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Sex games

A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 08

Author: DragoTime

Date: 1 December 2015

Blowjob, Fantasy, Consensual Sex, Cruelty

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Jerusalem, 1195 AD. In a tavern, an English traveller in his early 30s was waiting for a man to arrive with a delivery. Something for which he’d searched for over a decade. Something which, if his contact had been successful, was going to change his life forever.
“Another ale, my friend,” he said, flicking a coin in the direction of the bartender.
“You’re not from around here, are you?” The bartender asked him.
“No I’m not, but don’t worry, if all has gone to plan, I’ll be out of here before long.”

A few minutes later, a man arrived in a cloak, carrying an ornate box.
“Do you have it?” The Englishman asked, excited.
“Yes, it is in this box,” the other man replied.
“Good…let’s go into the back room. We need some privacy.”

They went into the back, where a table and two chairs had already been set up. They sat down at the table, and the box was laid on it.
“You’ve not touched it, have you?” The Englishman asked.
“Of course not, we had your instructions. We would not want to trigger the curse.” The Englishman reached to open the box, but the other man stopped him. “Where’s the reward I was promised?”
“I promise you shall have your reward, but for now, look at me. I am unarmed. I could not possibly steal this from under you, now could I? I merely wish to admire my prize.”
“Very well, but do not try anything. I do not trust you foreigners. I do not see why Saladin allowed you to come here.”

The Englishman opened the box, and his eyes widened when he saw the contents. Inside was a golden oil lamp.
“Oh hello, my pretty,” he said. “I’ve been waiting a long time for you.” He then reached in to pull it out.
“Hey, what happened to not touching it with your bare hands!?”
“I do not fear the curse. Tell me, where did you find this again?”
“A group of nomads found it amongst the Crusaders’ belongings a few years ago. We managed to “recover” it from them. But may I ask…why are you interested in this particular lamp?”
“Oh, because it is so much more than a mere lamp. This lamp, and its brothers and sisters, appear in stories from the dawn of man. Lamps of this nature appear in paintings and drawings from before they were invented. Well, before we developed the ability to duplicate their appearance. Great men have devoted their entire lives to searching for them. And now I have one.”
“What are you talking about?”
“Allow me to demonstrate.”

The Englishman then did the thing he’d long dreamt of. He rubbed the lamp. He felt its coldness grow warm in his hands, and he watched as streams of light-blue smoke poured out of it.
“What is this sorcery!?” The other man cried out. He got up, and tried to leave the room, but the door wouldn’t budge. “It’s locked.”
“Yes, I had an associate of mine lock it when we came in,” The Englishman said. “Poor sod, he thinks he’s going to get rewarded for his efforts.”
“What are you!?”
“Watch and learn.”

The blue smoke continued pouring out of the lamp, before it formed a pile on the floor. Both men then watched the smoke begin to take the form of a beautiful, nude girl.
“Oh good, a girl,” The Englishman said. “I was hoping for a girl.”
“Greetings Master,” the genie said. “I am-”
“Oh I’m well aware of what you are. And for my first wish, I wish for you to kill that man.” The Englishman pointed to the other man.
“What? No!” He shouted.
“Master, are you sure about that?” The genie asked him. “It seems awfully cruel.”
“DO NOT QUESTION ME, SLAVE!” The Englishman shouted. “I wish for you to feel as though your entire body is on fire!” The genie screamed out, and fell to the floor in agony.

“What is happening to her?” The man asked in fear.
“I am punishing her for her disobedience,” The Englishman replied.
“Please Master, I’m sorry!” The genie cried out.
“So grant my wish.”
“YES MASTER!” The genie pointed at the other man. A beam of energy shot out of her finger, which hit the man, and killed him instantly.
“Good girl,” the Englishman smiled. “So, are you going to behave from now on? Do you promise to not question me again?”
“YES MASTER!”
“Very well, then you may end your punishment.”

The genie let out a cry of relief, as she felt her pain end.
“Now then, I wish for you to dispose of his body,” The Englishman said calmly.
“Your wish is my command, Master…” the genie panted. She snapped her fingers, and the body instantly vanished. The Englishman smiled.
“Wonderful,” he said. “Now let’s go get rid of that bumbling accomplice of mine, and then have some fun.”

