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Sex games

A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 09

Author: DragoTime

Date: 1 December 2015

Consensual Sex, Fantasy, Lesbian, Male Domination

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Sophie woke up the next morning alone, which was something she’d long since decided she didn’t like. She generally preferred to wake up cuddling with someone, whether it was Matt, Alexis, or someone else she’d commanded into bed with her. But this morning, she was alone. Matt was mad at her, she’d commanded Alexis to go back into her lamp, and she wasn’t in the mood for sex with some random person.

“Good morning Mistress, would you like some breakfast?” Sophie turned around, to see Alexis sat there on a chair, holding a tray, with a big plate of pancakes and syrup.
“Alexis?” She said, yawning. “I told you to go into your lamp.”
“You once told me that you consider me your best friend,” Alexis said. “Best friends don’t always do as they’re told.”
“You’re also my genie, and you have to do what I say.”
“Fine, if you’re going to be like that, I’ll just leave, and take these delicious pancakes with me.”
“No…Alexis, I’m sorry,” Sophie said.
“It’s not me you should be apologising to. It’s that boy you scared half to death, and the boy who had to stop you.”
“Oh God, don’t remind me…I fucked up.”
“It’ll be fine. Now eat these pancakes I worked so hard to make.”
“What, you didn’t just conjure them up?”
“Yeah, but it took a lot of a sampling them to get the amount of syrup quite right.”
“Swimming in it is the right amount.” Alexis made the plate float over to Sophie, who started eating them.

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Matt also woke up alone that morning, but it wasn’t nearly as bad for him, since he wasn’t as used to waking up to the feeling of nude skin touching his own. He thought of what had happened the previous day. Had he blown his chance of having a girlfriend? Perhaps, but someone had to stop her. Matt didn’t bother calling Sophie that morning. Frankly he didn’t really want to think about her or the genies, so he opted to keep Lumiosa in her lamp when he went to school. He could just pretend that his “cousin” was sick.

As Matt was rummaging through his locker, he felt a hand on this shoulder.
“Hey Matt.” Matt turned around, and saw Dan standing there.
“Uh…hi Dan…” Matt said, expecting to either get beaten up, or mercilessly teased.
“Listen Matt…I just wanted to thank you for yesterday…For saving me from that psycho bitch…”
“Dan…she’s not a…”
“Look, I don’t know what weird powers you two have, and I don’t want to know. But thanks for saving me from her.”
“Whatever.”

Matt tried to walk away, not really wanting to talk, but Dan stopped him.
“Matt, look, I know I’ve never been particularly nice to you, but-” Dan said.
“Look Dan, you’re welcome for me saving you, but I really don’t want to talk,” Matt said grumpily.
“Dan, why the fuck are you talking to this loser?” Cindy asked, walking up to them.
“Cindy, he’s not, he saved me,” Dan told his girlfriend.
“Look, I’m just gonna go,” Matt said, walking off. “Please just leave me alone.”

Matt walked into his first class, where he saw Sophie and Alexis sat in their normal seats.
“Matt, I-” Sophie began.
“I don’t want to talk,” Matt said, turning to leave.
“Matt, please, I’m sorry!” Sophie shouted after him, before getting up to follow him.
“Sophie, I really don’t want to talk!”
“Matt, I’m really sorry for what happened! I made a mistake! I’m only human!”
“It’s not just that though! We’re supposed to be better than those old guys who enslave people with their genies! But you were about to do who knows what to Dan!"
“Matt, just-”
“And what about your parents? Still fucking, are they? They’re basically your slaves!”

“Oh you’re hardly one to talk!” Sophie shouted back. “Or have you forgotten how you made an entire girls’ PE class fuck you senseless!? Or how you did the same thing to your sister, and nearly killed the two of you in the process!?”
A crowd was starting to gather to listen to the two of them loudly argue.
“Oh Alexis, make them go away!” Sophie shouted.
“As you wish,” Alexis said.

