am. You people do have such short lifespans, don’t you?”
“And what, you’re going to grant my wishes?”
“Yes. If you actually ever make any. No rush though. I’ve got all eternity.”
“And what happens when I make a wish? You take my soul?”
“Honestly, you humans and your superstitions. No, I’m not going to take your soul. I’m bound to serve you from today until the day you die, whenever that may be.”

“And you can give me anything I want?”
“Well there are a few provisos. A few quid-pro-quos. But for the most part, yes, anything you want.”
“Alright then…I wish for money. Lots of it.”
“Typical, but hey, who am I to judge what you want to wish for?” Alexis smiled. “Your wish is my command, Master.”

Alexis snapped her fingers, and they were instantly in a glorious mansion.
“Wow…” Philip said in amazement.
“Daddy! Daddy!” He heard his kids shout. They ran into the bedroom in their nightclothes.
“Daddy, what just happened to the house!?” Jane asked in a panic.
“Your daddy just wished for money, so I gave it to him,” Alexis said proudly.
“I wished for money, not this big house!” Philip shouted.
“If you go down to the bank, you’ll find that your account balance is somewhat more substantial than it was a few minutes ago,” Alexis said. “I just assumed you’d want a big house to go with it.”

“This place is cool!” Michael said. “How big is it?”
“VERY big,” Alexis simply replied. “But I wouldn’t get too used to it if I were you. I don’t think your daddy’s going to let you keep it.”
“Daddy, no!” They both shouted.
“Kids…go and explore the house,” Philip said. “I want to have a grown-up conversation with Alexis.”
“Yay!” The kids shouted, and ran off to explore.

Philip sat down on the bed, and turned to face Alexis.
“So…there’s something I’ve wanted for over a year now,” Philip said.
“You want your wife back,” Alexis said.
“How did you know?”
“Just a wild guess.”
“So do it then. I wish for my wife to come back to life.”
“I can’t.”
“Why not?”
“Because death is permanent. It’s one of the rules.”
“You said I could have anything I wanted!”
“Almost anything. You can’t break the rules.”
“So I can’t bring my wife back?”
“No. But you can have pretty much anything else you want.”

Philip stayed silent for a while. It was clear he was sad at not being able to get his wife back. Alexis wanted to cheer him up, since he seemed like such a nice man.
“Master, may I ask, when did you last have sex?” She asked him.
“Why…why is that any of your business?”
“Well, because I feel like you’ve probably not fucked anyone since your wife died,” Alexis said seductively, before giving Philip a big kiss. “I think this penis of yours hasn’t seen much action lately…” She grabbed his penis through his trousers, which was quickly beginning to harden.
“I…I…”
“Sssshhhh Master, don’t speak. You know, money is one of the most common wishes my Masters make. You know what the other most common wish is for?” Philip shook his head, and Alexis whispered in his ear seductively. “Sex. Lots and lots of sex.”
“S-sex?” Philip asked nervously.
“Sex. Do you want sex Master? Just wish for it, Master. Just say the word, and you can have sex with me all night long.” Alexis gave Philip a slow lick, and he shuddered.
“Oh God…” Philip moaned. “I want you…I wish for you.”
“Your wish is my command, Master,” Alexis grinned cheekily.

Alexis snapped her fingers, and Philip was instantly naked. She planted kisses all over his body, leading down to his groin.
“Master, you don’t know just how lucky you are,” Alexis said in her seductive voice, and she circled his genitals with her tongue. “Sex with a human is good, but sex with a genie is just…magical.”
“Oh my God…” Philip moaned. “What about Jane and Michael!? They could walk in at any moment…” Alexis merely snapped her fingers again.
“They’re both in a deep, deep sleep,” Alexis said. “They won’t wake up until you wish them to. Now then, let’s get on with this…”
Alexis took Philip’s erect penis in her mouth, and he let out a loud gasp from the sheer pleasure of it.

“Oh my Goodness!” He said, before letting out a noise that was a mix of a moan and a wail. Alexis responded by licking his tip as she sucked, and then humming a tune. Philip could barely handle it, and he came in less than a minute, blasting his cum down Alexis’ throat. She pulled away, and smiled at him.
“I’m sorry…” He said. “I’m not normally that quick. It’s just it’s been a while, and-” Alexis put a finger on Philip’s mouth.
“Master, relax. I am here for your pleasure. You can cum as quickly and as often you like,” she said calmly. She then looked down at Philip’s penis, which had softened. She just grinned, pointed a finger at it, and militaristically said “Attention!” Philip’s penis filled with blood, and in less than a second, it was fully hard again.
“How…” he said.
“Magic. Now let’s get to the main event…”

Alexis pushed Philip onto his back, and mounted him. He groaned again as he felt her vagina engulf his penis, and she grinned happily.