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Alexis laid in her lamp, thinking of the past. In her tens of thousands of years of existence, she had served thousands of Masters, some kind, and some very, very cruel. It was why she was glad to have Sophie. It was why she always tried extra hard when granting Sophie’s wishes to make sure she liked the results. She wanted Sophie to be around as long as possible, so that she could enjoying having a genie for longer, and so that Alexis could have longer with a kind Mistress.

They didn’t really talk about this sort of thing much, but Sophie had promised Alexis that she would try and make sure that her next Master is someone kind. However, Alexis feared that this society they had met may simply attempt to confiscate her lamp once Sophie died. Of course, Matt and Sophie were the youngest members of the group, so it was of course possible that, after the other members died, they could simply take control, and re-distribute the captured lamps around the world.

Alexis didn’t get much more time to think, however, as at that moment, she felt the familiar pull, compelling her out of the lamp. Sophie was rubbing it. She closed her eyes, and within seconds, she was stood in her Mistress’ bedroom, next to Lumiosa. She saw that Sophie and Matt were sat on the side of the bed, naked, and holding their lamps. She noticed that they were both sweaty, and Matt had a few drops of cum still on his dick.

“What do you desire, Master?” Lumiosa asked.
“Oh change the fucking record,” Alexis said, annoyed.
“Someone get up on the wrong side of the lamp this morning?” Matt asked her.
“I’m just glad I got past the “I love my Master” stage of my life,” Alexis replied.
“There is nothing wrong with showing respect for ones Master, Alexis,” Lumiosa said to her fellow genie.
“Whatever,” Alexis said. “So I’m assuming you summoned me to make a wish?”
“Well for starters, we’d like to fill you in on what happened Saturday night with the society,” Sophie replied. “So Alexis, you have my permission to read the info from my mind.”
“You too, Lumiosa,” Matt said.

The two genies snapped their fingers, and they were instantly up-to-date with what had happened.
“Oh my God, they’re really delusional,” Alexis said. “They really think there’s some sort of maker who is responsible for putting all the genies on Earth?”
“It’s stupid, yeah, but what can we do?” Matt said.
“Well, I was thinking about it in my lamp, and actually, if we want to get hold of those lamps they have, it may be a good idea to simply wait it out,” Alexis said.
“Why?” Matt asked.
“Because the two of you are the youngest members of the society, so you’ll outlive the others, and be able to take the lamps for yourselves, especially as you’ll presumably be able to overrule any other members you’ve picked up by then.”
“But that could take years!” Lumiosa protested. “Don’t you want to free our brothers and sisters now?”
“Of course I do, but realistically, this is our best strategy,” Alexis said.
“I agree,” Sophie said. “At least until we think of anything better.”

Sophie then stood up, pulling Matt up with her.
“Anyway,” she said. “Time to go out. Alexis, I wish for you to dress the 4 of us for school.”
“School?” Alexis asked, confused. “But it’s Sunday?”
“No, it’s not, we just let you two stay in your lamps all of Sunday,” Matt told them. “Mostly because we wanted to have a day to ourselves.”
“Well I hope you enjoyed it, I had a nice nap in my lamp,” Alexis said. “Now let’s see about getting us dressed.” She snapped her fingers, and the 4 of them were instantly dressed for school.
“Alright, and now, I wish that all 4 of us were in all the same classes,” Sophie commanded.
“Even PE?”
“Yes. Now do it.”
“Your wish is my command, Sophie.”

The 4 of them drove to school in Sophie’s Ferrari. As they walked in, they saw Max and Sam.
“Hey guys,” Matt said to them.
“Hey Matt,” Sam said, before he saw Sophie and Alexis. “Hi Sophie…Please don’t do anything to us.”
“Aw, what’s the matter?” Sophie said teasingly. “Afraid I might give you more blowjobs?”
“We’re afraid you might make us orgasm in front of the entire school again, or give us blowjobs without letting us cum,” Sam replied. “It’s a valid concern.”
“The concerning bit is how you’re the only boys in the whole world that don’t want a girl to get them off,” Sophie said. “Come on, let’s go to class.”

As they walked into class, Sophie made a wish.
“I wish that no matter what we do in this class, no-one will find it weird,” she whispered in Alexis’ ear.
“Your wish is my command,” Alexis whispered back.