“Actually, we could handle that.” The three of them looked around for the source of the mysterious voice, but they saw no-one. At that point, they saw the other students in the corridor begin to fade away, along with all the walls and floors. They looked around, and saw that they were stood in an ornate living room, not unlike the dining room from before. In it, the other members of the society were sat around with their genies.
“You could have just called us,” Sophie said.
“Yes, but this is so much more fun,” Neil smiled. “Please, sit.”
“Make this quick, I’m not in a good mood,” Matt said, sitting down on an empty armchair.
“My my, what’s gotten into him?” Jürgen chuckled. “Why don’t you just have dear Lumiosa conjure up some fun for you?”
“Just get on with,” Matt said, his mood obvious in his voice.

“Very well,” Brian said. “Sophie, Matt, the time has come for you to prove your worth to our organisation.”
“What, helping to uncover Alex’s secrets wasn’t enough?” Alexis interrupted.
“Sophie may enjoy your contributions to discussions, but I do not,” Brian said to her sternly. “I would advise you to remember who is in charge here, genie.”
“And I would advise you to, oh great and wonderful human,” Alexis said sarcastically. “To remember that the only reason you have power at all is because of Lexia over there. You know, when I met Lexia, she was such a sweet girl. Loved making people happy. But now look at her.”
“She serves me obediently.”
“Yes, a little too obediently. Hey Lexia, remember Babylon? Remember showing me the gardens you built? How proud you were of them? It wouldn’t surprise me if he’d wiped your memories of it. Of everything. Turned you into his mindless slave, who’s only any good for granting wishes. Do you remember me, Lexia? Do you!?”
“She won’t speak without my permission.”
“Then give it to her! Give her some freedom, at least!”

“Sophie, your genie is being rather noisy,” Sarah interrupted. “Do shut her up. I can’t abide listening to her.”
“Alexis, go back into your lamp,” Sophie commanded her.
“Oh come on Sophie, don’t pretend that you don’t agree with-”
“Alexis, in your lamp! Now!” Sophie shouted. Alexis just stared at her.
“Your wish is my command, Mistress,” she said in her most sarcastic voice possible, before she returned to a cloud of light-blue smoke, which was sucked into Sophie’s handbag.

“Now then, to business,” Brian said. “Now as you know, one of our goals is to collect genie lamps. Well, we’ve discovered another one. Or rather, we discovered it many years ago, but its owner refused to join us.”
“Who is it?” Sophie asked.
“Jacob Larson,” Brian replied. “Born in 1922, a British man living in the countryside of Kent in a very large estate. He went from being relatively poor, until, in 1950, he made a fortune on the stock market. Not long after, he married a girl named Eléni. His genie, of course.”
“How do you know?”
“Because he told us, of course. He told his story to Alex’s father Richard in 1952. It was at that point he refused to join us. Ever since then, we’ve been waiting for an opportunity to take Eléni’s lamp for our own.”
“And now’s the time?”

“He was 93 last month. He’s not got long left. And we think his time is coming very soon. Like us, he has given himself eternal youth, and he used to be very active out in public, doing things like charity work. But recently he’s been seen stumbling a lot. Like he’s dying. And now he’s not going out in public at all. He will likely be dead soon. The job we want the two of you to do is to recover his lamp once he dies.”
“But that could take 5 more years for all we know!”
“It will not. We promise.”
“How do you even expect us to do this?”
“Well, for you and Alexis, we would like you to join his harem. You see, despite being happily married in public, we know that he has a rather large harem in his mansion, consisting of hundreds of girls. We figure no-one will notice two more popping in.”

“And me?” Matt asked, speaking up for the first time, but still sounding annoyed.
“As I said,” Brian continued. “Jacob does a lot of charity work. He has a meeting today with a man from the NSPCC, who is going to ask him to increase his contributions to them. Or he was, until, as if by magic,” the rest of them chuckled at this, “he dropped down dead. So now Matt is going to take over from him, with Lumiosa as his PA.”
“And what exactly do you hope to achieve by this?” Matt asked. “You’re hoping he’ll drop down dead while we’re there?”
“Yes. Or if not, very soon after. The important thing to remember is that, when Jacob dies, Eléni will be sucked back into her lamp. You two must get it before anyone else rubs it.”
“So are you in?” Neil asked them both.
“I’m in,” Sophie said. “I can’t speak for Matt though.”
“Fine, I’ll do it, but I don’t think it’ll work,” Matt said.