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Matt and Sophie went back to his house, and laid on his bed, cuddling. For a long while they didn’t say a word, just enjoying their closeness, and thinking of everything that had transpired.

“Matt…” Sophie said, finally breaking the silence. “We don’t deserve our genies.”
“Why?” He asked her.
“Because we’re too powerful. I mean, even before we thought we had to obey the rules, we were powerful, but now, we’re basically omnipotent. We’re like Gods. No-one can stop us. Hell, the things we were about to do to Alex…I was about to wish Hell upon him.”
“Maybe you’re right…But what can we do? We can’t give them up, or we’d be at the mercy of the other Masters.”
“Well maybe we could just wish all the other genies away?”
“But do we have that right?”
“Do we have the right to do anything? What gives us the right to wish things up with our genies?”
“I suppose now we can liberate the 217 lamps that the society has.”
“Yes, but then what? Do we choose 217 people to give them to?”
“I don’t know…”

At this point, there was a knock at the bedroom door.
“Matt honey, I've made you some breakfast,” said his mother. She opened the door slowly, and saw the two of them, nude under the duvet. “Oh…hello.”
“Mom, this is Sophie,” Matt said. “My uh, girlfriend.” Sophie smiled at hearing this.
“Nice to meet you, Mrs Evans,” Sophie said, pulling the duvet up over her breasts.
“You two, Sophie…” Mrs Evans said awkwardly. She then looked over at Alexis, Lumiosa and Apriya’s lamps, which were sat on Matt’s bedside table. “Are these the things what that awful man wanted?”
“Yeah,” Matt replied. “Look mom, it’s hard to explain…”
“They’re so pretty…” Mrs Evans said. She reached out, and picked up Apriya’s lamp. “I can see why he wanted these.”
“Mom, careful, before you-” Matt began, but it was too late.
“Um Matt, it’s getting warm,” she said. “Is it meant to do that?”
“Oh no…” Sophie said.

The sensations of Mrs Evans’ rubbing had set the lamp off, and a cloud of grey smoke poured out. It quickly formed the naked Apriya, who knelt before her on the floor.
“Greetings Mistress, I am Apriya, and I-” she began, before she noticed Matt and Sophie. “Oh no…Please don’t hurt me! Please! I was just following orders, I swear!”
“Apriya, I have no doubt in my mind that you encouraged Alex and his predecessors to do some of the things they did,” Sophie said to her.
“Oh my God, is she…is she a genie!?” Mrs Evans said excitedly. “Oh my God, Oh my God…Okay, 3 wishes. Gotta use them carefully.”
“Mom, wait, I don’t think-” Matt began.
“Okay, I wish for a big house full of lots of cash!” Mrs Evans said excitedly.
“Your wish is my command, Mistress,” Apriya said. She snapped her fingers, and the house transformed into a mansion, in much the same way that Philip Banks’ had, all those years ago.

“This is so cool!” Mrs Evans grinned. “Okay, second wish-”
“Mrs Evans, sleep!” Sophie ordered, and her magical voice compelled her to instantly fall into a deep sleep.
“How are you doing all this?” Apriya asked them. “You shouldn’t be able to do that to her. Or all the things you did to Alex.”
“We don’t know,” Sophie replied. “But we don’t want to talk to you about that, so go back into your lamp.” Apriya automatically responded to Sophie’s command, and was sucked straight back into her lamp. Sophie then put it back on the table.
“What shall we do with your mom?” She asked her boyfriend.
“Just leave her there for now, we’ll deal with things later,” he replied. “Come on, I’m hungry.”

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Author's message: This chapter was delayed by: Exams, family and me watching old Doctor Who episodes.

There are two Aladdin references in this chapter (Or 1 if you don't count the one that carries over from previous chapters). I was going to put a 3rd in, in the form of Alexis telling Philip that "You ain't never fucked a girl like me", but I decided against having Alexis reference a film from 150 years in the future. Who can spot the Mary Poppins reference though?