Meanwhile, the boys were sat chatting.
“So when are you gonna get us laid again?” Max asked Matt. “Come on Matt, you promised you’d make it up to us. Or are you still in no magic mode?”
“I’ll do it after school, I promise,” Matt said. At this point, Max and Sam felt their trousers and underwear vanish, and their cocks growing instantly hard.
“What the…” Sam said. Suddenly, both boys gasped, as they felt warm, wet mouths engulf their dicks. “Holy fuck…”
“Guys, what are you doing?” Matt asked, before he noticed that they were both naked from the waist down. Matt looked under the table, where he saw Sophie and Alexis sucking his friends off.

“What the fuck are you doing!?” He asked under his breath.
“Having fun,” Sophie replied, talking through having Max’s dick in her mouth.
“Sophie, you can’t keep messing with my friends!”
“If it makes you feel any better, you can mess with my friends.”
“I don’t want to mess with your friends! And I want you to stop messing with mine.”
“Oh fine…”

Sophie and Alexis pulled off of Max and Sam, and moved out from under the table.
“You know boys, clearly Matt doesn’t want you to feel good,” Sophie said.
“I just don’t like you using my friends as your toys,” Matt said. “If they’re going to get laid, it'll be of their own free will.”
“You’re so cute when you’re trying to be nice,” Sophie smiled, and kissed him.
“But you know what, I think I might take you up on the offer of messing with your friends,” Matt grinned. “Lumiosa, I have some wishes.”
“I’m all ears, Master,” Lumiosa smiled.
“Good,” Matt said. “I wish that Max and Sam, as well as Sophie’s friends Megan, Sally and Kelly will be teleported to Megan’s bedroom, where the 3 girls will intensely lust after the boys, and each-other.”

“Your wish is my command, Master,” Lumiosa said. She snapped her fingers, and Max and Sam were instantly gone. Sophie gave him a kiss.
“Naughty boy,” she said.
“It was your suggestion,” Matt said, kissing her back.
“I know,” Sophie grinned. “I like it.”
“Are you two done?” Alexis asked them.
“Oh shut up you,” Sophie said.

After class, the two of them both had PE. Of course, Alexis’ magic had put them all in the same class, meaning that Sophie, Alexis and Lumiosa would be getting changed with the boys. And of course, this meant that they got a LOT of attention. And Alexis hadn’t conjured up underwear for them, either, so the three of them were stood in the changing rooms, totally naked. Lumiosa was just stood there, while Sophie and Alexis were chatting casually, while all the boys stared at them.

“Man Matt, your cousin’s hot!” said one of the boys in the changing room.
“Hey, would you mind not staring at her?” Matt said. He was stood there, not really wanting to strip off, since he was also not wearing underwear. “Or my girlfriend?”
“Oh relax Matt, the boys are just admiring beauty,” Sophie said. “I’m still yours.”
“Well said babe,” said Dan, who proceeded to squeeze Sophie’s ass.
"Uh, what was that?" Sophie asked.
"Just admiring your beauty up close," Dan replied, grinning.
“Oh now you’ve done it,” Sophie said in a sinister voice. “Alexis…I wish for all the doors to be locked.”
“Your wish is my command, Mistress,” Alexis said in an equally-sinister voice. She snapped her fingers, and the boys heard a locking noise. “Oh I wouldn’t want to be you right now, boy.”

“Hey babe, what are you doing?” Dan asked.
“Sophie, what are you going to do?” Matt asked her.
“Just going to teach this guy some manners,” Sophie replied, walking up to Dan threateningly.
“Dan, apologise to her,” Jake said to the boy. “Seriously man, this girl can do some weird shit.”
“I’d listen to him if I were you. I wish Jake was naked.” Sophie said, and Jake was instantly naked. “Take a look Jake’s dick. It’s tiny, and it can’t ever get hard or cum. He and Mark got this as a punishment for pissing me off. Now apologise, or you’re going to get far worse.”

Matt didn’t like this. He didn’t know what was up with Sophie, but he didn’t like it.
“Lumiosa, I wish for Dan to be teleported back to his house!” Matt shouted.
“As you wish, Master,” Lumiosa smiled, and Dan was instantly gone, and naturally, everyone was freaked out.
“What the fuck did you do that for!?” Sophie shouted at him.
“Um, how about what the fuck were you doing to Dan!?” Matt shouted back.
“I just wanted to teach him a lesson about groping girls, and about cheating on his girlfriend!”
“Well there are better ways to do that than scaring him half to death! And while we’re at it, how about you put Jake and Mark’s dicks back to normal!?”
“Oh fine…Alexis, do it.” Alexis snapped her fingers, and everyone saw Jake’s penis grow before their eyes. “Better?”
“A bit,” Matt replied. “But I’m really mad at you. I’ve put up with you bossing me around because I like being with you, because I really like you, and because I like having you guide me with having a genie, but this is too far. You can’t just decide to punish people like that! You’re starting to be like the members of the society.”
“Matt…”
“Lumiosa, I wish for you to erase these boys’ memories of this, and teleport us home,” Matt said.
“As you wish, Master,” Lumiosa said.