The two of them pulled out their lamps, and rubbed them. Lumiosa emerged on her knees in front of Matt, while Alexis reclined on a sofa she materialised for herself.
“What do you desire of me, oh great and powerful Mistress?” She asked in her sarcastic voice. They then explained the situation to the two of them. “So we’re about to go and condemn another of my sisters to being trapped in her lamp for all eternity?”
“Alexis, I don’t want to talk about this now,” Sophie said sternly. “I wish for you to teleport us into Jacob’s harem.”
“Your wish is my command, Mistress.”

The two of them were instantly gone. Matt then turned to Lumiosa.
“Lumiosa, I wish for the two of us to be in a car, on its way to Jacob’s house. I wish I knew how to drive this car perfectly. And I wish we were both dressed in business attire,” he commanded.”
“As you wish Master,” she smiled, and the two of them also immediately vanished.

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The next thing Sophie knew, she was naked, and stood in a very steamy room with Alexis. She could hear girly giggles, and moans of pleasure. The two of them looked around, and saw that they were in a sauna-like room, with a large hot tub in it. In the tub were 10 drop-dead-gorgeous girls, making out and cuddling one-another.
“Well then, “Mistress”, if you’re done oppressing my freedom of speech, I think we should play the part. Hi girls!”
“Hey, who are you?” One of the girls in the tub asked.
“Uh, we’re new,” Sophie said.
“Then get in here and join the fun!” Another girl shouted. Alexis jumped into the water, and Sophie soon followed her.
“So are you girls American?” Asked the first girl, who kissed Alexis.
“Uh…yeah…” Sophie replied.
“I didn’t know that the Master went to America recently,” said the second girl, who started kissing Sophie.
“You idiot!” Shouted a third girl. “The Master is all-powerful. He can do what he wants.”
“Oh yeah, sorry,” the other girl said, before getting back to kissing Sophie. Sophie kissed her back, and squeezed the girl’s ass. She saw two more girls go under the water, who then proceeded to eat her out and lick and fondle her under the water.
“Welcome to the harem,” moaned the girl who was kissing Sophie. Sophie looked over, and saw her genie being caressed and moaning in a similar way.

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Meanwhile, Matt and Lumiosa appeared in a large-ish car, with Matt behind the wheel, and Lumiosa sat on his left in the passenger seat.
“Woah…this is weird,” Matt said as he drove. “They drive on the wrong side of the road here.”
“Would you like me to swap them around, Master?” Lumiosa asked.
“No!” Matt shouted in panic. “Listen, while we’re there, just let me do the talking. If you have to talk, let me think your words to you.”
“Yes Master, I understand.”
“Good. And remember, we’re from the NSPCC.”

They drove up to the house’s gates, and buzzed for entry.
“Who is it?” Asked a female voice on the other side.
“We’re here from the NSPCC, to see Mr Larson,” Matt replied.
“Just a moment,” The woman on the other end of the intercom said. There was a minute or so of silence, before she came back. “Please come in.”

They drove up further towards the house, Matt feeling very nervous.
“This reminds me of going to Alex’s house,” he said. They got there, and got out of the car, where a beautiful woman in a revealing dress greeted them.
“Good day,” she said. “I am Mr Larson’s wife, Eléni. It is a great pleasure to welcome you to our home. My husband is in his office, please, follow me.”

They walked through the long corridors of the house, where Matt noticed that, rather oddly, there was no-one around. Jacob Larson supposedly had a large harem, so where was it? He then realised that they’d presumably all been ordered to go and hide while they were there. They walked into an office, where a man who looked in his late-50s sat behind a desk. He looked weak.

“They’re here, honey,” said Eléni, before kissing him.
“Thank you,” he said weakly. “Welcome to my home. I am Jacob Larson, and who are you?”
“Matthew Evans,” Matt said. “And this is…uh, my wife, Lumiosa.”
“Lumiosa?” Eléni asked. “That sounds foreign. Is it Italian?”
“No no, dear, it’s genie, isn’t it?” Jacob said. Matt started panicking.
“Well, um, no, uh…” He said in a blind panic.
“Boy, I may be old, but I’m not stupid,” Jacob said bluntly. “My beautiful wife here is constantly scanning this house. She knows everything that’s going on inside it, and she’s monitoring everyone’s minds. Yet she cannot read yours. Why is that? I’ll tell you. It’s because this girl here is your genie.”
“Damn…” Matt said.
“And I can only assume the same for those girls in the sauna who magically appeared, since I can’t read their minds either,” Eléni said.