On that note, the past scenes in this chapter were meant to be set in 1841, since they banned kids going down chimneys the previous year. The past scenes this chapter were admittedly an attempt by me to extend it, but I'm happy with how this turned out. It's certainly better than the last chapter, I hope you'll agree. I've actually proof read this one for once as well, since people on Literotica were nagging me to. I actually wanted the past scenes in this chapter to be Alexis serving royalty, like she had she had done, but that would have required more research than I was willing to put in.

To everyone who was nagging me to post this chapter, I'm sorry, but I did post a comment saying I was not going to start it until Monday, which did happen, and I posted one yesterday saying it would likely be today. I really wanted to get this chapter out, but real life and a desire to make it good delayed that. Someone suggested I should block unregistered comments, which I considered, but very few registered users comment, with most coming from anonymous people, and I wouldn't want to block the genuinely nice people. I frequented this site for a couple of years before registering, and though I never commented I don't think, I'd have hated to have been blocked from doing so. Although even as I'm writing this, someone has commented "Where's chapter 10?". I do like seeing I have comments, and it disappoints me a little when I see that most of them are either people nagging me to post more, or duplicates.

Anyway, back to discussing the story itself. Matt and Sophie are back together, reconciling after what they've been through in this chapter. I hope it doesn't seem too forced, but I felt like it would be the sort of thing to get them back together after their argument. Something I've now realised I've forgotten to put in is Sophie apologising to Alexis, so I'll have to put that in the next chapter.

Speaking of future chapters, I definitely know how it's going to end. Maybe. Like, I don't know the End End, but I know the stuff near it. I promise there'll be answers for the plot twists from this chapter. Why can Matt and Sophie break the rules? Who sent Matt Lumiosa? All will be answered in the future, if you wish hard enough.

Now then, let's hope Chapter 11 doesn't take this long...


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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 00:50
    the thing with the letter seemed too "deus ex machina" for me.
    cringe worthy....

    I'm enjoying the story very much thoug! can't wait :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 00:51
    Hey Drago, great chapter, I get the feeling some will complain about lack of sec but the plot was there, the twist was there and the events turned our nicely. And now his mother has a genie... interesting. I look forward to chapter 11. Great chapter with nice length and depth.

    -H

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 01:02
    This was a great chapter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 01:14
    You may have a lot more registered users making comments than you realize. They may not be logged in though. I am a registered user, I 'm just not logged in, as I have not had a reason to log in yet.

    BTW, I am enjoying the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 01:49
    Yay! Great chapter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 02:01
    Excellent work my friend. I sincerely applaud you and your efforts. I still suggest putting the whole series into one long read, like a novel. But my suggestion would be one to consider when you have completed this Epic. Take your time. Your true fans will wait patiently.

    I wish you the best of luck in your story telling.
    - D.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 02:12
    I wish that they keep their genies and they choose to live forever and give all the extra genies to friends and family and anyone else they feel deserves a genie.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 02:57
    You story is defenitly amazing to say the least but looking upon what is going on so far, I think it will be safer for the family and friends to not recieve genies. Next try and focuz on extending the length of the story by using more details especially during sex. you coud also try and save , your thoughts bout the end until like chapter 30 because so far this is amazing and if continued, will defenitly be an inspiring series.

    -Abilene, age 18
    -single, Would love a genie named Alexis

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 03:06
    Great read but now that Matt and the girl can break the rules why don't they go back in time and meet the person or persons that started all this just an idea

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  • Krot0Q
    05.06.2015 03:48
    Your proofreading actually is noticeable. I'm glad to see you've got your plot firmly defined in your head. Can't wait to read till the end.

    Good work.

    PS. Yes I'm a registered user actually writing a comment. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:00
    So good, keep the good work.
    I think having Sophisticated an Matt the ability to break the rules will have something to do with the genies been free at the end, the main characters are the good guys so far. As Matt is the newest owner he is the reason and Sophie is the knowledge in my pov. But They will keep Luminosa and Alexis as friends.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:03
    I love it and keep it up.... As long as possible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:04
    Yes I agree but I also want a little bit more sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:14
    Sophie and Matt should find good people to give the 200-semod genies to, live until they are 100, be on a first name basis with the maker. Also mrs Evans should be able to keep the genie. You can stretch this story out for at the minimum... 15 more chapters. Overall, this story is the best story on this site and I've followed you since the very first chapter. You've done great evolving your writing style and I look forward to master-bating to more of your plot stuffed stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:14
    Awesome series man! if your ever interested in writing along other lines and would like to discus topics let me know cause i'm working with another author and shooting ideas at him and bouncing ideas off him all the time. if your interested let me know.