She snapped her fingers, and they were immediately stood in Matt’s living room, where they could hear moaning. Matt turned to look at the sofa, where he saw his sister Becky, riding her boyfriend Jamie.
“Oh my God!” Matt exclaimed.
“Matt…?” Jamie said, his voice weak, and his face one of exhaustion. “Oh God man, get her off me! She called me to come over, and when I did, she just jumped me! It was pretty great at first, but I can’t keep up with her! I feel like I’m gonna pass out!”

“Lumiosa, what’s wrong with Becky?” Matt asked his genie.
“Nothing Master, this is what you wished for,” Lumiosa replied with her usual smile.
“I do NOT wish for this,” Matt said.
“You wished for all the lust and love your sister felt towards you to go towards Jamie,” Lumiosa explained.
“I meant for her to go back to how she was before!” Matt shouted. “I didn’t mean for her to jump Jamie like this!” Tears started welling up in Lumiosa’s eyes.
“I’m sorry Master!” Lumiosa cried. “Would you like me to fix this?”
“Yes!”

Lumiosa snapped her fingers, and Becky began to calm down.
“Oh Jamie…I’m sorry…I don’t know what came over me…” She said, before climbing off of him.
“It’s fine babe…” Jamie panted. “I enjoyed it…kind of…”

Matt ran upstairs, and flopped onto his bed.
“Master, is something wrong?” Lumiosa asked him. “Do you wish me to pleasure you?”
“NO!” Matt shouted. “Just go away!”
“Yes Master…” Lumiosa said, sad that her Master seems sad. She turned into a cloud of pink smoke, which flowed back into her lamp.

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Meanwhile, Sophie was also laid on her bed, crying.
“Well I blew that,” She said. “I really blew it.”
“Yeah, you did,” Alexis said.
“No-one asked you.”
“I’m your genie. It’s my job to make you happy. And you’re not happy.”
“I’m not happy because I nearly turned into as big a monster as those guys in the society. And because I’ve probably lost Matt now.”
“Sophie, as a genie, I am bound to be honest to you. You may have given me the freedom to step away from this, but I am now choosing to reject that freedom, in order to disagree with you. Sophie, I think that you’re not nearly as much a monster as you think. I think you’re a good girl who gave in to temptation. Trust me, I know. I’ve met complete monsters. I’ve served them. I’ve suffered at their hands. And you, Sophie Swift, are not one of them. And I think you’re lucky you’re have Matt, and he’s lucky to have you. You fix each-other’s flaws. He stopped you from hurting that bully, and you stopped him from killing himself with sex.”

“You really think all that?”
“Of course I do. Sophie, you are one of the nicest people who has ever possessed me. It is the duty of a genie to make their Master happy, but I genuinely want you to be happy, because you have made me so happy. I want our years together to be ones I treasure for the rest of my existence. Ones I can think of when a future Master is punishing me for some trivial thing.”
“Alexis…” Sophie grabbed hold of her genie, and gave her a big hug. “Thank you.”
“No, thank you, Sophie.”

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Author's message: So this is a slightly shorter chapter, due to me not writing much today, and also out of the fact that the next couple of chapters are going to have a lot of plot, so I wanted to put something like this in. On the topic of the plot, I think I definitely know how I want the story to end. The problem is how to get there. The next couple of chapters have plot, but then there's a gap between then and the end. Oh well, I'm sure I'll work out how to fill that gap at some point.

Oh, and I'd just like to say that Becky riding Jamie to exhaustion is not a result of the person who commented on the last chapter to point out that Matt never took away her enhanced horniness, I always intended to write this.

Anyway, since people seem interested about me, I'm an 18-year-old male from the UK, getting ready to start at University (To do German and Italian), and who'd very much like to find a magic lamp of his own. I'd put that info (Well, the age/gender/location stuff) in the section for it at the top of each chapter, but I have no idea how, so if someone could tell me, that'd be great.