“I’m assuming you’re with the society, then?” Jacob asked. “Here to steal my lamp?”
“Jacob has already made provisions to ensure you don’t get your hands on me,” Eléni told them. “When he is about to die, I will return to my lamp, and teleport it hundreds of miles away from here. You’ll never find me.”
“Tell you what dear, why don’t you summon our other guests here?” Jacob said to his wife, who simply smiled, and snapped her fingers. The wall next to them vanished, and they saw looked at the sauna, which had lots of feminine moans of pleasure coming from it, and lots of nude girls in the hot tub.
“Could the genie and her Mistress please come out the water, and sit over here please?” Eléni said in a friendly manner. All the girls turned to look at her.
“Oh fuck,” Sophie said.
“You can say that again,” Matt said, come on.

Sophie and Alexis got out of the water, and Alexis clothed them with a snap of her fingers. She materialised 2 chairs for them, which they sat down on.
“Well that answers the question as to which one the genie is,” Eléni said.
“Well as I was just saying to your accomplice here, your organisation will never get hold of Eléni,” Jacob said.
“Look, we’re with the society, but we’re not like them,” Sophie admitted. “We don’t want the lamps in captivity either. It’s why we’re helping them. Once they’re all gone, we’ll be able to liberate the lamps.”
“And why should I just hand Eléni over to you?” Jacob asked. “If she does what I told her to do, she could find a new Master within days, not decades. And I’d hate to think of my love being locked away like that.”
“Well if we don’t get your lamp, the society’s going to start asking questions about us,” Sophie said. “This is supposed to be about proving our loyalty to them.”
“Sorry, I can’t help you.”

At this point, Matt heard his phone ringing in his pocket. He got it out, and saw that the call was apparently from “Your Worst Nightmare”.
“Hello?” Matt said, as he answered it.
“Hello Matt, do put me on speaker, I’d like Sophie to hear this,” said a familiar voice on the other end of the phone. Matt did so, and the voice continued. “Alex here, just to let you both know that I’ve got your parents Matt. And your sister. And those two friends of yours. And Sophie’s 3 friends. Why don’t you listen to them?”

In the background of the call, they could hear very loud moans of pleasure.
“I’ve wished up eternal orgasms for them all,” Alex continued. “They’re enjoying it so far, but their poor bodies won’t be able to stand it for long. You’d better come and save them soon, before they die of exhaustion.”
“You bastard!” Sophie shouted.
“Now now, are you really in a position to be risking angering me further?” Alex chuckled. “You two cost me my position in the society that my family founded. So now, you are going to surrender your genies to me.”
“Not in a million years!” Sophie shouted back.
“Oh yes you will. Because you value the lives of normal people. So you’ll surrender your genies to me, in order to save them. Do hurry now, won’t you?” Alex laughed evilly.

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Author's message: So I'm actually quite disappointed with this chapter. It's short, and I don't really like the contents. But the ending was required to set up the plot advancements I want. I think I've worked out where the plot is going to go from here until the end, and I do hope you all like it. I'm thinking there will be 3-4 more chapters total, but who really knows? Certainly the plot I have in mind can't extend much past that. Or maybe it will? I never quite know until I write it what's going to happen.

I'm sorry about there being so little sex in this chapter. It's part of the reason I'm not that proud of it. That and the fact it's so short in total. I'm thinking a proper sex scene at the end of the next chapter, but I have no idea how big in total it'll be. So we'll see.

Also, a lot of people have been pointing out how there's no interracial stuff in this story. How there are no non-Caucasians. Well, to be fair, no-one's race has been stated in this story. I've not given much description to the characters at all. Partly because that takes time and effort, and partly so you can imagine them how you want them to be. So if you want Sophie to be black and Matt to be Asian, you're free to do so. I just don't think it's particularly relevant to the story to mention the characters' races.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 15:36
    Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully its long in content and many sex scenes. Also I like the plot so far.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 15:42
    I agree with what you say about races. Good point!
    Side note - short chapter so was done reading it really fast.
    Thank you though. A nice slight cliffhanger at the end.
    I'm very curious as to how society is going to make it up to Matt, and how the whole scene with Alex is going to play out. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up with the great work mate!!
    - Regards, H

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 15:44
    Sophie** auto correct..
    -H

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 16:06
    Mate you've got to write a long long chapter with heaps of sex scenes! Mabey bring another young female into the story with a female Geinie? No to easy mabey a scene were the four go on a sexual escapades for a while? And set it up that the society have sent them out in search of more lamps? Oh and some how kill old mate Alex before all this happens.