    redtx7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 04:50
    Man I love this series can't get enough of it
    Great story. Great sex scenes. Keep up the great
    Writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 05:20
    I was disappointed waiting on this chapter so long. But hey man, when it comes to doctor who, I understand completely. Btw, after you finish this story, this site needs doctor who fan fic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 05:33
    Very good write with your heart

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  • Fuckbuddy88
    05.06.2015 05:43
    Hey Dragotime! It is me Fuckbuddy88. Your stories are really awesome. Keep up the good work. I have to ask this though, where was the sex?

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  • Kane101595
    05.06.2015 06:02
    I liked this one for the most part, I love every chapter really. I like how they were immune to the rules, although it would've been interesting if they had found work-arounds for the rules. Also if they're immune to rules, why not wish for immortality to spend eternity with each other and their genies? Just a thought :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 06:09
    good story, but Alex - basically thinking he's a god - should have been a bit more perverted. I know what I like in perversion, but you'll have to discover your own fantasies, on your own. it's why I don't read Patterson or king or any of that ilk. they just cater to an audience and want to be rich. they are not "authors" but simply "writers." screw them; write for yourself. Ken

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 06:11
    Life goes on, you have 2 do what u have 2 do. Great job though, good idea going into some depth of the history of the Jins.

    Just please, please refrain from any jellybabies, big blue police boxes, OR sonic screwdrivers. but dam you, now I'm going to be hearing K-9 every time they say "Misstress."

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 06:22
    It needs more sex its a great story but when my wifi is slow and cant watch videos and my girl is not around i.like to jack off to stories you shuld make another incest story like matt forgets that his mom has a genie now and that she wishes to have sex with her son but it dosent work since only matt and sophie can use there magic on other genie owners but at tge same time matt over hears his moms wish soo he makes it come true and then his dad walks in on them and maybe you can think the rest out just think of me as anonymous reader 101

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 06:29
    "and me watching old Doctor Who episodes." Ah, Classic Brits

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 06:41
    Been reading this series from the start and really like them (even if I prefer gay stories). The story line up till now was fluent and the plot intresting. I say "up till now" cause in my opinion this part felt to forced and convenient. But as you say in the side note "answers will be given", so I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 07:39
    it was wonderful.
    but what I found strange was how both sophie and matt got the ultimate power when the note came with lumiosa and was addressed to matt. The sudden appearance of the note with both their names makes it even more suspicious.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 07:42
    you made a mistake. in the first or the second chapter (cant remember), when matt wishes for the orgy in the gym, all girls including sophie get attracted to them. but later sophie tells him that she was not affected with the power and did it with free will. but according to this chapter even sophie should have been affected.
    otherwise its wonderful and I really think you can publish a book with these superb chapters.
    your biggest fan.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 10:12
    by the by it is going great! the story really keeps the readers attention. however I do ask. have you ever thought of putting anal in? if you have no wish of it then its fine just a thought. keep writing please though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 10:47
    Just out of curiosity, Can genies be killed? Say with, a sword? I also noticed alexis and luminesa felt exhasted after undoing all of alex's wishes. I thought genies didn't need rest? Is breaking the rules some how making them weaker? I'm enjoying your story very much and am looking forward to ch 11

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 11:48
    if matt is able to over rule oth
    er genie's magic then why was'nt he able to do that with the box with genie which was there in alex's house?(sry for the grammar)
    one of your fans...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 12:01
    plz make this story a little bit dark just so that it becomes more intense...also plz dont let matt and sophie easily achieve everything they want as I think greatness of the heroes of a plot can only be appreciated truely when the antagonists of the plot are if not more then atleast are equally potent...(yet agn sry for my grammar) english is not my first language...
    ps.i really love your stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 12:22
    is here going to be incest? Matt and his mom...Iwant Sopie Matt to ave sex and more lesbian stuff

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  • DragoTime
    05.06.2015 13:44
    Answers to questions that have been asked in the comments:

    The safe: Lumiosa saw that Apriya had put protection on it, so she just assumed it couldn't be undone by her, since they didn't know then that Matt and Sophie could bypass the rules.

    Genies being killed: I'm gonna say probably not. At least not by normal weapons, since if you shoot a genie say, they could just heal themselves.