As far as the content for this chapter went, I'm looking down the comments as I write this, and I see someone wanted Sophie to become more dominant. I'd actually forgotten this comment until just now, but it looks like you got your wish, anonymous commenter. As did all the people who wanted Matt to stand up for himself around her. And as I'm reading the comments now, I'm seeing one thing I actually intended to put in this chapter after I read it and have clearly forgotten. But hey, it wouldn't have worked with how the chapter went in the end, so it's probably for the best I forgot.

The stuff at the start in 12th century Jerusalem came about while I was writing the last chapter, and I thought it might be a nice thing to talk about one of one of the genies' previous Masters, even if only briefly, so that's why I did that. I hope you all liked it. And I hope I've not forgotten anything I wanted to say in this section. Oh well, it'll have to wait until Chapter 9. (Wow, we're already so far through...)


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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 01:10
    Very good I loved it especially the plot increase

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 01:12
    Can your add more sex at school or just in general

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 01:15
    DragoTime, I just would like to say this is an extremely well written story and I log on several times throughout the day to check for the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work man.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 01:44
    Looking forward to future chapters. Hopefully more stuff in the future. And was hoping one day you would do sex in class while the teacher taught or sex in more public places using that wish earlier would make it a lot easier since them having sex in class wouldn't be weird to anyone.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 01:50
    Can there be some figuring out of how they can best manipulate a well worded wish to their advantage? Like, wishing to have abilities that would make it impossible to trap them or steal their lamps. Such as, the ability to teleport to any place they are familiar with, even without asking their Genie to do it for them. Or wishing that every 12 hours their lamp automatically moves from wherever it is (such as a vault where the secret society locks up lamps of those it thinks shouldn't have Genies) to somewhere on their person.

    I don't know. I guess it just seems like they'er leaving a lot of the things that can be done to take their lamps from them unprepared for. I'm thinking comic book level powers. lol

    Also, maybe their friends could get some more development and become candidates to get some of the lamps that get rescued.

    Anyway, keep it coming, whatever you decide to do with it. I'm enjoying it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:12
    This is really the only story on this website that I keep up with. Keep up the good work! Also, as a suggestion, maybe you could get a teacher or multiple teachers having sex at some point?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:12
    So the boys were sent to Megan's to have some fun, maybe have those girls get pregnant because I don't think they are under any infertility wish. I would like to see some preggo.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:24
    In the next chapter could you have an orgy with some slightly gay stuff, I mean if you had a genie wouldn't you want to experiment?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:32
    I would like to see where Matt stays mad at Sophie for about a half a chapter, and then they have super hot make up sex.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:36
    I'm 12

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 02:40
    Have Matt's genie get prego

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:08
    I would love to see Matt either force lum or some other girl to try anal.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:11
    Awesome series, I hope this one doesn't end up unfinished like one of my other favorites, Caveworms.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:11
    Along with the anal it would be cool if they created there own person sex kingdom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:17
    No gay stuff....none at all....not even a little

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:43
    This story is great keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 03:54
    I really like this story, comes up close behind "peeping Tom" or "she is the one," I hope you can finish it before something terrible pops up. (Like "she is the one")

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 04:18
    well she is the one is still around hes up to chapter 32 or 33 now I got to get the link but when I do ill post it for u

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 04:33
    Have alexis fuck matt without sophie knowing! Alil plot twist

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 04:37
    Just read through all the chapters and want to say great job! I do have a couple comments that I hope you think about. First stay true to your story. By this I mean right what you feel don't add something you normally wouldn't just because others want to see it. (you can tell you weren't into the incest scene it was the worst written section) second take the time you need between chapters don't rush it.we can wait for it.