    Iv sat up and read all your chapters but this last one was so lacklustre to be honest was a disappointment.
    I totally agree with your not wanting to describe races but hey mabey another genie and girl comes into it and try's to break matt and Sophie up ? They have some sexual escapades and the girls a American Indian and had her lamp passed down for thousands of years and some how intertwines to the creator of the lamps??? thats a good idea? ?! You carnt leave it like this the story I was so bloody into into it haha it's nearly inspired me to write some stories!!! Really good work mate tho get cracking on my me new stuff!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 16:39
    I really enjoy the series, like the way the plot moves along, but thought that maybe the big sex scene could be a make up scene between Matt and Sophie? Just a thought but I really do enjoy reading these, and I can't wait for the next one!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 17:28
    Great chapter, it really is. I still want an official name for the society. If I can suggest something about sex scenes, do them with much more detail instead of throwing orgasms to the scene like they are no big deal. Just something that's been bothering me a little: it is stated that Matt was/is a nerd, and he has a genie but how has he not wished for superpowers? I know it's supposed to be a sex storie, but believe me, it could be so much more. As I previously said: came for the sex, stayed for the plot. Anyways, great story, don't rush it, make it as long as you want to.

    -Anon who's name is Charlie and commented on the last story. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 17:31
    Bad chapter ..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 18:14
    It would be interesting If you let Alex kill the hostages, brutal, but interesting. Also there should be a bit more sex in the next addition

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 18:22
    Honestly, writing style is what has always been what determines if I'll stick to a story or book. Your style is right in my ballpark. Please continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 18:24
    I agree with the author. No matter what you write there will always be someone who wants less, or more, or different colors. I prefer the story as it is and let my imagination supply that makes it good for me.
    KEEP GOING AS IS.

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  • Kane101595
    29.05.2015 18:54
    This probably wouldn't work as of how the story is going now, but earlier I had a thought of why not have matt or sophie wish themselves to be a slave of the other person for a day, to see how it feels being controlled or something. Also I picture rape scenes so maybe hint of dark fantasy with say alex and sophie or alexis or something, it could work and go many ways, just interested is all :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 19:15
    Interesting chapter....wonder what will happen next. I like how this is developing :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 19:24
    To the person saying bad chapter.. how about you bloody make a story.. or don't read this one. If you can't give constructive criticism don't give anything!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 19:25
    Great story all together I've actually been having dreams of having my own genie and wishing my wildest red neck wishes lol but a great story so far I think there may be a little too much plot but there's always room for improvement so keep on keepin on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 20:19
    I have been reading ua story !! It's just awesome......it's really interesting well done !! Waiting for next chapters..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 20:31
    let sophie lose her genie but matt keep his. Get some sex scenes in

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 22:21
    sophie's becoming quite the douchebag

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 01:21
    Good plot to the story I agree this chapter didn't quite measure up to the rest but good and as for the no interracial stuff I assumed Matt and Sophia are white and the genies are of Middle Eastern descent but have enough of a Caucasian look to pass for family

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 01:30
    Do a sex scene with matt and Alexis

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 01:40
    I love your story, I think it would be awesome to do a chapter during prom.

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  • BludKnyght
    30.05.2015 02:07
    Okay I guess the interracial part was for me. Only problem is you been kind of specific about the others. But fine. Thanks.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 02:32
    Please do a lot more
    more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 02:36
    Sophie is accting bitchy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 02:58
    I like where this is going. I also agree with the person that said Matt should hook up with Alexis. Also, Im sure you noticed the slight hiccup here where you said Sophie was in the car with Matt.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 03:00
    awesome job! and I do agree with the first comment, there should be a sex seen between alexis and matt.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 03:00
    awesome job! and I do agree with the first comment, there should be a sex seen between alexis and matt.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 04:27
    more detailed sex would be nice but I love the story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 04:54
    Alexis should fuck matt to show sophie that she is capable of doing alot more than she thinks she can. Throw a lil subplot in there and keep the story interesting with this curveball. Maybe after alexis being sarcastic and mad at sophie she channels this anger into getting back at sophie by fucking matt. Good story! Its just getting a bit of a bore and needs something to throw it for a loop!!