    Matt and Sophie affecting each-other: I didn't really explain this before, but I think Matt and Sophie's exemption from the rules doesn't apply to affecting each-other, since, well, they're both presumably equally-powerful.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 15:10
    How about for the next chapter flash forward into the future to see if Matt & Sophie get married and have Children to carry on the spinoff stories if you want

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 15:10
    Alexis should seduce Matt and fuck him against his will..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 15:56
    This is an interesting development of the story. I do find the super-powers a bit deus ex machina? Unless there are bigger plans for the future of the storyline, of course – and this is only a 'small' battle to be won. Because at least from my perspective, I got excited at the cliffhanger...and the issue was, well...resolved in a 'Oh look, we're exempt! Yay!' manner.

    Other than that, I still find your stories very well written and quite exciting. To resolve the Matt/Sophie affecting each other, they could perhaps both swear (and allow both their genies to bind them) that, without the free-willed consent of both parties, no party may do anything to the other that they wouldn't be able to do to any other genie owner.

    I look forward to reading more from you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 15:58
    Oh, on top of that, I love seeing Alexis' past being explored. This is an interesting angle I hope is developed in future :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 18:14
    I enjoyed seeing the genie's past 'lives'. It makes for a nice change of pace.

    I feel conflicted, though. Part of me wants to suggest all the stuff I'd like to see in this story, like Matt getting more confident and perverted now that he has pretty much unlimited power - using his mom and sister for sex, degrading people and genies for his pleasure whilst battling between guilt and lust.

    The other part of me strongly suspects that most of your best writing comes from your own ideas. At the end of the day you shouldn't feel obliged to include anything from the comments just to satisfy your readers, lest it feel forced and out of place. Looking forward to more chapters!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 21:24
    A very interesting twist in this chapter....excellent!
    However, YOU are the writer and you need nobody to influence you with their dumb pervert suggestions. This story is working FINE on its own.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 22:47
    Exceptional story to say the least. The thing about power, to anyone, is that it tends to corrupt them eventually. Case in point is Alex. Who misused his power to make Matt's and Sophie's family and friends suffer under his twisted little mind. So the original maker of all the genies as seen how the society has captured 217 lamps with intentions of becoming an ultimate power to rule the world. Not wanting this to happen, sent Lumiosa to Matt to over turn this devious plan, and to either set the genies free or get them to new masters that will use them wisely. Looking forward to see what is going to really happen.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 23:03
    Cant wait for chapter 11

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 23:56
    Honestly, you can forget making it about sex at this point (you seem to be already). A world with genies is quite interesting, though the sex adds realism (and yes some interest). If I were you I would consider rewriting and rethinking this into a proper book once you're finished. The thing that's kept me coming back is the original setting and interesting characters (mostly the genies). I recommend making the meeting between Matt and Sophie slightly more believable, or at least less typical of sex stories. Perhaps she tracks him down intelligently instead of simply attending the same school.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 00:19
    More Matt and liminosa sex please. It's always the hottest.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 00:40
    I'm an avid reader of steamy stories. I don't mean to say that I know this story better than you, but please more sexy per part TvT amazing genie sex. I'm
    Going to go read chapter one and two again now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 04:56
    as always, great story! Thanks for the update.. cant wait to finish this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 06:14
    Please add some references, and inside jokes for us whovians

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  • h0Ax8omb3r
    06.06.2015 13:47
    Yet again another great chapter to your amazing story. Just one little thing I think may of worked better is when the wished away everything alex had wished for instead of killing all the mindless girls they could of given them completely new lives again just a thought but I tthink it would have fitted better with matt and sophies characters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 14:26
    i think alexis should have a hardcore sex with matt and sophie dont know

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 14:26
    there need to be more genie sex alexis and matt

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 17:56
    this is becoming less and less of a sex storie get some hardcore sex. Put some anal in do some crazy stuff like alexis and matt or matt and some pornstar

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 18:16
    I appreciate the way you think dude! Your stories are going awesome. Keep it that way.
    Thank you for the series and good luck!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 18:53
    What is with all the comments about Matt and Alexis behind Sophie's back. It has to be the same person making the comments over and over. First they don't fit Matt's personality. Second following Matt"s personality all he would have to do is ask Sophie and have great sex with Alexis. Some people just think you can throw anything into a story and it will be fine. Keep up the great Job keep true to your characters

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 18:59
    To the post a few down from this. If you want hardcore or anal please click the appropriate link to the left side of the screen. This is a great story with sex scenes added. There is a plot to it of you don't appreciate that fact please go to a posting that is only sex.