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  • dmack900
    26.05.2015 04:55
    to anonymous poster 2 comments down here is the link for she is the one
    original .adult-fanfiction .org/story .php?no=600107407
    except without spaces

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 05:20
    You should have alexis and matt fuck without sophie.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 05:22
    Jashley posted the recent chapter 2 days ago and as the guy over there pointed out, your story really is nice, except for the fact that it lacks depth and volume(kinda short) but someone already said "If this is the amount of stories and quality" you're gonna pump out in just 2 days, then by all means continue...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:05
    Just wanted to say you are an amazing rider. I don't know if this has been commented but have you ever thought of taking it as far as a wedding between Sophie and Matt? I think you could make many more chapters leading up to the marriage and then many more after. A good ending 25-50 chapters down the road would be at the last part where matt and sophie die for some reason, give a sneak peak of the genies new master and then cut off. A real cliff hanger. I hope to see chapter 9 soon, keep up the amazing work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:08
    Excellent work! IF anyone had ANY temptational dreams of being a Genie's master; I'd suggest you watch "I Dream of Genie", THAT'LL solve THAT.

    Kinda surprised the Masters haven't wished to be Telepathic( well in some ways they have) Telekinetic, and have Teleportational abilities, masters at every martial art, stronger then any living or legendary human, AND be all knowing. With just a wish, they could be teaching the classes in HS, OR embaraseing the teachers with they're knowledge and brilliance. NOT to tell you how to write the story. It's just what MY initial wishes would be.

    Annnyyyywho, keep it up, but DON'T let this get in the way of you're studies! with you're writeing style and imagination, you COULD wind up being the next Dickens.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:09
    Hello Mister. I'm Ben Godwin and I think you should write more of these Boy and his Genie chapters. Best series ever. You should have Sam and Max become in love with Sophie and rape her. Then have Matt, alexis and Lumiosa come and save Sophie.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:47
    Could you please add an indian dude in there? Some sort of explorer or researcher who has been studying this stuff for many years... An expert in genies and stuff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:47
    Just got done reading all 8 chapters love your stories keep writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 06:55
    max and sam should get genies at some point because they already know about them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 07:43
    Hey man,I've read every part since they came out. Loving the series thus far and really looking forward to the rest. The plot is developing nicely and I do think the start of this one gave some lovely insight into the past. If I were to have any advise it'd be A) more relations between Lumiosa and Matt, and B) Don't feel compelled to push out a chapter prematurely if you don't think it's ready, although I think I speak for all/most when this far it's been really nice quality and quantity.
    Although this was a shorter chapter it still gave insight and setup which is much appreciated.
    Hope you do see this but anyway, keep up the great work.
    - Regards, H.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 08:03
    This a without a doubt a favorite series of mine, thank you ever so much for your writing talents, please continue the story.
    The only small think I'd like to see in the story at some point would be anal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 08:16
    Hi, it's a good story you have here. I just feel matt should have more sex scenes. I like the plot. Maybe more sex scenario.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 08:29
    I do not usually read stories because I find them dull but yours has me completely engulfed. Please do not stop with this series. But I have a bit of a foot fetish and would absolutely enjoy a scene about one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 09:00
    Mat needs a car that reflects him, as there will be times when him and Sofie don't see eye to eye.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 09:03
    WOW!!! as always, AWESOME! cant wait to read part 9.. thanks for updating.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 11:01
    The only thing I think is missing is the fact that Matt didn't wish for a car and the ability to drive. Personal suggestion 2014 Super Snake Mustang. Keep writing the stories are excellent.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 11:12
    Don't know why anonymous shows up I'm BludKnyght. Also there are no interracial aspects to the stories. No interest in wealth at least for the parents sake. Matt played video games but never made one? And nobody in the whole school is gay? No revenge towards a teacher/principal? Just a few thoughts to help with your excellent writing. Oh and one last thing. Most suburban homes have pets. Now just for you. I joined XNXX just to comment on you're stories. I've been reading this site for at least 6 years and your the first writer I want to talk to. Keep it up its a wonderful mix of sex & plot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 11:14
    i think that if you are planning to end the story. I think you should create a spin off

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 11:44
    Don't worry about what we, the readers, want...write what YOU want. It's a good series so far, looking forward to the (hopefully) many more chapters ahead

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 11:50
    Damn such a good story can we have anal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 13:49
    Great chapter! Even though it was short it was still a good read and the little bit at the start was interesting. Wouldn't mind hearing a bit more about the genies past. Would love to see some more sex in the coming chapters as well as some plot development. Some good sex scenes where they have lots of kinky sex is something I think we would all like to read about ;) take your time with this series and don't rush it. I'd love to see this last for as long as you can make it so don't ever stop writing!
    -Drew