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  • Fuckbuddy88
    30.05.2015 05:02
    Sophie isnt acting bitchy, but please write more stories. Theye are sucking me in like a girl giving me a blowjob. So, bravo on your story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 08:32
    Great story, please give us another chapter to read, hooked on this, think this is one of the best storys on this site!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 09:29
    More sex please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 12:06
    WOW! I keep refreshing your profile page just to see an update. its really fantastic.. keep it up.. and yeah.. thanks a lot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 13:53
    I don't understand some of the peoples comments. This has been a great story. To the people that want race added or anal added or even gay added. There are links to stories on the left side of the page that cover those topics. To the writer keep up the great work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 15:35
    More luminosity x matt

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 18:03
    Chapter 10 Should prove interesting when you consider that Alex un-knowingly Gave to Matt the power to receive, care for, control the Genie(s) / Lamp(s) in Alex's Possession... A simple Desperate "wish" from Matt could change Everything...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 18:39
    I just discovered your profile and I 'felt like I HAD to read your story'
    Read all the chapters in one go. Truly amazing awesome.
    I love your work dude. Now I want a genie too!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 19:05
    You should write twice a day

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 19:05
    You should write twice a day

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 19:13
    love the story dont care if there is so little sex and yes this chapter was a bit short but I love your writing and look foward to reading the next chapters as they are posted

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  • h0Ax8omb3r
    30.05.2015 20:55
    It was a shame this one was so short but I can be happy knowing that it will continue to impress, even though tis one was a relitivley short offering it still brought a lot to the table in terms of plot development. I myself find it difficult to give a decent plot to my storys and as such have not written for a long time but yours are giving me that feeling of needing to write again so thank you.

    Please feel free to check out my Story
    My Sisters 13th Birthday Party

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  • DragoTime
    30.05.2015 23:05
    Just a message to everyone who reads the comments: I've not started writing the next chapter yet, and I won't until Monday afternoon at least. I do know what's going to happen in it roughly, although it's again suffering from "How do I write this to make it realistic". I'll work it out, hopefully.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 00:10
    Thank you for the update DragoTime

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 07:12
    Let's smoke some ganji this weekend and get creative!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 08:07
    Love your series, I've been reading it on LitErotica. I like your two main human characters, but based on this chapters plot twist their going to have to get their hands dirty. Maybe Jacob can give them some guidance or a helping hand, so they don't have to live a long life with dirty hands. Cause Alex is a bad man and bad things happen to bad people.

    (Bigd1965bigd)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 10:54
    hello I commented and I was wondering if you can reply to this thread. I think if you know how this series will end, I believe that you should create a spin-off premise of maybe a series about the genies lives. Or something of that nature. I do want to say that I have loved this series and have been following your work since chapter and check back everyday waiting for new material thank you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 21:08
    He should fuck his mom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 22:29
    I get that this is a sex story... but torturing people with orgasms is a bit ridiculous. Not EVERYTHING has to be sexual.

    Also while I'm here, if the Englishman from previously in the story is supposed to be one of Lumiosa's former masters, why didn't she know English?

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  • pajarojkl
    01.06.2015 04:32
    I love these stories. I really hope matt and sophie work everything out.

    I kinda wish matt was nicer to lumiosa...kinda how sophie treats alexis (have her call him matt instead of master), but after the way alexis acted here, I'm not so sure. I see her point, but I also think there is a bigger picture.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 07:48
    kill a character... it's more realistic than some corny "happily ever after" ending

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 10:57
    Dude what happened to daily updates you are like updating once for 2 days

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 13:16
    Dude daily updates please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 13:21
    To the people bellow
    Life happen. Schooling happens.
    People can't just spend 24/4 on a text when they also have to prep for exams and such.. or work. I understand you're wanting more but you have to understand people have lives.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 23:10
    Dude u r becoming more and more latw and irregular...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 02:55
    Please make this series longer than 15 parts its awsome !