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  • DragoTime
    06.06.2015 19:02
    @The Last Two Commenters: Ditto.

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  • DragoTime
    06.06.2015 19:09
    Also, I started the next chapter yesterday. It's got another past section, but so far little else because I've not written much more. No ETA yet, but I promise proper sex in this chapter. It's bugging me that a sex story has had so little sex for the last few chapters, so I aim to remedy that. Plus sex is good padding.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 23:48
    Thanks Drago.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 01:28
    I have been reading this and would like to say your doing a good job but would only like to see something to the effect off matt getting his mom and sister at the same time besides that keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 06:26
    So good keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 07:37
    Fuckin awesome series bruh. Keep up the great work. Your one of my favorite writers now!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 08:52
    this is the first time ive ever commented so fhat must mean your doing good so to the point are matt and sophie gonna switch boddies again I thought that was the best idea ever keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 10:15
    I am so thoroughly enjoying this story, thank you. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but it will be worth the wait. Thank you so much.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 12:08
    Turn Apriya into a cum dump for everyone who needs to cum .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 17:30
    I've wondered if you were going to make it that Matt and Sophie since they are exempt are going to go back in time create all the genies and make the rules and restrictions that bind all the genies but also set the course and events for things to happen like Matt getting his genie and the exemption note also I wonder if u would do something else from Aladdin and make free genies so they can live without masters if they choose so the genies can leave there masters at the society

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 19:42
    I love the story one of the best I have read on this place

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 20:52
    i was thinking u could put in a twist like Matt and Sophie are the Gods who created the genies by going bak in time with their genies and wishinh 4 geniea 2 be created. I would really appreciate it if u added this in. Keep writing!!! Ur AWESOME!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 20:53
    sorry 4 spelling mistakes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2015 14:20
    aw man, did you really have to go and add the mother in like that? Ahhhhh kinda ruined the story for me now :/

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  • naenaegirl
    08.06.2015 20:47
    great story so far just let it flow where it goes and ill look forward to more thanks

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  • Buda+Knight
    09.06.2015 04:08
    You are under no obligation to anyone to post these story's. Your story's are some of the best I've read on this site. We the readers appreciate how fast you are writing and posting these story's. From one writer to another, thank you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2015 01:43
    i love your writing and I agree. you are under no obligation to just whip stories out your ass. keep up the good work! and dont mind the asshole comments, there just jealous that they cant write as good as you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2015 02:47
    This story is one of the best I have read. I am really looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2015 02:53
    you are going in a nice flow with the story.
    its good :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2015 08:26
    Thank you for new ideas and something that isn't done often enough magic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2015 16:59
    Also another reference, Phillip Banks is Will Smiths uncle in the Fresh Prince of Bel Air

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  • DragoTime
    14.06.2015 18:42
    I've never watched the Fresh Prince of Bel Air.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2015 21:58
    Seriously good sir? A story about genies needed extra deux-ex-machina? Don't get me wrong, I fucking love the story, but you can't make this shit up as you go. The rules of genies (genii?) is a real and serious thing, man, deeply rooted in physics and shit like that. OK, that's about as much as I can write while keeping a straight face. Seriously though, keep up the good work.

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  • DragoTime
    14.06.2015 22:10
    The Deus Ex Machina was planned beforehand. I'd known for several chapters that I wanted this to happen. I didn't make that up as I went.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2015 22:14
    Seriously good sir? A story about genies needed extra deux-ex-machina? Don't get me wrong, I fucking love the story, but you can't make this shit up as you go. The rules of genies (genii?) is a real and serious thing, man, deeply rooted in physics and shit like that. OK, that's about as much as I can write while keeping a straight face. Seriously though, keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2015 23:36
    Great story, love the whole thing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2015 10:21
    I rarely read a story more than once; but, I'm on my 3rd reading of this one--it's that good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2016 16:46
    6th reading, below

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 01:15
    suddenly having power worries Sophie. worry about making wishes, killing taking power. but then feel they need to impose such on other, that they should take away genies. What happen to the world not finding out about genies. add 5 more to the list of knowers.

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  • DragoTime
    30.05.2016 01:23
    The world as a whole. The general public.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2016 10:29
    Didn't Matt wish away his need for food? Why is he hungry at the end?

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