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 14:23
    Really great chap! U r just 18! Hope u write in the same way! U r really good! Can we hv a Friday night together with some booze!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 16:49
    Doing a great job I'd would like to see an orgy between the 4 of them and possible anal but keep doing what your doing its a great read cant wait for the next chapter, also maybe a little more detail and a bit longer with the sex scenes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 19:30
    It really is an awesome story. Please don't let us sway you to much in the way the story goes together, because while their story ideas may seem great to them, it may be the kiss of death to a lot of other people. So you are the artiest here, please continue to be that artiest and not get taken down the wrong path.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 20:13
    How about gay/lesbian sex? May be between Sophie and Lumiosa? Just a suggestion. Thought you might need a plot and a twist :p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 20:38
    thats what I have been suggesting for the last 2 chapters!! Still a very good suggestion dont you think?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 20:41
    (same commenter as the one just before this) DrogoTime you are a genie-us
    whenever I reed a chapter of your story it just makes me want a lamp and wish magic and all that stuff was real. KEEP WRITING IM YOUR NO. 1 FAN!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 21:20
    Zero Gravity Sex in Science class? :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 22:19
    Dude with his genie he can fuck a pornstar, I'd go for Brandi Love

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 22:34
    Great job on the story so far man! I love the way that you're interactive with the fans and incorporate our ideas! This is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read on this site, and I don't even mind waiting between chapters because you're so consistent with updates. Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2015 22:48
    We need anal man. And maybe an orgy with everyone in the society and their genies. I really like your work too. Keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 00:29
    When having Matt force a girl to try anal make them anal virgins and have then scream a little bit when being fucked like the girls who get tricked into anal sex at the casting coach auditions

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 00:32
    And maybe have Matt be tricked into being tied up and having Sophie peg him. Until he cums inside Lums ass or all over a random girls face who then wakes up confused about the cum all over her face and why there is a dick in her face. But u are doing a great job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 01:39
    hello, my name is jimmy greeley I normally dont comment I have to say your story is truely amazing. I have one request. you dont have to implement it sense its your story. I would like to see both genies in a long and detailed love making part with futanari with alexis getting pregnant.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 01:45
    its jimmy again. I ment alexis getting lumiosa pregnat. im sorry for bothing you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 02:16
    its a great story just one wish could you add a little more details to sex...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 02:26
    This story is great keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 03:19
    what would happen if sophie and alexis swap bodies, how would the wishing work. also can u put more incest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 03:26
    is there going to be pregnancy or a part where matt and sophie r marries and have kids like a after story or smthing

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  • Fuckbuddy88
    27.05.2015 05:58
    im ben godwin aka Fuckbuddy88 and you should kepp writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 06:03
    Hello this is very nice, wow very nice. Since have started reading this story somethings have been occuring to me. Just know that this story is not just al about sex..., nice one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 06:12
    Everyone wants anal lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 06:13
    I just wanted to say that your writing has really come a long ways since you started this story. Well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 07:17
    Love where you're taking the story and just want to point out a few things. First off when Matt got the lamp there was a note with it he could not read. Secondly who and why was the lamp stolen and sent to him. Thirdly what has become of Alex the man the lamp was stolen from? Also I feel as there is something special about Lumiosa because she hasn't been out of her lamp for so long and that it was her lamp that was stolen and sent to Matt. Just wanted to mention these things just in case you had not thought of them and think they might be beneficial to the story. But great writing and keep up the great work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 07:36
    Excellent work please take your time writing and don't let others rush the story beyond where you want it to be

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 10:10
    Been following this story, I think its a great storyline, love to read and see more when its ready, Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 12:50
    Great story. Excellent plot. Would like to see more sex including lumiosa.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 15:37
    Wow Just Realised something what if they could just ask for their brain to be capable of holding infinite info without forgetting anything this way they can become immortal ,know who the god is and everything else .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 16:33
    horse balls and monkey dicks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 16:36
    monkey dicks in your ass

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 16:39
    let the butt hurt in .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 17:24
    Cool stories keep on writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 20:37
    LESBIAN SEX
    LUMIOSA, ALEXIS, SOPHIE, BECKY, AND SOPHIES FRIENDS (I ACTUALLY FORGOT THEIR NAMES, DONT JUDGE ME)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 20:39
    Suggestion : Make one of Matt's Wishes or Sophie's go wrong, and they need the "Creator" To Fix It. - Great Chapters So Far, I Read This Stuff Faster Than I Read A Normal Book!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 21:11
    Been with this story since chapter 1 was first posted! Just wanted to say this story is awesome and it's amazing how you manage to bring it out daily. Keep up the good work
    Much love
    Anon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 21:47
    Gay stuff and maybe more incest? Btw I'm loving it read it since chapter 1 was posted one of the originals read when there was only like 700 views