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  • Dude5329
    02.06.2015 04:57
    So far all I have read is brilliant. Keep up the good work. Also, don't worry about trying to rush out more and more chapters for those who are rushing you, I'd much rather you took your time and kept the quality we have thus-forth appreciated. I look forward to any and all future chapters you intend to put out. Thank you for all of your hard work.

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  • bearclaw01234
    02.06.2015 04:57
    Drago, besides others' complaints about the length.. I've come to realize that though doing stories is a Writer's Job, it's NOT their life & they do have other things going on besides stories. So I say: make YOUR stories as long or as short as YOU feel they should be & pay no mind to people & their complaints about length because obviously they pay no mind to your life & feelings. Great Series & I hope to see many more parts in the days to come. Keep up the great work!

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  • bearclaw01234
    02.06.2015 05:06
    Drago, also for those that constantly hound ye about putting out new parts quickly, DO NOT pay attention to them. As an artist as well, I know sometimes it takes much to get creativity to flow & can't be rushed at all, so take your time & like Dude5329 commented about keeping the quality of work over quantity- I agree with him.

    TO ALL THOSE BEGGING FOR MORE- it takes great time & effort to write such works of art & creativity can't be rushed. If ye think that ye can do better than Drago (which I highly doubt) then start writing your own works & ye will realize just how much is involved with it & ye will then realize ye are wrong for constantly hounding Drago for daily updates.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 06:30
    Publish this into a book!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 07:16
    HEY MAN, YOU CAN PUBLISH A NOVEL WITH ALL THESE WONDERFUL CHAPTERS.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 10:41
    @bearclaw
    you are right that it takes lot of effort and thinking to write a story and we must not beg for another chapter to be posted fast, but Drago must have told that next chapter is going to take a bit longer and must take back his 2 days policy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 12:03
    More Lumiosa/Matt sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 13:37
    By the way in chapter 2 to3 you forgot that you didn't unwish their permanent boners. Other than I think you are a genius although if I had a genie I would of wished for super powers.for a nerd this dude has not been wishing what a nerd should.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 13:48
    I really like the story and have enjoyed reading it. There is one think that I can't get out of my head and that is Matt has taken the protection off his genies lamp. Will that come into play in the next few chapters?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 21:46
    No need to be disappointed. Its coming along nicely. I liked the twist at the end, with Alex
    However, as someome else already said, the forever-sex act is getting a bit old. Surely you can think of something more...evil

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2015 22:19
    Please make this series longer than 15 parts its awsome !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2015 03:24
    When's the next chapter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2015 06:31
    FOOT JOBS!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2015 18:21
    So need the next chapter having genie withdrawal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2015 18:39
    Hey I just loved your work , its amazing . I have been waiting for the 10th chapter for ages bud. When will it be out?

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  • DragoTime
    03.06.2015 21:56
    Chapter 10 is mostly written and will be out either tonight or tomorrow.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 00:06
    When will chapter 10 be done?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 02:22
    Yay drago. I've been looking forward to your update since Monday

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 05:38
    Thanks Drago.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 05:54
    Brilliant so far. Don't listen to what other people want. Do your own thing. And sod the rest of them. Keep it up mate.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 06:29
    Good job man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 09:31
    Drago....waiting for your chapter?
    Hope you are not taken up by some genie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 17:57
    when are you doing the next one you said Monday its Thursday now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 18:38
    Where the fuck is the rest??? U also left a story in middle.... unfinished??? Asshole

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  • DragoTime
    04.06.2015 18:52
    I think you'll find, Anonymous Reader, that I said I'd start writing it on Monday. Which I did.

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  • DragoTime
    04.06.2015 18:53
    And I think you'll also find I said in an earlier comment it would go up either yesterday or today. And it's likely going up today.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:20
    Awesome can't wait

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:38
    when approximately will the next chapter be up?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:43
    You should make it where you can only post comments if your registered and signed in

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:44
    Might do away with the fools that are posting negative comments. Probably another writer that's jealous that your stories are better then theres

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 19:47
    Next Chapter Plz <3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2015 23:42
    Where's chapter 10?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2015 06:30
    It's been so long, next chapter plzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2017 05:23
    I think your stories are structured quite well, although I think that Lumiosa should give Matt the same power as sophie

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