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 22:03
    more incest, a lot more, and maybe some pregnancy too

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 23:14
    Teacher sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 23:30
    Yes more incest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 02:07
    Doing great keep it up but definitely more incest. All in all good job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 02:34
    They should wish for the ability to fly and have Sex while flying

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 03:27
    amazing I love your series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 05:36
    i love reading your stories and I know your trying to find a good balance between sex and plot well dont worry about it if the story is good (and it is) than forget about the sex it will just work its way in there and I would like to know more about the previous masters do like some sub stories and im really interested in finding out where the genies came from plus I cant tell you how many times I have wanted a genie my self

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 05:58
    I like your story so far I can't wait for chapter 9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 06:18
    No horse balls or monkey dicks?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 06:44
    This story is so great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 07:26
    Futanari would be amazing (Alexis and lum)

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  • Krot0Q
    28.05.2015 09:25
    Anonymous readerReport
    2015-05-26 11:12:11
    Don't know why anonymous shows up I'm BludKnyght.

    You have to be logged in before writing a comment, for you nick to appear, Make sure that above the comment box and below Summit a comment, this appears :
    You are logged in as BludKnyght

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 10:58
    Great story. Excellent plot. Would like to see more sex including lumiosa.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 19:15
    Simple suggestion here, disregard it if you don't like, but I believe that Matt should be on a first name bases with his genie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 19:17
    I'm very glad you addressed the fact that Sophie was being bossy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 20:00
    I would love to see someone make this into a hentai movie. Great story!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2015 20:14
    No sex?!??!

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  • rat68
    28.05.2015 22:46
    Usually, I'm just looking for good sex, but the story has captured my interest. Well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 04:00
    Where's part 9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 04:04
    where part 9 at doe

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 04:13
    I just hope you actually read this and it doesn't get lost in the comments. GREAT STORY. Won't lie: Came for the sex, stayed for the plot. You are serioisly the best in this site, and the only story I've wanted to comment on. If you allow a suggestion, I recommend giving a name to the society (like "The Deus Inuentores" (latin for "God Finders")) and have a wish go wrong because of some silly play on words. Anyways, it's your story and you make it how you see fit. DON'T RUSH IT. Its really good to rush it and fuck it up. Cheers and congratulations. Keep on the good work.

    -Anon whose name is Charlie but doesn't want to create an account just yet. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 04:37
    Alexis should totally seduce and fuck Matt without permission.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 05:36
    Excellent storyline......the plot is Superb.........can't eat for chp.9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 06:56
    Great story. Excellent plot. Would like to see more sex including lumiosa.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 07:26
    great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 07:27
    when are you releasing part 9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 07:27
    great

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  • BludKnyght
    29.05.2015 10:09
    Excellent writing. But Matt's a teenager with no car? Suggestion KTR500 and shouldn't somebody be thinking of their parents financial status? Oh and no pets or black or foreign people? Just suggestions. Keep writing.

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  • BludKnyght
    29.05.2015 11:55
    Excellent writing. But Matt's a teenager with no car? Suggestion KTR500 and shouldn't somebody be thinking of their parents financial status? Oh and no pets or black or foreign people? Just suggestions. Keep writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 12:28
    I am a brit as well.would like a lamp my self. Keep this up brilliant so far. Matt needs to man up. Also can you make them a bit longer. It makes my trip on the underground go faster. But run out halfway through my train ride. Thanks fella.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 22:10
    I think you should write this as long as possible I love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 11:10
    Hmm.. This is really a ride of ,like a fun adventure..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 07:20
    You're a very good writer

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  • naenaegirl
    06.06.2015 14:10
    go to your profile page and ad your age sex gender... and it will show up thanks for the great story line looking forward to more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2015 11:42
    1st chapter u mentioned genie can't kill anyone as no master will be left for her mates....amd you killed a one in this chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2015 03:24
    Good. You're one of my favs.

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  • DragoTime
    07.06.2016 15:33
    Genies can muder individuals. They can't wipe out the whole human race.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2016 22:21
    Who wanna have some fun let video chat

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